第一篇：環(huán)保類作文訓(xùn)練

中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文指導(dǎo)：

重視檢查：

1、主謂一致

2、時(shí)態(tài)搭配

3、狀語(yǔ)

4、名詞復(fù)數(shù)

5、單詞拼寫

?？及祟惖湫途渥樱?環(huán)保

1.It's our duty to protect our environment。

2.It is very important to take care of our environment

3.We should not throw litter onto the ground

4.We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees

5.We should plant more flowers and trees。

6.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin

7.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become

much more beautiful。

8.As we all know now, the earth is like our mother.9.Once she was beautiful and rich, but she has become dirty and poor.10.She gives life to all the living things on the earth, beautiful and balanced nature.11.Droughts（旱災(zāi)）, floods, acid rain（酸雨）.These are the punishment from nature.12.We should treat our earth like mother.13.It ?s our duty to do something to cure her, love her, and take care of her so that we can

save the earth and save ourselves.14.The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays.Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future.15.People?s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.In order

to live a better life, we need a cleaner world.16.Good environment can make people feel happy and fit.17.To improve the environment means to improve our life.18.Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins.一、Pollution around us

In recent years our life is becoming better and better.But our environment is becoming

worse and worse.It?s very bad for our life.Now many people have air-conditioners and cars,they produce(give off)waste gas.More and more trees are being cut down.There is so much

sand on the earth(leaving only sand).We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes.Water in the river is quite dirty.We haven?t enough clean water to drink in cities.Now we are

in danger.It?s very necessary and important to protect the environment well.I think if

everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more

beautiful, and our life will be better and better.二、Save the Earth)

As time goes by, man is making the earth sick.People cut down too many trees and

leave rubbish everywhere.Factories let out their waste without doing anything to it.This has

caused some serious problems.Such as the land is sandy, the river is dirty, the air is less

clean, even the temperature of the earth is rising.What should we do to save the earth? My

suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put rubbish into dustbins and stop factories

pouring waste directly into the air or rivers.In all, we have only one earth, we should do our best to protect it, or we will regret.三、Save the earth

How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.It’s our duty to protect our environment.No matter where we live, we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy.We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling.We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields.We shouldn?t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places.We mustn?t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public.If everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better.四、How to Protect the Environment / Make our world more beautiful!

Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans.It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us.Animals and plants are our best friends, and we should share the world with them.We shouldn?t kill wild animals, and we must protect forests because they are animals? home.We must plant more trees and grass;they can make the world greener.The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have.Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.六、保護(hù)我們的城市(Save Our City)

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities.Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly.Or it may cause a lot of problems.It may pollute the air and water.People may get ill when they breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water.Our city has started to face the problem.Some rubbish is sorted and sent to a certain place.Waste gas is cleaned before it goes into the air.Waste water is also cleaned before it is poured into rivers.People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere.We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution.七、Keep our school clean

We are studying in this school.It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy.It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class.We shouldn?t leave rubbish here and there.Don?t draw pictures on the wall;they influence the look of our school.We should keep the classroom clean and tidy.And we should do some cleaning often.If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful.（2009山東東營(yíng)）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越差。環(huán)境問(wèn)題影響著人們的工作，學(xué)習(xí)，生活。而我們的工作，生活，生產(chǎn)又使環(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重.....如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?請(qǐng)以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫一篇短文。

提示: 存在問(wèn)題: 1.水污染和大氣污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重 2.森林被破壞和砍伐

3.白色垃圾隨處可見(jiàn)

要求 : 如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境? 至少3---4個(gè)方面，80詞左右。

How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution.And when trees are cut down, some animals disappear.There is more and more dirty smoke in the air.People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, it’s time for us to protect our world.Firstly, we shouldn?t throw away rubbish everywhere.And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.Don?t use plastic bags.Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.水資源與水污染問(wèn)題：

1.It?s our duty to save water（節(jié)約水是我們每個(gè)人的責(zé)任。）

2.As we know , water is very important to man,（我們知道，水對(duì)人類來(lái)說(shuō)是非常的重要。）

3.We can?t live without water.（沒(méi)有水我們就不能生存。）

4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.（適合人類喝的水是越來(lái)越少了。）

5.But some people don?t care about it.（但是有些人卻不關(guān)心或不在意。）

6.They waste a lot of water in their daily life.（日常生活中他們浪費(fèi)很多水。）

7.Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.（更糟糕的是他們排放污水到河流里。

8.They throw rubbish into rivers, too.（他們還亂扔垃圾到河流理去。）

9.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.（很多河流湖泊已經(jīng)受到嚴(yán)重污染。）

10.Something must be done to stop the pollution.（人類必須采取一些措施來(lái)制止污染。）

11.Only in this way can we live happily.（只有這樣，我們才過(guò)得幸福開(kāi)心。）

12.If we don?t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(如果我們不節(jié)約水，那么最后一滴水也許會(huì)是我們?nèi)祟惖难蹨I)

一、The importance of water

Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important.We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.However, not all of people understand this.They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes.Some factories even pour waste water into the river.As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink.Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves.二、Water

Water is very important for our life.Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash.Water is necessary for all plants.They need water to grow.People can’t live without water.Plants will die without water.It is important to all living things.However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean.At the same time we should save as much water as possible.三、關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)（水資源節(jié)約）的話題

Our environment is very important for our lives.We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on.In the past, there were many trees around us, the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now, people cut down many trees.Air pollution and water population are very serious.The environment around us becomes very terrible.We should protect our environment.First, we should plant many trees to keep water.Second, we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work.Third, we shouldn’t throw the dirty water into the river.Fourth, we shouldn’t use the plastic bags.Finally, we can ask more people to join us.（2009湛江）水資源問(wèn)題已成為舉世矚目的重要問(wèn)題之一。聯(lián)合國(guó)預(yù)計(jì)，到2025年，世界將近一半的人口會(huì)生活在缺水的地區(qū)。請(qǐng)以“How to Protect Water Resources”為題，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，要點(diǎn)如下：

1、眾所周知，水對(duì)人類是很重要的。沒(méi)有水，地球上將沒(méi)有生命。

2、現(xiàn)在工廠越來(lái)越多，很多河流變臟了，大量的魚(yú)死在了河里。

3、保護(hù)水資源是我們的責(zé)任。我們應(yīng)該節(jié)約用水、阻止工廠往河里排放廢水和倒垃 圾,并告訴人們保護(hù)水資源的重要性。

要求：1.包含所給出要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)舉例，意思連貫，詞匯、語(yǔ)法正確。

2.單詞數(shù)約80字左右。

參考詞匯：保護(hù)protect;水資源water resources;往……排放…… pour...into...;

廢水waste water

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How to Protect Water Resources

As we know, water is very important to us.There won?t be lives on the earth without water.However, there are more and more factories around us and some of them poured waste water into the rivers.They made the rivers dirty and lots of fish died.Therefore, it is our duty to protect water resources.First, we should save water.For example, remember to turn off the shower while you are washing your hair.Second, we should stop the factories from pouring waste water and throwing litter into the rivers.Finally, we should tell people the importance of protecting water resources.White pollution

根據(jù)國(guó)務(wù)院發(fā)布的“限塑令”，自2008年6月1日起，在所有超市、商場(chǎng)實(shí)行塑料購(gòu)物袋有償使用制度，超市、商場(chǎng)一律不得免費(fèi)提供塑料購(gòu)物袋。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，要求包括以下內(nèi)容：

現(xiàn)狀：目前中國(guó)每天消費(fèi)近30億個(gè)塑料袋，造成了嚴(yán)重的資源浪費(fèi)和環(huán)境污染； 限塑令的意義：減少塑料袋使用量，提高公眾的環(huán)保意識(shí)；

提倡：重拎布袋子，重提菜籃子。

參考詞匯：禁令 ban 意識(shí) awareness 提倡 advocate

The problem of “white pollution” caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role.In China about three billion plastic shopping bags are consumed every day, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution.Luckily, the government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1.The rule will undoubtedly reduce the use of plastic bags and enhance the awareness of environmental protection.It is highly advocated that we should turn to cloth bags and shopping baskets from now on.你愿意為瀕危動(dòng)物做些什么呢？也許你也可以寫一篇文章來(lái)介紹你所喜歡的動(dòng)物，并呼吁人們行動(dòng)起來(lái)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物。下面詞匯會(huì)對(duì)你有些幫助：furry, smart, intelligent, fast, strong, aggressive, enormous, gentle, fun, shy, friendly, endangered, laws, zoos, feed, etc.My favourite animals are pandas.I like them very much because they are gentle and shy.They are also friendly to people.And they look funny, too.Their eyes are the most interesting part.The black circles around their eyes make them look like they are wearing glasses or have just been in a fight.Their favourite food is bamboo leaves.They don?t like to move around very much.In fact, they prefer to sleep all day if they can.But now pandas are endangered.For one thing, people have destroyed many of their habitats.For another, they don?t have enough food to eat.We must think of ways to protect them.I think we should build more panda zoos and plant more bamboo for them.I hope everyone can do something for animals, so that we can keep our world rich and colourful and full of interesting animals.

第二篇：環(huán)保類作文

二．保護(hù)環(huán)境，倡導(dǎo)低碳生活

Li Hua

（一）低碳生活：現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活”（low-carbon life），即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開(kāi)支的生活方式。低碳生活對(duì)我們大家都有好處，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文向一家英文報(bào)社投稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。提示詞語(yǔ)：be good for，everyone，ride a bike，think，make a difference，environment，suggest，reuse 啟，總說(shuō)低碳生活對(duì)于每個(gè)人。Low-carbon life is good for everyone.承分說(shuō)自己對(duì)于低碳的身體力行事例To help with the environment，1 I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.2 Besides，I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.轉(zhuǎn)I think it’s my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we’d better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment，I believe the earth will be a better place.（二）保護(hù)環(huán)境：從2008年6月1日起，國(guó)家將禁止商家免費(fèi)提供塑料袋，掀起全國(guó)“拒塑”的環(huán)保運(yùn)動(dòng)。假如你是李華，準(zhǔn)備以“What Can We Do for the Environment”為題，寫一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的英語(yǔ)演講稿。內(nèi)容包含：1.在購(gòu)物時(shí)用布袋子替代塑料袋；

2.盡可能地再利用使用過(guò)的課本； 3.離開(kāi)教室應(yīng)關(guān)燈； 4.最好走路或騎自行車上學(xué)； 5.簡(jiǎn)述理由：保護(hù)環(huán)境，減少污染，節(jié)約能源等

注意：1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)； 2.可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫； 3.文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名，否則以零分處理。3.參考詞匯：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保護(hù)protect能源energy污染pollution課本textbook參考作文:

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello, everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What’s more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

（三）.環(huán)境問(wèn)題：今天環(huán)境變得越來(lái)越糟糕,環(huán)境問(wèn)題影響著人們的工作,學(xué)習(xí),生活等,而我們的工作,生活,生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重..........,如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?請(qǐng)以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫一篇短文。提示:存在問(wèn)題:1.水污染越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重

2.砍伐森林嚴(yán)重

3.大氣污染嚴(yán)重

4.白色垃圾等。要求：如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境?至少:3---4個(gè)方面，80字左右。

How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink Many trees are being cut down, some animals are getting less and less.Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster ,resources are getting less and less?etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.We shouldn't throw away rubbish everywhere.We should recycle ,reduce and reuse things.Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.（四）.為了保護(hù)地球有限的資源，我們應(yīng)該采取什么措施呢？請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇約80詞的短文，短文開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出。提示詞；1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it；2.save electricity, crucial, turn off, other electric machines；3.save forests, useful ,stop cutting down；4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources 參考作文：Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer.In order to protect them, something must be done.Save water.Water is the source of life.No water, no life.So it’s very important for us to do so.Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it.Save electricity.It is crucial.We can’t imagine what the life will be like without it.Everyone should do his best to save electricity.Don’t forget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working.Save forests.They are useful.Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead.Make our world a green one to live in.Recycle useful rubbish.Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so on.We can save resources in this way.

第三篇：中考作文文采專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練實(shí)戰(zhàn)篇—環(huán)保類

中考作文文采專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練· 實(shí)戰(zhàn)篇環(huán)保類（轉(zhuǎn)貼）

母題解說(shuō)

亙古至今，人類都在向自然進(jìn)軍。在征服自然、改造自然的過(guò)程中，人類告別了茹毛飲血的時(shí)代，建造了美麗的家園，但也因不尊重自然規(guī)律、破壞性利用自然資源，招致自然的懲罰和報(bào)復(fù)。在新的歷史條件下，為了自身的可持續(xù)性發(fā)展，我們?cè)摵稳ズ螐? 讓我們先揀拾起我們身邊觸目驚心的事實(shí)：酸雨，臭氧層破壞，全球性氣候變化，生物多樣性銳減，有毒化學(xué)品的污染及越境轉(zhuǎn)移，土壤退化正在加速，淡水資源的枯竭與污染，海洋生態(tài)危機(jī)，森林面積急劇減少，突發(fā)性環(huán)境污染事故及大規(guī)模生態(tài)破壞??這些都和人的環(huán)保生態(tài)意識(shí)、環(huán)保生態(tài)保護(hù)的政策與措施有直接的關(guān)系。人類如果不與自然和諧相處，不珍惜我們美好的家園，那么地球上的最后一滴水將是人類的眼淚!這個(gè)話題可以從大處著筆，也可以小中見(jiàn)大。大到整個(gè)宇宙，包括自然的許多方面；小到某一方面，甚至一草一木?？梢曰匾曔^(guò)去，可以關(guān)注現(xiàn)在，還可以預(yù)示未來(lái)；可以反映現(xiàn)實(shí)，還可以寫想象作文。

環(huán)保類話題包括：只有一個(gè)地球，水——生命的重要源泉，人和自然的和諧相處，人文與環(huán)保，提高環(huán)境意識(shí)，環(huán)境與和平，環(huán)境與居住，拯救地球就是拯救未來(lái)等子話題。

中考鏈接

1．(2007年浙江麗水卷)閱讀下面的材料，按要求作文。

一家知名雜志社進(jìn)行環(huán)保征文，由于獎(jiǎng)金豐厚，應(yīng)征稿件堆積如山。其中不乏名家巨匠的作品，也多是真知灼見(jiàn)。出人意料的是，特等獎(jiǎng)卻頒給一個(gè)普通的中學(xué)生。

那只是一篇尋常的文章，怎么會(huì)是最優(yōu)秀的?面對(duì)眾人的質(zhì)問(wèn)與懷疑，評(píng)委會(huì)的負(fù)責(zé)人取出了那份薄薄的稿件，答道：“他的文章也許不是最優(yōu)秀的，但他是唯一把文章打印在稿紙正反兩面的人。只有他真正做到了環(huán)保!”

的確，在“做到”面前，任何華麗的語(yǔ)句都會(huì)黯然失色。

材料所敘述的事情喚起了你的哪些聯(lián)想?引發(fā)了你怎樣的思考?請(qǐng)結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷或感受，選擇一個(gè)角度，自擬題目，寫一篇不少于600字的文章(詩(shī)歌除外)。文中不得出現(xiàn)你所在學(xué)校的校名，以及老師、同學(xué)和你的真實(shí)姓名。

2．(2006年江蘇鹽城卷)獨(dú)木不成林／只有千樹(shù)萬(wàn)樹(shù)齒相依，才有那陣陣松濤／一花不成春／只有千朵萬(wàn)朵壓枝低，才有那滿園春色／滴水不成流／只有千點(diǎn)萬(wàn)點(diǎn)長(zhǎng)聚首，才有那萬(wàn)頃碧波／親愛(ài)的同學(xué)，生活又何曾不是如此／生活正是因?yàn)橛辛四悖辛宋?，有了他／有了你、我、他的和諧相處，才五彩斑斕。

根據(jù)你對(duì)這段文字的理解，聯(lián)系自己的生活實(shí)際，自擬題目寫作。

3．(2006年廣東江門卷)《太原教育》要設(shè)《人與自然》欄目，請(qǐng)寫一篇文章為它投稿。

4．(2005年內(nèi)蒙古呼和浩特卷)地球是人類唯一的家園。為遏制和改變環(huán)境日益惡化的情況，一名中學(xué)生，能為環(huán)境保護(hù)做些什么?請(qǐng)以“環(huán)保，從我做起”為題寫一篇議論文，夾敘夾議，不少于600字，凡出現(xiàn)地名、人名、校名，一律用XX代替。

話題演練 1．半命題作文：關(guān)注

要求：先在橫線上填寫恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~，使題目完整，然后作文，不少于500字。2．請(qǐng)以“地球上的最后一滴水”為話題，寫一篇文章。

3．請(qǐng)以“點(diǎn)燃綠色的火焰”為題目，寫一篇不少于600字的作文。

(文)(采)(指)(津)

題1是半命題作文，由于環(huán)境的破壞和污染是當(dāng)前人類面臨的重大生存威脅，關(guān)系到全世界未來(lái)的發(fā)展，所以環(huán)境總是是非常值得關(guān)注的。如果平時(shí)關(guān)心時(shí)事，注意這方面的信息，并能夠深人思考，就能夠很快地抓住要旨，快速成文。我們可以采取比喻增色法構(gòu)思，如寫“關(guān)注生存危機(jī)”，可將地球比喻為“地球村”，在面臨著一場(chǎng)前所未有的危機(jī)，每個(gè)“村民”都有責(zé)任保護(hù)地球，拯救人類的生存家園。我們也可以采用旁征博引法，想到韓非子給人類留下的“不涸澤而漁，不焚林而獵”的古訓(xùn)，寫“關(guān)注自然”，由韓非子告訴我們對(duì)水、對(duì)森林、對(duì)魚(yú)蟲(chóng)鳥(niǎo)獸、對(duì)一切自然資源的利用都要持長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的有所保留的態(tài)度，引用蘇軾《赤壁賦》里的“耳得之而為聲，目遇之而成色，是造物者與我皆無(wú)窮也”來(lái)述說(shuō)人和自然的和諧。當(dāng)然我們也可采用情景再現(xiàn)法寫環(huán)境，借助于文學(xué)作品的描繪再現(xiàn)若干年前大自然和諧美好的情景，與今天的環(huán)境污染形成鮮明對(duì)比，提升文章立意。

題2從“地球上的最后一滴水”話題本身來(lái)看就是一個(gè)假設(shè)命題，所以可以以科幻童話為體裁，展開(kāi)豐富的想象，虛構(gòu)故事：人類如何面對(duì)眼前的現(xiàn)實(shí)，如何在地球上生存?我們可以來(lái)想象地球上只剩下最后一滴水的時(shí)候，地球干旱龜裂的情形，人類奄奄一息痛苦絕望的神情，草木枯黃、群芳凋零的蕭瑟肅殺，用濃墨重彩渲染情景。我們也可以用哲理滲透法，由對(duì)“人定勝天”的辯證思考，引出對(duì)破壞環(huán)境的人類的譴責(zé)，希望喚醒人們的良知，保護(hù)環(huán)境資源，維護(hù)生態(tài)平衡，增強(qiáng)人們的環(huán)保意識(shí)。當(dāng)然還可以采用排比鋪陳法，從現(xiàn)實(shí)的水資源的浪費(fèi)以及水缺乏等不同層面描繪，從不同的角度進(jìn)行質(zhì)疑思考，從而呼喚人們關(guān)注環(huán)保問(wèn)題，保護(hù)我們的家園。題3是命題作文，運(yùn)用推敲詞語(yǔ)法審題．題目的重心在于“點(diǎn)燃”，其施動(dòng)對(duì)象為“綠色的火焰”。綠色，是一個(gè)永恒的話題。多少年來(lái)，多少城市，因沒(méi)有實(shí)行可持續(xù)發(fā)展而付出了沉重的代價(jià)。隨著社會(huì)的進(jìn)步，綠色越來(lái)越受到人們的歡迎，它帶給人們新鮮的感覺(jué)，安全的理念，青春的向往。我們可以采用意境營(yíng)造法，用“綠色的火焰”來(lái)營(yíng)造一個(gè)溫馨和煦的生存環(huán)境，以引起人們保護(hù)綠色、關(guān)愛(ài)生命。因?yàn)轭}目本身就是一個(gè)比喻，所以也可以采用比喻增色法來(lái)強(qiáng)化文采，寫出自然、生命、心靈等各種不同的綠色火焰的內(nèi)涵。文章更可以選用整句與散句結(jié)合的形式來(lái)增強(qiáng)語(yǔ)言文采；用富有詩(shī)意化的語(yǔ)句，寫出健康綠色的精神品質(zhì)，喚起人們對(duì)真、善、美的熱愛(ài)。

名作引路

留下一片綠洲 口周慕風(fēng)

在阿拉伯的迪拜市時(shí)，我經(jīng)常被邀請(qǐng)到一個(gè)酋長(zhǎng)家中去做客。酋長(zhǎng)很熱情，每次總是親自開(kāi)著他的那輛老式吉普車來(lái)接我。

有一回，我們開(kāi)著車有說(shuō)有笑地行駛在泥土路上。路旁都是沙子，有點(diǎn)泥坦露出來(lái)已經(jīng)很不錯(cuò)了。行駛中途，酋長(zhǎng)突然剎住了吉普車。我以為有什么人要橫穿馬路，我向車周圍看看，根本沒(méi)有人，甚至連一只動(dòng)物也沒(méi)有。我問(wèn)酋長(zhǎng)停車的原因。

“你沒(méi)有看到車下有一片綠洲嗎?”酋長(zhǎng)邊說(shuō)邊做了一個(gè)表示很大的動(dòng)作。

看到我驚愕的樣子，酋長(zhǎng)開(kāi)始向后倒車。

我睜大眼睛，哪里有什么綠洲，有的只是一棵草。不過(guò)草挺鮮挺綠的，在風(fēng)中瑟瑟發(fā)抖，像是受到了驚嚇。我迷惑地看著酋長(zhǎng)，希望他再進(jìn)一步解釋。

“它很快會(huì)成為一片綠洲的!”酋長(zhǎng)走下車愉快地為那棵草澆點(diǎn)水然后自信地告訴我。

我毫不在乎地聳聳肩。

以后每次我們經(jīng)過(guò)那里時(shí)，酋長(zhǎng)總要為那棵草澆點(diǎn)水，然后繞過(guò)它開(kāi)過(guò)去。酋長(zhǎng)的領(lǐng)土根本沒(méi)有多少綠洲，放眼望去，只是滿眼的沙子，荒蕪得連草都很少。我開(kāi)始覺(jué)得酋長(zhǎng)有些無(wú)聊。

幾年后，當(dāng)我再次旅行到阿拉伯時(shí)，酋長(zhǎng)熱情地邀我去參觀剛剛建成的綠洲，而巧合的是這綠洲正是那棵小草的所在地。

“這真是那棵小草生成的綠洲?”我吃驚地問(wèn)酋長(zhǎng)。他笑而不語(yǔ)。

后來(lái)，我才知道那些花草樹(shù)木是酋長(zhǎng)專門從外地買來(lái)種上的，苦心經(jīng)營(yíng)幾年，終于有了現(xiàn)在的規(guī)模。據(jù)說(shuō)，每棵草每棵樹(shù)的根下都有一個(gè)提供水源的罐子，我總覺(jué)那罐子里盛的不是別的，正是酋長(zhǎng)的心血與汗水。

綠洲踞在金黃色的沙漠上。蓊郁的樹(shù)，濃厚的香，甘甜的水，清亮的鳥(niǎo)鳴。這沙漠中的綠洲，洗去跋涉者的疲勞，為饑渴的路人奉出食物和水，為遠(yuǎn)行的游客提供休息的處所，為迷失路途的流浪者指引方向。它是生活的供給處，精神的驛站。

我開(kāi)始理解酋長(zhǎng)的良苦用心。

留下一片綠洲，在別人的心里留下一片綠洲。無(wú)樹(shù)，無(wú)草，無(wú)水，不會(huì)太奢侈。但有樹(shù)的蔭涼，草的馨綠，水的清柔，有鳥(niǎo)語(yǔ)花香，有林軒草動(dòng)。在別人的心里留下一片綠洲，猶如遇到困難時(shí)的援助，受傷后的慰藉，挫折中的鼓勵(lì)。一張寫滿激情的字條，一個(gè)溫柔的眼神，一番溫馨的話語(yǔ)，為一個(gè)沙漠中的可憐人帶來(lái)清涼與希望。

酋長(zhǎng)所建的綠洲只是擁有暫時(shí)的給養(yǎng)，而心中的綠洲則永遠(yuǎn)伴隨所需它的人，永遠(yuǎn)是精神上的亢奮。留下一片綠洲，毋庸太多的物質(zhì)支持，心懷對(duì)一棵小草的憐惜，你心中才能裝下整個(gè)綠洲!留下一片綠洲吧，去幫助你身邊所有的人。社會(huì)需要太多太多的“綠洲”，讓所有人心中都擁人一片清涼。泉水淙淙，鳥(niǎo)語(yǔ)花香，樹(shù)林蔭郁，何等愜意!留下一片綠洲!

文采點(diǎn)評(píng)：l．運(yùn)用清新優(yōu)美的語(yǔ)言，及白描的手法，融入了人文的內(nèi)涵，使文章意旨更加豐厚，讓人在流溢的文采中感悟到環(huán)境的重要性。2．文章以情景再現(xiàn)法寫出小草與酋長(zhǎng)的對(duì)話，展示了作者心目中的意境：心中的綠洲則永遠(yuǎn)伴隨所需它的人，永遠(yuǎn)是精神上的亢奮。前后用小草的微小作鋪墊，和后面的綠洲相對(duì)照，從而引入“心中的綠洲”，由自然環(huán)境寫到心靈環(huán)境，深化了文章主旨。3．文章多處使用擬人、比喻、排比等修辭手法來(lái)描寫，顯得形象生動(dòng)。

山水吟 口陳阿細(xì)

山是雄奇、巍峨、壯麗的，層巒疊嶂，聳入云霄。彎彎曲曲的山道，需一步一個(gè)腳印地攀登。往往是行到懸崖絕壁處，忽然峰回路轉(zhuǎn)，又見(jiàn)一峰屏立眼前，方知山外有山。而一旦登臨頂峰?？匆惠喖t日撥開(kāi)云霧，朗照環(huán)宇，頓覺(jué)胸襟開(kāi)闊、壯志凌云；對(duì)著崖畔的孤松默坐，體味一個(gè)超拔卓越的生命所經(jīng)受的風(fēng)風(fēng)雨雨，此中真趣，欲辯忘言。至于探幽覽勝，更給人生閱歷增添一筆寶貴財(cái)富。當(dāng)你穿過(guò)經(jīng)年叢生的荊棘藤蔓，蛇行于昏暗幽深的巖洞，驚嘆于千奇百怪的石鐘乳，忽然一道日光照臨頭頂，眼前豁然開(kāi)朗：青天綠野，幾疑世外桃源!使你深深感悟到人生無(wú)窮的理趣，盡在“鍥而不舍”這四字真言中。

所以古人說(shuō)：“仁者樂(lè)山?！?/p>

又說(shuō)：“智者樂(lè)水?！?/p>

水清秀、淡泊、寧?kù)o，雖在山澗，卻常飛瀉如銀龍，沖激出萬(wàn)千朵盛開(kāi)的雪蓮。它含蓄千年滄桑、靜觀宇宙變化。多少風(fēng)起云涌、花開(kāi)花落，多少鳥(niǎo)影飛過(guò)，水只是沉靜地包容接納，不因物喜，不為己悲，就是被日光照射到了深處，也不過(guò)是淺淺地微笑。也許你要說(shuō)水是無(wú)情之物，可天地間，沒(méi)有無(wú)情何來(lái)有情?情到濃時(shí)便成無(wú)情。人在高山之巔，可以狂放如詩(shī)人，激揚(yáng)文字；可以豪邁似將軍，指點(diǎn)江山。但在水這面自然之鏡前，人方認(rèn)識(shí)自己，明白無(wú)論怎樣地輝煌，人終是要走下山巔，融人蕓蕓眾生、回歸平凡的生命本色。比起雄偉的高山，水似乎是柔弱的，可是再堅(jiān)硬的磐石，也經(jīng)不起一脈柔水千年萬(wàn)載的淚滴。那河邊遍布的光潔的鵝卵石，不都是以柔克剛的水的杰作嗎？

山與水，都是大自然億萬(wàn)年的杰作。山水之間，有郁郁蔥蔥的森林，有爭(zhēng)奇斗妍的白花，有飛鳥(niǎo)鳴禽，有無(wú)盡的資源和寶藏!人類曾經(jīng)依山傍水而居，狩獵于山，采百草造藥材；取水灌溉土地，收獲五谷雜糧。那時(shí)候，人類與山水有著親密無(wú)間的感情?？墒请S著人類的進(jìn)步，人們逐漸向大自然掠奪財(cái)富，于是，曾經(jīng)綠發(fā)飄揚(yáng)的山，變得光禿禿一片，潔凈的水源也遭到了嚴(yán)重污染。作為天地間唯一的“智者”，人類取得了勝利。然而，如果人類文明以犧牲自然為代價(jià)，那么這種勝利又有多大的意義? 我們只有一個(gè)地球，山水是我們的家園。讓我們保留一點(diǎn)仁者的精神，對(duì)養(yǎng)育我們長(zhǎng)大而今已變憔悴衰老的自然母親，感恩、回報(bào)!

文采點(diǎn)評(píng)：l．作者運(yùn)用排比、比喻、擬人的修辭手法，句式整齊之中富有變化，語(yǔ)言形象生動(dòng)富有文采。2．文章扣住了山水的秀美特征，以和諧的、完善的、神奇秀麗的自然呼喚人類約束自己、敬重坌命、保護(hù)自然，突出了環(huán)保主題。3．形象具體鮮明，運(yùn)用工筆描摹，傳遞出山的雄奇、巍峨、壯麗，及水的清秀、淡泊、寧?kù)o，帶給讀者人生的啟迪。

大河情結(jié) 口夢(mèng) 云

每一條河流都與文明、富饒和美麗緊緊相連。每一條河流都是生命的源泉、靈魂的家園。河水悠悠的情韻，不僅僅是春江花月的浪漫；河水的柔情，永遠(yuǎn)貼近心靈的呼喚，撫平歲月的坎坷。每一條穿越歷史的長(zhǎng)河，每一條洶涌在肥沃土地上的長(zhǎng)河，都是涓涓不息的溫暖血脈。

我們應(yīng)該銘記大河的情誼，從心靈的深處感激大河無(wú)私的奉獻(xiàn)。人類文明的起源就是從江河開(kāi)始的。在印度的恒河平原，在埃及的尼羅河三角洲．在幼發(fā)拉底河與底格里斯河兩河流域，在中國(guó)的黃河、長(zhǎng)江流域??人類歷史上最先綻放文明之花的搖籃．幾乎全部誕生在舉世聞名的大江大河的身邊。河流淌過(guò)的地方，不但土地肥沃、交通便利，就是那不舍晝夜轟天鳴響的波濤，也催促著人們不斷地奮進(jìn)追尋。

當(dāng)然，大河的意象是格外豐盈的。大河代表著生命的大氣，高高的波濤推舉著人生的帆船，沿著水流的方向把歲月之舟帶人輝煌。大河給你的是勇氣和信心，教會(huì)你如何迎接挑戰(zhàn)，并與永恒無(wú)極的大自然融為一體。白帆飄蕩在波濤里，故園的山川歷歷在目，看那秀麗無(wú)比的田園風(fēng)光，一派嫵媚的春色永駐心田。漁歌陣陣百舸爭(zhēng)流，彩云飄飄稻香起伏，我的故鄉(xiāng)被瀾滄江的蘭津之水淘洗得亮麗非凡。

那永遠(yuǎn)沸騰在我心里的藍(lán)色長(zhǎng)河——滇西峽谷中的瀾滄江，源自青藏高原的清冽圣水，歷經(jīng)漫漫長(zhǎng)旅，在我的故鄉(xiāng)匯成的寬闊大河——是我真正的母親河。在橫斷山地帶奔騰咆哮的瀾滄江，既有野性勃發(fā)的滾滾波濤．又兼具藍(lán)色溫情的美麗風(fēng)光c大河之水是泱泱之水，大河之水是生命之水。故鄉(xiāng)憑借著大河豐富的水源，以及大河兩邊肥美的土地，很早以前就成為了名揚(yáng)天下的魚(yú)米之鄉(xiāng)。

生在大河邊長(zhǎng)在大河邊，這是上天的恩賜，而擁有一條真正的大河那才是值得驕傲的。然而，人們總是對(duì)身邊的一切缺乏必要的關(guān)注，就是對(duì)滔滔的大河也是熟視無(wú)睹。許多時(shí)候人們只知道向大河索取，而忽視珍惜和愛(ài)護(hù)，于是一條條大河被污染，一片片森林被砍伐。從某種意義上看，一些大河早已徒有虛名，就像籠中的老虎缺少了虎的神韻。一些干涸的河流，河床只有白茫茫的流沙，濤聲已經(jīng)失落浪花已經(jīng)凋謝，紛紛揚(yáng)揚(yáng)的是人們懺悔的眼淚??人類在品嘗自釀的苦酒時(shí)，是否已經(jīng)警覺(jué)．一條條大河離我們?cè)絹?lái)越遠(yuǎn)了?當(dāng)務(wù)之急，我們應(yīng)該以穿越夢(mèng)美人的情懷與浪漫，體貼呵護(hù)與我們生死與共的每一條長(zhǎng)河。

文采點(diǎn)評(píng)：l．運(yùn)用排比鋪陳法，氣勢(shì)磅礴。本文開(kāi)篇即采用一組排比：每一條河流都與文明、富饒和美麗緊緊相連。每一條河流都是生命的源泉、靈魂的家園。接下來(lái)從印度的恒河平原列舉到中國(guó)的黃河、長(zhǎng)江流域，內(nèi)容充實(shí)而豐富。2．運(yùn)用比喻增色法，如：一些大河早已徒有虛名，就像籠中的老虎缺少了虎的神韻??濤聲已經(jīng)失落浪花已經(jīng)凋謝。形象的比喻，加深了讀者對(duì)文章主旨的理解，表達(dá)了作者對(duì)大河的感激、熱愛(ài)、痛惜之情。

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動(dòng)物搬遷記

口浙江金華一中 房 希

秋分剛過(guò)，樹(shù)葉還在枝頭無(wú)精打采地打著盹兒?！霸蕉被I備委員會(huì)主席貓頭鷹先生已經(jīng)準(zhǔn)備提前召開(kāi)會(huì)議了。

于是小麻雀四面八方散發(fā)消息：“召開(kāi)動(dòng)物大會(huì)了!各家各戶太陽(yáng)落山后到村后的棗林中集合!”

傍晚時(shí)分，各種動(dòng)物陸陸續(xù)續(xù)來(lái)到了會(huì)場(chǎng)。貓頭鷹看大伙來(lái)得差不多了，便首先發(fā)言：“各位同胞，今年的越冬籌備會(huì)比往年提前召開(kāi)，主要有兩方面原因：一是今年害蟲(chóng)猖獗，莊稼歉收，越冬食物較難儲(chǔ)備；二是經(jīng)過(guò)一段時(shí)間的居住，我發(fā)現(xiàn)這里騷擾太多，太不安全，環(huán)境也太差，所以我家準(zhǔn)備搬遷，今天請(qǐng)大伙來(lái)談?wù)勛约旱囊庖?jiàn)和看法。”

“搬遷?貓頭鷹先生，你真的想搬家嗎?”獵鷹疑惑地問(wèn)。

“是啊!我也是沒(méi)辦法!盡管科學(xué)家早就為我們平了反，可在這兒，仍有不少人把我們當(dāng)成‘不祥之物’，用石塊投，用獵槍打，我和家人整天生活在驚恐之中?！敝飨療o(wú)奈地?fù)u了搖頭。

“對(duì)呀。人類與我們似乎有不共戴天之仇，見(jiàn)到我們非要置我們于死地而后快，我們也是在提心吊膽過(guò)日子啊!”刺猬附和著說(shuō)。

“爸爸，媽媽，我們也隨貓頭鷹伯伯搬家吧!”眾小蛇嚷道。

“不錯(cuò)!”“不錯(cuò)!”“不錯(cuò)!”“干脆我們都搬家算了!” 眾麻雀也嘰嘰喳喳地開(kāi)了腔?！拔覀儽臼且黄眯模氲教飭?wèn)去捉蟲(chóng)。人們又安假人、又下藥，千方百計(jì)不讓我們靠近。最近，還有人想發(fā)昧心財(cái)，把我們捉了去賣給飯店做菜。大伙兒看看，原來(lái)，我們那么龐大的家庭，如今卻少得可憐了!”老麻雀說(shuō)到傷心處，忍不住放聲痛哭。

“麻雀老弟，別哭了!要說(shuō)當(dāng)菜吃，我們青蛙比你們更慘。人們建立了什么‘捉——收——運(yùn)——吃’一條龍。在他們眼里，我們哪是什么莊稼的朋友，早就成了他們桌上的下酒菜!”青蛙大哥說(shuō)到這里，肚子一鼓一鼓的，簡(jiǎn)直要?dú)庹恕?/p>

“其實(shí)就是沒(méi)人捉，我們的同胞也越來(lái)越少了，那么多農(nóng)藥噴到田里，蟲(chóng)子沒(méi)死，我們蜻蜒倒死了不少。還有的人打完藥，藥瓶隨手扔進(jìn)溝里，使我們多少親人死于非命啊!”蜻蜓接著說(shuō)。

“對(duì)!對(duì)!我們搬家!”

“這兒早已不再是山清水秀的田園了。留在這兒，我們遲早會(huì)被害得斷子絕孫的!”眾動(dòng)物義憤填膺。

貓頭鷹沒(méi)料到會(huì)員們都跟自己不謀而合，他又試探地說(shuō)：“大家安靜!請(qǐng)你們?cè)倮潇o思考一下?！?/p>

“不用再思考了，我們也決心離開(kāi)這兒了!”小蜜蜂也憤憤地說(shuō)，“當(dāng)年，我們可是慕名到這兒來(lái)的。剛來(lái)時(shí)，我們陶醉于這無(wú)邊無(wú)際的花海。誰(shuí)知道，那些嬌嫩的小花早被農(nóng)藥浸透了。我們只能采點(diǎn)野花度日，哪兒還有多余的蜂蜜過(guò)冬?還不如早點(diǎn)離開(kāi)!”

“是啊!與其在這里等死，還不如及早離開(kāi)這兒!”

“搬家!搬到遠(yuǎn)離人群的地方去!”燕子、喜鵲、狐貍、松鼠等一齊呼喊著。

“好!既然大伙主意已定，那就各自回家收拾收拾，準(zhǔn)備搬家!"貓頭鷹主席堅(jiān)定地?fù)]揮手。

文采點(diǎn)評(píng)：l．描寫具體，選用擬人、夸張等修辭手法，將沉重的環(huán)保話題通過(guò)人格化了的各種動(dòng)物之口吐露出來(lái)，擬人的寫作手法對(duì)表達(dá)作品主題起到了奇妙的效果。2．采用情景再現(xiàn)法，逐步揭示了環(huán)境惡化給人類帶來(lái)的災(zāi)難，形象鮮明，語(yǔ)言活潑，啟人深思。

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口天津市實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué) 王思濤

3030年的一個(gè)下午，伊波懊惱地坐在窗口，呆呆地望著眼前一座座早已人去樓空的大廈。頭頂灰黃灰黃的天空還下著毛毛細(xì)雨，空氣中彌漫著難聞的氣味。嗬，又是酸雨!伊波不由深深嘆了口氣。

就在幾天前，地球上的最后一批人也集體遷往建設(shè)好的火星，拋棄了這已滿目瘡痍的人類故土。當(dāng)時(shí)，伊波正在地下126層的公寓里休息，接到E—mail通知時(shí)，電梯已斷電了，當(dāng)他氣喘吁吁地爬到地面時(shí)，火箭已經(jīng)升空了。他絕望了，對(duì)天空大聲喊著：“還有我呀!不能這樣把我丟棄呀!”無(wú)人回應(yīng)，地面上所有機(jī)械設(shè)備都被掐斷電源。伊波無(wú)法與火星上的人們聯(lián)絡(luò)，更何況人們?cè)揪蜎](méi)打算在火星、地球之間架設(shè)太空站——成本太高了。

空虛、恐懼一次次襲來(lái)，幾乎讓伊波透不過(guò)氣來(lái)。突然，“咚咚咚”，工作室的門被敲響了，有人還沒(méi)走?伊波忘了可以用遙控器開(kāi)門，快步?jīng)_到門口，打開(kāi)了門。啊!“好啊，真還沒(méi)走光啊!”金絲猴氣急敗壞地吼道：“人類真自私!把地球搞成這樣，就開(kāi)溜!” 伊波還沒(méi)回過(guò)神來(lái)，其他動(dòng)物也七嘴八舌地議論著，漫罵著，丹頂鶴清清嗓子，叫道：“安靜安靜，各位請(qǐng)安靜!我來(lái)講幾句。先生，別生氣，小猴是過(guò)火了點(diǎn)，可它講的一點(diǎn)也沒(méi)錯(cuò)。雖然我們智商沒(méi)你們高，可我們很明白是誰(shuí)把我們共有的家園污染成這副模樣，樹(shù)和動(dòng)物一樣稀少，湊在一起連林子都算不上。氣候反復(fù)無(wú)常，六月下雪，一月不是酸雨就是洪災(zāi)。天是黃的，土是黃的，連空氣里都是黃沙、二氧化碳。一切這么衰敗，是誰(shuí)造成的?以后火星也會(huì)成為這個(gè)樣子，那時(shí)怎么辦?再跑?”

丹頂鶴還在喋喋不休地?cái)?shù)落著。伊波心里復(fù)雜極了，人類為什么遷徙?地球?yàn)槭裁磿?huì)這樣子?伊波流淚了，為可憐的地球流淚，更為可恥的人類流淚。

“我要替人類贖罪，建設(shè)好今天，留一個(gè)美好的地球給明天?！币敛ㄏ露Q心，開(kāi)始愚公移山般地工作，他想著，一天種下一百棵樹(shù)，一天就可以為明天創(chuàng)造億分之一的美好。哪怕耗盡這一生，他也要盡自己全力，改造滿目瘡痍的家園，留給明天一個(gè)溫馨和諧的社會(huì)。

文采點(diǎn)評(píng)：l．文章借助于科幻體裁，采用幽默詼諧的語(yǔ)言．妙趣橫生中給人以深思和警醒，立意深刻。因?yàn)橄胂笫址ǖ氖褂?，能形象生?dòng)地再現(xiàn)情景，且在現(xiàn)實(shí)與想象的對(duì)比中給人以深刻的啟示。2．運(yùn)用濃墨重彩法。使用對(duì)話、場(chǎng)景等描寫手法，把地球千瘡百孔的景象形象地傳遞出來(lái)．更能震撼人心。

文采仿寫庫(kù)

1．文人筆下生花的景物如今已一去不復(fù)返。人們給廣袤而深邃的大海加了幾分修飾，在大海中加了一種黑色的調(diào)味劑，并鋪上了一層白色的點(diǎn)綴品，使大海面目全非，全然沒(méi)有了往日的風(fēng)采。走入森林不會(huì)再有“兩只黃鸝鳴翠柳，一行白鷺上青天”的飄逸心情??是為了考驗(yàn)樹(shù)木的生命力，還是為了給其他樹(shù)木提供更大的生長(zhǎng)空間?人們?yōu)槭裁磳⒁豢每酶叽蠓泵臉?shù)木截去半枝呢?這本來(lái)是動(dòng)物們棲息的家園，卻被人類無(wú)情地占領(lǐng)了。遠(yuǎn)處天空彌漫著一團(tuán)團(tuán)的黑煙，向高空逼近，最后進(jìn)入大氣層，與大氣一比高下。這一切的一切，把大自然嚇壞了。琦君在《淚珠與珍珠》里曾說(shuō)過(guò)“眼因多流淚水而愈益清明”?？蔀槭裁茨飨碌臏I中有黑色的雜質(zhì)呢?我想，這一定是因?yàn)槟鷥?nèi)心充滿了的苦楚吧!2．這不是夢(mèng)境，這是真實(shí)的佘山，不再是舊日的污穢不堪。只見(jiàn)那山峰連綿起伏，像一個(gè)個(gè)親密的小伙伴兒，肩并著肩，手拉著手，顯得十分平等友好．好像誰(shuí)都不愿脫離集體，誰(shuí)都不愿盛氣凌人，也不愿孤獨(dú)落單。它峰巒疊翠，郁郁蔥蔥，就好像是一座墨綠翡翠雕成的屏風(fēng)。來(lái)到佘山腳下，抬頭上望．我覺(jué)得那一座座山峰好像有意顯示自己的高大似的，突然躥高了許多，沖過(guò)半空的白云，直逼藍(lán)天。天空一片蔚藍(lán)，佘山滿眼墨綠。一陣山風(fēng)吹來(lái)。佘山的綠樹(shù)立刻活躍起來(lái)，好似掀起了一陣奔騰涌動(dòng)的綠浪。再細(xì)瞧這綠浪，才發(fā)現(xiàn)它也不盡都是墨綠。你看，那新芽嫩葉從這兒的枝丫間探出腦袋，又從那兒的枝頭露出笑臉，給墨綠色的海洋涂抹出一些淡淡的嫩綠。

3．她那美麗的長(zhǎng)發(fā)——流水，已被人類的廢棄物涂得污穢不堪，那是因?yàn)槿祟惖摹奥斆鞑胖恰彼?，他們想事半功倍，于是人類把那難處理的廢物拋給了母親，而自己去享受；她那美麗的衣衫——森林，已被人類撕得所剩無(wú)幾，那是因?yàn)槿祟悶榱俗约簳簳r(shí)的享受和實(shí)惠，卻不顧母親已蒙羞；她那細(xì)嫩的皮膚—一土地，已被人類的“白色”物品和各種藥水染得粗糙無(wú)比，寸草不生，只有那無(wú)邊沙漠慢慢爬上來(lái)；她身邊那迷人的氣息——空氣，已被人類發(fā)明的汽車弄得連眼都睜不開(kāi)，雖然她在早期已經(jīng)告訴過(guò)人類那把遮陽(yáng)傘的重要性．但她那任性的孩子還是肆無(wú)忌憚地享用那些帶氧氯烴的玩意，毫不顧惜自己和兄弟們的性命。

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教師示例：我最喜歡文采片斷2。在濃密的綠樹(shù)叢中攀登，好像在綠色童話的世界里暢游。登上余山頂峰，我仿佛站在巨大無(wú)比的浪尖上漂浮著：腳下綠色的浪在鋪展，在起伏，在涌動(dòng)；眼前白色的云在繚繞，在變幻，在奔騰。稍稍低頭朝遠(yuǎn)方望去．平日毫不顯眼的田野，現(xiàn)在卻變得那么新鮮有趣：一塊一塊規(guī)則的正方形和長(zhǎng)方形，有的深綠，有：的淺綠，有的金黃，有的淡黃，有的紅綠相間，編織成一塊巨大無(wú)比的彩色地毯。公路上的汽車，看上去就像小小的玩具似的，在緩慢地爬行??哦，眼前的一切都似乎變小了，只有那余山的綠，仍然沒(méi)有改變，從山腳下一直綠到山頂上，空氣中也蕩漾著綠的清新。

學(xué)生仿寫：

押題王

我們生活在大自然中。雄奇的山峰，廣袤的原野，歡快的小溪，深沉的海洋，都會(huì)引起我們的深思；朝暉夕陰，寒來(lái)暑往，花開(kāi)花落，鳥(niǎo)語(yǔ)蟲(chóng)鳴，都會(huì)引起我們的遐想。在深思與遐想中，我們會(huì)有所感悟，感悟自然的寧?kù)o、和諧、壯觀、奇麗；在或喜或悲中使心靈找到歸宿，棲息在精神的自然家園。

請(qǐng)以“保護(hù)我們的家園”為話題，寫一篇文章，文體不限，題目自擬，600字左右，若寫成詩(shī)歌，不得低于20行。

應(yīng)考文采庫(kù)

比喻增色法

◆曾經(jīng)的大自然是那么溫和、親切，如今她卻風(fēng)度不再了。她憎惡沒(méi)有良知的人類，無(wú)情的人類，如此肆無(wú)忌憚地殘戮野生動(dòng)物，砍伐“空氣清潔工”森林??大自然流淚了，她忍不住自己的傷感，哭了??她眼淚足以使世界變成一個(gè)沒(méi)有邊際的太平洋。然而，大自然強(qiáng)忍住了自己的情緒，等待著人類意識(shí)的蘇醒，等待著有朝一日人類能夠感悟大自然。

排比鋪陳法

◆向往那“晴空一鶴排云上”的碧波藍(lán)天，卻不禁在“黑云壓城城欲摧”中迷失了自我。碧波藍(lán)天，被黑云無(wú)情地取代了。誰(shuí)愿看到一望無(wú)垠的綠色被一群樹(shù)樁代替，誰(shuí)愿嗆人的毒氣取代沁人心脾的新鮮空氣，誰(shuí)愿嘈雜的機(jī)械聲取代動(dòng)人的天籟之音呢?誰(shuí)愿漂著泡沫的湖水壓抑山泉?jiǎng)尤说囊舴?大自然賦予人類的美好事物太多了，人類不知感恩，卻恩將仇報(bào)，可悲、可嘆、可憐!

幽默詼諧法

◆人們不停地在索取，但沒(méi)有想到奉獻(xiàn)，于是地球也就快枯竭了，而我，一只老鼠，一只免疫力極強(qiáng)的老鼠，生活卻日益富裕了。人們都說(shuō)我“鼠目寸光”，其實(shí)這只是“人眼看鼠低”；在我的眼里，人類才是“人目寸光”哩。他們對(duì)自然的強(qiáng)取豪奪，借用人類自已的話，那是“吃子孫飯”，這豈不是“人目寸光”嗎?我們鼠輩為了生存，吃一點(diǎn)人類糧食，就被打成了賊。和人類相比，我們吃點(diǎn)算得什么?大家不妨看看人類在吃什么：上吃飛禽，下吃魚(yú)鱉，中吃走獸。多虧我們鼠字輩臟點(diǎn)，否則也難逃“盤中餐”的厄運(yùn)。和人類相比，我們老鼠的一點(diǎn)“小動(dòng)作”，豈足道哉?

哲理滲透法

◆今天，我們要為自己所做的一切負(fù)責(zé)，“知錯(cuò)能改，善莫大焉”。地球是我們賴以生存的唯一空間，而我們卻不是地球上的唯一生物，當(dāng)?shù)厍蛏现皇Ｏ氯祟悤r(shí)，便是人類滅亡之日，所以請(qǐng)愛(ài)護(hù)我們的地球。今天，又將有一個(gè)島嶼從地平線上消失：明天，又將有一個(gè)物種從地球上滅絕。面對(duì)合成化學(xué)物質(zhì)將有可能毀滅人類和地球的危機(jī)，愚昧無(wú)知和麻木不仁只意味著坐以待斃，我們需要的是：由憂患產(chǎn)生的積極果斷和切實(shí)有效的行動(dòng)。請(qǐng)珍惜我們美好的家園，否則地球上的最后一滴水將是人類的眼淚!

情景再現(xiàn)法

◆變成居民戶口，城市里的樹(shù)。脫離土地和森林的本質(zhì)，綠是裝飾的色彩。夜晚畫(huà)出樹(shù)的思念，在遙遠(yuǎn)的曠野。喧囂，你體會(huì)城市的個(gè)性，一個(gè)感情飽滿的人。寂寞，城市里的樹(shù)；站在街頭。承受飛塵以及濁氣的侵凌。那個(gè)孤獨(dú)的人，暗自流淚。

樹(shù)的本質(zhì)逐漸更改，飄落的葉。那些游離的魂，無(wú)法找到回歸的路徑。殘冬蒞臨，伸向蒼穹的枝丫嶙峋。企圖抓住季節(jié)的溫和，這些離群的士兵。鳥(niǎo)的歌唱，安撫靈魂的梵音。

一夜的風(fēng)雨，緊握生命的根系在泥土里深入。前行，苦苦追尋，森林的蹤跡。城市里的樹(shù)，一面自然的旗幟，逐漸撤退。

第四篇：環(huán)保類英語(yǔ)作文

Recently the problem of protecting the environment has been brought into focus.With the rapid development of economy, the surroundings of us become severe.Nowadays PM2.5 and other problems has become a problem we have to see.As is known to us that once the balance in nature is disturbed, it can lead to unpredictable results.Many factors that contribute to it.Firstly, merchants only pay attention to profit.So we should protect the environment and coordinated economic development.Secondly, the cars in China increasingly raise.We all know off gas can pollute air deeply.So we should suggest people that go to work by bike or bus.Thirdly, wasting water and excessively cutting down trees is increasingly common.I think we should suppose environmental protection knowledge.We should spare no effort to protect our environment.Only in this way can we solve pollution problems.I believe nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets the mind to it.

第五篇：英語(yǔ)環(huán)保類作文

關(guān)于英語(yǔ)環(huán)保作文 1)It’s our duty to save water.As we know , water is very important to man, we can’t live without water.（沒(méi)有水我們就不能生存）The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.But some people don’t care about it.（但是有些人卻不關(guān)心或不在意。）They waste a lot of water in their daily life.（日常生活中他們浪費(fèi)很多水。）Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.(他們排放污水到河流里。）They throw rubbish into rivers , too.（他們還亂扔垃圾到河流里）Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.（受到嚴(yán)重污染。）Something must be done to stop the pollution.Only in this way can we live happily.。）If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(如果我們不節(jié)約水，那么最后一滴水也許會(huì)是我們?nèi)祟惖难蹨I)

2)Planting trees

Trees are very helpful and important for us.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future.（為了將來(lái)我們的生活過(guò)得更好、更加健康我們應(yīng)該種更多的樹(shù)。）It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.（愛(ài)護(hù)和保護(hù)環(huán)境是每個(gè)人的責(zé)任和義務(wù)。）

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Recently we have held a class meeting to discuss what is

considered to be honorable behavior and what is shameful.（最近我們班開(kāi)了個(gè)班會(huì)討論什么是光榮和恥辱。）It is really a pity to see all this in our school.Some students don’t respect their teachers or parents.（不尊敬老師和父母）Some don’t take their studies seriously and cheat in exams.Some throw wastes everywhere and pollute the environment.It is honorable to obey the law and rules , care much about our class and study hard.（關(guān)心班級(jí)、努力學(xué)習(xí)、遵紀(jì)守法是光榮）It is shameful to break school rules, to be selfish or to

make little effort to achieve success.（違反學(xué)校紀(jì)律、自私驕傲）We should respect others and think more of them than of ourselves.（我們應(yīng)該尊敬別人經(jīng)常關(guān)心別人）We should work hard and make much more progress to repay the society.我們應(yīng)該努力學(xué)習(xí)取得更大進(jìn)步從而回報(bào)社會(huì)We should try our best to keep the environment clean。（我們應(yīng)該想方設(shè)法保持干凈的環(huán)境。）

4)環(huán)保問(wèn)題(environmental matter)

The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays.Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future.Due to lacking of environmental concepts, people's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.In order to live a better life, we need a cleaner world.We should now be concerned for environment by creating a better future for our next generation.In conclusion, the environmental matter is an important issue that directly affects very human in the world!

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人與環(huán)境是和諧相處的，我們生存在地球上，人是自然之子，而不能僅把人看作自然的征服者，大家都知道，人類只有一個(gè)地球，地球上的山山水水、動(dòng)物。植物是人類的細(xì)胞，如果我們把它損壞了，破壞了大自然的組織，等于消滅人類。因此，環(huán)境要與社會(huì)公德聯(lián)系起來(lái)，與實(shí)踐行為作為人格教育的一項(xiàng)重要內(nèi)容來(lái)抓。每個(gè)人都要履行保護(hù)環(huán)境的責(zé)任和義務(wù)。Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals.Plant human cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind.Therefore, the environment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important element of it.Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment.我們?cè)賮?lái)看一個(gè)命題作文。

：Man and His Environment(人和環(huán)境)

Man and His Environment

Throughout history man has changed his physical environment in order to improve his way of life.With the tools of technology he has altered many physical features of the earth.He has transformed woodlands and prairies into farms and made lakes and reserviors out of rivers for irrigation purposes or hydroelectric power.Man has also modified the face of the earth by draining marshes and cutting through mountains to build roads and railways.However, man's changes to the physical environment have not always had beneficial results.Today, pollution of the air and water is an increasing danger to the health of the planet.Each day thousands of tons of gases come out of the exhausts of motor vehicles.Smoke from factories pollutes the air of industrialized areas and the surrounding areas of the countryside.The pollution of water is equally harmful.The whole ecological balance of the sea is being changed and industrial wastes have already made many rivers lifeless.Now environmental protection is more pressing than ever before.As we know, massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man's existence.Indifference to these problems will mean committing suicide.Therefore, effective measures should be taken and laws passed to conserve environment.Otherwise,man is certain to suffer from the serious consequences caused by this lack of care for his living surroundings.人和環(huán)境

人類有史以來(lái)不斷改變自然環(huán)境，以改善自己的生活方式。人類借助技術(shù)工具改變了地球的許多自然特征。他將林地和草原改造成為農(nóng)田，使江河變成湖泊和水庫(kù)，用于灌溉或用于水力發(fā)電。人類還通過(guò)給沼澤地排水、鑿石劈山、修建公路和鐵路等方式，改變了地球的面貌。

然而，人類改變自然環(huán)境并不總是帶來(lái)有益的結(jié)果。今天，空氣和水的污染給地球的健康造成越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重的危害。每天機(jī)動(dòng)車輛的排氣管排出成千上萬(wàn)噸廢氣。工廠釋放的煙霧污染了工業(yè)區(qū)和周圍鄉(xiāng)村的空氣。水污染同樣有害，海洋的整個(gè)生態(tài)平衡正在受到破壞，工業(yè)廢水已使許多河流的生物死亡。

現(xiàn)在，環(huán)境保護(hù)比以往任何時(shí)候都更為緊迫。我們知道，對(duì)環(huán)境的大規(guī)模破壞已經(jīng)帶來(lái)負(fù)面影響，甚至嚴(yán)重威脅到人類的生存。對(duì)這些問(wèn)題漠不關(guān)心將意味著自我毀滅。因此，應(yīng)采取有效措施并通過(guò)法律來(lái)保護(hù)環(huán)境。不然的話，人類勢(shì)必遭受因其不關(guān)心生存環(huán)境而引起的嚴(yán)重后果之苦。

最后，我們?cè)賮?lái)看一個(gè)由關(guān)于水污染的問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)大家關(guān)注的是，水污染問(wèn)題現(xiàn)在很嚴(yán)重。尤其是去年松花江水污染問(wèn)題，可能會(huì)反射到中考英語(yǔ)作文上

Water pollution 水源污染

Water is used in homes, in farming, and in manufacturing.The water used by the people comes from oceans, lakes, rivers, and streams.Many water sources are becoming polluted.People are throwing things into the water.Factories are dumping waste materials into the water.Cities are dumping sewage into the water.Some water sources have become so badly polluted that the water cannot be made fit to use.Would you like to drink water that came from a source that had been so badly mistreated? Now is the time that we should take up our responsibility to protect our environment from being polluted.[參考范文]

Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest.Every day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty.But a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.They threw their rubbish,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste paper on the ground.Sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed birds.Some even made fires in the woods to cook food.How dangerous it was.Luckily,great changes have taken place here.Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins,and they are doing their best to protect the birds and plants as well.They bring their own meals instead of cooking to prevent starting a forest fire in the mountains.All these changes make us very happy.6）、關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)（水資源節(jié)約）的話題

Our environment is very important for our lives.We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on.In the past, there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now,people cut down many trees and air pollution,water polloution is very serious.The environment around us becomes very terrible.We should protect our environment.First, we should plant many trees to keep water.Second , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work.Third , we shouldn’t throw the dirty water into the river.Fourth, we shouldn’t use the plastic bags.Finally, we can ask more people to join us.Let’s protect our environment!

7）、保護(hù)我們的城市(Saving Our City)

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities.Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly.Or it may cause a lot of problems.It may pollute the air and water.People may get ill when they breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water.Our city has started to face the problem.Some rubbish is sorted and sent to a certain place.Waste gas is cleaned before it goes into the air.Waste water is also cleaned before it is poured into rivers.People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere.We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution.8）、保衛(wèi)地球(Saving the Earth)

As time goes by, man is making the earth sick.People cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere.Factories let out their waste without doing anying to it.This has cause some serious problems.Such as the land is sandy, the river is dirty, the air is less clean, even the temperature of the earth is rising.What should we do to save the earth ? My suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put rubbish into dusbins and stop factories pouring waste directly into the air or rivers.In all, we have only one earth, we should do our best to protect it, or we will regret.9）、如何保護(hù)環(huán)境(How to Protect the Environment)

Good environment can make people feel happy and fit.To improve the environment means to improve our life.We should plant more trees and flowers around us.We shouldn’t cut them down.We should stop factories from pouring waste water into the river and waste gas into the air.Whenever we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into dusbins.Never spit in public.Don’t draw on public walls.It’s our duty to protect the environment.10）、關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)的話題

Our environment is very important for our lives.We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on.In the past, there were many trees around us ,the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now,people cut down many trees.Air pollution and water polloution are very serious.The environment around us becomes very terrible.We should protect our environment.First, we should plant many trees to keep water.Second , we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work..Third , we shouldn’t throw the dirty water into the river.Fourth, we shouldn’t use the plastic bags.Finally, we can ask more people to join us.11）、[人與環(huán)境是和諧相處的，我們生存在地球上，人是自然之子，而不能僅把人看作自然的征服者，大家都知道，人類只有一個(gè)地球，地球上的山山水水、動(dòng)物。植物是人類的細(xì)胞，如果我們把它損壞了，破壞了大自然的組織，等于消滅人類。因此，環(huán)境要與社會(huì)公德聯(lián)系起來(lái)，與實(shí)踐行為作為人格教育的一項(xiàng)重要內(nèi)容來(lái)抓。每個(gè)人都要履行保護(hù)環(huán)境的責(zé)任和義務(wù)。]

Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals.Plant human cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind.Therefore, the environment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important element of it.Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment.