第一篇：考研創(chuàng)造閃光點(diǎn)

創(chuàng)造閃光點(diǎn)，作文亮一點(diǎn)！

作文是各類英語(yǔ)考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學(xué)們?cè)谡莆樟艘欢ǖ淖魑哪０澹突镜恼Z(yǔ)法、詞匯、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中創(chuàng)造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點(diǎn)，必定會(huì)使你的作文如虎添翼！

高分作文標(biāo)志 1：是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉；

2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ)；

3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；

4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；

5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：

1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

比如說(shuō)： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I By Simmy

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into

Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing numbers of individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語(yǔ)的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語(yǔ)，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)

Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強(qiáng)調(diào)

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語(yǔ)

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)

Facet 替換 aspect

各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn)，作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢！

以下是30個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下。

1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising

(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good

3readful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad

如果bad做表語(yǔ)，可以有be less impressive替換

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some

6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that，hold the view that, it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged that)替think

(因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z(yǔ)，所以要加that)

7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing

8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits)10or my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more(注意沒(méi)有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly

13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer

15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb.be interested in

18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth

23.desire 替換want.24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 替換remember

26.enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過(guò)程的意思)

27.interaction替換communication

28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance

30.next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible

希望各位朋友能夠在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中多總結(jié)精彩、地道的詞匯和句型閃光點(diǎn)，并與大家共享！

163分到340分

--------------致同等學(xué)歷的師弟師妹

十一假期如期來(lái)臨,我也終于有足夠的時(shí)間坐下來(lái)寫點(diǎn)東西．我構(gòu)思了好長(zhǎng)時(shí)間才最終寫出了這些，如果我寫的這些東西對(duì)同等學(xué)歷的師弟師妹們考研復(fù)習(xí)有一點(diǎn)幫助的話，那對(duì)我將是莫大的榮幸.我于2005年畢業(yè)于河南洛陽(yáng)某?？茖W(xué)校，畢業(yè)后在鄭州某電子衡器公司從事機(jī)械設(shè)計(jì),2007年一月參加研究生入學(xué)考試以163分的成績(jī)敗北.2007年6月1日正式辭職開(kāi)始復(fù)習(xí)考研,并在2008年的入學(xué)考試中以340分的總成績(jī)被江蘇省某大學(xué)順利錄取.我知道340的成績(jī)對(duì)于一般的本科應(yīng)屆生來(lái)說(shuō)不算什么,可是它對(duì)于一個(gè)高等數(shù)學(xué)只學(xué)過(guò)一點(diǎn)皮毛;線形代數(shù)學(xué)了一半;概率論與數(shù)理統(tǒng)計(jì)根本沒(méi)有接觸過(guò);英語(yǔ)沒(méi)有過(guò)四級(jí),甚至連一點(diǎn)語(yǔ)法都沒(méi)有;專業(yè)課教材是在工作后自己買的人來(lái)

說(shuō)是多么的可貴!

朋友,如果你的基礎(chǔ)和我的差不多,我認(rèn)為你可以一試,如果你的基

礎(chǔ)遠(yuǎn)比我好,那你還猶豫什么?！

能夠給予大家激勵(lì)和動(dòng)力的文章考研加油站(004km.cn)里“同等學(xué)歷”版塊里有很多(注：此處決不是做廣告，而是本人考研之初經(jīng)常受到考研加油站里面熱心研友的幫忙和鼓勵(lì)，事實(shí)求是不由得不提及)。在此本人僅向那些奮斗在考研一線的同等學(xué)歷的戰(zhàn)友們致敬！你們工作了兩年，并最終能決定考研，實(shí)在難能可貴！

下面我將會(huì)詳細(xì)的介紹我復(fù)習(xí)的一些細(xì)節(jié)和經(jīng)驗(yàn)，大家可以根據(jù)自

己的情況選擇。

首先說(shuō)英語(yǔ)。

選擇題部分。最初我把大量的精力都放在了單詞上，我用的是一款記單詞軟件，后來(lái)發(fā)現(xiàn)效果不甚理想，就干脆記大綱上的詞匯表，我認(rèn)為效果很好。我堅(jiān)決反對(duì)“單詞不重要”的說(shuō)法，因?yàn)樵囅?，拿到一篇文章，即便你沒(méi)有一點(diǎn)英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)法的知識(shí)，但認(rèn)識(shí)所有的單詞，并以你20多年的人生閱歷，搞定它還不是小菜一碟。但換過(guò)來(lái)，你的語(yǔ)法即使達(dá)到博士水平，可一個(gè)單詞不認(rèn)識(shí)，你能保證能搞定嗎？答案是顯而易見(jiàn)的。一句話，單詞很重要！

接下來(lái)說(shuō)主觀題部分。我認(rèn)為如果基礎(chǔ)不好，又想在最短的時(shí)間內(nèi)拿到最高的分?jǐn)?shù)，那就只能靠主觀題部分了,因?yàn)閷?duì)于大綱要求的5400多單詞不是一時(shí)半會(huì)能搞定的,而主觀題部分則不然,只要你在最后兩

個(gè)月突擊一下,準(zhǔn)能拿個(gè)高分.翻譯題我認(rèn)為一定要寫,無(wú)論你寫的對(duì)還是不對(duì),記住:只有你寫了

答案才有可能得分.小作文要求是一百單詞,一般是要求寫一封信,其實(shí)如果你很熟悉英文書寫格式的話很容易搞定,下面給一個(gè)例子:

Dear xxx

First of all, thank for …./ am apologize to…

I’m writing this letter in order to …..It will be a favor to me to receive you letter lately.And thanks

for you attention.Your sincerely

Xxxx

這不就是二三十個(gè)單詞嗎?中間根據(jù)要求再填七十多個(gè)單詞還不簡(jiǎn)

單? 大作文是200單詞,其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單,一般是根據(jù)一幅圖片寫議論文,記住第一段提出觀點(diǎn);第二段具體寫出能支持或者論證你的觀點(diǎn)的若干條理由,最好帶點(diǎn)實(shí)例以證明你的觀點(diǎn);第三段總結(jié).其實(shí)絕大多數(shù)考生的英語(yǔ)水平都是一般般的,尤其是寫作,所以一定要讓你的作文里面出現(xiàn)一兩個(gè)讓人的眼睛能為之一亮的,而且很多地方都可以用上的句子,當(dāng)然最好是英文諺語(yǔ),或者是極其經(jīng)典的句子,譬如: what we are doing willingly is easy.It may become one tool that opens windows to the world, unlocks doors to opportunities, and expands our minds to new ideas.等等.這些句子如果在你的文章當(dāng)中能用上三四個(gè)，當(dāng)然會(huì)讓你的文章光芒四射，高分也自然是順理成章。順便說(shuō)下，千萬(wàn)被寫跑了題，看準(zhǔn)了圖片和題意要求再寫，去年有好戰(zhàn)友就是失蹄于此,教

訓(xùn)非常沉痛。

記得考試下來(lái)我根據(jù)網(wǎng)上的答案60分的選擇題我估了23分，當(dāng)時(shí)很是郁悶，可成績(jī)下來(lái)一看英語(yǔ)53分，我感到很是意外。細(xì)細(xì)想來(lái)是主觀題做的好的原因。同時(shí)我建議做英語(yǔ)題先寫作文，再做翻譯，然后閱讀理解，最后完形填空，原因自己想。最后，字一定要寫好。記住，一手好字和一手爛字的可能差距在6分左右。我想至少也應(yīng)給能做到書

寫認(rèn)真吧。

數(shù)學(xué)，數(shù)學(xué)基礎(chǔ)很重要，課本一定要透徹。建議提前開(kāi)始復(fù)習(xí)，并給最后的總復(fù)習(xí)留出三個(gè)月的時(shí)間。同時(shí)我不建議做很多的模擬題，因?yàn)槟M題和真題的水平相差甚遠(yuǎn)。做五套足矣，但要做三遍以上。要搞懂每一道真題，尤其近幾年的。我建議真題做四遍以上。不要以為我是在故弄玄虛，做四遍不能得滿分的大有人在。數(shù)學(xué)我不想多說(shuō)，總結(jié)就

一個(gè)字：精。

我的數(shù)學(xué)只的了88分，原因很簡(jiǎn)單，我從6月分看教材，到11月才結(jié)束，根本沒(méi)有時(shí)間做真題和模擬練習(xí)。最后買的復(fù)習(xí)資料全新轉(zhuǎn)手

買給了別人。

政治。政治大綱的變化每年都會(huì)有很多，但是基本的東西是不會(huì)變的，所以大可不必?fù)?dān)心大綱的變化。而且不用復(fù)習(xí)的太早，最后留出兩三個(gè)月的時(shí)間就OK了。有人會(huì)問(wèn)有沒(méi)有必要報(bào)班，我的回答是沒(méi)有必要，報(bào)班純粹是給自己找個(gè)心理安慰。試想，一個(gè)班少則幾十人，多則幾百人，每個(gè)人的基礎(chǔ)都不一樣，老師怎么能照顧的過(guò)來(lái)？作為一名合格的準(zhǔn)研究生，我們都已經(jīng)不再是孩子，我們需要獨(dú)立思考：我們需要什么。去年我們一起復(fù)習(xí)的我身邊戰(zhàn)友絕大多數(shù)都報(bào)了培訓(xùn)班,可是當(dāng)我問(wèn)及他們最終的感覺(jué)怎么樣,他們的回答是:沒(méi)用!我建議買套任汝芬的政治資料，切不說(shuō)權(quán)威與否，至少他們搞這個(gè)很多年，經(jīng)驗(yàn)還是有的。最好弄套MP3。在吃飯，上廁所的時(shí)候都能聽(tīng)聽(tīng)政治課，豈不美哉！MP3很容易搞到，網(wǎng)上也有。（我認(rèn)為為了考研買一個(gè)MP3是很必

要的）

專業(yè)課 專業(yè)課拿不到120分以上就是沒(méi)有考好。最好通過(guò)關(guān)系弄點(diǎn)真題，一般來(lái)說(shuō)網(wǎng)上有下載，如果沒(méi)有，就要自己想辦法了。最好和你想報(bào)的學(xué)校的往屆研究生取得聯(lián)系。最后，提幾點(diǎn)建議：

1，如果你有一臺(tái)電腦，并且可以上網(wǎng)，可以打游戲，我建議你把網(wǎng)線去掉，把游戲刪掉。因?yàn)槟阈枰獣r(shí)間。2，如果你有女朋友并且正在一起為考研而奮斗，我建議最好兩個(gè)人保持一定的距離，最好不要住在一起，因?yàn)槟阈枰獣r(shí)間和精力去學(xué)習(xí),男女搭配干活不累,在這里不適用。3，如果你在自己舒適的家里學(xué)習(xí)，我建議你去某大學(xué)的自習(xí)室，最好是研究生專用的那種。（鄭州的同學(xué)可以去鄭大核心教學(xué)區(qū)南三，那棟樓有水，有暖氣，有電，而且全是考研的同胞。本人就曾在次學(xué)習(xí)，感謝鄭大?。?，如果你是在孤軍奮斗，我建議你找?guī)讉€(gè)同專業(yè)，最好是報(bào)考同一個(gè)學(xué)校的同學(xué)共同學(xué)習(xí)，大家有個(gè)商量，信息共享，相互鼓勵(lì)。俗話說(shuō)聽(tīng)君一席話，勝讀十年書。你會(huì)體會(huì)到的。5，如果你有很多親朋好友，請(qǐng)暫時(shí)和他們斷絕聯(lián)系，等考研究生之后再和他們聯(lián)系不遲。而且到時(shí)候你們的關(guān)系不會(huì)因?yàn)闀簳r(shí)的斷絕而冷淡，反而會(huì)更親近。6，如果你是同等學(xué)歷，并且準(zhǔn)備報(bào)考211院?；蛘?4所，除非你很牛很牛，或者你很年輕很年輕，成功的把握很大很大，并且完全有時(shí)間承受N次的失敗，否則就不要報(bào)。因?yàn)楹苡锌赡芗词鼓愕姆謹(jǐn)?shù)很高很高卻會(huì)在復(fù)試的時(shí)候被莫名其妙的淘汰，原因是——門第觀念！7,曾經(jīng)參加過(guò)一個(gè)企業(yè)的培訓(xùn),時(shí)間是一個(gè)禮拜,講的內(nèi)容當(dāng)然很多很多,但只有一句話我記得最清楚:人生或許是一場(chǎng)游戲,但是,如果你以一種游戲的心態(tài)去對(duì)待你的人生,那么你得到的必將是一種游戲的結(jié)果.同理,考研也不是一場(chǎng)游戲,我們同樣不能用一種游戲的心態(tài)對(duì)待,不是

嗎?

第二篇：創(chuàng)造閃光點(diǎn),作文亮一點(diǎn)

創(chuàng)造閃光點(diǎn)，作文亮一點(diǎn)！

作文是各類英語(yǔ)考試中得分率最低的題型之一。同學(xué)們?cè)谡莆樟艘欢ǖ淖魑哪０澹突镜恼Z(yǔ)法、詞匯、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中創(chuàng)造一些詞匯和句型的閃光點(diǎn)，必定會(huì)使你的作文如虎添翼！

高分作文標(biāo)志

1：是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉；

2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ)；

3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；

4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；

5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：

1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

比如說(shuō)： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I By Simmy

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing numbers of individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into

Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing numbers of individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語(yǔ)的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語(yǔ)，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)

Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強(qiáng)調(diào)

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語(yǔ)

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)

Facet 替換 aspect

各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn)，作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢！

以下是30個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下。

1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons)

2: positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising

(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good

3readful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad

如果bad做表語(yǔ)，可以有be less impressive替換

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some

6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that，hold the view that, it is widely shared that，it is universally acknowledged that)替think

(因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z(yǔ)，所以要加that)

7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing

8: shared 代 common

9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits)

10or my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion

11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more(注意沒(méi)有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly

13..beneficial, rewarding替換helpful，14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer

15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very

16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable

17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb.be interested in

18.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect

20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear

21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth

23.desire 替換want.24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to

25.bear in mind that 替換remember

26.enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過(guò)程的意思)

27.interaction替換communication

28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth

29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance

30.next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible

希望各位朋友能夠在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中多總結(jié)精彩、地道的詞匯和句型閃光點(diǎn)，并與大家共享！

第三篇：英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫作備考之創(chuàng)造閃光點(diǎn)

高分作文標(biāo)志:

1：是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;

2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ);

3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞;

5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：

1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。

比如說(shuō)： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think，people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

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Computer and I(By Simmy)

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very

thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search

an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with ?非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into

Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語(yǔ)的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides

Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語(yǔ)，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)

Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides

Computers do play，do 強(qiáng)調(diào)

Positive 替換 important / good 等

A slice of 替換 a part of 滬江四六級(jí) http://cet.hjenglish.com

Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences

We should, therefore, take advantage of ?使用插入語(yǔ)

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)Facet 替換 aspect

各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn)，作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢!

第四篇：英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫作寫作技巧之創(chuàng)造閃光點(diǎn)

英語(yǔ)六級(jí)寫作寫作技巧之創(chuàng)造閃光點(diǎn)

高分作文標(biāo)志： 1：是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉;

2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ);

3、用詞是否多樣，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;

4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞;

5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：

1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí), 句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。比如說(shuō)： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替換proper, approaches替換ways, implement替換carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)

下面舉一篇南京工程學(xué)院某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法和精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I(By Simmy)

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very thrilling 替換 exciting

sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth.google 替換 search an army of 替換 a lot of

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情;Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular

Coincident with … 非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與…一致”的意思，替換 With …

Advancement 替換 development

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into Current(currently)替換 now

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替換 more and more people

It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的 For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with

We can, freely, search 用了插入語(yǔ)的寫作手法

our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng) Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides Deliver 替換 send

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語(yǔ)，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do 強(qiáng)調(diào) Positive 替換 important / good 等 A slice of 替換 a part of Unfavorable 替換 bad

Impacts 替換 effects / influences We should, therefore, take advantage of … 使用插入語(yǔ) Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)Facet 替換 aspect 各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn)，作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢!

第五篇：考研英語(yǔ)作文閃光點(diǎn)創(chuàng)作

考研英語(yǔ)作文閃光點(diǎn)創(chuàng)作

作文是各類英語(yǔ)考試中得分較低的一種題型，究其原因，除了平時(shí)缺少練習(xí)之外，同學(xué)們還缺乏作文抓分技巧。同學(xué)們需要掌握一定的作文模板，除此之外，如果能在作文中設(shè)置一些詞匯和句型的閃光點(diǎn)，必定使你的作文如虎添翼。

高分作文標(biāo)志：

1、是否長(zhǎng)短句交叉；

2、是否會(huì)使用插入語(yǔ)；

3、用詞是否多樣、準(zhǔn)確、形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞；

4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞；

5、句型使用是否準(zhǔn)確、地道。

下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)：

1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)替換主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀地反映事實(shí)。句子開(kāi)頭不要總是用we / I(比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.)舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾的例子：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入語(yǔ)，比如說(shuō)把副詞、連接詞等，作為插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在主語(yǔ)、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語(yǔ)放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞、助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。舉例如下： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that ?

3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的替換太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如第一條的例子中，applicable替換proper;approaches替換ways;implement替換carry out;sharpen one’s competitive edge替換enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物競(jìng)爭(zhēng)力)。

下面舉一篇某位同學(xué)寫的優(yōu)秀作文的例子，看看他是如何運(yùn)用各類寫作技巧的。這位同學(xué)把老師上課講的各類寫作手法，精彩替換和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替換 very；（個(gè)人認(rèn)為替換成overwhelmingly更出彩）

thrilling 替換 exciting；

sth.exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb.be interested in sth；

google 替換 search；

an army of 替換 a lot of。

The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!

The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來(lái)描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情；

Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular；

Coincident with ? 非常地道的句型，表達(dá)“與?一致”的意思，替換 With ?；

Advancement 替換 development；

Pour into(flood into / swarm into)替換 enter into；

Current(currently)替換 now；

Appeal to sb.替換 sb.be interested in sth.；

Growing individuals 替換 more and more people；

It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型，說(shuō)某事是毫不夸張的。（it goes without exaggeration that更好）

For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment.Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.For a start 替換 To begin with；

We can, freely, search 用了插入語(yǔ)的寫作手法；

our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)；

Additionally 替換 In addition / Besides；

Deliver 替換 send。

There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型；其次however作為插入語(yǔ)；再次，function in the disservice of 替換 do harm to。

Emerging 替換 appearing(fading 替換 disappearing)；

Net citizen 網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞。（直接用 netizen更好）

As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替換 Every coin has two sides；

Computers do play，使用do 表示強(qiáng)調(diào)；

Positive 替換 important / good 等；

A slice of 替換 a part of；

Unfavorable 替換 bad；

Impacts 替換 effects / influences；

We should, therefore, take advantage of ? 使用插入語(yǔ)；

Fruits(而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換 advantage(defects 替換 disadvantage)；

Facet 替換 aspect。

以下是45個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替換詞，各位同學(xué)可以參考一下:

1.individuals,characters, folks替換people ,persons.2.positive, favorable, rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good.3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill(有害的)替換bad（如果bad做表語(yǔ)，可以有be less impressive替換。）

eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation ,as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive.4.an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most替換many.注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。

Eg.Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that?.同理 用most, if not all ,替換most.5.a slice of, quiet a few 替換some.6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that替換think(因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z(yǔ)，所以要加that)。

7.affair ,business ,matter 替換thing.8.shared 代 common.9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits.10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion.11.Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more(注意沒(méi)有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.)

Eg.sth has gained growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything或little or nothing替換hardly.13.beneficial, rewarding替換helpful.14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser 替換customer.15.overwhelmingly,exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very.16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable...替換 unnecessary, avoidable.17.indispensable替換necessary

18.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb.be interested in.19.capture one's attention替換attract one's attention.20.facet,demension,sphere代aspect.21.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear.22.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.23.There are several reasons behind sth 替換..reasons for sth.24.desire 替換want.25.pour attention into 替換pay attention to.26.bear in mind that 替換remember.27.enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過(guò)程的意思)。

28.interaction替換communication.29.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth.30.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance.31.next to / virtually impossible替換nearly / almost impossible.32.regarding/concerning 替換about.33.crucial/paramount 替換important.34.第一（in the first place/the first and foremost）;第二（there is one more point ,I should touch on, that?.）;第三（the last but not the least）.35.assiduous替換hard-working

36.arduous替換difficult

37.underdeveloped/financially-challenged 替換poor（因?yàn)閜oor通常含有貶義）

38.demonstrate /manifest 替換show

39.invariably 替換always

40.perilous/hazardous替換dangerous(寫社會(huì)類作文時(shí)常用，說(shuō)什么社會(huì)現(xiàn)象是不好的，有害的)

41.formidable 替換difficult

42.quintessential 替換typical（舉例時(shí)常用，例如：a quintessential example should be cited that=for example;for instance）

43.distinguished 替換famous

44.feasible替換possible

45.consequently, accordingly替換so