第一篇：巧用原味英語主張 增效高三寫作復(fù)習(xí)

巧用原味英語主張 增效高三寫作復(fù)習(xí)

【摘要】如何開展高三英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)和幫助學(xué)生有效提高英語作文得分一直都是諸多英語教師研究和努力的方向。本文將結(jié)合人教版高中英語選修10 Unit 3 I have a dream的教學(xué)案例，探討將“原味英語”的教學(xué)主張運用于高三英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)的有效性和可行性。

【關(guān)鍵詞】原味英語 教學(xué)主張 高三寫作

一、引言

英語寫作水平一直被視為體現(xiàn)高三學(xué)生英語綜合運用能力和成就高考英語第二卷成績高低的重要指標(biāo)?？v觀現(xiàn)今高考英語作文的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，除了高顏值的卷面外，有條理的寫作框架、有意義的內(nèi)容要點、有技巧的地道表達都是高分卷的特質(zhì)和亮點。

然而近年來大多數(shù)英語教師面對高三英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)卻往往陷入了一種“不懂教什么只能教范文、不知怎么教總是教不會”的尷尬境地，更別提幫助學(xué)生針對全國卷中常見的各類應(yīng)用文體進行地道寫作和流暢表達的指導(dǎo)和點撥。因此，對于大多數(shù)高三英語教師而言，開發(fā)復(fù)習(xí)資源和優(yōu)化寫作教學(xué)顯得越發(fā)迫切和重要。為此，筆者將在本文中結(jié)合自身的行動研究和教學(xué)實例，論述在高三英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)中運用“原味英語”教學(xué)主張的有效性和可行性。

二、“原味英語”教學(xué)主張的內(nèi)涵和應(yīng)用價值

“原味英語”的教學(xué)主張是近兩年由福建高中英語教育界大名鼎鼎的特級教師林楓老師和福建師范大學(xué)外國語學(xué)院黃遠振教授聯(lián)袂提出并大力倡導(dǎo)的。他們認為，“原味英語”不能如傳統(tǒng)理解僅局限于原滋原味的英語材料，它應(yīng)隨著時代和教學(xué)的發(fā)展而不斷更新和完善。因此，“原味英語”的教學(xué)主張主要涵蓋如下五個方面：原味語言、原味語境、原味教學(xué)、原味體驗和原味素養(yǎng)。這五個方面在英語教與學(xué)的過程中缺一不可，相輔相成。其中，提供自然地道的語言是“原味英語”的基本條件；創(chuàng)設(shè)生動真實的語境是“原味英語”的環(huán)境需求；開展有效本真的教學(xué)是“原味英語”的核心環(huán)節(jié)；促進快樂積極的體驗是“原味英語” 的教學(xué)方式；培養(yǎng)廣博精深的素養(yǎng)是“原味英語”的教學(xué)目標(biāo)。

“原味英語”的教學(xué)主張以它接地氣的教育理念和易操作的教學(xué)思路已受到了廣大教學(xué)專家及同行的關(guān)注和認可。作為其教學(xué)主張的堅定踐行者，筆者積極嘗試將其應(yīng)用于高三英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)的教學(xué)中。經(jīng)過一段時間的摸索和研究，筆者發(fā)現(xiàn)，“原味英語”的教學(xué)主張能夠很好地突破目前高三英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)中“沒教材、教不來”的瓶頸，對高三英語寫作的高效復(fù)習(xí)和有效教學(xué)有著深廣的應(yīng)用價值。

三、“原味英語”在高三英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)中的應(yīng)用

1.教學(xué)背景與教學(xué)目標(biāo)。不久前筆者接到一個省級觀摩課的任務(wù)，要求筆者展示一節(jié)有關(guān)高三英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)的公開課。一接到任務(wù)，筆者就著手選材，并最終將課題定為一種常用的應(yīng)用文寫作?D?D“演講稿”寫作。然而在查閱眾多試卷中有關(guān)“演講稿”的作文范文后，筆者無助地發(fā)現(xiàn)范文中蹩腳的框架結(jié)構(gòu)和中式英語實在不適合作為學(xué)生模仿和學(xué)習(xí)的范本。受到“原味英語”教學(xué)主張的啟發(fā)，筆者將尋覓地道“演講稿”范例的目光最終定格在人教版高中英語選修10 Unit 3 Using Language中的閱讀文本I have a dream上。該文本是美國黑人民權(quán)運動領(lǐng)袖馬丁?路德?金在1963年8月于美國首都華盛頓所發(fā)表的題為《我有一個夢想》的著名演講的片段。該文本框架規(guī)整、語言原味，是一篇非常適合學(xué)生反復(fù)誦讀和模仿學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)秀演講稿。

本節(jié)課的教學(xué)目標(biāo)在于讓學(xué)生通過回歸課本，重新學(xué)習(xí)英語演講稿的寫作要求以及寫作時三種常見修辭手法（反復(fù)、引用和比喻）的精髓和功能，并能大膽運用課上所學(xué)，完成一篇題為《我的高中》的演講稿寫作。

2.教學(xué)過程與設(shè)計說明。

Step 1 Lead-in――開啟新課

筆者利用PPT上的一幅照片導(dǎo)入本節(jié)課的新話題――“演講”。

[設(shè)計說明]用呈現(xiàn)圖片的形式快速導(dǎo)入新課，激活學(xué)生已有的背景知識和激發(fā)學(xué)生對新課的學(xué)習(xí)興趣。

Step 2 Pre-writing――原味輸入

（1）Set the writing task。學(xué)生被告知將作為高三學(xué)生代表在下周的周會上發(fā)言，故在本節(jié)課上要完成一篇100詞左右、題為《我的高中》的英語勵志演講稿。

[設(shè)計說明]在新課伊始就讓學(xué)生明確本節(jié)課的教學(xué)目標(biāo)和學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)，為即將展開的“演講稿”學(xué)習(xí)和寫作做好心理和知識上的準(zhǔn)備。

（2）Teach the structure of the speech。筆者通過啟發(fā)和探究的教學(xué)方式讓學(xué)生掌握“演講稿”的基本寫作框架（開頭、主體和結(jié)尾），并在PPT上呈現(xiàn)本節(jié)課要撰寫的《我的高中》的演講稿的開頭和結(jié)尾部分。

[設(shè)計說明]讓學(xué)生對英語演講稿的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)有更深的認識。為提高教學(xué)的實效性，筆者將寫作框架中“開頭”和“結(jié)尾”部分的文本先給予學(xué)生，為學(xué)生在接下來的“主體”寫作提供更多的時間和必要的學(xué)習(xí)支架。

（3）Brainstorm the contents of the main body。筆者引領(lǐng)學(xué)生通過大腦風(fēng)暴和小組討論的形式思考和分享演講稿――《我的高中》中正文部份的寫作要點，并將其歸納為回憶、成長、感恩和祝福等四個方面。

[設(shè)計說明]讓學(xué)生通過“大腦風(fēng)暴”、“小組討論”和“分享觀點”等學(xué)習(xí)活動鍛煉自身合作探究的能力，以及對發(fā)散型和聚攏型思維的培養(yǎng)。

（4）Review the rhetorics in the famous speech。筆者先是讓學(xué)生重溫人教版高中英語選修10 Unit 3中的已學(xué)文本I have a dream，讓學(xué)生從該演講稿中找出運用到反復(fù)、引用和比喻三種修辭手法的句子并學(xué)習(xí)它們的功能。接著，筆者分別從反復(fù)、引用和比喻這三個角度給出在《我的高中》英語演講稿正文中可能運用到的相關(guān)詞塊，讓學(xué)生從形態(tài)上和口頭上感知不同修辭手法的特征和效果。

[設(shè)計說明]讓學(xué)生通過回歸已學(xué)教材，從熟悉且原味的演講稿文本中感知反復(fù)、引用和比喻這三種修辭手法的句式特征和功用，再通過觀察模仿和口頭操練，為接下來的寫作環(huán)節(jié)儲備必要的句式和表達。

Step 3 Writing――原味輸出

筆者要求學(xué)生開始動筆進行現(xiàn)場寫作，鼓勵學(xué)生大膽運用本節(jié)課所學(xué)的反復(fù)、引用和比喻這三種英語演講稿中常用的修辭手法。

[設(shè)計說明]讓學(xué)生通過現(xiàn)場寫作鞏固本節(jié)課所學(xué)的修辭要點，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生用英語思維和寫作的能力。

Step 4 Presentation and peer comments――原味呈現(xiàn)

筆者邀請各小組的發(fā)言人上臺有感情地朗讀他們現(xiàn)場寫出的有關(guān)《我的高中》的演講稿正文，要求作為聽眾的其余學(xué)生分別從卷面、句子結(jié)構(gòu)、修辭手法和現(xiàn)場感染力等四個維度認真聆聽和評判同伴所寫的演講稿。

[設(shè)計說明]讓學(xué)生感知英語演講的魅力，感受修辭手法給演講稿所帶來的魔力，體味到合作探究和學(xué)以致用的樂趣和成就感。

Step 5 Homework assignment――原味內(nèi)化

筆者要求學(xué)生在課后依據(jù)本節(jié)課所聽所學(xué)，潤色和完善各自演講稿。

[設(shè)計說明]讓學(xué)生積極回顧課上所學(xué)，改進自身演講稿的不足，實現(xiàn)從輸入到輸出的語言習(xí)得。

四、感悟和結(jié)語

“原味英語”的教學(xué)主張在此次高三英語“演講稿”寫作復(fù)習(xí)課中的應(yīng)用收獲了學(xué)生、同行以及專家們的一致認可和廣泛好評。課后，筆者積極反思成功教學(xué)的經(jīng)驗，得到以下三點教學(xué)感悟：

1.巧用教材資源，實現(xiàn)原味輸入。本節(jié)課筆者摒棄以往高三寫作復(fù)習(xí)教學(xué)時拿試卷范文當(dāng)復(fù)習(xí)教材的做法，適時回歸教材，挖掘教材中的原味語言和原味元素。例如，在本節(jié)課中，筆者精心挑選人教版高中英語選修10 Unit 3 I have a dream作為研學(xué)文本，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注其本真地道的語言表達，以及之前學(xué)習(xí)該文本時不曾特別留意的體現(xiàn)反復(fù)、引用和比喻這三種修辭手法的典型詞組和句子。筆者對已學(xué)課文的再深挖和巧利用，為學(xué)生在寫作復(fù)習(xí)的輸入階段提供了有效的原味語言和學(xué)習(xí)支架。

2.遵循習(xí)得規(guī)律，實施原味教學(xué)。授課教師在本節(jié)課中緊緊圍繞“演講稿寫作”這個教學(xué)主線展開教學(xué)，主要設(shè)計以下五個環(huán)節(jié)：Lead-in，Pre-writing，Writing，Presentation and peer comments和Homework。細言之，筆者先是讓學(xué)生結(jié)合先前的學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗通過小組探討完成“演講稿”寫作框架的構(gòu)建，接著引導(dǎo)學(xué)生根據(jù)自身生活感知對“演講稿”的寫作要點借助大腦風(fēng)暴和小組討論的形式進行思考和歸納，再者帶領(lǐng)學(xué)生回歸教材通過鑒賞和分析的方式提煉出該演講文本中出彩的三種常用修辭。上述從 “框架構(gòu)建―要點歸納―修辭潤色”的原味教學(xué)使學(xué)生在筆者創(chuàng)設(shè)的原味語境中就著由易到難，以舊帶新，從說到寫的學(xué)習(xí)梯度，遵循語言學(xué)習(xí)的基本規(guī)律，自然又高效地完成從 “輸入―內(nèi)化―輸出”的習(xí)得過程。

3.關(guān)注學(xué)科素養(yǎng)，實行原味體驗?！镀胀ǜ咧杏⒄Z課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)（實驗）》（教育部，2003）指出，英語學(xué)科素養(yǎng)不僅是指學(xué)生的思辨能力、創(chuàng)新精神和文化意識，更關(guān)注學(xué)生價值取向和道德品質(zhì)方面的養(yǎng)成。本節(jié)課筆者一方面引導(dǎo)學(xué)生在框架感知、大腦風(fēng)暴、重溫課文、操練修辭、現(xiàn)場寫作和分享評價等多模態(tài)的學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)鏈中領(lǐng)悟英語“演講稿”寫作中三種常見修辭手法的精髓。能在高三寫作復(fù)習(xí)指導(dǎo)中大膽引入修辭實為有特色、有深度的教學(xué)嘗試。此舉有別于以往鼓勵學(xué)生背范文、套句型的生硬做法，有益于鼓勵學(xué)生多關(guān)注得體措辭和個性表達，為提升學(xué)生的思辨能力和創(chuàng)新精神提供絕妙的契機，也為高三英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)之“語言潤色”部份的教學(xué)增添新思路和新技巧。另一方面，筆者在讓學(xué)生重溫和體驗完已學(xué)課文《我有一個夢想》 中馬丁?路德?金原味有力的語言以及對國家及民族的大愛后，結(jié)合自身即將畢業(yè)離校的學(xué)情，完成一篇題為《我的高中》的演講稿寫作，暢談高中三年的校園生活、活動經(jīng)歷、個人成長和祝福母校等話題。這個寫作任務(wù)和教學(xué)目標(biāo)旨在激發(fā)學(xué)生愛校如家、感恩師長的博大情懷，亦凸顯出本節(jié)課“寓德于教，知情合一”的教學(xué)特色。

參考文獻：

[1]中華人民共和國教育部《普通高中英語課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》.（實驗）[M].人民教育出版社，2003.[2]普通高中課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)實驗教科書英語選修十（學(xué)生用書）[M].人民教育出版社，2010.

第二篇：高三英語作文寫作復(fù)習(xí)

Directions: Write an English composition in over 120 words based on the picture and the instructions given below.簡要描述圖片內(nèi)容，就圖片的主題談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿?/p>

范文：

In the picture, a girl is riding a bicycle, but her father is on her right showing the direction, her mother is on her left with a first-aid box and behind her is her granny, who is out of breath.They are all running as they are holding the bicycle.Sweat is falling down from their foreheads.The girl is shouting, “Leave me alone, I can manage.”

Today parents and grandparents tend to worry too much about their children.As an lonely child, I am looked after from head to foot by my parents.But is it necessary for them to do so? No!Indeed, they love me, but I don’t want this kind of love.I need independence more, because independence is important in modern society.Without it, we will not be able to meet challenges in the future.Certainly, I don’t mean that I don’t need my parents’ help, but I want them to help me gain my independence.Dear parents, please understand what we need!

第三篇：高三英語寫作

Section C(25 marks)

Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.在生活中，你或者你的朋友都有可能遭遇過這樣的尷尬：年長的人不能理解或誤解你們這一輩比較流行的文化現(xiàn)象，比如說：“快閃（flash mob）”。請你就此“generation gap”的現(xiàn)象由此展開想像或結(jié)合你的實際經(jīng)歷以第一人稱寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.你的這次被誤解的具體經(jīng)歷；

2、你當(dāng)時的心情；

3、你如何向長輩解釋清楚你的“古怪”行為。

注意：

1、詞數(shù)不少于120；

2、不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

3、“快閃”只是提供一個例子，你可以自由地選取任何“流行文化現(xiàn)象”進行描述

第四篇：英語寫作復(fù)習(xí)

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美化內(nèi)容：環(huán)境：大面積植樹，種草，栽花

環(huán)保：使用清潔能源；處理和再利用污水

目標(biāo)：花園城市；天再藍些，水再清些

Dear David,How nice to hear from you again.Now let me tell you something about the beautifyingwork on Beijing for the 2008 Olympic Games.Our slogan is ―Green Olympic‖.12.2 billiondollars will be spent on this project.A lot more trees, flowers and grass will be plantedin many places to make Beijing more beautiful.We will use clean energy and try out best to

make waste water clean and reuse it.In 2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden,with cleaner water and a clearer sky.I look forward to meeting you in Beijing in 2008.Li Hua

2.你叫李紅，一周前去香港度假時在一家商店買了一件女上衣，現(xiàn)有質(zhì)量問題。請結(jié)合下面提示向該店

外籍經(jīng)理寫一封英文信。

所購衣物：綠色女上衣，價格268元

問題：洗滌時退色，并說明理由。

要求：退款或換衣，并說明理由。

就此事發(fā)表看法或提出建議。

Dear Sir,While I was on holiday in Hong Kong about a week ago, I bought a green blouse for 268dollars in your shop, but there seems to be something wrong with it.When it is washed, thecolor runs.Now I can‘t possibly wear it.It‘s not my fault, so I‘d like you to solve theproblem for me.I insist you change it for another one for me or give me my money back.I

think it‘s better for you to make sure that everything in your shop is good.Then you willhave more customers.I‘m looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely,Li Hong

3.假定你是李明，你收到了下面這封美國的筆有寫來的信。請根據(jù)來信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信。May 28,2003

Dear Li Ming,I hop you are very well.I‘m glad to tell you that my parents have agreed to let me goto your country this summer.The first city I plan to visit is Beijing, where I will stayfor a week, and then I will go to your city by train to see you and your parents.As wehaven‘t met before, I‘m afraid there will be some difficulty in meeting each other, and I ‘m also afraid that it will not be easy for me to find your house.So please tell me how toget in touch with you while I stay in Beijing and how to meet or find you when I arrive inyour city.Please give my regards to your parents.Best wishes

Jack

June 6th, 2003

Dear Jack,I‘m so happy to learn that you will come to my country and to my home.Let me expressmy warmest welcome to you.My parents insist that I should write back to you as soon aspossible to invite you to our home.You don‘t have to worry about our meeting each other in my city.Now let me tell youwhat to do.When you have got the train ticket for my city in Beijing, please telephone me.My phone number is 0731-8847543.I will go to the station to meet you.When you get out of

the station, you will see me holding up a little board, on which is written ―Welcome, Jack!‖ We will surely meet there.I look forward to seeing you soon.With kind regards to your parents,Li Ming

4.在日常生活中，因特網(wǎng)起著越來越重要的作用。請根據(jù)下表所給提示英文為某英文報紙寫一篇題為On

the Internet 的征文稿。

因特網(wǎng)的主要用途：

信息：看國內(nèi)外新聞、獲取其他信息

通訊：發(fā)e-mail、打電話

學(xué)習(xí)：上網(wǎng)上學(xué)校、閱讀各種書籍、自學(xué)外語

娛樂：欣賞音樂、觀看體育比賽、晚期排游戲

生活：購物、聊天

On the Internet

The internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.On the net, wecan learn news both at home and abroad and all kinds of other information as well.We can

also send messages by E-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds ofbooks and learn foreign languages by ourselves.Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports or

matches and play chess or cards.On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat withothers and make friends with them.In a word, the Internet has made our life more colorful.5.假設(shè)你叫王紅，于5月7日星期五在學(xué)校門口看到兩則海報后，決定邀你的好友Harry一起參加其中的一

項活動。你趕到Harry住處時，發(fā)現(xiàn)他不在。請根據(jù)海報內(nèi)容給Harry 寫一張留言條，要他選擇其中的一

項活動并盡快通知你。

Movie –Gone with the Wind

In the School Hall

Sat.Mayp.m.Lecture—Women ?s Liberation

Speaker: Prof.Power---writer of

The Other Half of the Sky

Date: Sat., 8 May 27, 2005

Time: 7 p.m.Place: Room 10

1Dear Harry,It‘s a pity that you are not in, so have to leave you a note.There are two posters atthe school gate.One is about the movie ― Gone with the Wind‖, which is to be shown at 7Saturday evening in the school hall.The other is about a lecture on women‘s liberation,which is to be given by Prof.Betty Power, writer of the book ― The Other Half of the Sky‖ , at 7 on Saturday evening in Room 101.I‘d like to invite you to either the movie or thelecture, but I wonder which you would prefer.Please let me know your decision as soon aspossible.Wang Hong

6.假如你是李華，你澳大利亞的朋友Johnson來信告知將來北京工作，他打算買一套合適的住房。碰巧你

在報紙上看到了一則售房廣告。該房位于市中心，交通十分便利。給Johnson寫一封信，介紹住房的情況，以征求意見。

Dear Johnson,Thanks for your letter.I‘m very glad to learn that you‘re coming to Beijing.You sayyou want to by an apartment in Beijing, and here is one for you.The apartment building lies

in the center of the city.It is very convenient for you to travel anywhere from here.Theapartment is made up of six rooms—a living room, a dining room, two bedrooms, a kitchen and

a bathroom.A newly built parking lot lies in front of the apartment building.A lawn andmany trees are around it, which makes the air here very fresh.I‘d like to know your

opinion about the apartment.If you‘re satisfied with it, just telephone me.My telephonenumber is 010-64308389.I‘m looking forward to your reply.Best wishes to you,Yours truly,Li hua

7．假設(shè)你是李平，將赴美學(xué)習(xí)，并已拿到去紐約的機票。請你根據(jù)下面你將乘坐的班機起落時間表，寫

信告所將到紐約機場接你的美國朋友John.SCHEDULE

FromToFlightDateTimeArrival

BeijingShanghaiCA981June2510:20 AM12:20 PM

ShanghaiLos AngelesCA981June 2513:40 PM10:50 AM

Los AngelesNew YorkCA981June 2514:45 PM19:45 PM

Dear John,I‘ve got my plane ticket to New York, I will take Flight CA981 to New York on June

25th.My plane takes off at 10:20 AM from Beijing Airport.It arrives at Shanghai at 12:20PM and stops for one hour and twenty minutes.Then it continue its flight and lands at LosAngles at 10:50 AM on June 25th.I will have to stay about four hours at Los Angles Airport.Then my plane leaves Los Angles at 14:45 PM.The flight takes five hours and I will finallyget to New York at 7:45 in the evening.I‘m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours

Li Ping

8.下面是一家電子公司刊登在2002年2月6日的China Daily 上的一則招聘廣告。假如你是李平，符合該

公司的招聘條件，并對其待遇感到滿意，請寫一封自薦信。

Part-timeLab Assistant Wanted

Required by busy electronics company to help with the development of computer.Should

have an electronics degree andpractical experience of working in an electronics lab.Should be good at physics and English.Should be in good health.Hours 3:30 pm—5:00pm.Mon.–Fri.Salary: 3520.Letter of application to: Mrs.Chan NOVA

LECTRONICS, 45 GORDON Rd, Hung Hom, Kowloon.NOVA EECTRONICS

Gordon Rd

HungHom, Kowloon

February 8th, 2003

Dear Mrs.Chan,Having seen your advertisement for a part-time lab assistant to help with development of

computer in China Daily, I beg to offer myself for the position.I graduated from the Physics Department of Beijing University with an electronics degree

and I have been working in the electronics lab in Honda Electronics Company in

Guangdong for

five years.I‘m good at physics and both my spoken English and written English are verygood.Besides, I‘m in good health because I like sports very much.I work in my companyfrom 8:00 am to 12:00 am.From Monday to Friday, so I‘m quite able to work in your company

from 3:30 pm to 5:00pm.And I‘m quite pleased with the salary your company offers.Yours sincerely

Li Ping

9.張華在有一個外賓參觀團居住的賓館丟失了一個方形的棕色手提箱，箱內(nèi)有收音機、照相機個一臺、三卷膠卷、兩件襯衣、一張從深圳去紐約的飛機票和一本電影雜志。請你為他用英語協(xié)議則尋物啟示，并

寫明：如有拾到者，請馬上與他聯(lián)系，他的電話號碼時0755-3319582，他將不勝感激。

Lost

I wonder if I can get some help from you.I left my case in this hotel today.My case issquare and brown in color.Inside the case, there is a radio, a camera, three rolls of filmand two shirts.I also have a movie magazine and a plane ticket from Shenzhen to New York in

it.Will the finder please get in touch with me at once? My telephone number is 0755-3319582.I will be very thankful.Zhang Hua

10.你是黎明。請以為題，向英文報紙寫一封信，批評子女虐待老人，老人死后卻又花錢大*大辦喪事的不良社會風(fēng)氣。信的開頭部分已經(jīng)寫好，要求根據(jù)下面的要點提示將信補全

1．二自虐待老人的事例：在住、吃、治病方面各舉一例；

2．老人死后兒子花錢大辦喪事的事例：2-3例。

Big Funeral Is Too Late

Dear editor:

Grandma Li was my neighbor, who died last month.The old lady had three sons.All ofthem had grown up and got married, but none of them wanted to take care of her.They let her

live in a small dark room.They gave her little food.When she got ill, they refused to takeher to hospital.But to my surprise, the old lady‘s sons spent a lot of money on her funeral.The

funeral lasted several days, and scores of cars and trucks were used on the day when the old

lady was buried.What is the use of such a big funeral for the old lady? It is too late for her.We

should take care of old parent s while they are alive instead of spending so much money onthem when they are dead.

第五篇：高三英語寫作好句

高三英語寫作好句

◆ 名詞從句

① It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.②◆（非限制性）定語從句

① The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.It is not far from Jianxin Chinese School.→

② It was quite an experience for us both,◆ 分詞結(jié)構(gòu)

① I don’t know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending ② We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people.③ Hearing this, a few people began to run after him.④ Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor.◆ with結(jié)構(gòu)

①② ◆ It句型

① It will be + some time + before…

It won’t be long before humans visit the Mars.② It is + adj./n.+ for sb to do sth.It is very important for us to learn computer well, because it has changed our life so much.He said since it was a new model in China, it was impossible to fix it without the right spare parts.（2008年湖北卷）③ It is + 被強調(diào)部分 + that…

1)It is what Yang Liwei has done that encourages us a lot.2)Those who like reading extensively say it is through reading that we get our knowledge.◆ more …than any other 表示最高級

Among the optional courses, spoken English and computer study are more popular than any one else.◆ 倒裝句

① The library is to the east of the teaching building.→

② Although we are tired, we are happy.→

③上海卷)

④ May all your dreams come true!May our friendship last till the end of the universe.!（2007年湖南卷）◆ 被動語態(tài)

① Opinions are divided on the question.(NMET 2002)

② All classes are taught by teachers with rich experience in teaching foreign students.(2004全國卷 Ⅳ)③ New factories, houses and roads have been built.(2004 江蘇卷)

◆ 巧妙的改寫

（1）．Only 改成no one but

Only Tom passed the exam last week.→ No one but Tom passed the exam.（2）．a(chǎn)s soon as …改成No sooner…than…/Hardly…when…/Immediately…/Themoment No sooner had we arrived at the cinema than the film started.（3）．have sb/sth do/done

The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken(her leg was broken.).（4）．變換插入語的位置

① However, they suggest fees should be charged low.→

They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.(NMET 2002)

② I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.→This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing talent, and how well you’ve learned Chinese.(2004 全國卷Ⅰ)

(5).用同位語代替非限制性定語從句

Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.→

Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world.（2008年湖南卷）

◆ 其它

（1）注重句子的開頭

① 用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)開頭

With the sun setting in the west, we had to wave goodbye to the workers.With his help, we've learned how to analyze and settle problems.（2006年湖南卷）

With the functions of inserting, deleting, moving and copying, it enables us to edit test, browse web page and download what we want.（2009年江蘇卷）

② 用非謂語動詞形式開頭

?。㊣n order to improve our English, our school held an English contest.ⅱ）Walking towards the cinema, he met a foreigner.（2）長短句交錯使用（注意：應(yīng)突出主題句；長句子并非越長越好）

No matter how difficult English may be, you should do your best to learn it..Nothing can prevent us from realizing the four modernizations.As the saying goes, nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.Upon hearing the unexpected news, he was so surprised that he couldn't say a word.There is no denying(the fact)that the new management method has greatly increased the production.It is often said that..我們經(jīng)常這么說……

It goes without saying that...毫無疑問……

It can be easily proved that...……很容易被證明。

One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is...與以上一點同樣重要的是…

I am for the opinion that…我支持……

The chief reason why...is that...之所以……的主要原因是……

To take...for an example(instance)...把……作為一個例子

According to a latest study, it can be predicted that...最近的研究預(yù)測……

Another special consideration in this case is that..關(guān)于這件事還有一點值得考慮，那就是……

This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to..這也許對，但關(guān)于……我們?nèi)匀挥幸粋€問題。Besides, we should not neglect that...另外，我們不應(yīng)該忽視……

Therefore, these findings reveal the following information that...因此，這些發(fā)現(xiàn)揭示了以下信息…… On account of this we can find that...據(jù)此我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn)……

Wonderful as A is, it has its own disadvantages too.盡管A很優(yōu)秀，但它也有自身的缺陷。

Among the most convincing reasons given, one should be mentioned.在所有可信賴的理由中，有一個值得一提…… Currently there is a widespread concern that...目前，對于……普遍關(guān)注。

There is no immediate solution to the problem of..., but...might be helpful.關(guān)于解決……沒有快速的辦法，但……可能會有作用。

All available evidence points to the fact that...所有的證據(jù)證明……

No one can deny the fact that...沒人能否定……這個事實。

Taking into account all these factors, we may safely reach the conclusion that...考慮到所有這些因素，我們可以做出這樣的結(jié)論……

強調(diào)句：可以輕松地將時間、地點、原因、方式等類型的狀語從句轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)閺娬{(diào)句。

It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter.It was then that I realized the importance of English.◆倒裝句：只要句中有介詞短語或狀語從句，便可將其提前，變成倒裝句。

Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me.Only by this means can he escape from the big fire.◆with引導(dǎo)的伴隨結(jié)構(gòu)：可以將狀語從句或并列句中的其中一個分句變成with結(jié)構(gòu)。

With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits

He always likes to sleep with the windows open.◆巧妙地使用非謂語動詞：可以將狀語從句或并列的動詞簡化為非謂語動詞。

Hearing that, the driver’s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking.(低級形式：When he heard that, ……)

◆恰到好處的被動句：適合應(yīng)用于較簡短的句子，這樣顯得語言簡潔生動，賓語一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代詞。

Searched all my pockets, but nothing was found。

◆感嘆句：通常用于開頭結(jié)尾活躍文章氣氛，凡是“I feel ……”之類表達感情的句子皆可如此改造。

How terrible I felt today!I failed again in the math exam.◆高級定語從句：若定語從句中的動詞帶有介詞，只需將介詞移至先行詞后。

We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.◆進行時態(tài)：有時會含有一定情緒，尤其要使用always這樣的富含感情色彩的副詞。

I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.◆婉轉(zhuǎn)表達：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫畫型作文題。

I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned the shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter.◆what引導(dǎo)的名詞性從句：將動賓結(jié)構(gòu)轉(zhuǎn)化為此結(jié)構(gòu)。

What he gave me, which I knew, were not only a Christmas present but also a heart full of love and a mind of my existence in it.◆“數(shù)詞+名詞”變?yōu)椤癮s many as+數(shù)詞+名詞”。

As many as ten years ago, my hometown used to be covered by forests

◆適當(dāng)加一些不關(guān)痛癢的插入語：一些連詞、副詞可以放到句子中間充當(dāng)語氣較弱的插入語，如I guess、however、in a way、certainly、in my opinion、probably、briefly, generally speaking, believe it or not, besides, what’s more等，有時可以考慮幾個插入語連用，就更像英美人士的文章了。

◆獨立主格：將主從句去掉連詞，前句動詞變?yōu)榉衷~即可。

The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.◆把簡單句改成復(fù)合句：適當(dāng)?shù)臅r候把兩個簡單句改成“too….to…”或者“so…that…”等高級一點的復(fù)合句。例如： I was very tired.I couldn’t keep up with them.我們可以改成：I was so tired that I couldn’t keep up with them.或：I was too tired to keep up with them.這樣一來，英語基礎(chǔ)不是很好的學(xué)生只要能夠?qū)懗鲎罨镜木渥樱缓笤賹@些句子進行加工、改造、潤色，慢慢的，就會讓句子靚起來，在高考中就可以得到比較滿意的成績。

許多否定句不含not的否定結(jié)構(gòu)。如果考生能正確使用他們，就會增加寫作的閃光點，使文章顯得生動活潑。

1、Instead of indulging in playing computer games, children should be taught how to benefit from useful information on the internet.應(yīng)該教孩子們?nèi)绾螐幕ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)獲取有益的信息，而不是沉溺于玩電腦游戲。

2、On no account(Under no circumstances)can we ignore the immense value of knowledge.我們絕不能忽視知識的巨大價值。

3、College students take part-time jobs not for more money but for a better understanding of societies.大學(xué)生參加兼職工作不是為了賺更多錢，而是為了更好地了解社會。

4、One’s salary does not depend so much on his educational background as on his ability and contribution to the society.一個人的工資與其說取決于他的教育背景倒不如說取決于他的能力和對社會的貢獻。

5、In terms of nutrition, fast food is far from satisfactory.從營養(yǎng)角度來說，快餐遠非令人滿意。

6、Parents would not expect their children to become useful persons without working hard.父母們不能指望孩子們不經(jīng)過刻苦努力就可以成才。

二、非限制性定語從句

如果需要對前述的整個句子內(nèi)容進行解釋或說明，就可以用到非限制性定語從句。

1、Undoubtedly, practical courses can be used to the reality, which is of vital importance to their development in the future.毫無疑問，實用性課程可以用于實際中，這對于他們未來發(fā)展是非常重要的。

2、Children tend to imitate what they have seen and heard on mass media, which is sometimes dangerous and harmful.孩子們傾向于模仿大眾媒體上的所見所聞，這在有時是危險和有害的。

3、The majority of students believe that part-time jobs will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.大部分學(xué)生相信業(yè)余工作會使他們有更多機會發(fā)展人際交往能力, 這對他們未來找工作是非常有好處的.三、讓步句

讓步句是寫議論文最常用的句式之一，考生務(wù)必掌握以下4種用法，可以使英文句子起伏跌宕，富于變化。

1、This view is widely acknowledged；however，there is little evidence that smoking is beneficial to people’s health.這個觀點被廣泛認可，然而，幾乎沒有證據(jù)表明吸煙對人們健康有利。

2、Although(While, Even though)the computer has been widely used in class, it cannot replace the role of teachers.盡管計算機已經(jīng)廣泛用于課堂，但是它不能取代教師的作用。

3、Reasonable(Plausible)as the opinion sounds, it cannot bear much analysis.雖然這個觀點聽起來有道理，但是它經(jīng)不住分析。

4、In spite of(Despite)a lot of conveniences that cars bring to people’s life, they can create a series of serious problems.盡管汽車給人們的生活帶來了許多便利，但是也產(chǎn)生了一系列嚴(yán)重的問題。

四、It引導(dǎo)的句子

It引導(dǎo)的句子是寫作中使用頻率最高的句式?？忌鷳?yīng)熟練掌握其用法，并能靈活運用到文章的開篇、主體段和結(jié)尾段中。

1、It is hard to imagine what our life would look like without computers in modern society.很難想象如果現(xiàn)代社會沒有了計算機，我們的生活會變成什么樣子。

2、It is conceivable(imaginable)that being physically active(taking an active part in physical training)does good to health.可想而知，積極參加體育活動有利于身體健康。

3、It is a highly controversial issue whether women should join the armed forces or not.女性是否應(yīng)該參軍是一個非常有爭議的問題。

4、It is universally(widely, generally, commonly)acknowledged that water and air are indispensable to human beings.人們普遍認為，水和空氣對人類不可缺少。

5、It is essential that endangered species of animals be protected against being killed.保護瀕危的動物物種免遭殘殺是必需的。

6、It is high time that the government took effective measures to resolve these problems.該是政府

采取有效措施來解決這些問題的時候了。

7、It has been made easier for modern people to communicate with each other by the internet in a few seconds.現(xiàn)代人很容易通過互聯(lián)網(wǎng)在幾秒鐘內(nèi)就取得聯(lián)系。

8、It is worth caring about the way a child behaves.關(guān)心孩子們的行為方式是值得的。

9、It is no use crying over the spilt milk.覆水難收。

10、It has been a few decades since the computer came into being.自從計算機問世以來已經(jīng)有幾十年的時間了。

五、假設(shè)句& 倒裝句

假設(shè)句可分為真實假設(shè)句和非真實假設(shè)句兩種。常用在主體段落表示正、反論證。

1、If we destroy old buildings, then we will ruin the traditional culture and heritage.如果我們推倒老房子，就要破壞傳統(tǒng)的文化和遺產(chǎn)。

2、You would miss the chance to interact with other students if you used internet at home.假如你在家上網(wǎng)，你就會失去與其他同學(xué)交流的機會。

3、Once you change your present job, you will be faced with the danger of being unemployed.一旦你變換了現(xiàn)在的工作，就面臨著失業(yè)的危險。

六、倒裝句

在寫作中恰當(dāng)和準(zhǔn)確地使用倒裝句，有助于句子表達形式的多樣化，使語言更加生動有力。

1、Only in this way can the problem be tackled properly.只有這樣才能妥善地解決這個問題。

2、Only when children take arduous efforts can they become successful.只有當(dāng)孩子們付出艱苦的努力他們才能獲得成功。

3、Not only does studying in school serve academic purpose, but students learn how to handle interpersonal relations.在校學(xué)習(xí)不僅為了學(xué)術(shù)目的，而且還可以學(xué)會如何處理人際關(guān)系。

4、Under no circumstances should youngsters follow negative information on mass media blindly.青少年決不應(yīng)當(dāng)盲從大眾媒體上的不良信息。

5、So valuable is water that we cannot afford to waste it.時間是如此珍貴，我們經(jīng)不起浪費它。

6、Nowadays, most dangerous for youngsters is the tendency to indulge in playing PC games.如今對青少年最為危險的事情是傾向于過多地玩電腦游戲。

七、強調(diào)句

寫作時為了突出句子的某一成分，常常使用強調(diào)句。

1、It is for the benefit of maintaining the ecological balance that human beings ought to protect the endangered animal species.正是為了維持生態(tài)平衡，人類才應(yīng)該保護地球上瀕危的動物物種。

2、It is not until people suffer from some fatal diseases such as SARS and AIDS that they are becoming aware of how significant it is for the government to invest more money in medical care.直到人們患了像非典和愛滋病這樣致命的疾病時，才意識到政府把更多的錢投入到醫(yī)療

上的重要性。

3、Nothing in the world is more valuable than health.世界上沒有比健康更重要的了。

4、International tourism does promote mutual understanding between people from different countries.5、This is the very advantages brought by computers.6、Under no circumstances can we neglect the immense value of education in one’s life.7、One cannot emphasize the importance of education too much.8、It is no exaggeration to say that computers are of vital importance to human’s lives.八、比較句

正確地使用比較結(jié)構(gòu)可以使文章的句式增加變化，有利于提高寫作成績。

1、Studies show that juvenile delinquency rates are twice as high for youngsters from single-parentfamilies as for those in traditional households.（同級比較）研究表明來自單親家庭的青少年犯罪率是來自傳統(tǒng)家庭的兩倍。

2、Generally speaking, people in modern times enjoy less leisure time than they did previously.（比較級）一般說來，現(xiàn)代人比過去享有更少的休閑時間。

3、Compared with those with different abilities, children with intelligence do more well in their school work and intelligence tests.與不同能力的孩子相比，聰明的孩子在學(xué)業(yè)和智力測驗方面表現(xiàn)更加突出。

4、Contrary to(In contrast to, Unlike)pop stars, other professionals like doctors and teachers create the true value for their society.與明星不同，其他專業(yè)人員如醫(yī)生和教師為社會創(chuàng)造了真正的價值。

5、Air is to human what(as)water is to fish.空氣對人類就如同水對魚一樣。

九、插入語

插入語是對一句話做一些附加說明或解釋。最常見的位置于句中,一般用逗號或破折號與句子隔開。用得恰當(dāng)，不僅可以增加字?jǐn)?shù)，而且使文章更顯地道和精彩。

1、Computers, most important of all, create wide communication around the world.最重要的是，計算機在世界范圍

內(nèi)建立了廣泛的交流。

2、Providing more parking areas, in the long run, has proved to be a practical way out in many

large cities in the world.從長遠的利益來看，提供更多的停車位證明是許多世界大城市切實可行的出路。

3、Observing local culture, consciously and unconsciously, can reduce the chance of offending the locals, or it will lead to the embarrassment and even conflict.無論是否意識到，遵循當(dāng)?shù)氐奈幕梢詼p少冒犯當(dāng)?shù)厝说臋C會，否則，就會導(dǎo)致尷尬甚至沖突。

十、原因句

幾乎所有的寫作試題都要求寫原因或者可以寫原因。議論文的講道理實際就是說明原因。因此，掌握好表達原因的結(jié)構(gòu)是十分重要的。

1、Violent films can do harm to young people, because they contains numerous negative information.暴力影片對年輕人是有害的，因為其中包含大量負面信息。

2、Human beings are chiefly responsible for wild animal extinction.野生動物滅絕的主要責(zé)任在人類。

3、We should attribute(ascribe)medical advances to the animals which do substantial contributions to the experiment.我們應(yīng)該把醫(yī)學(xué)的發(fā)展歸因于動物對實驗做出的巨大貢獻。

4、Because of overpopulation, water shortage has become one of the most serious problems.由于人口過剩，水短缺已經(jīng)成為一個最嚴(yán)重的問題。

5、Owing to the fierce competition in today’s world, a great many young people find themselves under great pressure.由于當(dāng)今世界的激烈競爭，大量的年輕人承受巨大的壓力。