第一篇：英語(yǔ)高考書(shū)面表達(dá)結(jié)尾模版

英語(yǔ)高考書(shū)面表達(dá)結(jié)尾模版

結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式

1． 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式一：如此結(jié)論

說(shuō)完了，畢竟要?dú)w納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長(zhǎng)篇大論，到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類(lèi)的話，我們馬上停止開(kāi)小差，等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說(shuō)結(jié)束語(yǔ)。也就是說(shuō)，開(kāi)頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此為過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見(jiàn)之”，但說(shuō)無(wú)妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2． 結(jié)尾萬(wàn)能公式二：如此建議

如果說(shuō)“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒(méi)用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語(yǔ)氣用得很經(jīng)典，因?yàn)榭脊俦緛?lái)經(jīng)常考這個(gè)句型，而如果我們自己寫(xiě)出來(lái)，你說(shuō)考官會(huì)怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英語(yǔ)實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：

十五、（2009.遼寧卷）假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請(qǐng)你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。

要點(diǎn)：

時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00至11：00 內(nèi)容：采摘蘋(píng)果

報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前 提示：帶帽子、手套 注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯：社區(qū) community 第二節(jié)：

一、評(píng)分原則

1.本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。

2.評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

3.詞數(shù)少于80和多余120的，從總分中減去2分。

4.評(píng)分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。

5.拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。

6.如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差以至影響交際，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。

二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

1.時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00

2.內(nèi)容：采摘蘋(píng)果

3.報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前

4.提示：帶帽子、手套

5.歡迎踴躍參加

【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】 本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見(jiàn)的提綱式作文。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說(shuō)。

第一步：審題

1、看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，這樣格式應(yīng)該已經(jīng)給出，審題的重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)和要求上：要點(diǎn)有五項(xiàng)，注意有三項(xiàng)，但注意的第一項(xiàng)是重要的一項(xiàng)。

2、理思路：調(diào)整要點(diǎn)，講清本次活動(dòng)的安排?？梢韵葘⒒顒?dòng)的時(shí)間，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，要求、注意事項(xiàng)表達(dá)出來(lái)；然后再寫(xiě)5和3要點(diǎn)，這樣邏輯清晰表達(dá)合理。第二步：寫(xiě)作

可以先在草紙上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語(yǔ)去表達(dá)，要嘗試最簡(jiǎn)單的復(fù)雜句，如用定語(yǔ)從句、賓語(yǔ)從句等，但句式不易過(guò)于復(fù)雜，要用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間、段與段之間過(guò)渡自然。第三步：檢查

作文寫(xiě)完后，最后要進(jìn)行檢查。重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全了嗎？時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、動(dòng)詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫(xiě)對(duì)了嗎？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫(xiě)用對(duì)了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫(xiě)在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔。

【專(zhuān)家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】

主題與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W?；顒?dòng)無(wú)關(guān)，但由于是以涉外小區(qū)為背景所開(kāi)展的社區(qū)活動(dòng)，主題空間更為開(kāi)闊，因此該主題大體符合高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作話題的一般思路，可以歸類(lèi)為外事活動(dòng)。通常，命題以要點(diǎn)形式給出和以漢語(yǔ)題干形式給出，對(duì)考生而言，前者的難度要大于后者。因?yàn)橐c(diǎn)內(nèi)容的呈現(xiàn)一般看不出英語(yǔ)的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，而如果是完整或半完整句式的漢語(yǔ)題干卻能讓考生比較容易辨別出英語(yǔ)句式結(jié)構(gòu)。這本身就是一種便利。因此，對(duì)于各命題單位而言，這幾種形式都應(yīng)該依據(jù)整卷難度的分布情況加以合理配備使用，以免過(guò)難或過(guò)易。

十六、（2009.浙江卷）

5月1日，高二（3）班的學(xué)生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽(yáng)光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）開(kāi)展志愿者活動(dòng)（送水果.打掃.聊天等）。假如你是校英語(yǔ)報(bào)的記者，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一則100-120個(gè)詞的新聞報(bào)道。

1.時(shí)間.地點(diǎn).任務(wù).活動(dòng)；

2.老人們的反應(yīng)；

3.簡(jiǎn)短評(píng)論。

注意：報(bào)道的標(biāo)題和記者姓名已給出（不記詞數(shù)）。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【參考范文】

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

【解析】

本文仍屬于提綱式半開(kāi)放性體裁的作文，選材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，有利于考生的正常發(fā)揮，考生只要按照所給要點(diǎn)的思路來(lái)寫(xiě)即可。

【專(zhuān)家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】

09浙江卷的話題和07湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了無(wú)新意。但這并不就說(shuō)明該卷乏善可陳。若從以考生為本的角度看，該卷第一次出現(xiàn)在題中直接給出漢語(yǔ)拼音人名，而不是漢語(yǔ)人名，這也算是一個(gè)首創(chuàng)。目的只有一個(gè)：避免考生出錯(cuò)。其實(shí)，遮掩在漢語(yǔ)拼音中的人名也讓人看不出這個(gè)人名究竟是漢語(yǔ)中的哪幾個(gè)字，因?yàn)閷?duì)于外國(guó)人而言，字母人名只是一個(gè)符號(hào)，他們是無(wú)法想象漢字人名所攜帶著的鮮活感和親切感的。

浙江卷前幾年基本上是選擇疑問(wèn)句式的標(biāo)題作文。例如：“Film or book, which do you prefer?”（06），請(qǐng)你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”這個(gè)問(wèn)題…（07），“Working Individually or Working in a Team”（08）。09年不在題中給出標(biāo)題，卻在文中直接給出標(biāo)題，不知何意？不知這個(gè)對(duì)于檢測(cè)考生的實(shí)際能力有何幫助？另外，雖然說(shuō)的是新聞報(bào)道，但實(shí)際上是一個(gè)典型的敘事性質(zhì)的短文寫(xiě)作。08年僅北京考了一篇敘事性質(zhì)的寫(xiě)作。09年，除了北京繼續(xù)考了敘事外，浙江也出現(xiàn)了敘事性質(zhì)的文體要求。對(duì)于浙江考生而言，其寫(xiě)作難度應(yīng)該遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)低于前五年的寫(xiě)作要求了，應(yīng)該是福。

十七、（2009.重慶卷）

國(guó)外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新一輪網(wǎng)上討論活動(dòng)，正面向全球中學(xué)生征集話題。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，經(jīng)常訪問(wèn)該網(wǎng)站?，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給該網(wǎng)站發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題。

內(nèi)容包括： 自我簡(jiǎn)介 寫(xiě)信目錄

話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（thankful）推薦的理由 預(yù)?；顒?dòng)成功 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.郵件格式已為你給出 3.郵件中不能出現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)信息 4.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答

【參考范文】

Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】

這是一篇命題巧妙地書(shū)寫(xiě)體半開(kāi)發(fā)性提綱式作文。話題樹(shù)有教育意義，符合中學(xué)實(shí)際引導(dǎo)學(xué)生思考問(wèn)題。在寫(xiě)作中應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1.緊緊圍繞話題“我們應(yīng)該感恩”。

2.但自我簡(jiǎn)介、寫(xiě)信目錄、推薦的理由、預(yù)?；顒?dòng)成功都是圍繞話題展開(kāi)。3.注意分清段落層次，上下文的過(guò)渡。

【專(zhuān)家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】

從寫(xiě)作文體要求看，重慶卷04年要求寫(xiě)記敘文，05年則改成議論文，近四年基本上是陳說(shuō)性質(zhì)的文體。就話題而言，近四年都與外事活動(dòng)或外語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)。不過(guò)，09年的話題是涉外的話題征集，有些特點(diǎn)。六年來(lái)，三次短文寫(xiě)作，三次郵件（其中兩次電子郵件）。李華同學(xué)出現(xiàn)3次（06，07，09）。總的說(shuō)來(lái)，重慶卷一直比較謹(jǐn)慎，命題基本上沒(méi)有超出全國(guó)卷I的范式。

十八、（2009.上海卷）

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外學(xué)校舉辦英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)，開(kāi)設(shè)了如下課程：園藝（gardening），烹飪（cooking）,防身術(shù)（self-defence），護(hù)理（nursing）。假如你是王躍華（不可以用自己的真實(shí)姓名），寫(xiě)一封申請(qǐng)信，報(bào)名參加其中一門(mén)課程的學(xué)習(xí)。信的內(nèi)容必須包括：

你感興趣的課程

你期望從這門(mén)課程中學(xué)到什么 為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容 【參考范文】

Dear leader，I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses，such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening，because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more，I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。

Yours，Wang yue hua 【解析】

本文是書(shū)信格式，報(bào)名參加其中一門(mén)課程的學(xué)習(xí)，屬于半開(kāi)放式作文。學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1.先談自己感興趣的學(xué)科，從四科中選取自己最有把握和有話可說(shuō)學(xué)科，這是寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵，過(guò)渡要自然；

2.再寫(xiě)自己希望學(xué)到什么，要把握實(shí)用性。

3.然后談出想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容的原因，結(jié)合現(xiàn)實(shí)，理由合情合理。4.在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中可以嘗試句型的復(fù)雜化，適度增加情節(jié)

【專(zhuān)家簡(jiǎn)評(píng)】 上海卷的一貫特點(diǎn)有以下幾條：題干短，話題一般與學(xué)習(xí)或?qū)W校生活相關(guān)，寫(xiě)作形式主要是議論性質(zhì)，間或插以混合性質(zhì)，給考生的思維空間大。還有一點(diǎn)，從不給出范文。09年的Guided Writing屬于混合性質(zhì)：陳說(shuō)+議論。話題涉外，且與教育教學(xué)課程相關(guān)，是很好的話題。但對(duì)于上?？忌?，材料的提供是否過(guò)于豐富了些？！參看一下惜墨如金的歷年上海卷，你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)上海卷習(xí)慣于提供簡(jiǎn)練的題干信息，以利于考生的發(fā)揮。這次算是一個(gè)異數(shù)了。

【總評(píng)】

2009年高考英語(yǔ)全國(guó)卷地方卷共19套，短文寫(xiě)作共20篇（上海卷和廣東卷各2篇，寧·海卷共享全國(guó)卷I的短文寫(xiě)作題）。綜觀2009年高考英語(yǔ)短文寫(xiě)作試題，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)最重要的一個(gè)特點(diǎn)就是關(guān)于地方或傳統(tǒng)特色話題，也就是母語(yǔ)文化輸出類(lèi)話題增多（5篇），以前只是在某個(gè)年份、某個(gè)卷種中有這種話題的點(diǎn)綴，現(xiàn)在看來(lái)已經(jīng)蔚成風(fēng)氣。這說(shuō)明各卷種的命題者們已經(jīng)認(rèn)識(shí)到了母語(yǔ)文化輸出的重要性、緊迫性和現(xiàn)實(shí)性，這是最令人感到欣慰的。

強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練

11、（1分）

假設(shè)你是你校京劇愛(ài)好者協(xié)會(huì)的成員，在一次同英國(guó)中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)的聯(lián)歡活動(dòng)中，你協(xié)會(huì)將出一個(gè)京劇節(jié)目。在演出前，由你向外國(guó)朋友介紹京劇的由來(lái)，按以下提示介紹：

1．京劇在中國(guó)很受歡迎，歷史悠久，有200年歷史，在清朝乾隆年間，乾隆對(duì)地方劇

有興趣。

2．1790年，為慶祝乾隆80歲生日，他召集各地方劇團(tuán)來(lái)京為他演出，4個(gè)來(lái)自安徽

的劇團(tuán)在慶典后留在北京。

3．1828年，一個(gè)湖北劇團(tuán)來(lái)京，在京常與安徽劇團(tuán)一起演出，兩種唱派合在一起，逐

漸形成了一種新劇種，被稱(chēng)為京劇。

4．下面演出開(kāi)始，希望朋友們喜歡。參考詞匯：

地方劇：local opera

乾隆年間：the reign of Qianlong

表演：perform

劇團(tuán)：troupe

12、（1分）

你昨天去游泳患了感冒，今天早上頭痛，醫(yī)生讓你休息兩天。你用英語(yǔ)給老師寫(xiě)一個(gè)請(qǐng)假條。

13、（1分）

假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會(huì)的負(fù)責(zé)人，你們要組織一次英語(yǔ)講座，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一個(gè)通知，把講座的安排：時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，主講人，內(nèi)容，以及注意事項(xiàng)通知大家。

14、（1分）

李華父親的朋友陳偉是在美國(guó)居住多年的華裔。因陳偉的兒子陳小明明年要來(lái)大陸李華學(xué)校學(xué)漢語(yǔ)，陳小明來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)學(xué)校情況，以下是小華回信的內(nèi)容。

1．聽(tīng)說(shuō)你明年來(lái)我校學(xué)習(xí)，我們很高興。

2．我校是一所具有80年歷史的老學(xué)校。

3．學(xué)校很美，有許多花草樹(shù)木，兩座教學(xué)大樓，一座宿舍樓。

4．學(xué)校設(shè)備優(yōu)良，有體育館、計(jì)算機(jī)室和大圖書(shū)館等。學(xué)生除正式課程外，還有許多

選修課，如：油畫(huà)、打字、烹調(diào)等。

5．最重要的是，學(xué)校有許多優(yōu)秀教師，課程有趣，老師既有知識(shí)又和藹，非常愿意幫

助我們，我愛(ài)我們的學(xué)校，我真希望你也能喜歡我們的學(xué)校。參考詞匯：

選修課：elective

體育館：gym

宿舍樓：dormitory building

15、（1分）

寫(xiě)信向友人介紹作家魯迅。

魏明的美國(guó)朋友杰克開(kāi)始學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)文學(xué)，來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)魯迅其人及作品。魏明回信介紹魯迅：

1．魯迅是著名的中國(guó)作家。他不僅是作家，思想家，而且還是中國(guó)現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開(kāi)創(chuàng)者。

2．他的小說(shuō)被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如《阿Q正傳》、《祝福》這兩部影片

深刻地揭露了舊社會(huì)。毛主席對(duì)他有高度評(píng)價(jià)。他的一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大

學(xué)課本。

3．認(rèn)為讀魯迅作品對(duì)他很有益處。參考詞匯：

創(chuàng)始人：Founder

中國(guó)文學(xué)：Chinese Literature

阿Q正傳：The True Story of AH Q

祝福：The New Year’s Sacrifice16、（1分）

提示：為引進(jìn)外資，進(jìn)一步加快你家鄉(xiāng)A城改革開(kāi)放。你向一位外商介紹你家鄉(xiāng)A城。

1．A城是一新開(kāi)發(fā)的經(jīng)濟(jì)特區(qū)。它是一座具有三十萬(wàn)人口的臨海小城。

2．解放前是一個(gè)小漁村，以漁業(yè)為主，沒(méi)有工業(yè)，只有幾所小學(xué)。

3．改革開(kāi)放以來(lái)，許多外商到這里投資，經(jīng)濟(jì)增長(zhǎng)很快，建立了許多大工廠、一個(gè)大

港口。港口與國(guó)內(nèi)外許多城市連接。

4．教育有很大的發(fā)展，建立了該城第一所大學(xué)。已有三千人從該校畢業(yè)。我相信，A

城在不久的將來(lái)將更加現(xiàn)代化。參考詞匯：

投資：invest

經(jīng)濟(jì)開(kāi)發(fā)區(qū)：an economic-zone

港口：port

17、（1分）

11月11日，你將在家里為你的妹妹15周歲開(kāi)一個(gè)生日晚會(huì)，寫(xiě)信給你的外國(guó)朋友Peter，邀請(qǐng)他來(lái)參加。晚會(huì)開(kāi)始時(shí)間是晚上6點(diǎn)，將持續(xù)到很晚。告訴Peter每天晚上你都在家，請(qǐng)他給你打個(gè)電話告訴你他是否來(lái)參加生日晚會(huì)，并表達(dá)你盼望見(jiàn)到他的心情。

在信的開(kāi)頭告訴Peter你已收到他10月25日的來(lái)信，但由于最近一直忙于期中考試未能及時(shí)回信。

假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在的住址是北京西城區(qū)云梯胡同1號(hào)樓4門(mén)2號(hào)。

18、（1分）

給筆友保羅(Paul)的一封信 提示：

1．過(guò)了一個(gè)很好的寒假，在寒假中與父親一起回老家河北農(nóng)村。

2．吃驚于家鄉(xiāng)的巨大變化。幾乎村里每家都有彩電，許多家蓋了新房。有的家還有了

摩托車(chē)和小汽車(chē)。

3．一位村民自豪地告訴我，他和一部分村民打算參加一個(gè)旅游團(tuán)到國(guó)外旅游。

4．我表示羨慕他們，我對(duì)父親說(shuō)，將來(lái)大學(xué)畢業(yè)要回老家來(lái)，父親也表示說(shuō)他一退休

就來(lái)。

5．你的名字小海。

19、（1分）

張紅從廣告上得知某公司需要一名秘書(shū)。寫(xiě)信應(yīng)聘。以下是張紅的簡(jiǎn)歷。

年齡20歲，即將從職業(yè)學(xué)校畢業(yè)。專(zhuān)業(yè)：經(jīng)濟(jì)管理（business management）。學(xué)英語(yǔ)8年，會(huì)計(jì)算機(jī)。在過(guò)去三年中一直是本校學(xué)生報(bào)編輯之一，學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)?cè)诎嗌蟽?yōu)秀。主要是本人喜歡辦公室工作，相信能勝任秘書(shū)工作。如果能得到這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)將十分感謝。

請(qǐng)以張紅的名義向公司寫(xiě)信寫(xiě)聘。參考詞匯：

職業(yè)學(xué)校：vocational school

專(zhuān)業(yè)：major

20、（1分）

給朋友小林的一封信，談?wù)労偕睢?/p>

1．寒假很忙，因?yàn)榻衲昶咴乱獏⒓痈呖肌?/p>

2．每天埋頭讀書(shū)，復(fù)習(xí)每門(mén)必修課，做許多練習(xí)。

3．學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，每天學(xué)習(xí)10小時(shí)以上，累時(shí)看會(huì)兒電視，聽(tīng)音樂(lè)，但總不去影劇院。不

得不回絕親戚朋友的邀請(qǐng)，只在除夕時(shí)打電話問(wèn)候。

4．多希望沒(méi)有考試，但又不可能，要盡力取得好成績(jī)?？忌峡释丫玫那迦A大學(xué)。參考詞匯：

必修課：required subject

埋頭于某事：bury oneself in sth.參考答案：

11、（1分）

Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.12、（1分）

Dear Mr.Du，I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve caught a cold because I went swimming yesterday.This morning I had a headache and had a fever.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave.Yours respectfully，Li Qing

13、（1分）

There will be an English lecture on high school education in the U.S.by Mr.Jackson.It will be given in the Lecture Hall on Saturday afternoon from 2：00 to 4：00, May 15th, 1992.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English.THE STUDENTS’ UNION

14、（1分）

Dear Xiao Ming，I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.Now let me tell you something about our school.Our school campus is beautiful.It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass.We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building.In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library.There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking.Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school.Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students.I like our school.I hope you will like our school too.Yours Li Hua

15、（1分）

Dear Jack，I was very glad to receive your letter on the tenth of February.You ask me something about Lu Xun and his works since you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about him.Lu Xun was a well-Known Chinese writer, he was not only a writer, a thinker, and translator, but also a founder of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been put into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice which expose sharply the old society.The late Chairman Mao spoke highly of him.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Since you are learning Chinese literature, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.Yours Wei Ming

16、（1分）

My hometown is an economic-open-zone.It is a town on the sea with a population of three hundred thousand.Before the liberation it used to be a fishing village.Most people lived on fishing.There was no industry.And there were only few primary schools here.Since the open-door policy, a lot of foreign businessmen invested here.A lot of factories have been built.Economics have developed rapidly and big port has also been built, which is connected with many ports of other ports both in and out of our country.A new university now has been founded.Three thousand students have already graduated from it.I am sure in the near future our hometown will become more modern.17、（1分）

Doorway 4, building 1

Yunti Hu Tong

Xicheng District

Beijing 100037

China

November 4th,1995 Dear peter，Thank you for your letter of October 25.I haven’t written sooner as I were busy preparing for my mid--term exams.We are having a party on 11th November at our house for my sister’s 15th birthday and we hope you can come.It only happens once a year!The party will start at 6 p.m.and will go on until late!

I’m at home in the evenings.Please give me a call.We’re looking forward to seeing you.loves，Zhao Ning

18、（1分）

Dear Paul，How are you!I think you have come back to school now.I have had a wonderful winter holiday.During the holiday, my father and I went to hometown, In the countryside in HeBei Province.I was astonished to find that great changes had taken place in the village in recent years.Almost every family in the village had colour TV set, many families had their houses newly built, or rebuilt, some of them had motorcycles or cars.One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.How I admire them!

I said to my father that I would go back to my hometown after I graduated from college.Father also expressed he would go back as soon as he retired.Both of us were disappointed when the holiday ended so soon, and we had to leave.What did you do in your holiday? Are you busy now?

Here are my best regards to you and your family

Yours Xiao Hai

19、（1分）

Dear Sir：

How do you do? Through the ad.I know you need a secretary.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Hong.I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school.My major is business management.I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience.I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years.My grades remain upper level in my class.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.I am sure I can do it well.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours, Zhang Hong

20、（1分）Dear Xiao Lin，I have had a busy holiday these winter because I will take part in the entrance examination this September.I almost buried myself in the books every day.I had to go over every required subject and did a lot of exercises.I worked very hard, more than 10 hours a day.When I was tired I watched TV for a while and listened to music, but I never went to the cinema or theater.I had to refuse several invitations from my relatives and classmates.I only called them to greet them on the eve of the Spring Festival.How I wish there were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to Qing Hua University, which I have been longing for.How is your vacation? Best wishes to you and your family!

Yours Wu Qi

第二篇：高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)感謝信必備開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾

高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)感謝信必備開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾

感謝信必備開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾

開(kāi)頭：

【例句一】我真的不知道如何表達(dá)我對(duì)你的幫助的感激之情。I really don’t know how to express my gratitude for your help.【例句二】我想表達(dá)我對(duì)你及時(shí)幫助的誠(chéng)摯的謝意。

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for your timely help.【例句三】對(duì)你的好客表示誠(chéng)摯的謝意。I warmly appreciate for your hospitality.【例句四】我寫(xiě)這幾行文字是為了表達(dá)我誠(chéng)摯的謝意。With deepest gratitude, I write to you here a few lines.【例句五】你做的給我們留下了深刻的印象，并且我希望我能對(duì)你表達(dá)我的感激之情對(duì)于那些我們?cè)?jīng)在一起度過(guò)的美好時(shí)光。

What you did gave us a deep impression and we hope to express our thanks to you for the wonderful days we spent with you.結(jié)尾：

【例句一】對(duì)你的慷慨的幫助，我必須再次表示感謝。I must thank you again for your generous help.【例句二】我的感激之情超出了文字的描述。My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.【例句三】對(duì)你無(wú)私的捐贈(zèng)表示感謝。I am most grateful for your selfless donation.【例句四】我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切表達(dá)感謝。祝你萬(wàn)事如意！I,(on behalf of)my whole family/class/school, would like to thank you again for what you have done for me/us.May you be blessed in everything you do.【經(jīng)典文章】

假設(shè)你叫李華，現(xiàn)是武漢大學(xué)的一名新生。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，給你中學(xué)的英語(yǔ)老師李老師寫(xiě)一封感謝信，表達(dá)對(duì)他的愛(ài)戴和尊敬。

提示：1．對(duì)老師教學(xué)的評(píng)價(jià)2．回顧在校時(shí)你的心情3．對(duì)老師的理解和祝愿。注意：詞數(shù)100左右。信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr Li, I’m very excited to write to express my thanks to you.I am now a freshman of Wuhan University, which I have been dreaming about.Mr Li, I still remember the days when you taught me English.My English has been improved greatly because of your creative work.However, at one time, the pressure of examinations, too much homework and the high expectations made me depressed.I was tired of the warning that if I didn’t do my best, I wouldn’t have the chance to go to college.Thanks for your encouragement;if not, I wouldn’t have realized my dream.And now I really understand you.I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges.Are you still so busy? How I miss you!Hoping to hear from you soon.Yours, Li Hua

第三篇：高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾2

英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾

一篇文章通?？煞譃槿齻€(gè)部分，即開(kāi)頭、正文和結(jié)尾。這三個(gè)部分安排是否得體，直接影響到文章的質(zhì)量。

文章的開(kāi)頭一般來(lái)說(shuō)應(yīng)盡量做到開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，用簡(jiǎn)單明白的敘述引出文章的話題，使讀者了解文章要談?wù)撌裁?，一下子引起讀者的興趣。

英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)常見(jiàn)的開(kāi)頭形式大致有以下幾種： 1．開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，揭示主題

文章一開(kāi)頭，就交待清楚文章的主題是什么。如“How I Spent My Vacation”(我怎樣 度假)的開(kāi)頭是：

I Spent my last vacation happily．

下面是題為“Honesty”(談?wù)\實(shí))一文中的開(kāi)頭：

Honesty is one of the best virtues．An honest man is always trusted and respected．On the contrary, one who tells lies is regarded as a “l(fā)iar”，and is looked upon by honest people． 2．交代人物、事情、時(shí)間或環(huán)境開(kāi)頭

在文章的開(kāi)頭，先把人物、事件和環(huán)境交待清楚。例如“A Trip to Jinshan”(去金山 旅游)的開(kāi)頭：

The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan.The bus ride there took three hours.The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.3.回憶性的開(kāi)頭

用回憶的方法來(lái)開(kāi)頭。例如“A Trip to the Taishan Mountain”(泰山游)的開(kāi)頭是： I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.4．概括性的開(kāi)頭

即對(duì)要在文章中敘述的人或事先作一個(gè)概括性的介紹。如“The Happiness of Reading Books”(讀書(shū)的快樂(lè))的開(kāi)頭：

People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world.But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.5．介紹環(huán)境式的開(kāi)頭

即開(kāi)頭利用自然景物或自然環(huán)境引出要介紹的事物。如“An Accident”(一場(chǎng)事故)的開(kāi) 頭是:

It was a rainy and windy morning.The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty.I was on my way back to school.Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.6．交待寫(xiě)作目的的開(kāi)頭。

在文章的一開(kāi)頭就交待寫(xiě)作目的，如通過(guò)文章要表?yè)P(yáng)誰(shuí)，批評(píng)誰(shuí)，或說(shuō)明一個(gè)什么問(wèn)題 等。如 “Pollution Control”(控制污染)的開(kāi)頭：

In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.文章結(jié)尾的作用是概括全文內(nèi)容，進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)或肯定文章的中心思想，使文章意義表達(dá)得更加深刻。文章結(jié)尾的形式也是多種多樣的，常見(jiàn)的有以下幾種：

1． 首尾呼應(yīng)，畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛

在文章的結(jié)尾，把含義較深的話放在末尾，以點(diǎn)明主題，深化主題，起到畫(huà)龍點(diǎn)睛的效 果。如“I Cannot Forget Her”(我忘不了她)的結(jié)尾：

After her death, I felt as if something were missing in my life.I was sad over her passing away, but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.2． 重復(fù)主題句

結(jié)尾回到文章開(kāi)頭闡明的中心思想或主題句上，達(dá)到強(qiáng)調(diào)的效果。如“I Love My Home Town”(我愛(ài)家鄉(xiāng))的結(jié)尾：

I love my home town, and I love its people.They too have changed.They are going all out to do more for the good of our motherland.3.自然結(jié)尾

隨著文章的結(jié)束，文章自然而然地結(jié)尾。如“Fishing”(釣魚(yú))的結(jié)尾：

I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours, but my brother caught many more.Tired from fishing, we lay down on the river bank, bathing in the sun.We returned home very late.4．含蓄性的結(jié)尾

用比喻或含蓄的手法不直接點(diǎn)明作者的看法，而是讓讀者自己去領(lǐng)會(huì)和思考。如“A Day of Harvesting”(收割的日子)的結(jié)尾：

Evening came before we realized it.We put down our sickles and looked at each other.Our clothes were wet with sweat, but on every face there was a smile.5．用反問(wèn)結(jié)尾

雖然形式是問(wèn)句，但意義卻是肯定的，并具有特別的強(qiáng)調(diào)作用，引起讀者深思。如 “Should We Learn to Do Housework?”(我們要不要學(xué)做家務(wù)?)的結(jié)尾。

Everyone should learn to do housework.Don't you agree, boys and girls? 6．指明方向，激勵(lì)讀者

結(jié)尾表示對(duì)將來(lái)的展望，或期待讀者投入行動(dòng)。如“Let's Go in for Sports”(讓我 們參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng))的結(jié)尾：

As we have said above, sports can be of great value.They not only make people live happily but also help people to learn virtues and do their work bettter.A sound mind is in a sound body.Let's go in for sports.文章的結(jié)尾沒(méi)有一定的模式，可以根據(jù)表達(dá)主題的需要靈活創(chuàng)造。一般的習(xí)慣是，一些記敘文和描寫(xiě)文經(jīng)常采用自然結(jié)尾的方法；但說(shuō)理性和邏輯性較強(qiáng)的說(shuō)明文和議論文則往往都有結(jié)束語(yǔ)，以便使文章首尾呼應(yīng)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整

第四篇：高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)技巧

高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)技巧

通常，英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)，聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀、寫(xiě)、譯五項(xiàng)基本技能缺一不可?！镀胀ǜ咧杏⒄Z(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》，對(duì)九級(jí)語(yǔ)言技能目標(biāo)英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作有6點(diǎn)明確的要求。同時(shí)列出了寫(xiě)作技能與試題設(shè)計(jì)的要求和寫(xiě)作評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，其測(cè)試方式有五種。學(xué)生作文主要從內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言使用效果、結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性、格式和語(yǔ)域及與目標(biāo)讀者的交流五個(gè)方面進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)是英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和語(yǔ)法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的綜合運(yùn)用，還要具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力和邏輯思維能力，要求內(nèi)容清楚、意思連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)完整、邏輯性強(qiáng)、主題突出、用詞準(zhǔn)確、文體恰當(dāng)。一般，要文理通暢，非單純地翻譯。要答卷滿意，平時(shí)確實(shí)需要長(zhǎng)期的信心的培養(yǎng)，耐心的啟發(fā)，由易到難，從簡(jiǎn)單到復(fù)雜，循序漸進(jìn)地堅(jiān)持內(nèi)容、語(yǔ)言、語(yǔ)法、表達(dá)、結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯和卷面等進(jìn)行規(guī)范地訓(xùn)練，而且訓(xùn)練有素?，F(xiàn)在，不少學(xué)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。這并非完全意義上的寫(xiě)作，只要求用書(shū)面語(yǔ)言基本表達(dá)出要表達(dá)的東西。一般原則是：不多寫(xiě)、不少寫(xiě)和不錯(cuò)寫(xiě)?，F(xiàn)結(jié)合存在的問(wèn)題和多年的教學(xué)積累，談?wù)劯呖加⒄Z(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)注重的五方面。用順

審準(zhǔn)題義，明確情景，看清要求。不少考生寫(xiě)作時(shí)，還有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解題的習(xí)慣，特別是不注意生詞或短語(yǔ)提示，或干脆完全根據(jù)所給材料先后順序逐一翻譯。前后不連貫，層次不清晰，邏輯性不強(qiáng)。因此應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料，找到所要表達(dá)的主旨文意及線索，在線索引導(dǎo)下通暢地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，增加可讀性。為此，應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示過(guò)度及連接的詞匯，使之有較強(qiáng)的感情色彩。用對(duì)

對(duì)每一個(gè)句子都盡可能避免語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。通常錯(cuò)處出在：

2.1動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（劃線部分改為Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（劃線部分改為coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）

（3）時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。

1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（劃線部分改為comes）

2）Class start at 8:00 am.（劃線部分改為starts）

書(shū)面表達(dá)可能出現(xiàn)多種時(shí)態(tài)，但特定時(shí)間背景下時(shí)態(tài)相同。如人事物現(xiàn)狀的介紹，應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；過(guò)去的介紹，應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；日記應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；通知應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。千萬(wàn)不要隨心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面積失分。

（4）語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。由于漢語(yǔ)被動(dòng)色彩不濃，因此英語(yǔ)表達(dá)易受影響，該用而不用，不該用而用be動(dòng)詞。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遺漏處加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（劃線處去掉was）

還有喜歡在動(dòng)詞前面加be動(dòng)詞。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（劃線處去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（劃線處去掉are）

2.2名詞單復(fù)數(shù)混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（劃線處改為800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（劃線處改為ten-minute或ten minutes''）

2.3冠詞錯(cuò)誤

冠詞屬小詞，重視不夠，影響表達(dá)。

1）How do you spell the computer？（劃線處去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（劃線處去掉the）用準(zhǔn)

用準(zhǔn)確地道的語(yǔ)言，不能生澀難懂，不合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。常見(jiàn)現(xiàn)象如下：

3.1單詞堆砌

寫(xiě)句子，用語(yǔ)不準(zhǔn)，而根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)句序進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的英語(yǔ)單詞堆砌而成。如：

1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯(cuò)）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（錯(cuò)）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫(xiě)作時(shí)碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋?zhuān)媚：x，語(yǔ)言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達(dá)不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（錯(cuò)）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英語(yǔ)作文，受漢語(yǔ)影響，雖語(yǔ)法正確，卻不符英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。如：

1）Our friends are all over the world.（錯(cuò)）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（錯(cuò)）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)換功在平時(shí)。簡(jiǎn)明扼要，表達(dá)清楚，是關(guān)鍵所在。冰凍三尺，非一日之寒。用全

初學(xué)寫(xiě)作要簡(jiǎn)單完整清楚地表達(dá)，就要把握兩個(gè)關(guān)系：

4.1完整不一定就句式復(fù)雜

一味追求新、奇、特、難，容易出錯(cuò)。如：

1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（錯(cuò)）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（錯(cuò)）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2簡(jiǎn)單也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，結(jié)構(gòu)就不完整，句意就不明確。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯(cuò)）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（錯(cuò)）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的，要點(diǎn)齊全，是直接因素。必須注意要點(diǎn)來(lái)源：

標(biāo)題。有些需要標(biāo)題，卻粗心漏掉不寫(xiě)，造成失分。書(shū)寫(xiě)標(biāo)題應(yīng)力求簡(jiǎn)潔明了，有較強(qiáng)概括力和針對(duì)性，并注意單詞字母大小寫(xiě)。

格式。不少應(yīng)用文需要正確的格式，如通知的開(kāi)頭，常常要交待通知的對(duì)象；日記開(kāi)頭，常常交待時(shí)間和天氣；信件的左上角必須注明寫(xiě)信人的地址和時(shí)間，下一行要頂格寫(xiě)上稱(chēng)呼，正文結(jié)束后，要有結(jié)束語(yǔ)，并簽名。

正文。這是全文要點(diǎn)集中之處，應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料含義，理清大意，將所有要點(diǎn)逐一落實(shí)，并檢查有無(wú)遺漏。

常識(shí)性。原材料不一定反應(yīng)，但仍然重要，既屬內(nèi)容，又承上啟下，增強(qiáng)文章可讀性。如寫(xiě)通知結(jié)尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；寫(xiě)參觀歡迎詞開(kāi)頭可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，結(jié)尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介紹結(jié)束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；寫(xiě)信結(jié)尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必須注意原則：不多不少。該有的不少，不該有的不寫(xiě)。整潔

文章寫(xiě)好后，應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫(xiě)及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，謄寫(xiě)應(yīng)盡可能書(shū)寫(xiě)工整，布局美觀。卷面整潔清爽就會(huì)增加得高分機(jī)會(huì)。

總之，了解、掌握、運(yùn)用好以上五個(gè)方面，就容易得高分。

第五篇：高考書(shū)面表達(dá)

書(shū)面表達(dá)范文

例文一：

據(jù)說(shuō)，中國(guó)有一半人在吸煙。許多男孩和女孩都有吸煙的習(xí)慣，盡管他們還是中學(xué)生。

眾所周知，吸煙對(duì)人身體是有害的。越來(lái)越多的人們認(rèn)識(shí)到這個(gè)問(wèn)題的嚴(yán)重性，但他們?nèi)匀粯?lè)此不疲。

吸煙能導(dǎo)致很多疾病。由于吸煙，一些人一直在咳嗽。肺癌是吸煙導(dǎo)致的最嚴(yán)重的疾病。同時(shí)，吸煙很浪費(fèi)金錢(qián)。除此而外，粗心的煙民還可能引起火災(zāi)。

為了保證人們的身體健康，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)改掉吸煙的壞習(xí)慣。請(qǐng)立即停止吸煙吧。

It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings.More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.But they are never bored with it.Smoking causes many illnesses.A lot of people always cough because of smoking.The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money.Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Please stop smoking at once.例文二：

What is happiness in my mind?

Happiness means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything.I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happiness.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.例文三：

進(jìn)入2l世紀(jì)，環(huán)保是引起世界各國(guó)重視的大問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一篇80字左右的短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)環(huán)境污染的看法。

1．污染現(xiàn)已成為全球問(wèn)題?？諝狻⒑恿?、海洋、土壤的污染對(duì)人類(lèi)和動(dòng)物十分有害。

2．列舉2-3種產(chǎn)生污染的原輛以及由此造成的嚴(yán)重后果。

3．希望人們都能采取有效辦法，控制污染，凈化環(huán)境，保護(hù)生態(tài)平衡。（平衡：balance）In the world today, pollution has become a serious problem facing man and his planet.The air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous matter.It does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and plants.We can’t have fresh air.Fish died front polluted water.It is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many places

because of pollution.I hope that all the people in the world will take necessary steps and effective

measures to solve this serious problem.We arc looking forward to the coming of the day when we

see pollution effectively controlled and air cleaned.It is indeed our urgent task to do everything

possible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good balance.例文四（2012高考題）

春節(jié)是中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請(qǐng)以Spring Festival為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)作文，介紹一下人們是

如何歡度春節(jié)的。

作文必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1.春節(jié)是一個(gè)家人團(tuán)聚的節(jié)日，人們從四面八方回到家。

2.除夕夜，家庭成員坐在桌邊，享用豐盛美味的食物。

3.在春節(jié)期間，孩子們會(huì)很開(kāi)心。他們可以整天地玩耍，不用上學(xué)。而且，他們還能

得到許多壓歲錢(qián)。

4.春節(jié)也是人們休閑和走親訪友的日子。人們彼此祝?！靶履昕鞓?lè)”，并希望來(lái)年有好

運(yùn)。

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday and is celebrated on the first day of the

lunar year.It is a time for family members to get together.People go back home from all parts of

the country.On New Year’s Eve, the family sit at the table with a lot of dishes and enjoy delicious foods.During the Spring Festival, school children will have a good time.They can play all day long

instead of going to school.And they can get money from their parents.The Spring Festival is also a time for people to relax and visit their relatives and friends.They wish each other “A Happy New Year” and hope they will have good luck in the coming year.To us Chinese, the Spring Festival is the most important festival throughout the year.例文五：（2011高考題）

在一個(gè)人的成長(zhǎng)過(guò)程中，常會(huì)遇到煩惱。其中之一就是我們的父母親經(jīng)常翻看我們的書(shū)包和日記。假設(shè)你將參加校園英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)就這一現(xiàn)象寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，陳述你的觀點(diǎn)。

演講稿的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

有些同學(xué)覺(jué)得父母不尊重我們，沒(méi)有給我們足夠的空間。我們不必為此苦惱，因

為我們還不夠成熟，有時(shí)，無(wú)法作出自己的決定，我們需要父母親的幫助。同時(shí)，我們必須和父母親進(jìn)行交流和溝通。畢竟，我們要成長(zhǎng)。我們要發(fā)展自己的個(gè)性。我們

需要有自己的觀點(diǎn)、自己的想法以及自己對(duì)事物的判斷。但總有一天，我們會(huì)相互理

解的。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or

read our diaries.Some students feel parents don’t respect us and aren’t giving us enough space to

do what we like.In my opinion, we don’t have to be bothered about this.After all, there are times

when we are not old enough to make our own decisions and are in need of our parents’ help.Meanwhile, we can communicate with our parents, telling them we’re growing up and it’s good

for us to develop our own identity.Besides, we need to have our own opinions , thoughts and form

our own judgement about things.Sooner or later, I believe , we’ll understand each other.Thank you.例文六（2010高考題）

假如你是王紅，今年暑假即將畢業(yè)。請(qǐng)以第一人稱(chēng)給某公司林先生寫(xiě)一封80-100字的英文求職信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。

求職信必須包括如下要點(diǎn)：

1.今年暑假，我將于東方職業(yè)學(xué)校畢業(yè)。

2.在校期間我的專(zhuān)業(yè)是計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)。我曾獲得計(jì)算機(jī)輔助設(shè)計(jì)（CAD）一等獎(jiǎng)。

3.去年，在業(yè)余時(shí)間，我在一家公司兼職，我學(xué)了很多東西。

4.我想在貴公司申請(qǐng)一份職位。我相信我能勝任今后的工作。

5.希望林先生能考慮我的申請(qǐng)。期待著公司能給我一次面試的機(jī)會(huì)。

A Letter of Application

Dear Mr.Lin,I’m Wang Hong.I’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this summer.My major

is Computer Science and I like it.Once I entered for a CAD competition and I was awarded

the first prize.Last year, in spare time, I took a part-time job in a company, where I learned

quite a lot.Now, I’m writing to apply for a post in your company with the hope that I can do

something for you.With my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for my

future job.I sincerely hope Mr.Lin will take my request into consideration, and I would

appreciate an early interview.Yours faithfully,Wang Hong

假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示的要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一份60～80詞的請(qǐng)假條給張老師。

要點(diǎn)：

1、李華病了，感覺(jué)不舒服，頭痛，疲勞，不想吃東西。

2、從昨晚開(kāi)始就這樣，看了醫(yī)生。

3、醫(yī)生仔細(xì)地給他作了檢查，說(shuō)他患了重感冒，開(kāi)了藥。要求他臥床休息兩、三天，多喝開(kāi)水。

4、今天不能到校，請(qǐng)假兩天

Dear Miss Zhang,I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t feel well today.My head hurts and I feel tired.I don’t feel like eating anything.I have been like this ever since last night.I have seen the doctor.She looked me over carefully and told me that I have got a bad cold.She gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for two or three days and drink much water, so I’m afraid I can’t go to school today.I’d like to take two days off.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua 例文七：

假設(shè)你是李華，在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上看到英國(guó)高中生David登的一則啟事：希望結(jié)識(shí)一位中國(guó)朋友，以便學(xué)校中國(guó)的語(yǔ)言、文化。請(qǐng)你以李華的名義用英文給David發(fā)一封電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：

（1）你怎樣得知David的愿望；

（2）你愿意成為他的朋友；

（3）你打算如何幫助他；

（4）你盼望他的回復(fù)。

注意：（1）電子郵件的格式以為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；[來(lái)源:學(xué)&科&網(wǎng)][來(lái)源:Z。xx。k.Com]

（2）詞數(shù)：100左右。

Dear David,I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture.When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.How do you think?

I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua