第一篇:2011年6月英語四級(CET4)真題
對黨的認識
中國共產黨是工人階級的先鋒隊,同時也是中國人民和中華民族的先鋒隊,是中國特色社會主義的領導核心,始終代表中國先進生產力的發(fā)展要求,代表先進文化的前進方向,代表中國最廣大人民的根本利益。
中國共產黨建立于是1921年7月,以馬克思列寧主義、毛澤東思想、鄧小平理論和“三個代表”重要思想為指導,始終朝著既定的方向-實現共產主義而不懈奮斗。中國共產黨在中國的誕生,開創(chuàng)了中國歷史的新紀元。在毛澤東思想的指引下經過艱苦卓絕的斗爭,取得了自身的獨立與解放。
新中國建立后,中國人民政治地位發(fā)生了根本性改變,然而經濟生活卻極度空乏。中國共產黨就是在這一窮二白的基礎下,肩負起領導中國人民進行社會主義建設的歷史重任。1956年工農業(yè)的偉大改造的完成,初步建成社會主義工業(yè)體系;扭轉了中國經濟衰敗的態(tài)勢;“兩彈一星”的研制成功,顯示了新中國日益增強的國防力量;1971年中國重返聯(lián)合國,贏得了應有的國際地位。
黨的十一屆三中全會以來,鄧小平等黨和國家領導人,總結歷史,高瞻遠矚,做出將黨的工作中心向經濟建設轉移的決策,確立了建設有中國特色的社會主義的目標,全面進入社會主義的建設階段。在獨立自主、自力更生的基礎上,實行改革開放政策,大大推動經濟的發(fā)展和社會的進步。用“一國兩制”政策順利解決了香港、澳門問題,洗刷百年恥辱,領導中國人民在經濟、農業(yè)、工業(yè)、教育、科技、國防、外交等各個領域都取得重要成果。在現代化建設上,取得了舉世矚目的成就。
黨的最終理想和最終目標是實現共產主義。而我們黨清醒的認識到實現共產主義是一個非常漫長的歷史過程,只有在社會主義充分發(fā)展和高度發(fā)達的基礎上才能實現。所以我們黨以發(fā)展做為執(zhí)政興國的第一要務,發(fā)展就是以經濟建設為中心、經濟政治文化相協(xié)調的發(fā)展,是促進人與自然相和諧的可持續(xù)發(fā)展。中國共產黨以興國為已任,以富民為目標,走適合中國國情的社會主義發(fā)展的道路。按照代表先進社會生產力的發(fā)展要求,我們黨吸納各種德才兼?zhèn)涞膬?yōu)秀分子;按照代表先進文化前進方向的要求,我們黨吸納人類文化的一切優(yōu)秀成果;按照代表最廣大人民根本利益的要求,我們黨在工作中始終堅持“群眾路線”,緊緊依靠人民群眾,誠心誠意為人民謀利益,使黨獲得最廣大人民群眾的支持、擁護和信賴。
中國共產黨也是在領導中國人民的發(fā)展道路上,不斷的解放、發(fā)展和完善自我的。保持共產黨員先進性教育的開展,讓我更加深切感受到,我們黨是一個成熟的、先進的、充滿活力的政黨。實現中華民族的偉大復興,唯有靠中國共產黨。
基于這種認識和感受,我加入中國共產黨的決心和熱情更加強烈,我們黨的宗旨是全心全意為人民服務,也是我生活和工作的標準。作為一名普通崗位上的工作人員來說,加入中國共產黨有一種光榮的使命感,在理念上、作風上和行動上都受到黨組織的直接教育與培養(yǎng)。在政治上我堅信我們的黨、熱愛我們的黨,在思想上更加自覺、緊密地把自己的成長、事業(yè)、人生與黨的要求、使命和奮斗目標聯(lián)系在一起。懷著堅定實現共產主義的信念,平凡的工作也有不平凡的意文,立足本職工作,用自己的知識和本領為領導當好參謀,為基層、為職工服好務。用全部的熱情投身到交通建設事業(yè)中,使自身的價值得到充分體現。的黨組織:
??? x年x月x日,我參加了第x期入黨積極分子培訓班,通過學習,對黨有了更深刻的認識。
??? 中國共產黨是工人階級的先鋒隊,同時也是中國人民和中華民族的先鋒隊,是中國特色社會主義的領導核心,始終代表中國先進生產力的發(fā)展要求,代表先進文化的前進方向,代表中國最廣大人民的根本利益。
??? 中國共產黨建立于是1921年7月,以馬克思列寧主義、毛澤東思想、鄧小平理論和“三個代表”重要思想為指導,始終朝著既定的方向-實現共產主義而不懈奮斗。中國共產黨在中國的誕生,開創(chuàng)了中國歷史的新紀元。在毛澤東思想的指引下經過艱苦卓絕的斗爭,取得了自身的獨立與解放。新中國建立后,中國人民政治地位發(fā)生了根本性改變,然而經濟生活卻極度空乏。中國共產黨就是在這一窮二白的基礎下,肩負起領導中國人民進行社會主義建設的歷史重任。1956年工農業(yè)的偉大改造的完成,初步建成社會主義工業(yè)體系;扭轉了中國經濟衰敗的態(tài)勢;“兩彈一星”的研制成功,顯示了新中國日益增強的國防力量;1971年中國重返聯(lián)合國,贏得了應有的國際地位。
??? 黨的十一屆三中全會以來,鄧小平等黨和國家領導人,總結歷史,高瞻遠矚,做出將黨的工作中心向經濟建設轉移的決策,確立了建設有中國特色的社會主義的目標,全面進入社會主義的建設階段。在獨立自主、自力更生的基礎上,實行改革開放政策,大大推動經濟的發(fā)展和社會的進步。用“一國兩制”政策順利解決了香港、澳門問題,洗刷百年恥辱,領導中國人民在經濟、農業(yè)、工業(yè)、教育、科技、國防、外交等各個領域都取得重要成果。在現代化建設上,取得了舉世矚目的成就。黨的最終理想和最終目標是實現共產主義。而我們黨清醒的認識到實現共產主義是一個非常漫長的歷史過程,只有在社會主義充分發(fā)展和高度發(fā)達的基礎上才能實現。所以我們黨以發(fā)展做為執(zhí)政興國的第一要務,發(fā)展就是以經濟建設為中心、經濟政治文化相協(xié)調的發(fā)展,是促進人與自然相和諧的可持續(xù)發(fā)展。中國共產黨以興國為已任,以富民為目標,走適合中國國情的社會主義發(fā)展的道路。按照代表先進社會生產力的發(fā)展要求,我們黨吸納各種德才兼?zhèn)涞膬?yōu)秀分子;按照代表先進文化前進方向的要求,我們黨吸納人類文化的一切優(yōu)秀成果;按照代表最廣大人民根本利益的要求,我們黨在工作中始終堅持“群眾路線”,緊緊依靠人民群眾,誠心誠意為人民謀利益,使黨獲得最廣大人民群眾的支持、擁護和信賴。中國共產黨也是在領導中國人民的發(fā)展道路上,不斷的解放、發(fā)展和完善自我的。保持共產黨員先進性教育的開展,讓我更加深切感受到,我們黨是一個成熟的、先進的、充滿活力的政黨。實現中華民族的偉大復興,唯有靠中國共產黨。
??? 基于這種認識和感受,我加入中國共產黨的決心和熱情更加強烈,我們黨的宗旨是全心全意為人民服務,也是我生活和工作的標準。作為大學生,加入中國共產黨有一種光榮的使命感,在理念上、作風上和行動上都受到黨組織的直接教育與培養(yǎng)。在政治上我堅信我們的黨、熱愛我們的黨,在思想上更加自覺、緊密地把自己的成長、人生與黨的要求、使命和奮斗目標聯(lián)系在一起,懷著堅定實現共產主義的信念,充分利用自己的知識和本領,投身到社會主義建設事業(yè)中,使自身的價值得到充分體現。
我一直都對中國共產黨充滿了渴望與向往,覺得中國共產黨是一顆耀眼的明星,帶領著中國人民走向富裕,建設新中國;中國共產黨是一盞導航燈,引領著一批有一批的優(yōu)秀黨員奉獻于黨的革命建設事業(yè),實現自己的最高價值。
??? 現在,通過黨校的學習,我發(fā)現自己過去的認識還是太過于膚淺,沒有從根本上認識到黨的本質。其實黨并不簡簡單單是一種榮譽,是一種自我價值的體現,它更是一種責任,一種對社會對人民的不可推脫的責任。當然,黨愿意全心全意為人民服務。
??? 中國共產黨是中國工人階級的先鋒隊,同時是中國人民和中華民族的先鋒隊,是中國特色社會主義事業(yè)的領導核心。它始終代表中國先進生產力的發(fā)展要求,代表先進文化的前進方向,代表中國最廣大人民的根本利益。
中國共產黨成立于1921年7月,以馬克思列寧主義、毛澤東思想、鄧小平理論和“三個代表”重要思想為指導,為實現共產主義而不懈奮斗。中國共產黨的誕生,開創(chuàng)了中國歷史的新紀元。在毛澤東思想的指引下,中國共產黨領導全國各族人民,經過長期的反帝反封反對官僚資本主義的革命斗爭,并取得最終的勝利。
新中國建立后,中國人民政治地位發(fā)生了根本性改變,然而經濟生活卻極度空乏。中國共產黨就是在這一窮二白的基礎下,肩負起領導中國人民進行社會主義建設的歷史重任。1956年工農業(yè)的偉大改造的完成,初步建成社會主義工業(yè)體系;扭轉了中國經濟衰敗的態(tài)勢。??? 黨的十一屆三中全會以來,以鄧小平為主要代表的黨和國家領導人,總結歷史,高瞻遠矚,做出將黨的工作中心向經濟建設轉移的決策,確立了建設有中國特色的社會主義的目標,進入全面建設社會主義階段。在獨立自主、自力更生的基礎上,實行改革開放,大力推動經濟的發(fā)展和社會的進步。用“一國兩制”政策順利解決了香港、澳門問題,洗刷百年恥辱,領導中國人民在經濟、農業(yè)、工業(yè)、教育、科技、國防、外交等各個領域都取得重要成果。在現代化建設上,取得了舉世矚目的成就。
黨的最終理想和最終目標是實現共產主義。而我們黨清醒的認識到實現共產主義是一個非常漫長的歷史過程,只有在社會主義充分發(fā)展和高度發(fā)達的基礎上才能實現。所以我們黨以發(fā)展做為執(zhí)政興國的第一要務,發(fā)展就是以經濟建設為中心,經濟政治文化相協(xié)調的發(fā)展,促進人與自然相和諧的可持續(xù)發(fā)展。中國共產黨以興國為已任,以富民為目標,走適合中國國情的社會主義發(fā)展的道路。按照代表先進社會生產力的發(fā)展要求,我們黨吸納各種德才兼?zhèn)涞膬?yōu)秀分子;按照代表先進文化前進方向的要求,我們黨吸納人類文化的一切優(yōu)秀成果;按照代表最廣大人民根本利益的要求,我們黨在工作中始終堅持“群眾路線”,緊緊依靠人民群眾,誠心誠意為人民謀利益,使黨獲得最廣大人民群眾的支持、擁護和信賴。
中國共產黨也是在領導中國人民發(fā)展的道路上,不斷解放、發(fā)展和完善自我。通過黨校的學習,讓我更加深切感受到,我們黨是一個成熟的、先進的、充滿活力的政黨。實現中華民族的偉大復興,只有靠中國共產黨。
基于這種認識和感受,我加入中國共產黨的決心和熱情更加強烈。我作為一名在校大學生,覺得加入中國共產黨有一種光榮的使命感,在理念上、作風上和行動上都受到黨組織的直接教育與培養(yǎng)。在政治上我堅信我們的黨、熱愛我們的黨,在思想上更加自覺、緊密地把自己的成長、事業(yè)、人生與黨的要求、使命和奮斗目標聯(lián)系在一起。懷著堅定實現共產主義的信念,我會在大學的工作、學習中,積極做好模范帶頭作用,以自己的實際行動表明入黨的決心,并實現自己的價值。
敬愛的黨組織:
我很榮幸的能夠有機會接受黨組織的培訓,通過這幾天的學習,我感受頗多,也受益匪淺,現將心得總結如下:
黨員,顧名思義,是中國共產黨中的一員。中國共產黨領導全國人民艱苦奮斗,自己創(chuàng)業(yè),在經濟建設和社會主義現代化建設中起模范帶頭作用。所以,我想,作為一名想成為中國共產黨一員的大學生來說,在大學校園內起模范帶頭作用是最基本的。
作為一名大學生,尤其是想成為一名黨員的大學生,我們首先要從自我做起,做一個有理想,有抱負,有責任感的當代青年。我們應該學好科學文化知識,學好共產主義的理論,在社會實踐中提高自己,在為人民服務的過程中實現自己的人生價值,為實現共產主義理想努力奮斗。所以,我們在日常學習,工作,生活中應該做到四個方面:
第一,要加強理論修養(yǎng),用理論知識武裝自己,同時要有堅定的信念,大學是各種社會思潮匯集,相互激蕩的地方,但是畢竟我們的社會閱歷少,理論基礎薄弱,有時候我們往往不能正確,全面的看待事物的發(fā)展,在復雜的社會中容易產生困惑,迷茫。所以,我們要堅定正確的政治方向,用馬克思主義理論武裝自己,牢固樹立共產主義信仰,明辨是非,自覺抵制不良思潮的侵蝕。
那么,我們應該怎么去做那?
首先,無論在任何場合,我們都應該勇敢的表明自己的立場和觀點。這不僅是一種自信的表現,而且為我們以后的生活打下良好的基礎。而作為一名黨員,就必須要有自己的政治信仰和政治觀點。如果總是回避自己的信仰和觀點,那就說明自己尚未建立正確的信仰和觀點,或者對自己的信仰和觀點認識不足,信心不夠。
其次,我們要積極的學習馬克思列寧主義,毛澤東思想,鄧小平理論和“三個代表”重要思想,這些對我們了解我國國情有良好的指導作用。
第二,我們要學習政治理論課程,樹立三種意識,即:堅定的方向意識,強烈的求職意識和牢固的自律意識。
首先,我們要有正確的學習目的和端正的學習態(tài)度,將學習與自己的成才和社會主義現代化建設聯(lián)系起來,刻苦學習,有追求真理的執(zhí)著勁頭,而且要有正確的學習方法,能夠舉一反三,具備較強的自學能力。
其次,自力更生,艱苦奮斗是黨的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)和作風,作為一名積極入黨的大學生,我們也應該具備這種優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng),在社會實踐中鍛煉自己的能力,為自己以后的工作求職打下堅實的基礎。
再有,我們要嚴以律己,我們應該自覺遵守學校的各項規(guī)章制度,關心集體和同學,善于團結其他人一起工作,堅決同各種不良現象做斗爭,嚴以律己。我們要時刻總結,看自己是否在不斷進步,看看自己還存在哪些不足,完善自己。
第三,要有正確的世界觀,人生觀和價值觀,要牢記宗旨,勇挑重任。我們要用馬克思主義理論武裝自己,我們要積極參與社會工作,在實踐中鍛煉成長,成為學校各項工作的帶頭人和骨干;努力團結,帶動廣大同學按照“四有新人”的要求,將自己培養(yǎng)成為社會主義建設事業(yè)的接班人。
樹立社會主義榮辱觀也是當代大學生應該做的基本工作。在小的方面來說,我們要遵章守紀,做文明中北人。在去年的一次全校性調查中,我們學校十大不文明現象主要有:
(1)語言不文明。語言是個人素質的表現,但往往有些大學生語言極為不文明。(2)沒有社會公德,例如,隨地吐痰之類的不文明現象。(3)個人禮儀不文明。(4)男女交往的舉止不
文明。(5)消費和攀比之風嚴重。(6)大學生紀律觀念不強。(7)課堂紀律不好。(8)考試中作弊現象嚴重。(9)自覺自習,早操的觀念不強。(10)學習的風氣不好。文明事關個人形象,事關個人的發(fā)展和個人的人生。所以,我們要從小事做起,做一個文明中北人。
再有,文明也事關一個國家的尊嚴。在新加坡的很多地方,一些旅游勝地的標語都用中文寫,他們的意思是什么,分明是寫給中國人看的,這些標語是我們的國恥。在天安門前這么莊嚴的地方,口香糖的殘漬是一個相當重要的問題。有一年在新疆的一個景區(qū),有一支由韓國旅客組成的隊伍在撿垃圾。這些現象足以說明在國內一些人還是有不文明習慣。作為新世紀的大學生,我們應該從自身做起,以身作則,帶動周圍的人,做一個文明的中國人,做一個有榮辱觀的中國人。
在大的方面來說,構建和諧社會必須要加強實行社會主義榮辱觀,我們要從自身做起,提倡和發(fā)揚社會主義榮辱觀。首先,我們應該了解發(fā)揚社會主義榮辱觀的現實意義:(1)樹立社會主義榮辱觀是貫徹落實科學發(fā)展觀的必然要求??茖W發(fā)展是有良心的發(fā)展,這種良心包括熱愛國家,誠實守信,遵紀守法等內容;科學發(fā)展是有倫理精神的發(fā)展,這種倫理精神包括崇尚科學,反對迷信,互助互愛等內涵。所以說,科學發(fā)展觀是在倫理價值上的指向就是社會主義的榮辱觀。(2)樹立社會主義榮辱觀是對全球化挑戰(zhàn)的客觀要求。(3)樹立社會主義榮辱觀是社會主義初級階段的國情要求。(4)樹立社會主義榮辱觀是完善社會主義市場體制的必然要求。
中華民族是一個有著悠久歷史文化的國家,社會主義榮辱觀在一定程度上也體現了一定的文化背景。臺灣文化局局長龍應臺說過:“在一個文化厚實深沉的社會里,人懂得尊重自己——他不茍且,因為不茍且所以有品位;人懂得尊重別人——他不霸道,因為不霸道所以有道德;人懂得尊重自然——他不掠奪,因為不掠奪所以有永續(xù)的生命。”所以,社會主義榮辱觀在一定程度上體現了一定的文化,要想有長期的發(fā)展就要用文化來武裝自己。
另外,我們還要樹立黨員意識,爭取日后做一名合格的黨員。黨員意識即“兩個不忘,三個自覺”:不忘共產黨員的職責,不忘共產黨員先進性的時代要求,自覺遵守黨章,執(zhí)行黨的路線方針和政策,自覺接受黨的領導,自覺維護黨的威信。
通過幾天的黨課學習,我意識到了樹立遠大理想的重要性,了解了樹立社會主義榮辱觀的重要意義。在以后的學習生活中,我們要以此位出發(fā)點,端正入黨動機,樹立黨員意識,爭取能成為一名合格的黨員。
第二篇:英語四級作文真題及參考
英語四級作文真題及參考范文
【題目1】
1.許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀看春節(jié)晚會
2.但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會.
3.我的看法.
【參考范文】The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala.Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations.It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.【點評】
本次四級考試作文總體上來說并不是很難。但表現出兩個出人意料:一是體裁,二是題材。
對于體裁來說,本次四級作文屬于正反對比論證類的文體。比較出人意料,又回到了老的考查模式。很多學生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用場。但是這只能得到最基本的分數。雖然模板對于考查學生的語言表達并不益處,但還能測試出考生的語言基本功。從四級考試寫作的測試目的來看,還是注重考查學生對基本語法、基本詞匯運用能力的掌握情況。所以除了模板之外,考生還要在基本表達上狠下功夫,只有在平時多操練,在考場上才游刃有余。除此之外,學生還要在作文中多采用閃光點,這樣就會使作文在基本分數上有所提升,有所突破。
對于題材,本次四級作文的話題是關于人們對于春節(jié)晚會的不同看法,屬于社會生活類話題,一反常態(tài),沒有再次考查校園類話題。但是對于當代大學生來說,與大學生有關的社會話題也是需要關注的,這也說明考試方向的變化:校園類話題與社會熱點話題同等重要,這一點對于未來考四級的學生的作文備考的方向有的指導意義。
【題目2】1.校學生會將組織一次暑期志愿者活動,現招募志愿者。2.本次志愿者活動的目的,內容、安排等。3.報名條件及聯(lián)系方式。
這是一封公開信或會議通知,格式與信相同。An announcement for a voluntary program
【范文一】 Follow Students:
The hard and hectic(busy and bustling)semester is drawing to close.The Students’ Union is scheduled to organize a clean-up program to the Zhongshan Lake.The purpose of this program is to enhance the environment awareness of general public.We are now recruiting new members of volunteers for the event.The program procedure goes like this: next Saturday morning at 9:00 volunteers of 50 will go to the Zhongshan lake.Around the lake we will put up signs and posters calling people’s attention to the importance of in environment protection and pick up the trash by some tourists.This will certainly attract a lot of people since it is a weekend and the park is particularly popular with tourists.Each day there is an estimated number of 2000 people visiting the place, sight-seeing and picnic-going.This must be both exiting and rewarding.We welcome any students who like to take the time and trouble to do something for environment conservation.Interested students can register yourselves with us now.(or sign up your names at our office.)Our number is 88807777.The Students Union 【范文二】
Follow Students:
The hard and hectic(busy and bustling)semester is drawing to close.Have you got any plan for the summer vacation? Want anything interesting and exciting for a change? This is maybe for you.The Students Union is recruiting new members of volunteers for a clean-up program to the Zhongshan lake.The program is intended to promote the environment awareness of general public.The procedure goes like this: next Saturday morning at 9:00 volunteers of 50 will go to the Zhongshan lake.Around the lake we will put up signs and posters calling people’s attention to the importance of in environment protection and pick up the trash by some tourists.This will certainly attract a lot of people since it is a weekend and the park is particularly popular with tourists.Each day there is an estimated number of 2000 people visiting the place, sight-seeing
and picnic-going.This must be both exiting and rewarding.We welcome any students who like to take the time and trouble to do something for environment conservation.Interested students can register yourselves with us now.(or sign up your names at our office.)Our number is 88807777.The Students Union 【題目3】
1、近十年來某城市越來越多人選擇出去旅游
2、出現這種現象的原因
3、這種現象可能產生的影響
表格:1995
2000
20051萬人
近4萬 12萬以上
【范文一】
From the table, we can see that in the past 10 years, the number of people in a given city who have gone traveling abroad has increased considerably.Especially in the recent 5 years, the figure has been more than tripled, surging from 40,000 to 120,000.There are several reasons for the change.Firstly, with the development of economy, more and more people become better off.And their ability to finance their trip abroad is growing.Secondly, tourism has greatly developed over the decade.Travel agencies offer not only domestic packages but also travel specials abroad.In addition, individuals today are expected and encouraged to go outside to widen their horizon and to face the real world of globalization.In this way they hope to keep themselves informed of what is going on around the world.From the changes reflected in the table, we can predict that the number of individuals going out of the country will boost.This encouragingly and inevitably facilitates the cultural exchange between ours and the rest of the world and this trend will be irreversible.【范文二】Currently, people in growing numbers are seeking to make tours in other countries.As is vividly indicated in the above chart, the numbers of foreign-travelling people in X city has reached to more than 120,000 in the year of
2005, compared with about 12,000 in 1995 and less than 40,000 in 2000.From the chart, we can also predict that this trend is likely to continue in the following years.The reasons for the increasing of traveling abroad are obvious as follows.Firstly, as the development of people’s life style and economy, they are rich enough to afford to go travel abroad.Secondly, the world has become a small village as the information age and internet improve.Thirdly, more and more people are interested in the cultue of other countries, therefore they are eager to visit them in their eyed.As we can see from the chart, this trend mentioned above will bring lots of benefits for us.For one thing, traveling abroad will help connect our world closely and enhance the friendship between countries.For another, tourists can leran great amount of experiences and cultures, which will be unquestionably beneficial for our countries development
【題目4】
Part V.Writing(30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :
1.名校校園正成為旅游新熱點
2.校園是否應對游客開放,人們看法不同
3.我認為……
[參考作文]Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
【范文一】
One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university compus.During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites.In my opinion, university campus should be open to tourists.In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities.Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students.Besides this, as more tourists come to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism.In a word, I think the university compus should be open to the tourists 4
【范文二】
In university compus, especially in some famous ones, such as Peking University and Qinghua University, tourists are always seen looking around everywhere.Although most of them visit with hope and repect, I think university compus should not be open to tourists.First, tourists' visit will disturb the normal teaching.They always get into teaching buildings, libraries and so on.They will make noise and throw rubbish everywhere.Second, some tourists trample grass to take photos, and sculpture on trees to leave words.These will affect the environment of the compus badly.The university is a holy place for study, not for tourism.So It should not be open.【題目5】Part V.Writing(30 minutes)Directions:For this part.you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to a company declining a job offer.You should write at Least 150 words following the outline given below:
1.對公司提供職位表示感謝
2.解釋為何不能接受所提供職位的原因
3.希望予以諒解,并表達對公司的良好祝愿.【范文一】Dear Mr.Smith,Thank you very much for giving me so much time for last week's interview.I was very exciting you could provide the position for me as I'm a student who just graduate from college now.But I must say sorry for your believing in me.I could not be able to take this job.Because I have passed the examination to graduate school.As I have mentioned to you at the interview that I have attended the graduation exam half a year ago.At that time, I don't know the results.But now I received the acceptance letter from the school.So I couldn't be able to join in your company.I'm sorry for it.But here, I still want express again my deep gratefulness to your job and warm welcome.I hope and am sure we will have opportunite to cooperate in the future.Sincerely yours, Li Ming
第三篇:英語四級作文真題
2008年大學英語四級作文講座
2008年6月大學英語四級考試真題 一.寫作部分(9:00-9:30)Part Ⅰ Writing(30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write according to the outline given below.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.Recreational activities 1.娛樂活動多種多樣
2.娛樂活動可能使人們受益,也可能有危害性 3.作為大學生我的看法
College students are enjoying various kinds of recreational activities which involve the following ones: hanging out with friends in parties and clubs, watching films, etc.Those activities bring about benefits as well as disadvantages.Participating in such leisure activities, on the one hand, provides them with great benefits.To begin with, it helps to enhance the communication between undergraduates who are often busy themselves in their homework and researches.It invigorates their off-class lives.Moreover, it will lesson their anxiety and pressure and give them fresh feeling, thus enabling them engage in their works by heart and soul.On the other hand, it does harm to them.Firstly, it distracts students from their studies.To some extent, they can’t find a good balance between the entertainment and study.As a university student, I will spare no efforts to strike a balance between recreation and study.Only in this way can we develop ourselves in an all-around way.2008年1月
What Electives to Choose 1.各大學開設了各種各樣的選修課
2.學生因為各種原因選擇了不同的選修課 3.以你自己為例······
We all know that elective course can make a free space for everyone to show their strong points, develop their imaginations, creations and personal styles.Every term our school would offer a range of elective courses which you can choose according to your own areas of interest.I always read all course information and analysis which one is suitable for us study.This semester, I took an course about psychological health as my elective course.Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that people go to have some psychological consultations, including students in school.I always face great pressure from study and life.Being depressed for a long time, I doubt if I am physically healthy.So I choose it as my eclective course of this term.During the course, my mental state improved greatly.First and foremost, I tried to build up a healthy lifestyle.Furthermore, I realized that we need to find different ways to relax ourselves when we face severe competition.Thirdly, we should be sympathetic.Thanks to the electives course.范文2
All the universities offer various electives for students to choose.They may make different choices due to different reasons.But as far as I am concerned, Fashion and Image Design course is worth studying for each individual.First, a good appearance may help us make a better impression in social contacts.The way we are dressed helps us to preserve a sense of our own value and personality.Second, Fashion adds spice to life with its rich color, variety, and beauty.The world will be a dull place to live in if we always wear clothes of the same style and color.And the third, also the most important, being well-dressed is of psychological importance.Because dress properly can enhance our self-confidence in appearance, which will lead to confidence in our success in life.That’s the reason why I choose this course.The confident people are the most charming people, I believe that Fashion and Image Design will give you an unusual life.范文3
Nowadays, there usually exists a wide selection of electives for college students to choose from.However, students have quite different plans for their future so they always end up learning courses based on their own ideas.Some students may choose to learn a certain course in order to obtain an extra certificate for their job hunting after graduation.Because they assume that some more knowledge could ensure more chances of winning in finding a good job.Others may have their choice made just for fun.They tend to hold the idea that college life could be more colorful if they could widen their knowledge through elective courses.As far as I’m concerned, I’m inclined to choose electives based on both the value of the courses and the interest of my own.范文4
Nowadays many college students prefer to have electives in their spare time because the courses can offer a variety of skills and abundant knowledge apart from what they learn in the daily courses.There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with, many students want to get another degree besides their own, so that they can have more competence when they seek a job.Furthermore, as for me, I don’t care about degree or job, I just want to obtain some necessary skills to make my college life worthwhile.What I’m concerned most is how to own more skills that may be necessary for my future.Finally, some students want to learn anything that is different from what they are learning now.The science students, for example, want to know about Shakespeare while the art students want to tell how a vehicle works and how to deal with it when it breaks down.So, they can all get what they think is useful to their college life.On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of multi-demand of the employment market.There is still a long way for us to improve the elective itself, but as a student myself, I find it rewarding and interesting
2007年6月
Part I Writing(30 minutes)注意:此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Welcome to our club.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
歡迎辭,歡迎加入俱樂部。
Welcome to our club
1、本社團的主要活動內容
2、參加本社團的好處
3、如何加入本社團
范文1
There is a general discussion today about the issue of clubs in universities.This club is to help graduates get suitable jobs.Obviously, now students in growing numbers are beginning to realize that it is a good way for us to put our leanings into practice.A lot of reasons or benefits are responsible for joining us.To begin with, many students have no ideas of getting a post after graduation, however it may offer you a chance to touch the field of the job-hunting.In addition, it is free of change.What’s more, you may have relationships with these graduates, who are likely to help you in future.In other words, you are to be exposed to opportunities.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that it is beneficial for you to join this organization.You can email us by love@sina.com with your application.Please act without delay!
范文2 Welcome to Our Club
June 23, 2007
The Speech Club is organizing school-wide speech training and contests to be held on each Saturday at the Students’ Recreational Center.Five prestigious experts and professors will be invited to be speech lecturers and contest judges.For each speech contest, the first six winners will be given awards.Attending our club has substantial advantages.Firstly, it can improve your ability to deliver a speech which is of utmost significance to your future career and development.Secondly, it can help you to possess self-confidence, enrich your extra curricula activities and make your campus life dimensional, colorful and vigorous.To sum up, the experiences in our club will be extraordinarily unforgettable throughout your life.Students who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week(June 26).Everybody is welcome to attend our club.2007年1月
Spring Festival Gala on TV 1.許多人喜歡在除夕觀看春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會 2.有些人卻提出取消春節(jié)聯(lián)歡晚會 3.在我看來······
【參考范文】
Spring Festival Gala on CCTV
Since its very advent CCTV’s Spring Festival Gala has made every effort to present grand parties to its gigantic audience with a galaxy of stars and wonderful performances.It has become a custom for millions of Chinese people to sit through the variety show following the traditional family reunion feast.They simply cannot step into the new year without the gala which seems as indispensable to the New Year’s Eve celebration as firecrackers.With the passage of years however a growing number of people begin to view the gala as “ chicken rib” unappealing and worthless when people can feast themselves on other evening entertainment.Some even suggest throwing away the show which fails to give its increasingly demanding and diverse audience a convincing excuse to be rooted in the sofa and stay glued to the TV.To my eye the existence of the gala is still justifiable.For one thing with the variety show characteristic of Chinese tradition aired both home and abroad it provides the Chinese people especially those overseas with a good opportunity to establish their cultural identity on this unique evening.For another the gala a rare occasion of gathering of those performers is undoubtedly a treat for those in the remote or poverty-stricken areas.【參考范文】
The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala.Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations.It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show.2006年6月新題型
Our Students Selecting Their Lecturers 1. 有些大學允許學生自由選擇某些課程的任課老師 2. 學生選擇老師時所考慮的主要因素是······ 3. 學生自選任課老師的益處及可能產生的問題
Nowadays many universities entitle students to choose lecturers freely for some courses, which is welcomed by most students, and is becoming the focus of the students and lecturers concern.There are many factors which will influence students’ selecting lecturers.First of all, it is generally accepted that a lecturer’s professional knowledge and ability is the most important factor, since students choose his /her courses to learn knowledge.Moreover, quite a few students think teaching methods and skills are essential to a good lecturer.A lecturer must know how to teach.In addition, a lecturer’s sense of humor is also an important factor many students will consider.Undoubtedly, freely choosing of lecturers is very beneficial to both lecturers and students.On one hand it can provide a good chance for lecturers to prove and show their ability.On the other hand, in this way students can choose lecturers they like and obtain more initiative in learning.However, since it is a free choice, a small number of excellent lecturers will become the focus of most students, which will lead to an unreasonable class size and influence teaching effect seriously.2006年6月英語四級作文
題目:An announcement for a voluntary program
1、校學生會組織依次暑假志愿活動現招聘志愿者
2、本次志愿者活動的目的、內容及安排
3、報名條件和聯(lián)系方式
Volunteers Needed
范文A:
Ladies and gentlemen, our Student Union is calling for your due attention for a voluntary program to be launched in this imminent summer vacation and we are looking forward to your keen concern and active participation in earnest.This Program is designed to offer the young kids from a certain poverty-stricken area of Yun Nan Province an opportunity of tree education, which means a two-month stay there.We are convinced it is bound to help us university students to put our learning to full play, to foster a meaningful conception of life of being more caring and tolerant and to assume new tasks and responsibilities after graduation.Dear fellow students, we are beneficiaries of a rare privilege of formal education, meanwhile, there are many people, as innately talented as us, have been deprived of this equal chance, therefore, we hope sophomores and juniors, if interested and willing to help, in this university to contact us at 004km.cn or by 021-12345678.2005年12月24日英語四級作文及范文
Part V.Writing(30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? You should write at Least 120 words following the outline given below :
1.名校校園正成為旅游新熱點
2.校園是否應對游客開放,人們看法不同 3.我認為……
[參考作文]Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
[參看范文一]
One can always find visitors taking pictures and enjoying the scenery in university compus.During the May Day Holiday, National Day Holiday, summer and winter vacations, many University campuses become popular tourist sites.In my opinion, university campus should be open to tourists.In fact, there are many royal gardens and parks, all of them obviously better than the scenery in the Universities.Why do you think people prefer visiting here with their children? That is because it is a dream goal for many Chinese parents and young ambitious students.Besides this, as more tourists come to visit universities, these universities can widen their influence as well and they can also make some profit from the tourism.In a word, I think the university compus should be open to the tourists
[參看范文二]
In university campus, especially in some famous ones, such as Peking University and Qinghua University, tourists are always seen looking around everywhere.Although most of them visit with hope and respect, I think university campus should not be open to tourists.First, tourists' visit will disturb the normal teaching.They always get into teaching buildings, libraries and so on.They will make noise and throw rubbish everywhere.Second, some tourists trample grass to take photos, and sculpture on trees to leave words.These will affect the environment of the campus badly.The university is a holy place for study, not for tourism.So It should not be open.2005年6月18日英語四級作文及范文
Teacher’s Day :
1.向老師致以節(jié)日的問候。
2.回憶件老師的教誨中難忘的事情。3.我如何報答老師。
[參考范文之一]
This is Teachers’ Day and a time to be grateful to all teachers.This profession deserves the special recognition and respect.There is no more appropriate time than this to honor you and others in your chosen field.You have my eternal gratefulness.Have a happy Teachers’ Day.The whole secret of the teacher’s force lies in the conviction that men are convertible.Teacher, who educate children, deserve more honor than parents, who merely gave them birth;for the latter provided more life, while the former ensure a good life.What sculpture is to a block of marble, education is to the soul.My heartfelt thanks to you, dear teacher.On the voyage of life, you have kindled the light of hope for me.What you have done enriches my mind and broadens my view.On this day I honour you sincerely.No one deserves a bigger thank you than you.One day is hardly enough to show our gratitude.[參考范文之二]
National Teacher Day is always the Tuesday of the first full week of May.And it is always for our students to give our special thanks to our lovely teacher.I still remember last year when I was feeling lost, down and out, I had no idea about my life,my love, my study even doubt why I was here in the world.So then came so much wine and smoke, I was tired, physical and mental.I even wanted to end my life just jumping from the top of our building.Then my teacher came to me, she said she knew what I was afraid of, she also told me that’s very common like many young people of my age.She told me to call her anytime I need her help.I did so ,we often chat ems and made some phone call.I just can’t remember when come the mirical.I have found myself now!
Another teacher’s day,to all the teachers,to our parents.[參考范文之三]
The Once per year ’s Teacher’s Day will come soon.At first, I will extend the greeting of festival to my teacher.Last week, I suddenly had a stomachache terribly in the school.My teacher was very worried, sent me to the hospital in a hurry.After checking , doctor verified that I have got the acute enteritis.My teacher came with me all the night in the hospital, so kind as to look after me.My teacher fed me food and medicine on time.After struggling with the serious illness in one days and one nights, I left hospital.Then my teacher helps me to make up a missed lesson of English in a few days in succession.I express gratitude to my teacher, I can’t recover so fast without my teacher.Because of my teacher I can participate today’s CETD.I want to repay my teacher.No present can express my grateful feeling to my teacher.And the best repayment is that I can pass the CETD this time.2004年6月四級作文題及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition entitled A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction.You should write at least 120 words according to the following guidelines:
Your role: a tour guide
Your audience: a group of foreign tourists Your introduction should include: some welcoming words the schedule for the day
a description of the place the tourists will be visiting
(e.g.a scenic spot or a historical site, etc.)You should make the introduction interesting and the arrangements for the day clear to everybody.范文:
Good morning, ladies and gentleman, welcome to Beijing.To begin with, I would like to introduce myself: I am the tourist guide from China Travel Service and it’s great honor to stay here with all of you for a whole day.Just as the old saying goes, “It is always a pleasure to greet a friend from afar”,I wish all of you to enjoy yourselves during this trip.The following is schedule of the day.The first spot we are going to visit is the Great Wall, the grandest fortification in ancient China.The next sight to look around is the Ming Tombs, which is one of the best-preserved tombs for 13 emperors in Ming Dynasty more than one thousand years ago.In the afternoon, we will go for the Summer Palace, the royal park for Chinese ancient emperors.Currently we are on the way to the Great Wall.Dating back to the seven century B.C., the Great Wall is constructed by respective states for fortifying against invasion of neighboring states.By the reasons of long history and its length, it becomes one of the eight wonders in the world and represents the highest wisdom and crafts.From the top of the Great Wall, we can enjoy a magnificent view of continuous mountains, green trees and blooming wild flowers.It is no doubt that one says, “He who has never been to the Great Wall is not a true man”。
Above is my introduction to the Great Wall.If any of you have questions, please feel free to ask me at any time.
第四篇:英語四級真題及答案
1991年6月大學英語四級真題及答案
41.We had a party last month, and it was a lot of fun, so let's have ______ one this month.(A)another(C)the other
(B)more(D)other
42.It was difficult to guess what her _____ to the news would be.(A)impression(C)comment
(B)reaction(D)opinion
43.I decided to go to the library as soon as I _____.(A)finish what I did(C)would finish what I was doing
(B)finished what I did(D)finished what I was doing
44.There were some ______ flowers on the table.(A)benefits(C)false
(B)unnatural(D)unreal
45.We are interested in the weather because it _____ us so directly----what we wear, what we do, and even how we feel.(A)benefits(C)guides
(B)affects(D)effects
46.Will all those _____ the proposal raise their hands?
(A)in relation to(C)in excess of
(B)in contrast to(D)in favor of
47.Children are very curious ______.(A)at heart(C)on purpose
(B)in person(D)by nature
48.The match was cancelled because most of the members _____ a match without a standard court.(A)objected to having(C)objected to have
(B)were objected to have(D)were objected to having
49.The teacher doesn't permit _____ in class.(A)smoke(C)smoking
(B)to smoke(D)to have a smoke
50.I like watching TV _____ to the cinema.(A)more than to go(C)more than going
(B)than going(D)rather than to go
51.I appreciate ______ to your home.(A)to be invited(C)having invited
(B)to have invited(D)being invited
52.I hope my teacher will take my recent illness into _____ when judging my examination.(A)regard(C)account
(B)counting(D)observation
53.You _____ all those calculations!We have a computer to do that sort of thing.(A)needn't have done(C)shouldn't have done
(B)must not have done(D)can not have done
54.Important people don't often have much free time as their work _____ all their time.(A)takes away(C)takes up
(B)takes over(D)takes in
55.When I was very young, I was terribly frightened of school, but I soon ____ it.(A)got off(C)got away
(B)got across(D)got over
56.Many people complain of the rapid ____ of modern life.(A)rate(C)pace
(B)speed(D)growth
57.San Francisco is usually cool in the summer, but Los Angeles _____.(A)is rarely(C)hardly is
(B)rarely is(D)is scarcely
58.The speaker, _____ for her splendid speeches, was warmly received by the audience.(A)having known(C)knowing
(B)being known(D)known
59.American women were _____ the right to vote until 1920 after many years of hard struggle.(A)ignored(C)refused
(B)neglected(D)denied
60.I couldn't find _____, and so I took this one.(A)a large enough coat(C)a large coat enough
(B)an enough large coat(D)a coat enough large
61.I always _____ what I have said.(A)get to(C)lead to
(B)hold to(D)see to
62.No sooner had we reached the top of the hill _____ we all sat down to rest.(A)when(C)than
(B)then(D)until
63.Evidence came up _____ specific speech sounds are recognized by babies as young as 6 months old.(A)what(C)that
(B)which(D)whose
64.He moved away from his parents, and missed them ______ enjoy the exciting life in New York.(A)too much to(C)very much to
(B)enough to(D)much so as to
65.He was _____ of having asked such a silly question.(A)sorry(C)ashamed
(B)guilty(D)miserable
66.The last time we had a family reunion was ______ my brother's wedding ceremony four years ago.(A)in(C)during
(B)at(D)over
67.What _____ would happen if the director knew you felt that way?
(A)do you suppose(C)will you suppose
(B)you suppose(D)you would suppose
68._____ the advances of science, the discomforts of old age will no doubt always be with us.(A)As for(C)Except
(B)Besides(D)Despite
69.How close parents are to their children _____ a strong influence on the character of the children.(A)have(C)having
(B)has(D)to have
70.He _____ when the bus came to a sudden stop.(A)was almost hurt(C)was to hurt himself
(B)was hurt himself(D)was hurting himself
41.A 42.B 43.D 44.A 45.B 46.D 47.D 48.A 49.C 50.C
51.D 52.C 53.A 54.C 55.D 56.C 57.B 58.D 59.D 60.A
61.B 62.C 63.C 64.A 65.C 66.B 67.A 68.D 69.B 70.A
第五篇:英語四級作文真題
Part Ⅰ Writing
審題謀篇
本次四級作文主題為“綠色校園”,這是一個看似簡單普通的話題,寫起來卻不是那么容易。因為很多考生對于“綠色校園”所表達的內涵感覺比較生僻。假如對“綠色校園”這一主題感到難以把握,考生可以從作文提綱入手進行分析以獲取對“綠色校園”這一概念的相關信息。根據作文提示2,可以看出此處的“綠色校園”指的決不僅僅是青青的草地和高大的樹木構成的校園綠色風景,也不僅僅指對校園環(huán)境的珍視和愛護,而是指一種環(huán)境保護的文化氛圍和師生具有的環(huán)境素養(yǎng),以及由此帶來的和諧的人文環(huán)境和社會績效。在深入理解概念的基礎上,考生還應對 “綠色校園”的重要性進行剖析,這時,考生可以從多個角度組織素材,比如從校園的環(huán)境問題出發(fā),進而擴展到師生的環(huán)境意識對“綠色校園”所產生的長遠意義以及為未來環(huán)境改善所做的貢獻。最后是闡述建設“綠色校園”所要采取的措施。需要注意的就是作文給分的重點在于考生如何用恰當的語言詞匯表達自己的思想觀點。而不是寫得越多,得分就越高。一般分成三個自然段,大概十句話,基本的分布為首段、末段合起來五句或六句,中間段五句或四句,做到結構清楚,重點突出,就可以了。參考范文
Creating a Green Campus
Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.建設綠色校園
近來,隨著建設并保持“綠色地球”的觀念成為社會關注的焦點,“綠色校園”也成為校園里流行的話題。這無疑會給我們的校園和社會帶來長遠的利益。
“綠色校園”不僅僅指綠色的環(huán)境,還包括人們頭腦中的環(huán)境意識。學校在培養(yǎng)年輕一代上起著關鍵作用,“綠色校園”的意識必定會對學生畢業(yè)后的環(huán)境保護意識產生長遠影響。更為重要的是,年輕一代面臨著嚴重的環(huán)境污染,有太多問題等待他們去解決。
為使“綠色校園”成為現實,首先應該制定出可持續(xù)發(fā)展、可長遠發(fā)展的有效政策。其次,還需要人們對環(huán)境污染的嚴肅性有正確認識并采取實際行動切實減少污染。最后但同樣重要的是,有必要加強學校和社會的聯(lián)系以便在全社會共同努力下使“綠色校園”順利實施。范文點評
范文以“綠色校園”開篇,保證了文章切題。第一段開門見山,強調當今環(huán)保理念下構建“綠色校園”的長遠意義。第二段,著重討論“綠色校園”的含義,指出“綠色校園”不僅指校園中的綠化,還指生活在校園中的人們的綠色和環(huán)保意識,把校園這個小環(huán)境和社會這個大環(huán)境結合起來,說理更加深刻。第三段是談及具體的做法,分一、二、三點進行論述,無疑是使“綠色校園”的理念落在實處。結構完整,首尾呼應,用詞準確。關系詞的正確使用讓句與句之間、段與段之間銜接緊湊,思想表達成熟有深度。
【生動的用詞】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound長遠的;sustainable可持續(xù)的;recyclable可循環(huán)的。
【豐富的短語】bring benefit to帶來利益;play a crucial role in發(fā)揮關鍵作用;under the burden of在??重負下;come true實現;call for要求。
【多變的句式】
范文中長句、短句、簡單句、復雜句交叉使用。不同句型之間的轉換,能讓閱卷老師更好地了解考生對句子結構的掌握運用,從而獲得高分。
避錯指導
本次作文在題材上,雖然仍然延續(xù)了我們所熟悉校園類話題,但與社會背景有很大關系。剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會使環(huán)保減排這個主題成為焦點,在全世界都提倡可持續(xù)發(fā)展、和諧發(fā)展這一背景下的“綠色校園”,同時也是一個社會熱點話題,這是我們審題時所必須考慮的。另外開篇時,切忌拖泥帶水,應直截了當,使閱卷老師對文章主題一目了然。除正確審題之外,考生還應注意語言的準確運用,不落俗套。不同句型之間轉換時,考生應對句子結構全面掌握,避免句式錯誤造成扣分。
最后,應盡量避免單詞拼寫錯誤。本次作文常見的卷面拼寫錯誤如下表:
正確拼寫 詞性及詞義 錯誤的拼寫
focus n.焦點 focuse
effect n.影響 effection /affect
environment n.環(huán)境 envirment/invironment
burden n.負擔 burdon solve v.解決 slove serious a.嚴肅的 serous true a.真的 ture
society n.社會 soceity
theory n.理論 thery
總之,考生在構思和寫作過程中要盡可能做到思路完整,恰如其分地選擇詞匯。畢竟,無錯表達才是四級語言表達合格的核心。
能力拓展
【同義詞轉換】
作文表達除了準確,還要做到句式多變,詞匯靈活多樣。
1.realize → be aware of 意識到
We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我們最好意識到周圍污染的嚴峻性。
2.keep → preserve 保持
It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育學生意識到保護環(huán)境的重要性。
3.lead → conduct 引導
This will help conduct the activities of the college students.這有助于引導大學生的行為。
【話題備考錦囊】
6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“綠色校園”絕不僅僅是一個綠色環(huán)境。
7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in
various environmental protection activities.建設“綠色校園”將會極大激勵學生參與環(huán)境保護。
8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.為全面實施“綠色校園”,必須采取有效措施。
9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校園建設不僅對學生的身體發(fā)展很重要,而且對他們的心理健康也很重要。
10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫無疑問,對于綠色校園應該給與更多的思考。
【話題詞匯拓展】
devastation n.毀壞disastrous a.損失慘重的doom v.厄運,毀滅existence n.存在,生活
healthful a.健康的messy a.骯臟的,凌亂的participation n.分享,參與preserve v.保存,保護
preventive a.預防性的purify v.澄清,凈化
stimulation n.激勵,鼓舞arouse consciousness 喚起意識
命題風向標
本次作文難度適中,與之前考試中出現的“限塑”主題有千絲萬縷的聯(lián)系??忌朐诒敬巫魑闹蝎@取高分,除了審題恰當獨到,還要有扎實的語言基礎。如本文主題“綠色校園”可以采用多種表達:green campus和environmental-friendly campus;“綠色校園的構建”可以使用create,build up,establish和construct等,以體現考生對詞匯多樣性的積累。
從關注白色污染到關注博物館免費開放,再到綠色校園構建,四級作文命題重點在側重校園類話題的同時開始向與大學生生活有關的話題轉移。由此也凸顯了對歷年真題分析的重要意義。更多地立足真題,總結規(guī)律,切實提高自己語言能力,始終是四級作文備考的根本。