第一篇:2012考研英語作文寫作要的要點(diǎn)
一年來,甬江街道愛衛(wèi)會在街道黨工委、辦事處的正確領(lǐng)導(dǎo)下,深入貫徹落實區(qū)委七屆八次會議和區(qū)委、區(qū)政府《關(guān)于深入貫徹落實科學(xué)發(fā)展觀扎實推進(jìn)新一輪全國文明城市創(chuàng)建活動的決定》精神,緊密結(jié)合“開展‘三思三創(chuàng)’建設(shè)‘三區(qū)三城’”主題教育實踐活動和文明城市“三連冠”,立足街道實際,開展“城市形象提升”、“城市管理提升”兩大行動,對薄弱環(huán)節(jié)進(jìn)行專項整治,在各行政村、企業(yè)的配合和支持,愛衛(wèi)工作取得了良好成效,甬江街道的城市形象得到進(jìn)一步提升,城市管理得到進(jìn)一步完善,群眾整體素質(zhì)得到進(jìn)一步提高。具體工作總結(jié)如下:
一、加強(qiáng)領(lǐng)導(dǎo),落實責(zé)任
今年年初,街道街道領(lǐng)導(dǎo)班子即召開愛國衛(wèi)生工作專項會議,研究部署甬江街道2011年愛國衛(wèi)生工作和第二十三個愛國衛(wèi)生月活動。會后,街道愛衛(wèi)會在轄區(qū)范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行了力量充實,各村、各單位也成立了愛國衛(wèi)生工作領(lǐng)導(dǎo)小組,由各單位、村分管領(lǐng)導(dǎo)負(fù)責(zé),實行層層責(zé)任制,一級抓一級,一級促一級。
二、多種渠道宣傳愛國知識,注重健康教育內(nèi)容
(一)多種渠道宣傳,形成全民共識
街道愛衛(wèi)辦認(rèn)真貫徹落實上級指示精神,大力宣傳愛國衛(wèi)生知識、文明城市“三連冠”和第二十三個愛國衛(wèi)生月活動。街道和各行政村、企事業(yè)單位利用橫幅、標(biāo)語、黑板報、宣傳欄(窗)、各種圖片大力宣傳《寧波市愛國衛(wèi)生條例》,預(yù)防和控制病媒生物傳播的知識,讓群眾更多地知道衛(wèi)生和健康知識,做到家喻戶曉,人人皆知。
(二)注重健康教育內(nèi)容,提高群眾健康意識
為加強(qiáng)對街道廣大群眾健康教育,提高健康水平,改變不衛(wèi)生行為,增強(qiáng)自我保健意識,讓街道群眾的衛(wèi)生觀念在潛移默化中升華,進(jìn)一步激發(fā)廣大居民積極參與文明創(chuàng)建活動的積極性,我們開展了以下幾項工作活動:街道愛衛(wèi)辦認(rèn)真貫徹落實上級指示精神,大力宣傳《寧波市愛國衛(wèi)生條例》頒布施行三周年的宣傳活動,大力宣傳《寧波市愛國衛(wèi)生條例》,預(yù)防和控制病媒生物傳播的知識,農(nóng)民健康教育,農(nóng)民健康教育,中國公民健康66條、健康素養(yǎng)、愛滋病、公共場所禁煙,中國公民健康營養(yǎng)學(xué)內(nèi)容等等,讓群眾更多地知道衛(wèi)生和健康知識,力求達(dá)到家喻戶曉,人人皆知的宣傳效果。
三、以愛國衛(wèi)生月和文明城市“三連冠”為契機(jī),全面推進(jìn)愛衛(wèi)工作
(一)加強(qiáng)重點(diǎn)區(qū)域整治力度
一、常洪區(qū)域?qū)m椪?。街道共投?0多萬元,對329國道兩旁甬江管轄區(qū)域內(nèi)的綠化養(yǎng)護(hù)、低洼地、排污設(shè)施等進(jìn)行集中整治,同時協(xié)助交警、公安、城管等部門加強(qiáng)對該區(qū)域亂停車、亂設(shè)攤、跨門占道經(jīng)營的巡查治理工作。
二、沿路沿線專項整治。街道重點(diǎn)對轄區(qū)環(huán)城北路、倪家堰路、梅堰路、寧鎮(zhèn)公路等重點(diǎn)道路進(jìn)行亂停車、亂設(shè)攤集中整治,共整治馬路市場5處,取締無證攤販200位,做到定點(diǎn)、定時、統(tǒng)一規(guī)范有序的管理,確保了道路行車、行人安全通行。此外,對主要道路兩側(cè)、人口聚集區(qū)域,全面進(jìn)行墻面宣傳廣告的制作,共粉刷墻面廣告5萬多平方米,廣告畫200多幅。
三、建設(shè)拆遷區(qū)域?qū)m椪巍V攸c(diǎn)是做好街道在建安置房建設(shè)工地與灣頭、北高教園區(qū)拆遷區(qū)域的建筑垃圾清運(yùn)工作和圈圍工作,累計投入經(jīng)費(fèi)20多萬元,突擊清理偷倒垃圾、渣土、裝璜垃圾,共計清理各類垃圾145車800余噸。對拆遷區(qū)域主要道路兩側(cè)、重點(diǎn)區(qū)塊修建圍墻2000多米,使道路兩側(cè)的環(huán)境面貌得到了較大變化。同時利用拆遷的有利時機(jī),著重加大對違章建筑的查拆力度,共查處違章建筑24處,拆除建筑面積5519平方米。
四、河道、主道沿線整治。河道砌石670米,疏挖河道2108米,河岸綠化1000平方米。主道沿線兩側(cè)綠化350平方米、兩側(cè)美化1030平方米。
(二)抓好村莊環(huán)境整體提升。街道成立了農(nóng)村環(huán)境整治工作組,充實隊伍。原有保潔隊伍122人,新增9人,年人均受訓(xùn)次數(shù)122次。重點(diǎn)將破爛王、茶水房和亂堆放、亂搭建整治作為難點(diǎn)攻克對象予以整治。共整治和規(guī)范破爛王、茶水房58余家,通過專項整治,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期目標(biāo)。清理垃圾亂堆、亂放610處。完成村內(nèi)明溝改造1906米清除村莊立面亂涂貼2150處,村莊立面美化15750平方米。完成閑雜空地整治18處,整治面積2480平方米。對各行政村的村莊周邊、房前屋后,道路兩側(cè)、背街小弄等地段的衛(wèi)生死角,共清理330多處,清運(yùn)垃圾渣土868噸。完成畜禽養(yǎng)殖整治15家,截至目前,已拆除養(yǎng)鴨戶2戶,約15000平方米;另外1戶8000多只也簽訂了拆遷協(xié)議,還有4戶10000以上養(yǎng)殖戶正在協(xié)商中;孔浦、壓賽3戶養(yǎng)豬戶也在協(xié)商階段中。生活污水集中處理村從原有的8個增加到現(xiàn)在的14個。
(三)加快環(huán)衛(wèi)基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施建設(shè)。街道為了全面改善環(huán)境衛(wèi)生基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施,配套出臺了各項補(bǔ)助政策,對各村道路基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施進(jìn)行維修和保養(yǎng),并按標(biāo)準(zhǔn)規(guī)范化落實衛(wèi)生設(shè)施的配備和管理,對村排水、排污系統(tǒng)的改造計劃等方面進(jìn)行補(bǔ)助,調(diào)動各村基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施建設(shè)的積極性。今年累計投入150多萬元資金,對各村不符合標(biāo)準(zhǔn)要求的公廁、垃圾箱(亭),環(huán)衛(wèi)設(shè)施布局不合理的老、舊、破等影響美觀的設(shè)施進(jìn)行了重新建造和維修工作。改造維修垃圾房175座,新建垃圾房11座,新購垃圾桶540只;清除露天糞崗4座,改造公廁86座,新建公廁2座;新購電動環(huán)保車1輛,垃圾桶500只,改變了原來人力三輪車清運(yùn)垃圾,實現(xiàn)了垃圾清運(yùn)機(jī)械化。此外,又投入經(jīng)費(fèi)20萬元,對主要2條道路進(jìn)行全面修補(bǔ),累計修補(bǔ)道路2000多米。
(四)完善督察反饋工作機(jī)制。成立了綜合宣傳督查工作組。設(shè)立30萬元環(huán)境整治專項考核基金,與村干部考核獎金掛鉤。同時街道強(qiáng)化了環(huán)境衛(wèi)生督察力度,成立三支應(yīng)急分隊,在考核過程中,發(fā)現(xiàn)問題隨時進(jìn)行突擊性應(yīng)急處理,預(yù)防出現(xiàn)衛(wèi)生死角,并對重點(diǎn)地段加強(qiáng)人員配備,增加保潔力量,防止網(wǎng)格化管理脫節(jié)現(xiàn)象。與此同時,街道對于上級部門曝光的問題建立了快速響應(yīng)機(jī)制,力求在發(fā)現(xiàn)問題的當(dāng)天予以解決?;顒娱_展以來,累計完成各類督辦的近200張臟、亂、差曝光地點(diǎn)的整改工作。
(五)做好轄區(qū)內(nèi)“除四害”工作.街道愛衛(wèi)辦全力做好除四害藥物的訂購和發(fā)放工作,累計投入三萬多元購買了飛彪緩釋劑、安備、塔牌煙炮、環(huán)衛(wèi)箭、奮斗吶、飛彪乳油、捕蠅籠等十多種藥物,總重量超過300千克,此外,還準(zhǔn)備了滅蟑顆粒劑、滅蟑藥水、滅蟑膠餌、滅蟑方便貼、粘蟑紙等各類滅蟑螂藥物100多千克,并分發(fā)到各片區(qū)。同時,對各村除四害專職人員進(jìn)行技術(shù)指導(dǎo),從四害的生活習(xí)性、滅殺藥物的功能、殺滅的方法、用藥安全等一一進(jìn)行了詳細(xì)的講解說明,進(jìn)一步提高滅殺隊伍的專業(yè)水平。除“四害”工作,采取市場化的運(yùn)作模式,由街道出資40萬元聘請寧波康龍專業(yè)消殺公司負(fù)責(zé)全部15個行政村的“四害”消殺工作。該公司組織8名除四害專業(yè)人員,對15個村范圍內(nèi)的居民區(qū)、辦公樓、集貿(mào)市場以及150平方米以下五小單位等區(qū)域進(jìn)行滅鼠顆粒毒餌(大隆鼠藥及殺它仗)的全面投放,采用一次飽和投藥法和殘存鼠配制特殊毒餌專門投藥相結(jié)合的方法,并配以鼠夾、鼠籠,粘鼠板等物理器械滅鼠,防止藥物污染。經(jīng)過各方面努力,街道春、夏、秋三季“除四害”工作取得了良好效果,為轄區(qū)群眾創(chuàng)造了一個潔凈舒適的生活環(huán)境。
四、存在的問題和下一步工作展望
今年街道環(huán)境整治工作,投入了大量資金、人力、物力,整治力度大、效果好,圓滿完成了第二十三個愛國衛(wèi)生月活動和文明城市“三連冠”工作任務(wù),轄區(qū)生活環(huán)境進(jìn)一步優(yōu)化。雖然一年來街道在環(huán)境整治方面做了大量工作,但還是存在一些不足。
一、主要路段亂停車和亂設(shè)攤反彈較快。街道轄區(qū)主要路段如寧鎮(zhèn)公路路林段、梅堰路廟跟段和河?xùn)|農(nóng)貿(mào)路等都存在這樣的問題,集中整治后能夠維持一段時間,但是反彈較快。
二、行政村與自然村衛(wèi)生水平不平衡。一些行政村雖然總體衛(wèi)生較好,但較偏遠(yuǎn)自然村衛(wèi)生狀況不佳。三是曝光問題整改力度不夠大。部分村干部對環(huán)境整治工作重視度不夠,對區(qū)和街道曝光的環(huán)境問題整改的力度不夠大、動作不夠快。針對這些問題,今后街道愛衛(wèi)辦工作要重點(diǎn)從如下幾方面入手。第一,加大重點(diǎn)區(qū)域環(huán)境整治力度,特別是加強(qiáng)重點(diǎn)部位、重點(diǎn)地段(破爛王、茶水房、養(yǎng)殖場、亂堆放、不符合標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的垃圾房等)的整治。第二,加強(qiáng)網(wǎng)格化管理和督察力度。曝光督查力度不減,將暴露的問題及時反饋到聯(lián)片領(lǐng)導(dǎo)、聯(lián)村干部和各行政村。并嚴(yán)格要求在規(guī)定時限內(nèi)整改完畢。第三,完善環(huán)境整治資金管理體制。加大環(huán)境整治方面的資金投入,提高資金的使用效率,確保專項資金的安全規(guī)范運(yùn)作。
第二篇:2012考研英語作文寫作要的四大要點(diǎn)
2012考研英語之寫作四大問題導(dǎo)致作文低分
知已知彼,百戰(zhàn)不殆。要想再在英語作文方面取得高分,同學(xué)們不妨先了解下考研英語作文的題型、評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及對高分作文的具體要求。但是今天結(jié)合歷年考生情況,和同學(xué)們講講有關(guān)考研作文低分的常見四方面問題。
1.文不對題
“文不對題”是考研英語寫作中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的問題之一,不少老師在閱卷時都遇到過這樣的作文——內(nèi)容充實,條理清晰,用詞準(zhǔn)確,卻與題目規(guī)定的內(nèi)容大相徑庭,最后得分非常低??佳杏⒄Z寫作是非開放性的,不可以隨意創(chuàng)作,考生要嚴(yán)格按照題目的要求來展開文章。因此,在寫作時認(rèn)真審題是第一步。審題不僅僅是要仔細(xì)讀題目,還要準(zhǔn)確地理解、提取題目中的信息點(diǎn)和內(nèi)容,明確題目的要求。由于考試的時間有限,因此要求我們在考場上必須快速、準(zhǔn)確地審題。這就需要我們在平時多看一些題目,只有通過練習(xí)才能在考試時熟能生巧。
平時我們可以按照下面的步驟進(jìn)行審題練習(xí):
(1)看題目,劃出其中的核心詞匯,找出作文內(nèi)容的要點(diǎn)以及格式要求等。
(2)想一想這道題考的是什么方面的話題,應(yīng)該從哪方面展開,可以找到什么樣的論據(jù)。
(3)找到范文,與自己的構(gòu)思進(jìn)行對照、檢驗。對于歷年考研英語的作文真題,尤其是近幾年的新題,建議大家動手練一練。僅在腦海中對作文題進(jìn)行構(gòu)思雖然節(jié)省時間,但是很多問題只有通過完整地寫作才能發(fā)現(xiàn)。
2.無話可說
在寫作中考生常常遇到的一大難題就是無話可說,難以下筆。造成這種情況的主要原因是平時積累少。縱觀多年考研英語作文試題,我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn),這些題目幾乎從未涉及到偏、難、怪的話題,比如:2003年的話題:溫室花朵經(jīng)不起風(fēng)雨;2005年的話題:養(yǎng)老“足球賽”;2006年的話題:偶像崇拜等等,2011年的話題:環(huán)保。只要同學(xué)們在日常生活中能多看多想,在考試時就不會無話可說。
我們可以通過看中文的報刊來提升自己思想的深度與廣度,作為寫作時的論點(diǎn)與素材,也可以看英文文章來豐富語言。有不少人都提倡多背文章,但是背書對很多人來說并不是一件容易的事。其實要起到培養(yǎng)語感、積累語言素材的作用,只要多讀多看就可以了。這些文章可以是你感興趣的小短文,也可以是英文教材中的課文。在此,跨考楊老師還向大家推薦另一類材料,那就是閱讀理解的題目,這些題目中的文章內(nèi)容豐富,用語規(guī)范,長短也比較適宜,尤其是歷年考研英語真題中的文章。通過反復(fù)閱讀,不僅有益于作文,也可以幫助我們加深對閱讀理解部分出題方式的感受與體會。雖然這些文章不一定要背,但是要記住,我們對文章內(nèi)容及其表達(dá)方式越熟悉,在需要時它就越能為我所用。甚至在考試時,如果我們在閱讀中看到好的句子,也可以把它劃下來以便在寫作文時借用。
3.結(jié)構(gòu)混亂
結(jié)構(gòu)混亂是寫作最為忌諱的問題。有話可說是寫作最基本的要求,但要寫好作文則必須把話說到點(diǎn)子上,把意思表達(dá)的清楚明白。要做到條理清楚,就要求文章的結(jié)構(gòu)合理。而只有在寫作時理清思路,才能使作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,從而方便評卷老師理解文章的層次。
文章不分段或者分段過多都是不合理的?,F(xiàn)行的考研英語作文題目中一般會有三條要求,考生可以對應(yīng)的寫三段話進(jìn)行回應(yīng)。一篇文章一定要有開頭段與結(jié)尾段。首段不要太長,要開宗明義,明確表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。尾段的主要作用是使文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整,主要為歸納或建議。文章主體部分的每一段都應(yīng)該圍繞一個主題來寫,每一段都要有主題句,而且主題句最好是每段的首句,這樣更有利于避免一段內(nèi)出現(xiàn)多個論點(diǎn),或是出現(xiàn)偏題的現(xiàn)象,同時也可以使全文的邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)更加清楚明了。
良好的文章結(jié)構(gòu)也可以幫助我們有話可說。每篇文章的首段和尾段、每段的首句幾乎都是作為文章的結(jié)構(gòu)而存在的,因此它們的內(nèi)容是相對固定的。并列結(jié)構(gòu)的文章可以用如下幾組短語:on the one hand,on the other hand;for one thing,for another thing;in the first place,in the second/following/next place??in the last place;遞進(jìn)結(jié)構(gòu)的文章可以使用以下這些短語:further/furthermore,mor/moreover,besides/still/also,what is more;轉(zhuǎn)折結(jié)構(gòu)則可以用這樣的結(jié)構(gòu):Il is true??,But??,Also,??對于比較長的段落來說,還可以用一個結(jié)尾句來呼應(yīng)首句的主題,最常用的方法就是同意轉(zhuǎn)述。
4.用詞貧乏,句式單一
“用詞”和“句式”是反映英語作文水平的重要指標(biāo),用詞貧乏,句式單一,很容易讓作文失去“血肉”。因此,要提高語言的駕馭能力,積累仍然是最重要的。前文提到的多讀文章仍然是一個適用的好方法。當(dāng)然,針對考試作文我們還要有一些提升語言運(yùn)用能力的技巧。
在詞匯方面,建議大家多關(guān)注動詞、副詞以及連詞。針對大家常常出現(xiàn)的一個問題:同一個詞不斷被反復(fù)使用,我們可以積累一些重點(diǎn)詞匯的同義詞。有一個比較簡單的方法,就是在word文檔中輸入一個英文單詞,然后點(diǎn)擊鼠標(biāo)右鍵,在“同義詞詞庫”中就可以看到很多表達(dá)相似意思的詞匯。要想學(xué)會用一個詞,就要求我們知道該詞的用法與搭配。不僅動詞的使用存在搭配問題,副詞與連詞也一樣,比如:although和but不能在同一句話中連用。因此,在記單詞時最好是熟悉一些例句。我們不需要花太多時同和精力在偏詞、難詞上,有一些很簡單的小詞(如:take、get等)有眾多的搭配及不同的用法,如能恰當(dāng)使用,一樣能使文章增色不少。詞匯的應(yīng)用貴在準(zhǔn)確,而不在于使用多少高級詞匯。在拿不準(zhǔn)的情況下,建議大家不要亂用不熟悉的詞,以免鬧出笑話。
在句式方面表現(xiàn)出的變化其實并沒有大家想象的那么難,在有限的備考時間中,我們無法花費(fèi)太多的時間去學(xué)習(xí)語法、句法,建議大家能夠在復(fù)習(xí)過程中重點(diǎn)掌握2、3種特殊句式,不過一定要做到運(yùn)用自如。在學(xué)習(xí)時,要注意總結(jié)它的使用規(guī)律,多看多寫。比如,定語從句規(guī)律性就很強(qiáng),不難掌握,而且它的應(yīng)用也很廣泛,幾乎可以把一句話無限加長、變復(fù)雜。另外,向大家推薦一種句式,那就是插入語。插入語用法很多,在句子中的位置比較靈活,也易于學(xué)習(xí)掌握。比如:I think、I hope、I guess等句子結(jié)構(gòu);honestly、surely等
副詞或副詞短語,by the way、in short等介詞或介詞短語,generally speaking等分詞短語以及to tell you the truth、to be honest等不定式短語都可以作為插入語。
最后要提醒大家一點(diǎn),就是在寫作時要使用書面語,不要隨意使用口語,更不要寫口語形式的簡略句。
第三篇:2014考研英語作文寫作需掌握哪些要點(diǎn)
2014考研英語作文寫作需掌握哪些要點(diǎn)?
考研英語學(xué)習(xí)想向來是大部分學(xué)生的一個瓶頸。很多考生總是會感覺對英語的學(xué)習(xí)沒有頭緒,無所適從。即使已經(jīng)掌握了大量的詞匯、語法、句法,對英語整體的理解依舊是學(xué)得平淡無味,甚至產(chǎn)生了心理障礙——會有害怕、恐懼甚至厭惡的反應(yīng)。其實,這都是學(xué)習(xí)中的正常現(xiàn)象。就像我們哪一門課程學(xué)得不好,無論怎么努力就是轉(zhuǎn)不過這個彎,以至于對這門課程的老師都有了一定的心理因素產(chǎn)生,甚至?xí)绊懸惠呑?。那么,如何提高英語作文呢?什么樣子的英語作文才能得到閱卷老師的肯定取得較高的分?jǐn)?shù)呢?下面就讓考研1號的老師們告訴我們考研英語作文在復(fù)習(xí)的過程中,需要注意哪些呢?
一、內(nèi)容切題。內(nèi)容切題是考研英語作文的一項最基本的要求。我們可以總結(jié)160篇的寫作從以下幾個方面入手:認(rèn)真審題;注意安排和設(shè)計段落;根據(jù)文章的中心思想,確定各個段落的主要內(nèi)容和主題句。同學(xué)們在練習(xí)中,認(rèn)為還應(yīng)注意總結(jié)歸納一些常用的句式,形成自己的模板。要求考生切忌將記憶里比較熟悉的句子生拉硬搬,否則會使作文結(jié)構(gòu)松散,意思不明確,甚至?xí)x主題,給人胡亂堆砌的感覺。
二、表達(dá)清楚。要求考生的文章要做到文字連貫、表達(dá)清楚,要做到文字連貫,文章各段落就必須根據(jù)提綱所確立的不同主題句進(jìn)行展開,而且要求各段落的主題句將段落的各個部分緊緊連接在一起,完整而流利地表現(xiàn)出段落所要表現(xiàn)的思想,認(rèn)為這樣使讀者能夠輕松地理解段落中各部分以及段落之間的聯(lián)系,進(jìn)而明白你所要表達(dá)的意思。
三,句式有變化。初學(xué)寫作的同學(xué),由于對英語寫作沒有信心,通常不敢大膽地使用自己已經(jīng)掌握的語言基礎(chǔ)知識,包括英語句法知識。結(jié)果整篇文章都是以主語、謂語、賓語句式為主的簡單句子,認(rèn)為文章也因此顯得刻板,毫無生氣。實際上,認(rèn)為和漢語一樣,英語的句子結(jié)構(gòu)也是豐富多彩,變化多樣的,同樣的一個意義可以用多種句子結(jié)構(gòu)來表達(dá)。所以建議考生適當(dāng)?shù)倪\(yùn)用一些復(fù)合句會給你的文章增色添彩。
四、正確的句子結(jié)構(gòu)和恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯。句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確要求在寫作中使用正確的句子結(jié)構(gòu),選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯,首先要勤學(xué)多練。尤其在練習(xí)寫作的初始階段,要勤查語法書和字典,常用詞和短語進(jìn)行背誦記憶,擴(kuò)大詞匯量,拓展知識面。另外,要求考生深刻理解所背詞語的內(nèi)在含義,并了解他們所使用的語言環(huán)境。復(fù)習(xí)備考時,建議考生請務(wù)必認(rèn)真閱讀關(guān)于寫作方面的論述,模仿并熟記一些常用的過渡詞和英語句型,以及一些英語范文,并切忌自編自造漢語式的英語句式和詞組,認(rèn)為那樣容易養(yǎng)成不良的寫作習(xí)慣。最后,要求一定要注意使用學(xué)習(xí)過的,比較熟悉有把握的句式和詞匯,這樣會提升你的準(zhǔn)確率。
五、卷面整潔。特別強(qiáng)調(diào),寫作屬于主觀性測試,閱卷人對答卷印象的好壞會直接影響到考生的分?jǐn)?shù),而且研究生入學(xué)考試英語寫作的閱卷采用的是總體評分的方法,閱卷人員就總體印象給出獎勵分,而不是按語言點(diǎn)的錯誤數(shù)目扣分,因此,建議大家在復(fù)習(xí)中,也要特別注意卷面的整潔,注意養(yǎng)成良好的寫作習(xí)慣
以上五個方面是寫好任何一篇英語作文的必需。我們不僅要仔細(xì)地領(lǐng)會,還要慎重地對待和學(xué)習(xí),不能一味地尋找學(xué)習(xí)英語寫作的方法卻一味地得不到任何收獲。方法和技巧其實是有很多的,而最關(guān)鍵的是要找到最合適自己的,而以上五點(diǎn)無論任何人都得做注意的,這是客觀的得分方法,而主觀的攝取和舍得就得看個人的態(tài)度和復(fù)習(xí)的進(jìn)度了。當(dāng)然,這些要素的具備并不是通過短期的訓(xùn)練就可以具備的。另外,你也可以參照160篇的寫作題材進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練或者模仿。但是大家一定要相信:只要堅持,肯定就會有所收獲!
第四篇:考研英語寫作
高分范文展示:
The global economy, who is sleeping over that stretcher, like a helpless-sick wreck, is being practiced emergency treatment by worldwidebanking systems, which are trying their best to save the market intensively by cooperation.Conspicuously, that’s a horrible depiction related to/concerning the the world.the top of the list which should never be overlooked.First of all, , as the case of would make its comeback every 10-30 years on the average, so would this time.Furthermore, the overestimation of economic prosperityhas resulted in a great multitude of foams/bubbles in the securities and the realties.gues, who made use of installment policy to speculate in real estate industry, thus, only spending 30% of totally-needed funds in possessing 3 apartments, with the aggregate price over RMB 2 million.Actually, it is not the Day of Judgment.What we are glad to see is the keyword – “cooperation”and we will surely get through this tough period before long.好句寫法:把句子拉長→加修飾:
(1)n.+ who/which/that… 加從句
e.g.Many peopletakeseriously the lifestyle of chasing for luxuries.那些把一個人擁有財產(chǎn)的數(shù)量當(dāng)作評判其社會地位的唯一標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的人們,會很重視追逐奢侈品的生活方式。
(2)n./句子結(jié)尾 + v.-ed(en)(被動)/ v.-ing(主動)加分詞(定語后置)
e.g.youngsters, ranging from/who range from 20 to 30 years old ranging fromwith研究發(fā)現(xiàn),和十年前的5%相比,現(xiàn)在有近24%的年輕白領(lǐng)表示不清楚自己想要什么。
(3)n.+ with + n.(修飾語)加限定詞
e.g.A pretty girl → a girl with an angel-like face and a fairy-like figure
e.g.Nowadays, a lot of riches like buying luxurious autos to show/display their success and existence.當(dāng)今,很多有錢人喜歡通過買豪車來顯示自己的成功和存在。
→These days, withdefined as the typical marks of 句型模仿:
07 閱讀text3最后一段:
From the middle-class family perspective, much of this, understandably, looks far less like an opportunity to exercise more financial responsibility, and a good deal more like a frightening acceleration of the wholescale shift of financial risk onto their already overburdened shoulders.* Looks far less like… a good deal more like… 看起來不像是……而更像是……
模仿→05大作文:養(yǎng)老足球賽
From our conscientious and clear-minded perspective, much of this behavior, undoubtedly, looks far less like like a 依據(jù)我們的良知,毫無疑問,大多數(shù)這種行為并不能提供合理分配贍養(yǎng)老人義務(wù)的機(jī)會,相反,它更像是一種加劇中華傳統(tǒng)美德“尊老愛幼”走向大規(guī)模衰敗的危險行為
大作文——開頭what、中間why/effect、結(jié)尾how
What——虛開頭(首段首句)
(1)坊間流傳多年的所謂經(jīng)典套話
As can be seen in the picture given above…
→ Asgiven above…
e.g.悲觀樂觀 man, passion-sufficient and energy-continuous, is climbing upon a ladder to reach to his shining blue print.(2)直接描述
e.g.12002年作文:美國女孩穿著中國傳統(tǒng)服飾
There is a beautiful American girl, who is standing over there in a Chinese traditional costume, smiling just like a flower.a Chinese traditional costume.e.g.2 2010年作文:文化“火鍋”,既美味又營養(yǎng)
those dishes and cooking ingredients in a Chinese traditional hot-pot, including e.g.2012年作文:悲觀樂觀 What——[描述+寬泛、宏觀的點(diǎn)評](首段第二句)
It is aa significant information that 主題has been in the spotlight in current society主題 has aroused wide concern at any corner of our social consensus.e.g.家庭成員關(guān)系 * 首段第二句和第二段首句應(yīng)該有一定層次感,首段第二句提出一個觀點(diǎn)/現(xiàn)象,第二段首句再將其具體化/細(xì)節(jié)化,直擊中心。
Why/Effect——實開頭:(主題句)+ 原因/影響(內(nèi)部:自身 / 外部:社會、媒體)+ 例子
(1)主題句:
Among the topic concerning主題(抽象), as the depiction/picture shows, the most cardinal tip is related to the issue of主旨中心思想(具體).e.g.家庭關(guān)系
Among the topic concerning the depiction shows, the most e.g.出國留學(xué)人數(shù)/考研人數(shù)/公務(wù)員人數(shù)(2)引出原因
Several factors could weigh heavily for the happening of ____, yet, suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects.To begin with, _____.Additionally, _____.e.g.中國傳統(tǒng)文化/美德的缺失(3)引出影響
It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influences(that)the 現(xiàn)象 gives rise
to.To begin with, … Apart from… ,* 表示導(dǎo)致的短語:Contribute to Result in/trigger/induce/spell/invite
* 表示原因:inducement/incentive
e.g.人人考公務(wù)員 result in.To begin with, … Apart from … , * Apart from用法:Apart from(mentioned above), …(new information)= Besides, … , Google could owe its success to the brilliance of its founders, Sergey Brin and Larry Page.* 表示歸因于:owe/ascribe/attribute… to …
(4)舉例子
A good case blowing my mind now is 人/物, who/which …
e.g.慈善/真正的成功
A good case blowing my mind now is a world well-known man, whose name is Bill Gates, industry after his retirement.* 例子不能單獨(dú)提出,例子前面要有一個論點(diǎn),或者在例子后面要有一個點(diǎn)評和結(jié)論,這樣才是一個完整的舉例(名人名言也同理)。
How——提出建議(Suggestion):規(guī)則、思想、行為
(1)制定規(guī)則:
Lay down/Establish the effective/reliable/available/practical regulations to …呼應(yīng)主題.(敬老)(保護(hù)環(huán)境)(留學(xué))
(2)改變思想:
Deliver the moderate 主題詞 outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.e.g.Deliver the moderate outlook to guide us both physically and mentally.成功觀/生活觀/物質(zhì)觀/世界觀/知識觀/能源觀
(3)規(guī)范行為:
Exert/Implement/Practice the rational 主題詞 manners to live in a much more harmonious/compatible atmosphere/circumstance.circumstance.(4)補(bǔ)充說明方法:名人名言(適用于最后一段提完建議之后)
萬能套話:
As a classic saying goes,千里之行,始于足下
應(yīng)用:提完建議之后
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggerationthat depending on the lack of 主題詞, many citizens/youths would have immersed in such an extreme condition for a long time.Does it have opportunities for us to make achange ? / Is it possible to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely handle/optimize/refrain from … as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.養(yǎng)老 Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely refrain from as long as the above mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.e.g.奢侈浪費(fèi)
Yet, it is very probable to say without any exaggeration that depending on the lack time.Does it have opportunities for us to make a change? Actually, as a classic saying goes, “a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step”.We will surely mentioned proposals would be implemented immediately.特別講解:主體段落的展開(第二段)
(1)單向話題:要么褒,要么貶
原因展開:
The factors contributing to… are vastly complex.Some attribute it to ….Others place the blame on / Others place the high value on ….Still the rest complain of/ attach importance to …
e.g.為什么很多年輕人最終會抽煙
The factors contributing to a big rise in are vastly complex.Some attribute it to(2)雙向話題
e.g.中國傳統(tǒng)風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣的改變是好還是壞
According to my humble perspective, every sword is double-edged.is both positive and negative.To begin with, it goes without denying that the new-changed customs and habits have distinct advantages.On one hand, they On the other hand, they eliminate “culture gap” to Although / Whilebidding farewell to the bygones enjoys considerable merits, it still have their own drawbacks when the following point is taken into account.A good case coming to my mind now isof the Chinese virtues – raising seniors.After all, * 舉例子的時候,要實現(xiàn)從手段到效果的跨越(我們要怎么做來達(dá)到什么效果)
小作文——Simplified(簡明扼要)字?jǐn)?shù):100-120
* 大作文的套話和模板不能用在小作文中!
* 小作文寫作時必須覆蓋每個題目要求的要點(diǎn)
(1)Letter——郵件、信件:生活化/接地氣
a)邀請信
學(xué)術(shù)邀請(充滿敬意):
開頭:正式邀請(含參會時間和主題)
主體:介紹會議安排
結(jié)尾:希望得到正式回復(fù),并確認(rèn)
Dear Professor ___,It is my great honor to extend you our sincere invitation of an academic forum held on 具體時間 in/at 地點(diǎn),which focuses on the topic of主題
The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the 主題involves.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement, including ___.Then at around 時間, 另一個安排.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank
account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.最后期限.落款
范文:
Dear Professor Liu,It is my great honor to extend you my sincere invitation of an academic forum held on Jan.1 in The Nation’s Theatre, which focuses on the topic of Chinese traditional culture.The forum mentioned above will be arranged as followings.Firstly at 8 a.m.will start the opening of the forum, which involves a brief presentation with regard to the prospects as well as plights thatthe promotion of Chinese culture may encounter.Afterwards, there will be another arrangement concerning a micro-movie of the cultural relic exhibition, which will last 15 minutes.Then at 9 to 11 o’clock, you would be highly expected to present us a lecture named “World Needs China”.I really hope you can make it.If it is possible, I would like to ask you for sending me your bank account, and I’ll pay you 40 percent of the total lecture fees as the deposit.Reply, if you please before next weekend.Li Ming,The Supervisor of XXX
b)申請信
學(xué)校組織社團(tuán)評優(yōu),要寫申請。你是學(xué)校創(chuàng)新社(Innovation Agency)的負(fù)責(zé)人,請你代表你們社參與評優(yōu),寫一封申請信。
范文:
Dear Sir or Madame,Innovation Agency – “Most Improved Organization Award”.private tools’ rebuilding the living.building to make it accessible/easy to wheelchairs..Yours faithfully,Li Ming
c)回復(fù)投訴信(對別人投訴的回復(fù)和安撫):承擔(dān)責(zé)任,嘗試挽回
有人投訴你負(fù)責(zé)的勤工助學(xué)中心某學(xué)生表現(xiàn)糟糕,部分原文:
I will not use your temporary staff any more for their disastrous performance.范文:
Dear Sir,temporary administration assistant you received from my organization,.We really care about our clients and that is why we will try to give some explanation about what happened.candidate training.work for you.Yours faithfully,Li Mingd)銷售信(空格處填入產(chǎn)品名)
Last year, we achieved a 215% increase in the sales of our ______.We believe that this happy state of affairs be attributed to two causes.First, we managed to avoid passing on any part of our increased manufacturing costs to our majestic clients.Second, we believe our designs and colors are the most attractive that we have ever produced.And so we are happy to be able to tell you that our new season’s ____ are, if anything, more persuasive than last year’s and our prices will compare very favorably with those of any of our competitors.We believe that your will agree that our samples prove the truth of our claims.We look forward for you to favor us an order.e)現(xiàn)場筆錄證明
You’ve come across a serious crash last night when a taxi heavily knocked down a passerby.Now the police asked you to offer a certificate of witness involving following points:
1.The time and place
2.The process of this emergency
Witness on a Crash
It was 時間 in a 星期 night, 日期, when I was about to enjoy my late snack a first aid to the young and phoned ambulance at once.Signature:Li Ming
(2)Notice——通知、告示
a)失物招領(lǐng)(Lost and Found):信息要有所保留,不能全部透露
Case: You’ve picked up an ED(電子辭典)
1.Time and place
2.The feature of this electronic dictionary(留一個最大特征來核實對方身份)
3.Your information for contact
Lost and Found
On the evening of 日期regular magazine.of this ED the phone number Sincerely yours,Li Ming
第五篇:考研英語寫作
1.圖畫作文
It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(圖畫主題),which is ______________(進(jìn)一步的說明)。He seems to be saying that_______________(給出細(xì)節(jié))。In my opinion,___________(個人闡述)。
This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群體,如the whole of the human race)。Therefore,it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(問題所在)。One the one hand,we must _________________(建議一)。It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(進(jìn)一步說明)。On the other hand,________________(建議二)Only in this way can we___________(展望前景)。
2.圖表作文
The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(圖表主題)。The first thing we notice is that_______________(圖表最大特點(diǎn))。This means that as __________,_________________(進(jìn)一步說明)。
We can see from the statistics given that _______________(圖表細(xì)節(jié)一)。After ving_________(細(xì)節(jié)一中的第一個變化),the _____Ved+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化)。The figures also tells us that_________________________(圖表細(xì)節(jié)二)。(數(shù)據(jù)位置,如In the second column),we can see that ____________accounts for _______(進(jìn)一步描述)。
Judging from these figures,we can draw the conclusion that___________(結(jié)論)。The reason for this,as far as I am concerned is that_____________(給出原因)。/ It is high time that we Ved(發(fā)出倡議)
各位可愛的同學(xué):
考題為應(yīng)用文寫作,所以要注意:
1.條理清楚,按照下列老師所列每種應(yīng)用文的格式把內(nèi)容寫完整。
2.可以先用中文把提綱要求包含的信息都寫下來,再翻譯成英語。這樣可以確保不會把應(yīng)該包括的信息漏掉。
3.不要寫錯誤的單詞,寧可用簡單易懂的單詞代替,注意卷面清潔和工整。預(yù)祝大家都考上心儀的學(xué)校,制定好復(fù)習(xí)計劃,按部就班,調(diào)整好心態(tài)好好復(fù)習(xí),你的心愿一定能實現(xiàn),人生該吃苦該拼搏時就要拼搏!各位加油!
一. 祝賀信(Letter of Congratulations):
祝賀信的寫作與普通信件沒有什么大區(qū)別,但應(yīng)注意:
1.必須包括對收信人的稱謂。
2.必須包括對收信人的祝賀。
3.必須包括寫信人的姓名。
4.措詞真誠、輕松愉快,切忌言過其實。
Sample:
Dear Guojun,I heard that you graduated with high honors from Southeast University last month.I know that all your family must be very proud of you, and as your friend, I feel the same.I wish you greater and more brilliant success in your studies and work in the future.With best wishes.Yours sincerely,Qi Zi
常用祝賀信用語
1.Warm congratulations on your success in passing the entrance examination to … university.熱烈祝賀你考上了……大學(xué)。
2.Please accept our sincere wishes for your…
請接受我們對您……的衷心祝愿。
3.I extend my best wishes for your success.衷心祝愿你成功。
4.May each new year bring you new hope.愿每個新年都給您帶來新的希望。
二、道歉信(Letter of Apology)
Sample:
May 5
Dear Carole,I am very sorry that I missed your phone call yesterday.I shall be at home tomorrow morning.Would you please call me again?
Sincerely yours,Lisa
道歉信常用語句
1.Please accept my sincere apologies.請接受我們誠摯的道歉。
2.Please accept my sincere apologies for the lateness of my birthday greetings.3.
I am sorry I missed your …
對不起,我錯過了你的……
4.I’ve to offer you an apology for not coming to your party.未能參加你的慶祝會,我得向你道歉。
5.Please accept my sincere apologies for…
請接受我對……誠摯的歉意。
Ex.就下述內(nèi)容寫一封道歉信:
你的一位朋友昨天來看望你,你正巧外出未遇,對此你寫信表示歉意,并約他明天再過來。
May 5
Dear Tom,I am very sorry that I was out when you called on me yesterday.Could you come again tomorrow evening as I have something important to discuss with you?
Sincerely yours,Lisa 更多例子:
1.因未能踐約赴宴致歉 Unable to keep one’s promise
Dear [Miss Nancy],Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your [birthday] party [last Saturday], owing to the fact that my [little son] was suddenly taken ill early [that day].Hoping to see you soon.Truly yours,親愛的[南希小姐]:
[小兒][上周六]突然生病,因此未能應(yīng)約赴[生日]宴,殊覺抱歉,希原諒,再見。
祝好!
2.因遲復(fù)來信致歉 Because of answering one’s letter late
Dear [David]:
I am afraid that you will think me unpardonably negligent in not having answered your letter dated [7, December] sooner, but when I have told you the reason, I trust you will be convinced that the neglect was excusable.When your letter arrived, I was just in [Hong Kong].As my family could not forward it to me during my absence, it has been, therefore, lying on my desk until the moment when I took it up.Now the first thing I have to hasten to do is to write to you these few lines to express my deep regret.I enjoyed many pleasant sights during my trip.I shall be pleased to give you an account to of them when I see you next.Yours,親愛的[戴維]:
請原諒我收到您[12月7日]的來信后遲遲未復(fù),現(xiàn)將原因告訴您,相信您一定會諒解的。您的來信到來時,我正巧在[香港],家人無法及時轉(zhuǎn)遞。你的信一直放在我寫字臺上,直到我回到才看見,拖至今天才回信,深表歉意。
這次出去旅行飽覽了許多美麗景色,下次見到您時,將告訴您一切。
祝好!
3.因未能及時還書致歉 Unable to return borrowed book on time
Dear [Kate]:
Excuse me for my long delaying in returning to you your “Robinson Crusoe” which I read through with great interest.I had finished reading the book and was about to return it when [my cousin] came to see me.Never having seen the book, [She] was so interested in it that I had to retain it longer.However, I hope that in view of the additional delight thus afforded by your book, you will overlook my negligence in not returning it sooner.Thanking you again for the loan.Sincerely yours,親愛的[凱特]:
我遲遲未能歸還您的那本《魯濱遜飄流記》,請原諒。該書我讀得津津有味。讀完后,正預(yù)備歸還您時,我的[表妹]來訪,見這本書也感興趣,定要借去一讀。為了讓別人也能分享您那本書所給予的樂趣,我不能及時歸還。我想再延遲些日子奉還,諒您不會介意的。
再次感謝您的慷慨。
祝好!
4.因遺失借書致歉 Because of losing a borrowed book
Dear [Frank]:
I am terribly sorry to tell you that I have lost the valuable book you were so kind to lend me [last week].I read it [everyday] and intended to finish it [next month].[Last night] when I came to my room, it was nowhere to be found.I will try to recover it as soon as possible.If I fail to find it, I will get a new book for you.But I am afraid it can never take the place of the old one.Old books are like old friends.Once lost, they can never be replaced.They are connected with cherished associations which the new ones can never have.And for this irrecoverable loss, I am to blame.I was so careless with my things.This is a warning to me to be more careful in the future.Yours truly,親愛的[弗蘭克]:
很抱歉,[上星期]您借給我的那本書竟遺失了。我[每天]都在看,準(zhǔn)備[下個月]看完。[昨晚]我回到我的臥室,到處也找不到那本書。我將盡力找到它。萬一找不到,我只好買一本新的還您。
但是,新書恐怕不能代替那本舊書吧!舊書跟舊友一樣,一旦失去就不能再得。舊書與往事相連,這種不可彌補(bǔ)的損失,皆由我起。我對待一切太大意了,這次給我一個警告,叫我以后要小心。
三、慰問信
慰問信應(yīng)寫得真切,注意措辭,對輕病或者小損失,慰問信應(yīng)寫得輕松一些。相反,對嚴(yán)重病情或重大損失,信就應(yīng)該寫得深沉一些。慰問信寫時應(yīng)注意:
1.寫給受傷人的信要簡短,中肯。信中不必問詢事故發(fā)生的過程、原因、見證人等。
2.慰問信中應(yīng)寫一些被慰問者喜歡或熟悉的事物,如病人的愛好、興趣等,以使病人得到寬慰。
1.向朋友問候 A letter of inquiring after someone’s health
Dear [John]:
I am extremely sorry to hear that your illness, which we had thought was clearing up, has become more serious, and that your have had to go into hospital.Let us hope that it will be for only a very short time, and that you will soon be out and about again.Everybody here sends his best wishes to you for a quick recovery.With kind regards,Yours sincerely,親愛的[約翰]:
聽說你病了,我深感不安。原來我們還以為您的病情有所好轉(zhuǎn),事實上卻反而加重,而不得不住進(jìn)了醫(yī)院。但愿這是短時間的,很快不會恢復(fù)健康。這里每個人都祝愿您早日痊愈。
特此問候
2.問候朋友的母親 Inquiring after the health of a friend’s mother
Dear [Mr.Wang],I felt very sorry indeed when I heard of [your mother]’s illness, and am anxious to know how [she] is of late.Under a separate cover I am sending [her a box of assorted biscuits] with my best regards.Sincerely yours 親愛的[王先生]:
聽說您的母親身體欠安,深表憂慮。不知令堂近況如何,實為惦念。隨信另寄上[什錦餅干一盒],并致以最良好的問候。
您忠誠的
[吳洋]
3.祝賀朋友病愈 Congratulations on someone’s recovery
Dear [Jane]:
I learn, with very great pleasure, that the illness which has so cruelly caused great anxiety among your relatives and all those who know you has changed for the better and that you are now recovering, for which I therefore desire to congratulate you warmly.I hope that you will soon be completely restored to health.Yours sincerely
親愛的[簡]:
在您患病的這一期間內(nèi),親戚朋友無不為你掛慮,聽到你的病已有好轉(zhuǎn),并已逐漸痊愈,十分快慰,特地向你祝賀。
望你早日完全痊愈。
4.慰問喪偶的朋友 A letter of inquiring to those who lost their husband or wife
Dear [Mrs.Harper],I would like to express my sorrow at the recent death of your [husband].In the long time it was my privilege to enjoy [Professor of Harper]’s friendship.I found [him] a sincere and helpful associate, with whom it was a pleasure [to work].The knowledge that my thoughts are with you at his time will, I hope, be of some comfort to you.Truly yours
親愛的[哈珀女士]:
獲悉你的[丈夫]最近逝世的消息,深表遺憾。
長期以來,能與[哈珀教授]保持友誼是我的榮幸。[哈珀教授]是一位我最樂于與其一道[工作]的忠實而有幫助的朋友。
但愿我此時的問候,能給您帶來一些安慰。
四、傳真
傳真是通過傳真機(jī)傳遞的信函,大多為業(yè)務(wù)信函。企事業(yè)單位都有專用的傳真紙,紙上面印有現(xiàn)成的傳真格式,擬發(fā)傳真時按格式填寫即可。下面為一種常見的傳真格式:
發(fā)傳真人單位名稱、地址=電話和傳真號碼、電子郵件網(wǎng)址
TO:(收傳真人單位)
DATE(發(fā)送傳真日期)
ATTN:(Attention, 收傳真部門或個人姓名)
FAX NO:(傳真號)
FROM:(發(fā)傳真部門或個人姓名)
PAGE(S):(所發(fā)傳真頁數(shù))
RE:(Regarding, 傳真內(nèi)容標(biāo)題)
(傳真信函):
稱呼語:
信體:
客套結(jié)語:
署名:
五、請求信
Example 1.1903 Huashan Road
Shanghai 200030 July 8, 1995
Dear Sirs,I wish to enroll your intensive English program before I attend a university in the fall of 1996.Your sending me application materials at your earliest convenience will be greatly appreciated.Sincerely yours,Wang Xiaoping
Example 2.Wang Xiaoping
1903 Huashan Road
Shanghai 200030
July 6,1998
Dear Sirs,I want to pursue a Master’s degree in Electrical Engineering at your university.My intended date of entrance is Spring, 1999.Would you please send me the application forms for admission?
Sincerely yours
Wang Xiaoping
六、布告(Announcement):布告的寫作和便條一樣,也比較簡單。只要注意以下幾點(diǎn)即可:
1.在正文上方的中間位置應(yīng)該注明布告的性質(zhì)。2.
正文中簡單明了地說明布告的事宜。3.
正文右下方應(yīng)該注明發(fā)布告的單位。4.
發(fā)布告的日期可以省略。Sample:
Lost and Found A lady has picked a wrist watch in the shopping center and turned it over to our office.The owner of the wrist watch may come to claim it with his or her identification card.Lost and Found Office
七、(Notice):英文通知的寫作也可采用不同形式。有的是采用句子的形式予以陳述,而有的則只做以簡單的羅列。一般應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn): 1.必須包括notice字樣,而且每個字母都應(yīng)采用大寫。
2.內(nèi)容必須包括時間、地點(diǎn)、事宜和通知對象等。表達(dá)須準(zhǔn)確,措詞也要較正式。
3.必須包括寫通知的個人或者單位的稱謂,而且一般都放在通知的右下腳。
4.必須包括寫通知的日期。
Sample:
NOTICE
May 4, 2003 Mr.Wang, the general manager of Shanghai Golden Palm Computer System Limited Company, will give a lecture on Modern Information Management Model at 6:30 p.m.on March 12.The one-and-a-half-hour lecture will be held in the Multi-media Lecture Room.Students of Information Management are invited to attend the lecture.Information Management Department
Example 擬一張請計算機(jī)系的學(xué)生于10月5號星期三下午1:30到系會議室聽關(guān)于環(huán)境保護(hù)報告的通知。
NOTICE
Oct.2, 2004 All students of the Computer Department are requested to meet in the department conference room at 1:30 p.m.on Wednesday, October5, to hear a report on environmental protection.The Computer Department Office
八.便條 基本寫作格式
便條內(nèi)容和類型不盡相同,可以靈活變通。但各類便條必須包括以下幾個基本要素;1)Date:便條日期2)Salutation:稱呼3)Body:正文4)Signature:署名
樣例
收條:即收到錢物之后,給交錢或送物人寫張字據(jù),說明已經(jīng)收到某物,可留作證據(jù)。條據(jù)上需寫明錢物名稱和數(shù)量、立據(jù)人及日期。不得涂改。
Jan.23rd,2003Received from Student, Wang Zihao one hundred yuan only for this months tuition fee.Li ManFor the Finance Office ofForeign Language Institute
欠條;留下字據(jù),表示欠某人某物。條據(jù)上需寫明錢物名稱和數(shù)量、立據(jù)人及日期。不得涂改。
Sept.16th, 2002Borrowed from the Foreign Language Department Reference Library three books as follows:A copy of History and Anthology of English Literature by Wu WeirenA copy of A Survey of American Literature by Chang YaoxinA copy of World Literature by Jiang Chengen
Wu Zhuo
For the Office of
Social Science Department
留言:用書面留下要說的話。留言涉及的方面很多,包括約會,通知,請求等任何可用便條留下的口信。
TuesdayDear Li,As the Spring Festival is drawing near, Im very glad to invite you to come to a dinner party with several other friends of ours.Im sure we will have a very happy time and enjoy ourselves thoroughly.Would you like to come on time at 5:00 p.m.today, to Room 6 of Lijing Hotel?
Yours always, Jiayang
請假條:往往指由于生病或特殊情況不能親自當(dāng)面請假,用假條的形式告假。所以,請假條大多是病假條??梢宰詫懀部烧埶舜鷮?。寫假條最重要的是說明原因和請假的期限。
Jan.10thDear Ms.Jiang,I am terribly sorry that I shall be unable to attend this mornings two periods of English Class due to a bad cold and high fever.Enclosed is a certificate from the doctor who said I must stay in bed for a few days.I will go back to school as soon as I recover.Yours respectfully,Tian Ye
常用句子I shall feel obliged if you will favor me with a call at your earliest convenience.如您方便,請早日來電,我將不勝感激。
Delighted!Will call at 2 p.m.tomorrow.來條收悉,定于明天下午兩點(diǎn)拜訪。
Encl.: Doctors Certificate of Advice.附;醫(yī)生證明I shall be bery happy to call at your house at 6:30 this everying.Until then,...我定于今晚6:30去你家,望等候。
Upon receiving this note, please come to my office.見條后,請立即來我辦公室。
Mr.Li stands in urgent need of your service.李先生急需你的幫助。
I happen to be in urgent need of 200 yuan.我因有急事,需要200元。
Yours note with an admission ticket enclosed is much appreciated.留言和一張入場券均已收到,不勝感激。
Im very grateful to you for your kind invitation, and Im sure to come to see your concert.承蒙邀請觀看你們的音樂會,我一定按時到場。
Please accept this little figt as a small token of my esteen for you.奉上這小小的禮物,以表達(dá)我對您的崇高敬意。
結(jié)束語I trust my absence will not cause you any serious inconvenience.望我的缺席不會給你帶來太大的不便。
Please favor me with an early reply.敬請早復(fù)。
Hoping that the matter will be dealt with as soon as possible.希望能及早處理此事。
Please give an extension of leave for three days.請準(zhǔn)予續(xù)假三天為盼。
九、簡歷(resume)簡 歷 1 結(jié)構(gòu)要點(diǎn): 簡歷是個人經(jīng)歷的書面表達(dá)形式,應(yīng)包含個人信息、教育背景和工作經(jīng)歷。有時還可包含事業(yè)目標(biāo)(objective或career objective)、其他經(jīng)歷(activities)、獲獎情況(awards)和特長(special skills)等。舉例:Suppose you are going to graduate from the university.Write a resume in about 100 words to apply for a job.Do not use your own name, using “Li Mei” instead.Sample:
RESUME Personal Data: Name:Li Mei Sex:Female Address: Room 602, Dormitory Building 12,Wuhan University Wuhan, Hubei, 430021 Date of Birth:June 16, 1983 Place of Birth:Zunyi, Guizhou Telephone:(027)87273548, *** Email:angellimei@gmail.com Hobbies:painting, reading, Internet surfing, dancing Foreign Languages:English Objective: To work as a regional sales representative who is responsible for sales activity and coordination Education:
2002 ~ Present Studying at Wuhan University Bachelor of Arts in finance 1999 ~ 2002 Studying at Zunyi No.1 High School 1996 ~ 1999 Studying at Zunyi No.7 Junior High School Work Experience: None Special Skills and Technical Qualifications:
I am professionally trained in finance and economics.In addition to Mandarin, I can speak, write and read English fluently.I had two parttime jobs in Taiping Company and Zhida company, which helped me gain some sales operation knowledge and sales plan-ning experience
簡 歷
語言注意點(diǎn): 簡歷忌過長或用詞空泛,提供的信息應(yīng)有用、如實,編排須整齊有系統(tǒng)。
舉例:Suppose you are Tan Wen, English teacher at Taiyuan Institute of Technology.Write a resume in about 100 words to apply for a new job in another city.Sample: Tan Wen Taiyuan Institute of Technology Taiyuan, Shanxi Province telephone:(0351)6523787 Experience 2000 ~ Present Working as a lecturer of English at Taiyuan Institute of Technology Teaching undergraduate(nonEnglish majors)intensive reading, extensive reading, listening, writing Teaching graduate(nonEnglish majors)writing Education 1997 ~ 2000 Studying at Shanghai Teacher's University Master of Arts in American Studies 1993 ~ 1997 Studying at Shanxi University Bachelor of Arts in English Language and Literature 1990 ~ 1993 Studying at Mianyang Senior High School 1987 ~ 1990 Studying at Mianyang No.5 Junior High School Personal Data Sex: Female Date of Birth: June 27, 1976 place of Birth: Mianyang, Sichuan, China Marital Status: Married, without Child Health: Excellent
十、申請信
結(jié)構(gòu)要點(diǎn)申請信是向收信人提出某個請求的信件,包含三個部分: 1. 提出請求; 2. 說明原因; 3. 請求回復(fù)并表示感謝。
舉例:Write a letter in about 100 words to apply for a scholarship from a foreign university.Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir, I wish to apply for admission to your department as a graduate student.I am writing to ask whether it will be possible for you to grant me a full scholarship.I have just graduated from Shanghai University of Finance and Economics and got my bachelors degree last month.During my four years in the university, I have passed all the compulsory courses of study with high marks.Furthermore, I have chosen a wide range of optional courses such as literary, history and public speaking to widen my horizon and sharpen my mind.My father, a professor of English in Nanjing University, has been teaching me English since I was a child.So I believe I will not have any language difficulties while learning in your country.I would be most grateful if my request receives your favorable consideration.Thank you in advance and look forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 語言注意點(diǎn)申請信開篇應(yīng)點(diǎn)明主題,語言簡練。接著說明做此申請的原因,即自己所具備的申請條件,這一部分需重點(diǎn)明確,論述充分。最后請求回復(fù)并表示感謝時,應(yīng)采用禮貌、誠懇的措辭。
舉例:Write a letter in about 100 words to apply for a membership in a community service team.Do not sign your own name at the end of your letter, using “Li Ming” instead.Dear Sir, I have heard that a service team which aims to help the old and the handicapped will be organized in our community.I am very interested in it and want to join the team.I now study in Tongji University and my parents live here.It is known to all that it is a virtue to help others in need.As a college student, I am eager to do something for the society.Helping others is meaningful in that we not only bring others convenience and strength but also gain pleasure and satisfaction ourselves.Therefore, please allow me to join the team.I will certainly try my best.Yours sincerely, Li Ming