第一篇：2014山東省實驗中學二模書面表達參考

山東省實驗中學2011級第二次模擬試題

第二節(jié) 寫作(滿分30分)

假如你是新華中學的學生李華，你的美國朋友Mike給你的電子郵件中說他已經(jīng)收到了Yale University的錄取通知書(offer)，并表示如有可能，他將學習工程學。請你用英語 給他回復，并包括以下內(nèi)容：

1．表示祝賀；

2．向他介紹你感興趣的大學及專業(yè)，并做出適當解釋；

3．邀請他暑假到你的家鄉(xiāng)游覽。

注：字數(shù)120—150。

Dear Mike,I’m more than happy to hear that you have gained the offer to Yale University, where you are likely to learn your favorite major—engineering.Congratulations!

As for me, I want to study in Beijing University and major in English.First, English is my favorite subject.I can enjoy many beautiful English essays and learn something about English culture.Second, with the development of China, there are more and more foreign companies.As a result, those who major in English are badly needed in China nowadays.Last but not least, English is a universal language, which is of great significance in our daily life.Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past few years.Would you like to come here and experience Chinese culture during the summer vacation? I will show you around some places of interest and help you learn something about local customs.Looking forward to your early reply.Your sincerely,Li Hua

第二篇：2014山東省實驗中學三模書面表達參考

山東省實驗中學2011級第三次模擬試題

第二節(jié) 寫作(滿分30分)

假如你是新華中學的學生李華，學校安排你下周末作為導游代領(lǐng)外籍教師Mr.Smith進行一次近郊游。請你用英語給Mr.Smith寫一封電子郵件，包括以下內(nèi)容：

1、自我介紹

2、出游的時間、目的地等信息

3、需要提前做的準備工作

要求：1.120-150字。

2.可增加細節(jié)。

Dear Mr.Smith,Happy to write to you.First, let me introduce myself.I’m Li Hua, an ordinary student of Xinhua School.To my honor, I was asked to act as a tourist guide for you next weekend.According to the schedule, we’ll have a wonderful trip not far from the school.Since you are new here, it’s necessary for you to become familiar with the surroundings as soon as possible.We can meet at 8 o’clock on the morning of Saturday at the school gate.Remember not to carry too many things.Just a bottle of water, some pieces of bread or other kinds of food, a cap or a pair of sunglasses.Oh, you’d better wear a pair of sports shoes.Look forward to seeing you.I believe we’ll have a good time.Yours,Li Hua

第三篇：2014 濰坊二模書面表達閱卷總結(jié)

濰坊二模書面表達閱卷總結(jié)

要點一：建議他來中國 好詞好句：

1.I subscribe to the view that you can come to China to get a job which is of great benefit to you.2.As far as I’m concerned, it’s a good choice for you to work in China.3.You asked for my advice about whether you come to China for a job or not.It’s my pleasure to give my suggestions as follows.典型錯誤：

1.You said you will come China to find a work.As far as I concerned, work in China is good.My advices are following.2.I suggest you to come to China.要點二：闡述理由 1）就業(yè)機會多 好詞好句：

1.When it comes to working in China ,there is no doubt that you will have many alternatives.2.China is a large country where you won’t find it tough to get a job.典型錯誤：

1.China is easy to find a work.2.There have many works for you to chose.3.The chances to find a job is very large.2）專業(yè)受歡迎 好詞好句：

1,You major in Internet is very popular.2.You have a good command of English ,which will help a lot in finding a job.3.What you are majoring in is popular in China, which will benefit you a lot.典型錯誤：

1.Your knowledge is popular with China.2.You learn English is good.3）不同的文化體驗 好詞好句：

1.In terms of developing yourself, you can experience different cultures ,which contributes to broaden your horizons and enrich your knowledge.2.What is more attractive is that you could enjoy a different culture in China.典型錯誤：

1.You can experienced different culture to rich you knowledge.2.China culture is differ from the England.要點三：承諾可提供幫助 好詞好句：

1.What I’d like to tell you is that I’ll do all I can to help you when you are in trouble.2.Don’t hesitate to turn to me whenever you get into trouble.3.Whenever you have trouble in China ,I will spare no efforts to help you out.典型錯誤：

1.I promised to help you when you need.2.I will can try help you if you have trouble.總體評價 優(yōu)點：多數(shù)作文，要點全，段落結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,讓人一看就明確本段寫得是哪一個要點。缺點：1.部分作文，內(nèi)容看似充實，但很多句子與題目主題沒有太大的聯(lián)系，特別是要點二闡述理由部分，為什么建議Mike來中國？原因就是與在英國工作相比，在中國工作所具有的的優(yōu)勢，而一些同學用大量篇幅描述中國，這使內(nèi)容看似充實； 2.還有一些作文不分段，一段到底，較難辨別要點；

3.個別還用藍色筆、鉛筆，還有用膠帶紙粘的，有用修正帶的，有同一字母來回重復畫的，這直接造成卷面差；

4.大小寫混亂,特別是在單個的副詞或短語之后的單詞首字母大寫。如：Now, You …，In my opinion, It …

分要點評價 要點一

好詞好句：congratulations.Congratulate you on your graduation.The reasons why I advise you to come to China are as follows: 典型錯誤：as far as you/I concerned，I heard about you go to China.I writting you to … 要點二

好詞好句：quantities of

There is no doubt that …

As time goes by, …

What’s more, moreover, furthermore, last but not least…

典型錯誤：at the first

The China is develop quickly.There are many chance/opportunity.You will welcome in China.You could have different culture experience.要點三

好詞好句：in short I would appreciate it if you accept my advice.I will spare no effort to help you.典型錯誤：I sure I will help you.Looking forward your reply.學生優(yōu)秀句子 信開頭

1.I’m writing to give you some suggestions, which I hope might be of some help to you.2.I could express my happiness on hear that you intend to work in China.3.Hearing that you will graduate and decide to seek for a job in China, I feel very delighted.建議部分

1.In my opinion, it’s a good choice to work in China.2.Considering you are good at Chinese, I strongly recommend you to find a job in China.3.You may as well make the best of your qualifications to find a job here.原因部分 1.Not only will you enrich your knowledge but you will also experience a variety of cultures.2.There is no doubt that you have an advantage over others in terms of language and knowledge.3.There being more job opporunities here, you are more likely to find a suitable job.4.In addition, you will also have the chance to make the aquaintance of the Chinese culture.5.There is a wide range of jobs to choose from, so it’s not necessary for you do worry about what to do.幫助祝愿部分

1.If you have difficulty adjusting to the new surroundings, don’t hesitate to turn to me for help.2.I promise that I will offer help whenever necessary 3.I sincerely hope these suggestions will meet with your approval.4.All in all, it is beneficial for you to ry a new lifestyle.5.I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account.6.I can give you a hand whenever and wherever you geit into trouble.高三英語二輪模擬考試作文精彩句式 精彩句式

（一）要點一

1.What puzzled you most is whether you should come to China after your graduation.2.The reason for this is not far to seek.3.The reasons are as follows.4.My suggestion is that you should …

1.As far as I am concerned , It’s a wise decision for you to come to China to find a job.2.Knowing that you’ll gradute soon , I strongly recommend that you should come to China to find a job.(二)要點二

1.With the development of economy, there is no denying that there are a lot of challenges and chances in China, which is of great benefit for you to find a suitable job.1.Compared to England ,China has more opportunity to hunt for a job,which means that you can choose what ever you like.2.It’s what you major in that makes you stand out.(三)要點三

1.Taking all the factors above into consideration, working in China is really a good choice for you..2.Tough as it may be when you come to a foreign country, it is worthwhile to do it..1.I promise to do you a favour when you have difficulty in adapdting to the surroundings.2.Whenever you get into trouble, don’t hesitate to tell me.I will spare no efforts to help you.典型錯誤：

1.suggest 后的賓從沒有用虛擬語氣。

2.advise/advice 詞性分不開，并且advice是不可數(shù)名詞的特點沒有掌握。3.look forward to doing 使用錯誤 4.chances 拼寫錯誤，拼寫成了changes 5.writing 拼寫錯誤 6.major in 使用錯誤

一、問題：

1.詞性不分：different與difference 2.名詞混用：major與majority 3.介詞省略：look forward to的to 4.固定詞組誤用：look forward to doing 用成look forward to do 5.首行未縮進

二、優(yōu)美句子

要點一：1.As far as I am concerned , It’s a wise decision for you to come to China to find a job.2.Knowing that you’ll gradute soon , I strongly recommend that you should come to China to find a job.要點二：1.Compared to England ,China has more opportunity to hunt for a job,which means that you can choose what ever you like.2.It’s what you majir in that makes you stand out.要點三：1.I promise to do you a favour when you have difficulty in adapdting to the surroundings.2.Whenever you get into trouble, don’t hesitate to tell me.I will spare no efforts to help you.二輪閱卷總結(jié)

對于高三二輪的閱卷工作，匯報如下：

一、本次閱卷過程中發(fā)現(xiàn)的閃光點：

在本次閱卷過程中發(fā)現(xiàn)的學生的閃光點和亮點明顯比以往要突出，主要體現(xiàn)在： 1.最突出的讓人感到高興的地方是，學生的書寫相比以往有了極大的提高和改善，讓人賞心悅目的好卷面比比皆是。2.相當一部分學生的書面表達的整體性和邏輯性有了改善和提高，也就是說，一篇文章看上去更像一篇文章了，讓人感覺是一個整體，不再是語言點的羅列或堆砌，而且，行文邏輯更加流暢，部分學生的文章從整體上給人一種渾然天成的感覺。3.學生書面表達中的高級詞匯有了體現(xiàn)，很多學生的文章中應(yīng)用了高級詞匯。4.學生對習語的使用更加熟練。

5.對于各種從句和非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)等復雜語法的運用更加熟練。

二、仍需提高的方面：

1.對詞性的掌握仍然存在著問題，并且這個現(xiàn)象具有普遍性，不僅僅是書面表達得分低的學生有這個現(xiàn)象，即便是得分比較高的同學也存在著這個現(xiàn)象。2.3.4.5.短語搭配尤其是介詞的使用不成熟、不準確。對介詞to與動詞不定時to的辨析不夠熟練。單復數(shù)使用比較隨意。

部分文章中需要個人發(fā)揮的地方存在著兩個極端，要么無從發(fā)揮，要么發(fā)揮太廣太深從而導致詞不達意，甚至是離題。

6.部分同學對題目要求理解不到位，從而導致部分語言點的落漏。7.部分書面表達對時態(tài)、語態(tài)和人稱注意不夠。8.大小寫混亂。

9.有極個別的學生的書面表達不分段。10.有一個學生每一段全都是頂格寫（只遇見了一個，但其書面表達文章寫得不錯）。11.盡管整體上書寫比以往有了很大的提高，但是仍有個別學生的書寫需要大力提高，尤其是部分寫得比較好的同學的書寫。

寫作閱卷中發(fā)現(xiàn)的問題：

1.there be 句型的運用，出現(xiàn)there have sth.的問題以及多個謂語動詞的出現(xiàn)； 2.沒有段落的區(qū)分；

3.時態(tài)語態(tài)的問題，主謂一致的問題；

4.suggest,advise,advice的詞性、用法不清；

5.書寫較之前幾次有了改善，但是卷面涂畫問題仍需強調(diào)并加以改善。

我們學校的試卷和前幾次相比，書寫有了很大提高；學生普遍能用first of all,what’s more,last but not least等來表達層次，但是其他的連詞少得可憐。好詞靚句在學生的作文中幾乎無跡可尋，都是一些樸素無華的詞匯，能用對已是不錯。所以還是借鑒其他學校的吧。

第四篇：博山區(qū)實驗中學高三英語組書面表達

博山區(qū)實驗中學高三英語組書面表達匯編

2006.5.11

1.濟寧市2005—2006學高三第一次摸底考試

隨著時代的發(fā)展，人們彼此間的問候方式發(fā)生了很大變化。請你根據(jù)下面列舉出的三種方式，用英語寫一篇100字左右的短文，以便刊登在某英文報Society專欄。文章開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

1.郵寄賀卡、鮮花

2.發(fā)送電子賀卡

3.打電話或發(fā)手機短信

要求：1.分別說明上述方式及特點。

2.闡明個人喜好，并說明原因。

電子賀卡：e-card

Possible version:

The traditional way is to send greeting cards on festive occasions.It takes a bit longer, but the familiar handwriting itself makes a friend happy.Now, it is more popular to send flowers.Thanks to the Internet, we can send e-cards instead of paper ones.Most of the e-cards are beautifully designed and many have music and cartoons.And they can be sent and received almost the moment you click the button of “send”.Another way is to send mobile phone messages, which, in my opinion, is the most convenient and therefore my favourite way of greeting a friend.2.2006年青島市高三第一次教學質(zhì)量統(tǒng)一檢測英語

假如你是已在青島工作十幾年的外國專家Abbas Kdaimy，2006年春節(jié)到來之際，你給China Daily寫了一封100字左右的英語短信，內(nèi)容如下：

1.在中國的“狗年”到來之際對青島市政府和人民表達你最良好的祝愿；

2.感謝青島市政府和人民十幾年來在工作和生活等方面給你的關(guān)心、幫助和支持。Possible version:

Dear Editor,As Spring Festival is coming, it gives me great pleasure and honour to extend warm Spring Festival greetings and good wishes to the city government and all the citizens.In the year of Dog, I wish all your dreams come true, and your city continues its drive to sustainable development.I’ve lived and worked in your city for decades.I love the beautiful sea coastal city and wonderful people.I also appreciate your help and support to me—both in my work and daily life.I wish your city all the best and hope that your city had a future time of great happiness1

and prosperity for everyone.(106words)

3.假設(shè)你參加“My Future”為題的英語演講會，請按下列要求寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勀愕睦硐搿＃?00詞左右）

1.決心當一名中學教師，這是我兒時的夢想。

2.我認為和孩子打交道是一件快樂而又幸福的事，并非浪費時間。

3.目前我國教師缺編不夠用，其主要原因是教師工作太辛苦，收入不高，想當

教師的人不多，可我決心獻身教育事業(yè)。

Possible version:

We each are thinking about the future.What is mine？I’ve made up my mind to

become a middle school teacher.Does it sound surprising? I began to have this dream when I was only a child.I love children.I don’t think it is a waste time to deal with them all the year around.On the contrary, to me it would mean happiness.As we all can see, teachers are badly needed in our country, but not many of us want to become teachers.The main reason for this is that teachers’ work is too had and they get too little.In spite of that, I’m determined to give all my life to the cause of education.4.有一批要到中國投資的外國企業(yè)家在我國某城市參觀考察。假定你是接待人員，要向外賓們簡要介紹這個城市的概況。請你用英語寫一篇100-120詞的發(fā)言稿，必須包括以下內(nèi)容；

1.這是一座新興的現(xiàn)代化城市，建于20世紀80年代初

2.海、陸、空交通便利，又有一條與首都北京相連的高速公路（freeway）

3.自然資源豐富，電力以及其他能源供應(yīng)充足

4.公共秩序（the public order）良好，政府多方面支持外國投資者（investor）

注意：短文開頭已經(jīng)寫出，不計如總詞數(shù)。

Ladies and Gentlemen,Welcome to our city.Now let me introduce…

Possible version:

Ladies and Gentlemen,Welcome to our city.Now let me introduce our city to you.Our city is a newly-built modern city.It was set up in the early 1980s, but it has been developing rapidly.From here you can travel to anywhere by water, by air or by land.Recently another freeway which is connected with Beijing has started being used.The areas around our city are rich in natural resources.And we have enough supplies of electricity and other forms of energy.The public order is very nice。Besides, the government of our country and our city support foreign investors in many aspects.We expect more and more foreign friends to come and invest in our city.That’s all.Thank you.5.假定你是李明──北京某中學高三學生。你于五月五日收到了居住在新加坡的筆友Mike寄來的一封信。請你仔細閱讀他的來信并寫一封回信。

注意：

1.回信的內(nèi)容必須包括對方想要了解的全部情況；

2.詞數(shù)在100左右；

3.信的開頭語已給出，請接著往下寫。

Dear Li Ming,Glad to hear from you last Friday.From your letter, I've learned a lot about Beijing.Great changes have taken place in Beijing during the past few years.It must be more beautiful than it used to be.I'm expecting to visit Beijing sometime in the near future.Now, I'm eager to know something about your school life, especially about what you usually do after class.I will be much delighted if you can satisfy my request.I'm looking forward to your letter.With best wishes.Yours ever,Mike NelsonDear Mike,I was very glad to________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________

Yours truly,Li MingPossible version：

Dear Mike,I was very glad to receive your letter on May 5th.At your request, I'll tell something about my school life.In senior 3 at school, I have six subjects: Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and P.E.Now, I'm busy preparing for college entrance exams.School hours usually begin at 8:00 a.m.and end at 4:00 p.m.After class, we have sports, such as ball games and so on, or do some reading in the school library.Then I go home.This is my school life.It's spring now in Beijing.It's really very beautiful.Welcome to Beijing, Mike.I'll appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life in your next letter.I'm looking forward to it.With best regards.Yours truly,Li Ming

6.What is a good parent-children relationship?

Possible version：

A good parent-children relationship should be set up on the basis mutual understanding and

respect.Parents can not impose their ideas on their children.They should treat their children as independent individual.It is advisable for the parents to learn to listen to children's ideas and encourage them to think on their own rather than decide everything for the children.On the other hand, children should listen to their parents' advice for they're more experienced.Try to be understanding when there is disagreement with parents.Always keep one thing in min—whatever they do comes from their love for us.It is necessary children to exchange ideas with parents from time to time so that the gap between parents and children will be narrowed.7.閱讀下面兩則短訊，談?wù)勀銓W(wǎng)吧(Internet Bar)現(xiàn)象的看法。（不要把短訊譯成英文）?！?北京市關(guān)閉了許多網(wǎng)吧，但仍有學生周末一早乘車去郊區(qū)上網(wǎng)。

● 遼寧省錦州市6000余名學生舉行集體簽名儀式，保證遠離網(wǎng)吧。

解析：題目要求根據(jù)所提供的兩則短訊，談一談你對網(wǎng)吧的看法，可以從以下三個方面闡明自己的觀點：1．網(wǎng)吧的社會作用。網(wǎng)吧已成為人們了解世界，互通信息的重要窗口。對社會的進步發(fā)展起著重要的作用。

２．網(wǎng)吧存在的問題。網(wǎng)吧也存在很多問題，如：火災(zāi)隱患，黃色網(wǎng)站對青少年造成極壞的影響等。

３．你對中學生泡網(wǎng)吧的看法。要對網(wǎng)吧進行限制；青少年學生要遠離網(wǎng)吧。參考范文：

Internet Bars are popular today, especially among young people, for the net opens large windows to the outside world.But when people spend too much of their time in these bars, there come problems.Some kids are so lost playing games in the bars that they forget the time to go back home, and their health is harmed.To avoid checks by the police, the managers sometimes shut the doors and close many people in the small room.When there is fire or other danger, people can not find way out.I suggest Internet Bars be under strict supervision and young kids be guided to surf the web.Only in this way can Internet Bars be well used by people.8.假如你是李平，到一家外企應(yīng)聘求職。對方要求你用外語寫篇短文，介紹自己的基本情況。短文應(yīng)包括下表所列全部內(nèi)容。詞數(shù)100字左右。

姓名 李平性別 男國籍 中國

出生地 山東淄博出生日期1976.5.10身體狀況 健康家庭住址 和平路18號電話號碼 8111091

畢業(yè)院校 南京大學畢業(yè)日期1998.8

英語熟練程度具有較強的聽、說、讀能力，能寫各種信件計算機水平能熟練操作電腦。

興趣愛好流行歌曲、橋牌、自行車旅行。

One possible version:

I am a healthy Chinese boy named Li Ping.I was born in Zibo, Shandong Province, China on May 10, 1976.My home address is No.8 Heping Road and the telephone number is 8111091.I graduated

from Nanjing University.I've learned English for ten years.Now I'm good at listening, speaking and reading.I can write all kinds of letters.I can use a computer freely, too.I am one of the best students in my class.I am fond of popular songs and bridge and interested in travelling by bike.9.最近，你校同學正在參加一場討論。主題是：中國是否應(yīng)大力發(fā)展小汽車？請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，客觀地介紹這兩種意見。

60%的同學認為

1.應(yīng)大力發(fā)展2.促進國家經(jīng)濟發(fā)展3.增加就業(yè)機會4.提高生活質(zhì)量，方便，省時 40%的同學認為

1.應(yīng)有限制地發(fā)展2.增加城市交通的擁擠，交通事故3.修路占用土地4.空氣和噪音污染 One possible version:

We’ve had a discussion about whether China should make every effort to develop car industry.They believe this will speed up the development of the national economy.More workers will be employed.With cars the people’s life quality will be raised.They will save time and be more convenient in their life and work.On the other hand, 40% of them argue that China should control its car industry development.Otherwise, the city traffic will be even heavier and more traffic accidents will take place.At the same time, more land will be used for the new roads.What’s more air and noise pollution will become more serious.10.根據(jù)下面 中文提示寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文。

俗話說：不勞者，則無獲。(No pains, no gains.)請你根據(jù)生活中親身經(jīng)歷的一件事，說明一切成功都源于不斷的追求和辛勤的勞動。

解讀：定義解釋類寫作在近年的高考試題中有所涉及，2005年上海卷就是很好的例子。定義解釋類寫作通常包括闡述名言警句或?qū)δ硞€比較抽象，容易被誤解的事物或概念進行解釋，以利于他人的行動或取得他人的支持。這類題型通常是論說文。

樣題分析：這是一篇開放式作文，寫作時重點要緊扣“不勞者，則無獲”這一主題，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，從正反兩個方面進行論證，最后得出”艱苦工作，不斷進取，才是成功的法寶“這一結(jié)論。

寫作步驟：

第一步：先給出要解釋這一主題或名言，詮釋起最通俗的意義，使隱含意義具體化，明朗化。第二步：引用事例進行闡述。所舉事例要有說服力，能充分說明主題，做到“有血有肉“。第三步：概括總結(jié)。對文章所討論的問題提出建設(shè)性意見，從高，更新的角度提出問題的重要性和深遠意義。

No Pains, No gains

An old saying “No Pains, No gains.” reminds us that if people want to be successful and outstanding, they must make their own efforts to overcome all the possible difficulties.For example, the Chinese athletes’ excellent performance in 2004 Olympic Games in Athens is definitely the result of their hard training.If they didn’t work hard, even those with the best talents,can’t compare with others and win the championship in games.Another case in point is my own learning experience.I was not good at English when I started learning it.Sometimes the result of the exam was so dissatisfactory that I almost gave up.It was the old saying: “No Pains, No gains.” that brought back my confidence.Since then, I took every chance to practise my English.Now I have made great progress and English became my favourite subject.

第五篇：書面表達

中考英語書面表達的考點集匯、講解和訓練

【考點掃描】

書面表達是每年中考必考題型，是考查學生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。書面表達通常有三種形式：

1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；

2、看圖作文；

3、根據(jù)漢語提示作文。

無論是那一種書面表達形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準確、得當、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標點符號正確，能達到交際目的?！久麕熃怆y】 一.訓練方法

1.記。認真系統(tǒng)復習和背誦基礎(chǔ)知識和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應(yīng)該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習慣，相當一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學們?nèi)粲写罅康默F(xiàn)成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。

2.練。每練一篇書面表達題，都要真正學到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學邊忘。平時可以采用循序漸進、靈活多樣的練習方式。從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據(jù)表格或記錄寫短文等。

3.寫。要進行實戰(zhàn)寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內(nèi)寫出100個詞的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、1 內(nèi)容全、形式正確。這樣形成習慣，考試時就能得心應(yīng)手。二.應(yīng)試策略

1.審題目：要切中題意。《中考考試說明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。

2.圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。

3.列提綱：為寫作做好準備。根據(jù)文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。

4.定基調(diào)：定出時態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：

(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復和呆板。

(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型?？蛇m當多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1）語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準確無誤。

2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5）注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法： 1）表示并列關(guān)系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示時間關(guān)系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果關(guān)系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as… 7）表示總結(jié)性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不會表達，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準確越好，造復合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡?？傊?，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習慣。(6)改病句：認真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準確性、上下 3 文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手： 1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。5）標點錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。三.注意事項

書面表達要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)?！局锌挤独?/p>

VII.書面表達（共1題，計10分）

假如你叫張強。請根據(jù)下面美國朋友Bob的來信內(nèi)容，結(jié)合你自己的情況寫一篇語言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。

要求：1.認真閱讀來信的內(nèi)容，從中獲得你需要的信息。2.詞數(shù)：80左右。回信的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。注意：回信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實地址和所在學校的名稱。

Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs

After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根據(jù)前面提到第六個步驟，我們來寫一下這篇書面表達。

1.審題目：通過審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達應(yīng)是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強，收信人是Bob，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)是介紹張強自己的情況。

2.圈要點：根據(jù)來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點：

1、收到對方的來信；

2、愿意和對方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；

4、自己的身份、特長和愛好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提綱：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基調(diào)：1.時態(tài)：收到來信用一般過去時，介紹情況用一般現(xiàn)在時，希望用一般將來時。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來寫。4.開頭和結(jié)尾題目已經(jīng)給出。

5、寫全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang 6

6、改病句：認真復查一邊，如有錯誤，加以改正?！緷M分演練】

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華山是中國名山之一。假設(shè)外國友人到你校參觀后，準備去旅游。請根據(jù)以下要點向外國友人簡單介紹華山（the Hua Mountain）

1．位于陜西東部，是中國著名的旅游勝地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游觀光。2．乘汽車去大約要花1個小時；也可以乘火車去。

3．登山便可領(lǐng)略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀麗的風景及清晨美麗的日出。注意：

1．字數(shù)：80詞左右。2．請不要逐字翻譯。（2）根據(jù)提示和要求完成下面短文

假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令營認識的一個朋友Jim從英國給你寄來一件禮物—— 一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問好，他想知道你近來在忙些什么。請你給他寫一封回信（100個詞左右）表示感謝?；匦乓ㄒ韵聝?nèi)容： 1.向Jim問好并對他表示感謝。

2.禮物是你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。

3.告訴Jim你近來很好，上周剛過完生日，生日聚會很熱鬧。詢問Jim的近況，并表示希望他能來中國。

注意1.信的格式已經(jīng)給出。

2.信中不得使用真實的人名、地名。（3）

根據(jù)中文意思和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給英文提示詞語必須都用上，中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐句翻譯，每組英文提示所寫出的句數(shù)不限。

今天是6月23日星期日，天氣晴朗。你和你的同學張宏參觀了西安市動物園。那里的動物十分有趣，人見人愛。當你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物時，就上前阻止并說……

請你用英文寫一篇日記，記述今天的經(jīng)歷。（請注意日記格式）1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．a(chǎn)nimal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say（4）

根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。注意1.字數(shù)60~80。

2.所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當發(fā)揮）3.發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

假設(shè)你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營活動。請你準備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）

根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示詞語寫一篇短文。

今年暑假，有一批美國中學生要來你們學校訪問。請你寫一篇有關(guān)西安的簡介，以便和他們交流。

注意：1.字數(shù)100左右；

2.必須使用所給英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9（6）看圖寫話。

根據(jù)以上四幅圖和提示詞語，寫出一篇語法正確、意思連貫、語句通順、符合邏輯的短文，開頭已給出。要求：1.敘述要用第三人稱。2.詞數(shù)60~80個左右。3.要表達自己的看法或想法。

4.選用下列詞語：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（7）

請你參考圖文提示，寫一篇60~80詞的短文。注意：1.語言規(guī)范，語意完整，內(nèi)容豐富。2.表達符合圖意，書寫規(guī)范。3.給出自己的觀點。4.文章的開頭已給出。

參考詞：pollute, turn off the tap(水龍頭)，dry, save(節(jié)約 vt.), water resources(水資源)From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（8）

請根據(jù)下面四幅圖，寫一篇70個單詞左右的短文。文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不算入總詞匯數(shù)內(nèi)。

參考詞匯： on fire 著火firefighter n.消防員put out 滅火

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...”

__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________（9）看圖寫話。

要求：1.根據(jù)圖畫所提供的語境，寫出意思連貫、語言流暢、語法準確、符合邏輯的短文。2.至少使用兩種時態(tài)，70詞以上。不得使用真實姓名、地名、學校名。

3.標題和第一句已給出，但不計入70詞之內(nèi)。

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（10）

根據(jù)所給圖畫用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。

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假如你所在的學校要出一期英語壁報。你準備就自己經(jīng)歷的一件事寫一篇英語短文向壁報投稿。下面五幅圖記錄了你上個星期六與老師和同學到南河邊參加植樹活動的全過程。請你就以下五幅圖寫一篇英文短文。

注意：1.短文內(nèi)容要包括所有圖畫中的主要內(nèi)容 2.詞數(shù)：70～90

3.生詞提示： 桶bucket鋤頭hoe

________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________（12）

請按照下面6幅圖和表格的提示，寫一篇題為“Changes in Our Hometown”的英語短文。（詞數(shù)：50~80，不包括已經(jīng)給出的單詞）

內(nèi)容要點：

過去 現(xiàn)在 舊房 高樓 河水污濁 河水清澈 步行、騎自行車 乘公交車、小汽車 Changes in Our Hometown

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【練習答案】

(1)參考答案：

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit.(2)參考答案：

Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：

How are you? Many thanks for the shirt!I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!You remembered!It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you.I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your friend, Li Lei

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Sunday June 23rd

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”

(4)參考答案： Dear friends，I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening.(5)參考答案：

Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.(6)參考答案：

Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules.17(7)參考答案：

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)參考答案：

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow!He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour(to)fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9)參考答案：

TAKING CARE OF TREES

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found

that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”

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Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street.Suddenly a car passed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street.The old woman thanked us very much.（11）參考答案： 內(nèi)容要點：

（1）上星期五老師告訴我們“明天去南河邊植樹”。（2）上星期六（第二天）早上六點半我就起床了。（3）我?guī)е叭W校，同學們帶著桶、鋤頭在校門口等待。（4）到南河邊，我們開始植樹。（也可描寫動場面。）（5）看著新種下的樹，我們都很高興。

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)

After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank.（12）參考答案：

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶幾邊，我認出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一個才是媽媽的杯子呢？突然之間，我覺得，自己真得太不了解父母了。當媽媽為我倒水時，我卻不知她的杯子是什么樣的；當媽媽為我夾我喜歡吃的菜時，我卻沒想過他們是愛吃淡一點，還是濃一點。。。2009年到了，意味著過去一年的逝去和新的一年的到來。媽媽為我操勞了一整年，仔細想想，現(xiàn)在的我也應(yīng)該為她做一點點事了。

于是，我決定先將茶沏好再找杯子。學著爸爸平時沏茶的順序，我先從茶柜 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往燒水的壺里加入水放在電茶爐上燒，接著，我將爸爸已經(jīng)掰好的普洱茶片拿了兩片放在蓋碗里，等了一會，水開了，我小心地將水注入蓋碗，將蓋蓋上，把蓋碗里第一遍的茶水濾掉，然后再次注水，蓋上蓋，燜一會才兩手并用地將茶水倒入茶海里，因為第一次自己動手，蓋碗的燙手是我所沒想到的，手忙腳亂的我弄得茶幾上一片片的水漬。重復幾次這樣的程序后，我先幫外婆倒了一杯茶，因為外婆特別喜歡喝茶。當外婆從廚房走出來的時候我已經(jīng)把茶都給倒好了，這時，外婆才告訴我哪一個是媽媽的杯子。

媽媽起床了，我雙手捧著水杯送到她的面前，就像捧著一顆溫熱的心。媽媽一愣，隨即臉上露出了微笑，她一手接過水杯，伸出另一只手將我拉進了她的懷里，那手輕輕柔柔地在我的頭上撫摸著，接著媽媽在我的臉上深深地親了一口。雖然媽媽經(jīng)常親我，但這一刻的親吻卻最讓我感到幸福。我抬起頭對媽媽說：“媽媽快喝吧，要不茶要涼了?！眿寢屟銎鹆瞬弊?，張著嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了幾大口?？此翘鹈勖鄣臉幼樱路鹞⒖嗟钠斩枰彩敲垡话闾?。

我記得在我小學的時侯，就讀過一首曹值的七步詩：“煮豆持作梗，轆轂以為汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那時只知其大意，只知道曹操的長子曹丕繼位，他在一些奸臣的影響下，擔心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之內(nèi)作出一首詩來，否則處死；結(jié)果他的弟弟就在七步之內(nèi)寫出了流傳至今的“七步詩”。當時這首詩對曹丕也是一種極大的潮諷。

幾個世紀過去了，社會和生活都發(fā)生了極大的變化；應(yīng)該說人的素質(zhì)也應(yīng)有所提高；一個人生活在世上，是離不開親情、友情和愛情的；有人說：打架親兄弟，上陣父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的團結(jié)并不是真對與他人打架斗毆，在生活上，21 事業(yè)上應(yīng)是不可或缺的照應(yīng)；俗話說“一根筷子容易斷，十雙筷子斷就難”；可見，團結(jié)是一種力量，只有團結(jié)才有攻不破的堡壘。

然而，就在生活優(yōu)越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因為一點小事，一點利益而你爭我斗，反目成仇，甚而相殘；我和我的朋友在聊天時有時聊及這個問題，有人這樣評論：一個人生活在世上，如果不顧親情，對兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顧，那他在這個社會上和任何人都不要談“情”字，特別是友情。

樹大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是難免發(fā)生的，但要看你怎樣去對待，把金錢和利益看的太重，那麼，你就會值親情于不顧；看淡名利，注重親情才是做人的底線；爭則不足，讓則有余，在利益和金錢面前，我們何不禮讓一點，做一個有道德、有素質(zhì)、有親情的人呢？

家和萬事興，團結(jié)是一種力量，讓我們團結(jié)友愛，和睦共處，為個人的事業(yè)、為家庭的生活、為國家的興盛而看重親情、友情、愛情；把金錢和利益看淡一些吧！人過留名，雁去留聲，希望在幾十年之后，當你離開這個世界的時侯，留給后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。

今天是她父親的生日,她要回家和父親一起過生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父親已經(jīng)六十多歲了,為了子女的成長與幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.話說過來,人一輩子真的很不容易.人年老時非常希望能夠和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一個電話甚至一個短信,父母也已經(jīng)很知足了.我由于長期在外,很想念爸爸媽媽.想起過去,心里真的很辛酸,父母親為了我們的成長真的付出了很多,然而他們現(xiàn)在又生活得怎么樣呢?想起過去的一幕一幕,我心里很難受!我很希望做做子女的我們,踏踏實實地做好每一件事情,不讓父母擔憂,這是最基本的我們應(yīng)當做的事情.22 談到這里我不由自主地想起一部電影《我的兄弟姐妹》,這是一部關(guān)于親情的影片,暫且不管故事的真實性,主要考究它的內(nèi)涵.主人公齊思甜和哥哥齊憶苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齊天生活在一個不富裕卻充滿溫馨和愛的家。然而在一個暴風雪的夜晚，他們的母親舊病復發(fā)，咳得吐血了。父親背她去醫(yī)院，卻出了意外，他們倆都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬進了四個孩子的家。性格剛強的哥哥無法忍受這個新家庭的種種，無奈地帶著弟弟妹妹離開了家。他們開始四處奔波，尋找落腳之處。當實在沒有能力照顧弟弟妹妹的時候，他把妹妹齊思甜送給一對正要出國的夫婦；把弟弟送給他的舅媽一家；又把小妹妹帶到一對老人家中請他們收養(yǎng)。他自己和弟弟妹妹們便各奔東西……20年后，齊憶苦在北京當上了出租車司機；齊思甜出國受到良好的教育，成了音樂家；齊天成為東北大學學生；齊妙卻當上了舞廳小姐。在北京的音樂會上，思甜驀然回首的瞬間，音樂霎時凝固了。他們四人擁抱在一起，淚水順著另一支悠揚的樂曲落下，聽眾的掌聲久久不息……終于，他們有了一次永久的重逢。

齊思甜的父親是一個音樂教師，他們一家人都生活在音樂的天堂里，這也為后來思甜成為音樂家打好了基礎(chǔ)。父親說：“人生路上有許多困難的事情，只要有音樂在，你的靈魂便不再寂寞?！边@位父親是偉大的，他樂觀開朗，以身作則。盡管他和藹可親，但同時又是一個嚴厲的父親。有一回，齊憶苦偷鄰居家的雞蛋，是為了滿足妹妹小小的心愿。而他卻因此挨了父親的鞭子，還罰他站在雪地里很久。在父親被分配到別的地方邊勞動邊教音樂時，他對這“莫須有的罪名”并沒有悲憤倒下，而是瞞著家人當搬運工挨家挨戶送木材，還干各種各樣的粗活。他也沒有一絲怨言，還對孩子說：“我沒事?！倍碌暮⒆觽円材闷鹆斯ぞ撸瑤透赣H干活。他哼著小調(diào)，陽光幸福地灑在他們臉上。

可見,這位父親是多么偉大，他以他的行動告訴了孩子們音樂的重要性及如何面對生活的苦難。

那么，又是一種什么樣的力量，使后來的四個孩子重逢，使他們歡聚，使他們接受心靈的洗禮？

毋庸置疑，是親情。

寒冷的冬天，四個孩子依偎在車站。他們在為下一餐飯而擔心著?！案?，我餓?！?、“哥，我冷?！?、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹們的話刺痛了哥哥。他說：“只要我還有一口氣，就不讓你們受委屈?！笔聦嵣纤策@么做了。如果不是親情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘記，那一晚，父母臨走時對他的囑咐：“你是哥哥，要照顧好弟弟妹妹?！?/p>

生活改變了許多人和事，也改變了他們。但是，親情是始終不渝的。最小的妹妹齊妙長大后竟成了舞廳小姐！她離開原來的家后，養(yǎng)父母去世得早，加上無人看管，就開始墮落下去了。她在20年后與齊思甜相遇時，大言不慚地對她說她滿足于當前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回憶起以前的一點一滴，又不免傷感和懊悔。她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己對不起所有愛她的人，她的良心受到了譴責。于是，親情的歸來使她的精神方面的巨人復活了！她的靈魂才得以解放。

親情給人以新生，親情又猶如一支鎮(zhèn)心劑。

親情是心中的太陽，照耀著我們；親情是溫柔的春風，撫摸著我們；親情如綿綿的春雨，滋潤著我們。

親情是雪，晶瑩剔透；親情也可以是雷，驚天撼地。

親情可以是燈，溫暖柔和；親情也可以是微弱的燭光，不亮卻很輝煌。不管怎么說，親情一定是無價的寶藏。

沒有了親情，世界變得荒蕪、凄涼；沒有了親情，生命則無法繁衍后代；沒有了親情，生活就單調(diào)枯燥；沒有了親情，人間也成了地獄。

親情是溝通兩代之間思想交流的橋梁，是一條連結(jié)兩顆心的紐帶。“兄弟姐妹原是天上掉下的水花，誰也不認得誰。但落在地下后，結(jié)成一體，結(jié)成冰，化成水，就永遠也分不開了?！?/p>

“臨行密密封，意恐遲遲歸”，是親情。“我在這頭，母親在那頭”，也是親情。

無價的親情呵，愿我們在你的鼓舞下，駛向美好燦爛的明天。關(guān)于親情的影片..我看這部影片時,心情很沉重,流淚了.我想,不論一個人的出身是多么卑微,只要我們能夠記住親情的鼓舞與期待,只要我們我們?nèi)タ炭嗯?只要我們在心理上能夠戰(zhàn)勝自己,那么我們就是生活的強者!