第一篇：上海2012中考英語試卷評(píng)價(jià)：閱讀和寫作部分

上海2012中考英語試卷評(píng)價(jià)：閱讀和寫作部分

閱讀理解部分關(guān)注學(xué)生體驗(yàn)。閱讀部分語篇語言自然地道，題材豐富，體裁多樣，有感謝信、倫敦交通指南、科幻小故事等，旨在體現(xiàn)“讀中學(xué)、學(xué)中悟、悟中升”的教學(xué)觀念。注重測(cè)試學(xué)生運(yùn)用語篇提供的信息歸納、提煉并表達(dá)觀點(diǎn)的能力，學(xué)以致用。開放性的問題鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生大膽想象、多元表達(dá)。

寫作部分鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生自由表達(dá)。寫作題目緊密結(jié)合學(xué)生的實(shí)際生活，要求考生以書信方式表述自己的觀點(diǎn)，在幫助他人解決困惑的同時(shí)也正視自己的考試心態(tài)。通過寫作，希望考生能各抒己見，既找到減壓放松的方式，又懂得過程重于結(jié)果的道理?？碱}鼓勵(lì)學(xué)生多角度思考，多層次表達(dá)，又防止了猜題、套題的可能性。

總之，英語試卷合理分布難易度，杜絕偏題難題怪題，淡化語法、注重能力。

第二篇：2013年上海中考英語試卷分析

2013年上海中考英語試卷分析

一、詞匯

1.聽力部分填空的詞匯：

pretty, dance, fifteen, easily, brother, rest, Sunday.簡(jiǎn)單，常用。沒有為難考生。

2.筆試部分考到的詞匯主要有：

result, outdoor activities, recently, take part in, wild, make choices,go abroad, gently, offer, suceed, sucessful, unhealthy, correctly, building, change, skill, terrible, honest, housework, information, lonely, elephant.這些單詞，要求考生在明白中文意思的基礎(chǔ)上還要會(huì)準(zhǔn)確拼寫，因此，平時(shí)反復(fù)聽寫單詞的效果是不可小覷的。

3.筆試部分中，詞性轉(zhuǎn)換、副詞的用法、動(dòng)詞詞組（固定搭配）是考察的重點(diǎn)。

二、語法

1.單選題。20道單選題比較簡(jiǎn)單，考察最基本的語法常識(shí)，沒有陷阱題。其中，時(shí)態(tài)、固定搭配、口語應(yīng)答是考察重點(diǎn)。

2.句型轉(zhuǎn)換。7道句型轉(zhuǎn)換題考的是比較常用的時(shí)態(tài)和句型，都是課本里的基本語法知識(shí)，不難。

三、閱讀

1.九選八的文章講的是英國學(xué)生對(duì)于他們的寒暑假的感受以及建議學(xué)生如何豐富自己的假期生活。難度中等。

2.單選題的文章是一封講述在泰國曼谷學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)踐經(jīng)歷的EMAIL。主要考察細(xì)節(jié)理解，除了最后一題，答案基本上都能在文中找到。

3.完形填空講述了一個(gè)年輕人從大學(xué)輟學(xué)后，見到父親傷心而下決心要取得成功，并最終在銷售培訓(xùn)領(lǐng)域上立足的講述個(gè)人經(jīng)歷的小故事。難度中等。重點(diǎn)詞匯：

take efforts, break one's heart, average income, achieve, succeed, sales, market, arrange, just as.4.首字母填空是一篇關(guān)于如何跟室友相處的文章，是去年的室友謀殺新聞的一道應(yīng)景題，體現(xiàn)上海英語中考的時(shí)代性。難度中等。

5.回答問題講述的是青少年沉迷上網(wǎng)的問題。老調(diào)重彈，沒有新意。

閱讀理解部分主要考察：細(xì)節(jié)理解（從文章中尋找確切信息）；對(duì)單詞的理解；對(duì)全文的綜合概括（文章主題是什么？a study trip;Internet addiction）

四、作文

命題作文：How to protect yourself

雖然試題中給出提示以及供參考的英文短語，但是標(biāo)題范圍太廣，感覺難以確定寫作范圍和重點(diǎn)（自然災(zāi)難？人為犯罪？交通事故？），難以組織行文結(jié)構(gòu)。這個(gè)題目給人無從談起的感覺，在臨場(chǎng)壓力下的考生，特別是當(dāng)考試時(shí)間所剩無幾時(shí)，一定難以發(fā)揮出自己最好的水平。

第三篇：2009年上海中考英語試卷真題

2009年上海市初中畢業(yè)統(tǒng)一學(xué)業(yè)考試

英語試卷（滿分150分，考試時(shí)間100分鐘）

Part 2 Vocabulary and Grammar(第二部分詞匯和語法)

V.Choose the best answer(選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)拇鸢?(共26分)

()31.Can I have ____ look at the photo of your pen friend?

A.a B.an C./ D.the

()32.The teacher often takes his students to visit the Science Museum ____ Saturdays.A.in B.by C.at D.on

()33.The foreign visitors asked ____ lots of questions about Chinese culture during the tour.A.I B.my C.me D.mine

()34.____ of these two hats looks good on my daughter.Do you have another one?

A.Both B.All C.Neither D.None

()35.The little boy saved his classmates in the earthquake.____ brave he was!

A.What B.How C.What a D.What an

()36.The American student could speak only ____ Chinese, but he managed to communicate with us.A.few B.little C.a few D.a little

()37.Thanks to the new inventions, our lives are much ____ than before.A.convenient B.more convenient C.most convenient D.the most convenient

()38.The home-made ice-cream in this restaurant tastes ____.Would you like some?

A.softly B.greatly C.nice D.well

()39.When summer ____, some children will go to the seaside for fun.A.comes B.came C.will come D.would come

()40.I ____ you already that washing hands often will help prevent the A-H1N1 Flue.A.tell B.told C.have told D.am telling

()41.He was still working on his project while other people ____ a rest.A.were having B.are having C.will have D.have

()42.Many houses ____ in the big fire a few days ago.What a shame!

A.were damaged B.damage C.were damaging D.damaged

()43.To everyone’s surprise, Alex ____ play chess very well when he was only four.A.might B.should C.would D.could

()44.The woman feels that she should let her son ____ his own decision this time.A.makes B.make C.to make D.making

()45.Susan finally became a poplar singer after she practiced ____ for years.A.sing B.to sing C.singing D.sang

()46.____ John failed to climb to the top of the mountain several times, he didn’t give up.A.Although B.Because C.Whether D.Unless

()47.Keep an English diary, ____ your English will improve.A.or B.since C.when D.and

()48.Could you please tell us ____ in Shanghai?

A.when will you visit the World Expo B.when you will visit the World Expo

C.when the World Expo will you visit D.when the World Expo you will visit

()49.The room is very dark.I can’t ____ anything clearly without a light.A.watch B.look C.see D.notice

()50.It’s ____ to read the map before you travel to a new place.A.helpful B.harmful C.powerful D..awful

()51.Once a year, people take part in “____ Lights” activity to help save energy.A.Show off B.Turn off C.Take off D.Put off

()52.Our headmaster invited Christine to ____ the English Festival last term.A.be late for B.be angry with C.be familiar with D.be responsible for

()53.Many sports players became well-known after they joined in the Beijing Olympic Games.The underlined part means ____.A.rich B.strong C.lucky D.famous

()54.Be careful!There’s some broken glass on the ground.The underlined part means “____”.A.Look out B.Go ahead C.Get ready D.Keep quiet

()55.— How about raising some money for the charity?

— ____

A.Enjoy yourself.B.Good idea.C.You’re welcome.D.Never mind.()56.— You’ve done a great job, Grace.— ____

A.I’m afraid not.B.Thanks a lot.C.I agree with you.D.It’s hard to say.VI.Complete the sentences with the given words in their proper forms(用括號(hào)中所給的單詞的適當(dāng)形式完成下列句子。每空格限填一次)(共8分)

57.Many historical __________ will be shown on National Day.(movie)

58.With the help of Yellow Pages, we found the address of the theatre __________.(easy)

59.Eric, the __________ son of the family, has a special interest in physics.(three)

60.It’s __________ for him to be so active today as he is always a man of few words.(usual)

61.Who is the __________ of the book War and Peace?(write)

62.The short play was very __________.I laughed from beginning to end.(fun)

63.It’s raining heavily.I’d __________ you call a taxi home now.(suggestion)

64.I think the girl is old enough to tie up her shoes by __________.(her)

VII.Rewrite the following sentences as required(根據(jù)所給要求，改寫下列句子。每空格限填一詞)(共12分)

65.They work on the farm with their parents every weekend.(改為一般疑問句)

___________ they __________ on the farm with their parents every weekend?

66.Let’s take a picture in front of the fountain.(改為反意疑問句)

Let’s take a picture in front of the fountain, __________ __________?

67.The Shanghai International Arts Festival is held once a year.(對(duì)劃線部分提問)

__________ __________ is the Shanghai International Arts Festival held?

68.He was very nervous.He couldn’t go on with the job interview.(合并為一句)

He was __________ nervous ___________ go on with the job interview.69.I have no idea how I can operate the new machine.(改為簡(jiǎn)單句)

I have no idea __________ __________ operate the new machine.70.I’m going to make an early start in order not to miss the train.(保持句意基本不變)

I’m going to make an early start ___________ ___________ I won’t miss the train.Part 3 Reading and Writing(第三部分 讀寫)

VIII.Reading comprehension(閱讀理解)(共6分)

A.True or False(判斷下列句子是否符合短文內(nèi)容，符合的用 “T” 表示。不符合的用 “F”表示):(7分)

Daily News

A 14-year-old boy from the USA was descried as a hero yesterday after he saved the life of a woman in another country.Dean Bluey from Dallas, Texas, was a school boy who was interested in computer.One day, he was sending an e-mail to a friend on the Internet.Suddenly he received a message saying “Help!Help!Help!” The message was from Finland,(芬蘭)thousands of kilometers way from the USA.“I didn’t know what I should do, “ Dean said to a reporter afterwards.“It was really difficult to tell if the message was real.” So Dean did nothing at first.But the message kept coming.“By then it was easy to see that someone was in trouble,” Dean explained.He replied and discovered that the sender was a 20-year-old student called Tarja, who was alone in a university library.She was very ill.What was worse, there was no phone around her.Her only way of communicating with the world was by e-mail.Dean got in touch with the Texas police.The police immediately realized that the situation was quite serious.They found it necessary to telephone the police in Finland.Then an ambulance rushed to the university, and soon doctors found Tarja.Luckily, she was still alive and was quickly sent to the hospital.“I’m glad she’s OK,” Dean said.“It’s hard to believe, but e-mail saved her life.”

()71.Dean Bluey was a 14-old-year boy from Dallas, Texas, the USA.()72.When he was sending an e-mail, Dean heard someone calling outside.()73.Dean didn’t know whether the message was real when he first got it.()74.Tarja was a university student in the USA, thousands of kilometers away from Dean.()75.At that time in the library, Tarja was able to ask for help in many ways.()76.Dean made a phone call to the police in Finland and told them about Tarja’s trouble.()77.From the story we know that the Internet played an important part in saving Tarja’s life.B.Choose the best answer(根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)拇鸢?:(7分)

Have you ever had an embarrassing(尷尬)experience? Last week we asked readers to tell us about embarrassing experiences.We received thousands of letters!Here is a selection.Tony:

My most embarrassing experience happened when I had just left university.I had just started teaching in a Liverpool secondary school.One morning my alarm clock didn’t ring.I woke up at half past eight and school began at nine.I quickly washed, dressed, jumped into my car and rushed to school.When I arrived, the students had already gone into class.I didn’t go to the office, but went straight into class.After two or three minutes the students began laughing, and I couldn’t understand why!Suddenly I looked down and understood.I had put on one black shoe and one brown shoe!

Henry:

The most embarrassing experience I’ve ever had, happened two years ago.After seeing a film, my wife and I had lunch in our favorite restaurant in town.Then we decided to take a walk along the street.The street was very busy and we started looking at some watches in the new window.After a minute or two I reached for my wife’s hand.There was a loud scream, and a woman slapped my face.I hadn’t taken my wife’s hand.I’d taken the hand of a complete stranger!

James:

My wife and I had decided to buy a new house, and I’d made an appointment to see our bank manager.I’d never met him before and I was a bit nervous.I went into town in my car and I was lucky enough to find a

parking space outside the bank.I’d just started reversing(倒車)into the space when another car made its way into it.I was irritated!I opened my window and shouted at the man in the car.He ignored me and walked away.It took me twenty minutes to find another space.As soon as I had parked the car, I rushed back to the bank.I was ten minutes late for my appointment.I went to the manager’s office, knocked and walked in.The manager was sitting behind his desk.He was the man who had taken my parking space!

()78.Tony arrived at school late that morning because ____.A.he couldn’t find his shoes B.his alarm clock didn’t ring

C.he washed and dressed slowly D.his car went wrong on the way

()79.The students began laughing when they saw Tony ____.A.wearing a wrong shoe B.carrying an alarm clock

C.looking down suddenly D.rushing into the classroom

()80.Henry and his wife held hands ___.A.at the cinema B.in the shop C.at the restaurant D.along the street

()81.Henry was embarrassed because he ____.A.slapped the woman in the face B.took the hand of a complete stranger

C.heard his wife screaming in the street D.knocked over some watches in the shop

()82.James went into town to ____.A.put money in the bank B.look for a job C.meet the bank manager D.buy a new car

()83.The underlined word “irritated” probably means “____”.A.angry B.nervous C.worried D.embarrassed

()84.The best picture for each story is ____.A.B.Tony Henry James Tony Henry James

C.D.Tony Henry James Tony Henry James

C.Choose the words or expression_r_r_r_r_rs and complete the passage(選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或短語完成短文):(14分)

Sometimes you may not understand your parents.One minute they’re friendly, the next minute they’re shouting and screaming loudly enough for the whole street to hear.So who makes them so __85__? You, probably!

When you take your clothes off, remember to __86__.Get into the habit of taking glasses and plates down to the kitchen.Before long you’ll be doing it without thinking.Even though you may not realize it, your parents have bought you many clothes.But they’re not buying themselves new things every week, are they? The simple truth is that there are more __87__ things to spend money on, like the electricity bill and food.You may hate missing a party to visit some boring old relatives.They may go on and on about what a sweet baby you were.You have no choice but to listen.Even if you __88__, your parents won’t change their minds.Parents like to show off their family.The best thing you can do is to help entertain your relatives.Your parents will be so pleased with you afterwards that they’ll probably allow you to go to the next two __89__.You might not want to eat, but think of it from the parents’ point of view.If you cook two meals a day, it means 730 meals a year.Can you imagine how boring this can get? Imagine how your parents feel when you say you’re not really hungry.__90__, your parents are probably worried that you aren’t eating enough.Eat fewer snacks and leave room for your meals.Finally, offer to __91__ after the meal.Your offer may not be accepted, but your parents will be pleased.()85.A.friendly B.lonely C.changeable D.comfortable

()86.A.hang them up B.leave them alone C.put them on D.throw them away

()87.A.interesting B.difficult C.important D.surprising

()88.A.agree B.complain C.listen D.win

()89.A.concerts B.meetings C.classes D.parties

()90.A.In addition B.In return C.At most D.At last

()91.A.do the cooking B.lay the table C.buy some snacks D.wash the dishes

D.Read the passage and fill in the blanks with proper words(在短文的空格內(nèi)填入適當(dāng)?shù)脑~，是其內(nèi)容通順。每空格限填一詞，首字母已給):(14分)

E.Answer the questions(根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容回答下列問題):(14分)

Kyra Komac, 28 years old, now has 25 furniture stores all over the country.The new store, in London’s Camden High Street, takes her back to where it all started.She tells us about how the business began.When I was little, my mother began selling flowers in Camden Market.She couldn’t leave me at home on my own, so I had to go to the market with her.To begin with, I didn’t have to do anything.I just sat there, and my mum told me jokes and stories so I didn’t get bored.When I got older, I gave my mum a hand and I really enjoyed it.Then, one year, my grandma gave me a book for Christmas.It was all about making candles and I loved it.I was 14, and I didn’t have to go to the market any more because mum could leave me at home on my own.I spent my free time making candles of all shapes and sizes.I made hundreds of them.One day, my mother was ill so I had to go to the market on my own.I decided to take some candles with me and see if I could sell them.They were sold out in twenty minutes!The next week, my mum gave some money to buy some wax(蠟)to make more candles.They sold out really quickly, too.Nine months later, we decided to stop selling flowers.My mum and I couldn’t make enough candles during the week, so some of my school friends started to help us.I paid them one pound for every candle, and we used to sell them for three or four times that.It was fun and my friends worked with me in the market.At the age of 22, my uncle lent me some money and I opened my first shop in Portobello Road.Since then, I’ve never looked back, even in difficulties.In the first store, we only sold candles, but now we sell everything from designer furniture to paintings.Oh, and candles, of course.99.How many furniture stores does Kyra Komac have now?

______________________________________________________________

100.Where did Kyra’s mother sell flowers?

______________________________________________________________

101.What did Kyra do in her free time when she was fourteen?

______________________________________________________________

102.Did the candles sell well on the first day in the market?

______________________________________________________________ 103.Who helped Kyra and her mum when they couldn’t make enough candles during the week?

______________________________________________________________

104.How did Kyra’s uncle help her to open her first shop?

He helped her ___________________________________________________

105.What do you think of this story?

I think _________________________________________________________

IX.Writing(作文)(共18分):

106.Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”.(以“我想為學(xué)校做件事”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)

(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、小明及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。)

Use the following points as a reference.(以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)

l What do you want to do for your school?

l Why do you want to do it? l How are you going to do it?

Keys to the above:

31.A 32.D 33.C 34.C 35.B 36.D 37.B 38.C 39.A 40.C 41.A 42.A 43.D 44.B 45.C

46.A 47.D 48.B 49.C 50.A 51.B 52.D 53.D 54.A 55.B 56.B 57.movies 58.easily 59.third 60.unusual 61.writer 62.funny 63.suggest 64.herself 65.Do, work 66.shall we 67.How often 68.too, to 69.how to 70.so that 71.T 72.F 73.T 74.F 75.F 76.F 77.T 78.B 79.A 80.D 81.B 82.C 83.A 84.C 85.C 86.A 87.C 88.B 89.D 90.A 91.D 92.nobody 93.different 94.again 95.instead 96.less 97.drive 98.reduce 99.(She has)twenty-five / 25(furniture)stores.100.(She sold flowers)In Camden Market / a market / the market.101.She made candles(of all shapes and sizes)/ spent her free time making candles.102.Yes(, they did).103.Some of Kyra’s school friends(did)/(helped Kyra and her mum).104.by lending her some money.105.it is encouraging / inspiring / interesting / a success story…(Any reasonable answers are acceptable.)

第四篇：中考英語寫作

中考英語作文萬能模板：闡述主題題型要求從一句話或一個(gè)主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述．

１． 闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義．２． 分析并舉例使其更充實(shí)． 中考英語作文萬能模板：解決方法題型要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑１． 問題現(xiàn)狀

２． 怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))

In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious.First,------------(步說明現(xiàn)狀說明Ａ的現(xiàn)狀))．Second,---------------(舉例進(jìn)一Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another

-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future isawaiting us because--------------(帶來的好處).中考英語作文萬能模板：說明利弊題型這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度（利或弊）出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測(cè)）１． 說明事物現(xiàn)狀

２． 事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)（或一方面）３． 你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First----------------(Besides-------------------（Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二）Ａ的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一.).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that----------------(Ａ的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn))．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the

positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to---------------(我的看法)．

(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way,---------------（對(duì)前景的預(yù)測(cè))．)中考英語作文萬能模板：議論文的框架(1)不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型（選擇型）

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, __________.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因一

原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點(diǎn)一_____.People, however, differ in theiropinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點(diǎn)二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand二_____.Therefore, there，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____ is no doubt that ___觀點(diǎn)原因二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點(diǎn)一或二______.It is not only

because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.（2）利弊型的議論文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___advantages and disadvantages in __作文題目______.In fact, there are both 題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___secondly ___優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_____.優(yōu)點(diǎn)一______.AndJust As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___一______.In addition, ____缺點(diǎn)二______.缺點(diǎn)To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that 討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the

case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.中考英語作文萬能模板：圖表作文的框架as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the

figure/percentage in___作文題目的議題_____ has been on rise/ decreasethe table(graph/picture/pie/chart),(goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____.From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.There are at least two good reasons

accounting for ______.On the one hand, ________.On the other hand, _______ is due to the factresponsible that ________.for _______.Inaddition, ________ isMaybe there are

some other reasons to show ________.But it is generallyreasonsarebelieved commonly convincing.that the above mentionedAs far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______.Iboth sound and well-grounded.am sure my opinion is中考英語作文萬能模板：現(xiàn)象說明文（新中國成立以來發(fā)生了翻天覆地的變化，）

Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is ture that__________.There are many reasons

explaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.what is

more_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.Considering all

there,________________________.For one

thing_____________________,for another____________.In Conclusion____________________.中考英語作文萬能模板：一種事物或現(xiàn)象（負(fù)面意義傾向）

關(guān)于A的話題,早已引起了廣泛的社會(huì)關(guān)注。如今在電視、報(bào)紙、日常生活的很多角落，都有越來越多的關(guān)于A的議論。

給A一個(gè)精確恒定的定義并非易事，因?yàn)樗母拍钌婕傲丝茖W(xué)、人性、思想、經(jīng)濟(jì)、社會(huì)、自然等廣闊的領(lǐng)域。一般而言，我們可以這樣描述A…

A能成為公眾關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)，主要是由于它對(duì)個(gè)人、集體乃至整個(gè)世界都有著不容忽視的不良影響。

認(rèn) 真分析后我們可以看到，A對(duì)社會(huì)/世界 /健康的不利有很多。首先，從最直觀的角度來看，A的出現(xiàn)直接損害了（這里加入一句針對(duì)性的話，如人類的身體健康和環(huán)境的平衡）。（舉例）。其次，從更深一層次上講，它為人類的精神文明蒙上了一層陰影。更可怕的是，由于A所產(chǎn)生微小利益，卻促成了許多可悲的人們?yōu)槠渫跛?，破壞了人類生存的法則和空間。

事實(shí)上，A的出現(xiàn)是社會(huì)發(fā)展和人類進(jìn)步的產(chǎn)物，A所帶來的危害是人類進(jìn)化過程中付出的代價(jià)。同時(shí)，A的產(chǎn)生來源于部分人們的自私和趨利性，他們看到的是膚淺和片面的利益，而從未從整個(gè)全局和人類整體的利益出發(fā)去認(rèn)識(shí)和分析它。這使得A始終揮之不去。對(duì)此，我奉勸他們，跳出狹小的角落，用長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)和全局的眼光去重新審視A。

而如今，我們已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我們必須從根源上杜絕它的產(chǎn)生，我們每一個(gè)人都應(yīng)給予A高度的重視，用系統(tǒng)的和科學(xué)的方法去解決，唯有這樣，避免它帶來更多損失，我們?nèi)祟惽斑M(jìn)的腳步才會(huì)更加平穩(wěn)，更加歡快的邁向輝煌的明天。

中考英語作文萬能模板：說明原因型模塊（3）

Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate

the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that(1).If you(your dreams willcome true.On the contrary, if you2), as a result ,(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(look4very far to find out the truth , in respect that).You donn't have to

we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon(6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(附加

7).一、英語書信的常見寫作模板 開頭部分：How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m China for a visit.pleased to hear that you’re coming to I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.結(jié)尾部分：With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口頭通知常見寫作模板 呼語及開場(chǎng)白部分：Ladies

attention, please? I have an announcement and gentlemen, May I have your to make.正文部分：All the teachers and students are required to

attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please discussion in groups.listen carefully and we’ll have a Please come on time and don’t be late.結(jié)束語部分：Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.三、議論文模板1.導(dǎo)入：正反觀點(diǎn)式議論文模板第whether we should...1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about Our opinions are divided on this topic.（導(dǎo)入話題）

（觀點(diǎn)有分歧）

正文： 第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方觀點(diǎn)）Here are

the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(列出2~3個(gè)贊成的理由)

第against it.3段：However, the others are strongly Their place...reasons（反方觀點(diǎn)）2~3What’s are more...as

follows.In addition...(In the first 列

個(gè)反對(duì)的理由)出結(jié)論：

第overweigh 4段：Personally speaking, the advantages us more harm than good, so I support it.the disadvantages, for it will（個(gè)do 人觀點(diǎn)）2.“A オ

或者B”

類議論文模板： 導(dǎo)入： 第superior to B in many ways.Others, however, 1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is argue would prefer A because I think A has more that B is much better.Personally, I advantages.正文：

第A.The main reason is that...Another reason 2段：There are many reasons why I prefer is that...(贊同A的原因)

第some extent...(3段: Of course,列出B 1~2also 個(gè)has B的優(yōu)勢(shì)advantages)to 結(jié)論：

第A is much better than B.From what has been 4段: But if all these factors are considered, discussed conclusion that...(above, we may finally draw the 3.觀點(diǎn)論述類議論文模板：得出結(jié)論)オ 導(dǎo)入：

第As a student, I am strongly 1段：提出一種現(xiàn)象或某個(gè)決定作為議論的話題

decision.The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（亮明自己的觀點(diǎn)是贊成還是反對(duì)）in favour of the

（過渡句，承上啟下）

正文：

第2段：First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出

2~3個(gè)贊成或反對(duì)的理由)結(jié)論：

第3段：In conclusion, I believe that...（照應(yīng)第4.“How to”1段，構(gòu)成“總—分—總”結(jié)構(gòu)）

類議論文模板：導(dǎo)入：

第1段：提出一種現(xiàn)象或某種困難作為議論的話題 正文：

第serious 2段：Many ways can help to solve most effective.First of all...Another way to problem, but the following may this be solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3個(gè)解決此類問題的辦法)結(jié)論：

第two/ 3段：should be noted that we should take action three These measures are not the we best can but take.the only But it to...（強(qiáng)調(diào)解決此類問題的根本方法)

四、圖表作文寫作模板The chart gives us

圖表主題.The first thing we notice is that an overall picture of the 圖表

最大特點(diǎn)

.This means that as(進(jìn)一步說明).We can see from the statistics given that 表細(xì)節(jié)一thefigures 動(dòng)詞.-ed+After 幅度動(dòng)詞+時(shí)-ing 圖間(細(xì)節(jié)一中的第一個(gè)變化，緊 column, we can see that accounts for(also tell us that圖表細(xì)節(jié)二跟著的變.化)In.The 進(jìn)一步the 描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that(far as I am concerned is that(結(jié)論).The reason for this, as high time that we(發(fā)出倡議).給出原因)./ It is

一、英語書信的常見寫作模板 開頭部分：

How nice to hear from you again.Let me tell you something about the activity.I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr.9th.I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.結(jié)尾部分：

With best wishes.I’m looking forward to your reply.I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.二、口頭通知常見寫作模板 呼語及開場(chǎng)白部分：

Ladies please? I have an announcement to make.and gentlemen, May I have your attention,正文部分：

All the teachers and students are required to attend it.Please take your notebooks and make notes.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.Please come on time and don’t be late.結(jié)束語部分：

Please come and join in it.Everybody is welcome to attend it.I hope you’ll have a nice time here.That’s all.Thank you.三、議論文模板

1.正反觀點(diǎn)式議論文模板 導(dǎo)入：

第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should...Our opinions are divided on this topic.（導(dǎo)入話題）

（觀點(diǎn)有分歧）

正文：

第2段：Most of the students are in favour of it.（正方觀點(diǎn)）

Here are the reasons.First...Second...Finally...(2~3個(gè)贊成的理由)

列出第3段：However, the others are strongly against it.（反方觀點(diǎn)）

Their reasons are as follows.In the first place...What’s more...In addition...(列出2~3個(gè)反對(duì)的理由)

結(jié)論：

第4段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)）オ

2.“A或者B”類議論文模板：

導(dǎo)入：

第1段：Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways.Others, however, argue that B is much because I think A has more advantages.better.Personally, I would prefer A

正文：

第2段：There are many reasons why I prefer A.The main reason is that...Another reason is that...(贊同A的原因)

第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent...(列出1~2個(gè)B的優(yōu)勢(shì))

結(jié)論：

第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B.From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that...(得出結(jié)論)オ

3.觀點(diǎn)論述類議論文模板： 導(dǎo)入：

第1段：提出一種現(xiàn)象或某個(gè)決定作為議論的話題

As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision.（亮明自己的觀點(diǎn)是贊成還是反對(duì)）

The reasons for this may be listed as follows.（過渡句，承上啟下）

正文：

第2段：First of all...Secondly...Besides...(列出2~3個(gè)贊成或反對(duì)的理由)

結(jié)論：

第3段：In conclusion, I believe that...（照應(yīng)第1段，構(gòu)成“總—分—總”結(jié)構(gòu)）

4.“How to”類議論文模板：

導(dǎo)入：

第1段：提出一種現(xiàn)象或某種困難作為議論的話題

正文：

第2段：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective.First of all...Another way to solve the problem is...Finally...(列出2~3個(gè)解決此類問題的辦法)

結(jié)論： 第3段：These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take.But it should be noted that we should take action to...（強(qiáng)調(diào)解決此類問題的根本方法)

四、圖表作文寫作模板

The chart gives us an overall picture of the The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點(diǎn)圖表主題.This.means that as(進(jìn)一步說明).We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細(xì)節(jié)一.After 動(dòng)詞-ing 細(xì)節(jié)一中的第一個(gè)變化，the動(dòng)詞-ed+幅度+時(shí)間(緊跟著的變化).The figures also tell us that圖表細(xì)節(jié)二.Inthe column, we can see that accounts for(進(jìn)一步描述).Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that(結(jié)論).The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that(we(發(fā)出倡議).給出原因)./ It is high time that

第五篇：上海中考英語作文

上海中考英語作文學(xué)習(xí)資料

一.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

上海中考英語作文總分為20分，其中內(nèi)容分8分、語言分8分、組織結(jié)構(gòu)分4分。

以下為上海中考英語作文官方評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

1.內(nèi)容分8分。內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚完整。

2.語言分8分。學(xué)生需用語規(guī)范，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，無或少見語法錯(cuò)誤，詞匯拼寫正確，句型使用恰當(dāng)。首先是字?jǐn)?shù)，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

3.組織結(jié)構(gòu)分4分，也就是我們常說的文采分。根據(jù)學(xué)生使用復(fù)雜句型/單詞和諺語/俗語的情況來加分。

二.注意點(diǎn)：

每少5個(gè)詞扣0.5分，拼寫錯(cuò)誤每處扣0.5分，標(biāo)點(diǎn)，大小寫錯(cuò)誤每2處扣0.5分

3內(nèi)容和語言表達(dá)總分達(dá)15分及以上，得2~3分

內(nèi)容和語言總分13~14分，如確有好句型或表達(dá)用語，可酌情給1~2分

通篇句型，句式單一，詞匯貧乏者，即使無語法錯(cuò)誤，也不給分 開頭句+給的幾個(gè)參考點(diǎn)+結(jié)尾句+亮點(diǎn)。

先劃?rùn)n次：A檔 18~15分

B檔 14.5~12分

C檔 11.5~8分

D檔 3.5~0分 然后再仔細(xì)批閱看有否語法錯(cuò)誤,最后給出總分。

三.學(xué)生常出現(xiàn)的問題：

1.內(nèi)容空洞，沒有清晰的思路，表達(dá)能力不強(qiáng)，總是用一些不合適的句子內(nèi)容來表達(dá)，所以可能讓老師覺得理由或是內(nèi)容太假，當(dāng)然也就得不了高分。

2.議論過多，描寫不足。大多數(shù)情況下，我們把議論當(dāng)成的作文的重點(diǎn)，所以常常會(huì)跑題。應(yīng)當(dāng)多描述提示的內(nèi)容或加以想像，不能只翻譯了事。

3.總是使用同一個(gè)主語寫句子，重復(fù)太多。盡量使用不同的主語來表達(dá)，比如：I must learn English well.就可以換成：It is important for me to learn English well.4.結(jié)構(gòu)散漫，想哪兒寫哪兒，亂七八糟。應(yīng)該使用總分或總分總的結(jié)構(gòu)。

5.都是簡(jiǎn)單句，缺少復(fù)合句。多用狀語從句，賓語從句，定語從句及一些重要的句型，也 人教版新目標(biāo)初二下英語同步輔導(dǎo)

（一）初中二年級(jí)下un...初中二年級(jí)下Un...可以用用被動(dòng)語態(tài)。

6.連詞的使用較少，句子之間的連接很生硬?？梢约尤胍恍罕热? to my surprise(讓我驚 訝的是), what’s more（而且，還有）等，讓上文與下文銜接更緊密。意思也能更流暢地表達(dá)。

四． 中考寫作高頻使用詞組、句法

1.作文開頭的有用句

As we all know, As it is known to all, It’s known to all that… It’s common knowledge that… It’s commonly accepted that… There is no denying that… How time flies!In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water.2、中間分層部分的有用結(jié)構(gòu):

分正反兩面論述:On one hand, On the other hand 分兩點(diǎn)：For one thing, For another，分三點(diǎn)：Firstly, Secondly, Last but not least

3、結(jié)尾部分

All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的說，簡(jiǎn)單的說 Last but not least

組織語言 發(fā)表觀點(diǎn)的 In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I am concerned, Believe it or not，表示遞進(jìn)的 In addition Furthermore More importantly

What’s more Moreover 其他與“我”有關(guān)的寫作材料

1、重點(diǎn)句型

It`s+a.for sb.to do sth.So +a./ad.That

such a +a.+n.that too?to do Not?.until That’s why+句子

那是。。的原因 It’s said that +句子 There’s no doubt that+句子

毫無疑問··· It goes without saying that+句子

毫無疑問···

There’s no need to do

沒必要做··· There’s no point in doing 做某事毫無意義

2、提建議 Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why don`t+句子 I think you should do I suggest that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你的話，我會(huì)做``` It’s best to do

3、表示喜歡，感興趣 Like/love/enjoy doing Be fond of/be keen on sth.Prefer to do A rather than do B Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in

4、努力做``` Try to do/strive to do

Make efforts to do=make every effort to do Try one’s best/do one’s best to do Do what/everything sb can to do

5、打算做···/計(jì)劃做··· Intend to do/plan to do

Be going to do Decide to do Determine to do=be determine to do Make up one’s mind to do

6、表示想/希望

Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing

7、其他有用的短語

From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learn?by heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in?.8、其他有用的句式 For the reason above,/After all/As for me,/Frankly speaking/Generally speaking/Believe it or not,/As a Grade Nine student,/The reasons are as follows, People’s view on?vary from person to person

4、增添亮點(diǎn) 使用復(fù)合句和諺語 諺語舉例

I firmly believe that “A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life”.As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by asking questions.” It’s common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses.An old saying goes, “Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.”

五．2002-2013 上海中考英語作文題目集錦

2002 My favorite thing(s)

我的心愛之物

2003 To be a lovely Shanghainese

做一個(gè)可愛的上海人

2004 Leave School

畢業(yè)時(shí)分

2005 Growing pains and gains

成長(zhǎng)的煩惱

2006

I have a dream

我有一個(gè)夢(mèng)

2007 A Story about My Parent(s)

一個(gè)關(guān)于我父/母的故事

2008 Love Around Me

愛在我身邊

2009 I want to do something for my school 我想為我的學(xué)校做點(diǎn)什么

2010 I'm proud of myself

我為我自己感到自豪

2011 My Favourite Thing（s）

我的心愛之物

2012 If you are Joe.your friend Betty is upset because she cares too much about the result.寫給一個(gè)考試焦慮考生的一封信，并給予建議。

2013 Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”．(以“如何保護(hù)自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文)

六．近5年上海中考英語真題范文分享

2009命題作文

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to do something for my school”.(以“我想為學(xué)校做件事”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評(píng)分。)Use the following points as a reference.(以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)l What do you want to do for your school? 2 Why do you want to do it? 3 How are you going to do it? 例文1：

I want to make school clean.You may think it is very simple.But I don't think so.Our teacher said, “School is your home, you should keep it clean.” But I have never done anything to make school clean.For example, I have never told my classmate to pick up rubbish after he threw it on the ground.I also threw the rubbish on the ground.So I want to make school clean so that everyone can forgive me.During this summer holiday, I will go to school to make school clean.Of course, I will do it with my classmates.We will make school clean every weekends next term as well.Now, do you think it is simple? 2 One possible version I want to do something for my school I'm leaving my school.I want to plant a tree in my school garden.I have found there are too many buildings and few trees in our school yard, so I want to make my school much greener and more beautiful.If I plant a tree there, maybe more and more students will do as me.In their spare time, the students can read under the trees.2010命題作文

上海中考英語作文題:I'm proud of myself

1、What kind of person are you?

2、What makes you proud of yourself(Give an example/examples)

3、Why are you proud of yourself? 要求：至少60字 范文：1

I am a boy of less confidence.I always hate running.But as we all know, the students of Grade nine have to take part in the sports exam.At that moment, I just wanted to give up.But my parents encouraged me: “impossible is nothing,” “you could challenge yourself!” so with the encouragement of them, I tried my best to run and insisted on running.When I got to the finishing line, I felt proud of myself, though I didn't get the good mark, I knew, I won.I created a miracle for myself and I was so proud of myself!2.I am proud of myself The wheel of life has rolled fast through the past fifteen years.By looking backwards, I’m so proud of myself because I’ve grown into a strong-minded person.It was the first time for me to climb a high mountain alone.At first, I felt my body was filled with energy.As time went by, tiredness made my step slow down.For many times, the idea of giving up the journey appeared in my mind.But the saying “Accumulated water becomes a river.” enabled me to move on.Though the power of one step seemed so weak, I insisted on climbing to the top.When I succeeded, I felt I had reached a new height in my life.How proud I’m of being a strong-minded person.3.I am proud of myself I used to be a girl with few words.Last month I failed in the exam.I felt so depressed that I couldn’t help crying.However, my mother told me, “The life is a tough road full of ups and downs.Everyone has to experience the low times.” Her encouraging words lifted me up.I made up my mind to prepare for the next exam.I always listened to the teacher carefully and did my homework attentively.To my surprise, I achieved the best grade in the exam.At that time, I actually felt proud of myself.I’m proud because I achieved success as well as courage.Now I’m more active than before, and I always believe as long as you keep your heart facing the sun, the world will always bring you new hopes.2011話題補(bǔ)全式作文

Writing(作文)共18分

Write at least 60 words about the topic “I’m a member of “

(以“我是??的一員”為題寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格子” 提示： 你可以作為任意興趣小組或者社團(tuán)的一員，或者作為家庭，班級(jí)，社區(qū)額的一員，寫出你的經(jīng)歷，感受等。

Use the following points as a reference Are you glad to be a member of ??？ What do you do in it? How do you feel as such a member? 例文：1 I’m a Member of the Singing and Dancing ClubHello, everyone!I’m very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club.I have been in this club for 2 years.I’m an actor in the club.I like singing and dancing very much.I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends.Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day.It makes me feel very happy.2 In this world, every family has a mother, a father, a daughter or a son.For plenty of people, families are very important.when you are very said, you can found one or two persons to make you feel happiness, this is you family.I am very gold to become my family member, because I have a pretty good parent and a fairly younger brother.When I come back, I always feel freedom and relaxed.My mother is a kind cook;she has lots of experience in cooking, so my brother and I are healthy.As a daughter，I shouldn't make my parents worry.As a sister ,l should look after my brother.l want to be a great member of my family ,l would try my best to do what l should do in the family 2012書信類作文

Writing(作文):(共20分)

Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation(根據(jù)所給情景寫一封不少于60詞的信)Suppose you are Joe.Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result.What do you think? Try to offer her some advice.(假設(shè)你是Joe，你的好朋友Betty因?yàn)檫^于在意考試結(jié)果而感到焦慮。請(qǐng)給他寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶?，并給她一些建議。)例文：1 Knowing that you care too much about the result, I am quite worried.Actually, it is no use being upset despite the importance of the result.There are some effective ways to calm down.Above all, keeping reminding yourself to stay in peace is the most helpful.Besides, it will help you to relax if you spare some time for recreational activities like sports.Finally, talk to your parents and friends, who are always ready to comfort you.As is said by Steve Jobs, “the journey is the reward.” I am sure you will get through this situation.2.Dear Betty，How time flies!The exam is finally near at hand.Important as it is to you, you really shouldn't care too much about the result and get yourself overly upset.Remember all the hard work you have put in!As long as you go with a calm mind and a positive attitude, I'm sure there will be nothing difficult for you and the exam will be smooth sailing.I suggest you talk more to parents and teachers about your anxiety and take better care of your health such as getting enough sleep and doing more exercise.Above all, no matter what the result, all you need to do is to act more and think less because action is worry's worst enemy.Keep faith and calm down, and you are sure to come out with flying colors.All the best of luck.Yours, Joe

2013自由命題類作文

Writing(作文)(共20分)99．Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to protect myself”．(以“如何保護(hù)自己”為題，寫一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。)提示： 自我保護(hù)是青少年需要掌握的重要技能。請(qǐng)談?wù)勀阍谏钪性鯓舆M(jìn)行自我保護(hù)(可

結(jié)合生活中的某一個(gè)情景或具體事例，如：面對(duì)災(zāi)難如何自救，如何預(yù)防受騙或侵

害，如何避免生活中的意外，等等)。Phrases for reference(以下短語僅供參考)： Ask…for help

in danger

calm down prevent．．．from

(注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)具體人名、校名等個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分)范文1 As a student, I think it important for me to protect myself from dangerous situations.First of all, I must calm down as soon as possible, for panicking is of no help.Then, as is know to all, calling 119 immediately is the most effective way to save myself.As well as that, it is best to take the stairs instead of elevators.IN conclusion, with positive attitude and sufficient preparations, I will be able to protect myself from fires.2：How to protect myself

Everyone in my family was awaked by the unusual shaking.The first word that came to my mind was earthquake.When I looked outside of the window, I found everyone running here and there, and I could hear the shouting from the neighbors.Despite the fact that I was in danger, I told myself to calm down and think about the ways to protect myself in an earthquake.I should get outside instead of hiding inside the building.I couldn’t take the lift but walk downstairs.No sooner had I got outside than I asked the police for help.And I should always be aware of the unexpected drop overhead.Following these ways, I managed to prevent myself from being hurt, and survived the earthquake.I believe that these are useful ways to protect myself in an earthquake.3： A terrible fire in Jilin took many people’s lives recently and brought endless pains to a large number of families.So if I were caused in a fire, I would try my best to protect myself.First, I would stay calm.A cool head can prevent me from taking rash actions and help to pick out a right solution the first time.Then, I would call 119 with my exact location and the situation then.Most importantly, I would cover myself with wet clothes and made my way to the secure channel instead of jumping out of the windows.With above tips, I will surely be able to protect myself from fires.七．熱點(diǎn)話題背誦篇目

關(guān)于上海的變化

1.Great changes in Shanghai

With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in Shanghai.Many years ago, there used to be narrow bridges, roads and houses in Shanghai.But now, we can find big bridges, wide roads as well as high buildings everywhere.People live in Shanghai used to live in small houses in narrow streets, but now most of them are living in big and comfortable apartments.What’s more, we can see grass, lakes and parks here and there.To our great joy , the 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai as well.As a shanghainese, I am pound of all these changes.We are sure Shanghai will have a bright future.關(guān)于學(xué)校生活

2.Our school life

Our school life is very colorful.They are many hobby groups in our school, such as singing group, dancing group, science group and so on.We can learn a lot by joining these groups.For example, we hold a Singing Festival in May.We can enjoy ourselves by singing.It’s so interesting that everyone likes it very much.We also have a sports meeting in October.It always makes us excited.Sometimes we even have friendly matches with other schools.What an enjoyable school life we have!關(guān)于網(wǎng)上購物

3.Shoppign on the internet

Nowadays，shopping on the internet has become a new way of shopping.Indeed，it offers people a lot of advantages.So I prefer to do some shopping on the internet.For one thing, it is convenient because the online shops are open 24 hours a day and we don’t have to queue.For the other thing, it is often cheaper to buy goods on the Internet and it is also easy to find out what we want.Additionally，we can save a lot of time.Isn’t it great to do shopping on the Internet? 關(guān)于學(xué)習(xí)4.My way of Learning English

As we all know, English is one of the most important language in the world.So it’s important for us to learn it.Then how can we it well？In my opinion, the best way to learn English is to do more listening, speaking, reading and writing.What’s more, we should practice these skills every day.Of course, interest is the best teacher.The more we learn, the more interesting and helpful we’ll find English.As the saying goes,”Practice makes perfect.’’

關(guān)于節(jié)日

5.The Spring Festival As we all know, the Spring Festival is the most important festival in China.On the New Year’s Eve, families always get together and have a big dinner.Many people like to set off firecracker.People also eat dumping---a kind of traditional Chinese food.Especially, children like the festival very much because they can nit only have delicious food, wear new clothes but also receive red packets from their parents or their elders.It is said that the money in the red packets will bring children good luck.Chinese people have a good time during the festival.關(guān)于保護(hù)環(huán)境

6.Environment around us

The environment is very important to us.We need the fresh air, the clean water and so on.There used to be many trees around us, the air was fresh and the river was clean.But now, people cut down too many trees and the environment around us becomes worse and worse.So as students, we should try to protect our environment.First of all, we should plant as many trees as possible.Second, we should ride bikes or walk to school instead of taking buses or cars.Third, we shouldn’t’t use plastic bags.In a word, if everyone knows the importance of environment protection, we’ll have a green world.關(guān)于電腦7.My view on computer

With the development of science and technology, computers are playing more and more important roles in our daily life.They can do most of the things people can do.By using computers, we can gain huge amount of knowledge and information, especially, computers have made the communication with our friends and relatives more convenient and easier.But some students are so keen on playing games online that they even don’t want to go to school.I don't think it is right.In my opinion, we should make good use ot computers.關(guān)于出國8.Is it helping to study abroad

In recent years, more and more students in China go abroad for their further studies.Most Chinese people think it is helpful to story abroad.But I don’t think so.For one TOEFL or GRE, and this will surely waste us plenty of money and time.In addition, if we study home, we can stay with our family and friends, and we can study in a more friendly environment In a word, I prefer to study home.關(guān)注時(shí)事

H1N1流感

★ 范文01.根據(jù)中文大意和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文.所給英文提示詞語供選用.請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名.世界上已有許多國家發(fā)現(xiàn)了新型H1N1流感病毒(H1N1 flu virus)病例.據(jù)了解，人感染該病毒后會(huì)出現(xiàn)咳嗽、發(fā)燒、疲勞等癥狀.為了加強(qiáng)同學(xué)們的預(yù)防意識(shí)，(21世紀(jì)中學(xué)生英語報(bào)>正在舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你給該報(bào)投稿，描述感染該病毒的癥狀并談一談為了預(yù)防該病毒我們?cè)撛趺醋?，最后表達(dá)我們能戰(zhàn)勝病毒的信心.提示詞：cough, have a fever, feel tired, prevent, wash, exercise, sleep, believe Nowadays, many countries in the world have found cases of the new H1N1 flu virus.It?s said that people with H1N1 flu virus will cough, have a fever and feel tired.To prevent the virus, we can do many things.Firstly, we?d better not go to places where there are many people.Secondly, we need to wash our hands often with soap and water, especially after we cough or sneeze.It's also a good habit for us to exercise regularly.It can not only help us keep fit but also improve our health against illness.And having a good sleep is important, too.People who are tired or under stress can get sick easily.And then, eat more fruit and vegetable to keep ourselves fit and strong.Last but not least, open the window and keep the air in the room fresh.If we all do these things, we will prevent the virus.So there is no need to be worried.I believe we will win through in the end.★ 范文02.★ 上海世博會(huì)對(duì)中國的影響

As we all know that 2010 World Expo will be held in Shanghai, this is the first time that China hosted the World Expo.The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia.So it is a great honor for our country.It is also a great honor for all the Asians.As a host city, Shanghai will have more chances to develop quickly.The theme of the Expo is “Better City, Better Life”.We all really hope that Shanghai will become more exciting and attractive and that we can enjoy life to the fullest.Organizers expected to attract 70 million visitors from all over the world to attend, at the same time it is also the largest in the history of World Expo.It is a good chance for China to show its achievements in many fields.★ 范文04.How to Survive an Earthquake

If earthquake happened, firstly, don't panic and calm down.Secondly, find some safe place to stay and don't run in such a hurry.If in the room, one should hide himself/herself under something hard, such as desk, table or even bed and keep away from shelf and cupboard, and never take a lift to go downstairs.If in the open air, find an open place and never get close to cars or waterside.Thirdly, we should help each other when we meet trouble.At last, no matter how strong the earthquake is, if only we have the belief to defeat it and never give up, we must be able to overcome any difficulties.二、環(huán)保問題

★ 范文05.環(huán)境問題今天環(huán)境變得越來越糟糕,環(huán)境問題影響著人們的工作,學(xué)習(xí),生活等,而我們的工作,生活,生產(chǎn)等又使環(huán)境污染越來越嚴(yán)重??,如何保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境?請(qǐng)以“ How to protect our environment? ”為題寫一篇短文。提示:存在問題:1.水污染越來越嚴(yán)重；2.砍伐森林嚴(yán)重；3.大氣污染嚴(yán)重；4.白色垃圾等。要求：如何改善/保護(hù)環(huán)境?至少：3至4個(gè)方面。How to protect/save our environment/world? As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse /more and more seriously today.Water is polluted;we have no clean water to drink.Many trees are cutting down;some animals are getting less and less.Some factories are pouring dirty air into the sky.The population is increasing faster and faster, resources are getting less and less…etc.Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.People?s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution.Many people died of diseases.In order to live a better life, something must be done to stop the pollution.It?s our duty to protect our environment.We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere.Trees are very helpful and important for us.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and healthier in the future.If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful.In a word, if everyone pays more attention to our environment, there will be less pollution and our life will be better.“There is only one earth”, I hope everyone will protect our environment well.限塑令

★ 范文06.有關(guān)限塑令問題

根據(jù)國務(wù)院發(fā)布的“限塑令”，自2008年6月1日起，在所有超市、商場(chǎng)實(shí)行塑料購物袋有償使用制度，超市、商場(chǎng)一律不得免費(fèi)提供塑料購物袋。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語短文，要求包括以下內(nèi)容：

現(xiàn)狀：目前中國每天消費(fèi)近30億個(gè)塑料袋，造成了嚴(yán)重的資源浪費(fèi)和環(huán)境污染；

限塑令的意義：減少塑料袋使用量，提高公眾的環(huán)保意識(shí)；

提倡：重拎布袋子，重提菜籃子。

參考詞匯：禁令 ban 意識(shí) awareness 提倡 advocate The problem of “white pollution” caused by used plastic is becoming increasingly serious, in which plastic shopping bags play an important role.In China about three billion plastic shopping bags are consumed every day, which results in a great waste of resources and heavy environmental pollution.Luckily, the government has put a nationwide ban on the use of free plastic bags, demanding that all stores and supermarkets not provide customers with free plastic bags after June 1.I agree with the rule, which people can?t get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets.It advocates people to use their cloth bags and baskets.It?s good for our environment.So I hope all the students in our class stop using the plastic bags, and to use our own cloth bags.I hope we can take care of our environment.Let?s make our world more and more beautiful.★ 范文07.節(jié)約水是我們每個(gè)人的責(zé)任

As we know, water is very important to man, we can?t live without water.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.But some people don?t care about it.They waste a lot of water in their daily life.Even worse, they pour dirty water into rivers.They throw rubbish into rivers, too.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.Something must be done to stop the pollution.And I think it?s a great shame to waste while millions are in great need of water.I think what we can do is that we have to save every drop of water as possible as we can.For example, we must turn off the tap immediately after we use it.We can use a basin to wash our hands and faces.It?s also a good idea to encourage my friends and family members to join me!Only in this way can we live happily.If we don?t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.I believe if everyone makes a little effort, we can make a big difference.低碳生活

★ 范文08.現(xiàn)在全世界都在倡導(dǎo)“低碳生活”（low-carbon life），即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低開支的生活方式。低碳生活對(duì)我們大家都有好處，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文向一家英文報(bào)社投稿。內(nèi)容包括：你的具體做法、你的感受以及建議。

提示詞語：be good for, everyone, ride a bike, think, make a difference, environment, suggest, reuse Low-carbon life is good for everyone.To help with the environment, I always walk or ride a bike to school instead of taking a car.Besides, I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.I think it?s my duty to live a low-carbon life.And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment.So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And we?d better not spend much money on expensive clothes.If everyone does something for the environment, I believe the earth will be a better place.提出建議

學(xué)習(xí)★ 范文09.根據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信，信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，其字?jǐn)?shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)。

假如你叫Zhang Fang，是美國中學(xué)生Lucy的筆友，你收到了她的電子郵件。請(qǐng)根據(jù)她來信的內(nèi)

容寫一封回信。針對(duì)她的困惑，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑫r(shí)提出一些建議，并表達(dá)對(duì)她的祝愿。

Dear Zhang Fang，I have been in this school for two years.My school?s not too bad.But I haven’t got used to it.Some of the teachers are very good, especially my science teachers.They try to make lessons interesting.I like to have their classes and spend much time on it.So I usually get A in science exams.But I don?t like having English and history classes.There are too many things to memorize and they’re so boring.Besides, it seems that the teachers can only read again and again.They don?t try to make lessons interesting.Whenever the lessons start, I feel sleepy.I often get C in the exams, sometimes D.The final exam of this term is coming.What shall I do? Could you give me some advice? Yours，Lucy Dear Lucy，I’m very happy to hear from you.Don’t worry too much.Many students have the same problem like you.I think it?s very common for students to dislike memorizing.Here’s my advice.But in fact English and history are not as boring as you think.If you try the following things, you may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class again.First you had better learn the new lessons by yourself and write down the difficult points before lessons.It can make you become interested in what the teachers say in class.Second you should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers? questions.It can help you understand better and memorize more quickly.What?s more, you also need to review the lessons regularly after class.If you still feel unhappy, you can have a talk with your teacher to ask for help.I really hope my advice can help you out and get A in English and history exams.Keep trying, I believe you will enjoy the school life and make great progress with your study.Yours, Zhang Fang.生活 ★ 范文10.假如你是韓梅，下面是一封你的筆友Alice 給你發(fā)來的e-mail, 請(qǐng)根據(jù)e-mail的內(nèi)容，給他寫一封回信。與她交流看法，并幫她排憂解難。

提示詞語：listen to, mother’s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile

Dear Han Mei , I’m afraid I’ve got a big problem recently.My mother talks too much to me.She always tells me, “Be careful while crossing the street.” “Put on more clothes.” “Did you do a good job at school?” And so on.I’m annoyed(煩惱).What shall I do? Can you give me some ideas?

Alice Dear Alice，as a teenager, I met the same problem as you.But now I can get on/ along better with my mother.Here are some ideas for you.Your mother talks much, because she cares about you.I'm sure your mum loves you very much.Maybe it shows your mother?s love.So I think you should listen to her.If your opinions are different from your mother?s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you?re thinking about.If your mother doesn’t take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.I hope what I say here can help you a lot.Han Mei

娛樂 ★ 范文11.根據(jù)中文提示和英文書信內(nèi)容，寫一封意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的回信。（信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其字?jǐn)?shù)不計(jì)入所完成的回信內(nèi)）。請(qǐng)不要寫出你的校名和姓名。

75.中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)、大力大，專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约?。為此，不同的同學(xué)有不同的放松方式，有的愛看電視，有的聽音樂，有的做運(yùn)動(dòng)?請(qǐng)你談?wù)勀阃ㄟ^哪些方式放松自己并說說原因，談?wù)勀愕母惺?。提示詞語：relax, TV, music, think The Senior High School Entrance Examination is coming.In order to make a success in the exam I think it’s high time for us to relax a little.Or we’ll be too nervous to work well in the exam.In order to relax ourselves, we can turn to some of our hobbies, different students have different ways---Some watch TV, some listen to music… But for me I enjoy taking exercise most.Whenever I feel tired, I always spend an hour(in)walking or jogging in the park.Besides, I also play table tennis with my friends after class.In my opinion, taking exercise can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help build our bodies.I think it?s really helpful to both my health and my study.I hope all of my classmates can join me in getting relaxed.I wish you all every success in the coming examination！

運(yùn)動(dòng) ★ 范文12.假如你叫李飛，是學(xué)?！靶@英語報(bào)”的編輯。你收到你同學(xué)張麗的姐姐的來信。請(qǐng)根據(jù)這位姐姐的要求，給張麗寫一封回信。

Dear Editor，I am really worried about my sister, Zhang Li.She always watches TV or reads books in her free time.She doesn?t like going out to exercise.I?m afraid that she will be not strong enough.Could you write to her to tell her the importance of doing exercise and give her some advice?

A worried sister Dear Zhang Li，Your sister is worried about you very much.Because you don?t take any exercise in spare time.I think health is very important to us teenagers.Either study or work is based on strong body.Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic.If we don't take any exercise, we may feel tired and get sick easily.So you should go out instead of staying at home.There are many kinds of sports you can do, such as running, swimming and ball games.Just remember “Exercise one hour a day, keep illness away.” Good luck!

Yours，Li Fei

多彩校園

學(xué)校簡(jiǎn)介

★ 范文13.在一次英語班會(huì)上，老師請(qǐng)同學(xué)們以Proud of My School 請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給的提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括學(xué)校面貌，你在校的活動(dòng)，以及你喜歡學(xué)校的原因。提示詞：bigsmall, trees, play games, family, be kind to, befeel proud of Proud of my school My school is very big with several tall buildings.We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it.There are many flowers everywhere.8 My busy school life always makes me happy.I have lots of fun at school.I not only have all kinds of classes, but also take part in colorful activities after classes.I play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis.I love my school because it?s like a big family.The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents.I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.I'm leaving my school.I'll never forget the days I've spent here.友情至上

★ 范文14.假設(shè)你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你與同學(xué)們?cè)谝黄饘W(xué)習(xí)、參加各種活動(dòng)，相互幫助，彼此之間建立了深厚的友誼.校園網(wǎng)的英語論壇開辟了 “Thank you letter” 專欄.請(qǐng)按下面的要求給你的同學(xué)Ling Feng寫一封感謝信.注意：1.這封信要表達(dá)你對(duì)Ling Feng的感謝；2.信中要簡(jiǎn)述感謝Ling Feng的原因，適當(dāng)舉例，并談?wù)勛约旱母惺?；提示詞語：thank you, at the end of , kind, forget, help? with, stay in touch Dear Ling Feng，I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education.You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.You have given me so much help that I will never forget.Last term, I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week.When I was worrying about the lessons, you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject.With your help, I didn?t fall behind others.Since then, we have become very close friends.I think I?ll try to help others just like you.Thank you again.Even though we may go to different schools, I?ll always stay in touch with you.I wish you success for the future.Yours, Liu Yan

課余活動(dòng) ★ 范文15.體育鍛煉與參加夏令營(yíng)

Most of us spend one or two hours on sports one week, some do less than one hour.As for me, most of my sports time is for running.Sometimes playing basketball with my friends is also fun for me.I think it?s necessary for everyone to go out to do sports because it?s good for our health and study.And I?d

love to take part in the summer camp.First we?d better hold some parties with foreign students in order to know each other better.Next we can visit some museums, places of interest to open our eyes.Finally I hope we will have a chance to live in foreign families.I think it?s a good way to understand the different cultures between different countries.I really want to make friends with foreign students because we?re in the same world.At the same time, the activities can help us relax ourselves after the examinations and improve our English.運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì) ★ 范文16.一家英文報(bào)社正在舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你積極參加.題目是“一次難忘的運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)”.內(nèi)容要求：你或你的朋友參加了什么項(xiàng)目，結(jié)果怎樣，感覺如何？提示詞語：year, take part in, field event(relay race, high jump, long jump, shot put, excited, take the first prize.This year, I took part in the relay race, I was running the last lap.It was the final event on sports meet.Everyone was paying attention.All the runners got ready at the starting line.As soon as the race began, everyone was too excited to stop cheering.When it was my turn, I could feel the Class 4?s runner catch up with me.So I try my best to run faster, finally, our class won the first prize in the most exciting event.I was happy that I won another prize for my class.This is the most unforgettable sports that I had.畢業(yè)感想 ★ 范文17.初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，三年的初中生活一定給你留下了很多揮之不去的回憶。請(qǐng)你給大家講一個(gè)最值得你回憶的故事。包括時(shí)間、人物、事情經(jīng)過和事后你的感想（請(qǐng)不要寫出真實(shí)的學(xué)校名稱以及真實(shí)姓名）。

提示詞供參考。three years, memories, one of, one day, think, happy/ sorry How time flies!I have studied in my school for three years.And I will graduate from middle school in a month.I am eager to share my happiness and sadness with you.I had so many memories in three years? life.On of them impressed me very much.I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well.Since then, she has kept helping me.Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I?m good at it.I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.I’ve learned a lot from her.I will try to help others when they are in trouble.I think it is a happy thing to help others.★ 范文18.2008年政府取消了“五一”黃金周（“May golden week”），但是，最近有些人又提出要恢復(fù)7天的長(zhǎng)假.同學(xué)們也在校園網(wǎng)的“自由論壇”上展開了激烈的討論.請(qǐng)你選用下面表格所提供的信息，寫一篇短文，談?wù)劵謴?fù)長(zhǎng)假的利與弊，并簡(jiǎn)述你的觀點(diǎn)，給出一至兩條理由.Advantages Disadvantages have a good rest spend more time …with … … cause a lot of trouble… be crowded everywhere… … In 2008, May golden week was canceled, but this year people have discussed the problem whether we should renew May golden week or not.Some people think the 7-day holiday is very important.Firstly, we could have a good rest and refresh ourselves after several months of hard work.Secondly, we could spend more time staying with our family.Thirdly, we will be able to use the one-week vacation to travel to some farther places such as foreign countries.However, other people hold the opposite view.They think it causes a lot of problems.It may lead to traffic jam and visitors will not enjoy themselves if the travelling spots are over-crowded.As a student, I prefer a 7-day holiday.Not only can I sleep well and do exercise, but also I can read some interesting books.How I wish a 7-Day holiday would come soon and we will have a 7-day holiday then!

公共規(guī)則 ★ 范文19.It?s not allowed to throw litter anywhere in the public places.Everyone should obey the rules.Speaking loudly in the reading room is seemed to be very rude.Remember not to do anything that might make other people uncomfortable.We should stand in line when we are waiting for the bus.Try hard to give up the bad habits and develop good ones.We should respect the senior people and talk to them politely.Especially, we should give our seat to old people or women with babies on the bus.I think helping others can not only make us happy but also help us get more experience in life.Please cherish the public property.使用手機(jī) ★ 范文20.關(guān)于中學(xué)生使用手機(jī)

贊成意見：1.現(xiàn)在是信息社會(huì)，手機(jī)是最快的信息交流的工具之一。2.應(yīng)充分利用好手機(jī)。如偶遇突發(fā)事故，可立即撥打手機(jī)求助。3.可在每天學(xué)習(xí)之余利用手機(jī)游戲放松一下自己。4.只要正確使用好手機(jī)，緊跟時(shí)間并無過錯(cuò)，追求時(shí)尚可以理解，但學(xué)習(xí)是首要任務(wù)。反對(duì)意見：1.學(xué)校已提供了公共電話，因此手機(jī)并不能帶來更多的方便，而且花費(fèi)較多。2.若課堂接聽手機(jī)會(huì)影響上課。3.學(xué)生玩手機(jī)游戲或接發(fā)短信，將無法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students.Some think it is good for students to bring a mobile phone.But some people do not think so.They think it is bad for students to bring a mobile phone.Because the students will use mobile phones to play games, sent text messages, watch movies, etc which will do harm to their study.And if a mobile phone ring in the class, the teacher and students would be disturbed.In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information.A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information.The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to make the best use of it.Suppose there?s a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately.There?re also some games in the mobile phone.We can relax ourselves by playing them when we?re tired of our studies.In my opinion, it?s not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way and do not disturbed others.網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲 ★ 范文21.沉迷網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲

題目：李小虎沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。作為他的好朋友，你打算怎么幫他呢？ 請(qǐng)用下面所給的提示詞寫一篇短文。

提示詞：

give up

concentrate on

be(become)interested in Li Xiaohu spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others.As a good/close friend of his, I must do something to help him.First, I think it?s very important for him to learn lessons well.He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games.Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes.So he must give it up.I can play more sports with him after school.Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games.And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study.Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects.I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying.At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too.If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.電視節(jié)目 ★ 范文22.As we know, TV plays an important part in our daily life.It's quicker and more convenient to get information from TV than from newspapers.It is an important tool to spread culture and information, including foreign languages.And we can learn much knowledge from TV which we can?t get from books.What?s more, good TV programs can keep us wise and healthy.With TV, children can grow up happily.So it is not reasonable to forbid students to watch TV.But watching TV too long is not good.Sitting in front of TV all day does harm to our eyes and wastes our time for study.So we should take a correct attitude to students watching TV.六、飲食與健康

飲食安全 ★ 范文23.假如你是一所國際學(xué)校校辦英文雜志的學(xué)生編輯.你看了下面這封信后，也想寫一篇關(guān)于該信的讀后感，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：你對(duì)此事件的看法；解釋你的理由并提出你的建議；向受害者表達(dá)盡快康復(fù)的祝愿.Today, I received the reader's letter.I was shocked at it.Personally speaking, I think we should pay more attention to the food safety.The government must make some necessary laws.What's more, some businessmen shouldn't be only interested in making money.They must care about people's health.We'd better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious, because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health.Finally, I hope the family in the accident will get better soon.減肥問題 ★ 范文24.假設(shè)你是《21世紀(jì)中學(xué)生英語報(bào)》“heart to heart”專欄的編輯.下面是你收到的一位中學(xué)生的來信.請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他來信的內(nèi)容寫一封回信.針對(duì)他的問題 Dear Xiaowei，Weight problem is quite common among teenagers everywhere.So I don?t think you have much to worry about.Here are my suggestions.Eating late at night is OK, but you should to eat more fruit and vegetables, which are good for you.Also, when you are free, you?d better do more exercise.Running is great.You don?t like running alone, but what about running with your friends? Or you can do some team sports like basketball.I?m sure your friends will be willing to help you lose weight.I hope you have as much success in losing weight as you have had in your studies.“Believe myself, and I will win.” It?s really important for us when we meet difficulties.Don?t lose heart;I?m sure you will succeed one day.Good luck.Editor

中國城市與傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日

介紹首都北京 ★ 范文25.請(qǐng)你閱讀你的加拿大網(wǎng)友Tommy的e-mail，根據(jù)e-mail的內(nèi)容，給他寫一封回信.Dear Li Lei，I haven't heard from you for a long time.I'm glad to tell you that I'll visit Beijing this summer vacation.It is said that Beijing is a great city with a long history and more changes have taken place since the 2008 Olympic Games.I would like to know something about Beijing, such as places of interest, the environment, traffic and people there.I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Tommy

Dear Tommy, I’m glad to know you will come to Beijing.Beijing, the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world.There are many places of interest, such as the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City and the Great Wall.All of them are beautiful and well-known to the world.Great changes have taken place in Beijing since we successfully held the 2008 0lympic Games.Now, people pay more attention to the environment.More trees and flowers have been planted.For the traffic, it is very convenient for people to travel around Beijing, because several new subway lines have been built.If you come to Beijing, you will find people here are very friendly and helpful.What's more, a lot of people can speak English.Beijing is really an attractive city with a long history.I'm looking

forward

to

hearing

from

you

soon.Yours, Li Lei

中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日 ★ 范文26.根據(jù)中文大意和英語提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯、不少于60詞的短文。所給英文提示詞供選用。注意：不要寫出你的真實(shí)姓名和校名。

假設(shè)你是劉偉，你的美國朋友MIKE 想通過你了解中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，給Mike 寫一封e-mail，向他介紹我國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日春節(jié)的情況。

內(nèi)容提示：1.春節(jié)是中國最重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；2.春節(jié)期間人們的主要活動(dòng)（節(jié)前、除夕、節(jié)日期間）Spring Festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, set off fireworks, lucky money Dear Mike, How are you? I?m really glad that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.There are many traditional festivals in China, such as Spring Festival, Mid-Autumn Day and so on.I?d like to introduce the Spring Festival to you.Spring Festival is the most important traditional holiday in China.It usually lasts for 15 days.Days before the festival, people clean their houses.They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck.They decorate their houses with paper cuts.On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals.Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.At midnight, they set off fireworks to welcome the new year.During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people.People visit their relatives and friends.They wish each a happy year and good luck.How happy we are.Best wishes!Yours, Liu Wei

名言警句

01.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧.02.Time is money.時(shí)間就是金錢 03.Easier said than done.說來容易做來難 04.Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成.05.Look before you leap.三思而后行.06.Knowledge is power.知識(shí)就是力量 07.God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助.08.Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.心之所愿，無事不成 09.It?s never too old to learn.活到老，學(xué)到老 10.No pains, no gains.不勞無獲 11.Once in a blue moon.千載難逢 12.To make the impossible possible.將不可能變?yōu)榭赡?13.Failure is the mother of success.失敗乃成功之母 14.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患難見真情 15.First things first.先做重要之事 16.Great minds think alike.英雄所見略同 17.Rome was not built in a day.成功并非一朝一夕的事 18.All that glitters is not gold.閃光的未必都是金子 19.East or west, home is the best.金窩銀窩不如自家草窩 20.Time and tide wait for no man.時(shí)間不等人

21.There is but a secret to success—Never give up!成功只有一個(gè)秘訣—永不放棄！22.Where there is life, there is hope.有生命必有希望 23.Beauty will buy no beef.漂亮不能當(dāng)飯吃 24.Better late than never.遲做總比不做好 25.Every little helps.點(diǎn)滴都有用；積少成多 26.The shortest answer is doing.最簡(jiǎn)短的回答就是行動(dòng) 27.No news is good news.沒消息，就是好消息 28.Well begun, half done.好的開始是成功的一半 29.All for one, one for all.人人為我，我為人人 30.One false step will make a great difference.失之毫厘，謬以千里 31.Facts speak louder than words.事實(shí)勝于雄辯 32.As the tree, so the fruit.種瓜得瓜，種豆得豆

33.To live is to learn;to learn is to better live.活著為了學(xué)習(xí)，學(xué)習(xí)為了更好的活著 34.Like and like make good friends.趣味相投

35.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只學(xué)習(xí)不玩耍聰明的孩子也變傻.八、書面表達(dá)的考點(diǎn)講解和訓(xùn)練

【考點(diǎn)掃描】

書面表達(dá)是每年中考必考題型，是考查學(xué)生交際能力的一個(gè)重要組成部分。書面表達(dá)通常有三種形式：

1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；

2、看圖作文；

3、根據(jù)漢語提示作文。

無論是那一種書面表達(dá)形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯(cuò)誤，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確，能達(dá)到交際目的。【名師解難】 一.訓(xùn)練方法

1.記。認(rèn)真系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí)和背誦基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會(huì)吟詩也會(huì)作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強(qiáng)的寫作能力，首先應(yīng)該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學(xué)寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習(xí)慣，相當(dāng)一部分人有對(duì)照中文逐字翻譯的不良習(xí)慣，不去理會(huì)中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學(xué)們?nèi)粲写罅康默F(xiàn)成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。2.練。每練一篇書面表達(dá)題，都要真正學(xué)到一點(diǎn)東西，不可貪多而邊學(xué)邊忘。平時(shí)可以采用循序漸進(jìn)、靈活多樣的練習(xí)方式。從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據(jù)表格或記錄寫短文等。

3.寫。要進(jìn)行實(shí)戰(zhàn)寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內(nèi)寫出100個(gè)詞的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、內(nèi)容全、形式正確。這樣形成習(xí)慣，考試時(shí)就能得心應(yīng)手。

二.應(yīng)試策略

1.審題目：要切中題意?！吨锌伎荚囌f明》指出，書面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？

就是要認(rèn)真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動(dòng)筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。

2.圈要點(diǎn)：防止遺漏要點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出。

3.列提綱：為寫作做好準(zhǔn)備。根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。

4.定基調(diào)：定出時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時(shí)要做到以下六個(gè)方面：

(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。(2)多用簡(jiǎn)單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型?？蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。1）語態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。

2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5）注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。(4)描寫人物時(shí)，要生動(dòng)具體，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動(dòng)作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時(shí)間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法：

1）表示并列關(guān)系的：and, as well as, or? 2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but, yet, however? 3）表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that? 4）表示因果關(guān)系的：so, therefore ,as a result? 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that? 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as? 7）表示總結(jié)性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking?

(6)不會(huì)表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò)，容易被扣分，閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話：“錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡(jiǎn)。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

6.改病句：認(rèn)真檢查，改正錯(cuò)誤。中考作文時(shí)，由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此，改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手： 1）格式是否有錯(cuò)。2）拼寫有無錯(cuò)誤。3）語言是否用錯(cuò)。4）時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。5）標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。6）人稱是否用錯(cuò)。三.注意事項(xiàng)

書面表達(dá)要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時(shí)間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時(shí)間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)?！局锌挤独?VII.書面表達(dá)

假如你叫張強(qiáng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面美國朋友Bob的來信內(nèi)容，結(jié)合你自己的情況寫一篇語言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。

要求：1.認(rèn)真閱讀來信的內(nèi)容，從中獲得你需要的信息。 2.詞數(shù)：80左右?；匦诺拈_頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。注意：回信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)地址和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Dear friend, I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I?m fifteen.I?m American.I live in New York. I am a middle school student.I?m good at math.It is very interesting.My favorite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs together.After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I?m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I?m looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours, Bob

Dear

Bob，_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，Zhang Qiang

【解析】根據(jù)前面提到第六個(gè)步驟，我們來寫一下這篇書面表達(dá)。

1.審題目：通過審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達(dá)應(yīng)是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強(qiáng)，收信人是Bob，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)是介紹張強(qiáng)自己的情況。

2.圈要點(diǎn)：根據(jù)來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1、收到對(duì)方的來信；

2、愿意和對(duì)方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；

4、自己的身份、特長(zhǎng)和愛好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提綱：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shaanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we?ll meet in China

4、定基調(diào)：1.時(shí)態(tài)：收到來信用一般過去時(shí)，介紹情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，希望用一般將來時(shí)。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來寫。4.開頭和結(jié)尾題目已經(jīng)給出。

5、寫全文： Dear Bob，I got your letter yesterday.I?m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I?m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I?m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I?m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang

6、改病句：認(rèn)真復(fù)查一邊，如有錯(cuò)誤，加以改正。