第一篇：書面表達(dá)小結(jié)

高考英語書信作文套用句式及范文

一、投訴信

開頭段:自我介紹+寫作背景+寫作目的

1.I’m Li Hua, a customer who bought…from your website several days ago.I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction about/with….2.I’d like to / I wish to make a complaint about…/ I wish to express my dissatisfaction with/at/about…

3.I have been content/satisfied with your service for years but I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about…

中間段：投訴內(nèi)容/ 反映問題（要點(diǎn)）

4.The problems are as follows.Firstly, … Secondly,… What’s worse, ….(What’s worse=Worse still=To make the matter worse)5.I am completely disappointed to find… 當(dāng)我發(fā)現(xiàn)…我徹底失望了。6.I can hardly put up with it any more.(put up with=stand=bear=tolerate)結(jié)尾段：期待對方改進(jìn)+盼望回復(fù)

7.I sincerely hope that/It is my sincere hope that you will look into/investigate the matter/incident seriously and proper measures should be taken to prevent such an incident happening again.我真誠地希望你能認(rèn)真調(diào)查這件事情，以及采取恰當(dāng)?shù)拇胧┓乐诡愃剖录俅伟l(fā)生。8.I would appreciate it very much if you could take measures to deal with/solve the problem as soon as possible.9.I do hope that the problems will be solved as soon as possible.10.I hope my suggestions will be taken into consideration so as to improve the situation.范文背誦（附中三模）：

I’m Li Hua, a senior 3 student eager to improve my English.Having paid 200 yuan, I registered on your English learning website and became one of your club members.Now I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction about some problems in your club.Firstly, the style of web pages is dull due to the lack of the wonderful artistic design, which greatly affects the readers’ interest in reading.Secondly, it takes too long to get our problems solved online, which makes us doubt if the registration pay is worthwhile.What’s worse, till today we have never seen any foreign teachers or experts as you have promised, which undoubtedly makes us disappointed a lot.I sincerely hope that you can deal with these problems listed above as soon as possible.I do hope the problems will be solved as soon as possible.I’m looking forward to your early reply.二、求助信。

開頭段:（問候）+（自我介紹）+寫作目的 1.How are you? / How are you doing? / How are you getting on recently?/ How is everything going? 你好嗎？

2.I’m writing to ask you to do me a favor.(do sb.a favor= help sb.=give sb a hand= lend a helping hand to sb.)3.I wonder if you could help me…

4.I’m eager to get your timely help./ I’m eager for your timely help.中間段：說明求助內(nèi)容+聯(lián)系方式（要點(diǎn)）5.My puzzle is that I don’t know… 6.I wonder how to deal with the problems.7.What bothers me is that I don’t know what to do.8.Faced with so many difficulties, I have to turn to you for help.(turn to sb.for help=ask sb.for help)9.Please do feel free to contact me by e-mailing or phoning me at any time.10.If you want to know further information, do let me know.Thank you.結(jié)尾段：盼望回復(fù)

范文背誦（附中月考3+2011全國卷1+ 2013年全國卷2）： Dear Sir or Madam, I’m so grateful for your good service during my stay in Travel Inn Atlanta, But I’m writing to ask you to do me a favor to find and send back my pack left in your hotel.I checked in on Oct.1 and out on Oct.6.Setting off in a rush to the airport, I left my pack in Room 202.It’s a medium-sized, black backpack containing some reference books for my mid-term exam, a white iPad, a credit card and some cash.All in the pack matters to me, especially the iPad, a precious gift from my father on my 15th birthday.If you find it, would you please post it to me? The address in on the envelop.I would appreciate it if you could give me your earliest reply.Thank you for anything you can do for me.Yours，三、約稿信

開頭段:（自我介紹）+（寫作背景）+寫作目的 1.I’m writing to ask you to write an article for… 中間段：稿件內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

2.Would you please write something about…? 3.An article about…is especially welcomed.4.…words or so would be fine.(or so:大約)5.Could we have your article before…? 結(jié)尾段：盼望回復(fù) I’m looking forward to hearing from you.范文背誦（2015全國卷1）：

三、詢問信

開頭段:（自我介紹）+（寫作背景）+寫作目的

1.I’m writing to ask you some relevant questions.(relevant 相關(guān)的)2.I’d like to acquire some information related to….3.I’m writing to see if it’s possible for you to provide me with information about/ regarding/ concerning/ with regard to…)4.I’m Li Hua, a student in China… I wonder if you could provide me some specific information about…

中間段：要詢問的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

5.Firstly.I’d like to know something about… I would also like to inquire…(inquire咨詢)6.Another point I am not certain about is…

7.I wonder / I am wondering if you could let me know something about… 結(jié)尾段：盼望回復(fù)

范文背誦（2005全國卷1+ 2014全國卷1）：

四、感謝信

開頭段:（自我介紹）+（寫作背景）+寫作目的

1.I’m writing to express my thanks for your… / I’m writing to convey my gratitude to you for… 2.I am writing to express my thanks for(your)helping me improve my spoken English.3.I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.我謹(jǐn)借此機(jī)會感謝您給予我們的及時支持和幫助 中間段：要感謝的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 結(jié)尾段：再次感謝+盼望回復(fù)

4.Thanks again for your kind help./ Again, I'd like to express my thanks to you.5.I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by… 范文背誦:(一中三模)Dear Matty, I ‘ve heard that you will go back to the U.S.A.in less than a month.I just can’t hear you leaving.It is my honor to be one of your students.I learnt so much from you during the past year.You taught us not only the knowledge itself, but also the theory of life.It’s a great pleasure to listen to your classes.You always teach us patiently and warm-heartedly.Whenever I made mistakes you would tell me the proper way to construct a good sentence or how to pronounce a word correctly.Without your help, I couldn’t have made so much progress in English.I never said thanks to you when you were teaching us.But now, I must listen to the voice of my heart and express my gratitude to you.How I wish you could come back and give us more lectures!Looking forward to seeing you again in China.Yours;Dear Miss Wang, I am writing to express my thanks for helping me improve my English.Without your help, I would not be a student of South China Normal University.I still remember the days when you taught me English in Grade 3 of senior school.My English was once poor, but you were very patient with me and tried to tutor me after class.My English was greatly improved because of your encouragement.Without your help, I wouldn’t have realized my dream.I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges.Wish you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!Again, I sincerely thank you for your help!

Yours，五、道歉信

開頭段:（自我介紹）+（寫作背景）+寫作目的

1.I am writing to apologize to you for … /I am writing to say sorry for… 2.I’m truly sorry that…

3.I’m writing to express/ convey my heartfelt apology to you.4.I’m writing to make an apology to you for not being able to….5.I’m sorry for not being able to… due to the fact that… 中間段：要道歉的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn) 6.The reason why I fail to… is that… 結(jié)尾段：再次道歉+盼望回復(fù) 7.Please accept my sincere apology.8.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.9.Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.對于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。范文背誦:（十三校聯(lián)考2）Dear Mr Brown, I am Li Hua, your student in Class 12.I am indeed very sorry that I can't go to Yuelu Mountain with you next week.I feel uneasy about it and want to tell you what happened.Just now, my cousin, Xiao Ming, who went to Australia for his further study last year, informed me that he would return next Saturday morning.He wanted me to pick him up at the airport.You know, we haven't seen each other for nearly a year, so I can't spare the time to go out with you.I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.I would appreciate it if you could allow me to make another date to go there and have fun together with you.六、申請信/求職信

開頭段: 自我介紹+寫作背景+寫作目的

1.I learned from your advertisement/ website that you are in need of.../ you are looking for… 2.Having learned from your advertisement that you are looking for…, I’m more than pleased.= I’m more than glad/pleased/ delighted to hear/learn that…

3.I’m quite interested in it.Therefore, I’m writing to apply for the position of… 4.I’m writing to apply to be … 中間段：自我優(yōu)勢/申請資歷

5.I’m confident that I’m suitable for the job.Firstly/ To begin with,… Secondly, … Last but not least, …

6.I do think I’m qualified for the job due to the following reasons.結(jié)尾段：感謝+盼望回復(fù)

7.I would appreciate it if I have the chance of doing / to do….8.I’d greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.(I’d appreciate it if you could…= I would be very grateful/ thankful if you could…)范文背誦:（附中月考七+2012全國卷1）Dear Sir or Madam, I’ve read the news on the Internet that the World Horticultural Exposition will be held in Tangshan from May to October in 2016.I’m writing to apply for working as an English volunteer in July and August.I’m presently a student of Senior 3, but I’ll graduate in June this year.So I’ll be free in July and August.English is my favorite subject and I can speak English fluently and I ‘m often praised for my English writing as well., I’m an active and enthusiastic person who enjoys working with different people and can adapt well to new situations.Tangshan Horticultural Exposition will be a good chance to show Chinese culture, where I can meet visitors from all over the world.Therefore, being a volunteer there will be a wonderful practice for me.I’ll be willing to send you further information if you consider my request.Thank you for your time and consideration.I look forward to your reply.Sincerely，七、邀請信

開頭段: 自我介紹++寫作目的

1.We’re going to have/ throw/hold a party for… this Sunday.I’m writing to invite you to the party.2.It’s my honor to invite you to… / I would feel honored if you could come.3.I wonder if you would like to come to…/ join us.4.We’re having/ planning …on…(date)and we feel it would be a great idea if you could join us.我們將于…（日期）舉行…（活動），如果你能來就太好了。中間段：活動安排

5.Here are some details about this activity./ The following are some details about this activity./ Some details about this activity are as follows.6.To begin with, we will… Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as… which will… 7.I’m sure you will have a good time/ have fun/ enjoy yourself together with us.結(jié)尾段：希望對方接受邀請+盼望回復(fù)

8.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.9.We hope that you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you.范文背誦:（長郡中學(xué)二模 +2012全國卷2+2015全國卷2）Dear Mr.Smith, New Year’s Day is approaching.Our school will hold some activities to enrich our after-school life.There will be a singing competition, a hand-writing competition and book sales for charity.These days we are devoted to the preparation work for a book sale and I think we are sure to learn a lot from the activity.The book sale is arranged at 2 p.m on December 31st at Ri Xin square this weekend and there is no doubt that many teachers and students would like to come.I ‘m writing to invite you to the sale.All my friends will appreciate it you are coming.By the way, any book with teacher’s signature will be popular with us.So would you please bring a book with your signature for sale? I can’t wait to see you then.Best wishes!

Yours，八、建議信

開頭段: 問候+寫作背景+寫作目的

10.Having read your letter, I know you have trouble in…..Now, I’m writing to give you some useful suggestions here.11.In your last letter，you asked me for advice with regard to / regarding… and I will try to make some useful/ constructive suggestions here.12.I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on/ about… 13.I’m writing to give you some suggestions/ give you a hand.My suggestions are as follows 中間段：具體建議

14.When it comes to / As for…, I would like to suggest / recommend ….15.Here are three useful tips.16.You may/might as well do…(might as well = had better 你最好做某事)17.It’s important to do… as/because/ for the reason that….18.It’s also a good idea to….., which will benefit you a lot/ which will bring great benefit to you.19.It also helps to do… which will….做…也有幫助，這將… 20.If I were you, I would….21.In my opinion / Personally / As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise to take the following action.22.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./ I hope my suggestions will be of great help/ benefit to you.23.I feel that it would be beneficial/ great if you stick to… 我認(rèn)為，如果你堅(jiān)持。的話，會有益處的。結(jié)尾段：希望對方接受建議+盼望回復(fù)

24.I hope you will take my advice into consideration.范文背誦:（長郡中學(xué)月考3+2008全國卷2）Dear Li Mei, Your letter came as a surprise to me yesterday.I didn’t know you were suffering so much lately.I should have written to you earlier!We must admit that life sometimes is not so easy.Failure is part of life, especially when we are growing up, right? Your classmate laughed at your failure? Forget it!It is probable that he or she didn’t mean to hurt you.If possible, have a chat with him or her, telling him or her what you are feeling inside.Never say you want to drop out of school, because it is not a good way to solve the problem.What you should do right now is to calm yourself and try to think of the things that make you happy.Just cheer up whenever you face problems.九、告知信 / 介紹信

開頭段: 問候+寫作背景+寫作目的

1．Thank you for your letter asking about ….Here I’ like to tell you something about it./ I’d like to tell you some information about it./ I’ m writing to tell you some details about it./ I’ d like to tell you some detailed information about it.中間段：告訴對方的具體要點(diǎn)。

Yours sincerely, 結(jié)尾段：盼望回復(fù)

范文背誦:（附中二模+ 2004全國卷1+2004全國卷2+2006全國卷1+2007全國卷1+2007全國卷2+2009全國卷2+2013全國卷1）Dear Susan, I’m very glad to hear that you will come to Changsha for an exchange visit.In your letter, you asked me about Century Hotel, in which you are supposed to stay for a couple of days.Now I’d like to tell you some detailed information about it.Century Hotel is located at Xiangjiang Road, where you can enjoy a beautiful view of the river nearby.Traffic and shopping center are very convenient for there with the subway station just a few steps away and the nearest shopping center also within a walking distance.The accommodation fee for each guest is 200 yuan per day, including a free breakfast served from 7 am to 9 am.If you need further information, please call the reception desk on the ground floor at 0731-84270288.Looking forward to seeing you soon.考前熟記下列詞組（語法填空+短文改錯）1.冠詞的固定搭配。

in a mess 亂七八糟 in a hurry 匆匆忙忙 in a …condition 處于……狀態(tài) as a matter of fact 事實(shí)上 the other day 幾天前 come to an end 結(jié)束 have a gift for 在……有天賦 at a loss 不知所措 all of a sudden 突然 once in a while 偶爾 once upon a time 從前 go on a diet 節(jié)食 keep a diary 寫日記 do sb.a favor 幫某人一個忙 give sb.a lift 給某人提供順風(fēng)車 as a result 結(jié)果 keep an eye on 照看 have a word with 和某人談話 a waste of 浪費(fèi) a series of 一系列 make the most / best of 充分利用 on the spot / scene 在現(xiàn)場 at the moment 此時此刻 take the place of 取代；替代 in the daytime 在白天 in the distance 在遠(yuǎn)方 in the end 最終 on the whole 總體上 on the left / right 在左/右邊 at the same time 同時 in the air / sky 在空中 for the time being 暫時 in a word 總之 in the 1980s 二十世紀(jì)八十年代 all over the world 全世界 in the beginning 起初 by the way 順便說一下 at noon 在中午 at night 在晚上 at dawn 在黎明 at dusk 在黃昏 in public 當(dāng)眾 by bus 坐公共汽車

make great progress 取得很大的進(jìn)步

Yours, 2.介詞的固定搭配(以with為例)be angry with sb.因某事而生某人的氣 be filled with 裝滿；充滿 be strict with sb.在……對某人嚴(yán)格 be crowded with 擁擠 be connected with 連接 be flooded with 充斥；涌入 be familiar with 對……熟悉/ 不熟悉 be compared with 比較 be popular with 流行；受歡迎 be covered with 覆蓋 be patient with 對……有耐心 be faced with 面臨 be concerned with 關(guān)于；與..有關(guān) be concerned about 擔(dān)心;關(guān)心 be busy / occupied with 忙于

be fed up with 厭倦

be pleased / satisfied / content with 對……滿意 catch up with 追趕,put up with 容忍

keep up with 與…保持一致, come up with 提出，…to doing sth匯總 look forward to doing sth, devote oneself to doing sth.life to doing sth,pay attention to doing sth,be used to doing sth, doing,stick to doing sth.堅(jiān)持做……,adapt to doing sth.devote one’s

be accustomed to admit to doing sth，apply to doing sth, be addicted to doing sth.be dedicated to doing sth.致力于；獻(xiàn)身于, be indifferent to doing sth

be opposed to diong sth.be similar to doing sth.get down

lead to doing to doing sth.give one’s mind to doing sth.give rise to doing sth.sth.object to doing sth.prefer doing A to doing B

respond to doing sth.take to doing sth.喜歡上；從事；養(yǎng)成…的習(xí)慣；沉湎于… turn to doing sth.求助；轉(zhuǎn)而從事于

in addition to doing sth.in匯總 in danger, in trouble, in surprise, in black and white,in brief/short/ summary/ conclusion/a word,in case in case of, in that case,in charge of, in the charge of, in common, in depth,in fact, in effect, in favor of, in future, in general, in hand, in order，in order to do sth in order that… in other words，in pairs,in person, in private,in public, in progress,in rags, in reality, in return, in high spirits,in spite of = despite, in sum/total, in store for sb,in terms of, in the air=in the sky, in the end,in truth,in turn,in vain, in view of, in want of, in need of, in one’s twenties, interest sb.in sth.doing sth.be interested in sth.doing sth, in low voices have difficulty in doing sth，succeed in doing sth.spend some time in doing sth, be weak in sth.doing sth.do well in sth.doing sth.be lost in be absorbed in in(full)bloom 盛開，in blossom 盛開，in ruins, in rough，in that在于, 3.連接詞的固定搭配。

either… or… 要么……要么…… neither…nor… 既不……也不……

whether…or… 是/不論……還是…… not only…, but(also)… 不但……而且…… when it comes to… 當(dāng)涉及到…… from… to … 從…….到……

on the one hand ….on the other hand … 一方面……另一方面…… not…but…不是…而是…...…was / were doing sth.when… 正在做某事，突然…… be about to do sth when… 正要做某事，突然…… be on the point of doing sth.when… 正要/即將做某事，突然 ……h(huán)ardly …when = no sooner…than 一…就 There was a time when… 有一段時間；曾經(jīng) 4.代詞的固定搭配

take it for granted that… 認(rèn)為……理所當(dāng)然 make it a rule that… 把……作為規(guī)定 make it clear that… 聲明 make it +adj.for sb.to do sth.令某人去做某事很…… find / think / consider it+adj.to do sth.發(fā)覺/認(rèn)為做某事很…… make oneself +過去分詞 使自己被…… 5.非謂語的固定搭配

judging from / by 由……判斷 all things considered 全盤考慮；整體看來 only to see/ find/ discover 結(jié)果卻看見/發(fā)現(xiàn) to make things worse 更糟糕的是 7.名詞為復(fù)數(shù)形式的固定搭配。

shake hands with 和……握手 make friends with 與……交朋友

make preparations for 為……做準(zhǔn)備 be in high / low spirits 情緒高漲/低落 to make things / matters worse 更糟糕的是 be as follows 如下 have effects on / have an effect on 對……有影響 make efforts to do / make an effort to do 努力做某事 make contributions to / make acontribution to 為……做貢獻(xiàn) 8.固定的特殊句型

There is no denying that… 毋庸置疑

There is no need to do sth.沒必要做某事 generally speaking 籠統(tǒng)來講 be worth doing 值得做某事 to tell you the truth 實(shí)話實(shí)說 weather permitting 天氣允許的話

There is no point in doing sth 做某事沒有意義 It is no use / good doing sth.做某事沒用/不好 It is / was…that / who… 正是…… It was not long before… 很快…… It’s(high)time that sb.did / should do sth 該是某人做某事的時候了 It is / was the+序數(shù)詞+time that sb.has / had done sth.某人第……次做某事 9.以下動詞加-ed或-ing要雙寫最后一個字母

regret(regretted, regretting)后悔 control(controlled, controlling)控制 admit(admitted, admitting)承認(rèn) occur(occurred, occurring)出現(xiàn) prefer(preferred, preferring)寧愿 refer(referred, referring)提到 forget(forgetting)忘記 permit(permitted, permitting)允許 equip(equipped, equipping)裝備

注意：quarrel, signal, travel中的l可雙寫（英國英語）也可不雙寫（美國英語）10.易錯的動詞-ing形式

1.live 2.stop 3.study 4.teach 5.write 6.lie 7.lay 8.die 9.carry 答案：1.living 2.stopping 3.studying 4.teaching5.writing 6.lying 7.laying 8.dying 9.carrying 11.常考不規(guī)則動詞的過去式和過去分詞

1.put 2.set 3.read 4.go 5.take 6.come 7.make 8.get 9.bring 10.keep11.hold 12.buy 13.think14.teach 15.sell 16.catch 17.sit 18.spend 19.build 20.find 21.hear 22.tell 23.feel 24.break 25.know 26.grow 27.see 28.drive 29.draw 30.give 31.fall 32.write 33.ride 34.forbid 35.lie 36.lay 12.不規(guī)則形容詞和副詞的比較級和最高級

1.good/well 2.bad/ill 3.many/much 4.little 5.old 6.far 答案：1.better;best 2.worse;worst 3.more most 4.less;least 5.older/ elder;oldest/eldest 6.farther/further;farthest /furthest 13.常見形容詞的副詞形式

rude 11.wide 12.true 13.safe 14.gentle 15.probable/possible 16.terrible 17 gentle 18 instant 19 immediate 20 regular 21 most 答案：1.happily 2.simply

3.wholly

4.truly

5.automatically

6.hurriedly 7.unexpectedly 8.increasingly 9.surprisingly 10.rudely 11.widely 12.truly 13.safely 14.gently 15.probably/possibly 16.terribly 17 gently 18 instantly immediately 20 regularly 21 mostly

第二篇：書面表達(dá)

中考英語書面表達(dá)的考點(diǎn)集匯、講解和訓(xùn)練

【考點(diǎn)掃描】

書面表達(dá)是每年中考必考題型，是考查學(xué)生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。書面表達(dá)通常有三種形式：

1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；

2、看圖作文；

3、根據(jù)漢語提示作文。

無論是那一種書面表達(dá)形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號正確，能達(dá)到交際目的?！久麕熃怆y】 一.訓(xùn)練方法

1.記。認(rèn)真系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí)和背誦基礎(chǔ)知識和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強(qiáng)的寫作能力，首先應(yīng)該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學(xué)寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習(xí)慣，相當(dāng)一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習(xí)慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學(xué)們?nèi)粲写罅康默F(xiàn)成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。

2.練。每練一篇書面表達(dá)題，都要真正學(xué)到一點(diǎn)東西，不可貪多而邊學(xué)邊忘。平時可以采用循序漸進(jìn)、靈活多樣的練習(xí)方式。從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據(jù)表格或記錄寫短文等。

3.寫。要進(jìn)行實(shí)戰(zhàn)寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內(nèi)寫出100個詞的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、1 內(nèi)容全、形式正確。這樣形成習(xí)慣，考試時就能得心應(yīng)手。二.應(yīng)試策略

1.審題目：要切中題意?！吨锌伎荚囌f明》指出，書面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認(rèn)真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點(diǎn)等。

2.圈要點(diǎn)：防止遺漏要點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點(diǎn)逐條列出。

3.列提綱：為寫作做好準(zhǔn)備。根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。

4.定基調(diào)：定出時態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：

(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。

(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型?？蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運(yùn)用。1）語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。

2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5）注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法： 1）表示并列關(guān)系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示時間關(guān)系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果關(guān)系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as… 7）表示總結(jié)性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不會表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。(6)改病句：認(rèn)真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語言準(zhǔn)確性、上下 3 文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手： 1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。5）標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。三.注意事項(xiàng)

書面表達(dá)要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)?！局锌挤独?/p>

VII.書面表達(dá)（共1題，計(jì)10分）

假如你叫張強(qiáng)。請根據(jù)下面美國朋友Bob的來信內(nèi)容，結(jié)合你自己的情況寫一篇語言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。

要求：1.認(rèn)真閱讀來信的內(nèi)容，從中獲得你需要的信息。2.詞數(shù)：80左右?；匦诺拈_頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。注意：回信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)地址和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs

After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根據(jù)前面提到第六個步驟，我們來寫一下這篇書面表達(dá)。

1.審題目：通過審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達(dá)應(yīng)是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強(qiáng)，收信人是Bob，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)是介紹張強(qiáng)自己的情況。

2.圈要點(diǎn)：根據(jù)來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1、收到對方的來信；

2、愿意和對方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；

4、自己的身份、特長和愛好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提綱：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基調(diào)：1.時態(tài)：收到來信用一般過去時，介紹情況用一般現(xiàn)在時，希望用一般將來時。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來寫。4.開頭和結(jié)尾題目已經(jīng)給出。

5、寫全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang 6

6、改病句：認(rèn)真復(fù)查一邊，如有錯誤，加以改正?！緷M分演練】

（1）

華山是中國名山之一。假設(shè)外國友人到你校參觀后，準(zhǔn)備去旅游。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)向外國友人簡單介紹華山（the Hua Mountain）

1．位于陜西東部，是中國著名的旅游勝地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游觀光。2．乘汽車去大約要花1個小時；也可以乘火車去。

3．登山便可領(lǐng)略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀麗的風(fēng)景及清晨美麗的日出。注意：

1．字?jǐn)?shù)：80詞左右。2．請不要逐字翻譯。（2）根據(jù)提示和要求完成下面短文

假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令營認(rèn)識的一個朋友Jim從英國給你寄來一件禮物—— 一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問好，他想知道你近來在忙些什么。請你給他寫一封回信（100個詞左右）表示感謝?；匦乓ㄒ韵聝?nèi)容： 1.向Jim問好并對他表示感謝。

2.禮物是你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。

3.告訴Jim你近來很好，上周剛過完生日，生日聚會很熱鬧。詢問Jim的近況，并表示希望他能來中國。

注意1.信的格式已經(jīng)給出。

2.信中不得使用真實(shí)的人名、地名。（3）

根據(jù)中文意思和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給英文提示詞語必須都用上，中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐句翻譯，每組英文提示所寫出的句數(shù)不限。

今天是6月23日星期日，天氣晴朗。你和你的同學(xué)張宏參觀了西安市動物園。那里的動物十分有趣，人見人愛。當(dāng)你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物時，就上前阻止并說……

請你用英文寫一篇日記，記述今天的經(jīng)歷。（請注意日記格式）1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．a(chǎn)nimal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say（4）

根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。注意1.字?jǐn)?shù)60~80。

2.所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）3.發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

假設(shè)你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營活動。請你準(zhǔn)備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）

根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示詞語寫一篇短文。

今年暑假，有一批美國中學(xué)生要來你們學(xué)校訪問。請你寫一篇有關(guān)西安的簡介，以便和他們交流。

注意：1.字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；

2.必須使用所給英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9（6）看圖寫話。

根據(jù)以上四幅圖和提示詞語，寫出一篇語法正確、意思連貫、語句通順、符合邏輯的短文，開頭已給出。要求：1.敘述要用第三人稱。2.詞數(shù)60~80個左右。3.要表達(dá)自己的看法或想法。

4.選用下列詞語：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（7）

請你參考圖文提示，寫一篇60~80詞的短文。注意：1.語言規(guī)范，語意完整，內(nèi)容豐富。2.表達(dá)符合圖意，書寫規(guī)范。3.給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。4.文章的開頭已給出。

參考詞：pollute, turn off the tap(水龍頭)，dry, save(節(jié)約 vt.), water resources(水資源)From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（8）

請根據(jù)下面四幅圖，寫一篇70個單詞左右的短文。文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不算入總詞匯數(shù)內(nèi)。

參考詞匯： on fire 著火firefighter n.消防員put out 滅火

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...”

__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________（9）看圖寫話。

要求：1.根據(jù)圖畫所提供的語境，寫出意思連貫、語言流暢、語法準(zhǔn)確、符合邏輯的短文。2.至少使用兩種時態(tài)，70詞以上。不得使用真實(shí)姓名、地名、學(xué)校名。

3.標(biāo)題和第一句已給出，但不計(jì)入70詞之內(nèi)。

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（10）

根據(jù)所給圖畫用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。

(11)

假如你所在的學(xué)校要出一期英語壁報(bào)。你準(zhǔn)備就自己經(jīng)歷的一件事寫一篇英語短文向壁報(bào)投稿。下面五幅圖記錄了你上個星期六與老師和同學(xué)到南河邊參加植樹活動的全過程。請你就以下五幅圖寫一篇英文短文。

注意：1.短文內(nèi)容要包括所有圖畫中的主要內(nèi)容 2.詞數(shù)：70～90

3.生詞提示： 桶bucket鋤頭hoe

________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________（12）

請按照下面6幅圖和表格的提示，寫一篇題為“Changes in Our Hometown”的英語短文。（詞數(shù)：50~80，不包括已經(jīng)給出的單詞）

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

過去 現(xiàn)在 舊房 高樓 河水污濁 河水清澈 步行、騎自行車 乘公交車、小汽車 Changes in Our Hometown

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【練習(xí)答案】

(1)參考答案：

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit.(2)參考答案：

Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：

How are you? Many thanks for the shirt!I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!You remembered!It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you.I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your friend, Li Lei

(3)參考答案：

Sunday June 23rd

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”

(4)參考答案： Dear friends，I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening.(5)參考答案：

Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.(6)參考答案：

Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules.17(7)參考答案：

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)參考答案：

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow!He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour(to)fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9)參考答案：

TAKING CARE OF TREES

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found

that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”

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Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street.Suddenly a car passed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street.The old woman thanked us very much.（11）參考答案： 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

（1）上星期五老師告訴我們“明天去南河邊植樹”。（2）上星期六（第二天）早上六點(diǎn)半我就起床了。（3）我?guī)е叭W(xué)校，同學(xué)們帶著桶、鋤頭在校門口等待。（4）到南河邊，我們開始植樹。（也可描寫動場面。）（5）看著新種下的樹，我們都很高興。

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)

After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank.（12）參考答案：

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶幾邊，我認(rèn)出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一個才是媽媽的杯子呢？突然之間，我覺得，自己真得太不了解父母了。當(dāng)媽媽為我倒水時，我卻不知她的杯子是什么樣的；當(dāng)媽媽為我夾我喜歡吃的菜時，我卻沒想過他們是愛吃淡一點(diǎn)，還是濃一點(diǎn)。。。2009年到了，意味著過去一年的逝去和新的一年的到來。媽媽為我操勞了一整年，仔細(xì)想想，現(xiàn)在的我也應(yīng)該為她做一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)事了。

于是，我決定先將茶沏好再找杯子。學(xué)著爸爸平時沏茶的順序，我先從茶柜 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往燒水的壺里加入水放在電茶爐上燒，接著，我將爸爸已經(jīng)掰好的普洱茶片拿了兩片放在蓋碗里，等了一會，水開了，我小心地將水注入蓋碗，將蓋蓋上，把蓋碗里第一遍的茶水濾掉，然后再次注水，蓋上蓋，燜一會才兩手并用地將茶水倒入茶海里，因?yàn)榈谝淮巫约簞邮郑w碗的燙手是我所沒想到的，手忙腳亂的我弄得茶幾上一片片的水漬。重復(fù)幾次這樣的程序后，我先幫外婆倒了一杯茶，因?yàn)橥馄盘貏e喜歡喝茶。當(dāng)外婆從廚房走出來的時候我已經(jīng)把茶都給倒好了，這時，外婆才告訴我哪一個是媽媽的杯子。

媽媽起床了，我雙手捧著水杯送到她的面前，就像捧著一顆溫?zé)岬男?。媽媽一愣，隨即臉上露出了微笑，她一手接過水杯，伸出另一只手將我拉進(jìn)了她的懷里，那手輕輕柔柔地在我的頭上撫摸著，接著媽媽在我的臉上深深地親了一口。雖然媽媽經(jīng)常親我，但這一刻的親吻卻最讓我感到幸福。我抬起頭對媽媽說：“媽媽快喝吧，要不茶要涼了。”媽媽仰起了脖子，張著嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了幾大口?？此翘鹈勖鄣臉幼?，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。

我記得在我小學(xué)的時侯，就讀過一首曹值的七步詩：“煮豆持作梗，轆轂以為汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那時只知其大意，只知道曹操的長子曹丕繼位，他在一些奸臣的影響下，擔(dān)心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之內(nèi)作出一首詩來，否則處死；結(jié)果他的弟弟就在七步之內(nèi)寫出了流傳至今的“七步詩”。當(dāng)時這首詩對曹丕也是一種極大的潮諷。

幾個世紀(jì)過去了，社會和生活都發(fā)生了極大的變化；應(yīng)該說人的素質(zhì)也應(yīng)有所提高；一個人生活在世上，是離不開親情、友情和愛情的；有人說：打架親兄弟，上陣父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的團(tuán)結(jié)并不是真對與他人打架斗毆，在生活上，21 事業(yè)上應(yīng)是不可或缺的照應(yīng)；俗話說“一根筷子容易斷，十雙筷子斷就難”；可見，團(tuán)結(jié)是一種力量，只有團(tuán)結(jié)才有攻不破的堡壘。

然而，就在生活優(yōu)越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因?yàn)橐稽c(diǎn)小事，一點(diǎn)利益而你爭我斗，反目成仇，甚而相殘；我和我的朋友在聊天時有時聊及這個問題，有人這樣評論：一個人生活在世上，如果不顧親情，對兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顧，那他在這個社會上和任何人都不要談“情”字，特別是友情。

樹大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是難免發(fā)生的，但要看你怎樣去對待，把金錢和利益看的太重，那麼，你就會值親情于不顧；看淡名利，注重親情才是做人的底線；爭則不足，讓則有余，在利益和金錢面前，我們何不禮讓一點(diǎn)，做一個有道德、有素質(zhì)、有親情的人呢？

家和萬事興，團(tuán)結(jié)是一種力量，讓我們團(tuán)結(jié)友愛，和睦共處，為個人的事業(yè)、為家庭的生活、為國家的興盛而看重親情、友情、愛情；把金錢和利益看淡一些吧！人過留名，雁去留聲，希望在幾十年之后，當(dāng)你離開這個世界的時侯，留給后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。

今天是她父親的生日,她要回家和父親一起過生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父親已經(jīng)六十多歲了,為了子女的成長與幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.話說過來,人一輩子真的很不容易.人年老時非常希望能夠和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一個電話甚至一個短信,父母也已經(jīng)很知足了.我由于長期在外,很想念爸爸媽媽.想起過去,心里真的很辛酸,父母親為了我們的成長真的付出了很多,然而他們現(xiàn)在又生活得怎么樣呢?想起過去的一幕一幕,我心里很難受!我很希望做做子女的我們,踏踏實(shí)實(shí)地做好每一件事情,不讓父母擔(dān)憂,這是最基本的我們應(yīng)當(dāng)做的事情.22 談到這里我不由自主地想起一部電影《我的兄弟姐妹》,這是一部關(guān)于親情的影片,暫且不管故事的真實(shí)性,主要考究它的內(nèi)涵.主人公齊思甜和哥哥齊憶苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齊天生活在一個不富裕卻充滿溫馨和愛的家。然而在一個暴風(fēng)雪的夜晚，他們的母親舊病復(fù)發(fā)，咳得吐血了。父親背她去醫(yī)院，卻出了意外，他們倆都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬進(jìn)了四個孩子的家。性格剛強(qiáng)的哥哥無法忍受這個新家庭的種種，無奈地帶著弟弟妹妹離開了家。他們開始四處奔波，尋找落腳之處。當(dāng)實(shí)在沒有能力照顧弟弟妹妹的時候，他把妹妹齊思甜送給一對正要出國的夫婦；把弟弟送給他的舅媽一家；又把小妹妹帶到一對老人家中請他們收養(yǎng)。他自己和弟弟妹妹們便各奔東西……20年后，齊憶苦在北京當(dāng)上了出租車司機(jī)；齊思甜出國受到良好的教育，成了音樂家；齊天成為東北大學(xué)學(xué)生；齊妙卻當(dāng)上了舞廳小姐。在北京的音樂會上，思甜驀然回首的瞬間，音樂霎時凝固了。他們四人擁抱在一起，淚水順著另一支悠揚(yáng)的樂曲落下，聽眾的掌聲久久不息……終于，他們有了一次永久的重逢。

齊思甜的父親是一個音樂教師，他們一家人都生活在音樂的天堂里，這也為后來思甜成為音樂家打好了基礎(chǔ)。父親說：“人生路上有許多困難的事情，只要有音樂在，你的靈魂便不再寂寞?！边@位父親是偉大的，他樂觀開朗，以身作則。盡管他和藹可親，但同時又是一個嚴(yán)厲的父親。有一回，齊憶苦偷鄰居家的雞蛋，是為了滿足妹妹小小的心愿。而他卻因此挨了父親的鞭子，還罰他站在雪地里很久。在父親被分配到別的地方邊勞動邊教音樂時，他對這“莫須有的罪名”并沒有悲憤倒下，而是瞞著家人當(dāng)搬運(yùn)工挨家挨戶送木材，還干各種各樣的粗活。他也沒有一絲怨言，還對孩子說：“我沒事?！倍碌暮⒆觽円材闷鹆斯ぞ?，幫父親干活。他哼著小調(diào)，陽光幸福地灑在他們臉上。

可見,這位父親是多么偉大，他以他的行動告訴了孩子們音樂的重要性及如何面對生活的苦難。

那么，又是一種什么樣的力量，使后來的四個孩子重逢，使他們歡聚，使他們接受心靈的洗禮？

毋庸置疑，是親情。

寒冷的冬天，四個孩子依偎在車站。他們在為下一餐飯而擔(dān)心著?！案纾茵I。”、“哥，我冷?！?、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹們的話刺痛了哥哥。他說：“只要我還有一口氣，就不讓你們受委屈?！笔聦?shí)上他也這么做了。如果不是親情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘記，那一晚，父母臨走時對他的囑咐：“你是哥哥，要照顧好弟弟妹妹。”

生活改變了許多人和事，也改變了他們。但是，親情是始終不渝的。最小的妹妹齊妙長大后竟成了舞廳小姐！她離開原來的家后，養(yǎng)父母去世得早，加上無人看管，就開始墮落下去了。她在20年后與齊思甜相遇時，大言不慚地對她說她滿足于當(dāng)前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回憶起以前的一點(diǎn)一滴，又不免傷感和懊悔。她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己對不起所有愛她的人，她的良心受到了譴責(zé)。于是，親情的歸來使她的精神方面的巨人復(fù)活了！她的靈魂才得以解放。

親情給人以新生，親情又猶如一支鎮(zhèn)心劑。

親情是心中的太陽，照耀著我們；親情是溫柔的春風(fēng)，撫摸著我們；親情如綿綿的春雨，滋潤著我們。

親情是雪，晶瑩剔透；親情也可以是雷，驚天撼地。

親情可以是燈，溫暖柔和；親情也可以是微弱的燭光，不亮卻很輝煌。不管怎么說，親情一定是無價的寶藏。

沒有了親情，世界變得荒蕪、凄涼；沒有了親情，生命則無法繁衍后代；沒有了親情，生活就單調(diào)枯燥；沒有了親情，人間也成了地獄。

親情是溝通兩代之間思想交流的橋梁，是一條連結(jié)兩顆心的紐帶。“兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，誰也不認(rèn)得誰。但落在地下后，結(jié)成一體，結(jié)成冰，化成水，就永遠(yuǎn)也分不開了。”

“臨行密密封，意恐遲遲歸”，是親情?！拔以谶@頭，母親在那頭”，也是親情。

無價的親情呵，愿我們在你的鼓舞下，駛向美好燦爛的明天。關(guān)于親情的影片..我看這部影片時,心情很沉重,流淚了.我想,不論一個人的出身是多么卑微,只要我們能夠記住親情的鼓舞與期待,只要我們我們?nèi)タ炭嗯?只要我們在心理上能夠戰(zhàn)勝自己,那么我們就是生活的強(qiáng)者!

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There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason that②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由

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In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A.The problem is becoming more and more serious./ The present situation is worrying.First,------------(說明Ａ的現(xiàn)狀)．Second,---------------(舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀)

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Dear,⑴My name is.⑵I am.⑶I want to write you a letter about.⑷

The focus of the complaint is.⑸For one thing,.⑹For another,.⑺

Honestly speaking,.⑻But.⑼Besides,.⑽All in all, there is still

much room for improvement.⑾I do hope.⑿Thank you for your time

and kind consideration.Sincerely yours,Signature

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高考英語滿分作文范文:A Letter of Thanks(一封感謝信)

時間： 2008-04-08 17:11:41作者：來源：

Dear Mr.John,How are things going with you in Beijing?

I am writing to show my thanks to you.You tutored me in my spoken English

before you went to Beijing.With your help I made such rapid progress that I won

the first place in the Spoken English Competition of the city.My achievement is owed to your help.Thank you very much.I have heard that you and your wife will pay a visit to my school.I am very glad at the news.In that case we can see each other again.I am looking forward to your coming.I am sending you a telescope as a small gift.I hope you will like it.All the best.Yours,Liu Jie

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書面表達(dá)

1．書面表達(dá)（本題20分）根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。假如你是一名叫李明（Li Ming）的中學(xué)生，看了上述故事后，你想表達(dá)自己的看法。請你給欄目編輯寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括： 1.你對其中的哪個故事感興趣？原因是什么？ ．．．．．．．2.你對這個故事所提及的現(xiàn)象的看法。3.就該現(xiàn)象提出至少兩條解決問題的建議。作文要求：

1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校真實(shí)的名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。

2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。作文開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫在答題卡上。Dear Editor，I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today，__________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________ Your, Li Ming

2．書面表達(dá)(滿分15分)

假如你叫李明，是一位高一新生，你的班主任(也是你的英語教師)要求你們在下午的班會課上用英語演講的形式參與班長(monitor)競選，請根據(jù)圖片和文字提示，以“I believe I can” 為題寫一篇演講稿。要求:

1.短文必須包括三個方面內(nèi)容：我的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)；我的能力；我將為大家做什么； 2.短文內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，提示詞可選用； 3.短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；

4..短文詞數(shù)為80左右，開頭、結(jié)尾部分已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

I believe I can

Good aftemoon, ladies and gentlemen!My name is Li Ming

Thank you!

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從前，我們通訊不便捷，只能通過書信與千里之外的親朋交流，富有濃濃的親情。今天，隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展，智能手機(jī)（smart-phone）已被廣泛使用。人們的交流變得非常的方便，可我們身邊的“低頭族(phubber)”隨處可見，很多人都有同感：“距離近了，可親情遠(yuǎn)了?！闭埜鶕?jù)圖中所示，結(jié)合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

要求：1.短文須包含所有信息，語句通順、意思連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.題目與開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：1.have effects on 2.concentrate on 3.face-to-face conversation 4.make good use of

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】 試題分析：本文要求按圖表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題作文。短文重點(diǎn)是兩個方面，一是現(xiàn)象與弊端：揭示現(xiàn)代人用手機(jī)的惡習(xí)及其產(chǎn)生的危害；二是觀點(diǎn)與方式：告訴人們怎樣正確的使用手機(jī)，利用好這個現(xiàn)代的通訊工具。短文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。第三人稱或第一稱形式。寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文首先結(jié)合現(xiàn)代人使用手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象，說明了人們使用手機(jī)給生活帶來的危害，接著告訴

試卷第2頁，總3頁 人們怎樣正確地使用好手機(jī)。條理分明，層次清楚。短文包含了提綱的所有信息，語句通順，意思連貫。文中用了while doing，instead of, rather than等等結(jié)構(gòu)，給短文增色不少。

試卷第3頁，總3頁 本卷由系統(tǒng)自動生成，請仔細(xì)校對后使用，答案僅供參考。

參考答案

1．Dear Editor，I read the stories on BBC World Have Your Say today.I am interested in Mike's story, because I had the same experience when I traveled in Guangzhou.I can't stand bad manners in public, either.In fact, I really get angry when people jump the queen and smoke in non-smoking areas.I think it's wrong to break the rules in public.In my opinion, we should know more about good manners.On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.If we can't stop them, we can always ask the police or someone like that for help.Yours, 【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇電子郵件。本題所給材料是是根據(jù)上文的故事表達(dá)自己的感受。寫作前先結(jié)合要表達(dá)的事情確定句子的人稱時態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：文章直接談到作者對麥克的故事感興趣。文中用到了一些好的句式，如：I can't stand bad manners in public, either.；On the other hand, we had better stop people around us from being rude.給文章增色不少?？键c(diǎn)：考查提綱作文。2．

Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen!

My name is Li Ming!I'm very glad to be a member of our class.I want to be monitor for these reasons.First, I’m hard-working and helpful.I work very hard at my study and do well in all subjects.I am kind and I would like to help you anytime.Second, I am active.I have a lot of hobbies such as playing basketball, singing and dancing.I believe I will guide our class in the correct direction in study and other fields.I'm sure we will have a wonderful time during the following three years.That’s all.Thank you!【解析】

試題分析：本文要求寫一篇演講稿，要按照要求，從：我的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)；我的能力；我將為大家做什么三個方面進(jìn)行寫作。用第一人稱形式，我的品質(zhì)和能力用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，我將為大家做的用一般將來時態(tài)。要根據(jù)演講稿的特點(diǎn)選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語和句型結(jié)構(gòu)，增加語言的感染力。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：范文開頭簡單的自我介紹后直接點(diǎn)題：我要當(dāng)班長；接著由first, second 等等列出自己想當(dāng)班長的原因；后面用兩個一般將來時的句子說明自己將會怎樣當(dāng)好班長。敘述清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)明晰。文中的I believe I wi11?；I'm sure we will?充分表達(dá)了作者的自信，彰顯了作者個性，突出了短文主題，語言精煉，符合演講稿的特點(diǎn)?！究键c(diǎn)定位】 考查提綱類作文。3．

Refuse to be phubbers

With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people.Phubbers can be seen here and there.Some family members play with their smart –phones while eating with families instead

答案第1頁，總2頁 本卷由系統(tǒng)自動生成，請仔細(xì)校對后使用，答案僅供參考。

of talking with them.It has effects on the relationship between them.Some people look at their smart-phones while walking even riding or driving.It may increase the danger of causing traffic accidents.Some children want to play with smart-phones before sleeping.It’s bad for their health and their study.In fact, face-to-face conversations are much more conventient and better than chatting on line by phone.Mobile phones are helpful and necessary tools for modern life.But we should make good use of it to be “healthy” users rather than Phubbers.【解析】

試題分析：本文要求按圖表提示，以“Refuse to be phubbers”為題作文。短文重點(diǎn)是兩個方面，一是現(xiàn)象與弊端：揭示現(xiàn)代人用手機(jī)的惡習(xí)及其產(chǎn)生的危害；二是觀點(diǎn)與方式：告訴人們怎樣正確的使用手機(jī)，利用好這個現(xiàn)代的通訊工具。短文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。第三人稱或第一稱形式。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：短文首先結(jié)合現(xiàn)代人使用手機(jī)的現(xiàn)象，說明了人們使用手機(jī)給生活帶來的危害，接著告訴人們怎樣正確地使用好手機(jī)。條理分明，層次清楚。短文包含了提綱的所有信息，語句通順，意思連貫。文中用了while doing，instead of, rather than等等結(jié)構(gòu)，給短文增色不少。

【考點(diǎn)定位】圖畫及提綱類作文。

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18。(四川樂山)從2008年6月1日起，國家將禁止商家免費(fèi)提供塑料袋，掀起全國“拒塑”的環(huán)保運(yùn)動。假如你是李華，準(zhǔn)備以“What Can We Do for the Environment”為題，寫一篇保護(hù)環(huán)境的英語演講稿。

內(nèi)容包含：1.在購物時用布袋子替代塑料袋；2.盡可能地再利用使用過的課本； 3.離開教室應(yīng)關(guān)燈；

4.最好走路或騎自行車上學(xué)；5.簡述理由：保護(hù)環(huán)境，減少污染，節(jié)約能源等 注意：1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；3.文章中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名，否則以零分處理。

3.參考詞匯：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保護(hù)protect能源energy污染pollution課本textbook

What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello,everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!

參考作文：What Can We Do for the Environment

Hello,everyone.I’m Li Hua.It’s nice to speak about what we can do for the environment,and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping.It helps to protect the environment.The second thing we can do is to reuse（重復(fù)利用）the old textbooks as possible as we can.We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy.What’s more（更多的是，經(jīng)典詞組多用?。? it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school.We should try our best reduce pollution and waste.In fact,even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment.I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.Thank you for your listening!