第一篇:雅思寫作Task2:古老建筑是否該保留
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雅思寫作Task2范文:古老建筑是否該保留
每座城市是該保留它的古老建筑,還是該用現(xiàn)代建筑取而代之?本文是關(guān)于此論點(diǎn)的雅思論文,供各位參考。認(rèn)真研讀一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以幫助我們檢驗(yàn)自己的寫作水平,并能很好地吸收和應(yīng)用優(yōu)秀范文里的優(yōu)秀內(nèi)容。
Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings?
Model Answer:
Some people think that old, historic buildings are no need for the city and they should be destroyed and replaced with modern ones.However, other people believe that historic buildings must be preserved in order to know and remember our past.For several reasons that I will mention bellow I agree with those people who want to preserve old, historical buildings.First of all, by preserving historical buildings we pass our history to our future generations.I think that out children should know their history, learn from it and respect it.People need to know their traditions and customs, which are priceless and irreplaceable.Our history is our knowledge and power.From my opinion we need to preserve and restore historical buildings.By destroying them we show our disrespect to our forefathers and their traditions.Second of all, by preserving historical buildings a city can attract many travelers.Welcoming tourists a city can get many benefits including money, which can be spent on preserving historical buildings as well as on improving roads and facilities.資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
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Also, many tourists mean a lot of new business opportunities.Another important aspect of this is that businessmen will be willing to build new recreational centers, hotels, movie theaters, shopping centers to make a city more attractive for travelers.In addition to those practical benefits, many people will have the opportunity to get a job.All this is good for the economy of the city.To sum up, I believe that preserving old, historical buildings can bring only benefits to a city and all humankind.資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
第二篇:雅思寫作Task2:女性參軍
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雅思寫作Task2范文:女性參軍
有人認(rèn)為女性應(yīng)該被允許加入陸軍、海軍、空軍。你怎么看?如何完成這樣一篇文章,請參考本雅思范文。認(rèn)真研讀一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以幫助我們檢驗(yàn)自己的寫作水平,并能很好地吸收和應(yīng)用優(yōu)秀范文里的優(yōu)秀內(nèi)容。
Write about the following topic:
Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Model Answer:
Whether women should be allowed to serve in the military has triggered spirited debate.Some assert that women should be allowed to defend their country in the same capacity as their male peers.Personally, I agree with their assertion for two reasons.History has shown that women are fully capable of performing well in the military.Historically, there were a host of valiant women soldiers whose achievements really put their male counterparts to shame.One need only look at the classic examples of Joan of Arc and Mulan to see how exceptionally women could perform on the battlefield.In my observation, their determination, courage and dignity, to this day, are still being admired by male soldiers and civilians alike throughout the world.Moreover, from an enlightened standpoint, female patriots should be granted the right to go to the front line when their motherland is involved in a war.Admittedly, gender
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inequality was a highly controversial issue in the twentieth century.However, now twelve years into the new millennium, women can learn and teach, work and supervise, vote and voted in most countries just like men.In light of this sweeping progress in gender equality, there is no sense in denying them the right to defend their home country when a war breaks out.In sum, keeping military services out of bounds of women in the information age is unwarranted.I have been convinced that it is in the best interest of a nation if women are also granted equal rights in this particular arena.資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
第三篇:雅思寫作Task2:留學(xué)的利弊
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雅思寫作Task2范文:留學(xué)的利弊
許多學(xué)生有機(jī)會到國外完成他們的課業(yè),雖然這帶來很多好處,但也有些弊端。本篇文章是關(guān)于這個論題的雅思范文,請參考。認(rèn)真研讀一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以幫助我們檢驗(yàn)自己的寫作水平,并能很好地吸收和應(yīng)用優(yōu)秀范文里的優(yōu)秀內(nèi)容。
Write about the following topic:
Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries.While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages.Do you agree or disagree?
Model Answer:
In recent years there has been a vast increase in the number of students choosing to study abroad.This is partly because people are more affluent and partly due to the variety of grants and scholarships which are available for overseas students nowadays.Although foreign study is not something which every student would choose, it is an attractive option for many people.Studying overseas has a number of advantages.Firstly/For example, it may give students access to knowledge and facilities such as laboratories and libraries which are not available in their home country.Furthermore/Moreover/What is more/Secondly, by looking abroad students may find a wider range of courses than those offered in their country’s universities, and therefore one which fits more closely to their particular requirements.資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
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On the other hand, studying abroad has a number of drawbacks.These may be divided into personal and professional.Firstly students have to leave their family and friends for a long period.Furthermore/Moreover/What is more/Secondly studying abroad is almost always more expensive that studying in one’s local university.Finally/Furthermore/Moreover/What is more, students often have to study in a foreign language, which may limit their performance and mean they do not attain their true level.In my opinion/On the other hand, however, the disadvantages of studying abroad are usually temporary in nature.Students who study abroad generally become proficient in the language quite soon and they are only away from their family and friends for a year or two.Furthermore/What is more, many of the benefits last students all their lives and make them highly desirable to prospective employers.資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
第四篇:雅思寫作:如何跳出TASK2三步走誤區(qū)?
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雅思寫作:如何跳出TASK2三步走誤區(qū)?
眾所周知,雅思寫作(學(xué)術(shù)類)TASK2考察的領(lǐng)域廣泛,出題陷阱重重,完成任務(wù)的時間緊迫,對烤鴨們短時間之內(nèi)組織語言和素材的能力提出了近乎苛刻的要求。本文的目的在于和廣大烤鴨一起探討如何跳出TASK2全文寫作3步走中常見的誤區(qū)。
一步走:仔細(xì)審題,準(zhǔn)確理解題意
根據(jù)筆者長期批改烤鴨作文的經(jīng)驗(yàn),審題過程中考生主要會走入兩個誤區(qū):
誤區(qū)1:因混淆個別單詞而導(dǎo)致全文走題。
如09年7月25號曾考過這樣一道題:
Nowadays sending children to boarding school is becoming increasingly popular.What is the reason? Do you think it is a positive development?
有的烤鴨由于之前接觸過Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad/working abroad for a period of time這樣的考題而誤把boarding理解成abroad,導(dǎo)致全篇皆在談留學(xué)熱的原因和好處而跑題。
指點(diǎn)迷津:對于此類考生除了在心態(tài)上要戒急戒躁外,還應(yīng)在審題過程中把重點(diǎn)單詞用筆劃記下來以提醒自己寫作的重點(diǎn)。其次,有考生很有可能是因?yàn)椴徽J(rèn)識boarding這樣的詞匯而憑借自己對abroad的模糊印象來理解題目,導(dǎo)致全盤皆輸。這類考生應(yīng)該惡補(bǔ)自己的詞匯,把近3年內(nèi)的雅思考題仔細(xì)瀏覽一遍,把生詞挑出來并加以記憶,這時考生會發(fā)現(xiàn)有些題目的出鏡率是很高的,但問題形式往往會有細(xì)微的差別,考生應(yīng)重點(diǎn)關(guān)注這些細(xì)微差別以免重蹈覆轍前面的錯誤。
誤區(qū)2: 因概念偷換而導(dǎo)致全文走題。
如09年8月29號考過這樣一道題:
In the past, people travel aboard for the differences of other countries.Nowadays places are becoming more and more similar.What are the causes of the increasing similarity? Do you think the advantage of the development overweigh the disadvantage?
部分烤鴨由于之前接觸過What is the advantages and disadvantages of globalization這樣的考題而誤把原文中的Nowadays places are becoming more and more similar等同于globalization,導(dǎo)致全篇皆在談全球化的原因和利弊而跑題。
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指點(diǎn)迷津:這類考生在分領(lǐng)域備考大作文時,應(yīng)該理清楚題目當(dāng)中所提到的概念和備考領(lǐng)域的從屬關(guān)系,如上題中Nowadays places are becoming more and more similar。(即同一化)這實(shí)際上只是全球化的一種結(jié)果,并不能等同于全球化??忌诜诸I(lǐng)域備考過程中不妨畫出一些樹狀結(jié)構(gòu)圖,著重畫出(如下圖中的紅色字體)容易混淆的概念以提醒自己重點(diǎn)區(qū)分。如全球化和同一化的樹狀結(jié)構(gòu)圖表示如下:
二步走:列清提綱,條分縷析,論證得體有力
考生在第一步準(zhǔn)確理解題意之后不要急于動筆,盡管此時腦海中已經(jīng)涌現(xiàn)出無數(shù)的ideas和evidence,但是這些素材往往是雜亂無章的,需要通過精心布置全文的結(jié)構(gòu)以及確定好段與段之間,句與句之間,句子內(nèi)部之間的邏輯關(guān)系。布局謀篇的時候考生通常會走入以下2個誤區(qū)。
誤區(qū)一: 概念混雜,內(nèi)容重復(fù)。
還是看09年7月25號的這道題目:
Nowadays sending children to boarding school is becoming increasingly popular.What is the reason? Do you think it is a positive development?
某考生采取了傳統(tǒng)的四段式對稱寫作結(jié)構(gòu):
從以上結(jié)構(gòu)圖可以看出來,主體段1和主體段2的第一二點(diǎn)完全重合,這時候考官會覺得該考生只會用新瓶裝舊酒,即用不同的語言來表達(dá)同樣的內(nèi)容,素材貧乏,得分自然不會高。
指點(diǎn)迷津:建議這類考生大量地去誦讀相關(guān)領(lǐng)域的范文,注意學(xué)習(xí)別人新穎的觀點(diǎn)。同時,一定在列提綱過程中問自己:“某些重復(fù)的內(nèi)容可不可以在此基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)一步拓展出新的內(nèi)容?!比缟项}中由第一點(diǎn)和第二點(diǎn)“良好的師資水平,優(yōu)良的管理水平,先進(jìn)的教學(xué)設(shè)備和優(yōu)越的住宿條件”可不可以拓展出寄宿學(xué)校的學(xué)生相對于走讀學(xué)校的學(xué)生而言會享有更加充裕和更高水準(zhǔn)的教育資源,而這將為他們以后的進(jìn)一步學(xué)習(xí)深造和成就事業(yè)打下更好的基礎(chǔ)。同時,由于接觸的同伴和自己在家庭背景和教育背景相似的情況下會有更多的共同語言,有利于培養(yǎng)真摯的友誼,同時也為自己今后的創(chuàng)業(yè)打下良好的人脈基礎(chǔ)。
誤區(qū)二:舉例過于具體,代表性不強(qiáng)。
如2008年12月13號曾經(jīng)考過這樣一道雅思題:
Some people believe that a country can benefit a lot from the fact that many students graduate from universities.Others believe that sending a large percentage of young students to university is the way which leads to future highly rate of unemployment.Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
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某考生在文章的最后寫道:So in my opinion, it’s necessary for a county to send more students to the university and meet the requirement of the market for more talents.But in general I think it’s better for a country to improve the standard of entering the university.It’s also good for China to select the students in the new ways but Gaokao.This will be more essential than built several new universities。
這里姑且不討論最后提出來的“improve the standard of entering the university”有跑題的嫌疑,光是It’s also good for China to select the students in the new ways but Gaokao。這一句中China和Gaokao兩個名詞的出現(xiàn)就會讓考官丈二和尚摸不著頭腦,因?yàn)榭脊賶焊筒恢乐袊母呖际窃趺匆换厥隆6揖退阒?,他也會認(rèn)為你的文章因?yàn)椴扇×诉@樣個體化的例子而削弱了整體的說服力,因?yàn)樵趯W(xué)術(shù)化的寫作里個別的事例并不具廣泛推廣意義。
指點(diǎn)迷津:不可否認(rèn)的是,面對如此抽象的雅思題我們應(yīng)該聯(lián)系身邊的具體事例,但是一定要有一個模糊化的過程,因?yàn)橹灰逊秶粩U(kuò)大,你的廣泛代表意義就會比個體的實(shí)力強(qiáng)。如上題中考生可以把China的范圍模糊化到all countries, 把Gaokao模糊化到全國高等教育入學(xué)考試(national matriculation test),這樣你文章的代表意義就更強(qiáng)。
三步走:潤色語言,字斟句酌,力爭字字珠璣
誤區(qū)一: 在沒有扎實(shí)語法功底的情況下一味追求長難句。
如2007年8月4號有這道題目:
Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world.Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
有考生在第一段的第一句話拋出了這樣的句子:There is not-self evidence that international tourism are exerting profound impact on contemporary society development。這一句話15個單詞出現(xiàn)的語法錯誤一共為4個:
There is not-self evidence that(it is self-evident that)international tourism are(is)exerting profound impact on(exerting a profound influence on)contemporary society development(the development of our contemporary of our society).試問考官在一篇文章最開始的時候就看到了如此噩夢般的句子他還有看下去的勇氣嗎?
指點(diǎn)迷津:不可否認(rèn),在語句正確的基礎(chǔ)上我們應(yīng)該追求用詞和句式結(jié)構(gòu)的復(fù)雜性,但是一條,句子應(yīng)當(dāng)遵循“寧簡勿錯”的原則,建議語法基礎(chǔ)薄弱的考生能在習(xí)作過程中請人修改自己的語法錯誤并將常犯的語法錯誤歸下類,再針對自己的語法弱項(xiàng)不斷做相關(guān)方面的改錯和翻譯練習(xí),當(dāng)自己寫出來的句子沒有大的語法錯誤時再去嘗試著用比較復(fù)雜的句式。
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誤區(qū)二:同一表達(dá)出現(xiàn)次數(shù)過多,同義詞詞庫不豐富。
最典型的例子為:看到“好處壞處”就想到advantages and disadvantages;看到“越來越多”就想到more and more;看到“贊成不贊成”就想到agree and disagree;看到“我認(rèn)為”就想到in my opinion,諸如此類,不勝枚舉。
指點(diǎn)迷津:對于此類考生惟一的辦法就是通過不斷地通過觀摩范文,查同義詞字典,拿同義詞做造句練習(xí)建立、豐富并熟練自己的同義詞詞庫,不斷地結(jié)合文章練習(xí)直至原來的陳詞濫調(diào)在自己文章中消失為止。
總之,學(xué)術(shù)類寫作Task 2中陷阱重重,考生應(yīng)該在觀摩學(xué)習(xí)范文的基礎(chǔ)上不斷練習(xí)反省,在結(jié)構(gòu)完整,條理清晰,語句通順的基礎(chǔ)上再追求用詞用句的復(fù)雜性,只有通過循序漸進(jìn)和持之以恒的練習(xí)寫作才會有長足的提高。
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第五篇:雅思寫作Task2:去國外留學(xué)的利弊
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雅思寫作Task2范文:去國外留學(xué)的利弊
去國外留學(xué)有利有弊,你怎么看呢?如果讓你據(jù)此寫一篇觀點(diǎn)文章,該如何寫?請看本文。認(rèn)真研讀一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以幫助我們檢驗(yàn)自己的寫作水平,并能很好地吸收和應(yīng)用優(yōu)秀范文里的優(yōu)秀內(nèi)容。
Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people.But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Model Answer:
There is no doubt that going to study in a foreign country, with its different language and culture, can be a frustrating and sometimes painful experience.But while overseas study has its drawbacks, the difficulties are far outweighed by the advantages.Indeed, people who go abroad for study open themselves up to experiences that those who stay at home will never have.資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
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The most obvious advantage to overseas university study is real-life use of a different language.While a person can study a foreign language in his or her own country, it cannot compare with constant use of the language in academic and everyday life.There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken.Moreover, having used the language during one's studies offers a distinct advantage when one is applying for jobs back home that require the language.On a university campus, the foreign student is not alone in having come from far away.He or she will likely encounter many others from overseas and it is possible to make friends from all around the world.This is not only exciting on a social level, but could lead to important overseas contacts in later professional life.Finally, living and studying abroad offers one a new and different perspective of the world and, perhaps most important, of one's own country.Once beyond the initial shock of being in a new culture, the student slowly begins to get a meaningful understanding of the host society.On returning home, one inevitably sees one's own country in a new, often more appreciative, light.資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/
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In conclusion, while any anxiety about going overseas for university study is certainly understandable, it is important to remember that the benefits offered by the experience make it well worthwhile.資料來源:教育優(yōu)選 http://004km.cn/