第一篇:托福寫作兩次滿分一點(diǎn)經(jīng)驗(yàn)
小生是在3月24日和4月28日考的托,其他的都太水,不過兩次寫作都考的不錯(cuò),都是滿分。所以在這里和大家分享下自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
首先,小生是考過G的,答過AW的人都知道打字速度是很重要的,而且小生的個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)看來,T的寫作也是要拼字?jǐn)?shù)的,兩次的獨(dú)立寫作都寫夠了600,綜合都寫到了400.所以大家練習(xí)打字是很重要的,在最后小生給大家留有一個(gè)練習(xí)打字的小軟件,可以幫助大家提高打字速度。
然后,怎么把字?jǐn)?shù)寫到那么多? 就獨(dú)立寫作來說,就一句正反兩方面說,寫到600字,除了天才,沒準(zhǔn)備的人很難做到,這里如果大家考過AW,那么事情就會(huì)簡(jiǎn)單些,按照Issue的反正正或正反反方式去說加上開頭結(jié)尾五大段,最后再加上一個(gè)建議端。即按以下的公式: 開頭+讓步(支持一小下你不贊同的那面)+轉(zhuǎn)折+遞進(jìn)+總結(jié)+建議,大家不要覺得用Issue的方法寫托福作文會(huì)不會(huì)不好,一開始我也是這么想的,很多XDF的老師都說,G考邏輯,T考語(yǔ)言,實(shí)際上小生認(rèn)為T也是考邏輯的,因?yàn)槿魏挝恼聸]有邏輯都無法寫出。而且我以我的親身經(jīng)歷告訴大家,文章寫的很有邏輯至少是沒有害的,而且我認(rèn)為會(huì)有好處。想想考官在看了那么神散形也散的文章后,看到了一篇結(jié)構(gòu)清晰的文章,即使語(yǔ)言稍差,也應(yīng)該是倍感輕松。
然后就是建議段最好要有,我覺得很重要,而且可以湊字?jǐn)?shù)。
之后有了框架之后就是中間內(nèi)容的填寫,最好用例子,這里的例子就沒有G里的例子那么嚴(yán)格,小生覺得形式也不用那么教條,即使是你排比比喻或瞎編,只要切題就可以。但是例子一定要新,新例子從哪里找,我覺得在十天的那本書說的就很好。
例子是要準(zhǔn)備的,考前可以根據(jù)機(jī)經(jīng)適當(dāng)準(zhǔn)備一些。
之后就是詞匯替換,我覺得詞匯替換很很總要,還是那個(gè)道理托??脊倏戳四敲炊嗥恼氯且粯拥脑~,然后看你的文章里也充斥著那么多一樣的詞,你說他得有多煩。所以要學(xué)會(huì)把一樣話兩樣說,小生也準(zhǔn)備了一些詞類替換,最后傳給大家。
另外,一些小細(xì)節(jié)就是名言的運(yùn)用,和開頭,我認(rèn)為開頭很重要,開頭寫好了,對(duì)后面也很關(guān)鍵。所以我的建議是開頭用名言和復(fù)合句,然后正文多用短句,因?yàn)殚_頭不是說理,不用寫的太短,所以可以拽下文采。
此外,減少語(yǔ)法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤也是很重要,即使你寫的再好,拼寫錯(cuò)誤太多,考官也不會(huì)好評(píng)你的文章。所以寫到一定程度后不要貪多,一定要留下時(shí)間檢查錯(cuò)誤,這又是對(duì)打字速度的要求。
對(duì)于綜合寫作,我認(rèn)為模板的作用很重要,聽力也是很重要的一部分,這個(gè)有點(diǎn)像AW中Argument,很多Argument中的套話也可以用在模板中,這里我覺得需要指出的一點(diǎn)是結(jié)尾段一定要寫,一是湊字?jǐn)?shù),二是起一個(gè)總結(jié)補(bǔ)充的作用,可以讓邏輯更清楚。另外,就是拼寫錯(cuò)誤的問題,也是留出時(shí)間檢查的。
第二篇:寫作滿分經(jīng)驗(yàn)
1、注重寫好文章的框架
我曾經(jīng)問過我的外教老師,外國(guó)人看文章最注重的是什么,他告訴我說是文章的framework.即一篇文章好不好,首先看的不是他的句型,詞匯,或是論點(diǎn)等。而是段落之間的銜接一定要十分清楚,我們不能老是采用大三段的形式-開頭,經(jīng)過,結(jié)尾。我們可以多用用連接詞,例如:first of all, moreover, secondly, lastly等,另外可以多分自然段,給考官一目了然的感覺。還有我們可以多看看國(guó)外的文章,看看他們的寫作模式,我當(dāng)初寫文章的時(shí)候,用的就是我看到一篇國(guó)外文章的模式,我覺得可以套用,我最后介紹給大家。
2、句型的多樣化
如果一篇文章,從頭到尾,永遠(yuǎn)用的只有一種句型,那么這篇文章一定拿不到高分,我們可以適當(dāng)?shù)母膿Q一下句型,我給大家一定建議,希望給大家有點(diǎn)幫助。
3、基本句型包括Ⅰ.主謂句;Ⅱ.There be;Ⅲ.主系表結(jié)構(gòu)的句子;Ⅳ.被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)(我看到一張?zhí)终f,不要用被動(dòng),我不這樣認(rèn)為,國(guó)外的文章,用被動(dòng)的也比比皆是。)
4、復(fù)雜句型 包括Ⅰ.并列句;Ⅱ.從句(定語(yǔ),狀語(yǔ),名詞性,非謂語(yǔ))
5.詞匯 的Variety
說實(shí)話做到這點(diǎn)真的很難,首先你要有龐大的 詞匯 量,第二你要用的恰當(dāng),不出錯(cuò)誤。我自認(rèn)做不到這點(diǎn),所以我用的詞匯有時(shí)候會(huì)重復(fù)。當(dāng)然大家可以累計(jì)一些固定搭配的詞匯,例如:激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)fierce competition等
6、多舉EXAMPLE(重要)
大家不要小看這點(diǎn),我認(rèn)為對(duì)于寫作基礎(chǔ)不是很好的考生來說,這點(diǎn)是最重要的。一篇文章如果讓你從頭到尾都在講道理,你有這么多話要說嗎?而且有時(shí)候還不一定說的清楚。那么這時(shí)候你就用例子來表明你的觀點(diǎn)。我認(rèn)識(shí)一個(gè)朋友,可以說她的 英語(yǔ) 基礎(chǔ)很差,但她的文章也拿了6分,我問她怎么寫的,她告訴我說就是拼命的舉例子。就這點(diǎn)我也曾問過我的外教老師,他曾是IELTS的考官,他說考官歡迎考生多舉例子。
7、建議:
1)、寫文章最關(guān)鍵的就是審題千萬(wàn)不要出錯(cuò)誤,不然就前功盡棄了。
2)例如我積累的句子:
? Cultivate independence
? Develop a strong sense of responsibility
? Enhance social awareness
? Build up one’s confidence and offer one’s a sense of achievement—realize ones value
and capacity
? Widen one’s horizon and sharp one’s character
這些句子比較常用,而且在口語(yǔ) 考試 中也可以派上用處。最后給大家介紹一種寫作模式,我覺得很不錯(cuò):
With unprecedented advances in medical technology, a debate has developed over whether or not a person on life support has the right to die.On one side of the debate are those who say that......On the other side is the view that......In my mind, I completely agree/disagree the later.There is no denying that......has many positive effects.To begin with,......Secondly,......Finally,......However, every coin has its two sides.......is no exception.Many opponents say that......To conclude,....
第三篇:托福寫作滿分作文怎么寫
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托福寫作滿分作文怎么寫?
首先,應(yīng)當(dāng)挑選題目新、話題多樣、寫法全面的高質(zhì)量范文資料,這一點(diǎn)至關(guān)重要,倘若范文質(zhì)量欠佳,勢(shì)必會(huì)影響備考效率。然后,按照如下步驟使用范文資料:
第1 步,通讀30 篇高分范文,注意尋找文章的寫作思路和主要論點(diǎn),把握整體框架。以《托福高分范文大全》中的文章為例,2013 年6 月15 日考題:
The way a person dresses in is a good indication of his/her personality and character.通讀此文時(shí),應(yīng)找到文章主要論點(diǎn):1.著裝習(xí)慣反映個(gè)人偏好;2.著裝習(xí)慣透露了性格的某些方面;3.除了著裝習(xí)慣,行為和舉止是性格的更真實(shí)體現(xiàn)。
第2 步,精讀10 篇范文,理清每句話之間的關(guān)系。如:Relatives were co-habitants inside a large house where more intimate relationships could be stably maintained and carried on.Nowadays, however, nuclear families are taking up the greatest ratio of social build-up...這兩句話之間形成了轉(zhuǎn)折的邏輯關(guān)系。又如:Minor setbacks might cause a loss of confidence, or even produce overwhelming distress.Therefore I think it is unrealistic to expect a person who is down in spirit to accomplish their goals.這兩句話之間形成了因果邏輯關(guān)系
第3 步,詳細(xì)分析10 篇范文,弄懂每句話內(nèi)部的關(guān)系以及每句話之間的關(guān)系。如:In addition, obsessed with computer games, children are gradually becoming slaves under the control of the pre-designed game modes.As a matter of fact, it is not only a waste of time, but may also considerably mislead children mentally...在這段話中,標(biāo)志詞in addition 表明首句承前啟后,該句中,過去分詞短語(yǔ)obssessed with...表原因,children are usually...是原因所導(dǎo)致的結(jié)果。第二句是對(duì)首句的進(jìn)一步解釋說明,注意not only...but also...這個(gè)典型句式的應(yīng)用。
第4 步,選取經(jīng)過詳細(xì)分析的10 篇范文題目進(jìn)行仿寫練習(xí)。
第5 步,再選取另外10 道題目進(jìn)行寫作練習(xí),完成后與范文對(duì)照,尋找自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn)與不足之處。
第四篇:TPO1 托福綜合寫作 滿分案例
The professor think that by 4-day workweek rules, the company may probabely cost more and cut in their profits.Firstly, more employees means more work space and more computers, this is a large budget that the lecture didn,t include.Even thought they accept that they can be payed less if they go on the four-day workweek, the amount of work doesn't change.To fullfill the company's business goal, they need to hire more empolyees, therefore more private work space and computers and stuff like that are needed.Since the new employees take up the salary which the others gave up, the cost of the computer and workplace cannot be solved without investing more money.Secondly, by reducing the work hour, one emploee's assignment cannot be accomplished as much as before, and then the leftover must be shifted to another employee.Also, with less time to work, the employees should work much harder than they used to be.This will lead to a high work expectations that make one's pressure more intense.How can a man live a good life under a huge stress? On the contrary to the lecture, less work time will oppositely lead to an unpleasant life than a better life which can improve one's work efficiency and make more benefits to the company.Finally, as the competition is so high in the work market, one who just work for 4 days a week cannot match those who work as hard as they can and at least 5 days a week.Being less competitive, one cannot keep their job stability, and may be the first sacrifice of the job competition.Since the boss must give their credit to those who work 5 days a week other than those who work only 4 days a week.Therefore, the delegant ones get promoted for they can be relied on crucial tasks and they will supervise the company constantly with lower absense-error happening.
第五篇:托福100 經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享
新托福過關(guān)寶典:托福100+經(jīng)驗(yàn)分享
托福新題,103分。分?jǐn)?shù)不高,R30,L26,S20,W27。本意不是寫什么炫耀貼,也沒有任何可炫耀的。后來想還是寫點(diǎn)給以后的人看吧,也給自己申請(qǐng)攢點(diǎn)人品。但是,大家看經(jīng)驗(yàn)貼的時(shí)候,一定要注意適不適合自己,因?yàn)橛械慕?jīng)驗(yàn)貼寫的雖然好,但是由于寫貼人的英語(yǔ)水平有差異,所以不一定適合自己。我自己二托的時(shí)候就吃過這樣的虧,看了一堆經(jīng)驗(yàn)貼,浪費(fèi)了好多時(shí)間,還一點(diǎn)都不給力。