第一篇：經(jīng)典英語(yǔ)高考作文欣賞4

Health

How can we keep our health? Only by knowing and carefully obeying the laws of health.A happy man is a healthy man, and only the healthy man can live a happy life.The desire of good health is universal.Everyone who loves life understands how important good health is.First, good health is the guarantee for enjoying life.The only desire of a patient is always to live an ordinary and healthy life.Second, good health establishes a firm foundation for your ambition of the career.Without it, any lofty aspiration turns to be a day-dream.Then how to keep fit? Everyone has his own answers to this question, while I think three principal suggestions should be followed.The first one is that a scientific diet should be adopted, which offers the necessities for your body.The second one is that physical exercises must be persisted, especially for the indoor people.The last, but not the least, is that the cheerful mood should be kept.In order to keep fit, I force myself to keep away from the “junk food” , although it usually tastes good.I even form a good habit of doing morning exercises.And the beautiful music and good books always cheer me up.20

My Views on Large Modern Cities

Since every coin has two sides, living in large modern cities offers us many advantages, simultaneously causes many troubles.Better education and better jobs are easy to get, and better medical care is convenient to receive in large modern cities.People are usually well-informed(見(jiàn)聞廣的)due to the advanced(先進(jìn)的)media, such as television, newspaper and net PC.Large modern cities also provide varied(各種各樣的)entertainment for the city-dwellers(城市居民).The public places like cinema, bar, disco-hall are everywhere.On the other hand, large modern cities are too big to control, so the traffic jams and traffic accidents often happen, and the social security is a headache problem.And city-dwellers have to face the housing problem.Usually a house is too expensive for the salary earning class(工薪階層)to buy and the rent is also high.Moreover, noise and pollution in large cities bring harm to people’s health.21

Live in the City or in the Country

Where do you like to live, in the city or in the country?

Most cities are centers of economy, trade, transportation or culture.With the development of economy and society, more and more people have flooded into(涌入)the cities, which makes the scale（規(guī)模)of the cities lager and larger.Surely, it is very convenient for shopping, education, business and so on.But it also has many disadvantages: the large population makes it crowded in each corner of the city;the big factories, too many cars, buses and trucks pollute the

clean air;too much noise can make people mad.To live in the city, one even can’t get enough room for living.To live in the country is another thing.You can breathe the fresh air cheerfully, own a spacious(寬敞的)house with a big backyard, relax yourself in quietness.But when you want to go shopping, or take your child to school, perhaps you will complain about its inconvenient transportation, its remoteness(路途遙遠(yuǎn))…

I am an ordinary person.I am always longing for(渴望)the peaceful idyllic(田園詩(shī)般的)life of the countryside.22

Should Firecrackers(爆竹)Be Banned

Letting off firecrackers(放炮)has long been a custom for the Chinese on their happy occasions.However, these years, people in China have different opinions about the custom.Some people think letting off firecrackers is a good thing.It reflects(反映)the heritage(傳統(tǒng))of Chinese culture.And it adds much to the warm atmosphere of the most important Chinese holidays—the Spring Festival.People can’t imagine what the holidays would be like without such a custom.But many people, on the other hand, believe that letting off firecrackers should be banned.The main reasons, in the eyes, are that letting off firecrackers not only brings great economic loss to the country, but also causes certain disorder in the society.For example, during holidays, some buildings are burnt to ashes(燒成灰燼)due to the firecrackers.And many persons are injured by the firecrackers and sent to hospital.In my opinion, letting off firecrackers should be banned.We must try our best to find new, beneficial(有益的)ways to replace the old custom.Only in this way can we spend our holiday in a peaceful and joyful manner.23

Smoking

It is well known that smoking does harm to the health.Today, however, so many people still keep smoking, which has drawn wide attention of the society.Smoking has so many disadvantages but no advantages at all.Firstly, the cigarettes with nicotine(尼古丁)in them do great harm to the health.Such diseases as pneumonia(肺炎), lung cancer may be caused or partly caused by them.Furthermore, the bad effects of cigarettes cost the smokers lots of money which could be spent on the meaningful things.Thirdly, the accidents of fire all over the world every year are mostly caused by the still-burning butts(煙蒂).The government has formulated(制定)the regulation(規(guī)章)of no smoking in public places.Yet its result is not so satisfactory.From my point of view, it needs the common efforts of the society.Not only the nonsmokers but the smokers should cooperate(合作)on this matter.24

On Making Friends

As a human being, one can hardly do anything without a friend.Helping one out of trouble and bringing happiness to a lonely heart, a true friend may shed(spread)sunshine and love on one’ life.A friend will help you find out and overcome an overlooked(忽略的)shortcoming, so that you can make progress and have success in your work or study.All the splendor(輝煌)in the world is not worth a good friend.True friendship is like an in-time rain falling on the dry land.True friends are not those who like to eat or drink with you, but those who concern more about your needs, growth, success and failures.They will never flee for their own sake when faced with a great danger.Just as the old saying puts it, “ A friend in need is a friend indeed.”

I like making friends.In order to make true friends, I will trust others, following their advice and lending a hand whenever they need help.I like to make friends with those who have the same interests and ideas with me, but not those who are boastful(full of self-praise), aimless, narrow-minded or selfish.Once I made friends with someone, I hope that the friendship will last all through my life.25

Don’t Give up

It matters not what you learn, but when you once learn a thing, you must never give it up until you have mastered it.It matters not what you inquire into, but when you inquire into a thing, you must give it up until you have thoroughly understood it.It matters not what you try to thing out, but when you once try to think out a thing, you must never give it up until you have got what you want.It matters not what you try to sift out, but when you once try to sift out a thing, you must never give it up until you have sifted it out clearly and distinctly.It matters not what you try to carry out, but when you once try to carry out a thing, you must never give it up until you have done it thoroughly and well.If another man succeeds by one effort, you will use a hundred efforts.

第二篇：經(jīng)典英語(yǔ)高考作文欣賞2

On Learning

Learning is one’s own business, which can not rely on others.As we know, learning is a process of accumulating knowledge.It is one’s life-long task, which cannot be accomplished in one move.A successful learner is an independent one, who has both an indomitable(不屈不撓的)will and amazing endurance.He will try to discover his own way of learning.Instead of waiting for the teacher’s help, he will make efforts to create favorable conditions on his own initiative.It will certainly be of great help, if there is good environment, sufficient books and equipment, as well as instructions from teachers and beneficial friends.But even if one has got all these favorable conditions, one cannot be sure to succeed in learning.7

Is Failure a Bad Thing?

Failure is a common occurrence(發(fā)生的事情)in our daily life.Whatever we do, there are always two possible results: success or failure.Although everyone wants to succeed in what he tries, sometimes failure can’t be avoided.Different people hold different attitudes toward failure.When faced with it, some can stand up to it, draw a useful lesson from it and try their best to fulfill what they are determined to do.Others, however, lose heart and give in.They do nothing but complain about themselves and objective conditions.As a popular saying goes, “Failure teaches success.” In my opinion, what really counts is not the failure itself, but the proper attitude we should take after it.I trust that as long as we keep to what is right and correct what is wrong, that is to say, learn a lesson from failure, we will be certain to succeed.So I am of the opinion that failure is not a bad thing.8

On Today’s Education

I think one of the main problems with today’s education is that too much emphasis is placed on test score.It has become the most important criterion(標(biāo)準(zhǔn))for college enrollment(入學(xué)).A student, however creative and intelligent, will not be admitted into a college for his total scores are just one point less than required.It is also one of the crucial(至關(guān)重要的)factors either in job assignment(分派)or in employment competitions.The competition for high scores among students becomes intense.Students find themselves concentrating more on strategies（策略）to achieve high scores than on acquiring the knowledge.They will play truant(逃學(xué))of some subsidiary(輔助的)courses and skip over the substance which will not be tested on.Teachers are apt(有…傾向的)to give their students high scores.As their job is judged mainly by the students’performance in terms of scores, some teachers tend to set easy papers to test their students on or narrow down the

scope(范圍)of the exam, even give them the hint(提示)to exams, or favor their students with fighter score.As a result, the competition for high scores becomes so intense that it actually affects our education results.9

Knowledge and Power

Knowledge and power are the two things most desired by man.There is close connection between these two things.The man having done his best in acquiring knowledge, will easily get a high position and perform it successfully.Power depends on knowledge.Knowledge to power is just like a compass to a ship, by which her sailing is made safely across an unknown ocean.A great statesman（政治家）or a learned scholar can render(give)his good services to his country just because he has perfect and profound knowledge.Power only follows knowledge.A man cannot do anything well unless he has some information as how to do it well.A man will sometimes lose his way in a strange land;an apprentice(學(xué)徒；生手)cannotproduce any delicate(精密的)work.Why are these so? Because they are in want of knowledge.If the apprentice wishes to produce good work, he must pay attention to his instructor’s advice.We are all the future masters of our country.Our country needs our services.How can we fulfill our future tasks? To get more knowledge is the only answer.10

Rome Wasn’t Built in a Day

Learning English is like building a house.Laying a strong foundation（打基礎(chǔ)）is the first and most important step.In other words, you should read and speak English every day.Memorizing new words and phrases is also helpful.Like building a house, learning English takes some time.So don’t be impatient.Remember “Rome wasn’t built in a day.11

Television Addiction

Television provides us with a wide range of information and entertainment.However, it’s a pity that it may also have a bad influence on young minds.For instance, some TV shows have too much violence and crime.These programs may lead youngsters astray(誤入迷途).It is easy for students to become addicted to the excitement of these programs and neglect（忽視）their homework.Parents must, therefore, keep an eye on what their children watch.

第三篇：經(jīng)典英語(yǔ)高考作文欣賞5

The Importance of the Reform and Open Policy

Today we are carrying outthe reform andopenpolicy.Itisbecause themostimportant tasktoday istodeveloptheinternational economy and improve the people’slivingstandard.Inordertorealizethegoal, weshouldreformtheoldeconomic system so that we canliberate the productiveforce.Weshouldalsoopenourdoortotheworld so thatwecan learnadvancedscienceandtechnologyfromthedevelopedcountries.27

Traffic safety

Traffic is one of the most important problems of every modern city.With the invention of the motor car and all sorts of motor vehicles, nearly every day we can read in the newspapers about the news of traffic accidents.We can not help sympathizing with the victims.Of course, if we can do away with those modern vehicles, no such things can happen.But it is against the progress of the civilization.We cannot return to the backward past ages.But if we cannot entirely prevent traffic accidents from happening, at least we can lessen its chances of occurrence.We can avoid it by means of educating the pedestrians and car drivers on the ways of traffic safety.28

We need A Science Society

Youths today should all take a keen interest in science, for we are in a rapidly progressing scientific age.Indeed, no one can now be regarded “up-to-date” without a general scientific knowledge we get from school textbooks, we should visit the libraries more often and read the current scientific news from the newspaper.But the enthusiastic youths have often found out that there are not enough suitable books to read in the public libraries, since many of them are too advanced and too specialized.To overcome this difficulty, I suggest that the Education Department should establish an inter-school science society.The main objects of the society are to increase the scientific knowledge of youths and to foster friendship between members.29

We Are Young But Once

Many young girls like to copy grown-ups.They wear high-heels, paint their faces, dress in tight clothes and all that burden.They.Willingly let tight clothes suffocate their breathing, high-heels hinder their walking, and make-ups mar their natural beauty.They think they equal adults by using these stuff, and look down upon their counterparts as childish, who incidentally do not care much to over-act their age.In fact, one can not be considered as a grown-up just by appearance.It acquires more, such as maturity of thought, which can only be seasoned by time..Young is indeed a very precious gift, and remember, everyone is young only once.While we still have youth with us, why should we restrict ourselves from enjoying it to our heart’s content by attempting to be much older than we really are?

Chances once lost may never come again, and youth definitely will not.Once it is over, real life requests our experience, and responsibilities await us with graveness.Our life will never be as free and blissful as we are today.Our present tasks in life are light.Our hearts are still full of youthful spirits and enthusiasm.So while we are still in the flower of life, why do we not gather the “rose-buds ”of youth before they wither away?

Women of Today

Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.They are not restricted to their roles as wives and mothers anymore, they now work and have become the equal partners of men.In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, teachers, scientists and even leaders.We can say that almost all jobs which men can do are done perfectly by women.Women are no longer looked down upon by society.With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well.Husband and wife are now equal in the family.They cope with problems of daily life together, and share happiness with each other.Also, you can hardly find out that in today’s families, women are being busy with dinners, whereas men are comfortably sitting in armchairs, reading newspapers.31

Use of the Time

A man’s life occupies, at best, but a limited space of time;every bit of time wasted in idleness means a reduction of success and prosperity to the man himself and to the world at large.The magnitude of a man’s success in life depends largely upon how he makes use of his time.Those who achieve greatness in different channels of success are, as a whole, the most hard working people.Our famous scholar Yao and Shun wasted not a single minute, while Da Yu, our great emperor, valued even the briefest space of time.They were our great men;their accomplishments stand out in our history in bold relief.If we wish to do something useful, the sure way to success is to turn every minute that we may have at our disposal.The old hours which we have after our daily work are the best time for reading.There is a great deal of wisdom locked up in books.Nowhere else can we find such a rich spring of knowledge for quenching(satisfy)our thirst.Of course, different people follow different occupations.They do not need the same sort of information.Here they must make their own choice to get the books

best suited to their particular needs.The time spent in such reading will add greatly to their stock of knowledge and prepare them for greater work in their respective fields of activity.When the reading habit is once formed, they will enjoy reading far more than they do anything else.32

Build up good hobbies

Everybody has his own hobbies: some are fond of collecting stamps, coins, etc., some like swimming, and there are some who like reading or music---all these are of good hobbies.Nowadays, most teenagers are crazy about “hit-song”.From those songs we can learn many phrases which we can not find in books.Although teenagers like those songs very much, adults dislike them.And if they indulge in them, it would be a waste both of time and of money.This should not be considered as a good hobby.The worst hobbies of all are smoking and gambling.Smoking harms our bodies.Some men like to smoke in public places, and do not care about other people’s feelings.Gambling will make you lose everything.You may lose your temper, money and friendship.Friendship is the thing that money can’t buy.To lose a friend is easy but to build up a friendship is hard.So, why don’t we play something that cannot hurt others and which is worthwhile to us? For good hobbies, like stamps-collecting and reading can help us broaden our knowledge, music can make us happy, and sports can keep us in good physical condition.So why not take the good and discard the bad?

第四篇：高考作文欣賞

時(shí)間都去哪兒了

◆文題精練◆

閱讀下面的材料，按要求作文。

“門(mén)前老樹(shù)長(zhǎng)新芽，院里枯木又開(kāi)花，半生存了好多話，藏進(jìn)了滿(mǎn)頭白發(fā)。??時(shí)間都去哪兒了?還沒(méi)好好感受年輕就老了，生兒養(yǎng)女一輩子，滿(mǎn)腦子都是孩子哭了笑了?！痹凇稌r(shí)間都去哪兒了》質(zhì)樸的旋律中，有人想到趙薇的“致青春”，追憶我們逝去的青春韶華;有人想到父親母親，深深皺紋濃濃親情;有人想起胡風(fēng)創(chuàng)作的《時(shí)間開(kāi)始了》，燃起熱情與希望，腳步從容，重新出發(fā)??

要求：結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，選準(zhǔn)角度，明確立意，自選文體(詩(shī)歌除外)，不少于800字。

【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】

這則材料作文，具有時(shí)代感和共鳴性。馬年春節(jié)，這首歌從上至下感動(dòng)了中國(guó)人，溫暖的歌詞訴說(shuō)著歲月流轉(zhuǎn)中的種種故事：關(guān)于親情，關(guān)于時(shí)間，關(guān)于青春，關(guān)于奮斗??句句歌詞直戳心扉?？忌l(fā)

揮空間很大，立意角度豐富，可以寫(xiě)孝順父母，寫(xiě)感恩，也可以寫(xiě)把握青春，珍惜時(shí)間，堅(jiān)持奮斗等，主題開(kāi)放，思維角度發(fā)散，很符合高考作文命題的宗旨。行文可以議論亦可以記敘，或闡發(fā)自己的獨(dú)到見(jiàn)解，或分享動(dòng)人的情感?？傊?，選擇記敘文或散文體，要做到“以情動(dòng)人”;選擇議論文體，要做到“以理服人”。

【佳作示例】

贏過(guò)時(shí)間

時(shí)間記錄著世界。

時(shí)間每天都在開(kāi)始。何須傷感時(shí)間都去哪兒了?只要我們的腳步踏得結(jié)實(shí)、從容，既不左顧右盼、也不走走停停，就隨時(shí)可以整裝出發(fā)。

時(shí)間的打磨，使得人們一天天變得成熟而寬容。曼德拉在獄中關(guān)了27年。人們可曾想過(guò)27年有多久?有一篇網(wǎng)文《我?jiàn)^斗了18年，才和你在一起喝咖啡》曾經(jīng)風(fēng)靡一時(shí)，不同出身和背景的人在社會(huì)上奮斗，路徑與付出自然不同，總拿自己和別人比，會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)扭曲。坦然面向世界，平靜對(duì)待自己，才能讓心靈走向高貴。一如初次入獄的偉人曼德拉正是43歲，他堅(jiān)持學(xué)習(xí)、鍛煉、傳播信仰，把牢獄當(dāng)課堂。27年過(guò)去，我們沉于世故與平庸，曼德拉依然光彩照人。人家才叫贏，把時(shí)間贏到了手。

贏得時(shí)間不容易，要與時(shí)間比耐心。無(wú)法忘記那名英國(guó)警官梅耶的故事。21歲，這位騎單車(chē)吹口哨的年輕人當(dāng)了警察。那一年，他接手了一樁殺人案。歷時(shí)52年，73歲的梅耶將罪犯捉拿歸了案。這52年，他沒(méi)有一刻閑著：翻閱了十幾米厚的卷宗，打了30萬(wàn)個(gè)電話，踏遍四大洲的土地，行程可繞地球20圈。52年的時(shí)光無(wú)時(shí)無(wú)刻不在消磨著他，但他沒(méi)有敗陣。他后背一定刺了四個(gè)字:耐心無(wú)敵。

時(shí)間是我們行為的坐標(biāo)，又是萬(wàn)物演變的見(jiàn)證。1988年，一群雜志同行沿著河西走廊考察、觀光。車(chē)行戈壁，四周都是地平線，東北的馮編輯突然叫停了車(chē)，端著相機(jī)四處拍。同行們一臉困惑：什么景觀也沒(méi)有，在拍什么?馮編輯嚴(yán)肅回答：在拍歷史，拍時(shí)間。的確，滄海桑田，在地球演變中不過(guò)一瞬。坐在陽(yáng)關(guān)旁的坡上，久久望著坡下開(kāi)闊的古戰(zhàn)場(chǎng)。一些人跑下去撿拾傳說(shuō)中的戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)殘片了，一些人卻想象著千年前的廝殺：時(shí)間滌蕩了一切，千古風(fēng)流，誰(shuí)有耐心陪它到如今，誰(shuí)就是贏家。

時(shí)間開(kāi)始了，也許它走得跌跌撞撞，也曾經(jīng)讓我們遍體鱗傷。但終究時(shí)間不會(huì)辜負(fù)人們，盡管那步履走得艱難，走得蹣跚。86年前，為了驗(yàn)證瀝青是液體，物理學(xué)家把它加熱后倒進(jìn)了漏斗，待它凝固后滴落。86年間，瀝青一共滴下了8滴，第9滴孕育了12載，已呈現(xiàn)出完美的淚滴形。這真是個(gè)考驗(yàn)人類(lèi)耐心的實(shí)驗(yàn)。

曾記否?《他們》的故事主人公，兄弟倆走了不同的路，一輩子陌生寡言，知道弟弟死去半年后的一天，哥哥哭了。兄弟畢竟是手足，他們看似冰硬的情誼在歲月的漏斗里逐漸成型，雖然歷時(shí)長(zhǎng)久，終有一天突然滴落。

時(shí)間不能改變一切，一切終究贏在自己。

【點(diǎn)評(píng)】關(guān)于“時(shí)間”的話題，高考考生曾經(jīng)寫(xiě)過(guò)，但主旨和事例都很局限，少有創(chuàng)新和突破。本文旨意深刻，例證素材新穎，尤其是運(yùn)用數(shù)據(jù)進(jìn)行對(duì)比，突出時(shí)間縱深，賦予文章立體質(zhì)感。文章最大的亮點(diǎn)是行文層次和語(yǔ)言風(fēng)格，言辭質(zhì)樸卻說(shuō)理透徹，相對(duì)于考生的華麗辭藻和規(guī)范結(jié)構(gòu)，本文更真實(shí)，更有說(shuō)服力，更震撼人心，引發(fā)共鳴。

品位

【文題】

品位本意是指對(duì)事物有分辨與鑒賞的能力。生活中它可以是形象的展示，也可以是內(nèi)在氣質(zhì)的流露，還可以是人生價(jià)值的體現(xiàn)??人們不斷追求生活的品位，精神的品位??請(qǐng)以“品位”為話題，自選角度，自定立意，寫(xiě)一篇不少于800字的文章。(文體不限，詩(shī)歌除外)

【寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)】

以“品位”為話題寫(xiě)文章，最容易出的問(wèn)題是把“品位”和“品味”混淆了。“品位”是名詞，它的意思是：①礦石中有用元素或有用礦物含量的百分率。②泛指人或事物的品質(zhì)、水平。而“品味”的意思是：①?lài)L試滋味;品嘗②仔細(xì)體會(huì);玩味③(物品的)品質(zhì)和風(fēng)味④格調(diào)和趣味?！捌肺丁钡牡谒姆N釋義和“品位”基本是一樣的，但是“品味”的范圍大于“品位”，如果在寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候完全忽視這些差別，就容易寫(xiě)得文不對(duì)題。有的同學(xué)干脆在寫(xiě)作中拋開(kāi)“品位”二字，連書(shū)寫(xiě)都成了“品味”，那就很難寫(xiě)出合格的考場(chǎng)文章了。

“品位”有高下，追求高的品位應(yīng)該是一種共識(shí)。但什么是高品位?高品位的表象和本質(zhì)是什么?一些人眼中的高品位真的是高品位么?為什么要追求高品位?怎樣追求高品位?追求哪個(gè)領(lǐng)域的高品位?怎樣才能追求到高品位?追求到高品位又怎樣???同學(xué)們要練習(xí)拿到一個(gè)文題能提出各種問(wèn)題，然后選擇其中讓自己有話可講，有認(rèn)識(shí)會(huì)分析的一個(gè)或幾個(gè)問(wèn)題展開(kāi)自己的文章。

【優(yōu)秀例文】

品位

樹(shù)木花草，總有良莠之分;世間人物，自然也有品位高下之別。

高品位源于良好的環(huán)境。

蓬生麻中，不扶自直;白砂在涅，與之俱黑。品位的高下，很多時(shí)候與人的生存環(huán)境密切相關(guān)。書(shū)香門(mén)第，多有大家閨秀;市井小院，則出小家碧玉。雖說(shuō)各有可愛(ài)之處，但高下之別自不待言。

出身是不能選擇的，但后天選擇一個(gè)良好的發(fā)展環(huán)境，則與品位的形成關(guān)系重大。近朱者赤，近墨者黑。孟母三遷，為的就是給孩子尋求一個(gè)更佳的環(huán)境。雖說(shuō)不可能只靠搬家就搬出個(gè)“亞圣”，但倘若孟母不遷，則世間恐怕要少個(gè)文化的星斗，多個(gè)平庸的吹鼓手了。高品位還源于高超的技藝，廣博的學(xué)識(shí)。

山歌村笛，雖不乏情趣，但終欠缺技巧，難免嘔啞嘲哳難為聽(tīng);琵琶女技藝超群，奏長(zhǎng)安坊樂(lè)，則讓人“如聽(tīng)仙樂(lè)耳暫明”，品位之高下是基于學(xué)識(shí)與技巧的。高山流水、陽(yáng)春白雪、詩(shī)詞歌賦??高品位的藝術(shù)形式哪一個(gè)不是代代藝人、學(xué)者用畢生心血澆灌出來(lái)的?

司馬遷通史精文，成就了“史家之絕唱，無(wú)韻之離騷”;諸葛亮上知天文，下曉地理，中通古今，贏得了“千載誰(shuí)堪伯仲間”的至譽(yù)。魯迅知理達(dá)文，錢(qián)鐘書(shū)學(xué)貫中西。歷數(shù)這些高品位的名家大家，哪一個(gè)不是以高超的技藝，廣博的學(xué)識(shí)作為自己的厚重基墊的?高品位更源于崇高的道德，偉大的理想。

旗幟舉得高，可以引領(lǐng)前進(jìn);鼓聲擂得高，可以振奮士氣。然而，利劍懸得高、鋼刀舉得高卻只能帶來(lái)更大的危險(xiǎn)，更可怕的災(zāi)難。沒(méi)有理想的正確指引，沒(méi)有道德的適時(shí)約束，品位的高下就失去了本質(zhì)的意義。這時(shí)某種意義上“高品位”的人反倒成了“危險(xiǎn)品”。風(fēng)流倜儻，寫(xiě)得佳文美賦的公子子蘭，勾結(jié)權(quán)貴，逼得屈子投江。擅長(zhǎng)書(shū)法，自創(chuàng)宋體的秦檜，殘害忠良，落個(gè)千古罵名。曾被稱(chēng)為“青年才俊”的汪精衛(wèi)，出賣(mài)國(guó)家，出賣(mài)靈魂，落個(gè)“第一大漢奸”的“美譽(yù)”。道德的殘缺，理想的迷失，使這些“品位”不低的人，最終被歷史的車(chē)輪不留情面的碾入污泥之中，永世不得超生。品位的航船，沒(méi)有崇高的道德，偉大的理想為舵，就必定誤入歧途。

尋求佳境，增長(zhǎng)學(xué)識(shí)，修正道德，樹(shù)立理想。自然，你就會(huì)成為一個(gè)高品位的人。

【教師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

談“品位”的角度很多。同學(xué)們大多很神往那種“有品位的生活”，可是怎樣才能成為一個(gè)真正高品位的而不是矯揉造作的人呢?高品位到底從何而來(lái)?這篇文章做了一個(gè)比較全面的分析。環(huán)境、學(xué)識(shí)、道德和理想，從客觀到主觀，從淺層到深層。作者觀點(diǎn)鮮明，思路清晰，論證有力，語(yǔ)言精練，把高品位從哪里來(lái)分析得比較透徹。

關(guān)注·思考·干預(yù)

【高考作文猜想】：

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)自己的感悟和聯(lián)想，寫(xiě)一篇不少于800字的文章。

經(jīng)常有媒體報(bào)道注水肉引發(fā)的**，也有不同媒體引用專(zhuān)家分析注水肉的危害，可每到重大的節(jié)日，我們總會(huì)看到各地集中力量重點(diǎn)整治注水肉的新聞??對(duì)此，你有什么樣的感悟和思考?

要求：①選準(zhǔn)角度，自定立意;②自擬題目;③除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限，文體特征鮮明;④不要脫離材料內(nèi)容及含意的范圍。

【命題思路分析】：

20XX年以來(lái)，山東省的高考語(yǔ)文作文的命制總體呈現(xiàn)一種穩(wěn)定性和延續(xù)性，除20XX年是以“這世界需要你”為題進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作的命題作文之外，其余三年均是以材料作文的方式呈現(xiàn)。

這些材料作文，具有以下幾個(gè)鮮明的特征：一是多維度多視角的解讀，突出考查學(xué)生思考的廣度和靈活度，又便于考查部分優(yōu)秀學(xué)生的思考深度;二是材料都能夠與我們的現(xiàn)實(shí)生活緊密結(jié)合，貼近生活沒(méi)有

太多的隔膜感，既能夠引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注社會(huì)生活，不做“兩耳不聞窗外事”的書(shū)呆子，又能夠讓絕大多數(shù)學(xué)生有話可說(shuō);三是材料本身具有一定的“隱喻性”，都體現(xiàn)了一定的思辨色彩，能夠較好地考查學(xué)生的辯證思維能力，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生理性地思考社會(huì)人生;四是都在“文體不限”的前提下又突出“文體特征鮮明”，既給了學(xué)生自主選擇寫(xiě)作文體的自由，又突出了寫(xiě)作文體的規(guī)范——寫(xiě)什么文體是你的自由，一旦選擇了就必須合乎這種文體的規(guī)范。

20XX年是引用了列夫·托爾斯泰一句富含哲理的名言“人生的一切變化，一切魅力，一切美都是由光明和陰影構(gòu)成的?！币龑?dǎo)學(xué)生能夠辯證地思考生活中的“變化”“魅力”“美”都與生活中的“光明”和“陰影”密切相關(guān)，任何事物都具有兩面性，看待事情應(yīng)該一分為二，任何“變化”都有“好”和“壞”的因子，不要極端地看待生活中發(fā)生的事情;“光明”和“陰影”共同組成了生活的“魅力”和“美”20XX是命題作文，“這個(gè)世界需要你”體現(xiàn)了每個(gè)人都有自己的存在價(jià)值，每個(gè)人(當(dāng)然包括自己)都對(duì)這個(gè)世界有著這樣那樣的意義，凸顯了每一個(gè)人的“重要性”，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生認(rèn)識(shí)生命個(gè)體的擔(dān)當(dāng)和責(zé)任意識(shí)。

20XX引用的是孫中山的一段名言，20XX的材料則用了文化名人鐵凝、莫言對(duì)待“批評(píng)”“找錯(cuò)”的態(tài)度，這兩個(gè)材料雖然看起來(lái)離得較遠(yuǎn)差別較大，但其宗旨依然還是緊緊扣住了“責(zé)任”“擔(dān)當(dāng)”“氣度”“胸襟”，意在引導(dǎo)學(xué)生正確認(rèn)識(shí)“生命的價(jià)值”和“責(zé)任感”。

綜上分析，近幾年的山東高考作文，雖然在命題角度和方法上各有所“變”,但在核心的命題立意上卻“一脈相承”——多角度解讀材料，理性地思考社會(huì)人生，突出人生觀、價(jià)值觀，彰顯責(zé)任感與擔(dān)當(dāng)?shù)臍舛取?/p>

【命題材料解讀】：

1、注水肉對(duì)人們的生命健康有危害，這是人人皆知的事情，明知有危害，為什么還會(huì)有注水肉出現(xiàn)，屢禁不絕?從商家的角度分析，注水肉增加了商家的利潤(rùn)，為了個(gè)人私利而不顧別人的生命健康，在他們謀了利的同時(shí)卻損害了別人的健康權(quán)利，圍繞這類(lèi)思考，可以寫(xiě)“良知”“職業(yè)道德”“操守”“底線”“誠(chéng)信”“價(jià)值”??拓開(kāi)一些，不光注水肉，假藥、假酒、假榮譽(yù)、假學(xué)歷，幾乎涉及生活的各個(gè)層面，都有鮮活的材料，也從另一個(gè)方面表現(xiàn)了問(wèn)題的嚴(yán)重程度。

2、如果從消費(fèi)者的角度分析，發(fā)現(xiàn)注水肉之后是自認(rèn)倒霉，是退回商家了之，是有人出來(lái)甚至是人人出來(lái)較真，甚至舉報(bào)到相關(guān)部門(mén)來(lái)維護(hù)自身權(quán)利，也許會(huì)顯麻煩，也許不想一人出頭大家受利，也許根本就沒(méi)想這么多??從這個(gè)角度思考，可以寫(xiě)“規(guī)則”“維權(quán)”“見(jiàn)怪不怪與見(jiàn)怪必究”“責(zé)任”“素養(yǎng)”“文化”。

3、如果從職能部門(mén)的角度分析，這樣的事件屢屢暴光，有沒(méi)有應(yīng)對(duì)措施?有沒(méi)有相應(yīng)的法律法規(guī)出臺(tái)?有了法律法規(guī)之后，有沒(méi)有落到實(shí)處?為什么屢查屢有屢禁不絕?這種“一陣風(fēng)”式的工作作風(fēng)到底是一種姿態(tài)還是一種“釣魚(yú)”謀利?從這個(gè)角度出發(fā)，可以寫(xiě)“工作作風(fēng)”“制度的健全與落實(shí)”“利益”“責(zé)任與擔(dān)當(dāng)”。

在對(duì)材料進(jìn)行解讀時(shí)，注水肉事件只是社會(huì)生活中的一個(gè)“點(diǎn)”，我們當(dāng)然應(yīng)該首先抓住這個(gè)“點(diǎn)”，但又不能僅僅停留在這個(gè)“點(diǎn)”上，要有所輻射，有所引申，要從事情的表面深入挖掘，要從材料出發(fā)，聯(lián)系社會(huì)生活，既要學(xué)會(huì)細(xì)致地觀察生活，又能對(duì)所觀察的現(xiàn)實(shí)生活有所思考，并最終能用自己的思考發(fā)出自己的聲音反過(guò)來(lái)干預(yù)生活：這應(yīng)該是我們追求的方向，同時(shí)也理應(yīng)是我們教育的終極目的之一。

【范文示例】：

歸去來(lái)兮，迷途的靈魂

水可以注入各種各樣的肉里，賣(mài)出肉的價(jià)錢(qián);水可以灌入各式各類(lèi)瓶里，賣(mài)出名酒的價(jià)錢(qián);當(dāng)然，水也可以注進(jìn)各種各樣的針劑里，注射到人們的肉體里，賣(mài)出藥的價(jià)錢(qián)??水似乎成了弄虛作假的罪魁禍?zhǔn)?，成了危害社?huì)的元兇，孰不知，真正的元兇不是水，是人，是那些雙眼只看到金錢(qián)卻看不到生命心里只裝著利益卻裝不下良知的人們!

金錢(qián)至上，利欲熏心，人心不古，物欲橫流。本該溫暖柔軟的心靈突然變得冷漠變得兇暴變得像頑石像鋼鐵一般的堅(jiān)硬。熱衷財(cái)富，卻忽略了古老民族積淀了幾千年的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)，失去了誠(chéng)信，喪失了責(zé)任，淪陷了道德底線，泯滅了良知，為了金錢(qián)，每個(gè)人都可以不再是人，成為獸，成為吸血啖肉敲骨榨髓的獸。這不是哪一個(gè)人的悲哀，這是一個(gè)國(guó)家一個(gè)民族一個(gè)時(shí)代的悲哀!

歸去來(lái)兮，迷路未遠(yuǎn)的靈魂!

人最寶貴的是生命，生命屬于我們每個(gè)人都只有一次。生命和健康是任何人都無(wú)權(quán)剝奪不能踐踏的神圣權(quán)利?？墒?，在當(dāng)今社會(huì)，在那些唯利是圖的人們眼里，別人的健康不重要，別人的痛苦和歡樂(lè)不重要，甚至別人的生命也不重要，只有自己賺錢(qián)才重要。眼里只有金錢(qián)而沒(méi)有健康和生命，心里只裝著自己卻沒(méi)有為別人留下一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)位置，這是一種什么樣的價(jià)值觀!這種被金錢(qián)綁架的靈魂扭曲到了什么地步，如果我們的社會(huì)還沒(méi)有引起高度的關(guān)注，或者雖有所察覺(jué)卻沒(méi)有引起足夠的重視，那么，我們的社會(huì)將是一個(gè)什么樣的社會(huì)?!在此，我突然想起了小品中沈騰的那句名言：“人倒了還可以扶起來(lái)，人心倒了可就扶不起來(lái)了!”這豈是危言聳聽(tīng)?

人，應(yīng)該是人的天堂，應(yīng)該是別人的天使;人，絕不應(yīng)該是人的地獄，絕不應(yīng)該成為別人的魔鬼。

如果每個(gè)人的眼里都只看到利益，如果每個(gè)人的心里都只裝著自己，那么，最終將是你欺騙著別人卻也同時(shí)被別人欺騙，你咒罵著別人卻也同時(shí)被別人咒罵，你提防著別人卻也同時(shí)被別人提防，那可真應(yīng)了一句話，城市是車(chē)的海洋，是人的沙漠，游逛在大街上的哪有人啊，全都是欲望，全都是冷漠全都是提防全都是算計(jì)，生活在這樣的世界里，你還會(huì)找到生活的快樂(lè)嗎，你還能感受到人心的溫暖嗎，就算是穿金戴銀坐擁珠寶無(wú)數(shù)，你還能體會(huì)到生命的幸福嗎?

回來(lái)吧，迷途的人們!

找回你丟失的誠(chéng)信，讓人人能夠坦誠(chéng)相待;找回久違的微笑，讓人人能夠感受到對(duì)方的關(guān)愛(ài)和體貼;打開(kāi)緊閉的心鎖，讓人人能夠愉快地交流??

人只有生活在人的世界里，才會(huì)快樂(lè)和幸福。

第五篇：經(jīng)典英語(yǔ)高考作文欣賞（范文模版）

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Advertisements can be seen everywhere in the modern society.Large billboards（廣告牌）are built on the roadsides or on top of the high buildings.Newspapers become thicker and thicker, for pages of the paper are covered with advertisements.TV shows us endless advertisements day and night.Advertisements force people to notice their products..When a new product is developed, it is the manufacturer’s or seller’s duty to let the public know what the new product is;what the specialties(特點(diǎn)，特別之處)are and what the manufacturer’s or the seller’s guarantees（保證，承諾）are to the products.Surely, advertisements are like bridges between customers and manufacturers or sellers.（虛假?gòu)V告）can also be found at the same time.When a person has been cheated once, he can’t believe advertisements once more, or at least he can’t believe advertisements fully.People have become wiser and learn to use their brains when facing a beautiful and attractive advertisement.2

On Test and Test Taking

The purpose of a test is to check how much we students have learned about a（新獲得的知識(shí)）permanent, but also enable us to find what needs to spend more time improving.But some students do not deal with test correctly.Some of them are afraid of.They cheat even at the risk of being caught on exams.Though cheating might give one “better grades”, it adds nothing to one’s knowledge.This dishonest behavior will do one more harm than good.I think that we go to college in order to have our further studies, and prepare us to be qualified for the future job.Therefore, we should take a correct attitude towards test.As long as we study diligently（勤奮地）and review our lessons regularly, we are sure to serve its real purpose.3

The Dictionary

The dictionary is a living teacher.Whenever you come across a new word, just consult（查找，參考）it and you will get a clear definition（定義，解說(shuō)）.Every student, whether attending school or self-taught（自學(xué)的）dictionary …）.As a study aid(輔助工具), a dictionary is convenient, inexpensive and almost omniscient(無(wú)所不知的).Language skills will develop with your constant use of various dictionaries.The more you use them, the more familiar you will become with them.Sooner or later, you will be quite skilled in finding the page, scanning the entries and locating the exact meaning of the new words.But you should have one thing in mind.As a

language student, you can never(太過(guò)于依賴(lài))dictionaries;basic language skills do not come from dictionaries, but from your practice.Expose yourself to the language by listening, speaking, reading and writing more, and that is the only way to the mastery(掌握)of a language.The Way to Achieve Success

Many people say that they much of …歸功于）the cultivation of certain good habits in early life.In forming good habits, I think we should pay attention to four things, that is honesty, industry（勤奮）, enthusiasm（熱情）and thrift（節(jié)儉）.“Honesty is the best policy.” This is a proverb to which we must pay attention.There are so many temptations in society that through a little carelessness we.But when we are honest, people will not be dishonest to us.Industry gives every man and woman, every boy and girl, proper work to do.To do nothing is going to ruin oneself.Enthusiasm is a great force.One’s soul will expand（激發(fā) 膨脹）if one devotes.The difficulties in our way are tremendous, but what can we not accomplish, if with enthusiasm? , 宣布, 提出）the advantages of thrift.Since we live in the world in which money is a very powerful thing, we should always try to save a portion（部分）of our earnings for future use.There are the four things to which we must pay attention.It is only by this way that we can achieve success.TV—a Blessing(福)or a Curse(禍)?

As TV enters into more and more families, people begin to wonder about its advantages and disadvantages.Some believe it is a blessing, others hold（持…觀點(diǎn)）that it is a curse to society.TV, as a 大眾媒體), can bring to people new information on economics, culture, arts, and many other fields.People can enjoy their favorite programs at home.In some countries, some TV stations provide such programs as looking for dangerous criminals(罪犯)and lost children, helping to find an ideal(理想的)lover, which are quite beneficial to society, and others provide various useful seminars(研討會(huì))for people of various ages and social status.But on the other hand, TV may exert bad influence on people.Some programs are full of violence.As a result, people, especially juveniles(青少年), are led to 犯罪沉湎于…)TV programs that some even neglect(忽略)their duties.In my opinion, the attitude toward TV all depends on oneself.People should choose those programs which are useful, and can bring to them the sense of beauty.