第一篇:2006高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文天津卷
天津卷
[作文真題]
假設(shè)你是李華,在出國(guó)交流學(xué)習(xí)期間,到當(dāng)?shù)匾患译娪霸嚎戳艘粓?chǎng)精彩的電影,但在觀影過(guò)程中發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問(wèn)題,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示用英語(yǔ)給影院經(jīng)理寫(xiě)一封信。
1.因廣告過(guò)多,影片放映晚點(diǎn);
2.影片播放音量過(guò)大
3.安全出口標(biāo)識(shí)不明,存在安全隱患;
4.適當(dāng)結(jié)尾。
注意:(1)詞數(shù):80~120;(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
(3)信的開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好(不計(jì)入詞數(shù))。
參考詞匯:安全出口exit安全隱患poterltial safety hazard Dear Manager
I’m an exchange student from China.Yesterday.I went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but
Yours
faithfully,Li Hua
COMPOSITION ONE
Dear Manager,rm an exchange student from China.Yesterday,I went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but I found some small problems that took away flrom my enjoyment of the film.
First,there were so many advertisements before the film that the actual film staned quite late.During the film itself,I found that the volume was so loud.it made me un. comfortable,and it became difficult to hear the film clearly.
Lastly,I noticed that the exit sign was not at aIl visible,and I feel this puts everyone’s safety at risk by not allowing them to find their way out of the cinema clearly and quickly.Safety should always come first,and I think if you can't correct the other two problems,you should correct this one.
Thank you for your time,and I hope to see more movies in your cinema in the future,and find more comfort and convenience.
Sincerely,Li Hua
COMPOSITION TWO
Dear Manager,I'm an exchange student from China,and recently visited your cinema to see a film.The film itself was great,but it seemed there were a few small problems while the film was underway.Although the problems are not big,I do believe that if you can solve them,you may attract a larger audience.First,I found that there were too many advertisements before the beginning of the film,which delayed the film’s start by a long time.I found these advertisements to be very annoying.Second,the sound in the film was too loud,and it made it very difficult to hear the film clearly.
Third,the EXIT sign was not clearly visible,and I feel this creates a safety hazard for customers.If anything terrible happened,it might be very difficult for your customers to evacuate.
Although I'm only a visitor to your city,I hope you can consider these problems and find a way to solve them.Yours
truly,Li HuaCOMPOSITION THREE
Dear Manager,I’m an exchange student from China.Yesterday,1 went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but I found a few small problems.
First and most important,the EXIT sign was not clearly visible.I feel that safety should be the most important,and this small problem could cause some serious problems in the case of an accident.
Second,the film was so loud that we could not hear it clearly.It made it difficuIt to fully enjoy the movie,and there were many things I could not understand because of this.Last,there were so many advertisements before the movie started that it kept me waiting for 15 minutes.Is it possible to use less advertising so people don,t become impatient before trying to enjoy the film?
After saying all this,I feel I should also say I enjoyed the experience very much.a(chǎn)nd I thank you for taking the time to read my letter.
Sincerely,Li Hua COMPOSITON FOUR
Dear Manager,I'm a Chinese exchange student studying at a local school in your city.I recently went to your cinema to view a film,and although the film was great,I found that there were some points I'd like to share,that could use improving.
First.I found that the sound was much too loud to be able to hear the film clearly.Although my understanding of English is very good.I found it difficult to understand the film because of the volume.
Second,the EXIT sign was not visible,and I feel that a small problem could create a very large disaster in the case of an emergency.This would be a very easy problem to solve.
Last,but not least,I found that the amount of advertising before the film started,was just too much.Fifteen minutes is a long amount of time to sit through advertising.a(chǎn)nd I could feel everyone around becoming very impatient.
With all this in mind.it would take little thought and a few good measures to create a cinema that will attract many more people.With that said.I must tell you that aside from the above,I enjoyed my experience very much.
Thank you,Li Hua COMPOSITION FIVE
To Whom It May Concern:
I'm a new exchange student who recently arrived from China.Yesterday,I went to your cinema to view a film.a(chǎn)nd I found the film to be great.Although I enjoyed the film.I found there were a few problems that made me unhappy.
First,the film began quite late because of the number of advertisements before the film had started.Second,the volume was so loud that I couldn’t hear clearly.Tllird,the EXIT sign couldn’t be seen clearly,and may create some hidden danger,that may prevent people from exiting safely.
I hope that you can find some time to try to fix these problems.a(chǎn)nd I feel that you will attract a much larger audience as a result.
Sincerely,Li Hua
[附:天津卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣文]
Dear Manager,I’m an exchange student from China.Yesterday.1 went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very good,but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema.
First,the film was delayed as there were so many advertisements at the beginning.It was rather annoying.Second.t11e sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly bear it.Third,the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly,which presented potential safety hazards.And if something terrible should happen,it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.
As a visitor to your city,I'm disappointed with my experience in your cinema.I’m writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua
第二篇:2014年高考英語(yǔ)天津卷滿(mǎn)分作文
絲路教育 2014高考英語(yǔ)天津卷滿(mǎn)分作文 夏繼超
第二節(jié): 書(shū)面表達(dá)(滿(mǎn)分25分)
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)高二(1)班的班長(zhǎng)李津,得知美國(guó)學(xué)生Chris 作為交換生,下學(xué)期將到你班學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,給他寫(xiě)封郵件:
(1)表示歡迎
(2)介紹與本地生活相關(guān)的信息(如天氣,飲食等)
(3)介紹本班情況
(4)希望Chris做哪些事情,以增進(jìn)中美學(xué)生之間的了解和友誼
參考詞匯:
交換生exchange student
Dear Chris,I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.I have heard that you are to come to our school as exchange students, and I, on behalf of our class, welcome you warmly and sincerely.Now, I’d like to introduce some details about the weather, food, and our class.The weather in fall is very pleasant.It is neither too hot nor too cold, and neither too dry nor too humid.The temperature here is at about 20 centigrade.Moreover, the food in Tianjin is delicious, including the Eight Great Bowls and The Four Great Stews, and some snacks such as Goubuli, a kind of steamed bun with filling.I am sure you will enjoy them.Our class is a very warm family.There are 60 students in our class, containing 35 boys and 25 girls.You will find it easy to join us since we all want to make friends with you.Then, you needn’t worry about the life here, because the girls and boys in our class are very friendly and helpful.Whenever you get in trouble, they are ready to lend their hands to you.At last, I personally advise you to learn some basic Chinese, in order to communicate with local people and it is much easier for you to get on with teachers and classmates by speaking Chinese.We are looking forward to seeing you.Yours
Li Jin
第三篇:2011年天津卷高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文[定稿]
2011年天津卷高考英語(yǔ)滿(mǎn)分作文
假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華,你校將于6月26日接待來(lái)自美國(guó)某中學(xué)的學(xué)生訪(fǎng)問(wèn)團(tuán),你受學(xué)校委托,負(fù)責(zé)安排其在津的一日活動(dòng),請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,用英語(yǔ)給該團(tuán)的領(lǐng)隊(duì)smith先生寫(xiě)一封電子郵件,介紹活動(dòng)計(jì)劃并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由,最后征求對(duì)方意見(jiàn)!
1,.上午我校學(xué)生座談(談話(huà)如校園生活,文化差異等)
2.中午與我校學(xué)生共進(jìn)午餐(午飯包括餃子,面條等)
3.下午與我校學(xué)生游覽海河.Dear Mr.Smith.I am LiHua, chairman of the student Union, from Chengguang High school.I’m very happy to tell you our plan of your visit to Tianjin on June 26th as follows.In the morning, your delegation will have an informal discussion with some of us students for a free talk , including our school life ,differences in cultures and customs.During the noontime ,we will have lunch together ,You can enjoy some Chinese food such as Jiaozi and noodles.After lunch ,You will have a break for a while.In the afternoon ,we will show you around the HaiHe River ,I think you will have a good time there.This is our arrangement, If you have any suggestions ,just tell me as soon as possible.2011年重慶卷
某國(guó)際動(dòng)物關(guān)愛(ài)學(xué)會(huì)面向全國(guó)中學(xué)生招募“動(dòng)物代言人”,希望申請(qǐng)者選擇一種自己喜歡的動(dòng)物為之代言(speak for).加上你是重慶新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華,有意參與該活動(dòng),現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文在線(xiàn)填寫(xiě)申請(qǐng)表,內(nèi)容如下:
1.表示有意參加;
2.說(shuō)明自己富有愛(ài)心,關(guān)愛(ài)動(dòng)物;
3.打算為何種動(dòng)物代言,并說(shuō)明理由;
4.希望申請(qǐng)成功
I am a student from XinHua School in Chongqing, China.I am greatly interested in becoming one of the spokesmen for animals.I think I’ve got what it takes to be a perfect spokesman for the reason that I am a caring boy with a loving heart.I intend to be a spokesman for pandas.As is known to all.Pandas are not only cute but also friendly ,However ,there are few of them left because of the destruction of their habitat.To make matters worse ,some of them end up in zoos ,leading an unhappy life ,As a big lover of pandas ,I think I should do something for them.I’d be so grateful if you could give me a chance to serve your organization and the precious pandas!
2011年湖北卷
請(qǐng)根據(jù)一下提示,結(jié)合你校校園生活中的一個(gè)事例,就“與人合作”這一話(huà)題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
Working ingroups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork.Teamwork shows us how other people’s roles fit the purpose of the group.and it teaches us to be patient and how to
respond to different people.注意:1.無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題,不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示
2.除詩(shī)歌外,文體不限
3.內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合校園生活中的一個(gè)事例
4.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名個(gè)學(xué)校名稱(chēng)
5.次數(shù)100左右
In my opinion, in high school, our success is based on cooperating with others.Just as the saying goes: one tree doesn’t make a forest.It happened when I was in Senior One.To enrich our school life ,our chlass decided to put on a short English play.At first ,I was shy and didn’t join in the activity ,But later ,at the encouragement of my fellow classmates ,I took an active part in it.How happily we worked with each other.practicing and enjoying all of it.Finally ,as it turned out ,our performance was successful ,and from this I learned how important it was to work together with others in a group.It is from this moment on that I have learned the importance of teamwork’s spirit.
第四篇:2010高考天津卷滿(mǎn)分作文
2010高考天津卷滿(mǎn)分作文
閱讀下面的文字,按照要求作文。(60分)
世界似畫(huà)筆下繽紛的色彩,世界如琴弦上跳動(dòng)的音符;世界因創(chuàng)新而進(jìn)步,世界緣和諧而溫馨;世界可以存在于神奇虛擬的網(wǎng)絡(luò),世界更演繹著平凡真實(shí)的人生;世界說(shuō)起來(lái)很大,世界其實(shí)又很小??
每個(gè)人都有自己的世界,每個(gè)人都生活在世界之中。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的體驗(yàn)和感悟,以“我生活的世界”為話(huà)題,寫(xiě)一篇文章。
要求:(1)自選角度,自擬題目。(2)除詩(shī)歌外,文體不限。(3)不少于800字。(4)寫(xiě)出自己的真情實(shí)感。(5)不得套作,不得抄襲。
我生活的世界
我是一個(gè)盲人,但我的世界卻是多姿多彩的。
每天早上起來(lái),母親都會(huì)不厭其煩的為我穿衣,幫我梳頭,15年來(lái)一直如此。天氣晴朗的時(shí)候,母親還會(huì)用她那粗糙的手拉著我去河邊散步。走在小石子路上,陽(yáng)光照在我身上暖暖的。我問(wèn)母親,陽(yáng)光是什么顏色的?母親總會(huì)輕柔的撫摸著我的頭說(shuō),陽(yáng)光啊,是黃色的,金燦燦的。哦,我知道了。于是,獨(dú)自在心中立下誓言:我要讓我生活的小小世界變成了金黃色的,讓每一個(gè)生活在這個(gè)世界的人都能感受到暖暖的陽(yáng)光。從此以后,孤獨(dú)的小朋友身邊,有我為他唱兒歌的身影;勞累的父母身邊,有我為他們捶背的身影;寂寞的老人身邊,有我和他們聊天的身影?。
每天中午坐在屋門(mén)前,父親都會(huì)給我講歷史名人?!绊?xiàng)羽是中國(guó)古代著名將領(lǐng),歷史上說(shuō)的西楚霸王就是他??”通過(guò)父親,我的知識(shí)面更廣了。到12點(diǎn)了,小學(xué)生們都放學(xué)了,他們經(jīng)過(guò)我家門(mén)前,一陣陣談笑的聲傳到了我的耳朵。我問(wèn)父親,孩子們的談笑聲是什么顏色的?父親停頓了一下說(shuō),紅色的,對(duì),就是紅色。我有點(diǎn)兒不解,紅色?紅色什么樣的???父親笑了幾聲說(shuō)道,紅色是充滿(mǎn)朝氣的顏色,是剛毅的代表,我給你講的項(xiàng)羽還記得么?我們就能說(shuō)他是紅色的。哦,我明白了。是紅色給予了我們快樂(lè)的生活;是紅色讓我們充滿(mǎn)活力;是紅色讓我生活的世界更加美好。
吃完晚飯,傍晚的時(shí)候,我會(huì)陪著奶奶在河邊乘涼,聽(tīng)奶奶和一些老人討論今天一天他們的世界所發(fā)生的一些有趣的事情。因?yàn)槭敲と?,所以我的?tīng)覺(jué)比較靈敏。耳邊隱隱約約會(huì)傳來(lái)細(xì)細(xì)簌簌的聲音,于是問(wèn)奶奶:“那是什么聲音?”奶奶告訴我說(shuō)“那是清澈的河水拍打石頭的響聲?!薄扒宄??那是什么顏色的?是黃的還是紅的呢?”“呵呵,都不是的,是藍(lán)色,淡淡的藍(lán)色,就和你穿的衣服一樣的顏色。”我的世界里又多了一種顏色。
通過(guò)我的親人、朋友,我的世界才會(huì)有那么多的顏色,才會(huì)變得五彩繽紛。純潔的白,熱情的紅,暖暖的黃,清澈的藍(lán)??每一種顏色在我的小世界都有屬于自己的一個(gè)小角落。
“愛(ài)是什么顏色?”
“愛(ài)沒(méi)有固定的顏色,每一種顏色中都飽含親人對(duì)你的愛(ài)?!?/p>
第五篇:2018年高考 “天津卷”滿(mǎn)分作文解讀
2018年高考 “天津卷”滿(mǎn)分作文解讀
一、作文命題
閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)自己的體驗(yàn)和感悟,寫(xiě)一篇文章。
生活中有不同的“器”。器能盛納萬(wàn)物,美的形制與好的內(nèi)容相得益彰;器能助人成事,有利器方成匠心之作;有一種“器”叫器量,兼容并包,彰顯才識(shí)氣度;有一種“器”叫國(guó)之重器,肩負(fù)榮光,成就夢(mèng)想……
要求:①自選角度,自擬標(biāo)題; ②文體不限(詩(shī)歌除外),文體特征鮮明; ③不少于800字;④不得抄襲,不得套作。
二、文題解讀
2018天津卷作文立足于“立德樹(shù)人”,著眼于大視野,引導(dǎo)學(xué)生“認(rèn)識(shí)社會(huì)、認(rèn)識(shí)自我、規(guī)劃人生”;希望莘莘學(xué)子能“盛納萬(wàn)物,內(nèi)外兼修;有情懷,有大國(guó)工匠之器;有器量,兼容并包,進(jìn)而成為‘國(guó)之重器’”,與祖國(guó)共命運(yùn)同發(fā)展。作文材料介于新材料作文和話(huà)題作文之間,審題難度較小,有很廣泛的寫(xiě)作空間。
材料中“生活中有不同的‘器’”開(kāi)宗明義,告訴我們,器的多樣性,實(shí)質(zhì)也就告訴我們可選擇內(nèi)容的多樣性。“器能盛納萬(wàn)物”是從用途上來(lái)說(shuō),這不禁讓人質(zhì)問(wèn):什么樣的“器”可盛納萬(wàn)物呢?這些“物”是實(shí)指還是虛指呢?由此可展開(kāi)思維縱橫馳騁。
“美的形制與好的內(nèi)容相得益彰”是從外形來(lái)說(shuō)的,同樣可以讓人產(chǎn)生遐想:“美的形制一定與好的內(nèi)容相得益彰嗎?”“不美的形制可與好的內(nèi)容相得益彰嗎?”等問(wèn)題。當(dāng)功能與外形結(jié)合起來(lái),寫(xiě)作的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)十分豐富了。
“器能助人成事”是從功能上來(lái)說(shuō)的,這個(gè)“成事”當(dāng)然也有積極面和消極面。如一柄寶劍,當(dāng)正義之人以其斬殺妖邪時(shí),是成人之美;當(dāng)奸佞之徒以其濫殺無(wú)辜時(shí),是助紂為虐。如洲際導(dǎo)彈,可謂國(guó)之重器,在霸權(quán)主義者的手中,是欺凌列國(guó)的幫兇;在熱愛(ài)和平者的手中,是維護(hù)一方平安的瑰寶。故“器”本身無(wú)好壞之分。
“有一種‘器’叫器量”,這是從內(nèi)涵上來(lái)說(shuō)的,“器量”越大,胸襟越開(kāi)闊,反之則逼仄。“器量”大的人可以兼容并包,由此可提及集體,國(guó)家;構(gòu)成個(gè)人——集體——國(guó)家的遞進(jìn)態(tài)勢(shì),由此及彼,由個(gè)及眾,增加文章廣度的同時(shí)增加文章的厚度。
還有一種“國(guó)之重器”專(zhuān)指人,對(duì)國(guó)家有特殊貢獻(xiàn)的人,如殲20總師楊偉、雜交水稻之父袁隆平、青蒿素的創(chuàng)始人屠呦呦等,是當(dāng)之無(wú)愧的國(guó)之重器,他們肩負(fù)榮光,成就夢(mèng)想……
據(jù)此可以從以下方面立意: ①“利其器”方能“善其事”; ②擁有大器量才能成就大事業(yè);