第一篇：高三復(fù)習(xí)短文改錯(cuò)1+答案

短文改錯(cuò)專練

（一）假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A

March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room.It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep.I’m thinking about my future!Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know!My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun.Also I’m really bad at biology at the school.My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed.I can think about my future in bed.I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.B

I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time.We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before.We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place.We listened to the music together and soon became best friends.Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them.It is great.We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach.We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs.Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.C

Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK.I’ve got news too.I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school.We’re going to stay on a farm with four days!We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.I’m sure I’ll love it.You know how crazy I am about the animals!I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too.Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours, Nadia

D

People had always been interested in bees.This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make.In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years.In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey.They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard.Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees.In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees.They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other.Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.E

Yesterday afternoon, I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name.How a good man!

F

I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today.According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way.He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification.Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.G

Last weekends, I went shopping by myself.It was a sunny day and I feel very happy.When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus.Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop.Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room.I had to wait the next bus.Suddenly, it started to rain.I had no choice but to call a taxi.Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by.Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain.What an unlucky day!

H

My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor.I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.I enjoy serving others.Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job good.Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies.For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students.Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax.I believe I am the right person to this post.答案

1....at my room.2....have to getting...3....my parents asks...4....when you grow?” 5.And she doesn’t...6....not her idea of...7....at the school.8.He knew I hate...9....I’m getting tiring...10....I’m lain down.1.We firstly met...2....five years before.3....to the music...4....go on holiday...5.It is great.6....beautifully beach.7....a lot of funs.8....changed her job...9....to other town.10....in the phone...A

at → in getting → get asks → ask

grow后加up And → But her → my 去掉the knew → knows

tiring → tired

lain → lying

B

firstly → first before → ago 去掉the go前加to is → was

beautifully → beautiful funs → fun her → his

other → another in → on / over

C

1.Thanks to your...to → for

2....to know when...when → that或去掉when 3....next weeks with...weeks → week 4....with four days!with → for 5....and doing some...doing → do 6....about the animals!7....or the horses.8....have some times...9....finish homework...10....to telling you...1.People had always...2....what bees make.3.In the fact...4....thousand of years.5....recently past...6....working so hard.7....we talk with...8....has a new reason...9....bees able to...10....surprised facts...1....I had listened...2....by my earphones.3....that I should...4....bus in hurry.5....to finding it...6....the bus companies...7.Fortunate, at the...去掉the or → and

times → time

homework前加my

telling → tell

D

had → have what → that / which

去掉the thousand → thousands recently → recent

working → work

with → about

has → have

able前加are

surprised → surprising

E

去掉had by → with

that → where

hurry前加a

finding → find companies → company

Fortunate → Fortunately

8....I see my bag.see → saw 9....and the staff...and → but 10.How a good man!

How → What

F

1....an interested piece...interested → interesting 2....they do it in...do → did 3....a wide ranges...ranges → range 4....losing the weight...去掉the 5....managed to meeting...meeting → meet 6....like “very successful.” like → as

7....so much failed...much → many 8....and led by...led前加were 9....time on thinking...on → in或去掉on 10....what would happen...what → that

G

1.Last weekends...weekends → weekend 2....I feel very happy.feel → felt 3....anything I needed...anything → everything 4....too much people...much → many 5.Then it was my...Then → When 6....wait the next bus.the前加for 7....was broke down.去掉was 8....filled with angry...angry → anger 9....an emptier bus...emptier → empty 10....in a rain.a → the

H

1....I wanted to be...wanted → want 2....or easy-going.or → and 3....have vary interests.vary → varied 4....as well soccer.soccer前加as 5....be always open...去掉be 6....do the job good.good → well 7....in our classes...classes → class 8....who is falling...is → are 9....among teachers...among → between 10....to this post.to → for

短文改錯(cuò)專練

（二）假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A

Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week.I’m really sorry.I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was.So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken.Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus.And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing.Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone.Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me.Hope to hear you soon.Yours，Jack

B

Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip.I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus.On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked.We all had good time.Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees.It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air.Finally, we went home at half past four.Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.C

Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad.They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent.Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future.Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them.He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners.Besides, the cost is too much for his family.In my opinions, I should continue to study in China.As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.D

Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market.It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars.But there is one serious problems with this.The information are actually very often misinformation.It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us.And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.E

My grandfather had had enough of his cat.He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess.So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town.He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep.My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather.He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention.He decided he will never give her away again.F

Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society.This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did.People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past.Customs and beliefs have changed very slower.They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better.Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next.Yet changes do take place.All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other.In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.G

My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof.They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter.Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police.After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to.It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly.The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground.Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.H

Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit.There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema.But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities.As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired.But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic.Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active.In a word, exercise is good for the health.答案

A

1....apologize to what...to → for 2....gotten here on...here → there

3....gone wrongly.wrongly → wrong 4....what the time...去掉the 5....I have to...have → had 6....get changing.changing → changed 7....another buses...buses → bus 8....and my brother...and → but 9....too angrier with...angrier → angry 10.Hope to hear you...you前加from

B

1....my classmate and...classmate → classmates 2.I get up at...get → got 3....had good time...good前加a 4.Two hours late...late → later 5....that the farmers...that → where 6....they began to plant...they → we 7....to getting close to...getting → get 8....on the open air.on → in 9....all of us was...was → were 10....more unforgettable.去掉more

C

1....mother has...has → have 2....at early age...early前加an 3....to be dependent.dependent → independent 4....be easier to me...to → for 5....that will prepare...that → which 6.Moreover, my good...Moreover → However 7.He thought my...thought → thinks 8....for his family.his → my 9.In my opinions...opinions → opinion 10....hard at now...去掉at

D

1....about newer products...newer → new 2....with everything...with → on / about 3....serious problems...problems → problem 4....are actually very...are → is 5....its disadvantages.its → their 6....buying things...buying → buy 7....sense reality.reality前加of 8....the white teeth!”

去掉the 9.And it doesn’t...And → But 10....a health diet and...health → healthy

E

1....all the funitures...furnitures → furniture 2....made a mess.made → making 3.He told his friends...friends → friend 4....so old to look...so → too 5....in a very cold...in → on 6....and surprised to...surprised前加was 7....found his way...his → her 8....such a cold weather.去掉a 9....the cat outside...10....he will never...1....living in a...2....live on much...3....has strong ties to...4....changed very slower.5....when changes will...6.Values are passing...7....with little changes...8....much quickly at...9....than at other.10....including deserts...1....aunt come home...2....discovered huge...3....were covered...4....which they saw...5....had happened to.6....holding the wastes...7....had burst openly.8....it fell towards...9....broke into piece...10....after melting in...outside → inside

will → would

F

living → live

on → in

has → have slower → slowly

去掉when passing → passed

little → few

much → more或quickly前加more

other → others deserts前加the

G

come → came huge前加a were → was which → what 去掉to wastes → waste openly → open

it → they

piece → pieces

after → before

H

1.Taking parts in...parts → part 2....help us keep...help → helps 3....kinds of activity...activity → activities 4....going to cinema.cinema前加the 5....better to have...去掉to 6....sit too longer...longer → long 7....brains getting...getting → get 8.But it’s a good...But → So 9....some runnings...runnings → running 10....make it smart...it → them

短文改錯(cuò)專練

（三）假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A

Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email.A cave!You know we’re on holidays in Spain.Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first.We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good.I think I ate too much ice cream the day before.Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada.However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking.Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful.We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave.We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything.Take care!

Ben

B

My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television.He decided to set up himself.He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses.After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV.The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV.That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside.When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire.Fortunately, the fire was putting out.It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.C

Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others.It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves.But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas.We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received.They forget to think of the sick and the homeless.The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed.What a shame!

D

A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him.Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes.At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door.Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move.Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house.When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy.But it was too late and she was arrested.My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.E

Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams.Some copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones.Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects.For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students.For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future.So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating.At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.F

Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student.At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class.I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent.Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.I believe you will be one of their friend too.Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing.I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.Best wishes!

Yours，Li Hua

G

My friend Jake is eighteen years old and lives in a small village, not far with the city of Nottingham.He grew up in this village, so he knows everyone here.But he feels boring in the village.At the moment, he travels Nottingham every day to the shop where he works.This is a bus at 7:30 in the morning and the latest bus back in the evening is at 5:30.From the September, however, he’s going to stay in Nottingham with his aunt and uncle when his cousin join the Navy.He can use his cousin’s room.He’s really looking forward to live in Nottingham.He’ll be able to go out with his friends in the evening and he doesn’t have to get up earlier in the morning to catch the bus.H

Last night, our neighbor visited my family and complained for the noise from our home at night.We feel very sorry to cause so much trouble.I explained why my parents fixed our kitchen at night because we worked all day and only came back home in the evening.What’s more, they fixed the kitchen by themselves because the high cost of workers.Since my parents are not professional, so it took them a long time to fix it.Considering the noise and trouble the neighbor were having, my parents decided to hire some workers to fix our kitchens on the weekend.We promised we would finish the work as soon as possibly.At last, we expressed our shame again and the neighbor forgiving us.答案

A

1....on holidays in...holidays → holiday 2....we spend a few...spend → spent 3....feel very good.good → well 4....when I left...I → we 5....not enough bed!

bed → beds

6.“Why don’t try...don’t → not或try前加you 7....he were joking.were → was 8.But there we are...there → here 9....it much that...much前加so 10....explore for everything.去掉for 1.My uncle buys...2....to set up...3....with the side of...4....of his houses.5.After he finishing...6....very much hot...7....were on fire.8....was putting out.9....her neighbor’s...10....but had caused...1....express our love...2....which we perform...3....less fortunate to...4....the other people...5....we sat down to...6....related with...7....that the presents...8....the one we...9.They forget to...10....has complete...1....his bag by...B

buys → bought up前加it with → to houses → house finishing → finished 去掉much were → was putting → put her → his but → and

C

express前加to

which → when to → than

去掉the sat → sit

with → to that → whether / if one → ones

They → We

complete → completely

D

by → with

2....feeling a pair...feeling → felt 3....he sees an eagle...sees → saw

4....frightening to move...frightening → frightened 5....after ten minute...minute → minutes 6.Therefore, the eyes...Therefore → However 7....parents returned to...去掉to 8....turned the light...the前加on或light后加on 9....she was arrested.she → he 10....eagle were better...were → was

E

1....were found cheating...were → are 2....or prepared note...note → notes 3....communication tool...tool → tools 4....some worse effects.worse → bad 5....will result unfair...unfair前加in 6....cheats in exams...cheats → cheat 7.On my opinion...On → In 8....put into the effect...去掉the 9....understood what kind...understood → understand 10....or try to build...or → and

F

1....come Beijing to...Beijing前加to 2....but I always get...but → and 3....better grades in...better → good 4....the spoken...去掉the 5....with you frequent.frequent → frequently 6.Beside, my...Beside → Besides 7....and is friends...is → are 8....of their friend...friend → friends 9....during you stay...you → your 10....willing to helping...helping → help

G

1....not far with...with → from 2....he feels boring...boring → bored

3....travels Nottingham...Nottingham前加to或into 4.This is a bus...This → There 5....the latest bus...6....the September...7....his cousin join...8....to live in...9....he doesn’t have...10....get up earlier...1....complained for...2.We feel very sorry...3....explained why my...4....we worked all day...5....because the high...6....so it took them...7....were having...8....fix our kitchens...9....as soon as possibly.10....forgiving us.latest → last 去掉the

join → joins

live → living doesn’t → won’t earlier → early

H

for → about / at

feel → felt

why → that

we → they

the前加of

去掉so were → was

kitchens → kitchen

possibly → possible forgiving → forgave

第二篇：短文改錯(cuò)

短文改錯(cuò)

（一）I am interested at swimming very much.At first, I went swimming just to keep health.Now my dream was to swim for my country in the Olympics.Though practicing in the pool is very bored, but I still work very hard in order to realize my dream.Because my hard work, I have already come first in much important competitions.In the competitions, I’ve made lot of friends and we’re very close.It’s much easier to have friends which are swimmers because they also have to get up early to practice like you and they understand this kind of life.短文改錯(cuò)

（二）One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw parents.Mom said,” How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.短文改錯(cuò)

（三）Last summer vacation, I went on a school trip with mine classmates.We visited a farm in a countryside.We took a bus for a while, and then we walked here.We saw a lot of different kinds trees and villages along the way.Some farmers were worked hard in the farm when we arrived.One of the farmer showed us around, introducing differently crops to us.We fed chickens, picked some green apples and took up many beautiful photos.It was really interesting and at the same time, I learned a lot about farming.What an excited school trip!

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（四）I’ve been playing baseball for six year and I’m the only girl on an all-boys baseball team.Our strict coach wants us do our best when we are playing.So it’s not always about winning.He also tells us to just smile and enjoyed ourselves.I take advice he gives me and bring them to my game.Some people say girls can’t play baseball.Hear that doesn’t get me mad.Instead, it makes me play more harder.I want to be knew for being a good player, not just for being the only girl on the team.If you’re a girl who want to play ball, just play you heart out!

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（五）My uncle drove his car meet his friends.When he found there was still some time leaving before the train had arrived, he wanted to take a short sleep.He was falling sleep when a woman came and asked him the time.He opened his eye and answered, “Half past eight.” With a “Thank you!” a woman left.On a short while this happened again.So my uncle wrote “I don’t know the time” on a piece of paper and put them on the window of the car.A few minutes late, an old man came and woke him up, “Hi, young man.I can tell you that time it is.It’s nine o’clock now.”

短文改錯(cuò)

（六）When I began my senior high school years, I had difficulty to learning English.I dared not speak English in the public because of my poor pronounce.I could not get high marks, but I always used bad grammar.Afraid of be laughed at, I never put up my hand answer questions in class.When my English teacher Miss Li learned about this, she encouraged me and lend me a hand, that helped improve my English.With her help, I became interest in English and finally got high marks.Miss Li, like a shining star, shines on her path to success.短文改錯(cuò)

（七）Dear Tim, How time flies!It has been a month since you go to America.What is everything going? Next weekend I will take part in a national English speaking competition to be holding in Shanghai.It will be a good chance to improve your English and make friends with students from other part of China.But right now I’m not sure that I can remember all the words for a competition.Anyway, I will hope I can get a good result.I am looking forward seeing you again and hope we can have a true great time then.Yours, Li Hua

短文改錯(cuò)

（八）As a service dog, Sandy’s job is help manage a medical condition I have.My condition can be dangerously.When something bad happen, Sandy will tell my parents immediately.Of course, I help take care of Sandy, too.I feed him, walk him, but even take him just about everywhere I go.If I don’t bring Sandy to me, he will get upset.Once he stays with my grandparents for a few hours while my parents and I went to the beach.Sandy was upset in the whole time.He never stopped look for me.When I got home, he was such happy that he rushed to me.I love his dog very much.4

第三篇：短文改錯(cuò)

短文改錯(cuò)

高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)題要求考生判斷一篇短文中十行(自1995年以來(lái))文字是否有錯(cuò)，如果有錯(cuò)誤就將其改正。

此題型旨在測(cè)試考生發(fā)現(xiàn)、判斷并改正短文中錯(cuò)誤的能力，以及考查考生準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用詞法、句法、行文邏輯等的綜合能力。

本題型側(cè)重考查考生的詞匯和語(yǔ)法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，但并不是單純的知識(shí)檢測(cè)，而是考查考生在閱讀的過(guò)程中運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法知識(shí)解決實(shí)際問(wèn)題的能力。

縱觀近幾年高考短文改錯(cuò)，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)其設(shè)題方式比較固定：正確為1個(gè)，多詞或缺詞共計(jì)3個(gè)，錯(cuò)詞為6個(gè)，其比例為1：3:6。

下面引用近幾年的高考題來(lái)分析一下此題的三種錯(cuò)誤類型：多詞、缺詞和錯(cuò)詞。

一、多詞

1.多冠詞

(l)Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacherin the crowd.【解析lsight是不可數(shù)名詞，且catch sight of是固定搭配，意為“看見(jiàn)”。

(2)For e】cample, when l was a child, the rain was amystery.【解析】，am為不可數(shù)名詞，泛指時(shí)前面不用冠詞。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)不可數(shù)名詞表示泛指時(shí)不用冠詞。

Modern people know more about the health, havebetter food，and?

(2)與by連用的交通工具及air，land，sea等名詞前不用冠詞。

by bike騎自行車，by sea由海路，乘船

(3)有些名詞(如school，class，hospital，church，prison，bed，table，town等)與相應(yīng)介詞連用，表示進(jìn)行和這些詞直接相關(guān)的活動(dòng)時(shí)，前不用冠詞。

___ _去上學(xué)，_______坐牢，_______在吃飯

(4)球類運(yùn)動(dòng)、棋類游戲前，不用冠詞。

___ _打籃球，_______下棋

(5)mo。t副詞作“非?！苯鈺r(shí)，前面不用定冠詞the。

She is most pretty.她非常漂亮。

(6)。或though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，構(gòu)成倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，前置的單數(shù)名詞前不用任何冠詞。

Child as he is,he knows a lot.雖然他只是孩子，知道的卻很多。

2.多介詞

(l)ln fact,they are planning to visit China in next yeaL

(2)We practice for three times every week..(3)So l'm really sorry that l won't be able to come inthis time.【解析】以上三例都是作時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)的名詞短語(yǔ)前多了介詞。

(4)?but we do not seem to get much time to talkabout together.【解析】talk about意為“談到??”，是及物動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)，后須接介詞賓語(yǔ)，但根據(jù)本句語(yǔ)境，此處不必接賓語(yǔ)，故去掉about。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)last night, next week, this year, one day,threetimes等名詞詞組直接充當(dāng)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，前面不用介詞。

(2)有些動(dòng)詞在漢語(yǔ)中是不及物動(dòng)詞，在英語(yǔ)中卻是及物動(dòng)詞，由于受漢語(yǔ)影響，可能多一個(gè)介詞。

serve for the people, follow after the teacher, marrywith her,make him as our monitor,play with Tom in amatch(畫線介詞多余)

(3)有些表示地點(diǎn)的副詞，其意義中已包含to，如果再加to，則多余。

on one's way to there, return to home, go to upstairs(畫線介詞均多余)

(4)有些副詞或介詞詞組后加另一個(gè)介詞，構(gòu)成復(fù)合介詞，若后面沒(méi)有介詞賓語(yǔ)，介詞則多余。同樣，有些動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)是“動(dòng)詞十介詞”結(jié)構(gòu)，若后面沒(méi)有介詞賓語(yǔ)，介詞則多余。

①If you won’t go，I'll go instead of.(畫線介詞多余)

②She listened to but heard nothing(畫線介詞多余)

(5)有些動(dòng)詞或形容詞后接名詞或代詞時(shí)，須加一個(gè)介詞，但接從句時(shí)，必須去掉介詞。

①l never knew about a ride down a river could be soexciting.(畫線介詞多余)

②I am sorry for that he won't come(畫線介詞多余)

3.詞義重疊

(1)Whenever I see them l will often think of myEnglish teacher.【解析】在whenever l see them這一時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句后再用often顯得重復(fù)，應(yīng)去掉。

(2)1'11 spend all the whole weekend reading andpreparing for it.【解析】the whole weekend意為“整個(gè)周末”，再加上all，詞義重疊。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)有些詞受漢語(yǔ)影響，多一副詞或介詞，造成詞義重疊。

return back回來(lái)，repeat again重復(fù)，flee away逃走，enter into進(jìn)入，blue color藍(lán)色，stop down停下來(lái)，raiseup舉起來(lái)，unpack open打開

(2)定語(yǔ)從句中的一個(gè)名詞，已由關(guān)系代詞取代，再用其替代詞是多余的。

I do remember you having apologized to the old lady Imet her last week

(3)單音節(jié)的形容詞或副詞比較等級(jí)加-er.-est，多音節(jié)加more、most，但二者不能同時(shí)重疊使用。

As a result, people in the modern world generally livemuch more longer than people in the past.4.出現(xiàn)冗言現(xiàn)象

(l)Today l visited the Smiths-my first time visit toan American family.【解析】本句中的first修飾visit，visit此處為名詞，意為“我的第一次訪問(wèn)”，time多余。

(2)Now I can't watch much television,but?【解析】根據(jù)上下文，此處應(yīng)是“我根本不能看電視”，因此受漢語(yǔ)影響，多了much，造成冗言。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)狀語(yǔ)從句與主句之間多一并列連詞。

①Though he tried his best, but he failed.②The more he has, and the more he wants.(2)充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)的介詞短語(yǔ)與主句之間多一關(guān)系代詞或關(guān)系副詞。

①In the last five years that they have climbed churches一②?in other places where you are limited to a certainnumber...(3)充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)的分詞與主句之間多一并列連詞。

Sitting down,and he began to work.(4)從屬連詞后多一個(gè)that。

She was absent from the meeting because that she was ilL(5)復(fù)合賓語(yǔ)前多一個(gè)that。

I found that her lying on the ground.5.固定搭配中多詞

(1)I was used to watch it every night.【解析】此處屬于used to do與be used to兩個(gè)固定搭配的誤用，應(yīng)去掉was，取“過(guò)去常?！敝狻?/p>

(2)?in any other words,Iam only a child.【解析lin other words為固定搭配，意為“換句話說(shuō)”，而any other意為“任何別的??”，與本文上下文不符。

6.行文邏輯上多詞First, let me tell you something more about myself.【解析】由first可知是剛開始向別人講述自己的故事，故只能說(shuō)something，而不能加more。

二、缺詞

1.名詞前缺限定詞

(1)Each player must obey^captain, who is theleader of the team.the【解析】此處應(yīng)加上the，特指“球隊(duì)的隊(duì)長(zhǎng)”。

(2)The day before the speech contest^Englishteacher talked to me.my【解析】根據(jù)上下文分析，此處English teacher是有所指的，指的是“我的”英語(yǔ)老師，故加上my，表達(dá)一個(gè)更確切的概念。

(3)I'1I take this chance to wish you^ wonderful timeon your birthday.a【解析lwish sb.awonderful time為固定搭配，意為“祝某人玩得愉快”。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)在“so+形容詞十可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)”結(jié)構(gòu)中，名詞前不能缺a或an。

This is so good a book that we will buy it.=This is such a good book that we will buy it.(2)little,few表示肯定時(shí)，前面不能缺a，意為“一些”。

如a little water，但是“每隔幾分鐘”應(yīng)說(shuō)成every fewminutesa

(3)有些不可數(shù)名詞(如metal, beauty, iron, tea,coffee, ice, youth, pleasure, success, failure等)，表示“一種”“一個(gè)“一份”時(shí)，應(yīng)加上a或an。

Work is a pleasure to me.(4)“the+姓氏復(fù)數(shù)”表示一家人時(shí)，the不能省。

The Browns like to go skating.(5)表示“兩者之中比較??的一個(gè)”時(shí)，比較級(jí)前應(yīng)加the。

He is the taller of the two boys.(6)在句中可數(shù)名詞不可單獨(dú)使用，前面應(yīng)有限定詞，如his,that,Tom's,the,a等。

When we walked to the car, Bill smiled and shook^head.his2.缺動(dòng)詞不定式符號(hào)to(1)I'd like very much^come but I have anexamination on Monday morning.to【解析】like后面不能直接加動(dòng)詞，需加to，構(gòu)成固定搭配“would like to do”，意為“想做??”。

(2)一.and will do all they can^ make sure that l geta good education to【解析】不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)，不定式符號(hào)to不可省。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)不定式作后置定語(yǔ)，不定式符號(hào)to不能省。

But then there are always more mysteriesAlook into:_____to

(2)-般說(shuō)來(lái)，兩個(gè)實(shí)義動(dòng)詞不能并列使用，中間常用to連接。

①7Ihe World Health()rganization and other organizationsare workingAimprove health all over the world_____to

②i had always wantedA retum to the village _____to

(3)feel, hear, let, make,have, see, notice, watch,ob。rv。等動(dòng)詞變成被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)時(shí)，充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)的不定式不能省去to。

Little Tom was made to do heavy work

(4)為了避免重復(fù)前面的動(dòng)詞，后面的不定式常常省略，但要保留不定式符號(hào)to。

We wanted to go to the lecture, but we weren't able to

3.缺系動(dòng)詞

(l)neyA eager to Imow everything about China：.'were【解析】eager為形容詞，必須加系動(dòng)詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)。

(2)What^ your favourite sport?IS【解析】本句缺謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，應(yīng)加is。

(3)I'd like to^ your pen-friend, and.be/become【解析】本句考查I'd like to do結(jié)構(gòu)，根據(jù)上下文，必須加上系動(dòng)詞。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)由于受漢語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法規(guī)則的影響，有些形容詞作表語(yǔ)時(shí)，常常缺少系動(dòng)詞。

She is afraid of her boss.(2)在被動(dòng)結(jié)構(gòu)中，由于缺少助動(dòng)詞，變成了主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，造成錯(cuò)誤。

?and let you know when the book you want has^returned and is ready for you to pick up.been4.缺介詞(l)We must keep in mind that we play for the teaminstead^ ourselves._____ of【解析linstead of為固定短語(yǔ)，意為“而非，而不是”，后接賓語(yǔ)。

(2)?but the others spent a lotA time arguing_____of【解析la lot of是固定習(xí)語(yǔ)，意為“許多，大量”，后加賓語(yǔ)。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

改錯(cuò)題對(duì)介詞的考查，重點(diǎn)是一些固定搭配，再如：

WhenI have free timeI go^along walk..for，因此，同學(xué)們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)和復(fù)習(xí)中應(yīng)牢記一些固定搭配。

5.缺連詞In one class,l learned^ it rained.why【解析】本句因缺連詞而造成句子成分殘缺，只有加上why，句子的意義才完整。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)在漢語(yǔ)中，分句與分句之間往往不用連詞，但在英語(yǔ)中卻不行。

It began to rain,^ they had to stop working.and

(2)受母語(yǔ)影響，幾個(gè)同類詞并列連用時(shí)，它們之間往往缺一連詞。

CDi told Mother, Father, Sister,^ all my friends herewhat a great time I had.and②He looked inside but saw nothing.(3)that引導(dǎo)的主語(yǔ)從句置于句首時(shí)，that常常不能省。

That light travels in straight line is known to all.(4)引導(dǎo)同位語(yǔ)從句的連詞that，when等常不可省。

(DThe doctors came to the conclusion that the patientwas suffering from cancer.②i have no idea when he will return(5)在even if，even though，as if'as though等短語(yǔ)中，第二個(gè)連詞不能少。

He walks as if/though he were drunk

三、錯(cuò)詞

1.可數(shù)名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用

(l)They were eager to know everything about Chinaand asked me lots of question

(2)We study quite a few subject, such as maths,Chinese, English and physics.(3)We practise three times every week and oftenwatch football match on TV together.(4)She said that she and my schoolmate' all.wishedme success,.(5)?so that l'11 get good marks in all my subject.___

(6)?and many happy return of the day_____

(7)I used to love science class-all of them-biology,chemistry, geography, physics.【知識(shí)拓寬】

對(duì)名詞單復(fù)數(shù)的考查是高考的熱點(diǎn)之一，幾乎每年考查一處。因此，為了對(duì)名詞錯(cuò)誤判斷準(zhǔn)確，應(yīng)該：

(1)弄清名詞是可數(shù)名詞還是不可數(shù)名詞。

We stopped to rest for a while and to drink somewaters from a stream water

(2)掌握好可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)的變化規(guī)則。

There are branch library in many villages libraries

(3)要熟練運(yùn)用名詞的所有格。

2.時(shí)態(tài)誤用

(l)We havea good tinte talking and laughing together.had

(2)I learn about you from my English teacher, MissFang.learned

(3)I was a member of our school football team am

(4)I arn happy with any programme but the othersspent a lot of time...was

(5)I remembered her words and calm down calmed

(6)They did not want me to do any w,ork at home do【知識(shí)拓寬】

動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)是短文改錯(cuò)考查的熱點(diǎn)之一，一般說(shuō)來(lái)每年考查一處，而且近幾年高考主要考查現(xiàn)在時(shí)與過(guò)去時(shí)的使用，再如：I had an examination on Monday moming.have

3.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用

(l)It was very kind of them to meet me.at the railwaystation and drove meto their home drive

(2)I look forward to hear from you soon hearing

(3)Play football not only makes us grow up...Playing

(4)I was often alittle tired after a day's work andwatch TV demands very little effort.watching【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)由以上考例可見(jiàn)，v.-mg形式作主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)是考查的熱點(diǎn)。

CDi'ii spend the whole weekend reading and preparefor it.preparing②After learn the basics of the subject, nothing elseseemed very practical to me.learning

(2)過(guò)去分詞與現(xiàn)在分詞的區(qū)別是另一考查熱點(diǎn)。此時(shí)重點(diǎn)要看分詞與主語(yǔ)或邏輯主語(yǔ)的關(guān)系。

①After an hour or so, we began to feel veryfrightening.frightened②?but now l am interesting in football.interested(3)被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)中的過(guò)去分詞誤用成動(dòng)詞原形。

Books may be keep for four weeks.kept(4)掌握好動(dòng)詞不定式帶to與不帶to的差異。

(5)有些動(dòng)詞后接不定式，有些動(dòng)詞后接動(dòng)名詞，應(yīng)分別牢記這些動(dòng)詞。

4.主謂不一致

(1)Playing football not only makes us grow up talland strong but alsoglve us a sense of fair play and teamspirit.gives

(2)Now my picture and the prize is hanging in thelibrary.are【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)一般取決于前面主語(yǔ)的單復(fù)數(shù)。

Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing toborrow them.costs

(2)not only;一but also, neither.—nor.一，either.or..-等并列連詞連接兩個(gè)主語(yǔ)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)應(yīng)采取就近一致原則。

(3)There be結(jié)構(gòu)中，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也應(yīng)采取就近一致原則。

But then there is always more mysteries to look into.are

(4)注意把集合名詞(如family，class，team等)和不定代詞(如all，none等)放在具體語(yǔ)境中，判斷其謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)。

5.代詞不一致

(l)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.their

(2)And they must not break the rules too often if wewant to win the game.we(3)Now someone at home reads instead.everyone/everybody【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)根據(jù)上下文判斷，出現(xiàn)了代詞不一致。

①1 felt that it helped me understand how the worldworks.they②They have been to Europe many timesWe

(2)傾向于考查學(xué)生對(duì)不定代詞、形容詞性物主代詞、名詞性物主代詞以及代詞的主格與賓格等諸方面知識(shí)的掌握與運(yùn)用能力。

And I can’t forget the good food you cooked forl me

(3)人稱代詞性別上的誤用也是常見(jiàn)的錯(cuò)誤形式之一。

6.連詞誤用

(l)~esaid that she and my schoolmates all wished mesuccass,but it didn’t matter thatI would win or notwhether【解析】it為形式主語(yǔ)，whether l would win or not是真正的主語(yǔ)，意為“我是否能贏”。

(2)lt looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor andaguest.or【解析】句意為：看起來(lái)我的父母親把我當(dāng)成了“visitor”或“guest”。二者為選擇關(guān)系而非并列關(guān)系，故將and改為or。

(3)It is a very important exam butI can't afford tofail it.and/so【解析】此處應(yīng)是并列或因果關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)正確掌握各連詞的含義及其在從句中的應(yīng)用。

①?because I felt that they helped me understandwhat the world works.how②Most people can quickly get help from a doctor orgo to a hospital sir ce they areill when/if

(2)熟練應(yīng)用表示并列、選擇、轉(zhuǎn)折、因果等關(guān)系的連詞：and, or, but, so, therefore, however等.①She was smiling but nodding at me.and②Therefore, there are still some countries wherepeople have shorter lives.However

(3)弄清whether和if的含義及用法區(qū)別。

?and whether you pay the cost of sending apostcard,the librarian will write to you.if

7.關(guān)系代詞與關(guān)系副詞誤用

I live inBeijing,where is the capital of China.which【解析】此處是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，關(guān)系代詞which作主語(yǔ)。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

(1)正確區(qū)分關(guān)系代詞之間的區(qū)別，尤其是that和which的區(qū)別。

?in other places you are limited to.a certainnumber, of that some may be novels.which

(2)正確區(qū)分關(guān)系代詞與關(guān)系副詞的區(qū)別，并掌握它們的用法。

However,there are still some countries there peoplehave shorter lives.where

8.詞性誤用

(1)Also the sport teaches us the important ofobedience.importance【解析】本句應(yīng)該用名詞importance作動(dòng)詞teach的直接賓語(yǔ)。

(2)Unfortunate, there are too many people in myfamily.Unfortunately【解析】此處應(yīng)該用副詞unfortunately作狀語(yǔ)，意為“不幸的是”。

(3)After learning the basics of the subject,nothingelse seemed very practically to me.practical【解析】。eem為系動(dòng)詞，后面應(yīng)接形容詞作表語(yǔ)。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

詞性誤用指的是動(dòng)詞與名詞混淆，副詞與形容詞混淆等。這就要求我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中重視詞性及各類詞在句中的基本功能。再如：

I'm sure we'IIhave 8 wonderfully time together.wonderful

9.限定詞誤用

(1)Today I visited the Smiths-my first visit to aAmerican family.an【解析】American為元音音素開頭的單詞，故應(yīng)用部定冠詞 an

(2)wemay be one family and live under a sameroof，?the【解析】same意為“同樣的”，前面應(yīng)加定冠詞the。

10.近義詞混用They did not want me to do any work at family......home【解析】family側(cè)重指“家庭這個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)或家里的人。，而home則側(cè)重指“家庭的所在地”。因此，“在家里”應(yīng)用athome。

【知識(shí)拓寬】

在英語(yǔ)中，有許多同義詞、近義詞和反義詞，在平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)抓好基礎(chǔ)，牢記每一個(gè)詞的基本含義。再如：.Uncle Ben will alsogo back for Christmas.come總之，平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)加強(qiáng)對(duì)基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的積累，熟練掌握高考詞匯、基本詞法、句法，同時(shí)還應(yīng)加強(qiáng)閱讀能力的訓(xùn)練。因?yàn)?，較快的閱讀速度、較好的語(yǔ)感和牢固的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)是做好短文改錯(cuò)的重要前提。平時(shí)訓(xùn)練短文改錯(cuò)時(shí)，不應(yīng)只是為了做題而做題，而應(yīng)善于總結(jié)、摸索答題的規(guī)律。

參考答案

一、1.(3)go to school;in prison;at table(4)play basketball;play chess

三、1.(1)question-*questions(2)subject—subjects(3)match-*matches(4)schoolmate—+ schoolmates(5)subject-+ subjects(6)return—.retums(7)class-classes

第四篇：高二英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)專題復(fù)習(xí)高二英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)專題復(fù)習(xí)

高二英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)專題復(fù)習(xí)高二英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)專題復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)總結(jié)歸納：

短文改錯(cuò)的題是一篇意思連貫，但有九行文字中各有一個(gè)語(yǔ)法或用詞錯(cuò)誤的英語(yǔ)短文。它所涉及的知識(shí)面很廣，能力要求較高。而且題中所設(shè)的錯(cuò)誤常常是考生自己在寫作中經(jīng)常出的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，是專門針對(duì)考生的弱點(diǎn)而設(shè)的。但它又從另一個(gè)角度考查了語(yǔ)法知識(shí)的運(yùn)用。因此，做題時(shí)，應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面著手解題：動(dòng)詞使用錯(cuò)誤；名詞使用錯(cuò)誤；形容詞，副詞使用錯(cuò)誤；連詞使用錯(cuò)誤；代詞使用錯(cuò)誤；冠詞使用錯(cuò)誤；介詞使用錯(cuò)誤，上下文邏輯錯(cuò)誤等。

在研究每一行的句子時(shí)，首先把握句子的意思，然后劃分句子的成分：主語(yǔ)；謂語(yǔ)部分；賓語(yǔ)；狀語(yǔ)：地點(diǎn)，時(shí)間，方式等。如果句子是并列句或復(fù)合句，先分開各部分小的分句，根據(jù)各個(gè)分句之間的關(guān)系判斷使用的連詞是否正確。然后再研究各個(gè)分句的成分。

（一）名詞使用錯(cuò)誤：名詞一般在句中做主語(yǔ)或賓語(yǔ)，名詞的錯(cuò)誤主要在于名詞單，復(fù)數(shù)的錯(cuò)誤使用。

1.They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.： question是可數(shù)名詞根據(jù)本句的意思，前面有l(wèi)ots of修飾，應(yīng)當(dāng)改為復(fù)數(shù)形式。2.We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics.：subject是可數(shù)名詞根據(jù)本句的意思，前面有quite a few修飾，應(yīng)當(dāng)改為復(fù)數(shù)形式。

3.We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV together.：根據(jù)本句的意思match在此應(yīng)當(dāng)改為復(fù)數(shù)形式。

4.Happy birthday, Peter, and many return of the day.：return在此是名詞，應(yīng)當(dāng)改為復(fù)數(shù)形式：many returns of the day是祝賀人們生日的固定用語(yǔ)：祝你健康長(zhǎng)壽。

5.He said that she and my schoolmate all wishes me success.：all 在句中提示了除我以外schoolmate應(yīng)當(dāng)是復(fù)數(shù)形式。

6.On the way up I was taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful.：picture應(yīng)當(dāng)改成復(fù)數(shù)形式，因?yàn)樽髡咭宦飞厦τ谡障啵恢箖H照一張像。另外還要注意名詞所有格形式上的錯(cuò)誤使用。

That kind of lie, a little, does two things: it keeps your friend feeling from being hurt….：根據(jù)句子意思：有時(shí)一個(gè)小小的謊言（善意的）可以使你的朋友的感情免遭傷害friend應(yīng)當(dāng)改為friend’s

（二）動(dòng)詞使用的錯(cuò)誤：

<一> 作為謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，注意謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，與主語(yǔ)是否一致以及用詞方面的問(wèn)題。1.My favourite sport is football.I was a member of our school team.：全句的基本時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)當(dāng)是現(xiàn)在時(shí)，was應(yīng)改為am 2.Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit.：主謂一致的錯(cuò)誤。Give的主語(yǔ)是Playing football，動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)是單數(shù)形式，應(yīng)改為：gives 3.I use to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time, but now I am interested in football.：前半句是說(shuō)過(guò)去的事情used to do ：過(guò)去常常做某事。use改為：used 4.…the scenery was so beautiful.The time passes quickly.Evening came down.：時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。全句是過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，passes 改為passed 5.As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples and told stories.：動(dòng)詞形式的錯(cuò)誤。句中有三個(gè)連續(xù)的動(dòng)作做謂語(yǔ)。因此visit不是伴隨狀語(yǔ)，是第二個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，應(yīng)該為visited.6.The Internet is a computer network that use the telephone system to link millions of computers around the world.：句中定語(yǔ)從句中的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞use 的主語(yǔ)是先行詞a computer network，是單數(shù)形式，所以按主謂一致的原則use改為：uses.<二> 作為非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，現(xiàn)在分詞，過(guò)去分詞，動(dòng)名詞，不定式形式的使用錯(cuò)誤，同時(shí)注意非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞在平行結(jié)構(gòu)中出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤。

1.Not far from the hotel, there was a shop with all kinds of clothes hang up.：hang up在此做定語(yǔ)修飾先行詞clothes，應(yīng)改為現(xiàn)在分詞形式表示掛著各種衣服。

2.He had worked on farms and in shops where he spent his spare time studied by himself.：定語(yǔ)從句是說(shuō)：他把業(yè)余時(shí)間花在學(xué)習(xí)上，按句型結(jié)構(gòu)：spend some time doing something.所以studied應(yīng)改為：studying.<三> 形容詞，副詞使用錯(cuò)誤：

注意：① 形容詞和副詞的比較級(jí)，原級(jí)，最高級(jí)使用方面的問(wèn)題。② 修飾比較級(jí)的副詞的錯(cuò)誤使用。③ 以ing和以ed結(jié)尾的形容詞的混用。④ 形容詞和副詞的混用。

1.I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting：much修飾比較級(jí)形式，在此沒(méi)有比較級(jí)的意義，所以去掉much.2.I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.：形容詞與副詞混用。Have a wonderful time：過(guò)得非常愉快。wonderfully 改為：wonderful 3.…h(huán)is mother was very poor that she had to send him to a rich family who had no child.：本句含有so…that 句型。very改為：so 4.People will work few hours than they do now.：這是一個(gè)含比較級(jí)的句子。（句中有than），few 改為比較級(jí)形式fewer 5.Computers will be more smaller and useful….：比較級(jí)smaller前面的修飾詞應(yīng)該是副詞much。More與多音節(jié)形容詞或副詞原形構(gòu)成比較級(jí)。more改為much 6.Last week, I went to a movie, which was very moved.形容詞moved指人受到感動(dòng)。本句的定語(yǔ)從句的主語(yǔ)是movie。應(yīng)當(dāng)是moving.<四> 連詞使用錯(cuò)誤：并列句連詞and與but的誤用是歷年高考題中常考的內(nèi)容。復(fù)合句如賓語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句，定語(yǔ)從句中主，從句的連接詞的誤用根據(jù)主從句的關(guān)系可以發(fā)現(xiàn)。1.My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there.：前后兩句的關(guān)系是并列關(guān)系or應(yīng)改為：and 2.My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.前后兩句是并列關(guān)系不具有轉(zhuǎn)折意義。but改為：and 3.It deosn’t matter that I would win or not.Matter后面的從句是whether…or not結(jié)構(gòu)。That改為：whether 4.An Eskimo boy becomes a man since he kills his first polar bear.：根據(jù)句子意思：在Eskimo男孩殺死他的第一只北極熊之后，才真正成為一名男子漢。Since改為：after 5.The fine-furniture store ∧I work has been in business since the 1920s.：I work是定語(yǔ)從句修飾先行詞The fine-furniture store，The fine-furniture store在從句中做地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)，應(yīng)加關(guān)系副詞where.解題思路：

首先要理解整個(gè)短文的含義，邏輯關(guān)系，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。再仔細(xì)研究每一句的意義。借助劃分句子成分的方法判斷每一部分是否有錯(cuò)誤。讀句子時(shí)一定以整句為單位。【典型例題】

A（2004全國(guó)卷I）Dear Ralph I’m a newcomer here of a small town.I would 1.from describe myself as shy and quietly.Before my classmates, 2.quiet it seems always difficult for me to do things∧ well as 3.as them.I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as 4.at a fool.So I feel unhappy every day.5.√

Besides, I have few friends, I don’t know that they 6.why

don’t like to talk with me.Sometimes, we talked to each other 7.talk very well in class, but after class we become stranger at 8.strangers once.I am trying to improve the situation since it dosen’t 9.but seem to work.Can you tell me about what I should do? 10.about去掉 分析：

1.來(lái)自一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)的新生。強(qiáng)調(diào)“來(lái)自于”用介詞：from 2.describe oneself as +形容詞，所以quietly改為quiet 3.缺少連詞，這是同級(jí)比較結(jié)構(gòu)as…as，加上as 4.介詞錯(cuò)誤：詞組laugh at somebody：嘲笑某人。

6.賓語(yǔ)從句連詞的錯(cuò)誤，that 本身沒(méi)有意義可以省略，本句是說(shuō)：我不知道他們?yōu)槭裁床幌矚g我。

7.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，全篇用的是現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

8.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)的錯(cuò)誤，主語(yǔ)是we，賓語(yǔ)與主語(yǔ)呼應(yīng)，應(yīng)該是復(fù)數(shù)形式。9.這是一個(gè)并列句，前后為轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。10.根據(jù)句子意思，about多余。

B全國(guó)卷III2004 You can find all kinds ∧information in just 1.of a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a 2.minutes huge library without have to walk around to find 3.having your books.Recently even though, many people 4.去掉even have been discussing the dangers of the Internet.5.√ They have been reports in America about people 6.There trying to steal person information for bad purposes.7.personal Finding information on the Net is easily.But not all 8.easy information are good to society.For example, you 9.is can find such information like how to kill people.10.as The problem will become more serious in the future.分析：

1.all kinds of是固定詞組，of 不能缺少.2.a few 后面的名詞是復(fù)數(shù)形式。minute是可數(shù)名詞 3.without是介詞，后面跟動(dòng)詞ing形式。

4.even though：即使，此處表示“雖然”。應(yīng)去掉even 6.此處表示：在美國(guó)有報(bào)道說(shuō)…..應(yīng)當(dāng)用表示“有…”的句型：there be… 7.此處表示“個(gè)人的信息”，需要用形容詞做定語(yǔ)。personal：個(gè)人的。8.is后面是形容詞形式。

9.information是不可數(shù)名詞。后面的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)形式。10.such…as是固定句型?！灸M試題】（答題時(shí)間：45分鐘）A You can find all kinds information in just 1._____ a few minute on the Internet.It’s like going to a 2._____ huge library without have to walk around to find 3._____ your books.Recently even though, many people 4._____ have been discussing the dangers of the Internet 5._____ They have been reports in America about people 6._______ trying to steal person information for bad purposes.7._______ Finding information on the Net is easily.But not all 8.________ information are good to society.For example, you 9.________ can find such information like how to kill people.10.________ The problem will become more serious in the future.B This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy, 1._________

The most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 2._________ Festival.My grandma was the best cooker in the world 3._________ but could make the most delicious dishes.One time, I just 4._________ couldn’t wait for the Spring Festival dinner.As I was 5._________ about take a picture from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in 6._________ the kitchen looking at me.Shake her hand, she said, ‘It 7._________ isn’t a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize 8._________ and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.You 9._________ know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.” 10.________

參考答案 A 1.在kinds后面加of ：all kinds of 是固定短語(yǔ)。這里缺少了介詞of 2.名詞“數(shù)”的錯(cuò)誤, minute是可數(shù)名詞，有a few修飾，應(yīng)改為：minutes 3.have改為：having：without是介詞，后面的動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該是動(dòng)名詞形式。4.去掉even：even though：即使。此處表示：雖然。5.此行正確。

6.They改為：There：本句表示：有一份報(bào)告。用there be 句型。7.person改為：personal：此處指?jìng)€(gè)人的信息，應(yīng)該用形容詞形式。8.easily改為easy：be后面接形容詞。

9.are改為is：主語(yǔ)information是不可數(shù)名詞。

10.like改為as：such…as為固定句型，表示：象……這樣的……。B 分析：

1.boy是可數(shù)名詞，第一次提到，前面必須加a 2.本句是說(shuō)：歡渡春節(jié)。When在此多余.3.用詞不當(dāng)，cooker：炊具。Cook：廚師。4.前后兩個(gè)分句是并列關(guān)系。

6.be about to do something 是固定句型。7.Shake her hand在本句中做伴隨狀語(yǔ)。應(yīng)該用ing形式。8.全句都在敘述過(guò)去的事，用過(guò)去時(shí)。

9.本句是說(shuō)：控制自己。賓語(yǔ)應(yīng)改為反身代詞。10.several后的名詞應(yīng)是復(fù)數(shù)形式。

第五篇：短文改錯(cuò)24-41

24.Our neighbor has two sweet dogs which seems lovely.I fell in love with the at the moment I saw them.For several days, I had been able to ask them to come near me by offer ‘doggie treats’.Today all of them took treats from my hand.I was happy that I was able to final gain their trust.It occurs to me that there are people of my acquaintance also seem fearful, and distant for me.I promise today that I will not judge them, and will simply extend my hand.I hope that they will trust their attempts at friendship.25.I was sitting on the train commuting to work in this morning.I notice a lady who was pregnant.However, no one offered him a seat, even those who were sitting in the disabled seats.I was really enjoying sit down as I suffered vertigo and struggled bear it on the train.However, I eventual offered my seat and stood for my commute.To be honesty, my feet hurt badly.But I did feel such good because I let someone who needed a seat much more than me have what she needed.If someone needs help in the future, I can’t still lend a hand.I have to share this wonderful story sharing by my cousin Jane.She is in her first competition and went into a panic when another one swimmer swam over her.She felt very frightened and call out to the life guard.Immediate a 17-year-old young man jumped in and came near him and talked to her.He said “I can’t touch you and you won’t be qualified.However, if you like, I will swim a rest of the way with you”.And he did that, and my precious cousin was able finish her challenge.Isn’t that absolute wonderful?

Yesterday, I got an opportunity help an injured neighbor.His right leg was injuring with some major infection.Obviously, he was seemed very worried, for no one else was at home.So I took her to hospital at once.When we arrived there, I discuss his treatment with a doctor.The doctor advised him to receive proper treatment or to rest for a long time, that I thought was quite right.I either bought some medicines for him.Three hours passed quickly before I had everything arrange.Then I drove home, tried but happily.To help children living in poor mountainous areas, the Students’ Union organize an activity of donating books.It took place in our school hall in the afternoon of last Saturday.Students present were very pleasing to be able to help those children.And some of it wrote encouraging words on the donated books.Meanwhile, they expected the Students’ Union organize this activity as often as possibly.At last, we received about five hundred book.The activity turns out to be the success.Because of not only does it help those children in poor mountainous areas but also lets us treasure which we have now.Today was so a peaceful day.I go to see my friend and her boyfriend earlier in the day.She is getting her kidney stone remove later this week.I wanted to spend some times with her before the operation.Her boyfriend is recovering from her own surgery from 2 weeks before.I brought her some sweet food or a pair of earrings.In the return she sent me home with a cake.I had a small piece and it was deliciously.I plan share the cake with others tomorrow.I was laying on my bed relaxing after a long day.Music was playing and I was taking the time to reading a book.Just as I turned on the page an old song started playing who always reminded me of Mom.I put the book down but listened.Mom had been died for 23 years, but sometimes I still felt like it was only yesterday.I closed my eye and allowed the flood of memories to wash over me.And my heart ached as I thought of how I still missed him.I wiped the tears from my cheeks as song finished.Then I looked out of my window at the night sky, and send an “I love you, Mom” from my lips to Heaven’s ear.31

I was having a rough morning, feeling rather tiring.So I went to our school coffee’s shop to calm down.I was in my own world, and then saw the woman in front of me in line.She tells the cashier that she was going to pay for whichever I wanted to get.I was grateful and rather confused.As a result, I asked him why.In my surprise, she said, “You are a student, right? This is my way helping students.” I was touched and what she had said really made me happy.32

I went to a supermarket nearby to buy few things.There were two lady collecting food for a winter food drive for a charity.I had bought a few cans of food and two chocolate bars, where I handed to them.I thanked them for spend time at their weekends collecting for those in need.They all smiled and thanked me.They said it was just that they needed.Honestly spoken, their kind action really touched me.After this experience I wouldn’t have done that, but now I’m brave enough for personally greetings and eye contact

Today I got stick behind a mini bus on the narrow street of my neighborhood.As I sat there angrily, I had looked up and saw a man.He was wearing an uniform coming out of a house.I could tell that the bus block my way was for him.He turned around and waved goodbye to his very elderly mother whom was watching him from the house.Then, as he was about board the bus, he turned, smiled, and waved at myself.My anger left and tear were rolling as I smiled and waved back.I was late for work but I had the good day ever!I smiled to everyone I saw.34

In July 21, I, together with some people gathered at Youth Square at 5 am.Then we boarded a bus, where took us to Wuling Mountain, taking us two and a half hour.To tell the truth, Wuling Mountain is a really attractive spot, where the scene was beautiful enough.When first climbing mountain, I felt excited, and walked fast, only take some pictures now and then.There was a large number of tourists that day, making the path crowded.At noon, I had a simply lunch, for I took some food with me.We had returned at four o’clock, laughing and talking.Tired but happy, we arrived home safely and sound.35

I like many sport.But swimming is my favorite sport.When I am six years old, my parents often took me to a swimming pool.He taught me how to swim and told me not be afraid of water.Later I became very interesting in swimming.Now I go swim every afternoon in the swimming pool.Swimming is really a great fun.Unless you swim in the water, you will feel like a lovely fish, feeling very free.In the way, I took part in the swimming match last week in our city.But I won the match!

We had moved house 9 months ago.Before that we had lived in a same house for 20 years.Our next-door neighbours have lived in their house even long, so we have known them for the full 20 years.They are a lovely retire couple, Bob and Jean.Bob has just gone in hospital because of a serious illness and is not expected live.We took a 2-hour-round trip to visit her on Sunday in hospital.We sang some happy songs so told him all our news.However, we couldn’t hold back tear.Then we hugged and cried together, Jean including.37

It was cloudy day with little rain in the air.I stood at the roadside waiting for a taxi while suddenly I felt a voice beside me.It was a boy who was wearing poor cloth.I felt very disgusted that I tried to pull myself away.The boy kept follow me shouting out “Big brother!Big brother!” and I didn’t answer him at all.I heard him call out again, which makes me angry.So I shouted at him that we had no money to spare.However, the boy said to me, “Brother, will you please to help me cross the road!” I held the boy’s hand firm and helped him cross the road.38

After fill my gas tank I walked in to pay.The mother of the girls were digging through her purse.She had bought some small snacks for her children but still needed five more dollar to pay for them.She sighed and started to pick out the snacks to put it back.“I got it,” I said and put the money on the counter.The Mom turned and looked me with watery eyes.Then sudden she stepped forward and hugged me.I felt the burst of warmth in my heart.The Mom let me to go and said, “Thank you.” She smiled, grabbed the snacks and hurry out to her children.I stood there watching them leave.39

I stare from the window of my hotel room.A older gentleman was helping a young girl as she struggled walk down the beach.I ate in the hotel restaurant in that evening.I watched as the same young girl continued to get up from the table and reach for her walker.She grasped it firmly with both hand, leaning heavy.She made her way out of the restaurant, smile.As I drank me coffee in the hall the next morning.I noticed a sign saying “Special Olympics Relays”.Ah, I thought, that mustn’t be what the walking lessons were all about.40

On the morning of the Olympics, I felt forcing to watch Elizabeth’s Olympic event.I cheered as she crossed a finish line—the second place.She smiled as she stood on the award platform, and tears slipped down his cheeks.She told the crowd, “I especially want thank my grandpa for believing in me when I have no one else.” I found her late.I said, “Congratulation!” As we talked, she said that she and her parents were hit by a drunken driver at three years ago.She was the only survivor.Elizabeth smiled but hugged her grandpa.“Everyone gave up hope whether I would walk again.My grandpa was the only one who doesn’t.”

Yesterday afternoon, I went back home and found the door to my house opened.On the doormat was a pair of shoes were belonging to my mom.I got into the house and headed direct to the bedroom.I found her weep uncontrollably.I tried to ask her why was wrong but she couldn’t explain.Instead, she became much sad.I seated her down on the bed and bring her a glass of waters to drink and helped her cool down.When she was stable, she told me the reason of her sadness.She thought great wrong had done to her.