第一篇:四級(jí)寫(xiě)作
四級(jí)寫(xiě)作
孫子云:“知己知彼,百戰(zhàn)不殆”。想在寫(xiě)作考試中獲得成功,就必須首先了解四級(jí)考試的要求和評(píng)分規(guī)則。由于新四級(jí)考試還沒(méi)有開(kāi)始進(jìn)行,筆者就以一篇根據(jù)現(xiàn)行四級(jí)寫(xiě)作題目“Do‘Lucky Numbers’Really Bring Good Luck?”寫(xiě)成的學(xué)生作文為例來(lái)講述幾個(gè)最基本的道理。
例文1:
Some people think that certian(拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤)numbers will bring good luck to them.Numbers such as six, eight, sixteen and eighteen are regarded as lucky numbers.There are also people who think that their success is related to certain numbers.However, some other people think numbers have nothing to do with their luck.They believe in their own rather than“l(fā)ucky numbers”.They don't do things according to certain numbers.As far as I am concerned, I think it is a person's own business whether he believes in a certain number or not.The most important thing is that he has done the work by himself and has done it quite well.As to the belief in numbers, it is their(前后指代不一致,應(yīng)改為his)personal choice.該文章是當(dāng)年四級(jí)考試命題組印發(fā)給全國(guó)評(píng)卷老師的一篇例文,根據(jù)15分制的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),這篇例文被評(píng)為14分,供全國(guó)評(píng)卷老師作為評(píng)分參考。乍看起來(lái),本文無(wú)論從遣詞造句還是思想深度,似乎都算不得一篇佳作;但它之所以能夠被評(píng)為14分,還是有其內(nèi)在深層次原因的,那就是經(jīng)常被考生們所忽視的議論文寫(xiě)作常識(shí)。簡(jiǎn)要地講,可分為以下三個(gè)部分:
(一)英文議論文的結(jié)構(gòu)特點(diǎn)
漢語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作對(duì)文章結(jié)構(gòu)的要求不是很高,如開(kāi)頭段應(yīng)該包括什么、論題句應(yīng)該在什么時(shí)候出現(xiàn)、文章的結(jié)尾是否必須總結(jié)全文等等。而英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作要求文章結(jié)構(gòu)必須十分嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),文章各個(gè)部分的功能都要十分清晰,開(kāi)頭、中間和結(jié)尾都有嚴(yán)格的要求。
簡(jiǎn)而言之,英語(yǔ)議論文共有三大特點(diǎn):
1、觀(guān)點(diǎn)鮮明的開(kāi)頭;
2、緊扣主題的結(jié)尾;
3、有主題句并且銜接自然的中間段落。
這三點(diǎn)當(dāng)中,第1、2點(diǎn)早已為絕大多數(shù)中國(guó)學(xué)生所熟知,因?yàn)殚_(kāi)頭點(diǎn)題和結(jié)尾扣題同樣也是漢語(yǔ)文章的要求。但在長(zhǎng)時(shí)間的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中,這樣的要求被很多學(xué)生以為是“老土”而得不到足夠的重視。如果將這種思想帶到英語(yǔ)議論文寫(xiě)作當(dāng)中,直接的后果就是中心分散、觀(guān)點(diǎn)不明確,加上中國(guó)學(xué)生普遍英文表達(dá)能力不強(qiáng),這些因素就為整篇文章的失敗埋下了隱患。
另外,英語(yǔ)文章和漢語(yǔ)不同的是段落的主題句一定要放在段首,而不能按照中文的寫(xiě)作習(xí)慣放在段落的中間或者最后,在英文應(yīng)試寫(xiě)作中更加如此。正因?yàn)闆](méi)有“主題句”的思想,所以中國(guó)學(xué)生在寫(xiě)英語(yǔ)文章時(shí)經(jīng)?!跋氲绞裁?,就寫(xiě)什么”,這在英語(yǔ)議論文中是不能接受的。例如,例文1中每一段的首句都簡(jiǎn)要地概括出了該段的主要內(nèi)容,換句話(huà)說(shuō),每段的內(nèi)容都是根據(jù)首句來(lái)展開(kāi)的,其順序不能顛倒。
(關(guān)于段落的銜接,在后面的內(nèi)容中將詳細(xì)介紹。)(二)中心統(tǒng)一
在中心統(tǒng)一這個(gè)問(wèn)題上,英語(yǔ)議論文和漢語(yǔ)議論文的概念也有所不同。中國(guó)人在寫(xiě)議論文時(shí)常常遵循“中庸”的原則,其具體的表現(xiàn)就是認(rèn)為世界上沒(méi)有任何事情是絕對(duì)的。當(dāng)他們?cè)谖恼轮斜頁(yè)P(yáng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的時(shí)候,總要指出其不足;同樣,在批評(píng)一件事物或一種現(xiàn)象的同時(shí),也總不忘記指出其也有合理之處。這種做法從道理上來(lái)講并沒(méi)有什么不妥,但卻不符合英語(yǔ)議論文的寫(xiě)作習(xí)慣,因?yàn)橛⒄Z(yǔ)作家在寫(xiě)議論文時(shí)關(guān)注的是自己的辯論技巧和其結(jié)果對(duì)公眾的影響力。換句話(huà)說(shuō),如果作者告訴大家兩面都有道理也就等于說(shuō)兩面都沒(méi)有道理,因?yàn)樽x者在讀了文章之后仍舊不知道作者的看法是什么,以及自己在這種情況下到底該怎么做。
所以,既然四級(jí)考試考的是英語(yǔ)文章,大家就應(yīng)該遵循英文議論文的寫(xiě)作思路和習(xí)慣:表示支持則旗幟鮮明地支持;表示反對(duì)就徹徹底底地反對(duì),而不能采取“墻頭草兩邊倒”的做法。以上面的例文1為例,如果作者的觀(guān)點(diǎn)是“幸運(yùn)數(shù)字是既有道理又無(wú)道理的”,這種觀(guān)點(diǎn)就無(wú)法讓人接受,因?yàn)樵谟⒄Z(yǔ)議論文中,這是典型的中心不統(tǒng)一
大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作常用經(jīng)典句型
1)主語(yǔ)從句
It is common knowledge that honesty is the best policy.It is well-known that…
It is self-evident/ conceivable / obvious / apparent that…
It goes without saying that… It is universally acknowledged that… It is / that 2)賓(表)語(yǔ)從句 We cannot understand why he was so cruel to his roommates.The problem is not who will go, but who will stay.3)定語(yǔ)從句(限定性和非限定性)
As is shown/ demonstrated/ illustrated/ depicted/ described…in the cartoon/ picture/ graph/ table…, There are many reasons why I want to study in your university.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.4)狀語(yǔ)從句(時(shí)間,原因,地點(diǎn),條件,讓步,轉(zhuǎn)折等)
When the man is enjoying the cigarette, the smoke becomes a monster(怪物)which will devour him.Whatever the reason, there are still some problems with student use of computers.5)分詞短語(yǔ)做定語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)
Prof.Kang came to our university, giving us a lecture on how to acquire English better.6)倒裝句
Only through these measures can we hope to solve the problem.Scattered around the globe are more than 100 small regions of isolated volcanic activity known to geologists as hot spots.7)被動(dòng)句
Some measures should be taken to deal with the problem.He is said to have accomplished a lot of great deeds.Many people believe that…(It is believed that…)8)設(shè)問(wèn)句
Do you still remember the boy who cried wolf for several times so no one would trust him?
大學(xué)英語(yǔ)新四級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作要求及高分策略(1)一.四級(jí)考試對(duì)寫(xiě)作的要求
《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱》和《大學(xué)英語(yǔ)課程教學(xué)基本要求》都對(duì)培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力做了明確規(guī)定,即學(xué)生能在半小時(shí)內(nèi)完成120字左右的短文,包括書(shū)信等應(yīng)用問(wèn)題寫(xiě)作,要求文理基本通順,表達(dá)思想清楚,無(wú)重大語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。通過(guò)分析歷年的真題,我們不難發(fā)現(xiàn):英語(yǔ)作文考查的類(lèi)型基本包括議論文(一般為三段論式的論說(shuō)文字),說(shuō)明文(目前側(cè)重于這方面的寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練),圖表作文(要求描述性的語(yǔ)言要貼近圖表信息,真實(shí)反映語(yǔ)言水平)和應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作(包括書(shū)信、便條、通知、海報(bào)等)。
二.四級(jí)改革和寫(xiě)作變化
2005年1月的作文題目是要求學(xué)生以導(dǎo)游的身份寫(xiě)一篇演講稿,不僅包含歡迎辭(表態(tài))行程安排,(說(shuō)明),而且包含安排的理由(說(shuō)理)。2005年6月作文題目是校園文化旅游,要求學(xué)生就此闡述不同的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。2006年1月是個(gè)競(jìng)選演說(shuō),如果我當(dāng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席,我會(huì)給大家做點(diǎn)什么事情(說(shuō)明)。2006年6月17日的四級(jí)考試則是一個(gè)海報(bào),要求考生構(gòu)想一個(gè)招募志愿者的海報(bào),其中包括應(yīng)聘人必備的資歷和應(yīng)準(zhǔn)備的材料等(說(shuō)明)。2006年6月24日新題型的作文是傳統(tǒng)的議論文形式,討論大學(xué)生選擇任課老師相關(guān)的問(wèn)題。2007年1月作文也是傳統(tǒng)的議論文形式,探討對(duì)春節(jié)晚會(huì)所持的不同觀(guān)點(diǎn)。2007年6月份是歡迎同學(xué)加入俱樂(lè)部的海報(bào)(應(yīng)用文)。
從上面的題目變化趨勢(shì)看,描述現(xiàn)象、分析原因、個(gè)人看法仍是四、六級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作部分主要考查的重點(diǎn),在今后相當(dāng)長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間內(nèi),英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作教學(xué)和輔導(dǎo)的主要突破口應(yīng)集中在說(shuō)明文、議論文和應(yīng)用文上。
此外,仔細(xì)研究06年6月24日以后的四級(jí)試卷,我們還可發(fā)現(xiàn),新四級(jí)的寫(xiě)作題目與校園生活密切相關(guān),學(xué)生普遍感覺(jué)親切,體裁包括兩篇議論文,一篇應(yīng)用文。不僅如此,新四級(jí)寫(xiě)作題中提供的文章框架清晰,思路比較明確,絕大多數(shù)考生都能利用“經(jīng)典句型”或“萬(wàn)能模板”寫(xiě)出及格的作文。盡管新四級(jí)前兩次都考查了議論文,但這并不能說(shuō)明寫(xiě)作的重心有任何偏移。根據(jù)考試改革方案和課程教學(xué)要求的相關(guān)規(guī)定,應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作、說(shuō)明文和議論文仍將是新四級(jí)作文的主攻方向。
三.四級(jí)寫(xiě)作高分策略
新四級(jí)考試并沒(méi)有改變對(duì)寫(xiě)作的測(cè)試標(biāo)準(zhǔn)和要求,但在出題順序上卻做了明顯的調(diào)整:寫(xiě)作作為第一項(xiàng)考查的內(nèi)容,被提到新四級(jí)試卷的最開(kāi)頭,這令許多考生感覺(jué)不適應(yīng),部分網(wǎng)友甚至認(rèn)為這是在折騰考生。其實(shí),提高寫(xiě)作能力雖然較難,但寫(xiě)作教學(xué)卻是一片大有可為的沃土。在過(guò)去十多年的英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作輔導(dǎo)中,筆者堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為:考生如果堅(jiān)持做到如下幾點(diǎn),就不難在規(guī)定的時(shí)間內(nèi)寫(xiě)出一篇成功的英語(yǔ)作文。
1.了解英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的測(cè)試目的,準(zhǔn)確把握題目的要求
英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作測(cè)試,其實(shí)主要還是要考查學(xué)生組織英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的能力,和用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)思想的能力,體裁不外乎議論文,說(shuō)明文和應(yīng)用文,主題也是在大學(xué)生熟知話(huà)題基礎(chǔ)上的翻新或擴(kuò)展。綜觀(guān)歷年的四級(jí)作文真題,變化趨勢(shì)是從三段論的議論文向?qū)嵱眯愿鼜?qiáng)的應(yīng)用文體,尤其是書(shū)信寫(xiě)作方面傾斜。考生平時(shí)應(yīng)有意識(shí)地就他們感興趣的一些話(huà)題進(jìn)行思考和拓展,爭(zhēng)取在實(shí)踐中磨練敏銳的審題能力。2.迅速梳理寫(xiě)作的思路,列出并借助提綱進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作
到了大學(xué)階段,學(xué)生還是非常善于思考的,他們不僅想象力非常豐富,晚上做夢(mèng),還經(jīng)常daydream, 各有獨(dú)特的思維和寫(xiě)作思路。但是,如何將千頭萬(wàn)緒的思路梳理清楚,學(xué)生則必須有真工夫。為此,在進(jìn)行四級(jí)寫(xiě)作時(shí),考生一定要首先形成自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn),之后合理運(yùn)用一些手段,如常用的有四種:陳述理由、舉例說(shuō)明、提供數(shù)據(jù)、下定義等,之后充分就此展開(kāi)論說(shuō)。這樣通過(guò)高效思考,嚴(yán)密組織,再輔以提綱形式的文章架構(gòu),考生一定會(huì)寫(xiě)出較符合規(guī)范的文章 3.擴(kuò)展寫(xiě)作提綱,草擬文稿,表述主要觀(guān)點(diǎn)
在利用提綱展示個(gè)人寫(xiě)作思路的基礎(chǔ)上,學(xué)生還應(yīng)充分利用現(xiàn)有的英語(yǔ)水平,按照一定的邏輯思路,充分表達(dá)個(gè)人的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作之初,學(xué)生不必字斟句酌,只要脈絡(luò)清楚,具備輪廓就可以了。草擬文章的過(guò)程實(shí)際是把思維結(jié)果外在化的過(guò)程,學(xué)生應(yīng)力爭(zhēng)使文章具有連貫性和流暢性。草擬過(guò)程的順利與否,在很大程度上取決于平時(shí)訓(xùn)練所達(dá)到的水平。許多考生畏懼作文,經(jīng)常懶于動(dòng)筆;還有一些考生認(rèn)為寫(xiě)作很難提高,干脆放棄平時(shí)的訓(xùn)練。這些想法都是錯(cuò)誤的。為真正提高寫(xiě)作水平,筆者建議大家從開(kāi)始準(zhǔn)備四級(jí)的那天起,就應(yīng)有針對(duì)性地分體裁、分話(huà)題、分階段地進(jìn)行實(shí)戰(zhàn)模擬,強(qiáng)迫自己一氣呵成將文章寫(xiě)完,不必追求完美,不必在乎自己的文稿到底語(yǔ)言有多么不地道或出現(xiàn)多少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。熟能生巧。只要堅(jiān)持多寫(xiě)、多練,平時(shí)注意擴(kuò)大閱讀,寫(xiě)作的水平自然就會(huì)提高。
2005年1月CET作文題目
四級(jí)作文題目:
A Campaign Speech 你認(rèn)為自己具備是什么條件(能力,性格,愛(ài)好)可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席工作,如果當(dāng)選你將會(huì)為本校同學(xué)做什么?
范文:
Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students‘ union.I am junior in Chemical Department.Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class.I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my tacher all give me a good praise.I am good at communication and organizing.And I like to help others.Moreover, I have a varity of hobbies,for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc.I am sure that I am qualified for this position.If I become the president, I will try my best to do well.I will organize some siutable activities for you.I will do many things for you to reache your demands as well.I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president.Thank you.六級(jí)作文題目:
1,對(duì)病人的簡(jiǎn)單介紹:目前的病情和家庭情況
2,目前的困難:無(wú)法繼續(xù)承擔(dān)醫(yī)療費(fèi)用,需要護(hù)理
3,希望捐助,聯(lián)系方式
Your Help Needed 范文: Dear friends,As some of you may know,Lucy,a lovely girl student,a junior from the Department of Fine Arts,has been seriously ill.In fact,she has been suffering from hepatitis, which is very dangerous.This 20-year-old girl comes from a small town in Shangdong province.Her family has tried every means to save her.Now Lucy is in urgent need of operation to her liver transplanted.However, her family is too poor to afford the expenses, which totaled 120,000 yuan.How can a poor family earning 1000 yuan per month afford such high expenses? But the time is limited.They cannot afford to wait to see the disease untouched.So you help is urgently needed.Let's do what we can to save our fellow student.The life of such a lovely girl is in your hand.Your love can save a life.You can contact 2335648 in the daytime and 2335658 at night.2005年6月CET作文題目
四級(jí)作文題目:
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay[ IN honour of teachers on the occasion of Teacher's Day].You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1,向老師表達(dá)節(jié)日祝賀
2,從一件小事來(lái)回憶老師的教誨和無(wú)私的奉獻(xiàn) 3,我如何回報(bào)老師的關(guān)愛(ài) Teacher's Day 六級(jí)作文題目:
In this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Pirated Products.1.目前盜版的現(xiàn)象比較嚴(yán)重 2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因及危害 3.我們應(yīng)該怎么做?
參考單詞:盜版 piracy(n.)盜版產(chǎn)品 pirated products 知識(shí)產(chǎn)權(quán) intellectual property rights 侵犯版權(quán) infringe sb's copyright;copyright infringement,Say No to Pirated Products 內(nèi)容:
1、有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課老師。
2、學(xué)生選擇老師時(shí)所考慮的主要因素是??
3、學(xué)生自選任課老師的益處及可能產(chǎn)生的問(wèn)題。
As the proverb says, “Knowledge is power.” It is an undeniable fact that a large amount of students prefer to choose their own teachers for certain courses.In fact, some universities allow their students to do so.When choosing a teacher, some factors should be taken into consideration.On one hand, a learned teacher is preferred.After all, for a student, studying is given full priority.A teacher with plentiful knowledge can ease the burden of study for many students and provide them with many opportunities for enlarging their scope of knowledge, while at the same time realizing their potentials.On the other hand, a teacher with a clear and humorous teaching style is favorable.To a large extent, whether a lecture is welcomed by the students or not is depended on the way of delivering rather than its content.No one can deny that interesting interaction is far more enjoyable than monologue.There is a good side and a bad side to everything, including choosing teachers by students.It goes without saying that it can arouse students’ interest in study to the largest extent.Such phenomena as being absent from classes or paying no attention to the classes may vanish.Nevertheless, it cannot be denied that it can bring some side-effects.The management of classes may be in a disorder.Some teachers can be warmly welcomed so the number of the students may be too large while other courses may have few participants.We can conclude that allowing students to choose their own teachers has both positive and negative effects.What we must do is to make sure that the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible.春節(jié)作文
寫(xiě)春節(jié)作文前,我們可以先回憶下過(guò)春節(jié)是我們參加過(guò)的活動(dòng),如貼倒福、分壓歲錢(qián)、吃餃子、撣揚(yáng)塵、貼年畫(huà)、貼剪紙、放鞭炮、守歲、給壓歲錢(qián)、掛千千結(jié)、貼春聯(lián)等,然后挑一個(gè)我們印象深刻的上網(wǎng)查些資料,可以到百度搜春節(jié)的八個(gè)習(xí)俗,春節(jié)的由來(lái)與傳說(shuō)等,也可以上作文網(wǎng)作文素材頻道找到相關(guān)資料再進(jìn)行介紹。
作文題目可以自擬,如歡度春節(jié),春節(jié)游文廟,除夕之夜,美麗的春節(jié),春節(jié)花會(huì)
開(kāi)頭部分:大致介紹一下春節(jié),及春節(jié)的一些習(xí)俗,點(diǎn)明你所要介紹的習(xí)俗。(略寫(xiě))
第二部分:介紹這一習(xí)俗的來(lái)歷、象征意義等,像剪紙、年畫(huà)、千千結(jié)等還可以寫(xiě)寫(xiě)這些物品的種類(lèi)、樣子等。(詳細(xì))
第三部分:回憶自己參與這一活動(dòng)的情景。(詳細(xì))結(jié)尾結(jié)尾部分:寫(xiě)寫(xiě)自己對(duì)這一習(xí)俗的感受。
每個(gè)部分舉例:
開(kāi)頭部分:大致介紹一下春節(jié),及春節(jié)的一些習(xí)俗,點(diǎn)明你所要介紹的習(xí)俗。(略寫(xiě))
例:元宵節(jié)是我國(guó)的四大節(jié)日之一,元宵節(jié)一過(guò),春節(jié)也就算過(guò)完了,所以這一天是非常隆重和熱鬧的。過(guò)元宵節(jié)的節(jié)目豐富多彩,有充滿(mǎn)樂(lè)趣的看花燈猜燈謎,有喜氣洋洋的舞龍,還有熱鬧非凡的賽龍船。不過(guò),最吸引我們小孩子的卻是那多姿多彩的煙花。
第二部分:介紹這一習(xí)俗的來(lái)歷、象征意義等,像剪紙、年畫(huà)、千千結(jié)等還可以寫(xiě)寫(xiě)這些物品的種類(lèi)、樣子等。(詳細(xì))
例:春聯(lián)代表著歡樂(lè)祥和。在我們中國(guó),每逢春節(jié),無(wú)論城市還是農(nóng)村,家家戶(hù)戶(hù)都要精選一副大紅春聯(lián)貼在門(mén)上,為節(jié)日增加喜慶的氣氛。一幅幅春聯(lián)不僅帶來(lái)了吉祥和祝福,還帶來(lái)了中國(guó)古老的濃濃的文化氣息。瞧!“大地春光好,長(zhǎng)天曉日紅”、“歲歲皆如意,年年盡平安”、“江山萬(wàn)里如畫(huà),神州四時(shí)皆春”、“春風(fēng)送春處處***美,喜鵲報(bào)喜家家喜事多”…… 幅幅春聯(lián)讓千家萬(wàn)戶(hù)喜氣盈門(mén)。春聯(lián)的種類(lèi)比較多。按照使用場(chǎng)所,可分為門(mén)心、框?qū)?、橫批、春條、斗方等。因此,貼的位置也不同,如“門(mén)心”貼在門(mén)板上端中心部位;“橫批”貼在門(mén)楣的橫木上。
第三部分:回憶自己參與這一活動(dòng)的情景。(詳細(xì))
例:記得去年元宵節(jié)的晚上爸爸媽媽帶我去工人體育館看煙花。八點(diǎn)整,只聽(tīng)見(jiàn)幾聲沉悶的聲音,一個(gè)個(gè)煙花帶著紅紅的火星竄上了天空,幾聲脆響,夜空綻放出幾朵美麗的花朵。它們的形狀和顏色各不相同,有五顏六色的滿(mǎn)天星,金黃色的蒲公英,紫色的牽?;ǎ鸺t的玫瑰花,粉紅的月季、銀色的百合,真是絢麗多彩。隨著一聲聲的炮響,人們?cè)隗@呼,在贊嘆,夜色中,人們微微揚(yáng)起的臉上也變幻著多姿的色彩,露出了幸福的笑容……
結(jié)尾結(jié)尾部分:寫(xiě)寫(xiě)自己對(duì)這一習(xí)俗的感受。
例:我看著那散發(fā)著傳統(tǒng)文化芳香的中華結(jié),仿佛品味到了中華民族遠(yuǎn)古的神秘和東方的靈秀。它的古香古色,它的千變?nèi)f化,讓我神往,讓我遐想…… 《春節(jié)的街頭》
今天,是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——春節(jié)。早晨我還沒(méi)醒,就聽(tīng)到了鞭炮的聲音。平靜的社區(qū),今日顯得熱鬧非凡。這熱鬧的喧囂,把我的睡意一股腦的全都打撒開(kāi)來(lái)。于是,起床穿上了新衣服連早飯都來(lái)不及吃就沖到門(mén)外,看著各家各戶(hù)的炮竹,煙花。接著就是跟爸爸媽媽一起去走街串巷——拜年!
“李伯伯,新年快樂(lè)”“王阿姨,工作順了”“劉奶奶,身體健康”〃〃〃跟所有的長(zhǎng)輩們拜過(guò)年之后,媽媽提議說(shuō):一會(huì),去街上看看,感受下新年的氣氛。
一上街,街上可就更熱鬧了。人們手里有提著大袋大袋的菜,身邊的孩子手上握著一大把小花炮,蹦蹦跳跳地跑著。看!我左邊的一位四、五歲左右的小女孩,跑到前面去。一下子又轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)頭對(duì)一位滿(mǎn)手是鼓鼓的袋子的大人喊著:“爸爸,快點(diǎn)!我要回去放炮玩呢!”。有拿著那邊超市發(fā)的小氣球的,紅的,黃的,綠的,還有藍(lán)的。也有三五成群,手挽著手說(shuō)說(shuō)笑笑的姑娘們,小伙子們,忙綠了一年,辛苦了一年,我想這個(gè)時(shí)候應(yīng)該是大家最放松,最高興的時(shí)候。你看,路燈上還掛著兩個(gè)小紅燈,喜氣洋洋的。就像在說(shuō),“我們也要過(guò)新年,我們也要過(guò)新年”。
一進(jìn)菜市場(chǎng),那才更熱鬧呢!人流竄動(dòng),一眼望去,什么也看不見(jiàn),全是人。還有那翠綠的黃瓜,可真新鮮哪,你看,那金黃色的小花在太陽(yáng)的照射下顯得多么的生機(jī)勃勃啊。那鯽魚(yú),鰱魚(yú),青魚(yú),草魚(yú)等等在水里游來(lái)游去,真是印證了我們中國(guó)的老話(huà):年年有魚(yú)(余)!黃的韭菜,紅的番茄,黑的木耳,白的蘿卜〃〃〃真是要什么有什么呀?!鞍?!可真夠擠的?!蔽亦止玖艘痪?。跟著媽媽買(mǎi)了幾個(gè)我愛(ài)吃的菜,結(jié)完帳就走出了菜場(chǎng)。超市里的收銀臺(tái)前也早已排起了長(zhǎng)龍。
傍晚時(shí)分,街上,又漸漸安靜下來(lái)。店主們把店子關(guān)了,超市也比往常早了些許關(guān)門(mén)。大家都提著東西回家過(guò)年去了。
到了晚上6點(diǎn)左右,社區(qū)漸漸安靜,孩子們都回家吃團(tuán)圓飯去了。吃完團(tuán)圓飯7、8點(diǎn)的樣子社區(qū)又重新熱鬧起來(lái)。孩子們?nèi)汲鰜?lái)放花炮了。這個(gè)放個(gè)“降落傘,”那個(gè)又放個(gè)“天女撒花”〃〃〃〃各式各樣的花炮全有。每放完一個(gè)都會(huì)聚集好幾個(gè)孩子,他們?cè)谟懻撜l(shuí)的花炮最美麗,誰(shuí)的花炮顏色最多,之后又是陣陣歡笑。大人們或幾個(gè)坐在一起打牌,打麻將;或幾個(gè)坐在一起嗑瓜子,剝花生;或看著自己的孩子放花炮,偶爾還要幫他們一下。大多數(shù)的孩子,都是自己獨(dú)立操作完成。
夜,更深了。人們陸陸續(xù)續(xù)的回家了,有些不肯回家的孩子也在父母的勸說(shuō)下,不情愿的回了家,一天的熱鬧景象漸漸被夜幕包圍。我不禁感嘆又是一年到,時(shí)間過(guò)得可真快呀!
春節(jié)見(jiàn)聞 “當(dāng)、當(dāng)、當(dāng)”新年的鐘聲敲響了,家家戶(hù)戶(hù)的門(mén)上早已貼上了或火紅或金黃的對(duì)聯(lián),每一家的老老少少都樂(lè)得合不攏嘴。興奮的孩子們有的目不轉(zhuǎn)睛地盯著電視,品嘗著一年一度的晚會(huì)大餐――春節(jié)晚會(huì);有的急著給自己的長(zhǎng)輩拜年,發(fā)短信,打電話(huà),所有新年的祝福話(huà)語(yǔ)仿佛怎么也說(shuō)不完;調(diào)皮的孩子正在向自己的父輩們 “討要”壓歲錢(qián);屋外的鞭炮聲此起彼伏,炸開(kāi)了鍋,五彩的煙花更是把這個(gè)特殊的夜晚點(diǎn)綴得絢麗多姿。
正月初一,農(nóng)歷新年的第一天迎著人們的喜悅祥和而來(lái)。我這個(gè)平時(shí)最賴(lài)床的懶漢,今天卻起了個(gè)大早,因?yàn)槲覙O想穿上我那美麗的新衣,出去好好炫耀一翻。我要去走親訪(fǎng)友拜新年了,這無(wú)疑也是一件高興的事。我們小孩子走在拜年隊(duì)伍的前面,見(jiàn)到長(zhǎng)輩們拜個(gè)年,說(shuō)幾句吉利話(huà),就可以收獲一大把的壓歲錢(qián),然后拿到街上去買(mǎi)自己喜愛(ài)的東西――玩具、零食、鞭炮……,家長(zhǎng)好像變了個(gè)人似的,對(duì)我們的放縱是那么的寬容,一切都有了!這就是過(guò)年的感覺(jué)。
“放鞭炮嘍!”不知是誰(shuí)喊了一聲,小孩子們很快都聚在了一起。一串串鞭炮在人們手中點(diǎn)燃,響聲震天,四處飛濺,仿佛要把一個(gè)個(gè)美好的愿望送到千家萬(wàn)戶(hù)。一陣陣炮竹聲接連不斷,熱鬧非凡。
到了吃飯的時(shí)候,望著滿(mǎn)桌子平時(shí)最?lèi)?ài)吃的菜肴,我們小孩子卻一點(diǎn)兒也不覺(jué)得餓。大人們?cè)谕票瓝Q盞之間,談?wù)撟疃嗍牵航穹俏舯劝?!今天的幸福生活從餐桌上最能說(shuō)明問(wèn)題,現(xiàn)在人們生活好了,天天就像在過(guò)年!
奔波在走親訪(fǎng)友的路途上,我見(jiàn)到了春意盎然的田間大地,一條條新修的高速公路縮短了我們的行程,通往鄉(xiāng)村的泥巴路也被“村村通”的水泥路所覆蓋,城市高樓大廈像雨后春筍,一年一個(gè)變化……
春節(jié)對(duì)于我們小孩子來(lái)說(shuō),那就是一切都在變化,一切都是新的!
第二篇:四級(jí)寫(xiě)作
一.對(duì)比觀(guān)點(diǎn)題型
(1)要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀(guān)點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。
1.有一些人認(rèn)為……
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2.另一些人認(rèn)為……
3.我的看法……
The topic of ①________(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③________(理由二).Moreover, ④________(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥____________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦_(dá)___________(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧________(我的觀(guān)點(diǎn)).The reason is that ⑨____________(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn),要求考生反對(duì)這一觀(guān)點(diǎn)Some people believe that ①________(觀(guān)點(diǎn)一).For example, they think ②________(舉例說(shuō)明).And it will bring them ③________(為他們帶來(lái)的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④____(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤____(反對(duì)的理由之二).Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法).英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試寫(xiě)作技巧
二.闡述主題題型
要求從一句話(huà)或一個(gè)主題出發(fā),按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實(shí).The good old proverb ________(名言或諺語(yǔ))reminds us that ________(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________(理由一).For example, ____________(舉例說(shuō)明).Secondly,________(理由二).Another case is that ________(舉例說(shuō)明).Furthermore , ____________(理由三).英語(yǔ)四級(jí)英譯漢的目的,要求和評(píng)分
In my opinion, ________(我的觀(guān)點(diǎn)).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say____A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.三.解決方法題型
要求考生列舉出解決問(wèn)題的多種途徑
1.問(wèn)題現(xiàn)狀英語(yǔ)四級(jí)英譯漢的目的,要求和評(píng)分
2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))
In recent days, we have to face I problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________(說(shuō)明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second, ________(舉例進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________(解決方法一).For another ________(解決方法二).Finally, ________(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that ________(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(帶來(lái)的好處).四.說(shuō)明利弊題型
這種題型往往要求先說(shuō)明一下現(xiàn)狀,再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊,有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度(利或弊)出發(fā),最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè))
1.說(shuō)明事物現(xiàn)狀
2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(或一方面)
3.你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides ____________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).To make matters worse,____________(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè)).五.議論文的框架
(1)不同觀(guān)點(diǎn)列舉型(選擇型)
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀(guān)點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying
that ___觀(guān)點(diǎn)一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀(guān)點(diǎn)二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand,___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀(guān)點(diǎn)二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀(guān)點(diǎn)一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點(diǎn)一______.In addition, ____ 缺點(diǎn)二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.英語(yǔ)四級(jí)英譯漢的目的,要求和評(píng)分
As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語(yǔ)警句性議論文
It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語(yǔ)_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語(yǔ)的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)
A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語(yǔ)_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語(yǔ)_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.as is indicated above......there is.....in the picture,it is obvious that,by diagramwe know that.for the reason if we realize that we firstly should,secondly we ,not only do webut, in the end it is essential that,,we make a conclusion that it is ,it isthat,,to our surprise ,the cartoon show us to sty.ina word ,we believe that
第三篇:四級(jí)寫(xiě)作
1.大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)測(cè)試作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 2.四級(jí)作文命題規(guī)律 3.怎樣寫(xiě)好四級(jí)作文 2.四級(jí)作文命題規(guī)律 2.1.歷年四級(jí)作文題目
1995.1 Can Money Buy Happiness? 1995.6 Advantages of a Job Interview 1996.1 The Two–Day Weekend 1996.6 Global Shortage of Fresh Water 1997.1 Practice Makes Perfect 1997.6 Getting to Know the World Outside Campus 1998.1 Harmfulness of Fake Commodities 1998.6 Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? 1999.1 Don?t Hesitate to Say “No”
1999.6 Reading Selectively or Extensively? 2000.1 How I Finance My College Education 2000.6 Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? 2001.1 How to Succeed in a Job Interview 2001.6 A Letter to a Schoolmate 2002.1 A Letter to the University President about
the Canteen Service on Campus 2002.6 Students? Use of Computers 2003.1 It Pays to Be Honest 2003.6 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident.2003.9 The Day My Classmate Fell Ill(or Got Injured)2003.12 A Letter in Reply to a Friend 2004.6 An Introduction for Tourists 2005.1 A campaign speech 2005.6 In honor of Teachers On the Occasion of Teachers? Day 2005.12 Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists? 2006.6 An Announcement for a Voluntary Program 2.2.命題形式 4.2.1.提綱作文
提綱作文實(shí)質(zhì)上是議論文,其下可分為四種類(lèi)型:
現(xiàn)象闡釋型 : 2003年1月四級(jí)作文考題 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.1.當(dāng)前社會(huì)上存在許多不誠(chéng)實(shí)的現(xiàn)象;
2.誠(chéng)實(shí)利人利已,做人應(yīng)該誠(chéng)實(shí)。
.問(wèn)題對(duì)策型:分析問(wèn)題,找出成因,提出解決辦法,題目實(shí)例如下: 1997年6月四級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus.You should write at least 100 words and you
should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.大學(xué)生了解社會(huì)的必要性;
2.了解社會(huì)的途徑(大眾媒介、社會(huì)服務(wù)等);
3.我打算怎么做。
觀(guān)點(diǎn)對(duì)比型:辨析兩種對(duì)立觀(guān)點(diǎn),題目實(shí)例如下: 1995年1月四級(jí)作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.有人認(rèn)為金錢(qián)是幸福之本(source of happiness)2.也有人認(rèn)為金錢(qián)是萬(wàn)惡之源(root of all evil)3.我的看法
論說(shuō)反駁型:支持或駁斥一種觀(guān)點(diǎn),題目實(shí)例如下: 1998年6月四級(jí)作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below: 1.有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會(huì)帶來(lái)好運(yùn); 2.我認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運(yùn)氣無(wú)關(guān),…… 2.2.2.圖表作文
近十年來(lái)圖表作文只考過(guò)一次柱狀圖
2.2.3.情景作文的實(shí)質(zhì)是記敘文,主要考過(guò)這幾種類(lèi)型: A.書(shū)信
(1)告知信/ 建議信:2004年1月 四級(jí)作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend's inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1.建議報(bào)考的專(zhuān)業(yè)及理由; 2.報(bào)考該專(zhuān)業(yè)的基本條件; 3.應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考。(2)綜合信
2002年1月四級(jí)作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 假設(shè)你是李明,請(qǐng)你就本校食堂的狀況給校長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)一封信,內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及食堂的飯菜質(zhì)量、價(jià)格、環(huán)境、服務(wù)等,可以是表?yè)P(yáng),可以是批評(píng)建議,也可以兼而有之。
B.演講致辭
2005年1月四級(jí)作文真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.A Campaign Speech 1.你認(rèn)為自己具備是什么條件(能力,性格,愛(ài)好)可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席工作,2.如果當(dāng)選你將會(huì)為本校同學(xué)做什么? 議論文(共14題)現(xiàn)象闡釋型:
1995年6月,1996年1月,1997年1月,1998年1月,1999年1月, 2003年1月
問(wèn)題對(duì)策型:
1996年6月,1997年6月,2000年1月,2001年1月,觀(guān)點(diǎn)對(duì)比型:1995年1月,1999年6月,2000年6月 論證反駁型:1998年6月 圖表作文(共1題)
柱狀圖:2002年6月 記敘文(共7題)
告知信/建議信:2001年6月,2004年1月
綜合信:2002年1月
綜合敘事:2003年6月,2003年9月
演講致辭:2004年6月,2005年1月,2005年6月 2.3.命題規(guī)律
1)新:對(duì)傳統(tǒng)的三段論式作文提出挑戰(zhàn),新的題型層出不窮。特別是2003年以來(lái),先后考過(guò)交通事故目擊證詞、導(dǎo)游詞等首次出現(xiàn)的題目,所以?xún)H僅依靠背誦套句變得越來(lái)越行不通。需要同學(xué)們重視提高自己的真正寫(xiě)作水平,以不變應(yīng)萬(wàn)變。
2)綜合能力考核:純粹的記敘、說(shuō)明或議論文的考核被同時(shí)考核三種能力的綜合性題目所代替,如2003年9月份的考題,就要求考生在第一段敘述你的classmate生病或受傷的過(guò)程,第二段要求說(shuō)明一下各方面對(duì)他的關(guān)心,第三段要求你對(duì)這個(gè)事件展開(kāi)討論。這要求我們要全面發(fā)展自己的寫(xiě)作能力,不可偏廢。
3)實(shí)用:實(shí)用文體的寫(xiě)作出現(xiàn)得越來(lái)越多,書(shū)信作文屢次出現(xiàn),2004年6月還考了一篇導(dǎo)游詞。這體現(xiàn)了四級(jí)作文對(duì)學(xué)生實(shí)際運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)能力的關(guān)注,也是四級(jí)作文備考訓(xùn)練的重點(diǎn)之一。
2.4.四級(jí)作文可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)的題目
1)考試的命題作文大都是議論文結(jié)構(gòu),一般來(lái)說(shuō)題目?jī)?nèi)容應(yīng)該是考生所熟悉的,能夠有話(huà)可說(shuō)的,如那些社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題就是經(jīng)常出的題目。
2)但不是所有的熱點(diǎn)問(wèn)題都會(huì)成為考試題目??荚囶}目還要和考試對(duì)象的文化背景,年齡特點(diǎn)相一致,所以有關(guān)大學(xué)生生活,學(xué)習(xí),理想等的題目經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)。
3)作文題目會(huì)考慮到考生的語(yǔ)言水平,也就是說(shuō)學(xué)生要求掌握的詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)能否足夠表達(dá)所考的題目。
總的來(lái)說(shuō),根據(jù)學(xué)生要求掌握的詞匯,根據(jù)學(xué)生的知識(shí)結(jié)構(gòu),年齡特點(diǎn)和文化背景,出題的范圍可大致如下:
科學(xué)技術(shù):計(jì)算機(jī),克隆,電視,小汽車(chē)等對(duì)社會(huì)和生活的影響 社會(huì)問(wèn)題:如住房,交通,就業(yè),犯罪,婚姻,環(huán)境,能源和廣告等
校園生活:如學(xué)習(xí)方式,考試,課余活動(dòng),體育鍛煉,人際交往和興趣愛(ài)好等
青少年問(wèn)題:如父子代溝,抽煙吸毒,個(gè)人思想,職業(yè)選擇,文化教育和成功失敗等 文化教育:閱讀,道德修養(yǎng),出國(guó)留學(xué),學(xué)生減負(fù),教育與成長(zhǎng)等
3.怎樣寫(xiě)好四級(jí)作文
3.1.如何開(kāi)頭
(1)主題句法
The appeal of advertising to buying motives can have both negative and positive effects.(2)問(wèn)題法
Do you know how many people die from traffic accidents every 23 minutes? Why does cream go bad faster than butter?
(3)對(duì)比法
When asked …., most of college students say that….But I think quite differently.I would prefer a career that will help realize my potentials.(4)數(shù)據(jù)法
According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.(5)故事法
Six o?clock yesterday(June 20th, Friday)afternoon when I was walking along the riverbank of our school, an unbelievable scene caught my eyes.(6)引語(yǔ)法
As the proverb goes, “You are only young once.”(適用于記住的名言)There is an increasing awareness/popularity among people that…..3.2.如何結(jié)尾
3.2.1.重復(fù)中心思想 回到文章開(kāi)頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上,達(dá)到再次肯定和強(qiáng)調(diào)的效果。
With all these benefits, it is no wonder that sports and games have now become more popular with people than ever.3.2.2.作出結(jié)論 文章最后用幾句話(huà)概括全文內(nèi)容,并進(jìn)一步肯定文章的中心思想或作者的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。
In conclusion/to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, a good teacher-student relationship can be mutual beneficial.The students gain knowledge eagerly and enjoyably, and the teacher gains satisfaction from his job.3.2.3.應(yīng)用引語(yǔ) 用格言、諺語(yǔ)或習(xí)語(yǔ)總結(jié)全文,既言簡(jiǎn)意賅又有更強(qiáng)的說(shuō)服力。
If you have anything to do, try to do it yourself, for that is the safest way to permanent success.Remember the famous saying.“God helps those who help themselves.“
3.2.4.用反問(wèn)結(jié)尾 雖然形式是問(wèn)句,但意義卻是肯定的,具有明顯的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用,引起讀者思考。
Therefore, listening skills must be consciously improved.Since it is such an important means of learning and communication, why shouldn?t we develop this ability as far as possible? 3.2.5.提出展望或期望 表示對(duì)將來(lái)的展望或期待讀者投入行動(dòng)。
I am sure that Chinese will become one of the most important languages in the world in the next century.As China will open further to the outside world,the language is sure to be spread world widely.From the discussion above, we may safely arrive at/come to/reach the conclusion that… 3.3.行文中間
3.3.1.用詞多樣豐富
think vs.hold the view that/maintain that… so vs.consequently
because vs.resulting from, on account of the fact that and so on
3.3.2.長(zhǎng)短句交錯(cuò)使用
When it comes to…, I hold the view that… I am for/ against the view that… There is no denying the fact that… There is no doubt that No wonder …
The reason why…is that… On no account can we…
Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that… 3.3.3.通過(guò)遣詞造句使英語(yǔ)更加地道 遣詞
抽象名詞的使用是現(xiàn)代英語(yǔ)的一大特點(diǎn) Family life makes me feel happy.Family life is a source of happiness to me.Our parents always expect that we should make progress in school, and will ask why we fail to do so.Our parents always anticipate progress and question its absence.The mayor said he was very grateful because the construction workers were dedicated and competent.The mayor expressed his appreciation of the dedication and competence of the construction workers.The news made us no longer anxious but joyful.The news turned our initial anxiety into joy.If we don?t recognize the serious problem of growing population, we will make a big mistake.Failure to recognize the seriousness of growing population will lead to a big problem.造句
漢語(yǔ)句子信息密度高,而英語(yǔ)句子冗余度高 漢語(yǔ)句子按照時(shí)間和因果順序進(jìn)行線(xiàn)性排列,重心落在最后,而英語(yǔ)句子卻可以運(yùn)用各種虛詞著眼于空間的立體組合,把重心放在句首,不拘泥于時(shí)間發(fā)生的時(shí)間和因果次序,也不必?fù)?dān)心其邏輯關(guān)系上的混亂
When I first visited Shanghai, I could not find any trees and flowers in the streets.I was really surprised.I was really surprised at the absence of any trees and flowers in the streets when I first visited Shanghai.Some shows will have bad effect on children.But our parents fail to notice it, so they allow children to watch whatever program is on.Children are allowed to watch whatever program is on, with little thought on parents’ part of the bad effect that some shows will have on children.In summer vacation, I visited several places and met different kinds of people.I can tell you many wonderful stories about them.There are many wonderful stories to tell about places I visited and different kinds of people I met during the summer vacation.3.4.四級(jí)作文范例
06年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)及范文
Direction:
1.許多人喜歡在除夕夜觀(guān)看春節(jié)晚會(huì)
2.但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì).3.我的看法.The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala.Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations.It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes.Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs.These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV.Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance.The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives.Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve.They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television.I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned.Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year.To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan.We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show 4.如何提高寫(xiě)作能力 原則一:豐富詞匯 原則二:重視閱讀
一方面做大量的泛讀。作文和閱讀是相輔相成、互相促進(jìn)的。
另一方面做有意識(shí)的精讀。一要精讀一些內(nèi)容接近現(xiàn)實(shí)生活的例文。二要精讀優(yōu)秀范文??吹臅r(shí)候要著眼于三個(gè)方面:范文是如何提出觀(guān)點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行論證的,運(yùn)用了哪些論證手法;范文是如何安排段落的,段落之間以及句子之間是怎樣銜接的;范文里有什么精彩的詞、詞組和句型是值得我們模仿的。如果考生能夠舉一反三,仔細(xì)思考并且適當(dāng)借鑒的話(huà),定會(huì)獲益非淺。
原則三:加強(qiáng)背誦 原則四:收錄材料 原則五:勤于練習(xí)
練習(xí)四級(jí)真題。在練習(xí)的時(shí)候要注意應(yīng)該在規(guī)定時(shí)間內(nèi)完成。在練習(xí)頻率上,基本應(yīng)該保持兩天寫(xiě)一篇以上。
在練習(xí)寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候也不一定非得要寫(xiě)完整的文章,有時(shí)候可以進(jìn)行段落論證的寫(xiě)作。寫(xiě)完之后對(duì)照范文,反思自己作文中存在的問(wèn)題。英文里有句諺語(yǔ):Practice makes perfect.(熟能生巧),只要堅(jiān)持,提高四級(jí)作文分?jǐn)?shù)指日可待。
提綱
1.大學(xué)英語(yǔ)作文新動(dòng)態(tài)分析 2.四級(jí)作文寫(xiě)作步驟解析 3.四級(jí)作文??碱}型分析
4.寫(xiě)作對(duì)策
5.最新作文解析
6.寫(xiě)作注意事項(xiàng)
1).寫(xiě)作時(shí)間沒(méi)有變,字?jǐn)?shù)要求有變化。
2)寫(xiě)作提綱沒(méi)有了,出現(xiàn)了寫(xiě)作情景或語(yǔ)境
2011年12月的作文沒(méi)有給出中文提綱而是設(shè)定了一個(gè)語(yǔ)境(context)。這與之前相比難度相對(duì)增加了,考生必須在30分鐘內(nèi),首先用三至五分鐘,來(lái)給自己打個(gè)腹稿,確定全文的結(jié)構(gòu)或outline。
其次,也是從今往后的考試中最大的一個(gè)變化是,在寫(xiě)作要求(instruction)里,會(huì)給你設(shè)定好一個(gè)情景(situation)或語(yǔ)境(context)。這就給考生提出了更大的挑戰(zhàn)。
考生必須要在文章中,以這個(gè)情景或語(yǔ)境為出發(fā)點(diǎn),來(lái)展開(kāi)對(duì)命題的探討。決不能脫離這個(gè)所給定的情景或語(yǔ)境,隨心所欲地大發(fā)議論,以免跑題。
基本形式:三段落式; 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及注意事項(xiàng):
1.切題:根據(jù)該段所給的題目及情景或語(yǔ)境來(lái)寫(xiě)相關(guān)內(nèi)容
2.語(yǔ)言:完整句子,減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
3.連貫:運(yùn)用列舉法,使段落結(jié)構(gòu)清晰;
免俗 2.寫(xiě)作步驟解析
(1)分析所給語(yǔ)境與題目之間的關(guān)系 1.審題列提綱:
(3 min)(2)確定三部分的寫(xiě)作結(jié)構(gòu)和基本內(nèi)容 2.寫(xiě)作(24 min)3.檢查(3min)3.四級(jí)作文??碱}型分析 1)現(xiàn)象解釋型 2)觀(guān)點(diǎn)對(duì)立型 3)問(wèn)題解決型
2008/06
Recreational Activities 2008/12
Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags 2009/06
Free Admission to Museums 2009/12
Create a Green Campus 2010/06
Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 2010/12
How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent 2011/06
Online Shopping 2011/12
Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will近四年來(lái)四級(jí)作文的題型歸類(lèi) 1)現(xiàn)象解釋型
----2008/12 2)觀(guān)點(diǎn)對(duì)立型
----2008/06,2009/06, 2011/06 3)問(wèn)題解決型
-----2009/12,2010/06,2010/12 4.寫(xiě)作對(duì)策 1)、現(xiàn)象解釋型
a.闡述現(xiàn)象
b.分析原因或影響因素
c.存在的問(wèn)題或作者的觀(guān)點(diǎn) 以2008/12的作文為例進(jìn)行分析 2008年12月的作文
Part I Writing(30 minutes)
注意:此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: Limiting the Use of Disposal Bags
1、一次性塑料袋曾經(jīng)廣泛使用
2、由此帶來(lái)的問(wèn)題
3、限制一次性塑料袋的意義
寫(xiě)作范文 寫(xiě)作范文 寫(xiě)作模板 A.Nowadays_________is a common phenomenon in society.For example, ________.People/prefer doing ________because______._________ do more(good)than(harm)to us.For one thing, _________.For another, ____________.B
Recently ________ has aroused public concern.It ______________________.People/prefer doing ________because______.___________ do both(good)and(harm)to us.On the one hand,________.On the other hand,________________.2)、觀(guān)點(diǎn)對(duì)立型
a.一些人對(duì)某一事物的 觀(guān)點(diǎn)是… …
b.另外一些人對(duì)該事物的 觀(guān)點(diǎn)是… …
c.我的看法… …
(以2011年6月的作文為例進(jìn)行分析)
2011年6月的作文
Part I Writing(30 minutes)
注意:此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: Online Shopping
1.現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物已成為一種時(shí)尚
2.網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物有很多好處,但也有不少問(wèn)題
3.我的建議 觀(guān)點(diǎn)對(duì)立型模版
第一段提出問(wèn)題模版:
1.There is a hot debate going on about____
2.Recently many people are involved in the heated discussion about_____近年來(lái),…...引起了激烈的爭(zhēng)論.第二段 論述兩種不同的觀(guān)點(diǎn)模版
1.As for such a question, different people hold different views.Some believe______, While there is also an opposite voice,___.2.Some insist that _____.Others, however, are voicing quite a loud protest.They pointed out that___________.3.Some maintain that_________, others argue that__________.4.Most people take it for granted that________..However,others hold________.第三段 我的觀(guān)點(diǎn)模版
1.As for me, I hold that ______________.2.I firmly believe that_____________.3.As far as I?m concerned, ___________.4.For my part,it is______________.5.Personally, I believe the trend that____.6.From my perspective,____________.7.In my opinion__________________.練習(xí):
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Credit Cards.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.越來(lái)越多的人使用信用卡,信用卡有哪些好處
2.信用卡的弊端
3.你自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)
Credit Cards 3)問(wèn)題解決型
a.闡述問(wèn)題、解決問(wèn)題 b.解決問(wèn)題的辦法 c.我的看法
以2010/12的作文為例進(jìn)行分析 2010年12月的作文
Part I Writing(30 minutes)
注意:此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: How should parents help children to be independent?
1,目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切
2,為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)該..How should parents help children to be independent?
This is a thought-provoking social phenomenon that parents monopolize their children’s everything.From going to university, selecting majors to hunting for a job, parents make every crucial decision for their sons and daughters.No doubt, what the parents do leads to a most serious problem—children are badly dependent on parental help.Every morning the children wake up, but
they don’t know what they should do and how they could do.They lose the ability to take care of themselves, and in turn, lose the opportunity to succeed.Don’t keep on spoiling the children anymore, because they need independence.These are some suggestions for parents.Firstly, parents should create an independent climate for their children.Secondly, parents should try to help children maintain their independence.Finally, parents should always believe that their children have the ability to make their own decisions in their lives.寫(xiě)作模板
A
Sometimes we find there are really many problems/difficulties in _______________.Then how can we manage to overcome all these? Step by step, first,________.Secondly, __________.Thirdly,__________.Last, _____.After a period of painstaking efforts, I feel that _______________________________.B
These days we often hear that___________.There are some possible reasons for that.In the first place,______________.In the second place, _________________.To solve the problem is not easy at all, but it is worth trying.We should do something such as _________ to improve the present situation, And I do believe everything will be better in the future.5、最新四級(jí)作文解析(2011年12月的作文)Part I Writing(30 minutes)
注意:此部分試題在答題卡1上。
”you're allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, “Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I 've done it hundreds of time.” You'd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.” ? 從命題要求中,我們可以看到此次命題的考試內(nèi)容為勵(lì)志型話(huà)題,與學(xué)生的日常學(xué)習(xí)生活和人生觀(guān)有關(guān)。命題屬于依據(jù)材料來(lái)分析問(wèn)題的文章體裁,對(duì)于這樣的話(huà)題,我們可以借用三段式這一模式,首先依據(jù)背景材料來(lái)提出問(wèn)題,“從戒煙的問(wèn)題引出做任何事情都需要堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志,需要堅(jiān)持到底,不可半途而廢?!敝蠓治鲞@一問(wèn)題,可以正反論證,也可舉例論
證,此為主體段落,可以通過(guò)“人生要靠自己創(chuàng)造”、“人的潛力無(wú)窮”、“任何苦難和痛苦都是對(duì)自己的挑戰(zhàn),其收獲到的經(jīng)驗(yàn)將是無(wú)窮的”。也可以引用名人名言,如“where there is a will, there is a way”。最后一段,可以總結(jié)來(lái)論證堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志對(duì)于成功的重大意義。提綱
(1)闡述現(xiàn)象“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world.I ?ve done it hundreds of time.”,并進(jìn)行評(píng)論
(2)舉例證明Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
(3)作者的觀(guān)點(diǎn)
Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will
Everyone tries to achieve success in his career.However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails.Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means
steadiness in one's work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.6、寫(xiě)作的注意點(diǎn): 1.字跡一定要清晰工整
2.第一段不要出現(xiàn)語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,如:nowadays的拼寫(xiě).3.不能出現(xiàn)的標(biāo)點(diǎn)(1)書(shū)名號(hào)(2)頓號(hào)
(3)6個(gè)點(diǎn)的省略號(hào)(4)中文形式的句號(hào)
第四篇:四級(jí)模擬題寫(xiě)作
1.Should Smoking Be Banned in Public Places? In recent years, smoking has been banned in many public places such as shops, restaurants, and even bus stops.This regulation has triggered much dispute.On the one hand, many welcome the ban since lots of illnesses and deaths are smoking-related, and this is a very sensible step to improve people’s health and living condition.On the other hand, however, smokers consider it is unfair to ban smoking.It is their right to smoke, and they are not committing any crime, so the government should not ban that.In my view, to ban smoking is a long term process, during which education rather than enforcement is more likely to be the key to the success.Banning smoking in the public areas is a policy that should be implemented step by step.2.On Internet Celebrities In recent years a variety of Internet celebrities have emerged with different stories.Some folks consider it a cultural progress in this network era while some hold the opposite opinion.I prefer to agree that this phenomenon is a progress.First, the emergence of those celebrities represents the free expressions of new ideas, either creative or queer.New idea is a very important aspect in the development of this fast-moving world.Second, the society’s acceptance to the celebrities indicates that we are more open-minded and willing to take in new stuff than before.With more new ideas and open-minded sense, we are able to create an all-round diversified society.All in all, the emergence of Internet celebrities, to some extent, is our progress in developing a more diversified society.3.Should Electricity in the Dormitory Be Cut Off after Midnight? The electricity in the dormitory of some colleges is cut off after midnight to ensure students to go to bed early.Some people agree with this conduct for it is beneficial for students’ daytime study;while some argue that this regulation imposes restrictions on students’ private life.For me, I agree with the latter opinion.First, a college student is already an adult, so he can control his work and rest schedule.Second, now people’s life depends on electricity very much.It is convenient when a student to use an appliance but the electricity is unavailable.Third, sometimes a student may study late.Without electricity, he can not finish his assignment on time and this is not good for his study.Hence, colleges should abandon this unnecessary operation and offer 24-hour electricity supply to students.4.The Advantages and Disadvantages of Keeping Pets Nowadays many people like raising pets, such as dogs, cats, birds, etc.Actually, it is good to keep pets because pets can play with the young and accompany the old.Research also shows that living with a pet helps soothe people’s pressure and distress and even decreases the possibility of getting heart diseases.However, many are against living together with animals.They argue that pets are easily infected by diseases, which may pass on to humans.What’s more, the unpleasant smell and waste caused by pets are a resource of environmental pollution.In my opinion, keeping pets bring joy to our life.But to avoid potential risks and troubles, we have to make sure that our pets are properly vaccinated and their behaviors are under control.5.Factors of Success Achieving success is an ideal for almost everyone.However, it does not mean everyone can make it, since it takes effort, time amongst other factor.First of all, painstaking effort is indispensable for anybody who wants to be successful.“No pains, no gains” is the universal truth acknowledged by all successful men.Secondly, success always comes along with time.As the saying goes, “Rome was not built in a day”;likewise, any wish of becoming successful overnight is nothing more than a fantasy.Besides, there are other important factors leading to success, such as confidence, intelligence, patience, perseverance, to name just a few.As a young man, I am still striving on my way to success.Already aware of the challenges and barriers ahead, I have equipped myself with the most courage and determination.6.My View on Best Wishes Text Messages On holidays many best wishes text messages are forwarded.Some people like forwarding these text messages because it is convenient.Others say the wishes sent in this way are not sincere enough and I agree with this view.On the one hand, a text message made by yourself means that you are willing to take the time to organize your words and express your special wishes to a friend;while a forwarded one may show that you are taking it just as a duty.On the other hand, a self-made text message contains what you exactly want to wish.Maybe it is not fancy, but it is special and unique.So when next holiday comes, let’s compose our own best wishes text messages to our families and friends.7.A Letter to Cousin Dear Mike, Your first winter holiday in college is approaching.Do you have any idea of how to spend it? I can share with you my ideas.First, you can keep focusing on your study, if you want.After half a year in college, you already have a general idea about campus study.So in the holiday, it can benefit you to keep studying for more knowledge to prepare for future learning in the long run.Second, if you want to go out for relaxing, traveling can be fun.It will broaden your horizons.Third, taking part in some social activities, like volunteer work, is also a good choice.It can improve your interpersonal skills and teamwork spirit.Please tell me what your choice will be.Wish you a delightful and meaningful winter holiday.Best regards,Ann
8.Vocational Education or College Education? The number of people who take the college entrance examination has been decreasing these years.Some people consider vocational education an advantage to job-hunting, while others argue that a college diploma is more important.In my opinion, college education is more advisable for most people.First, college education is systematic and students can learn a lot in many aspects.Unlike vocational education, which always focuses on just one job skill, college education enables students to develop different potentials.Second, to obtain a higher degree, such as a master’s degree, one has to go through college education to get a bachelor’s degree first.In a society where any job skill may become outdated quickly with the appearance of new technologies, the limitations of vocational education prove even more serious.Only college education can prepare us for future challenges.9.On Reacting to Disastrous Events One time or another, one might encounter disastrous events such as earthquakes, snow-storms, and traffic accidents.Serious disasters claim lives and cause heavy losses, and can leave lasting effects on one’s minds.How should we react to disasters? First I think it is reasonable to accept them.No one expects disasters, but if they come, they are there, and we must accept them as they are.In this way it might become easier for us to recover from the shock they bring to us.Second, I’ll concentrate on what I can do to relieve the bad effect of the disaster.We cannot undo what is done, but we can make things a little better with our efforts.Besides, concentrating on what we can do helps us forget the huge pains we feel about the disaster.10.On Improving Students’ Network Morality The problem of college students’ network morality is becoming more and more serious today, which does great harm to the development of their personality and mentality.Therefore, it is important to improve their network morality.There are some ways to improve students’ network morality.First, students should be taught to understand that their online activities bring not only self-experiences but also social responsibility.Second, rules should be made to control the network environment so that students will not be exposed to various immoral information on the Internet.Finally, technical means are required to supervise students’ online behaviors so that any immoral behavior can be duly(適當(dāng)?shù)?punished.If the student understands the importance of keeping a high network morality, if the Internet environment is healthy, and if immoral network behavior is always duly punished, I’m sure students’ network morality can be improved greatly.Keys to model test 7 1-7 BCBCD CB 8.de-centralized 9.placeness 10.round-the-clock location(for work and play)47-51 CDEMO
52-56 GNFKI
57-61 DDBAC
62-66 BCABD 67-71 BABAC
72-76 DCCAC
77-81 BCDAB
82-86 DABCA 87.needn’t have done 88.China tops the list of instant noodle demands 89.result from human activities 90.one of the best steps you can take 91.when the telephone rang
Keys to model test 8 1-7 ACDBA BC
8.adult continuing education 9.primarily 10.shared, mutual 47-51 DHOGM 52-56 JBBNCA 57-61 BDBCD 62-66 AACBD 67-71 CACDD 72-76 CDCBA 77-81 BBABC 82-86 DACBA 87.play important roles/ parts in 88.summit your resume online within this week 89.this dispute(should)be resolved / settled as soon as possible 90.forgetting to call in advance to cancel the date 91.At the thought of Saturday’s interview
Keys to model test 9 1-7 ABDCD AB 8.extended grammar and vocabulary 9.provide 10.release 47-51 BMOAF 52-56 EHIKL 57-61 ABBDC 62-66 DACBB 67-71 ADABC 72-76 CCDAB 77-81 ACDCB 82-86 CADCB 87.so that he could pass it smoothly 88.participate in / take part in regular physical activity 89.children in lower grades have too heavy study load 90.let alone / not to mention of / not to speak of the same company 91.have trouble/ difficulty(in)understanding text
Keys to model test 10 1-7 BCBDB AB 8.college-level courses 9.partners 10.keep up in the global economic race 47-51 CFGAM 52-56 BOJKD 57-61 DABDA 62-66 BACDA 67-71 AABCC 72-76 DDCAB 77-81 CBBAC 82-86 BDDDD 87.shall have left for 88.It is really worth a reading /It is really worthy of a reading 89.the better we understand their thoughts / ideas 90.attributed it to John’s strong will 91.bound to have a dramatic effect / influence on the future work
第五篇:四級(jí)寫(xiě)作3
四級(jí)寫(xiě)作范文1
1、圖畫(huà)作文:2013年6月真題第一套
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay.You should start youressay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importanceof reading literature.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180words.如圖所示,當(dāng)老師在布置文學(xué)作品閱讀任務(wù)時(shí),告訴學(xué)生將它當(dāng)作長(zhǎng)篇手機(jī)短信對(duì)待。該圖片提醒我們,在大多數(shù)人閱讀手機(jī)短信遠(yuǎn)多于文學(xué)作品的當(dāng)下,閱讀文學(xué)作品尤為重要。
事實(shí)上,由于閱讀文學(xué)作品不但能拓寬我們的視野,還能充實(shí)我們的心智,我們迫切需要閱讀文學(xué)作品。具體而言,閱讀名著能使我們大開(kāi)眼界,了解到各種重大歷史事件以及文化傳統(tǒng)。其次,文學(xué)作品中傳達(dá)的道德觀(guān)和人生觀(guān)為我們提供了極好的養(yǎng)分,讓我們成長(zhǎng)并變得睿智。
以我自己為例,每當(dāng)我遇到困難,我都會(huì)想起讀過(guò)的小說(shuō),想象書(shū)中的主人公如果處于我的處境會(huì)怎么做。隨后我一般都會(huì)從中獲得克服困難的力量??傊?,對(duì)于更精彩及睿智的人生,經(jīng)常閱讀文學(xué)作品至關(guān)重要。
As is symbolically portrayed in the cartoon, when a teacher assigns her student to read a literature book, she tells him to think of it as a long text-message.It reminds me of the significance of reading literature while most of the people are spending much more time reading text-messages than literary works.Since reading literature can not only broaden our horizon but also enrich our mind, it is imperative for us to read literature.To be specific, reading classic works is a real eye-opener, from which we can acquire theoretical knowledge of different historical events and cultural traditions.In addition, the moral outlooks and views of life revealed in great works offer great nourishment and contribute to our growth and wisdom.To demonstrate, whenever I am confronted with obstacles, I will reflect on the books I have read, imagining what the heroes would do if they were in my situation.Then normally I will get the power and overcome any difficulty.To conclude, reading literature regularlyis crucial to a more colorful and wiser life.四級(jí)寫(xiě)作范文2
2、圖畫(huà)作文:2013年6月真題第二套
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay.You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.如圖所示,兒子對(duì)父親說(shuō)擔(dān)心核廢料的處理問(wèn)題,而父親則對(duì)兒子說(shuō)如果他能先把垃圾倒了,就什么事都能做好。這幅發(fā)人深省的漫畫(huà)向我們揭示了做大事之前先把小事做好的重要性,并且讓我們聯(lián)想到“一屋不掃,何以?huà)咛煜隆边@句成語(yǔ)。
首先,通過(guò)做小事,我們能積累寶貴的經(jīng)驗(yàn)及必要的實(shí)用技能,為將來(lái)所有可能發(fā)生的大事做好準(zhǔn)備。其次,做小事有助于我們養(yǎng)成良好的習(xí)慣,如堅(jiān)持和耐心。有了它們,我們?cè)谟龅礁蟮睦щy時(shí)才不會(huì)輕易放棄或退縮。
不可否認(rèn),我們應(yīng)該目標(biāo)高遠(yuǎn)并且具有雄心壯志,但在我們做大事之前,我們應(yīng)該努力把像倒垃圾這樣的小事做好。
It is subtly revealed in the caricature that a son isexpressing his concern about disposing of nuclear waste to his father, while his father asked him to empty the dustbin first.This thought-provoking portrayal illustrates to us the significance of doing small things before undertaking somethingand reminds us of an old Chinese saying,“Sweeping your own house before conquering the world.”
In the first place, through doing small things, we accumulate precious experience and essential practical skills, which help us to get better prepared for any upcoming big things.In the second place, doing trivial matters helps us develop good habits, such as perseverance and patience, with which we won’t give up or escape easily when confronted with bigger difficulties.Admittedly, it is reasonable for us to aim high and be ambitious, but before we are to undertake something big, we should try hard to fulfill simple tasks such as empty the dustbin.四級(jí)寫(xiě)作范文3
3、圖畫(huà)作文:2013年6月真題第三套
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay.You should start your essaywith a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance oflearning basic skills.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.如圖所示,一名教師正在某個(gè)教室教數(shù)學(xué)。然而,她的一名學(xué)生認(rèn)為到他們就業(yè)的時(shí)候,這些基本技能也許會(huì)過(guò)時(shí)?,F(xiàn)在,越來(lái)越多的學(xué)生傾向于認(rèn)為沒(méi)必要學(xué)習(xí)基本技能。
我認(rèn)為,大學(xué)生所學(xué)的基本技能不會(huì)過(guò)時(shí)。相反,這些技能將一如既往地發(fā)揮重要作用。首先,盡管基本技能常被歸類(lèi)為不切實(shí)際的學(xué)科,不能直接應(yīng)用到將來(lái)的工作中,但正是這些基礎(chǔ)學(xué)科為學(xué)習(xí)更高級(jí)的技能打下堅(jiān)實(shí)的基礎(chǔ),為深造做準(zhǔn)備。此外,大部分的基本技能,如算術(shù)和讀寫(xiě)能力,在各種職業(yè)中都是必需的。
總之,基本技能對(duì)于我們的成功至關(guān)重要。我們掌握的基本技能越多越好,我們?cè)接锌赡苷业揭环轁M(mǎn)意的工作,并過(guò)上幸福的生活。
It is subtly demonstrated in the portrayal that a teacher is teaching mathematics in a certain classroom.Unfortunately, one of her students holds the opinion that these basic skills might be outdated by the time they are in the job market.Currently, students in mounting numbers tend to believe it is unnecessary to learn basic skills.It is my view that the basic skills college students learn will not turn old-fashioned.Instead, they will remain as vital as they will ever be.Above all, though basic skills is often classified as impractical subjects that cannot be applied directly to one’s future career, it is these basic subjects that lay a solid foundation for more advanced skills, preparing us for further studies.In addition, most of the basic skills, like calculating and literacy, are always vital in a variety of occupations.To conclude, the basic skills are crucial for our success.The more and better basic skills we master, the more likely we are to find a satisfactory job and live a happy life.四級(jí)寫(xiě)作范文4
4、圖畫(huà)作文:2015年6月四級(jí)真題第一套
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.As is symbolically illustrate in the cartoon, a person is always staying in front of a computer no matter whether he or she is working, studying or playing.Even when he is sleeping, the image of surfing on line is also indispensable in his sweet dreams.如圖所示,一個(gè)人無(wú)論工作、在家或娛樂(lè),總是坐在一臺(tái)電腦前面。甚至當(dāng)他睡覺(jué)的時(shí)候,在他甜美的夢(mèng)中,網(wǎng)上沖浪的畫(huà)面也是必不可少的。
The metaphorical portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and computer.On the one hand, there is no denying that the computeris currently one of the most efficient tools either to entertain oneself or to meet the work's needs.But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to computers to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues.Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life.這幅比喻并使人印象深刻的圖畫(huà)象征性揭示了人與電腦之間的雙重關(guān)系。一方面,不可否認(rèn)電腦目前是用于娛樂(lè)自我和滿(mǎn)足工作需要的最高效媒介之一。但另一方面,很多人承認(rèn)他們太沉迷于電腦而不愿與朋友和同事保持面對(duì)面接觸。一旦沉迷于這種虛幻世界,人們不愿接近他人并關(guān)注現(xiàn)實(shí)生活。
Hence, it is necessary for us to use computers in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence.After all, the computer is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach.因此,我們很有必要以一種合理的方式使用電腦,避免過(guò)度沉迷。畢竟,人們發(fā)明電腦是為了連接你和我,為我們的生活帶來(lái)方便,而非設(shè)置障礙使人彼此疏遠(yuǎn)。
四級(jí)寫(xiě)作范文5 圖表作文:2012年12月真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below(Weekly earnings of 2010).Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it.You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.The column chart above clearly illustrates the statistics of the weekly earnings of people with different educational backgrounds in the United States in 2010.According to the data from U.S.Bureau of Labor Statistics, there was a steady increase from $444 for people with less than a high school diploma to $1550 for those with a doctoral degree.The reasons for this trend are as follows.In the first place, it has long been an accepted fact that a higher degree is a pre-requisite for a promising career, or finding a good job.In the second place, in our highly competitive society, whether one is in China or the U.S., it can be said that it is impossible for a person to find a good job with a promising future without at least a college degree.From the analysis given above, we may predict that in order to remain competitive in the workplace as well as in salary, people in mounting numbers will return back to school to continue their higher education, even though they already have their college or university degrees.上述柱狀圖清晰揭示了2010年不同教育背景人群的周薪數(shù)據(jù)。根據(jù)美國(guó)勞工統(tǒng)計(jì)局的數(shù)據(jù),周薪從低于高中文憑人群的444美元穩(wěn)步上升到博士學(xué)位擁有者的1550美元。
形成上述趨勢(shì)的原因如下。首先,只有擁有更高的學(xué)位,才能找到好工作并擁有遠(yuǎn)大的職業(yè)前景,這是大家公認(rèn)的事實(shí)。其次,無(wú)論是中國(guó)還是美國(guó),在當(dāng)今社會(huì),競(jìng)爭(zhēng)極其激烈,一個(gè)人如果連大學(xué)文憑都沒(méi)有,可以說(shuō)就找不到好工作,前途黯淡。
從上述分析,我們可以預(yù)計(jì):為了在職場(chǎng)和薪水方面保持競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力,越來(lái)越多的人就算有了大學(xué)文憑,也將回到學(xué)校繼續(xù)深造。