第一篇：創(chuàng)新英語作文大賽作文練習(xí)

Directions: Would you expect a “thank you” when you give your seat to an old man, or a woman with her baby? How do you feel if they take your seat without even taking a look at you? Would you be angry? You are given 60 minutes to state your view on the topic within less than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.“Thank you”—a powerful gift

Recently, some individuals would not give their seats to the old or the pregnant as the result of no reaction given back.Naturally, problems arouses: Must we demand a “thank you” when we give a seat to others? As my opinion, a “thank you” is both beneficial to the seat sharers and the ones who take the seat.A smile and a “thank you” paid back can promote the phenomenon of giving seats and enhance the moral value of the society.The first time Igave my seats to a pregnant and she smiled to me saying “thank you”.That time I felt the flower of my heart come out and bloomed.So I kept on doing that until an old lady once stared at me without saying a word when I gave my seat to her.I felt as if I would never do that again and got off of the bus.Apparently, the simple smile and words motivate people to do more moral things for the ones needing help while everyone is longing for a “thanks” when they do things for you.Your reactions are really important to others.If we are ignored by the ones who take your seat, do not be sad and keep on doing the things we think are right.We might be disappointed ,or even sad, when we are ignored as our own view.But have you ever thought that the impolite actions might be reasonable? Maybe those individuals were in a bad mood and did not tend to talk to anyone else.Or maybe they just got some bad news of their body and were extremely week so that they could not make an reaction.Standing in others view can always alleviate our disappointment on them and encourage us to keep on the good things.We should always believe that the world ,with our positive outlook and action, will be increasingly beautiful and warm and advance morally.In conclusion, we should continue to give seats to others and give others a thank you and a smile when they do the same to us.Like the saying : “Giving others roses and the scent will remain.” Let’s make our slightest action as a gift to others and contribute to a happier world positively.Directions: Chinese people always have the tradition of helping others;regardless of a friend or a stranger.However, in recent years, people find that when they try to help others, some changes are taking places.One of the most common examples is that, a passer-by who sent an injured senior people to hospital would be very likely to be recognized as the accident-maker.This kind of events is being rerun again and again.When trapped in the dilemma of tradition and trouble, what would be your choice?

The rose's in others’ hand, the flavor in mine.News about helping others but getting punished are often seen these days with negative effects.Inevitably, debate has arisen: whether or not we should keep on helping others? People think variously.As far as I am concerned, I would choose to keep on helping others and deepen the Chinese moral value of helping others in my mind for reasons below.To begin with, helping others, one regarded as our traditionally moral value, enhance the positive power of our society.For example,Lei Feng , one that always help others in his life, behaved as a positive moral role, teaching children of China to help others and awaking public of their social responsibilities.Apparently, we can see that if you do minors to help ones, then those who receive your help are more likely to help others, thus enhancing the positive power of our society.Furthermore, giving others a hand while they are in need can make ourselves more confident and happy.As a student, have you ever taught your classmates on how to work out a hard exercise? If your answer is yes, then you must have felt the sense of happiness and confidence from the bottom of your heart.Similarly, when we give others a hand, regardless of what way you do that, you will feel the real warm and happy like raising a flower till they broom in the spring.Of course, you do not have to help others every time they need you.Concern about your power carefully before you help others.Do not risk your life to help them impulsively!If you can not help one immediately, you can turn to the adults or think about other ways to make it.In a nutshell, the major reasons why we should help others, although there are some other minors, have been discussed above.What we should do is attempt to help others no matter what the man think of you.Hopefully, the discussion would exert further concern of public in order to search a better answer and many individuals have changed their mind.Is that meaningful?

9Topic:

Should We Follow Fashions?

Directions:

Some people say that fashion is just for selling clothes, so we should not follow it and we should dress what we like and feel comfortable in it.How far do you agree with them? Write an essay on the following topic: should we follow fashions?

Requirements:

Illustrate your view on the topic with no less than 250 words and write down your opinions and reasons so long as they are reasonable.Should We Follow Fashions?

Chasing fashion is always a hot topic among teenagers and adults.Inevitably, debate has arisen: Whether or not should we follow the fashions? People think variously.As far as I am concerned, We should follow the fashions properly as discussed below.To begin with, following the trend is not just for special outlook, it is also believed as a way of keeping our pace with the world.As is known to all, many individuals are not willing to catch up with the advance trend, leading to their common position all their lives.Obviously, following the fashion is one of the ways to keep pace with the changing world.If you tend to lead the advanced culture and contribute to a new world, you have to follow the fashion first.Furthermore, chasing the fashion is not a waste of money but a kind of invest to your outlook which enhance your social position.It is accepted by many manager that they would more like staff with fashion outlook than those who are out of fashion as a result of the fashionable ones always come up with more creative ideas and make more innovation.From that we can see that if you follow the trend ,you will get advantages over others in chances and social position.However, everything is never without its drawbacks.Some individuals, especially teenagers, lack self-control in terms of the money they spend on fashion.We have to know that our chasing fashion is based on our well-being life and enough disposable deposit.Fortunately, schools and medias have taken some measures to address the issue.In a nutshell, the major reasons why we should follow the fashion ,although there are some other minors, have been discussed above.What we should do is properly follow the fashion.Hopefully, the discussion would exert further concern of public in order to search a better answer and lead public to the real fashion.Is that meaningful?

第二篇：創(chuàng)新英語作文大賽作文練習(xí)

Directions: Would you expect a “thank you” when you give your seat to an old man, or a woman with her baby? How do you feel if they take your seat without even taking a look at you? Would you be angry? You are given 60 minutes to state your view on the topic within less than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.―Thank you‖—a powerful gift

Recently, some individuals would not give their seats to the old or the pregnant as the result of no reaction given back.Naturally, problems arouses: Must we demand a ―thank you‖ when we give a seat to others? As my opinion, a ―thank you‖ is both beneficial to the seat sharers and the ones who take the seat.A smile and a ―thank you‖ paid back can promote the phenomenon of giving seats and enhance the moral value of the society.The first time Igave my seats to a pregnant and she smiled to me saying ―thank you‖.That time I felt the flower of my heart come out and bloomed.So I kept on doing that until an old lady once stared at me without saying a word when I gave my seat to her.I felt as if I would never do that again and got off of the bus.Apparently, the simple smile and words motivate people to do more moral things for the ones needing help while everyone is longing for a ―thanks‖ when they do things for you.Your reactions are really important to others.If we are ignored by the ones who take your seat, do not be sad and keep on doing the things we think are right.We might be disappointed ,or even sad, when we are ignored as our own view.But have you ever thought that the impolite actions might be reasonable? Maybe those individuals were in a bad mood and did not tend to talk to anyone else.Or maybe they just got some bad news of their body and were extremely week so that they could not make an reaction.Standing in others view can always alleviate our disappointment on them and encourage us to keep on the good things.We should always believe that the world ,with our positive outlook and action, will be increasingly beautiful and warm and advance morally.In conclusion, we should continue to give seats to others and give others a thank you and a smile when they do the same to us.Like the saying : ―Giving others roses and the scent will remain.‖ Let’s make our slightest action as a gift to others and contribute to a happier world positively.Directions: Chinese people always have the tradition of helping others;regardless of a friend or a stranger.However, in recent years, people find that when they try to help others, some changes are taking places.One of the most common examples is that, a passer-by who sent an injured senior people to hospital would be very likely to be recognized as the accident-maker.This kind of events is being rerun again and again.When trapped in the dilemma of tradition and trouble, what would be your choice?

有一句話推薦你思考一下：Virtue is its own reward.其實這個話題就是對這句話的思考。

The rose's in others’ hand, the flavor in mine.News about helping others but getting punished are often seen these days with negative effects.我知道你開頭想表達最近又有什么社會現(xiàn)象??，這是很常見的開頭套路，針對它的翻譯也基本很難耍出什么新鮮花樣，所以干脆換中文表達：最近我們常?？吹竭@樣的新聞??。這個思路挺好的，但是with negative effects 很奇怪，去掉就可以了。

修改1：News about helping others but getting punished are often seen these days.但是被懲罰？不確切，應(yīng)該是付出了代價，沒有好下場之類的。

修改2：Good deeds can cost you a large fortune – it is nothing new in today’s China.Inevitably, debate has arisen: whether or not we should keep on helping others? People think variously.縱觀全文，中式英語是硬傷啊，你的詞匯量神馬絕對不是問題，但是用的是否準(zhǔn)確就難說了。解決這個問題的方法很簡單啊，積累，不要局限于導(dǎo)致，結(jié)果，因此這些邏輯連接詞，任何可以精簡你的文章的動詞和名詞都可以啊。

inevitably是個很高大上的單詞，但是“難免的”用在這里有點過了。類似于：人們觀點各不相同，人們議論紛紛這種很明顯是湊字?jǐn)?shù)，完全可以刪除的話就扔掉吧，把你的精力用在更實際的演繹推理上。

whether or not后面引導(dǎo)了賓語從句，陳述語序后面你加了問號？口語中可以，但是寫作就顯得不正式了。

修改：As a result, people often find themselves between a rock and a hard place whenever they run across a person in need of help.On the one hand, they are in fear of being wrongly identified;on the other hand, they are morally obliged to lend a hand.其實我修改的內(nèi)容也是對話題的重復(fù)，但是如果你有把握用不同的短語和角度把事情表達一遍也可以，如果沒有把握干脆就避開直奔主題。

As far as I am concerned, I would choose to keep on helping others and deepen the Chinese moral value of helping others in my mind for reasons below.加深我心中的價值觀？有點怪怪的??

修改：As far as I am concerned, despite all the possible consequences, I would still insist on helping others, as ―virtue is its own reward‖.好了，接下來就有點難在你的文章上動刀了，因為我們倆的出發(fā)點不一樣。但是，我可以把我的邏輯給你看看。

我的總觀點很簡單，因為美德本身就是一種獎勵（A），所以我愿意繼續(xù)幫助別人（B）。那么我接下來必須要證明為什么美德本身就是一種獎勵，（好難?。^T）

1.幫助別人能讓自己快樂。為什么？會給自己有價值的感覺。

2.幫助別人能夠幫助自己。為什么？因為能散播正能量，避免自己在需要幫助的時候沒人幫助自己；善有惡報的確是很糟糕的事情，但是因為少數(shù)人的錯誤而放棄幫助別人，只會讓社會越來越黑暗。

我覺得對于你現(xiàn)在而言，練習(xí)不是重要的，重要的修改自己的作文，把你自己覺得不妥的地方畫出來，反復(fù)替換表達，直到找到最妥帖的為止。然后把這些你覺得特別好的表達和觀點總結(jié)背下來。同時找一些相關(guān)的文章看看，盡量找老外寫的。

多積累動詞，多造句，多背精煉的名言，并去體悟里面的道理。

好吧，最后講一下如何修改作文，其實很簡單

1.找語法錯誤

2.找不確定的地方，然后通過英英詞典確定用法

以第一段為例，黃色是語法錯誤，綠色是我不確定的地方

To begin with, helping others, one regarded as our traditionally moral value, enhance the positive power of our society.For example,Lei Feng , one that always help others in his life, behaved as a positive moral role, teaching children of China to help others and awaking public of their social responsibilities.Apparently, we can see that if you do minors to help ones, then those who receive your help are more likely to help others, thus enhancing the positive power of our society.剩下的你自己先改改看吧，我再給你找一篇參照閱讀

我摘錄一點給你看看，如果你有興趣就去看全文把 Basically it means that being a virtuous person is in your self-interest(It would benefit you).In other words being a moral person has a reward on its own.For example If you see an old man fall and you help him up, it would make you feel good about yourself.對你有好處，這一段就有三種替換方法：be in your self-interest, benefit sb., has a reward on its own

Business ethics? Hmm..I'm not sure.You can include what Plato said about being a virtuous person.He said virtues are intrinsic to self-interest;he argued that there are 3 main virtues that we must all have: wisdom, courage and self-discipline.intrinsic,（價值或性質(zhì)）固有的，本質(zhì)的，多么牛掰的一個詞，我可以在自己的文章里說： According to Plato, there are 3 main virtues that we must have – wisdom, courage and self-discipline.If we give up extending our kindness to others due to fear, we lose the courage to face the evil, the wisdom to judge, the self-discipline that keeps the society in order.So instead of walking away and being tortured by the guilt brought by our intrinsic virtue, coming to people’s help is beneficial for both the helpers and the ones in trouble.用上了吧，而且內(nèi)容立刻深刻了。（我得意的笑~）

還有，這句話我找到了一個完整版

Virtue is its own reward, and brings with it the truest and highest pleasure;but if we cultivate it only for pleasure's sake, we are selfish, not religious, and will never gain the pleasure, because we can never have the virtue.Furthermore, giving others a hand while they are in need can make ourselves more confident and happy.As a student, have you ever taught your classmates on how to work out a hard exercise? If your answer is yes, then you must have felt the sense of happiness and confidence from the bottom of your heart.Similarly, when we give others a hand, regardless of what way you do that,you will feel the real warm and happy like raising a flower till they broom in the spring.Of course, you do not have to help others every time they need you.Concern about your power carefully before you help others.Do not risk your life to help them impulsively!If you can not help one immediately, you can turn to the adults or think about other ways to make it.In a nutshell, the major reasons why we should help others, although there are some other minors, have been discussed above.What we should do is attempt to help others no matter what the man think of you.Hopefully, the discussion would exert further concern of public in order to search a better answer and many individuals have changed their mind.Is that meaningful?

9Topic:

Should We Follow Fashions?

Directions:

Some people say that fashion is just for selling clothes, so we should not follow it and we should dress what we like and feel comfortable in it.How far do you agree with them? Write an essay on the following topic: should we follow fashions?

Requirements:

Illustrate your view on the topic with no less than 250 words and write down your opinions and reasons so long as they are reasonable.Should We Follow Fashions?

Chasing fashion is always a hot topic among teenagers and adults.Inevitably, debate has arisen: Whether or not should we follow the fashions? People think variously.As far as I am concerned, We should follow the fashions properly as discussed below.To begin with, following the trend is not just for special outlook, it is also believed as a way of keeping our pace with the world.As is known to all, many individuals are not willing to catch up with the advance trend, leading to their common position all their lives.Obviously, following the fashion is one of the ways to keep pace with the changing world.If you tend to lead the advanced culture and contribute to a new world, you have to follow the fashion first.Furthermore, chasing the fashion is not a waste of money but a kind of invest to your outlook which enhance your social position.It is accepted by many manager that they would more like staff with fashion outlook than those who are out of fashion as a result of the fashionable ones always come up with more creative ideas and make more innovation.From that we can see that if you follow the trend ,you will get advantages over others in chances and social position.However, everything is never without its drawbacks.Some individuals, especially teenagers, lack self-control in terms of the money they spend on fashion.We have to know that our chasing fashion is based on our well-being life and enough disposable deposit.Fortunately, schools and medias have taken some measures to address the issue.In a nutshell, the major reasons why we should follow the fashion ,although there are some other minors, have been discussed above.What we should do is properly follow the fashion.Hopefully, the discussion would exert further concern of public in order to search a better answer and lead public to the real fashion.Is that meaningful?

第三篇：創(chuàng)新英語作文大賽作文

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Topic:

第二部分題目

Directions: Addison said,“Every man should have a purpose in life.A man without a purpose lives on, like a cabbage in a field, but he knows no life.” According to him, having a purpose in life is very important for us.With Addison’s words as your point, write an essay with no less than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.用法：艾迪生說，“每個人在生活中應(yīng)該有一個目的。一個人要有目標(biāo),否則根本就不懂生活”據(jù)他介紹，而有個生活目標(biāo)對于我們來說是非常重要的。艾迪生的話，你的觀點，不少于300個詞寫一篇文章。你可以自己添加標(biāo)題。

第四篇：創(chuàng)新英語大賽作文

“The more you do, the more mistakes you will make.” This is true, but we can not avoid making mistakes.Mistakes are indispensable.When we grow up and on the way to success, we have to face all sorts of problems and make many choices.Sometimes we make mistakes—we are in big trouble and we However, as long as we are doing what we like, we feel happy.Also, making mistake is a kind of “I was so stupid at that time”, but we will never regret—what we have done are for our dreams!Yes, mistakes may make our life journey difficult and challenging, but that is what really makes life meaningful and beautiful, isn’t it?

But what can we do now? Parents always want to “protect” us from making mistakes, so they don’t give us too many chances to try.They don’t want us to be someone who is “unusual”, but tell us to be what they want us to be.We are in a hard situation—we want to achieve our own dreams, but our parents want us to do things as they tell us to.We also love our parents, we don’t want to let them down.So we choose to listen to them instead of following our heart most of the time.However, I really want to say: dear parents, can you give us an opportunity to be ourselves? We will never really grow up and learn until we start making our own mistakes.Mistakes are our valuable wealth.Without them, our lives will be incomplete.Finally, it is natural for us to make some mistakes.Though we may be hurt sometimes, we learn more from them.The things we learn and the experiences we have will be of good help in the future, and we will have a better tomorrow.“The more you do, the more mistakes you will make.” This is true, but we can not avoid making mistakes.Mistakes are indispensable.When we grow up and on the way to success, we have to face all sorts of problems and make many choices.Sometimes we make mistakes—we are in big trouble and we really want and need in our lives.Also, as long as we are doing what we like, we feel happy.Many years later, when we think about the mistakes we have made, we may laugh and say: “I was so stupid at that time”, but we will never regret—what we have done are for our dreams!Yes, mistakes may make our life journey difficult and challenging, but that is what really makes life meaningful and beautiful, isn’t it?

But what can we do now? Parents always want to “protect” us from making mistakes, so they don’t give us too many chances to try.They don’t want us to be someone who is “unusual”, but tell us to be what they want us to be.We are in a hard situation—we want to achieve our own dreams, but our parents want us to do things as they tell us to.We also love our parents, we don’t want to let them down.So we choose to listen to them instead of following our heart most of the time.However, I really want to say: dear parents, can you give us an opportunity to be ourselves? We will never really grow up and learn until we start making our own mistakes.Mistakes are our valuable wealth.Without them, our lives will be incomplete.Finally, it is natural for us to make some mistakes.Though we may be hurt sometimes, we learn more from them.The things we learn and the experiences we have will be of good help in the future, and we will have a better tomorrow.

第五篇：英語創(chuàng)新作文大賽題目

題目

Directions: Addison said,“Every man should have a purpose in life.A man without a purpose lives on, like a cabbage in a field, but he knows no life.” According to him, having a purpose in life is very important for us.With Addison’s words as your point, write an essay with no less than 300 words.You can add a title by yourself.人生目標(biāo)（詞語解析）

常常有人問；我從哪里來，我要到哪里去，卻不問我到這里干什么，有什么任務(wù) 人生目標(biāo)的不選擇，可以看看豬是沒有選擇的，牛是沒有選擇的，春去冬來，與葉同腐。是一種自然現(xiàn)象。牛其以耕地卻不懂鳥會飛翔。人生目標(biāo)的錯誤選擇 人生目標(biāo)有什么任務(wù)呢？當(dāng)然是來這里適應(yīng)這個世界，適應(yīng)及促成這個宇宙的從無到有的規(guī)律。如果反對規(guī)律，此乃毀滅，這在宇宙沒出生之前的時間已經(jīng)度過了，沒意思的，所以一定要促成這個宇宙的從無到有的規(guī)律，才有意思，再說反對規(guī)律就是到處碰壁，拿石頭砸自己的腳，是自毀，是很痛的，是下下策，是不動腦子的，被貧窮所迫的，被自己腦子惰性限制所迫的，被因為選擇反對規(guī)律被規(guī)律折磨的造成腦子惰性限制所迫

概述

每個人都有自己的目標(biāo)，我所說的人生目標(biāo)是：作為一名有志之士。

我的目標(biāo)是成為一個企業(yè)家，我的目標(biāo)是讓我的父老鄉(xiāng)親們共同富裕起來。也可以說，是自己的一個人生規(guī)劃，這個規(guī)劃在某種意義上是比較人文化，社會化的。

人生目標(biāo)使我們在規(guī)劃人生的同時可以更理性的思考自己的未來，初步嘗試性的選擇未來適合自己從事的事業(yè)和生活，盡早（多從學(xué)生時代）開始培養(yǎng)自己綜合能力和綜合素質(zhì)。每個人都應(yīng)該有自己的目標(biāo)，并為之而奮斗。上帝讓每個人都玩同樣的游戲就是“人生”。只要好好走下去就會是最后的贏家！朝著自己的目標(biāo)奮斗吧！

如何制定

一、你的目標(biāo)必須是長期的。

沒有長期的目標(biāo)，你也許就會被短期的種種挫折所擊倒。設(shè)定了長期的目標(biāo)后，起初不要試圖去克服所有的阻礙。就像你早上離家不可能等路口所有的交通燈都是綠色你才出門，你是一個一個地通過紅綠燈，你不但能走到你目力所及的地方，而且當(dāng)你到達那里時，你常常能見到更遠(yuǎn)的地方。

二、你的目標(biāo)必須是特定的。

一個獵人，當(dāng)他面對樹上的一群鳥時，如果說他能打下幾只鳥的話，那么他肯定不是向這群鳥射擊，幾只鳥的收獲一定是獵人瞄準(zhǔn)特定目標(biāo)的結(jié)果。

三、你的目標(biāo)一定要遠(yuǎn)大。

一旦你確定只走1公里路的目標(biāo)，在完成還不到1公里時，你便有可能感覺到累而松懈自己，因為反正快到目標(biāo)了。然而，如果你的目標(biāo)是要走10公里路，你便會作好思想及其他一切必要的準(zhǔn)備，并調(diào)動各方面的潛在力量，一鼓作氣走完7、8公里后，才可能會稍微松懈一下自己。

四、你必須實踐自己的目標(biāo)。

五、你的人生大目標(biāo)并不一定要詳細(xì)精確。只要有個較明確的方向和大致程度要求就可以，例如立志做個卓越的科學(xué)家、立志做個大企業(yè)家或是立志做個改變世界的政治家等等。

成功價值

第一、目標(biāo)能夠使你看清自己的使命；

第二、目標(biāo)能讓你安排事情的輕重緩急；

第三、目標(biāo)引導(dǎo)你發(fā)揮潛能；

第四、目標(biāo)使你有能力把握現(xiàn)在；

第五、目標(biāo)有助你評估事業(yè)的進展情況；

第六、目標(biāo)為你提供了一種自我評估的重要手段；

第七、目標(biāo)使你未雨綢繆；

第八、目標(biāo)使你把工作重點從工作本身轉(zhuǎn)到工作成果上；

第九、目標(biāo)能使你認(rèn)識到自己的人生價值。