第一篇：2012年考研英語(yǔ)作文十大熱點(diǎn)（共）

2012年考研英語(yǔ)作文十大熱點(diǎn)

一、低碳與環(huán)保

低碳與環(huán)保 高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③

everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。

To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。

二、網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利與弊

到底聽(tīng)誰(shuí)的？ 高分范文

Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online.Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①.It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。

The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience.For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on.On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。

In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time.On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided.Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。

三、醉酒駕車與安全意識(shí)、社會(huì)責(zé)任

醉酒駕車與安全意識(shí)、社會(huì)責(zé)任 高分范文

What a scary and sensational scene it is!In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。

The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice.So life is to be respected and awed②.It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence(DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility.We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us.It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。

四、大學(xué)生就業(yè)：放低姿態(tài)、平常心做人

大學(xué)生就業(yè) 高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①.At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus.On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④.On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable.This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。

Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。

五、節(jié)約資源

儲(chǔ)蓄水滴，儲(chǔ)蓄幸福 高分范文

Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource.Actually, water resource is very limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①.Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。

However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②.For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③.Water resource is indispensable④

not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤

when there is no more water。

Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥

this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

六、面對(duì)人生與社會(huì)：樂(lè)觀與豁達(dá)

樂(lè)觀與豁達(dá)

高分范文

As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。

As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while②

the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③

toward the same life。

There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude.What’s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let’s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④

七、商業(yè)行賄

商業(yè)行賄

高分范文

There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery.Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape.What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。

The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money.For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive②

effect on the whole society.Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③

may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy.Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position.For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”，showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money.It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。

To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted.Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public.Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。

八、城市交通

城市交通 高分范文

How horrible the traffic is!The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street.In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。

Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait.Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted on the road.On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③

has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam.Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④

should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。

九、科技與生活

科技與生活 高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。

Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③

of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。

It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④

in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。

十、弘揚(yáng)民族文化

弘揚(yáng)民族文化 高分范文

In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。

It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”，referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③

to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④

about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。

Toward this kind of “China craze”，we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。

2011年考研英語(yǔ)大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測(cè)11

Introduced as a widely known Chinese fable “Blind men and an Elephant”, it tells us never to draw a conclusion from incomplete data.For tremendous years, people outside China could only get narrow and unilateral knowledge about China, leaving a real China far from being unveiled.Nevertheless, the past 2008 Beijing Olympics was the very and perfect time to lift the curse.For most people who are non-Chinese, they tend to have a picture of Chinese who are just Confucius-like, living in a highly polluted place or even having no freedom to speak in public, etc.Reasons behind are usually the following two: one is that westerners are not so eager to learn about China just as our Chinese do about them, the limited information that reached them are mostly outdated or biased one which were more often than not stipulated by a third party with a special interest;the other is that Chinese government were not so open as the one today and did inadequate publicity about its country, thus the image of China is always kind of mysterious to outsiders, then the image depicted above about China, though misleading, is understandable.However, the grand Olympic Games provide an golden opportunity for people around the world to see a complete and “brand-new”China.Therefore, a better world characterized by harmony between China and all the other countries is to come.2011年考研英語(yǔ)大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測(cè)12

重點(diǎn)推薦: the lack of responsibility

范文演示：When the issue of poisonous milk powder gains an overwhelming focus from the public, what are these malefactors doing? As we can see from the depiction, enterprise, milk station, milch cow and even grass are trying to find someone scapegoating for this credit crisis, in my view point, that’s nothing to do with the credit but the problem of responsibility.Responsibility is a keyword that we should never disregard, defined not only as the courage to face every foreseeable risk, but as the braveness to entail every malpractice when it really takes place as well.The causes of the shortage of responsibility or even conscience may be as follows.Firstly, inner cause ascribing probably to the destructive influence emanating from the decay of morality may result in the over-materialism.Furthermore, outerly , deficient supervisal gives rise to the fearless adventurer who is at the risk of anything ,not to say to deviate from his own liability ,to pursue as many as profits.A case in point is the Melamine-laced Milk Incident which almost destroyed the whole of China’s milk industry.It is imperative that drastic measures should be taken to end this thorny situation, such as enacting related law to reinforce our supervisal mechanism to avoid the behavior of kicking the ball when something bad happen and promoting social entities to regain one of Chinese traditional virtues, which is called “who would enter the hell if I wouldn’t”,that means, undoubtedly, to learn to be responsible for the blunder means sensible unflinchingness.2011年考研英語(yǔ)大作文權(quán)威預(yù)測(cè)13

背景介紹：山寨現(xiàn)象

“山寨”一詞源于廣東話，是“小型、小規(guī)模”甚至有點(diǎn)“地下工廠”的意思，其主要特點(diǎn)為仿造性、快速化、平民化。如今，網(wǎng)絡(luò)上各種各樣的東西都有山寨版，山寨版明星、山寨版“神七”，山寨版“鳥(niǎo)巢”，山寨版的《紅樓夢(mèng)》甚至火過(guò)新版《紅樓夢(mèng)》。

從2003年開(kāi)始出現(xiàn)山寨手機(jī)到各種山寨產(chǎn)品，“山寨”一詞從經(jīng)濟(jì)行為逐漸演變?yōu)橐环N社會(huì)文化現(xiàn)象。如今“山寨相機(jī)”、“山寨電影”、“山寨明星”甚至“山寨版的春晚”等諸多帶有模仿性質(zhì)的“山寨現(xiàn)象”層出不窮，形成了獨(dú)有的“山寨文化”。

KEYWORDS: “Shanzhai” or “copycat”（山寨）

MODEL ESSAY:

As is indicated in the illustration given above, one well-known historical notability named Li Kui is being astonished by his another-self, who is standing in the opposite side, with a disgraceful note in his hand announcing “giving you the parallel experience as the original edition could pay”.So, paid for what? Definitely, he would be paid for his special reputation as a so-called “Copycat Big Star” or “Shanzhai Superstar” which is rampant in today’s China.The trend of the variety of human culture is unchangeable even without the action delivered by human beings ascribing to the various individualities themselves, so is this round of culture revolution.The novelties emanating from the “Copycat Culture”---“Shanzhai Movie”, “Shanzhai Camera” and even “Shanzhai Celebration of Spring Festival” have brought a lot of entertainment to the public to some extent, but what we should never be blind to is their negative influence if they go to extremes hypothetically.Just as the exemplification demonstrated in the cartoon goes, “Shanzhai Star” is taking advantage of the fame or profitable value generating from the true superstar, sometimes this kind of behavior is a typical infringement to the intellectual property indeed, which we can never fail to recognize from TV programs or newspapers always.Then, the question goes to another orientation, that is, whether or not should we admit the existence of “Copycat Culture” or to what extent could we make efforts to protect the rights of original authority? It goes with no denying that the engine of the development of a country is subject to the nation’s creative power, which needs the much strongest protection from no matter government or civilian to fight with any behavior ravaging this kind of ecological balance.Fortunately, the first good news has been coming in---“a unique 15-digit code, the International Mobile Equipment Identity(IMEI), is being applied to China’s more than 200 types of registered mobile phones.The effort will combat “Shanzhai” mobile phones, or copycat phones, the Ministry of Industry and Information Technology said recently.”

2011年必背小作文三篇

訂購(gòu)及銷售信

銷售：

Last year we achieved a 15% increase in the sales of our

.we believe that this happy state of affairs can be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s

are, if anything, more attractive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that you will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.訂購(gòu)：

Could you give us some idea about your price?

Full information as to prices, quality, quantity available and other relative particulars would be highly appreciated.It will be greatly appreciated if you will kindly send us your samples.However, we find that we can obtain a price less by 30% than yours with local firm.投訴信：

你參加了一個(gè)公司的面試，結(jié)果在面試過(guò)程中考官把你批的顏面全無(wú)，根本不顧及你的感受，請(qǐng)寫(xiě)信給這個(gè)公司的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)投訴。

1，說(shuō)明來(lái)信目的 2，具體闡述投訴理由

3，期待的解決方式

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這是一封典型的combination（合體式）作文，它既涉及找工作面試用語(yǔ)，又涉及投訴信，代表了考研應(yīng)用文命題的典型思路。

MODEL ESSAY:

Dear Sir or Madam，I, the undersigned, am a job applicant who had participated in the interview held by your company last Wednesday.I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about this jod-striving experience.The reason for my dissatisfaction has nothing to do with the outcome but the tone of your interviewer, Mr Wang.First, when I was about to illuminating my deep thought, he began to blame on my so-called nonsense according to his perspective.Additionally, his cynical eyesight always made me feel that I am a reject , after all, I am a novice who has stepped into this ruthless carrer world for the first time.I appreciate it very much if you could take my letter into consideration, what I really want is just an apology delivered from him,and I would like to have this matter settled by this Friday.Yours，Li Ming

投訴信

Dear_______，I am.(自我介紹)I feel terribly bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about_______.The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______________(總體介紹).In the first place,_________________________(抱怨的第一個(gè)方面).In addition, ____________________________(抱怨的第二個(gè)方面).I do appreciate it greatly if you could_______________________(提出建議和請(qǐng)求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(設(shè)定解決事情最后期限).Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 感謝信

Dear XXX, On behalf of誰(shuí), I would like to extend our utmost sincere gratitude for 做的事情，we appreciate greatly your aid, in that without your help, we could not make it in the end.It is your 幫助等 that we could enjoy such an amazing trip, 或其他的事情。And we will forget your painstaking efforts and perfect cooperation /warm hospitality.Once again, we appreciate your help, and hope that you can come to China for a wonderful trip.或其他的事情。Yours sincerely, Li Ming

第二篇：2011年考研英語(yǔ)作文十大熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)及

2011年考研英語(yǔ)作文十大熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)及范文：低碳與環(huán)保 構(gòu)思點(diǎn)撥

圖片中一個(gè)小男孩，早已進(jìn)入甜蜜的夢(mèng)鄉(xiāng)，電視卻依然在播放，這時(shí)候媽媽走過(guò)來(lái)幫他關(guān)了電視，還責(zé)備他為什么總是忘記關(guān)電視。顯然，直觀看來(lái)，這幅圖是在告訴我們要節(jié)約用電。但是，我們?nèi)绻麖母暧^，更深層次的角度去思考，這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個(gè)流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導(dǎo)一種低碳環(huán)保的生活方式。因此本文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)可如下：第一段：描述圖畫(huà);第二段：列舉現(xiàn)象，分析影響;第三段：建議措施，展望未來(lái)。思維拓展環(huán)保話題，例如節(jié)約能源、拼車、交通問(wèn)題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯(lián)系，從低碳的角度入手展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。

To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and shift to developing green economy, circular economy and low carbon economy.All these effective measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。佳作妙譯

如上圖生動(dòng)地展示，一個(gè)小男孩正在沙發(fā)上舒適地睡覺(jué)，電視還開(kāi)著。這時(shí)候媽媽走過(guò)來(lái)幫他關(guān)了電視，責(zé)怪小男孩又忘了關(guān)電視。

這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見(jiàn)。很多人習(xí)慣于做什么事情都開(kāi)著電視，實(shí)際上并不看。這種習(xí)慣會(huì)導(dǎo)致電力和能源的浪費(fèi)，這會(huì)導(dǎo)致碳排放。這偏離了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，減少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保護(hù)環(huán)境，實(shí)現(xiàn)可持續(xù)發(fā)展。根據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)，如果我們每天把開(kāi)電視的時(shí)間減少一小時(shí)，則每個(gè)月可以減少4.17千克的碳排放量。

作為對(duì)地球負(fù)責(zé)任的管理者，我們必須在公眾中推廣并普及低碳的生活方式，從日常生活中的每個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)開(kāi)始。我們必須要改變?yōu)榱双@得短期的快速經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，犧牲長(zhǎng)期的環(huán)境健康的做法，轉(zhuǎn)向發(fā)展綠色經(jīng)濟(jì)、循環(huán)經(jīng)濟(jì)以及低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)。所有這些有效的措施可以幫助我們實(shí)現(xiàn)社會(huì)發(fā)展與自然有序發(fā)展之間的和諧。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表達(dá)為 A boy is fast asleep?！皊oundly and comfortably”這類副詞的加入，使得描述更生動(dòng)活潑，而不是單調(diào)的主謂賓。② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the

television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。該句主干結(jié)構(gòu)是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。這個(gè)句型的含義是：一件事情正在發(fā)生(正在睡覺(jué))，突然發(fā)生了另一件事(媽媽來(lái)關(guān)電視)?！皐ith the television on”： with 引導(dǎo)的伴隨結(jié)構(gòu)，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以寫(xiě)成伴隨狀語(yǔ)A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television?！癰laming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，這句是媽媽關(guān)電視的伴隨動(dòng)作，一邊關(guān)電視，一邊責(zé)怪孩子忘記關(guān)電視。圖畫(huà)描述這句，寫(xiě)得越精彩越好，這句是先入為主的句子，也是閱卷老師重點(diǎn)看的句子。③ are used to doing:習(xí)慣于做某事，使用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)，地道準(zhǔn)確。④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:這是2005年真題閱讀中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)到位。一般而言，環(huán)保類話題，都可以用這句話，引出第三段的個(gè)人評(píng)論。歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫(kù)，我們一定要充分利用，舉一反三。2011年考研英語(yǔ)作文十大熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)及范文：網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利與弊思路點(diǎn)撥

本圖中，一個(gè)女孩正在因一個(gè)問(wèn)題感到困惑，“10牛的水是否產(chǎn)生10牛的浮力?”。于是她上網(wǎng)求助于網(wǎng)友，網(wǎng)友的答案更是五花八門(mén)，說(shuō)對(duì)說(shuō)錯(cuò)的都有。女孩更加困惑。由此可見(jiàn)，這幅圖反應(yīng)了這樣一個(gè)現(xiàn)實(shí)：網(wǎng)絡(luò)文化有利也有弊。因此本文可以這樣設(shè)計(jì)：

第一段：描述圖畫(huà);第二段：網(wǎng)絡(luò)的利+舉例，網(wǎng)絡(luò)的弊+舉例;第三段：提出建議措施——取其精華，去其糟粕。思路拓展 所有利弊型的文章，均可按照本范文提供的思路進(jìn)行論述。例如，城市化的利與弊。大學(xué)擴(kuò)招的利與弊等。高分范文

Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online.Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①.It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。

The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows.On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience.For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on.On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③.For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating.Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。

In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time.On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided.Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。

佳作妙譯如圖所示，圖片中一個(gè)女孩正在網(wǎng)上問(wèn)一個(gè)問(wèn)題，來(lái)自于網(wǎng)友的答案差異太大了，以至于女孩很困惑到底該聽(tīng)誰(shuí)的。很明顯，人們面臨困境的時(shí)候上網(wǎng)提問(wèn)的現(xiàn)象已經(jīng)成為一種時(shí)尚。

這幅圖所隱含的意義可以闡釋如下。一方面，因特網(wǎng)為我們提供了很大便利。例如，通過(guò)百度等搜索引擎鍵入一些命令、點(diǎn)擊幾下鼠標(biāo)，我們就可以獲得幾乎各個(gè)領(lǐng)域的知識(shí)。另一方面，由于因特網(wǎng)上有海量的信息，很難區(qū)分好的信息和壞的信息。例如青少年可能會(huì)把錯(cuò)誤的信息誤認(rèn)為是正確的，其結(jié)果是非常具有毀滅性的。網(wǎng)上的一些不健康信息也可能會(huì)給人們帶來(lái)負(fù)面影響。

總之，一方面，充分利用因特網(wǎng)來(lái)提高效率，節(jié)約時(shí)間，這很重要。另一方面，應(yīng)該采取有效的措施教育人們?nèi)ヅ懦W(wǎng)上不合適的甚至錯(cuò)誤的數(shù)據(jù)，以免被誤導(dǎo)。只有這樣，網(wǎng)絡(luò)才能更好地為我們的生活、學(xué)習(xí)和工作服務(wù)。名師點(diǎn)評(píng) ① so… that 句型：如此……以至于……。② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 這是2004年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型。③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 這是2003年真題閱讀第一篇中的句型?？梢?jiàn)，充分了解真題閱讀，對(duì)于提高寫(xiě)作的幫助作用也很大。④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work：倒裝句。倒裝句的寫(xiě)法(部分倒裝)：原句：The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way。only放在句首，把情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can和主語(yǔ)交換一下位置就寫(xiě)成了倒裝句。2011年考研英語(yǔ)作文十大熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)及范文：醉酒駕車與安全意識(shí)、社會(huì)責(zé)任醉酒駕車與安全意識(shí)、社會(huì)責(zé)任思路點(diǎn)撥

圖畫(huà)中一個(gè)已經(jīng)喝得爛醉如泥的司機(jī)，車頂上還馱著一瓶巨大的啤酒，汽車卻依然在路上飛馳。雖然這幅圖有點(diǎn)夸張，但是它卻反映了一個(gè)觸目驚心的安全問(wèn)題：醉酒駕車。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照以下的脈絡(luò)展開(kāi)論述：

第一段：描述圖畫(huà);第二段：分兩個(gè)分論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行論述：提高安全意識(shí)、提高社會(huì)責(zé)任感;第三段：建議措施、強(qiáng)調(diào)后果。思維拓展

實(shí)際上，本文的內(nèi)容和行文思路，不僅僅適用于醉酒駕車，還適用于所有關(guān)于安全事故和社會(huì)責(zé)任的圖片話題。例如，火災(zāi)、漏油事故、施工事故、違反交規(guī)等等一系列與安全或社會(huì)責(zé)任感相關(guān)的話題，都可以參考此文。只需要把第一段中間那句圖畫(huà)描述替換掉即可。高分范文

What a scary and sensational scene it is!In the drawing, the driver, as drunken as a fiddler①, is driving fast on the road, with a large bottle of beer on the top of his car.What is conveyed by the picture has both realistic and alarming implications for each member of the country。

The profound meaning of the vivid drawing can be elaborated in terms of both awareness of security and social responsibility.For one thing, consciousness of safety should be one of our top priorities.Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice.So life is to be respected and awed②.It is cruel to and inhumane to spell the end of any life, with a careless driving under the influence(DUI)③.For another, to act as a responsible member of the society, each of us should bear social responsibility.We do not live only for ourselves but also for those whom we love and who love us.It is irresponsible to claim either lives of drivers or lives of other victims are not important, leaving the families and relatives into deep grief and, may be, great living burden④。

In short, it is imperative that legislative measures should be taken by the authority to punish drunk drivers severely such as suspending their driving licenses or even putting them into jail.Besides, the mass media, such as TV, radio and website, should work together to enhance awareness of security and sense of responsibility to reduce the rate of car accident。佳作妙譯這是一幅多么可怕的觸目驚心的場(chǎng)景啊!在這幅圖中，爛醉如泥的司機(jī)正在馬路上飛速行駛，車上還頂著一大瓶啤酒。這幅圖所傳達(dá)的意義，對(duì)我們國(guó)家的每一位成員，都具有現(xiàn)實(shí)和警醒的意義。

這幅栩栩如生的圖畫(huà)的深刻意義可以從安全意識(shí)和社會(huì)責(zé)任感兩個(gè)角度闡釋。一方面，安全意識(shí)應(yīng)該是我首要重視的問(wèn)題。生命是一次單程旅行：你不能經(jīng)歷兩次生命。所以我們應(yīng)該敬重生命、敬畏生命。由于醉酒駕車的疏忽而

宣告任何一條生命的結(jié)束是殘忍的、不人道的。另一方面，作為這個(gè)社會(huì)負(fù)責(zé)任的一員，我們每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該去承擔(dān)社會(huì)責(zé)任。我們不僅僅是為了自己活著，我們也為那些我們所愛(ài)的和愛(ài)我們的人活著。無(wú)論是聲稱司機(jī)的、還是受害者的生命不重要，都是不負(fù)責(zé)任的。因?yàn)檫@會(huì)給他們的家人和親戚帶來(lái)巨大的悲痛和沉重的生活負(fù)擔(dān)。

簡(jiǎn)言之，官方應(yīng)該制定立法措施嚴(yán)厲地懲罰醉酒駕車的司機(jī)，例如吊銷駕照或進(jìn)行監(jiān)禁。立法措施勢(shì)在必行。此外，電視、收音機(jī)、網(wǎng)站等大眾傳媒應(yīng)該共同努力來(lái)提高公民的安全意識(shí)和責(zé)任感，以降低交通事故的發(fā)生率。名師點(diǎn)評(píng)① as drunken as a fiddler: 醉得像一個(gè)游蕩者。實(shí)際上是一個(gè)比喻，相當(dāng)于漢語(yǔ)中的爛醉如泥。用語(yǔ)非常形象生動(dòng)，一個(gè)酩酊大醉的司機(jī)形象躍然紙上!② Life is one-way journey: you cannot experience it twice：非常富有哲理性，語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美、地道。respected and awed: 敬重和敬畏，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔、有力、到位。③ DUI: 醉酒駕車，也可以寫(xiě)成：drunk driving。④ leaving…:動(dòng)詞的ing形式作伴隨狀語(yǔ)。句型經(jīng)典。2011年考研英語(yǔ)作文十大熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)及范文：大學(xué)生就業(yè)

思路點(diǎn)撥在畫(huà)中，一位正在找工作的年輕女孩，毫不猶豫地拒絕了一份服務(wù)崗位的工作，不屑一顧地說(shuō)：“伺候人的工作我不干”。這幅圖表明，很多年輕人找工作時(shí)，眼光過(guò)高，不切實(shí)際，沒(méi)有用平常心對(duì)待就業(yè)問(wèn)題。實(shí)際上，可以先就業(yè)后擇業(yè)。所以這篇圖畫(huà)作文可以這樣創(chuàng)作：

第一段：描述圖畫(huà);第二段：兩個(gè)角度分析這種現(xiàn)象的原因：志存高遠(yuǎn)，不愿意從底層做起;好逸惡勞;第三段：建議措施：教育年輕人要腳踏實(shí)地;根除好逸惡勞的思想。

思維拓展關(guān)于平常心態(tài)做人、腳踏實(shí)地的話題還可以有很多，例如城市選擇問(wèn)題、院校報(bào)考問(wèn)題、專業(yè)選擇問(wèn)題、股市問(wèn)題，均可以從這個(gè)角度出發(fā)，進(jìn)行展開(kāi)論述。高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, the job-hunting girl refuses a service post without any hesitation, complaining that she will never take a job of serving others①.At the same time she is wondering why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life③, especially on campus.On the one hand, many job-seekers are reluctant to take jobs that they consider to be humble and trivial, such as being a secretary or an assistant, because they have great ambitions and they only want to ride on the peak of success.What is amazing is that they are not conscious that ambition is to be achieved step by step④.On the other hand, wanting to gain more but pay less, both the jobless and graduating students aspire to seek a job that is well-paid, relaxed and comfortable.This kind of “no work, all play” attitude toward life can be destructive to both personal and social development.We should not look down upon service industry, the third industry, because it does provide us with many employment opportunities and positions⑤。

Therefore, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve the current situation.For one thing, an education campaign should be launched to popularize the idea that “the longest journey starts with a single step” and to cultivate a down-to-earth attitude toward life.For another, the tendency of being lazy must be eradicated from the mind of the young.Only in this way can people realize their value of life better and can unemployment rate be reduced and thus can social harmony be achieved⑥。

佳作妙譯正如上面的漫畫(huà)所示，這個(gè)找工作的女孩毫不猶豫地拒絕了一個(gè)服務(wù)崗位，她還抱怨一直找不到工

作。同時(shí)她還納悶為什么在如今找個(gè)有前途的工作這么難。

這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見(jiàn)，尤其在校園里更加明顯。一方面，很多求職者不愿意從事秘書(shū)或助理等工作，他們認(rèn)為這些是卑微且無(wú)足輕重的。他們有更大的抱負(fù)，想直接登上成功的頂峰?？墒撬麄儧](méi)有意識(shí)到理想抱負(fù)是需要一步一步實(shí)現(xiàn)的。另一方面，很多失業(yè)者和畢業(yè)生都想少勞多得，想得到一份輕松舒適而且薪水不菲的工作。這種“好逸惡勞”的生活態(tài)度對(duì)個(gè)人和社會(huì)的發(fā)展都是很不利的。我們不應(yīng)看不起服務(wù)業(yè)，第三產(chǎn)業(yè)，因?yàn)樗_實(shí)為我們提供了很多工作機(jī)會(huì)和職位。

因此，采取一些必要措施來(lái)改善這種情況已經(jīng)是當(dāng)務(wù)之急。一方面，應(yīng)該發(fā)起一場(chǎng)教育運(yùn)動(dòng)來(lái)普及這種“千里之行，始于足下”的理念和腳踏實(shí)地的生活態(tài)度。另一方面，要把懶惰的思想從青少年的思想中根除。只有這樣人們才能更好地實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的人生價(jià)值，才能讓失業(yè)率大幅下降，才能實(shí)現(xiàn)社會(huì)和諧。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng) ① complaining that she will never take a job of serving others: 伴隨狀語(yǔ)。② why finding a promising job is so difficult in modern society: 這個(gè)句子充當(dāng)了整個(gè)句子的賓語(yǔ)，叫做賓語(yǔ)從句。特殊疑問(wèn)詞why, what, when等引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句必須使用正常的陳述語(yǔ)序，不得使用主謂倒裝的形式。例如，這句就不能寫(xiě)成：why is finding a promising job so difficult in modern society?finding a promising job是主語(yǔ)。is是系動(dòng)詞。再如：I don?t know what his name is。絕對(duì)不能寫(xiě)成：I don?t know what is his name。③ 2008年真題閱讀選項(xiàng)中的句子。原句為：Political compromises are easily found throughout the U.S.history。稍加改動(dòng)，變成了一個(gè)個(gè)性化的句子引入第二段內(nèi)容的模板，雖然沒(méi)有華麗的辭藻，但是非常精彩和純正。④ be conscious that: 意識(shí)到，that后邊必須接完整的主謂賓結(jié)構(gòu)。這個(gè)表達(dá)等同于be aware that，可以進(jìn)行同意替換。此外：be conscious of 和be aware of 在意思上也等同于這兩者，表示意識(shí)到。但是：be conscious of 和be aware of后邊要接單詞或者短語(yǔ)，一般不能加句子。⑤ the third industry: 第三產(chǎn)業(yè)，是service industry(服務(wù)業(yè))的同位語(yǔ)。同位語(yǔ)其實(shí)一般都是廢話，等同于前面的詞。巧妙地使用同位語(yǔ)，可以把單調(diào)的句子變得錯(cuò)落有致、抑揚(yáng)頓挫。it does provide us with: does在句中表強(qiáng)調(diào)，翻譯成“確實(shí)”。⑥ Only in this way can… realize… and can… be… and thus can… be…：排比句，短促有力，氣勢(shì)強(qiáng)大，使得對(duì)未來(lái)的展望顯得信心十足!普通的被考生用爛了的這個(gè)句型：Only in this way can we live in a harmonious society，被本文的作者巧妙地改寫(xiě)成了一個(gè)精彩的排比句。這樣的作文，怎么能不得高分呢!

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五、節(jié)約資源思路點(diǎn)撥

本圖描述的場(chǎng)景是一副令人喜聞樂(lè)見(jiàn)的圖畫(huà)，圖畫(huà)中，一只可愛(ài)的小豬造型的儲(chǔ)蓄罐，正在接住自來(lái)水里滴下來(lái)的水滴，像存錢(qián)一樣，存儲(chǔ)水滴。實(shí)際上，它儲(chǔ)存的不是水，它儲(chǔ)存的是幸福。我們可以看出，人們有了節(jié)水意識(shí)。但是，從正在滴水的水龍頭看，還是有人忽略了節(jié)約用水這一問(wèn)題。因此，本文可以這樣寫(xiě)作：第一段：描述圖畫(huà);第二段：分析有些人浪費(fèi)水的心理，并闡述水資源的寶貴;第三段：建議措施。思維拓展

實(shí)際上，積極正面的圖片寫(xiě)作，和揭示負(fù)面現(xiàn)象的文章沒(méi)有什么本質(zhì)上的區(qū)別，只要我們筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，就能把它繼續(xù)按照原來(lái)的套路寫(xiě)。

本文也可以從低碳、環(huán)保的角度出發(fā)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。

關(guān)于節(jié)約能源的話題，都可以按照這個(gè)行文思路和語(yǔ)言模式進(jìn)行展開(kāi)。

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Water used to be mistaken to be an unlimited and renewable resource.Actually, water resource is very limited and precious.It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention①.Just as is depicted in the picture, just like saving money, the lovely and smiling piggy bank is collecting every drop of water falling from the water tap。

However, water shortage is still a serious problem threatening the existence and survival of the whole human being, and yet the phenomenon of wasting water can still easily be found anywhere in our daily life②.For example, water taps are frequently left on by careless users.Someone even assumes that they have the right to waste water because they pay for it so that it has nothing to do with others.In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it③.Water resource is indispensable④ not only in our daily life but also in the industry and agriculture.And water is the wealth of the whole mankind, and it is hard to imagine what the world would be like⑤ when there is no more water。

Even though an increasing number of people have become aware of⑥ this emergency, further measures still need to be taken.On the macro level, the whole world should make a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, should be conducted.To store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。

佳作妙譯 水資源一度被誤認(rèn)為是一種無(wú)限的可再生資源，實(shí)際上，水資源是非常有限且寶貴的。有幸的是現(xiàn)在公眾開(kāi)始關(guān)注這一問(wèn)題了。如圖所示，一只可愛(ài)的快樂(lè)小豬存錢(qián)罐積攢著水龍頭里流出的每一滴水，就像存錢(qián)一樣。然而，水資源短缺問(wèn)題仍然威脅著全人類的生存和發(fā)展。浪費(fèi)水的現(xiàn)象在日常生活中仍然隨處可見(jiàn)。例如，經(jīng)常有粗心大意者忘記關(guān)水龍頭。更有甚者認(rèn)為自己繳了水費(fèi)就有權(quán)浪費(fèi)，與他人無(wú)關(guān)。事實(shí)上，水資源不僅在生活中必不可少，在工農(nóng)業(yè)生產(chǎn)中也是不可或缺的。水資源是全人類共同的財(cái)富，很難想象當(dāng)沒(méi)有水的時(shí)候世界會(huì)是什么樣子。雖然越來(lái)越多的人已經(jīng)認(rèn)識(shí)到了這種緊迫性，但是仍然要采取進(jìn)一步的措施。從宏觀層面上講，全世界應(yīng)該共同努力反對(duì)浪費(fèi)水。從微觀層面上講，要進(jìn)行廣泛的宣傳活動(dòng)。比如在電視臺(tái)播出關(guān)于如何節(jié)水的節(jié)目。節(jié)約用水就是存儲(chǔ)幸福，只有節(jié)約用水才能為子孫后代存儲(chǔ)更好的生活。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)① It is fortunate that now the public is starting to pay attention: 來(lái)自于2005年閱讀真題，原句是這樣的：Fortunately, the White House is starting to pay attention。歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫(kù)，廣大考生一定要學(xué)會(huì)充分利用這寶貴的資源!② 第二段開(kāi)頭，用了一個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折詞，也就是“起承轉(zhuǎn)合”中的所謂的“轉(zhuǎn)”，把這篇作文改造成了一篇社會(huì)問(wèn)題型作文，也就是大家最擅長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)的作文。③ In fact, so precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it: 倒裝句，表語(yǔ)提前，句子倒裝。倒裝句寫(xiě)法：第一步：寫(xiě)正常原句：Water is so precious that we cannot afford to waste it。第二步：表語(yǔ)precious提前。第三步：主謂倒置，變成So precious is water that we cannot afford to waste it。普通的so… that… 句型，也能被化腐朽為神奇，成為鉆石加分句型!④ indispensable: 不可或缺的，替換important的一個(gè)很好的詞匯。順便講一個(gè)英譯漢的技巧：大家可以看到，在譯文中，這句話被翻譯兩次：必不可少、不可或缺。因?yàn)樵闹谐霈F(xiàn)了：not only… but also，所以這個(gè)單詞被拆開(kāi)翻譯成了兩個(gè)近義詞，以使行文更加通順。⑤ what the world would be like：注意賓語(yǔ)從句必須用陳述語(yǔ)序。⑥ become aware of: 意識(shí)到。意思和用法都等同于be conscious of。后邊接詞語(yǔ)。⑦ 非常重要：一般而言，歷年真題中談到的正面話題，或者人生哲理類的文章，有可能題目要求會(huì)變成：Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following

drawing.In your essay, you should(1)describe the drawing briefly,(2)explain its intended meaning, and then(3)support your view with an example/examples。也就是第三段并非發(fā)表個(gè)人評(píng)論(建議措施)，而是舉例，這時(shí)候就需要我們?nèi)フ{(diào)整一下文章的敘述方法。這種情況下，我們可以把結(jié)尾段調(diào)整為：Examples of people?s increasing awareness on saving water can easily be found anywhere in our life.On the macro level, the whole world is making a joint effort to fight against waste of water.On the micro level, publicizing activities, such as broadcasting wonderful ways on how to save water on TV and other media, can be seen nearly anywhere and every day.In short, to store water means to store happiness and only by saving water can we save a better life for our offspring。這樣的話，結(jié)尾段就從建議措施，變成了論證文章的示例?？梢?jiàn)，隨機(jī)應(yīng)變，對(duì)寫(xiě)好考研作文也很重要。2011考研英語(yǔ)作文熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)及范文十篇(6)

六、面對(duì)人生與社會(huì)：樂(lè)觀與豁達(dá)

思路點(diǎn)撥圖畫(huà)中的一只小綿羊，正呆在一塊大石頭的陰影下面。但是它樂(lè)觀、豁達(dá)地認(rèn)為，有陰影，那么就說(shuō)明有陽(yáng)光。這幅圖無(wú)疑向我們傳達(dá)了一種健康的人生哲學(xué)：樂(lè)觀生活、達(dá)觀處世。由于這是一篇人生哲理類文章，所以文章安排可以相對(duì)自由一些：第一段：描述圖畫(huà);第二段：利用正反舉例論證悲觀與樂(lè)觀的差距+總結(jié)句;第三段：倡導(dǎo)一種樂(lè)觀生活、達(dá)觀處世的人生態(tài)度和人生哲學(xué)。思維拓展 本文也可以從世界觀、人生觀的角度入手。相反，如果是一幅表明悲觀厭世的圖片，我們也可以采取同樣的手法進(jìn)行處理。高分范文

As is apparently revealed in the cartoon above, the sheep lives happily in an optimistic state of mind, ignoring the threat of a dark shade, because he believes that where there is shadow, there is sunshine①.What is conveyed in the picture is both positive and illuminating。

As far as the purpose of the drawer is concerned, I think he intends to remind us of the importance of optimism.If the sheep in the cartoon feels anxious and pessimistic about the dark shade all day long, he can by no means have a comfortable and happy life.Examples like this are numerous, but I think the following one will be convincing enough.If there is half a cup of water, the pessimist may cry over it because they have only a half, while② the optimist may cheer for it because they still have a half.Obviously, they will have different perceptions and feelings③ toward the same life。

There is no denying that, most optimists have a high happiness index, which can hardly be experienced by pessimists.Therefore, we must read our life with a positive attitude.What?s more, the optimistic attitude can infect others strongly, meaning that we will find that all the friends around us are optimistic if we observe them in the same perspective.As a result, an atmosphere of optimism and happiness could be naturally set up.Therefore, let?s keep the famous line of Shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”④佳作妙譯

上面的漫畫(huà)清楚地表現(xiàn)出這只山羊不顧陰影的威脅仍然保持樂(lè)觀，因?yàn)樗嘈庞嘘幱暗牡胤骄鸵欢ㄓ嘘?yáng)光。圖片中反映的問(wèn)題是積極的和富有啟發(fā)性的。

我認(rèn)為作者要表達(dá)的意義是要提醒我們保持樂(lè)觀心態(tài)的重要性。如果漫畫(huà)中的山羊終日悲觀地生活在陰影中，它將永遠(yuǎn)無(wú)法獲得舒適和幸福的生活。類似的例子千千萬(wàn)，但是我認(rèn)為下面的例子就足夠有說(shuō)服力。如果這里有半杯水，悲觀的人會(huì)抱怨只剩下半杯了，而樂(lè)觀的人在慶幸還有半杯可以喝。顯然，面對(duì)同樣的生活，他們會(huì)有不同的感受。

毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，樂(lè)觀者擁有更高的幸福指數(shù)，而悲觀者永遠(yuǎn)也體會(huì)不到。因此我們必須以積極的態(tài)度面對(duì)生活。而且樂(lè)觀的情緒能強(qiáng)烈地感染他人，這就意味著如果我們以樂(lè)觀的視角面對(duì)周圍的朋友們，他們也會(huì)同樣地樂(lè)觀。于是，樂(lè)觀和幸福的氣氛自然而然地就建立起來(lái)了。因此，讓我們把著名詩(shī)人雪萊的名句銘記在心吧：冬天來(lái)了，春天還會(huì)遠(yuǎn)么?

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)① where there is shadow, there is sunshine: 這句話讀起來(lái)是不是很熟悉?沒(méi)錯(cuò)，它正是仿寫(xiě)了我們非常熟悉的諺語(yǔ)“Where there is a will, there is a way”：有志者，事竟成。作者將這句話仿寫(xiě)得惟妙惟肖，可見(jiàn)作者對(duì)語(yǔ)言駕馭是何等的嫻熟。② while: 表示兩種現(xiàn)象的對(duì)比、反差，常翻譯成“而”。③ perceptions and feelings:近義詞疊加。近義詞疊加也是一種向閱卷老師展示自己語(yǔ)言能力和詞匯量的一種極為有效的手段。翻譯：只翻譯出一種意思即可。即，這兩個(gè)詞合譯為：感受。④ Therefore, let?s keep the famous line of shelley, the well-known poet, in mind for ever, that is, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”全文的點(diǎn)睛之筆，堪稱經(jīng)典。首先：keep sth.in mind 這個(gè)詞組用得很地道。其次：引用了雪萊的詩(shī)歌，表現(xiàn)出了深厚的文化底蘊(yùn)。第三：the famous line=“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”即后者為前者的同位語(yǔ)。同位語(yǔ)的介入，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)錯(cuò)落有致，層次分明，朗朗上口。第四：著名詩(shī)句“If winter comes, can spring be far behind?”淋漓盡致地詮釋了樂(lè)觀的生活態(tài)度。實(shí)際上，歷年真題的閱讀中又何曾沒(méi)有出現(xiàn)過(guò)這種模仿呢?廣大考生可以去查閱2007年text 3中的最后一句：The financial fallout has begun, and the political fallout may not be far behind。⑤ 非常重要： 本題題目要求最后一段也可能會(huì)變成：support your view with an example/examples。這時(shí)候，我們可以把文章的結(jié)尾改寫(xiě)為：Examples of optimistic attitude toward life can easily be found anywhere in our world.How would have Zhang Haidi, suffering from the high paraplegia, made such glowing achievements in life, without her strong mind and optimistic attitude? Facing the serious diseases and hardships in life, she did not choose to hold back.Instead, she has been courageous and optimistic enough to defeat them.She has set an excellent example for us。

七、商業(yè)行賄

構(gòu)思點(diǎn)撥上圖表現(xiàn)的是在“尚方寶劍”嚴(yán)懲的威嚴(yán)下，一位從事商業(yè)賄賂的人落荒而逃。不言而喻，這幅圖反映的是當(dāng)今一種比較猖獗的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象：商業(yè)賄賂。深層次來(lái)講，就是道德問(wèn)題、責(zé)任問(wèn)題。本文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)安排如下：第一段：描述圖畫(huà);第二段：從兩個(gè)角度分析影響+分析動(dòng)機(jī);第三段：建議措施。

思維拓展此類文章可以展開(kāi)的角度有：金錢(qián)觀，商業(yè)道德建設(shè)、職業(yè)道德建設(shè)，公平競(jìng)爭(zhēng)。相似的圖片比比皆是。高分范文

There is no doubt that this cartoon vividly depicts a negative but rampant scenario in modern society: commercial bribery.Frightened by the sharp punishment sword, the man, carrying a large pile of money used as bribery①, is trying his best to escape.What is conveyed by the drawing is both realistic and thought-provoking。

The implication of the given picture can be elaborated in terms of the decline of work-moral values and the view on money.For one thing, commercial bribery has a very damaging and destructive② effect on the whole society.Firstly, moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness revealed in the action of bribery③ may stain and pollute the atmosphere of professional ethics and cause others to copy.Secondly, fair competition may be threatened because bribery puts honest businessmen at a disadvantaged position.For another, the bad behavior of commercial bribery is largely driven by “profit”，showing that those people who are involved in bribery do not have a right view on money.It is true that money is indispensable④, but, there is no denying that money should be obtained and spent in a reasonable, wise and legitimate way。To eliminate the immoral behavior of bribery thoroughly⑤, drastic actions should be taken and severe punishment measures should be adopted.Besides, a positive mental guidance on the right attitude to money should be popularized among the public.Only in this way can we have a fair and sound social environment。佳作妙譯

毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)這幅漫畫(huà)生動(dòng)地描述了現(xiàn)代社會(huì)一種負(fù)面的但是卻十分猖獗的現(xiàn)象：商業(yè)賄賂。由于懼怕嚴(yán)厲的懲罰，這個(gè)人背著一大堆賄賂用的錢(qián)落荒而逃。漫畫(huà)的寓意是十分現(xiàn)實(shí)并發(fā)人深思的。

上圖的寓意可以理解為詳細(xì)闡述了在金錢(qián)沖擊下職業(yè)道德的淪陷。一方面，商業(yè)賄賂對(duì)全社會(huì)造成惡劣的、毀滅性的影響。首先在賄賂行為中表現(xiàn)出的道德缺陷和人性弱點(diǎn)會(huì)破壞和污染職業(yè)道德的氛圍，不良分子也會(huì)效仿。其次，行賄者將破壞公平競(jìng)爭(zhēng)，誠(chéng)信經(jīng)營(yíng)的商人被置于不利地位。另一方面，商業(yè)賄賂行為大多是被利益驅(qū)動(dòng)的，這說(shuō)明這些人對(duì)金錢(qián)沒(méi)有正確的態(tài)度。沒(méi)有金錢(qián)的確是萬(wàn)萬(wàn)不能的，但對(duì)待金錢(qián)，無(wú)疑需要取之有道，用之有度。

為了徹底根除賄賂這種道德敗壞的行為，應(yīng)該采取嚴(yán)厲的懲罰措施。另外，應(yīng)該在公眾中逐漸普及正確的金錢(qián)觀。只有這樣，我們才能擁有公平、健全的社會(huì)環(huán)境。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)① money used as bribery: 過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)=定語(yǔ)從句。寫(xiě)過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)的步驟：第一步：寫(xiě)成定語(yǔ)從句：money which is used as bribery;第二步：省略引導(dǎo)詞“which”和be動(dòng)詞“is”變成money used as bribery。這樣，一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句就變成了過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)。② damaging and destructive:近義詞疊用，押韻：頭韻③ revealed in the action of bribery: 過(guò)去分詞作定語(yǔ)，修飾前面的moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness，寫(xiě)法參考本文點(diǎn)評(píng)第① 條。④ It is true that money is indispensable: It作形式主語(yǔ)，真正的主語(yǔ)是that從句。

⑤ To eliminate the immoral behavior of…: 為了……。作目的狀語(yǔ)

八、城市交通

思路點(diǎn)撥此圖片描述的是一幅交通堵塞的場(chǎng)景。圖片中，車一輛接著一輛地堵在街上，各種抱怨聲不斷。毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，這幅圖反映的是城市交通的壓力問(wèn)題。同時(shí)，汽車過(guò)多就意味著尾氣排放過(guò)多，所以這幅圖同時(shí)又反映了環(huán)保和低碳問(wèn)題。第一段：描述圖畫(huà);第二段：分析交通堵塞給人和環(huán)境帶來(lái)的影響;第三段：建議措施。

思維拓展建議措施部分，還可以從如下角度提出：呼吁政府：投資完善基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施、繼續(xù)堅(jiān)持限行的制度。倡導(dǎo)低碳出行：步行、騎自行車。倡導(dǎo)理智選擇城市：人全部擁擠在大城市帶來(lái)的負(fù)面影響。高分范文

How horrible the traffic is!The picture depicts a scenario of a terrible traffic jam in the street.In fact, the traffic jam is so heavy that it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street①.Anxious passengers cannot take buses because there are few buses.Instead, the street is filled with too many private cars。

Exaggerated as it is, the phenomenon is not uncommon nowadays.With the number of private cars increasing②, traffic jams in metropolitans are bound to happen.Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and exert negative impacts on the environment.On the one hand, when traffic jam happens, short distance in the past now seems to become terribly long, and drivers could do nothing but to wait.Therefore, a lot of precious time has been wasted

on the road.On the other hand, exhausted gas emitted by cars③ has increased the burden of environment and caused carbon emission, which has diverted from the concept of living a low carbon life。

Therefore, effective measures should be taken to alleviate the traffic jam.Firstly, taxes levied on the sales of private cars④ should be raised so as to restrict private car ownership rate.Secondly, public transportation such as buses and subways, which are low-carbon transportation means, should be encouraged and promoted so that we can have a smooth transportation。佳作妙譯

交通狀況真是一團(tuán)糟!這幅漫畫(huà)描述了街上糟糕的交通堵塞的場(chǎng)景。實(shí)際上，交通堵塞嚴(yán)重到了一定程度，與其說(shuō)這是一條擁擠的街道，還不如說(shuō)這是一個(gè)停車場(chǎng)。焦急的乘客等不到數(shù)量稀少的公交車，而私家車卻到處都是。雖然這幅圖有點(diǎn)夸張，但是當(dāng)今這種現(xiàn)象并不罕見(jiàn)。私家車的增多必然產(chǎn)生大城市交通堵塞。大城市沉重的交通壓力會(huì)給人民生活帶來(lái)不便，也會(huì)對(duì)環(huán)境造成負(fù)面影響。一方面，一旦發(fā)生堵車，原來(lái)很近的路程似乎變得十分漫長(zhǎng)，除了等沒(méi)有別的辦法，大量的寶貴時(shí)間被浪費(fèi)在路上。另一方面，汽車排放的尾氣更增加了環(huán)境的負(fù)擔(dān)、導(dǎo)致了碳排放，這和低碳生活的理念相違背。

因此，應(yīng)該采取有效措施緩解嚴(yán)重的交通堵塞問(wèn)題。第一，通過(guò)提高稅費(fèi)限制私家車擁有率(保有量)。第二，應(yīng)該鼓勵(lì)和推廣低碳的公交車、地鐵等公共交通工具，以便我們擁有更順暢的交通。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的結(jié)構(gòu)，通過(guò)字面可以理解成：更多的是A而不是B。翻譯的時(shí)候，往往翻譯成：與其說(shuō)是B，不如說(shuō)是A。反過(guò)來(lái)，當(dāng)我們想用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)“與其……不如……”的時(shí)候，我們可以采用這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)。實(shí)際上，這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)在歷年真題閱讀中曾多次出現(xiàn)。如2000年Text 3中的選項(xiàng)：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短語(yǔ)表伴隨，翻譯成“隨著”。③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作后置定語(yǔ)。相當(dāng)于定語(yǔ)從句：gas which is emitted by cars(被汽車排放的尾氣)。寫(xiě)法：請(qǐng)參考《商業(yè)行賄》點(diǎn)評(píng)第①條。④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中l(wèi)evied on the sales of private cars(針對(duì)私家車被征的稅)，為過(guò)去分詞做定語(yǔ)。寫(xiě)法：請(qǐng)參考《商業(yè)行賄》點(diǎn)評(píng)第①條。

九、科技與生活思路點(diǎn)撥

圖中描述的是武廣高鐵的開(kāi)通，給城際交通帶來(lái)了極大便利。表面上看，它反映的是城市與城市之間距離被“縮短”的問(wèn)題，但是更深層次來(lái)講，是科技帶來(lái)了這一切，所以這幅圖可以有兩個(gè)切入點(diǎn)：城際交通、科技改變生活。本文作者選取了第二個(gè)角度為主要論述視角。第一段：圖畫(huà)描述;第二段：兩個(gè)角度論述科學(xué)技術(shù)是第一生產(chǎn)力;第三段：提出建議、展望未來(lái)。思維拓展科技的話題，實(shí)際上是映射熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題：上海世博。世博的主題“城市讓生活更美好”，其中一個(gè)側(cè)面就是城市與科技?？梢苑从场翱萍肌敝黝}的圖片有很多，如現(xiàn)代通訊、網(wǎng)絡(luò)等。表面上看是反對(duì)迷信，深層含義實(shí)際上就是崇尚科學(xué)。高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan.In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①.No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。

Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development.On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly.Take the high-speed railway as an example.Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes.Last but not the least, the load of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent.On the other hand, with the development of science and technology, such as the operation of high-speed transportation, video phone, webcam meeting, the world has become smaller and smaller。

It has long been a tradition for Chinese government to attach great importance to the advances④ in science and technology.Science and technology has successfully shaped an entirely new image of China on global stage via the two grand world events, 2008 Olympic Games and 2010 Shanghai World Expo.It is strongly advised that young people should devote themselves into the study of science and technology for “better city, better life”。佳作妙譯

如上圖所示，一位旅客從廣州踏上了去往武漢的高速鐵路。2009年，武廣高鐵正式建成通車，將兩地之間的行程從12小時(shí)縮短到3小時(shí)，極大地方便了兩地的交通。難怪這幅漫畫(huà)上寫(xiě)道“有了武廣高鐵，每個(gè)城市都在家門(mén)口”?？萍际堑谝簧a(chǎn)力，在國(guó)民經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展中扮演著重要角色。一方面，科技的進(jìn)步促進(jìn)了經(jīng)濟(jì)社會(huì)的快速進(jìn)步。高速鐵路就是鮮活的例子。首先這條鐵路成為地區(qū)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展新的引擎。其次鐵路吸引了大量游客，這些城市的旅游業(yè)隨之繁榮起來(lái)。再次這條鐵路很大程度上緩解了現(xiàn)有線路的運(yùn)輸壓力。另一方面，隨著科技的發(fā)展，高速鐵路，視頻電話，視頻會(huì)議等應(yīng)用會(huì)越來(lái)越多，世界將變得越來(lái)越小。

中國(guó)政府一直很重視科技的發(fā)展，通過(guò)2008北京奧運(yùn)會(huì)和2010上海世博兩件盛事，科技成功地重塑了中國(guó)在世界舞臺(tái)上的國(guó)際形象。因此青少年要懷著“城市，讓生活更美好”的信念，積極投身到對(duì)科技文化知識(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)上。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)① reducing…, bringing…: 并列的兩個(gè)現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)。② Science and technology are the primary productive forces: 科學(xué)技術(shù)是第一生產(chǎn)力這是任何一篇與科技相關(guān)的文章都可以用的萬(wàn)能句型。③ a new engine: 一個(gè)新的引擎，這是一個(gè)形象的比喻，把科技對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展的動(dòng)力表達(dá)得非常具體、形象。涉及到科技、發(fā)展、環(huán)境等題目時(shí)，不可避免的就需要用到發(fā)展這個(gè)詞，本文中 “發(fā)展”，多次出現(xiàn)，作者采用了多樣化的詞匯： “development(n。)”，“progress(n。)”，“flourish(v。)”，“boom(v./n.)”，“advance”。這類詞匯還有： “prosperous(adj。)”，“improve(v。)”等。近義詞的多種替換方式，使得文章在統(tǒng)一中富于變化。廣大考生可以把這些詞匯積累下來(lái)，應(yīng)用到自己的寫(xiě)作中去，也能起到妙筆生花的效果。④ 如果題目要求最后一段舉例，則我們可以把文章的結(jié)尾改成例子：如手機(jī)、因特網(wǎng)等是如何提高了生活效率的。

十、弘揚(yáng)民族文化思路點(diǎn)撥

圖片中共有三個(gè)內(nèi)容：陶瓷花瓶、功夫熊貓、麻將牌。這三種形象都是典型的中國(guó)元素。正如圖片的名稱“歐洲的?中國(guó)熱?”所說(shuō)，一種學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化和漢語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的熱潮正在歐洲悄然興起。毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，本圖的主題是：弘揚(yáng)中國(guó)文化，以及中國(guó)國(guó)際形象、國(guó)際地位的上升。全文行思路可如下：第一段：分別描述圖畫(huà)中體現(xiàn)出的中國(guó)元素;第二段：分析外國(guó)人對(duì)中華文化的興趣提升的原因+舉例;第三段：對(duì)待民族文化的正確態(tài)度。

思維拓展保護(hù)文物、文明遺產(chǎn)、名勝古跡的圖片也可以從捍衛(wèi)和弘揚(yáng)民族文化的角度入手加以分析論證。

高分范文

In the picture, we can see that there are some vases made of china, which are typical products in China since ancient time.An image of a panda playing Kung Fu① is carved on the surface of the vases, in which both Panda and Kung Fu are the symbols of Chinese elements.Besides, the Chinese mahjong which is growing out of a vase is also a typical Chinese element。It is obvious that the main purpose of the picture is to reflect the phenomenon of “China fever”，referring to a foreign passion and enthusiasm② on Chinese elements, especially culture.There are reasons accounting for the growing interest in Chinese elements.For one thing, for the past decades, China has made conspicuous progress in all fields such as economy, science and technology, and comprehensive strength of China has been enhanced greatly.For another, due to the progress, China presents a new image to the world and is becoming increasingly attractive and appealing③ to the whole world.Nearly every day news stories are reported and broadcasted④ about what is going on in and around China.And By 2010, there are 72 Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture⑤。

Toward this kind of “China craze”，we should hold a right attitude.On the one hand, we should take pride in the “China craze” by foreigners, which originates from the increasing prestige of China.On the other hand, it is the responsibility of each Chinese citizen to popularize and promote excellent traditional Chinese culture and guard a favorable image of our motherland。佳作妙譯

這幅圖中我們可以看到一些瓷制的花瓶，這是中國(guó)自古以來(lái)的典型產(chǎn)品。瓶身上畫(huà)著一只正在練習(xí)中國(guó)功夫的熊貓，熊貓和功夫同樣是中國(guó)文化的代表。此外，花瓶中長(zhǎng)出的“麻將”也是典型的中國(guó)元素。

這幅漫畫(huà)的主要目的是反映“中國(guó)熱”的現(xiàn)象，即國(guó)外對(duì)中國(guó)元素尤其是中華文化的一種追捧和熱情。國(guó)外對(duì)中國(guó)元素興趣上升的這種現(xiàn)象是有原因的。首先，過(guò)去的幾十年中，中國(guó)在經(jīng)濟(jì)、科技等各個(gè)領(lǐng)域都取得了顯著的進(jìn)步，中國(guó)的綜合國(guó)力已經(jīng)大幅提升。另一方面，由于這些進(jìn)步，中國(guó)以嶄新的形象出現(xiàn)在世人面前，在全世界越來(lái)越有吸引力。幾乎每天都有很多關(guān)于中國(guó)及其周邊正在發(fā)生的新聞報(bào)道。截止到2010年，已經(jīng)有26個(gè)歐洲國(guó)家建立了72所孔子學(xué)院來(lái)傳播中國(guó)語(yǔ)言和文化。

對(duì)于這種“中國(guó)熱”的現(xiàn)象我們應(yīng)該持有正確的態(tài)度。一方面我們應(yīng)該為外國(guó)人的“中國(guó)熱”感到自豪，這源于中國(guó)聲望的提高。另一方面，弘揚(yáng)優(yōu)秀的中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化和捍衛(wèi)祖國(guó)的形象，是每一位中國(guó)公民的責(zé)任。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)① a panda playing Kung Fu: 正在練中國(guó)功夫的熊貓。其中playing Kung Fu 是后置定語(yǔ)修飾panda。現(xiàn)在分詞作后置定語(yǔ)的寫(xiě)法：第一步：寫(xiě)出定語(yǔ)從句：a panda that is playing Kung Fu;第二步：把引導(dǎo)詞“that”和be動(dòng)詞“is”一起省略;② passion and enthusiasm:近義詞疊加，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣和氣勢(shì)。③ attractive and appealing:近義詞疊加，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣和氣勢(shì)④ reported and broadcasted:近義詞疊加，加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)氣和氣勢(shì)。⑤ Confucius Institutes in 26 European countries established to spread Chinese language and culture: 其中“established… culture”是Confucius Institutes(孔子學(xué)院)的后置定語(yǔ)。寫(xiě)法：請(qǐng)參考《商業(yè)行賄》點(diǎn)評(píng)第①條。

第三篇：2011考研英語(yǔ)作文十大熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)一

考研英語(yǔ)作文十大熱點(diǎn)預(yù)測(cè)一(海天28篇節(jié)選)

一、低碳與環(huán)保

低碳與環(huán)保

構(gòu)思點(diǎn)撥

圖片中一個(gè)小男孩，早已進(jìn)入甜蜜的夢(mèng)鄉(xiāng)，電視卻依然在播放，這時(shí)候媽媽走過(guò)來(lái)幫他關(guān)了電視，還責(zé)備他為什么總是忘記關(guān)電視。顯然，直觀看來(lái)，這幅圖是在告訴我們要節(jié)約用電。但是，我們?nèi)绻麖母暧^，更深層次的角度去思考，這幅圖正是在告訴我們一個(gè)流行的生活理念：低碳生活。所以本文旨在倡導(dǎo)一種低碳環(huán)保的生活方式。因此本文的內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)可如下：

第一段：描述圖畫(huà)；第二段：列舉現(xiàn)象，分析影響；第三段：建議措施，展望未來(lái)。

思維拓展

環(huán)保話題，例如節(jié)約能源、拼車、交通問(wèn)題等圖片都可以與低碳生活的理念相聯(lián)系，從低碳的角度入手展開(kāi)寫(xiě)作。

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the drawing above, a boy is sleeping soundly① and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again②。

This phenomenon can easily be found anywhere in our daily life.Many people are used to doing③ everything with the television on, not actually watching it at all.Such a habit can cause waste of much electricity and energy, and result in the emission of carbon.This deviates from the popular concept of “l(fā)ow carbon life” — to reduce the emission of carbon, especially carbon dioxide, to protect our environment and realize sustainable development.According to statistics, if we can decrease the time for having the television on by one hour each day, we can deduce the amount of carbon emission by 4.71 kilogram each month。

To serve as responsible stewards of the planet④, we must promote and popularize a low carbon life among the public from every detail in our daily life.We must change the past practice of sacrificing long-term environmental health for short-term rapid economic development, and

measures can help us to reach harmony between development of the society and health of the nature。

佳作妙譯

如上圖生動(dòng)地展示，一個(gè)小男孩正在沙發(fā)上舒適地睡覺(jué)，電視還開(kāi)著。這時(shí)候媽媽走過(guò)來(lái)幫他關(guān)了電視，責(zé)怪小男孩又忘了關(guān)電視。

這種現(xiàn)象在我們的生活中隨處可見(jiàn)。很多人習(xí)慣于做什么事情都開(kāi)著電視，實(shí)際上并不看。這種習(xí)慣會(huì)導(dǎo)致電力和能源的浪費(fèi)，這會(huì)導(dǎo)致碳排放。這偏離了流行的“低碳生活”的理念。低碳生活是指，減少碳，尤其是二氧化碳的排放，以保護(hù)環(huán)境，實(shí)現(xiàn)可持續(xù)發(fā)展。根據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)，如果我們每天把開(kāi)電視的時(shí)間減少一小時(shí)，則每個(gè)月可以減少4.17千克的碳排放量。

作為對(duì)地球負(fù)責(zé)任的管理者，我們必須在公眾中推廣并普及低碳的生活方式，從日常生活中的每個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)開(kāi)始。我們必須要改變?yōu)榱双@得短期的快速經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，犧牲長(zhǎng)期的環(huán)境健康的做法，轉(zhuǎn)向發(fā)展綠色經(jīng)濟(jì)、循環(huán)經(jīng)濟(jì)以及低碳經(jīng)濟(jì)。所有這些有效的措施可以幫助我們實(shí)現(xiàn)社會(huì)發(fā)展與自然有序發(fā)展之間的和諧。

名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

① is sleeping soundly: 熟睡，也可以表達(dá)為 A boy is fast asleep。“soundly and comfortably”這類副詞的加入，使得描述更生動(dòng)活潑，而不是單調(diào)的主謂賓。

② A boy is sleeping soundly and comfortably in the sofa, with the television on, when his mother comes and turns off the television for him, blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again。

該句主干結(jié)構(gòu)是：A boy is sleeping, when his mother comes and turns off the television。

這個(gè)句型的含義是：一件事情正在發(fā)生(正在睡覺(jué))，突然發(fā)生了另一件事(媽媽來(lái)關(guān)電視)。

“with the television on”： with 引導(dǎo)的伴隨結(jié)構(gòu)，即A boy is sleeping, while the television is on.也可以寫(xiě)成伴隨狀語(yǔ)A boy is sleeping, forgetting to turn off the television。

“blaming the boy for not having turned off the television again”，這句是媽媽關(guān)電視的伴隨動(dòng)作，一邊關(guān)電視，一邊責(zé)怪孩子忘記關(guān)電視。

圖畫(huà)描述這句，寫(xiě)得越精彩越好，這句是先入為主的句子，也是閱卷老師重點(diǎn)看的句子。

③ are used to doing:習(xí)慣于做某事，使用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)，地道準(zhǔn)確。

④ to serve as responsible stewards of the planet:這是2005年真題閱讀中的原句，的文章里面的句型，引用的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)到位。

一般而言，環(huán)保類話題，都可以用這句話，引出第三段的個(gè)人評(píng)論。

歷年真題是一座巨大的寶庫(kù)，我們一定要充分利用，舉一反三。

第四篇：2013考研英語(yǔ)大作文十大總結(jié)

2013考研政治 密切關(guān)注十八大

2013年考研政治新大綱的變化主要有三個(gè)方面：增加了什么，減少了什么以及調(diào)整了什么。

首先，各位2013年考研的學(xué)子，都不必?fù)?dān)心新大綱對(duì)政治考試的影響。政治大綱的變化都是一些細(xì)節(jié)知識(shí)點(diǎn)的調(diào)整，且萬(wàn)變不離其宗?？佳姓蔚膹?fù)習(xí)需要好的教研，好的教材和好的方法。在之后的三階與四階復(fù)習(xí)中，要堅(jiān)持持之以恒的復(fù)習(xí)，不斷調(diào)整、不斷積累。

在大綱發(fā)布到1月5日初試的這不到4個(gè)月的時(shí)間內(nèi)，各位考生在全面復(fù)習(xí)的過(guò)程中要密切關(guān)注十八大會(huì)議精神和領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人重要講話。人事調(diào)動(dòng)是肯定不會(huì)考的，但是一定要注意到重要的新提法，11年的七一講話總結(jié)了改革開(kāi)放以來(lái)取得一切成就的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，有三大內(nèi)容：堅(jiān)持和拓展中國(guó)特色社會(huì)主義道路，堅(jiān)持和豐富中國(guó)特色社會(huì)理論體系，還要知道一個(gè)內(nèi)容叫做堅(jiān)持和完善中國(guó)特色社會(huì)主義制度，這是之前沒(méi)有寫(xiě)入考試大綱的。2013乃至之后幾年內(nèi)的考研政治中，與黨中央十八大的新精神新思想相關(guān)的考點(diǎn)一定是重要考點(diǎn)。對(duì)此，各位考研學(xué)子也不用擔(dān)心，一般輔導(dǎo)班會(huì)對(duì)十八大精神以及相關(guān)考點(diǎn)進(jìn)行深度解析，讓大家做到心中有數(shù)。

此外，考生要關(guān)注當(dāng)年的社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)。中宣部有一本書(shū)，叫《從怎么看到怎么辦》，里面分專題對(duì)當(dāng)年的社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)進(jìn)行了解讀；要重視周年紀(jì)念日，《半月談》有一個(gè)欄目，叫做歷史上的今天。這些都是大家可以也應(yīng)該復(fù)習(xí)到的考點(diǎn)。

2013年的形勢(shì)與政策及當(dāng)代政治與經(jīng)濟(jì)共有15個(gè)知識(shí)點(diǎn)，重點(diǎn)的重點(diǎn)有兩個(gè)：一個(gè)是走和平發(fā)展道路，一個(gè)是和諧世界；至于形勢(shì)和政策，12年考試考查的時(shí)間范圍是從1月考到12月，實(shí)際上是考胡錦濤的講話，考黨中央的文件，這門(mén)課的重點(diǎn)考胡錦濤的講話，考黨中央的文件；但是2013年新增的“西方干涉主義的新特點(diǎn)”也要加以重視，有可能成為命制最后一道分析題的考點(diǎn)。

第五篇：2015年考研英語(yǔ)大作文十大

2013年考研英語(yǔ)大作文十大模板

1.圖畫(huà)作文

It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(圖畫(huà)主題)，which is ______________(進(jìn)一步的說(shuō)明)。He seems to be saying that_______________(給出細(xì)節(jié))。In my opinion，___________(個(gè)人闡述)。

This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群體，如the whole of the human race)。Therefore，it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(問(wèn)題所在)。One the one hand，we must _________________(建議一)。It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明)。On the other hand，________________(建議二)Only in this way can we___________(展望前景)。

2.圖表作文

The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(圖表主題)。The first thing we notice is that_______________(圖表最大特點(diǎn))。This means that as __________，_________________(進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明)。

We can see from the statistics given that _______________(圖表細(xì)節(jié)一)。After ving_________(細(xì)節(jié)一中的第一個(gè)變化)，the _____Ved+幅度+時(shí)間(緊跟著的變化)。The figures also tells us that_________________________(圖表細(xì)節(jié)二)。(數(shù)據(jù)位置，如In the second column)，we can see that ____________accounts for _______(進(jìn)一步描述)。

Judging from these figures，we can draw the conclusion that___________(結(jié)論)。The reason for this，as far as I am concerned is that_____________(給出原因)。/ It is high time that we Ved(發(fā)出倡議)

3.利弊型作文

Recently the issue of whether or not______(討論話題)has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.There are two major arguments that can be made for_________.For one thing，__________can bring ____ to_____________(優(yōu)點(diǎn)一)。For another，it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(優(yōu)點(diǎn)二)。

But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________，among which are ____________(列舉缺點(diǎn))。For instance，it can be __________to _____________(舉例說(shuō)明)。In addition，many people find it ________(形容詞)to _______________(第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn))

When asked to __________，I tend to ____________.This is because I _______________(原因一)。Furthermore，_______________________(原因二)。Finally，______________(原因三)。

4.展望未來(lái)型

The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones.First，__________________(影響一)。More importantly，________________(影響二)。Hence，I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless，I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望)

There are numerous reasons why ____，and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here.The first is that the more(比較級(jí))_____，the more(比較級(jí))。In addition，we all aGREe that________________________(第二個(gè)原因)

5.告示

You should write about 100 words.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.Chinese-Speaking Contest

January 19，2008

To improve students‘ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities，the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese-speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week(26 January)at the Students‘ Auditorium.Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week.Five professors will be invited to be judges.The first six winners will be given awards.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.the Students‘ Union

Department of Chinese Language and Literature

6.職業(yè)道德

the cartoons vividly depict people in expanding numbers are engaged in open and rampant cheating in business.In the first drawing，a boy has no courage to have dinner in front of delicious foods in that there may exist pesticide pollution or poisonous elements in the foods.In the second picture，the administrative office，salesmen，breeding families and forage shops are laughing at the hanging of a poisonous duck.Professional dishonesty has a very damaging effect.In the first place，since cheating in business reveals the moral deficiencies as well as the humanity weakness of those businessmen who engage in it，the dishonest practice will ultimately exerts a perverse influence on the whole society.In the second place，it not only puts honest businessmen at a competitive disadvantage，encouraging those who did not cheat to adopt similar practices later，but undermines the very foundation of

professional ethics in business.It is often painful to impose sanctions in a specific case.But it is worthwhile.For one thing，to eliminate professional dishonesty thoroughly，serious forms of punishment for a willful offense—a suspension of the offender from business—should be applied.For another，since the incentives to engage in cheating in business are mainly due to a lack of adequate precautions，drastic actions should be taken to prevent one form of cheating or another.7.投訴信

Directions： You live in a room in college which you share with another student.You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting and has parties in the room.Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term.You would prefer a single room.Explain your reasons.Dear Sir or Madam，I am writing to express/air dissatisfaction/disappointment/concern regarding accommodation.I would prefer to move into a single room next semester，as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate‘s inconsiderate behavior.For one thing，his friends are constantly visiting him;for another，he regularly holds noisy parties.To solve this problem/surmount this difficulty/improve this situation/crack this hard nut，I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.I am sure you will aGREe that the only solution for me is to move into a room of my own.Therefore，I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me，preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

8.網(wǎng)絡(luò)問(wèn)題

In recent years，people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet.As is vividly depicted in the picture，it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line，either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work‘s needs.Actually on-line visiting has become a routine activity in our everyday life.However，it seems rather ironic to use a chain instead of normal wire to connect with the mouse in this picture.The exaggerative and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and Internet.Discussion on the duality has become very popular in newspapers or in people‘s chats.On the one hand，no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most

useful media in our daily life.People from all walks of life are benefiting considerably from its powerful function of information communication.But on the other hand，a GREat many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.Cyber-living resembles the experience of looking constantly into a kaleidoscope which displays both colored patterns and illusions.Such a waste of time inevitably leads to their failure in their life and work.Accordingly，it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.For one thing，college students in expanding numbers get on line every day to learn the news，to study English by registering for web courses，to exchange information through e-mails with their net friends and to download their favorite music，F(xiàn)LASH，film and pictures.Being veteran on-line shoppers，they frequently purchase books，CDs at much lower prices.For another，once indulged in the fictitious world，people can barely concentrate on real life.Consequently，many students just chat on line or play computer games immoderately everyday，skipping many essential classes.After all，Internet is invented to enrich our life，to connect you and me，and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain.9.環(huán)境問(wèn)題

the pictures symbolically illustrate pollution is becoming increasingly serious around the globe.In the first cartoon，a man is scorching the earth on a chimney.In the second one，a famous ancient Chinese poet，Wang Bo is astonished by the heavy smoke poured by chimneys into the air and dirty river polluted by a factory.We are informed that “the autumn river is the same color with the sky”。

the drawer is sending a message about the significance of the need for everyone to fight against the danger of environmental pollution.There is no denying that the industry is indications of civilization，proGREss and development.Unfortunately，as industry develops，so will the number of factories，and the amount of industry pollutants.We are so development-oriented that we almost can sacrifice our blue sky and pure water in order to obtain a little material gain.As a consequence，it is imperative for us to take drastic actions.On the one hand，the factories should be equipped with devices which can dispose of waste gas and water so as to prevent them from polluting our planet.On the other hand，there should be an increasingly loud voice from the public for firm actions against poisonous gas sent off and unhealthy water polluted by factories.10.提綱式議論文

Directions：

A.Title： Air Travel

B.Time limit： 40 minutes

C.Word limit： about 200 words

D.Your essay should be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2.E.Your essay should be based on the information given below.現(xiàn)在許多人愿意乘飛機(jī)旅行。隨著我國(guó)民航事業(yè)的迅速發(fā)展，全國(guó)各大城市興建了許多現(xiàn)代化的機(jī)場(chǎng)。乘飛機(jī)旅行有許多長(zhǎng)處(方便、快捷、省時(shí)、舒適等);但是，空中旅行也有許多不足之處(機(jī)票價(jià)格貴，有的旅客不適應(yīng)空中旅行，常常感到身體不適，甚至有人還擔(dān)心發(fā)生空難)。請(qǐng)你簡(jiǎn)單闡述上述兩個(gè)方面。最后請(qǐng)你說(shuō)明你的看法。

(Composition for reference only)

Many people prefer to travel by air.This is because air travel has some advantages.In the first place，airplane，the miracle created by man，is the fastest means of transport.It takes the least time for one to travel by air from one place to another.Secondly，traveling by air is convenient and comfortable.Friendly air hostesses are affectionate and considerate.They look after passengers all the way to their destinations.Moreover，on long distance flights there are films and music for people to entertain themselves.As a popular saying goes，“Everything has two sides.” The same is true of air travel.It has some disadvantages，too.For one thing，air travel costs a GREat deal.The average Chinese are not rich enough to afford expensive air fares.So they prefer to take trains，which save a lot of money.For another，although passengers are assured of their safety，they are still worried about it during the journey because flying always involves more or less risk.As far I am concerned，the advantage mentioned above exceed the disadvantages.If I were given choice between traveling by train，I would certainly prefer the former.For me，time is money and it is the most important thing I have to take into consideration whatever I do.(216 words)