第一篇：十天突破 小作文經(jīng)典

劍六Test4小作文(十天突破 雅思寫作 P217)

范文：

The first bar chart shows data about American marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 while the second bar chart describes information about the married status of adult Americans in 1970 and 2000.According to the first bar chart, the marriage rate was consistently higher than the divorce rate over the thirty-year period.More precisely, in 1970 the number of marriages stood at 2.5 millions whilst the number of divorces was 1 million.Then, the number of marriages remained stable at this level over the next decade whereas the number of divorces increased to 1.1 millions over the same period.After that, the number of marriages gradually declined to 2 millions in the next twenty years.The number of divorces also experienced a downward trend(1.4 millions and 1 million in 1990 and 2000, respectively).The second bar clearly shows that married people accounted for the greatest proportion of the adult American population in both 1970 and 2000(70% and 59%, respectively).As for other categories, the percentage of American adults who were never married was 14% in 1970 and 20% in 2000.By contrast, people who were widowed represented 8% of the population in 1970 and 6% in 2000.Divorced couples constituted only 2% of the entire population in 1970 but in 2000, this figure amounted to 9%.Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the charts that the USA marriage rates were substantially higher than the divorce rates over the three decades and married population made up the largest proportion of the whole population in both 1970 and 2000.

第二篇：十天突破口語雅思口語單詞總結(jié)

十天突破口語雅思口語單詞總結(jié)

一、有用的短語

work out= exercise 鍛煉

To keep fit, I work out in the gym for an hour every day.let someone down = disappoint sb.讓某人失望

I'm studying hard because I don't want to let my parents down.stand for 表示，代表

DIY stands for do it yourself.piles up 堆積，變多

The work piles up but I will keep at it.live up 使快樂，使活躍

We played games to live up the party.polish up 改善

I need to polish up my English before I go to Australia.crack up 逗樂

Steven Chow's comedies never fail to crack me up.hand down from 傳承

It was hand down from my grandmother.wind down 放松

Reading helps me wind down.bring down 喚起

These old photos bring back memories of my childhood.二、常用的小詞

stuff 東西，口語中=things，不可以加復(fù)數(shù) The stuff in that store is very pricey(貴的）

Pretty=副詞 very

My new pad is pretty fun.fun=interesting There's lots of fun things to do in the classroom.adore 非常喜歡 I adore that singer.shortly= soon I'll get these things done shortly.spot 1看見=see

I spotted some squirrels and woodpeckers in Stanley park.地方=place It looks like a nice spot for a picnic.eye-opening 是地道的英文，讓人大開眼界的 Trips to other countries can be really eye-opening.decent=quite good 不錯的，挺好的

This job offers a decent salary and an impressive set of benefits.hang out=玩兒，可以代替play,但是不能接賓語

I often hang out in bars at weekend.I often hang out with them at the park.kind of=sort of 有點(diǎn)……，=somewhat My boss is kind of hard to get along with.like 比如說，像是，差不多是

I bought lots of stuff, like carrots ,beef and salmon.That program is like,...boring.in a row=one after another 連續(xù)地出現(xiàn)或發(fā)生

Jeremy Lin led New York Knicks to seven wins in a row.Patricia passed four exams in a row last week.a trade-off 有得就有失

There is a trade-off between the benefits of the medicine and the risk of side effects.Gracie had to make a trade-off between her job and her family.entire=whole/complete Daniel ate the entire cake and made no apology for that.Our situation is entirely different from theirs.Jessica is not entirely sure if she can get a nice job after graduation.......as well 也 =.....too Beijing is exciting for its nightlife.And it's culturally attractive as well.....is a piece of cake=...is a snap=...is a breeze 小菜一碟

The IELTS speaking test is just a breeze if you know all the tricks about it.during 在...的時(shí)候

We go hiking and camping during holidays.Know...inside out=know...backwards and forwards 精通 He knows computers backwards and forwards.I'm all for 我完全支持某事物

I've got nothing against change-I'm all for it.is no picnic=is a pain in the neck 很折磨人

Getting the homework done everyday is no picnic....really bothers me./...is getting on my nerves 讓我很煩

The noise really bothers me./ The noise is getting on my nerves.kick back and relax=let one's hair down 放松 At parties, we just kick back and relax.a couple of 幾個(gè)

I stayed in France for a couple of weeks.a bunch of=some 一些

I went there with a bunch of new friends.dozens of 幾十

I just bought dozens of gifts online.loads of=piles of=tons of=a multitude of 很多= lots of I've got loads of works to get through before tomorrow.make sense 合理= be reasonable The plot（劇情）of that movie didn't make any sense...., you name it=and the list goes on and on 應(yīng)有盡有

Beijing has traditions, modern lifestyles, tasty food, exciting night-life, beautiful people...you name it.by doing that, I kill two birds with one stone 一舉兩得

When i travel around, i take photos and then sell them online.So you see, I just kill two birds with one stone....is the best+名詞，hands down.....絕對是最....的 The new IPad is the best tablet I've ever seen, hands dow....would be the last thing I want to do....是我人生最不想做的 Doing the dishes would be the last thing I want to do.that's the way the ball bounces.命中注定就是這樣了

Lots of people got fired.Too bad.But that's the way the ball bounces in a recession.get the hang of 基本了解了怎樣做某事

“I've never used a word processor before.”“Don't worry-you'll get the hang of it shortly.”

get...down pat 完全掌握了

If you just memorize all the answers, even if you get all the answers down pat, there may still questions you haven't thought of during the test.So,....What a shame!太可惜了

They lost that match.What a shame!

...is nonexistent 壓根就不存在

Some scientist believe global warming is non-existent.Some of them even argue that the earth is actually getting colder.end up verb+ing 常用來描述某人或某事物最終處于某種狀態(tài) I ended up having to do all the work myself.suit someone well/ suit someone's needs 適合 The bustling city life suits Jeremy better.

第三篇：十天突破雅思寫作36個(gè)基本論據(jù)

前進(jìn)類（用來論證advantage好的方面）

1． 從......當(dāng)中獲益

2． 對……投資

3． 促進(jìn)……的發(fā)展

4． 提高效率/生產(chǎn)率

5． 在……中起關(guān)鍵作用

6． 豐富……的社會的/學(xué)術(shù)的/職業(yè)的經(jīng)歷

7． 保持社會穩(wěn)定

8． 有責(zé)任做…….9． 讓人放松身心

10． 基于……

11． 創(chuàng)造就業(yè)機(jī)會

12． 省錢又省時(shí)間

13． 減輕某人的學(xué)業(yè)/經(jīng)濟(jì)/心理負(fù)擔(dān)

14． 發(fā)揮某人的潛能

15． 為（發(fā)展、交流等）消除障礙

16． 促進(jìn)……和……之間的文化交流與活動

17． 控制（犯罪、污染、媒體的有害內(nèi)容等）的擴(kuò)散

18． 提高人們的某種意識

19． 有某方面的內(nèi)在優(yōu)勢

倒退類（用來論證disadvantange負(fù)面的方面）

1.生活在貧困/困苦/沮喪/焦慮中

2.導(dǎo)致犯罪率上升

3.競爭越來越激烈

4.為了避免….人們應(yīng)該……

5.加大A與B之間的差距

6.起源于…..7.對……構(gòu)成威脅

8.扼殺創(chuàng)造力/想象力

9.發(fā)現(xiàn)某事物很單調(diào)無聊而且無法給人動力

10.減少人們休閑的時(shí)間

11.A和B之間有密切的聯(lián)系

12.失去控制

13.在……和……之間產(chǎn)生緊張和沖突

14.對某事過度依賴

15.對……有負(fù)面影響

16.人口在激增

17.與……明顯不協(xié)調(diào)

第四篇：告訴你慎小嶷十天突破雅思寫作到底有沒有用

【雅思書評】告訴你慎小嶷十天突破雅思寫作到底有沒有用

目前市面上有各種各樣的雅思備考書籍，考生們最關(guān)心的問題就是這些書到底怎么樣，適不適合自己，最常提到的書就是慎小嶷的十天突破系列了，那么接下來點(diǎn)課臺老師先幫大家詳細(xì)分析一下這本書，告訴大家它的內(nèi)容如何，適合什么樣的學(xué)生，然后你再去決定你要不要買。

首先，大多數(shù)人買這本書可能都是因?yàn)榘l(fā)現(xiàn)它銷量真的很高，而且周圍好多刷雅思的同學(xué)都用，甚至我們辦公室的書架上也擺著慎小嶷的十天突破寫作。從內(nèi)容上來看，它涵蓋了大作文小作文的寫作常識，詞匯，語法，結(jié)構(gòu)和寫作方法。我們以十天突破寫作劍八版為例，從好處方面來說，它可以在“國內(nèi)考生無法回答的十個(gè)問題”中讓對雅思寫作一無所知的考生快速知道寫作考試是怎么一回事，和需要注意的細(xì)節(jié)，在“多大的詞匯量算大”中給出了很多高頻雅思詞匯，很容易將其運(yùn)用到不同Topic的作文中去;給出的模板句，對于那些致力于6分以下的同學(xué)來說，看這本書已經(jīng)足夠了。然而好處也就這些了，這本書的硬傷就是它不適合那些英語水平較高或者已經(jīng)考過雅思托福并且分?jǐn)?shù)還不錯的考生們。原因很明顯，首先模板書非常暢銷的后果就是幾乎所有考生寫得作文都是一樣的，本來能考4分的考生他們把模板死記硬背下來考試的時(shí)候?qū)懗鲆粋€(gè)只有模板內(nèi)容空洞的文章，運(yùn)氣好一點(diǎn)拿個(gè)5分不成問題;但是對于那些英語水平非常好的學(xué)生，他們雖然思想內(nèi)容上表達(dá)得更加豐富，但是卻不停地冒出模板句來充字?jǐn)?shù)，給考官的感覺肯定不會眼前一亮，而依然是千篇一律。所以這就是為什么總有學(xué)生來問我，老師我考了很多次雅思，但每次其它科目都能考到7分以上只有寫作一直保持在6分，這到底是為什么！我說你趕快扔掉慎小嶷我再告訴你。大家知道模板句有多害人了嗎?其次，有很多同學(xué)喜歡慎小嶷的書是因?yàn)槿の缎?。不得不承認(rèn)，作者為了與時(shí)俱進(jìn)，把冰冰和思聰都寫到書里也是蠻拼的。很多學(xué)生在翻開書的時(shí)候甚至都感覺不到壓力，但是這在我看來也恰恰是它的缺點(diǎn)。大家需要明白一個(gè)道理，就是你備考的時(shí)候不是在新東方的課堂，不會有老師承擔(dān)著評分的壓力而千方百計(jì)地取悅你，講個(gè)黃段子或者感人故事，沒有這個(gè)必要。大家的目標(biāo)就是在有限的備考時(shí)間里得到更多的干貨，迅速掌握考試技巧，而無需以勞逸結(jié)合的名義讓你不斷地從復(fù)習(xí)中分心。要是學(xué)累了想休息直接休息就行了，完全可以自己規(guī)劃放松時(shí)間嘛。然后，從內(nèi)容上說，有些內(nèi)容太過簡單粗暴。比如說到小作文的段落結(jié)構(gòu)，作者給出的建議是開頭段，主體段1?.主體段N，結(jié)尾段。大家如果真得拜讀過雅思考官的滿分范文和備考建議的話，就不難看出他給出的結(jié)構(gòu)有多混亂。第一，小作文正常就寫四段，開頭段改寫主題，第二段綜述全圖，三四段分別為兩個(gè)主體段，依次描述各個(gè)圖形的具體信息即可，既不需要N個(gè)主體段，也不需要結(jié)尾。書中像這樣的邏輯混亂簡單粗暴的地方有很多，難怪有很多學(xué)生看完表示全書雜亂無章，仍然是一頭霧水。

總之呢，慎小嶷的十天突破寫作肯定是標(biāo)題黨了，它的暢銷和大眾普遍喜歡捷徑的心理密不可分。真正誠實(shí)的寫作書會告訴大家寫作是要在大量練習(xí)、大量被批改之后方能進(jìn)步。點(diǎn)課臺老師本著為大家負(fù)責(zé)的態(tài)度，建議就是如果你的目標(biāo)是6分以下或者想快速了解一些雅思寫作的常識，那不妨一看；否則還是算了吧。

第五篇：十天軍訓(xùn)心得體會

十天軍訓(xùn)心得體會

孩提時(shí)，腦海里充滿了對軍人的崇敬和軍旅生活的各種向往；學(xué)生時(shí)，軍訓(xùn)因種種原因與自己擦肩而過；然而，心中的橄欖綠一直不曾褪色。在百花爭艷的五月里，組織給了我們這次機(jī)會，不但圓了我幼時(shí)的軍營夢，填補(bǔ)多年的遺憾，還使我的人生路上多了一份淡定和從容。

這十天，我們體驗(yàn)著部隊(duì)生活的五味齋：酸的是刻板的訓(xùn)練和不可商榷的時(shí)間表。早起，走隊(duì)列，站軍姿，集合吃飯，跑步鍛煉，統(tǒng)一熄燈&&我們一次又一次體驗(yàn)著疲憊和酸痛。甜的是集體生活的互助友愛和樹蔭下不經(jīng)意的笑聲。同學(xué)們的一句累了吧，還行嗎？象興奮劑一樣趕走了一身的疲憊；班長有所保留的眼神象抓住偷吃奶糖的孩子一樣抓住了一時(shí)的走神；偶爾一句你實(shí)在太有才了不時(shí)地從樹蔭下傳來陣陣歡笑&&我們一次又一次體驗(yàn)著友愛和歡樂。苦的是每天的早起和越來越久的定型。五點(diǎn)半哨聲一起，瞇著眼睛、拖著鞋子，迅速到齊；遠(yuǎn)望小值離去，我等郁悶把型定，一分二分，慢吞吞；吱吱嗡嗡，肚咕嚕&&我們一次又一次體驗(yàn)著痛苦和困倦。辣的是格斗術(shù)的威武和射擊的刺激。盡管我們的格斗術(shù)多少有些花拳繡腿，但一聲ha頓時(shí)感覺自己就是除暴安良的豪杰和保疆衛(wèi)家的英雄。盡管天公不作美，沒來得及練習(xí)射擊就直接考核，但莫名其妙中靶的感覺卻讓人興奮不已&&我們一次又一次體驗(yàn)著火辣和激情。澀的是別離時(shí)的不舍和軍營生活的永訣。班長訓(xùn)練時(shí)嚴(yán)厲的教導(dǎo)和生活中細(xì)心的關(guān)照，司務(wù)長充滿疑惑又可愛又稚氣的表情，炊事班小弟們每天勤勞默默地為我們燒水煮飯&&成了腦海中永不褪色的底片，閑暇時(shí)我們會一次又一次地拿出來放映和回味。

十天的部隊(duì)生活象夢一樣地飛逝，然而早晨的口哨聲，行軍中的口號依然在腦中回蕩，在夕陽柔美灑落下的這個(gè)美麗軍營我?guī)Р蛔?，但它卻給了我太多的感想、感悟和感動：

一是令行禁止，整齊劃一。只有有令行禁止的意識，才有整齊劃一的高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。軍營的第一堂課就使我們明白兩者的深刻意義。令行禁止才能使我們在生活、工作中保持良好的秩序與紀(jì)律。整齊劃一才能讓我們認(rèn)準(zhǔn)同一個(gè)目標(biāo)，齊心協(xié)力完成各項(xiàng)任務(wù)，充分體現(xiàn)自我價(jià)值。

二是快速反應(yīng)，永爭第一。服從是軍人的天職，快速反應(yīng)則是軍人必備的素質(zhì)。這次軍營生活，我們經(jīng)常需要接受真正軍人一樣的快速反應(yīng)訓(xùn)練，這將使我們在未來競爭中搶占先機(jī)，領(lǐng)先一步，站立國際競爭的潮頭。

三是團(tuán)結(jié)協(xié)作，共同前進(jìn)。每天齊步走，跑步走&&不斷重復(fù)，盡管是自己做好了也無法達(dá)到排面整齊，班長讓我們不斷練習(xí)，這曾讓我們困惑不已。但細(xì)想一下，其實(shí)練齊步跑步是在培養(yǎng)我們的團(tuán)結(jié)協(xié)作精神，要把簡單的齊步走和跑步走走好，不但要每個(gè)人不出錯，還要保證大家協(xié)調(diào)統(tǒng)一。這將使我們在今后的工作中更加注重團(tuán)隊(duì)精神和相互間的配合。

四是增進(jìn)感情，加強(qiáng)溝通。集體生活讓我們有了更多的時(shí)間和機(jī)會溝通和交流，一起分享生活樂趣，一起交流工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)，探討工作中遇到的難題，摸索人生旅途的坎坷，讓我們不再覺得是沙漠中的苦行者，不再感到孤獨(dú)和寂寞。

十天的軍訓(xùn)給了我太多寶貴的東西，應(yīng)該感謝的人太多了。懷著一顆感恩的心，我將更有勇氣用獅子般的力量工作，用菩薩般的心腸待人。

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