第一篇：游學(xué)之旅匯報(bào)演講稿

游學(xué)之旅匯報(bào)演講稿

尊敬的各位領(lǐng)導(dǎo)、各位老師，大家下午好。很榮幸能夠在這里與各位老師分享這一次的游學(xué)之旅。在此十分的感謝學(xué)校給予我陪同孩子們游學(xué)的機(jī)會(huì)以及在此期間為我上課換課的老師們。下面我將從以下三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行這次小學(xué)部的游學(xué)匯報(bào)：

1、生活方面

2、學(xué)習(xí)方面

3、游覽方面。在介紹以上三方面之前先于大家介紹一下我們的行程安排。這一次的游學(xué)體驗(yàn)為期十天，從11月23日至12月1日。前五天主要在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)，后五天主要參觀游玩北京著名景點(diǎn)。首先來(lái)說(shuō)說(shuō)在生活體驗(yàn)方面：非常感謝上天對(duì)我們海南孩子的眷顧，一下飛機(jī)，就看到漫天飛舞的大雪朝我們展開(kāi)翅膀，熱情的擁抱。對(duì)于大多數(shù)孩子而言那綿綿的白雪是熟悉而又陌生的。當(dāng)真實(shí)見(jiàn)到這被大雪裝飾的瓊枝玉葉時(shí)孩子們的驚嘆的聲音就不絕于耳。黃小的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)還特意為孩子們預(yù)留了打雪仗，堆雪人的場(chǎng)所。在學(xué)校的操場(chǎng)里，踩著這厚厚的白雪，孩子們沉浸在這白雪皚皚的世界中，玩的不亦樂(lè)乎，打起了雪仗，堆起了雪人。在北京有句俗話：“上車的餃子，下車的面”對(duì)于遠(yuǎn)道而來(lái)的客人，通常第一頓是吃面即下車的面，在送別時(shí)便會(huì)下餃子?！庇螌W(xué)期間孩子們的就餐主要在黃小解決。中午是與同班同學(xué)一起在班級(jí)就餐，晚上便在黃小的餐廳，黃小的餐廳的叔叔阿姨們?yōu)榱擞虾⒆觽兊目谖?，每天變換著不同可口的飯菜。在這里我們也品嘗到了北京最具特色的小吃，冰糖葫蘆以及北京烤鴨。那用冰糖包裹著的山楂，甜絲絲，酸溜溜，孩子們吃的非常開(kāi)心，體驗(yàn)到北京眾多孩子的童年回憶。為了給孩子們嘗試到正宗的北京烤鴨，黃小的魏主任還特意從酒店給孩子們制定，七個(gè)工作人員周末加班專門為孩子們服務(wù)，而那讓人印象特別深刻的是在11月29號(hào)這個(gè)特殊的日子里，肖天樂(lè)和胡雨禾兩位小朋友竟然同一天生日，再補(bǔ)上前兩天張喬欣同學(xué)的生日。分別給三位壽星贈(zèng)送了黃小孩子六年以來(lái)夢(mèng)寐以求的“校服熊”作為禮物。當(dāng)然生日中哪能少了蛋糕呢，邢主任早早便給壽星們預(yù)定了蛋糕?？粗@一張張?zhí)鹈?、幸福的笑臉，深深地覺(jué)得我們就是一家人。

2學(xué)習(xí)方面： 孩子們的交流體驗(yàn)的學(xué)校是皇城根小學(xué)，黃小的上課作息時(shí)間為早上七點(diǎn)半鐘準(zhǔn)備開(kāi)始早讀、上課至下午三點(diǎn)半鐘放學(xué)。為了避免遲到現(xiàn)象的出現(xiàn)，我們的孩子們?cè)缟狭c(diǎn)就需要起床。本有些擔(dān)心孩子未必能戰(zhàn)勝被窩的溫暖，但在天蒙蒙亮?xí)r，孩子們都已穿戴整齊準(zhǔn)備出發(fā)。開(kāi)啟了游學(xué)篇章，我們的孩子分別進(jìn)入到四年級(jí)1、2、4、11班中為期五天的學(xué)習(xí)。看著黃小同學(xué)們燦爛的笑容以及熱情的幫助，孩子們剛開(kāi)始有些緊張的心情便開(kāi)始慢慢舒緩，在課堂上也敢舉起了自己的小手，展現(xiàn)自己的見(jiàn)解，融入了課堂，交到了朋友，天下沒(méi)有不散的宴席，時(shí)間總是轉(zhuǎn)眼而逝，五天的課堂學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間也接近了尾聲。黃小孩子表演了節(jié)目，贈(zèng)送了自制的賀卡以及書信，字里行間中透露著依依不舍。雖然時(shí)間短暫，但友誼常在。學(xué)校還特意給我們頒發(fā)了游學(xué)體驗(yàn)課程證書以及黃小?；?。相信這珍貴的禮物孩子們會(huì)讓孩子永遠(yuǎn)珍藏。

3瀏覽景點(diǎn)：結(jié)束了游學(xué)課程，接下來(lái)的五天時(shí)間中我們分別走向了北京城的各項(xiàng)著名景點(diǎn)。瀏覽了具有皇家獨(dú)特輝煌的故宮，讓運(yùn)動(dòng)健將們騰飛的水立方鳥巢以及探索生命挑戰(zhàn)未來(lái)的中國(guó)科技館。呈上知識(shí)的盛宴給予我們美得享受的故宮博物館和天文館。還有頤和園那好風(fēng)光，好氣派令人綺思遐想。長(zhǎng)城的腳下那份銀裝素裹的世界。水木清華，古樸的學(xué)府讓我們心之向往。眾多的瀏覽，參觀，體驗(yàn)讓孩子們紛紛說(shuō)道：“我暑假還要來(lái)！”游學(xué)之路的腳步漸漸接近尾聲，

第二篇：西安游學(xué)匯報(bào)

古都西安之旅

初到西安，它給我的印象只有喧囂，火車站外到處都是推銷商品的小販，還有密集的人群和五花八門的各色店鋪，但是深入瀏覽過(guò)后，我了解到了西安的古老，西安的沉靜，西安的內(nèi)涵。

秦朝的雄偉——兵馬俑

在我的印象中兵馬俑是一排排一列列排列整齊的陶俑方陣，但是深入的參觀后我卻對(duì)兵馬俑有了更深刻的理解。

兵馬俑規(guī)模宏大，作為秦始皇陵的陪葬品，目前為止已發(fā)現(xiàn)了4個(gè)俑坑，兵馬俑制作工藝精良，造型各異，種類豐富，包括了軍士俑、立射俑、跪射俑、武士俑、軍吏俑、騎兵俑、馭手俑等。兵馬俑雖然為陶俑，但是形態(tài)各異，表情逼真，面部形態(tài)栩栩如生，無(wú)一雷同，可見(jiàn)兵馬俑是工匠們參照一個(gè)個(gè)真實(shí)的士兵捏造，燒制而成的，兵馬俑的制作體現(xiàn)了秦代高超的雕塑技藝水平。

不僅如此，在我眼中，兵馬俑的產(chǎn)生也是中華文化的一種發(fā)展，一種升華，在秦以前，中國(guó)是實(shí)施活人殉葬的，兵馬俑的產(chǎn)生在某種意義上標(biāo)志著統(tǒng)治者對(duì)人民生命的理解和尊重，是人們思想的進(jìn)步。這可以說(shuō)是冷冰冰的兵馬俑背后溫暖的一面。

大唐的繁盛——華清池

當(dāng)我們來(lái)到華清池時(shí)正是一個(gè)雨后的下午，華清池后的山被霧氣籠罩著，恍若仙境，在這個(gè)美妙的時(shí)間，我穿越回了大唐盛世，體會(huì)了皇家溫泉的繁華。

華清池自唐代修建以來(lái)就被文人墨客贊揚(yáng)，更是歷代皇帝的休閑享樂(lè)的行宮。無(wú)論是華清池中的美景，還是雄偉壯麗的宮殿，亦或是供帝后洗浴的雕花精致的浴池都無(wú)不彰顯了大唐盛世的繁華與偉大。但是就是的偉大不代表今日的輝煌，曾經(jīng)華麗的浴池如今只剩下了青石的輪廓，曾經(jīng)的雕花也已經(jīng)不斷磨損，模糊不清；曾經(jīng)清澈透明的泉眼也被綠苔覆蓋；曾經(jīng)壯麗的宮殿也早已坍塌，如今只剩下新建的大殿屹立在那里。所有的繁華終究會(huì)落去，最終留下的只有最最普通卻又最最堅(jiān)硬的青石，能夠永存的只有精神。

古都西安之旅給了我身體和精神上的升華，讓我見(jiàn)識(shí)了大千世界，見(jiàn)識(shí)了秦代的雄偉，大唐的繁華，更讓我體會(huì)了中華文化“浮華散去，精神永恒”的內(nèi)涵。

西安是喧囂的，也是沉靜的；是古老的，也是現(xiàn)代的。西安之行對(duì)我而言是難忘的，是永恒的。

第三篇：“2011.發(fā)現(xiàn)美國(guó)”暑假游學(xué)之旅

“2011.發(fā)現(xiàn)美國(guó)”暑假游學(xué)之旅

D1-3：杭州出發(fā)，抵達(dá)上海同和國(guó)際留學(xué)生村，與外國(guó)留學(xué)生同住，并開(kāi)始為出國(guó)游學(xué)“破冰”――了解美國(guó)的衣食住行、文化禮儀，通過(guò)場(chǎng)景模擬訓(xùn)練快速進(jìn)入美國(guó)生活情境。期間參訪復(fù)旦大學(xué)、同濟(jì)大學(xué)等滬上名校。

D4：上海直飛紐約，抵達(dá)波士頓，毗鄰名校入住。

D5：訪問(wèn)世界頂級(jí)名校哈佛大學(xué)、麻省理工學(xué)院，聆聽(tīng)高校學(xué)者的講座。

D6：回到大都會(huì)紐約，參觀“無(wú)畏號(hào)”航空母艦?？詹┪镳^、世界金融中心華爾街，在著名的第五大道觸摸紐約時(shí)尚與經(jīng)濟(jì)的脈搏。

D7：參訪“美國(guó)政治家搖籃”普林斯頓大學(xué)和以普利策新聞獎(jiǎng)聞名的哥倫比亞大學(xué)，參觀充滿奇思妙想的紐約現(xiàn)代藝術(shù)博物館（MOMA）。華燈初上的夜晚，來(lái)欣賞一場(chǎng)精彩的百老匯演出吧！

D8：訪問(wèn)電影大師輩出的紐約大學(xué)和世界四大設(shè)計(jì)學(xué)院之一的帕森斯設(shè)計(jì)學(xué)院。參觀聯(lián)合國(guó)總部以及象征著美國(guó)精神的自由女神像。

D9：前往首都華盛頓，在白宮、國(guó)會(huì)山莊、林肯紀(jì)念堂、越戰(zhàn)紀(jì)念碑……之間徜徉，感受美國(guó)的歷史與政治現(xiàn)實(shí)。

D10：參觀承載著人類夢(mèng)想與探索的航空航天博物館，以及收藏了1.2億件自然標(biāo)本的自然歷史博物館。

D11：飛抵舊金山，游覽地標(biāo)式建筑金門大橋和漁人碼頭。下午參觀高科技企業(yè)云集的硅谷，在計(jì)算機(jī)博物館中看奇妙的科技怎樣轉(zhuǎn)換為第一生產(chǎn)力。

D12：參訪西岸頂級(jí)名校加州大學(xué)伯克利分校和擁有“西岸的哈佛”之稱的斯坦福大學(xué)。下午在半月灣海灘享受加州明媚的陽(yáng)光和碧海藍(lán)天。

D13：飛往洛杉磯，游覽環(huán)球影城，體驗(yàn)好萊塢電影世界的奧妙與神奇。

D14：訪問(wèn)美國(guó)高中，零距離體驗(yàn)美國(guó)中學(xué)校園生活，與美國(guó)同齡人溝通交流。在家庭晚宴中，感受濃濃的美國(guó)家庭生活氛圍。

D15-16：參加加州大學(xué)洛杉磯分校（UCLA）的特設(shè)課程培訓(xùn)，深入體驗(yàn)世界頂級(jí)名校的風(fēng)采，了解美國(guó)高校的申請(qǐng)程序及要點(diǎn)，接受寶貴的留學(xué)指導(dǎo)。

D17-19：迪士尼樂(lè)園怎可錯(cuò)過(guò)！除了盡情游玩八大主題公園外，更重要的是參加專為青少年設(shè)置的Y.E.S奇妙學(xué)習(xí)系列課程，寓教于樂(lè)，其樂(lè)無(wú)窮。

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第四篇：2009游學(xué)之旅”獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)魑狞c(diǎn)評(píng)及選登

2009游學(xué)之旅”獲獎(jiǎng)?wù)魑狞c(diǎn)評(píng)及選登

總評(píng)

自今年1月份瘋狂英語(yǔ)編輯部與英國(guó)大使館聯(lián)合發(fā)布游學(xué)征文的活動(dòng)啟事以來(lái)，收到了許多熱心讀者的反饋，活動(dòng)反響十分熱烈。稿件從全國(guó)各地如雪花般飛來(lái)，更曾經(jīng)一度導(dǎo)致郵箱短暫爆滿，以至小編們要一天數(shù)次清空郵箱才能保證郵件的順利接收。這里，小編們向參加征文的每一位讀者，包括熱心鼓勵(lì)孩子的家長(zhǎng)、認(rèn)真指導(dǎo)學(xué)生的教師衷心地道一聲謝謝，正是有了你們的熱情參與和支持，這次活動(dòng)才得以順利進(jìn)行、圓滿結(jié)束；也正是由于你們的支持和鼓勵(lì)，才有了CE系列期刊的茁壯成長(zhǎng)。

這次征文比賽，來(lái)稿的質(zhì)量著實(shí)令編輯們開(kāi)心了一番，尤其是中學(xué)組，真是讓人眼前一亮，有種驚喜的感覺(jué)。不錯(cuò)不錯(cuò)，后生可畏呀！征文比賽結(jié)果公布后，很多同學(xué)，甚至有一些家長(zhǎng)，都會(huì)打電話來(lái)詢問(wèn)，想知道為什么別人的文章獲獎(jiǎng)了，自己的或者說(shuō)自己的孩子卻沒(méi)有；或者想知道，如何才能寫好英文文章。關(guān)于這一點(diǎn)，編輯部的外籍小編Mitch就給大家提出了許多行之有效的建議（我們把它貼在下面），大家一定要認(rèn)真看哦。

其實(shí)呢，很簡(jiǎn)單，文章嘛，首先是立意新，其次要文法拼寫正確，最后要有趣，除了這最后一點(diǎn)，前面兩點(diǎn)應(yīng)該說(shuō)，與大家的作文考試要求都是一樣的吧。寫好文章并不難。首先，很多同學(xué)都沒(méi)有注意到基本的語(yǔ)法和拼寫問(wèn)題，小錯(cuò)不斷，大錯(cuò)也犯，小編可是眼睛最尖的，一發(fā)現(xiàn)文章中有出現(xiàn)單復(fù)數(shù)呀、時(shí)態(tài)呀、人稱呀等等混亂情況，這篇稿子就立刻“犧牲”了。其次呢，就像外籍小編Mitch提出來(lái)的，大家不要將文章寫得像在記流水賬，早上起來(lái)刷牙到中午午飯吃了些啥，都不厭其煩細(xì)細(xì)說(shuō)來(lái)，無(wú)論是誰(shuí)看了都會(huì)打瞌睡的:P……還有呢，英國(guó)大使館的評(píng)稿專家就指出，有些同學(xué)特意使用一些生僻冷門的詞匯，殊不知這些詞匯有些就是一些古語(yǔ)，現(xiàn)代英語(yǔ)早已摒棄不用，用在文章里，甭說(shuō)小編看不懂，就連外教們也是滿腦袋問(wèn)號(hào)——一句話：根本不合適。

像中學(xué)組一等獎(jiǎng)梅芝蕊同學(xué)的文章，就是一篇不錯(cuò)的好文章，小小一件事情，卻蘊(yùn)含著深刻的哲理；敘述干凈利落，不拖泥帶水；用詞準(zhǔn)確，沒(méi)有多余的廢話；文章不長(zhǎng)，卻制造了一個(gè)小小的懸念，吸引人讀下去，最后才真相大白、豁然開(kāi)朗。讀這樣的文章，才不會(huì)打瞌睡的說(shuō)^0^

好吧，好東西要大家一起分享。我們把一等獎(jiǎng)的兩篇文章貼出來(lái)，與大家一起分享。若覺(jué)得的確比自己寫得好，就學(xué)習(xí)一下人家的寫作技巧和遣詞造句；若是不服氣，那咱們就下次擂臺(tái)賽上較量較量吧——CE有的是機(jī)會(huì)哦！

中學(xué)組征文一等獎(jiǎng)獲得者：

廣州市華南師范大學(xué)附屬中學(xué) 高二（9）班 梅芝蕊

My Journey To Beauty

“Done!” said Old Jim with a satisfied smile.“Thanks.” I reached for my wallet and was about to pay him.“No,” he shook his head, “it’s on the house.”

Old Jim was without doubt the best hair stylist I’d ever known.He designed every haircut with such artistry and delicacy that to say the miracles created by those crafty hands were “beautiful” would be an understatement.But there was one strange thing about his shop: there was no mirror in it, so customers were kept in suspense until they reached home.I thanked him again and walked out through the door, his words lingering in myhead:

“There’smagicinyournewhair.Nowstartyourjourneyto beauty.”

Sunlight dropped down through the overlapping foliage above my head as I walked on the pavement.I shook my head, but didn’t feel a difference.I could only vaguely feel that something was different, like a little voice that had long been suppressed that desired to be heard.As I walked I could see a boy walking toward me.We went to the same school, but hadn’t talked to each other much.If it weren’t for the new hair, I would’ve looked down and pretended not to see him.I had always been shy.But at that point, I intended to test out Old Jim’s magic.I waved at him with butterflies in my stomach.“Hey, Aaron!”

“Hey, what’s up?” he waved back, a slightly surprised smile crossing his lips.We continued on our separate ways.It all happened so naturally, without any of the awkwardness that usually accompanies meeting new people.I had never expected it to be so easy to surmount my shyness.I do look better with this new hair, I thought, a smile growing on my face, when I heard someone calling out to me.“Susan!Susan!”

I turned around.It was Jennifer, the most popular girl in the whole school.“It really is you, Susan.You look great today!”

“Thanks.So do you.”

Jennifer was everything I wanted to be.What a sweet victory to get such a compliment from a girl like her!

We had a conversation on school and cheerleading, and parted at a crossing, where she turned left and I right.As I walked on briskly, my ears were filled with mellifluous songs from birds and rhythmic sounds of leaves dancing in the summer breeze.All of the minute details that I ignored on the way home every day now seemed infused with a life force I had never

before noticed.At the street corner, a blind man stood playing the violin, I paused and listened attentively.Melodies of joy and serenity flowed from under his deft fingers.I observed his facial expressions--I had always considered people like him as pitiful, for they subsisted on unstable incomes, struggling everyday to make ends meet--to my surprise, not a hint of sorrow was

displayed on his weather-beaten face.He even smiled after finishing a tricky passage.Then I was reminded of the fact that he couldn’t see, and the only way for him to capture the different colours of life was with his ears, hands, and violin, from which he derived such gaiety and gratitude.Deeply moved, I placed a coin quietly in the can before him.I accelerated at the sight of home, or rather at the thought that I’d be able to see my new hair in the mirror in my room.An hour ago, I entered Old Jim’s hairdresser’s crestfallen, having just been rejected a role in the school play.I looked plain and boring, that’s why they didn’t want me--I was convinced.“I want to be beautiful,” I said to Old Jim, tears almost dropping.Now see what his magic had done!After a twenty-minute walk home, I was fresh, alive, and radiant with joy.I rushed upstairs, my heart pumping furiously.I couldn’t wait to see my new hair.And here I stood in front of themirror taken by surprise.My hair was bobbed, the bangs disheveled from running.In short, not much had been done, except for a tiny velvet bow over my left ear.Comment from Cultural And Education Section, British Embassy：The author cleverly created suspense at the beginning, making readers look forward to the denouement.The article was smoothly written with very little interference from the first language.It far exceeded the judges’ expectation of a middle school student's English writing ability.大學(xué)組征文一等獎(jiǎng)獲得者：

上海外國(guó)語(yǔ)大學(xué) 裘天佑

My Favourite Film

I have always wondered: What’s the purpose of Christmas? Is it merely a traditional ritual to celebrate the birth of Jesus? Is it a perfect reason to plunge into an orgy of food and fun? Or, is it but a joke, bearing the intention to make those happy people happier and the lonely ones even

lonelier?

Thanks to Love Actually, one of my favourite films, the answer to the mystery was finally unveiled.Following the paths of eight couples and the ways they cope with their ups and downs in love and relationships during the month of chaos preceding Christmas, this hilarious rom-com creates a unique evocation of Christmas: without any plan or agenda, to express, to confess and to reveal(編者注：此處應(yīng)改為“without any plan or agenda to express, confess or reveal”)the existence of our deep-buried, long-forgotten, but most cherished emotion in the world, an emotion that makes us mad and miserable but manage(編者注：此處應(yīng)改為“manages”)to remind us that we are alive and why we are.Christmas is a time for us to rediscover the ubiquity of love.We endure the maddeningly complicated food preparation in steaming kitchens;we squeeze through the torrent of crowds and packed shops;we hunt for the perfect presents despite the hectic hustle and bustle of holiday shopping;and we crack our heads trying to figure out the first line on a Christmas card—not(編者注：此處應(yīng)加上“so”)much because we need to or have to, but because we would love to.Love is the ultimate answer.“Often it is not particularly dignified or newsworthy,” as the film tells, “but it’s always there—fathers and sons, mothers and daughters, husbands and wives, boyfriends, girlfriends, old friends.When the planes hit the Twin Towers as far as I know, none of the phone calls from the people on board were messages of hate and revenge.They were all messages of love.If you look for it, I’ve got a sneaky feeling you’ll find that love actually is all around.”

…

I love it for it speaks the universal language of love that ignores all the differences between peoples and nations and serves as the source of inspiration for all.I love it for it is telling me, no matter who we are, no matter where we are from, we all belong to the same species that can never ever escape the sweet agonies of love.…

Christmas, as all its other equivalents in different cultures, is a timely reminder of the fact that our world is not a place of hatred and greed, and our life is not about the prosperity in our bank accounts or the climbs up the social ladders;we are living for something called love, unconditional and overabundant love.Even though Christmas is mostly a time we do nothing but hang around with friends, killing time in cafe(編者注：此處應(yīng)改為“cafes”)or gorging the night away on some not-so-mouthwatering feasts;even though we secretly complain all the time that the new sweater we receive(編者注：此處應(yīng)改為“received”)is not impressive enough, or the

holiday shows on “telly” are as tedious as usual;even though the greatest achievement that we accomplish during Christmas is probably getting ourselves drunk with tons of Guinness and crazy Christmas carols, we are feeling, more strongly than ever, that we are warmed by the sense of

belonging and the knowledge that someone will always be there, reaching out for us, rain or shine, fair or foul.Next time when snowflakes are kissing the evergreen, when street lights start glowing again, when the melody of Silent Night is dancing in the air and when Love Actually rebroadcasts on HBO, “without hope or agenda”, let’s tell each other in any language we want: “Merry Christmas, and you know, I love you”.Comment from Cultural And Education Section, British Embassy：By posing the question about the purpose of Christmas, the author reveals the true message behind the film.The judges are all impressed by the smooth flow of the language.The article also reflects the author’s understanding of western culture.It ends beautifully with a depiction of a lovely scene.It has a very touching effect which makes people want to see the film.外教支招

想知道中國(guó)人英文寫作的有哪些常犯錯(cuò)誤嗎？要知道，避免這類錯(cuò)誤可以使你的文章更地道?？炜纯茨銜?huì)否也踩中地雷呢？

此次征文比賽我們收到了不少佳作，有些習(xí)作連我們的外教Mitch也大贊其表達(dá)地道。當(dāng)然在這些征文來(lái)稿中還是存在著許多易見(jiàn)但又很容易被忽視的問(wèn)題，為此，我們的外教Mitch特地撰寫了以下的寫作小撇步，希望能夠?qū)Υ蠹医窈蟮挠⒄Z(yǔ)寫作有所幫助。

? Don’t use big words if you don’t know how to use them properly: simplicity is best.Use words you would use in everyday life to make the sentence smooth or natural.e.g.It is my firm belief that knowledge obtained from genuine experience provides greater value to one’s life than knowledge gained through

academic experience.→ I think you can learn more from hands-on experience than you can from reading books.? Avoid using the same word more than once in a sentence Use variety in your vocabulary.e.g.The flowers were pretty and the stars were very pretty too.?

? Don’t use “and so on” or “etc” to end a sentence!It’s lazy and native English speakers never do this.(In some circumstances “etc” is OK to use, but try to avoid it.)Decide what is relevant and irrelevant.Delete any information that does not help your story move forward.Too many details weigh the story/essay down.e.g.I woke up at 6 a.m., then took a shower until 6.30, then we caught the bus at 7a.m.to go to the beach.This is not an interesting story.Details about how you feel are much more interesting to read.e.g.It was so hard to force myself to wake before sunrise.I hurried to take a shower and get dressed and only just made it to the station on time.Excitement rushed over me as the bus rolled away and the adventure began.? Avoid using clichés.e.g.“…And they all lived happily ever after.”

? Don’t ask questions to the reader This may be cute as a child, but for teen and adult writing it’s too immature.e.g “Why did I enjoy the holiday/movie so much? Let me tell you.” Thanks for all the entries and keep up the writing!

第五篇：山東游學(xué)總結(jié)匯報(bào)（模版）

山東游學(xué)匯報(bào)總結(jié)

在高一結(jié)束的暑假，學(xué)校組織我們?nèi)w高一年級(jí)遠(yuǎn)赴山東進(jìn)行了前所未有的游學(xué)體驗(yàn)，踏入齊魯大地，不僅可以走入孔子故鄉(xiāng)感受源遠(yuǎn)流長(zhǎng)的中國(guó)文化，同樣也可以親自登上泰山一覽眾山小，也可以漫步在大明湖畔尋找傳說(shuō)中皇帝的一段凄美愛(ài)情。

陽(yáng)光初投在學(xué)校的操場(chǎng)，難以抑制的興奮洋溢在每個(gè)人的臉上，早晨的北京南站因?yàn)槲覀兊牡絹?lái)而顯得充滿了活力，一路上的歡聲笑語(yǔ)充斥著一節(jié)又一節(jié)的車廂。終于到達(dá)目的地。

到達(dá)目的地的第一站便是大明湖，已是盛夏，悶熱的天氣顯然是每個(gè)人都有一些吃不消，每個(gè)人也不免有一些焦躁，但是當(dāng)我們真正的置身于大明湖畔時(shí)，那種清涼卻是由內(nèi)而外的，每走一步都有一種歲月的幽靜感，每呼吸一次都能感受到大明湖的絲絲涼意，灌溉著原本焦躁的內(nèi)心，慢慢的用平靜的心來(lái)欣賞美景，湖畔。湖畔的周圍是成蔭的柳樹，我和幾名同學(xué)靜心散步，遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)地便聞到一股荷葉的清香，走近看，是用荷葉做的燒麥，相傳是當(dāng)年進(jìn)貢給皇上的消暑佳品，依著一棵柳樹，捧著一本史書，品嘗著美食，也許大明湖沒(méi)有西湖那樣湖面遼闊，也沒(méi)有昆明湖的小巧玲瓏，它擁有的更多是一份樸素，一份恬靜。仿佛人生，也不用刻意的追求功名利祿。

游覽過(guò)大明湖的碧水清波，我們來(lái)到了趵突泉，失望的是趵突泉并沒(méi)有想象中的那么洶涌，而是非常輕緩的突出了水面，不急不慢，更為遺憾的是也沒(méi)有品嘗到趵突泉的泉水。有人扔下了硬幣，或是希望財(cái)源滾滾，或是希望金榜題名。也許泉水在某天會(huì)停噴，但是天下第一泉卻還會(huì)是屬于它的，因?yàn)樗休d著上期千年的歷史，上千年的歷史同樣承載著它，沒(méi)有人可以改變歷史，我們能做的便是創(chuàng)造歷史。

會(huì)當(dāng)凌絕頂，一覽眾山小。從小背過(guò)的詩(shī)句中，不乏有很多是贊美泰山的，杜甫的這首《望岳》便是最經(jīng)典的代表。我們終于來(lái)到了泰山。站在山腳下，想像杜甫一樣望岳，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)山頂處云霧繚繞，根本看不到山頂，想領(lǐng)略泰山的雄偉只有一個(gè)辦法，征服它！

登山的隊(duì)伍很快便拉的很長(zhǎng)很長(zhǎng)，開(kāi)始的攀登每個(gè)人都是信心滿滿，也許攀登本身對(duì)泰山就是一種挑戰(zhàn)，從古至今有多少人想征服它，又有多少人失敗了，多少人成功了，成功是自己一步一步的攀登帶來(lái)的，沒(méi)有捷徑，也沒(méi)有人會(huì)否認(rèn)你。都不知道自己走了多久，衣服仿佛用水洗過(guò)一般，紙巾一張又一張，每過(guò)一個(gè)門都提醒自己，快到了，快到了。不知道什么時(shí)候已經(jīng)置身在飄渺的云霧中間，恍然抬頭，遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)地望見(jiàn)了最頂端的寺廟，回頭望去，來(lái)時(shí)的路也已經(jīng)被重重地?zé)熿F封鎖了。望向遠(yuǎn)方，朦朧的云煙中仍然可以看到那扎根在峭壁上的古松。于是回頭繼續(xù)攀登。向著頂峰。

最后一天，我們就要參觀“三孔”了，孔林、孔府、孔廟。真正的感受千百年來(lái)儒家文化的發(fā)源地。孔子作為中國(guó)歷史上的一代偉人，他的思想可以保留到今天，足可以證明他思想的遠(yuǎn)見(jiàn)。在今天，其實(shí)有部分人已經(jīng)神華了孔子，將其稱之為圣人，為他的身世迷上了神秘的面紗，其實(shí)無(wú)論時(shí)代怎么改變，孔子還是那個(gè)孔子，只不過(guò)是人們的看法發(fā)生了改變罷了。

返京的火車徐徐開(kāi)動(dòng)了，三天的時(shí)光也轉(zhuǎn)瞬即逝，我們收獲了歡笑，當(dāng)然我們也收獲了一份最真摯的友情，因?yàn)槲覀兌贾?，在開(kāi)學(xué)的時(shí)候，我們將會(huì)因?yàn)榉职喽珠_(kāi)，組建了一年的家也將被拆散，其實(shí)每個(gè)人在這三天都好好的做了無(wú)聲道別，希望最后在為這個(gè)班級(jí)做一點(diǎn)什么，我們是不會(huì)哭的，雖然眼淚在打轉(zhuǎn)，但是，我們卻還是選擇把微笑留給最親的人，因?yàn)槲覀兿嘈潘麄儚奈醋哌h(yuǎn)。