第一篇：2013考研英語寫作高分相互信任
2013考研英語寫作高分范文相互信任
摘要：2013考研英語(一)寫作高分范文:相互信任，查看更多2013年考研英語作文優(yōu)秀范文、熱點話題及常用句型請登錄新東方網(wǎng)！
人與人之間的相互幫助問題
圖畫描述: 在第一幅畫中，一大群人圍著一個躺在地上的人，七嘴八舌的猜測著。
在第二幅畫中，警察問在場的人們?yōu)槭裁床话阉歪t(yī)院，人們以各種借口搪塞著。
Two pictures above describe a story which we would never wish to encounter.In the first one, a large crowd gathered around a man lying on the ground, gabbling the cause of the accident.In the second picture, a policeman was asking those who were present, “Why didn't you send him to hospital?” They faltered out various pretexts.It is quite obvious that the drawer wishes to draw our attention to this most unfavorable social phenomenon.Many people are used to finding all kinds of excuses to shirk their responsibilities of helping those who are in need of help.In their eyes, their own daily businesses are always more important than those of the strangers.This phenomenon will bring a series of harmful consequences.First, when people refuse to take care of the strangers, the danger of accidents will be much higher, because you have only a small group of people to rely on whenever emergency arises.Second, the possibility of attaining a happy life will be much smaller.If everyone only takes his own interests into consideration, the society will be full of selfish people.The social cost of achieving success will remain high before cooperation becomes a habit.Helping others is equal to helping ourselves.Only by extending our helping hands to others when necessary can we enjoy a happy and secure life.
第二篇：考研英語寫作怎么考高分
考研英語備考攻略：寫作高分秘籍
考研英語寫作怎么考高分?又是一個炎熱的暑假，考研英語復習已經(jīng)進入強化提高階段。盡管天氣炎熱，容易浮躁，但為了實現(xiàn)自己的夢想，老師還是希望各位小伙伴可以沉下心來認真復習。在考研英語滿分100分中，寫作部分就占了30分，可見寫作不容忽視。下面由太奇教育考研組老師將對試卷中的寫作專項給大家從題型、復習方法等方面作出詳細的講解。
(一)題型介紹
寫作是英語試卷中的第三部分，主要考查考生的書面表達能力，該部分由A、B30分。
A部分要求考生根據(jù)情景寫出一篇約100分;B部分要求考生根據(jù)提示信息寫出一篇160-200定情景、圖、表等，滿分20分。
鑒于B
(二)復習方法
1.精讀提高實力
考研英語真題中的文章都是出題人從等雜志中選擇的，文章地道，題材多樣，2.3.默寫
背完之后，不少小伙伴都反映記不住，老愛忘。根據(jù)艾賓浩斯的遺忘曲線來看，我們記住的事物具有容易遺忘的特點。因此必須調(diào)動多種感官同時記憶，并多次記憶，這樣才能記的更長久。因此，太奇教育考研組老師建議小伙伴們在背誦完經(jīng)典范文后再進行默寫，并仔細對比原文，發(fā)現(xiàn)不足之處，包括在單詞、標點等方面的不足，并在今后的背誦學習中多加注意。
4.仿寫
有了前面的積累之后，相信你們肚子里已經(jīng)有很多料了，太奇教育考研組老師希望此時小伙伴們能夠模仿之前背誦的文章，寫出新的文章。作文一定要多寫多練，每次都找到自己的有點與不足，優(yōu)點繼續(xù)保持，不足之處要不斷改進。
5.掌握技巧
有了前面的四步積累，太奇教育考研組老師相信小伙伴們已經(jīng)掌握了寫作技巧。但由于考場上時間有限，太奇教育考研組老師建議小伙伴們根據(jù)之前的積累形成自己的萬能框架，運用于考場寫作中，這可達到事半功倍的效果。但值得注意的是，框架最多只能占作文總字數(shù)的一半，剩下的一半要根據(jù)實際考題現(xiàn)場發(fā)揮。不然一味的死搬硬套，不靈活運用，會出現(xiàn)“下筆千言，離題萬里”的結(jié)果。
考研英語寫作怎么考高分?總的來說，寫作方面的講解多多練習，不斷進步，最終實現(xiàn)自己的夢想，考入理想中的學校。
第三篇：2014考研英語寫作高分句型匯總
體驗式英語教育先鋒美聯(lián)英語
2014考研英語作文高分句型：
過渡句結(jié)構(gòu)
1)This is not necessarily the case, however.2)We want to keep up with the times.3)Good intentions alone are not enough.4)It was indeed the case.5)But modern research has found that this is not so.6)But it is now thought that this in not so.7)What does this mean as far as our flying saucer program is concerned?
8)As for as I am concerned, some days are lucky while others seem marked by bad fortune.9)And that last ounce is what really counts.10)What is the point of being rich?(富有的意義何在呢?)
11)What other power matters? [其他的權(quán)力有什么重要的(要緊的)呢?
12)Yet there are advantages to underground life.2014考研英語作文高分句型：
主語從句結(jié)構(gòu)
1)What makes it rather disturbing(令人煩惱)was the arbitrary circumstances both of my arrest and my subsequent fate in court.2)But what was most shocking at the time was the thins my release from the charge so clearly depended on.3)What I remember then is not her failure, but her courage, the courage to go ahead.2014考研英語作文高分句型：
遞進式結(jié)構(gòu)
1)Fresh vegetables are nutritious(有營養(yǎng)的);furthermore, they re cheaper than frozen ones.2)We will not only bring joy into other people’s lives, but also added happiness into our own.3)But teaching offers something beside money and power;it offers love.Not only the love of learning and go books and ideas, but also the love that a teacher feels for his students.4)Not only should you limber up(做準備活動)before exercising, but you must also be sure to cool down afterwards.5)They do not seem to like one anther very much.Neither are they too keen on conventional people(正統(tǒng)的人)
2014考研英語作文高分句型：
體驗式英語教育先鋒美聯(lián)英語
動名詞或分詞結(jié)構(gòu)
1)Improving your study habits will improve your grades.2)Teaching gives me pace, and variety, and challenge, and the opportunity to keep on learning.3)Being very short of money and wanting to do something useful, I applied.4)Having little in common is a frequent cause of divorce.5)Owing sets of books is useless unless you read them.6)Drinking, eating, and smoking excessively can do severe harm to even a young person’s health.7)The art of communication requires learning the language and culture of the audience.
第四篇：考研英語寫作高分攻略1
§考研英語寫作高分攻略背誦版（1）
第一章 圖 畫 作 文§
第1節(jié) 人生價值
【要點提示】
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圖畫作文也叫漫畫作文，出題方式一般是提供一幅圖畫，并且圖上帶有一點文字提示。然后題目要求考生對圖畫進行簡單描述，并且說明其內(nèi)在寓意和考生自己的看法。如此一來就需要考生對圖畫進行細致認真的觀察，獲取有效信息，這樣才能正確把握圖畫的寓意。為了方便考生復習，我們海天英語教學團隊總結(jié)出有關(guān)“考研英語圖畫作文十大經(jīng)典話題”的重要圖畫啟示以及相關(guān)的核心表達、句式和模版來供考生背誦。
首先，在第一節(jié)大家需要掌握的是關(guān)于人生價值的漫畫給我們的啟示，一般可分為以下幾種：
1）人要有樂觀的心態(tài)，樹立自信，只有這樣才能獲得成功；2）逆境無處不在，人們應當積極面對，用堅強的意志去戰(zhàn)勝它；3）尋找人生的真諦，取得事業(yè)成功，向社會貢獻力量才是人生的奮斗目標；4）知足常樂；5）只有真正了解自己，才能克服人生道路中的困難；6）金錢不是萬能的；7）人生就像一盤棋，要統(tǒng)籌安排，不能輕易放棄；8）人們要懂得化阻力為動力。
【核心表達】
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self-delusionn.自欺
self-assessmentn.自我評價
ridiculen.&vt.嘲笑，奚落
blessingn.祝福
perspectiven.看法，觀點
optimistn.樂觀主義者
arrangementn.整理，布置；約定
impulsivenessn.沖動
possessvt.擁有
ragevi.發(fā)怒，怒斥
appreciatevt.感謝，感激；欣賞，賞識
cultivatevt.培養(yǎng)；陶冶，建立，加強（友誼）
overestimatev.高估
underestimatev.低估
surmountv.戰(zhàn)勝，克服
harborvt.心懷，懷有 n.港灣，海港
realistica.現(xiàn)實（主義）的narrow-mindeda.氣量小的，小心眼的contenteda.心滿意足的，滿足的sobera.冷靜的，清醒的；審慎的determinanta.決定的persistenta.堅持不懈的；持續(xù)的，持久的cynicala.憤世嫉俗的；悲觀的harmoniousa.和睦的，友好的；和諧的，協(xié)調(diào)的triviala.瑣細的；不重要的；無價值的despiteprep.不管，盡管
carry weight 對??重要，有影響力
all walks of life 各行各業(yè)
take into account 考慮，注意，顧及，體諒
succumb to 屈服
more often than not 往往，多半
long for 渴望
take a second look at 重新觀察
owe to 把??歸功于
can’t afford 承擔不起，買不起
in addition 此外
as long as 只要
【黃金句式】
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1.We have to admit that…(我們不得不承認??)
2.The aim of this picture can be interpreted as follows:…（這幅圖的目的可以解釋為如下意思：）
3.As is vividly depicted in the picture above…（正如上圖形象描述地那樣，??）
4.Just as is revealed in the picture above,…（正如上圖所揭示的那樣，??）
5.Looking at the drawing above, …（看上圖，??）
6.The implied meaning subtly conveyed in the picture should be taken into account in this way:…（圖片所表達的內(nèi)在含義應當可以解釋為??）
7.From my point of view,…（從我的觀點來看，??）
8.Only by means of doing…（只有通過做??的方式）
9.Under such rough condition,…（在如此艱苦的條件下，??）
10.Equip ourselves with…（用??武裝我們自己）
11.It is widely acknowledged that…（眾所周知??）
12.Most people are of the opinion that…（許多人認為??）
13.When it comes to…（當談到/涉及到??）
14.…can’t help but leave one impressed with…（??不得不對??留下深刻印象）
15.A growing number of people are beginning to realize that…（越來越多的人開始意識到??）
16.If this is indeed the case, then…（如果事實確實如此，那么??）
17.One of the most important traits of …is…, another is…, and still another is …(??最重要的特征之一是??，其次是??，還有一個是??)
18.We can deduce from this picture that…(從這幅圖中我們可以推斷??)
19.The picture indicates/ conveys the meaning that…（這幅圖指出/傳達了??）
【萬能模版】
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模版一
________________.Actually, what the drawing reveals is thought-provoking.Needless to say, this picture aims at revealing a philosophy of human’s life: ________________________________.As a matter of fact, _________________.Many people believe that _______________.However, more often than not,_______________.There are many ways to _____________.First, _____________.Second, _________.Third,_______________.To sum up , _________________________________________________________.模版二
_________________________________________________________.__________________________________, ______________ happens to all of us, we should try to persist through the obstacle course of life with strong will._______________________________.There are many examples of men and women who achieved greatness in the end despite facing deep hurdles（困難）once in their lifetime.______________________________________________________.All these set us good examples.______________________________, we will surely be able to move ahead and grow in full bloom like the flowers in crevice(巖石、墻等的裂縫).模版三
According to the drawing above, ________________________.Although this is a very simple drawing, its intended meaning is meaningful and thought-provoking.It is wise to compare _______to______.As far as I’m concerned, there are______ reasons.To begin with, ___________________________________________________.Attitude decides everything.We should be an________, try to be_________.Furthermore, ___________________________.It is the same to life.We should be always clear about ________________.Eventually,______________________________________________.Similarly, life is not always smooth to each of us.Giving up in half way is irresponsible, we should _______ all the time.In conclusion, __________________not only_______, but also_________________.模版四
The first drawing presents us with a scene that_________________________.While in the second drawing,______________________.These two pictures set me thinking for a long time.Gradually, I find that the drawer may want to tell us a lesson:______________________________________________.We have to admit that many _____ are due to______.In my view, there are still some ways to overcome it.Firstly,_______________.Secondly, ___________.Thirdly,__________________.If we could do so, surely, the chances of being _______would be doubled.模版五
The drawing depicts ______________________________________________.The drawing intends to show us that__________________________________.In fact,_________________.The drawing reminds us that it is important to have a clear picture of the_________ we face in life.Examples of this phenomenon can be found in many other situations.For instance,_____________________________________________________________.模版六
It goes without saying that this
In picture this aims at revealing a current problem:_________________________._________in front of challenges.This kind of situation drawing, _______________.However, ___________________lack almost every aspect of our ______________________________________.Obviously, can be seen in
life._____________________.Sometimes,_________________________________.In a word,_______________________________________________________.模版七
As is shown in the above picture,_____________________________________.Take_________ for example.Though he/she is ___________（e.g.deaf/handicapped）, he/she never gave up.That’s why he/she became a successful__________ at last.We are well-being and much more fortunate than______, is there any excuse that we don’t work hard to pursuit our life goals?
Meanwhile,_____________________ is also necessary.Never lose heart, you will make it.In short, we should take efforts just because we are living on this planet.It is then our value will be realized and __________________________.模版八
This cartoon humorously presents a scene of _____________________________.However, at the critical moment,_______________________.Likewise,_________.Apparently, the purpose of the picture is to emphasize the importance of _________.On account of the quickening pace of life,______________________.Suppose ________________.Therefore,_________________________________.Numerous examples can demonstrate the power of a positive attitude.A case in point is ___________________________________________________.As for me,____________.As the saying goes,______________.Only by building strong ______________ can we demonstrate__________ and turn our dreams into reality.
第五篇：2011考研英語寫作高分秘籍 應用文
2011考研英語寫作高分秘籍 應用文
2011年考研臨近，考研教育專家根據(jù)2011年考研寫作的命題要求，特別整理了寫作高分秘籍與大家分享，希望能在最后的時間里幫助大家最大限度的提高寫作能力！
第四篇 應用文
滿分策略：
4.1信函寫作：個人書信
語域使用：正式—使用禮貌表達，不用縮略語（對公）
半正式—可以使用縮略和口語表達（對私）
非正式（一般不考）——It depends
組成部分：稱呼、正文、落款
4.1.1格式：稱呼、落款、正文
4.1.2內(nèi)容
三段（8句）：寫作目的段、細化段、感謝或者期待。
4.1.3各種信函內(nèi)容安排
建議信：2007年及2009年P(guān)artA真題及解析：
基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型：
Dear?
自我介紹，贊揚在先，仍需改進，提出建議。
建議細節(jié)
期望改進，表示感謝。
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
與投訴信比較：仍然以提建議為主：無需贊揚，直接表明寫信目的—即提建議：最后無需感謝，只需表示期待改進。
常用句型：
I am writing with my suggestion about???
I would like to suggest that?
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful
I would like to extend my appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration
We would like to draw your attention to something you have obviously failed to notice（投訴信）
I am writing to express my concern|dissatisfaction|disappointment about?（投訴信）
To improve the situation，it is advisable for you to take the following measures（投訴信）
We trust that you will now consider this matter seriously and make an effort to prevent the recurrence of this kind（投訴信）
致歉信：2008PartA真題及解析
基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型：
Dear?
表明寫信目的：道歉
闡述道歉原因，并提出解決方法。
再次道歉。
常用句型：
I am writing to apologize to you for my failing to ?
Here is my deepest apology for ??
I would like to express my apologies for not being able to?
I am writing to you with some embarrassment and many apologies.Excuse me for my carelessness in making such a mess
I am really sorry for the trouble.Would you mind if I ?。？
Would it be convenient for you ?？
To make up for the inconvenience caused，I would like to ??
Once again，I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.申請信：2006年P(guān)artA 真題及解析（申請信）
基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型：
Dear?
告知信息來源及寫信目的突出重點的自我介紹，附簡歷
表示感謝。
Yours sincerely，Li Ming
常用句型：
I learnt from the newspaper that you are wanting an accountant and I would like to apply for the job
Sb，suggested me to write to you about the medical physicist position at ABC Med-Instrument Corporation
Enclosed is my resume to provide additional information about my undergraduate work.I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you to discuss further how my qualifications meet the needs of your organization.Thank you for your time and consideration.辭職信：2005年P(guān)artA真題及解析（辭職信）：
基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型：
Dear?，寫信目的表明要辭職。
給出辭職原因。
感謝栽培并表示抱歉。
Yours sincerely，Li Ming
常用句型：
I am sorry to tell you that I decided to quit the job of being a ?職業(yè)。
I am writing to inform you of my decision： I am going to quit my present job.Please accept my apology.I have been trying in vain to convince myself that the job is interesting.I highly appreciate the invaluable experience and happy days working here.Thank you for your patience，understanding，and trust.詢問信：考研英語大綱樣題應用文部分（詢問信）：
基本結(jié)構(gòu)和常用句型：
Dear ?，自我介紹，表明寫信目的是咨詢某事。
詢問細節(jié)。
感謝及相關(guān)信息。
Your sincerely
Li Ming
常用句型：
27.I am writing this letter to inquire about ?
28.I want to/would like to know ?
29.I wonder if ?
30.Would it be possible for you to ?？
31.How should I pay for these books ？—by cash or by other means ？
32.Finally，if I order these books now，when can I get them ？ How will these books be delivered to my house？
33.I should be grateful if you could give me an early reply.邀請信：
基本結(jié)構(gòu)：
Dear?，發(fā)出邀請。
為何邀請細節(jié)。
期望參加。
Yours sincerely，Li Ming
常用句型：
We are having a farewell party/a gather together/meeting/seminar in（place）on（date）at（time）。Would you like to come？（不太正式）
It is my honor to inform you that there is an academic meeting in（place）on（date）at（time）。（正式）
We would be too glad to invite you as an expert to our school for the inquiry of studying abroad.If you have no other plans for this weekend night，will you do us a favor of going to our party？
接收邀請與謝絕邀請的表達法：都要表示感謝。
Accept the invitation：
Success is the last persistence at the toughest moment.成功是最艱難時刻的堅持。
Thank you very much for your invitation.It‘s our great pleasure to accept your invitation.Nothing would give us greater pleasure than accepting your kind invitation.Refuse the invitation：
Thank you so much for your invitation，but I have had plans at the time.If you don‘t mind，let’s make an appointment next time when you are available.I regret that I can‘t make it because of a sudden illness/full schedule/business trip.范文解析：
Dear Professor Wang，It is my honor to inform you that there is a “Culture Festival” held in mu school.Would you like to give us an excellent lecture on Phychology in the auditorium of our campus on sept.13th at 6：30 P.M.？
Since phychology has caused more and more concerns among the students，and you are an expert in the area，we all expect your acceptance and your wonderful lecture.I very much hope than you will be able to attend and give us a talk in your branch.If you have any question.Please contact me.Look forward to hearing your lecture.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
感謝信：
基本結(jié)構(gòu)
Dear?，表示感謝。
感謝緣由及內(nèi)心感受。
再次感謝，寄予希望。
常用句型：
I sincerely appreciate your kindness and generosity.Thank you ever much for the latest information.Please accept out sincerest thanks for what you have done for us.（heartfelt gratitude）
I don‘t know how to thank you for such generous behavior.It is something that I will cherish for a long time to come.I am now writing to express my great appreciation for the timely help you offered.It was considerate of you to do me a great favor.I wish there were a better word than “thanks” to express my appreciation.Many thanks again for your generous hospitality.Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude to you.范文解析：
Dear Jim，I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude.I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day，when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi.If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid，I fear that the Consequences might have been much more serious.Everynoe agrees that it was your quick-witted 9 response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome??
Although nowdays people in mounting numbers talk about the need to be unselfish，we see very few people practice what they preach.If there were more people like you，this world would be a much nicer place.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
祝賀信：
基本結(jié)構(gòu)：
Dear?。，表示祝賀，為之高興。
祝賀緣由，勞有所獲。
寄予期望，取得更大成就。
再次祝賀。
Yours sincerely，Li Ming
常用句型：
Congratulations to you no getting the scholarship.I am just as proud as you can be of you and send my sincerest congratulations no your achievement/success/graduation.10
What wonderful news！I know how happy you must be at the news of your promotion/election.Please accept my heartiest congratulations on your graduation/getting such a good job.I am looking forward to hearing more good news in your studies and research work.范文解析：
Dear Mr.Smith，I was very happy to learn that you have been elected President of the Seotland-China Associatioin and Iwould like，on behalf of the Chinese People‘s Association for Friendship with Foreign Countries and in my own name，to express to you our warmest congratulations.I hope that during your tenore of office the relations of friendship and cooperation that already exist between our two organizations will be further developed.Let us join our efforts to make greater contributions to the promotion of mutual understanding and friendship between the people‘s of China and Scotland.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
慰問信：
基本結(jié)構(gòu)：
Dear?，表示同情，進行安慰，11
鼓勵其努力，在此表示同情，并希望其早日復原。
Yours sincerely，Li Ming
常用句型：
I just can not tell you how sorry I was to learn of your unhappy experience/injury/accident/divorce.I felt very sorry indeed when I was informed of your sickness.I wish there were something I could say or do to ease your sense of loss/to soften your grief.I know there were no words that can be a comfort to you now.I hope that you will soon be completely restored to health/get well again.Please don‘t hesitate to call on me if there is anything I can do now and always.范文解析：
Dear Li Gang，I was really shocked andsaddened to hear of your unhappy experience in the earthquake.There is little that anyone can say or do at a time like this to ease your grief，but I would express my deepest sympathy.In the next day or so you will receive a little package from me.I hope you like it，and that it 12 will be useful ai your present moment.What‘s more，please don’t hesitate to contact me if there is anything else I can do now and always.I do hope you will soon get well again and be able to come back to school.Be assured of my availability and eagerness to help in any way I can.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
4.2 備忘錄/告示類應用文寫作（Memorandum/Notice）
基本結(jié)構(gòu)：
TO：
FROM：
SUBJECT：
DATE：（month day，year）
正文
簽名
模擬題及范文：
Directions：
You are an active member of the student newspaper.The newspaper is currently looking for journalists for the summer semester.Write a memo that will appear in the newspaper next week describing the position available.Date： August 10，2005
To： All students
From： Li Ming
4.3 摘要寫作（Abstract）
This article focuses on the ?。
This thesis discuss/analyzes?。
This paper provides an overview of ?
This paper presents up-to-date information on ?
1、簡單概括
2、描寫畫面內(nèi)容，兩句話描寫一幅圖。
3、點明中心：重點又是新起點。
This is a very interesting and though-provoking picture.1 as is vividly depicted in the picture，the goal keeper thought he was too small for the gate and was afraid that he could not keep the ball from entering the gate.But what the player，who was ready to shoot，thought about the goal keeper could not help us thinking the truth of the picture it conveys.In his eyes，the goal keeper was so strong that he had almost covered the whole gate.And little did he have the chance to win.2 obviously，the two players looked at the same thing in a different angle.3（in different angles）
簡單概括
描寫畫面內(nèi)容，每幅圖分開描述，并遞進關(guān)系。
點明中心，從不同視角看待同一問題。
2.現(xiàn)象簡介
Today，advertisements is mounting numbers are appearing on the TV screen.1 they are not only shown before and after all kinds of programs —— news，weather forecasts and quiz shows，etc.—— but even interrupt dramas and movies，2 and annoy the viewers.3
1、概括介紹
2、細節(jié)介紹：怎么個多法兒——是節(jié)目前后和中間都有
3、帶來的后果就是激怒觀眾。
3.寓意象征
What a vivid and accrate picture it is when describing the meaning of love in the dark.1 As is shown in the picture，the love is just like the light in the picture，which seems insignificant in the sun，but it certainly shines brighter in the dark.2 in other words，the darker the place is，the more precious the light will be.3 love is somewhat the same.It surely means much moer to the man who is in great difficulty than to the one who is in comforts.4
簡要評價
對畫面的簡單描述。（結(jié)合love對畫面進行分析）
寓意說明，符合題目要求
結(jié)論：燈光在越微弱的地方越明亮，愛心在越需要的地方越有價值
Species‘extinction in America.Facing the figures，we can only admit that America’s population growth has had undesirable effect on its wildlife and will still pose a formidable threat to its wildlife resources if sufficient care is not given.3
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1、總括介紹了圖畫內(nèi)容（運用對比，強調(diào)后者）
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2、特別好的過渡方式：不是描述勝過描述
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3、結(jié)論：如果不足以重視，結(jié)果不堪設想
4、原因分析
（As far as I am concerned，there are several reasons accounting for the phenomenon.）1 First and foremost，the reasons for this phenomenon are that TV is the most efficient and rapid way of dissemination（傳播）information.2 As China develops its highly competitive market economy，manufacturers and sales people（salespersons）need to inform the general public of the latest commodities that are available.3 Furthermore，TV stations use the money that they earn from showing the advertisements to produce more programs.Last but not least，it is necessary to keep consumers informed of the range of（the）products that they may choose from.（原文的過渡出現(xiàn)在下一段）
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1、闡述中心，或者引導本段。
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2、例舉原因
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3、對已經(jīng)提出原因的拓展
However，the tobacco consumption is experiencing a decrease，1 According to the given figures，the tobacco production in 1994 was 14.364 billion pounds while in 1995 it reduced to 14.2 billion pounds.This is mainly because 2 more and more people have become aware of the harm of smoking to human brings.Many of them resist the addiction to tobacco and advise people around not to smoke.Furthermore，governments of many countries realizing the serious effects of tobacco have taken effective measures to call on people to give up smoking.So I believe a healthy tomorrow of less tobacco will be achieved through efforts of every person.3
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1、闡述中心
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2、列舉原因，this 作過渡詞
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3、如果減少吸煙人群，可能產(chǎn)生的結(jié)果（注意命題的積極傾向，展望未來式很合命題者口味）
5、利弊分析
In the country，on the other hand，one can enjoy the advantages of fresh air and food，and a more relaxed（relaxing）life style.Housing is usually spacious and inexpensive in the country.I and，as for recreation，what could be more relaxing than a stroll down a country lane amid beautiful scenery？ 2 However，there are disadvantages of living in either the city or the country.3 City air tends to be polluted，and the streets are always crowded and noisy.In the country，on the other hand，the lack of stimulating activities can make a person feel bored and isolated.4
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1、列舉鄉(xiāng)村居住的優(yōu)勢
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2、對優(yōu)勢的拓展說明
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3、過渡說明：劣勢開始
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4、列舉無論城鄉(xiāng)居住皆有劣勢
6、舉例說明
It seems reasonable when people laugh at the cartoon，but it would no longer be laughable when people find similar things taking place in our daily life.1 Recently there is a trend of making promises in various fields of our society.From departments of government to common shopping centers，many businesses who supple products of offer services have made various promises to their customers or service receivers.2 They assert their products to be of good quality or promise to offer excellent service.3 As a matter of fact，many of these businesses claim in the same way that（比較）the hen in the above cartoon promises to lay eggs.4
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1、過渡：第一段說到可笑，下面就談不可笑——連接
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2、例子：商場、政府的承諾行為
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3、拓展：深化承諾行為的細節(jié)
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4、結(jié)論：同母雞下蛋的承諾一樣虛無沒有價值
※表示性質(zhì)，代替adj.=of +n.（小作文高分必殺）
e.g.helpful=of any help assistant=of any assistance good=of any good harmful=of any harm
The following examples will support this point.1 In schools，a unit-exam not only declares the end of the former unit，but also acts as a reminder of the preview work for the next unit.In the business field，what a CEO needs to do at the end of a year is more than review and summarize（review and summarizing）。It is the time to formulate and effective and efficient development plan for next year.2 Just turn back to the sports ground.（句號結(jié)束）although in front of the end there isn‘t a real start——arrowhead，there surely exists an invisible one sprouting（appearing）in every athlete’s mind，blooming（being）the training strategy of the preparation for next competition.3
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1、承上啟下
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2、舉例論證
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3、舉例的同時說明結(jié)論：終點又是新起點，正是這種心態(tài)成為下次比賽成功的技巧或策略。
7、判斷評論
It is clear that promise is what you claim you can do or you will do，not what you really are or you are expected to be.1 Generally speaking，it is good and sometimes necessary to make commitment to people，but promising what you must or should do can be considered a kind of cheating.2 What the cartoon really aims at is not the funny picture itself but to criticize this popular phenomenon existing in our society.3
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1、既點名了本段主題：談承諾，又是一個定義，起承上啟下作用。
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2、自己的建議。
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3、再次強調(diào)“承諾”這一社會現(xiàn)象。
8、問題建議
Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts，but also by people in all walks（職業(yè)、行業(yè)）of life.1 The failure of child education does more harm to the development of our society and our civilization than to the children themselves.Thus，it‘s high time that parents，educators and the government made concerted（共同努力的，同心協(xié)力的，conert得來）efforts to put an end to this situation.2（家長，老師和政府應該怎么做）
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1、引出本段主題，兒童教育的現(xiàn)狀，用婉轉(zhuǎn)的方式表達。
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2、本段結(jié)論：三方行動
In our life，what we need most is self-insurance and a proper view of challenges before us.1 Therefore，we should bear in mind that our competitors may not be as terrible（frightening）as expected，and our painstaking efforts will pay off as long as we arm ourselves with courage and confidence.2 Only in this way can we overcome any difficulties and challenges.3
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1、從自己角度提出意見
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2、具體行動的方法
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3、only 表示強調(diào)，以及建議的價值。
9、個人選擇
All in all，I would say that living in the city is best（better），1 for the convenience the city offers in terms of education and work（job opportunities）；2 after all，one can always spend 19 vacations in the country——and get the best of both.3
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1、選擇結(jié)果
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2、選擇原因
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3、總結(jié)
As for me，I have always led a regular life.1 By everyday exercises，I build up a strong body，2 and by reading intensively I learn to acquire a proper attitude toward life.3
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1、個人選擇或?qū)嵺`
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2、選擇帶來的好的后果
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3、拓展
10、現(xiàn)實運用
As we all know，children are the future of our country，Their healthy growth has therefore become a serious concern among many people.1 It should be made clear that too much care is not love.The real love and care for them are to prepare them for the future.When faced with difficulties，they can summon up the courage and exert their strength to overcome the difficulties.When faced with fierce competition，they can employ their knowledge，skills and experience to confront with their rival.2 This is the younger generation we can expect.3
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1、價值體現(xiàn)：孩子關(guān)乎祖國的未來。
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2、啟示：重要的原因
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3、寄予希望
2007年范文寫作
首段：圖畫描述：
This is a series of interesting and thought-provoking pictures.A goalkeeper，who is trying hard to keep the ball from the goal，sees himself as a dwarf.What‘s funnier is that the football-player，preparing to kick the ball，regards the goalkeeper as huge as the goal.The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound.Both of them lack courage and confidence in front of challenges.中間段：寓意象征+舉例說明
The majority of people would agree that everyone may feel challenged when a powerful rival appears in his/her mind.What divides them into successes and losers is their attitude towards confidence.（We can easily find the equivalent of the topic discussed here in our surroundings.）We，undergraduates girding ourselves for the NETEM（the Examination for postgraduate candidates），provide a good illustration.Some of us feel depressed when thinking that they are not able to prepare well，so they even give up the chance of participating in the examination.In fact，the exam is not as difficult as they suppose，and a little more courage and confidence will motivate them to achieve the final successs.尾段：建議+展望
Accordingly，it is the time that we placed great emphasis on building up our confidence.What we should bear in mind is that no one can overcome difficulties without confidence.（In other words，We should be honest about the challenges we face.）only in this wa we can se a right goal.challenge it，and achieve it.Tips：
1.穩(wěn)重下體的部分是精彩的語言，即文章的高分點，希望同學們學習。
2.文中有下劃線的部分是范文的錯誤，希望大家思考，然后改正，避免自己在寫作時犯這樣的錯誤。
3.再次強調(diào)，希望大家不要背范文，學習精彩的句式表達，背會，通過多練習掌握這些 21 句型。
小作文范文及解析
2007年P(guān)art A 真題及解析（投訴信
Directions：
Write a letter to your university library，making suggestions for improveing its service.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter.Ues “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.To Whom It May Concern，I am a student in this university who regularly comes to the library to spend ma spare time.Generally speaking，the services you offer here are quite good； however，I have some suggestions for you to adopt.And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.To begin with，will you please prolong the time for reading？ In the daytime，most of the students are having classes，so they can‘t come to the library.Moreover，some of the books on shelves are out of date.If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines，we will be very pleased.I really wish to have a more comfortable library.Thank you for your time and consideration.Yours sincerely，Li Ming
2008 Part A 真題及解析（致歉信）：
Directions：
You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob，your landlord there.Write him a letter to
make an apology，and
suggest a solution.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the den of the letter.Ues “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.解析
Dear Bob，I am writing to express my apology to you.Several days ago，I borrowed your music CD when I lived in your house.Unfortunately，after I came back from Canada，I found it in my luggage.Was in such an hurry that I forgot to return it to you.I will send it to you by post of expose as soon as possible.If necessary，I will compensate for any troubles it may cause.Once again，I feel so sorry for any inconvenrence caused.Please accept my apologies.Sincerely yours，Li Ming
2006年P(guān)art A真題及解析（申請信
Directions：
You want to contribute to project Hope by offering financial aid to a child in a remote area.Write a letter to the department concerned，asking them to help find a candidate.You should specify what kind of child you want to help and how you will carry out your plan.Write your letter in no less than 100 words.Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter，use“Li Ming”instead.Do not write the address.（10points）
解析：
To Whom It May Concern，I am writing this letter to you to ask if there is a child in need of financial sponsorship through the Hope Foundation.I am willing to give financial aid to those children who have not had a chance to receive education in poverty-stricken area.I would like to help two kinds of children：first，those who do not have a stable source which can cover their education fees，and second，those whose academic performance in school is excellent.I have decided to commit myself to save the necessary
financial aid required to accomplish my goal.I would also like to be kept informed as to the academic progress of each student every term.I have not doubt（There is not doubt）that I meet the criteria required for a sponsor and look forward to hearing from you.Thank you for your consideration.Yours sincerely
Li Ming
推薦信：
Dear，寫作意圖：簡單介紹，自己與被推薦人關(guān)系，推薦他做什么。
推薦原因：被推薦人的相關(guān)工作經(jīng)歷或個性特點，應當突出與寫信人的相關(guān)性。
感謝與期待。
Yours sincerely
Li Ming
解析：
Dear Sir，It is with a great pleasure that I recommend to you Mr.Li Lei，an outstanding accountant，for working in your firm.Mr.Li graduated from China Financial University in 1991，majoring in accountancy，After graduation，he came to our firm to be an accountant.In 1996 he obtained the certificate of a certified accountant，and in 2001 he was promoted to the one of the chief accountants of our firm because of his excellent work.In association with me，mr.li impressed me that he was a friendly and pleasant gentleman，devoted to his firm and profession.it is surely a huge loss for our firm that he has to leave us for some personal reasons.I recommend mr.li without reservation and believe you will find him a real treasure very soon??
Yours sincerely，Li ming
2005年part a 真題及解析（辭職信）：
Directions：
Two months ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine design and fashion.but now you find that the work is not what you expected.You decide to quit.Write a letter to your boss，mr.wang，Telling him your decision，stating your reason（s），and making an apology.Write your letter with no less than 100 words.Wrte it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter； use “l(fā)i ming”instead.You do not need to write the adress.解析：
Dear mr.wang，I am writing this letter to apologize that I will quit the position as an editior for you are your magazine for the reason of myself.Two months ago，I was accepted by the design and fashions，as a member of it.I was deeply impressed by the kindness，diligence of all staff members around me.But during the span of working here，I have come to realize that the job probably is not suitable for me because I want a more pesceful life，such as a teacher.And you know that I am not an outgoing girl.I find that I am not able to devote all my efforts to a job which I do not reslly like.So I am awfully sorry to tell you my decision to quit.please accept my apology.Yours sincerely，26
Li ming
2009年考研英語大綱樣題應用文部分（詢問信）
Directions：
You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books.Write a letter to
the sales department of bookstore to ask for：
detailed information about the books you want，methods of payment，time and way of delivery.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end
Of the letter.Use“Li Ming”instead.You do not need to write the address.解析：
Dear Sir/Madam，As a student preparing for TOEFL in the coming May，I am writing to ask if you have
Appoches to TOEFL complied by professor Wamg Sming and published by University College
Press in 2006（注意次序）
If you have the book for sale，I‘d like to mail order it.Pleasel let me know if I can pay for it.by money order or do you accept the credit card？
I‘d appreciate it if you could send me the book at your earliest convenience by EMS to the following address：
Li Ming
Room 158，student dormitory no.8
West campus，Beijing university
Beijing，100081
Sincerely yours
Li Ming
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