第一篇:2013高考英語書面表達(dá)講義及訓(xùn)練(15)及參考:健康幸福話題作文
2013高考英語書面表達(dá)講義及訓(xùn)練(15)及參考范文:健康幸福話題作文
生活中沖突時(shí)有發(fā)生。假設(shè)你班同學(xué)蘇華和李江打籃球時(shí)發(fā)生爭執(zhí),導(dǎo)致關(guān)系緊張。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合此事,并根據(jù)以下提示,用英語寫一篇短文,向?qū)W校英文報(bào)“Happy Teens冶專欄投稿。
簡要描述事情的經(jīng)
過
分析發(fā)生沖突的原
因
談?wù)劚苊鉀_突的做
法
注意: 1.對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯。
2.詞數(shù)150 左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷或感想,提出至少兩種做法)1.遇事不夠冷靜2.…… 打籃球、碰撞、爭執(zhí),等等
3.作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.【參考范文】
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball.Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.To be honest, it was Su爺s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things.They cared too much about winning and losing.As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying aharmonious life.It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society.Instead of blaming each other, we should
communicate more and put ourselves in others’place.Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate.We must learn to handle
conflicts calmly andwisely.********************************************************結(jié)束
例1: 根據(jù)下面提示,寫一篇《財(cái)富與快樂》的短文。
(1)一些人認(rèn)為財(cái)富能帶來快樂。
(2)另一些人認(rèn)為錢多了不是一件好事。
(3)提出自己的看法。
注意:單詞數(shù)120個(gè)左右。
Wealth and Happiness
Some people think wealth can bring happiness to them.It is true that most of them try to acquire wealth by means of honest labor.They work hard and overcome many difficulties.After doing this, they feel very happy and pleased.Even their spending money is a kind of happiness。
But some people believe wealth can't bring them happiness.For example, when one gets a fortune, the family members will come from different parts of the country and try to share the wealth with him.And afterwards, they will quarrel with one another, trying to share more.And sometimes even appear bloody fight and killing.What a terrible result!
In my opinion, I think there is no doubt that wealth brings happiness, especially in the modern society.If you have money you can lead a comfortable and colorful life.But we should take a proper attitude towards wealth.Remember: money is not everything。
例2:
最近,你班同學(xué)展開了一場討論,主題是:Wealth & Health。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提供的信息,寫一篇100詞左右的文章,介紹一下你們討論的情況。
一些人認(rèn)為財(cái)富更重要一些人認(rèn)為健康更重要
1.沒有錢萬萬不行
2.想辦法多掙錢
1.健康是本錢
2.要愛惜身體
個(gè)人看法:更看重健康。身體不好,錢再多也無濟(jì)于事。
Wealth & Health
Which is more important, wealth or health? Different people have different opinions.Some people prefer wealth, holding that money can not bring everything, but without it, one can do nothing.In order to accumulate more money they can do anything.However, other people regard health as more important.Once health is lost, it is no use having a lot of money.As far as I am concerned, I love wealth, but I value health more.Everybody wants to live a happy life.So they try their best to earn money which can ensure they lead a comfortable life, but if happiness and comfort are achieved at the cost of their health, how can they be happy? Without health money becomes meaningless.In my opinion, no one agrees that a wealthy person without good health can be happy.So, just do our best to keep healthy.*****************************************************結(jié)束
第二篇:2013高考英語書面表達(dá)講義及訓(xùn)練(13)及參考表格作文
2013高考英語書面表達(dá)講義及訓(xùn)練(13)及參考范文:表格作文(1)(25 min.)(2012·師大附中二模)某英語報(bào)向中學(xué)生征集關(guān)于開展研究性學(xué)習(xí)的文章,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示,用英語寫一篇介紹你校和你們小組研究性學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)的短文。全校研究性學(xué)習(xí)所涉及的主題
當(dāng)?shù)仫L(fēng)俗習(xí)慣
人民生活變化
環(huán)境保護(hù)
??
你們小組的研究課題
家鄉(xiāng)河流的污染問題:
1.發(fā)現(xiàn)三大污染源:
工廠廢水、生活污水、農(nóng)民使用的農(nóng)藥;
2.建議:??
感想與體會(huì)
??
注意:
1.開頭語已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,但不要逐條翻譯; 3.詞數(shù):不少于120。
參考詞匯: agricultural chemicals Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school.We are very interested in this kind of activity.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】One possible version:
Nowadays we are required to do research work apart from the lessons we learn in school.We are very interested in this kind of activity.We have a variety of subjects to choose from, such as local customs, changes of people's living conditions,and protection of the environment.Last term our group made a study of the pollution in a river in my hometown.The river used to be clean, but now it is dirty and the water gives off a terrible smell.Our research shows that the river is mainly polluted by the waste water from the factories.Waste water from people's daily life and agricultural chemicals also lead to the pollution of the river.To deal with the problem, we call for people to be aware of how serious the situation is and do something about it.Through our research,not only did we gain practical experience, but also we developed various abilities.We find such research very valuable and helpful.**********************************************************結(jié)束(2)(25 min.)假定你在參加一場英語辯論賽。你是正方辯手,試用英語簡要地表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。詞數(shù):不少于120。主題
Shall a senior student take a parttime job in holidays?
觀點(diǎn)
1.高中生重視功課,而對(duì)社會(huì)知道甚少。
2.假期做兼職是很好的社會(huì)實(shí)踐。
3.通過書本學(xué)到的東西不如通過實(shí)踐學(xué)到的東西有效。
4.通過社會(huì)實(shí)踐,我們可以在知識(shí)和能力兩個(gè)方面取得進(jìn)步。
5.假期做兼職的報(bào)酬或多或少對(duì)家里有些幫助。
結(jié)論
高中生??
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】One possible version: Dear friends,Here are my points.We students of today have to pay much attention to our lessons and know little of society though it's not our fault.A holiday is the best time to make up for that.Taking a parttime job is a good form of social practice.What is learned in books can't have the same deep effect on us as what is learned through experience.In social practice, we can surely make progress in both knowledge and ability.Besides, taking a parttime job, we may get paid more or less to help our family.Thus, I will say a senior school student should take a parttime job in holidays, if possible, of course.***********************************************************結(jié)束(3)(25 min.)(2012·師大附中月考)假如你是紅星村的李華,家鄉(xiāng)人民決定開發(fā)農(nóng)業(yè)旅游,邀請(qǐng)你參與策劃紅星生態(tài)山莊旅游項(xiàng)目,并請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語文章向旅游者推介紅星生態(tài)山莊。地理位置
長沙市以北35公里處,占地面積15平方公里;北面靠山,湘江從村邊經(jīng)過
主要產(chǎn)品
茶葉,綠色蔬菜,魚等
娛樂休閑項(xiàng)目
釣魚,??
生態(tài)旅游有利
條件(不少于兩條)??
參考詞匯: ecological village 注意:自擬標(biāo)題,詞數(shù)不少于120。
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】One possible version: A village like no other Do you feel tired after a week's hard work in the noisy city? Why not visit Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself?
Red Star Ecological Village is a beautiful and quiet village, located 35 kilometers north of Changsha, which only takes approximately 30 minutes' drive from the center of the city.It covers an area of 15 kilometers.It is a place where you can see many big pine trees in the mountains in the north, where you can see a lot of ducks on the Xiangjiang River, and where you can join the villagers picking up green tea leaves and growing vegetables in the garden.If you are a fishing lover, you can go fishing in the pond and barbecue what you get in the water under the big trees.It is really fantastic to enjoy your lunch in the open air with your family and friends, talking and laughing.Whether you are looking to try green food or enjoy quiet country life, Red Star Ecological Village is the place for you.Come to Red Star Ecological Village and try something different to relax yourself.***********************************************************結(jié)束(4)(25 min.)實(shí)現(xiàn)有效的溝通,建立良好的人際關(guān)系,不僅要善于言表,更要學(xué)會(huì)傾聽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息,寫一篇題為“Being a Good Listener”的英文演講稿。為何傾聽
表示尊重,增進(jìn)理解,建立良好的人際關(guān)系
誰來傾聽
家長傾聽孩子
理解孩子,消除代溝,??
老師傾聽學(xué)生
了解學(xué)生,滿足需求,??
同學(xué)相互傾聽
增進(jìn)友誼,互幫互學(xué),??
怎樣傾聽
請(qǐng)考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容,列舉兩至三點(diǎn)。
注意:
1.對(duì)所給要點(diǎn),逐一陳述,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,不要簡單翻譯。2.詞數(shù)不少于120。
3.演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。
________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 【參考范文】One possible version: Good afternoon, everyone,The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”.
Good listening can always show respect, promote understanding, and improve interpersonal relationship.Many people suggest that parents should listen more to their children, so they will understand them better, and find it easy to narrow the generation gap;teachers should listen more to their students, then they can meet their needs better, and place themselves in a good relationship with their students;students should listen more to their classmates, thus they will help and learn from each other, and a friendship is likely to be formed.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen to others.Show your respect and never stop others till they finish their talk;show you are interested by a supportive silence or a knowing smile;be openminded to different opinions even though you don't like them.In a word, good listening can really enable us to get closer to each other.Thank you for your listening!********************************************************結(jié)束
第三篇:2013高考英語二輪書面表達(dá)(話題為主)訓(xùn)練(13)及參考
2013高考英語二輪書面表達(dá)(話題為主)訓(xùn)練(13)及參考范文
1.書面表達(dá)(滿分25分)(注意:在試題卷上作答無效)
假定你是李華,正在一所英國學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)暑期課程,遇到一些困難,希望得到學(xué)校輔導(dǎo) 中心(Learning Center)的幫助。根據(jù)學(xué)校規(guī)定,你需書面預(yù)約,請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)寫一封信: 1.本人簡介; 2.求助內(nèi)容: 3.約定時(shí)間;
4.你的聯(lián)系方式(Email:lihua@1236.com;Phone:12345678)。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。
Dear Sir/Madam, Look forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
2.第三節(jié)書面表達(dá)(滿分30分)
【預(yù)測試題12】畢業(yè)感言——【提綱類】【演講稿應(yīng)用文】
假如你是高三學(xué)生李華,英語老師要求你在畢業(yè)典禮上做一個(gè)簡短的演講,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇演講稿。
1、最難忘的一次經(jīng)歷;
2、所取得的優(yōu)異成績:
3、你對(duì)未來的展望。
(半)開放作文是一種傳統(tǒng)的“書面表達(dá)”限制更少,留給考生自由發(fā)揮空間更多的書面表達(dá)題型。這樣的考試模式注重突出語言的應(yīng)用、突出在語境中對(duì)學(xué)生語言能力的考查。與傳統(tǒng)的“書面表達(dá)”相比,這種“開放作文”對(duì)學(xué)生構(gòu)思、表達(dá)、寫作以及語句的組織應(yīng)用能力有了更高的要求。它要求考生在寫開放作文時(shí),要注意審題,盡可能做到內(nèi)容充實(shí)、邏輯清晰、表達(dá)得體、語言準(zhǔn)確。這樣的考試模式能讓考生發(fā)揮出自己的特長,有利于高校選拔優(yōu)秀學(xué)生。
對(duì)于(半)開放作文,同學(xué)們寫作時(shí)要注意以下事項(xiàng):
1、認(rèn)真審題,即:審語境、審人稱、審時(shí)態(tài);
2、要緊扣主題,符合要求,首尾呼應(yīng):
3、注意寫作對(duì)象和語言風(fēng)格,要有讀者意識(shí);
4、要進(jìn)行細(xì)致描寫,有細(xì)節(jié)的支撐;
5、要有主次之分,詳略得當(dāng):
6、要力求內(nèi)容新穎,必須符合邏輯;
7、要做到思想健康,積極向上。主題演講型
Ladies and gentleman, Today I will talk about.(演講主題).As you know, there are many advantages of(演講主題)
First of all,.(分要點(diǎn)一)..(展開一句或兩句).Besides,.(分要點(diǎn)二).,(展開一句或兩句).Last but not least,(分要點(diǎn)三)..(展開一句或兩句)
In a word(In my opinion/Personally),(重申主題/總結(jié)主題).Hello, everyone!I'm glad to make a speech here.When I look back on the past three years, what
第四篇:2013高考英語二輪書面表達(dá)(話題為主)訓(xùn)練(17)及參考
2013高考英語二輪書面表達(dá)(話題為主)訓(xùn)練(17)及參考范文
書面表達(dá)(滿分35分)
最近,某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開設(shè)了“After-class Activities”的欄目,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件,并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參加課外活動(dòng)。1.你校開展課外活動(dòng)的情況;
2.你參加過的課外活動(dòng)及給你帶來的益處 3.為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)提出建議 3.為學(xué)校開展課外活動(dòng)提出建議 注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.文中不得提及人名、校名及地名‘ 3.稿件的開頭以為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))
After-class Activities Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.【預(yù)測試題10】孩子與父母交流——【提綱類】【演講稿應(yīng)用文】
假如你校要舉辦一次主題為“How to Communicate with our parents”的英語演講比賽,請(qǐng)你用英語寫一篇演講稿。要點(diǎn)如下:
1、尊重并信任父母:
2、常與父母聊天;
3、換位思考問題。
寫作時(shí),應(yīng)注意:
1、參考詞匯:換位思考put oneself in another's shoes
2、有時(shí)提綱類作文所提供的要點(diǎn)順序并非就是寫作時(shí)的順序,因此,寫作前先將要點(diǎn)標(biāo)出,并按照一定的邏輯關(guān)系,如時(shí)間順序、空間順序、事件發(fā)生的先后順序等,把這些要點(diǎn)排列并整理好。
3、提綱類作文不是簡單地把漢語提示轉(zhuǎn)換成英文,不能簡單地直譯??忌闷綍r(shí)自己最有把握的單詞、短語和句型,圍繞主題,將意思完整清楚地表達(dá)出來。在遇到自己想不起來或找不著相應(yīng)的英語詞匯或句型時(shí),學(xué)會(huì)用相近的句子來表達(dá)。寫作模板
一、問題解決型
In recent days, we have to face a problem A, which is becoming more and more serious.First.(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second,.(舉例進(jìn)一步說明).We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,(解決方法一).For another,(解決方法二).Finally,Personally, I believe that.(我的解決方法).I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because.(帶來的好處).
第五篇:18高考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及十份高考英語書面表達(dá)
18高考英語作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)及十份高考英語書面表達(dá)
1.感謝信
假設(shè)你是李華,梁教授去年六月推薦你去悉尼大學(xué)深造,現(xiàn)在你已經(jīng)被悉尼大學(xué)化學(xué)學(xué)院錄取,請(qǐng)寫封信向梁教授表示感謝。【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University.Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help.You not only wrote a recommendation(推薦)for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters.It is your unreserved(無保留的)help that enables me to obtain this splendid(極好的)opportunity of further education.For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate(回報(bào))your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.Yours truly, Zhang Ying 2.道歉信
假設(shè)你是李華,你上星期參觀倫敦,當(dāng)時(shí)你爸的一個(gè)朋友Rogers先生對(duì)你照顧有加,請(qǐng)寫封信表達(dá)你對(duì)他的感謝。【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear Sarah, I am terribly sorry to tell you that I am unable to attend your birthday party next Thursday evening.That is owing to(因?yàn)椋﹖he fact that(同位語從句)my younger brother suddenly fell ill and was taken to a hospital this morning.I have to go there immediately and take care of him.As told by the doctor in charge, it will take around five days for him to recover and I have asked my boss for a leave.I really regret that I cannot go to celebrate your birthday personally and would miss the perfect chance of enjoying myself with all our old friends.I have chosen a small gift for you and will send it to you tomorrow to show my best wishes.Besides, please give my regards to our friends when you meet them at the party.Cordially,(sincerely)
Li Hua 3.申請(qǐng)信
假定你是李華,將于今年七月從新星外語學(xué)校畢業(yè)。你從報(bào)紙上得知B & B公司要招聘一名英文秘書,你很感興趣,要寫一封求職信,包括下列要點(diǎn): 1.年齡:182.
2.學(xué)習(xí)情況:班級(jí)前5,英語口語好
3.興趣和特長:打字快,喜歡閱讀,聽音樂 4.性格特點(diǎn):積極向上 注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行為連貫; 3.開頭語和結(jié)束語己為你寫好?!緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】
Dear Sir/ Madam, I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary.I’m really interested in this position so I am writing to apply for it.I’m18 years old and will graduate from Xin xing Foreign Languages School this July.I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students.I’m good at English, especially spoken English.I often use the computer and I type very fast.In my spare time, I read a lot.Poems are my favorite.I enjoy music very much too.Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities.Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.I hope I may be granted(授予)an interview, when I can explain my qualifications(資格,條件)more fully.I am looking forward to your reply.Sincerely/Yours, Li Hua 4.通知
假如你是校學(xué)生會(huì)主席。新年即將到來,為了幫助你校的外國留學(xué)生更好地了解中國文化,學(xué)生會(huì)將為他們舉辦一個(gè)新年晚會(huì)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,用英語向他們發(fā)出口頭通知。時(shí)間:下周五6:00—8:00 地點(diǎn):教學(xué)樓101室
內(nèi)容:1.唱中國歌
2.比賽用筷子
3.學(xué)習(xí)包餃子
注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)?!緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】
Good afternoon, everyone.May I have your attention, please?
I’m the chairman of the Students’ Union.As the New Year is around the corner(即將到來), we are going to hold a New Year party for you, which is intended to enable you to have a better understanding of Chinese culture.During the party, not only can you sing a Chinese song, but you will also compete with each other to see how skilled you are at using chopsticks.What’s more, you’ll learn at the party how to make dumplings.Sounds great.Doesn’t it? The party is scheduled(計(jì)劃于)in Room 101of the
Teaching Building from 6:00 p.m.to 8:00 p.m.next Friday.Please make sure you won’t miss it.Thank you for your attention.5.邀請(qǐng)信
你們班同學(xué)打算周六去爬香山。請(qǐng)給外教Chris寫一封英文信,邀請(qǐng)他參加此次活動(dòng)。具體內(nèi)容如下:
1.時(shí)間:8am—5 pm; 2.集合地點(diǎn):校門口; 3.交通工具:公交車;
4.攜帶物品:雨具,午餐,相機(jī)。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于50;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear Chris,I’m writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class.We are supposed together at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am sharp.The bus will serve as our transportation.We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picnic lunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch.At about 2:00 pm.We will go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about5.00pm.You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain.Please spare some time to join us.Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement.Yours, Joe 6.建議信
假定你是李華,你所喜愛的Global Mirror周報(bào)創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見.請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫封信,內(nèi)容主要包括: 1.說明你是該報(bào)的忠實(shí)讀者
2.說明該報(bào)優(yōu)點(diǎn):1)兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞
2)介紹名人成功故事
3.提出建議:
刊登指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右,開頭語己為你寫好;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫?!緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear Editor-in-Chief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!I’m a regular reader of your newspaper.I like it so much that I hardly miss any copy.There are many advantages of Global Mirror.Firstly, Global Mirror covers both national and international news.By simply turning the pages, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad.Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them.In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.As a young student, I wish that I can be a master of English language.Therefore, I suggest that Global Mirror provide articles about English learning for us.Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular.Thank you for your time!
Sincerely yours, Li Hua 7.求助信
假設(shè)你是李華,你的美國朋友Tom上個(gè)月來到北京學(xué)習(xí)。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學(xué)生英語演講比賽(speech contest),你在資料搜集、語言運(yùn)用等方面遇到了困難。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom寫一封電子郵件: 1.詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況; 2.談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請(qǐng)Tom幫忙; 3.告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他。注意: 1.詞數(shù):120—150;
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫?!緝?yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear Tom,How is it going these days? I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing.Have you got used to the life in China? Are you enjoying your life? I hope you are.Let me tell you a piece of good news: I’m going to take part in an English speech contest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation.So I’m busy preparing for it.But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English word to express my thoughts.Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation(語調(diào)).Of course, as a native English speaker, you can give me some suggestions.In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest.I’m sure we will have a wonderful time together in Beijing!I can hardly wait to see you!I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua 8.投訴信
你是李華,兩周前你從網(wǎng)上一套書蟲系列讀物(Bookworm Series)昨天才到貨,且包裝破損,數(shù)量不足。請(qǐng)就此向網(wǎng)店客服寫郵件投訴。要點(diǎn)如下: 1.介紹購物情況 2.反映存在問題 3.提出解決方案 注意:
1.詞數(shù)100詞左右
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫 3.開頭結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞 可能用到的生詞:投訴complaint n.【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】
To whom it may concern, I am one of your customers(顧客).I ordered(訂購)a set of(一套)Bookworm Series on your website two weeks ago, but I didn’t receive them until yesterday.And much to my disappointment, the books were so poorly packed up that the cover of one book was torn.To make matters worse, it is not a complete set, as I found one book missing.I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have every right to ask you to deal with this problem.I hope that you either return my money or deliver a new set of books to me.Besides, I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint.Looking forward to your reply.Sincerely, Li Hua 9.祝賀信
假如你是李華,你的好友魏芳在中學(xué)生英語演講比賽中榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容,給她寫一封祝賀信。
內(nèi)容包括:1.表達(dá)你的愉悅心情;2.向她表示祝賀; 3.請(qǐng)她介紹成功的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右; 2.開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:英語演講比賽 the English Speech Contest
【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear Wei Fang, I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of Middle School Students, so I’m writing to give my sincere congratulations.You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.As your best friend, I am proud of you!Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression.It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua 10.求職信
假如你是李華,從報(bào)紙上看到中老年英語培訓(xùn)機(jī)構(gòu)Mid.Senior ESCH面向高中畢業(yè)生招聘暑期兼職輔導(dǎo)員,負(fù)責(zé)學(xué)員課間服務(wù)事項(xiàng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的廣告內(nèi)容用英語寫一份求職信。ASSISITANTS WANTED Valuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English.Their work is to tend the senior students during the break.
Requirements attached:1.Good at English.2.Experienced priority. Contact us by e-mail:Englishtec@163.com.
注意:1.短文詞數(shù)100字左右;2.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱; 【優(yōu)秀滿分范文】 Dear Director: I’d like to apply for the post of assistant which was advertised in the newspaper.I found this position quite appealing to me.I’ve just graduated from high school.Luckily I am good at English and I can speak English fluently.In addition, I have previous experience.During my stay in middle school, I used to be a volunteer and looked after the old people in a nursing home on weekends.In short, I believe my experience and fluent oral English will be a great help for me in doing the work.I’m available for interview at any time.It would be appreciated if I can get your offer.Sincerely, Li Hua 高中作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
第五檔(很好):(21-25分)1.完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù);2.覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn);3.應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯;4.語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯(cuò)誤,但為盡力使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級(jí)詞匯所致;具備較強(qiáng)的語言運(yùn)用能力;5.有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊;6.完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第四檔(好):(16-20分)1.完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù);2.雖漏掉1、2個(gè)次重點(diǎn),但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;
3.應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求;4.語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確,些許錯(cuò)誤主要是因嘗試較復(fù)雜語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯所致;5.應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊;6.達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第三檔(適當(dāng)):(11-15分)1.基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù);2.雖漏掉一些內(nèi)容,但覆蓋所有主要內(nèi)容;3.應(yīng)用的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿足任務(wù)的要求;4.有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,但不影響理解;5.應(yīng)用簡單的語句間的連接成分,使全文內(nèi)容連貫;6.整體而言,基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。第二檔(較差):(6-10分)1.未恰當(dāng)完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù);2.漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內(nèi)容,寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容;3.語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限;4.有一些語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響了對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解;5.較少使用語句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容缺少連貫性;6.信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。第一檔(差):(1-5分)1.未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù);2.明顯遺漏主要內(nèi)容,寫了一些無關(guān)內(nèi)容,原因可能是未理解試題要求;3.語法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)、詞匯項(xiàng)目有限;4.較多語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤,影響對(duì)寫作內(nèi)容的理解;5.缺乏語句間的連接成分,內(nèi)容不連貫;6.信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。
不得分:(0分)未能傳達(dá)給讀者任何信息:內(nèi)容太少,無法評(píng)判;寫的內(nèi)容均與所要求內(nèi)容無關(guān)或所寫內(nèi)容無法看清。