第一篇：六級(jí)寫作 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀+批改報(bào)告

六級(jí)寫作 滿分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀

CET作文題采用總體評(píng)分方法。從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體，作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語(yǔ)言來表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而確切地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。

滿分15分，根據(jù)考試大綱的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，給出的最高的14分評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)為：

14分：切題，表達(dá)思想清楚。語(yǔ)言通順，連貫性較好，基本上無語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤；

解

A.“切題，表達(dá)思想清楚”：所謂切題，最直觀的理解就是“不跑題”，在四六級(jí)英語(yǔ)寫作中，跑題是比較難的，因?yàn)轭}目會(huì)給出非常明確的觀點(diǎn)選擇或者命題場(chǎng)景。所謂表達(dá)思想清楚，尤其對(duì)于四六級(jí)寫作中的給出兩種觀點(diǎn)，問你同意哪一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，這個(gè)時(shí)候建議同學(xué)們要有清晰的觀點(diǎn)傾向，即便你會(huì)對(duì)比兩種觀點(diǎn)各自的利弊，最終你清晰的preference是給考官非常重要的信息傳遞。

B.“語(yǔ)言通暢，連貫性較好，基本上無語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤”：這一條主要要求考生的語(yǔ)言的邏輯和語(yǔ)言的使用能力。在四六級(jí)寫作中，雖然不像GRE GMAT這種高端邏輯寫作對(duì)邏輯要求那么高，但是邏輯的通暢也是最基本的，而且只有邏輯通暢了，語(yǔ)言才是通暢的。但是英文作為“形合”語(yǔ)言，既注重“內(nèi)容邏輯”也注重“形式邏輯”，例如必要的邏輯引導(dǎo)信號(hào)，firstly，secondly，whereas，on the other hand，all in all?.都能引領(lǐng)讀者和考官更加清晰的把握你的文章的起承轉(zhuǎn)合。關(guān)于語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，建議大家還是要高標(biāo)準(zhǔn)嚴(yán)格要求自己，用最地道的書面英文進(jìn)行寫作，四六級(jí)寫作還不是真正的文章寫作，但是是非常好的過渡都GRE TOEFL、甚至論文寫作的橋梁，培養(yǎng)自己書面化表達(dá)的嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)性和地道性。

讀： 2007年12月六級(jí)作文真實(shí)批改報(bào)告

題型：英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文

題目：2007年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文 原文字?jǐn)?shù)：173 批改時(shí)間：2013年08月09日 20：27

Nowadays,we can never fail to find the phenomenon1that digital devices are used more and more widely,such as mp3,mp4,digital cameras2,mobile phones,3and so on.As we can see,digital devices have a huge

4infuluence on our modern

5in society.First,they are changing our method of working.Using the internet,we are able to work on our computers in our own homes instead of offices,which means our time can be more flexible.Second,our learning efficiency 6are improved by 7them.For instance,we can take some online classes 8to 9promote our studies,whereas mp3 can benefit our English and listening abilities.Third,they help our lives become more meaningful and colorful.For example,with mobile phones10we can communicate11more than before,which is good for maintaining the relationships with our family and friends.As is mentioned above, thanks to the fast development of technology,digital devices are 12becming more and more powerful and useful.Only by adapting to digital devices,can we live a better life.錯(cuò)誤歸類分析：

格式錯(cuò)誤：

1：批改解釋：Poor formation.修改建議：of digital devices being used.標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤： 2: 批改解釋：The punctuation mark is not needed.修改建議：Omit.Use “and”.10: 批改解釋：A comma is missing.修改建議：，多余文字：

3: 批改解釋：Avoid using this kind of phrase in a formal essay.修改建議：Omit.9: 批改解釋：Not needed.修改建議：Omit.拼寫錯(cuò)誤(SPL)：

4: 批改解釋：Wrong spelling.修改建議：influence.12: 批改解釋：Wrong spelling.修改建議：becoming.介詞錯(cuò)誤：

5: 批改解釋：Not needed.修改建議：Omit.8: 批改解釋：Poor choice of preposition.修改建議：of.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤：

6: 批改解釋：Verb tense error.修改建議：is.選詞錯(cuò)誤：

7: 批改解釋：Poor diction.修改建議：Using such electronic gadgets like computers.單詞缺失：

11: 批改解釋：A word is missing.修改建議：conveniently.得分11.0分（滿分30分）

切題 Response to the prompt

文章切題，闡說充分

response to the prompt with adequate explanation

文章結(jié)構(gòu) Organization

段落組織有序，銜接緊密

well-organized structure, clear and close transition as well

論點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展和細(xì)節(jié)運(yùn)用 Development and Details

段落內(nèi)句與句連接順暢，句式使用恰當(dāng)，用詞確切，得體，論證充分 coherent structure, appropriate word usage, adequate exampling

語(yǔ)法 Grammar

表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)雜句使用流暢

accurate expression, advanced vocabulary with a high degree of accuracy

總評(píng)

該篇文章得分為11分（滿分為30分）。能基本清清楚楚地表達(dá)，框架完整，語(yǔ)言、邏輯有小的瑕疵。

范文重寫

Of late, the world has gone technological, affecting not only the way people communicate or gather information, but even their life styles.Gadgets like televisions, radios, music players and phones have grave effect on people.Technological advancement in spheres like computers has changed the way people gather information or communicate.Gone are the days of physical letter writing.An email takes just two seconds to reach its destination.Work and studying are made easy because they can be effected from homes.Boredom is a myth as people can listen to music and watch movies on music players and phones.With a phone, a friend or family member is as close as one’s nose.On the whole, a digital world is of noble welcome for it amasses numerous advantages and benefits to people

2008年06月六級(jí)作文真實(shí)批改報(bào)告

題型：英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文

題目：2008年06月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文 原文字?jǐn)?shù)：188 批改時(shí)間：2013年08月13日 15：47

In the contemporary society,with the steady development of information technology,the 1E-books are playing a more and more important role in our 2life.A great 3deal of people hold the view that E-books will replace the traditional 4paper books in the long run.Apparently,there are several reasons

5of

this idea.First,compared to traditional books,the E-books is much more accessible,as there 6exist a lot of 7book resources on the internet.Second,since the cost of producing e-books is much lower8.the E-books 9boasts the price advantage.Last but not least,the e-books are easier to 10transport 11whereas it is more convenient to keep and store them12the same.From my point of view,I insist that E-books 13will be used more and more widely,but it will not replace the traditional books.On one hand,not all the people are accustomed to

14read books on digital devices.On the other hand,reading on digital devices can harm our eyesight.All in all,there are pros and cons in everything,so I believe both kinds of books will continue to exist for a long time.錯(cuò)誤歸類分析：

大小寫錯(cuò)誤：

1：批改解釋：Capitalization error.修改建議：Use “e-books” instead in a sentence.單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤：

2: 批改解釋：Error in singular or plural form.修改建議：“l(fā)ives” should be used here.選詞錯(cuò)誤：

3:批改解釋：Poor word selection.修改建議：“number” is better here.“a great deal of” is usually used to modify uncountable nouns like time, water and etc.6: 批改解釋：Poor word selection.修改建議：“are” is better here.10: 批改解釋：Poor word selection.修改建議：“carry” is right word here.13: 批改解釋：Poor word selection.修改建議：“should” will be better to go with “insist”.多余文字：

4: 批改解釋：The word is not required here.修改建議：Delete the word “paper”.12: 批改解釋：The two words are not needed here.修改建議：Delete them.介詞錯(cuò)誤：

5: 批改解釋：Error in preposition use.修改建議：“behind” is better here.單詞重復(fù)過多：

7: 批改解釋：Repetitive words.修改建議：“books” or “resources” is better here.標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤：

8: 批改解釋：Incorrect punctuation.修改建議：A comma “,” should be used instead here.單詞合并錯(cuò)誤： 9: 批改解釋：Error in word combination.修改建議：“boasts of” should be used here.連詞錯(cuò)誤：

11: 批改解釋：Incorrect conjunction.修改建議：“as” or “since” is much better than “whereas”.語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤(VOI)：

14: 批改解釋：Invalid verb use.修改建議：The word “reading” goes much better with the phrase “be accustomed to”.得分13.0分（滿分30分）

切題 Response to the prompt

文章切題，闡說充分

response to the prompt with adequate explanation

文章結(jié)構(gòu) Organization

段落組織有序，銜接緊密

well-organized structure, clear and close transition as well

論點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展和細(xì)節(jié)運(yùn)用 Development and Details

段落內(nèi)句與句連接順暢，句式使用恰當(dāng)，用詞確切，得體，論證充分 coherent structure, appropriate word usage, adequate exampling

語(yǔ)法 Grammar

表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)雜句使用流暢

accurate expression, advanced vocabulary with a high degree of accuracy

總評(píng)

Logically developed essay.Take more care to write grammatically correct sentences.Check your writing for spelling mistakes, agreement among grammatical elements of each sentence, the use of articles, the choice of singular and plural forms of a word, in case they undermine the effectiveness of your essay.Keep on trying a little harder, you’ll be a very good writer!

范文重寫

In contemporary socitety, with the steady develoment of information technology, the e-books are playing a more and more important role in our lives.A great number of people hold the view that e-books wil replace the traditional books in the long run.Apparently,there are several reasons behind this idea.First, compared to traditional books, the e-books is much more accessible free of charge, as there are a lot of e-books on the internet.Second, since the cost of producing e-books is much lower, the e-books boasts of the price advantage.Last but not least, the e-books are easier to carry since it is more convenient to keep and store them.From my point of view, I insist that e-books will be used much more widely, but it will not replace the traditional books.On one hand, not all the people

are accustomed to reading books on digital devices.On the other hand, reading on digital devices can harm our eyesight.All in all, there are pros and cons in everything, so I believe both kinds of books wil continue to coexist for a long time.2011年12月六級(jí)作文真實(shí)批改報(bào)告

題型：英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文

題目：2011年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文 原文字?jǐn)?shù)：174 批改時(shí)間：2013年08月17日 15：57

1Success is something everyone looks for, longs for and dies for.But have you ever considered what success is? Some may hold that success means one has2beautiful life, 3like pretty house, cool cars and great power.It’s indeed one way to define success.But to me, success is doing something one really feels like doing4。5.Don't be discouraged by the weaknesses of the essay I pointed out.As long as you work harder and be careful enough with details, you'll be an excellent writer.Trust me.2008年12月六級(jí)作文真實(shí)批改報(bào)告

題型：英語(yǔ)六級(jí)作文

題目：2008年12月英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文 原文字?jǐn)?shù)：190 批改時(shí)間：2013年08月14日 11：51

1On the contemporary society, due to the heavy study burden, students are 2sufferiing a great deal psychologically, because the teachers and parents do not pay enough attention to the students' mental health.3To our horror, some students even choose to commit suicide under such unbearable pressure.As we can see, we must attach more importance to mental health.To start with, psychologically healthy students usually show greater potential in learning, 4as they are brilliant.Besides, students with healthy mind can have positive attitudes towards life, especially when they are facing difficulties.Here are some suggestions 5of how to improve the mental health of students.First,there should be psychological courses in the schools, so that students can turn to the psychological professors for help once they have mental trouble.Second, the parents should learn more 6psychological knowledge in order 7fo perceive changes in their children's mind.Third, students 8had better learn to adjust their own minds as well.As is mentioned above, it is never too9inordinate to stress the significance of students' mental health, which needs the cooperation 10of the schools,the parents ,the society and the students themselves.錯(cuò)誤歸類分析：

介詞錯(cuò)誤：

1：批改解釋：Preposition error.修改建議：It’s better to use “in” here.5: 批改解釋：Preposition error.修改建議：“about, for, on”, any of these three is ok here, but not using “of”.7: 批改解釋：Preposition error.修改建議：“for them too” is needed here.10:批改解釋：Preposition error.修改建議：How about “among”?

拼寫錯(cuò)誤(SPL)：

2: 批改解釋：Spelling error.修改建議：The word should be spelled out as “suffering”.從句錯(cuò)誤：

4: 批改解釋：Clause deficiency.修改建議：It’s vague in meaning.How about “since mental health helps to form good learning habits and keep them work effectively”?

中式英語(yǔ)(CHI)：

6: 批改解釋：Chinglish.修改建議：How about “knowledge about how to deal with mental problems”?

選詞錯(cuò)誤：

8: 批改解釋：Poor word choice.修改建議：“had better” is a strong phrase which is often used by a superior to order an inferior.9:批改解釋：Poor word choice.修改建議：That’s a really big word.It’s awkward here, though.The essay will be rewritten.Pls refer to the new version.好樣的！

3: 批改解釋：Excellent.修改建議：Good work about this sentence.得分22.0分（滿分30分）

切題 Response to the prompt

文章切題，闡說充分

response to the prompt with adequate explanation

文章結(jié)構(gòu) Organization

段落組織有序，銜接緊密

well-organized structure, clear and close transition as well

論點(diǎn)擴(kuò)展和細(xì)節(jié)運(yùn)用 Development and Details

段落內(nèi)句與句連接順暢，句式使用恰當(dāng)，用詞確切，得體，論證充分 coherent structure, appropriate word usage, adequate exampling

語(yǔ)法 Grammar

表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，簡(jiǎn)單句、復(fù)雜句使用流暢

accurate expression, advanced vocabulary with a high degree of accuracy

總評(píng)

It's pleasing to find very few grammatical mistakes in this essay.Keep on your work, and then you'll be a good writer.However, much work is needed to improve on the structure of your writings.As to the structure of your version of this essay, the original 2nd paragraph is not necessary here.Instead, you should have written more at the end of the first paragraph about the concrete examples of mental problems among students.Please refer to the new version of the essay.And please refer to the webpage for the model structures of different categories of writings, and you can find similar articles anywhere on the internet, http://wenku.baidu.com/view/d6c5ee7f31b765ce050814df.html.范文重寫

In the contemporary society, due to the heavy study burden, students at schools are suffering a great deal psychologically.What's worse, it seems that the teachers and parents do not pay enough attention to the students' mental health.To our horror, some students even choose to commit suicide under such unbearable pressure.Besides, due to mental problems, some students find it hard to get along well with the people around him or her, like the classmates, other schoolmates, and teachers.As we can see, we must attach more importance to mental health of college students.Here are some suggestions on how to improve their mental health.First,there should be psychological courses at their schools, so that students can learn in class effective methods of dealing with mental troubles when necessary.Second, the parents should learn more knowledge about precautionary measures against potential problems in their children.Third, it is advisable for students to learn about how to adjust their own minds when facing much pressure.In conclusion, it is of great importance for us to ensure students' mental health, which needs the joint effort from all the parties concerned, such as the schools, the parents, the society and the students themselves.

第二篇：六級(jí)翻譯寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

六級(jí)翻譯評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

（一）翻譯題型描述

翻譯部分測(cè)試學(xué)生把漢語(yǔ)所承載的信息用英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來的能力，所占分值比例為15%，考試時(shí)間30分鐘。翻譯題型為段落漢譯英。翻譯內(nèi)容涉及中國(guó)的歷史、文化、經(jīng)濟(jì)、社會(huì)發(fā)展等。四級(jí)長(zhǎng)度為140-160個(gè)漢字，六級(jí)長(zhǎng)度為180-200個(gè)漢字。

（二）翻譯評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

本題滿分為15分，成績(jī)分為六個(gè)檔次：13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分和0分。各檔次的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)見下表：

檔次 評(píng) 分 標(biāo) 準(zhǔn)

13-15分 譯文準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)了原文的意思。用詞貼切，行文流暢，基本上無語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。

10-12分 譯文基本上表達(dá)了原文的意思。文字通順、連貫，無重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

7-9分 譯文勉強(qiáng)表達(dá)了原文的意思。用詞欠準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有些是嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

4-6分 譯文僅表達(dá)了一小部分原文的意思。用詞不準(zhǔn)確，有相當(dāng)多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

1-3分 譯文支離破碎。除個(gè)別詞語(yǔ)或句子，絕大部分文字沒有表達(dá)原文意思。

0分 未作答，或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞，或譯文與原文毫不相關(guān)。

六級(jí)寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

(一)作文評(píng)分原則

1.CET作文題采用總體評(píng)分(Global Scoring)方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分(Reward Scores),而不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。

2.從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體，作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過語(yǔ)言來表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而確切地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。

3.避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分;該給低分的給低分，包括0分，一名閱卷人員在所閱的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分?jǐn)?shù)。

(二)作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

1.本題滿分為15分。

2.閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等: 2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。

3.閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)(如8分)相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)(即8分)，若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)，即可加一分(即9分)或減一分(即7分)，但不得加或減半分。

4.評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

2分……條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

5分……基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

8分……基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫;語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。

11分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。

14分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好?；旧蠠o語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。

第三篇：六級(jí)寫作素材

六級(jí)寫作素材素材一：Technology

﹢Technology helps to

the increase/enhance/promote

efficiency in people’s study and work, making our/their activities more economical and less time-consuming.﹣The youngsters are more likely to/tend to/ incline to be overly dependent on technology, even getting addicted to it.﹣Technology could make/render city-dwellers slaves to high

technology, alienating people from one another.﹣Technology deprives the citizens of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.素材二：Mind, soul

﹢enable the students to grasp their subjects better, helping them to broaden their horizons.﹢relax their bodies and ease the minds.﹣The citizens are more likely to be monotonous and un-motivating.﹣The youngsters might even suffer from mental diseases/illnesses, such as depression.素材三：Society

﹢promote the development of society

﹢keep the society safe and stable ﹣increase the already high crime rate

素材四：Environment

﹣The proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish（such as disposable plastic bags）poses a

threat to environment and humanity.how We should not develop economy at the expense of environment.素材五：Employment, competition ﹢create more job opportunities

﹢enable the students to find jobs more easily

﹣The competition in modern society is increasingly fierce, which alienates the city-dwellers from one another and makes them cold and cruel.素材六：Culture globalization ﹢It is manifest that globalization can bring numerous benefits to human.﹢promote/enhance the cultural communication and interaction between people from different countries/ethnic minority.﹣create tension and conflicts between…

素材七：Money（egoism←→altruism）

﹣Youngsters today tend to be

money-oriented and are likely to fall prey to materialism and egoism.﹣It is wrong to equate happiness with making more money and living in a spacious house.

第四篇：六級(jí)寫作要點(diǎn)

六級(jí)寫作要點(diǎn)

寫作常見錯(cuò)誤綜述

１.缺少標(biāo)題；相對(duì)于作文長(zhǎng)短來說標(biāo)題太大，應(yīng)該根據(jù)文章的主要內(nèi)容縮小標(biāo)題；標(biāo)題的大小寫不規(guī)范.?作文的標(biāo)題中的首尾單詞的第一個(gè)字母要大寫,另外,中間出現(xiàn)的單詞中,除冠詞,連詞(and, or, but, nor, for),短的介詞和不定式的to要小寫外,其它詞要大寫:

my first visit to the palace museum

?the people without a country

?rules to abide by

?dickens and david copperfield

?what can the artist do in the world of today?

?what reform means to china

?the myth of a “negro literature”

?the English-speaking people in Quebec

My First Visit to the Palace Museum ?The People Without a Country

?Rules to Abide By

?Dickens and David Copperfield

?What Can the Artist Do in the World of Today?

?What Reform Means to China

?The Myth of a “Negro Literature”

?The English-Speaking People in Quebec

2.段落開頭空格不規(guī)范，應(yīng)該空四至五個(gè)字母的距離；

文章要分段，不能全文只有一或兩段，一般要有至少三段，而且開頭結(jié)尾段不宜太長(zhǎng)，一般各部分不超過四句話。

?3.除去開頭結(jié)尾一般就應(yīng)該是文章的中心部分，這部分的內(nèi)容不能太少。這部分的內(nèi)容從字?jǐn)?shù)上應(yīng)該至少超過開頭結(jié)尾的總和。而且，從語(yǔ)言形式上看，要把這部分內(nèi)容分成幾部分且用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)進(jìn)行連接，使這部分從形式上看條理清楚。

?中心部分的內(nèi)容也要意思上是相互聯(lián)系的，如先寫重要的，再寫次要的；或先一方面再寫另一方面。

4.不論議論文寫什么內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)記住只要寫一個(gè)中心觀點(diǎn)?？梢蚤_頭段或結(jié)尾段亮明你的觀點(diǎn)。

但文章中所有內(nèi)容都應(yīng)該為這個(gè)中心觀點(diǎn)服務(wù)，不論是證明中心觀點(diǎn)的次觀點(diǎn)，還是舉例，請(qǐng)緊緊圍繞你的觀點(diǎn)寫作文。

5.因?yàn)槭亲h論文，文章的目的是說服文章讀者認(rèn)同你的觀點(diǎn)，所以文章要客觀，有說服力。為此，要避免主觀偏激的議論，舉出有說服力的事例或數(shù)據(jù)，引用名言，做出合理的分析討論。

5.因?yàn)槭亲h論文，文章的目的是說服文章讀者認(rèn)同你的觀點(diǎn)，所以文章要客觀，有說服力。為此，要避免主觀偏激的議論，舉出有說服力的事例或數(shù)據(jù)，引用名言，做出合理的分析討論。

6.書寫潦草會(huì)影響你的得分。單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤也常常出現(xiàn)，建議多查字典，考試中對(duì)那些沒把握的詞盡量不用。句子的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤也不少，對(duì)此要學(xué)好語(yǔ)法，也可通過多練筆請(qǐng)別人改的方法提高。有些表達(dá)令人費(fèi)解，建議寫作完成后嘗試以一個(gè)讀者的身份給自己的作文挑刺。

?7.文章的開頭是非常重要的,這是文章的引子。作為讀者, 會(huì)從開頭段傳遞出來的信息來對(duì)下文的內(nèi)容有一個(gè)合理期待, 如果與期待不符, 會(huì)讓讀者覺得文章寫作很不緊湊。

?8要提高寫作不是一朝一夕能做到的，需要下工夫。可以通過多寫作文，多看范文或多背范文，學(xué)習(xí)寫作知識(shí)來提高寫作。平時(shí)多背一些好的句型，并能在說的時(shí)候盡量用上，多做翻譯練習(xí)（口頭的可節(jié)省時(shí)間，筆頭能進(jìn)行細(xì)致分析）對(duì)提高寫作也很有幫助。

寫作如何開篇

??以校園內(nèi)或社會(huì)上的某種現(xiàn)象或趨勢(shì)作為文章的引子來開篇 ?1)With the steady growth in the country’s economy as well as the people’s living standards, ….?2)With the rapid improvement in …/ growing awareness of …, more and more …/ sth…

?(e.g.With the considerable improvement in building industry, more and more structures are being erected to set the people’s minds at ease.)

?3)Recently, sth./the problem of …h(huán)as been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern.?(e.g.Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.)

?4)One of the universal issues we are faced with/ that cause increasing concern is that …

?(e.g.One of the universal issues that draw(cause)growing concern is whether it is wise of man to have invented the automobile.)

?5)In the past few years, there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…

?(e.g.In the past ten years, there has been a sharp decline in the number of species.)

?6)Nowadays, more/most important/dangerous for our society is …

?(e.g.Nowadays, most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles.)

?(過渡句)

?1)To prevent this phenomenon/trend from worsening/running wide/To guide the matter/situation to the best advantage, it is necessary/important to …

?2)In the face of …some people take the position that …/some people come to believe that …, to which I can’t attach/add my consent.?In the face of …people retain/take/show/assume different attitudes/positions/standpoints.?3)But many people feel puzzled about/ perplexed at…

?2 圖表常用開篇語(yǔ)

?1)As can be seen form the table above, some changes in …h(huán)ave taken place over the period from… to ….?(e.g.As can be seen form the table above, some changes in people’s diet have taken place over the period from 1986 to 1990.)

?2)According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that…

?3)As can be seen from the table/graph/figure, there is a marked increase/decline/favorable(an unfavorable)change in …

? 4)As we can see from the table/graph/figure above, drastic/considerable/great changes have taken place in …over the period of time form … to…

?(過渡句)

?1）To get a sense of how …we must turn first to causes for it.?2)This is a(n)favorable/unfavorable/unhealthy/

?essential/marked/grateful change/tendency/

?situation, but factors/causes/reasons for it are not hard to find.?3)The progress/improvement/change(s)in …is(are)really tremendous/remarkable/marvelous, so it is necessary to understand what has caused it(them).?

?3)反襯法：從事物的對(duì)立面出發(fā)，引出思考。

?e.g.As modern cities have been brought into rapid development, more and more of vegetation is going out of urban life.Trees are being pulled down to make room for high-rise office buildings, and industrial pollution makes it harder for the rest of greenery to survive among the forest of apartment structures.This is a situation worth improving, as vegetation is as essential to health as fresh air to life in big cities.? 1)The current situation of …, if approached from the opposite angle, reveals that…

?(e.g.The current situation of our reforms in political structure, if approached from the opposite angle, reveals that much of the achievement is far from satisfactory.For example, …)

?(過渡句)

?1)This situation/phenomenon/trend/tendency is rather distressing/ disturbing/depressing/heart-rending, for the opposite of it is just in line with our wishes/just what is to be expected.?2)This is what we are unwilling to see, so some way must be found

out to …

?3)Fortunately, however, more and more people come/begin to realize that…

?4)Unfortunately, things have worsened/come/developed to the point where…

4．直入法

?Everyone would agree that, although our age entirely overshadows all previous ages in means of obtaining knowledge, reading still takes its leading role in all senses.But agreement ceases as soon as they attempt to determine how to read more profitably, upon which views vary from person to person.?1)To sb.’s mind/In sb.’s eye(s), sth.seems/means…

?2)No one would deny that…

?Or: Everyone would agree that…

?(過渡句)

?1)If we take a further/closer look at this problem/matter, however, more secrets/grounds/chances/ways will be found out for … ?2)If you push the analysis/study/

?argument/comparison/exposure further, you will see that…

?5.讓步法：先承認(rèn)其好的一面，再轉(zhuǎn)而討論其不好的一面。?1)The birth/invention of …h(huán)as made an enormous/essential difference to …But it does not mean that…

?(e.g.The birth of the computer has made a radical difference to the human progress.But it does not mean that this wonder does no threat to our society.)

?2)Sth.has changed the way of our society develops,….But its bright side should not keep us from following closely its dark side.?3)No/Little doubt that… But…

?(e.g.Little doubt that the traditional schooling has contributed much to our social development.… But some grave defects in it begin to stand out against the modern times.)

? 6．設(shè)問法：如題就是一問題，可用此方法

?Title: On Youth

?What does “youth” mean?.....?1)What is the best definition for …?

?2)How/Why does sth.affect our life?

?7.情景法：設(shè)計(jì)情景，再引出討論。

?1）Suppose/Imagine that …/Let’s suppose/assume/imagine(that)…

?(e.g.Suppose, by any chance, you heartily disagree with anything that is going on about you, you are less likely to stay on the good side of people around you.)

?2)We often find ourselves caught/involved in a dilemma whether…

?(e.g.We often find ourselves caught in a dilemma whether we should reach for the bear’s paw or for the shark’s fin/whether to reach for…)

?(過渡句)

?1)In that case, however, I prefer to … rather than…

?2)When exposed to/subject to the same conditions/challenge/choice, however, different people tend to behave in different ways.?8)引言法：引用名言，不可用直接引語(yǔ)，可自己造名言，只要能說得通。

?1)One of the great sociologists/psychologists once said that?(e.g.One of the great sociologists once said that society affects human character as vitally as the clothes one wears, the food one eats and the friends one involves himself with.)

?(過渡句)

?1)If this is true/the case, what accounts for such an issue:

?2)His voice arouses echoes among people of insight, who have come up with some practical measures.

第五篇：大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四、六級(jí)考試評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四、六級(jí)考試評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四、六級(jí)考試的原始分?jǐn)?shù)在經(jīng)過加權(quán)、等值處理后，參照常模轉(zhuǎn)換為均值為500、標(biāo)準(zhǔn)差為70的常模正態(tài)分?jǐn)?shù)。同時(shí)，四、六級(jí)考試不設(shè)及格線，考試合格證書改為成績(jī)報(bào)告單。

四、六級(jí)考試單項(xiàng)分的報(bào)道分為四個(gè)部分，這四個(gè)部分以及各部分所占的分值比例分別為：聽力(20%)、閱讀(40%)、綜合(25%)、作文(15%)。各單項(xiàng)報(bào)道分的滿分分別為：聽力142分;閱讀284分;綜合178分;作文106分。各單項(xiàng)報(bào)道分相加之和等于報(bào)道總分。

四、六級(jí)的單項(xiàng)報(bào)道分也是常模正態(tài)分?jǐn)?shù)，但參照的常模是相應(yīng)的單項(xiàng)常模。因此，單項(xiàng)報(bào)道分能夠報(bào)道考生在各單項(xiàng)常模群體中所處的百分位置。舉例如下：

某考生四級(jí)作文報(bào)道分?jǐn)?shù)是62分，則其在常模群體中的百分位是在77%～86%之間，表示這名考生的英語(yǔ)成績(jī)至少要優(yōu)于常模群體中77%的人，但不會(huì)優(yōu)于86%的人。

某考生六級(jí)聽力報(bào)道分?jǐn)?shù)是100分，則其在常模群體中的百分位是54%，表示這名考生的英語(yǔ)聽力成績(jī)優(yōu)于常模群體中54%的人。

大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試得分換算表

一、寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

說明：寫作部分占整套試卷的15%

二、聽力部分的評(píng)分換算法

說明：

1）聽力部分占整套試題的35%，最高分71分，最低分29分。

2）其中短對(duì)話~短文聽力，每題算一題，共計(jì)25個(gè)題；

聽寫單詞句子共11個(gè)題，每?jī)蓚€(gè)單詞算一個(gè)題，每個(gè)句子算2個(gè)題，共計(jì)10個(gè)。

三、閱讀部分的評(píng)分換算法

說明：

1）閱讀部分占整套試題的35%，最高分71分，最低分29分。

2）其中快速閱讀，每題算一題，共10個(gè)；

15選10，每?jī)蓚€(gè)空算一個(gè)題，共5個(gè)；

篇章精讀，每題算兩個(gè)題，共20個(gè)。

四、綜合測(cè)試部分的評(píng)分換算法

說明：

1）綜合能力測(cè)試占整套試題的15%

2）其中完形填空每?jī)蓚€(gè)題算一個(gè)題，共計(jì)10個(gè)題

翻譯每個(gè)算一個(gè)題，共計(jì)5個(gè)題。