第一篇：2014高考英語 書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練(11)

2014高考英語書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練（11）附參考范文

假如你是張宏，剛從美國(guó)回來。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表信息，給你的好友王梅講述一下你的美國(guó)之行。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：120左右；

2．開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Wang Mei，I have just come back from a trip to the United States.I had a very good time there.________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________

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I hope you will take a trip to the United States some day.Best Wishes!

Yours，Zhang Hong

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Dear_Wang_Mei，I_have_just_come_back_from_a_trip_to_the_United_States.I_had_a_very_good_time_there.On the first day，I went to New York.It is really a very big city.I saw quite many skyscrapers there，but the Twin Towers of the World Trade Center are no longer to be seen.The following two days，I went to Los Angeles，where I visited Hollywood on the day I got there.I spent a whole day in Disneyland.It is such a wonderful place that I will remember it forever.On the last day I went to Reno，Nevada.There is a beautiful lake named Tahoe.The scenery there is very attractive.I_hope_you_will_take_a_trip_to_the_United_States_some_day.Best_Wishes!

Yours，Zhang_Hong

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高考英語書面表達(dá)講義：要點(diǎn)作文

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(2012·師大附中月考)學(xué)校學(xué)生會(huì)正在招募學(xué)生干部，你作為一名優(yōu)秀的高中生，想競(jìng)選學(xué)生會(huì)主席，請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一篇不少于120詞的競(jìng)選演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：

1．你認(rèn)為自己具備了什么條件(能力、性格、愛好等)可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席的工作；

2．如果當(dāng)選，你將為本校同學(xué)做些什么。

注意：開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯： 學(xué)生會(huì)主席chairman of the Students' Union

Dear fellow students，It's my great honor to announce that I am running for chairman of the Students' Union.________________________________________________________________________

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Dear fellow students，It's my great honor to announce that I am running for chairman of the Student Union.Who is the best candidate? The answer is: me, nobody but me.As a diligent man with pleasant personality, I have acquired working experience and communication skills which I consider as the most essential for the work.Meanwhile, as a big fan of sports，I fully realize the importance of teamwork and advocate the spirit of being quicker and stronger.I possess strong determination to take firm steps toward achieving the objectives of my team.If I am elected, I believe I have the capability to lead the Union to advance in the right direction.I will take innovative measures to make the Union a true assistance to students' study and life here as well as a bridge of communication between teachers and students.I promise that I'll become your voice, representing every need of yours.So, my wise friends, vote for yourself and vote for me — that's because I am your hope and your best choice!Thank you!

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最近你校對(duì)中學(xué)生消費(fèi)情況進(jìn)行了調(diào)查；請(qǐng)根據(jù)調(diào)查表提供的信息寫一篇英語短文，簡(jiǎn)要介紹調(diào)查結(jié)果并談?wù)勀銓?duì)中學(xué)生消費(fèi)的看法。字?jǐn)?shù)：120-150左右。

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As can be seen from the diagram above，nowadays middle sch．ool students spend most of their pocket money on snacks，clothes，things for entertainment and social communication．However，they seldom buy learning resources．Furthermore,some of them are free to buy whatever they like without considering the income of their family and their needs．

In my opinion，it's wrong of us students to consume blindly．such as following the fashion，pursuing famous brands of clothes,As we know，once seeking material comforts，we will lose the motivation of learning．Therefore，we should spend our pocket money on what we really need．Also，we should acquire a scientific outlook of consumption and focus on study．What's more，it's essential for us to develop a good habit of saving money．

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高考英語作文精選范文（看圖作文類）

I.看圖作文類

1.今年寒假，你參加了社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，去某旅行社當(dāng)業(yè)余導(dǎo)游。請(qǐng)根據(jù)該旅行社提供的數(shù)據(jù)和你的所見所聞，用英語寫一篇短文，作為寒假作業(yè)交給你的英語老師。

Number of people in City X traveling abroad in 1996, 2001 and 2006

要求：1.簡(jiǎn)析表格，說明產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；2.結(jié)合漫畫，談?wù)劸惩饴糜纬霈F(xiàn)的問題；

3.針對(duì)所出現(xiàn)的問題闡述你自己的看法（至少兩點(diǎn)）；

4.詞數(shù)120左右；5.參考詞匯：吐痰spitv.When people’s life is getting better and better, more and more people choose to spend their holidays abroad.The year 2006 sees a sharp increase in the number of overseas travelers compared with the year 2001, when the number was already much larger than that of the year 1996.It’s a good thing that Chinese tourism is developing very fast.However, reports about people’s bad manners flood in.Some are even asked if all Chinese spit and litter everywhere.The poor behavior has done great harm to the image of China, which is really shameful.China has long been regarded as a country with good manners.Everybody should keep some do’s and don’ts in their mind to guide their behavior in public, home and abroad.Win respect for yourself and our country!

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高考英語作文（經(jīng)典好句）

（一）段首句

1.關(guān)于……人們有不同的觀點(diǎn)。一些人認(rèn)為……

There are different opinions among people as to ____.Some people suggest that ____.2.俗話說（常言道）……，它是我們前輩的經(jīng)歷，但是，即使在今天，它在許多場(chǎng)合仍然適用。

There is an old saying______.Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today.3.現(xiàn)在，……，它們給我們的日常生活帶來了許多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更為糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life.First, ____ Second, ____.What makes things worse is that______.4.現(xiàn)在，……很普遍，許多人喜歡……，因?yàn)椤硗猓ǘ遥?/p>

Nowadays，it is common to ______.Many people like ______ because ______.Besides，______.5.任何事物都是有兩面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.6.關(guān)于……人們的觀點(diǎn)各不相同，一些人認(rèn)為（說）……，在他們看來，……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that

______.To them, _____.7.人類正面臨著一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問題……，這個(gè)問題變得越來越嚴(yán)重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______ which is becoming more and more serious.8……已成為人們關(guān)注的熱門話題，特別是在年輕人當(dāng)中，將引發(fā)激烈的辯論。

______ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.9……在我們的日常生活中起著越來越重要的作用，它給我們帶來了許多好處，但同時(shí)也引發(fā)一些嚴(yán)重的問題。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It hasbrought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.10.根據(jù)圖表/數(shù)字/統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)字/表格中的百分比/圖表/條形圖/成形圖可以看出……。很顯然……，但是為什么呢？

According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that______ while.Obviously，______，but why?

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第二篇：2014高考英語 書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練(12)

2014高考英語書面表達(dá)一輪訓(xùn)練（12）附參考范文

高考英語書面表達(dá)講義：要點(diǎn)作文

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(2012·瀏陽一中月考)假如你是中學(xué)生李華。在一位名叫WolfDad的學(xué)生家長(zhǎng)的博客上，你看到如下內(nèi)容。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)博客內(nèi)容、寫作要點(diǎn)和要求，給這位家長(zhǎng)回復(fù)。

I'm the father of a fourteen-year-old boy.I have a rule for my son: be among the top 3 students or get punished in one way or another.He has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on him.Am I wrong?

寫作要點(diǎn)：

1.表明自己的看法；

2.陳述自己的理由(可舉例說明)；

3.提出至少兩條建議。

寫作要求：

1.短文字?jǐn)?shù)不少于120(不含已寫好的部分)；

2.內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫；

3.書寫須清晰、工整。

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Hi, WolfDad,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, health and life attitude should never be ignored.There are many examples around us.Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected.The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends' advice.More importantly, let him live like-1-

a lovely boy;let him have more friends and social activities;and let him make mistakes of his own as we teenagers often do.Yours,Li Hua

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(2012·醴陵月考)幾個(gè)月后你將從這里畢業(yè)，邁向新的征程。假如你必須進(jìn)入社會(huì)，參加工作，請(qǐng)根據(jù)自己的情況，以“My ideal job”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。

內(nèi)容包括：

1.你理想的工作；

2.你的理由。

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One possible version：

Time flies.I have been studying here for more than two years and will graduate.Because

of my poor family, I will have to look for a job and begin my career.What should I do? I would like to be a hairdresser.Firstly, I have been interested in hairstyles, so I like to observe, enjoy and study different hairstyles of different boys, girls, ladies and gentlemen and can understand what styles different people like best.Secondly, my sister has been a hairdresser for many years.She has rich experience and can help me learn how to be a hairdresser as soon as possible.So it's easy for me to begin my career.Once I begin the job, I will work hard and make every effort to develop more hairstyles, letting more people enjoy their wonderful person styles.********************************************************結(jié)束

下列圖描述的是Mr．a(chǎn)nd Mrs white購(gòu)物后，到停車場(chǎng)取車時(shí)發(fā)生了一場(chǎng)誤會(huì)。請(qǐng)用英語將下列圖示敘述清楚。短文必須包括圖畫的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使其連貫完整。詞數(shù)80—100。

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After shopping, Mr.and Mrs.White went back to the car park.Mr.White carried a lot of packets in his arms.And just as his hands were full, Mrs.White asked him where he put his key to the car.He told her that it was in his pocket.But she was unable to find the key in his right pocket.Mr.White told her it was in his left pocket and she got it.But when she was unlocking the door, the key just didn't fit in it.Mr.White was wondering what had gone wrong, when the owner of the car came up, asking angrily, “What are you doing to my car?” It was then that they realized it was a wrong car that was exactly like theirs.Mr.White answered, “We are very sorry, we've made a mistake.”

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（廣東卷）寫作(共兩節(jié)，滿分40分)第一節(jié)：基礎(chǔ)寫作

以下是一本圖書的基本信息及相關(guān)報(bào)道

基本信息：

⑴書名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother

⑵作者：Amy Chua，美籍華人，耶魯*大學(xué)教授

⑶出版時(shí)間：2010年

⑷內(nèi)容：作者用中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)方式教育兩個(gè)女兒的故事

⑸效應(yīng)：引發(fā)中美教育方式孰優(yōu)孰劣的討論

相關(guān)報(bào)道：

⑴中文版：2011年初開始在中國(guó)銷售

⑵意外反應(yīng)：多數(shù)中國(guó)媽媽不贊同作者的做法

⑶最新消息：17歲的大女兒已被哈佛**和耶魯錄取

*耶魯：Yale哈佛：Harvard

[寫作內(nèi)容]

根據(jù)以上信息寫一篇圖書介紹，內(nèi)容包括：

1.圖書的基本信息

2.圖書的相關(guān)報(bào)道

[寫作要求]

只能用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容

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句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章連貫

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Published in 2010, Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, whose wrtier is Amy Chua, a Chinese American professor in Yale University, is about a story that the author applied the Chinese traditional educational method to instruct her two daughters.The books with Chinese edition were sold in China at the beginning of the 2011.As a result, it caused a heated discussion on which is better, the Chinese way or American.Accidently, most of the Chinese mothers are not in favour of what the writer did.However, the latest news shows that her 17-year-old daughter was admitted into Harvard and Yale University.2011年廣東省高考英語基礎(chǔ)寫作是一篇說明文，讓考生對(duì)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother這本書進(jìn)行介紹。今年的基礎(chǔ)寫作題材較新，有些考生可能不知道虎媽教育孩子的事情，但不影響本文寫作，考生只把它當(dāng)作一本圖書介紹即可。

試題詳細(xì)地給出了內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，為控制性寫作。在文章結(jié)構(gòu)方面，一定要緊扣考題已給出的寫作提示：1.圖書的基本信息；2.圖書的相關(guān)報(bào)道。要寫好此文，考生需要注意四點(diǎn)：

一、要認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)等；

二、要運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫?，合理地組織文字；

三、切忌照譯，要適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。

四、在句型方面，為了用五個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容，復(fù)合句的使用依然是考查的重點(diǎn)。

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高考英語作文（經(jīng)典好句）

（二）中間段落句

1.相反，有一些人贊成??，他們相信??，而且，他們認(rèn)為??。

On the contrary，there are some people in favor of ___.At the same time，they say____.2.但是，我認(rèn)為這不是解決??的好方法，比如??。最糟糕的是??。

But I don’t think it is a very good way to solve ____.For example，____.Worst of all，___.3??對(duì)我們國(guó)家的發(fā)展和建設(shè)是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，??。而且??，最重要的是??

______is necessary and important to our countries development and construction.First，______.What’s more, _____.Most important of all,______.4.有幾個(gè)可供我們采納的方法。首先，我們可以??。

There are several measures for us to adopt.First, we can______

5.面臨??，我們應(yīng)該采取一系列行之有效的方法來??。一方面??，另一方面，Confronted with______，we should take a series of effective measures to______.For one thing，______For another，______

6.早就應(yīng)該拿出行動(dòng)了。比如說??，另外??。所有這些方法肯定會(huì)??。

It is high time that something was done about it.For example, _____.In addition, _____.All these measures will certainly______.7.為什么??？第一個(gè)原因是??；第二個(gè)原因是??；第三個(gè)原因是???？偟膩碚f，??的主要原因是由于??

Why______? The first reason is that ______.The second reason is ______.The third is______.For all this, the main cause of ______due to ______.8.然而，正如任何事物都有好壞兩個(gè)方面一樣，??也有它的不利的一面，象??。However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, ______also has its owndisadvantages, such as ______.9.盡管如此，我相信??更有利。

Nonetheless, I believe that ______is more advantageous.10.完全同意??這種觀點(diǎn)（陳述），主要理由如下：

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第三篇：初三英語書面表達(dá)訓(xùn)練

中考作文】2013中考英語作文預(yù)測(cè)

2012中考英語作文預(yù)測(cè)：8個(gè)要準(zhǔn)備的話題 1.關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)英語的話題: 復(fù)習(xí)要點(diǎn) Learn English 請(qǐng)你以“How to learn English well?”寫份演講稿80字左右.范文: Dear classmates: We have been learning English for over 6 years and really love it.English is one of the most important langnages in the world.It’s necessary for us to learn it well.How do you study? Everyone learns English in different ways.I think the best way to improve your English is to improve your English skills.They are/include listening reading and writing.We should practice them every day.we should remember more words and grammar.Reading more English story books or novels Watching more English cartoon TVs or moves.Listening English tapes and repeating after the speaker.Second you are not afraid to make any mistakes you speak English as much as possible.Third you ask the teachers when you don’t understand any knowledge.It’s very good for you if you are interested in Egnlish.You will find studying Egnlish is interesting and helpful.One more thing remember “Practice makes perfect”!I hope everyone makes progress.Thanks!

2.衛(wèi)生健康飲食:健康一直是人們關(guān)注的問題我校要舉行以“關(guān)愛健康”為題的主題班會(huì),請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶?寫一篇80字左右的演講槁。

保持健康的重要性

保持健康的方法

保持健康的結(jié)論

(你的看法?)1.多吃水果蔬菜保持飲食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2.多鍛煉健身強(qiáng)體;3.鄙棄不良習(xí)慣

(你的看法?)How to stay our health /fit? 范文1: Dear boys and grils : I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? As a middle shool student first you’d better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(繩子).Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals Don’t eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest.Next keep yourself happy.As people often say smiling makes younger.Last you mustn’t drink wine or smoke.They are bad for your health.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank you bye!范文2:Dear boys and girls: I’m talking about / Here is my advice about how to keep health/fit? Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise eat more junk food isn’t enough time to sleep.If we keep fit we must keep taking exercises every day.Eat lots of fruit and vegetables.Sleep for about 8 hours a night.Stay away from cigarettes/smoking/drugs毒品.Early to bed early to rise/get up.Breathe(呼吸)the fresh air in the open air.Keep happy every day.That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.3.假如你叫李華,你校初三年級(jí)同學(xué)正在開展一場(chǎng)討論,主題是“初三學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉”。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所提供的信息,用英語總結(jié)出討論情況。

提示: 70%的學(xué)生

30%的學(xué)生

應(yīng)該每天進(jìn)行體育鍛煉,但不要時(shí)間過長(zhǎng)

鍛煉浪費(fèi)時(shí)間、使人疲勞

鍛煉能增強(qiáng)體質(zhì),保持健康

鍛煉以后很興奮,較長(zhǎng)時(shí)間不能投入學(xué)習(xí)

鍛煉能使大腦休息,使學(xué)習(xí)效果更好

鍛煉中可能會(huì)受傷

要求:語句通順,句意連貫;詞數(shù)為80詞左右;發(fā)言稿的開頭已寫好,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear classmates: I’m Li Hua.After the discussion we found that 70% of the students think they should take all kinds of exercise every day but not spend too much time.They think exercise builds body and can keep them healthy.Sports also let them have a good rest so that their study will be more effective.On the other hand 30% students believe taking exercise is tiring and it’s a waste of time.They say that after having sports they are too excited for a long time to focus on their lessons.And it’s possible to be hurt while doing sports.4.環(huán)境問題:今天環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作學(xué)習(xí)生活等而我們的工作生活生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重..........如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?請(qǐng)以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”為題寫一篇短文。提示:存在問題:1.水污染越來越嚴(yán)重 2.砍伐森林嚴(yán)重 3.大氣污染嚴(yán)重 4.白色垃圾 等 要求 : 如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境?至少:3---4個(gè)方面, 80字左右的。

范文: How to protect/save our environment/world? The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down some animals is getting less and less.Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky the population is increasing faster and faster resources is getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health it also has a great affection in the future.people's health has been greatly affected by air noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life we need protect our world.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.We want to recycle reduce reuse things.Don’t waste things This saves money and reduces pollution.Use things for as long as possible.We don’t use plastic bags.We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them.We hope our world is more and more beautiful.5.關(guān)于“人口問題 POPULATION ”

6.關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn),談?wù)勀愕目捶?見2008年初中畢業(yè)寫作專題復(fù)習(xí))。范文:略

7.介紹自己的興趣余愛好(單元四)。

8.春節(jié)習(xí)俗與計(jì)劃,如何過2009年的春節(jié),假如你是LINGLING給外國(guó)朋友JHON發(fā)一份電子郵件。

The spring Festival Dear John, The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar(中國(guó)的農(nóng)歷).It’s China’s New Year’s Day.So usually a month before the festival people begin to buy food clothes and decorations(裝飾)for houses.About a week before the festival housewives are busy preparing the new year dinner.And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the houses.People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the new year’s family reunion(團(tuán)聚).On New Year Eve each family will gather tighter eating talking and watching TV for almost the whole night.And there will be some interesting programmes on TV.The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from parents or grandparents.On Lunar New Year’s Day after getting up people will eat dumplings.When they meet their neighbours or friends they’ll say: “Happy New Year!”

I am ready to spend with together my family on the Spring Festival I’am going to see my grandparents and friends.I ’m going to Disneyland in HONGKONG with my parents I will revise lessons do exercise every day help the old and children.Welcome to China.Waiting for your e –mail.Yours

Lingling

Happy new year to everyone!

英語書面表達(dá)

一、人物

1、以“The Most Interesting Teacher”為題，根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文，可以作適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。

注意：如果是女教師，則稱她為“Sue”;如果是男教師，則稱他為“Oliver”.1.Who is the most interesting teacher in your heart? And what does the teacher teach? 2.What is the teacher like? 3.Why do you think the teacher is the most interesting? The most interesting teacher

The Most Interesting Teacher I think my history teacher is the most interesting teacher in our school.His name is Oliver.He is a tall man with glasses.He is kind to everyone.In my mind, Oliver is the most knowledgeable person.He often tells us some interesting historical stories in class, such as Cao Cao and Liu Bei.I became interested in history when I was very young.I fell in love with Oliver and his classes.I regard Oliver as the most interesting teacher.2、Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m proud of myself”.(以“我為自己感到自豪”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。)（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分）Use the following points as are reference(以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)What kind of person are you? What makes you proud of yourself?(Give an example/examples.)Why are you proud of yourself?

I'm proud of myself I used to be a shy girl and I used to be afraid of speaking in public.But now I am outgoing.All is because of the last speech competition.I am good at English, so the teacher asked me to enter the speech competition.My classmates supported me and they were sure I could win the competition.I didn't want to let them down.So I encouraged myself to be brave.I took a deep breath and kept smiling.I practiced so }lard that I won the competition successfully.My teacher and classmates are proud of me, and I am proud of myself, too.二、假期計(jì)劃

3、同學(xué)們很快就畢業(yè)了, 馬上要迎來快樂的暑假和2012年的倫敦奧運(yùn)會(huì),你的心中是否充滿期待?請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇90詞左右的短文, 和大家分享你心中的暑期計(jì)劃.寫作要求: 1.主要選擇通過電視或現(xiàn)場(chǎng)看哪幾種比賽項(xiàng)目? 最喜歡哪幾位體育明星?為什么? 2.主要安排哪幾項(xiàng)體育鍛煉活動(dòng)?(包括時(shí)間,地點(diǎn)和目的意義等)注意: 短文中不允許出現(xiàn)與考生本人相關(guān)的相關(guān)的真實(shí)姓名,地名,校名等信息.The summer vacation and the 2012 London Olympic Games are coming.It's a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation.During these days, I'll choose to watch the Olympic Games by TV, especially I will spend my time on the table tennis, badminton and weight lifting because I like these sports.Of all the players I like Zhang Yining, Lin Dan and l.iu Xiang best.1 think they are very excellent players.As for myself, I'll also plan for several PE exercise activities.Firstly, I'll do morning exercises every morning to build up my body.Secondly, I'll play table tennis with my friends to be a second Zhang Yining.Through these activities, I believe I'll be stronger and more energetic to get prepared for the study of senior middle school.Hello, everyone!Summer vacation is coming.I'd like to talk about my plan for the summer vacation.I have two plans.The first plan is to teach stay-at-home kids in the village.I'm always looking forward to being an English teacher.I will prepare for the class and teach the children carefully.If I do it, I can get much experience about being a teacher.That will be useful for me.As for the second plan, it's to raise money for the children in Yushu.I think we should try our best to help them rebuild their new home.I am sure I can have a special and exciting vacation.Let's be helpful and useful in the summer vacation.That's all.Thank you.4、暑假是每個(gè)中學(xué)生期盼的一段時(shí)光，請(qǐng)你圍繞如何過一個(gè)輕松、愉快、有意義的暑假，寫一篇90詞左右的英語短文。

注意：

1、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名；

2、下列詞匯可供參考：summer holiday, travel, do sports, do some reading, help… with housework, take part in …

A Meaningful Summer Holiday Many students maybe look forward to having a good summer holiday.I think traveling is the best choice on holiday.We could have a good rest and go to visit lots of places of interest.We could do some sports, like basketball, football and so on.What's more, we can have fun doing some reading.()f course, we can't forget to help our parents with housework.If we do something to help others who need help, we will have a more meaningful summer holiday.三、一次經(jīng)歷

5、在你成長(zhǎng)的歷程中，有些日子會(huì)讓你開心快樂，經(jīng)久難忘。請(qǐng)以“My Pleasant Day”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，記述你那天的活動(dòng)和感受（如exciting, fun…）Ways to relax? TV, Computer, Sports, Music, Shopping… Work? Homework, Housework, Cooking, Cleaning… Other things? Enough sleep, Delicious food… 寫作要求：1.參考所給提示，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮； 2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整。

My Pleasant Day

Yesterday I was busy, but I was really happy.After breakfast, my parents took me to the amusement park.We took some photos over there.My mother bought me a toy car.I even played the roller coaster and that made me felt excited.After leaving the amusement park, we went to visit my grandparents.I spent the whole afternoon chatting with my grandfather.My parents prepared delicious food for us.We had a wonderful dinner together.What a pleasant day it was!

6、反思可以使每個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)進(jìn)步，為未來做好計(jì)劃可以鑄就成功。初中的即將結(jié)束，新的高中學(xué)習(xí)將要學(xué)習(xí)將要到來。請(qǐng)你用英語記錄下一兩件最讓你感動(dòng)或遺憾的事，同時(shí)為你將來的生活做一點(diǎn)設(shè)計(jì)，下列句型可以幫助你完成作文：One thing in my mind is …., I am happy that …, It is a pity that I didn’t …., I will…

寫作要求：內(nèi)容真實(shí)，要點(diǎn)齊全，行文邊貫，詞數(shù)90詞左右。

My life in junior school will come to an end soon.I am happy that I am going to have another chance of beginning my study again.It is a pity that I didn't study harder in the past because I spent a lot of time playing computer games.Once I even fell asleep in front of a computer.However, in last year's Paralympics, Nataliya, a ping-pong player, changed my attitude towards life.She was known as “Venus in Poland” for having only one arm and set: a good example for me.So I will take part in more activities and make more friends to make my life more meaningrul.四、英語學(xué)習(xí)

7、回想你三年的英語學(xué)習(xí)歷程，豐富多彩的英語課堂活動(dòng)一定給你留下了許多難忘的印象。請(qǐng)你以“What should we do in English class?”為題寫一篇英語短文，談?wù)勀阍谟⒄Z課堂上學(xué)生應(yīng)該怎樣做，才能使英語學(xué)習(xí)更有效。

寫作提示：1.Listen to the teacher;2.Take part in activities;3.Be confident in ourselves.寫作要求：1.文稿須包括所有提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.文稿中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名；3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右

What should we do in English class?

In English class, we should listen to the teacher carefully.This is the most important for us.When we have any questions, we should ask the teacher or classmates at once.It's necessary for us to take notes in class, too, because reading notes is helpful to review what we have learned in class.When the teacher asks us to practice English in groups, we should take an active part in the activity.We should be confident in ourselves and not be afraid of making mistakes.If we keep on working hard at English, we'll be able to be good at it one day.五、健康

8、某英語網(wǎng)站進(jìn)行了一次中學(xué)生健康情況調(diào)查，發(fā)現(xiàn)很多中學(xué)生的健康狀況令人擔(dān)憂。主要原因有：飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理；體育鍛煉不足；理壓力過大，不能與人很好地溝通等。為此，他們發(fā)起了題為“How to keep Fit”的征文活動(dòng)，倡導(dǎo)中學(xué)生的健康生活方式。請(qǐng)你寫一篇80詞左右的短文，說明如何保持身體健康。（文中不要出現(xiàn)作者本人的真實(shí)信息）寫作參考：

1、保持健康的重要性

2、保持健康的方法

3、談?wù)勀愕目捶?/p>

How to Keep Fit

Everyone wants to keep healthy.But how to keep fit? Firstly, you should eat more vegetables and fruits, because they are good for your body, just as the old saying, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” Secondly, you'd better go to bed early and get up early.As we all know “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy.” Thirdly, you should do more exercise.For example, you can run in the park and the street in the morning.No sports, no life.At last, you should always try to make yourself happy.If you can do these, I think you can keep healthy.Keeping Health

Health is very important for us.Good health can make us enjoy our life and do well in everything.While poor health means nothing.So, we mus keep healthy.How to keep healthy then?

First, it is very important for us to take more fruits and vegetables because they give us enough vitamins, and we have to keep a balanced diet.So we should not eat the food with lots of sugar and fat.Second, we'd better take enough exercise every day to make our bodies strong.Besides, we should be happy every day.Finally, we have to give up those had habits such as drinking and smoking.In a word, to be in good health, we must be in high spirits and take good care of ourselves.六、畢業(yè)留言

9、初中生活即將結(jié)束，新的生活即將開啟，請(qǐng)為你最好的同學(xué)寫一段畢業(yè)留言：他（她）給你留下的深刻印象、你們?cè)谝黄鸬目鞓窌r(shí)光及對(duì)他（她）最美好的祝愿。

寫作要求：1.可參考下圖所給提示詞,也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,開頭已給出(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))2.80詞左右.How time flies!We have been studying together for 3 years.You are always so happy that your smiles seem to be more shining than the sunlight.!shall never forget that monthly-examination, in which I got a really low mark.I just felt the sky was going to fall down.Just then, you came out.You comforted me a lot, which encouraged me to keep studying hard.You touched me deeply.You are so diligent a person that you certainly will have a bright future.Good luck to you.七、愛好

10、現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)越來越發(fā)達(dá)，中學(xué)生上網(wǎng)的利弊已成為人們討論的焦點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)參考下面的信息并結(jié)合自己的觀點(diǎn)寫一篇90詞左右的短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

網(wǎng)絡(luò)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：課后放松，輔助學(xué)習(xí)，傳遞信息，開闊視野，網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友等…

網(wǎng)絡(luò)的缺點(diǎn)：上網(wǎng)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)有害健康，沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲，不思學(xué)業(yè)，不良網(wǎng)站，誤導(dǎo)學(xué)業(yè)，虛擬網(wǎng)絡(luò)，真假難辨…

Internet plays an important role in my daily life.But it has both positive and negative points.On the one hand, surfing the Internet is very easy and it is becoming more and more popular

among teenagers.They are so interesting and enjoyable that students all love playing them.It's true that it can not only do good for the students but also be of great interest and make them happy and relaxed.On the other hand, surfing the Internet has some disadvantages.Some students are so addicted to the games that they can't get out of them, which would waste time and do harm to their study.What's more, there are some bad materials in the games or on the Internet, which would have a had influence on their health.I think that Internet is a good thing, but we also need to get rid of it sometimes.Habits Habits whether good or bad, are gradually formed.When a person does a certain thing again, he'll be obligea to it in the same way by some unseen force.Thus habit is formed.Once a habit is formed, it is difficult and sometimes almost impossible to get rid of it.It is therefore very important that we should take care in the formation of habits.Good habits have many advantages.Going to bed early and getting up early makes us healthy.Diligence helps to succeed.Honesty helps win the respect and trust of others.If we form bad habits, such as rudeness, laziness, lying and stealing,we might be ruined by them.We ought to keep away from bad habits and try to acquire habits good ourselves and others.八、關(guān)系處理

11、父母與孩子之間常有摩擦.父母想讓孩子聽他們的,按他們說的做,但孩子更愿意自己選擇朋友,自己設(shè)計(jì)(design)未來，更加獨(dú)立（independent）地生活，所以不和往往在所難免。解決（solve）這一問題的最好辦法只有相互理解。孩子們應(yīng)學(xué)會(huì)尊重父母，聆聽他們的意見，因?yàn)樗麄冇懈S富的人生閱歷（experiences）.父母也應(yīng)盡量和孩子交換（exchange）意見，不能過分地責(zé)備（scold）和打罵，那樣會(huì)使孩子遠(yuǎn)離父母。把孩子當(dāng)作朋友，這樣他們會(huì)信任父母，會(huì)使家庭生活更幸福。

請(qǐng)根據(jù)中文提示，用英語寫一篇短文，把以上觀點(diǎn)正確表達(dá)出來，不少于90詞

Parents and Children Parents and children often disagree with each other.Parents want their children to listen to them and do what they ask their children to do.But children want to be free to choose their friends, design their future and live a life in a more independent way.So the disagreement between them can't be avoided.The best way to solve the problem is to understand each other.Children should learn to respect their parents' opinions, for parents have richer experiences of life.Parents should also try to exchange opinions with their children.Don't scold or beat them too much.These will make them away from parents.Treat them as friends.Then children will believe in their parents.It will make family life much happier.How to Get along Well with Others

In our daily life, we have to come into contact with people in every walk of life.Therefore, it is very important for us to know how to get along with other people.To get along well with others and win their friendships, we must observe strictly the following words.To begin with, we need to be honest with others and should always say what we mean.Lies will surely make people stay far away from us in the long run.After all, honesty is the best policy.Second, we have to be humble enough.If we are proud in public, we can hardly win other's respect, not to mention “friendship”.Finally, we must not be selfish.We should learn how to show concern for others.As long as we abide by get along well with others.what mentioned above, we will find it easy

九、夢(mèng)想

12、請(qǐng)你以未來計(jì)劃為話題,根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇90詞左右的短文.1.你的夢(mèng)想職業(yè)及居住地等 2.你做出這些選擇的理由;

3.你為實(shí)現(xiàn)未來計(jì)劃應(yīng)做的努力;4.有一天你實(shí)現(xiàn)了你的理想,你怎樣回報(bào)父母,回報(bào)社會(huì).My Dream in the Future I have a great dream.I want to be adoctor when I grow up.I will work in the hospital in my hometown.On the one hand, to work as a doctor is very important and useful.Because a doctor can help people who are ill.And a doctor can help people to keep healthy and also help sick people enjoy their life.On the other hand, I can keep not only other people but also my family healthy.When they are ill, I can give them some advice on health.I love my hometown and I love the people there.So I want to be a doctor.At present.I must study hard so that I can learn more knowledge.Then I may go to a medical university.If I am a doctor, I will work hard and try my best to help other people.I hope my dream will come true.十、最喜愛的學(xué)科

13、My Favourite Subject My favourite subject is Chinese teacher.I like it because I have a lovely Chinese teacher.She is very kind to us.She teachers us very carefully.And her classes are very interesting and funny.In Chinese class, I always listen carefully ahd take notes.I am not afraid of making mistakes in learning.I often read Chinese novels and watch the TV program-Quiz Show after school.That not only makes me know great Chinese culture and history, but also helps me improve my Chinese skills.Thanks to my Chinese teacher, I will learn Chinese better!

English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old.But at the very beginning,listening seemed a little difficult for me.So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programs.And I found it really helped a lot.In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well.For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English club or find a pen pal from English-speaking countries.I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.十一、環(huán)保

14、從2008年6月1日起，國(guó)家將禁止商家免費(fèi)提供塑料供袋，從而掀起了全國(guó)性的“拒塑”環(huán)保運(yùn)動(dòng)。假如你是李華，準(zhǔn)備以“What Can We Do for the Environment”為題，寫一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的英語演講稿。

寫作提示：1.在購(gòu)物時(shí)用布袋子替代塑料袋.2.盡可能地再利用使用過的課本.3.離開教室應(yīng)關(guān)燈.4.走路或騎自行車上學(xué)齡前5.簡(jiǎn)述理由: 保護(hù)環(huán)境,減少污染,節(jié)約能源等 寫作要求: 1.詞數(shù)90詞左右

2.可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使文章連貫，3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名,否則以零分處理.What Can We Do for the Environment Hello, everyone.I'm Li Hua.It's nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What's more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

第四篇：英語書面表達(dá)限時(shí)訓(xùn)練

英語書面表達(dá)限時(shí)訓(xùn)練

國(guó)內(nèi)某英文報(bào)招聘兼職記者，報(bào)道2012年奧運(yùn)會(huì)。假設(shè)你是李 目前在英國(guó)做交換生，想應(yīng)聘這份工作，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)寫一封自薦信。

1.個(gè)人情況：熟悉本地情況，有相關(guān)工作經(jīng)歷。

2.能力優(yōu)勢(shì)：英語好、愛好體育、善于交往、團(tuán)隊(duì)合作等。

3.承諾：保證按要求完成任務(wù)。

注意：詞數(shù)100-120，參考詞匯：交換生 exchange student Dear Sir or Madam:,I am writing to apply for the job as a part-time repoter for The london Olympic Games.

第五篇：高考英語書面表達(dá)技巧

高考英語書面表達(dá)技巧

通常，英語學(xué)習(xí)，聽、說、讀、寫、譯五項(xiàng)基本技能缺一不可?！镀胀ǜ咧杏⒄Z課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》，對(duì)九級(jí)語言技能目標(biāo)英語寫作有6點(diǎn)明確的要求。同時(shí)列出了寫作技能與試題設(shè)計(jì)的要求和寫作評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，其測(cè)試方式有五種。學(xué)生作文主要從內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、語言使用效果、結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性、格式和語域及與目標(biāo)讀者的交流五個(gè)方面進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。英語書面表達(dá)是英語語言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和語法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的綜合運(yùn)用，還要具有較強(qiáng)的語言表達(dá)能力和邏輯思維能力，要求內(nèi)容清楚、意思連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)完整、邏輯性強(qiáng)、主題突出、用詞準(zhǔn)確、文體恰當(dāng)。一般，要文理通暢，非單純地翻譯。要答卷滿意，平時(shí)確實(shí)需要長(zhǎng)期的信心的培養(yǎng)，耐心的啟發(fā)，由易到難，從簡(jiǎn)單到復(fù)雜，循序漸進(jìn)地堅(jiān)持內(nèi)容、語言、語法、表達(dá)、結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯和卷面等進(jìn)行規(guī)范地訓(xùn)練，而且訓(xùn)練有素?，F(xiàn)在，不少學(xué)生對(duì)英語書面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。這并非完全意義上的寫作，只要求用書面語言基本表達(dá)出要表達(dá)的東西。一般原則是：不多寫、不少寫和不錯(cuò)寫?，F(xiàn)結(jié)合存在的問題和多年的教學(xué)積累，談?wù)劯呖加⒄Z書面表達(dá)應(yīng)注重的五方面。用順

審準(zhǔn)題義，明確情景，看清要求。不少考生寫作時(shí)，還有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解題的習(xí)慣，特別是不注意生詞或短語提示，或干脆完全根據(jù)所給材料先后順序逐一翻譯。前后不連貫，層次不清晰，邏輯性不強(qiáng)。因此應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料，找到所要表達(dá)的主旨文意及線索，在線索引導(dǎo)下通暢地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，增加可讀性。為此，應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示過度及連接的詞匯，使之有較強(qiáng)的感情色彩。用對(duì)

對(duì)每一個(gè)句子都盡可能避免語法錯(cuò)誤。通常錯(cuò)處出在：

2.1動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（劃線部分改為Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（劃線部分改為coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）

（3）時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。

1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（劃線部分改為comes）

2）Class start at 8:00 am.（劃線部分改為starts）

書面表達(dá)可能出現(xiàn)多種時(shí)態(tài)，但特定時(shí)間背景下時(shí)態(tài)相同。如人事物現(xiàn)狀的介紹，應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；過去的介紹，應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)為主；日記應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)為主；通知應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。千萬不要隨心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面積失分。

（4）語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。由于漢語被動(dòng)色彩不濃，因此英語表達(dá)易受影響，該用而不用，不該用而用be動(dòng)詞。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遺漏處加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（劃線處去掉was）

還有喜歡在動(dòng)詞前面加be動(dòng)詞。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（劃線處去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（劃線處去掉are）

2.2名詞單復(fù)數(shù)混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（劃線處改為800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（劃線處改為ten-minute或ten minutes''）

2.3冠詞錯(cuò)誤

冠詞屬小詞，重視不夠，影響表達(dá)。

1）How do you spell the computer？（劃線處去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（劃線處去掉the）用準(zhǔn)

用準(zhǔn)確地道的語言，不能生澀難懂，不合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。常見現(xiàn)象如下：

3.1單詞堆砌

寫句子，用語不準(zhǔn)，而根據(jù)漢語句序進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的英語單詞堆砌而成。如：

1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯(cuò)）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（錯(cuò)）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫作時(shí)碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋，用模糊定義，語言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達(dá)不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（錯(cuò)）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英語作文，受漢語影響，雖語法正確，卻不符英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。如：

1）Our friends are all over the world.（錯(cuò)）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（錯(cuò)）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

語言轉(zhuǎn)換功在平時(shí)。簡(jiǎn)明扼要，表達(dá)清楚，是關(guān)鍵所在。冰凍三尺，非一日之寒。用全

初學(xué)寫作要簡(jiǎn)單完整清楚地表達(dá)，就要把握兩個(gè)關(guān)系：

4.1完整不一定就句式復(fù)雜

一味追求新、奇、特、難，容易出錯(cuò)。如：

1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（錯(cuò)）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（錯(cuò)）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2簡(jiǎn)單也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，結(jié)構(gòu)就不完整，句意就不明確。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯(cuò)）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（錯(cuò)）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的，要點(diǎn)齊全，是直接因素。必須注意要點(diǎn)來源：

標(biāo)題。有些需要標(biāo)題，卻粗心漏掉不寫，造成失分。書寫標(biāo)題應(yīng)力求簡(jiǎn)潔明了，有較強(qiáng)概括力和針對(duì)性，并注意單詞字母大小寫。

格式。不少應(yīng)用文需要正確的格式，如通知的開頭，常常要交待通知的對(duì)象；日記開頭，常常交待時(shí)間和天氣；信件的左上角必須注明寫信人的地址和時(shí)間，下一行要頂格寫上稱呼，正文結(jié)束后，要有結(jié)束語，并簽名。

正文。這是全文要點(diǎn)集中之處，應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料含義，理清大意，將所有要點(diǎn)逐一落實(shí)，并檢查有無遺漏。

常識(shí)性。原材料不一定反應(yīng)，但仍然重要，既屬內(nèi)容，又承上啟下，增強(qiáng)文章可讀性。如寫通知結(jié)尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；寫參觀歡迎詞開頭可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，結(jié)尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介紹結(jié)束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；寫信結(jié)尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必須注意原則：不多不少。該有的不少，不該有的不寫。整潔

文章寫好后，應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，謄寫應(yīng)盡可能書寫工整，布局美觀。卷面整潔清爽就會(huì)增加得高分機(jī)會(huì)。

總之，了解、掌握、運(yùn)用好以上五個(gè)方面，就容易得高分。