第一篇：托福寫作心得

關(guān)于托福作文的幾個(gè)比較常見(jiàn)的問(wèn)題：

1,多少字?jǐn)?shù)合適？OG上說(shuō)綜合寫作150-225，獨(dú)立寫作300。個(gè)人認(rèn)為綜合250字，獨(dú)立380+比較妥當(dāng)，但是不用追求太多的字?jǐn)?shù)，有字?jǐn)?shù)沒(méi)質(zhì)量的作文絕對(duì)不能得高分。但是有質(zhì)量的作文字?jǐn)?shù)肯定少不了，ETS要求Use specific reasons and details to supportyour choice，你想想達(dá)到這個(gè)要求的作文字?jǐn)?shù)能太少嗎？

2,要準(zhǔn)備多少時(shí)間？三到四周第一周把***185范文看透，每個(gè)題目自己都分析一下，同時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)好的句子。后面兩周每天練一篇綜合一篇獨(dú)立，練手感，同時(shí)練打字速度。（用老鍵盤練，不能用筆記本鍵盤）3，托福作文這么八股，考了高分其實(shí)不算什么，為了達(dá)到北美大陸以后我們寫起論文來(lái)杠杠的，我們一起為提高整體英語(yǔ)綜合實(shí)力努力吧。

一定要嚴(yán)格按照l(shuí)ecture的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，千萬(wàn)不要添加自己的東西。綜合寫作不需要你表態(tài)的，你要做的就是用不同的句子對(duì)就lecuture進(jìn)行復(fù)述。

第一段就對(duì)論點(diǎn)進(jìn)行簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)述，表達(dá)自己的立場(chǎng)。

第二段舉出一個(gè)例子進(jìn)行描述，穿插idea

第三段通過(guò)另一個(gè)不同方面的例子

第四段作一個(gè)小結(jié)

這樣寫的話，就是以例子為主，議論為輔了。

句子盡量簡(jiǎn)潔,略微的加入一些特殊句式.開(kāi)篇段落的寫作可分為兩大步驟，第一步就是用簡(jiǎn)潔明了的句子對(duì)原題目的意思進(jìn)行同義替換；

第二步是提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。

這兩大步驟細(xì)化起來(lái)可以概括為四句話：

第一句，采用同義替換的方式對(duì)原題目的意思進(jìn)行更改，當(dāng)然是“形變神不變”；第二句，對(duì)題目的意思進(jìn)行解釋

第三句，提出自己的觀點(diǎn)；

第四句，概括自己所提出觀點(diǎn)的理由，引起下文。

案例1：誤解原意思

Do you agree or disagree: Because people are busy with doing so many things, they can do few things well?

Original：

Some people may hold the view that they are able to do things well even if they are busy with doing so many things simultaneously or during a given period.Although plausible at the first glance, I disagree with the statement.Depending on my own personal experience and personality, I firmly maintain that people can do few things well when they are busy with doing so many things.My arguments of this opinion are listed as follows.解析：

文章第一句話不是對(duì)原題目意思進(jìn)行解釋，而是采用采取了和原意思相反的做法來(lái)進(jìn)行題目詮釋；第二句表明自己對(duì)誤解題目的觀點(diǎn)；第三句話對(duì)自己的觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行近一步的解釋；

第四句一個(gè)過(guò)渡性的句子。開(kāi)篇內(nèi)容安排倒是很好，但是作者犯了誤解原題目意思的錯(cuò)誤導(dǎo)致后面整個(gè)文字都做了無(wú)用功。

改后：

When people are engaged in a large extent of work simultaneously, they will not be able to perform all of them perfectly.Just imagine how terrible it will be: too many jobs need to be done by the same person in a given time.Once such a picture appears in my mind, I feel dizzy.To me, it is impossible to do everything well with the limited energy and many others factors.Therefore , I agree with the statement too many things to be done at the same time cause few to be well done.The reasons are as follow.Revised：

第一句話對(duì)原題目意思進(jìn)行了很好的詮釋；第二、三句話進(jìn)一步解釋原題目；第四句話提出自己的觀點(diǎn)；第五句話過(guò)渡性句子引起下文。

案例2 ：語(yǔ)言羅嗦，繞彎子給出自己觀點(diǎn)，浪費(fèi)時(shí)間

Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible.Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time.Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.original：

With the development of science and technology, people’s living standard has been improving day by day.According to the family plan, one couple could have only one child.So child becomes the center of the whole family.Some of them are even spoiled.Therefore, I think it is better if the young adult could live independent from their parents as soon as possible.解析：

這個(gè)開(kāi)頭看似沒(méi)有任何問(wèn)題，但是仔細(xì)分析就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)很多問(wèn)題。首先，作者繞了個(gè)大彎才給出自己的觀點(diǎn)。其次，觀點(diǎn)是對(duì)原題目的抄寫，改動(dòng)的比較少。最后，開(kāi)篇缺少引起下文的過(guò)渡句。更大的錯(cuò)誤是這個(gè)開(kāi)頭更像是一個(gè)全文主要觀點(diǎn)的一個(gè)分論點(diǎn)。

Revised:

As we all know, some young adults have the sense of independence in a special period so that they want to choose to live apart from their family, while others still choose to stay with parents in the family.Family can provide young adults a warm bay where he or she could turn to whenever any problems arise.However, considering the sound development of the young adult both mentally and physically, I think to live independently the earlier, the better.Independence is a lesson that each of us must face one day.The detailed reasons are listed below.解析：

第一句話詮釋原題目意思；第二句話進(jìn)一步解釋第一句話；第三句話提出自己的觀點(diǎn)；第四句話解釋自己的觀點(diǎn)，引出下文。

integrated writing/綜合寫作:要求考生在3分鐘內(nèi)讀一篇文章，然后聽(tīng)一個(gè)lecture，在20分鐘內(nèi)根據(jù)文章和lecture內(nèi)容寫一篇250字左右文章比較兩者的觀點(diǎn)。（注：文章內(nèi)容和lecture內(nèi)容注定是對(duì)立的，如果你考的不是對(duì)立的，那只有一種可能，你的RP次到了人神共憤的地步了。）

綜合寫作的八股在于：第一段指出reading passage和lecture內(nèi)容是對(duì)立的；第二、三、四段從三個(gè)方面/點(diǎn)來(lái)說(shuō)明他們的內(nèi)容是怎樣對(duì)立的；第五段總結(jié)一下他們之間確實(shí)是對(duì)立關(guān)系。

independent writing/獨(dú)立寫作：給定一個(gè)題目，要求考生在30分鐘內(nèi)寫出400字左右的文章，要求邏輯清晰，論述有力，無(wú)明顯的語(yǔ)法和詞法錯(cuò)誤。

獨(dú)立寫作八股在于：第一段陳述你的觀點(diǎn)，支持哪一方；第二、三、四段從三個(gè)方面論述你的觀點(diǎn)；最后一段總結(jié)一下，綜上所述，某某觀點(diǎn)是正確的。

既然新托福兩篇作文都是八股文，那必然有各自的八卦寫法，接下來(lái)，讓我們來(lái)看一下怎樣寫八股托福作文。

綜合寫作：模板，套模板，一定要套模板！

理由：1，模板讓你的思路更加清晰，這是ETS要求的。

2，20分鐘！開(kāi)玩笑，怎么湊到300字？當(dāng)然要用模板！

3，閱讀聽(tīng)力我都不怕，就怕作文，寫三句話錯(cuò)兩句，我怎么得26+？當(dāng)然還是用模板，既然是模板就意味著是你精挑細(xì)選的句子，保證了寫作的質(zhì)量！

提醒：1，模板要富于變化，一篇只能用5句那你就要準(zhǔn)備10句！

2，模板不能一味照搬別人的，避免重復(fù)！

3，保證模板里的句子沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法和用詞錯(cuò)誤！

一般來(lái)說(shuō)，大家把一下幾個(gè)句子稍微變形，即完成了綜合寫作第一步

1.The lecturediscusses…which differs from the main idea in the reading that…（用于第一段）

2.The professormade the point that …The reading , in contrast, held a different view.（用于第一或第二三四段）

3.Another important pointshowed in the listening material is that …but the reading presents aconflicting idea that…（用于第三四段）

4.Finally, the professorstated that...which challenges the standpoint made by the writer who saidthat...（用于第四段）

5.In general, the professordiscussed the problem of …that the reading viewed in acontraryopposingdifferent angle.（最后總結(jié)段）

6.According tothe lecture… on the other hand while the reading stated that …

7.The professor made the pointthat… on the contrary in contrast however, the writer demonstrated an ideathat…

8.The lecturesupportsillustrates the idea that…

9.The lecturecontradictsrefutes is contrary to is the opposite of the idea that…

10.Contrary tothe belief in the passage that …the professor says that…

11.The professorrefutes the viewpoint showed in the passage that… by saying that…（6-11均用于第二三四段）

大家可以把連接詞變化一下，把動(dòng)詞變化一下或句式稍變，11句話靈活運(yùn)用。

除了模板以外，綜合寫作我們還需要做什么？

做筆記，做聽(tīng)力筆記！

99．9%的情況下，綜合寫作的主體內(nèi)容是三個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)，所以大家只要把這個(gè)三個(gè)點(diǎn)記下來(lái)，然后把閱讀里相應(yīng)的三點(diǎn)摳出來(lái)放到模板里面去，你的綜合寫作就做完了，就是這么簡(jiǎn)單！

獨(dú)立寫作怎么辦？

很遺憾，獨(dú)立寫作沒(méi)有固定的模板，起碼我沒(méi)用過(guò)。沒(méi)有模板怎么能叫八股文呢？獨(dú)立

寫作的八股在于它的題目很固定，如果不信，請(qǐng)翻看OG上給出了那幾百道例題。絕大部分題目是：**和**相比，你覺(jué)得哪個(gè)更好/更合理？/你更支持哪個(gè)觀點(diǎn)？一部分題目是：*******，你怎么辦？/你是怎么看的？

還有極小部分發(fā)散性題目很少考，而前面兩種其實(shí)是一種題目，不信？你看個(gè)例子。Q：Yourschoolhasreceived a gift of money.What do you think is the best wayforyourschool to spend this money? Use specific reasons and detailstosupport yourchoice.這個(gè)題目沒(méi)有給你二選一的選項(xiàng)，我們要做的是把它轉(zhuǎn)化為二選一，捐款的用途無(wú)外乎這么幾種：建圖書館、體育館（還可細(xì)分籃球、**。。）、學(xué)生公寓、辦公大樓、買電腦。。這么多選項(xiàng)你只要從中挑選一個(gè)，然后把這個(gè)和其他的相比較這篇文章你就搞定了！除了題目固定之外，寫作的手法同樣很固定。其實(shí)大家只要熟讀范文100篇，不會(huì)背書也能寫。而且能寫高分作文。具體的方法就是在論壇找到那誰(shuí)誰(shuí)誰(shuí)的185篇滿分作文，挑選其中你覺(jué)得寫的不錯(cuò)的把其中鋪墊的句型，轉(zhuǎn)換詞挑出來(lái)，背一背，背多了你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)所有的滿分作文其實(shí)是一個(gè)套路出來(lái)的流水線作品（除極少數(shù)作文）。流水線作文誰(shuí)不會(huì)寫呢？那滿分作文其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單的！

第二篇：托福寫作

Agree or disagree A university should focus more on its facilities, computers or laboratory, rather than on hiring famous teachers

Nowadays, highly education has been attached more important than before.A argue that school facilities should pay more attention than professor lecture.From my perspective, although such hardware like computer centers and science lab provide some benefits to university students, university depends on quality of stuff.Admittedly, a school equipped with great facilities is more appealing the applicants.The reason is that it can make study easier.A bright library offers such a quiet condition for knowledge absorption;a computer center provides a self-govern ways to study;a science lab make student get more practice about miracles.However, this factors become less considerate when it comes to the quality of the professors.For one thing, not only do famous teachers can impart the knowledge, but instill the angle that to solve the problem.To pass on knowledge, a human is no better than a machine or a high-tech tool.The difference lies in the

special ways to get the solutions and the potential inspiration by the former.Take my favorite teacher for example, she often shows us some different way to solve the difficulties.And then she tells us the angle to work out the problem.As for me, it was not until her explanation, that I know about the easier way to work the problem.That is something that high-tech can barely achieve.For another, universities with qualified teachers tend to have higher graduate employment.It is not hard to imagine that a teacher with connections can bring more opportunity to get internship.As an old saying goes, knowledge starts with practice.It is still true now.Students who swamped in labs, would never face the brutal fact that you need a window for people to see what you’ve got.In this way, a well-connect professor can open that for you, instead of lifeless labs.In conclusion, though facilities could promote learning, but it fail to generate more practical merits to students.Recruit more qualified teacher should be paid more attention and stress.

第三篇：托福寫作欣賞

托福寫作范文欣賞：a new university in your community

摘要：新托?？荚噷懽魅绻忌肽酶叻郑X子里一定要有幾篇文章，背上幾篇范文，能以備不時(shí)只需。托福寫作是中國(guó)考生的弱項(xiàng)，只有在日常生活中多讀些范文，了解托福寫作中的邏輯思

新托?？荚噷懽魅绻忌肽酶叻郑X子里一定要有幾篇文章，背上幾篇范文，能以備不時(shí)只需。托福寫作是中國(guó)考生的弱項(xiàng)，只有在日常生活中多讀些范文，了解托福寫作中的邏輯思維，才可更好的進(jìn)行鍛煉。下面我們一起欣賞這篇托福寫作范文。

這篇托福獨(dú)立寫作滿分范文的主要內(nèi)容是討論了如果政府宣布計(jì)劃興建一所新的大學(xué)，而有些人認(rèn)為你所在的社區(qū)是個(gè)建大學(xué)的好地方，那么請(qǐng)你也對(duì)比一下在你所在的社區(qū)建新大學(xué)的好處和壞處。The government has announced that it plans to build a new university.Some people think that your community would be a good place to locate the university.Compare the advantages and disadvantages of establishing a new university in your community.Use specific details in your discussion.①優(yōu)點(diǎn)：學(xué)生上學(xué)方便;促進(jìn)當(dāng)?shù)氐慕逃l(fā)展

②優(yōu)點(diǎn)：促進(jìn)當(dāng)?shù)禺a(chǎn)業(yè)發(fā)展，提供就業(yè)崗位

③缺點(diǎn)：本區(qū)很多老人，將極大影響他們的生活，其他人的生活也不再安寧

④缺點(diǎn)：交通、環(huán)境問(wèn)題轉(zhuǎn)自:考試網(wǎng)-[Examw.Com]

My community is located in a quiet and small town with very

beautiful natural sceneries.The environment is very suitable for a new university.Everyone in my community would without doubt enjoy a sense of pride when informed that a new university will be built here.However, just as any other constructions, this action will bring many advantages as well as disadvantages to my community.The most essential and exciting advantage is that a new university will definitely enhance the education on all levels in my community.Usually, children living nearby a university would frequently visit or play in the university, and thus they can be unconsciously influenced by the academic environment.This influence might be more effective to them than any preach from their parents about the importance of studying.By building a new university, children in my community will develop a greater motivation for studying hard.Moreover, with a university located nearby, all the primary schools, middle schools will have a greater sense of competition.The teachers may encourage the students to work harder to get a university degree, since it would be very embarrassing that the students of their own community could not be admitted by the new university.Besides, a new university in my community will boom the local economy.As we all know, universities are always surrounded by a wide range of stores, restaurants and markets which provide services to the students and faculty.Thus it is very likely that the new university will

encourage the local residents to offer their services around the school.As a result, more people will be employed and the employment rate which bothers the government for years might eventually drop.However, with closer examination, the disadvantages of building a new university in my community could also be formidable.Since my community is far from the city, most of its residents are seniors.Even for the younger people living here, they prefer a quiet environment and are afraid of any major changes made to their lives.Therefore, the attention brought by a new university might be unbearable to these local people.To be specific, traffic will no doubt increase in the near future.With more cars and people on the roads, it is possible that the local environmental quality will decrease.If the air is no more clean, our community might lose its strongest attraction.Then current residents might feel quite reluctant to live here in the future.In sum, the advantages of building a new university in my community seems very promising, yet we have to consider the undesirable consequences it might bring about.The government should really be cautious and take all the possible factors into consideration before making such a decision.'

我們并不主張考生死記范文，考試時(shí)如果遇到類似題目照搬上去，這并不能考察考生的寫作能力。新托福考試寫作多背一些范文，可以積累一些素材，像好的短語(yǔ)、詞、句等，靈活運(yùn)用。

第四篇：托福寫作

Do you agree or disagree that university should spend money on improving facilities(labs and general requirements)rather than hiring famous teachers?

Nowadays it rarely surprises us any more that there are relatively large numbers of facilities such as labs and libraries in the campus of universities.However, hordes of people are likely to go to extremes to hold that the university should not spend that much money on improving facilities on account of the lack of fund.Perhaps there is a slice of credibility in their argument, but I, without hesitation, advocate that it’s really essential for the universities to improve facilities

Granted, it is true that by saving money from the investment of facilities, the universities may concentrate more on the development of curriculum and the welfare which is provided for the teachers and professors.The statistics from the Harvard University reveal, astonishingly, that 62.7% people suggest that the universities should not be too eager to develop the general requirements.However, they ignore the fact that these facilities provided by the universities will definitely benefit the students in more ways than one.First and foremost, what never seizes to enthrall me is that the facilities will build a great atmosphere for the people(mainly college students)to study and relax.If the university constructs a great library which stores up millions of books or more, it will surely appeal to lots of studious students and those who don’t have the opportunity to attend the university.So actually this kind of facilities benefits the whole society, so do labs and other general requirements.Also, facilities like a natatorium or a gym can provide the basic facilities for students to relax.As we all know, students suffer both from studying burden and everyday lives.They need a way to relax, and these facilities just happen to provide great opportunities to relieve and extenuate their pressure.Therefore, there is no denying that by spending money on improving facilities a university will, to a great extent, enrich the students’ knowledge and broaden their horizon and give them the chance to relax at the same time.Moreover, the reputation gained from various facilities exerts a considerable fascination on me.If a university has more facilities which can provide students with more privilege, it can surely attract more top students who want the best education.Also, a famous university with variety numbers of facilities can add to the prestige of the city, the province, even the country which it belongs to.A case concerns MIT, which is one of the most celebrated universities all over the world.It has gained a high reputation for its prominent labs and stat-of-the-art equipments which provide students with the remarkable experimental qualification.Also, it makes its city, Cambridge, better known by the people as a cosmopolitan, international and civilized conurbation.Accordingly, it is apparent that the variety of the universities will make itself more eminent, therefore making significant contribution to the prosperity of the region.In conclusion, it is true that the limitation on funding facilities will economize some manpower and material resources for a university, but in order to provide both the students andthe universities with a bright future, spending money on these general equipments should never be off the table by a university.

第五篇：托福寫作素材經(jīng)典練習(xí)

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托福寫作素材經(jīng)典練習(xí)

書籍是我們最為沉浸而永恒的朋友;是最易接近和才華橫溢的顧問(wèn);是最為耐心的良師。

經(jīng)驗(yàn)的重要性:

Work and experience create and broaden our knowledge.It is of value to test the veracity of the indirect book knowledge by applying it to reality.Sir Isaac Newton, applied mathematics to his personal experience, resulting the discovery of kinetic theory.Nicholus Copernicus, through extensive observation and existing scientific analysis, calculated the earth and other planets’ orbit around the sun.Such knowledge is now easily assessable in textbooks, but would require decades of work on our own to research and understand that phenomenon.Books are valuable when knowledge is beyond the scope of our experiences.Perhaps the most obvious examples are those fluent writers.They write various stories, the scopes of which are far beyond any individual's experiences.Take Joyce Carol Oates for example, her productivity has been prodigious, accumulating in less than two decades to nearly thirty titles, including novels, collections of short stories and verse, plays and literary criticism.Although some of them appear to come from her own direct observations, her dreams, and her fears, much more is clearly from the experiences of others.Her fictive world remains strikingly akin to that real one reflected in the daily newspapers, the television news and talk shows, and the popular magazines of our day.學(xué)習(xí)方式：

興趣的重要性

哥倫布 Christopher Columbus As a child, he helped his father as a weaver.He always liked the sea.Genoa was an important seaport.There is no doubt that as a child he caught rides on ships.He had little schooling but was a genius with the sea.His plan was not to prove that the world was flat, but it was to find a shortcut to the Spice Islands.He wanted to establish a city there for trade, seaports, and much more.When he grew into a man he was interested in sailing to Asia by going west.學(xué)一科還是學(xué)很多科

Leonardo da Vinci is best remembered as the painter of the Mona Lisa(1503-1506)and The Last Supper(1495).But he's almost equally famous for his astonishing multiplicity of talents: he dabbled in architecture, sculpture, engineering, geology, hydraulics and the military arts, all with success, and in his spare time doodled parachutes and flying machines that resembled inventions of the 19th and 20th centuries.He made detailed drawings of human anatomy which are still highly regarded today.Leonardo also was quirky enough to write notebook entries in mirror

decades after his death.學(xué)一科還是學(xué)多科 generalist

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(backwards)script, a trick which kept many of his observations from being widely known until

Professionals and specialists have always found knowledge of other disciplines helpful and inspiring.If students are allowed to enroll only in the courses that will help prepare them for jobs in their chosen fields, the blockades between disciplines will not only hamper discoveries at the boundaries, but also preclude infusion of fresh ideas and inspiration.With a broader knowledge base, students can choose disciplines of concentration, complexity, and profundity according to their interest.As a saying goes, interest is the best teacher.You cannot account on one to succeed in a field in which he is not interested in and the scarcity of the interest can lead to a disappearance of creativity too.interest

experience

idea

學(xué)文科還是理科?

Music and art are very mathematical.In the early 1400s, Leon Battista Alberti suggested painting be considered a liberal Art with a scientific basis.In De Pictura he exposed optical perspective as a geometrical technique which could be applied by artists to their work.書本知識(shí)

讀書類

You can cover a great deal of country in books.Life-transforming ideas have always come to me through books.Books are the quietest and most constant of friends;they are the most accessible and wisest of counselors, and the most patient of teachers.