第一篇：六級(jí)作文之應(yīng)用文

應(yīng)用文：

Dear Sir/Madame,I am a sophomore in Shanghai University, majoring in computer software.In the previous one and a half years I have been a model student and monitor of my class.However, since I registered here, the expenses have become a burden for my average family.You know, my parents are both laid－off workers, and, to make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.It will be beyond their ability to finance me through my remaining education.It is now a must for me to help relieve their financial pressure.So I’m applying to your bank for a loan of 10,000 yuan.If my application is approved, all the money will go to my tuition and fees for the coming academic years.I’ve made a detailed plan to arrange my school life.A part-time job as a family tutor will not be difficult to find and some work-study programs for students like me are also provided in our university.From these sources I will be able to earn more than enough to support myself.I guarantee that I will repay the loan within five years, that is, within two years after my graduation.Please have confidence in me: I have a very good credit record.I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted.Many thanks.Yours sincerely,Li Ming

第二篇：六級(jí)作文之現(xiàn)象解釋型

六級(jí)作文范文之現(xiàn)象解釋型

On students’ selection their lecturers

1)有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課教師

2)學(xué)生選擇教師時(shí)所考慮的主要因素

3)學(xué)生自選任課教師的益處和可能產(chǎn)生的問(wèn)題

分析：提綱(1)指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱(2)要求說(shuō)明決定該現(xiàn)象的因素，提綱(3)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象帶來(lái)的益處和可能產(chǎn)生的影響，本文應(yīng)為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文，重點(diǎn)在于對(duì)現(xiàn)象原因和影響的分析，可用側(cè)重解釋原因的解題思路。

On students’ selection their lecturers

Nowadays, many universities entitle their students to freely choose teachers for courses.This policy is welcomed by most students.In addition, teachers have also paid much attention to it since it concerns about their future career.There are many different factors contributing to the students’ choices of lectures.(描述現(xiàn)象段)

Among all these factors, a teacher’s professional knowledge plays a very important role.That is a pre-condition of being chosen, since many students choose to follow the good teachers to acquire knowledge.Moreover, quite a few students think teaching methods and skills are essential.Besides, a teacher’s sense of humor is also an important factor that many students consider.(說(shuō)明因素段)

In my opinion, free choosing of teachers has its advantages as well as disadvantages.On the one hand, it motivates a teacher to prove his ability, and give students more initiative in learning.On the other hand, since it is a free choice, the limited number of excellent teachers will become the focus of most students, which will lead to troubles in class arrangement.To conclude, both students and teachers should take this matter into serious consideration.(說(shuō)明影響段)

第三篇：六級(jí)作文句型之精彩開(kāi)頭集錦

一、引出開(kāi)頭六級(jí)作文句型 1：It is well-known to us that

…

…

（我們

都

知道……）=As far as my knowledge is concerned, …（就我所知…）2：Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus.=Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……（最近……問(wèn)題引起了關(guān)注）3：Nowadays（overpopulation）has become a problem we have to face.（現(xiàn)今，人口過(guò)剩已成為我們不得不面對(duì)的問(wèn)題）

4：Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.（互聯(lián)網(wǎng)已在我們的生活扮演著越來(lái)越重要的角色，它給我們帶來(lái)了許多好處但也產(chǎn)生了一些嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題）

5：With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that……（隨著科技的迅速發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的人認(rèn)為……）

6：It is common belief that……=It is commonly believed that……

（人們一般認(rèn)為……）

7：A lot of people seem to think that……（很多人似乎認(rèn)為……）

8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子（全世界都知道...）

二、表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)六級(jí)作文句型 1：People's views on……vary from person to person.Some hold that…… However, others believe that……（人們對(duì)……的觀點(diǎn)因人而異，有些人認(rèn)為……

然而其他人卻認(rèn)為……）

2：People may have different opinions on……（人們對(duì)……可能會(huì)持有不同見(jiàn)解）

3：Attitudes towards（drugs）vary from person to person.=Different people hold different attitudes towards（failure）（人們對(duì)待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異）

4: There are different opinions among people as to……（對(duì)于……人們的觀點(diǎn)大不相同）

三、表示結(jié)尾六級(jí)作文句型

1：In short, it can be said that……（總之，他的意思是……）

2：From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……（從上面提到的，我們可以得出結(jié)論……）

3：Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……（把所有的這些因素加以考慮，我們自然可以得出結(jié)論……）

4：Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……（因此，我們最好的出這樣的結(jié)論……）

5:There is no doubt that(有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn)）6.All in all, we cannot live without……, but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.（總之，我們沒(méi)有…無(wú)法生活，但同時(shí)我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來(lái)面對(duì)可能出現(xiàn)的新問(wèn)題）

四、提出建議六級(jí)作文句型

1：It is high time that we put an end to the(trend).（該是我們停止這一趨勢(shì)的時(shí)候了）

2：There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……（毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，對(duì)……問(wèn)題應(yīng)予以足夠重視）

3：Obviously, if we want to do something … it is essential that……（顯然，如果我們想要做么事，很重要的是……）

4：Only in this way can we ……（只有這樣，我們才能……）5：Spare no effort to + V（不遺余力的）

五、預(yù)示后果六級(jí)作文句型

1：Obviously，if we don't control the problem, the chances are that…will lead us in danger.（很明顯，如果我們不能控制這一問(wèn)題，很有可能我們會(huì)陷入危險(xiǎn)）

2：No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……（毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，除非我們采取有效措施，否則我們很可能會(huì)……）

3：It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation（很緊迫的是應(yīng)立即采取措施阻止這一事態(tài)的發(fā)展）

六、表示論證六級(jí)作文句型 1：From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.(在我看來(lái)，支持第一種觀點(diǎn)比第二種更有道理)2：I cannot entirely agree with the idea that……（我無(wú)法完全同意這一觀點(diǎn)）

3：As far as I am concerned/In my opinion,……（就我來(lái)說(shuō)……）

4：I sincerely believe that……==I am greatly convinced(that)從句.（我真誠(chéng)地相信……）

5：Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why ……（最后，坦率地說(shuō)，還有另外一個(gè)實(shí)際的原因……）

七、給出原因六級(jí)作文句型

1：The reason why + 句子 …… is that + 句子（...的原因是...）2: This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First, Second, …….Third，……

這一現(xiàn)象存在有很多原因的，第一……第二……第三……

3：…For one thing, …… For another thing，…… =On the one hand,…… On the other hand……一方面……另一方面……

4：

I quite agree with the statement that

…

…The reasons are chiefly as follows.我十分贊同這一論述，即……。其主要原因如下。

八、列出解決辦法和批判錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)做法六級(jí)作文句型

1：The best way to solve the troubles is……解決這些麻煩的最好辦法是…… 2：As far as something is concerned …就某事而言，…… 3：It is obvious that……很顯然……

4：It may be true that……but it doesn't mean that…… 可能……是對(duì)的，但這并不意味著……

5;It is natural to believe that……but we shouldn't ignore that… …認(rèn)為……是自然的，但我們不應(yīng)忽視……

6：There is no evidence to suggest that……沒(méi)有證據(jù)表明……

九、表示好處和壞處 六級(jí)作文句型

1：It has the following advantages.它有如下優(yōu)勢(shì)

2：It is beneficial/ harmful to us.=It is of great benefit/harm to us.它對(duì)我們有益處

3:It has more disadvantages than advantage.他有很多不足之處

十、表示重要、方便、可能六級(jí)作文句型

1：It is important(necessary/difficult/convenient/possible)for sb.to do sth.對(duì)于某人做……是……

2：It plays an important role in our life.十一、采取措施六級(jí)作文句型

1：We should take some effective measures.我們應(yīng)該采取有效措施 2：We should try our best to overcome/conquer the difficulties.我們應(yīng)該盡最大努力去克服困難

3：We should do our utmost in doing sth.我們應(yīng)該盡力去做…… 4：We should solve the problems that we are confronted/faced with.我們應(yīng)該解決我們面臨的困難

十二、顯示變化 六級(jí)作文句型

1：Some changes have taken place in the past five years.過(guò)去五年發(fā)生了很多變化

2：Great changes will certainly be produced in the international communications.在國(guó)際交流中理所當(dāng)然會(huì)發(fā)生很多大的變化

3：It has increased/decreased from…to…他已經(jīng)從…增加/減少到…? 4：The output of July in this factory increased by 15%.這個(gè)工廠7月份產(chǎn)量以增加了15%.十三、表明事實(shí)現(xiàn)狀六級(jí)作文句型

1：We cannot ignore the fact that……我們不能忽略這個(gè)事實(shí)…… 我我我 2：No one can deny the fact that……沒(méi)人能否認(rèn)這個(gè)事實(shí)…… 3：This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.4: be closely related to（與...息息相關(guān)）

十四、進(jìn)行比較 六級(jí)作文句型

1：Compared with A, B……與A比較，B……

2: I prefer to read rather than watch TV.十五、常用英語(yǔ)諺語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文句型 1：Actions speak louder than words.事實(shí)勝于雄辯

2：All is not gold that glitters.發(fā)光的未必都是金子

3：All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬

4：A good beginning is half done.良好的開(kāi)端是成功的一半

5：Every advantage has its disadvantage.有利必有弊

6：A miss is as good as a mile.失之毫厘，差之千里

7：Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母

8: Industry is the parent of success.勤奮是成功之母

9: It is never too old to learn.活到老，學(xué)到老

10: Knowledge is power.知識(shí)就是力量

11: Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it.世上無(wú)難事，只怕有心人

第四篇：精選六級(jí)作文

The core value can be interpreted as following: The City, built by people, has been evolving and growing into an organic system.People are the most dynamic cells with the best ability to innovation this system.People’s life is closely interactive with the urban morphology and development.With the rapid urbanization, a more extensive relationship and interaction has been established between the city organic system and earth’s biosphere and resource system.People, city and earthare just like three organic systems linking with each other and fusing into the integrity.Throughoutthe whole process of urban development.其核心思想可以這樣理解：城市史人創(chuàng)造的，它不斷地演進(jìn)、演化和成長(zhǎng)為一個(gè)有機(jī)系統(tǒng)。人是這個(gè)有機(jī)系統(tǒng)中最具活力和最富有創(chuàng)新能力的細(xì)胞。人的生活與城市的形態(tài)和發(fā)展密切互動(dòng)。隨著城市化進(jìn)程的加速，城市的有機(jī)系統(tǒng)與地球大生物圈和資源體系之間相互作用也日益加深和擴(kuò)大。人、城市和地球三個(gè)有機(jī)系統(tǒng)環(huán)環(huán)相扣，這種關(guān)系貫穿了城市發(fā)展的歷程，三者也將日益融合成為一個(gè)不可分割的整體。

For further reflect of the theme “Better City, Better Life”, five sub-themes are defined;they are “Blending of Diverse Cultures in the City”,” Economic Prosperity of the City”, Innovation of Science and Technology in the City”, “Remodeling of Urban Communities”, and “Rural-urban Interaction”.為了更好地理解“城市，讓生活更美好”，上海世博會(huì)還設(shè)有五個(gè)副主題分別是“城市多元文化的融合”、“城市經(jīng)濟(jì)的繁榮”、“城市科技的創(chuàng)新”、“城市社區(qū)的重塑”、“城市和鄉(xiāng)村的互動(dòng)”。

Creating a Green Campus

Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of “green campus” will definitely produce a profound effect on students’various environmental protection activities after their graduation.What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.避錯(cuò)指導(dǎo)

本次作文在題材上，雖然仍然延續(xù)了我們所熟悉的校園類話題，但與社會(huì)背景有很大關(guān)系。剛剛閉幕的哥本哈根世界氣候大會(huì)使環(huán)保減排這個(gè)主題成為焦點(diǎn)，在全世界都提倡可持續(xù)發(fā)展、和諧發(fā)展這一背景下的“綠色校園”，同時(shí)也是一個(gè)社會(huì)熱點(diǎn)話題，這是我們審題時(shí)所必須考慮的。另外開(kāi)篇時(shí)，切忌拖泥帶水，應(yīng)直截了當(dāng)，使閱卷老師對(duì)文章主題一目了然。

【生動(dòng)的用詞】 maintain保持;concept概念;profound長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)的;sustainable可持續(xù)的;recyclable可循環(huán)的。

【豐富的短語(yǔ)】bring benefit to帶來(lái)利益;play a crucial role in發(fā)揮關(guān)鍵作用;under the burden of在??重負(fù)下;come true實(shí)現(xiàn);call for要求。

【同義詞轉(zhuǎn)換】

作文表達(dá)除了準(zhǔn)確，還要做到句式多變，詞匯靈活多樣。

1.realize → be aware of 意識(shí)到

We’d better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我們最好意識(shí)到周圍污染的嚴(yán)峻性。

2.keep → preserve 保持

It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育學(xué)生意識(shí)到保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性。

3.lead → conduct 引導(dǎo)

This will help conduct the activities of the college students.這有助于引導(dǎo)大學(xué)生的行為。

【話題備考錦囊】

6.The idea of “a green campus” is beyond a green environment.“綠色校園”絕不僅僅是一個(gè)綠色環(huán)境。

7.The construction of “a green campus” will greatly stimulate students to take part in various environmental protection activities.建設(shè)“綠色校園”將會(huì)極大激勵(lì)學(xué)生參與環(huán)境保護(hù)。

8.To bring “a green campus” to its full play, effective measures should be taken.為全面實(shí)施“綠色校園”，必須采取有效措施。

9.Campus construction is of vital importance not only to the physical development of students but to their mental health as well.校園建設(shè)不僅對(duì)學(xué)生的身體發(fā)展很重要，而且對(duì)他們的心理健康也很重要。

10.There is little doubt that further consideration must be paid to our green campus.毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，對(duì)于綠色校園應(yīng)該給與更多的思考。

【話題詞匯拓展】

devastation n.毀壞

disastrous a.損失慘重的 doom v.厄運(yùn)，毀滅

existence n.存在，生活

healthful a.健康的

messy a.骯臟的，凌亂的 participation n.分享，參與

preserve v.保存，保護(hù)

preventive a.預(yù)防性的 purify v.澄清，凈化

stimulation n.激勵(lì)，鼓舞

arouse consciousness 喚起意識(shí) 1.上圖所示為某城市1989、1994、1999、2004年參加成人教育(或繼續(xù)教育)的人數(shù)情況，請(qǐng)描述其變化;

2.請(qǐng)說(shuō)明發(fā)生這些變化的原因(可從社會(huì)發(fā)展及競(jìng)爭(zhēng)能力方面加以說(shuō)明)

3.請(qǐng)預(yù)測(cè)我國(guó)成人教育(繼續(xù)教育)的前景

A Boom in Continuing Education

From the graph, we know the statistics of the Continuing Education participation and the increasing numbers of the participants in X city.In 1989 there were only thirty people taking part in the Continuing Education, but in 1994 the number has grown to eighty? Our thousand people, and in 1999, a hundred and sixteen thousand, and in 2004, the number of Continuing Education participation reached its top: a hundred and seventy thousand.It can be seen easily that there are more and more people who hope to get advanced degrees and gain more knowledge after they began to work.There are many reasons responsible for the great change, and the following are the typical ones.For one thing, during the work people begin to realize what they have learned before is far from enough.They know what kind of knowledge they need.In addition, as the science and technology in China are developing so fast, adults after graduation have to go back to universities to refresh themselves and improve their competitive ability in society.The main reason is the population growth that affects people? promotion chances.Many people without Bachelor have been laid off.Therefore, such competitive social background stimulates many people to continue to study.However, this graph may not predict the entire situation in the future.I believe one thing is quite certain that education can? be separated from our social development.As our society is developing, more and more people will receive Continuing Education in the future.1.中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日受到冷遇，西方節(jié)日日益升溫已成為趨勢(shì)

2.形成這種現(xiàn)象的原因

3.你對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象的態(tài)度

【范文】

The Prevalence of Western Holidays

It is noticeable that western holidays are becoming increasingly popular day by day, while Chinese traditional holidays are being somewhat neglected.Old people often complain that Chinese New Year has lost its real meaning.To their astonishment, young people in China, ignorant about Chinese traditional holidays, are crazy about Christmas or Valentine Day.There are several possible reasons for this phenomenon.First, western nations, such as the United States and Britain, are powerful and dominant in every aspect.Everything in these countries is assumed to be superior and adored by some modern young people.Second, the prevalence of English as a world language and the development of globalization enable western culture to flood in China.Overwhelmed by such a trend, Chinese unconsciously get involved in western culture.Last but not least, some Chinese people have blind faith in foreign things while dismiss our own possessions with contempt.I am critical of this trend.China boasts a brilliant history and splendid traditions.In modern times, Chinese tradition should be preserved and promoted.But it seems that young people no longer treasure the tradition.On the contrary, they turn to pursue enthusiastically a supposedly more modern culture.If this trend is allowed to continue, the priceless heritage of our ancestors will be replaced by western traditions.Nobody expects such a consequence.So let join hand in hand to protect Chinese tradition.1.據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)，在網(wǎng)上聊天交友、玩網(wǎng)絡(luò)游戲是目前我國(guó)大學(xué)生上網(wǎng)的主要活動(dòng)內(nèi)容

2.專家認(rèn)為，那些沉迷于聊天和游戲的大學(xué)生，不僅耗費(fèi)了金錢、時(shí)間和精力，還影響了正常的學(xué)業(yè)和人際交往

3.我們應(yīng)當(dāng)如何看待大學(xué)生上網(wǎng)的問(wèn)題

【范文】

What are College Students doing on the Internet?

Nowadays surfing the Internet has become very popular on campus.I am impressed most that many college students spend too much time playing games and chatting on the Internet.As is well known, chatting and playing and can do much harm to us if we spend too much time on the virtual world.Firstly, it is an enormous waste of time and we will have little time for our study.Secondly, those who play games or chat day and night will be harmed physically for lack of rest and sleep.Thirdly, our social ties will suffer as a result of the immersion in the virtual world.The last but not the least, it will cost us much money.In my opinion, we should deal with the Internet carefully.On the one hand, we can get some pleasure and knowledge from the Internet.On the other hand, we shouldn’t spend too much time, energy and money on the Internet because study is our priority.In conclusion, we should make good and proper use of the Internet.工作的選擇

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed.However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’t necessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends.As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better.校園“考證族”的隊(duì)伍不斷壯大，很多學(xué)生忙于考區(qū)各種資格證書 大學(xué)生忙考證的利弊 你的觀點(diǎn)

On Qualification-obtaining Fever

Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications among college students, including vocational qualifications and skills certificates.Many students spend their weekends and vocation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science.Even after their graduation, some of them are still having full enthusiasm on it.No doubt qualifications have attractions of their own.They are evidences to confirm students’ abilities.Work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help students find a satisfactory job, so students hold the opinion that they are obtaining not credentials but opportunities for their future.However, as it is known to all that each coin has its two sides, obtaining qualifications also brings negative influences in spite of its advantages.First, some vocational qualifications are obtained at the expense of the basic discipline study or major learning.Second, it will take 300 to 500 Yuan to go in for a certain certificate, leading to great financial burden.Third, better jobs do not always necessarily follow more qualifications.From my point of view, what matters most is relevant experience or skill, not the number of credentials you have obtained.[Next Page好詞佳句]

好詞佳句總結(jié)：

fever 狂熱可用指某種現(xiàn)象

vocational qualification 職業(yè)證照

work-related 與工作有關(guān)

credentials 學(xué)歷資歷等的資格

at the expense of以??為犧牲

同學(xué)們注意下范文最后一句，使用該句式又穩(wěn)妥，又能拿個(gè)不錯(cuò)的分?jǐn)?shù)。

From my point of view, what matters most is? not?

1)道路事故會(huì)給人們的生命和財(cái)產(chǎn)帶來(lái)很大的損 2)分析道路事故發(fā)生的主要原因 3)如何降低事故發(fā)生率

行文思路：

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)問(wèn)題，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析造成該問(wèn)題的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求說(shuō)明解決該問(wèn)題的方法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問(wèn)題解決型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出道路事故的嚴(yán)重性及主要危害;分析導(dǎo)致道路事故的主要原因;說(shuō)明應(yīng)該如何降低道路事故的發(fā)生率。

高分范文：

Road Accidents

Road accidents, as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern.In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents.In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives.The following reasons contribute to road accidents.Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities.More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents.In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations.For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk.Besides, the weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason.Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose.Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations.Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners.Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.2009年英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文預(yù)測(cè)范文第二篇

1)隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的普及和應(yīng)用，網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪開(kāi)始擺在世人面前

2)應(yīng)該如何來(lái)打擊和預(yù)防網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪越來(lái)越成為人們必須要解決的一個(gè)難題

3)作為大學(xué)生，你應(yīng)該怎么做？

【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)提出一個(gè)問(wèn)題，提綱第2點(diǎn)指出解決該問(wèn)題的緊迫性，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求談?wù)劥髮W(xué)生應(yīng)該如何應(yīng)對(duì)該問(wèn)題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問(wèn)題解決型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：描述網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪出現(xiàn)的背景及問(wèn)題現(xiàn)狀；指出解決網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪問(wèn)題的緊迫型，說(shuō)明解決辦法；從大學(xué)生的角度談?wù)剳?yīng)該如何應(yīng)對(duì)網(wǎng)絡(luò)犯罪。

【參考范文】

Cyber Crimes

With the popularization of Internet, cyber-crimes have become a serious problem facing us.Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet.To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers.As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses。

However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more.It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber-crimes.First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly.Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber-crimes.Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。

As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber-crimes.For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission.For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information.In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes。

1)有些人會(huì)選擇收入高但工作時(shí)間長(zhǎng)的工作；有些人則寧愿選擇收入低但工作時(shí)間卻相對(duì)較短的工作

2)如果讓你選擇，你會(huì)選擇哪種工作？理由是?

【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出兩種不同的工作選擇，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求表明“我”的傾向，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出人們對(duì)工作的兩種不同選擇傾向：一些人即使需要工作更長(zhǎng)的時(shí)間也會(huì)選擇收入高的工作，一些人則寧愿拿低工資也會(huì)選擇工作時(shí)間較短的工作；表明“我”會(huì)選擇什么類型的工作，說(shuō)明“我”這樣選擇的理由。

【參考范文】

My Choice for Job

A recent survey shows that people who get higher salaries generally work longer hours than those who get lower salaries.Some people favor higher-paying jobs, even though such jobs always result in longer work time.They believe that money is so indispensable in people’s lives that without it no material comforts or well-being can be guaranteed。

However, others have different preferences.They would rather take up lower-paying jobs with shorter hours.In their eyes, money doesn’tnecessarily ensure happiness and well-being.They want to spend more time in doing their likes and getting together with their family and friends。

As for me, I prefer to take up a job with shorter hours even if it pays less.In my opinion, work is not our whole life.We should allocate enough time to our family and friends and have more time to enjoy our life.Besides, we are not machines.We need time to relax and rest so that we could be energetic enough to do our job better。

1)現(xiàn)在各種各樣的電視選秀節(jié)目吸引了許多年輕人

2)為了實(shí)現(xiàn)明星夢(mèng)，一些年輕人甚至放棄了學(xué)業(yè)，這種現(xiàn)象引起了許多關(guān)注

3)你怎么看？為什么？

【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)和第2點(diǎn)指出一種有爭(zhēng)議的現(xiàn)象，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求表明“我”對(duì)該現(xiàn)象的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：描述年輕人熱衷選秀節(jié)目的現(xiàn)象，引出對(duì)其的爭(zhēng)議；表明“我”對(duì)年輕人熱衷選秀節(jié)目的看法，并說(shuō)明“我”的理由。

【參考范文】

Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People

Nowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion。

It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.The following reasons can support my view.Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。

In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows。

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting.You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:

1)近年來(lái)出現(xiàn)大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象

2)產(chǎn)生這一現(xiàn)象的原因

3)如何解決這一問(wèn)題

【思路點(diǎn)撥】

本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)要求指出目前大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分析這種現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，提綱第3點(diǎn)則要求闡述應(yīng)該如何解決這一問(wèn)題，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為問(wèn)題解決型作文。

根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含以下內(nèi)容：提出大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象，指出現(xiàn)象的表現(xiàn)；說(shuō)明現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，如大學(xué)生追求目標(biāo)過(guò)高等；從幾個(gè)方面提出解決方法。

【參考范文】

College Students’Job Hunting

Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem.About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite difficult at present.In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation。

Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons.Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role.In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy。

Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem.Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society.Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society.Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level.Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。

In the sound of the whistle, the May meeting of rain and tears.This is a sad moment: the mothers, fathers, sons, daughters, wives, husbands, lovers, teachers, students, friends, colleagues, neighbors…...to at 14:28 on May 12 before the dull, busy, hope , Disappointed, sad, happy…… those beautiful days.Today's Wenchuan Festivals, it is only a short farewell.Life, not just breathing and heartbeat.Man's bitterest sorrows are separation and death not the lives of the border.Pro-people did not leave, everything will continue.In the ruins of the baby crying sound, called a “Wenchuan” new life, born today.在悠遠(yuǎn)的汽笛聲中垂首默立，任5月的雨水和淚水交匯。這是揮別的一刻：向母親、父親、兒子、女兒、妻子、丈夫、戀人、老師、學(xué)生、朋友、同事、鄰居??；向5月12日14時(shí)28分前的平淡、忙碌、盼望、失望、憂愁、歡喜??那些美麗的溫馨日子。

今天的汶川祭奠，一定也只是短暫的告別。生命，并非僅僅是呼吸和心跳。生離死別，不是生命的邊界。親人們沒(méi)有離去，一切都將延續(xù)。在廢墟上嘹亮的嬰兒啼哭聲里，一個(gè)叫做“汶川”的新生命，今天降生。

May 12, 2008, let us all Chinese people always remember this day for it, our “national calamity,” the history of the Chinese nation, engraved too many disasters, but never the candidate of our national glories, One of the disaster, and again before loading the line, then let us bury the grief of all good, clean up all the ruins, was once their homes on the land, rebuild our homes, to live boldly, to live On a good living.2008年5月12日，讓我們所有中華兒女永遠(yuǎn)記住這一天吧，我們的“國(guó)難日”，中華民族的歷史本上，銘刻了太多的災(zāi)難，但這永遠(yuǎn)也難掩我們民族的輝煌，一次次的災(zāi)難，一次次的負(fù)重前行，那么就讓我們掩埋好所有的悲痛，清理干凈所有的廢墟，在曾經(jīng)是家園的土地上，重建我們的家園，勇敢地活下去，能活，就好好活。

Broken heart, tend to become very fragile, post-disaster reconstruction, the firm has become particularly important, three minutes after we wiped away tears, we cannot weep, to bravely live, because their relatives in heaven We watched, Tongbuyusheng, sad to tactic is not their wish to see, good to live in, they are to our expectations, think about this, it has the ruins to life for the life of the mother, “Dear Baby, if Can you live, to keep in mind that mother love you ”;think that in order to save the expense of four children and teachers, we go to these family members, in their own lives to give us an opportunity to a live, To them, we have to live better.破碎的心，往往會(huì)變得相當(dāng)脆弱，災(zāi)后重建，堅(jiān)強(qiáng)就變得尤其重要，三分鐘過(guò)后，我們要擦干眼淚，我們不能再哭，要勇敢地活下去，因?yàn)橛H人會(huì)在天堂看著我們，痛不欲生、傷心欲絕不是他們想看到的，好地地活下去，是他們對(duì)我們的期望，想一想，那廢墟中以已命換子命的母親，“親愛(ài)的寶貝，如果你能活下去，要記住，媽媽愛(ài)你”；想一想那為了救四個(gè)孩子而犧牲了的老師，我們的走了的這些親人，用自己的生命給我們爭(zhēng)來(lái)了活的機(jī)會(huì)，為了他們，我們也要活的更好。

We all Chinese people, is a lifelong hard to forget the day, because today is the “national crisis,” Sadness Wenchuan, the country was sad, we use such a way, to commemorate those in earthquake In the passing away of relatives, we used this as a way for them came in on the road toward heaven, I hope they will be well all the way, when they look back at the earth, will see tens of thousands of their compatriots hand-foot-, Look up to the sky pray for them, so they will not be alone, not lonely。

對(duì)于我們所有中國(guó)人來(lái)說(shuō)，都是一個(gè)終生難忘記的日子，因?yàn)榻裉?，是我們的“?guó)難日”，悲情汶川，舉國(guó)志哀，我們用這樣一種方式，來(lái)紀(jì)念那些在地震中逝去的親人，我們用這樣的一種方式，為他們招魂，在奔向天國(guó)的路上，希望他們能夠一路走好，當(dāng)他們回頭遙望故土大地時(shí)，會(huì)看見(jiàn)成千上萬(wàn)的他們的同胞手足，在仰望蒼穹為他們祈禱，所以他們不會(huì)孤獨(dú)、不會(huì)寂寞。

1)有的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生選擇工作時(shí)主要看重高工資，而有的則認(rèn)為良好的職業(yè)發(fā)展空間才是更重要的

2)闡述他們各自的考慮

3)表明你的看法

High Salaries or Career Development?

There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose.[1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries.[1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness.[3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life.Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money.[2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.[5]It is career development that counts most.Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness.Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later.So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.[1]用于引出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)或傾向。

[2]用于對(duì)比分析兩種觀點(diǎn)各自的理由。

[3]“with+賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ)”的獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)。

[4]“因?yàn)槿卞X”。

[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句子的主語(yǔ)。

[6]while引導(dǎo)比較狀語(yǔ)從句，意為“然而”。

[7]“一般來(lái)說(shuō)”。

[8]“選擇”。

1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.臨?。航┠陙?lái)，越來(lái)越多的人開(kāi)始喜歡洋快餐。

___________________________________________________________________________.2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.臨?。喝欢?，持第二種觀點(diǎn)的人認(rèn)為體育明星們?yōu)樯鐣?huì)做出了杰出的貢獻(xiàn)，因此應(yīng)該得到特殊待遇。

___________________________________________________________________________.3.佳句：Career may give us longing term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.臨摹：我們之間的共同之處使我們的關(guān)系牢固，而不同之處則都會(huì)我們?nèi)绾蜗嗷ダ斫狻?/p>

___________________________________________________________________________.【KEY】

1.In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.2.However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.3.The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.1.大學(xué)生自主創(chuàng)業(yè)已經(jīng)很普遍

2.大學(xué)生自主創(chuàng)業(yè)的好處

3.我的看法

范文：

Recently, self-employment has become a popular idea among youngsters, college graduates in particular.Owing to favorable policies, a large number of graduates launch their own business as the starting line of career.Furthermore, some successful examples have already been reported in the newspapers and Internet.Admittedly, there are several advantages for graduates to become self-employed.Firstly, the current intense competition for jobs can be eased to a large extent.Besides, it is apparent that young people can broaden their horizon in this process.Even if unsuccessful, they can learn from their failure and enrich their experience.Lastly, the hardship in self-employment enables graduates to be more diligent, which will be of tremendous benefits to their career in the society.As modern college students, not only should we get a good command of professional knowledge, but also make a clear and reasonable plan for our future career.Personally, I intend to establish my own business after graduation.I am convinced that being self-employed can contribute a lot to my personal development.(170 words)

第五篇：六級(jí)作文

話題：Open Courses

1.現(xiàn)在網(wǎng)絡(luò)公開(kāi)課很盛行;2.網(wǎng)絡(luò)公開(kāi)課有不少好處，也存在一些問(wèn)題;3.我對(duì)此的建議。

范文：

Online open courses are gaining popularity in recent years.Follwoing globally famous universities like Yale and Harvard, some universities in China have also started to offer online open courses.Those courses have attracted people from all classes with different occupations.The courses have brought many benefits to people.Many of the courses are provided by universities in foreign countries, and thus offer fresh ideas to us.Through them, we can keep up with what people are thinking all over the world.But that can also be a problem.Some of the courses may not be very suitable for Chinese students because of cultural differences and may cause chaos on Chinese campus.In my opinion, online open course is useful and we should make use of it to broaden our horizons.But we should also remember to have our own thinking and not be brainwashed by improper ideas.題目：On Blind-date Show

1、目前電視相親節(jié)目很流行

2、出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因是：

3、我對(duì)此的看法

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Nowadays, the blind-date shows are becoming more and more popular.Whenever we turn on TV, those incredible senses of blind-date shows would pop up on the screen.Many people, from teenagers to the elderly, are so crazy about these shows that they never miss a single chance to watch them.Three reasons would contribute to the popularity of these blind-date shows.To begin with, there are over 180 million people who remain single long after they have reached the official age for marriage.Moreover, a great number of people would like to amuse themselves by watching other people dating.Last but not least,more and more television producers add a couple of attractive elements to cater for the different tastes of the audience.In my view, the government should impose restrictions to these blind-date shows.Many of these shows advocate money-warship and materialism;quite a few of the guests’ identities are artificial.If these problems are not solved, the misleading effects can be disastrous.題目：Self-help Traveling

1、越來(lái)越多的大學(xué)生選擇“自助游”

2、也會(huì)帶來(lái)一些問(wèn)題

3、我的看法

范文：

Self-help traveling enjoys great popularity among college students today.The reason may be that they can save a lot of money by arranging the routes, booking cheaper hotels and deciding cheaper transportation tools all by themselves.Convenient and economical as self-help traveling sounds, they still have some potential problems.Perhaps the most important one is the safety problem.Being alone without a group or a tour guide, a traveler may be helpless in face of danger, i.e.robbery, wild animal attacks, etc.In addition, they are more likely to be at risk of getting lost when traveling alone in a city strange to them or in the remote countryside.In my view, self-help traveling can be exciting and challenging and is worth trying.However, before setting out alone, travelers should make good preparations.Besides, they should bear safety and security in mind all the time and keep in touch with their friends or relatives.Thus, they can enjoy both safety and pleasure of exploring different places.題目：On Adversity

1、每個(gè)人都會(huì)碰到逆境

2、人們對(duì)逆境的看法不一

3、我的看法

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Everyone meets setbacks and frustrations in life,and each tries hard to avoid them, only to find that they are just like your own shadow accompanying you all your life.When confronted with adversity, different people make different response.Some people consider it a stumbling block on the road to success,and get depressed or even sink into despair, others consider it the stairway to great accomplishments and try to overcome it with constant struggle.The latter, therefore, will recognize their disadvantages from their temporary defeat,draw lessons from it,and grow stronger each time they have coped with a difficulty.In my opinion, adversity often leads to prosperity.Painful and depressing as it is, overcoming adversity endows us with great confidence that is crucial to success.Great people are not born successful, they are great only because they have tempered their personality and remedied their deficiencies through experiencing countless adversities and defeats，which is actually a goddess of blessing in disguise.Traveling Abroad

In recent years, more and more citizens are traveling abroad.In 1995, the number of people who choose to travel abroad was about 10000.The number quadrupled to nearly 40000 in 2000.And in 2005, the number further climbed above 12000.There are several reasons for the shocking rise.To begin with, the improvement of the life standards makes traveling abroad affordable to more and more people.Moreover, the convenient transportation facilities make more destinations accessible.The last but not the least, after visiting most famous scenic spots throughout our country, exotic cultures seem to appeal more to many citizens.And gradually, they begin to treat traveling abroad as a new fashion.This trend is beneficial for people on the whole.On one hand, it is a very interesting and romantic way to spend one's vacation.On the other hand, it enlarges people's vision by having a look at what is going on in a different country.話題：樹(shù)立目標(biāo)

1.樹(shù)立目標(biāo)很重要2.原因是??3.如何設(shè)立和達(dá)到目標(biāo)

The Importance of Goal

There is no denying that setting a goal is very important.We find that successful people are always those having and achieving their goals.They set goals, short-term or long-run, to help realize their visions.Why is goal-setting important? By setting goals you are taking control of the tempo of your life.It is having a map to guide you to where you want to head for.With a clear direction, and with certain plans, you will straightly get what you want.On the contrary, without a goal ,you will live a wandering life.You do not know where to go, what you want and why you are listless.Then your life becomes dull and meaningles just like the dead water in a muddy lake.From my point of view, goals are not difficult to set and realize.First, you should make clear what you really want, which constitutes your goals.Then you make detailed palans and follow the through, as many wi話題：How to Enhance

the Sense of Happiness

1.人們對(duì)于如何提升幸福感有不同看法 2.幸福感提升不僅包含物質(zhì)層面，也指??

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The sense of happiness is of great significance.As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future.However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects.Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love.Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness.It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness.To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability.1.當(dāng)今社會(huì)，社交網(wǎng)站很流行 2.各人對(duì)此看法不同 3.我的看法

話題：Social Network Sites

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Social Network Sites

In recent years, social network sites like Renren and Kaixin have rapidly gained popularity among all kinds of people.Many people spend a lot of time on those sites chatting, making friends and playing games.Those sites have become a part of their life.The public hold different views on this phenomenon.Some are in favor of those sites for they provide many opportunities to know other people and to know what’s happening in the world.Besides, they’re very convenient to access.One can use a computer or cell phone to log on at home, in a restaurant, or even in the subway.But some people don’t approve of the social network sites.They say that people are wasting too much time on the sites.Some even get addicted to them and abandon their real life.After all, they don’t live in the virtual world.In my opinion, the social network sites can be very helpful when we want to keep in touch with friends, but we must remember that the real world is the most important in our life.1.有人相信知識(shí)能改變命運(yùn)2.有人則認(rèn)為當(dāng)今社會(huì)光靠知識(shí)已經(jīng)很難改變命運(yùn)3.我認(rèn)為??

Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?

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Can Knowledge Change One’s Destiny?

Some people have always believed that knowledge can change their destiny.Most of them are those from undeveloped areas, and by knowledge they usually mean diploma.They believe that if they send the kids in the family to college and that the kids get a diploma, they can change the kids’ destiny from doing farm work to enjoy a modern and advanced life in the city.However, some hold a different view.They say that in today’s society, knowledge alone is not enough to change destiny.To succeed in this complicated age, one needs not only knowledge, but also good communicating skills and a wide horizon, which cannot be easily learned in class.Knowledge itself is also more complicated than before.With technologies constantly advancing, one needs good learning ability to keep up with the time.In my opinion, knowledge is essential, but it is not everything.To change the destiny, one needs to keep learning various skills, to widen his horizons, and to keep pace with the latest trend.