第一篇：英語作文寫作框架 (試用考研作文)

寫作框架

1.分析解決型：

看圖，展示社會上普遍存在的一個問題或現象，并拿其作為一個話題，要求考生分析其產生或日益嚴重的原因，對社會的影響，并要求給出一些緩解或解決的方法及建議。

Introduction: 簡要引出某社會問題或社會現象 Main Body 1: 分析它的原因或負面影響

Main Body 2: 提供解決該問題的一個方法 Main Body 3: 提供解決該問題的另一個方法 Conclusion: 概括事物的原因/影響解決方法 2．探討雙方

Introduction：在引入話題的同時，對雙方觀點進行一個簡單的介紹 Main body 1: 深入探討正方的觀點，給出理由、證據、例子來進行支持。

Main body 2: 深入探討反方的觀點，給出理由、證據、例子來進行支持

Conclusion: 在綜合考慮雙方觀點之后，提出自己的想法。

3.陳述利弊型

Introduction：簡要介紹將要討論的事物 Main body 1: 給出其中一個好處 Main body2: 給出另一個好處 Main body3: 給出其中一個壞處 Conclusion: 得出“利大于弊”的結論

注意：建議任何主題段都要由兩部分組成：首先要寫一個主題句（topic sentence），開門見山地指出該段路的核心思想（main idea）；然后再寫3-4 個支持句（又稱擴展句），對主題句的核心思想進行補充、解釋、論述及證明。

Main body范例：

First of all, it is obvious that the proliferation of cell phones, people are prone to reduce face to face interaction.Besides, as far as the medical aspect is concerned, the increasing functions of mobile phones contribute to the growing incidence of myopia among teenagers.Apart from health problem, the recycling problems of mobile phones are still under resolution.

第二篇：2011最新考研英語作文框架

考研英語作文經典框架結構(重點推薦)

一．?？贾攸c文章框架

萬能框架一：圖畫作文

This illustration depicts__________（圖畫中的人物）, with_______________（補充說明）.Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to____________（進一步闡釋）

It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______（圖畫主題）, which is ______________（進一步的說明）.He seems to be saying that_______________（給出細節(jié)）.In my opinion, ___________（個人闡述）.This simple picture is a wake up call for ______（所涉群體，如the whole of the human race）.Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________（問題所在）.One the one hand, we must _________________（建議一）.It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________（進一步說明）.On the other hand, ________________（建議二）? Only in this way can we___________（展望前景）.萬能框架二：圖表作文

The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________（圖表主題）.The first thing we notice is that_______________（圖表最大特點）.This means that as __________, _________________（進一步說明）.We can see from the statistics given that _______________（圖表細節(jié)一）.After ving_________（細節(jié)一中的第一個變化）, the _____Ved+幅度+時間（緊跟著的變化）.The figures also tells us that_________________________（圖表細節(jié)二）.（數據位置，如In the second column）, we can see that ____________accounts for _______（進一步描述）.Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that___________（結論）.The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that_____________（給出原因）./ It is high time that we Ved（發(fā)出倡議）

萬能框架三：利弊型作文

Recently the issue of whether or not______（討論話題）has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.There are two major arguments that can be made for_________.For one thing, __________can bring ____ to_____________（優(yōu)點一）.For another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when _________________________（優(yōu)點二）.But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________, among which are ___________（列舉缺點）.For instance, it can be _________to ____________（舉例說明）.In addition, many people find it ________（形容詞）to ______________（第二個缺點）

When asked to __________, I tend to ____________.This is because I ______________（原因一）.Furthermore, ____________________（原因二）.Finally, _____________（原因三）.萬能框架四：展望未來型

With the rapid advances of _____________ in recent years, ___has____________（引出現象）.However, _______ has________________, as____________（提出問題）.As a result, _____has ____________________（指出影響）.The effects of? _________ which has produced on___________ can be boiled down to two major ones.First , __________________（影響一）.More importantly, ________________（影響二）.Hence, I believe that we will see a ____________（提出展望）/ Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a ______（或反面展望）

There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here.The first is that the more（比較級）_____, the more（比較級）.In addition, we all agree that________________________（第二個原因）

二．常考重點段落框架示例

第一：.圖畫/圖表描述段

示例一：From the picture(graph, chart, table, pie, bar）, we kmow that ______________(圖表內容總概括）。②On the one hand, the left/first picture tills us that? ______________(情況一，圖一/表一的內容）。③On the other hand,(the right/ second）picture informs us that ______________(情況二，圖二/表二的內容）。④It can easily be seen that? ______________(揭示圖畫/表寓意）。

示例二：As is vividly shown/described/depicted in the cartoon/picture, ______________(圖表內容總概括）。②In the first picture, ______________(描述圖/表一內容,如果是一個表，則可左或上半部分）。③As is shown in the second drawing/ picture, ______________(描述圖/表二內容,如果是一個表，則右或下半部分）。④It is safe to draw the conclusion that ______________(提示寓意,或主題句，回應主題但不是主題句的重復）。

示例三：①It is shown/depicted descibed in the picture tha t ______________(圖表內容概括）。②______________(進一步闡述圖表內容）。③As is symbolically revealed in the pictures, ______________(折射生活中的意義）。④we can say that/ We may draw/safely come to a conclusion that/ We can see clearly that ______________(對寓意進一步引申和歸納）。

第二：意義闡述段

示例一：①Judging from the pictures, we can clearly infer that the drawers intention is _________(主題句）。②________(擴展句）For one thing/First of all/First of all/Firstly_______(第一個層面）。③For another/ Besides/Moreover/In addition/Secondly_______(第二個層面）。④Thus/As a result/Therefore/Finally________(總結句）。

示例二： ①To begin with, the purpose of the drawings is to show us that ______________(主題句）yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously。②(擴展句）______________ is naturally associated with______________, to be specific ______________(第一個層面）。③Besides/Moreover/In addition ______________(第二個層面）。④As a result/Therefore ______________(總結句）。

第三：原因闡釋段

示例一： ①There are many reasons responsible for this phenomenon/case/instance and the following are the typical ones.② The first reason is that______________(理由一）。③The second reason is that______________(理由二）。④The third reason is that/ A case in point is that/ The typical example is that______________(理由三）。

示例二：①There are many reasons to explain/explaining the effect/phenomenon/case/instance.②The most contributing one is/the main reason is no other than______________(理由一）。③What is more_____________(理由二）。④(理由三）______________also play a role in this case.第四：舉例說明段

示例一：①There are many reasons/examples to explain ______________(主題句）。②Take…as a typical example./The first example is that ______________(闡述例子）______________（可進一步闡述）。③The second example is that/In addition/Here is a counter example./Opposite case in point is that/On the contrary ______________(第二個例子的內容或舉一個反面例子）。④Therefore,/Only…can…______________(總結主題句、段落總結句）。

示例二：①______________(觀點句）。It can be best/well illustrated in/explained by ______________(例子）。②______________(闡述例子）。③______________進一步闡述例子。④段落總結句：Therefore, ______________(進一步總結觀點句的必要性和重要性）。

第五：建議措施段

示例一：①Considering all these reasons/this situation/Confronted with such a problem, I think we need to take some positive measures.②On the one hand, ______________(方法/建議一）。③On the other hank, it is necessary for us to ______________(方法/建議二）。④Thus/Only in this way, can______________(總結自己的觀點/建議/態(tài)度）。

示例二：①In order to improve the situation/ To sun up the above arument/ Confronted with such an issue/problem, we should find several solutions to is/need to take some positive measures.②On the one hand/For one thing, we should______________(方法/建議一）。③On the other hand/ For another ______________(方法/建議二）。④Therefore/Thus/Only in this way, can______________(段落總結句）。

示例三：①Accordlingly/ In my opinion, the proper attitude towards/suggestion for______________(主題）is that______________(我的觀點/態(tài)度/建議）。② For one thing we should______________(方法一）。③For anther, ______________(方法二）。④Only in this way, can/So/Therefore/As a result______________(段落總結句）。

第六：趨勢預測段

示例一：①Accordingly, it is vital for us to derive positive implications from these thought-provoking drawings.②On the one hand, we can frequently use them to enlighten?? that ______________(主題）。③ O n the other hand, we should be sensible enough to _____________(觀點/態(tài)度）。④Only by_____________(段落總結句）, and only in this way can we have a brillent future.

第三篇：2018考研英語小作文框架寫作表達集錦

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根據考研英語大綱要求，小作文主要考查考生進行一般性應用文寫作的能力。應用文的類型包括私人和公務信函、備忘錄、報告、通知等。其中書信類應用文是歷年考研英語考試的考查重點。而從共性上來看，大部分書信類應用文體現的交際目的是交流自己因某事物產生的某種情緒，重在闡述情緒衍生的相應行為。今天，文都網?？佳杏⒄Z老師就交流基礎情緒過程中的常見表達給大家進行總結。

一、交流欣喜或感動

1）It is a delight to do sth.例：很高興你們成為我們的校友。

It is a delight to have you as our schoolmates.2）Undoubtedly,....gives me much delight/ happiness/ gladness/ joy.例：毫無疑問，你們的到來讓我很高興。

Undoubtedly, your coming gives me much gladness.3）I wish to heartily congratulate you on sth.例：我想對你考試取得的優(yōu)異成績表示真心祝賀。

I wish to heartily congratulate you on your excellent exam results.4）I appreciate the time and efforts you extended on...例：我很感激你投入時間和精力減輕我的心理痛苦。

http://004km.cn/kaoyan/ I appreciate the time and efforts you extended on alleviating my mental sufferings.二、交流喜歡、感興趣

1）I have a great passion for...例：我對開創(chuàng)自己的企業(yè)充滿興趣。

I have a great passion for creating my own business.2）.....holds strong attraction for me.例：在你的學校進一步學習對我有強大的吸引力。

Pursuing further study in your university holds strong attraction for me.3）I can’t wait to / don’t hesitate to recommend to you.....例：我忍不住向你推薦這部電影。

I can’t wait to recommend to you this film.4）I would like to know whether I can obtain the opportunity to...例：我想知道我是否能擁有在貴校學習的機會。

I would like to know whether I can obtain the opportunity to study in your school.三、交流不喜歡、厭惡

1）I would like to express my disappointment / dissatisfaction at...例：我想表達對多收電話費的不滿。

http://004km.cn/kaoyan/ I would like to express my dissatisfaction at the overcharged phone bill.2）I am sorry to inform you that I will resign from....例：我很遺憾地通知您我將從《設計·時尚》雜志辭職。

I am sorry to inform you that I will resign from the magazine Designs &Fashions.3）...can no longer be tolerated.例：不能再容忍插隊了。

Jumping the queue can no longer be tolerated.四、交流困擾和擔憂

1）I particularly worry / I’m particularly confused about...例：我對學生身體狀況下降非常擔心。

I particularly worry about the deterioration of students’ physical condition.2）Facing..., I become completely confused.例：面對這個復雜的局面，我完全迷惑了。

Facing this complicated situation, I become completely confused.3）I want to get detailed guide on how to....例：我想得到關于如何確定職業(yè)方向的詳細指導。

I want to get detailed guide on how to decide on my career direction.http://004km.cn/kaoyan/ 緒過程中的常見英文句式表達。希望大家能夠結合句式表達下面的例句將上述英文句式表達熟練掌握。

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第四篇：2016考研英語作文第3段及結尾寫作框架

2016考研英語作文第3段及結尾寫作框架

距離2016考研初試只有10天時間，對寫作還沒通竅的考生要抓緊了，在余下10天時間里，為大家提供考前速提分指導，幫助寫作菜鳥爭取多拿分。

解析：第三段與結尾部分是整篇文章的總結部分，對于整體來說有點睛和提分的作用。本文提供的框架也分為負向文章行文思路與正向文章行文思路兩大類，第三段的總結與提升主要從兩個層面(社會層面與個人層面)來分析。

一、第三段開頭可以用到的過渡句：

What should we do to release/fix the problem?

Are there any recommendations to solve the problem?

How to cure the pressing situation?

What should we do at present?

+The answer is that all hands are required to(solve the pressing problem/improve the situation.二、負向文章行文思路：

1、社會層面

(1)中央地方共同努力

The local officials should resort to the law to regulate(environmental conservation).Besides, the central government is not supposed to hand a blank check to the local and should be partially involved in(curbing the local tainted environment).state government

(2)政府立法聽民意

Our government should resort to the law to regulate(the standard of product quality)and shall listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to(quality of product)

food security/safety

(3)政府直面問題，聽民意，平衡兩者關系

Our government should not sugarcoat(cover)the problem but listen to public opinions and demands when formulating laws, regulations and policies relating to(09-網絡遠近the Internet)and

try to juggle(the use of network and the supervision on it/ control over it)

try to balance between(the use of network and the control over it)

juggle A and B

unfavorable information

balance between A and B

(4)學校提供相關教育

Our colleges are supposed to provide training and course for students to learn how to juggle(03溺愛孩子their physical development and psychological maturity/ 13選擇 their study at school and internship outside the campus/off campus)on campus

(5)學校組織

Student Union should start/kick off campaign, both inside and outside the campus(both on and off campus), to educate people that(06追星--chasing idol during the youth should be properly handled by their parents.)

(6)媒體

Media can broadcast less commercials and more public service advertisements

to call on parents to(03溺愛parent their children properly)

to promote the awareness of(03溺愛 right parenting)

2、個人層面

(1)有問題找家長和輔導員

Our young generation should turn to our student supervisors and parents for recommendations about

how to(balance between internship and academy for their future career.)

how to promote their awareness of()

how to strengthen their belief that()

(2)積極投入活動

We should take part into the campaign to promote the awareness of()and fulfill our accountability as a member of our community.(3)啥都做

No matter how much fund that our government would put into(the recovery of tainted region), we will never see(a clean sky or breath fresh air)if effort of the young generation were absent.Although not financially independent, our college students must be doing everything we can to fulfill our duty to take part into the improvement of our community.3、負向文章行文思路結尾：

With efforts from all walks of life, it is certain that the situation would get improved soon.三、正向文章行文思路(積極倡導)：

(Confidence)is partially the driving force behind the evolution/growth of our society.And all hands are supposed to join together to(foster people’s confidence).1、社會層面

(1)媒體傳遞正能量media

The mass media should exert more positive energy, such as being confidence, to the public so that people would react more positively to difficulties and adversities.(2)教育education

Education, affects people’s attitude and reaction to the world.Thus, moral education should be enhanced and concentrated on juveniles and kids before they enter their adulthood.Specifically，self-discipline and code of social conduct should be written in books and carefully discussed in class.(3)學校college

College is where undergraduates obtain knowledge and skills to enhance their academic performance and where students get their personality and code of social conduct improved as well.Thus, moral course of moral education should be provided as elective curriculums to college students.curriculum 校內課程

extra curriculum課外活動

electives n選修課 elective curriculums

2、個人層面

(1)改善自我

①Reading books.We can devote some of our leisure to cultivating a love of reading books.You will find what you can not get in reality but in books, such as companion, answers to tough questions, etiquette as well as mental power etc.such as +N/doing

for example,+句子

②Exercising.Polls conducted online says, taking part into sports would improve your mentality, personality and strengthen your weak point.Your will find yourself more assertive and decisive after one year of group exercising.find oneself +adj

find oneself +doing sth

③+給予他們時間成長Of course, we can not grow to be(a confident person)overnight if we were not, therefore, we should allow ourselves to take baby steps to learn it.(2)志愿工作voluntary work

It is highly recommended that people should participate in voluntary work.During the process, you would get your mind purified, moral consciousness boosted, and social responsibilities strengthened.You would like to join hands with your peers or colleagues to proceed with your task.get sth done

3、正向文章行文思路結尾：

I am determined to say that effort and devotion from all hands would promise a prosperous and harmonious society.I am sure that effort and devotion from all walks of life would ensure that our society make a rapid strides in near future.?

第五篇：2018考研英語：書信作文十大經典框架推薦

2018考研英語：書信作文十大經典框架推薦

考研英語中，作文是除了閱讀外占分最高的題型，其重要性自然不容忽視。常有英語小白抱怨：書信文不會寫，咋辦?不要急，下面就為你奉上最全的框架，相信有了這些框架，你的作文水平一定能提升一個層次!當然框架不能迷信，只能作為自己的參考，因為最好的框架是自己學習整理出來的~

一、投訴信

Dear ______，①I am ______(自我介紹).②I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.③The reason for my dissatisfaction is ______(總體介紹).④In the first place, ______(抱怨的第一個方面).⑤In addition, ______(抱怨的第二個方面).⑥Under these circumstances, I find it ______(感覺)to______(抱怨的方面給你帶來的后果).⑦I appreciate it very much if you could ______(提出建議和請求), preferably ______(進一步的要求), and I would like to have this matter settled by ______(設定解決事情最后期限).⑧Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

二、求職信

Dear Sir or Madam，①I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in ______(報紙名稱)of ______(廣告發(fā)布時間).②Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but I also have the right personality for a ______(工作名稱).③In the one hand, ______(第一個原因).④On the other hand, ______(另一個原因).⑤Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful.⑥If you need to know more about me, please feel free to contact me at any time at ______(電話號碼).⑦Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

三、建議信

Dear ______，①You have asked me for my advice with regard to ______ , and I will try to make some conductive suggestions here.②In my humble opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ______(建議的內容).③I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

四、請求信

Dear ______ ，①I am writing to formally request to ______(請求的內容).②The reason for ______is that ______(給出原因).③I ______ , so I ______(給出細節(jié)).④I would also like to request ______(提出進一步的要求).⑤I am sorry for any inconvenience I have caused.⑥Thank you for your attention to these requests.⑦If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me at ______(電話號碼).⑧I look forward to a favorable reply.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

五、邀請信

Dear ______ ，①There will be a ______(內容)at/in ______(地點)on ______(時間).②We would be honored to have you there with us.③The occasion will start at ______(具體時間).④This will be followed by a ______(進一步的安排).⑤At around ______(時間), ______(另一個安排).⑥I really hope you can make it.⑦RSVP before ______(通知你的最后期限).Yours sincerely，Li Ming

六、道歉信

Dear ______，①I am truly sorry that ______(道歉的原因).②The reason is that ______(介紹原因).③Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.④Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

七、感謝信

Dear ______ ，①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______(感謝的原因).②If it had not been for your assistance in ______(對方給予的具體幫助), I fear that I would have been ______(沒有對方幫助時的后果).③Every one agrees that it was you who ______(給出細節(jié)).④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

八、詢問信

Dear ______ ，①I am ______(自我介紹).②I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding ______(要詢問的內容).③First of all, what are ______(第一個問題)? ④Secondly, when will ______(第二個問題)? ⑤Thirdly, is ______(第三個問題)?

⑥I would also like to inquire ______(將最重要的問題單獨成段).⑦Could you be so kind as to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?

⑧Thank you for you kindness, and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

九、推薦信(求職/求學)

Dear ______ ，①It affords me much pleasure to recommend ______(要推薦的人)to you.②During his/her graduate years he/she was my ______.③As his/her ______ I found him/her ______(介紹與此人的關系).④His/Her performance in the school years was outstanding.⑤First, he/she had been and showed great talents in ______.⑥In addition, he/she has a very pleasant personality.⑦He has developed a strong sense of ______, and working with him is always.⑧I can state that he/she has all the qualities of being ______.(介紹此人的能力)

⑨Therefore, I here recommend him/her to you with all my heart.⑩Should you favor him/her with a position in your company/Should you accept him/her in your university?I am sure that his/her future conduct/academic work will prove worthy of your confidence.I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest possible moment.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

十、祝賀信

Dear ______ ，①I have learned with delight that you ______(祝賀事由).②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.③You must be ______.④And I feel very happy for you.⑤ ______(所取得的成績)is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to ______(被祝賀人過去的努力).⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______(被祝賀人的優(yōu)點).⑧Kindly let me know when you ______(咨詢對方何時有空).⑨I hope ______(表達自己的愿望).⑩My best wishes for your further success.Yours sincerely，Li Ming

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2016高考滿分作文：你活好自己了嗎？

【真題再現】

上海卷：評價他人的生活 作文題：

隨著現代社會的發(fā)展，人們的生活更容易進入大眾視野，評價他人生活變得越來越常見，這些評價對個人和社會的影響也越來越大。人們對“評價他人的生活”這種現象的看法不盡相同，請寫一篇文章，談談你對這種現象的思考?！緷M分佳作】

你活好自己了嗎？ 上海一考生

按一些幽默程序員的說法，“別人的生活在你看來是.jpg，但在他自己看來則是.gif”。大致意思就是：你看到的是別人的表象，而不是他人生的真實演繹。

一位穿著簡陋的婦女，身后跟著一個孩子，似乎很是畏懼她的母親似的，這一路都沒敢和她母親對視。想必，那是個嚴厲的母親。走到地鐵站臺，一名白發(fā)蒼蒼的老人正拉著二胡，身旁放著一只鐵盤，里面只有零星幾枚硬幣。婦女經過老人身旁時，一臉嫌棄的轉過腦袋，對孩子說：“看吧，多可憐。你要是不聽話，以后也會活成那般模樣?！蔽以谝慌造o靜的看著。孩子膽怯地點點頭，跟著母親走了。那般模樣？

那名婦女能出此言，必然是發(fā)自內心的。不過，分明是發(fā)自內心的自卑。很明顯，她也不過是個農村婦女，只是來到大城市，這才顯得神氣活現。

由此，不禁想到：評價他人生活的同時，你的評價可能恰好就是你內心的真實寫照。當一個人是自卑的時候，看到別人光鮮的生活時，更多的是羨慕，嫉妒，甚至上前恭維。我也許不得不去猜測那位婦女的生活，也許也是十分辛酸，十分貧苦，不那么如意吧。這只是一件很小很小的事情，也許每天都會發(fā)生，以至于被人們漸漸淡化了。

再說唐朝的大詩人劉禹錫，曾被“送”給一間“陋室”，簡陋到比當今的“蝸居房”還要簡陋。人們紛紛議論著劉禹錫的生活該將是如何悲慘如何不悅，同時也有慶幸自己沒有違背官府，生活還沒有落得這般下場。但實際上劉禹錫那種安貧樂道的心態(tài)早就將他置于一個世外桃源般的境界了，該寫詩寫詩，該喝茶喝茶，日子過得閑適愜意。

別人的生活需要你來議論嗎？一個表面光鮮的公司總裁背地里可能是個境界一般的俗人；而一個落魄的流浪歌手也許會因為自己時常追逐著夢想的生活而思想變得無比光鮮。生活，是活給自己的，不是活給別人看的。

別人的生活你擅長議論嗎？我認為，對他人生活的評價，可能就是自己生活狀況和生活態(tài)度的真實寫照。一個生活樸素閑適的文人若是路過劉禹錫的舊宅，也許會感嘆：雖然住宿條件惡劣，但是這里清新的空氣，幽雅的環(huán)境??多么令人神往！

而一個虛榮心強，實際上內心自卑的官吏，也許也會感嘆：這樣破舊簡陋的屋子，恐怕在無數個日夜里他都睡不著覺吧??看看這臺階，到處是青苔??自卑的人評論他人的生活，更多的是對自己的一種慰藉，但這始終是自卑的表現。

不過，想要公平地議論他人的生活，始終是很難的。每個人的心態(tài)多有不同，真正公平的議論只能是來自“別人”自己的。每個人都是“別人”。所以活好自己就夠了。

【名師點評】

這是閱卷組評定的一篇考場標桿佳作。本文以緣事析理、促人深思、語言簡潔而被評為一類卷。具體特點如下：

1.設問擬題，促人深思。文章以“你活好自己了嗎？”為題，引發(fā)讀者對問題的審視與思考，進而自然地聯系到“對他人的評價”上面來。作者之所以這樣擬題，其言外之意就是：先活好自己，活出味道，活出精彩，才有資格對別人“評頭論足”——這就是作者所要闡明的觀點。2.開篇鋪墊，緣事剖理。首段，引用程序員的話，為下文觀點的呈現做必要的鋪墊、張本，接著，由目睹耳聞的真實故事的剖析，得出結論，再以劉禹錫的“陋室”為例，展現兩種截然不同的人生觀和價值觀，最后，又通過光鮮的公司總裁與落魄的流浪歌手進行比對，說明只要活好自己就是值得肯定的，并且，評價他人是不容易的，也是艱難的。

3.語言簡潔，富有張力?？梢哉f，整篇文章的語言或簡約，或樸實，或直白，或通俗，或文雅??但不管屬于哪種情況，都具有表意清楚，詞約義豐之效，彰顯了作者語言表達上的張力和駕馭語言的嫻熟功底。成功公式：鋪墊蓄勢

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2016高考滿分作文(北京卷)

讓人一見鐘情的滿分作文：“老腔”何以令人震撼

【2016年北京市高考作文試題一】

《白鹿原上奏響一支老腔》記述老腔的演出每每“撼人肺腑”，令人有一種“酣暢淋漓”的感覺。某種意義上，老腔已超越了其藝術形式本身，成為了一種象征。請以“‘老腔’何以令人震撼”為題，寫一篇議論文。

要求：從老腔的魅力說開去，不局限于陳忠實散文的內容，觀點明確，論據充分，論證合理?！緷M分作文】

“老腔”何以令人震撼

猴年的春晚，我聽到一聲之前從沒有聽過的曲子“老腔”——那黃土地黑皮膚鑼鼓喧天吼聲震顫八百里山川河岳的歌！

我愿意把它令人震撼的力量歸結為一個詞——接地氣！

“老腔”不是曲高和寡的陽春白雪，它不適合淺斟吟唱。很簡單，在大西北粗礪的風沙中，陽春白雪扎不下根來，淺斟吟唱傳不到遠處，它吼出的是底層草根心里的吶喊，它體現的是生民發(fā)展的原生態(tài)艱難歲月。

“老腔”牽系著那么多，承載著那么多——俗稱之為民俗，雅稱之為文化！它有令人震撼的力量，因為它的真實，它的本色，它的溫情，也因為它深深扎根于這片熱土的執(zhí)著——它榮，他們榮；它辱，他們辱；它興，他們興；它衰，他們衰！

陳道明曾在一次電視節(jié)目上發(fā)飆，幾十個來自山西稷山的農村孩子表演了一出高臺花鼓，滿堂喝彩，卻被幾位評委貶低得一無是處。陳道明怒斥：你們對傳統文化毫無理解，居然就直接否定了這個節(jié)目。你們可能讀過不少書，有很高的知識水平，但對中國傳統文化和農耕文明卻知之甚少、理解不了??

震撼，真的不在于文化程度有多高，無所謂見識有多廣，而在于能不能放棄那種矯揉造作的勢態(tài)，以赤子之心感受到一種發(fā)自心底的沖動與虔誠。老腔、秦腔、花鼓的傳承者們，骨子里就是一種這樣動人的虔誠。只是我們誤解了這種虔誠，甚至蔑視地稱它為“愚昧”。于是我們看到令人落淚的一幕——

義務宣發(fā)方負責人方勵現身某直播平臺用下跪、磕頭的極端方式，懇求全國院線經理為《百鳥朝鳳》增加排片！《百鳥朝鳳》僅僅是吹嗩吶嗎？錯，它堅守的是在東西方文化八面來風中，可貴的文化自覺和文化定力；它表達的是對中國優(yōu)秀傳統文化的認識和傳承，以及對現實中普通人的細致關懷??

中華大地，沉默無言，山重水復，莽莽蒼蒼，它的激情，只為生于斯長于斯逝于斯的人而奔瀉，而我們的文化便被這種奔瀉所裹卷，吞吐千年，涵納古今！

為什么我的眼里常含淚水？因為我對這土地愛得深沉。期待如“老腔”般的傳統藝術能更多地走進人們的視野，老腔變紅腔！

【點評】真正的好作文能夠聯系現實，能夠觸類旁通，整篇文章充滿靈動性，而且高考作文最佳的狀態(tài)是讓人知曉時代特征。這篇文章真的是讓人一見傾心。不但底蘊豐厚，文采飛揚，而且能把《百鳥朝鳳》都寫進文章中，談文化自覺和文化定力，意境高遠，含義雋永，足以彰顯作者的文化思考力！