第一篇：第十一屆全國創(chuàng)新英語大賽細則

“安博杯”第十一屆全國創(chuàng)新英語大賽復賽考試細則

為了規(guī)范第十一屆全國創(chuàng)新英語大賽的復賽考試工作，建立公開、公平、公正的考試制度，保證第十一屆全國創(chuàng)新英語大賽考試質量，根據組委會相關規(guī)定，制定本辦法。

一、復賽場地查看

1.時間：2012年7月14日下午15:00~17:00

2.地點：各賽區(qū)考點

二、考試時間：2012年7月15日

（一）聽力、作文考試時間 2012年7月15日上午8：30-9：50。

8：00――8：15核對證件 選手進入考場

8：15――8：20宣讀比賽準則

8：25――8：30發(fā)放答題紙

8：30――9：50聽力、作文筆試

9：50――10：30休息，下午進行口語比賽的選手離場

（二）口語考試時間 2012年7月15日上午10：30-12：30，下午13:30-18：00。

10：10A組口語比賽的選手進入侯考區(qū)

10：30――12：30A組口語比賽時間

13：10B組口語比賽的選手進入候考區(qū)

13：30――15：30B組口語比賽時間

15：40C組口語比賽的選手進入候考區(qū)

16：00――18：00C組口語比賽時間

三、復賽選手參加考試必帶材料：

1．準考證；

2．身份證（無身份證選手可以使用臨時身份證或者附有蓋章照片的戶籍證明）；

3．準考證必須和身份證同時使用才有效（無身份證選手請參考以上第2條）；

4．準考證以大賽報名系統(tǒng)顯示為準，禁止擅自修改，一經發(fā)現，取消考試資格；

5．鋼筆或簽字筆（黑色或藍色）、2B鉛筆（聽力比賽使用）、橡皮。

四、聽力考試

（一）考試辦法

1.聽力考試時間為20分鐘。

2.聽力試題由試題命題組命制，考試當天要求在全體選手監(jiān)督下拆封試卷和聽力資料。

3.考試結束后，由監(jiān)考老師當場裝訂并密封試卷。

（二）聽力評審

1.復賽聽力評分辦法：復賽結束后，全國各地的試卷匯總到北京賽區(qū)，統(tǒng)一閱卷評分。

2.所有試卷閱卷老師無法看見學生的考號、姓名等個人信息

3.聽力成績占總體復賽成績的20%。

五、作文考試

（一）考試辦法

1.現場限時作文一篇（時間60分鐘，字數不少于300字）。

2.復賽作文題目由參與本次大賽的部分高校分別命制并組成題庫，考試當天由北京主考區(qū)考生家長當場隨機抽取一道題目；北京主賽區(qū)抽題結束，組委會連線全國其他15個考點告知考試作文題目。

3.考試結束后，由監(jiān)考老師當場裝訂并密封試卷。

（二）作文評審

1.復賽作文評委：復賽評委由參與本次大賽的部分高校選派的英語教學專家、教師組成。

2.復賽作文評分辦法：復賽結束后，全國各地的試卷匯總到北京賽區(qū)，統(tǒng)一閱卷評分。

3.閱卷分為A、B組，每組設一個評卷組組長，組長由著名高校的英語專家擔任，組長負責把控作文的閱卷標準、閱卷進度。作文由A、B組老師各閱1遍，取平均分為考生的最終成績。

4.如果同一份試卷，A、B組閱卷分數相差5分（不包括5分）以上，將由復審專家進行復審。

5.所有試卷閱卷老師無法看見學生的考號、姓名等個人信息。

6.作文成績占總體復賽成績的60%。

六、口語考試

（一）、比賽辦法

1.口語試題由參與本次大賽的部分高校分別命制口語題庫。

2.分賽區(qū)所有選手由組委會事先由電腦程序自動生成口語比賽順序，選手準考證上可看到自己的進場侯考時間。

3.參加口語比賽的選手應在規(guī)定時間，在指定的考場外等待考試，按照順序依次進場考試。

4.選手進入口語考場后，將準考證交給考場工作人員，由選手本人在考試機器上輸入自己的準考證號，進入系統(tǒng)后，選手確認個人信息無誤后，開始考試。

（二）、口語評審

1.復賽口語評委：復賽口語評委由參與本次大賽的部分高校選派的英語教學專家、教師組成。

2.全國創(chuàng)新英語大賽組委會對本次考試全程錄音。

3.復賽口語評分辦法：復賽結束后，由評委老師根據選手口語考試錄音。每一個選手的錄音由兩個考官進行打分，取兩個考官的平均分復核確定最終成績。

4.口語考試占復賽總體成績的20%。

（三）、口語題型

口語比賽題型分為：自我介紹和話題陳述。

各占10分。

自我介紹：考生有10秒的時間閱讀考試要求，在系統(tǒng)提示可以陳述之后，考生有60秒的陳述時間，自我介紹內容包括：

My name is?

My number is?

I have a dream?

話題陳述：系統(tǒng)隨機抽題，選手有30秒的準備時間，在系統(tǒng)提示可以陳述之后，有90秒的陳述時間。

七、評分和獎項：

1.選手復賽成績?yōu)椋?0%的聽力成績+20%的口語成績+60%的作文成績。

2.大賽復賽獲獎者均可獲得參加此項大賽自主招生高校相應的自主招生等優(yōu)惠條件。

3.復賽結果請于8月初登陸創(chuàng)新英語網（）、騰訊網、新浪網查詢。

八、考場紀律要求

1.考生進入考場，只準帶必需的文具，如鋼筆、簽字筆、鉛筆、橡皮等，不可攜帶任何書籍、紙張、筆記本、電子詞典、字典等任何作弊材料及工具。手機等通訊工具必須關閉，否則立即取消考試資格。

2.禁止家長跟隨考生進入考區(qū)，家長可在考區(qū)之外等候考生。

3.筆試開考前15分鐘（即8：15）之后，考生不得進入考場考試。

4.考試時間內如有特殊情況經監(jiān)考同意后可暫時離開考場，但必須有監(jiān)考人員陪同。除此之外，離開考室均須交卷并不得返回續(xù)考。

5.聽力、作文考試時，考生答題一律用黑、藍色鋼筆或簽字筆書寫?？忌鹁頃r，要先在試卷指定位置填寫姓名、考號。凡姓名、考號漏填或字跡模糊不清、無法辨認的，該試卷一律作廢。

6.考試結束時間一到，考生必須立即停止答卷，并將試卷背面朝上放置在課桌上。不準將試卷和分發(fā)的稿紙帶走，提前交卷的考生不得在考場附近逗留、談論。

7.考生在考試時不準偷看他人的答卷或有意讓人抄襲，不準交頭接耳。凡有作弊行為的考生，一律取消考試資格。

8.嚴禁考生作弊，如發(fā)現冒名頂替、代考等作弊現象，當即取消其參賽資格，并通知考生所在中學。

9.有下列行徑者，考官可以當場取消考試資格：

（1）由他人冒名頂替考試的；

（2）擾亂考場秩序的；

（3）在試卷卷面非署名處署名或作標記對評卷人員進行提示的；

（4）不尊重監(jiān)考和主考，擾亂考試，情節(jié)嚴重的。

《高校招生》雜志社

全國創(chuàng)新英語大賽組委會

2012年7月

第二篇：第十一屆 全國創(chuàng)新英語作文大賽 (經典)

Topic: Moms and dads, please let us fly.Conversations:

Parents: Take good care of yourself, my boy.Boy: Yeah, I’ll.And you，too.Parents: Don’t forget to check your passport again before boarding the plane.Watch out your belongings, and don’t be shy to ask your host family for help if you make any mistakes, of course you can call us as well.And, oh…

Boy: Don’t worry, mom and dad.I promise to only make mistakes you never made.Composition:

As can be seen in the picture, there stands a merrily boy who is well-packed.Maybe he is going to be an exchange student.And his parents are saying goodbye to him by their house.This picture conveys the message that the couple gives the freedom of practice to their child.They allow him to break a path by himself so that he can adapt to the society easily and finally lead a rich and varied life although they worry a lot about their little boy.Just as the message above shows, our parents usually think too much of us, because they want us to be a perfect one.They tell us what we should do and what shouldn’t, ignoring our thoughts.They just don’t think what we are interested in is beneficial to our growth.They love us in an unsuitable way.Actually, in our opinions, we think we need chances to make mistakes.Because we will go through a process of making mistakes, during which we experience

and learn a lot.So, for this point of view, I advice parents respecting and encourage the personality of their children.And the most effective way is taking part in society activities.For one reason, with the rapid development of information technology in the 21st century, our society needs an increasing number of talents who have not only extraordinary ability of knowledge but also the teamwork spirit and sense of cooperation, but not the ones who are spoilt by their parents.Another reason is that there exists intense competition in modern society.So in order to have our own places in society, we must make full preparations through experiencing setbacks and challenge them.If parents follow the principles above, there will be a much happier and more harmonious relationship between parents and us.What’s more, for us, these experiences and rebirths will also be invaluable to character building, making them more independent, diligent and enterprising.Moms and dads, we need opportunities to make mistakes, only in this way can we stand a better chance.So you may rest assured that we will not fail your expectations.If you love us, just let ourselves go!

第三篇：第十一屆語文創(chuàng)新作文大賽

閱讀能力測試（1）

1、作者通過通過賓夕法尼亞大學近期的一項實驗發(fā)現：人們不愿關注那種那種泛泛的信息，他們更有可能會捐錢給某一特定受害者。即人類相比于關注社會性的貧窮問題，更愿意關注個人性的貧困問題。

2、人們在面對貧窮等問題時第一反應是慷慨，但由于自己能力有限而所需捐款數額巨大，而往往覺得自己的捐款起不到什么幫助。

3、人們總是會對捐款的最終去處產生擔憂，因此人們總是懷疑捐款的安全性和真實性。

4、人們的想法過于極端，會覺得捐款毫無用處或覺得捐款就可以解決一切問題或者其他。

5、人們總是只注重捐款，而不注重提高貧窮地區(qū)人們的整體素質。

6、人們總是去思考如何解決貧窮，但由于實施起來難度太大，總是不去做。

7、人們總是夸大捐款的作用，不去幫貧困地區(qū)人們提高積極性和生產力，不能從根本上解決貧窮問題。

8、注重捐款的過程而不注重捐款如何去用，不了解貧困者心理狀態(tài)，不能做到對癥下藥，讓捐款起到應起的作用。導致了捐款的盲目性。

9、不去了解貧困者真正的生活困境及其特殊性表現，不去思考如何消除貧窮。（2）

貧窮與富有是相對的，兩者有著密不可分。在我看來，未來世界將會更加“貧窮”，但最終會趨于穩(wěn)定。全世界都存在貧富差距，并普遍認同意大利經濟學家創(chuàng)立的基尼系數，并將0.4設為警戒線。我沒有讀過資本論，但有幸涉獵了一些經濟學。如果資本家可以通過做生意賺取2000萬人民幣的話，他可能只需要拿出500萬來給工人開工資。剩余的1500萬就被資本家給剝削掉了。而這個世界上有著許許多多的資本家，也就是說這個世界的大部分財富掌握在這少部分人手中。那些貧窮的人因為教育資源的匱乏和趨于飽和的市場等問題就難以有為。而原來的那些資本家與他們的后代可以憑借先前的資本進行越來越大的“剝削”。長此以往，越來越多的財富會聚集在越來越少的人身上，而基尼系數也就會越來越大。但過大的貧富差距如果不在體制或規(guī)則上進行制約，社會必會以動蕩乃至崩潰的方式來強令其調整。所以我想未來世界相比現在會再“貧窮”一些，不過終將趨于穩(wěn)定。創(chuàng)新作文寫作

高考之外

六月斑斕的風，浮在臉頰上的青春，我們在一起的時光。高中三年對于每個人來說都是一次考驗和一段美好的記憶，不同的態(tài)度可以產生不同的結果。在浩如煙海的試卷里，許多人還未高考就急于否定自己，最后拿到了“理所應當”的成績，但其實低谷并不可怕，可怕的是你自己急著承認失??！許多人的高考之路失敗了，但也有許多人通過高考而實現了人生的逆轉。落榜兩次最終考上北京大學的新東方創(chuàng)始人俞敏洪，從全班倒數第一成為正數第一并最終考入中國傳媒大學的央視主持人白巖松，高考前拼盡全力學習而考上清華大學的暢銷書作家高曉松。我們身邊從來就不缺少高考勵志的小故事，高考也確實改變了許多人，讓許多有才之人可以憑自己努力來實現夢想。高考有著它最大的特點——公平。但高考真的是我們成才的唯一出路嗎?如果不通過高考我們就不能獲得好的教育，從而擁有美好的生活嗎?到底什么樣的人才適合高考之外的那些路徑呢？

事實是，條條大路通羅馬，高考并不是唯一的成才之路，在高考之外，萬千學子仍有著許多方法和機會去實現各自的理想，只要有信念。說到韓寒，可謂無人不知無人不曉。成功逆襲的他已然成為青少年的新一代勵志偶像。高二時，處于青春叛逆期的他懷著對傳統(tǒng)流水線教育模式的不滿憤然退學，開啟了另一種奮斗模式。他通過自己的執(zhí)著和堅持不懈的努力，憑借辛辣的筆觸迅速崛起，在新文學論壇開辟了屬于自己的一片江山。當許多成績不好的憤

青也想模仿韓寒以為可以輕而易舉獲得成功時，韓寒卻說：“照亮我前途的不是七門功課紅燈，而是才華。”是的，韓寒的成功不是每個人都可以復制，因為讓他走向名利雙收的從來不是他所謂的叛逆，而是他異于常人的才華和難以想象的付出。

新一代文藝女作家蔣方舟也是名噪一時。她有著和韓寒相似的文學稟賦，自7歲就開始寫作，9歲寫成散文集《打開天窗》，2008年被清華大學“破格”錄取，畢業(yè)后，就任《新周刊》雜志副主編。她也是一位桀驁不馴的人，但不像韓寒那么極端那么有棱角，而是選擇了充分利用自己文學方面的特長，順利通過保送進入清華大學，依靠清華良好的氛圍和平臺進一步成就自己。

現如今，有著越來越多的奧賽生通過保送或自主招生進入自己心儀的大學，讓不少學生分外眼紅。不過我想這些奧賽生所獲得的優(yōu)惠是他們應得的。為了理想，他們放棄了閑適的假期，無論嚴寒酷暑，終日與難題對抗，冒著偏科的危險追求自己的理科夢想，并敢于在數以萬計的考生中做一個不一樣的人。關鍵是，他們比一般考生更努力。有些成績不好的學生可能會覺得自己只是沒好好學，好像他們只要一好好學就能考到年級前幾一樣，對此，我只想說，我所在的奧賽班沒有一個人是笨蛋，但每個人都很努力。高考之外并不是指的不上大學，它是泛指除高考外實現人生目標的方法。你只有才華而沒有努力是不會取得什么成就的。只有具有才華，玩命努力，才能在高考之外找到屬于自己的天地。

一位物理學研究生曾多次與其導師討論最前沿的科技問題，而他的導師每一次的回答都是“對不起，這項研究我還沒有看?！本枚弥?，研究生就對導師的能力產生了懷疑，他忍不住去問導師他是不是已經對物理學失去興趣了。導師只是淺淺一笑，淡淡的回道：“我想你并不知道這些科技前沿新聞的價值到底是什么，它的價值在于讓你了解你研究的課題別人是不是已經研究過了，或者這項科研進行到哪一步了，距離出成果到底還要多久，而不是讓你也加入到這項研究中去。我之所以不看這些東西，是因為我已經養(yǎng)成了自己的決策論和方法論?！庇纱硕R的追求不在于多，而在于精。如果我們的學習方法自成體系，而自己恰好又才華橫溢，便可以沉醉在自己的思考中，追求自己的人生目標。別忘了，當年愛因斯坦想出相對論的過程中，他沒接受任何幫助。聰明討巧的思考方式，是高考數學搶分的關鍵。而獨具一格的思維模式，是你與別人最大的不同所在。

你所熱愛的不一定擁有，你所向往的不一定抵達，你所眷幕的不一定停駐，你所堅定的不一定持續(xù)。經過與快樂的談判，與痛苦的和解，適合你的生活方式，就是歸宿。但只有那些天生具有才華，能吃得人下苦的人才能在高考之外實現自己的人生目標。對于大部分人來說，高考才是真正的主戰(zhàn)場。

空氣流動，風的路線有一萬種。無論高考之外還是高考之內，我們的目標都是通過努力過上自己喜歡的生活，就算平平淡淡，也絕不意興闌珊。方向可以改變，但絕不能丟失，讓自己過得快樂的人，才是最大的贏家。

第四篇：2013年全國英語創(chuàng)新大賽作文

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2013年全國英語創(chuàng)新大賽模板作文

How to Eliminate Fake Diplomas

As is known to us all, jobs or something else.What’s worse, someone even takes faking diplomas as their jobs.It is generally accepted that faking diplomas does no good to not only the universities or companies but also the owners.The universities or companies may have some low-skilled students or workers, which will make the institutions suffer a lot.For the owners, faking diplomas may cause a bad thought in their mind, because they hold the opinion that faking diplomas can solve all the problems.If this trend came into being, the whole society would be in such a mess.Therefore, how to solve the problem is worth paying more attention to.What’s worse, our country may fall behind compared with other countries, if the trend continues.The following ways can be adopted to eliminate fake diplomas.Firstly, the universities and companies can have a search to see whether the diplomas are real or not online.Secondly, they can give exams to check whether they have skills.Thirdly, our government should take measures.For example, the government can set an online data base store to help universities or company check online conveniently.Last but not least, we, the civil, should set up a proper attitude to faking diplomas, and refuse to do that.And if we see someone is faking diplomas, we should give an alarm to the police in order to make a harmonious society.It's true that we need high-skilled workers, but what we need more is honesty.Only if we treat others in honesty can we set up a world in harmony.However, eliminating fake diplomas is still on the way.We need to spare no effort to do that.Only when we stop this trend can we live in a fair society.Never Give Up

As an old proverb goes, never give up.At anytime, whether giants in any field or common people, the old saying can refer to them.No doubt, only with the determination of “Never giver up” can we achieve the final success.Many remarkable reasons contribute to this argument.First of all, success usually can’t be achieved until after a lot of failures.It is not unusual for us to fail in our first attempt at something new, so we should not feel discouraged by our failures but should try again, which is the main basic spirit of “never give up”.What’s more, a lot of scientific achievements are created under the spirit.For example, if Edison had given up his research after a few failures, we might not have the electric light today.If WangXizhi once had given up his ambition to write excellently, I’m afraid we might not have the brilliant handwriting.Besides, we can develop confidence from our mistakes and failures.In addition, it also helps us to improve our skills.All mentioned above tell us that it is necessary for us to do the right things without giving up.If we give up, we will not achieve anything.Besides, if we give up, it may make us lose heart.And if we always give up when confronted with difficulties, we will not be able to develop new skills and see miracles come out

All in all, “never give up” is a basic requirement for us.Not only can we achieve success but also make us confident.We should never give up when working towards our goals.Therefore, there is no denying that we should have the determination of “Never give up”, whatever we do.Only with this belief in mind can we really achieve something.The Difference in Income Sources between American and Chinese Student

As is described in the chart, we can clearly learn that Chinese students depend on parents much more than American students.It is reported that American students get a large amount of income from their part-time jobs rather than from parents which suggests that American students are much more independent.愛心用心專心 1

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There are many reasons accounting for that case.First of all, as we all know, Chinese students are ordered to keep on studying for a long time in order to pass exams while American students have much more free time when they can earn money.Secondly American students are taught to be independent when they are young.On the other hand, Chinese students’ priority is to study well since they set foot into schools.Thirdly, American government allows children to do part-time jobs, while Chinese government doesn't.Last but not least, the college scholarships in China are not enough to meet most of Chinese students' needs.As a result, it's quite evident that why there exists such a big difference in income sources.As we all know, the way American students use to earn money will make

them much more independent, while we Chinese students will never catch up with up with them.So it’s high time that we were supposed to take measures.In my opinion, the Chinese should learn from Americans.The students should find more chances for part-time jobs in spite of parents' help, because they can not only lighten the heavy load of high tuitions fees on their family, but also gain necessary social skills and experience in communication or others.By means of doing part-time jobs, they can also have an objective view on this country, and even develop their creative ability.Therefore, Chinese students' income source should be diversified.Telephone or letter

Quite a few people take it for granted that telephone has taken the place of letters.Even some hold the opinion that we don't need letters anymore.On the other hand, some prefer to write rather than make a phone call.In my view, I'm in favor of the former.Of course, writing can organize one's thoughts more logically.By writing they express themselves more easily.But writing a letter takes a lot of time and sometimes it makes one so eager to receive his letter that he may get worried.Besides, it will cost us a lot of money if we want to write to a friend far from us.As we all know, as a convenient way to making a phone call gets more and more popular.The following reasons can account for my argument.First, the telephone provides us a quick way to get connected tothe person who we want to contact.A good example is that it takes us only a few minutes to call an ambulance by phone.Second, by making a call, we can listen to the speaker's voice on the line as if we are talking face to face, which, I believe, can strengthen the relationship between each other.Third, it suits the world's fast current on economy and life style.If we wrote instead of making a phone call, we would lose chances or right time to earn money or to develop our companies.Last but not least, with the development of Internet, the Internet telephone is more popular, which costs a little.All in all, I still hold the opinion that writing must be set aside(建議用make way)for making a phone call, because the former doesn't suit our fast steps at all.What we need is a much cheaper and fast way for daily life.（302）

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第五篇：全國創(chuàng)新英語大賽優(yōu)秀作文

題目：

Directions:

Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes.Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness.In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention.Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s)is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion.Come and join us in volunteer work right now!

On Volunteer

黃昕彤 遼寧省鞍山市鞍山一中108班

The definition of the word volunteer in Lougnan（Longman）Dictionary is someone who helps others sponstaneously（spontaneously）and willingly.That's true!Life is a style of enjoying yourself, not only by entertaing and enriding yourself, but also by the process of helping others.Undoubtfully, those volunteers reveal their great love and passion for their country.Love is the eternal theme of the world, Without hove(love), it's like birds without wings, failing to show its talents of flying, It's like spring without flowers, burying is charming fragrants in the deep soil.Their volunty work unites China, shouing the world how united Chinese people are shocking the world of its cooperation.People around the country are making their efforts to helping others, which leaves the world an impression that China is a veal country, and all the people here are like brothers and sisters, who cares a lot for others.You can never imagine how touched I was when I watched the TV program called “Moving China”.13 peasants from tangshang volunteered to help those victims of Sichuang on hearing the tremendous earthquake happened there, leaving all their farm work done in the field they sacrifiled anything and helped others at any cost, for they knew the glant pains the earthquake brings to people.They can never forget how much pains they havendertaken in the earthquake and how much help they have received from the world.They compared their own feelings to the victims and passed the splrit on.In this sense, people will pass the spirit from generation to queneration, from China to all over the world.Then, how sweet will the World be!

I have a dream that one day, I will be a member of the volunteer team.I have a dream that oneday, I'll make contributions to China however slightest it may be.I have a dream that one day I'll be a founder of a world Charity, helping people all over the world.I'm firmly convinced that it will not only be a drean for me, but also a drean for people all over China, all over the world, and for the great Global Village.專家建議：

整篇文章條理清晰，結構完整，總體感覺很好。但有個別語法錯誤，固定搭配有些用得不夠準確，建議多用課本學過的固定搭配或是詞組造句。

專家點評：

文章語言流暢，運用了修辭手法，展現出一定的語言功底。此外，論據生動有力，讓人信服。如果句子之間的多用些關聯詞就更好了。

陳茜 江蘇省哈爾濱市第三中學高三18班

Dear grandfather:

How are you?

I am writing to invite you to join us, in the next year, to be a voluntear in the great event, which is to hold in Shanghai.We, a generation born in the 90s in our city, have made a team to do the volunteer work.And you are welcomed by all our team members awing to your great amount of knowledge about Chinese traditions and culture.Please don't tell me you are too old to do this job.I believe you are sure to accept my invitation after reading my following explannation of the importance of the volunteer work.Nowadays, volunteer work, which has raised public interest and concern, is becomming more and more popular throughout the world.As is known to all, volunteer work is not only meaningful but also necessary.One my personal wete, what's more, it's interesting and pleasant!It help us develop oursel.Firstly, for individuals, especially those young, to do volunteer work is an awailuabe wany to goin social experience.By doing volunteer work, they can meet vorrious people and they may run across all kinds of troubles.They however, can become mature and determined by solving these problems.You know, no pains, no gains.Also, individuals will realize that they do make a difference in someone else's life, even the whole event, the world!Their confidence can be rovised and confidence is what it takes to do any job well.For families, if you're the side that received the help of the volunteers, of couse your issue will be more easily dealt with.If you're the side who give others your hand, you will realize there exists no better way to educate your children that “a virtwre deserues amother” because you'll get the best presentsmall at first, contained within its banks, flood passionally then merged into the sea, for the sense of moral considerations.And now, I quite support to be a volunteer.We can never forget these moving scenes: A group of adolecents from Beijing dashed to the City of Wenchuan who gave up their comfortable living situations and picked up the heavy burden to save people buried into the ground, while a middle aged white collar who threw away his computer and salary came here to fetch wictims' lives from the death.It is volunteers who rushed to this place which has suffered from the catastrophe that gave a great help to those victims in need.A volunteer can support a piece of sky, and this one reason I am eager to join them.Secondly, only a volunteer who is in active part in Beijing Olympic Games will he give a great help to those losers.It is volunteers who gave us a warm welcome to Beijing that put the glorious sports meeting from in chaos to in order.A person, as we know, who hasn’t join into the group of volunteer is one of the unfortunate victims of this society which is occupied with love.All of us are in high pressure in this adverse circumstance.Our mind catches hold of something and will not let it go, if we choose the way to argue with the mind, the stronger the will, the more fuitile the task, so we, should choose a way to help others, to see the smile from others.Then the pressure get out suiftly.I always go into rapture at a mere mention of being a volunteer and regard it as a person who is eager to help others or a group not in the same class with the suburban social-climbers.It seems a cliché but a saying which is an infallibility that a splendid case can not leave a volunteer just as a fish can not live without water.專家點評：作者盡量用到了一些高級詞語和句型，表明作者有一定的英語功底，但是小的錯誤頻發(fā)，如單詞拼寫，語法問題，句子邏輯，這在某一方面也表明作者的基本功有待提高，繼續(xù)努力。

專家建議：用詞準確是寫作的基礎。對于學習英語的中國學生來說，背單詞擴大詞匯量是有必要的，但遺憾的是，學生們背的大都是單詞的“外殼”，記的大都是單詞的表意或字典提供的大致意思，而基本上忽視了詞在語境中的作用和詞的“精神”。這種只記單詞表意的學習方法對提高語言的運用能力，特別是寫作能力是極其不利的。

Let us shine

徐葉子 江蘇省張家港市張家港外國語學校高二4班

Volunteers are just like diamonds in the sun, and the diamonds are forever, especially the youth.Volunteer work is just like a miracle.From the May 12th earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, volunteer work made unbelievable contributions.60 years ago our country was set up, today we will celebrate its 60th birthday.In this process, volunteer work did a lot of help and now our country is standing in the world just like a giant.In the past years, volunteers have helped a large number of people, the old, the young, the poor and the homeless.All the volunteers know that the road ahead will be long and cragged, but no matter what obstacles stand in their way they will never stop.Because they have a creed and they believe everything is possible.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers keep on going without hesitation.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers hand in hand and be with together forever.Oh the creed of volunteer work, you make volunteers go to the edge of the world and let them know the true meaning of life.Do you know what the creed is? Yes, it is love.With love, volunteer work makes people open their mind and let them find the sky is theirs.With love, volunteer work makes people look into their hearts and let the sunshine in.With love, volunteer work makes people believe that smilers will never lose and frowners will never win.I know something has changed because of volunteer work.I know it for real because it feels so right and the world looks so much brighter.Love is important to volunteer work and volunteer work is important to the whole world.The infinite sky is motionless and the blue ocean is boisterous.This moment is perfect.Let us become volunteers and try our best in volunteer work.It can be the start of something new and it's our turn to learn some or win some.So, let's make a wish and get ready to shine like diamonds.專家建議：

建議該考生在語言流暢的基礎之上，注意兩方面問題。第一，用詞更具體些，避免使用語義較為空泛的表達，如learn some or win some。第二，文章華美有余，但邏輯層次不足。需加強句子與句子之間以及段落與段落間的邏輯性。

專家點評：

該作文使用了很多修辭方式，從這一點上看，作者在學習英語的過程中一定是位有心人，注重邊閱讀邊積累背誦。同時能看出，作者一定是一位喜愛英文歌曲的人，文中很多表達都來自于音樂歌詞。但在遣詞造句時，需要區(qū)分口頭表達和較書面表達，在這點上，文章還有提高的空間。