第一篇：校園生活類作文應(yīng)考訓(xùn)練

校園生活類作文應(yīng)考訓(xùn)練

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大學(xué)的意義

What we desire in a college is much more than a degree, nor a job prospect, but a chance to get higher education.It is an education for a civilized mind.Namely, the business of college is not only to train us, but to put us in touch with what the best human minds have thought.Through reading books, man’s peculiar accomplishment, we add to our human experience and enter the worlds we have not the time to travel in literal time.Reading Shakespeare, for example, we have the experience of Shakespeare, which takes us into his world.A civilized mind is, in essence, one that contains many such lives and many such worlds.考試作弊

According to a recent poll, 65 percent of college students have admitted cheating on exams at least once.To deal with the widespread dishonesty in examination, some educators advocate a trusting practice, in which no invigilate keeps watching students in exam, showing much trust in students.One conspicuous argument is that distrust can be contagious;some efforts to prevent cheating may actually encourage cheating---a person may feel “they don’t trust me anyway”, and be tempted to “beat the system”.This practice has turned out effective in preventing cheating on exam.大學(xué)生結(jié)婚

The decision by the educational department that college students are permitted to marry has aroused a heated discussion.Some people for the decision base their argument on the law about the age of marriage.They hold that any citizen beyond 24 has the right to get married no matter what identity he has.Others against the decision hold that the permission will affect college students in the following three aspects.Firstly, marriage life is time-consuming and it will tear students away from learning, students’ main task.Secondly, marriage life is money-consuming and it will exert more burden on their families besides tuition when students have no ability to support themselves.Thirdly, the permission is very likely to promote some unpleasant incidents on campus.Admiring others’ marriage life, some students are likely to find temporary companions hastily to get rid of the loneliness.Thus things like living together and even pregnancy are very likely to happen.學(xué)生住家？住校？

Living at home, though they can enjoy the comfort of the family, students may lose the opportunities to communicate with others, and therefore it is not easy for them to get friendship, understanding and encouragement from their contemporaries, which however is critical in their future social life.Living at home, though they can enjoy the warmth from their parents, they may fail to get the campus experience.It seems that they come to college only for academic lessons, neglecting the functions of a college as a place where we can learn to compete and cooperate through various extracurricular activities.So I insist that we should live on college campus.學(xué)生打工

If you think what a part-time job brings to us is only money, you are completely wrong.When we are earning money, we also earn social experience, which is a good preparation for the future job-hunting campaigns.范文1 Directions: Some people hold that intelligence is critical to one’s success in study, but others believe that diligence is more important than intelligence.What’s your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Intelligence or Diligence: Which One Is More Important in Study? You are to write in three parts.In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea.In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.The Importance of Diligence in Study

As to the heated discussion, which is more important, intelligence or diligence, some people argue for the importance of intelligence.They support their argument by some exceptional examples to show that they can never cultivate an idiot into a successful man no matter how hard he works.But I insist that diligence be critical in our study.The importance of diligence lies in two aspects.For one thing, diligence can make up for intelligent insufficiency.Diligence means persistence in one’s work.By steady work we can constantly enrich our knowledge and accumulate experiences in solving problems.Even from failures we can learn more about the truth.That is the essence of the famous saying that “Diligence redeems stupidity.” For another, diligence can make the intelligent more successful.If a person does not devote himself to his work by spending much time reading or doing exercise, though he may have great talent, he can never grasp what he should learn.Zhong Yong in ancient China is a good case in point.He, though gifted in composing poems when he was a young boy, grew mediocre due to no further learning.On the contrary, Edison, one of the greatest inventors in the world, though intelligent enough, still holds that “99% persistence plus 1% inspiration results in great achievement.”

Seeing the above evidence, I believe, you will agree with me on the point that diligence is the mother of success.

第二篇：中考英語作文校園生活類

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優(yōu)尼全能英語：中考英語作文校園生活類范文

多彩校園

學(xué)校簡(jiǎn)介 ★ 范文13.在一次英語班會(huì)上，老師請(qǐng)同學(xué)們以Proud of My School 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給的提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括學(xué)校面貌，你在校的活動(dòng)，以及你喜歡學(xué)校的原因。

提示詞：bigsmall，trees，play games，family，be kind to，befeel proud of Proud of my school My school is very big with several tall buildings.We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it.There are many flowers everywhere.My busy school life always makes me happy.I have lots of fun at school.I not only have all kinds of classes，but also take part in colorful activities after classes.I play games and do lots of sports，like playing basketball，football and table tennis.I love my school because it’s like a big family.The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.I‘m leaving my school.I’ll never forget the days I‘ve spent here.友情至上 ★ 范文14.假設(shè)你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你與同學(xué)們?cè)谝黄饘W(xué)習(xí)、參加各種活動(dòng)，相互幫助，彼此之間建立了深厚的友誼。校園網(wǎng)的英語論壇開辟了 “Thank you letter” 專欄。請(qǐng)按下面的要求給你的同學(xué)Ling Feng寫一封感謝信。注意：1.這封信要表達(dá)你對(duì)Ling Feng的感謝；2.信中要簡(jiǎn)述感謝Ling Feng的原因，適當(dāng)舉例，并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?；提示詞語：thank you，at the end of，kind，forget，help… with，stay in touch Dear Ling Feng，I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education.You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.You have given me so much help that I will never forget.Last term，I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week.When I was worrying about the lessons，you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.With your help，I didn’t fall behind others.Since then，we have become very close friends.I think I’ll try to help others just like you.Thank you again.Even though we may go to different schools，I’ll always stay in touch with you.I wish you success for the future.優(yōu)尼全能英語提供純英式幼兒英語、兒童英語、少兒英語、青少兒英語、留學(xué)、游學(xué)英語培訓(xùn)課程,。趕緊登陸優(yōu)尼全能英語官網(wǎng)獲取免費(fèi)試聽課程，開始英語學(xué)習(xí)之旅。

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Yours，Liu Yan 課余活動(dòng) ★ 范文15.體育鍛煉與參加夏令營(yíng)

Most of us spend one or two hours on sports one week，some do less than one hour.As for me，most of my sports time is for running.Sometimes playing basketball with my friends is also fun for me.I think it’s necessary for everyone to go out to do sports because it’s good for our health and study.And I’d love to take part in the summer camp.First we’d better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better.Next we can visit some museums，places of interest to open our eyes.Finally I hope we will have a chance to live in foreign families.I think it’s a good way to understand the different cultures between different countries.I really want to make friends with foreign students because we’re in the same world.At the same time，the activities can help us relax ourselves after the examinations and improve our English.運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)

★ 范文16.一家英文報(bào)社正在舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你積極參加。題目是“一次難忘的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)”。內(nèi)容要求：你或你的朋友參加了什么項(xiàng)目，結(jié)果怎樣，感覺如何？提示詞語：year，take part in，field event（relay race，high jump，long jump，shot put，excited，take the first prize.This year，I took part in the relay race，I was running the last lap.It was the final event on sports meet.Everyone was paying attention.All the runners got ready at the starting line.As soon as the race began，everyone was too excited to stop cheering.When it was my turn，I could feel the Class 4’s runner catch up with me.So I try my best to run faster，finally，our class won the first prize in the most exciting event.I was happy that I won another prize for my class.This is the most unforgettable sports that I had.畢業(yè)感想 ★ 范文17.初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請(qǐng)你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想（請(qǐng)不要寫出真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱以及真實(shí)姓名）。

提示詞供參考。three years，memories，one of，one day，think，happy/ sorry How time flies！I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in three years’ life.On of them impressed me very much.I still remember，when I began to learn English，I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried，I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem，she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then，she has kept helping me.Little by little，I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.優(yōu)尼全能英語提供純英式幼兒英語、兒童英語、少兒英語、青少兒英語、留學(xué)、游學(xué)英語培訓(xùn)課程,。趕緊登陸優(yōu)尼全能英語官網(wǎng)獲取免費(fèi)試聽課程，開始英語學(xué)習(xí)之旅。

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優(yōu)尼全能英語提供純英式幼兒英語、兒童英語、少兒英語、青少兒英語、留學(xué)、游學(xué)英語培訓(xùn)課程,。趕緊登陸優(yōu)尼全能英語官網(wǎng)獲取免費(fèi)試聽課程，開始英語學(xué)習(xí)之旅。

第三篇：時(shí)事評(píng)論類作文訓(xùn)練

時(shí)事評(píng)論類作文訓(xùn)練

一、寫作要領(lǐng)

1、就事評(píng)事。要點(diǎn)：旗幟鮮明

緊扣事件

2、寫出分析和理由。要點(diǎn)：有理有據(jù)

3、寫好由頭。要點(diǎn)：簡(jiǎn)潔明了

二、時(shí)評(píng)基本寫作模式

第一步：引用材料，擺出現(xiàn)象；第二步：從現(xiàn)象中提取論述的觀點(diǎn)；第三步：分析論證觀點(diǎn)（提醒：要聯(lián)系實(shí)際，緊緊圍繞論點(diǎn)，運(yùn)用各種論證方法）；第四步：總結(jié)全文，提出倡議。

三、示例題目

近年來，隨著中國(guó)改革開放的不斷深入，外來文化對(duì)中國(guó)的影響也越來越大，中國(guó)人開始熱衷西方的文化，特別是一些在西方才有的節(jié)日，在我們這里也被隆重地慶祝著。為此，中國(guó)人民大學(xué)揚(yáng)名、武漢大學(xué)陳喬見等十位名校博士生聯(lián)署發(fā)表文章抵制過圣誕節(jié)。無獨(dú)有偶，成都教育局下發(fā)通知，要求學(xué)校嚴(yán)禁學(xué)生在12月10日——28日期間上街參加圣誕節(jié)群體聚集活動(dòng)?？戳诉@些消息后，你有何想法？請(qǐng)針對(duì)消息內(nèi)容寫一篇時(shí)事評(píng)論，要求觀點(diǎn)明確，有理有據(jù)。寫成論述文體，題目自擬，不少于800字。

四、審題思路

本題為材料作文。材料講述了兩則新聞，事件可分別概述為：十位博士生聯(lián)署發(fā)表文章抵制過圣誕節(jié)；成都教育局嚴(yán)禁學(xué)生上街參加圣誕節(jié)群體聚集活動(dòng)。題目要求就這兩則消息，寫一篇論述類的文章。因此，在寫作時(shí)，必須就材料中的事件發(fā)表自己的看法，可以是贊同，亦可以是反對(duì)，但都要求不能脫離材料中所述的事件，論述要有理有據(jù)。

五、評(píng)分及評(píng)分細(xì)則（滿分60分）

（一）關(guān)于內(nèi)容

1、切合與符合題意：

（1）贊同博士生和教育局的做法——反對(duì)文化擴(kuò)張、捍衛(wèi)傳統(tǒng)文化的主體性、警惕圣誕節(jié)的商業(yè)炒作、娛樂和信仰的關(guān)系。

（2）反對(duì)博士生和教育局的做法——堵不如疏、消除民族文化的自卑心理、文化交流是經(jīng)濟(jì)信息全球化的必然、對(duì)外國(guó)文化要取其精華去其糟粕。

2、基本符合題意：

（1）提及材料，但論述的重點(diǎn)和材料關(guān)系不密切。

（2）只是談喜歡不喜歡過圣誕節(jié)，而不涉及節(jié)日背后的文化、心理、信仰層面。

（3）沒有針對(duì)當(dāng)今的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象進(jìn)行拓展。

（二）關(guān)于表達(dá)

1．一般說來，時(shí)事評(píng)論的寫作包括以下幾個(gè)步驟：擺現(xiàn)象，提觀點(diǎn)，分析證明，類比拓展，結(jié)論。文章完全不提及材料判為三等及以下。

2．凡是記敘類、說明類、散文類的文章均為“不符合文體的文章”，判為四等?！緝?yōu)秀例文】

論文化戰(zhàn)

近年來國(guó)內(nèi)文化界掀起一陣反西化的熱潮，央視國(guó)學(xué)系列一出，百姓不分男女無論老少紛紛群起而響應(yīng)，聲討筆伐，很是熱鬧。今又聞大學(xué)名校博士生聯(lián)署抵制圣誕節(jié)、當(dāng)局禁圣之舉，又是一番手筆。筆者感慨之余，帶點(diǎn)無奈；欣慰之中，略有疑惑，一時(shí)百感，今便趁此機(jī)會(huì)一并談?wù)劇＃ㄒ霾牧蠑[現(xiàn)象）

究其圣誕節(jié)在我華夏土地上如此猖獗，也不過是商品經(jīng)濟(jì)的效應(yīng)罷了。改革開放以來，我國(guó)一直秉承開門迎賓，和氣生財(cái)?shù)脑瓌t，迎來各路商家。在這商品進(jìn)門之時(shí)，自然也帶著

他人文化的風(fēng)塵。初我國(guó)因?yàn)閲?guó)力尚不足與西方相抗，自己的產(chǎn)品在西方成熟工藝下相形見絀，西方商品大行其道，這商品上附著的文化效應(yīng)也四處橫行，而我國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)文化也因部分商品的難看而貶值。圣誕節(jié)說白了也就是搭乘了圣誕器物及西方商品而來的乘客罷了。每次過圣誕，誰最開心？非過節(jié)的人，而確乎是那賺得金銀滿盆的商家?，F(xiàn)在政令“血書”并下，先不說單薄強(qiáng)硬的禁止能否阻擋經(jīng)濟(jì)全球化后商品侵入的潮流，就是每年為了給國(guó)內(nèi)國(guó)外帶來幾個(gè)億收益的圣誕器物，商家們也不會(huì)眼睜睜讓你斷了財(cái)路。更別說那被完全西化的年輕“哈”族了。所以，單純的“公車上書”與政令嚴(yán)禁我認(rèn)為是不可取的。發(fā)動(dòng)民眾可以，但如今對(duì)抗的是金幣與貿(mào)易潮流，應(yīng)和者注定是無法成什么氣候的。（擺靶立論析根源）

難道就眼睜睜看著我國(guó)舉目盡赤，滿地節(jié)假洋鬼子么？不。大禹治水，疏而不堵。故一味蠻干是不行的。清朝的悲劇也說明了僅僅筑一堵高墻不僅堵住別人也堵死了自己。這是一場(chǎng)沒有硝煙的戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)，是文化之間的侵略與反侵略的戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)。要戰(zhàn)勝之，必先找出癥結(jié)所在，再批亢搗虛，一舉擒敵。

一、文化戰(zhàn)。要對(duì)抗大胡子圣誕老人，必先樹立自己的小兩口牛郎織女。五千年的文化中，有價(jià)值何僅知識(shí)技藝？我們的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日一向很豐富，只是不知為何如今在法定節(jié)日中通通“不合法”了，重拾傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，國(guó)家包裝一下宣傳一下便能上戰(zhàn)殺賊了，如日本，傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日“秋祭”是法定放假的。有了法律做后盾，大胡子公公也鬧不出大場(chǎng)面。文化最終也只能由文化來戰(zhàn)勝。

二、經(jīng)濟(jì)戰(zhàn)。文化入侵實(shí)質(zhì)上就是經(jīng)濟(jì)入侵，大胡子們都是乘著商品來的。沒有那些影片商品，大胡子們就形如殘廢。一段時(shí)間內(nèi)，韓國(guó)也是遭受了美國(guó)“和平演變”的商品文化沖擊，但韓國(guó)人不傻，迅速在自身傳統(tǒng)文化中汲取養(yǎng)分，商品包裝后扔擲過去，一聲爆響，連著亞洲滿地都是《大長(zhǎng)今》《海神號(hào)》。這還是我們應(yīng)效法的，單純學(xué)術(shù)上的弘揚(yáng)文化是不夠的，還可以商品化文化。迅速在傳統(tǒng)文化上找到自己的品牌，商品化后便可攻可守，無往不利。如今中國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)實(shí)力已成熟，缺乏的僅是國(guó)民對(duì)國(guó)家文化商品的信任。找準(zhǔn)一個(gè)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，商品包裝后打入市場(chǎng)，斷大胡子們的臂助，用兵之道也?！段饔斡洝贰⒐Ψ?，在世界各國(guó)民眾心中扎的根便是范例。（聯(lián)系古今提做法）

學(xué)者們與成都政府其心可嘉，但行事未免稍有毛躁。文化之戰(zhàn)并不是剎時(shí)能解決的，而須持久戰(zhàn)之。巨龍正在騰飛，觀夫現(xiàn)在中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)的熱潮形勢(shì)，相信中華文化耀目于世界文化之林也是指日可待的。（結(jié)論）

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文起筆高遠(yuǎn)，文化視野開闊。在開頭“擺現(xiàn)象”部分，不僅擺出聯(lián)署抵制、政令禁圣之舉，還聯(lián)系當(dāng)今國(guó)內(nèi)文化界倡國(guó)學(xué)、反西化的熱點(diǎn)，作者對(duì)文化現(xiàn)象的觀察思考之深廣可見一斑。文章分析較為中肯，評(píng)論較為深刻。在分析說理部分，文章通過現(xiàn)象分析了圣誕節(jié)在我國(guó)“熱過”的原因，提出嚴(yán)禁之舉齊心可嘉但并不可取后，采用標(biāo)本兼治的做法，順勢(shì)提出要打好文化戰(zhàn)和經(jīng)濟(jì)戰(zhàn)兩大策略，其中援引日本規(guī)定“秋祭”為法定節(jié)日，韓國(guó)成功包裝本國(guó)文化的事例恰切而有說服力。最后以打好文化持久戰(zhàn)，讓中華文化耀目于世界作結(jié)。全文圍繞“文化戰(zhàn)”分析說理，中心突出，材料充要，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。本文除了個(gè)別詞語尚欠斟酌外，文筆較為生動(dòng)活潑，使人樂于閱讀?！緝?yōu)秀例文】

理性看待西方文化的入侵

最近中國(guó)人民大學(xué)楊名，武漢大學(xué)陳喬見等十位名校博士生聯(lián)署發(fā)表文章抵制過圣誕節(jié)。成都市教育局要求學(xué)校嚴(yán)禁學(xué)生在12月10日——28日期間上街活動(dòng)。（開門見山，轉(zhuǎn)引材料，干脆利落）

我想無論是名校博士，還是成都教育局，他們抵制洋節(jié)的行動(dòng)都是出于擔(dān)心中國(guó)人對(duì)西方文化的熱衷會(huì)蓋過對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的熱愛，期望借此“禁止令”保護(hù)傳統(tǒng)文化，其本意無疑是好的。但熱衷慶祝西方節(jié)日就一定會(huì)動(dòng)搖傳統(tǒng)文化的主體地位嗎？我看未必。（說話有分寸，避免生硬和蠻不講理的謾罵）

前陣子有日本學(xué)生來我們學(xué)校交流，通過與他們的交談，我發(fā)現(xiàn)圣誕節(jié)在日本也是十分

受重視的，學(xué)校也會(huì)積極組織一些慶祝活動(dòng)。但與此同時(shí)，日本學(xué)生也常常在我們面前“炫耀”起她們的傳統(tǒng)舞蹈，他們的和服，他們的茶道……可見她們對(duì)日本傳統(tǒng)文化的熱愛。（日本人過洋節(jié)日與保持傳統(tǒng)文化對(duì)比鮮明，日本人對(duì)本土文化的保護(hù)寫得更為具體，有理有據(jù)。）

至于年輕一代為什么熱衷于慶祝西方節(jié)日而冷落了傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日呢？我認(rèn)為問題的關(guān)鍵在于我們民族節(jié)日的內(nèi)涵逐漸喪失。中秋節(jié)就是吃月餅，端午節(jié)就是吃粽子，諸如此類的，單調(diào)乏味。有時(shí)甚至還淪為大人們搞應(yīng)酬、拉關(guān)系的籍口，以至于讓它們的魅力在年輕一代的心中逐漸褪色。（從反面進(jìn)一步分析青年人熱衷于過洋節(jié)日的原因；深化論點(diǎn)。）

所以我認(rèn)為博士生們與教育局要做的并不是跳出來發(fā)表以下文章抵制過圣誕節(jié)，以顯示自己很愛國(guó)。他們更應(yīng)該做的是思考洋節(jié)“受寵”的原因，借鑒其成功的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，以發(fā)展傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，傳承中華傳統(tǒng)文化。例如，讓年輕一代深刻了解中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日里所承載的人文意義，接受傳統(tǒng)文化的熏陶。也可以舉辦更多慶祝和祭奠活動(dòng)，向年輕一代展現(xiàn)中華文化精髓。另外，在學(xué)生的課程安排中更多的注入傳統(tǒng)文化的內(nèi)容，讓學(xué)生從小接受熏陶。日本在這一方面無疑是成功的，他們的中小學(xué)就開設(shè)民族特色的柔道、劍術(shù)、茶道等課程。因此，只要我們將中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日重視起來，加大宣傳教育，才能讓中國(guó)文化保持主流的地位。就好比如日前出臺(tái)的新法定假期，新增的清明、中秋假期就是很好的舉措。如此一來，傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日自然深入民心。（指出解決問題的辦法，并且以日本的做法為例子，給國(guó)人以參照，使文章內(nèi)涵豐富，立意深化。）

洋節(jié)的興起，外來文化的傳播，對(duì)我們而言既是機(jī)遇也是挑戰(zhàn)。要想抓住機(jī)遇就不能全部抹殺外來文化，而是要接受挑戰(zhàn)，取其精華，滋養(yǎng)我們的民族文化，使其發(fā)光發(fā)熱。我深信，在不久的將來中國(guó)的優(yōu)秀文化也會(huì)展現(xiàn)出她無窮魅力?。ńY(jié)尾點(diǎn)題）【評(píng)分】22+21+9=52 【點(diǎn)評(píng)】

開篇直接引述材料，擺出現(xiàn)象，進(jìn)入評(píng)述，干脆利落。文章主體部分通過我國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日漸受“冷落”的原因，進(jìn)一步提出我們要借鑒洋節(jié)“受寵”的成功經(jīng)驗(yàn)，以發(fā)展我們的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，傳承中華文化。全文中心突出，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。自身見聞的描述及對(duì)新假期規(guī)定的引入則體現(xiàn)出作者對(duì)現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的關(guān)注。

拜金將使民族退化

張藝謀導(dǎo)演的影片《山楂樹之戀》上映后，劇組公布了一段挑選該片女主角靜秋人選的短片，六個(gè)導(dǎo)演組到各個(gè)城市，甄選了五六千名藝校學(xué)生，但仍舊沒有一個(gè)人入老謀子的法眼。張藝謀開玩笑說：“現(xiàn)在的孩子越生越難看，漂亮姑娘都不和帥哥生孩子，全去找煤老板、有錢人、老男人，所以現(xiàn)在的?90后?，真長(zhǎng)得不行?！?/p>

這話盡管是一句笑話，也有些偏激，但卻是當(dāng)前一個(gè)殘酷的現(xiàn)實(shí)。

如今的美女，幾乎都是嫁給了有錢人，就拿那些女明星來說，比如伏明霞、王楠、張怡寧、李湘、章子怡、楊瀾、劉濤、王燕、車曉??還有幾個(gè)不是在“一切向錢看”？“星”們?nèi)绱?，民間美女們更是削尖腦袋，不去找“才”，轉(zhuǎn)而求“財(cái)”，于是煤老板、有錢人、老男人都成了香餑餑。而那個(gè)“寧愿坐在寶馬車?yán)锟?，也不愿坐在自行車上笑”的馬諾，把“拜金主義”演繹得淋漓盡致。大家一定還記得，此前千萬富豪“全球私人甄選佳麗”的活動(dòng)，更是在為“拜金主義”推波助瀾。

在張藝謀的心中，人的漂亮不止是表現(xiàn)在外表，更重要的是表現(xiàn)在內(nèi)心的干凈，那是應(yīng)該在“干凈環(huán)境”之下成長(zhǎng)起來的“干凈、清純和透明”。

俗話說，“富不過三代”。在兩種極端心態(tài)下誕生的孩子，本身就預(yù)示著一種頹廢與沒落。

對(duì)于那些一心嫁入豪門的美女，我們沒有什么憂慮可言，最多不過可能是將來多個(gè)怨婦。而真正令人擔(dān)憂的是我們這個(gè)社會(huì)充滿的“拜金”思想，這是一種致命的威脅，這關(guān)系我們 的未來，不僅僅在于外表，而在于內(nèi)心。

社會(huì)的財(cái)富不僅僅是靠繼承，更重要的是要靠創(chuàng)造，何況有錢人的繼承更多的是一種揮霍與倒退，而創(chuàng)造需要的是一種勇于進(jìn)取、奮斗不息的精神，絕不是躺在有錢老男人的懷里醉生夢(mèng)死、得過且過。

當(dāng)前的拜金主義是“三俗”現(xiàn)象的核心所在，低俗、媚俗、庸俗，一個(gè)字，大家都是為了“錢”。為了錢，什么話都可以說，什么事都可以做，人格、尊嚴(yán)、幸福、信仰等，都可以拋在一邊，當(dāng)然美女們?nèi)フ矣绣X人，去當(dāng)“二奶”，也就沒有什么想不通了，只是這樣的導(dǎo)向太可怕。

因此，當(dāng)前反“三俗”的核心就是要打倒拜金主義，就是要營(yíng)造一種干凈、拼搏、自強(qiáng)不息的精神境界，這是一個(gè)民族復(fù)興的必然選擇。

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】寫議論文最怕板著臉孔說教，隔靴搔癢，枯燥無味。此文毫無說教的痕跡，風(fēng)趣幽默，大氣靈動(dòng)。文章起于張藝謀的新片《山楂樹之戀》，自然而活潑；佐證于女明星的“拜金”，有理有據(jù)。全文事例鑿鑿，析理透辟，尤其是“社會(huì)的財(cái)富不僅僅是靠繼承，更重要的是要靠創(chuàng)造”的見解，入理而服人。文章最后結(jié)語于“民族復(fù)興的必然選擇”，觀點(diǎn)鮮明。

六、訓(xùn)練題目

近日，央視名嘴白燕升做客九江學(xué)院濂溪講壇，在講座中，白燕升號(hào)召大學(xué)生繼承傳統(tǒng)，斥責(zé)歌曲《最炫民族風(fēng)》不著邊際，沒有任何美感，希望大學(xué)生多感受經(jīng)典，傳承國(guó)粹。(10月28日網(wǎng)易娛樂)

對(duì)于上面的材料中的白燕升對(duì)《最炫民族風(fēng)》的批評(píng)和對(duì)傳承國(guó)粹的希望，你有什么想法？請(qǐng)針對(duì)此事寫一篇不少于800字的評(píng)論。

第四篇：寫景類作文訓(xùn)練

第三次 寫景類作文訓(xùn)練

訓(xùn)練目的：

1、掌握寫景基本技巧。

2、提高描寫景物的能力。

命題：

1、家鄉(xiāng)美景 甲天下 美麗的

要求：（1）從中任選一題，將題目補(bǔ)全或自擬題目。

（2）以寫景為中心內(nèi)容，要有描寫、抒情。

（3）字?jǐn)?shù)：600字左右。

2、以旅游所見的景致為內(nèi)容，寫一篇寫景記敘文。

要求：（1）從自己親自游歷的風(fēng)景優(yōu)美的地方中選取一處，用生動(dòng)的語言描繪出它的景致。

（2）描寫、抒情等表達(dá)方式綜合運(yùn)用。

（3）題目自擬，字?jǐn)?shù)600字左右。

審題指導(dǎo)：

1、這些題目都有一個(gè)相同之處，即都是以表現(xiàn)某一地方美麗的景致為主要內(nèi)容，主要的不同是地點(diǎn)的差異。

美的含義是豐富的，同樣，人們對(duì)于景色的美也有不同的理解。有人認(rèn)為綿綿青山、潺潺溪水如詩如畫是美的；有人認(rèn)為懸崖峭壁、急流險(xiǎn)灘激蕩人心是美的；也有人欣賞的是茫茫無邊的大沙漠……只要你認(rèn)為是美的景色，都可以寫入你的文章。

從選取的地點(diǎn)看，后一個(gè)題目取擇范圍很廣。近到自家庭院、所在學(xué)校，遠(yuǎn)到祖國(guó)各地，只要是你熟悉的，都可寫入文章。

要抓住景物特征，多方位、多角度予以描繪，寫出景物的動(dòng)、靜、聲、色。還要將自己的生動(dòng)感受融入到景色描繪當(dāng)中，以感染打動(dòng)讀者。

2、本文應(yīng)該描寫在旅游途中所見的景致。

從內(nèi)容來看，可以寫景點(diǎn)特有的景色，富有地域色彩的風(fēng)俗、文化，甚至獨(dú)有的植被、動(dòng)物。

從描寫角度看，要調(diào)動(dòng)人的各種器官，多角度表現(xiàn)景物的特點(diǎn)，不僅描繪出這里的形、色，還要有美妙的聲響、氣息。

從觀察角度看，視角應(yīng)該是以移動(dòng)為主的。

在表達(dá)方式上，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用議論、抒情，以贊美祖國(guó)的秀麗山河，歌頌自然的神奇、偉大，抒發(fā)對(duì)美好生活的熱愛。要將滿腔的感情融于文章之中，才能產(chǎn)生感染人的力量。

第五篇：環(huán)保類作文訓(xùn)練

中考英語滿分作文指導(dǎo)：

重視檢查：

1、主謂一致

2、時(shí)態(tài)搭配

3、狀語

4、名詞復(fù)數(shù)

5、單詞拼寫

?？及祟惖湫途渥樱?環(huán)保

1.It's our duty to protect our environment。

2.It is very important to take care of our environment

3.We should not throw litter onto the ground

4.We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees

5.We should plant more flowers and trees。

6.We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin

7.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become

much more beautiful。

8.As we all know now, the earth is like our mother.9.Once she was beautiful and rich, but she has become dirty and poor.10.She gives life to all the living things on the earth, beautiful and balanced nature.11.Droughts（旱災(zāi)）, floods, acid rain（酸雨）.These are the punishment from nature.12.We should treat our earth like mother.13.It ?s our duty to do something to cure her, love her, and take care of her so that we can

save the earth and save ourselves.14.The environmental matter is a hot topic nowadays.Not only does it affect our health, it also has a great impact on our future.15.People?s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.In order

to live a better life, we need a cleaner world.16.Good environment can make people feel happy and fit.17.To improve the environment means to improve our life.18.Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into dustbins.一、Pollution around us

In recent years our life is becoming better and better.But our environment is becoming

worse and worse.It?s very bad for our life.Now many people have air-conditioners and cars,they produce(give off)waste gas.More and more trees are being cut down.There is so much

sand on the earth(leaving only sand).We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes.Water in the river is quite dirty.We haven?t enough clean water to drink in cities.Now we are

in danger.It?s very necessary and important to protect the environment well.I think if

everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more

beautiful, and our life will be better and better.二、Save the Earth)

As time goes by, man is making the earth sick.People cut down too many trees and

leave rubbish everywhere.Factories let out their waste without doing anything to it.This has

caused some serious problems.Such as the land is sandy, the river is dirty, the air is less

clean, even the temperature of the earth is rising.What should we do to save the earth? My

suggestion is that we should plant more trees, put rubbish into dustbins and stop factories

pouring waste directly into the air or rivers.In all, we have only one earth, we should do our best to protect it, or we will regret.三、Save the earth

How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.It’s our duty to protect our environment.No matter where we live, we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy.We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling.We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields.We shouldn?t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places.We mustn?t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public.If everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better.四、How to Protect the Environment / Make our world more beautiful!

Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans.It’s our duty to take care of the nature around us.Animals and plants are our best friends, and we should share the world with them.We shouldn?t kill wild animals, and we must protect forests because they are animals? home.We must plant more trees and grass;they can make the world greener.The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have.Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.六、保護(hù)我們的城市(Save Our City)

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities.Rubbish must be thrown away or reused properly.Or it may cause a lot of problems.It may pollute the air and water.People may get ill when they breathe the polluted air or drink the polluted water.Our city has started to face the problem.Some rubbish is sorted and sent to a certain place.Waste gas is cleaned before it goes into the air.Waste water is also cleaned before it is poured into rivers.People should be prevented from throwing rubbish everywhere.We should try our best to take care of our environment and fight against pollution.七、Keep our school clean

We are studying in this school.It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy.It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in the class.We shouldn?t leave rubbish here and there.Don?t draw pictures on the wall;they influence the look of our school.We should keep the classroom clean and tidy.And we should do some cleaning often.If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school, I’m sure our school will be more beautiful.（2009山東東營(yíng)）現(xiàn)在環(huán)境變得越來越差。環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作，學(xué)習(xí)，生活。而我們的工作，生活，生產(chǎn)又使環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重.....如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?請(qǐng)以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫一篇短文。

提示: 存在問題: 1.水污染和大氣污染越來越嚴(yán)重 2.森林被破壞和砍伐

3.白色垃圾隨處可見

要求 : 如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境? 至少3---4個(gè)方面，80詞左右。

How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is more and more serious today.We have no clean water to drink because of water pollution.And when trees are cut down, some animals disappear.There is more and more dirty smoke in the air.People's health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, it’s time for us to protect our world.Firstly, we shouldn?t throw away rubbish everywhere.And we should recycle, reduce and reuse things, for this saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.Don?t use plastic bags.Also, we must plant more trees and stop people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.水資源與水污染問題：

1.It?s our duty to save water（節(jié)約水是我們每個(gè)人的責(zé)任。）

2.As we know , water is very important to man,（我們知道，水對(duì)人類來說是非常的重要。）

3.We can?t live without water.（沒有水我們就不能生存。）

4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.（適合人類喝的水是越來越少了。）

5.But some people don?t care about it.（但是有些人卻不關(guān)心或不在意。）

6.They waste a lot of water in their daily life.（日常生活中他們浪費(fèi)很多水。）

7.Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers.（更糟糕的是他們排放污水到河流里。

8.They throw rubbish into rivers, too.（他們還亂扔垃圾到河流理去。）

9.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.（很多河流湖泊已經(jīng)受到嚴(yán)重污染。）

10.Something must be done to stop the pollution.（人類必須采取一些措施來制止污染。）

11.Only in this way can we live happily.（只有這樣，我們才過得幸福開心。）

12.If we don?t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.(如果我們不節(jié)約水，那么最后一滴水也許會(huì)是我們?nèi)祟惖难蹨I)

一、The importance of water

Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important.We can live without food for many days, but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.However, not all of people understand this.They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes.Some factories even pour waste water into the river.As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink.Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves.二、Water

Water is very important for our life.Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash.Water is necessary for all plants.They need water to grow.People can’t live without water.Plants will die without water.It is important to all living things.However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water clean.At the same time we should save as much water as possible.三、關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)（水資源節(jié)約）的話題

Our environment is very important for our lives.We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on.In the past, there were many trees around us, the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now, people cut down many trees.Air pollution and water population are very serious.The environment around us becomes very terrible.We should protect our environment.First, we should plant many trees to keep water.Second, we can ride a bike or walk to the school and work.Third, we shouldn’t throw the dirty water into the river.Fourth, we shouldn’t use the plastic bags.Finally, we can ask more people to join us.（2009湛江）水資源問題已成為舉世矚目的重要問題之一。聯(lián)合國(guó)預(yù)計(jì)，到2025年，世界將近一半的人口會(huì)生活在缺水的地區(qū)。請(qǐng)以“How to Protect Water Resources”為題，寫一篇英語短文，要點(diǎn)如下：

1、眾所周知，水對(duì)人類是很重要的。沒有水，地球上將沒有生命。

2、現(xiàn)在工廠越來越多，很多河流變臟了，大量的魚死在了河里。

3、保護(hù)水資源是我們的責(zé)任。我們應(yīng)該節(jié)約用水、阻止工廠往河里排放廢水和倒垃 圾,并告訴人們保護(hù)水資源的重要性。

要求：1.包含所給出要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)舉例，意思連貫，詞匯、語法正確。

2.單詞數(shù)約80字左右。

參考詞匯：保護(hù)protect;水資源water resources;往……排放…… pour...into...;

廢水waste water

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How to Protect Water Resources

As we know, water is very important to us.There won?t be lives on the earth without water.However, there are more and more factories around us and some of them poured waste water into the rivers.They made the rivers dirty and lots of fish died.Therefore, it is our duty to protect water resources.First, we should save water.For example, remember to turn off the shower while you are washing your hair.Second, we should stop the factories from pouring waste water and throwing litter into the rivers.Finally, we should tell people the importance of protecting water resources.White pollution

根據(jù)國(guó)務(wù)院發(fā)布的“限塑令”，自2008年6月1日起，在所有超市、商場(chǎng)實(shí)行塑料購物袋有償使用制度，超市、商場(chǎng)一律不得免費(fèi)提供塑料購物袋。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語短文，要求包括以下內(nèi)容：

現(xiàn)狀：目前中國(guó)每天消費(fèi)近30億個(gè)塑料袋，造成了嚴(yán)重的資源浪費(fèi)和環(huán)境污染； 限塑令的意義：減少塑料袋使用量，提高公眾的環(huán)保意識(shí)；

提倡：重拎布袋子，重提菜籃子。

參考詞匯：禁令 ban 意識(shí) awareness 提倡 advocate

The problem of “white pollution” caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role.In China about three billion plastic shopping bags are consumed every day, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution.Luckily, the government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1.The rule will undoubtedly reduce the use of plastic bags and enhance the awareness of environmental protection.It is highly advocated that we should turn to cloth bags and shopping baskets from now on.你愿意為瀕危動(dòng)物做些什么呢？也許你也可以寫一篇文章來介紹你所喜歡的動(dòng)物，并呼吁人們行動(dòng)起來保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物。下面詞匯會(huì)對(duì)你有些幫助：furry, smart, intelligent, fast, strong, aggressive, enormous, gentle, fun, shy, friendly, endangered, laws, zoos, feed, etc.My favourite animals are pandas.I like them very much because they are gentle and shy.They are also friendly to people.And they look funny, too.Their eyes are the most interesting part.The black circles around their eyes make them look like they are wearing glasses or have just been in a fight.Their favourite food is bamboo leaves.They don?t like to move around very much.In fact, they prefer to sleep all day if they can.But now pandas are endangered.For one thing, people have destroyed many of their habitats.For another, they don?t have enough food to eat.We must think of ways to protect them.I think we should build more panda zoos and plant more bamboo for them.I hope everyone can do something for animals, so that we can keep our world rich and colourful and full of interesting animals.