第一篇:寫作練習(xí)-邀請信
寫作練習(xí)---如何寫邀請信
邀請信是寫信人對收信人的一種盛情邀約。邀請信分為正式邀請信和非正式邀請信。非正式邀請用詞比較隨便;正式邀請信則是向收信人發(fā)出正式邀請,用語和格式均比較規(guī)范、嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。
邀請信通常包括以下幾個方面的內(nèi)容:發(fā)出邀請;說明邀請對方做什么事;說明活動時間和地點(diǎn);表達(dá)期待或感謝之情。一 文章結(jié)構(gòu)
1.(自我介紹)活動名稱+發(fā)出邀請
2.活動具體內(nèi)容和安排
3.參加活動能給受邀人(邀請人)帶來的好處
4.表明期待以及聯(lián)系方式 Tips: 信中要說明關(guān)于活動的詳細(xì)信息,包括活動時間、地點(diǎn)、內(nèi)容,有時需要說明參加活動的人員。語氣要熱情真摯,但不要強(qiáng)人所難。
二 萬能句型
邀請信開頭及中間部分常用句式
The...will be held on....The activity is in honor of....You can also bring...together with you.May I have the honor of your accompany at dinner? We sincerely/ faithfully hope you can attend...You will be my most respected guest to come to...I wonder if there is any chance for your to come to…
I am writing to ask whether you would be willing to attend...It would be my pleasure to share the important moments with you.There are also arrangements for … which I am sure you will thoroughly enjoy.邀請信結(jié)尾常用句式
I would love for you to attend, so please let me know your decision.Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.Please let me know soon if you decide to come.I shall be much obliged by a reply at your convenience.I would feel honored if you could come to...I am looking forward to your participation in...I really hope you can make it.We sincerely hope that you can make it.We would be honored to have you there with us.We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.The honor of your presence is requested.三 模板
示例一:
Dear________,There will a ________________(內(nèi)容)at/in________________(地點(diǎn))on___________(時間).We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at ___________(具體時間).This will be followed by a _______(進(jìn)一步的安排).At around______(時間)_________________(另一個安排)
I really hope you can make it before ____________(通知你的最后期限)
Yours sincerely
Li Ming 示例二:
Dear_____________ ,①_____________(開門見山提出事件/活動、地點(diǎn)、時間).②It would be pleasant/honored to have you here.③During the party/conference, we will have lots of activities you will be interested in.④First, ___________(要舉行的活動內(nèi)容一).⑤Second, ________(要舉行的活動內(nèi)容二).⑥I know/believe that you will be very interested in_____________.⑦For one thing, _____________(受邀請人參加的理由一).⑧For another, _____________(受邀請人參加的理由二).⑨The conference/party would not be complete without you!
⑩The party/conference will begin at 時間and we do hope you can come.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
范例:(2015全國卷II)
假如你是李華,計劃和同學(xué)去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人們過重陽節(jié)(the Double Ninth Festival)。請給外教露西寫封郵件,邀她一同前往,內(nèi)容包括:
1.出發(fā)及返回時間;
2.活動:包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫; 3.結(jié)語已為你寫好。
【寫作步驟】
一. 根據(jù)題目要求以及我們上面提到的注意點(diǎn),列出提綱:
第一段:問候+自我介紹+寫信背景(去敬老院)+寫信目的(邀請同去)
第二段:主題句+拓展句1(出發(fā)及返回時間)+拓展句2(活動,such as……)
第三段:我希望(你也能去)。我相信(你會喜歡這個活動)。感謝你(讀我的信)。
請回信(告訴我你的決定)。二. 完成初稿
三. 糾錯及潤色(重點(diǎn)檢查寫作要點(diǎn)、時態(tài)語態(tài)、人稱、格式等)四. 定稿、謄抄【參考答案】
Dear Lucy,I’d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We’ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there.We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.We should be back around 4 o’clock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us, please let us know and we’ll wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours
Li Hua
【解析】試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)屬于英文書信,根據(jù)提示信息說明邀請Lucy去參加的活動和時間等。寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn):
1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確三個要點(diǎn):邀請、時間、具體活動。
2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)憽?/p>
3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài);就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般將來時態(tài)。
4、注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明。We’ll also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引導(dǎo)的定語從句和句式spend time doing。此外,還有if從句以及一些短語如invite you to join us,for a visit to,make dumplings等。
PracticeI 假如你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李華,你校將舉辦一次英語演講比賽,希望附近某大學(xué)外籍教師Smith 女士來做評委。請參照以下比賽通知給她寫一封信。
英語演講比賽
主題:人與自然
時間:6月15日下午2:00-5:00
地點(diǎn):501教室
參賽選手:10名學(xué)生
聯(lián)系人:李華(電話:44876655)Dear Ms.Smith,I am Lihua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School.I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge.The contest, the theme of which is “Man and Nature”, will be held in the Room 501 from 2:00 to 5:00 on the afternoon of June 15.What’s more, there will be ten students taking part in it.I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.My telephone number is 44876655.I am looking forward to your reply.With best wishes,Yours,Li Hua
PracticesII 1.假如你叫李華, 你所在的學(xué)校擬在下個月舉辦美國電影節(jié)(American Film Festival)。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給你的美國朋友Peter 寫一封短信,邀請他給學(xué)生做一次講座。信的主要內(nèi)容包括:
1.講座目的: 使學(xué)生對美國電影有所了解; 2.講座內(nèi)容: 簡要介紹美國電影業(yè)的歷史; 3.講座時間:1小時30分鐘左右
注意:1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),使結(jié)構(gòu)完整;
2.詞數(shù)150左右。
Dear Peter,Our school is planning to hold an American Film Festival next month.I'm writing to ask you to come and give a talk on American films and filmmaking industry.It will help us understand how the industry has developed into big business as it is today.This understanding should go a long way toward increasing their knowledge of American culture in general.Do you think one and a half hours will be enough?Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements.
I'm looking forward to seeing you and enjoying the talk.
With best wishes!
Yours,Li Hua
第二篇:邀請信等練習(xí)答案
邀請信練習(xí)答案(1)請朋友吃飯
Would you be able to join us for lunch at the Swan Pavilion restaurant at 11:00 a.m.this Sunday? If you are prevented from coming, will you let me know?(2)邀請朋友參加活動
In view of your departure, we have planned a small send-off party for this Friday evening.The party is at 6:30 p.m.in our classroom.Do please try to come.(3)按照要求寫六封不同內(nèi)容的邀請信 a.Daniel, Would you like to come swimming with me next Monday afternoon? We could meet at the school gate at about 1:30 p.m.and then go together.Sally b.Dear Mr.Smith, There will be a meeting of our drama group on Saturday afternoon April 5, at 5 p.m.in our classroom, # 410, to discuss which play to put on for the English Evening.We would like to hear your suggestions and hope you will come if you possibly can.Selena c.Dear Marilyn, We are having a party in our classroom, #402, to celebrate the New Year’s Day.Would it be possible for you to join us on Friday, December 29, at 8 p.m.? we would be very happy if you could be with us.David
d.Mr.& Mrs.Johnson, We should be very glad if you could come to dinner with us at our apartment at about 7 p.m.on Wednesday, September 21st.We look forward to seeing you.Galaxy & Eric e.Dear Mr.Morrison,We should be very grateful if you could give a talk on American.Literature to students of the English Department on Saturday, April 19.if this subject does not suit you, any other interesting talks from distinguished visitors from various countries this semester and look forward eagerly to the opportunity to benefit from your experience and wisdom.Yours sincerely f.Dear Joanna, Would it be possible for you to join us for tea at 4 p.m.this Saturday? March 8th is International Women’s Day.All the Chinese women members of our section are coming for a chat.You have been working here for about half a year.Everybody speaks highly of you and praises
your sincerity, helpfulness, and work commitment.Regretfully, we have not been able to meet very often as we are all busily occupied.Now this is a good chance.We would be very happy if you could manage to come.Yours sincerely,感謝信練習(xí)答案
(1)對別人的禮物表示感謝 a.Dear xxx,……The College Writer’s Handbook.……I am doing my best to improve my writing ability in English.This handbook will be of great help to me.…… Yours,(signature)b.Dear XXX, ……the bunch of fresh tulips you sent while I was in the hospital for medical treatment….Sincerely,(signature)C.Dear XXX, ……the painting from you for my birthday.…artistic.…h(huán)ang it up in my room and … Yours,(signature)把信的中文翻譯成英文 a.Thank you for the wedding gift.I put the black ceramic vase on mantel.b.The little brass travel alarm clock is exactly what we needed.Now Peter won’t have to phone the hotel desk—
He likes the way the alarm starts softly, then keeps on getting louder.Thanks again;it’s a wonderful gift.Cordially,(signature)(2)對別人的幫助表示感謝 將信中的中文譯成英文 a.Dear Mr.Manning,…I took your advice—probably the best thing I ever did.Since then I have advanced several times with this company.The cooperation of the people here is better than I should really expect.I am sure my future is here.I want to express my sincere gratitude for your consultation and help and to wish you and your family a happy holiday season.b.Dear Vivian,How can I possibly thank you enough for your constant support during my traumatic separation and divorce… you had faith in me, and you listened while I talked out my tensions.You helped me when I needed help.(3)對被人的友誼表示感謝 將下面這封信翻譯成英文 Dear Don,This gift is just a small thank-you for the friendship you showed me this summer.I will always think of you as a kind friend who took a real interest in both my work and life.將感謝詞句填入三封信中 a.1.I would like to thank you for the help you gave me 2.I don’t know what I should have done without your help.b.3.Thank you very much for 4.I am really very grateful to you c.5.I am really very much indebted to you for the encouragement and help you have given me.根據(jù)情景寫一封對別人的友誼表示感謝的信: Dear Cynthia and George, I find it hard to believe all you have done for us since Alan was so badly injured.You have assumed the family chores and duties: getting the children fed, sending them to school, bringing them home from after-school activities, putting them to bed, cooking our meals, and doing the household chores.It has been a wonderful relief for me.Your help has left me time to concentrate on the myriad details of hospital care, rehab care, police reports, insurance reports, and attorney contacts.I hope I will some day be able to repay all your help.Affectionately,(signature)(4)對別人的款待表示感謝 替代原來的詞 a.vegetable salad b.iced watermelon, …colorful lights……h(huán)ostess’ tap-dance 將信件中的中文譯成英文 c.Dear Windy,I wish to thank you and Alan for your kind hospitality during my three days in Torrance.I thoroughly enjoyed the short trips to the city’s points of interest and the evening meal at your beautiful home.… d.Dear Carl and Ellen, It was wonderful of you to invite a “new couple on the block” to your party last Saturday.Ted and I were made to feel welcome and not at all like strangers.We appreciate your introducing us to your friends and our new neighbors.You are gracious hosts, and we hope to reciprocate before long.It was a delightful evening.…
(5)對別人的邀請表示感謝
a.Dear XXX,…But we suggest we talk about anything but work.We have had too much work all these weeks, haven’t you? Yours,(Signature)b.Dear XXX,……I have an engagement This Saturday afternoon.When I arrive I will sing a folk song for you as a penalty for my being late.Will this be OK? 根據(jù)所給情況寫兩封感謝別人邀請的信 a.Dear Tim,It is certainly a privilege to have dinner together with you and your friends at the excellent Sea Empress Seafood Restaurant.Since we haven’t seen each other for quite a long time, this will be a wonderful chance for us to have a good talk.Thanks again for your invitation, and I am looking forward to seeing you, Sincerely,(signature)b.Dear Mr.James,Thank you for your invitation to speak to your students.I will be happy to talk to them.To verify our discussion on April 2, I will present the current thinking on long-term investments in foreign countries to your class at 1:00P.M.on May 4 in room A402, Business Building on the Plymouth campus.I have enclosed a brochure that presents our company’s impression on global investments.It will give your students a specific viewpoint on the subject, if you wish to discuss it before my point, which will provide a broader view.Look forward to seeing you on May 4.Regards,(signature)
謝絕練習(xí)答案
謝絕邀請
(1)保留劃線部分,寫出六封信
a.It was very kind of you to invite me to the dance party.I really ought to be there, but as our class is organizing a trip to Suzhou, I have no other choice but to go with them.I wish I had the extraordinary power of the Monkey King to produce another me.b.Thank you very much for your kind invitation to have a meal with you at a western-style restaurant, but I am afraid I have to decline because I am suffering from a bad cough.The fits of coughing even make me unable to sleep well at night.I am indeed very sorry to miss this wonderful opportunity to have a pleasant chat with you over a nice meal.c.I am very sorry for not being able to accept your invitation for dinner at your home.We are
having our short-term military training, as highly disciplined as real soldiers.But I will come to see you some time after the training is over.d.I regret very much that I can’t come to the alumni get-together.Please say hello to my former classmates.e.I have an important matter to tend to.So I can’t join you for the picnic in the forest Park.Roast meat is my favorite food.I believe I shall miss a great occasion.My greatest regrets!f.I have just received a letter from my uncle.He said he would arrive in Shanghai the coming Saturday.I must go to the station to meet him.I am afraid I can’t accompany you to the exhibition.Sorry to be causing you so much trouble.(2)根據(jù)所給情況寫一封謝絕信 Dear Andy, Thank you for your personal invitation to attend the Old School dinner meeting on October 22.I regret that only yesterday did I accept an invitation to a meeting with a business group to which I have belonged for the past few years.Perhaps I can join you and our Old School gang next year.Thanks again for your invitation.Sincerely yours,(3)將信中的中文譯成英文
Thank you for your invitation to speak before you fellow-workers about our success of sales promotion last year.Unfortunately, I have been scheduled to lead our sales meeting in Shanghai that week.… Perhaps Brain can help you.He was involved in all the details and could offer many suggestions.I sincerely appreciate your asking me.(4)把整封信譯成英文 Dear Ms.Rogers,Thank you for the invitation to speak at your investment club’s annual dinner on May 18.I am sorry that because of previous obligations I will not be able to attend.I am sure you can find another investment counselor to address your group.And I wish you good investing.Sincerely.(5)參考所給英文信寫一封謝絕參加某俱樂部邀請的信 Dear Mr.Adams, I appreciate your asking me to join the Tennis Club.I was a member of the Tennis Club a number of years ago but dropped out because of conflicts with my busy work.I have just moved to this town, bought a new house, and found a new job.With all this piling up on me, I don’t believe I could do my fair share as a participating member.I will keep your kind invitation in mind and hope to join you at a later date.Thank you for asking me.Sincerely yours, 拒絕別人的要求
根據(jù)四個不同的情境完成四封謝絕信 a.Dear Richard, Sorry we can’t loan you our barbecue grill for your backyard party in June.We don’t have it any more.We hadn’t used it for at least five years.Then, after three years trying to sell it, we gave up and
took it to the landfill about two weeks ago.We hope you can find one somewhere, and we wish you a fun-filled afternoon in June.Cordially, b.Dear Ellen, It’s true that at my age I am home most of the time.That’s why I agreed to baby-sit little Lisa once in a while.She is a sweet girl, but I must decline to continue because “once in a while” has become “too often”.Last week you brought her here three times, twice without calling me first.That is taking undue advantage of a person willing to be helpful.Sorry, but I am no longer available to baby-sit Lisa.Sincerely, c.Dear Frank, I’m disappointed, Frank, that you would think me capable of stating an outright lie for you.I can’t do it.That would put both of us in jeopardy.You got yourself into a bad situation, and it’s your job to get yourself out.Good luck, d.Dear Eva, Saying “no” to a simple request disturbs me, but I’ve been disappointed when loaning shoes and bracelets to friends.My shoes came back with a missing heel plate, and my bracelet catch was jammed.So I said to myself, “no more, not even to my best friend.”
I would like to loan you my favorite blue dress for your Saturday-night party, but just feel I can’t.I hope you can make some other arrangement.Love,道歉練習(xí)答案 為不端的言行道歉
a.把四句道歉的話填入信中: 4132 b.按照要求寫道歉信
Dear Mr.Caronna, I am sincerely sorry for what happened Wednesday, and especially for my actions.I hope you will accept my apology.Please rest assured that nothing similar will occur again.Regretfully,Dear Nadine, I feel I must make a double apology for the fiasco yesterday at our group’s luncheon meeting.I should not have brought hyper little randy, and I could not control his behavior.My baby-sitter canceled at the last minute, and I was unable to get another.Then my eagerness to visit all of you overcame my judgment, which told me to phone and apologize for not being able to attend.I’m sorry for the disturbance I caused and will think more clearly next time.I ask for your forgiveness.Sincerely,Dear Angela, If I seemed to slink away from your delightful cocktail party Friday night rather than thanking you, it was because I was mortified---and still am.I am the one who ripped the back of your new sofa.I will be out of town until the middle of next week, but will call you as soon as I return.Arrangements can be made for an upholsterer to pick up and repair the damage, and I will pay for it.I’m terribly sorry for what I did and for your inconvenience.Will talk you next week.With regrets,c.將中文部分譯成英文
This is a letter I never expected to write.It is an honest effort to apologize for what I said to you last evening at the company office party.… I admit I consumed too much delicious punch and lost control, but rest assured it will not happen again.Please accept my humble apology.Sincerely yours,為謝絕邀請而道歉 Dear Mr.Jones, Since accepting your kind invitation to dinner and the theater on March 2, I have learned of the serious illness of my mother and I will be leaving for Shanghai tomorrow.I am sorry to have to forgo a delightful evening with you.Sincerely,Dear Mr.Parrot, I am sorry I can’t accept your invitation for dinner and the concert on May 3.I have a budget meeting scheduled for that night and there is no way I can skip that meeting.With regret,為約定時間被迫推遲而道歉 Dear April and Edwin, I am sorry that the dinner we had planned for May 29 must be postponed.We are still looking forward to helping you celebrate your twenty-fifth wedding anniversary.I will write soon what we can arrange in June.My sister is not expected to survive much longer and we have been asked to join the family in Beijing.Cordially,Dear Sonja, Hope you received my call on your answering machine in time to get another couple for bridge Wednesday afternoon.We had counted on being there, but my sister called from Los Angeles to say Mother is getting worse.We left right away.Perhaps we can get together in a couple of weeks.I’ll call you when I get home.Love,為未能履約而道歉
a.參照范例用填空形式完成: 3 b.根據(jù)情景寫三封道歉信 Dear Mr.Radican, There is no excuse for my not meeting you for lunch yesterday, or at least getting word to you.I had the appointment written on my calendar, and I was looking forward to the occasion, but somehow I thought our date was for next Thursday.It was just one of those days.Please forgive me.I am anxious to talk with you and will phone you Tuesday to see if we can arrange a meeting before you leave town.I won’t let you down this time.Cordially,Dear Miss.Smith, This is an apology I feel embarrassed at having to make.I have no excuse for not checking my appointments calendar before dashing off to Denver—even if it was an emergency call.After looking forward for six weeks to meeting you and discussing your latest research results of the Matson Project over lunch, I feel bad about forgetting to even notify you of my absence.I will call you next week when I return and perhaps we can get together in San Francisco at your convenience.Please accept my apology.Sincerely,Dear Ms.Watson, I am sorry I was out of the office when you called Tuesday.I had told you I would be available any time during the week, but a labor problem at the plant required my presence Tuesday afternoon.Please phone and let me know when you will be in town again.I’ll try to forestall any emergencies that day.Sincerely,為未能及時做某事兒道歉
a.把適當(dāng)詞句填入下面信中: 3 1 2 4 b.參照范例自己寫兩封信 Dear Mr.Wilson,Please excuse my delay in answering your letter February 13, but this has been one of those busy, hectic periods beset with all kinds of deadlines.I hope you will find the data in my letter useful.Sincerely,Dear Mr.Parker, Last year’s issues of Business magazine that you lent me are being returned.I owe you a thank-you as well as an apology for not returning them sooner, as intended.I found the articles I was looking for and got much useful information from them.It was so kind of you to lend me these magazines, and I hop the delay has not been an inconvenience to you.Sincerely,
第三篇:英語應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請信
英語應(yīng)用文寫作之邀請信
(一)一、邀請信及復(fù)信
邀請信包括宴會邀請、午餐和晚餐邀請、聚會邀請、舞會邀請、婚禮邀請等。
邀請信雖然看起來不象請柬那樣正規(guī)、莊重,但是,也是很講就的。寫好邀請信,需注意以下幾個問題:
1.邀請信一定要寫得明確、完整,不可給收信人留下任何疑問。如: “ I’d like you and Tom to come to dinner next Wednesday.” 這樣的寫法就不夠明確,需要加上具體的日期和時間。該句應(yīng)寫成: “I’d like you and Tom to come to dinner on Wednesday, June 14, at seven o’clock.”
2.在歐美國家,夜晚的邀請,除了那些只允許男人參加的社交活動之外,不論是正式的,還是非正式的,都應(yīng)該邀請夫妻雙方參加。
3.別人對你的邀請是對你的尊重,因此,無論能否赴約,都應(yīng)該給與及時的、有禮貌的答復(fù)。
4.對于邀請信,在復(fù)信時應(yīng)該明確地說明是接受邀請, 還是不能接受邀請。不能使用模棱兩可的話。如: “ I’ll try my best to come.” “ I’ll come if I’m in town.” 等等,那樣會使邀請人感到十分不安,應(yīng)該明確說明去還是不去,以便讓邀請人早做安排。
5.接受邀請時,在回信時要重復(fù)寫上邀請信中的某些內(nèi)容,如:
幾月幾日、星期幾、幾點(diǎn)鐘等等。不應(yīng)該這樣寫:“ I’ll be delighted to attend your luncheon…”,而應(yīng)該寫成: “ I’ll be delighted to attend your luncheon on Thursday, May tenth, at one o’clock.” 這樣寫,可以糾正你或邀請人可能弄錯了的日期和時間。
(一)宴會邀請信及復(fù)信
邀請朋友赴宴(Inviting a Friend to Dinner)
Dear Zhang Ning,Will you and Mr.Wang Yi have dinner with us on Tuesday, the fifth of May, at seven o’clock?
It’s a long time since we have had the pleasure of seeing you and we do hope you can come.Sincerely yours,Elizabeth K.Benton ·接受邀請(Acceptance)
Dear Mrs.Benton,Wang Yi and I will be delighted to dine with you on Tuesday, the fifth of May, at seven o’clock.How nice of you to ask us!We are both looking forward with great pleasure to seeing you and Dr.Benton again.Very sincerely yours,Zhang Ning
不能赴約(Regret)
Dear Mrs.Benton,I’ve been putting off this note until the last possible moment, hoping and hoping Wang Yi would get back from Shanghai in time for your dinner party.But now I must regretfully write that he’ll still be out of town on Tuesday, the fifth;and we therefore cannot accept your kind invitation for dinner on that day.It was sweet of you to ask us;and I know Wang Yi will be as sorry as I am to miss an evening with you and Dr.Benton.We know how delightful such evenings at your house usually are!Sincerely yours,Zhang Ning
2.邀請朋友赴宴和看電影
現(xiàn)代人由于忙忙碌碌,邀請信總是寫得很簡短,邀請朋友赴宴和看電影,通常只寫上幾行字,但是,他們認(rèn)為這并不是草率和不恭敬的表現(xiàn),只是為了速度快些罷了。例如:
Dear Li Ming,We have four tickets for a new movie Brokeback Mountain this Friday, the tenth.Will you and He Yi join us here for dinner at six sharp;and then go on with us later to the movie? We’ll be
looking for you Friday night, so don’t disappoint us!
Affectionately yours,Doris
·接受邀請(Acceptance)
Dear Doris,Delighted!We’ll be there Friday at six, and go with you
afterward to the cinema.How wonderful of you and Frank to ask us!….Affectionately yours,Li Ming·不能赴約(Regret)
Dear Doris,I think you’d better ask some other couple for Friday.He Yi is in Shanghai and won’t be back for another week.Wait till he hears what a wonderful evening he missed with you and Frank!Thanks for asking us, Doris.I’m certainly sorry we can’t say “yes”!
Affectionately yours,Li Ming
3.取消非正式宴會的短箋
有時候,由于生病或其他原因,需取消原定的宴請,如果時間緊,可以用電話通知已邀請的客人,如果有時間,應(yīng)該寫一封短信表示歉意。
Dear Mrs.Jennings,I have just learned that my son, who is at school in Shanghai, was injured in a basketball game.Although the injury is not very serious, Lin Kai and I feel we must go to him at once;and we are leaving tomorrow morning.Under the circumstances, we must recall our dinner
invitations for Tuesday, the fifth of May… and plan on a later date for our party.I’m sure that you and Mr.Jennings will understand our anxiety, and will forgive this last-minute change in plans.Sincerely yours,Li Li
4.對于非正宴請的不能如期赴約的短箋
按照英美人的習(xí)慣,應(yīng)邀者因為生病或其他原因而不能如期赴約時,應(yīng)該打個電話或?qū)懸环舛绦鸥嬖V邀請人。當(dāng)然,只有在萬不得已時才能做出這樣的改變。
Dear Mrs.Benton,I’m very sorry to have to write you this letter!After accepting your kind invitation for dinner on Tuesday, May the fifth, I now
find that we cannot be there after all.Li Yong has just been called to Shanghai on business;and although he tried very hard to postpone the trip until after the fifth, he was unable to do so.We had been looking forward with great pleasure to seeing you and Dr.Benton;and we both feel very badly about this unexpected development.We hope you understand, and that you will not be inconvenienced.Sincerely yours,Wang ShanshanWriting Assignment 1:寫一封邀請信,要請你的好朋友Elizabeth K.Benton 本周六晚7點(diǎn)到你家赴宴, 然后一起去電影院看新電影《金剛》(KING KONG)(The Eighth Wonder of the World.)。以Elizabeth K.Benton的身份給你寫一封表示接受邀請的回信。
.以Elizabeth K.Benton的身份給你寫一封表示不能接受邀請的回信。
第四篇:寫作練習(xí)
寫作指導(dǎo)之小動物篇(1)閱讀新體驗: 可愛的小鴨
我非常喜歡外公家的那一群小白鴨,它們穿著一身潔白的“衣服”
走起路來一搖一擺的。它們的眼睛圓圓的,嘴巴扁扁的,紅紅的。它 們的腳也是紅的,腳趾間是連著的,腳掌像兩片楓葉。
他們很愛游泳,經(jīng)常在碧綠的水面上悠閑的游來游去。有時追逐著 做游戲,有時伸長脖子,嘎嘎地天聲高歌。游夠了,它們就來到岸邊 大口大口地吃水草。晚上睡覺時,它們總是反兩條腿藏在胸脯下,脖 子縮進(jìn)去。當(dāng)有人靠近它們時,他們就會馬上站起來,嘎嘎地叫著,好像是在向你好。你們瞧,我外公家這群小白鴨多可愛我是學(xué)習(xí)小主人 1你覺得文中哪些詞語和句子寫得好,說說你的看法。2你都認(rèn)識哪些小動物呢?寫下來,并說說它的樣子 3用“勾出文中的擬人句。這樣寫有什么好處
4小作文是圍繞一個中心句在寫的,請把這句話用“﹏﹏”勾出
來。體會并與同學(xué)討論一下這樣寫的好處。
5照樣子寫詞語(游)來(游)去
6通過本文的學(xué)習(xí),你都學(xué)會了哪些知識:
同題作文,我會賞析
可愛的小金魚
我們家有一個非常漂亮的魚缸,里面住著三只可愛的小金魚。其 中有兩只紅色的,我經(jīng)常分不清他倆誰是誰。時間長了,我發(fā)現(xiàn)其中 有一只身體的左下角有一個小圓點(diǎn),于是我給它取名叫歡歡,另一只 就叫貝貝,還有一只就叫京京.他們的眼睛大大的,鼓鼓的,像一個個小氣球。身體也圓鼓鼓的,吃 飽了更好玩,像要爆炸了一樣。他們的紅尾巴,總喜歡擺來擺去,像 一把把小扇子,漂亮極了。
他們可貪玩了。有時在水里游來游去,像在做游戲;有時在水草 里鉆來鉆去,像在捉迷藏;有時不停地吐泡泡,像在進(jìn)行吹泡泡比賽。他們真是玩得不亦樂乎。
小金魚還很貪吃。聽媽媽說,金魚是不知道飽的,你喂多少魚食,他們就會吃多少,所以不知道的人,常常給金魚吃很多,結(jié)果把他們 給撐死了。我給他們喂食時就特別小心,生怕一個不留神,就把他們 給撐著了。每次,魚食才剛落入水中,他們便爭先恐后地來搶食物,有的還特別狡猾,居然用頭去撞伙伴;有的甚至就快跳出水面了。
金魚給我的生活帶來了無窮樂趣,我愛我家的金魚!
我的三只小金魚可有禮貌了,每當(dāng)有人向它們靠攏時,還可以躍 出水面給大家表演節(jié)目,好像在歡迎客人的到來呢!
這就是我可愛的小金魚。她們可愛吧!
快樂寫作 :
小朋友,在我們家里或熟人家里,你一定都看到很多可愛的小動物吧,想一想,然后把它寫下來
寫前先想好你到底要寫什么內(nèi)容: ;再想想先寫
什么,后寫什么,還可能用上一些什么好詞好句(一定得用上才學(xué)的擬人句 喲):先,老師要對學(xué)生習(xí)作的訓(xùn)練點(diǎn)心中有數(shù)。
準(zhǔn)確把握住目標(biāo),對全冊書以及適當(dāng)?shù)木毠P處都要心中有數(shù)。有了系統(tǒng)的把握,深刻的理解才能對學(xué)生的習(xí)作給予得當(dāng)?shù)闹笇?dǎo)。
其次,訓(xùn)練學(xué)生習(xí)作要講系統(tǒng)。
對于剛剛接觸習(xí)作的孩子,只靠課本中那幾次習(xí)作是不可能提高學(xué)生的習(xí)作水平的,老師就要根據(jù)訓(xùn)練目標(biāo)認(rèn)真在課本中尋找讀寫結(jié)合點(diǎn)并進(jìn)行系統(tǒng)的訓(xùn)練。如訓(xùn)練學(xué)生對人物的描寫,就從觀察動作、觀察模擬對話場景、觀察神態(tài)等各個方面,一步步對學(xué)生進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練。不求快,但求理解的準(zhǔn)確,描寫的細(xì)致。
再次,身邊處處是素材。
讓孩子寫作最難的問題莫過于沒得可寫,通過婁老師的講座我感受到了身邊處處是素材。觀察身邊季節(jié)的變化;留心觀察學(xué)校的活動;引導(dǎo)學(xué)生關(guān)注感興趣的東西;記下條目日記……關(guān)鍵看老師的引導(dǎo),學(xué)生是習(xí)作的主人,但是這些小主人需要老師的引導(dǎo)與點(diǎn)撥,當(dāng)事情發(fā)生在身邊時,老師提前提醒學(xué)生細(xì)心的觀察,教會孩子怎么觀察。長此以往,身邊經(jīng)過的不起眼的事情在孩子的筆下也會變得惟妙惟肖啊!
最后,習(xí)作積累要豐富。
通過這次講座以及老師們的交流溝通,我知道了孩子寫作的難點(diǎn)除了培養(yǎng)觀察的習(xí)慣,還有一點(diǎn)就是豐富的積累。和老師一起練的再刻苦,腦中沒有積累怎么也寫不出好的習(xí)作啊。所以還應(yīng)該從小培養(yǎng)學(xué)生良好的閱讀習(xí)慣,不僅讀課本,還有讀課外書,老師適時的介紹給孩子看課外書,當(dāng)孩子著迷其中時必定會被書中的人物吸引,也自然會記住其中的細(xì)節(jié),當(dāng)他自己習(xí)作時就會不知不覺得用到自己的習(xí)作之中啊。不過,我覺得“閱讀“是一種興趣,有的孩子有這種興趣,有的孩子沒有這種興趣,怎么樣讓沒有這種興趣的孩子同樣養(yǎng)成閱讀、博覽的習(xí)慣是我需要努力思考的。
看過一篇文章《成功,不像你想象的那么難》,寫的是人們往往被成功的難度所嚇倒,以為成功就要錐刺骨,吃得苦中苦,其實只要踏踏實實,快快樂樂地做,人們照樣可以輕輕松松地成功。
作文也是如此,還沒開始學(xué),早就被“作文難啊”、“到三年級你可要努力啊”等諸如此類的輿論蒙住了,弄得小小學(xué)生戰(zhàn)戰(zhàn)兢兢,愈發(fā)緊張,愈發(fā)寫不出好的作文來。
其實,作文也不像你想象的那么難,來,別把作文當(dāng)回事,今天我們就此為三年級師生打開一扇習(xí)作的新窗。
一、淡化作文概念,我手寫我心
《語文課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》關(guān)于寫作的總目標(biāo)確定為:“能具體明確、文從字順地表達(dá)自己的意思。能根據(jù)日常生活需要,運(yùn)用常見的表達(dá)方式寫作?!痹陔A段目標(biāo)部分,第一學(xué)段稱“寫活”,第二、三學(xué)段都稱為“習(xí)作”,到第四學(xué)段才稱為“寫作”,這就體現(xiàn)出降低小學(xué)階段寫作難度的意思。
我國傳統(tǒng)的作文教學(xué)理念也認(rèn)為應(yīng)該“我手寫我心”,從寫“放膽文”起步,逐漸過渡到寫“小心文”。即在學(xué)習(xí)寫作的初始階段,不必強(qiáng)調(diào)種種規(guī)矩,應(yīng)讓學(xué)生放膽去寫,就像剛學(xué)走路的幼兒,首先是讓他有邁開步子自己去走不要人扶的勇氣,什么走路的規(guī)矩和技巧對他都
沒用處,所以,我們不必過于強(qiáng)調(diào)作文的重要,應(yīng)鼓勵學(xué)生把心中所想、口中要說的話用文字寫下來,消解寫作的神秘感,讓學(xué)生處于放松的狀態(tài),我手寫我口,我手寫我心。
二、順應(yīng)兒童天性,自然寫作
《語文課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》對寫作初始階段的目標(biāo)設(shè)定,也特別強(qiáng)調(diào)情感態(tài)度方面的因素,讓孩子愿意寫作,熱愛寫作,變“要我寫”為“我要寫”,也就是順應(yīng)兒童的天性,不拘形式,自然寫作。例如,第一學(xué)期的相關(guān)表達(dá)是“對寫話有興趣”第二學(xué)期是“樂于書面表達(dá)”,第三階段才要求具有初步的寫作意識。
記得國學(xué)大師張中行先生曾說過這樣一段說:“有些人認(rèn)為寫作是件了不起的事,一寫文章就不由自主板面孔、端架子,這容易造假。其實寫作就是用筆說話,初學(xué)者不妨解放思想,先練?胡說八道?,怎么想就怎么寫,時間長了,有了經(jīng)驗,就知道哪些話該說,哪些不該說,哪些需多說,哪些宜少說?!?/p>
中行志先生的話說得簡單樸素,清楚明白,令我們語文老師沉思。簡簡單單教作文,輕輕松松學(xué)作文,快快樂樂寫作文,應(yīng)是我們的方向。
三、抓住生活契機(jī),隨時寫作
學(xué)生作文難的原因之一是無話可說,無米下鍋,教師的任務(wù)是幫助學(xué)生發(fā)現(xiàn)生活,為學(xué)生提供廣闊的寫作空間,減少具體的約束,使學(xué)生表達(dá)出自己的主觀感受,從而體現(xiàn)《語文課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》要求的“寫作的個性化”。
教師不宜簡單按照教學(xué)進(jìn)度的安排或課程表的設(shè)置,哪個單元該寫什么作文,就要寫出什么樣的作文,而應(yīng)根據(jù)學(xué)生生活實際,從學(xué)生的生活視野和感性經(jīng)驗中取題立意,“最好是令學(xué)生自己出題目”或者干脆不定題目,讓學(xué)生寫自己觀察到的、自己喜歡的東西。例如日記,就是一種很好的練習(xí)方式。
對于學(xué)生來說,寫作是他們精神生活的一部分,是自己人生的“史記”,我們要有意識地引導(dǎo)學(xué)生養(yǎng)成留心觀察周圍事物的習(xí)慣,豐富自己的見聞,鼓勵學(xué)生及時記錄,用筆表達(dá)。
四、適時點(diǎn)評鼓勵,激發(fā)興趣
盡人皆知,興趣是最好的老師,興趣也是作文最重要的內(nèi)驅(qū)力。如果學(xué)生寫了作文,被老師評的一無是處,他不討厭作文也得懼怕作文,所以,我們對學(xué)生習(xí)作,特別是三年級起步作文,一定要慎重對待,用欣賞的眼光,去發(fā)現(xiàn)和放大學(xué)生的一段通順的句子,一個用得準(zhǔn)確的詞語,一個沒有錯誤的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號等,給學(xué)生鼓勵。
具體的方法:如在班上朗讀,在板報上張貼,給廣播站投稿,和家長溝通肯定等,讓學(xué)生對寫話有興趣、有信心、有熱情、有勇氣,在沒有壓力、沒有模式的前提下,充分想象,自覺表達(dá),打下良好的寫作基礎(chǔ),養(yǎng)成良好的寫作習(xí)慣。
“別把作文當(dāng)回事”,讓孩子們輕裝上陣,在作文之路上勇敢前進(jìn)
語文教學(xué)擔(dān)負(fù)著的積累語言的任務(wù),應(yīng)包括語言材料、語言范例、語言知識三方面的積累。語言材料主要是指漢字和詞語;語言范例是指好詞佳句、名段名篇名作;語言知識是指同語言材料、語言范例的掌握密切相關(guān)的字詞句篇、語法邏輯等知識。語言積累的方式各不相同:讀中積累、學(xué)中積累.語文的學(xué)習(xí)很難做到一蹴而就,它是個長期積累的過程,只有“厚積”才能“薄發(fā)”。習(xí)作能力的培養(yǎng)也需建立在語言積累的基礎(chǔ)上,《語文課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》在第二學(xué)段的階段目標(biāo)中指出:“積累課文中的優(yōu)美詞語、精彩句段,以及在課外閱讀和生活中獲得語言材料”,“嘗試在習(xí)作中運(yùn)用自己平時積累的東西。
小學(xué)五年級語文作文輔導(dǎo)
審題是寫作文首先要做好的事,否則,就會直接導(dǎo)致“文不對題”,“下
筆千言,離題萬里”。怎樣才能審好題呢?根據(jù)通常的作文題目的形式來看,一 般可分為命題作文和材料作文兩大類。對命題作文的審題,就是要審查給定的文
章題目確定的具體要求,審清文題意圖,明晰題外要求,確定“題眼”。通過審 題,明確作文的內(nèi)容范圍、時間范圍、數(shù)量范圍、人稱范圍、處所范圍等。不能 超出給定的范圍。對材料作文的審題,主要要從兩個方面去把握: 一是與材料的
思想內(nèi)容要“形影不離”,二是與作文形式的要求“絲絲入扣”。
命題作文的審題
我們先重點(diǎn)談一下關(guān)于命題作文的審題,要注意做好哪些事情。
A.確定內(nèi)容范圍
有的題目,對寫作內(nèi)容做出規(guī)定。所以,審題時,要確定題目規(guī)定的內(nèi)容范 圍: 記人的,要記什么人; 敘事的,要敘什么事; 寫景的,要寫什么景; 狀物的,要狀什么物,等等 B.確定時間范圍
有的題目,從時間上規(guī)定了寫作范圍。因此,作文必須是反映規(guī)定時間范圍內(nèi)的 事。
C.確定數(shù)量范圍
有的作文題目,對選材的數(shù)量做出規(guī)定。審題時必須注意,不能超范圍選題。選材多了,不但沒功,反而有錯 D.確定人稱范圍
有的作文題目對寫作的人稱做了規(guī)定,審題時要依照要求確定人稱范圍,明確是
寫自己的還是寫別人的,該用第一人稱的,就絕對不能用第二人稱或第三人稱。E.確定處所范圍
有的題目規(guī)定了處所范圍。這就要求我們在審題時必須依照文題要求,把握住事情發(fā)生的地點(diǎn),不能把應(yīng)在操場上發(fā)生的事搞到野外去。F.確定“題眼”
“題眼”
就是作文題目中的關(guān)鍵詞,它是作文標(biāo)題意思的核心,是作文要反映的 具體內(nèi)容的重點(diǎn)所在。
學(xué)習(xí)、做事都要抓住關(guān)鍵,這個道理用在作文上,就是要抓住 “題眼” 這個關(guān)鍵 G.確定比喻意義
比喻,就是打比方,是一種常用的修辭方法。這種修辭方法有助于形象地說明問
題。我們平時見到的作文題中,有很多運(yùn)用了這種修辭方法。因此,弄清文題的 喻意,就顯得非常重要。例如,文題“難忘的一幕”,其中的“一幕”本該是指 舞臺上的演出。但它具有比喻意義,可以用來說明生活中的一瞥、一個鏡頭、一 個場面等。因此,在作文前,必須先確定好它的比喻意義,以增加文章的內(nèi)涵
五年級來說的話,作文的要求并不是很高 主要是幫助孩子把他想寫出來的感受抑或是真正的體會給敘述出來就可以。由于年紀(jì)不是很大,沒有必要去追求措詞和造句的華麗程度 但是必要的修飾和優(yōu)美句的應(yīng)用也應(yīng)該掌握 幫助孩子學(xué)會運(yùn)用名人名言、諺語等增加文采 從閱讀,基礎(chǔ)知識,作文入手,還要掌握課本上的古詩,等重點(diǎn)課文的理解,能力嘛,能寫出400字以上,600字以下的作文,還要有深度,有思想感情,能借物喻人,有修辭手法,語句通暢,有景物描寫等(這是六年級的作文要求,如果能達(dá)到這種水平,那作文肯定能達(dá)到一類).多讀書,多感悟
總體把握小學(xué)生寫作文
一、提高認(rèn)識事物和表達(dá)事物的能力。我國著名教育家葉圣陶先生指出:“寫任何東西決定于認(rèn)識和經(jīng)驗,有什么樣的認(rèn)識和經(jīng)驗,才能寫出什么樣的東西來。反之,沒有表達(dá)認(rèn)識的能力,同樣也寫不出好作文”。
二、把認(rèn)識結(jié)構(gòu)作為作文的核心,包括學(xué)習(xí)知識,觀察積累,記憶儲存,訓(xùn)練思維,豐富想象,培養(yǎng)情感,鍛煉意志;從說到寫,推敲修改,多讀勤寫。
三、樹立大作文觀,聽、說、讀、寫有機(jī)結(jié)合 一要注重審題;二要明確寫作目的,立意要新;三是選材要有根據(jù);四要講究謀篇技巧,安排好篇章結(jié)構(gòu);五要注意文章分段,事先列小標(biāo)題,作文提綱;六要注重文章寫法,因文用法;七要妙用語言,用思想調(diào)遣語言。
學(xué)會五種立意法:以事贊人,直抒胸臆,借物喻理,觸景生情,托物言志。
四、作文大目標(biāo)的逐年級分解: 一年級字詞,二年級句子,三年級片斷,四年級篇章,五年級綜合,六年級提高。
五、實施五項訓(xùn)練
根據(jù)認(rèn)識是作文的核心這一原則,圍繞這個發(fā)展學(xué)生心理機(jī)制的核心,扎扎實實地進(jìn)行了五項訓(xùn)練:
(一)、字詞訓(xùn)練。學(xué)習(xí)掌握大量字詞。掌握運(yùn)用字詞的金鑰匙:聯(lián)系自己熟悉的事物;聯(lián)系自己生活實際;聯(lián)系自己學(xué)會的語言及字詞知識。
運(yùn)用“十引說”的方法,把字詞學(xué)習(xí)與說話訓(xùn)練相結(jié)合。“十引說”是:
1、分析字形;
2、利用教具;
3、憑圖學(xué)詞;
4、組詞擴(kuò)詞;
5、選詞填空;
6、詞語搭配;
7、調(diào)整詞序;
8、觸景用詞;
9、詞語分類;
10、聯(lián)詞成句。豐富了說話訓(xùn)練內(nèi)容,使自己積累大量會說會用的字詞,為寫作文打下堅實基礎(chǔ)。
(二)、句子訓(xùn)練。只要是一個句子,都包括兩個方面:一是說的人、事、物、景,二是說目的??捎行┙處熤笇?dǎo)學(xué)生說一句話時,沒有很好憑借圖畫和事物,認(rèn)真教學(xué)生觀察、認(rèn)識、分析、表達(dá)的方法,只是拿出一張圖或一事物讓學(xué)生說寫一句話,學(xué)生不知道為什么要說寫一句話,怎樣說寫一句話,說寫一句什么句型、什么句式的話,導(dǎo)致作文中語調(diào)單
一、呆板、不活潑生動??梢愿淖寣W(xué)生憑圖、看物、對話、練習(xí)說寫一句時間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件四要素完整的話,四種句型,九種句式的話。學(xué)生才會在作文中運(yùn)用不同句型、句式,表達(dá)不同的思想、感情、態(tài)度、目的。
(三)、段的訓(xùn)練。結(jié)合八種段式:以事物發(fā)展為序段,時間先后為序段,空間變換為序段,總述、分述結(jié)構(gòu)段,因果段、轉(zhuǎn)折段,遞進(jìn)段,并列段。以此認(rèn)識客觀事物的發(fā)生、發(fā)展規(guī)律。不論哪種段式,都是記敘事物的發(fā)展和人們對事物的認(rèn)識,即段的內(nèi)容,段的中心。它和一句話一樣,也是對人、事、物、景的敘述,也是表達(dá)一個意思。只不過是把一句話進(jìn)一步說得更清楚、更深刻。
(四)、篇章訓(xùn)練。篇是由段組成的。通過對審題、立意、選材、謀篇、定法、用語的知識與方法,通過記敘、描寫、抒情、議論四種表達(dá)方法,文章開頭與結(jié)尾、過渡與呼應(yīng)方法,各種文章體裁的知識與方法。學(xué)會寫中心明確,意思完整,詳略得當(dāng)?shù)挠洈⑽暮蛻?yīng)用文。
(五)、生活現(xiàn)場訓(xùn)練。采用生活現(xiàn)場訓(xùn)練,更好地體會“從內(nèi)容入手”寫作文。通過各種作文教學(xué)活動,如“確定中心討論會”、“選材討論會”、“作文會診會”、“小諸葛審題會”、“妙用詞語比賽會”,從活動中生動具體地學(xué)到作文知識與寫作文的方法。另外,還可開展各種校內(nèi)外活動,如跳繩、拔河、踢毽、球類、背書比賽,從而學(xué)會如何寫比賽作文;開展校內(nèi)外義務(wù)勞動,學(xué)會如何寫勞動場面;舉行詩歌朗誦、講演會,學(xué)會如何寫會議場面及會議上的見聞;通過參觀訪問,瀏覽名勝古跡,學(xué)會如何寫參觀訪問記、游記。學(xué)習(xí)觀察方法,留心周圍的事物、事件,“處處留心皆學(xué)問,人情練達(dá)即文章”。通過現(xiàn)場生活作文,進(jìn)一步認(rèn)識到:生活是作文的沃土。從而學(xué)會寫真事、抒真情,陶冶真、善、美的情操,培養(yǎng)良好的文風(fēng)。
實行“互評互改”,培養(yǎng)學(xué)生思維獨(dú)立性和創(chuàng)造性。學(xué)生作文寫好后,組織在小組內(nèi)講評。先學(xué)習(xí)別人作文的優(yōu)點(diǎn),再用批評的眼光互相指出作文中的缺點(diǎn),并指出改進(jìn)意見。在此基礎(chǔ)上重新再寫,從而使學(xué)生每寫一篇都有收獲。
寫出誠實的自己的話
“寫誠實的自己的話”是老教育家葉圣陶先生說的。旨在營造“自主”作文的五彩世界。所謂“自主”就是不受條條框框的限制,讓學(xué)生無拘無束的思想,自由自在的寫作?!白灾鳌弊魑木褪恰把詾樾穆暋?,率性而為,展現(xiàn)自我的風(fēng)采,體現(xiàn)鮮明的個性。
應(yīng)當(dāng)脫離作文教學(xué)的陳舊方式,可以讓學(xué)生在“自主”狀態(tài)下寫作,褪去矯揉造作、模仿穿鑿,賦予其鮮活的想象力,豐富的創(chuàng)造力,等待收獲的將是繽紛的色彩,清新的果實和勃勃的生機(jī)。
寫作時,課堂上常發(fā)生這樣的情況:有的學(xué)生文思枯竭,三言兩語就把要說的傾倒完了,干干癟癟;有的學(xué)生卻思緒綿綿,腦子里如有活水,或潺潺流淌,或波瀾起伏,筆下洋洋灑灑。究其原因,與寫作材料充足與否當(dāng)然有密切關(guān)系,然而,切不可忽視另一重要因素,即想象力發(fā)揮得如何。
根據(jù)近代腦生理的研究,人的大腦可分為四個功能部位,即感受部位、判斷部位、儲存部位和想象部位。就多數(shù)人而言,前三個部位注意開發(fā),想象部位比較忽視。據(jù)研究測試,一般人只用了自身想象力的15%,潛力很大。學(xué)寫作,就要重視想象力的發(fā)展。人們說,科學(xué)是從想象開始的,如果人們不幻想能像烏一樣飛,像魚一樣游,哪來今日的飛機(jī)、潛艇?寫文章也一樣,發(fā)揮想象力,讓思想插上雙翅飛翔,就能上下求索,神游八荒,獲得十分豐富的寫作材料。
開展想象應(yīng)選擇不定向的、跳躍式的、自由自在的方式,也就是浮想聯(lián)翩,不受限制地思考。一般地說,人們思考問題常常是按一定的常規(guī)、一定的角度進(jìn)行,思維的范圍比較窄,而想象卻不是按部就班地思考,是不受任何拘束放開來想,思維充分發(fā)散。思維發(fā)散,頭腦中就能形成許多從來沒見過的事物形象,創(chuàng)造出前所未有的新形象。
第五篇:英文邀請信寫作要點(diǎn)
英文邀請信寫作要點(diǎn)
邀請信分為兩種:一種屬于個人信函,例如邀請某人共進(jìn)晚餐、參加宴會、觀看電影、出席典禮等。另一種邀請信則屬于事務(wù)信函,一般是邀請參加會議、學(xué)術(shù)活動等等。
一、普通邀請信
第一種邀請信邀請的對象一般是朋友、熟人,所以內(nèi)容格式上的要求都比較松,可以寫得隨便一些。只要表明邀請的意圖,說明活動的內(nèi)容、時間、地點(diǎn)等等。但既然是邀請信,那么就一定要在信中表達(dá)非常希望對方能夠參加或者出席的愿望。這種邀請信的篇幅可以非常短,下面以一封邀請看電影的短信為例:
Dear Jane,We have four tickets for a famous film shown at Guangming Cinema,Friday, the ninth.Will you join us? We'll be looking for you at eight sharp Friday night in front of the cinema, so don't disappoint us!
Warmest regards.Alice
二、正式邀請信
第二種邀請信一般由會議或?qū)W術(shù)活動的組委會的某一個負(fù)責(zé)人來寫,以組委會的名義發(fā)出,而且被邀請者通常也是屬于比較有威望的人士。因此,這類邀請信的措辭要相對正
式一些,語氣要熱情有禮。
加的意圖以及會議或?qū)W術(shù)活動的名稱、時間、地點(diǎn);然后要對被邀請者的威望和學(xué)術(shù)水平等表示推崇和贊賞,表明如果被邀請者能夠接受邀請,會給會議或者活動帶來很好的影響;接著要說明會議或活動的相關(guān)事宜,最好是能引起對方興趣的事宜;當(dāng)然不能忘了表達(dá)希望對方能夠參加的誠意;最后還要請收信人對發(fā)出的邀請做出反饋,如確認(rèn)接受邀請。下面是一封邀請對方參加學(xué)術(shù)會議的信函:
Dear Professor Wang,On behalf of the Ohio State University and, I would be very pleased to invite you to attend and chair a session of the
forthcoming 2004 International Conferenceto be held in
Bellaire, Michigan, from October 25 to October 28, 2004.You are an internationally scholar and educator.Your
participation will be among the highlights of the Conference.We sincerely hope that you could accept our invitation.If you can come, please let us know as soon as possible, since we have to prepare the final program soon.We are looking
forward to your acceptance.Sincerely yours,Peter White
一、邀請信常用句:
1、I'd like...to come to dinner 非常希望...共進(jìn)晚餐
2、request the pleasure of 恭請...3、The favor of a reply is requested 敬賜復(fù)函
4、May I have the honor of your company at dinner? 恭請
6、I hope you're not too busy to come.我期望您會在百忙中光臨
7、The reception will be held in...,on...招待會定于...在...舉行
8、We sincerely/faithfully hope you can attend….我們期待您的光臨
9、We are looking forward to...我們期待著....10、We have decided to have a party in honor of the occasion 為此我們決定舉辦一次晚會
11、Please confirm your participation at your earliest
convenience 是否參加,請早日告之
12.On the occasion of