第一篇：四級作文閃光點
一、“閃光點”
1)主語從句
Why he would reject such a good offer remained unknown all these years.Whether we can succeed or not depends upon our efforts.What you have done for us will be in our memory forever.It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that…
It is self-evident that…
It goes without saying that…
It is universally acknowledged that…
2)賓語從句
They believe that the central government’s decision to develop the western part of the country and the success of Beijing’s bid to host the 2008 Olympics will open up further opportunities for the country’s development.We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.Experience from foreign countries suggests that no aircraft manufacturers can survive depending only on their domestic market.3)表語從句
This is where she lived when she was young.Quality is what counts most.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.What we want to know is whether the government may take measures to tackle this problem.The question is which one you may choose.4)定語從句(限定性和非限定性)
As
is shown/demonstrated/illustrated/depicted/described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…，There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of yuan is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.The food supply will not increase nearly enough to match this, which means that we are heading into a crisis in the matter of producing and marketing food.5)狀語從句(時間，原因，地點，條件，讓步，轉(zhuǎn)折等)
When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster(怪物)which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.Although we focus on the needs of exceptional children, we find ourselves descri
ibing their environment as well.6)分詞短語做定語或狀語
Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.Coupled with the growing quantity of information is the development of technologies which enable the storage and delivery of more information with greater speed to more locations than has ever been possible before.7)強調(diào)句
It was him who gave us much hope for the future.8)倒裝句
Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.9)省略句
If so, we have to give it up.If necessary…
Whatever the reason…
10)What句型
We totally agree with what you have just said.11)設(shè)問句
Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?
12)被動句
Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that…(It is believed that…)The government and the public should pay enough attention to…(Enough attention should be paid to…from both the government and the public.)二.提高
1.The above mentioned issue results from the following factors./ Many factors are responsible for the problem.To begin with, ________.What’s more, _________.Last but not the least, ____________.2.There is no doubt that____________.…
No one can deny that____________.… It goes without saying that____________.…
3.When it comes to the issue, different people have different opinions.4.Just as any coin has two sides.I believe there is some truth to both.If I am allowed to make a decision, I prefer _____ to _______ because _______.5.sth.is an indispensable part of sth.6.People can not imagine the world without_______./ People can not ima
gine what the world would be like without_______.7.In my view, we have to think carefully before we make the decision to _____.Question1 ? Question2 ? These questions need to be answered before we make the final decision.8.in all walks of life
9.As an old saying goes，10.Instead of doing sth, we should.…rather than
11.It is true that…, but… eg.It is true that we can’t do anything without money, but money is not everything.12.attach great importance to sth.13.… is a hot issue
14.satisfy/meet one’s needs and desires
15.sth.benefit sb.= sth.do good to sb.sb.benefit from sth.sb.receive benefit from/by sth.sth/it.is beneficial to sth./sb.16.try every means to do sth./strive to do sth.17.sb.do sth., while sb.others do sth.else
18.it is supposed to do sth.該文章轉(zhuǎn)載自無憂考網(wǎng)：http://www.51test.net
第二篇：四級作文閃光點 文檔
四六級作文閃光點
高分作文標志
1：四級120-150字；六級150-180字； 2是否長短句交叉；
3用詞是否恰當(dāng)，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞； 4關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；
寫好一篇作文的注意事項：
1.適當(dāng)用被動代替主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I（比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.）以04年6月6級作文結(jié)尾為例:
It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.Thus，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
3.一定要學(xué)會換詞，換形象，具體的代替太寬泛的。（考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen one's competitive edge代替enhance one's competitiveness（提高某物競爭力）
以下面作文為例
Computer and I I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in
goggling
an
army
of useful information I had expected and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very thrilling 替換 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search an army of 替換 a lot of The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular Coincident with … 非常地道的詞匯，表達“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …
Advancement 替換 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into Current(currently)替換 now
Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說 “某事是毫不夸張的”
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動
Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides deliver 替換 send There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen, which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to
Emerging 代替 appearing(fading 代替 disappearing)Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do 強調(diào)
Positive 替換 important / good 等
A slice of 替換
a part of Unfavorable 替換 bad
Impacts 替換 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語
Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)
Facet 替換 aspect
以下是近30個最經(jīng)典的替換詞
1.individuals, characters, folks代替(people ,persons)
2.positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding代替good
3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse(有害的)代替bad 如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive代替
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,many, if not most)代替many.注意：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many
后一定要有詞。Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理 用most, if not all, 代替most 5.a slice of, quiet a few , several代替some 6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think
7.affair ,business ,matter 代替thing 8.shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 代替get much benefit）
10.for my part ,from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion
11.Increasing(ly),growing 代替more and more(注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.)Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing代替hardly 13.beneficial 代替helpful 14.shopper, client, consumer, purchaser, 代替customer 15.exceedingly, extremely 代替very 16.hardly unnecessary, hardly inevitable...代替 necessary 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 代替sb take interest in 18.capture one's attention代替attract one's attention.19.facet, dimension, sphere代aspect 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 代替cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 代替..reasons for sth 23.desire 代替want.24.pour attention into 代替pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 代替remember 26.enjoy, possess 代替have(注意process是過程的意思)27.interaction代替communication 28.frown on sth代替 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example代替 for example
第三篇：英語四級寫作高分必備閃光點句型（范文）
2009年12月英語四級寫作高分必備閃光點句型
一、“閃光點”
1)主語從句
Why he would reject such a good offer remained unknown all these years.Whether we can succeed or not depends upon our efforts.What you have done for us will be in our memory forever.It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that?
It is self-evident that?
It goes without saying that?
It is universally acknowledged that?
2)賓語從句
They believe that the central government’s decision to develop the western part of the country and the success of Beijing’s bid to host the 2008 Olympics will open up further opportunities for the country’s development.We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.Experience from foreign countries suggests that no aircraft manufacturers can survive depending only on their domestic market.3)表語從句
This is where she lived when she was young.Quality is what counts most.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.What we want to know is whether the government may take measures to tackle this problem.The question is which one you may choose.4)定語從句(限定性和非限定性)
As is shown/demonstrated/illustrated/depicted/described?in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table?，There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of yuan is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.The food supply will not increase nearly enough to match this, which means that we are heading into a crisis in the matter of producing and marketing food.5)狀語從句(時間，原因，地點，條件，讓步，轉(zhuǎn)折等)
When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster(怪物)which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.Although we focus on the needs of exceptional children, we find ourselves describing their environment as well.6)分詞短語做定語或狀語
Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.Coupled with the growing quantity of information is the development of technologies which enable the storage and delivery of more information with greater speed to more locations than has ever been possible before.7)強調(diào)句
It was him who gave us much hope for the future.8)倒裝句
Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.9)省略句
If so, we have to give it up.If necessary?
Whatever the reason?
10)What句型
We totally agree with what you have just said.11)設(shè)問句
Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?
12)被動句
Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that?(It is believed that?)The government and the public should pay enough attention to?(Enough attention should be paid to?from both the government and the public.)
二.提高
1.The above mentioned issue results from the following factors./ Many factors are responsible for the problem.To begin with, ________.What’s more, _________.Last but not the least, ____________.2.There is no doubt that____________.?
No one can deny that____________.? It goes without saying that____________.?
3.When it comes to the issue, different people have different opinions.4.Just as any coin has two sides.I believe there is some truth to both.If I am allowed to make a decision, I prefer _____ to _______ because _______.5.sth.is an indispensable part of sth.6.People can not imagine the world without_______./ People can not imagine what the world would be like without_______.7.In my view, we have to think carefully before we make the decision to _____.Question1 ? Question2 ? These questions need to be answered before we make the final decision.8.in all walks of life
9.As an old saying goes，10.Instead of doing sth, we should.?rather than
11.It is true that?, but? eg.It is true that we can’t do anything without money, but money is not everything.12.attach great importance to sth.13.? is a hot issue
14.satisfy/meet one’s needs and desires
15.sth.benefit sb.= sth.do good to sb.sb.benefit from sth.sb.receive benefit from/by sth.sth/it.is beneficial to sth./sb.16.try every means to do sth./strive to do sth.17.sb.do sth., while sb.others do sth.else
18.it is supposed to do sth.英語寫作：英語四六級考試寫作必背的35句型
一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名詞 +(that)+ 主詞 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容詞 + 名詞 +(that)+ 主詞 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。
Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.張老師是我曾經(jīng)遇到最仁慈的教師。
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容詞 + than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.沒有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.(再怎么強調(diào)...的重要性也不為過。)例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.我們再怎么強調(diào)保護眼睛的重要性也不為過。
四、There is no denying that + S + V...(不可否認的...)
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.不可否認的，我們的生活品質(zhì)已經(jīng)每況愈下。
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~(全世界都知道...)
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.全世界都知道樹木對我們是不可或缺的。
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~(毫無疑問的...)
例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子(...的優(yōu)點是...)
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create(produce)any pollution.使用太陽能的優(yōu)點是它不會制造任何污染。
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子(...的原因是...)
例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應(yīng)我們新鮮的空氣。
九、So + 形容詞 + be + 主詞 + that + 句子(如此...以致于...)
例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.時間是如此珍貴，我們經(jīng)不起浪費它。
十、Adj + as + Subject(主詞)+ be, S + V~~~(雖然...)
例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.{by no means = in no way = on no account 一點也不}
雖然我們的國家富有，我們的生活品質(zhì)絕對令人不滿意。
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~(愈...愈...)
例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈進步。
The more books we read, the more learned we become.我們書讀愈多，我們愈有學(xué)問。
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~(借著...，..能夠..)
例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借著做運動，我們能夠始終保持健康。
十三、~~~ enable + Object(受詞)+ to + V(..使..能夠..)
例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松。
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~(我們絕對不能...)
例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.我們絕對不能忽略知識的價值。
十五、It is time + S + 過去式(該是...的時候了)
例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.該是有關(guān)當(dāng)局采取適當(dāng)?shù)拇胧﹣斫鉀Q交通問題的時候了。
十六、Those who ~~~(...的人...)
例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.違反交通規(guī)定的人應(yīng)該受處罰。
十七、There is no one but ~~~(沒有人不...)
例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.沒有人不渴望上大學(xué)。
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V(不得不...)
例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.既然考試迫在眉睫，我不得不放棄做運動。
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子(可想而知的)
It is obvious that + 句子(明顯的)
It is apparent that + 句子(顯然的)
例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.可想而知，知識在我們的一生中扮演一個重要的角色。
二十、That is the reason why ~~~(那就是...的原因)
例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I don't like it.夏天很燠熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。
二十一、For the past + 時間，S + 現(xiàn)在完成式...(過去...年來，...一直...)
例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.過去兩年來，我一直忙著準備考試。
二十二、Since + S + 過去式，S + 現(xiàn)在完成式。
例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自從他上高中，他一直很用功。
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~(...是值得的。)
例句：It pays to help others.幫助別人是值得的。
二十四、be based on(以...為基礎(chǔ))
例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.社會的進步是以和諧為基礎(chǔ)的。
二十五、Spare no effort to + V(不遺余力的)
例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我們應(yīng)該不遺余力的美化我們的環(huán)境。
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事(讓...明白...事)
例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.我們應(yīng)該讓人們明白努力的價值。
二十七、be closely related to ~~(與...息息相關(guān))
例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.做運動與健康息息相關(guān)。
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving
= make it a rule to + V(養(yǎng)成...的習(xí)慣)
We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.我們應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成早睡早起的習(xí)慣。
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~(因為...)
例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.因為他的鼓勵，我終于實現(xiàn)我的夢想。
三
十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!
= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么...!)
例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守諾言是多么重要的事!三
十一、Leave much to be desired(令人不滿意)
例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.我們的交通狀況令人不滿意。
三
十二、Have a great influence on ~~~(對...有很大的影響)
例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.抽煙對我們的健康有很大的影響。
三
十三、do good to(對...有益)，do harm to(對...有害)
例句：Reading does good to our mind.讀書對心靈有益。
Overwork does harm to health.工作過度對健康有害。
三
十四、Pose a great threat to ~~(對...造成一大威脅)
例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.污染對我們的生存造成一大威脅。
三
十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best(盡全力去...)
例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.我們應(yīng)盡全力去達成我們的人生目標。
第四篇：閃光點(200字)作文
精選作文:閃光點(200字)作文
說起橡皮，大家都很熟悉。但是我這里有一塊與眾不同的橡皮介紹給大家。
這是一個藍色的橡皮。中間有一道白色的疤痕。
有一天，我正在寫字。突然，我一不小心寫錯一個字，老師不給用涂改液，怎么辦？突然，我想：還是別管了！可是又想：我要做得比別人好！于是就拿出這個橡皮，輕輕地擦。奇跡發(fā)生了：雖然不是完全擦干凈了，但只要寫上那個新字只要寫上了，就不是看得很清楚。
是的，只要你仔細觀察一件事物，就會發(fā)現(xiàn)它的閃光點。三年級:月詠冰雪 篇一：小學(xué)作文我的閃光點
我的閃光點
我活潑，我勤勞，我節(jié)儉??細細數(shù)一數(shù)，我的閃光點還真不少。不要以為我是“王婆賣瓜自賣自夸”哦，我的閃光點里可沒有自大。讓你眼見為實吧： 五月里出生的我，為原本多彩的五月增添了幾分活潑，因為老天賜予了我猴子般的性格。我不會讓困難奪去我的笑容，要讓活潑伴隨我戰(zhàn)勝挫折。誰說活潑不是閃光點呢？我認為活潑是最無畏的，最可愛的。
經(jīng)過春夏秋冬，我越來越懂得勤勞的意義了。
每天早晨起來，我都會將房間打掃的干干凈凈，被子疊得整整齊齊。父母總是一個勁地夸我長大了，懂事了。這是誰的功勞？當(dāng)然是勤勞。它讓我心里總是甜滋滋的，就像是品嘗到了頂級的蜂蜜一般。
父母那勤勞的汗水灌溉了我節(jié)儉的花朵。
每當(dāng)看到別人吃零食時，我也想買。但我的腦海里總會浮現(xiàn)出烈日下父母正在辛勤勞作的情景。我貪吃的意念頓時就打消了。就這樣，我養(yǎng)成了節(jié)儉的習(xí)慣。在父母眼里，我是懂事的，所以即使有再多的錢，他們也放心交給我?；顫姟⑶趧?、節(jié)儉，這就是我。我相信將來我會有更多的閃光點。
朋友們，為我加油吧。
我們班上的同學(xué)個個有他們自己值得驕傲的閃光點 “ 高云杰，團結(jié)友愛；姚越，熱愛學(xué)習(xí)??我也不例外，我也有一個令我驕傲的最大閃光點。可能大家不知道吧！那就讓我來告訴你吧！
樂于助人，是我的最大閃光點。
有一次放學(xué)，突然間下起了傾盆大雨。不知所措的我立刻拿出事先準備好的雨傘向斑馬線走去。突然，看到一個小男孩在哭，便走向前去詢問： “ 小朋友，你怎么了？ ”“ 下雨了，我媽媽沒有來帶我，我又沒有雨傘?！?我說： “ 讓我來陪你吧.”
“ 叮當(dāng) —— 叮當(dāng) ” 時針敲過八響，鐘聲打驚了我的心。我心想爸爸有可能已經(jīng)急成了熱鍋上的螞蟻。我不時流露出焦急的神情，小男孩似乎看出了我的心思說： “ 姐姐，你回家吧，太晚了?！薄?不，來，姐姐送你回家?！?/p>
我慢慢的把小男孩送到家，男孩的媽媽正急著要出去找他，聽了小男孩說的事后眼圈里流下了兩行感動的淚水，她不斷的夸我是個好孩子。小男孩的媽媽還要留下我吃飯，我婉言的謝絕了阿姨好意趕緊向家趕。
回到家，我把事情的來龍去脈都告訴了我爸爸，爸爸說： “ 好！這才是我的好女兒呢！” 我好開 ＆#10084;呀！因為我又做了一件樂于助人的好事！
每個人都有自己的閃光點，每個人的閃光點都可以把自己的人生變的更燦爛更精彩。
篇二：發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生閃光點 讓學(xué)生體驗作文樂趣論文
發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生閃光點 讓學(xué)生體驗作文樂趣
摘 要：語文教師要在作文教學(xué)中采取一定的策略，以達到提高教學(xué)效果的目的。要想有好的教學(xué)效果，教師就必須要采取相應(yīng)的策略，如善于發(fā)現(xiàn)作文的閃光點，用肯定的態(tài)度去欣賞并利用這些閃光點，讓學(xué)生體驗到作文成功的樂趣，激發(fā)寫作的興趣，從而提高寫作水平。
關(guān)鍵詞：初中語文；作文教學(xué)；方法；策略；閃光點
中圖分類號：g632 文獻標識碼：b 文章編號：1002-7661（2013）13-010-01 語文教師在作文教學(xué)中不能用刻板的標準去評價和衡量學(xué)生的作文，而應(yīng)從學(xué)生的知識水平和認知能力出發(fā)，實事求是地評價學(xué)生的作文，教師要從實際出發(fā)采取相應(yīng)的教學(xué)策略，發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生作文中的閃光點，激發(fā)學(xué)生的寫作興趣，提高寫作水平。
一、發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生作文中精妙的詞、句
著名教育家家葉圣陶認為：“學(xué)生作文中任何一點可取的地方，都應(yīng)找出來，肯定他的想法和寫法。”心理學(xué)告訴我們：希望是人們奮斗的原動力。學(xué)生完成一篇作文后，都希望得到老師的承認和肯定。教師對學(xué)生作文的要求不宜過多、過高。面對學(xué)生幼稚的作文，教師要盡量發(fā)現(xiàn)其閃光點，以正面肯定、鼓勵為主，不求全責(zé)備，不扼殺學(xué)生創(chuàng)造的火花。即使學(xué)生作文中有一點進步（包括字體的端正、字詞的使用等），也應(yīng)該得到老師的肯定。我們認為，學(xué)生只要用心去寫了，在一篇作文中，總會有那么一些字詞使用得比較
恰當(dāng)，甚至某些段落寫得比較精彩。教師在批改作文時應(yīng)作重點批注，并在作文講評課上予以賞析、肯定和褒揚，從而激發(fā)學(xué)生寫作的興趣。
二、摘抄學(xué)生習(xí)作精美語句
教師在批改學(xué)生作文時發(fā)現(xiàn)了用得好的字詞、寫得好的句子、段落，但又不可能在講評課上對每篇作文中的精美句子段落都一一賞析。但老師又不能對這些好的句子、好的段落置之不理。如果這樣不僅不能激發(fā)學(xué)生的寫作興趣，而且還可能因為老師的漠視打擊學(xué)生的寫作積極性。因此，教師可以采取摘抄學(xué)生作文中精美語句的方法，以激發(fā)學(xué)生的寫作興趣。具體可以這樣操作：教師把所有作文中的精美語句抄寫在黑板上，每句話的后面注明班級、姓名，同時要求學(xué)生把這些語句抄寫在專門的摘抄本上。如果條件允許的話，教師把這些精美的語句打印出來，張貼在學(xué)習(xí)園地，讓學(xué)生課后去抄，這樣學(xué)生可以不占用上課的時間。
三、編輯優(yōu)秀作文本或者張貼優(yōu)秀作文
如果是帶著欣賞的眼光去看學(xué)生的作文的話，我們就不難發(fā)現(xiàn)班上也有不少優(yōu)秀作文。這些作文能夠真實反映出學(xué)生豐富的內(nèi)心世界，能夠準確地反映出學(xué)生的知識水平，能夠反映出學(xué)生的語言文字運用能力。其中好的作文對全班同學(xué)能起示范作用，從而激發(fā)學(xué)生的寫作興趣。
我們可以在每次作文后，把寫得好的文章挑選幾篇（最好有進步較大的）出來，經(jīng)過教師修改后，讓學(xué)生工整地抄寫一遍，然后把
它編上目錄，注明作者的班級、姓名，并裝訂成冊，作為優(yōu)秀作文書在學(xué)生中傳閱。每次作文就一小冊，一個學(xué)期下來，就可以訂成一大本。這些優(yōu)秀作文不僅記錄了學(xué)生的成長過程，同時也為教學(xué)積累了資料。教師在放假前把一學(xué)期來同學(xué)們?nèi)脒x作文的篇數(shù)統(tǒng)計出來，對進步最快或入選作文最多的同學(xué)進行表彰獎勵。同時利用學(xué)校召開家長會的機會，在教室墻上辦“優(yōu)秀習(xí)作展覽”，向家長展示學(xué)生的習(xí)作成果。臨近期末，又組織學(xué)生編輯“班級優(yōu)秀作文選”，讓大多數(shù)學(xué)生的“作品”得以展示。長此以往，學(xué)生的寫作積極性就調(diào)動起來了，寫作水平也就會有較大幅度提高，同時還疏通了學(xué)生對作文的“愁”、“怕”、“厭”等心理障礙，為學(xué)生進一步學(xué)習(xí)寫作打下了堅實的基礎(chǔ)。
不過，為了強化學(xué)生閱讀的效果，教師應(yīng)要求學(xué)生傳閱作文后寫讀后感、寫心得體會，這樣能最大限度地發(fā)揮作文冊和作品展的作用。實踐證明：同學(xué)們利用互相學(xué)習(xí)的機會，能更有效地啟迪思維、開闊思路、對提高寫作水平有很大的幫助。
四、肯定學(xué)生作文中的巧妙構(gòu)思
學(xué)生思維活躍，視角獨特，作文時經(jīng)常會有巧妙構(gòu)思出現(xiàn)。雖然有的作文整體水平不高，但在作文構(gòu)思上卻也有值得肯定之處。好的構(gòu)思能給作文增色不少。所謂構(gòu)思是指在動筆寫作前對文章的內(nèi)容和表達方式的總體設(shè)計。它是作文過程中的一種創(chuàng)造性的復(fù)雜的思維活動。具體來是說文章構(gòu)思就是對映在頭腦中的材料作進一步的擴充、延伸、分解、組裝，使之有序化最優(yōu)化。
如有學(xué)生在寫《我的媽媽》時，巧妙地運用了對比的寫作手法，把媽媽5年來為這個家日夜操勞的變化寫了出來。他這樣寫5年前的媽媽：“那時媽媽在一家公司做文員，每天打扮得漂漂亮亮的： 1.63米的個頭，圓圓的臉蛋、披肩長發(fā)，化個淡妝，人十分精神?！?年后的媽媽則變成：“瘦弱的身軀，瘦削的臉成天露出疲憊的神情，人整天忙個不停，就像一個上了發(fā)條的時鐘?！蔽覀兿炔徽f這個作文整體水平高不高，單看作者的構(gòu)思是成功的。因為這更能反映出媽媽5年來為這個家做出的貢獻，同時也表達了孩子對媽媽的愛。另外一個學(xué)生則寫了一個很陳舊的故事：假期自己在路上撿到了一個皮包，包里有現(xiàn)鈔和各類銀行卡和身份證，最后交給到了派出所。如果文章只寫下這個過程，無非就是記敘了一件好人好事而已。但作者卻寫了家人對是否交皮包給派出所表現(xiàn)出來的兩種截然不同的意見。一種是撿到東西要交給派出所，一種是自己要了，反正交上去也是白交了！這樣兩種思想斗爭的描寫為文章增色不少。我在講評時特意突出了這兩個同學(xué)文章巧妙構(gòu)思的好處，強調(diào)一篇作文是否成功，構(gòu)思是否巧妙是十分重要的因素。由于教師能在作文教學(xué)中采取相應(yīng)的策略，善于發(fā)現(xiàn)并利用學(xué)生作文的閃光點，讓學(xué)生體會到被肯定和褒揚后帶來的滿足感和榮譽感，讓他們體會到成功的快樂，從而激發(fā)了學(xué)生創(chuàng)作的欲望，提高了學(xué)生的作文水平。
篇三：挖掘閃光點—作文評價淺談
挖掘閃光點—作文評價淺談
作者：周穎超
來源：《學(xué)校教育研究》2014年
極向上的評價點燃了學(xué)生的寫作熱情，在以后的文章中總能看到不少精彩的語句和生動的描寫。
正如法國教育家
學(xué)生在寫作的實踐過程中抒寫自我的心靈感受，開啟心靈之竅門，實現(xiàn)人格與能力的和諧發(fā)展。
篇四：英語六級高分作文閃光點
作文寫完檢查集中點
1.每個句子是否都有謂語動詞；
2.動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)；
3.主謂搭配是否恰當(dāng)；
4.標點符號。
高分作文標志 1：是否長短句交叉；
2、是否會使用插入語；
3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；
4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；
5、句型使用是否準確、地道。
具體例子下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：
2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。如however / therefore /for example/i believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
比如說： other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?
3.一定要學(xué)會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, 下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
exceedingly 替換 very thrilling 替換 exciting sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search an army of 替換 a lot of
the dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情； increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular coincident with ? 非常地道的句型，表達“與?一致”的意思，替換 with ? advancement 替換 development pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into current(currently)替換 now appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.growing individuals 替換 more and more people it is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的
for a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.for a start 替換 to begin with we can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法 our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動 additionally 替換 in addition / besides deliver 替換 send
emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞
no garden has no weeds 替換 every coin has two sides positive 替換 important / good 等
a slice of 替換 a part of unfavorable 替換 bad impacts 替換 effects / influences we should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語
fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)facet 替換 aspect 各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢！
以下是30個最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。
eg.many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some 6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因為是書面語，所以要加that)7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing 9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits)10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion
11:increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more(注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly 13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful, 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer 下頁 余下全文
第五篇：英語六級高分作文閃光點
作文寫完檢查集中點
1.每個句子是否都有謂語動詞；
2.動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)；
3.主謂搭配是否恰當(dāng)；
4.標點符號。高分作文標志
1：是否長短句交叉；
2、是否會使用插入語；
3、用詞是否多樣，準確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；
4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；
5、句型使用是否準確、地道。
具體例子下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項：
1.適當(dāng)用被動替換主動，這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結(jié)尾時不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間，一般放在動詞，助動詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號。
比如說： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?
3.一定要學(xué)會換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)
下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。
Computer and I
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very
thrilling 替換 exciting
sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search
an army of 替換 a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型，用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular
Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型，表達“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?
Advancement 替換 development
Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into
Current(currently)替換 now
Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動
Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides
Deliver 替換 send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個句子有三個精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to
Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)
Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides
Computers do play，do 強調(diào)
Positive 替換 important / good 等
A slice of 替換 a part of
Unfavorable 替換 bad
Impacts 替換 effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語
Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)
Facet 替換 aspect
各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點，作文怎么會不得高分呢！
以下是30個最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下。
1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。
Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因為是書面語，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing
8: shared 代 common
9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits)
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more(注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb.be interested in
18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth
23.desire 替換want.24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替換remember
26.enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思)
27.interaction替換communication
28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance
30.next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible
應(yīng)當(dāng)承認:
Admittedly, a few governments have taken timid measures.2.simply 簡而言之:
The answer is simply money.3.discreetly 小心謹慎地:
point out discreetly that?
4.conceivably 可以想象地:
Smoking may, conceivably, be harmful.5.surely 肯定地:
This is surely the most short-sighted policy you could imagine.6.eagerly 渴望地
7.increasingly 不斷增長地
While money is eagerly collected in vast sums with one hand, it is paid out in increasingly vaster sums with the other.8.honestly: 誠實地:
the government is honestly concerned about the welfare of its people政府真心實意地關(guān)心它的人民的福利
9.certainly: 當(dāng)然地
As individuals we are certainly weak, but if ?作為個人,我們當(dāng)然是弱小的,但是如果?
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Importance of Reading Classics.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.讀經(jīng)典書籍對人的成長至關(guān)重要。
2.現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人卻越來越少，原因是。。3.我們大學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎么做
The Importance of Reading Classics
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