第一篇:2012年專業(yè)英語四級作文十大熱點話題預測
一、低碳與環(huán)保
構思點撥:低碳生活,本文旨在倡導一種低碳環(huán)保的生活方式。因此本文內(nèi)容和結構可如下:第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:列舉現(xiàn)象,分析影響;第三段:建議措施,展望未來。思維拓展:環(huán)保話題,例如節(jié)約能源、拼車、交通問題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯(lián)系,從低碳的角度入手展開寫作。
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。
To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。
名師點評;① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡,也可以表達為 A boy is fast asleep。“② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again?!皐ith the television on”,with 引導的伴隨結構,即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以寫成伴隨狀語A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。③ are used to doing:習慣于做
某事,使用短語表達,地道準確。
二、網(wǎng)絡的利與弊 思路點撥:一個現(xiàn)實:網(wǎng)絡文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設計:第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:網(wǎng)絡的利+舉例,網(wǎng)絡的弊+舉例;第三段:提出建議措施——取其精華,去其糟粕。思路拓展:所有利弊型的文章,均可按照本范文提供的思路進行論述。例如,城市化的利與弊。大學擴招的利與弊等。
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Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online.Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①.It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。
The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience.For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on.On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。
In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time.On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided.Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。
三、醉酒駕車與安全意識、社會責任
思路點撥:
圖畫有點夸張,但是它卻反映了一個觸目驚心的安全問題:醉酒駕車。寫作時可以按照以下的脈絡展開論述:第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:分兩個分論點進行論述:提高安全意識、提高社會責任感;第三段:建議措施、強調(diào)后果。思維拓展:實際上,本文的內(nèi)容和行文思路,不僅僅適用于醉酒駕車,還適用于所有關于安全事故和社會責任的圖片話題。例如,火災、漏油事故、施工事故、違反交規(guī)等等一系列與安全或社會責任感相關的話題,都可以參考此文。
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What a scary and sensational scene it is!In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。
The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice.So life is to be respected and awed②.It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence(DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility.We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us.It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。
In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。
名師點評:① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一個游蕩者。實際上是一個比喻,相當于漢語中的爛醉如泥。② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice:非常富有哲理性,語言優(yōu)美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏,語言簡潔、有力、到位。③ DUI: 醉酒駕車,也可以寫成:drunk driving。④ leaving?:動詞的ing形式作伴隨狀語。句型經(jīng)典。
四、大學生就業(yè):放低姿態(tài)、平常心做人
思路點撥: 一位正在找工作的年輕女孩,毫不猶豫地拒絕了一份服務崗位的工作,不屑一顧地說:“伺候人的工作我不干”。很多年輕人找工作時,眼光過高,不切實際,沒有用平常心對待就業(yè)問題。實際上,可以先就業(yè)后擇業(yè)。所以這篇圖畫作文可以這樣創(chuàng)作:第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:兩個角度分析這種現(xiàn)象的原因:志存高遠,不愿意從底層做起;好逸惡勞;第三段:建議措施:教育年輕人要腳踏實地;根除好逸惡勞的思想。思維拓展:關于平常心態(tài)做人、腳踏實地的話題還可以有很多,例如城市選擇問題、院校報考問題、專業(yè)選擇問題、股市問題,均可以從這個角度出發(fā),進行展開論述。
高分范文
As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①.At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。
This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus.On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④.On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable.This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。
Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。
④ be conscious that: 意識到,that后邊必須接完整的主謂賓結構。這個表達等同于be aware that,可以進行同意替換。此外:be conscious of 和be aware of 在意思上也等同于這兩者,表示意識到。但是:be conscious of 和be aware of后邊要接單詞或者短語,一般不能加句子。⑤ the third industry: 第三產(chǎn)業(yè),是service industry(服務業(yè))的同位語。巧妙地使用同位語,可以把單調(diào)的句子變得錯落有致、抑揚頓挫。it does provide us with: does在句中表強調(diào),翻譯成“確實”。⑥ Only in this way can? realize? and can? be? and thus can? be?:排比句,短促有力,氣勢強大,使得對未來的展望顯得信心十足!這個句型:Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society,五、節(jié)約資源 思路點撥:本圖描述的場景是一副令人喜聞樂見的圖畫,圖畫中,一只可愛的小豬造型的儲蓄罐,正在接住自來水里滴下來的水滴,像存錢一樣,存儲水滴。實際上,它儲存的不是水,它儲存的是幸福。我們可以看出,人們有了節(jié)水意識。但是,從正在滴水的水龍頭看,還是有人忽略了節(jié)約用水這一問題。因此,本文可以這樣寫作:第一段:描述圖畫;第二段分析有些人浪費水的心理,并闡述水資源的寶貴;第三段:建議措施。思維拓展:實際上,積極正面的圖片寫作,和揭示負面現(xiàn)象的文章沒有什么本質(zhì)上的區(qū)別,只要我們筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn),就能把它繼續(xù)按照原來的套路寫。本文也可以從低碳、環(huán)保的角度出發(fā)進行寫作。高分范文
Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource.Actually, water resource is very limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①.Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。
However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②.For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③.Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。
Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。
六、面對人生與社會:樂觀與豁達
思路點撥:它樂觀、豁達地認為,有陰影,那么就說明有陽光。向我們傳達了一種健康的人生哲學:樂觀生活、達觀處世。這是一篇人生哲理類文章,所以文章安排可以相對自由一些:第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:利用正反舉例論證悲觀與樂觀的差距+總結句;第三段:倡導一種樂觀生活、達觀處世的人生態(tài)度和人生哲學。本文也可以從世界觀、人生觀的角度入手。相反,如果是一幅表明悲觀厭世的圖片,我們也可以采取同樣的手法進行處理。
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As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。
As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings
③ toward the same life。
There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude.What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”
④
名師點評:① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 這句話正是仿寫了我們非常熟悉的諺語“Where there is a will, there is a way”:有
志者,事竟成。
③ perceptions and feelings:近義詞疊加。這兩個詞合譯為:感受。
④ Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far
behind?”
全文的點睛之筆,堪稱經(jīng)典。首先:keep sth.in mind 這個詞組用得很地
道。
其次:引用了雪萊的詩歌,表現(xiàn)出了深厚的文化底蘊。第三:the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者為前者的同位語。
同位語的介入,使句子結構錯落有致,層次分明,朗朗上口。第四:著名詩句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓盡致地詮釋了樂觀的生活態(tài)度。
七、商業(yè)行賄
構思點撥:商業(yè)賄賂。深層次來講,就是道德問題、責任問題。本文的內(nèi)容和結構安排如下:第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:從兩個角度分析影響+分析動機;第三段:建議措施。思維拓展此類文章可以展開的角度有:金錢觀,商業(yè)道德建設、職業(yè)道德建設,公平競爭。相似的圖片比比皆是。
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There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery.Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape.What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。
The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money.For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive② effect on the whole society.Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③ may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy.Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position.For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”,showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money.It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。
To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted.Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public.Only in this way can we have a fair and
sound social environment。
八、城市交通
思路點撥:城市交通的壓力問題。同時,汽車過多就意味著尾氣排放過多,所以這幅圖同時又反映了環(huán)保和低碳問題。第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:分析交通堵塞給人和環(huán)境帶來的影響;第三段:建議措施。思維拓展建議措施部分,還可以從如下角度提出:呼吁政府:投資完善基礎設施、繼續(xù)堅持限行的制度。倡導低碳出行:步行、騎自行車。倡導理智選擇城市:人全部擁擠在大城市帶來的負面
影響。
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How horrible the traffic is!The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street.In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。
Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait.Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road.On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。
Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam.Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can
have a smooth transportation。
名師點評: it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的結構,通過字面可以理解成:更多的是A而不是B。翻譯的時候,往往翻譯成:與其說是B,不如說是A。反過來,表達“與其??不如??”
九、科技與生活
思路點撥:表面上看,它反映的是城市與城市之間距離被“縮短”的問題,但是更深層次來講,是科技帶來了這一切,所以這幅圖可以有兩個切入點:城際交通、科技改變生活。本文作者選取了第二個角度為主要論述視角。第一段:圖畫描述;第二段:兩個角度論述科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力;第三段:提出建議、展望未來。思維拓展 科技的話題,實際上是映射熱點問題:上海世博。世博的主題“城市讓生活更美好”,其中一個側面就是城市與科技??梢苑从场翱萍肌敝黝}的圖片有很多,如現(xiàn)代通訊、網(wǎng)絡等。
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As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。
Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。
It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。
名師點評:② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力。③ a new engine: 一個新的引擎,這是一個形象的比喻,把科技對經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的動力表達得非常具體、形象。本文中 “發(fā)展”,多次出現(xiàn),作者采用了多樣化的詞匯: “development(n。)”,“progress(n。)”,“flourish(v。)”,“boom(v./n.)”,“advance”。這類詞匯還有:
“prosperous(adj。)”,“improve(v。)”等。
十、弘揚民族文化 思路點撥: 圖片中共有三個內(nèi)容:陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊貓、麻將牌。這三種形象都是典型的中國元素。正如圖片的名稱“歐洲的‘中國熱’”所說,一種學習中國傳統(tǒng)文化和漢語語言的熱潮正在歐洲悄然興起。毫無疑問,本圖的主題是:弘揚中國文化,以及中國國際形象、國際地位的上升。全文行思路可如下:第一段:分別描述圖畫中體現(xiàn)出的中國元素;第二段:分析外國人對中華文化的興趣提升的原因+舉例;第三段:對待民族文化的正確態(tài)度。思維拓展:保護文物、文明遺產(chǎn)、名勝古跡的圖片也可以從捍衛(wèi)和弘揚民族文化的角度入手加以分析論證。
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In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。
It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”,referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。
Toward this kind of “China craze”,we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our
motherland。
第二篇:今2011年專業(yè)英語四級作文十大熱點話題預測
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一、低碳與環(huán)保
構思點撥 圖片中一個小男孩,早已進入甜蜜的夢鄉(xiāng),電視卻依然在播放,這時候媽媽走過來幫 他關了電視,還責備他為什么總是忘記關電視。顯然,直觀看來,這幅圖是在告訴我們要 節(jié)約用電。但是,我們?nèi)绻麖母暧^,更深層次的角度去思考,這幅圖正是在告訴我們一 個流行的生活理念:低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導一種低碳環(huán)保的生活方式。因此本文的 內(nèi)容和結構可如下: 第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:列舉現(xiàn)象,分析影響;第三段:建議措施,展望未來。思維拓展 環(huán)保話題,例如節(jié)約能源、拼車、交通問題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯(lián)系,從低碳的角度入手展開寫作。高分范文 As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。佳作妙譯 如上圖生動地展示,一個小男孩正在沙發(fā)上舒適地睡覺,電視還開著。這時候媽媽走 過來幫他關了電視,責怪小男孩又忘了關電視。這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見。很多人習慣于做什么事情都開著電視,實際上并 不看。這種習慣會導致電力和能源的浪費,這會導致碳排放。這偏離了流行的“低碳生活” 的理念。低碳生活是指,減少碳,尤其是二氧化碳的排放,以保護環(huán)境,實現(xiàn)可持續(xù)發(fā)展。根據(jù)統(tǒng)計數(shù)據(jù),如果我們每天把開電視的時間減少一小時,則每個月可以減少 4.17 千克 的碳排放量。作為對地球負責任的管理者,我們必須在公眾中推廣并普及低碳的生活方式,從日常 生活中的每個細節(jié)開始。我們必須要改變?yōu)榱双@得短期的快速經(jīng)濟發(fā)展,犧牲長期的環(huán)境 健康的做法,轉(zhuǎn)向發(fā)展綠色經(jīng)濟、循環(huán)經(jīng)濟以及低碳經(jīng)濟。所有這些有效的措施可以幫助 我們實現(xiàn)社會發(fā)展與自然有序發(fā)展之間的和諧。名師點評 ① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡,也可以表達為 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”這類副詞的加入,使得描述更生動活潑,而不是單調(diào)的主謂賓。② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。該句主干結構是:A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。這個句型的含義是:一件事情正在發(fā)生(正在睡覺),突然發(fā)生了另一件事(媽媽來關電 視)?!皐ith the television on”: with 引導的伴隨結構,即 A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以寫成伴隨狀語 A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”,這句是 媽媽關電視的伴隨動作,一邊關電視,一邊責怪孩子忘記關電視。
圖畫描述這句,寫得越精彩越好,這句是先入為主的句子,也是閱卷老師重點看的句 子。③ are used to doing:習慣于做某事,使用短語表達,地道準確。④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:這是 2005 年真題閱讀中的原 句,的文章里面的句型,引用的標準到位。一般而言,環(huán)保類話題,都可以用這句話,引出第三段的個人評論。歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫,我們一定要充分利用,舉一反三。
二、網(wǎng)絡的利與弊
思路點撥 本圖中,一個女孩正在因一個問題感到困惑,“10 牛的水是否產(chǎn)生 10 牛的浮力?”。于是她上網(wǎng)求助于網(wǎng)友,網(wǎng)友的答案更是五花八門,說對說錯的都有。女孩更加困惑。由 此可見,這幅圖反應了這樣一個現(xiàn)實:網(wǎng)絡文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設計: 第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:網(wǎng)絡的利+舉例,網(wǎng)絡的弊+舉例;第三段:提出建議措 施——取其精華,去其糟粕。思路拓展 所有利弊型的文章,均可按照本范文提供的思路進行論述。例如,城市化的利與弊。大學擴招的利與弊等。高分范文 Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online.Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①.It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience.For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on.On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time.On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided.Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。佳作妙譯 佳作妙譯 如圖所示,圖片中一個女孩正在網(wǎng)上問一個問題,來自于網(wǎng)友的答案差異太大了,以 至于女孩很困惑到底該聽誰的。很明顯,人們面臨困境的時候上網(wǎng)提問的現(xiàn)象已經(jīng)成為一 種時尚。這幅圖所隱含的意義可以闡釋如下。一方面,因特網(wǎng)為我們提供了很大便利。例如,通過百度等搜索引擎鍵入一些命令、點擊幾下鼠標,我們就可以獲得幾乎各個領域的知識。另一方面,由于因特網(wǎng)上有海量的信息,很難區(qū)分好的信息和壞的信息。例如青少年可能 會把錯誤的信息誤認為是正確的,其結果是非常具有毀滅性的。網(wǎng)上的一些不健康信息也 可能會給人們帶來負面影響??傊?,一方面,充分利用因特網(wǎng)來提高效率,節(jié)約時間,這很重要。另一方面,應該 采取有效的措施教育人們?nèi)ヅ懦W(wǎng)上不合適的甚至錯誤的數(shù)據(jù),以免被誤導。只有這樣,網(wǎng)絡才能更好地為我們的生活、學習和工作服務。名師點評 ① so? that 句型:如此??以至于??。② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 這是 2004 年真題 閱讀第一篇中的句型。③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 這是 2003 年真題 閱讀第一篇中的句型。可見,充分了解真題閱讀,對于提高寫作的幫助作用也很大。④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work: 倒裝句。倒裝句的寫法(部分倒裝): 原句:The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。only 放在句首,把情態(tài)動詞 can 和主語交換一下位置就寫成了倒裝句。
三、醉酒駕車與安全意識、社會責任
思路點撥 圖畫中一個已經(jīng)喝得爛醉如泥的司機,車頂上還馱著一瓶巨大的啤酒,汽車卻依然在 路上飛馳。雖然這幅圖有點夸張,但是它卻反映了一個觸目驚心的安全問題:醉酒駕車。寫作時可以按照以下的脈絡展開論述: 第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:分兩個分論點進行論述:提高安全意識、提高社會責任 感;第三段:建議措施、強調(diào)后果。思維拓展 實際上,本文的內(nèi)容和行文思路,不僅僅適用于醉酒駕車,還適用于所有關于安全事 故和社會責任的圖片話題。例如,火災、漏油事故、施工事故、違反交規(guī)等等一系列與安全或社會責任感相關的 話題,都可以參考此文。高分范文 高分范文 What a scary and sensational scene it is!In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice.So life is to be respected and awed②.It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence(DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility.We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us.It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。佳作妙譯 這是一幅多么可怕的觸目驚心的場景??!在這幅圖中,爛醉如泥的司機正在馬路上飛 速行駛,車上還頂著一大瓶啤酒。這幅圖所傳達的意義,對我們國家的每一位成員,都具 有現(xiàn)實和警醒的意義。這幅栩栩如生的圖畫的深刻意義可以從安全意識和社會責任感兩個角度闡釋。一方面,安全意識應該是我首要重視的問題。生命是一次單程旅行:你不能經(jīng)歷兩次生命。所以我 們應該敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒駕車的疏忽而宣告任何一條生命的結束是殘忍的、不人道的。另一方面,作為這個社會負責任的一員,我們每個人都應該去承擔社會責任。我們不僅僅是為了自己活著,我們也為那些我們所愛的和愛我們的人活著。無論是聲稱司 機的、還是受害者的生命不重要,都是不負責任的。因為這會給他們的家人和親戚帶來巨 大的悲痛和沉重的生活負擔。簡言之,官方應該制定立法措施嚴厲地懲罰醉酒駕車的司機,例如吊銷駕照或進行監(jiān) 禁。立法措施勢在必行。此外,電視、收音機、網(wǎng)站等大眾傳媒應該共同努力來提高公民 的安全意識和責任感,以降低交通事故的發(fā)生率。名師點評 ① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一個游蕩者。實際上是一個比喻,相當于漢語 中的爛醉如泥。用語非常形象生動,一個酩酊大醉的司機形象躍然紙上?、?Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice:非常富有哲理性,語言優(yōu)美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏,語言簡潔、有力、到位。③ DUI: 醉酒駕車,也可以寫成:drunk driving。④ leaving?:動詞的 ing 形式作伴隨狀語。句型經(jīng)典。
四、大學生就業(yè):放低姿態(tài)、平常心做人 大學生就業(yè):放低姿態(tài)、思路點撥 在畫中,一位正在找工作的年輕女孩,毫不猶豫地拒絕了一份服務崗位的工作,不屑 一顧地說:“伺候人的工作我不干”。這幅圖表明,很多年輕人找工作時,眼光過高,不 切實際,沒有用平常心對待就業(yè)問題。實際上,可以先就業(yè)后擇業(yè)。所以這篇圖畫作文可 以這樣創(chuàng)作: 第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:兩個角度分析這種現(xiàn)象的原因:志存高遠,不愿意從底 層做起;好逸惡勞;第三段:建議措施:教育年輕人要腳踏實地;根除好逸惡勞的思想。思維拓展關于平常心態(tài)做人、腳踏實地的話題還可以有很多,例如城市選擇問題、院校報考問 題、專業(yè)選擇問題、股市問題,均可以從這個角度出發(fā),進行展開論述。高分范文 As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①.At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus.On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④.On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable.This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。佳作妙譯 正如上面的漫畫所示,這個找工作的女孩毫不猶豫地拒絕了一個服務崗位,她還抱怨 一直找不到工作。同時她還納悶為什么在如今找個有前途的工作這么難。這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見,尤其在校園里更加明顯。一方面,很多求職者不 愿意從事秘書或助理等工作,他們認為這些是卑微且無足輕重的。他們有更大的抱負,想 直接登上成功的頂峰??墒撬麄儧]有意識到理想抱負是需要一步一步實現(xiàn)的。另一方面,很多失業(yè)者和畢業(yè)生都想少勞多得,想得到一份輕松舒適而且薪水不菲的工作。這種“好 逸惡勞”的生活態(tài)度對個人和社會的發(fā)展都是很不利的。我們不應看不起服務業(yè),第三產(chǎn) 業(yè),因為它確實為我們提供了很多工作機會和職位。因此,采取一些必要措施來改善這種情況已經(jīng)是當務之急。一方面,應該發(fā)起一場教 育運動來普及這種“千里之行,始于足下”的理念和腳踏實地的生活態(tài)度。另一方面,要 把懶惰的思想從青少年的思想中根除。只有這樣人們才能更好地實現(xiàn)自己的人生價值,才 能讓失業(yè)率大幅下降,才能實現(xiàn)社會和諧。名師點評 ① complaining that she will never take a job of serving others: 伴隨狀語。② why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society: 這個句子 充當了整個句子的賓語,叫做賓語從句。特殊疑問詞 why, what, when 等引導的賓語從句必須使用正常的陳述語序,不得使用 主謂倒裝的形式。例如,這句就不能寫成:why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society?finding a promising job 是主語。is 是系動詞。再如:I don’t know what his name is。絕對不能寫成:I don’t know what is his name。③ 2008 年真題閱讀選項中的句子。原句為:Political compromises are easily found throughout the U.S.history。稍加改動,變成了一個個性化的句子引入第二段內(nèi)容的模板,雖然沒有華麗的辭藻,但是非常精彩和純正。
④ be conscious that: 意識到,that 后邊必須接完整的主謂賓結構。這個表達等同于 be aware that,可以進行同意替換。此外:be conscious of 和 be aware of 在意思上也等同于這兩者,表示意識到。但是:be conscious of 和 be aware of 后邊要接單詞或者短語,一般不能加句子。⑤ the third industry: 第三產(chǎn)業(yè),是 service industry(服務業(yè))的同位語。同位語其實一般都是廢話,等同于前面的詞。巧妙地使用同位語,可以把單調(diào)的句子變得錯落有致、抑揚頓挫。it does provide us with: does 在句中表強調(diào),翻譯成“確實”。⑥ Only in this way can? realize? and can? be? and thus can? be?:排 比句,短促有力,氣勢強大,使得對未來的展望顯得信心十足!普通的被考生用爛了的這個句型:Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society,被本文的作者巧妙地改寫成了一個精彩的排比句。這樣的作文,怎么能不得高分呢!
五、節(jié)約資源
思路點撥
本圖描述的場景是一副令人喜聞樂見的圖畫,圖畫中,一只可愛的小豬造型的儲蓄罐,正在接住自來水里滴下來的水滴,像存錢一樣,存儲水滴。實際上,它儲存的不是水,它 儲存的是幸福。我們可以看出,人們有了節(jié)水意識。但是,從正在滴水的水龍頭看,還是 有人忽略了節(jié)約用水這一問題。因此,本文可以這樣寫作: 第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:分析有些人浪費水的心理,并闡述水資源的寶貴;第三 段:建議措施。思維拓展 實際上,積極正面的圖片寫作,和揭示負面現(xiàn)象的文章沒有什么本質(zhì)上的區(qū)別,只要 我們筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn),就能把它繼續(xù)按照原來的套路寫。本文也可以從低碳、環(huán)保的角度出發(fā)進行寫作。高分范文 Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource.Actually, water resource is very limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①.Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②.For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③.Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。佳作妙譯 水資源一度被誤認為是一種無限的可再生資源,實際上,水資源是非常有限且寶貴的。有幸的是現(xiàn)在公眾開始關注這一問題了。如圖所示,一只可愛的快樂小豬存錢罐積攢著水 龍頭里流出的每一滴水,就像存錢一樣。然而,水資源短缺問題仍然威脅著全人類的生存和發(fā)展。浪費水的現(xiàn)象在日常生活中
仍然隨處可見。例如,經(jīng)常有粗心大意者忘記關水龍頭。更有甚者認為自己繳了水費就有 權浪費,與他人無關。事實上,水資源不僅在生活中必不可少,在工農(nóng)業(yè)生產(chǎn)中也是不可 或缺的。水資源是全人類共同的財富,很難想象當沒有水的時候世界會是什么樣子。雖然越來越多的人已經(jīng)認識到了這種緊迫性,但是仍然要采取進一步的措施。從宏觀 層面上講,全世界應該共同努力反對浪費水。從微觀層面上講,要進行廣泛的宣傳活動。比如在電視臺播出關于如何節(jié)水的節(jié)目。節(jié)約用水就是存儲幸福,只有節(jié)約用水才能為子 孫后代存儲更好的生活。名師點評 ① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 來自于 2005 年閱讀真題,原句是這樣的:Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫,廣大考生一定要學會充分利用這寶貴的資源?、?第二段開頭,用了一個轉(zhuǎn)折詞,也就是“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”中的所謂的“轉(zhuǎn)”,把這篇作 文改造成了一篇社會問題型作文,也就是大家最擅長寫的作文。③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒裝句,表語提前,句子倒裝。倒裝句寫法: 第一步:寫正常原句:Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。第二步:表語 precious 提前。第三步:主謂倒置,變成 So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。普通的 so? that? 句型,也能被化腐朽為神奇,成為鉆石加分句型?、?indispensable: 不可或缺的,替換 important 的一個很好的詞匯。順便講一個英譯漢的技巧:大家可以看到,在譯文中,這句話被翻譯兩次:必不可少、不可或缺。因為原文中出現(xiàn)了:not only? but also,所以這個單詞被拆開翻譯成了兩個近義詞,以使行文更加通順。⑤ what the world would be like:注意賓語從句必須用陳述語序。⑥ become aware of: 意識到。意思和用法都等同于 be conscious of。后邊接詞語。⑦ 非常重要:一般而言,歷年真題中談到的正面話題,或者人生哲理類的文章,有可 能題目要求會變成: Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing.In your essay, you should(1)describe the drawing briefly,(2)explain its intended meaning, and then(3)support your view with an example/examples。
也就是第三段并非發(fā)表個人評論(建議措施),而是舉例,這時候就需要我們?nèi)フ{(diào)整一 下文章的敘述方法。這種情況下,我們可以把結尾段調(diào)整為: Examples of people’s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life.On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day.In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。這樣的話,結尾段就從建議措施,變成了論證文章的示例。
六、面對人生與社會:樂觀與豁達 面對人生與社會:
思路點撥 圖畫中的一只小綿羊,正呆在一塊大石頭的陰影下面。但是它樂觀、豁達地認為,有 陰影,那么就說明有陽光。這幅圖無疑向我們傳達了一種健康的人生哲學:樂觀生活、達 觀處世。由于這是一篇人生哲理類文章,所以文章安排可以相對自由一些: 第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:利用正反舉例論證悲觀與樂觀的差距+總結句;第三段: 倡導一種樂觀生活、達觀處世的人生態(tài)度和人生哲學。思維拓展 本文也可以從世界觀、人生觀的角度入手。相反,如果是一幅表明悲觀厭世的圖片,我們也可以采取同樣的手法進行處理。高分范文 As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude.What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④ 佳作妙譯上面的漫畫清楚地表現(xiàn)出這只山羊不顧陰影的威脅仍然保持樂觀,因為它相信有陰影 的地方就一定有陽光。圖片中反映的問題是積極的和富有啟發(fā)性的。我認為作者要表達的意義是要提醒我們保持樂觀心態(tài)的重要性。如果漫畫中的山羊終 日悲觀地生活在陰影中,它將永遠無法獲得舒適和幸福的生活。類似的例子千千萬,但是 我認為下面的例子就足夠有說服力。如果這里有半杯水,悲觀的人會抱怨只剩下半杯了,而樂觀的人在慶幸還有半杯可以喝。顯然,面對同樣的生活,他們會有不同的感受。毫無疑問,樂觀者擁有更高的幸福指數(shù),而悲觀者永遠也體會不到。因此我們必須以 積極的態(tài)度面對生活。而且樂觀的情緒能強烈地感染他人,這就意味著如果我們以樂觀的 視角面對周圍的朋友們,他們也會同樣地樂觀。于是,樂觀和幸福的氣氛自然而然地就建 立起來了。因此,讓我們把著名詩人雪萊的名句銘記在心吧:冬天來了,春天還會遠么? 名師點評 ① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 這句話讀起來是不是很熟悉? 沒錯,它正是仿寫了我們非常熟悉的諺語“Where there is a will, there is a way”: 有志者,事竟成。作者將這句話仿寫得惟妙惟肖,可見作者對語言駕馭是何等的嫻熟。② while: 表示兩種現(xiàn)象的對比、反差,常翻譯成“而”。③ perceptions and feelings:近義詞疊加。近義詞疊加也是一種向閱卷老師展示自己語言能力和詞匯量的一種極為有效的手段。
翻譯:只翻譯出一種意思即可。即,這兩個詞合譯為:感受。④ Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?” 全文的點睛之筆,堪稱經(jīng)典。首先:keep sth.in mind 這個詞組用得很地道。其次:引用了雪萊的詩歌,表現(xiàn)出了深厚的文化底蘊。第三:the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者 為前者的同位語。同位語的介入,使句子結構錯落有致,層次分明,朗朗上口。第四:著名詩句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓盡致地詮釋 了樂觀的生活態(tài)度。實際上,歷年真題的閱讀中又何曾沒有出現(xiàn)過這種模仿呢?廣大考生可以去查閱 2007 年 text 3 中的最后一句:The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far behind。⑤ 非常重要: 本題題目要求最后一段也可能會變成: support your view with an example/examples。這時候,我們可以把文章的結尾改寫為: Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world.How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back.Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them.She has set an excellent example for us。
七、商業(yè)行賄
構思點撥 上圖表現(xiàn)的是在“尚方寶劍”嚴懲的威嚴下,一位從事商業(yè)賄賂的人落荒而逃。不言 而喻,這幅圖反映的是當今一種比較猖獗的社會現(xiàn)象:商業(yè)賄賂。深層次來講,就是道德 問題、責任問題。本文的內(nèi)容和結構安排如下: 第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:從兩個角度分析影響+分析動機;第三段:建議措施。思維拓展 此類文章可以展開的角度有:金錢觀,商業(yè)道德建設、職業(yè)道德建設,公平競爭。相 似的圖片比比皆是。高分范文 There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery.Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape.What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money.For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive② effect on the whole society.Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③ may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy.Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position.For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”,showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money.It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted.Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public.Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。佳作妙譯 毫無疑問這幅漫畫生動地描述了現(xiàn)代社會一種負面的但是卻十分猖獗的現(xiàn)象:商業(yè)賄 賂。由于懼怕嚴厲的懲罰,這個人背著一大堆賄賂用的錢落荒而逃。漫畫的寓意是十分現(xiàn) 實并發(fā)人深思的。上圖的寓意可以理解為詳細闡述了在金錢沖擊下職業(yè)道德的淪陷。一方面,商業(yè)賄賂 對全社會造成惡劣的、毀滅性的影響。首先在賄賂行為中表現(xiàn)出的道德缺陷和人性弱點會 破壞和污染職業(yè)道德的氛圍,不良分子也會效仿。其次,行賄者將破壞公平競爭,誠信經(jīng) 營的商人被置于不利地位。另一方面,商業(yè)賄賂行為大多是被利益驅(qū)動的,這說明這些人 對金錢沒有正確的態(tài)度。沒有金錢的確是萬萬不能的,但對待金錢,無疑需要取之有道,用之有度。為了徹底根除賄賂這種道德敗壞的行為,應該采取嚴厲的懲罰措施。另外,應該在公 眾中逐漸普及正確的金錢觀。只有這樣,我們才能擁有公平、健全的社會環(huán)境。名師點評 ① money used as bribery: 過去分詞作定語=定語從句。寫過去分詞做定語的步驟: 第一步:寫成定語從句:money which is used as bribery; 第二步:省略引導詞“which”和 be 動詞“is”變成 money used as bribery。這樣,一個定語從句就變成了過去分詞做定語。② damaging and destructive:近義詞疊用,押韻:頭韻 ③ revealed in the action of bribery: 過去分詞作定語,修飾前面的 moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness,寫法參考本文點評第① 條。④ It is true that money is indispensable: It 作形式主語,真正的主語是 that 從句。⑤ To eliminate the immoral behavior of?: 為了??。作目的狀語。
八、城市交通
思路點撥 此圖片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的場景。圖片中,車一輛接著一輛地堵在街上,各種抱 怨聲不斷。毫無疑問,這幅圖反映的是城市交通的壓力問題。同時,汽車過多就意味著尾 氣排放過多,所以這幅圖同時又反映了環(huán)保和低碳問題。第一段:描述圖畫;第二段:分析交通堵塞給人和環(huán)境帶來的影響;第三段:建議措 施。思維拓展 建議措施部分,還可以從如下角度提出: 呼吁政府:投資完善基礎設施、繼續(xù)堅持限行的制度。倡導低碳出行:步行、騎自行車。倡導理智選擇城市:人全部擁擠在大城市帶來的負面影響。高分范文 How horrible the traffic is!The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street.In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait.Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road.On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam.Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。佳作妙譯 交通狀況真是一團糟!這幅漫畫描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的場景。實際上,交通堵 塞嚴重到了一定程度,與其說這是一條擁擠的街道,還不如說這是一個停車場。焦急的乘 客等不到數(shù)量稀少的公交車,而私家車卻到處都是。雖然這幅圖有點夸張,但是當今這種現(xiàn)象并不罕見。私家車的增多必然產(chǎn)生大城市交 通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通壓力會給人民生活帶來不便,也會對環(huán)境造成負面影響。一方 面,一旦發(fā)生堵車,原來很近的路程似乎變得十分漫長,除了等沒有別的辦法,大量的寶 貴時間被浪費在路上。另一方面,汽車排放的尾氣更增加了環(huán)境的負擔、導致了碳排放,這和低碳生活的理念相違背。因此,應該采取有效措施緩解嚴重的交通堵塞問題。第一,通過提高稅費限制私家車 擁有率(保有量)。第二,應該鼓勵和推廣低碳的公交車、地鐵等公共交通工具,以便我們 擁有更順暢的交通。名師點評 ① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B 的結 構,通過字面可以理解成:更多的是 A 而不是 B。翻譯的時候,往往翻譯成:與其說是 B,不如說是 A。反過來,當我們想用英語表達“與其??不如??”的時候,我們可以采用這個結構。實際上,這個結構在歷年真題閱讀中曾多次出現(xiàn)。2000 年 Text 3 中的選項: 如 Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短語表伴隨,翻譯成“隨 著”。③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中 emitted by cars 是過去分詞短語作后置 定語。相當于定語從句:gas which is emitted by cars(被汽車排放的尾氣)。寫法:請參考《商業(yè)行賄》點評第①條。④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中 levied on the sales of private cars(針對私家車被征的稅),為過去分詞做定語。寫法:請參考《商業(yè)行賄》點評第①條。
九、科技與生活
思路點撥 圖中描述的是武廣高鐵的開通,給城際交通帶來了極大便利。表面上看,它反映的是 城市與城市之間距離被“縮短”的問題,但是更深層次來講,是科技帶來了這一切,所以 這幅圖可以有兩個切入點:城際交通、科技改變生活。本文作者選取了第二個角度為主要 論述視角。第一段:圖畫描述;第二段:兩個角度論述科學技術是第一生產(chǎn)力;第三段:提出建 議、展望未來。思維拓展 科技的話題,實際上是映射熱點問題:上海世博。世博的主題“城市讓生活更美好”,其中一個側面就是城市與科技??梢苑从场翱萍肌敝黝}的圖片有很多,如現(xiàn)代通訊、網(wǎng)絡等。高分范文 As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。佳作妙譯 如上圖所示,一位旅客從廣州踏上了去往武漢的高速鐵路。2009 年,武廣高鐵正式建 成通車,將兩地之間的行程從 12 小時縮短到 3 小時,極大地方便了兩地的交通。難怪這幅 漫畫上寫道“有了武廣高鐵,每個城市都在家門口”??萍际堑谝簧a(chǎn)力,在國民經(jīng)濟發(fā)展中扮演著重要角色。一方面,科技的進步促進了 經(jīng)濟社會的快速進步。高速鐵路就是鮮活的例子。首先這條鐵路成為地區(qū)經(jīng)濟發(fā)展新的引 擎。其次鐵路吸引了大量游客,這些城市的旅游業(yè)隨之繁榮起來。再次這條鐵路很大程度 上緩解了現(xiàn)有線路的運輸壓力。另一方面,隨著科技的發(fā)展,高速鐵路,視頻電話,視頻 會議等應用會越來越多,世界將變得越來越小。中國政府一直很重視科技的發(fā)展,通過 2008 北京奧運會和 2010 上海世博兩件盛事,科技成功地重塑了中國在世界舞臺上的國際形象。因此青少年要懷著“城市,讓生活更美 好”的信念,積極投身到對科技文化知識的學習上。名師點評 ① reducing?, bringing?: 并列的兩個現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語。② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科學技術是第一 生產(chǎn)力。這是任何一篇與科技相關的文章都可以用的萬能句型。③ a new engine: 一個新的引擎,這是一個形象的比喻,把科技對經(jīng)濟發(fā)展的動力表 達得非常具體、形象。涉及到科技、發(fā)展、環(huán)境等題目時,不可避免的就需要用到發(fā)展這個詞,本文中 “發(fā) 展”,多次出現(xiàn),作者采用了多樣化的詞匯: “development(n。)”,“progress(n。)”,“flourish(v。)”,“boom(v./n.)”,“advance”。這類詞匯還有: “prosperous(adj。)”,“improve(v。)”等。
近義詞的多種替換方式,使得文章在統(tǒng)一中富于變化。廣大考生可以把這些詞匯積累 下來,應用到自己的寫作中去,也能起到妙筆生花的效果。④ 如果題目要求最后一段舉例,則我們可以把文章的結尾改成例子:如手機、因特網(wǎng) 等是如何提高了生活效率的。
十、弘揚民族文化
思路點撥 圖片中共有三個內(nèi)容:陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊貓、麻將牌。這三種形象都是典型的中國元 素。正如圖片的名稱“歐洲的‘中國熱’”所說,一種學習中國傳統(tǒng)文化和漢語語言的熱 潮正在歐洲悄然興起。毫無疑問,本圖的主題是:弘揚中國文化,以及中國國際形象、國 際地位的上升。全文行思路可如下: 第一段:分別描述圖畫中體現(xiàn)出的中國元素;第二段:分析外國人對中華文化的興趣 提升的原因+舉例;第三段:對待民族文化的正確態(tài)度。思維拓展 保護文物、文明遺產(chǎn)、名勝古跡的圖片也可以從捍衛(wèi)和弘揚民族文化的角度入手加以 分析論證。高分范文 In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”,referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。Toward this kind of “China craze”,we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。佳作妙譯 這幅圖中我們可以看到一些瓷制的花瓶,這是中國自古以來的典型產(chǎn)品。瓶身上畫著 一只正在練習中國功夫的熊貓,熊貓和功夫同樣是中國文化的代表。此外,花瓶中長出的 “麻將”也是典型的中國元素。這幅漫畫的主要目的是反映“中國熱”的現(xiàn)象,即國外對中國元素尤其是中華文化的 一種追捧和熱情。國外對中國元素興趣上升的這種現(xiàn)象是有原因的。首先,過去的幾十年 中,中國在經(jīng)濟、科技等各個領域都取得了顯著的進步,中國的綜合國力已經(jīng)大幅提升。另一方面,由于這些進步,中國以嶄新的形象出現(xiàn)在世人面前,在全世界越來越有吸引力。幾乎每天都有很多關于中國及其周邊正在發(fā)生的新聞報道。截止到 2010 年,已經(jīng)有 26 個 歐洲國家建立了 72 所孔子學院來傳播中國語言和文化。對于這種“中國熱”的現(xiàn)象我們應該持有正確的態(tài)度。一方面我們應該為外國人的 “中國熱”感到自豪,這源于中國聲望的提高。另一方面,弘揚優(yōu)秀的中國傳統(tǒng)文化和捍 衛(wèi)祖國的形象,是每一位中國公民的責任。名師點評 ① a panda playing Kung Fu: 正在練中國功夫的熊貓。其中 playing Kung Fu 是后 置定語修飾 panda。現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語的寫法: 第一步:寫出定語從句:a panda that is playing Kung Fu; 第二步:把引導詞“that”和 be 動詞“is”一起省略; ② passion and enthusiasm:近義詞疊加,加強語氣和氣勢。③ attractive and appealing:近義詞疊加,加強語氣和氣勢。④ reported and broadcasted:近義詞疊加,加強語氣和氣勢。
⑤ Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture: 其中“established? culture”是 Confucius Institutes(孔子 學院)的后置定語。寫法:請參考《商業(yè)行賄》點評第①條。U4998P352DT20101228121801.jpg(29.81 KB)1
第三篇:四級預測作文最新(推薦)
預測作文1 You should start your essay with a briefdescription ofthe phenomenon ofstudying abroad,and then explain the reasonsfor choosing to shdy overseas.
寫作導航
1.根據(jù)圖表描述近幾年出國留學的總體趨勢,指出發(fā)展過程中的主要信息,2.闡述人們選擇出國留學的主要原因,3.得出結論:出國留學是有益的,但提醒大家,出國留學未必適合所有人,人們應該根據(jù)自身的能力和條件做出選擇。
范文與譯文
Studying Abroad
The past several years have witnessed a drastic increase in the number of Chinese students who choose to study abroad.As is illustrated by the column chart,the number ofstudents studying overseas has more than doubled from 2008 to 2013,climbing from 180,000 to around 410,000.
There are a variety of reasons for studying overseas.First,students can enrich their knowledge and enlarge their horizons by being exposed to entirely new ideas and cultures.Second,an overseas living experience allows a real-life use of a foreign language,so it can improve the efficiency in acquiring second-language skills.Last but not least,many people hold the idea that all overseas diploma from top universities in the world Can provide more competitive advantages for their future careers than a diploma obtained at home.
Generally speaking,studying abroad is valuable in one’s personal development. However,people should also be aware that it may not necessarily pay off due to the high financial COSffi and the potential challenges of adapting to a new culture.
出國留學
過去幾年見證了中國學生選擇出國留學在人數(shù)上的急劇增長。如柱狀圖所示,出國留學人數(shù)從2008年的18萬增加到2013年的41萬,增長了一倍多。
選擇出國留學的原因有很多。首先,通過接觸新的思想和文化,學生可以增長知識,拓寬視野。其次,國外生活經(jīng)歷可以使外語在實際生活得以使用,從而提高掌握外語技能的效率。最后但并非最不重要的是,很多人認為,同在國內(nèi)院校獲得的文憑相比,從國外頂尖院校獲得的文憑能給自己未來的職業(yè)發(fā)展帶來更多競爭優(yōu)勢。
總的來說,出國留學對于個人發(fā)展是很重要的。但是,人們也應該意識到,由于較高的經(jīng)濟開支和適應新的文化帶來的潛在的挑戰(zhàn),出國留學未必一定帶來好的結果。
預測作文2 You should start with a briefdescription ofthe picture,and then express your views on whether we should help those in need.
寫作導航
1.簡要描述圖片:人們對跌倒的老人袖手旁觀,并指出這是一種不良的社會現(xiàn)象;
2.從原因出發(fā)闡述了自己的觀點;
3.提出建議和號召:我們在提高自身安全意識的同時,還是要堅持和發(fā)揚樂于助人這一傳統(tǒng)美德。
范文與譯文
Should We Help Others in Need?
The picture illustrates what we are often sorry to see in modem society:an old man is lying on the ground,while the passers-by are all hesitating over whether to offer help or not,fearing that it may incur unwanted trouble.
From my perspective,there are two reasons that may account for this phenomenon:on one hand,it is reported that some people wim evil intentions adopt this method to blackmail those friendly and helpful people.So people now are more risk-conscious and wary of such deceits.On the other hand,due to the increasing pressures from modern life and the well.accepted concept that time is money,people tend to care more about themselves than others,not to mention helping a stranger.
However,as we all know,being accommodating has always been seen as a virtue in Chinese culture.We should stick to and carry on this fine tradition.Of coursc,we should also look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.
我們應該幫助有困難的人嗎?
這張圖片描述了在現(xiàn)代社會我們很遺憾地經(jīng)??吹降囊环N現(xiàn)象:一名老人躺在地上,而路人都在猶豫是否提供幫助,因為他們擔心這會帶來不必要的麻煩。
在我看來,有兩個原因能解釋這種現(xiàn)象:在一方面,有報道說具有不良意圖的一些人用這種辦法來敲詐那些友善的、樂于助人的人。所以人們現(xiàn)在更具有風險意識,對這種騙局更加警覺。在另一方面,由于日益增長的現(xiàn)代生活壓力和被普遍接受的“時間就是金錢”的觀念,人們更關心自己,不太關心別人,更不要提幫助陌生人了。
但是,總所周知,在中國文化中,樂于助人一直被看作是一種美德。我們應該堅持并發(fā)揚這一優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)。當然,我們也應該小心提防潛在的危險,以防被騙。
預測作文3 You should start with a briefdescription ofthe picture,and then express your views on whether we should help those in need.
寫作導航
1.簡要描述圖片:人們對跌倒的老人袖手旁觀,并指出這是一種不良的社會現(xiàn)象;
2.從原因出發(fā)闡述了自己的觀點;
3.提出建議和號召:我們在提高自身安全意識的同時,還是要堅持和發(fā)揚樂于助人這一傳統(tǒng)美德。
范文與譯文
Should We Help Others in Need?
The picture illustrates what we are often sorry to see in modem society:an old man is lying on the ground,while the passers-by are all hesitating over whether to offer help or not,fearing that it may incur unwanted trouble.
From my perspective,there are two reasons that may account for this phenomenon:on one hand,it is reported that some people wim evil intentions adopt this method to blackmail those friendly and helpful people.So people now are more risk-conscious and wary of such deceits.On the other hand,due to the increasing pressures from modern life and the well.accepted concept that time is money,people tend to care more about themselves than others,not to mention helping a stranger.
However,as we all know,being accommodating has always been seen as a virtue in Chinese culture.We should stick to and carry on this fine tradition.Of coursc,we should also look out for potential hazards so as not to be deceived.
我們應該幫助有困難的人嗎?
這張圖片描述了在現(xiàn)代社會我們很遺憾地經(jīng)??吹降囊环N現(xiàn)象:一名老人躺在地上,而路人都在猶豫是否提供幫助,因為他們擔心這會帶來不必要的麻煩。
在我看來,有兩個原因能解釋這種現(xiàn)象:在一方面,有報道說具有不良意圖的一些人用這種辦法來敲詐那些友善的、樂于助人的人。所以人們現(xiàn)在更具有風險意識,對這種騙局更加警覺。在另一方面,由于日益增長的現(xiàn)代生活壓力和被普遍接受的“時間就是金錢”的觀念,人們更關心自己,不太關心別人,更不要提幫助陌生人了。
但是,總所周知,在中國文化中,樂于助人一直被看作是一種美德。我們應該堅持并發(fā)揚這一優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)。當然,我們也應該小心提防潛在的危險,以防被騙。
預測作文4 You should write an email inreply to a friend"s inquiry about whether you are going to work or continue your study after graduation.You shouM also explain the reasons behind your choice.
寫作導航
1.回應對方來信,提出自己的觀點,即會選擇繼續(xù)深造;
2.從就業(yè)形勢和知識的重要性兩方面闡述了做出該選擇的原因,并指出會通過參加實踐活動來保持與時俱進;
3.進行總結;
4.按照書信格式表達感謝和祝愿。
A Letter of Reply
Dear Li Ming,I’m very glad to hear from you.Concerning my plan after graduation,I will probably continue my study as a postgraduate.
I have the following reasons.First of all,a higher degree and beaer educational background will give me an edge on the fierce competition of job-hunting because the fact that millions of college students enter the job market annually makes it difficult for US to find the job we want.Besides,as far as I am concemed,knowledge is,undoubtedly,an invaluable treasure of human being,and we should make full use of our youth to learn as much knowledge as possible.of course.staying in the Ivory Tower doesn’t suggest that l will be cut off from society;instead.I will get involved in social and practical activities in my spare time.
Taking all aspects into account.I choose to further my study and get a master’s degree.
Many thanks for your concern.Best wishes!
Your sincerely,Wang Lang 預測作文5 You should start your essay with a briefdescription of the picture and then express your views on the problem oftrust crisis.
寫作導航
1.簡要描述圖片,指出人們之問缺少信任是一種不良社會現(xiàn)象,會產(chǎn)生嚴重后果;
2.從政府、社會機構(媒體和學校)和個人三個層面出發(fā)闡述了解決辦法;
3.進行總結,建議人們從個人做起,謹小慎微,提高誠信意識。
范文與譯文
Trust Crisis
The picture vividly depicts the trust crisis in modern society:the customer doubts about the quality of a bargain,while the seller worries that the bill is counterfeit.This is a worrying social problem,which makes people always suspicious about others,and then affects social harmony.
To get to the root of this problem,we should call on the efforts from all sides to recognize the value of honesty and credibility in the tide of commodity economy.For one thing,the government should enact strict laws and regulations to punish frauds.For another,the mass media and education institutes should play a positive role in restoring mutual trust.
Finally,individuals should improve their own moral standards,and develop a sense ofresponsibility for others.
In short,being honest and credible is SO valuable a virtue that it should be the last thing that can be cast away.Everyone should watch out his behaviors and eradicate immediately the seed ofdishonesty once it is sowed in the mind.
預測作文6 信任危機
這張圖片生動地描述了現(xiàn)代社會的信任危機:顧客懷疑特價商品的質(zhì)量,而賣家擔心收到的是偽鈔。這是一個令人堪憂的社會問題,它讓人們總是懷疑別人,并進而影響社會和諧。
要從根本上解決這個問題,我們應該號召各方共同努力來認識到誠信在商品經(jīng)濟浪潮中的價值。首先,政府應該制定嚴格的法律規(guī)定來懲治欺詐行為。其次,媒體和教育機構應該在重建相互信任上發(fā)揮積極作用。最后,個人應該提高他們的道德標準,培養(yǎng)對他人的責任感。
簡言之,誠信是一項重要美德,不應該被丟棄。每個人應該注意自己的行為,一旦腦子里有了欺騙的想法,就應該馬上根除。
預測作文7 Youngsters’ Worship
1.大學生現(xiàn)在過分崇拜大明星
2.分析產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因
3.我的看法
【范文】Youngsters’ Worship
Nowadays, star-worshiping is popular among teenagers, especially many university students.Why? When it comes to the symptoms of worshiping a star, the main factor I’d like to mention is imitation.With a blind love for their idols, teenagers firmly believe that their choices are the best.As a result, the stars’ clothes, hairstyles and hobbies, as well as their behaviors in public, are closely observed or followed, though, to some extent, they may be considered improper or even ridiculous.In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing.However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”.As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists.As students, we should learn from them.Only in this way can we become useful persons in the future.On Pursuing Fashion
1.現(xiàn)今,越來越多的大學生追求時尚
2.這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的不良影響
3.我的看法 【范文】
On Pursuing Fashion
Nowadays, more and more undergraduates are pursuing fashion.Some of them even cut down the expenditure on books and meals to satisfy their desire for fashionable items.The blind following of fashion has had a great influence on college students.First of all, the pursuit of fashion has made many college students get lost.Some of them even fail to focus on their study.Secondly, it is a costly hobby to follow the tide, which will impose great financial burden on their parents.As far as I am concerned, college students should cherish ambitions rather than become slaves of fashion.As for them, the main task on campus is not to pursue fashion but to study.All in all, undergraduates should adopt a more reasonable attitude towards the pursuit of fashion.預測作文8 Green Consumption
1.綠色消費的概念在中國日漸流行
2.中國推行綠色消費還存在許多困難
3.如何解決這個問題
【范文】Green Consumption
The conception of green consumption has gradually become popular in China.More and more green foods are making their appearance on the market and more and more people are becoming conscious of environmental protection.However, there still exist quite a few difficulties in the further promotion of green consumption.On the one hand, many people are still not quite clear of the advantages of green foods.On the other hand, due to high profits, many fake green foods are found in the market.Moreover, many consumers don’t want to pay extra money for green foods.There may be several ways to solve these problems.Firstly, the government should supervise the good quality strictly to protect consumers’ interests.Secondly, the conception of green consumption should be further promoted and emphasized.Thirdly, the government should work together with manufacturers to make the price more reasonable.
第四篇:四級作文預測
占位
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reserving a Seat.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)很多大學里“占座”現(xiàn)象十分普遍
2)這種現(xiàn)象會帶來哪些影響
3)你 對此的看法
【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指 出一種現(xiàn)象,提綱第2點要求分析該現(xiàn)象帶來的影響,提綱第3點要 求談談“我”對該現(xiàn)象的看法。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:描述大學生在教室和圖書館“占座”的現(xiàn)象;說明這種現(xiàn)象帶來的 不良影響;闡述“我”對“占座”現(xiàn)象的看法。
Reserving a Seat
We often see there is a table cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, indicating the seat is taken.This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities.Strangely enough, most of students seem to take this for granted, and few will protest it.Though most of students’ taking seats in advance is for better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects.On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students’ interests.Sometimes even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat.On the other hand, reserving a seat violates the rule of fairness.No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you even though many others are eager for that seat.Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior.Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”.流行病
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Epidemics.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)流行病在我們的生活中隨處可見
2)流行病會帶來哪些危害
3)對此我們應采取哪些措施
Epidemics
Epidemics are rampant throughout the whole human history, and they have caused the most devastating impacts on us.Each year, numerous epidemics break out on earth and they have such characteristics as fast spreading and infectious.Epidemics are harmful in many ways.For one thing, it will make people and animals seriously ill or dead, which is a great loss to the country.For example, the outbreak of SARS once killed lots of people and brought great economic loss to the whole country.For another, there is no cure for many kinds of epidemic diseases.Once we are infected by one of them, it is difficult to be cured.To avoid the outbreak of some kind of epidemics as possible as we can, we should first change some unhealthy habits or customs.For example, meals served individually should be encouraged, which would reduce the possibility of the spread of germs.On the other hand, the government should learn how to deal with emergencies when an epidemic broke out.I believe as long as we treat and prevent epidemics in the right way, we will finally conquer them.新東方:2011年12月英語四級作文預測4篇(1)
一、Computers in Students’ Dorms
1).現(xiàn)在大學生宿舍幾乎人手一臺電腦
2).有些人認為會促進學生的學習,有些人認為會影響學生的學習
3).你的看法
首段現(xiàn)象描述:
On many dorms, it has become a prevalent phenomenon for one college student to possess a PC or a notebook.Meanwhile, a host of parents or teachers encourage and advocate college students to use computers in their life and study.Taking a look around, we can find a great many students and dorms like this.利弊分析(支持方觀點+反方觀點)
A number of individuals prefer or favor the phenomenon “One student, One PC”.In their eyes, studying with the help of computers will enhance students’ over-all development and competitiveness, because rich information on the Internet will enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.Even so, others hold a different view that using computers may carry some risks.First, buying PC calls for plenty of money;however, the quality of learning is not always as satisfactory as expected.Then, what worries many teachers is that students’ academic learning may be affected negatively by a variety of computer games.我的看法(或建議)
By and large, I am convinced that the advantages derived from the popularity of computers far outweigh the disadvantages.Without this machine, it is impossible for students to have more opportunities to acquire the knowledge beyond their campuses.Therefore, students are advisable to use the PC in a sensible way.新東方:2011年12月英語四級作文預測4篇(2)
二、Oversea Study at an Early Age
1.很多低齡學生出國留學
2.低齡學生出國留學的利弊
3.我的看法
首段現(xiàn)象描述:
In contemporary society, it has become a prevalent phenomenon for young students to pursue their oversea study at an early age.Meanwhile, a host of parents or teachers encourage and advocate their kids to prepare from primary school.Taking a look around, we can find a great many parents and children like this.利弊分析(支持方觀點+方法觀點)
A number of individuals prefer or favor studying abroad at an early age.In their eyes, this new experience will enhance students’ over-all development and competitiveness, because advanced education in developed nations will enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.Even so, others hold a different view that this practice may carry some risks.First, studying abroad as children calls for plenty of money;however, the quality of learning is not always as satisfactory as expected.Then, what worries many teachers is that students’ Chinese culture learning may be affected negatively by their living environment in foreign nations.我的看法(或建議)
By and large, I am convinced that the advantages derived from this phenomenon far outweigh the disadvantages.Without this experience, it is impossible for students to have more opportunities to acquire the knowledge beyond their nations.However, students are advisable to put the same emphasis on Chinese learning and oversea studying.新東方:2011年12月英語四級作文預測4篇(3)
三、Campaign for Student Leaders
1.很多大學生參加競選學生干部
2.對此,人們看法不一
3.我的看法
首段現(xiàn)象描述:
On many campuses, it has become a prevalent phenomenon for college students to participate in the campaigns for student-leaders.Meanwhile, a host of parents or teachers encourage and advocate college students to take these chances to gain a favorable position in job-hunting.Taking a look around, we can find a great many students like this.利弊分析(支持方觀點+方法觀點)
A number of individuals prefer or favor students’ participation in associations as leaders.In their eyes, these wide opportunities will enhance students’ over-all development and competitiveness, because various activities will enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.Even so, others hold a different view that this campaign may carry some risks.First, preparing and participation calls for plenty of time, energy, even money;however, the result of campaign is not always as satisfactory as expected.Then, what worries many teachers is that students’ academic learning may be affected negatively by too many extra-curriculum activities in associations.我的看法(或建議)
By and large, I am convinced that the advantages derived from this activity far outweigh the disadvantages.Without it, it is impossible for students to have more opportunities to cultivate their ability, especially leadership.Therefore, after mastering their professional knowledge, students are advisable to take part in a sensible way.新東方:2011年12月英語四級作文預測4篇(4)
四、My Opinion on Campus Lectures
1.大學校園里的講座豐富多彩
2.聽講座的益處
3.你對在大學校園里聽講座的評論
首段現(xiàn)象描述:
On many campuses, it has become a prevalent phenomenon for college to hold various lectures.Meanwhile, a host of parents or teachers encourage and advocate college students to attend these lectures to gain a favorable position in academic learning.Taking a look around, we can find a great many lectures like this: lectures about job-hunting, cet-46 and so on.利分析(支持方觀點)
A number of individuals prefer or favor these lectures.In their eyes, these wide opportunities will enhance students’ over-all development and competitiveness, because lectures by famous professors will enrich their knowledge and broaden their horizons.Then, holding lectures calls for less time, energy, and money;however, the result of learning is always as satisfactory.Then, what excites many teachers is that students’ academic learning may be affected positively by much extra-curriculum information.我的看法(或建議)
By and large, I am convinced that the advantages derived from this activity far outweigh our expectation.Without them, it is impossible for students to have more opportunities to cultivate their ability and acquire knowledge.Therefore, , students are advisable to attend these lectures.
第五篇:四級作文預測
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)現(xiàn) 在有一些大學生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡游戲,家長和學校對此憂心忡忡 2)但 有人認為網(wǎng)絡游戲并不是一無是處 3)你 對此的看法是…… 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指 出對于某問題的一種反面看法,提綱第2點指出對于該問題的正面看法,提綱第3點要 求談談“我”對該問題的看法,由此可判斷本文 應為對比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:指出大學生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡游戲的問題,闡述家長和老師對該問題的否 定態(tài)度和他們的擔憂;指出一些人對待網(wǎng)絡游戲的肯定態(tài)度,并闡述網(wǎng)絡游戲的好處;表明“我”對網(wǎng)絡游戲的看法。
Online Games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students.Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games.But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected.This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents.However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful.They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly.Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science.More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly.From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way.When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once.But if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them.預測作文2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Machine Translation and Human Translation.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)現(xiàn) 在諸多的電子辭典及相關翻譯軟件被開發(fā)出來,人們不再需要翻閱厚重的字典 2)有 人認為以后機器翻譯會完全取代人工翻譯 3)你 是否同意這種觀點,為什么? 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指 出一種新興事物,提綱第2點針對該事物提出一種有爭議的觀點,提綱第3點要 求表明“我”是否同意這種觀點,由此可判斷本 文應為對比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:描述電子辭典和翻譯軟件的使用現(xiàn)狀,引出機器翻譯會代替人工翻 譯的觀點;表明“我”對這一觀點的態(tài)度并說明理由;總 結“我”的觀點,提出建議。Machine Translation and Human Translation In recent years, all kinds of electronic dictionaries and translation software have been developed.With the development of technology, these electronic dictionaries and software can help us translate not only words and phrases but even sentences and paragraphs.So some people come to the conclusion that machine translation will replace traditional human translation.However, I couldn’t agree with this argument.Admittedly, translation machines and software bring much convenience for our study and our work.With them, we needn’t bother to leaf through the heavy dictionaries.However, machine translation has its disadvantages.First, generally speaking, translation software only can give direct translation, which is sometimes not in accordance with the original articles in logic and meaning.Second, some people depend on electronic dictionaries and software too much, which is unfavorable to their improvement in language ability.Considering the above-mentioned, I think that machine translation cannot replace human translation, but it is a good complementary to human translation.Therefore, we should combine machine translation with human translation efficiently.預測作文4 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Extravagant Spending on College Campus.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)據(jù)調(diào)查顯示,現(xiàn)在大學生每月的花銷越來越高,很多大學生花錢如流水,根本沒有節(jié)儉的概念
2)分 析產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因 3)我 的看法 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指 出校園內(nèi)的一種現(xiàn)象,提綱第2點要求分析產(chǎn)生該現(xiàn)象的原因,提綱第3點要 求談談“我”的看法,由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象 解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:描述大學生花錢沒有節(jié)制的現(xiàn)象;分析導致大學生這種消費習慣的 原因;闡述“我”對大學生消費觀的看法。Extravagant Spending on College Campus According to a survey, in recent years the monthly expenditure of a college student has been on the sharp rise.Many college students spend money like water and have no concept of thrift in their mind.They take it for granted that they spend money from their parents before they enter into the society.This extravagant spending is mainly caused by the following factors.First of all, nowadays most of students are the only children of their families.They are the apple in their family’s eyes and naturally get more care and pocket money.Secondly, with the improvement of living standard, parents can afford higher expenditure of their children.Thirdly, some students like to pursue fashion and trends, which tends to need more money.Finally, campus love is also a possible factor causing extravagant spending.From my point of view, a college student, as a pure consumer, should learn to be thrifty.We should limit our expenditure on daily necessities but not buy whatever we want regardless of their prices.The habit of thrift can help us form right values and is favorable to our future development.預測作文5 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Social Practice of College Students.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)各 大學在假期都會組織學生參加各種社會實踐活動 2)這 些活動給大學生帶來了哪些好處 3)參 加社會實踐活動應該注意些什么 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指 出一種現(xiàn)象,提綱第2點要求分析這種現(xiàn)象帶來的好處,提綱第3點要 求指出注意事項,由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:概述大學生社會實踐活動及其主要內(nèi)容;分析社會實踐活動給大學 生帶來的好處;指出大學生參加社會實踐時應該注意些什么。Social Practice of College Students Nowadays many universities encourage and organize students to take part in social practice activities.During the holidays, more and more students choose to be the volunteers, take part-time jobs, or take part in other practical activities alike.It’s obvious that social practice is playing a more and more important role in China’s college education.Undoubtedly, college students have benefited a lot from social practice.Above all, they are provided with more opportunities to contact the real world outside the campus.Moreover, in social practice activities, students can apply their knowledge to the solution to the practical problems.So their practical skills are improved greatly.Besides, social practice helps strengthen students’ sense of social responsibility.Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is necessary for college students to participate in social practice.However, social practice may bring some problems.For example, some students spend too much time in taking part-time jobs so as to ignore their study.Therefore, we should try to balance the relationship between social practice and study.預測作文6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Skipping Classes on College Campus.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)大 學里逃課現(xiàn)象時有發(fā)生 2)分 析學生逃課的原因 3)如 何減少逃課現(xiàn)象
【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指 出一種現(xiàn)象,提綱第2點要求分析該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因,提綱第3點要 求說明如何解決該問題,由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:描述大學生的逃課現(xiàn)象;分析大學生逃課的主要原因;說明應該如 何減少逃課現(xiàn)象。Skipping Classes on College Campus In colleges and universities, the phenomenon of students’ skipping classes is not unusual.There are often some students who skip those classes for feeling unwell or other private reasons.Besides, still some students don’t go to class without any reason but for they don’t want to.There are two main reasons for college students’ skipping classes.First, compared with in middle school, students have more freedom in college.It depends more on one student’s consciousness whether he will attend the class.So those students lacking self-discipline begin to skip classes.Second, some teachers’ lectures could not attract students’ interests so that some students would rather skip classes to study what they are interested in.For whatever reasons, skipping classes does bring negative effects on students’ study.Therefore, it is necessary to take some effective measures to reduce this phenomenon.On the one hand, the school and teachers should make students realize the negative effects of skipping classes and enhance their consciousness of attending the class.On the other hand, teachers have to improve their teaching quality to attract students’ interests in the courses.Only in this way can the phenomenon of skipping classes be reduced as soon as possible.預測作文7 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Continuing Education.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)上 圖為某城市1992—2007年參加繼續(xù)教育的人數(shù)情況,請描述其中的變化 2)分 析導致該變化的原因 3)談 談你對繼續(xù)教育的看法 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要 求描述圖表中反應的變化,提綱第2點要求分析該變化產(chǎn)生的原因,提綱第3點要 求談談“我”的看法,由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象 解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:根據(jù)圖表中的數(shù)據(jù)描述1992—2007年繼續(xù)教育參加人數(shù)增加的現(xiàn)象;分析導致參加繼續(xù)教育的人數(shù)增加的原因;闡述“我”對繼續(xù)教育的看法。
A Boom in Continuing Education From the graph, we can learn the number of continuing education participants has kept increasing from 1992 to 2007 in X city.In 1992 there were only 20 thousand people taking part in the continuing education, but in 1995 the number grew to 60 thousand, and in 2000 140, and by 2007, the number has reached 210 thousand.It can be seen easily that continuing education is gaining more and more popularity.The following reasons are responsible for this boom in continuing education.Firstly, during the work many people begin to realize what they have learned in schools is far from enough.So they turn to continuing education to gain more knowledge and skills.Moreover, as the science and technology in China are developing very fast, adults after graduation have to refresh themselves.In addition, in modern society, those without bachelor’s degrees or above are less competitive.As far as I am concerned, the boom in continuing education is a necessity.It provides those on-the-job people with chances to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge.As our society develops, more and more people will receive continuing education in the future.預測作文8 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Make Full Use of Reference Books.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1)參 考書泛濫已成為師生共同關注的問題 2)參 考書泛濫帶來了哪些影響
3)作 為大學生,應該如何正確選擇和使用參考書 【思路點撥】 本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提 出一個問題,提綱第2點要求分析該問題帶來的影響,提綱第3點要 求說明如何解決該問題,由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:描述參考書泛濫的現(xiàn)象;分析參考書泛濫帶來的不良影響;從大學 生的角度說明應該如何正確選擇和使用參考書。How to Make Full Use of Reference Books Nowadays reference books have become a problem of great concern for both teachers and students.There are many kinds of reference books available in the book market.A smarter use of these books is certainly beneficial, but the misuse and overuse of them may cause a lot of problems.First of all, teaching reference books might make the students less attentive in class.Armed with reference books, many students may think that they know what the teacher is going to talk about.So they may not listen to the teacher in class at all.Secondly, some students rely on the reference books too much, which is unfavorable to the improvement of their ability to work out the solutions for themselves.Thirdly, there are some reference books with many mistakes, which might mislead students.Considering the above-mentioned, we should be careful in selecting and using references books.Firstly, we should check the contents of the book carefully but not only pay attention to the brand of publishing house.In addition, we can turn to the recommendation of teachers and students around us.Besides, reference books are just an assistant, so we shouldn’t rely on them too much.Only in this way can we make full use of reference books.預測作文9 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Will Network Classroom Replace Traditional Classroom? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)網(wǎng) 絡課堂教學的興起,使傳統(tǒng)的課堂教學受到了前所未有的挑戰(zhàn) 2)網(wǎng) 絡課堂教學模式會完全取代傳統(tǒng)課堂教學模式嗎? 3)你 的看法,理由是…… 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指 出一種新興事物,提綱第2點針對該事物提出一個有爭議的觀點,提綱第3點要 求表明“我”的看法,由此可判斷本文應為對比 選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:描述網(wǎng)絡課堂對傳統(tǒng)課堂的挑戰(zhàn);提出關于網(wǎng)絡課堂是否會取代傳 統(tǒng)課堂的兩種不同觀點并說明理由;表明“我”的態(tài)度并說明理由。Will Network Classrooms Replace Traditional Classrooms? With the popularization of the Internet, network classrooms are gaining more and more popularity.As a new teaching pattern, network classrooms have become an effective complement to traditional classrooms.So some people propose one question: will network classrooms replace traditional classrooms? As to this question, the opinions vary from one to another.Some people think it quite possible for network classrooms to take the place of traditional classrooms.First, network classrooms needn’t have face-to-face communication and are not limited by time and place, which facilitate both teachers and students.Secondly, network classrooms release teachers from repeating the same contents since the video or audio material can be played time and again.However, many people have opposite standpoints.They say that with online courses, students lack direct communications with teachers and their confusion cannot be solved instantly.In addition, the computer system cannot be guaranteed to work stably all the time.Personally, both network classrooms and traditional classrooms are necessary for students.If traditional teaching patterns and the modern ones like network classrooms can be combined together, more fruitful education is sure to be realized.預測作文10 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Witness of a Theft Incident.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)描 述你在公共場所目睹的一次扒竊事件 2)譴 責這種不文明的現(xiàn)象 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要 求描述一次事件的經(jīng)過,提綱第2點要求對事件進行評論,由此可判斷本文應為記敘文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:交待事件背景;描述扒竊事件的經(jīng)過和最后結果;譴責這種不文明 的現(xiàn)象,提出解決建議。A Witness of a Theft Incident
Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home.The thief was so rampant that it left me a very deep impression.It was in the rush hour, when many people were buying tickets at the subway station.A woman took her purse out and paid for the ticket.Then she put her purse back into her bag and turned to leave, when a mid-aged man brushed past her muttering “Excuse me”.She didn’t feel unusual and went into the station.Indeed, her purse had been stolen by that man.To our surprise, the thief seems not to be nervous at all and even began to look others up and down.Maybe he was searching for the next target.At that time some persons, including me, witnessed the process.But unfortunately, no one dared to warn that woman.This incident makes me ashamed and leaves me a deep thought.The pickpocket has posed a great threat to residents’ and visitors’ property safety.Undoubtedly, it is an urgent thing to take action to prevent pickpocket.However, it cannot depend on the police only.Instead, it needs our common efforts.We can not shut our eyes and mouths to the pickpocket any more.It should be kept in our minds that our forces are far beyond those thieves.預測作文11
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Why People Migrate to Another Country? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese): 1)近年來越來越多的人移居到國外 2)分 析其原因 3)“我”的看法
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要 求描述近年來社會上出現(xiàn)的一種現(xiàn)象,提綱第2點要求分析出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因,提綱第3點則要求闡述“我”的看法,由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含以下內(nèi)容:描述近年來越來越多的人移居到國外的現(xiàn)象;分析其產(chǎn)生的原因; 闡述“我”的觀點。Why People Migrate to Another Country? Many people choose to live in a foreign country, which has aroused great concern.Nowadays, more and more people, especially plenty of intellectuals, migrate to some developed countries, such as America, England and Canada.In addition, there are still many people studying and working in foreign countries struggling for “green cards”.There are many reasons accounting for this phenomenon.Among all these factors, pursuing high-quality life plays a critical role.Moreover, most of them migrate to some foreign countries with a view to making their children receive good education there.Besides, some people just want to experience a different culture they like.All these above factors contribute to their choice to migrate to another country.As far as I am concerned, though I enjoy various cultures all over the world, I won’t migrate to another country.For one thing, I don’t like to live far from my friends and relatives.For another, I can’t bear to speak and listen to a foreign language from day to night.In a word, everyone has his right to decide where to live, and everyone’s choice should be respected.預測作文12
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic “Mute English” among Chinese Students.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese):
1)中 國有很多學生無法用英語進行交流,由此出現(xiàn)“啞巴英語”的現(xiàn)象 2)造 成“啞巴英語”的原因 3)提 供一些可行的解決方法 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要 求闡述目前學生遇到的一個問題,提綱第2點要求說明原因,提綱第3點要求 提供解決方法,由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含以下內(nèi)容:闡述中國大多數(shù)學生口語很差的現(xiàn)狀;造成“啞巴英語”的原因;提供一些可行的解決辦 法?!癕ute English” among Chinese Students
Nowadays, oral English is quite a serious problem among Chinese students.Most of the students have studied English for a long time, but they can’t communicate well with other people in English.In addition, there are still many other students who can understand every word of a article, but fail to read them out fluently and correctly.Many reasons contribute to this problem.Among these reasons, examination-oriented education system plays a vital role.What’s more, most of the students are too shy and nervous to speak in public.I think it is high time that we paid more attention to this “Mute English”.Above all, students should read after the tape recorder or MP3 to practise the pronunciation.Moreover, they should talk as much as possible with the foreigners and not be afraid of losing face.In addition, students should enrich vocabulary and pay attention to the differences between spoken language and written language.Only through these ways can Chinese students avoid “Mute English” and speak a fluent English.預測作文13
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese): 1)大 學生應對挫折的能力差,學校應當加強挫折教育 2)開 展挫折教育刻不容緩
Frustration Education should be Strengthened among College Students
College students should be guided correctly to face frustrations in life, which has been generally accepted.Frustration is inevitable during our life, and frustration education should be carried out among colleges and universities.The truth of it is deep and profound.Many remarkable examples contribute to this argument.A case in point is that there are an increasing number of college students committing suicide each year when confronted with some kind of frustration.This is close to suggest that strengthening frustration education allows of no delay.For another example, it seems that successful people tend to be good at dealing with frustrations.Moreover, most of the students are often annoyed and discouraged by frustrations instead of drawing lessons.Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that frustration education is essential to the college students.But what is worth noting is colleges should also provide psychological service for the students while giving frustration education.To conclude, college students should be guided in the right path when facing setbacks in life.預測作文14
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Campus Security.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)近年來發(fā)生在校園的意外事件不斷增加,校園安全問題備受關注 2)對 此我們應該采取哪些措施 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要 求闡述目前校園里出現(xiàn)的一種問題,提綱第2點要求提供解決辦法,由此可判斷本文應為 問題解決型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含以下內(nèi)容:闡述“目前 校園意外事件不斷出現(xiàn)”這一問題,校園安全問題備受關注的現(xiàn)狀;我們應當采取哪些措施來應對;總結全文。Campus Security
Security issue may sound clichéd, but when it comes to the campus security, we have to take it seriously.Nearly every day, there are reports to the security office on campus that valuable things are stolen away.A surrounding with stealing, mugging can’t be worse for studying.In such cases, what measures should be taken to improve the campus security?
On the one hand, we students should strengthen our security awareness.Once we smell out something unusual, we should report it to the campus guard immediately.On the other hand, more equipment such as monitors should be installed on campus so as to detect crimes as soon as possible.Besides, a proper amount of security guards should be arranged to patrol the campus.In my opinion, campus security will be improved as long as efforts are made on campus.Therefore colleges and universities should try their best to make everyone on campus safe and sound.(總結觀點段)預測作文15
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Epidemics.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)流 行病在我們的生活中隨處可見 2)流 行病會帶來哪些危害 3)對 此我們應采取哪些措施 Epidemics
Epidemics are rampant throughout the whole human history, and they have caused the most devastating impacts on us.Each year, numerous epidemics break out on earth and they have such characteristics as fast spreading and infectious.Epidemics are harmful in many ways.For one thing, it will make people and animals seriously ill or dead, which is a great loss to the country.For example, the outbreak of SARS once killed lots of people and brought great economic loss to the whole country.For another, there is no cure for many kinds of epidemic diseases.Once we are infected by one of them, it is difficult to be cured.To avoid the outbreak of some kind of epidemics as possible as we can, we should first change some unhealthy habits or customs.For example, meals served individually should be encouraged, which would reduce the possibility of the spread of germs.On the other hand, the government should learn how to deal with emergencies when an epidemic broke out.I believe as long as we treat and prevent epidemics in the right way, we will finally conquer them.預測作文16
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Face to Face Communication Better than Other Types of Communication? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)如今人們之間的交流方式越來越多(如:寫信,MSN,手機等),你個人認為面對面交流是否優(yōu)于這些交流方式 2)論 證你的觀點 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要 求闡述一種觀點,提綱第2點要求論證這個觀點,由此可判斷本文應為觀點論證型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含以下內(nèi)容:關于面對面交流是否優(yōu)于如寫信和打電話等其他交流方式給出你的 觀點;通過舉例論證此觀點;重申觀點,總結全文。Is Face to Face Communication Better than Other Types of Communication?
Nowadays, with the development of technology, many modern forms of communication, such as phone calls and email, have stepped into our life.Facing with these, the traditional way of communication — face-to-face communication, seems to be left behind the times.But in fact, this is not actually true.For me, noting can parallel with face-to-face communication.The following reasons can account for my opinion.For one thing, face-to-face communication allows us to make an interactive conversation.For example, we can clear away the misunderstanding in time.Because a person’s tone of voice or facial expression often reflects his mood, while in other kinds of communication it’s hard for us to perceive the subtle changes of one’s emotion.For another, face-to-face communication can deepen the interpersonal relationship.For instance, trust and respect between businesses partners can be established even with a firm handshake.In a word, face-to-face communication improves the relationship among people and it is the best kind of communication.All the other types are merely the complement of it.預測作文17
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Letter of Appeal.You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline given below: 在過去幾年中,我們已經(jīng)目睹了人類活動引起的各種災害。作為一位大學生,請寫一封倡議書,呼吁大家 關注這些自然災害并保護環(huán)境,內(nèi)容應包括:
1)舉 出人類活動引發(fā)的災害的實例 2)指 出一些必要的防范措施 3)號 召大家行動起來拯救地球 【思路點撥】
本題要求寫一封倡議書。根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含以下內(nèi)容:點明寫信的目的:呼吁大家關注人類活動對地球造成的危害,陳述災害的具體表現(xiàn);為了拯救地球,我們應當采取哪些措施;號召大家行動起來拯救地球。
A Letter of Appeal June 13, 2008 Dear friends,I am writing this letter to call on everyone to pay attention to the present disasters caused by human activities.As some of you may know, over the past years, floods, droughts, landslides, and dust storms have frequented our planet.Not long ago, tsunami swept the Southeast Asia, which caused enormous damage.All these have sounded an alarm to human beings.So it is high time that we join efforts to save our planet.Above all, a task of top priority for us is to plant trees as many as possible, especially in the arid areas.At the same time, we should stop deforesting in large amount.And we can save our planet through many other ways, such as saving water and using recycled paper.So don’t hesitate to act out these measures.Even a small action is meaningful to our planet.Please join us in the action of protecting our planet.If you are willing to do something to save our planet, please start from the little thing right around you.Thank you!
Sincerely yours,Li Ming 預測作文18 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Smoking in Public Places be Banned? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1)公 共場合是否應該禁止吸煙,說出你的觀點 2)論 證你的觀點 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點要 求闡述一種觀點,提綱第2點要求論證這個觀點,由此可判斷本文應為觀點論證型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含以下內(nèi)容:關于公共場合是否應該吸煙給出你的觀點;通過舉例論證此觀點; 重申觀點,總結全文。
Should Smoking in Public Places be Banned? Nowadays many countries in the world have passed laws to ban smoking in public places.Some smokers claim that their rights are infringed if smoking is forbidden in public places.However, most non-smokers regard the ban as good news.As far as I’m concerned, smoking should be banned in all the public places such as restaurants, theaters and public squares.On the one hand, smoking is harmful both for smokers themselves and others.It is reported that every year smoking causes millions of death around the world.On the other hand, smoking pollutes the air.Just imagine that you sit in a restaurant full of smoke, how can you enjoy your meal there? Besides, smoking is bad for the elevation of a country’s image in the world.I believe if smoking is banned in all the public places, most of us will breathe in more fresh and clean air.And the health condition of all the people will be greatly improved.預測作文19 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Commercialization of Campus Music.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)近年來校園音樂逐漸走向商業(yè)化,由企業(yè)發(fā)起主辦的大學生音樂節(jié)、校園歌手大賽層出不窮
2)導致這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么 3)這 種現(xiàn)象可能帶來的影響 【思路點撥】
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指 出一種現(xiàn)象,提綱第2點要求分析導致這種現(xiàn)象的原因,提綱第3點要 求說明該現(xiàn)象可能帶來的影響,由此可推知本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:描述近年來企業(yè)熱衷于舉辦大學生音樂節(jié)、校園歌手大賽的現(xiàn)象; 分析導致這種現(xiàn)象的原因;說明該現(xiàn)象可能帶來的影響。
Commercialization of Campus Music In recent years, campus music has been commercialized gradually.More and more enterprises are interested in being the sponsors of college music festivals or award competitions of campus singers.Campus singers and songs are not confined to college campus any more but being pushed to the market gradually.The following factors can account for this phenomenon.On the one hand, some enterprises’ paying more attention to campus music is out of their sense of commitment to the society.They want to set healthy enterprise images before the public.On the other hand, nowadays entertainment marketing is very popular.Enterprises want to utilize entertainment activities to improve their notability and influence.College students, as the focus of the whole society, are a good choice for these enterprises.Of course, these musical activities have brought more chances for campus singers to show their talents to the public.Besides, campus songs have gotten more wide spreading.However, commercialization of campus music to some extent reduces its uniqueness.Induced by fame and wealth, some campus singers try to cater to the tastes of the public and lost their own styles gradually.Therefore, in order to make campus music develop more healthily, both the sponsors of music activities and our campus singers should pay more attention on music itself but not profits.預測作文20 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reserving a Seat.You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1)很 多大學里“占座”現(xiàn)象十分普遍 2)這 種現(xiàn)象會帶來哪些影響 3)你 對此的看法 【思路點撥】 本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指 出一種現(xiàn)象,提綱第2點要求分析該現(xiàn)象帶來的影響,提綱第3點要 求談談“我”對該現(xiàn)象的看法。
根據(jù)所給提綱,本文應包含如下內(nèi)容:描述大學生在教室和圖書館“占座”的現(xiàn)象;說明這種現(xiàn)象帶來的 不良影響;闡述“我”對“占座”現(xiàn)象的看法。
Reserving a Seat We often see there is a table cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, indicating the seat is taken.This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities.Strangely enough, most of students seem to take this for granted, and few will protest it.Though most of students’ taking seats in advance is for better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects.On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students’ interests.Sometimes even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat.On the other hand, reserving a seat violates the rule of fairness.No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you even though many others are eager for that seat.Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior.Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”.