第一篇：四、六級(jí)寫作精華

關(guān)于四級(jí)寫作

2009年9月13日

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：

? 2分-條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子有錯(cuò)，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤； ? 5分-基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤； ? 8分-基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫。語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，其中有少量的嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。? 11分-切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但是少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。? 14分-切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本上無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)誤。

注：英語(yǔ)作文一般不少于三段，分開頭部分，擴(kuò)展部分，結(jié)尾部分。

開頭部分

按作文題目的不同大約可以分為六種：一般性作文（或要性作文），正反作文，引經(jīng)據(jù)典式作文（或名人名言作文）,題目為疑問(wèn)句的作文，圖表作文，應(yīng)用文。

第一種：一般性作文（或要性作文）格式：引子（引出主題）+謙語(yǔ)+論點(diǎn)+啟下

以Reading widely為例

引子：Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the _______(especially on __________),which is ___________.例如：Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.謙語(yǔ);as far as I know, as far as I am concerned,in my opinion,from my viewpoint

論點(diǎn)：________have positive effects on___*__, 例如：reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, 啟下：以上*號(hào)處,which results from the reansons as follows.從而可得整篇開頭如下：

Reading widely

Nowadays,there exists an increasingly hot topic among the students, especially on college campus,which is reading widely.from my viewpoint

reading widely have positive effects on your nowlege extension and horizion broaden, which results from the reansons as follows.注意:以后在各種問(wèn)題中，引子，謙語(yǔ)，啟下，都不變。

第二種：正反作文

格式：引子（引出主題）+謙語(yǔ)+觀點(diǎn)+啟下

以Private car為例

引子:As an old ssaying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.謙語(yǔ): from my viewpoint 1 private car have both advantage and 觀點(diǎn):○shortcoming on our daily life, private car have both positive and ○negative effects on our daily life，啟下: which results from the reansons as follows.從而可得整篇開頭如下：

Private car As an old ssaying goes ,every coin has 2 sides,which applies to private car as well.from my viewpoint, private car have both positive and negative effects on our daily life, which results from the reansons as follows.第三種：引經(jīng)據(jù)典式作文（或名人名言作文）格式：引子+It means+解釋（轉(zhuǎn)述）+啟下

以No pains,no gains為例

引子：No pains,no gains(抄題)，which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.解釋：It means your success,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , 啟下：which results from the reansons as follows.從而可得整篇開頭如下：

No pains,no gains No pains,no gains，which derives from the valuable experience of our forefathers,but it still has its realistic significance even today.It means your success,to some extent,depends on your hardwork , which results from the reansons as follows.第四種：題目為疑問(wèn)句的作文

可分為一般疑問(wèn)句，選擇疑問(wèn)句，特殊疑問(wèn)句 一

題目為一般疑問(wèn)句 ○格式：引子+抄題+簡(jiǎn)短回答+謙詞+轉(zhuǎn)述（立論）+啟下

簡(jiǎn)短回答：of course+主語(yǔ)+助動(dòng)詞 Of course not It all depends 以Should students be abroad studying at the

younger age ?為例

Nowadays,there exists an increasing heated discussion in matters of middle school students’ studying abroad.Then should they be abroad studying at the younger age ? It all depends.From my viewpoint,studying abroad for middle school students has both positive and negtaive effects on their future,which results from the reasons as follows.二 題目為選擇疑問(wèn)句 ○格式:引子+抄題(一定要補(bǔ)全)+簡(jiǎn)短回答+謙語(yǔ)+轉(zhuǎn)述+啟下

簡(jiǎn)短回答：I prefer to former to later

或It all denpends

以Reading selectively or widely ?為例 Nowadays,there existsan increasingly heated discussion in matters of the content of reading,especially for college students.Then should we read reading selectively or widely ? I prefer to latter.From my viewpiont,reading widely serves as an indispensable part to our study,which results from the reasons as follows.三 題目為特殊疑問(wèn)句 ○格式：引子（傳統(tǒng)）+抄題+回答（立論）+啟下

以What could we do for the 2008 olympics?為例

Nowadays,2008 olympic games to be held in Beijing has become a hot topic among the Chinese home and abroad.Then as a college student,what could we do for her ? From my viewpoint,doing what we could from slight detail is of great importance, which results from the reasons as follows.第五種:圖表作文

格式:引子+現(xiàn)象結(jié)論+描圖+論點(diǎn)

引子：An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,*******************.現(xiàn)象結(jié)論：*號(hào)處?？捎迷~changed dramatically.描圖：對(duì)圖表進(jìn)行整體大致描述。例如：圖表略。

{An obvious conclusion could easily be drawn from the chart above,}引子。{the number of computers owned by every 1000 people has changed dramatically in the past 20 years.}`現(xiàn)象結(jié)論。{In 1987,only 3%。of the people can work or play on computers ；While the number soared to 80% in 2007.}描圖。{From my viewpoint,computers are being more and more widely used in our daily work and life.}論點(diǎn)。

第六種：應(yīng)用文

應(yīng)用文包括感謝信，投訴信，求職信 開頭：I’m writing the letter to: 1 apply for position in your company.○2 1.complain ○about the bad quality of the goods I bought the other day.2.complain about the bad service I received.3 express my heart-felt gratitude to sb ○for sth.擴(kuò)展部分

一般性作文都可用以下格式： first and foremost,………

○2 what is more,………

○3the last but not the least important,………

○對(duì)于兩面作文：on the one hand ……… On the other hand………

結(jié)尾部分

結(jié)尾的寫法大致可以分為四種：印證主題式，呼吁社 會(huì)式，正反對(duì)照式，名人名言式。可以根據(jù)自己的題 材選擇適當(dāng)?shù)慕Y(jié)尾方式。第一種：印證主題式

格式：After pondering this issue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that_______________.以part-time jobs為例

After pondering this issue on many occasions,it seems not difficult to draw the conclusion that part-time jobs for college students have both positive and negative effects on their study and future.Inconsequence,we should have a correct attitude to when confronted with it.第二種：呼吁社會(huì)式

格式: In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________.Only in this way ,we can _________in the future.以Private car為例

In a word,the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of private car.Only in this way ,we can enjoy life in the future.第三種：正反對(duì)照式

格式：In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we _______________,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.以Private car為例

In my opinion,both sides are partly right.When we want to have a private car,we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems,and then make the right choice.第四種：名人名言式結(jié)尾

格式：Whatever you do,please remember the saying____________.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.以No pains no gains為例

Whatever you do,please remember the saying no pains no gains.If you understand it and apply it to study or work,you will definitely benefit a lot from it.

第二篇：六級(jí)寫作素材

六級(jí)寫作素材素材一：Technology

﹢Technology helps to

the increase/enhance/promote

efficiency in people’s study and work, making our/their activities more economical and less time-consuming.﹣The youngsters are more likely to/tend to/ incline to be overly dependent on technology, even getting addicted to it.﹣Technology could make/render city-dwellers slaves to high

technology, alienating people from one another.﹣Technology deprives the citizens of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.素材二：Mind, soul

﹢enable the students to grasp their subjects better, helping them to broaden their horizons.﹢relax their bodies and ease the minds.﹣The citizens are more likely to be monotonous and un-motivating.﹣The youngsters might even suffer from mental diseases/illnesses, such as depression.素材三：Society

﹢promote the development of society

﹢keep the society safe and stable ﹣increase the already high crime rate

素材四：Environment

﹣The proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish（such as disposable plastic bags）poses a

threat to environment and humanity.how We should not develop economy at the expense of environment.素材五：Employment, competition ﹢create more job opportunities

﹢enable the students to find jobs more easily

﹣The competition in modern society is increasingly fierce, which alienates the city-dwellers from one another and makes them cold and cruel.素材六：Culture globalization ﹢It is manifest that globalization can bring numerous benefits to human.﹢promote/enhance the cultural communication and interaction between people from different countries/ethnic minority.﹣create tension and conflicts between…

素材七：Money（egoism←→altruism）

﹣Youngsters today tend to be

money-oriented and are likely to fall prey to materialism and egoism.﹣It is wrong to equate happiness with making more money and living in a spacious house.

第三篇：六級(jí)寫作要點(diǎn)

六級(jí)寫作要點(diǎn)

寫作常見錯(cuò)誤綜述

１.缺少標(biāo)題；相對(duì)于作文長(zhǎng)短來(lái)說(shuō)標(biāo)題太大，應(yīng)該根據(jù)文章的主要內(nèi)容縮小標(biāo)題；標(biāo)題的大小寫不規(guī)范.?作文的標(biāo)題中的首尾單詞的第一個(gè)字母要大寫,另外,中間出現(xiàn)的單詞中,除冠詞,連詞(and, or, but, nor, for),短的介詞和不定式的to要小寫外,其它詞要大寫:

my first visit to the palace museum

?the people without a country

?rules to abide by

?dickens and david copperfield

?what can the artist do in the world of today?

?what reform means to china

?the myth of a “negro literature”

?the English-speaking people in Quebec

My First Visit to the Palace Museum ?The People Without a Country

?Rules to Abide By

?Dickens and David Copperfield

?What Can the Artist Do in the World of Today?

?What Reform Means to China

?The Myth of a “Negro Literature”

?The English-Speaking People in Quebec

2.段落開頭空格不規(guī)范，應(yīng)該空四至五個(gè)字母的距離；

文章要分段，不能全文只有一或兩段，一般要有至少三段，而且開頭結(jié)尾段不宜太長(zhǎng)，一般各部分不超過(guò)四句話。

?3.除去開頭結(jié)尾一般就應(yīng)該是文章的中心部分，這部分的內(nèi)容不能太少。這部分的內(nèi)容從字?jǐn)?shù)上應(yīng)該至少超過(guò)開頭結(jié)尾的總和。而且，從語(yǔ)言形式上看，要把這部分內(nèi)容分成幾部分且用關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)進(jìn)行連接，使這部分從形式上看條理清楚。

?中心部分的內(nèi)容也要意思上是相互聯(lián)系的，如先寫重要的，再寫次要的；或先一方面再寫另一方面。

4.不論議論文寫什么內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)記住只要寫一個(gè)中心觀點(diǎn)。可以開頭段或結(jié)尾段亮明你的觀點(diǎn)。

但文章中所有內(nèi)容都應(yīng)該為這個(gè)中心觀點(diǎn)服務(wù)，不論是證明中心觀點(diǎn)的次觀點(diǎn)，還是舉例，請(qǐng)緊緊圍繞你的觀點(diǎn)寫作文。

5.因?yàn)槭亲h論文，文章的目的是說(shuō)服文章讀者認(rèn)同你的觀點(diǎn)，所以文章要客觀，有說(shuō)服力。為此，要避免主觀偏激的議論，舉出有說(shuō)服力的事例或數(shù)據(jù)，引用名言，做出合理的分析討論。

5.因?yàn)槭亲h論文，文章的目的是說(shuō)服文章讀者認(rèn)同你的觀點(diǎn)，所以文章要客觀，有說(shuō)服力。為此，要避免主觀偏激的議論，舉出有說(shuō)服力的事例或數(shù)據(jù)，引用名言，做出合理的分析討論。

6.書寫潦草會(huì)影響你的得分。單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤也常常出現(xiàn)，建議多查字典，考試中對(duì)那些沒(méi)把握的詞盡量不用。句子的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤也不少，對(duì)此要學(xué)好語(yǔ)法，也可通過(guò)多練筆請(qǐng)別人改的方法提高。有些表達(dá)令人費(fèi)解，建議寫作完成后嘗試以一個(gè)讀者的身份給自己的作文挑刺。

?7.文章的開頭是非常重要的,這是文章的引子。作為讀者, 會(huì)從開頭段傳遞出來(lái)的信息來(lái)對(duì)下文的內(nèi)容有一個(gè)合理期待, 如果與期待不符, 會(huì)讓讀者覺得文章寫作很不緊湊。

?8要提高寫作不是一朝一夕能做到的，需要下工夫?？梢酝ㄟ^(guò)多寫作文，多看范文或多背范文，學(xué)習(xí)寫作知識(shí)來(lái)提高寫作。平時(shí)多背一些好的句型，并能在說(shuō)的時(shí)候盡量用上，多做翻譯練習(xí)（口頭的可節(jié)省時(shí)間，筆頭能進(jìn)行細(xì)致分析）對(duì)提高寫作也很有幫助。

寫作如何開篇

??以校園內(nèi)或社會(huì)上的某種現(xiàn)象或趨勢(shì)作為文章的引子來(lái)開篇 ?1)With the steady growth in the country’s economy as well as the people’s living standards, ….?2)With the rapid improvement in …/ growing awareness of …, more and more …/ sth…

?(e.g.With the considerable improvement in building industry, more and more structures are being erected to set the people’s minds at ease.)

?3)Recently, sth./the problem of …h(huán)as been brought to popular attention/ has become the focus of public concern.?(e.g.Recently, the problem of unemployment has been brought to such popular attention that governments at all levels place it on the agenda as the first matter.)

?4)One of the universal issues we are faced with/ that cause increasing concern is that …

?(e.g.One of the universal issues that draw(cause)growing concern is whether it is wise of man to have invented the automobile.)

?5)In the past few years, there has been a boom/sharp growth/decline in…

?(e.g.In the past ten years, there has been a sharp decline in the number of species.)

?6)Nowadays, more/most important/dangerous for our society is …

?(e.g.Nowadays, most dangerous for our society is the tendency to take advantage of each other in political circles.)

?(過(guò)渡句)

?1)To prevent this phenomenon/trend from worsening/running wide/To guide the matter/situation to the best advantage, it is necessary/important to …

?2)In the face of …some people take the position that …/some people come to believe that …, to which I can’t attach/add my consent.?In the face of …people retain/take/show/assume different attitudes/positions/standpoints.?3)But many people feel puzzled about/ perplexed at…

?2 圖表常用開篇語(yǔ)

?1)As can be seen form the table above, some changes in …h(huán)ave taken place over the period from… to ….?(e.g.As can be seen form the table above, some changes in people’s diet have taken place over the period from 1986 to 1990.)

?2)According to the information given in the table/graph, we can find that…

?3)As can be seen from the table/graph/figure, there is a marked increase/decline/favorable(an unfavorable)change in …

? 4)As we can see from the table/graph/figure above, drastic/considerable/great changes have taken place in …over the period of time form … to…

?(過(guò)渡句)

?1）To get a sense of how …we must turn first to causes for it.?2)This is a(n)favorable/unfavorable/unhealthy/

?essential/marked/grateful change/tendency/

?situation, but factors/causes/reasons for it are not hard to find.?3)The progress/improvement/change(s)in …is(are)really tremendous/remarkable/marvelous, so it is necessary to understand what has caused it(them).?

?3)反襯法：從事物的對(duì)立面出發(fā)，引出思考。

?e.g.As modern cities have been brought into rapid development, more and more of vegetation is going out of urban life.Trees are being pulled down to make room for high-rise office buildings, and industrial pollution makes it harder for the rest of greenery to survive among the forest of apartment structures.This is a situation worth improving, as vegetation is as essential to health as fresh air to life in big cities.? 1)The current situation of …, if approached from the opposite angle, reveals that…

?(e.g.The current situation of our reforms in political structure, if approached from the opposite angle, reveals that much of the achievement is far from satisfactory.For example, …)

?(過(guò)渡句)

?1)This situation/phenomenon/trend/tendency is rather distressing/ disturbing/depressing/heart-rending, for the opposite of it is just in line with our wishes/just what is to be expected.?2)This is what we are unwilling to see, so some way must be found

out to …

?3)Fortunately, however, more and more people come/begin to realize that…

?4)Unfortunately, things have worsened/come/developed to the point where…

4．直入法

?Everyone would agree that, although our age entirely overshadows all previous ages in means of obtaining knowledge, reading still takes its leading role in all senses.But agreement ceases as soon as they attempt to determine how to read more profitably, upon which views vary from person to person.?1)To sb.’s mind/In sb.’s eye(s), sth.seems/means…

?2)No one would deny that…

?Or: Everyone would agree that…

?(過(guò)渡句)

?1)If we take a further/closer look at this problem/matter, however, more secrets/grounds/chances/ways will be found out for … ?2)If you push the analysis/study/

?argument/comparison/exposure further, you will see that…

?5.讓步法：先承認(rèn)其好的一面，再轉(zhuǎn)而討論其不好的一面。?1)The birth/invention of …h(huán)as made an enormous/essential difference to …But it does not mean that…

?(e.g.The birth of the computer has made a radical difference to the human progress.But it does not mean that this wonder does no threat to our society.)

?2)Sth.has changed the way of our society develops,….But its bright side should not keep us from following closely its dark side.?3)No/Little doubt that… But…

?(e.g.Little doubt that the traditional schooling has contributed much to our social development.… But some grave defects in it begin to stand out against the modern times.)

? 6．設(shè)問(wèn)法：如題就是一問(wèn)題，可用此方法

?Title: On Youth

?What does “youth” mean?.....?1)What is the best definition for …?

?2)How/Why does sth.affect our life?

?7.情景法：設(shè)計(jì)情景，再引出討論。

?1）Suppose/Imagine that …/Let’s suppose/assume/imagine(that)…

?(e.g.Suppose, by any chance, you heartily disagree with anything that is going on about you, you are less likely to stay on the good side of people around you.)

?2)We often find ourselves caught/involved in a dilemma whether…

?(e.g.We often find ourselves caught in a dilemma whether we should reach for the bear’s paw or for the shark’s fin/whether to reach for…)

?(過(guò)渡句)

?1)In that case, however, I prefer to … rather than…

?2)When exposed to/subject to the same conditions/challenge/choice, however, different people tend to behave in different ways.?8)引言法：引用名言，不可用直接引語(yǔ)，可自己造名言，只要能說(shuō)得通。

?1)One of the great sociologists/psychologists once said that?(e.g.One of the great sociologists once said that society affects human character as vitally as the clothes one wears, the food one eats and the friends one involves himself with.)

?(過(guò)渡句)

?1)If this is true/the case, what accounts for such an issue:

?2)His voice arouses echoes among people of insight, who have come up with some practical measures.

第四篇：如何攻克四、六級(jí)

如何突破四、六級(jí)

有些大學(xué)四六級(jí)通關(guān)率特別低，下面我就自己通過(guò)四六級(jí)的一些復(fù)習(xí)策略與大家分享一下。

一、聽力

聽力占有很大的分值，因此我們需要好好攻克此部分。平時(shí)，我們可以看一些美國(guó)大片，學(xué)習(xí)他們的的發(fā)音。在看電影時(shí)我們需要反復(fù)看同一部電影，直到不用看字幕就能聽懂為止。若要在短時(shí)間內(nèi)攻克部分，我們需要采取以下措施:做歷年真題，第一遍僅僅是做出選項(xiàng)；第二遍邊聽邊寫，需要反復(fù)聽，直到把句子寫出來(lái)為止；第三遍：將自己陌生的詞匯、習(xí)語(yǔ)記錄下來(lái)；第四遍：重新做一遍題。需要提醒的是，將自己記錄下來(lái)的哪些詞匯、習(xí)語(yǔ)要經(jīng)常翻看，直到牢記在心。

二：閱讀

平時(shí)我們可以擴(kuò)大自己的閱讀，剛開始可以看一些簡(jiǎn)單的英文雜志，到后面可以涉獵一些較難的英文書籍。若要短時(shí)間突破四六級(jí)，需要狠下功夫，采取以下措施：做歷年真題，同樣第一遍僅僅需要在限定時(shí)間內(nèi)做完題目；第二遍查看自己出錯(cuò)的原因；第三遍閱讀整篇文章，弄懂生詞，且把出現(xiàn)頻率高的詞匯做一記錄；第四遍掌握文章中的難一點(diǎn)的句子結(jié)構(gòu);第五遍：要是文章比較優(yōu)美，可以花費(fèi)一定時(shí)間背誦下來(lái)。

三：作文

平時(shí)一定要練習(xí)寫作，最好養(yǎng)成每天寫一篇英文作文的習(xí)慣。多背一些好的文章，好的句子，這樣寫起來(lái)會(huì)得心應(yīng)手。遇到寫作，先不急于下筆，構(gòu)思一下文章的大體輪廓，再下筆。寫作的時(shí)候需要條理清晰，字跡整齊，卷面干凈。

四：新題型

談?wù)勛鲂骂}型的技巧：先看題目，找出每個(gè)題目中的關(guān)鍵詞1-3個(gè)，一般是名詞；然后快速瀏覽文章，若一段中有3個(gè)詞與關(guān)鍵詞相同，那么那句的對(duì)應(yīng)段落就是該段。

五：翻譯

翻譯最重要的我感覺是整個(gè)段落的聯(lián)絡(luò)性和恰當(dāng)?shù)木渥咏Y(jié)構(gòu)，要把握好這兩點(diǎn)。

第五篇：六級(jí)作文訓(xùn)練(四)

Self-Protection Awareness

培養(yǎng)自我保護(hù)意識(shí)

Recently, a large number of affairs about sexual assault were disclosed and reported by mass media.As far as I am concerned, people should get some enlightenment from these affairs, such as enhancing and strengthening education in self-protection awareness, especially for children and students.最近，有很多關(guān)于性侵的事件媒體揭露和報(bào)道。我認(rèn)為人們應(yīng)該從這些事件中得到一些啟示，比如，提高和加強(qiáng)自我保護(hù)意識(shí)教育，特別是對(duì)于兒童和學(xué)生。

Children and students are hurt most in this kind of affairs.As a result, to enhance and strengthen their self-protection awareness is indispensable.In addition, to strengthen the awareness of defending danger is also important.If they can realize the potential danger from someone or something before it happens, they can make some preparations to avoid the danger and reduce the rate of being hurt.因這類事件傷害最大的是兒童和學(xué)生。因此，提高和加強(qiáng)自我保護(hù)意識(shí)是必須的。此外，加強(qiáng)防范危險(xiǎn)的意識(shí)也是很重要的。如果他們能在事情發(fā)生前意識(shí)到某人或某事的潛在危險(xiǎn)，他們就可以做一些準(zhǔn)備來(lái)以避免和減少受傷率。

Therefore, I advocate that parents should help their children develop self-protection awareness from birth, such as designing some situation for them to cope with.In addition, parents should teach their children to recognize the danger and how to avoid and reduce the danger from outside.Besides, children also need to develop an excellent ability of observation.因此，我認(rèn)為父母應(yīng)該幫助他們的孩子從出生開始就培養(yǎng)自我保護(hù)意識(shí)，比如，設(shè)計(jì)一些情況來(lái)讓他們應(yīng)付。父母還應(yīng)該教導(dǎo)孩子認(rèn)識(shí)危險(xiǎn)，如何避免和減少來(lái)自外界的危險(xiǎn)。此外，孩子也需要培養(yǎng)優(yōu)秀的觀察能力。

In a word, to protect children needs both the effort of parents and children

themselves.總之，保護(hù)兒童需要家長(zhǎng)和孩子他們自己的努力。