第一篇：廣西防城港市2016高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí) 書面表達(dá)學(xué)生觀摩篇

書面表達(dá)學(xué)生觀摩篇（4）

【福建省漳州市2014高考英語第三次聯(lián)考試題】 書面表達(dá)（25分）

一項社會調(diào)查發(fā)現(xiàn)，目前許多在城市上班的子女因為工作等原因每年只能回鄉(xiāng)下老家或者甚至常年沒回家，忽視了家里年邁的父母。老人常常盼著子女回家吃飯或者哪怕打個電話，可是經(jīng)常希望落空。請用英語寫一篇短文反應(yīng)此情況，說說你的感想，并呼吁全社會來關(guān)心老年人。詞數(shù)：120左右。

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【參考范文】One possible version: Nowadays, many young people who work in big cities rarely return home to see their old parents, who, however, expect their children to be back to have dinners with them, or just make a phone call every day, especially during festivals.As a result, their expects often become disappointments.In my opinion, the old don’t ask for much.They simply hope their children can come back, talk with them and have a meal together.But the young fail to do so.They think the old are satisfied as long as they have enough to eat and drink.In fact, they can easily get lonely and they often miss their children.So the young should spend more time with their parents and also it’s time that our society took some measures to solve this problem and call on everyone to care about the old.Only in this way can we make our society more beautiful.【山東省日照市2014高考英語一模試卷】 寫作(滿分30分)外教Chris Pearson開設(shè)了一個英語輔導(dǎo)班(English Tutorial)，按照學(xué)生實際需要進(jìn)行輔導(dǎo)。參加者須根據(jù)個人實際情況提出中請并選擇輔導(dǎo)內(nèi)容。假如你是李明，請你按照下面提示給外教寫一個電子郵件。內(nèi)容如下： 1．介紹個人情況：

2．說明輔導(dǎo)意向(如：口語、語法、寫作、文化知識等其中的一項或幾項)； 3．表達(dá)愿望。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：120-150；開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總側(cè)數(shù)； 2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dear Mr Pearson，I am writing you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial．________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________

【參考的范圍】One possible version: Dear Mr Pearson, I am writing you to apply for the membership of the English Tutorial.As a Senior Grade 3 student, I think I’m doing well in English because I always get good marks in written English tests.But still I think I am not a perfect learner because I’m not so good at spoken English, and that is what troubles me most.And when I listen to native speakers, I find it hard to catch what they talk about.Whenever I speak English, I often make some mistakes, which annoys me.So, I want to be a member in the speaking tutorial so that I can improve my spoken English and communicate better with others.I’m sure I’ll do much better in it with your help.Looking forward to your reply.3mobile phone or other means to get in touch with his parents.He was angry and felt lonely.He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.[寫作內(nèi)容] 1.以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。

2.以約120個詞講述一次你（或你的朋友）想家的經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括： ⑴ 時間、地點和起因；

⑵ 想家給學(xué)習(xí)和生活帶來的影響； ⑶ 你（或你朋友）是如何應(yīng)對的。[寫作要求] 1.作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。[評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)] 概括準(zhǔn)確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容何時，語句連貫。

【參考范文】讀寫任務(wù)：Version 1: Sam, a student, was sent to a boarding school, in which he missed his parents very much, and thus he got sick and could not focus his attention on his lessons.(31 words)In fact, in real life, everyone must have an experience of feeling homesick.I remember when I was 10 years old, because my parents were busy, I was sent to my uncle’s in another city.Right here, I would have to study in school for two years.Although my uncle and his family were really kind to me, I still felt homesick.At first, I couldn’t sleep well, because I didn’t adapt to the climate there.And, since different teachers have different teaching styles, it was difficult for me to understand the lessons in the beginning.Besides, I was new for the students there.As a result, hardly did I have any close friends.Feeling terribly lonely, I couldn’t help thinking my parents and my fellow guys in my city every now and then.However, as days went on, I slowly adapted myself to the new environment.It was

第二篇：2014屆高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)測試 書面表達(dá)7

2014屆高考英語二輪專題復(fù)習(xí)測試：書面表達(dá)

1.假設(shè)你是李華，在外教Mr.Smith 的課堂上使用手機(jī)，影響了同學(xué)們上課，手機(jī)被 Mr.Smith 拿走，現(xiàn)在你想要回手機(jī)，請根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一封郵件發(fā)給外教Mr.Smith，闡述需要拿回手機(jī)的理由：

承認(rèn)自己的錯誤；攜帶手機(jī)的必要性；作出承諾。要求：

1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Mr.Smith, ________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely，Li Hua

2.假設(shè)你是李紅,你的一位美國筆友Robert寫E-mail問及你高考后暑假的安排,請根據(jù)以下要點,寫一封100詞左右的email回復(fù)他, 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

1.學(xué)開車 2.參加英語培訓(xùn)課程 3.去北京看奧運會 4.游覽北京的名勝 注意:1.根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文,不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。

2.要準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯;使用一定的句型、詞匯,清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思;3.詞數(shù):100個左右。開頭已給出,不計詞數(shù)。Dear Robert, How time flies!

3.近日，你校學(xué)生吃零食現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重，為此學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備舉行一次主題英語演講活動。請你根據(jù)下列提示以Don’t Eat Snacks為題撰寫一篇英語演講稿，呼吁同學(xué)們不要吃零食。

1.現(xiàn)象；

2.危害（金錢、健康及環(huán)境等方面）。注意：

1.詞數(shù)120左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3.演講稿的開頭與結(jié)束語已為你寫好（不計入總詞數(shù)）。

Don’t Eat Snacks

Good morning, everyone!The topic of my speech today is “Don’t eat snacks”.___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening.4.假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上得知一個國際中學(xué)生組織將在新加坡((Singapore)舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學(xué)生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。

內(nèi)容主要包括: I.自我介紹(包括英語能力);2.參加意圖(介紹中國、了解其他國家);3.希望獲準(zhǔn).注意: 1.詞數(shù)100左右: 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua，Regards, Li Hua

5.請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。

You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim.Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.2

6.假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班的學(xué)生李華，校報英文版正在開展“續(xù)寫雷鋒日記”活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，將上周六你所做的一件好事敘述下來，向校報投稿。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

試卷答案

1.I’m sorry to interrupt you.It’s my fault to use my cell-phone in class.However, it’s necessary for me to own a cell-phone in my daily life.Reasons can be listed as follows.Firstly, carrying a cell-phone is popular among students.It’s convenient for students to keep in touch with their parents by cell-phone.Secondly, individuals can communicate more easily with each other though a cell-phone.Thirdly, students can find useful information for their study using cell-phones.Only until now can I realize the side effect of carrying a cell-phone.I promise that I won’t use my cell-phone in class from now on.Yours sincerely，Li Hua

2.Dear Robert: How time flies!The happy days we shared often shines in my memory.What about you? As you know, my college entrance exam is approaching, which also announces the end of this sort of pressing study life.However,I intend to have a meaningful summer vacation.First, I will learn to drive to get a driving license, which is a new activity for a high school graduate in China.I will have a good rest, enjoying my hobbies.Then I will take some English courses to improve my English communication ability, With the 2008 Olympics beginning, I will be a participant of it, watching the basketball match between China and the US.I have been dreaming of Kobe’s performance long.After that, I will pay a visit to some tourist attractions to widen my horizon.That is the plan for my vacation.I am looking forward to being told about your arrangements of vacation.Give me your quick reply soon, OK? Best wishes!

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Don’t Eat Snacks

Good morning, everyone!The topic of my speech today is “Don’t eat snacks”.As you can see, there is a serious phenomenon in our school that many students will crowd in the school store to buy snacks after each class and some students even eat snacks in class.Eating snacks is a bad habit and is also a waste of money.In addition, most snacks are unhealthy food, for they contain too much fat and sugar.Eating snacks improperly may lead to fatness and illness.What’s worse, some students throw the wrappers everywhere, which pollutes our campus.Dear fellow students, it’s high time that we shouldn’t act like kids any more.We high school students, should develop good eating habits.Remember that three regular meals a day as well as a balanced diet are essential for us.Let’s form good eating habits and say no to snacks.Thanks for listening.4.Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it.I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it.I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English.What is more, I'JI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!

Regards, Li Hua

5.Everyone has a dream.Just like the boy in the picture.He is climbing a 5

ladder to reach the stars.Although the stars seem far too high for him to reach, the boy is still making great effort.Some people may laugh at the boy.But in my opinion, dreams are like the stars hanging high in the sky.Even though we may not reach them, we can look up and enjoy their beauty, believe in them, and try to follow where they lead.What’s more, in fulfilling our dreams, we may run into many difficulties.We should face them bravely and manage to find ways to solve the problems.Like the boy in the picture, we should find a ladder to success and move up step by step.The more difficulties we overcome, the closer we are to our dreams.Dreams are the most valuable things we have in our life.They inspire us, they fire us up, and they make us work wonders.Fulfilling our dreams makes our life full and meaningful.6.Last Saturday afternoon I went home with my friend Wang Wei.We were talking happily when a man riding a motorbike passed us quickly.To our great surprise, some 100-yuan notes dropped to the ground from the bag hanging on his motorbike.Hurriedly I shouted at the top of my voice to stop him.But he rode away without hearing me.Seeing the notes scattered on the road, Wang Wei and I decided to pick up the money and wait for the man to come back.Some people seeing what had happened also helped to collect the money.A

few minutes later, the man rode back, with sweet on his forehead.He was in a great panic when he saw many people picking up the money.He must have thought that we would go away with his hard-earned money.So when all of us returned the money to him he was so moved and relieved that he kept saying “thank you”.I was so happy that I could give a hand to the man who was in trouble.It was a really rewarding and fulfilling afternoon.

第三篇：湖北省高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)專題訓(xùn)練：完成句子+寫作

完成句子+短文寫作（57）

第一節(jié)：完成句子

1.With __________________(一切打包好了), the soldiers who withdrew from the front couldn’t wait to get home in no time.(pack)2.Only by shouting __________________(他才能)make himself heard by people on the other side of the river.(able)3.What he mentions is __________________(與?無關(guān))what he is up to at the moment.(do)4.Although she was not the group leader, she insisted that __________________(自己來安排)the trip properly.(organize)5.It is the first time that I __________________(參觀)the Summer Palace.(pay)6.It is not easy for a Chinese to __________________(像?一樣流利地說英語)as a native speaker.(fluently)7.I am advised __________________(利用)my spare time to practise playing the guitar.(make)8.__________________(以?為基礎(chǔ))what happened to him many years ago, it reads like a real-life story.(base)9.__________________(因為)his carelessness that we are suffering a great loss.(because)10.I have been dreaming of climbing that mountain, __________________(山頂上聳立著)an old temple.(stand)

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第二節(jié)：寫作

假如你校要舉辦一次主題為“How to communicate with friends”的英語演講比賽，請你用英語寫一篇演講稿。要點如下：

1．尊重并信任朋友； 2．常與朋友聊天； 3．換位思考問題。注意：

1．詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．參考詞匯：換位思考 put oneself in sb’s shoes

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第四篇：湖北省高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)書面表達(dá)專題訓(xùn)練：完成句子+寫作

完成句子+短文寫作（61）

10.So difficult I find it(解決這個問題)that I decided to ask my

teacher for advice.(work)

第二節(jié)：寫作

90后出生的學(xué)生行為方式和價值觀令人擔(dān)憂。假如你是90后出生的學(xué)生，請根據(jù)下表中所提供的信息以”Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”為題寫

一篇英語演講稿，以消除人們的憂慮。

面臨更多的升學(xué)和就業(yè)煩惱，所處環(huán)境競爭更

90后的境遇

加激烈。

1、注重自我，輕視合作，……

人們的憂慮

2、缺乏毅力，容易氣餒，……

3、盲目追求，渴望成名，……

敢于挑戰(zhàn)，……

我們的長處

（請考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，再列舉兩至三點）

注意：

1、對所給要點，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

2、詞數(shù)在120左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

3、演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。

Good afternoon, everyone!

The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”.Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the

90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.Thank you for your listening!

第一節(jié)：完成句子

1.Take part in

2.making/having made so foolish/stupid a mistake

3.we would have got lost

4.What people are concerned about

5.taken into consideration

6.that the war had ended

7.where I was brought up

8.will deal better with

9.did we express sympathy

10.to work out the problem

第二節(jié)： 寫作（one possible version）Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised people’s concern.They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do.Besides, they consider us as lacking in determination, and this is what it takes to do any job well.Without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty.They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly,which will in turn ruin our values and future.However, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses.Firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams.In addition, we are quick-minded and creative.We can do our work more efficiently.Yet, we still need to learn more from those experienced.Please do trust us!

Thank you for your listening!

第五篇：高考英語第一輪復(fù)習(xí)知識點 書面表達(dá)

高考英語第一輪復(fù)習(xí)知識點 書面表達(dá)

來源： 互聯(lián)網(wǎng)

高考第一輪如何復(fù)習(xí)一直都是考生們關(guān)注的話題，整理了 高考英語第一輪復(fù)習(xí)知識點之書面表達(dá)，希望為考生們提供服務(wù)。下面為您解讀高考第一輪復(fù)習(xí)策略。

在歷年的高考評卷過程中，閱卷老師是如何評判一份卷子的，閱卷人最注重的是什么，是每個高考考生迫切想知道的，筆者將結(jié)合多年的高考閱卷經(jīng)驗，告訴大家如何在高考中勝人一籌，在書面表達(dá)上拿到高檔次的分?jǐn)?shù)。書面表達(dá)在評閱時遵循語言第一位(語言高級)，內(nèi)容第二位(要點齊全)，結(jié)構(gòu)第三位(文章分段)的原則，也就是說閱卷老師最注重的是語言，換句話說是亮點，根據(jù)語言使用情況，亮點的多少而定出檔次，所以考生在書面表達(dá)中語言上的亮點是得高分的關(guān)鍵。亮點一共有四種：

一、高級詞匯和語法;

二、修辭手法;

三、有效的連詞;

四、名人名言或諺語。首先簡單介紹亮點當(dāng)中至關(guān)重要的高級語法，以及修辭手法當(dāng)中的一些技巧的使用。

肯定不如雙否好

修辭的使用在書面表達(dá)中算作很大的亮點，在高中階段很少有學(xué)生會注重修辭的應(yīng)用。雙重否定也是種修辭，而且對于考生來說，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中設(shè)計雙重否定的句子。例如想表達(dá)“郵遞員天天準(zhǔn)時到”，如果寫成The postman comes on time every day，就不如變成雙重否定，The postman never fails to come on time，就變成了亮點句，起到強(qiáng)調(diào)作用。幾乎每個人對生活的態(tài)度都不同程度受到地震的影響，寫成雙重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not affected by the earthquake.應(yīng)用類似的修辭會在高考中為考生加分。

陳述不如倒裝妙

在書面表達(dá)中閱卷老師喜歡看到的高級語法共有五種：倒裝，強(qiáng)調(diào)，從句，獨立主格和分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，以及虛擬語氣。倒裝是一種最簡單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點的方法。在高中階段只需掌握倒裝的四種形式，足以應(yīng)對書面表達(dá)，如何應(yīng)用倒裝，有很多方法和技巧。

主動不如被動巧

在近些年的閱卷中，發(fā)現(xiàn)考生在寫作中很少使用被動語態(tài)，也許是受中文思維的影響，幾乎整篇文章都使用主動語態(tài)。其實在英文中，被動語態(tài)的使用是很重要的。因為英語是一門客觀的語言，而漢語是主觀的語言，具體體現(xiàn)在英語中經(jīng)常用被動語態(tài)，漢語經(jīng)常用主動語態(tài);英語中經(jīng)常用物稱或形式主語開頭，強(qiáng)調(diào)一件事發(fā)生在什么人身上，而漢語經(jīng)常用人稱開頭強(qiáng)調(diào)一個人發(fā)生了什么事。所以使用被動語態(tài)符合英語的習(xí)慣，如果能將整個文章中兩個句子變成被動語態(tài)，就會呈現(xiàn)句型的變化，使整個文章句型豐富。例如在2006年的高考中，很多學(xué)生在表達(dá)我們每次可以借五本書最多借十天時，都是用：We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.這句話如果寫成：At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days，分?jǐn)?shù)會更高。