第一篇：六級作文訓練(四)

Self-Protection Awareness

培養(yǎng)自我保護意識

Recently, a large number of affairs about sexual assault were disclosed and reported by mass media.As far as I am concerned, people should get some enlightenment from these affairs, such as enhancing and strengthening education in self-protection awareness, especially for children and students.最近，有很多關(guān)于性侵的事件媒體揭露和報道。我認為人們應該從這些事件中得到一些啟示，比如，提高和加強自我保護意識教育，特別是對于兒童和學生。

Children and students are hurt most in this kind of affairs.As a result, to enhance and strengthen their self-protection awareness is indispensable.In addition, to strengthen the awareness of defending danger is also important.If they can realize the potential danger from someone or something before it happens, they can make some preparations to avoid the danger and reduce the rate of being hurt.因這類事件傷害最大的是兒童和學生。因此，提高和加強自我保護意識是必須的。此外，加強防范危險的意識也是很重要的。如果他們能在事情發(fā)生前意識到某人或某事的潛在危險，他們就可以做一些準備來以避免和減少受傷率。

Therefore, I advocate that parents should help their children develop self-protection awareness from birth, such as designing some situation for them to cope with.In addition, parents should teach their children to recognize the danger and how to avoid and reduce the danger from outside.Besides, children also need to develop an excellent ability of observation.因此，我認為父母應該幫助他們的孩子從出生開始就培養(yǎng)自我保護意識，比如，設(shè)計一些情況來讓他們應付。父母還應該教導孩子認識危險，如何避免和減少來自外界的危險。此外，孩子也需要培養(yǎng)優(yōu)秀的觀察能力。

In a word, to protect children needs both the effort of parents and children

themselves.總之，保護兒童需要家長和孩子他們自己的努力。

第二篇：六級作文訓練(十七)

在家辦公

Working from Home

Certain companies, especially some small-scale businesses, start to encourage their staff to work from home or use home as their working base for at least part of the week nowadays.Some offer some forms of remote working support to their work-forces, such as equipping them with laptops and installing broadband, and others pay for the telephone bills for these workers.一些公司，特別是一些小型企業(yè)，開始鼓勵他們的員工在家工作，或使用家庭為他們的工作基礎(chǔ)，至少部分的周現(xiàn)在。有些提供遠程工作的支持某種形式的工作力量，如配備筆記本電腦和安裝寬帶，和其他人為這些工人付電話費。

This work pattern is popular because it’s clear that there are a number of benefits for these companies.First, it helps retain employees, especially highly-qualified working parents with childcare responsibilities.Second, it brings higher productivity because the employees have fewer interruptions and less commuting time.Last but not least it offers savings on premises and other facilities.這種工作模式的流行是因為它很清楚，有許多這些公司的好處。首先，它有助于留住員工，特別是高度合格的工作的父母與孩子的責任。第二，它帶來了更高的生產(chǎn)率，因為員工更少的中斷和減少通勤時間。最后但并非最不重要的研究提供了前提和其他設(shè)施的儲蓄。

However, there are some potential drawbacks.For one thing, there is difficulty of managing home workers and monitoring their performance and difficulty of maintaining staff development and upgrading skills.For another, it may create a sense of isolation among home workers and it can be harder to maintain team spirit.Therefore, enterprises should weigh the pros and cons before permitting their employees to work at home.然而，也有一些潛在的缺陷。一方面，有管理家庭工人和監(jiān)測其性能和維護困難員工的發(fā)展和技術(shù)升級的困難。另一方面，它可以創(chuàng)造一種在家工作者分離可能會很難保持團隊精神。因此，企業(yè)應權(quán)衡利弊之前允許員工在家工作。

第三篇：四、六級作文心得

四、六級作文心得

慎用套詞！現(xiàn)在很多老師都建議學生在臨考前背一些范文、重點句式，幾乎所有的作文參考書上也羅列了一大堆此類范文、重點句式。在應試作文中，這些句式“放之四海而皆準”，曾經(jīng)讓無數(shù)考生從中嘗到了甜頭。但是請大家注意了，時光已經(jīng)走到了公元2004年，閱卷老師的觀念也正在“與時俱進”。現(xiàn)在那些閱卷老師普遍對那些套詞恨之入骨。這也不奇怪，雖然有的句子很好，但是如果用的人多了，也就失去了新鮮，甚至會遭到反感。如果一篇圖表或圖畫作文，一上來就是：“Simple as the picture(table/photo/cartoon/drawing/)is，the symbolic meaning it conveys is deep and profound?！焙芎玫木渥?，不知是哪位傳授的，但其影響之大，受眾之廣，讓閱卷老師始料不及。閱卷老師一看就知道是套詞，所有的看圖作文都能用，于是就當考生沒寫這句話。再看到這句話，開始反感，覺得考生水平不高，就會用別人的話，反而會留下不好的印象，自然不會給高分；換了份卷子，怎么還是這句話？！直接就給你打入冷宮。這也不奇怪，就算是滿漢全席也有吃厭的時候，更何況一個十分鐘能見八回的句子？這樣出彩的句子尚且如此，更別提那些俗上加俗、倒人胃口的套詞了：how interesting the picture is！As can be seen from the picture等等。最讓人深惡痛絕的一句是as far as I am concerned…撇開其用法不確切不說，你讀一下，算算用了幾秒？[a：] [e:] 都是長音，老師在一個段落上不會耗費超過3秒的時間，你想讓他看些什么呢？如果你覺得I think 太俗，可以選些不太常用但是語法上毫無錯誤的表達方法來發(fā)表觀點。如：I`m convinced that，I strongly believe that，總之，既然你想發(fā)表觀點，就直接說明，讓老師盡快了解，讓他1秒鐘之內(nèi)就能判斷出你沒有跑題就是最成功之處！切記：慎用套詞！

長度適中！要求150字左右(四級120字)，不要寫太短，免得字數(shù)不夠，降兩檔處理。我估計字數(shù)大家都不會成問題，我在這里要強調(diào)的是：字數(shù)可千萬別寫太多了。要知道，應試作文，按照要求去做是最實惠的，人家要求150字，你為什么偏要奔著200去呢？記?。簩懙迷蕉啵e的必然也就越多！老師閱卷的過程，不就是一個給你作文挑錯的過程么？既然如此，何必自討苦吃呢？

第四篇：四、六級寫作精華

關(guān)于四級寫作

2009年9月13日

評分標準：

? 2分-條理不清，思路紊亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子有錯，且多數(shù)為嚴重錯誤； ? 5分-基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴重語言錯誤； ? 8分-基本切題。有些地方表達不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫。語言錯誤較多，其中有少量的嚴重錯誤。? 11分-切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但是少量語言錯誤。? 14分-切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯誤。

注：英語作文一般不少于三段，分開頭部分，擴展部分，結(jié)尾部分。

開頭部分

按作文題目的不同大約可以分為六種：一般性作文（或要性作文），正反作文，引經(jīng)據(jù)典式作文（或名人名言作文）,題目為疑問句的作文，圖表作文，應用文。

第一種：一般性作文（或要性作文）格式：引子（引出主題）+謙語+論點+啟下

以Reading widely為例

引子：Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the _______(especially on __________),which is ___________.例如：Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.謙語;as far as I know, as far as I am concerned,in my opinion,from my viewpoint

論點：________have positive effects on___*__, 例如：reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, 啟下：以上*號處,which results from the reansons as follows.從而可得整篇開頭如下：

Reading widely

Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.from my viewpoint

reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, which results from the reansons as follows.注意:以后在各種問題中，引子，謙語，啟下，都不變。

第二種：正反作文

格式：引子（引出主題）+謙語+觀點+啟下

以Private car為例

引子:As an old ssaying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.謙語: from my viewpoint 1 private car have both advantage and 觀點:○shortcoming on our daily life, private car have both positive and ○negative effects on our daily life，啟下: which results from the reansons as follows.從而可得整篇開頭如下：

Private car As an old ssaying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.from my viewpoint, private car have both positive and negative effects on our daily life, which results from the reansons as follows.第三種：引經(jīng)據(jù)典式作文（或名人名言作文）格式：引子+It means+解釋（轉(zhuǎn)述）+啟下

以No pains,no gains為例

引子：No pains,no gains(抄題)，which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.解釋：It means your success,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , 啟下：which results from the reansons as follows.從而可得整篇開頭如下：

No pains,no gains No pains,no gains，which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.It means your success,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , which results from the reansons as follows.第四種：題目為疑問句的作文

可分為一般疑問句，選擇疑問句，特殊疑問句 一

題目為一般疑問句 ○格式：引子+抄題+簡短回答+謙詞+轉(zhuǎn)述（立論）+啟下

簡短回答：of course+主語+助動詞 Of course not It all depends 以Should students be abroad studying at the

younger age ?為例

Nowadays,there exists an increasing heated discussion in matters of middle school students’ studying abroad.Then should they be abroad studying at the younger age ? It all depends.From my viewpoint,studying abroad for middle school students has both positive and negtaive effects on their future,which results from the reasons as follows.二 題目為選擇疑問句 ○格式:引子+抄題(一定要補全)+簡短回答+謙語+轉(zhuǎn)述+啟下

簡短回答：I prefer to former to later

或It all denpends

以Reading selectively or widely ?為例 Nowadays,there existsan increasingly heated discussion in matters of the content of reading,especially for college students.Then should we read reading selectively or widely ? I prefer to latter.From my viewpiont,reading widely serves as an indispensable part to our study,which results from the reasons as follows.三 題目為特殊疑問句 ○格式：引子（傳統(tǒng)）+抄題+回答（立論）+啟下

以What could we do for the 2008 olympics?為例

Nowadays,2008 olympic games to be held in Beijing has become a hot topic among the Chinese home and abroad.Then as a college student,what could we do for her ? From my viewpoint,doing what we could from slight detail is of great importance, which results from the reasons as follows.第五種:圖表作文

格式:引子+現(xiàn)象結(jié)論+描圖+論點

引子：An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,*******************.現(xiàn)象結(jié)論：*號處?？捎迷~changed dramatically.描圖：對圖表進行整體大致描述。例如：圖表略。

{An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,}引子。{the number of computers owned by every 1000 people has changed dramatically in the past 20 years.}`現(xiàn)象結(jié)論。{In 1987,only 3%。of the people can work or play on computers ；While the number soared to 80% in 2007.}描圖。{From my viewpoint,computers are being more and more widely used in our daily work and life.}論點。

第六種：應用文

應用文包括感謝信，投訴信，求職信 開頭：I’m writing the letter to: 1 apply for position in your company.○2 1.complain ○about the bad quality of the goods I bought the other day.2.complain about the bad service I received.3 express my heart-felt gratitude to sb ○for sth.擴展部分

一般性作文都可用以下格式： first and foremost,………

○2 what is more,………

○3the last but not the least important,………

○對于兩面作文：on the one hand ……… On the other hand………

結(jié)尾部分

結(jié)尾的寫法大致可以分為四種：印證主題式，呼吁社 會式，正反對照式，名人名言式?？梢愿鶕?jù)自己的題 材選擇適當?shù)慕Y(jié)尾方式。第一種：印證主題式

格式：After pondering this issue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that_______________.以part-time jobs為例

After pondering this issue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that part-time jobs for college students have both positive and negative effects on their study and future.Inconsequence,we should have a correct attitude to when confronted with it.第二種：呼吁社會式

格式: In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________.Only in this way ,we can _________in the future.以Private car為例

In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of private car.Only in this way ,we can enjoy life in the future.第三種：正反對照式

格式：In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we _______________,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.以Private car為例

In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we want to have a private car,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.第四種：名人名言式結(jié)尾

格式：Whatever you do,please remember the saying____________.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.以No pains no gains為例

Whatever you do,please remember the saying no pains no gains.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.

第五篇：如何攻克四、六級

如何突破四、六級

有些大學四六級通關(guān)率特別低，下面我就自己通過四六級的一些復習策略與大家分享一下。

一、聽力

聽力占有很大的分值，因此我們需要好好攻克此部分。平時，我們可以看一些美國大片，學習他們的的發(fā)音。在看電影時我們需要反復看同一部電影，直到不用看字幕就能聽懂為止。若要在短時間內(nèi)攻克部分，我們需要采取以下措施:做歷年真題，第一遍僅僅是做出選項；第二遍邊聽邊寫，需要反復聽，直到把句子寫出來為止；第三遍：將自己陌生的詞匯、習語記錄下來；第四遍：重新做一遍題。需要提醒的是，將自己記錄下來的哪些詞匯、習語要經(jīng)常翻看，直到牢記在心。

二：閱讀

平時我們可以擴大自己的閱讀，剛開始可以看一些簡單的英文雜志，到后面可以涉獵一些較難的英文書籍。若要短時間突破四六級，需要狠下功夫，采取以下措施：做歷年真題，同樣第一遍僅僅需要在限定時間內(nèi)做完題目；第二遍查看自己出錯的原因；第三遍閱讀整篇文章，弄懂生詞，且把出現(xiàn)頻率高的詞匯做一記錄；第四遍掌握文章中的難一點的句子結(jié)構(gòu);第五遍：要是文章比較優(yōu)美，可以花費一定時間背誦下來。

三：作文

平時一定要練習寫作，最好養(yǎng)成每天寫一篇英文作文的習慣。多背一些好的文章，好的句子，這樣寫起來會得心應手。遇到寫作，先不急于下筆，構(gòu)思一下文章的大體輪廓，再下筆。寫作的時候需要條理清晰，字跡整齊，卷面干凈。

四：新題型

談談做新題型的技巧：先看題目，找出每個題目中的關(guān)鍵詞1-3個，一般是名詞；然后快速瀏覽文章，若一段中有3個詞與關(guān)鍵詞相同，那么那句的對應段落就是該段。

五：翻譯

翻譯最重要的我感覺是整個段落的聯(lián)絡(luò)性和恰當?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)，要把握好這兩點。