第一篇：熱 點(diǎn)話題2014年中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)

熱點(diǎn)話題2014年中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)

感恩

對(duì)父母心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o予我生命，讓我健康成長(zhǎng);對(duì)老師心存

感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o了我教誨，讓我拋卻愚昧;對(duì)朋友心存感恩，因?yàn)樗麄兘o了我友愛(ài);對(duì)社會(huì)心存感恩，因?yàn)樯鐣?huì)給了我智慧和力量。自從國(guó)家實(shí)施義務(wù)教育以來(lái)，書本免費(fèi)，食宿免費(fèi)，而且還有貧困助學(xué)金等。面對(duì)這些，我們應(yīng)該心存感恩，感謝祖國(guó)對(duì)我們的厚望和期盼。讓我們永遠(yuǎn)記?。焊兄x父母、感謝老師、感謝朋友、感謝全社會(huì)!請(qǐng)以“感恩”為話題寫一篇80—100字的作文。

★ 范文

What should we thank?

The thankful great universe provides the environment of existence for us and give us sunlight, air, water and everything in keeping with us existence of space, bring storm to let us accept to toughen for us, bring to us mysterious let us look for.The thankful parents give us the life, make us feel the merriment of the human life, feel the genuine feeling of the human life, feel the comity of the human life, feel happiness of the human life, also feel hardships and pain and sufferings of the human life!The thankful teacher works with diligence and without fatigue everyday of teach, give us knowledge ability, and put on the wing which flies toward the ideal for us.The thankful classmate and friend grow up with us and let us no longer stand alone in the itinerary of life.The thankful our country provides us with free books, dormitory and food.Whenever it is, we should keep a thankful heart towards everything existed.Only thus, can we become a useful man.

第二篇：2014年中考英語(yǔ)書面 表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題

2014年中考英語(yǔ)書面 表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題：如何減壓讓生活更美好

許 多學(xué)習(xí)生活中的 煩惱都會(huì)使人產(chǎn)生壓力 ,為了更好地發(fā)現(xiàn)及解決同學(xué)們中存在的心理壓力問(wèn)題,你們班特意開展了一次以“Less Pressure, Better Life”為主題的英語(yǔ)演講比賽,請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備發(fā)言稿,談?wù)勀愕囊恍┚徑鈮毫Φ暮棉k法,與同學(xué)分享,內(nèi)容包括:

(1)同學(xué) 們中普遍存在的壓力是什么;

(2)我的壓力是什么;

(3)我是 如何成功緩解我的壓力的。

注意:文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。詞數(shù)80~100。

★ 范文

Less Pressure, Better Life

Hello, boys and girls!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world.Students in our class are under too much pressure.Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.I’m always under pressure, too.M y parents want me to be the top student in class.So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends.Last Monday eveni ng, I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy.I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me a t last.SoI think a conversation with paren ts is necessary to solve the problem.That’s all.Thank you!

第三篇：2014年銅仁市中考英語(yǔ)預(yù)測(cè)熱點(diǎn)話題書面表達(dá)[推薦]

2014年銅仁市中考英語(yǔ)預(yù)測(cè)熱點(diǎn)話題書面表達(dá)

以下材料供英語(yǔ)老師參考，建議根據(jù)學(xué)生實(shí)際，從6月2日起安排學(xué)生背誦和默寫。

第一篇：《中國(guó)漢字聽寫大會(huì)》的熱播引起了人們對(duì)漢字書寫的關(guān)注。假如你校將舉辦一次演講比賽，請(qǐng)你以“傳遞書寫文明，領(lǐng)略漢字之美”為主題寫一篇演講稿。內(nèi)容必須包括：

1、分析漢字書寫存在的問(wèn)題和原因：書寫能力下降；鍵盤的使用；

2、表達(dá)漢字書寫的重要性：提高書寫意識(shí)；感受漢字之美；傳承中華文化；

3、提出提高漢字書寫能力的方法：端正書寫態(tài)度；開展書寫競(jìng)賽。參考詞匯：中國(guó)漢字 Chinese characters傳遞pass on書寫競(jìng)賽：writing competition 注意： 1．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2．語(yǔ)言通順，意思連續(xù)，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Boys and girls, have you ever experienced this moment? You pick up a pen and start to write something down, but you can’t remember what the characters(漢字)look like.By studying Chinese characters, a window to Chinese culture and history is open to you.【答案】Possible version

Boys and girls, have you ever experience this moment? You pick up a pen and start to write something down, but you can’t remember what the characters look like.It seems that Chinese characters are in danger.Most people now write Chinese on keyboards.They now communicate with each other by e-mail or on QQ instead of writing letters.As a result they forget what a Chinese character looks like.Chinese people must understand the importance of Chinese characters, and it’s our duty to pass on Chinese culture.What’s more, we can feel the beauty of them.When we do homework, we must try to write carefully.More writing competitions can be held to help us write correctly.By studying Chinese characters, a window to Chinese culture and history

is open to you.第二篇：一個(gè)民族有自己的“民族夢(mèng)”，一個(gè)國(guó)家有自己的“國(guó)家夢(mèng)”，同樣，每個(gè)人也應(yīng)有屬于自己的“美麗夢(mèng)想”。最近，你班就“我們的理想職業(yè)”展開了一次調(diào)查。下表是你們小組的調(diào)查情況。請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容寫一篇

注意1 100詞左右（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；

2不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分；3在必要處作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Our ideal work Recently we did a survey in our class in order to learn about students’ ideal jobs Here’s a report about my group members’ ideas第三篇：今年央視春晚，一曲《時(shí)間都去哪兒了》讓許多觀眾深受感動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是九年級(jí)一班的李明，你將代表班級(jí)參加學(xué)校舉行的“感恩父母”英語(yǔ)演講比賽。演講內(nèi)容包括：

1.講述一件你和父母之間難忘的事情;2.你對(duì)“感恩父母”的認(rèn)識(shí)； 3.具體的感恩行動(dòng)（至少兩點(diǎn)）； 4.表達(dá)祝福與愿望。注意：

1．語(yǔ)言通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范；

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3．詞數(shù)80左右。文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?！敬鸢浮縃ello, everyone!I’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9.Today the topic My parents do many things for me.When I was 10 years old, I caught a cold and had a high fever at midnight.I felt so terrible.My mother took me to hospital immediately.She took good care of me without a rest during the whole night.My parents give me almost everything.However, they don’t want to get any reward from me.From now on, I will help my parents do more housework.My mother’s birthday is coming;I will make a birthday card for her.I must thank her by studying hard.I hope my parents are in good health forever.第四篇：請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示內(nèi)容，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80-100個(gè)詞的短文。

新華學(xué)校實(shí)施了改善學(xué)生健康的“蛋奶工程”。Wet Hua是該學(xué)校的一名學(xué)生。這天，Wei Hua 又得到了剛發(fā)下的雞蛋和牛奶。他打開那盒牛奶喝了一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)，就不想喝了。連續(xù)吃了一段時(shí)間的牛奶和雞蛋，Wei Hua感到吃膩了，就偷偷地把雞蛋和大半盒的牛奶扔進(jìn)了垃圾桶里。遠(yuǎn)處的王老師看到了他的舉動(dòng)，并對(duì)他進(jìn)行了教育。他對(duì)此感到抱歉，決定今后要節(jié)約糧食，不再浪費(fèi)糧食。

參詞匯rubbish bin垃圾桶，be tired of 對(duì)感到厭（膩）了，throw扔，save節(jié)約 要求1包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，用上所給參詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)法正確，80-100個(gè)詞。開頭句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3文不得出現(xiàn)生真實(shí)的姓名、地點(diǎn)和所在的學(xué)校名稱。To improve students’ health, Xin Hua Middle School has carried on the Milk

【答案】To improve students’ health, Xin Hua Middle School has carried on the Milk and Eggs Project for students.Wei Hua is a student at the school.Today Wei Hua got the milk and egg again as usual.He opened the box of milk and drank a little.He felt tired of the egg and the milk.He didn’t want to have them any more.Then he threw the milk and egg into the rubbish bin.At that moment, Miss Wang saw this from far away.She came over and told him not to do this again.Wei Hua felt sorry to do so.He promised not to waste food any more.第五篇：某學(xué)校九年級(jí)(3)班舉行了“讀好書,促成長(zhǎng)”的主題班會(huì)。會(huì)上同學(xué)們積極發(fā)言,請(qǐng)根據(jù)發(fā)言內(nèi)容寫一份倡議書,倡議全班同學(xué)認(rèn)真讀書,豐富自己的課余生活。

讀書的重要讀書可以獲取知識(shí),增長(zhǎng)見識(shí),使人聰明,使人快樂(lè),有助

性于學(xué)習(xí),有助于成長(zhǎng)。

班級(jí)讀書情許多同學(xué)在上網(wǎng)、看電視、聽音樂(lè)上花費(fèi)很多時(shí)間,況讀書時(shí)間太少。

發(fā)出倡議多讀書,讀好書。

參考詞匯：獲取知識(shí)gain knowledge;增長(zhǎng)見識(shí)open the mind

My dear friends,Reading plays an important part in our daily life.__________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’s start reading now.【答案】書面表達(dá)

My dear friends,Reading plays an important part in our daily life.We can gain knowledge through reading.It can not only open our minds but also make us cleverer and happier.Our study can be improved if we read more books.Reading also helps us grow as a person.However, it’s a great pity that many activities such as surfing the Internet, listening to music, and watching TV and so on take up too much of our reading time.So here, I would like to suggest that everyone should spend more time in reading books and reading good books.It will do good to us.Let’s start reading now.

第四篇：高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及

高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及范文

（六）抗震救災(zāi)，眾志成城

1、考題示例

假設(shè)你是李華，在得知四川大地震的消息之后，作為校學(xué)生會(huì)主席，你決定給災(zāi)區(qū)的中學(xué)生寫一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1、得知四川發(fā)生突如其來(lái)的特大地震災(zāi)害，心情非常難過(guò)；

2、看到你們表現(xiàn)得非常鎮(zhèn)定、堅(jiān)強(qiáng)，感動(dòng)得熱淚盈眶；

3、患難見真情，全校師生向你們表示慰問(wèn)的同時(shí)，共計(jì)捐款12萬(wàn)元；

4、美好家園可以重建，希望你們要看到希望、充滿信心。參考詞匯：捐款 make a donation to I’m awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown.Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears.A friend in need is a friend indeed.Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you.I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you.Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty.A better hometown can be rebuilt.Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help!

高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及范文

（五）觀光旅游、景點(diǎn)導(dǎo)游

1、考題示例

假設(shè)你是李華，你是一名奧運(yùn)會(huì)志愿者，你將帶領(lǐng)一個(gè)來(lái)自美國(guó)的奧運(yùn)旅游團(tuán)游覽某城市一著名的旅游景點(diǎn)---XXX。請(qǐng)用英文寫一個(gè)關(guān)于XXX和活動(dòng)安排的口頭導(dǎo)游詞，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1、歡迎來(lái)到XXX城市，我很高興成為你們的導(dǎo)游；

2、XXX是一個(gè)具有悠久歷史的城市；

3、XXX是XXX市的歷史性建筑，是XXX的發(fā)源地；

4、“XXX”已經(jīng)成為世界文化遺產(chǎn)；

5、祝愿大家在XXX玩得開心。

2、參考范文

Ladies and gentlemen I feel honored to be your guide for the one-day tour to the XXX.First of all, on behalf my travel agency, I’d like to extend my welcome to all of you.Our schedule for today is to visit the famous scenic spot---the XXX, which is the historic architecture in the city of XXX.As the origin of XXX, the XXX has become the world cultural heritage.I’m quite sure that you will be impressed by the beauty of the royal construction and the long history of the city as well.Wish you have great fun during the whole day!

高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及范文

（四）迎奧運(yùn)、講文明、樹新風(fēng)

1、考題示例(1)

為迎接奧運(yùn)會(huì)在中國(guó)舉行，請(qǐng)寫一篇關(guān)于講究文明禮儀的倡議書，具體內(nèi)容包括：

1、講究文明禮貌是中華民族的傳統(tǒng)；

2、面對(duì)外國(guó)友人應(yīng)熱情大方、彬彬有禮；

3、要堅(jiān)決杜絕公共場(chǎng)所大聲喧嘩、擁擠打鬧、隨地吐痰等不文明行為；

4、奧運(yùn)即將召開，我們將代表中國(guó)形象。參考詞匯：喧嘩 uproar

2、參考范文(1)My dear fellow students, The Olympics are just around the corner.Today I want to talk about good manners and courtesy.We Chinese have always been respected and highly praised for good manners and courtesy, which have, as well, become precious traditions of our people.In a couple of weeks beyond, a large number of foreign friends will come to China to join us in enjoying the Olympics.Beforeforeign guests, we should have an easy manner and behave politely and warm-heartedly.In public places, such ugly behaviors as uproar, pushing or squeezing together, spitting and so on should be determinedly forbidden.In a sense, each of us will not simply stand forourselves but stand for China.Therefore, boys and girls, let’s do it well right now and the eyes of the world are to on us!

高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及范文

（三）奧運(yùn)精神

1、考題示例

仔細(xì)觀看下列海報(bào)，寫一篇短文闡述圖中所表達(dá)的奧運(yùn)精神。要求：表達(dá)連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象，100詞左右。

參考詞匯：羽毛球 badminton 橄欖忮 olive branch 接力棒 baton

2、參考范文 Olympics in Posters There are two people in either posters, each of which tells something about Olympic spirits.In the first poster, two badminton players hold one gold medal together, which suggests that cooperation always comes first in Olympics.Although all the players struggles to be higher, faster, and stronger, the teamwork usually plays a very important role in a lot of events, such as football, group gymnastics and relay races.In the second poster, in the relay race one athlete is passing an olive branch, instead of a baton, on to the next one.What does it mean? It shows us that the Olympics mean more than just competition.Peace and friendship are also part of the Olympics!

高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)熱點(diǎn)話題及范文

（二）奧運(yùn)與健身

1、考題示例

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇報(bào)告，描述奧運(yùn)會(huì)給中學(xué)生生活帶來(lái)的變化。

迎奧運(yùn)之前迎奧運(yùn)之后 學(xué)校每周兩節(jié)體育課，并且有時(shí)被文化課占用每天一小時(shí)體活課，師生一起開展戶外活動(dòng) 學(xué)生只顧學(xué)習(xí)，忽視運(yùn)動(dòng)鍛煉重視鍛煉，認(rèn)識(shí)到身體好可以促進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)參考詞匯：忽視 neglect

2、參考范文

As the form reflects, with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games’ drawing nearer and nearer, some positive changes have taken place.Before that, each week, only two so-called PE lessons were scheduled, during which sometimes we were actually having lessons such as Chinese, Math, Physics and so on.Most of us, who mainly cared for our studies, always neglected physical training.高中世博會(huì)英語(yǔ)作文 魅力上海，閃耀世博

Throughout its existence of more than 150 years, the Expo will bring new knowledge from a specific period of time and trend of development, reflecting the human civilization.The main attractions of the first session of the World Expo in 1851 in the Crystal Palace in London: almost 500 meters long palace built of cast iron and glass.Subsequently, the participating countries will offer similar advantages to introduce from time to time every few years.Today EXPO is the economic and cultural Olympiad of the world, a competition among nations, as well as among exhibitors from the private sector on a given subject.At the same time, it is about marketing countries internationally.Expositions of the first category last a maximum of 6 months and may be held on an enormous area.But at a time when information as well as goods can be had through the internet and other technologies, they remain a place of rendezvous and of authentic experiences.

第五篇：中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá) 命題作文

中考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá) 命題作文

命題作文就是我們依據(jù)所給題目,確定中心,選擇材料,寫出符合題意,內(nèi)容表達(dá)具體、充分的文章。

寫命題作文通常要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

一、審準(zhǔn)題目：文章的中心要對(duì)題目的分析來(lái)確定,一定要弄清主題的內(nèi)涵,確立與文章聯(lián)系的主題思想,表達(dá)不能游離于主題,否則即使內(nèi)容再精彩,也是“跑題”作文,得分將會(huì)大打折扣,因此,寫命題作文最重要的是先審清題目,確立要表現(xiàn)的中心。

二、構(gòu)思結(jié)構(gòu)：就是開放思路,啟動(dòng)聯(lián)想,構(gòu)想表現(xiàn)形式,勾勒出文章的結(jié)構(gòu)層次,依次寫出引言段,主題句,發(fā)展段和結(jié)尾句,努力使之新穎,別致。

三、選擇材料：這一點(diǎn)很重要,一定要圍繞想表現(xiàn)的中心去選擇組織材料,所選的材料必須典型精要。

四、表達(dá)：就是用最確切明了的語(yǔ)言貫穿材料,表達(dá)自己的思想,力爭(zhēng)用符合英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法規(guī)則。英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣,最順暢自然的詞,句,段去表達(dá)中心思想,與表現(xiàn)中心無(wú)關(guān)的話即使再生動(dòng)形象也不要去寫。就寫作的目的表現(xiàn)形式來(lái)看,命題作文分為三種形式：

1、記敘文類；

2、說(shuō)明文類；

3、議論文類。

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記敘文就是以記敘人物的經(jīng)歷或事物發(fā)展變化過(guò)程為主的一種文章。在初中寫作訓(xùn)練中,記敘文是最基本,最常見,最重要的書面表達(dá)形式。記敘文有“六要素”即指“時(shí)間,地點(diǎn),人物和事 件的起因,經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)果”。一篇記敘文只要把這些要素寫清楚,文章就會(huì)內(nèi)容具體, 眉目清晰,中心意思明確。一般情況下,這六要素中的人物,時(shí)間,地點(diǎn)作為開端,要寫在文章的開頭。事件,原因常作為記敘文的段落發(fā)展,又稱為文章的主體部分,應(yīng)該放在文章的中間。結(jié)果作為記敘文的結(jié)局常放在文章的末尾處。

記敘文從寫作的線索上來(lái)看,有三種表現(xiàn)形式：

1、以人物為主,圍繞人物組織材料。

2、以事物為中心,圍繞事件組織材料或圍繞事件寫人。

3、以寫景狀物,描寫為主。

寫好記敘文應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn):

1、明確寫作目的:寫文章的目的就是確切表達(dá)一個(gè)中心思想,文章的一切內(nèi)容應(yīng)自始自終地為展開中心服務(wù)。

2、選擇細(xì)節(jié)材料:選擇好的細(xì)節(jié)材料就是為了更好地表現(xiàn)主題,所選擇的材料要有代表性,典型性。寫作內(nèi)容要詳略得當(dāng),主要情節(jié)應(yīng)詳細(xì)寫,次要內(nèi)容要簡(jiǎn)略或概述。

1)關(guān)于寫人物,一般要把某人的年齡,外貌和性格特征,人物行為,心理活動(dòng)等方面簡(jiǎn)要概括出來(lái)。同時(shí)要略加點(diǎn)評(píng)或感想。

2)關(guān)于寫事件,事件是記敘的核心,往往有它的起因,經(jīng)過(guò)和結(jié)局。寫事件要比較詳細(xì)地交代事情的來(lái)龍去脈,同時(shí)要重點(diǎn)突出,表達(dá)精練,防止渲染。

3、恰當(dāng)?shù)倪x擇寫作方法:記敘文的寫作方法就是指寫作的順序,文章先寫什么,后寫什么都要有一定順序。

中考經(jīng)典展示：

(1)以My Mother為題寫一篇短文。(2003揚(yáng)州)

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):1.我的媽媽是護(hù)士,工作努力。2.上個(gè)月去北京,抗擊SARS(fight against)。3.一個(gè)月沒(méi)有回來(lái)。4.保護(hù)我們免受侵害。5.我愛(ài)媽媽,為媽媽自豪。

標(biāo)題已給出，要求1.寫清時(shí)間 2.要點(diǎn)要完整 3.可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容 4.字?jǐn)?shù)在60個(gè)詞左右

(2)班會(huì)上,老師要求每位同學(xué)用英語(yǔ)介紹自己的一位朋友,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所提供的要點(diǎn)為題寫一篇短文。(2003南京)

要點(diǎn):1.Who is he / she。2.When and where did you get to know him / her。3.Why do you like him / her。注意:1.文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出(不計(jì)入詞數(shù))2.詞數(shù)60-80,須包括以上要點(diǎn),可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使短文意思通暢。3.條理清楚,語(yǔ)意連貫,句式規(guī)范,字跡工整。4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名。校名等相關(guān)信息。

寫作實(shí)踐范例

以“My Chinese Teacher”為標(biāo)題寫一篇字?jǐn)?shù)為80-100之間的英語(yǔ)短文。提示內(nèi)容如下:

1、孫老師今年36歲,中等身材。

2、她關(guān)心。熱愛(ài)學(xué)生,工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)。

3、她語(yǔ)文課講得生動(dòng)。有趣。My Chinese Teacher Of all the subjects, I like Chinese best because I have a good Chinese teacher.Though she has been teaching us for only three years, I respect and love her very much.My Chinese teacher is thirty-six years old and she is neither tall nor short.Ms Sun works very hard.She is always the first to come and the last to leave her office.She tries to make her classes lively and interesting.And we enjoy her lessons very much.Ms Sun is very kind and friendly to us.And we're getting on well with each other.But she is very strict with us in our studies.Ms Sun teaches us so well that we all enjoy learning Chinese.All the students think she is one of the most popular teachers in our school.新題導(dǎo)練

請(qǐng)以“My Classmate”為標(biāo)題寫一篇記敘文

要求:

1、主題明確。語(yǔ)言流暢。思路清晰。

2、字?jǐn)?shù)在100字以內(nèi)。

思路點(diǎn)撥

寫記敘文要按照事物發(fā)展的客觀規(guī)律敘述,所敘述的內(nèi)容要交代清楚,條理清晰,重點(diǎn)突出,主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。

這篇文章也是記敘文,主人公應(yīng)該用第三人稱,時(shí)態(tài)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主。本文以主人公為中心線索,以

一、兩件事件為重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容去組織材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整個(gè)內(nèi)容情節(jié)要合情合理,有真實(shí)感,敘述時(shí)可按事情發(fā)展的順序進(jìn)行,同時(shí)加以點(diǎn)評(píng)。

參考范文： My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived, and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.