第一篇：考研研究生入學(xué)考試備考復(fù)習(xí)輔導(dǎo)指導(dǎo)英語篇作文考場批改及點(diǎn)評(píng)

考研研究生入學(xué)考試備考復(fù)習(xí)輔導(dǎo)指導(dǎo)英語篇作文考場范文批改及點(diǎn)評(píng) 考研英語作文考場范文：道德滑坡

①Looking at this thought-provoking picture(加“which was”,其中which引導(dǎo)定語從句，修飾picture;was和后面的depicted構(gòu)成被動(dòng)語態(tài))symbolically depicted by the drawer, I do realize the urgency to improve the moral standards nowadays.②

A pregnant woman, an old man and his little granddaughter stands(“stands”改為“stand”，該句主語為復(fù)數(shù)，主謂應(yīng)保持一致)on the crowded bus, looking at a young man who sits in the seat comfortably with a piece of black cloth covering his eyes, puzzled and indignant(“puzzled and indignant”是用來修飾the yong man, 或是作者“感到困惑和憤怒”，應(yīng)表達(dá)清晰;若要表達(dá)作者的情感，可改為：...covering his eyes.I feel puzzled and indignant).①The temporary blind in the picture indicates a serious phenomenon in the modern society that some young people are suffering from moral decline.②The reasons contributing to moral decline are worth pondering.③First, respecting the old and caring the young is abandoned by some modern people, because they only care about their own benefits.④Only if you could provide them with a great outcome(“a great outcome”改為“great outcomes”，和them保持一致), will they lend you a hand(“a hand”改為“hands”，和they保持一致)in exchange.⑤In addition, the educational system is also to blame(“be to blame for”意為“對(duì)??應(yīng)負(fù)責(zé)任;應(yīng)該為某事負(fù)責(zé)任”，如果要表述“教育體制也應(yīng)對(duì)此負(fù)責(zé)”，可表達(dá)為： the educational system is also to blame for the phenomenon;如若要表述“教育體制也應(yīng)受到責(zé)備”，可表達(dá)為the educational system should also to be blamed).⑥It

emphasizes more on high marks at the expense of having few time to teach traditional moral values in school which leads to people’s defect(“defect”為可數(shù)名詞，此處應(yīng)改為“defects”和people保持一致)on this issue.①It is high time that we fostered our moral values.②For one thing, schools and governments should play an active role(“an active role”應(yīng)改為“active roles”，前后主謂保持一致，主語為schools and governments)in advocating moral values and traditional virtues to teach the young.③For another, individuals should learn more about virtues and help people around with a warm heart(“a warm heart”改為“ warm hearts”,前后單復(fù)數(shù)保持一致).④Only through our joint effort(“effort”應(yīng)改為“efforts”,前后單復(fù)數(shù)保持一致), could we recollect the virtues.原作點(diǎn)評(píng)

第一段描述圖畫的內(nèi)容。第①句，picture應(yīng)該是被drawer描繪的，所以應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)語態(tài)“be+動(dòng)詞的過去的、分詞”來表示;第②句最后，表達(dá)不夠清晰，應(yīng)注意。第二段揭示圖畫的寓意，闡述產(chǎn)生此現(xiàn)象的幾個(gè)原因。應(yīng)注意單復(fù)數(shù)問題。第三段結(jié)合前兩段的闡述，提出建議。總體點(diǎn)評(píng)文章亮點(diǎn)：文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，每個(gè)段落的功能基本得以體現(xiàn)。文章錯(cuò)誤：①語法錯(cuò)誤：培訓(xùn)搜培訓(xùn)課程px.wangxiao.so培訓(xùn)網(wǎng)提醒您文章出現(xiàn)了一些語法錯(cuò)誤，比如被動(dòng)語態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)形式等。②句法錯(cuò)誤：有的句子表達(dá)不夠清楚。比如第一段第②句，第二段第⑤句。修改意見：文章整體結(jié)構(gòu)不錯(cuò)，但是要注意一些細(xì)節(jié)，避免不必要的錯(cuò)誤。本文中，單復(fù)數(shù)一致問題較多，希望作者在完成習(xí)作時(shí)應(yīng)多檢查，盡量減少此類錯(cuò)誤。

考研英語作文考場范文：老外過春節(jié)

(文章直接描述圖畫內(nèi)容，不妥，可加一句圖畫類作文的開頭常用句，如As is vividly depicted in the picture,等)The black man, with a happy and delighted face(改為with a happiness of facial expression), is spending spring festival with a Chinese family.Conspicuously, it is a(改為an)encouraging scene relate to culture

integration between China and west(可改為the west countries), which is a(改為an)excellent offspring of new century.Several factor(改為factors，several意為“幾個(gè)”，其后名詞應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式)weight heavily for this emerging trend illustrate(改為illustrated)in the picture, yet, two kernels suspended on the top of the list which should never be overlooked.To begin with, the Chinese economy has witnessed its unprecedented lever(改為level,unprecedented level表示“前所未有的水平”)of growth in past 30 years, which give an powerful impetus to the publicity of Chinese civilization.What’s more, Chinese culture, though through perpetual wars and turbulence, preserve its vitality and glamour(改為its vitality and glamour are preserved),(加and its)assets appreciated by most foreigners.There are encouraging parallels today, as many westerners in one wave after another making their trip(改為trips)to China to get panorama of Chinese heritage.From my perspective, various measures should be made to foster this integration.Firstly, suitable atmosphere must be created, where our culture and its counterparts can co-exist in

harmonious.,(注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)的正確使用)by us.Secondly, the authorities ought to lunch various publicity campaigns to make Chinese culture known to(加the)world.The cultural thrive has loomed, and the economic prosperity will not be far away.總體點(diǎn)評(píng)

整體來說，文章寫得不錯(cuò);但還存在個(gè)別簡單的語法錯(cuò)誤。作者在寫作完之后若可以花費(fèi)幾分鐘時(shí)間來回讀文章，便會(huì)減少不必要的錯(cuò)誤?？佳凶魑牡恼w思路你已經(jīng)基本掌握，后面要做的就是多積累高分佳句，為自己的文章增彩;再者，寫完之后一定要認(rèn)真檢查，減少失分點(diǎn)。加油吧，祝你考研成功!

參考分?jǐn)?shù)(滿分20分)：1

3考研英語作文考場范文：堵車現(xiàn)象

As is indicated in the cartoon above,a big crowded of drivers stay in cars on the road,waiting for their turn to go,with patience almost running up(表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)確且句子缺成分，根據(jù)圖片可改為and even some people want to hold the car to go out of the long queue).In fact ,nowadays,this phenomenon reflected by the picture is so widespread,especially in super(super改為big，super表示“超級(jí)”，用在此處不

合適)cities.Thanks to the fast development of economy,we have a chance to experience the more(去掉the more，rich為單音節(jié)形容詞，其比較級(jí)直接在后面加-er即可)richer life.As a result of that,(第一句用thanks to表示原因，第二句用as a result of that也表示原因，這樣有點(diǎn)繁瑣，建議將兩句話合為一句話，可改為and)the number of people who own cars is larger and larger.The once wide roads become narrow(漢語式英語，可改為The wide roads before become narrow now).In order to get to destination(改為destinations，每個(gè)人的目的地不一樣，應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式)on time,people have to set up(改為set out，set up意為“建立，創(chuàng)立”;set out為“出發(fā)”，注意短語的正確選擇)earlier in case of being blocked.By the way ,discharging too much carbon-dioxide to the air would(改為will)destroy the environment.Therefore,it is imperative for us to take measures to change the fact.The simplest method is to diminish the times(改為time，time在表示“時(shí)間”時(shí)，為不可數(shù)名詞，當(dāng)“次數(shù)”講時(shí)為可數(shù)名詞)of using private transportations.There is no doubt the world would change into a better place for us to live benefited from all the efforts we devote.(漢語式英語，可改為There is no doubt that the world will be better for us to live in as long as all of us devote our efforts.)

總體點(diǎn)評(píng)

文章中存在一些細(xì)節(jié)問題，比如詞匯的選擇和一些基礎(chǔ)的語法知識(shí)。作者在寫作完之后若可以花費(fèi)幾分鐘時(shí)間來回讀文章，便會(huì)減少此類問題，從而避免失分。同時(shí)，建議結(jié)合《寫作160篇》的指導(dǎo)，認(rèn)真復(fù)習(xí)，積累經(jīng)典句型，避免漢語式英語的表達(dá)，不斷提高自己的寫作水平。加油吧，祝你考研成功!

參考分?jǐn)?shù)(滿分20分)：1

1考研英語作文考場范文：因材施教

The duck mother, who is anxious and energetic, is begging the monkey teacher to teach her children the approach of climbing tree, which give(改為gives)him a fright.Conspicuously, that is a delicious(用詞不當(dāng)，delicious一般用來形容美食，故應(yīng)去掉)ironic(改為an ironic)depiction concerning blind education,(加and，句子之間用連詞連接)a phenomenon(句子缺謂語，加is)pervasive in contemporary

society.This overwhelming, occupy with various kinds of irrational behaviors over children(句子表意不清，建議改為This overwhelmingly various kind of irrational behaviors), led(改為lead，句子時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)保持一致)us to conclude that the blind

education is more of a devastation to children’s faculties than a reasonable practice.This kind of aimless education kids(加are，be exposed to為固定短語)exposed to tend to be in(去掉，be exposed to后面直接跟賓語)domestic situation, by,(此處by是什么意思?)unfortunately, their own parents, who exert great pressure on children’s already over-burdened small shoulder.(改為children’s over-burdened small shoulders)More ridiculously, many parents know that countless flaws are consist in this way of education and yet most did litter(改為little，litter意為“垃圾”)

to change it.There are upsetting parallels today, as parents one wave after another force their little kids(加to,force sb.To do sth.)participate in various kinds of out-class courses(“課外課程”可表達(dá)為extra-curriculum courses)(注意句子順序，改為as parents force their little kids to participate in various kinds of extra-curriculum courses one wave after another), as a result(去掉), their

vulnerable heart become(改為will be)occupied with depression and anxious.The clear message is that we should get moving to protect our children.Firstly,suitable atmosphere must be created, where our kid can grow freely in harmonious, by us, especially the parents(表述不清新，建議將此部分去掉).Moreover, the authorities should charge with the obligation of fashioning the idea that education entails more than simply teach children numerous disciplines.Rather, making full display of children’s advantage and timely adjustment is(改為are)of substantial weight.Only by doing this, can we weather this crisis.總體點(diǎn)評(píng)

文章在句子組織方面，存在一些問題。作者應(yīng)該注意句子的正確表達(dá)，弄清楚句子的成分，句與句之間的邏輯關(guān)系等。建議作者從句子練起，每周可花幾天積累詞匯、經(jīng)典語句，然后自己根據(jù)積累的情況仿寫句子。在做真題時(shí)，注意長難句解析，鞏固基本的語法知識(shí)，達(dá)到自我提高的目的。加油吧，祝你考研成功!

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第二篇：2017考研英語 作文暑期備考指導(dǎo)

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2017考研已經(jīng)拉開序幕，很多考生不知道如何選擇適合自己的考研復(fù)習(xí)資料。中公考研輔導(dǎo)老師為考生準(zhǔn)備了考研英語方面的建議，希望可以助考生一臂之力。同時(shí)中公考研特為廣大學(xué)子推出考研集訓(xùn)營、專業(yè)課輔導(dǎo)、精品網(wǎng)課、vip1對(duì)1等課程，針對(duì)每一個(gè)科目要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行深入的指導(dǎo)分析，歡迎各位考生了解咨詢。

作文是考研英語復(fù)習(xí)的一大部分，中公考研總結(jié)了考研英語作文復(fù)習(xí)的一些建議，2017年考生可以全面了解一下，希望對(duì)大家有所幫助。

1.大小作文考查內(nèi)容有區(qū)別

考研英語作文分為小作文，大作文兩種。小作文滿分10分，多是辭職信、道歉信、感謝信等應(yīng)用文體。因?yàn)樾∽魑牡奈捏w限制，更加適合背誦若干模版，靈活運(yùn)用，所以它比大作文更加容易得分。大作文滿分20分，要求根據(jù)提示信息寫一篇160-200詞的短文，提示信息一般為圖表。

從選題范圍上看，大作文大都是目前人們最為關(guān)注的問題，反映了當(dāng)前社會(huì)的熱門話題或可以用熱門話題來透視的哲理性問題。通過對(duì)近些年的真 題分析，從文體上看，可以劃分為說明文和議論文，因?yàn)榭歼@類體裁的寫作比較符合形勢發(fā)展的實(shí)際需要，在學(xué)習(xí)、工作和生活中，人們所書寫的材料大多也是說明 文或議論文;從出題形式上看，在平穩(wěn)中逐漸趨于多樣化，寫作題目易于理解，無論中公考研，讓考研變得簡單！

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以文字的形式還是以圖表、圖畫的形式出現(xiàn)都淺顯易懂。出題人盡量讓我們不會(huì)因題目中出現(xiàn)生詞或難以理解的短語而影響正常發(fā)揮。

2.大小作文寫作套路有不同

小作文寫作獲得高分需要在格式、語言這兩個(gè)方面下功夫。以應(yīng)用文來舉例，首先稱呼要用敬稱。正文格式為首段開頭空四個(gè)字母，段落之間不空行，現(xiàn)在流行的格式，每段開頭不空格，但是各段之間空一行。語言主要注意用語的場合和習(xí)慣，要注意針對(duì)不同場合使用不同語言，使交流得以進(jìn)行。另外，考生也要注意不同的應(yīng)用文有不同的用語。中公考研專家建議考生對(duì)某些應(yīng)用文的格式和習(xí)慣用語，應(yīng)該加以熟悉和背誦，以便運(yùn)用自如。

大作文主要在結(jié)構(gòu)上下功夫，一般都是三段論。第一段描述現(xiàn)象，將作文給出的圖表或者其他提示用自己的語言重復(fù)一遍，要多用長句子和不常見的單詞，這樣判卷老師會(huì)覺得你比較特別。第二段，分析現(xiàn)象，運(yùn)用邏輯思維的方法分析上述現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，考生可以先用中文在試卷上列出自己分析的幾點(diǎn)原因，然后把它翻譯成你自己認(rèn)為比較優(yōu)美的英文句子，第二段就基本結(jié)束了。第三段，提出個(gè)人見解，或者解決方法，并點(diǎn)題?；旧纤械拇笞魑目梢园凑者@個(gè)套路來寫，中公考研也建議大家這么寫，但是模版要慎用。近些年來英語作文模版的泛濫，已經(jīng)導(dǎo)致了判卷老師的審美疲勞，大家用模版會(huì)適得其反，要用也最好用自己總結(jié)的獨(dú)一無二的。

3.小作文的備考技巧

應(yīng)用文寫作要求考生在三個(gè)方面完成要求：一要注意把握信息點(diǎn);第二是把握語言點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容要十分明確，不要出現(xiàn)過多的錯(cuò)誤;第三是要注意格式和語言。應(yīng)用文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求是100個(gè)字，大概8句話，8句話怎么分配呢?第一段就寫一句話，第一句話表明你寫信的基本內(nèi)容：如果是詢問信息的話，就說你寫這封信要詢問以下幾個(gè)問題;如果是投訴，就說寫這封信是要表達(dá)對(duì)什么東西的不滿;如果是請(qǐng)求信，就說寫這封信想要請(qǐng)求什么東西就可以了。總之，就一句話，簡明扼要。然后，用簡練的語言表達(dá)清楚題目要求表達(dá)的內(nèi)容和信息。最后一句話，就是一個(gè)禮貌的結(jié)尾。

4.大作文的備考技巧

大作文的寫作一般會(huì)給考生寫作提綱，或圖表、圖畫，或圖文并茂。命題方式雖然多樣，但題目涉及面往往是考生比較熟悉的內(nèi)容，目的是測定考生語言的實(shí)際應(yīng)用能力。要求表達(dá)清楚，文字連貫，中心突出，內(nèi)容豐富，句式多變，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確。

語言的應(yīng)用能力不可能一蹴而就，必須厚積薄發(fā)，必須經(jīng)過長期的實(shí)踐鍛煉。如何提高英語寫作能力呢?一是要背大量的優(yōu)秀范文，整段整篇地背，并轉(zhuǎn)換為自己的語言，寫作時(shí)才能隨心所欲地支配。考試時(shí)避免套用以前死記硬背的幾個(gè)范文，把一些不達(dá)意的詞堆積在一起，沒有統(tǒng)一性，無法很好地表現(xiàn)主題。另外，多動(dòng)手才能提高筆下功夫，才能保證在考場上順利寫作。

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第三篇：考研英語作文復(fù)習(xí)備考經(jīng)驗(yàn)

考研英語作文復(fù)習(xí)備考經(jīng)驗(yàn)

從這幾年的考研真題作文來看，考研英語作文話題之廣泛讓我們難以想象，這些話題都更加貼近我們的生活，更加關(guān)注我們身邊的事情。這些作文話題讓我們有話可說，有話可寫。更加突出在考察我們個(gè)人想法和寫作能力。絕不是以前的作文模版就能夠解決的。也不是我們輕而易舉就能拿高分的?？佳杏⒄Z作文是對(duì)我們綜合實(shí)力的考察，這些綜合實(shí)力表現(xiàn)在各個(gè)方面，其中最重要的就是我們的基礎(chǔ)一定要扎實(shí)。

我們回想一下考研的歷程，我們就很明顯的看到國家的命題方式在發(fā)生根本性的變化，以前的應(yīng)試教育正在逐漸向注重能力的方面轉(zhuǎn)變，我們能否僅僅以背誦“萬能模板作文”這一不變的方法去應(yīng)對(duì)萬變的考題呢？俗話雖然說萬變不離其宗，可是這個(gè)“宗”僅憑背誦這點(diǎn)小伎倆就可以應(yīng)付嗎？以上種種跡象表明，不管是英語寫作還是閱讀，我們都已經(jīng)從“技巧”的時(shí)代走過來了，而對(duì)于考研英語寫作來講，單純的背誦“萬能模板作文”就是一味的追求技巧應(yīng)試，我們現(xiàn)在要做的就是走進(jìn)打“基礎(chǔ)”的時(shí)代，只有把自己的基礎(chǔ)打好了，才能提高自己的能力，而這個(gè)基礎(chǔ)又是什么呢？？

當(dāng)然沒有誰會(huì)喜歡在沙地上建房子，如果想要建造的房子結(jié)實(shí)、堅(jiān)固。辭海中說，基礎(chǔ)，指的是“把建筑物的荷重傳遞給地基的結(jié)構(gòu)”，這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)有淺也有深，我們憑經(jīng)驗(yàn)可以判斷，房子越高，基礎(chǔ)肯定越深。英語寫作的知識(shí)就好比一座大廈，寫作知識(shí)的增長猶如在一個(gè)堅(jiān)實(shí)的地基上進(jìn)行的一磚一瓦的“遞進(jìn)式構(gòu)造”，基礎(chǔ)越深、越廣，寫作知識(shí)的大廈就能建設(shè)得越高、越大。

說白了，寫作的基礎(chǔ)就是要勤于動(dòng)口、勤于動(dòng)手。多讀、多背、多寫、多模仿。這種方法是很枯燥很笨，可是往往最笨的方法是最有成效的，要突破寫作就得從背誦和模仿開始。

1）背誦。背誦一些經(jīng)典的、典型的范文（最好是與考綱要求相一致的文章）。像考研1號(hào)《寫作160篇》這本書中，經(jīng)典必背的30篇范文就很不錯(cuò)，大家在背誦時(shí)要掌握一些基本詞匯，一些常用句型；再就是力求在背誦和研讀的過程中，培養(yǎng)出良好的語感，進(jìn)而探索出英文寫作的一般規(guī)律。

2）模仿。在具備一定的寫作知識(shí)儲(chǔ)備的前提下嘗試進(jìn)行寫作，這是寫作復(fù)習(xí)過程中不可逾越的階段。一定要勤于動(dòng)筆，不要“覺得”應(yīng)該能寫出來，就不去試著寫，因?yàn)閷?shí)踐與想象有很大的差距，只有當(dāng)你寫出來的時(shí)候，你才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)原來要很好地表達(dá)一句話并不是一件很容易的事。細(xì)節(jié)之處見真功，講的就是這個(gè)道理。

想想如果我們平常積累了很多范文中的高分佳句，自己平常也練習(xí)實(shí)踐了很多，在考試中我們只要稍作加工創(chuàng)作成自己的句子就可以了，這種水到渠成的事情當(dāng)然是基礎(chǔ)做得好。

我們大多數(shù)人在考研英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)上最大的誤區(qū)就在于過分的迷信所謂的“萬能”模式，企圖以模式來代替大量的寫作實(shí)踐。我們在背誦的基礎(chǔ)上一定要多模仿，多寫作，這樣基礎(chǔ)才會(huì)扎實(shí)。相信大家肯定也同樣知道，如果要自身成長，就必須扎實(shí)夯實(shí)這些基礎(chǔ)。這似乎是一個(gè)簡單的常識(shí)，根本不需要懷疑。

考研英語寫作要拿高分，技巧是一方面，但是不是最主要的，最重要的就是我們要抓基礎(chǔ)，考研英語寫作對(duì)基礎(chǔ)要求比較高，隨意大家在平時(shí)復(fù)習(xí)，一定要扎扎實(shí)實(shí)做好考研英語基礎(chǔ)復(fù)習(xí)，只有自己的基礎(chǔ)好了，考研英語作文不論以何種方式出題，哦度不會(huì)難道我們。希望大家丟掉以前的作文靠模版和技巧的想法，好好復(fù)習(xí)，這樣我們的作文才有可能拿高分。

第四篇：2012年考研英語小作文及備考指導(dǎo)

2012年考研英語小作文范文及備考指導(dǎo)

開門見山說意圖

咨詢建議一二三

不同內(nèi)容可分段

感謝客氣不可少

期待回信成慣例

2006年真題解析

You want to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area.Write a letter to the department concerned, asking them to help find a candidate.You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.Don't sign your own name....“Li Ming” instead.Don't write the address.To whom it may concern，I wish to contribute to Project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area.Having conceived such a plan for a long period, I write this letter to request your help to recommend a candidate.I wonder if it is convenient for you if two things concerning the child are taken into consideration.First, the child should come from Gui Zhou Province because I intend to help a child from my hometown.Second, it will be better if the child is a primary school student.Actually, I am good at teaching mathematics at elementary level.My plan will be carried out as follows.First, I will remit at least 300 yuan in cash every month so as to reduce the financial burden of the family.More importantly, I decide to teach the child math and English in person during my summer vacation, which will surely be more beneficial to the child.I really appreciate your help, and I look forward to your reply as soon as possible.Yours sincerely，Li Ming 感謝信

Directions:

Your delegation(代表團(tuán))has just returned from a visit to a university in Great Britain.And you were warmly treated there by Professor Herthwell.Please write a letter to express your thanks to him for his hospitality and hope for further cooperation.Dear Prof.Herthwell,(告訴了名字，又知道是教授，最好這么稱呼)

I am writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for your kind hospitality you showed to our delegation during our visit in your university.(寫信意圖：感謝對(duì)方的熱情招待)

I am indebted to your generous help to our visit.It was nice of you to introduce me to so many of your famous professors at your university.In addition, we appreciate the accommodation you provided for us.We had a fantastic time in Britain and will never forget it.(感激內(nèi)容：鑒于這是感謝信，內(nèi)容發(fā)生在過去，在這里套用I would be grateful if you would take …into consideration是不太合適的。用關(guān)聯(lián)詞1，2，3也顯得呆板。于是調(diào)整了一下，大意是：

我感激你的慷慨幫助。你介紹了很多教授給我認(rèn)識(shí)。另外，(IN ADDITION，不用1，2，3了)，提供的住宿很好，我們很爽，絕對(duì)不會(huì)忘記)(注意時(shí)態(tài))

Meanwhile, I hope you will someday pay a short visit to our university and give us some lectures on “Modern Western Economics”.(這句是提綱要求 hope for further cooperation.不寫的話嚴(yán)重扣分)(或者I would be grateful if you would pay a short visit to our university)If you have interest in our university, please feel free to contact me for more information.Yours Sincerely

Li Ming

段落句子分布詳情

1-4-2 總共7句，113字，已經(jīng)超綱

詢問信

Directions: You want to study at a certain foreign university.Write a letter to ask about the situation there as regards what qualifications one needs for acceptance, fees, possible scholarships, and accommodation.Dear Sir or Madam，I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university.My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I have already had a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements.Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students.Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation?

I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.Yours sincerely，Li Ming [NextPage] 推薦信

To whom it may concern，As the director of Philosophy Department, I am writing to you to recommend one of my best friends, Mark.Eros, to your distinguished department.I would be grateful if you would be interested to know his details via this letter.Firstly, …What’s more….Last but not least……

Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend him as an ideal candidate for your position.If you have any questions concerning his background, please feel free to contact me for more information.備忘錄/報(bào)告(MEMO)：備忘錄在本質(zhì)上也是書信，一般是寫給同事的一種正式而簡短的信，常常是有關(guān)工作事宜等。它的主體部分和書信幾乎一樣，只是省略其中的禮貌結(jié)尾。同時(shí)，MEMO不需要結(jié)束語和簽名。(但結(jié)尾可以寫If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me for more information.)

寫作格式：

Date: 日期 如September 12, 2001

To：收件人

From: 發(fā)件人

Subject：事由，如Faculty Meeting

范文：Directions:

You are an active member of the student newspaper.The newspaper is currently looking for a journalist for the summer semester.Write a memo that will appear in the newspaper next week describing the position available.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.提綱分析：沒有具體的提綱要求，中間完全自己發(fā)揮。

P1：寫作目的：招人

P2：具體細(xì)節(jié)：展開2-3點(diǎn)。三點(diǎn)最好，每點(diǎn)一句即可?？梢詮囊韵路矫嬲归_：

1)招聘條件 2)上班時(shí)間 3)工作任務(wù) 4)薪水待遇 5)培訓(xùn)機(jī)會(huì)

Date: August 10, 2004

To: All students

From: Li Ming

Subject: Journalist Position Available for the Summer Semester

On behalf of the students newspaper, I am writing this MEMO to inform you that we are going to recruit a new staff.And the details are listed as follows.(寫作意圖/寫此MEMO的目的)(2句，30字)

Firstly, Applicants should currently be studying at the university, and should preferably have at least two years’ writing experience.Secondly, the successful applicant will be expected to write two articles every week on happenings in the city and on campus.Finally, the position will commence at the end of May and will last through to the end of August.(3句，59字)

If you are interested, please send your resume to the campus newspaper office.(OR: If you have any questions concerning the position/application, please feel free to contact me for more information.)(1句，13字)

公告/告示

1.標(biāo)題(Announcement或者具體活動(dòng))放中間

2.寫作日期位于標(biāo)題下一行，右頂格

3.無須稱呼結(jié)尾禮貌語，但可以寫If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me for more information.而且要署名，一般是機(jī)構(gòu)，題目會(huì)告之

Your university, Xinhua University, is going to celebrate its 60th anniversary.Write an announcement which covers the following information.1)opening and closing dates of the celebrations，2)celebration activities，3)an invitation to all the past students, and

4)ways to contact.Do not sign your own name at the end of the announcement.Use Xinhua University at the end of the announcement.You should write about 100 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(10 points)

提綱分析：

P1：公告/活動(dòng)目的

P2： 活動(dòng)細(xì)節(jié) 1。時(shí)間(提綱1)2。活動(dòng)(提綱2)(最好自己再發(fā)揮一點(diǎn))

P3：邀請(qǐng)+聯(lián)系(提綱3，4)

Announcement

January 19, 2008

A month-long anniversary celebration will be held at Xinhua University, to salute its 60th anniversary.And the details of the activity are listed as follows.Firstly, it will start/commence from September 16th, 2005 and continue to October.15th, 2005.Secondly, seminars, cultural and athletic sports activities, and many other programs are planned to mark this glorious occasion of the university.Finally, our mayor will be present to make a speech too.Hereby(特此，很經(jīng)典)we sincerely invite all our alumni to be present to share these happiest hours of the school.If you have any questions, you are most welcome to contact us at 010-89766789 or email us at xinhuauniv@edu.com.cn.(OR: If you have any questions, you are most welcome to contact us for more information.)

Xinhua University

總結(jié)：不管如何，MEMO和公告的共同點(diǎn)是：

P1：活動(dòng)/事件目的+And the details of the activity are listed as follows.P2：細(xì)節(jié)的安排 改寫提綱+合理擴(kuò)展 寫三點(diǎn)

P3：問題聯(lián)系方式If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me for more information.Part A范文

Dear Mr.Wang，I am writing to inform you of my decision to resign from my current position.After two months of work, I find it is inappropriate for me to take the position as an editor here for the following reasons.First and foremost, I have expected the job to be interesting and challenging, which turns out to be the opposite.In addition, the salary has proven to be much lower than you originally promised, and I have a large family to support.Therefore, I have decided to quit the job after much deliberation.Please let me know if there is anything I need to do before my departure.Thank you very much for offering me the opportunity to work with the outstanding staff here.I sincerely hope that you approve of my resignation.I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Sincerely Yours, Li Ming 譯文 王先生：

我寫這封信是告訴您我決定辭掉現(xiàn)在這份工作。經(jīng)過兩個(gè)月的工作，我發(fā)現(xiàn)編輯這個(gè)工作不太適合我，原因如下：

首先也是最重要的，我想要一份有趣而有充滿挑戰(zhàn)的工作，但這份工作恰恰相反。另外，工資要比你當(dāng)初承諾的低很多。因此考慮再三，我決定辭職。在離開之前如果需要我做什么請(qǐng)告訴我。

謝謝您給我這次能和這么多優(yōu)秀員工合作的機(jī)會(huì)。真誠的希望你能批準(zhǔn)我辭職。對(duì)于可能的不便表示深深的歉意。

您的真摯的：李明

黃金句型 I am writing to inform you of...我寫信是為了告訴您……

I find it inappropriate for me to...我發(fā)現(xiàn)我不適合做……

First and foremost...In addition...首要……另外……

Please let me know if there is anything I need to do.如果有什么需要我做請(qǐng)告訴我。

I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.對(duì)于可能的不便表示深深的歉意。

Part B 范文

The picture symbolically depicts how three sons and a daughter treat their old, helpless father.They each stand in a different corner of a football field in the middle of which is the old man who is crouching.The eldest son kicks out the father and the other children are prepared to ward him off.It is sad to see none of them is willing to receive their father.The picture is thoughtprovoking, and what it illustrates is a common phenomenon in todays society: many grown-up children refuse to support their aging parents.They regard them as a burden to live with although it is their duty to support parents when they grow up.I think these children have betrayed their own conscience and therefore may subject themselves to social contempt and criticism.It is no doubt that this phenomenon is becoming common in modern society, but it is not a good manner for young people to imitate.Most parents devote all their lives to bring up their children.They give their children everything they have just because of love and hope.It is against nature for us to shirk the responsibility of taking care of our parents when they are old.Rather, we have the duty to pay back their love by making their later years enjoyable and happy.譯文

這幅圖形象地描述了三個(gè)兒子和一個(gè)女兒如何對(duì)待一個(gè)年老無助的父親。他們分別站在球場的四周，中間是一個(gè)蜷縮的老人。大兒子將老人踢出去，其他的孩子正準(zhǔn)備防守?？吹?jīng)]有一個(gè)孩子愿意贍養(yǎng)老人真的讓人很悲哀。

這幅圖非常發(fā)人深思，它說明了當(dāng)今社會(huì)的普遍存在的一個(gè)現(xiàn)象：很多成年人拒絕贍養(yǎng)他們的父母。盡管贍養(yǎng)父母是每個(gè)成年人的義務(wù)，但他們卻把父母當(dāng)作負(fù)擔(dān)。我認(rèn)為這些孩子被判了自己的良心，應(yīng)該受到社會(huì)的鄙視與譴責(zé)。

盡管這些現(xiàn)象越來越普遍，但年輕人不應(yīng)該模仿。父母為了養(yǎng)育孩子付出了一生。他們?yōu)楹⒆幼龅亩际菫榱藧酆拖Ｍ?。不贍養(yǎng)年邁的父母是不符合天理的。事實(shí)上，我們有責(zé)任讓父母安享晚年以此來回報(bào)他們的愛。

黃金句型

The picture symbolically depicts...這幅圖形象地描述了……

It is sad to see...看到……另人很難過。The picture is thought-provoking, and what it illustrates is a common phenomenon in todays society:...這幅圖非常發(fā)人深思，它說明了當(dāng)今社會(huì)的普遍存在的一個(gè)現(xiàn)象：

It is no doubt that..., but...……毫無疑問，但……

It is against nature for us to...做……是不符合天理的。

剖析2004年真題

一、2004年真題解說 Directions：

Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should 1)describe the drawing 2)interpret its meaning, and 3)support your view with examples You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.(20 points)

2004年考研寫作考查了圖畫作文。按照題目這篇作文應(yīng)該包括三點(diǎn)：第一點(diǎn)是描述圖畫中的內(nèi)容；第二點(diǎn)是闡述其含義；第三點(diǎn)是用若干例子來支持自己的觀點(diǎn)。

本題的寫作步驟：

1． 認(rèn)真審題

考生首先要看懂圖片包含的內(nèi)容，根據(jù)題目的要求考慮是否需要給出標(biāo)題。本題中并沒有要求寫標(biāo)題，考生可以根據(jù)自己是否有把握來選擇是否要寫標(biāo)題，一個(gè)好的標(biāo)題可以起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用，但如果沒有把握就不要寫，避免畫蛇添足。通過審題，我們知道主人公是個(gè)正跑到終點(diǎn)線上的小男孩，他頭上冒著汗，嘴角卻帶著笑，地上一個(gè)箭頭寫著終點(diǎn)，而另一個(gè)卻又寫著起點(diǎn)。下面的一行字寫著“終點(diǎn)又是新起點(diǎn)”。

2． 理解畫面的含義

這是寫作最重要的部分?？忌梢愿鶕?jù)自己對(duì)人類社會(huì)、對(duì)日常生活的觀察或自身的親身感受來做出不同的解釋。比如考生可以用辯證的觀點(diǎn)，說明世上的任何事物都是向前發(fā)展的，不斷更替的。就像長跑比賽一樣有終點(diǎn)，一旦到達(dá)終點(diǎn)，又有一個(gè)新的起點(diǎn)。也可以理解為人類的歷史就是這樣不斷奮勇向前的。

3． 用若干具體事例支持自己的觀點(diǎn)

其實(shí)這樣的實(shí)例是很多的。比如說，人類對(duì)某一自然現(xiàn)象的理解取得了突破性進(jìn)展（如基因的發(fā)現(xiàn)解答了生物遺傳之謎，同時(shí)又標(biāo)志著動(dòng)物克隆的一個(gè)新起點(diǎn)；我國神州五號(hào)飛船勝利返航到達(dá)終點(diǎn)，同時(shí)也意味著我國太空探索領(lǐng)域的新起點(diǎn)）。再近一點(diǎn)，經(jīng)過4年的緊張學(xué)習(xí)，我們的大學(xué)時(shí)代即將到達(dá)終點(diǎn)；而從另一方面看，無論我們考上研究生還是投身于社會(huì)，未來的歲月對(duì)我們來說都是一個(gè)新的起點(diǎn)等。

4． 列出提綱和主題句，圍繞提綱完成全文。

第五篇：2012考研英語小作文復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)

2012考研英語小作文復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)

萬學(xué)海文

小作文考察的多是辭職信、感謝信、道歉信等20多種類型的應(yīng)用文文體，著重考察考生的邏輯思維能力和語言應(yīng)用能力。萬學(xué)海文提示2012年的廣大考生小作文具有如下特點(diǎn):重格式，不輕內(nèi)容；輕思想，重交際；字?jǐn)?shù)少，易得分；重套路，難發(fā)揮。2012年的考生應(yīng)著重依照這四個(gè)特點(diǎn)來進(jìn)行復(fù)習(xí)。

背格式：

小作文重格式的特點(diǎn)要求考生們在格式上不能犯錯(cuò)，必須注意熟悉一些應(yīng)用文的格式和英文中應(yīng)用文的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。萬學(xué)海文提示考生：格式無誤是小作文得高分的第一步。

舉2011年小作文題目為例：

Write a letter to a friend of yours to

1)recommend one of your favorite movies and

2)give reasons for your recommendation.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.(10points)

參考范文：（萬學(xué)海文：《2012考研英語歷年真題權(quán)威解析》）

Dear Tom,I am writing, without hesitation, to share one of my favorite movies, Forest Gump, with you, which is not only conducive to your study, but also beneficial to your life.For one thing, the beautiful language in this original English movie may contribute to your study of English in listening, speaking, reading and writing.For another thing,the profound cultural elements implicit in the scene will equip you with foreign cultural background and, above all, enrich your daily life.Would you like to see this movie after my recommendation? Remember to tell me your opinion about the movie.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Ming

一、稱呼格式

1.用于對(duì)陌生的組織或團(tuán)體負(fù)責(zé)人的稱謂：Dear Madam or Dear Sir

2.用于對(duì)認(rèn)識(shí)但是關(guān)系很正式的個(gè)人、組織或團(tuán)體負(fù)責(zé)人的稱謂：Dear Ms....or Dear Mr....3.用于對(duì)關(guān)系親密的人的稱謂：Dear Tom/Lucy(or any other name)

二、正文格式

縮進(jìn)式: 段落之間無空行，每段開頭空四個(gè)字母。

三、落款格式

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use“...”instead.落款時(shí)可以使

用下列萬能格式：

Yours,Li Ming

背范文：

背誦是考生積極備戰(zhàn)、快速提高寫作成績的一條捷徑?？忌鷳?yīng)嚴(yán)格按照真題的要求獨(dú)立寫作，對(duì)比真題解析中的范文，發(fā)掘范文中的亮點(diǎn)和得分點(diǎn)，找出自己文章中格式、語法和邏輯上的錯(cuò)誤。背誦一些歷年真題解析中的優(yōu)秀范文和優(yōu)秀的小作文寫作模板來提高小作文得分。

技巧錦囊：掌握固定格式，準(zhǔn)確用詞，注意不同類型的要點(diǎn)。

布局：

小作文的布局上一般可以分為三段展開。第一段：開門見山，直接點(diǎn)明主題。第二段：擺出內(nèi)容，陳述原因，羅列建議。第三段：回應(yīng)首段，再次感謝，期待回復(fù)。

語言：

用詞準(zhǔn)確：用詞準(zhǔn)確是最基礎(chǔ)的要求之一。

語法正確：語法錯(cuò)誤是考試的失分點(diǎn)所在，在小作文的寫作中應(yīng)盡量少用縮略語和口語。句型多變：例如既有并列句，也有復(fù)合句，還有從句。

小作文的考查要求中會(huì)體現(xiàn)出文章的背景場合和寫作目的，考生應(yīng)針對(duì)不同情境選擇不同表達(dá)。不同的應(yīng)用文有不同的用語，萬學(xué)海文英語輔導(dǎo)老師們建議2012年的考生對(duì)某些應(yīng)用文的格式和習(xí)慣用語加以熟悉和背誦，以便運(yùn)用自如。

注意：

雖說小作文的字?jǐn)?shù)不多，但考生們最好還是不要忙于動(dòng)筆，仔細(xì)審題后，先理清思路，認(rèn)真列個(gè)提綱再下筆。寫作時(shí)，萬學(xué)海文英語考研輔導(dǎo)專家們建議2012年的考生們應(yīng)注意下幾個(gè)方面的問題：第一，交代清楚目的；第二，注意關(guān)聯(lián)詞或銜接詞的運(yùn)用，以便閱卷老師明了篇章結(jié)構(gòu)；第三，有必要時(shí)對(duì)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)闡述；第四，用簡短的語句代替冗長的語句，行文切忌復(fù)雜。最后，完成作文以后，應(yīng)該檢查、修改，以免需要表達(dá)清楚的細(xì)節(jié)和要點(diǎn)被遺漏。