第一篇：最新高考滿分作文精選(二)

最新高考滿分作文精選(二)

[考場佳作]2009高考優(yōu)秀作文『湖南卷』

踮起腳尖

人被軀殼的長短而左右，因羞愧或甘心于三尺之軀而自修囹圄，從某種意義上來說，是盲了自己的心。

人到達(dá)這樣那樣的高度，對低處多少有了鄙夷，然而更吸引眼球的在于仰望時的那方景致。生活的階梯上，人各擁其位，這高度或成阻礙，或與期望值尚有一段距離。聰明的人啊，在暫無法登往高處時，學(xué)會了，踮起腳尖。

有彈性的不光是身體，還有心。又或許，我們能理解為，踮起腳尖不過是某類外化，真正的內(nèi)核是我們的那顆渴望攀升的心。

我想起了登埃菲爾鐵塔。它那么自然而然地平地而起。在塔下仰望塔尖，扶住帽子，抬起頭，踮起腳。眼再抬一寸，腳再高一厘，望見的不過是塔身。眼睛到不了的地方，讓心到達(dá)。搭乘塔內(nèi)的貨車，在尖頂與自己的心會合。方才的踮腳雖是徒勞，可心中所升騰的征服感最終引我站在這里。巴黎城慵懶地在塞納河畔小憩，正午的城市在午睡，而我的心卻在狂躍不止。我再次踮起腳尖，讓獵獵的風(fēng)灌滿我的胸膺。

原來，人踮起腳，是要去望向更遠(yuǎn)的風(fēng)景，去吸進(jìn)一口常日里所缺少的高處的活潑。踮起腳，把希冀已久的夢攬入懷中，入目之景，春深夏淺之間，年輕的心在曠野中引吭高歌!澳網(wǎng)冠軍小威倔強(qiáng)地說，叩開成功之門的是有力的網(wǎng)球而非網(wǎng)球裙。她自知沒有庫娃俏麗的臉蛋，但在她的人生征程中，哪怕前半程充斥著不堪入耳的嘲諷，她也從不低下她驕傲的頭。這份驕傲是成熟的獨(dú)白。“媽媽默許我趴在小木屋的窗邊發(fā)一下午的呆”，她回憶著：“她知道我沒有發(fā)呆，我是在眺望遠(yuǎn)方?！?/p>

李安自覺在臺灣待得過久，他的創(chuàng)作靈感逐漸消退。沒有人知道隱沒的那些年他讀了多少書，走過了多少城市，只看到他的身影伴隨《斷背山》與《色戒》浮出。被歲月打磨得愈發(fā)剛毅的面容，被時光鑄就的更沉穩(wěn)的步伐。他還依舊帶著淡淡的笑容說，他不甘臨摹，他只想往前走，走自己的路。

人借助于身體與世界連線，然而沒有一個人愿意在心為形役的人生境遇中來回兜圈。踮起腳尖，擷一手高枝的果珍，讓夢境延伸，與現(xiàn)實(shí)交匯!

【評點(diǎn)】文章前三段引論舒緩，不僅切合題意，且認(rèn)識水平超出一般。本論部分以自己登埃菲爾塔經(jīng)歷、小威的獨(dú)白、李安的“向前走”三例論證自我提升之意義，緊扣主題，前

后連貫，且暗含有“身一心一行”的層進(jìn)意味。結(jié)論部分歸納準(zhǔn)確，有力地呼應(yīng)了前文。結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語言流暢，切合議論文文體要求。

奶奶的個子不是很高，近70歲的年紀(jì)壓得她愈加矮小，可總有些東西在高處，這時，奶奶不得不踮起腳尖。

父母外出工作，小時候一直都是奶奶帶著我，我也甘心地跟著奶奶，奶奶的慈祥與和藹就像童話時的仙女奶奶一樣。那時，家里有個大柜子，我知道，那柜子上層有許多零食，可當(dāng)時不夠高的我就是踮起腳尖也是望塵莫及。一次，我終于想到一個辦法，找來一根長桿，踮起腳尖，使勁兒地把上面的東西往下?lián)?，大概是太用勁兒，上面的東西嘩嘩商落，除了零食，還有許多書都一股腦兒地砸下來，我來不及防備，就打得哭了起來。奶奶聞聲而來，看見滿地都是七零八落的東西，明白了緣由，輕聲地安慰我，將地上的零食放到我手里。第二年，奶奶拉著我走到一個小柜子面前，原來奶奶已把零食裝進(jìn)這里面，我便不用拿工具，甚至不用踮腳尖了。

不知不覺，我已經(jīng)長得比奶奶高了許多，許多對我來說，很輕松的動作，奶奶卻得踮起腳尖，艱難地完成。

一次數(shù)學(xué)課，總覺得有個人頭在窗戶外晃來晃去。教室的窗有些高，而且貼了一層膜，要想看到里面的情形，個子稍矮的都得踮起腳尖?？茨巧碛坝行┦煜?，我請假出去看看。是奶奶，她往前傾著身子，使勁地踮起腳尖，努力地探著頭往教室里看，可總也不夠，她又踮直了腳尖。我一出來，她似沒晃過神來，仍然保持著踮起的姿勢，如同一位芭蕾演員，只是沒著裝，手里還提著送來的水果。我呆住了，沒有說話，等回過神來，奶奶已站在身邊，額頭上布滿了汗珠，幾絲頭發(fā)順著汗水貼著，奶奶笑著。我從口袋里拿出紙巾遞給奶奶，奶奶笑得更加燦爛了。等奶奶別過身去，我的眼淚流了下來，奶奶卻突然轉(zhuǎn)身了，看見了正在哭的我，趕忙跑過來，問我發(fā)生了什么，我連說著沒事。

在奶奶的執(zhí)拗下，我先進(jìn)了教室，可總有一個人影仍在窗口晃來晃去，我知道，是奶奶，她還是不放心，我裝著認(rèn)真聽講，等過了十幾分鐘，人影離開，我趴在桌子上，淚又肆無忌憚地流出來了??奶奶又多站了十幾分鐘，又踮起了腳尖十幾分鐘??

時光流過，奶奶愈加矮小，需要踮起腳尖的時候也越來越多，可我長高了，長壯了，絕不要奶奶辛苦地踮起腳尖，我可以趴下來，奶奶踮起的腳尖不過是我身軀的高度。

【評點(diǎn)】文章由實(shí)到虛，兩代人的“踮起腳尖”隱含一種生命承續(xù)的象征意義，使文章具有一定的歷史感。主旨表現(xiàn)奶奶對我的深切關(guān)愛。切合題意，中心突出；特別是寫奶奶踮起腳尖在教室窗外看我的鏡頭感情真摯，表現(xiàn)細(xì)膩，富有感染力。文章主體在描寫兩個畫面，表達(dá)方式切換自然，語言大致流暢，符合記敘文文體要求。

發(fā)展等級可從“形象豐滿”“文句有表現(xiàn)力”等方面計(jì)l0分。計(jì)分：內(nèi)容24分+表達(dá)22分+發(fā)展l0分=56分。

第二篇：四川高考滿分作文二【2011】[定稿]

2011年四川高考滿分作文【二】：總有一種期待

月唱千年，折轉(zhuǎn)芳菲知暮是。夢回落帳，舞盡笙歌罷人間。間不斷，期待依然。

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秋水閣里聲聲慢，一世沉香落錦弦?？傆幸环N期待，天上人間。總有一種期待，刻盡了絕代的芳華。那是一片脂紅胭白，翠綺羅裳遮不住春韻初綻，冗復(fù)屏風(fēng)掩不住身子風(fēng)流。卻偏有這樣的人兒，無奈葬花淚不語，直至暮合月升，黯然神傷。她在期待，不惜鮮血浸染了羅娟。慶幸的是，他沒有負(fù)她，縱然榻上的俏佳人似玉如花。他們有共同的期待，正是這份期待讓他憤然離去，卻也讓她相思成疾，魂斷香消。世道的悲情劇，遺恨的大觀園。這期待耗損了今生韶光，來世紅顏。

總有一種期待，繪觸了亂世的壯志豪情。那是一片硝煙彌漫，三分天下，各立為王。燎原的戰(zhàn)火湮沒了亂世的兒女情長，小喬傾城的姿顏難留他去意堅(jiān)決。赤壁的熊熊烈火燒盡了荒蕪，奔馳的戰(zhàn)馬踏過了斷壁殘?jiān)Ｋ诖?，勃勃的野心在這片莽原上騰起，那是宿命的安排。豪情壯志自難當(dāng)，把酒當(dāng)歌不思量，直至他落馬身亡。這期待，鑄造了亂世的赤血男兒。

總有一種期待，落定了隔世的曠古英魂。淥水亭外婉轉(zhuǎn)鶯啼，啼不盡，如水的哀思。目畔畔秋若芷水，怎抵愁思難為北來難為東，本是性。情中人，無奈命運(yùn)捉弄，紫禁城銅墻鐵壁，寸步難行。但他沒有舍棄自己，只為那至生的期待。江南多情女，一夢知紅妝。他終于開始反抗，反抗這世事蒼涼。然而，當(dāng)絢麗的煙花飄飛了灰燼，自由的天空停止了翻飛的心跳，一場煙夢就此終結(jié)。這期待，演繹了一場亙古的離殤。

總有一種期待，似那一片無垠的草原，在我的心里延伸著。春去秋來，綠草和花海永遠(yuǎn)只在瞬間。此時此刻，已是金秋季節(jié)，草色開始枯黃，白霜已經(jīng)迷茫，鴻雁又在南飛。皚皚白雪已經(jīng)在遠(yuǎn)方的山巔閃現(xiàn)。不過，這不要緊，我的期待并不在于綠色的草葉之上，也不在于搖曳的露珠之間，唯有那深深扎根大地而又默默無聞的草根，才是草原上真正可以超越冬天的期待。多少年來，多少人踢踢踏踏騎著馬兒走過草原，奔向世外桃園，寒冬來了，一切都成了過眼煙云，唯有大地深處手握著手，心連著心的草根，才是我心中真正的“期待”。

總有一種期待，盛開著千古余香。

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總有一種期待

總有一種期待，屬于你我。蕓蕓眾生，我們都有夢。我們因夢而生，為夢奮斗，含夢而笑?！}記

總有一種期待，屬于你我。旖旎的大干世界接受了無知的我們，那是生命最初的開始。不知從哪一天起，我們學(xué)會了思考，學(xué)會了表達(dá)自己的情感，學(xué)會了仰望無邊無垠的天空。我們在那時埋下了一粒希望的種子，靜靜期盼，等待著它破土而出的那一刻，光芒四射，刺痛了周圍所有人的眼睛。年少輕狂的一顆顆有力跳動著的心，滿是對未來的期待。

總有一種期待，屬于你我。陽光不會永遠(yuǎn)眷顧我們，有時也會變幻莫測，忽而一陣傾盆大雨，摧殘著我們心中跳躍的火苗般的期待。有時似乎在那一瞬火苗將要夭折，但它忽明忽暗，卻從未被泯滅。那種期待已根植在我們身體里，不是一些暴風(fēng)雨就可以輕易把它連根拔起。

總有一種期待，屬于你我。我們期待夢想綻放的那一天，將是幸福的彼岸。累了，不敢休息；怕了，不愿退縮；敗了，不想放棄。這一切，源于那種期待，源于那種執(zhí)著，源于那種不可言表的對生命升華的熱情和追求。而這一切，又都是來自于最初的夢想和最終的期待。

總有一種期待，屬于你我。真正到了我們心中一直期待的那一天時，卻有一種巨大而空洞的失落感在心底油然而生。又不由得反問自己，我一直期待的，真的是這個么？是期待成為萬眾矚目的焦點(diǎn)，還是享受物欲橫流的生活？似乎是，又都不是。

在時間的磨礪下，我們終會明白，我們期待的原來并不是最終的結(jié)果，所以在最后一刻會感受到失魂落魄。

我們的期待，全部幻化成這個痛苦，快樂而有意義的過程。能讓我們的生命得到升華的，唯有夢，和夢想綻放的過程。

總有一種期待，屬于你我。這是一種無比強(qiáng)烈的情感精華，由它發(fā)散出來的，是夢想的實(shí)現(xiàn)，伴隨而來的是我們的蛻變。

總有一種期待，屬于你我。它是派頭，是動力，是一座山頂，站在上面，我們的未來一覽無余，把它踩在腳下，有如此厚重，踏實(shí)的安全感。

總有一種期待，使我們擁有了它，就仿佛擁有了全世界。

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總有一種期待

只要春天還在

我就不會悲哀

縱使黑夜吞噬了一切 太陽還可以重新回來

一汪國真《只要明天還在》

萬物期待陽光，禾苗期待雨露，我們可有屬于自己的期待？

當(dāng)人聲喧囂的街頭，一位年邁的老人倒在馬路；當(dāng)一位幼小孩童在風(fēng)雨中流浪，我們是否有所期待？當(dāng)一雙渴望的眼睛天真地面對我們，當(dāng)滿是憔悴的臉肅立在寒風(fēng)里，我們真的是否有所期待？

是的，我們期待社會能多一點(diǎn)愛心，人間能多一點(diǎn)溫暖，人與人不再互相仇視，不獨(dú)讓“西單女孩”，“旭日陽剛”能夠活在春天里，讓所有的人都能樂開懷。

是的，我們期待，警察用自己的生命換來的不再是冷漠，善良不再為法律所嘲諷，社會一片晴朗，同在?片藍(lán)天下和諧地享受生活的甜蜜。

是的，我們期待正義能夠得以伸張，高尚能夠得到弘揚(yáng)。不論“我爸是李剛”，還是他叔是“金國友”，只要觸犯了法律，都一樣能受到嚴(yán)懲，司法不能像娟婦一樣被人隨意蹂躪和糟蹋，不能淪落到任人擺布，毫無尊嚴(yán)的地步?！疤靸r(jià)打撈”淪落的道德，藥家鑫拋卻的人性冷漠卑劣都如煙云般飄散，使邪惡難以在中華大地立足。

我們期待，樓不再歪，奶粉不再毒，血鉛、毒大米、毒豆芽不再成為人們的困惑。讓道德的清溪盡洗俗世的鉛華，讓善良觸動人的淚腺。他人失意時可以輕輕拍拍他的肩膀，靜靜聆聽滿肚苦水人的傾訴，他人失誤時不嘲笑自吹而是開解，他人身體欠佳或重病，送去幾句點(diǎn)燃希望的話或一首振奮的音樂??我們期待，人間能少一些悲哀，世界多一片陽光。

我們期待，“天價(jià)酒”、“天價(jià)煙”不再成為常項(xiàng)，社會能多一點(diǎn)和諧，人與人多一份理解。

我們期待天空能多一抹瓦藍(lán)，大地能多一層綠意。地方發(fā)展不是一味重視經(jīng)濟(jì)的增長，而忘卻了環(huán)境的保護(hù)。治理環(huán)境污染，不能只掛在嘴上，讓大山披上綠裝，讓江河揚(yáng)起清波。

我們期待能擁有更多的空間，更多的自由，“虎媽”不要成為時尚??

總有那么多的期待，期待如花，讓我們芬芳滿懷，幸福滿懷??

總有那么多的期待，期待如霞，給我們以希望，給我們以精彩??

期待是如此的執(zhí)著，期待是這樣的急切，期待讓我們大步奔向未來??

—北大資源研修學(xué)院

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注意：1.信的開頭已為你寫好。

2.詞數(shù)：100左右。3.參考詞匯：門票---entrance fee

Dear editor,I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people?s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work.If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls.In the end a city will take on a bad look.40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive.The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park.Do we share the sameopinion, dear editor?

Yours truly,Li Hua

Dear editor,I?m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Sixty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee should not be forced on the public.They believe parks are the place where the public enjoy themselves at their leisure.They think that a gate and wails are to be built if an entrance fee is to be charged.The city will not look so beautiful as it should have.Forty percent of my schoolmates are for the idea that an entrance fee is OK, but it shouldn?t be out of control.Entrance fee can be used to pay the gardeners and buy new types of flowers and trees.For myself, I?d like to say that if we all work hard to build our city into a flower garden, who cares about the entrance fee for parks?

Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about the discussion on whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions vary from person to person on this issue.50% of the students disagree with the idea of entrance fees.In their opinion, parks are public places where all the people can have a rest and enjoy themselves.So if an entrance fee is charged, some people will surely be kept away from the park.Besides, in order to charge entrance fees, gates and walls must be built.They think that it will do harm to the appearance of a city.40% of the students agree with the idea of entrance fees, because the gardeners need to be paid and new plants and flowers need to be bought.But fees should be charged reasonably.Yours truly,XXX

Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about the discussion on whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.Opinions vary from person to person on this issue.60% of the students oppose the idea of entrance fees.They believe

everyone can go to parks for rest and fun because parks are public places.But an entrance fee may keep some people away from the park.Besides, in order to charge entrance fees, it is necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.40% of the students approve of the idea of entrance fees, because money is needed to pay the gardeners and to buy new plants and flowers.But fees should be charged reasonably.Yours truly,(2)

Dear Headmaster,As the minister of students' life in the Student Union, I am writing to you to reflect something about our canteen.To our satisfaction, the canteen supplies us with various kinds of food.This gives us many choices.At the same time the price for the food is low and the food is tasty.And the surroundings for having a meal have been improved.The canteen has become clean.And when we are eating, we can watch TV.But something unsatisfactory exists, too.For example, the quantity of a helping is less than it should be.This is unfair.And in the canteen, the seats are not enough.Some students have to stand while eating.We hope that the school will consider adding more seats for us.Finally we hope that they can improve the quality of the food and their service.We will be very happy if our advice is taken.Yours respectfully,(3)On Money

Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything.A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love.I don't think we should regard money as everything.Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life.What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers.This way, all of us can lead a happier lives.(4)假設(shè)今天你上網(wǎng),點(diǎn)擊進(jìn)入“今日話題”網(wǎng)站.看到一則有關(guān)禁止學(xué)生在校園內(nèi)使用手機(jī)的報(bào)道.網(wǎng)友們對此各抒己見.作為一名高中生,你對此頗感興趣,就在該欄目下發(fā)帖,客觀反映周圍同學(xué)們對此的不同看法.并簡單談?wù)勀愕目捶?(100字左右)

以下為同學(xué)們的看法:

贊同: 便于聯(lián)系, 有安全感, 功能(function)多樣

不贊同: 便于聯(lián)系非必需，因有IC卡電話, 玩游戲，發(fā)短信(e--massage), 耗時費(fèi)錢

你的觀點(diǎn)

Just now, I entered the website—“Topic for Today”.I feel interested in the report on banning the use of the cell-phone on campus in middle schools.One possible version:

Just now, I entered the website--“Topic for Today”.I feel interested in the report on banning the use of cell-phones on campus in middle schools.In fact, more students now come to school with cell-phones.My schoolmates have different opinions.Some think it is convenient to get in touch with others with the cell-phone, which also makes you feel safe especially in time of trouble.Besides, it is nice to enjoy various functions of different cell-phones.Others think differently.First, the cellphone in not a must in school, as there are some IC phones there, making it easy to call others.Second, many often play e-games and send e-massages with their cell-phones, even in class, which will surely have bad effects on their study.Worse is to come, it will result in a great waste of time and money.In my opinion, the cell-phone is a useful tool in our daily life.But it doesn't mean we can use freely in school.(5)三班的學(xué)生進(jìn)行了一場有關(guān)大學(xué)生是否應(yīng)該打工的討論。請你根據(jù)下面表中的提示

寫一篇英語短文，介紹討論的情況。

一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為

另一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為

打工會影響大學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí);改變正確的人生觀;甚至?xí)顾麄兂绨萁疱X

打工可以減輕父母的負(fù)擔(dān);同時使大學(xué)生獲得社會經(jīng)驗(yàn);發(fā)展個人能力;豐富學(xué)習(xí)生活

注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右;2.不必逐條翻譯，可進(jìn)行合理發(fā)揮。

3.參考詞匯：打工lake a part-time job 人生觀life view 負(fù)擔(dān)load

The students of Class 3 had a discussion about whether college students should take part-time jobs.Some students think it is advantage for college students to take part-time jobs.Because, by doing part-time jobs, they can earn money on their own so that they don?t need to ask their parents for money, and in this way, they reduce their parents? load.Besides, taking part-time jobs can help them gain social experience, develop personal abilities and make their life enjoyable.One the other hand, some students have a disagreement.In their opinion, the students? main task is to study, while taking part-time jobs has a bad effect on their study.And also, it may make college students change their life views and they may think too much of money.(6)面對中學(xué)生“出國熱”，社會對此有不同的看法。請你以Studying Abroad為題，根據(jù)以下提供的信息，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/p>

Advantages:

1.良好的語言環(huán)境，更利于語言學(xué)習(xí)。

2.拓寬視野，學(xué)習(xí)國外先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù)。

3.傳播各民族間的不同文化。

Disadvantages: 1.年紀(jì)小，缺乏生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)，自理能力差。

2.情感孤獨(dú)，思鄉(xiāng)。3.生活學(xué)習(xí)費(fèi)用高。

注意：1)第一句已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2)詞數(shù)100 左右。

3)參考詞匯：媒介，中間人 mediator

Studying Abroad

In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign

countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad.There are many advantages in attending schools abroad.First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures.Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries.Third, we can learn foreign languages more quickly.However, there are some disadvantages.Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living

experience.Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick.Of course the costs are much.(7)On net bars

With the development of the Internet, the net bar plays an important role in people's life.More and more people, especially students, like to go to net bars.They are absorbed in playing video games, making bad friends and having a chat with “Meimei” on the net in the bar.Some students often go on playing late into the night in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go by bus to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.It is quite necessary for the students to get rid of the bad habit.Recently, more and more students would like to go to net bars, especially students.It has become quite common to go there.They waste too much precious time on playing video games in the net bar.As a result, not only does it do harm to their health but also produces a bad effect on their studies.Their health becomes worse and worse and their studies are neglected.Now a lot of net bars have been shut down in Beijing.But some students go to the net bars at suburbs to play.Fortunately, more and more parents and schools have realized it.Recently, more than six thousand students ensured that they would be far away from net bars in Jinzhou city, Liaoning Province.Most students are making full use of their time and devoting themselves to their studies.It is a good thing.F.看圖作文：

(1)假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國筆友Bob將于九月到你所在城市的建新華文學(xué)校學(xué)中文，來信請你在學(xué)校附近為他找一套住房。

請根據(jù)圖畫提供的信息，寫信介紹住房的情況，并告知住房面積為25平方米，月租500元。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右：

2.參考詞匯：房租—Tent(n.).I?m very happy to receive your letter, and I?m glad to hear that you will go to China to learn Chinese here.I have already found a fiat for you.It is on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.Bus No.11 can take you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School.The flat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom, the other two are bathroom and kitchen.There are a bed, a sofa, a desk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small flat, and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Maybe this fiat is not as good as your wish, but I?ll try my best to meet your needs.If it is not suitable enough, write to me and I will look for another better place.Hope you will come here soon!

All the best!

Yours,Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，意思表述完整，行文流暢自然。作者在寫作過程中注意長短句并用，還使用了以?which，?引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，從而使文章層次分明，富于變化，不愧為考場佳作。

Dear Bob,Welcome to China!You wrote to me to find a place for you.I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street near Jianxin Chinese School.It is on the third floor and there?re three rooms in it: a bedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom.There is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair in the bedroom.The house is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan per month.Also from this house you can get to your school easily.Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of the building.It is only one stop.At last, will you please tell me the time you arrive? Then I?U be able to meet you at the airport, see you.Best wishes!

Yours,Li Hua

滿分理由

本文格式正確，內(nèi)容完整，表述清楚，銜接緊密流暢，時態(tài)語態(tài)使用準(zhǔn)確，特別是結(jié)尾末段適度的發(fā)揮，既充實(shí)了內(nèi)容，又符合邏輯，成為本文與眾不同的亮點(diǎn)。

Dear Bob,How are you these days?

I?m so glad to know that you?ll come to our city to learn Chinese.You asked me to find a place for you.Now I?ve found one which I think is pretty good.The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near the No.11 bus stop.It?s just one stop away from Jianxin Chinese School.There are three rooms, a kitchen, a bathroom and a bedroom.Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, I think it is suitable.By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month.I hope you?ll like it.If not, I?ll try to find another place for you.Yours,Li Hua

滿分理由

本文內(nèi)在邏輯性很強(qiáng)，由遠(yuǎn)及近。由外及內(nèi)，層次分明，錯落有致。同時讓步狀語從句運(yùn)用得恰到好處，很出彩，再則結(jié)構(gòu)完整，從開頭的問候語到結(jié)尾都很完備。

(2)請看下面的這幅漫畫，再聯(lián)想實(shí)際生活，寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)120左右。題目：Don?t Waste Water

Don't Waste Water

A man is washing his clothes ,regardless of the notice above “Save the Water Please.”

As we see ,water is the source of life.But there is very limited available water resources in our world.So we shouldn't waste it.Of course, we have to use it to drink, cook, wash, clean and etc.But we must remember not to use it extravagantly.If we didn't stop such

wasteful habits, we would cut off the development of the world and the human life.G:其他：

(1)Companionship of Books

A man may usually be known by the books he reads as well as by the company he keeps: for there is a companionship of books as well as of men;and one should always live in the best company, whether it be of books or of men.A good book may be among the best of friends.It is the same today that it always was, and it will never change.It is the most patient and cheerful of companions.It does not turn its back upon us in times of trouble or distress.It always receives us with the same kindness, amusing and instructing us in youth, and comforting us in age.Books possess an extract having the fundamental properties of immortality.They are by far the most lasting products of human effort.Temples and statues decay, but books survive.Time is of no account with great thoughts, which are as fresh today as when they first passed through their author's minds ages ago.The only effect of time has been to sift out the bad products, for nothing in literature can long survive but what is really good.Books introduce us into the best society: they bring us into the presence of the greatest minds that have ever lived.We hear what they said and did.we see them as if they were really alive;we sympathize with them, enjoy with them, hurt with them;their experience becomes ours, and we feel as if we were, in a measure, actors with them in the scenes which they describe.The great and good do not die even in this world.Embalmed in books, their spirits walk abroad.The book is a living voice.It is an intellect to which one still listens.Hence we ever remain under the influence of the great men of old.The great intellects of the world are as much alive now as they were ages ago.(2)How to Keep Healthy

Nowadays more and more people are concerned about their health.But how to keep healthy? Different people may give different answers to this question.In my opinion, it is essential to do the following.First, it is absolutely necessary to take some exercise every day.Research shows that getting plenty of exercise make the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder.This strengthens the heart, reduces the chance of heart attack, and helps lower blood pressure.That's why more and more people are becoming active in various kinds of sports and exercises.Every morning many people get up early and take much exercise.Some practice shadowboxing and swordplay while others run, jog, walk or dance to music.In the afternoon, there are also many people keen on sports.Some play basketball or volleyball or table tennis, others go in for gymnastics or track events.Through sports and exercise, people become healthier and stronger.Medical researchers have proved that what people eat affects their health.They advise people to eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat such as beef and pork because meat contains more fat than poultry and fish.Fat can build up in the arteries, block the flow of blood, and cause a heart attack or stroke.Getting rid of bad habits like smoking and drinking alcohol is also an important way to keep healthy.Smoking and drinking alcohol injure one's health a great deal, and therefore should be given up.Unfortunately few people follow this advice.If people follow these three ways of keeping fit, they greatly improve their health.(3)Children and Television

Television has been changing the way people live for thirty years.It influences nearly every aspect of modern life.how people use leisure time, how news is reported, how information is learned, and how people think and feel.Children are particularly susceptible to the effects of television because their minds are growing, developing, and learning much faster than those of adults.Whereas television could be used as an educational tool for children, more often simple entertaining cartoons with little or no educational value are shown.Social scientists, teachers, and parents are troubled by the kinds of television programs children choose to watch.These groups of people are concerned about the media's impact on young.children.They are worried about the effects of televised violence on society as well as commercials for sugarcoated food.Most importantly, however, they feel television is one factor that causes declining math and reading scores among schoolchildren.Because of the excessive time spent in watching TV, children are spending less time readingand thinking independently.Experts are concerned about the view of the world that youngsters are learning from television.Parents, schools, and churches have traditionally been the social models and teachers for children.However, because television influences children's attitudes and

behavior, its role in society is becoming increasingly more powerful--it is much more than a simple recreational activity.Exposure to excessive violence is another influence of television.According to several studies, televised violence may cause children to become more aggressive.Also, because so much violence is seen by children on television, they become more used to it as the only solution to difficult situations.Children who watch a great deal of violence on television may become apathetic toward actual aggression.One study has shown that, compared to a control group, fifth-graders who watched an aggressive television broadcast were slower to ask for adult help when a fight broke out among younger children.

第四篇：湖北省高考滿分作文(二)

湖北省高考滿分作文大全(二)

湖北高考滿分作文：隔著代溝我望見了您

已經(jīng)不記得上一次好好地看您是什么時候了，父親。

我只記得那時的您，頭發(fā)烏黑，皮膚泛著古銅的光。青年時期的下鄉(xiāng)生活，讓您有了健康的體魄，也讓您在這紛繁的社會中變得寡言少語。

自我上高中以來，您就很少管過我。有人說′兒隨母，女隨父′。在我的生活中，更多的是媽媽的教育和關(guān)懷。我?guī)缀趺刻於家退勑?，卻很少能跟您講上一句話。媽媽總是關(guān)心我這，關(guān)心我那，而在我眼中，您總是坐在您自己的角落里，研究著您自己的股票。我總覺得您根本不關(guān)心我，我總覺得您是家中的一個外人。

隨著感情的疏遠(yuǎn)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)我漸漸地不認(rèn)得您了。代溝，這可真是個神奇的東西。

高考離我越來越近，可您卻離我越來越遠(yuǎn)。雖然您也開始時不時地說些什么，您也開始每天按時往我嘴里塞各種各樣的補(bǔ)品?？蓪ξ襾碇v，那些話遠(yuǎn)不如媽媽講得動聽。而塞藥時我甚至感覺，您是一個′醫(yī)生′，而不是一個父親。感情的疏遠(yuǎn)，似乎真的隔斷了認(rèn)知。

考前的那幾天學(xué)校放假，您讓我到您的學(xué)校復(fù)習(xí)。您帶著我去了您的學(xué)校，讓我在辦公室等著，自己去清一間教室出來。我一人待在辦公室里無聊，就走下樓去，走到那間教室門口。教室里您忙碌的身影晃動著。我突然意識到我很久沒有好好看看您了。

我不聲不響地走進(jìn)去。您還在忙著。光線并不明亮，我卻看到了您頭上幾點(diǎn)晃眼的光。我頭一次注意到您有白頭發(fā)了。您費(fèi)力地搬著桌子，額頭上已經(jīng)閃著瑩瑩的光。這就是我的父親啊，曾幾何時家里重活一人包的父親，竟也變得這樣虛弱！您還是老了啊！

那一刻，我突然感覺一股沖擊從心底噴薄而出，震動著我的全身。我覺得那是源自割不斷的親情，那是心底的回音。突然找回了被父愛包圍的感覺，這父愛不像從前那樣廣博而無微不至，但它卻更深沉，更能激起我內(nèi)心的共鳴。我覺得我重新認(rèn)識了您。

也許您還沒有感覺到我的覺醒，也許在您眼中我還是那個對您冷若冰霜不屑一顧的小男孩。可您一定知道，只要親情不斷，血脈相連，我一定會認(rèn)識到父愛的偉大。感情也許會疏遠(yuǎn)，可無論這代溝有多寬，我終究會望見您的！

【滿分作文點(diǎn)評】這篇文章最大的特點(diǎn)是緊扣了我，用敘事方式寫了我和父親之間的交流，而非很多考生寫的議論文。這種交流主要是心理交流，顯得親切自然，并且這種情感也易被閱卷老師接受。

文章扣題準(zhǔn)確，它抓住了當(dāng)代學(xué)生和家長之間存在代溝這一現(xiàn)象。代溝是種情感因素，感情的親疏，也就是代溝的深淺，它成為我認(rèn)識父親的障礙。行文最后，通過父親幫我清理教室，拉近了作者和父親之間的距離，讓人看后感動。

此外，這篇文章的題目寫得不錯，隔著代溝表示的是情感；我望見了您代表的是認(rèn)知。不過，它雖是模仿朱自清的《背影》，但是寫得較淺，無深層次的思考。

湖北高考滿分作文：莫把情云遮慧眼

人生活在世上，是在無數(shù)的感情里度過。有人說一個人的生命是從笑聲中開始又在哭聲中結(jié)束，這一笑一哭，莫不飽含著濃濃的人情，浸透了感情的一生，使生命有了支柱、目標(biāo)、希望，使生命真正飽滿、充實(shí)，使人性有了耀眼的光華。

人們重感情，人類也許永遠(yuǎn)也無法理解在一頭饑餓的雄獅面前，它的孩子與獵物沒有區(qū)別的那種無情獸性。然而深深淺淺的感情織成的云卻又常常成為一種遮蔽，讓人們原本智慧的眼眸無法看到青天。

司馬遷說，人情莫不念父母、顧妻子，人在很多時候都會自然而然地因情感的砝碼將公正的天平偏向自己更在意更關(guān)心的人，就像俗話所說的胳膊肘哪能朝外拐。于是古代有了智子疑鄰的寓言而今人也仍舊在走著這條老路，甚至走得很偏很遠(yuǎn)。一個年輕的女職員在她本該擁有幸福家庭，擁有燦爛前途之時卻貪污公款，被投入監(jiān)獄，當(dāng)人們問她為什么要做這種傻事時，她的回答只有三個字：為了愛。一位母親，因年幼的兒子身患絕癥無藥可治，竟抱著兒子踏上了黃泉路。一個老實(shí)的農(nóng)民，卻也知道講哥們兒義氣，將小時候同學(xué)偷盜來的贓款藏在了自己的被褥下稀里胡涂地便成了窩藏犯&&人們所犯的錯誤小到考試時幫助作弊，大到殺人放火，有的只是一時的情不自禁，美好的情感卻真成了道家所說的情劫。

人們中也有很多人認(rèn)識到這一點(diǎn)，于是情似乎又變得可惡了。殺熟在很多不同的地方，不同的領(lǐng)域冒出頭來。一樣的顧客，陌生人就可以得到全面周到的服務(wù)，而熟人卻被晾到了一邊兒；有次品賣不出去，就聯(lián)系一個熟單位做職工福利。反正是親不見怪，抑或是熟人自然能夠體諒，熟悉的人礙著面子不好說，只管讓他們自咽苦水。感情又一次左右了人的態(tài)度甚至還成為了一種利用的工具。

我們景仰包公，不只是因?yàn)樗晃窂?qiáng)權(quán)，更因?yàn)樗罅x滅親，鍘了自己的親侄兒。

而事實(shí)上，每個人在感情占了上風(fēng)的時候只要能再有一刻的冷靜，就能擺脫情感的糾葛，不論是偏向親近的人還是故意殺熟，都不再會成為人心中對錯的評判。

人是有感情的，但更是有理智的。當(dāng)我們注視感情時也切記：莫把情云遮慧眼。

【滿分作文點(diǎn)評】這篇文章最大的特點(diǎn)是例子運(yùn)用得匠心獨(dú)特，緊扣了題目：莫把情云遮慧眼。開頭形式較好，從感情入手，說明感情在人的一生中非常重要。

第三自然段所舉事例和作文所給的《智子疑鄰》材料主旨一致：感情的親疏影響了對事物的正確認(rèn)識。隨后，作者深層次地談起現(xiàn)代社會的一個怪現(xiàn)象：殺熟，也就是人的感情被利益所驅(qū)使，成為一種被利用的工具。這個例子跳出了常規(guī)，成為整篇文章的亮點(diǎn)。

第五篇：2011年北京高考滿分作文(二)

2011年北京高考滿分作文大全(二)

高考滿分作文：制約與發(fā)展

一道黑色的鐵幕在柏林緩緩落下，世界將面臨新的瓜分，但我預(yù)言，二十年內(nèi)世界將保持和平丘吉爾

眾所周知，這是丘吉爾著名的鐵幕演說，從那時起，美國和蘇聯(lián)對立長達(dá)四十余年，兩個超級大國互不相讓,爭霸全球.但與此同時,我們的地球已遠(yuǎn)離大面積的戰(zhàn)亂六十多年了，丘吉爾的預(yù)言現(xiàn)在看來太過保守了。兩強(qiáng)近半個世紀(jì)的冷戰(zhàn)換來了世界的相對和平與飛速發(fā)展，不得不說，是兩強(qiáng)的相互制約，為世界的長期發(fā)展提供了條件。

不過看來，若是一家獨(dú)大又會怎么樣呢?九十年代的美國給了我們答案。當(dāng)時蘇聯(lián)解體，兩強(qiáng)格局不復(fù)存在，美國為自身利益在全球不斷挑起事端。海灣戰(zhàn)爭，出兵南聯(lián)盟，東南亞駐軍&&世界在不停的流血，因?yàn)橐恢还陋?dú)求敗的霸王龍無人可擋，甚至無人敢制約其鋒芒?？仆厝苏劽郎儯?jīng)濟(jì)被摧殘的窘境危害至今，他們的鮮血讓我們發(fā)現(xiàn)這個世界多么需要制約與平衡。

當(dāng)歷史的腳步邁入二十一世紀(jì)，歐盟，中國等地區(qū)迅猛發(fā)展，世界多極化格局日益增強(qiáng)，我們又一次享受到了全球的穩(wěn)定與和平，各地區(qū)的交流與發(fā)展也重獲生機(jī)。不得不說，這是各強(qiáng)國間的互相制約帶來的發(fā)展機(jī)遇。

可見，任何事物中某一個體過于強(qiáng)大時，事物的發(fā)展必然減慢。而當(dāng)事物中幾個個體相互制約時，他們將盡力競爭，同時也有合作，進(jìn)而促進(jìn)事物整體的發(fā)展。

在各個領(lǐng)域中，每個個體都謀求孤獨(dú)求敗的至尊地位，殊不知這樣的格局并不利于整個領(lǐng)域的發(fā)展。

當(dāng)拿波倫與反法同盟互相廝殺時，難奈對手時，歐洲民族國家正飛速形成，歐洲正向著近代文明飛奔，然而當(dāng)他橫掃歐洲時，歐洲大陸卻盡是鮮血與啼哭;當(dāng)成吉思汗與南宋相對時，兩方安撫百姓，招攬民心，中華大地欣欣向榮，然而當(dāng)忽必烈?guī)еF蹄統(tǒng)一中國時，卻只剩人分四等的荒謬與漢人無以為家的凄涼;李自成起兵西北時萬民歡騰，夾道歡迎，待到殺入北京功成名就時卻得八十天夢辭京城的結(jié)局，眾人皆說起殘暴，卻忘記了明朝廷與其相互制約的作用。

相互制約時，各圖其利，一心向上，個體的發(fā)展共同促進(jìn)整體發(fā)展。一旦大包大攬，必將貽害整體，停滯不前。

中國隊(duì)再一次折冠而歸，我卻難言高興。備受國人喜愛的乒乓球運(yùn)動，正向著一家獨(dú)大，技術(shù)退步的深淵滑落&&

我的生命不會太長了，我是多么懷念我的對手，懷念那個屬于我們的歐洲。拿破侖

【滿分作文剖析】閱卷現(xiàn)場評分：內(nèi)容分25分+表達(dá)分25分+發(fā)展分10分=總分60分

北京高考滿分作文：讓或不讓

當(dāng)孔融讓梨的故事早已成為千古美談，當(dāng)六尺微巷已為眾人所稱頌。贊揚(yáng)，面對那一枚枚閃爍著金光的世乒賽金牌，我不禁問道，我們是否應(yīng)該讓出他們，我們到底該讓出什么?

誠然，當(dāng)乒賽的現(xiàn)場奏響一次次國歌，國人是那么自豪，驕傲，然而面對所謂壟斷的質(zhì)疑層出不窮，我們也會焦慮，反思，那么，我們又是否該讓?

在我看來，我們可以讓出技術(shù)，而不是讓出獎牌，我們可以讓出科學(xué)的訓(xùn)練方法，卻絕不可以故意削弱自己的實(shí)力，以求他國獲得金牌，粉飾出世界經(jīng)濟(jì)水平的一片繁榮多元的假象。

時光匆匆而逝，一百年前的中國剛剛放生了劇變，一次驚天的變革剛剛開始。一百年來，我們感受到了中國生機(jī)勃勃的改變，我們要自豪的說，這些改變是靠中國人的手創(chuàng)造出來的，我們何時要求過英美國家讓出一片天地呢?

授人之魚，不如授人之漁。當(dāng)我們先進(jìn)的乒乓球訓(xùn)練方法達(dá)到世界領(lǐng)先水平時，我們有理由與他國做技術(shù)交流，讓出技術(shù)。而當(dāng)我們的水稻種植技術(shù)，因袁隆平的成果而提高時，我們也主動提出讓他為世界水稻種植培養(yǎng)人才。只有這樣，才能解決糧食問題，而不只是一味的讓出糧食，救濟(jì)饑餓人口。

孔融讓梨，六尺微巷，讓出的是一種傳統(tǒng)美德，讓出的，是一種人性的美好。而讓獎牌卻非如此，讓糧食讓錢，讓一切一切的物質(zhì)，僅僅只能救一時之需，甚至有時違背了基本的道德準(zhǔn)則。只有當(dāng)先進(jìn)的技術(shù)為世人所共享時。我們才真的可以看到高水平的比賽，我們才真的可以看到這世上再無饑餓啼哭的孩子，我們才真的可以看到那人們的笑臉綻放在世界的每一個角落。

你讓或不讓世界都會因此而改變;你讓或不讓，沒有人會強(qiáng)迫。