第一篇:2011.6四級(jí)考試寫作精選話題及
2011.6四級(jí)考試寫作精選話題及范文 1.志愿者活動(dòng)
Part I Writing(30 minutes)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Volunteering activities.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1、越來(lái)越多的人從事志愿者工作
2、志愿者工作的社會(huì)意義
3、作為大學(xué)生,應(yīng)該怎么做
范文:
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters.According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games.Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China.Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society.Olympic Games are a good example.As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games.Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games.Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games.As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities.By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability.Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth.So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow.(161words)
2.培訓(xùn)學(xué)校
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Private School?You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1.當(dāng)前,社會(huì)上有很多私立學(xué)校和培訓(xùn)學(xué)校;
2.私立學(xué)校的利與弊
3.你的看法
范文:
It can be noticed that a large number of private schools or training organizations become a new landscape in education.When you read newspapers, when you watch TV, when you walk on the road, you will inevitably see lots of advertisements about private schools.There are private schools mainly dealing with foreign languages, computers, music and sports.However, is it a good or bad thing to have so many private schools? As a coin has two sides, so are the private schools.On the one hand, private schools can meet the special needs of the society or the particular requirements of people.On the other hand, they often bring people extra burden because of comparison and competition.When asked to decide whether we should have a society without private schools or a society with private schools, I will not hesitate a moment to prefer the latter.Although attending a training course will result in the extra cost or burden, it is of tremendous merits in preparing my work and cultivating my skills.3.明星代言
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Celebrities as the products’ spokesmen?You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1、明星代言現(xiàn)象很普遍。
2、明星代言廣告存在一些問(wèn)題。
3、我的看法。
Celebrities as the products’ spokesmen
In the contemporary society, it is very common for celebrities, or the so-called superstars, to be spokesmen or representatives for a wide variety of products.Celebrities’ advertisements can be easily found on the Internet, televisions, newspapers, magazines and even on the walls of some buildings.There are, however, some problems for celebrities and the consumers.To begin with, before representing, a star may know nothing about the product.Thus, consumers may be misled.Even worse, for the sake of money, some stars advertise for items with low quality, even for fake commodities.In the case of Sanlu, the public image of stars involved was spoiled.Last but not least, the high income of advertising does not deserve their labor, which widens the gap between the poor and the rich.From my point of view, it is high time that measures were taken to eliminate the demerits.Firstly, laws should be worked out to regulate celebrities’ advertising.Secondly, stars should be required to tell the truth to the public.Only by doing so can stars be trusted by their fans and can consumers benefit.(183)
注:字?jǐn)?shù)稍微有點(diǎn)多了,請(qǐng)大家看著自己酌情刪減吧!4.如何選擇就業(yè)
Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Choosing an occupation.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1、職業(yè)的選擇很重要
2、如何明智的選擇自己的職業(yè)
3、你的職業(yè)選擇。
Every individual faces the problem of choosing an occupation after graduating from university, which is of great importance in one’s whole life.An appropriate occupation makes a man work with vigor and zest.Besides, it is beneficial for both the individual and the country.To make an advisable choice, a graduate should take into account at least two aspects, namely, individual’ interest and the demand of the society.Only when the two aspects are connected, can a man show his ability and talent to the best advantage.If the two factors conflict, the former, in most cases, should give way to the latter, for it is interests that stimulate one’s vigor and potential.In regard to my choice in the future, I want to work as an interpreter.I am keen on learning foreign languages, English in particular.Moreover, in the contemporary society, international exchange in economy and culture has been growing significantly.However, competent interpreters are far from enough.So I am determined to be a qualified interpreter.(169)
注:這回收住手了,剛好滿足六級(jí)的要求150字左右。稍微有點(diǎn)超了,四級(jí)考生請(qǐng)適度刪減
第二篇:四級(jí)寫作話題預(yù)測(cè)及匯總
My View on Job-hopping
Outline: 1.有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作,因?yàn)椤?2.有些人喜歡經(jīng)常換工作,因?yàn)椤?.3.我的看法
People's opinions are always different when they talk about job-hopping.Those who never change their job throughout their life maintain that they have accumulated enough experience to work smoothly and efficiently, so what's the point in changing it and taking another job? They also firmly believe that anyone who wants to excel in his specialty has to work hard on the same post for years to acquire the required skill and knowledge.However, many others hold just the opposite view.On the one hand, they believe that if the present job can offer neither satisfactory working conditions nor future opportunities, they will not hesitate a moment to leave.On the other hand, they hold that life is but once and job-hopping can provide rich and exciting experiences.My own opinion is that job-hopping, in this fast-changing era of information, has become more than common and acceptable.If we want to keep pace with the times, we have to change for the faster, the higher and the stronger.If life is a journey, we have nothing to regret so long as we put meaning into it.So why not make a change?
My View on Job-hopping
Outline: 1.有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作,因?yàn)椤?2.有些人喜歡經(jīng)常換工作,因?yàn)椤?.3.我的看法
People's opinions are always different when they talk about job-hopping.Those who never change their job throughout their life maintain that they have accumulated enough experience to work smoothly and efficiently, so what's the point in changing it and taking another job? They also firmly believe that anyone who wants to excel in his specialty has to work hard on the same post for years to acquire the required skill and knowledge.However, many others hold just the opposite view.On the one hand, they believe that if the present job can offer neither satisfactory working conditions nor future opportunities, they will not hesitate a moment to leave.On the other hand, they hold that life is but once and job-hopping can provide rich and exciting experiences.My own opinion is that job-hopping, in this fast-changing era of information, has become more than common and acceptable.If we want to keep pace with the times, we have to change for the faster, the higher and the stronger.If life is a journey, we have nothing to regret so long as we put meaning into it.So why not make a change?
求職信sample 1
Directions: For this part, you are asked to write An Application Letter in about 120 words based on the information provided below in Chinese:
中國(guó)四達(dá)國(guó)際經(jīng)濟(jì)技術(shù)合作公司(CSCIETC)誠(chéng)聘文秘一員,要求如下:
*年歷20—30歲,大學(xué)本科以上學(xué)歷
*流利的英語(yǔ)聽(tīng)說(shuō)讀寫能力
*熟練的計(jì)算機(jī)操作能力
*良好的溝通與協(xié)調(diào)能力*
*有外企工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)者優(yōu)先
應(yīng)聘者請(qǐng)將簡(jiǎn)歷、聯(lián)系方式以及待遇要求寄至:上海市淮海中路8560號(hào)攬盛大廈人力資源部
郵編:200033
Wang Peng
No.3120, Zhongshan Road
Xu Hui District
Shanghai, 200076
September, 28th, 2003
Department of Human Resources
Lansheng Building
No.8560, Huaihai Zhong Road
Shanghai, 200033
Dear Sir or Madam,I learned from Beijing Youth Daily Oct.2 that your company is offering a position for a secretary, and it's a great pleasure for me to write to explore the possibility of seeking the job.I graduated two years ago from Beijing University of Technology, and obtained a bachelor's degree in the field of business manage?ment.During my stay in the university my major courses included macro-economics, business communication skills, marketing and com?puter applications.I was especially fond of the communication skills which enabled me to deal with people and things around well.Upon graduation I engaged with HP China Branch as an assis?tant to the head of Marketing Department.My responsibilities consist?ed of carrying out market surveys, writing reports and organizing meet?ings within the department.This two-year experience has helped me a lot in many ways.In particular, I become increasingly aware of the importance of co-ordination and co-operation among co-workers.I also believe the experience will qualify me for the current vacancy in your company.I passed both CET-4 and CET-6 with high marks.My spoken English is also fluent enough to organize meetings in English, which was actually my routine work in HP.Most of my market reports were presented in English, as my former boss is a native English speaker
I enclose herein my resume and some relevant documents as re?quired.And if you need any further information on me, I also refer you to Mr.Johnson, my ex-colleague, who is available at 021-66668888.I appreciate your sincere consideration of me, and am looking forward to an early interview with you.Sincerely yours, Wang Peng
求職信sample 2
Directions: The summer vacation is drawing near.You, Liming by name, want to find a part-time job.Write an application letter of about 120-150 words within 30 minutes.Dear Sirs,I'm Li Ming, a sophomore majoring in English at XX University.I read in yesterday's newspaper that you are looking for a part-time secretary and I think I'll prove to be a real find for you.During the past two years at university, I‘ve taken over 18 compulsory and optional course, and have according improved my ability of English listening, speaking, reading, writing and translation considerably.Besides, I have learned a lot about foreign relations and trade.At leisure, I always try to grasp every precious opportunity to practice English with native speakers.As a matter of fact, I've already tried some translation and interpretation jobs.I once worked as a temporary interpreter at the East China Export Commodities Fair.In addition, during the past two years, I have been working as a part-time tour guide.My jobs offered me good opportunities to improve my English and work competence and I enjoy them very much.Two weeks from now, I will be on holiday again.If you can grant me the honor to work for your company as a secretary for two months, I'd feel obliged.Thank you for reading my application letter.I'm looking forward to your reply.1.Craze for Civil Service Examinations
1.現(xiàn)在有越來(lái)越多的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員
2.引起此現(xiàn)象的原因
3.你的看法
Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees.Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can‘t be ignored.The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it‘s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts.On one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest.On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a as well stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as other comforts of life, it‘s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish蕭條的 world economy.Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach(無(wú)可厚非), as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors.The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty崇高的 ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.5.Friendship
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: What does friendship mean? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
1.友誼是人生永恒的主題。
2.友誼到底意味著什么。
3.友誼的重要性。
What does friendship mean? There is no definite answer.An eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily life.Friendship is to our life what salt is to dasher.When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade;when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation;if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you;if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help.We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, which firmly combined them and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism.Friendship isn't almighty, but no one can live happily without it.3.Private Tutoring
Outline: 1.為孩子聘請(qǐng)家教目前非常普遍 2.家教的利與弊 3.我的看法
Sample: Private tutoring is ―in‖.A recent investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors.Such a popular practice indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education.Many parents, for various reasons, missed the chance of obtaining a good education.When their children meet with difficulties in study, they are helpless.Private tutoring is the only solution.As private tutoring is usually one-to-one, the teacher knows the strong points as well as the weak points of the pupil clearly.However, private tutoring has its own disadvantages.For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupils‘ time that they can hardly find enough time for rest and entertainment, which are essential for their physical and mental health.For another, some teachers, busy ―shuttling‖ from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties.What‘s more, some teachers are eager to help pupils do well in the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking rather than help them acquire what is more meaningful.Generally speaking, its disadvantages outweigh its advantages.Greater emphasis should be laid on classroom teaching and practice, on the improvement of teaching quality and on the tapping of pupils‘ potentials.Only in this way can a new generation be healthily brought up.Sample 1
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:
假設(shè)你被 選取為交換學(xué)生,到美國(guó)學(xué)習(xí),你會(huì)選擇什么做為禮物帶給美國(guó)朋友。
Suppose that I am chosen to be an exchange student, ready to stay and study in the USA for a while, I will show the American people the best of our country and our culture.I think the best way to achieve this purpose is to bing them some souvenirs that can best represent Chinese characteristics.I would choose Chinese Ties.The reasons for my choice are twofold.First things first, it symbolizes a Chinese dream, a dream deeply rooted in the Chinese culture—a harmonious society.Typically round in shape, a Chinese Tie reflects ancient Chinese outlook on the world, which, they believe, should be round.In turn, round things signify a harmony.Secondly, I think few things are so wonderful as a...., since just in its middle is a square hole, which has another meaning– the idea of order and rule.Perhaps, there are numerous things that can stand for China, such as …… However, the best that can visualize China, as far as I am concerned, is the Chinese tie.Sample 2
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Fascinating China.You should write at least 120 words according to the situation given below in Chinese:
一位外國(guó)朋友第一次來(lái)中國(guó),他想讓你介紹兩三樣極具中國(guó)特色的事物(可以是風(fēng)俗文化等),你會(huì)向他介紹什么?如何介紹?
The Fascinations of China
China, one of the cradles of human civilization, possesses so many treasures with Chinese characteristics that numerous foreign friends come to visit her.The first place to go to is, the Great Wall, which is the symbol of China and one of the seven wonders in the world.What's more, it is said to be the only construction that can be seen from the outer space.In the imperial periods, it was used in defense of the dynasties.Since liberation, it has become a place of interest.There is a famous saying: “He who does not reach the Great Wall isn't a true man.”
China is home to Panda, an animal with only two colors, white and black, but very cute.It's our national treasure, often functioning as a friendly diplomat.Terracotta-clay warriors unearthed in Xi'an, a famous ancient city-were sculptured in Qin Dynasty, the first dynasty of China.When former U.S.President Clinton came to China, he visited terracotta‘s first.The above mentioned are just a wave of the sea.If you want to know more about this ancient nation, come and be our guest.Sample 3
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Something I admire about the Western Culture.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below :
1.Is there anything in the Western culture you admire?
2.What is it(are they)and why do you like it(them)?
Something I Admire about the Western Culture
Despite the cultural conflicts between the Orient and the Occident, there do exist some admirable ingredients in the Western culture.First and foremost, the equality between parents and children.The parents are not always superior to their children, and the children do not always need to obey their parents‘order, that is, they are more like close friends.Second, the independent personality.Western people have a strong sense of supporting themselves and being independent.They begin earning their pocket money early in their life, even as kids.Last, Western people do not always assess a person according to his background.If only he can achieve success through personal struggle, he can win status.It's a talent-oriented society, not background-oriented.1.“A Letter to the Minister of Education”.Your must base your composition on the following instructions(given in Chinese).Your composition should be no less than 120 words.Remember to write it neatly.假設(shè)你是李文,請(qǐng)你就學(xué)校假期的安排給教育部長(zhǎng)寫一封信,向他建議將學(xué)校傳統(tǒng)的長(zhǎng)假調(diào)整為幾次短假并陳述相關(guān)的原因比如:學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間過(guò)長(zhǎng)可能引起過(guò)度疲勞,而放假過(guò)長(zhǎng)則可能導(dǎo)致浪費(fèi)時(shí)間等等。
A Letter to the Minister of Education
Dear Minister of Education,I am a college student and I would like to suggest that students should be given several shorter breaks through the year instead of the traditional long vacations.The reasons why I am in favor of it are as follows.First, students must work very hard at their studies.If they work for too long without a break, they may become overtired and discouraged.They may lose their enthusiasm for learning.Second, a very long vacation is not necessary.Students can recharge their energy in a few days rather than weeks.Furthermore, many students do not use a long vacation wisely and just waste their time instead of doing something meaningful.And last but not least, vacations give students time to explore other interests and perhaps apply what they have been learning to the real world.If they always focus on their studies.They may lose touch with what is happening in their society.In conclusion, I believe that students today would benefit more from several short vacations than they do form two long ones.I do hope you can take my suggestion into consideration and make a final wise decision.Yours Sincerely
Li Wen
2.Campus Life
Outline: 1.有的大學(xué)生認(rèn)為大學(xué)生活是豐富多彩、充實(shí)的 2.有的大學(xué)生對(duì)校園生活不滿意
3.你理想中的大學(xué)生活是什么樣的?談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/p>
Sample 1:
Early in senior high school, we longed to be enrolled in a university.Now the dream has come true.But how do we college students like our campus life?
Certainly, some relish it, finding it colorful and rewarding.Besides study, they spend considerable amount of time improving themselves in various aspects.Yet others do not think much of their college life, thus do not benefit as much.In their eyes, the university is just a bigger high school.The only difference is that they have more time at their disposal without parents looking over their shoulder.As to me, college life is ideal if only I have abundant books to read, some bosom friends to keep me company, a couple of conscientious professors to instruct me, and an easy access to the Internet.Sample 2
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter of about 120-150 words to your cousin.In the letter, you should give him some advice how to prepare for the college entrance examination he is going to take next month.Dear Xiao Yan,Your entrance examination is drawing near now, and I expect you to be very busy preparing for it and a little nervous.But I believe that you will do well.As a good friend of yours and survivor of the exam, I am going to give you a few practical hints.It is no good to go on studying until the last minute of examination.What you need in the exam is a clear mind.If you tire yourself out before the examination, you will not be mentally and physically ready for it.So a day or two before the examination just relax-leave your books shut and try some other things: get out into the open air;do some physical exercises;see a film;have fun.When you take the exam, don't feel nervous.Breathe deeply and picture yourself performing well in all the tests.Then, read the questions through carefully and thoughtfully, and put your answer down to paper.Last, you should pay attention to the time.Keep an eye on the clock and allot appropriate time to each section.I hope all these suggestions will be helpful to you.Best wishes for your success.Sample 3 A Letter of Reply to a Friend
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a friend's inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university.You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1.建議報(bào)考的專業(yè)及理由
2.報(bào)考該專業(yè)的基本條件
3.應(yīng)當(dāng)如何備考
December 27, 2003
Dear,When it comes to which major you should choose, I propose that you apply for the major of English.To begin with, English is the most popular language in the world, which is widely used in all fields such as teaching, translation, foreign trade and so on.What's more, it goes without saying that English majors are more likely to find a good job in the tighter and tighter job market.In order to study at English Department, you have to meet the following requirements.In the first place, you have to spend a lot of time on it, just as the old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect”.In the second place, the basic skills of reading, writing, listening and speaking are necessary, because they are the foundations for your future study.Last but not the least important, you need an intense interest in learning English since “interest is the best teacher.”
As far as the preparation work is concerned, you should first of all review all the required vocabulary.In addition, you'd better spend some time on reading and writing.Only through these measures can you hope to enroll in our university.Yours
3.演講作文
Sample 1:工作總結(jié)演講
1.簡(jiǎn)述上周五系學(xué)生會(huì)搞的一次以環(huán)保為主題的到某一湖區(qū)拾trash的活動(dòng)。
2.上述活動(dòng)的效果及存在的問(wèn)題。
3.你的建議。
My fellow students,Last Friday, the Students‘ Union of our Department organized a clean-up project to Zhongshan Lake.The purpose of this project is to enhance(加強(qiáng))the environment awareness of general public.Late in the afternoon around 4, a group of 35 volunteers went to the park where we pick up the trash(垃圾)left by some tourists.As head of the group, I would like to report to you on the event.Actually, we did a wonderful job.When we were collecting the trash near the lake, many people paused to watch and then came to our help, showing considerable appreciation and support.But our work still left some to be desired.For one thing, since our project started late in the afternoon, hours were not long enough to attract enough people as we had predicted.For the other, lots of people passed by apparently not knowing what we were doing.But for these two drawbacks, our project could have been much better and more effective.So, following are two of my suggestions: next time we have similar activities, try to start earlier, say in the morning.In this case we can put in more hours.And also, as we are getting along, we can put up some posters to tell people what we are doing and call their attention to environment protection.Thank you.Sample 2 真題演講例文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese.你認(rèn)為自己具備是什么條件(能力,性格,愛(ài)好)可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席工作,2 如果當(dāng)選你將會(huì)為本校同學(xué)做什么?
Good morning.My fellow friends, I feel very glad and excited to have the honor of being a candidate for the president of the students' union.I am a junior and come from the Foreign Language department.I think I can be qualified to work for the union as the president for the following reasons.I joined the department students' union the moment I entered this university, and have been the president of that organization one year later.Consequently, I have accumulated rich experiences in organization activities and communicating with students.Besides, I have a belief of serving for the benefits of students and that of the university as well.Both my fellow department-mates and teachers all give me high praises due to the contributions I made during my term.More importantly, I believe I am a dynamic person full of passion for a variety of things.I am one member of the school basketball team.If I am lucky enough to be elected the president, I will contribute great efforts to serve the interests of our school.Specifically speaking, I will organize various activities and do more exchanges with other schools to help our learning and make the life even more colorful.I sincerely hope you may give me a chance.Thank you.4.國(guó)內(nèi)外求學(xué)申請(qǐng)信
Sample 1 國(guó)外讀研留學(xué)申請(qǐng)
Your name is Li Jin, a student of the Department of Applied Physics, Tsinghua University.You hope to further your study in Boston University(Massachusetts, USA)upon your graduation next year.Now you are writing to the office of graduate admissions to ask for the Application Form and other relative materials.The following points should also be covered by letter:
1.your personal information 2.the reason why you choose Boston University 3.a brief study plan
Sample
Department of Applied Physics
Tsinghua University
Beijing(100083),China
Sept.11th, 1999
Office of Graduate Admissions
Boston University
Massachusetts, USA
Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in Applied Physics toward master degree in your university.My name is Li Jin, an undergraduate student of the Department of Applied Physics, Tsinghua University(China).Next year in the summer, I will graduate and get my BS degree.I plan to continue my study and research in this field under the instructions of first-class professors and in a dynamic academic atmosphere.I choose Boston University because there are a congenial team of researchers, an array of databases and research projects in your School of Physics.I believe my interests are extremely congruent with the strengths of the School.And my solid academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.I will appreciate it very much if you could send me the Graduate Application Forms, the Application Form for Scholarships/Assistantships, a detailed introduction to the School of Physics, and other relevant information.My mailing address is shown on the top of this letter.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Sincerely yours,Li Jin
Sample2 讀研申請(qǐng)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition of about 120-150 words.Write a letter to the Law Department in a university to apply for the M.A.course of business law.Dear Sir or Madam:
I read with great interest the information of graduate studies in your university.I am particularly interested in the course of business law.I am writing to apply for the M.A.course of business law beginning in October, 2003.I am a student of the Law School of ABC University where I have had four years' study of civil law, criminal law, administrative law, environmental law, constitutional law, business law and many other subjects.During those four years in college, I have passed all the required courses of study with satisfactory marks.Enclosed herewith is a certified copy of my academic report form the department concerned.You will notice that I obtained very excellent results in business law.I have always found business law an interesting subject.I would like to further my study in this field at your prestigious university.I therefore request more detailed information for the course.Thank you in advance for your prompt attention to this.Sincerely yours,Li Jin
5.Should College Students Live on Campus
v a.有些人喜歡住在學(xué)校的宿舍,因?yàn)椤?/p>
v b.有些人喜歡住在校外,因?yàn)椤?/p>
v c.我的看法
There are an increasing number of students who choose to live off campus.Parents and university administrations understandably reacted differently.They voiced concerns about security and the threat of off-campus lifestyles getting out of control.However, college students have their own reasons for their choices.Some students prefer to live on campus for the following reasons.First, campus residents are closer to classes, the library, and other resources, so they are more likely to succeed in college and complete their bachelor‘s degree in four years.Furthermore, living in a dorm is a great opportunity to meet all kinds of new people and develop relationships with them, so students living on campus are more sociable.Last but not the least, living on campus is cheaper and more convenient.Often times, off-campus housing is more expensive than on-campus housing and while living on campus, you don‘t have to worry about monthly rent payments and utility bills.Some others choose to live off campus because they believe living off campus they are more independent, with more privacy and a lot more quiet time.Living off campus gives them freedom from those dorm rules and allow them to set their own.The extra space also means that one can probably find a quiet place to study in the convenience of his own home.As for me, I‘m a faithful supporter of the former group because I, living on campus myself, have witnessed and enjoyed all the convenience and happiness of doing so.To me, living on campus undoubtedly adds an important element to the complete college experience.6-1.How to improve student's mental health
Sample 1
1、大學(xué)生的心理健康十分重要
2、因此,學(xué)??梢?.....3、我們自己應(yīng)當(dāng)......As is known to all, psychological health is as important as, if not more important than, physical health for a student during his/her growth.However, it‘s quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy.Undoubtedly, schools and universities should take great account in the responsibilities of students‘ psychological health.Relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that they would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it.For example, there should be a psychological counseling hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid.Of course no psychological health can be obtained without the efforts from the students themselves.From my perspective, what they can do is trying to stay positive, optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools.To be more specific, they can participate in some activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind.Meanwhile, harmful impacts from the cyber space should definitely be avoided.6-2面對(duì)壓力、困難、挫折、災(zāi)難的主題
Sample 2 On Stress 面對(duì)壓力
1.壓力是學(xué)生和工作的人都面對(duì)的事情。
2.有人說(shuō)壓力過(guò)大,影響到身心健康,使人無(wú)法做出最佳表現(xiàn);也有人說(shuō),壓力能夠使人不斷進(jìn)取,是一個(gè)人不斷進(jìn)步的必須條件。
3.我的看法。
(1.有的人害怕壓力。
2.有的人認(rèn)為壓力并不是一件壞事。
3.我的看法。)
With the fast pace of modern life, more and more people are living under great pressure.Some people are afraid of pressure.They think that the stresses and strains of work deprive them of joy and happiness.In their view, stress does harm to them both physically and mentally.That is why they prefer something less competitive and strenuous to something more demanding and challenging.Others argue that stress isn't as bad as it often supposed to be.Unless it is overwhelming, a certain amount of stress is vital to provide motivation and stimulation.Without stress, you may slack off and idle away your time.It gives purpose and meaning to an otherwise meaningless, dull life.People under stress tend to bring their potential into full play and to realize their goals.In my opinion, we shouldn't escape from stress but to face it as it is.What we can do is to adapt to the stress and to profit from it rather than to avoid it.Sample 3 On disasters 面對(duì)災(zāi)難
1.人的一生中,可能會(huì)遇到一些災(zāi)難事件,給我們的生活帶來(lái)意外的打擊。
2.面對(duì)災(zāi)難,我們應(yīng)該堅(jiān)強(qiáng),不要過(guò)于沉湎于悲痛,積極面對(duì)人生。
3.我的看法。
As we all know, one‘s life is full of unexpected events, some of which are wonderful and some of which are disastrous.Those heavy blows, such as, floods, snowstorms, and earthquakes, threaten to weigh one down..However, it‘s even worse if one can‘t drag himself out of the grief in that break-down in the sprit is more serious than the disaster itself.Instead of indulging oneself in sadness, one should be positive of life and contribute to the reconstruction of the hometown..As to me, if I am not the victim of a disaster, I will try my best to help those who are suffering by donation blood or money.If I am a victim, I will try my best to recover from the sadness as soon as possible and try to be strong and supportive to the recovery work..Sample4 On Crisis 論危機(jī)
1.危機(jī)的作用
2.舉個(gè)例子說(shuō)明 3.總結(jié)
Crisis is to us what illness is to our body.On the one hand, illness can harm our body and sometimes even put an end to our life.In the same manner, crisis can cause damage to our life and career.On the other, just as illness sometimes can harden and strengthen our body(our immune system), so crises, especially those minor crises in life sometimes can be turned into a bless to us.A ready example that comes to mind is the earthquake crisis that has recently devastate most of Kyushu, Qinghai Province.Admittedly, it has cost us quite a lot.So many people were seriously injured and still so many even lost their lives.And our economy suffers a temporary setback and a slowdown.However we also have learned a great deal from it.Never has our nation been so united or have our people been more aware of value of lives.All in all, if we can bear in mind all the sufferings and ordeals we have experienced, then all our blood, tear, toil and sweat will not go unrewarded.7.投訴信
Sample1
(1)陳述你對(duì)學(xué)校圖書(shū)館的不滿
(2)列舉圖書(shū)館存在的問(wèn)題
(3)希望能夠得到改進(jìn)
September, 11
Dear President,I am a sophomore with the Department of Law.My name is Wang Ming.I am writing to you today to intimate you with something undesirable that I have found in the University Library.You may or may not realize how much our library, the landmark of our university or even of our town, weighs in our minds.It is a place we are most proud of and where we like to spend most of our time.In such an honorable place we have noticed recently some phenomena which hurt our eye.Some seats in the reading rooms are ?permanently reserved vacant seats‘, that is, some students ―occupy‖ some seats they never come to use.What a terrible waste of valuable resource!Some other students are too noisy, talking among themselves, leaving mobile phone beeping anytime.And some library staff is ill-mannered and rude and not helpful most of time.These and other undesirable things have already done damage to the fame of our university and caused a lot of inconvenience to the users.Dear President, we hope that something can be done to change and reverse the current situation.Let our cozy, comfortable, quiet, effective library come back.Best wishes
Yours sincerely,Wang Ming
真題投訴信和申訴信
Sample 2 申訴信
Dear Mr.Smith,Your printing quality is excellent, but delivery is not.We expect our printing orders to be on time.Recently, our orders have been delivered to us from two to five days later than the time promised.This practice has got to stop.We have been maintaining a mutual rewarding relationship.We receive outstanding service coupled with creativity.For instance, with the widget promotion you helped to develop the color theme for our marketing program and we appreciated that greatly.In return for your quality work, we have given all our business to you.Now that relationship is in jeopardy because of your untimely delivery of printing orders.We know you can meet the deadlines.Your action of getting our printing requirements to us on time is greatly appreciated.Sincerely,Li Ming
分析:以上是Gloryfield Furniture Manufacturing Inc.寫給Smith & Steven Printing Company 的申訴信, 信中提到Smith & Steven Printing Company經(jīng)常延誤送貨時(shí)間而給Gloryfield Furniture Manufacturing Inc.帶來(lái)?yè)p失。最后,Gloryfield Furniture 希望對(duì)方以后能夠準(zhǔn)時(shí)交貨。
Sample 3 投訴信
Dear Customer Service Department,Thank you for sending the above mentioned merchandise promptly.However, the merchandise No.00712433, Model Name: Anta Sport, received on January 23rd, 2005, was found defective.The merchandise mentioned above was fading.Based on the merchandise quality report given by your company, the sneaker is fade proof;and it is manufactured under strict quality control.Moreover, the sales agreement has clearly stated that any unsatisfactory transaction can be resolved in the way of exchanging the merchandise or refunding.As the merchandises are the most demanded in the market and for the sake of our mutual benefit, your prompt actions are appreciated.I am looking forward to your reply.Enclosed are copies of invoice and delivery order for your reference.Yours truly,Li Ming
分析:這是顧客向客戶服務(wù)部投訴的一封信。第一段清楚說(shuō)明了有問(wèn)題的商品的型號(hào),交易時(shí)間。第二段提出解決問(wèn)題的辦法和依據(jù),要么更換,要么退錢。第三段表達(dá)出期待,當(dāng)然最后還要附上發(fā)票和其他證明依據(jù)。
Sample 1: Statistics of Family Expenses in Shanghai
As is shown in the table above, dramatic changes have taken place in family expenses in the City of Shanghai within two decades(from 1980 to 2000).The most obvious change is in expense on food and clothing, which has dropped by 48%, while those on recreation, education and health care have increased respectively by 5%, l6% and l0%.Expenses on other things keep rising from 17% to 35%.The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but are in fact closely related to one another.The most likely factors accounting for these changes are as follows:
Development in economy is the fundamental one.The increased income results in the lowering percentage of food and clothing.Another factor lies in the development of people‘s concept.People begin to interest themselves in recreation and education.These changes should also be attributed to social reforms.In the 1990‘s, college education was not totally free as it was before, which also accounts for the rising expenses on education.Soon after, the government gradually stopped offering houses to its citizens without charges.People had to save a large proportion of their money for housing.That's partly why the expenses for ''others'' doubled.As for the more expenses on health care, I figure there are two main reasons: the cancellation of free medical care and people‘s awareness of the importance of health.The changes reflect the development of the city and indicate that people are enjoying more.Sample 2:
根據(jù)國(guó)務(wù)院發(fā)布的:限塑令‖,自2008年6月1日起,在所有超市、商場(chǎng)實(shí)行塑料購(gòu)物袋有償使用制度,超市、商場(chǎng)一律不得免費(fèi)提供塑料購(gòu)物袋。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文,要求包括以下內(nèi)容:
現(xiàn)狀:目前中國(guó)每天消費(fèi)近30億個(gè)塑料袋,造成了嚴(yán)重的資源浪費(fèi)和環(huán)境污染;
限塑令的意義:減少塑料袋使用量,提高公眾的環(huán)保意識(shí);
提倡:重拎布袋子,重提菜籃子。
As we all know, white trash mainly refers to the plastic bags we consume everyday.And this pollution has been affecting us for many years.It is reported that 3 billion plastic bags are used on a daily basis.Fortunately, the government has take measures to deal with the increasingly serious problem.A new ban was launched not quite long ago that plastic shopping bags are no longer free.This ban is significant in the following aspects.First of all, it contributes to the reduced quantities of plastic bags and therefore can relieve the pressure of white trash on the environment.Furthermore, the environmental awareness will be strengthened and thus benefit other aspects of the environmental protection.In all, we have only one earth, which doesn‘t belong to our generation only.It‘s the responsibility for every individual to take actions to protect it.Let‘s use more cloth bags, baskets instead of plastic bags.Only by taking actions can we really rescue our mother earth from being drown in the trash.住房話題參考閱讀文章
“To buy or to rent”, that is a question about living for most young people who just graduated from university or who have worked for one or two years in big cities.Many people see it as a torturing choice and feel weak in face of it.sub-topics:
1.Which one will choose or have you chosen? Why?
2.Discussion: the advantages and disadvantages of buying a house and renting a house.3.What's your expectation about the realty market in the coming 10 years?
Millions of Americans have been unable to pay the mortgage on their houses and have had to leave them.Many are now renting, but are finding it difficult financially
Owning your home was once part of the American dream.But that dream has faded because of the economic recession in the United States.Millions of Americans have been unable to pay the mortgage on their houses and have had to leave them.Without a home of their own, many people are now renting, but this also can be difficult financially.Until recently, Brenda Ganaway lived in a home of her own in Alexandria, Virginia, a suburb close to Washington, D.C.But then the economic crisis hit and she was unable to keep paying the mortgage on her house.“We were behind on a few payments and we couldn't get a loan anywhere, so they just immediately foreclosed it and told us we had a certain amount of days to leave,” she explained.There are millions of people like Brenda Ganaway in America now.Raphael Bostic is the assistant secretary at the U.S.Department of Housing and Urban Development, or HUD.He says the number of Americans who own their homes is steadily dropping.“The homeownership rate in the United States used to be somewhere close to 70 percent.We've fallen off by several million households now,” he said.“And so the rate is down considerably.And a lot of those have now gone into the rental market.”
Renting does have some advantages over home ownership.If a renter wants to move, for example, he does not have to worry about finding a buyer for the house.Yazgul Odekova manages a rental property in Alexandria.She says the major reason people rent is that it is usually less expensive than owning a home.“People rent for different reasons.Number one is affordability,” she said.“It is cheaper to rent and it is risk-free.”
Renting is cheaper for many reasons, says Arun Shu.He is an international businessman who rents a home near Washington.He says there are many costs to owning a house besides paying the monthly mortgage.“If you decide to buy a house, a lot of expenses are involved.Not only payment if you take a mortgage, but also you have to pay property tax, maintenance and upkeep of the house,” he said.“You probably will want to spend some money on renovating the house, remodeling parts of the house if you buy [a] used house.”
But even renting can be difficult in today's market, especially in big cities.Danilo Pelletiere is an official at the National Low Income Housing Coalition.He says there just are not enough homes to rent and poor people are the most affected.“In the United States there has been a focus both at the local level and a national level on home ownership.That affected renters, low-income people and the like and a result you have shortage of three million units of affordable housing for lowest income people,” he said.Even if a house is available, Mr.Pelletiere says, being able to pay for it is another problem.To afford the rent, he says, many poor people work more than one job.“Today you need multiple minimum wage jobs to be able to afford a two-bedroom apartment,” he added.“We calculated about $18 an hour.”
Even if a person can afford the rent there are other obstacles.Yazgul Odekova, the property manager in Alexandria, says most people just do not meet the necessary qualifications, such as being able to prove they can afford the rental payments.“Right now from every 10 application we turned down nine.It is not just because people are dishonest.Sometimes people have big medical bills, sometimes people have bankruptcy, because suddenly they became sick and don't have health insurance.Sometimes peoples' income is very low, sometimes it is unstable relationship between people,” Odekova said.HUD's Raphael Bostic says the U.S.government has programs to help low-income families pay the rent.“We provide direct subsidy where we try to make sure that families are not overly burdened [so we don't wanna go over that 30 percent ratio], but that they can get into some decent high-quality housing,” Bostic said.But most analysts agree that until the U.S.economy improves, buying a home or renting one will be especially hard for low-income people.1.My View on the Income Gap
Outline: 1.收入差距懸殊是當(dāng)前社會(huì)的一種現(xiàn)象 2.人們對(duì)之褒貶不一 3我的看法
Sample
Now the income gap is getting wider and wider.In some privately owned firms, joint-ventures, or foreign-fund companies, an executive‘s yearly income is ten times or even a hundred times as much as an ordinary worker‘s.Faced with this situation, people will undoubtedly have different opinions.Some believe that it benefits the social and economic development since driving force is often derived from the gap.In other words, the gap inspires people and gives a push to advancement.Others speak of its side effect: income gap is often the root of social unrest and also contrary to our country‘s principle.From my point of view, while it is true that the income gap may stimulate the social development to some extent, it causes trouble as well.An income gap that is too wide for most people to bear can neither contribute to the stability of a country nor promote its economic development.Therefore, while we are advocating the rapid development of our country, we should tolerate the narrow income gap but narrow the wide one.4.Fast Food
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Fast Food.Your composition should be based on the Outline given below:
1.快餐在中國(guó)十分流行
2.快餐受歡迎的原因
3.我對(duì)快餐的看法
Fast Food
Fast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers.Today, nothing is more representative of the fast pace of modern society than fast food.There are several reasons for its popularity.First, it is quick and convenient.Go into a fast food restaurant, and your food will be ready in a minute.You can satisfy your hunger instantly.Precious time won't be wasted in waiting-in-line to order or waiting at your table for your food to arrive.Second, its popularity is also attributed to the clean food, the excellent service and the comfortable environment of the fast food restaurant.However, I think that fast food isn't healthy enough because it does not compose a balanced diet and is low in nutrition.Doctors suggest that people should avoid eating too much fast food.Although home cooking is time-consuming and following washing-u p tiresome, it offers healthy and delicious meals your body likes and needs.1.2010年作文預(yù)測(cè)--地震慰問(wèn)信
A Letter of Condolence慰問(wèn)信
中國(guó)青海玉樹(shù)大地震災(zāi)害嚴(yán)重,已造成***多萬(wàn)人無(wú)家可歸。請(qǐng)你代表 我校寫一封慰問(wèn)信向?yàn)?zāi)區(qū)人民 表示關(guān)懷和慰問(wèn)。
1.簡(jiǎn)要描述災(zāi)區(qū)的情況
2.對(duì)災(zāi)區(qū)人民表示關(guān)懷和慰問(wèn)
3.表達(dá)災(zāi)后重建家園的信心
第一篇(范文)
Dear victims,A powerful earthquake hit your hometown, Yushu in Qinghai province month ago.It is also a terrible natural disaster for our whole nation.It has caused both financial and life loss.Until now, approximately seventy thousand people lost their lives due to the earthquake and much more were injured seriously.Six million people have no homes to return as the majority of the buildings were collapsed.These days we keep watching the staggering death roll(名單)and hearing the heart-wrenching(揪心的)stories from the Yushu earthquake.We are so much saddened(悲哀)that many children lost their parents and many couples lost their lovers.I could not help but cry when hearing of the moving stories that happened during the disaster.And we are so much touched by the true outpouring of effort and emotion from all over the country.You are not alone and you won‘t feel lonely.Our whole nation is a big family, and every member would like to give a helping hand by all means, such as donating money, time, energy and blood to the people in the stricken area.We, 1.3 billion Chinese people shed the same tear sharing the same hopes.A series of actions has been taken since the earthquake happened.A majority of Chinese people are doing whatever they can to lend a hand.I believe, with the assistance of people in all walks of life, your after-disaster reconstruction will be dealt with at a fantastic speed.The stricken area will soon be restored.And I hope you can pull yourself together and muster up courage to face the future.We will overcome any difficulty, because we are Chinese.Ten thousand people beat everything with a single undying heart".Try to look on the bright side of things.The future will be bright, cheer up!
Yours sincerely
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第2篇(范文)
Dear victims,The earthquake which happened one month ago in Qinghai province is an enormous disaster for our whole nation.It has caused both financial and life loss.Until now, fifty thousand people lost their lives due to the earthquake and many more were injured seriously.Five million people have no homes to return as the majority of the buildings were collapsed
We are sorry about this accident.It‘s a pity that many children lost their parents and many couples lost their lovers.I could not help but cry when hearing of the moving stories that happened during the disaster.Our whole nation is a big family;every member would like to give a helping hand to the people who suffered from the earthquake.We must show our warm-heartedness and make donations to the stricken area so that their broken heart can be warmed.A series of actions has been taken since the earthquake happened.I believe the stricken area will soon be restored with the soldiers and other warm-hearted people‘s help.The future will be bright, cheer up!
Yours sincerely
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第3篇(范文)
Dear victims,A week ago, I was shocked at the news about the earthquake in Yushu.And I‘m very sorry to hear that this earthquake was the greatest disaster after 1949.And there are 40075 people who are found dead in the disaster till now and there have been more than 500 million people who are homeless.The floor was ripped through, many blocks and houses were seriously damaged, and even were as flat as a pancake.I‘m deeply moved by the volunteers and the international rescue teams who are in the frontline.I, standing for my school, comfort your victims and survivors with our warm heart.Moreover, we contribute a large amount of money to you.And our school will try our best to help you.Last but not the least, I hope we all have the confidence to rebuild your home after the disaster.Only when we have the perseverance can we defeat the natural disaster.Good luck and best wishes to you!
Yours sincerely
ZZIA(JY)
第4篇(范文)
Dear victims,On the 14 of May in 2010, an incredible and unknown earthquake suddenly happened in Yushu, Qinghai province.Almost half of China was affected.It was a huge calamity to Chinese people.Until now, there are nearly 50 thousand people who died in this earthquake and more people injured.Many people lost their relatives and fell into the deep sorrow.And they also lost their homes and hometowns.A large number of buildings were damaged.What‘s more, many children and students lost their lives because of the collapse of schools.And their parents who suffer from this big calamity can‘t accept the fact until now.All of the Chinese people begin to act and do everything they can when they hear the news.Almost every one of us contributes a great number of money and goods which people in Qinghai need.As students, we don‘t have enough money to donate, but we should do all that we could do.What‘s more important, we consider that we can help Qinghai people rebuilt and their home and live happily.Yours sincerely
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第5篇(范文)
Dear James,In today‘s newspaper, I read about the recent events in your town and I am writing to extend my deepest condolences.It broke my heart to see all those pictures of those whose homes have been destroyed in the tragic hurricane.I couldn‘t believe my eyes when I saw a little girl crying on the roof of her house asking for help.I am really worried about you and your family, and all your friends there.I am crossing my fingers for you now in hopes that you are all safe and sound.I can only imagine how difficult this time must be for you, and I want to extend to you my unwavering support.Our government and many nongovernmental organizations are initiating various campaigns to urge people to donate money and necessary things to send to America.I donated all my allowance that I have been saving for years.I feel extremely sorry for this tragedy, and I will be looking forward to hearing from you.Please pass my concern on to your parents.Yours Sincerely,***
第6篇(范文)
Dear friends,I'm awfully sorry to hear that a horrible and severe earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown.Faced with such a rarely-seen disaster, you remain so calm and strong-willed that we are all moved to tears.A friend in need is a friend indeed.Thinking about your present situation, we can not wait a minute to make every bit of our effort to help you.I, as the chairman of student union, on behalf of all my schoolmates, express our most sincere pity and care for you.Besides, we make a donation of 120 thousand yuan to you, expecting that it can help you go through the difficulty.A better hometown can be rebuilt.Therefore, never give up whatever happens.Remember we won‘t be far away when you need any help!
Yours Sincerely,Li Hua
Volunteer teaching in the west
1.每年,高校許多大學(xué)生受到鼓舞去貧困地區(qū)支教。
2.支教活動(dòng)的意義。
3.我的看法。
Every year, college students are inspired to help students with their study in underdeveloped areas in china.They have been trying their best to impart knowledge and offering help to those students who are so eager to learn.This volunteer practice has been beneficial in two aspects.On one hand, college volunteers are really devoted to the cause.They have opened the eyes of students in underdeveloped regions to the outside world by bringing them new knowledge and thoughts.As a result, they are extremely welcome and respected by the children there.On the other hand, college students have received a rigorous training by adapting to the harsh living conditions.They are learning how to deal with difficulties and face challenges as well.What‘s more, by any means, this volunteer experience will be always a valuable asset in his or her life.In my opinion, every Chinese citizen is responsible for the development of education in china.And we college students should take the lead in response to the appeal for offering aid to children in poor areas.
第三篇:2012四級(jí)寫作話題預(yù)測(cè)
[2012四級(jí)寫作] 四級(jí)寫作話題預(yù)測(cè):考公務(wù)員
1.Craze for Civil Service Examinations
1.現(xiàn)在有越來(lái)越多的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生報(bào)考公務(wù)員
2.引起此現(xiàn)象的原因
3.你的看法
參考范文:
Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees.Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored.The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts.On one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest.On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a as well stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programmes, as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish蕭條的 world economy.Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach(無(wú)可厚非), as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors.The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty崇高的 ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates.[2010四級(jí)寫作] 12月四級(jí)寫作話題預(yù)測(cè):當(dāng)村官
2.“College Graduates Work as Village Officials”.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:Remember to write it neatly.1.現(xiàn)在許多大學(xué)畢業(yè)生愿意到農(nóng)村當(dāng)村官。
2,分析形成這種現(xiàn)象的原因。
3.你的看法。
參考范文:
In recent years being a village official has become the first choice of many college students when they graduate and are trying to find a job.According to a report carried by The Chinese Education Daily the number of students who apply for the post increases at the annual rate of 20 percent in recent five years, which well justifies the popularity of becoming a village official
among college students.Several factors may account for this popularity.First, it is the fierce competition of job market that forces the college graduates to consider other alternatives other than staying in the big cities as they used to.Secondly, to encourage well-educated young talents to work in the rural areas, the government authorities have made some policies offering major incentives to college graduates who are willing to work for rural governments at grassroots level, especially for village committees.For example, those who work for a rural committee for at least three years after graduation can get a 10-point credit in their exams to enter graduate schools.The preferential treatment is appealing to many students.Last but not least, many students consider working as a village official is a rewarding opportunity.It will acquaint themselves with the very society of our country as well as improve their adaptability to different circumstances, both of which are believed to be beneficial to their future career.In my opinion, college students working as a village official is worth promoting.It is possible that some graduates may use the job as “spring boards”: only applying for it in order to receive the favorable treatment, but the majority of them genuinely hope to serve the rural areas and better the life of the villagers.With the participation of so many college graduates, we have reasons to believe that it will not take too long to realize the blueprint of Constructing New Village.[2010四級(jí)寫作] 12月四級(jí)寫作話題預(yù)測(cè):支教
1.每年,高校許多大學(xué)生受到鼓舞去貧困地區(qū)支教。
2.支教活動(dòng)的意義。
3.我的看法。
參考范文:
Every year, college students are inspired to help students with their study in underdeveloped areas in china.They have been trying their best to impart knowledge and offering help to those students who are so eager to learn.This volunteer practice has been beneficial in two aspects.On one hand, college volunteers are really devoted to the cause.They have opened the eyes of students in underdeveloped regions to the outside world by bringing them new knowledge and thoughts.As a result, they are extremely welcome and respected by the children there.On the other hand, college students have received a rigorous training by adapting to the harsh living conditions.They are learning how to deal with difficulties and face challenges as well.What’s more, by any means, this volunteer experience will be always a valuable asset in his or her life.In my opinion, every Chinese citizen is responsible for the development of education in china.And we college students should take the lead in response to the appeal for offering aid to children in poor areas.[2010四級(jí)寫作] 12月四級(jí)寫作話題預(yù)測(cè):就業(yè)難
5.Jobs for Graduates
1)大學(xué)生難找工作2)原因很多3)解決的辦法
Sample
It’s very hard for college graduates to find a job, of course harder to get an ideal job.In fact, many factors contribute to the unfavorable situation.First, more and more students can go to college because of the being fast improved high education of China.As a result, there are more graduates every year.However, job vacancies don’t increase that fast.More people, less food, which is the exact description of the hard condition.Second, more and more people go on to pursue their master and doctor degree;more and more Chinese oversea students come back to China to hunt better working chances.It is sure that the competition is more and more fierce.Third, because of the fast development of science, technology, economy, society and the interchange of different nations, all units have higher requirement of their employees, for example, stronger ability and higher degree.In addition to the factors above, there are still more which bring hardship for graduates to find jobs.Nevertheless, how to solve the problem is more important.It is a good idea for the graduates to learn more knowledge with a higher degree and to practice and improve their capability of dealing with all kinds of situation, organization, having good terms with others and cooperative spirit.Besides, the government should try to and encourage all units to create more job vacancies for the college graduates.Of course, the graduates should have a proper attitude towards various jobs, but not always pursue those with higher payment.[2010四級(jí)寫作] 12月四級(jí)寫作話題預(yù)測(cè):求職信
4.求職信
求職信sample
1Directions: For this part, you are asked to write An Application Letter in about 120 words based on the information provided below in Chinese:
中國(guó)四達(dá)國(guó)際經(jīng)濟(jì)技術(shù)合作公司(CSCIETC)誠(chéng)聘文秘一員,要求如下:
*年歷20—30歲,大學(xué)本科以上學(xué)歷
*流利的英語(yǔ)聽(tīng)說(shuō)讀寫能力
*熟練的計(jì)算機(jī)操作能力
*良好的溝通與協(xié)調(diào)能力*
*有外企工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)者優(yōu)先
應(yīng)聘者請(qǐng)將簡(jiǎn)歷、聯(lián)系方式以及待遇要求寄至:上海市淮海中路8560號(hào)攬盛大廈人力資源部
郵編:200033
參考范文1:
Wang Peng
No.3120, Zhongshan Road
Xu Hui District
Shanghai, 200076
September, 28th, 2003
Department of Human Resources
Lansheng Building
No.8560, Huaihai Zhong Road
Shanghai, 200033
Dear Sir or Madam,I learned from Beijing Youth Daily Oct.2 that your company is offering a position for a secretary, and it's a great pleasure for me to write to explore the possibility of seeking the job.I graduated two years ago from Beijing University of Technology, and obtained a bachelor's degree in the field of business manage?ment.During my stay in the university my major courses included macro-economics, business communication skills, marketing and com?puter applications.I was especially fond of the communication skills which enabled me to deal with people and things around well.Upon graduation I engaged with HP China Branch as an assis?tant to the head of Marketing Department.My responsibilities consist?ed of carrying out market surveys, writing reports and organizing meet?ings within the department.This two-year experience has helped me a lot in many ways.In particular, I become increasingly aware of the importance of co-ordination and co-operation among co-workers.I also believe the experience will qualify me for the current vacancy in your company.I passed both CET-4 and CET-6 with high marks.My spoken English is also fluent enough to organize meetings in English, which was actually my routine work in HP.Most of my market reports were presented in English, as my former boss is a native English speaker
I enclose herein my resume and some relevant documents as re?quired.And if you need any further information on me, I also refer you to Mr.Johnson, my ex-colleague, who is available at 021-66668888.I appreciate your sincere consideration of me,and am looking forward to an early interview with you.Sincerely yours,Wang Peng
參考范文2:求職信sample 2
Directions: The summer vacation is drawing near.You, Liming by name, want to find a part-time job.Write an application letter of about 120-150 words within 30 minutes.Dear Sirs,I'm Li Ming, a sophomore majoring in English at XX University.I read in yesterday's newspaper that you are looking for a part-time secretary and I think I'll prove to be a real find for you.During the past two years at university, I’ve taken over 18 compulsory and optional course, and have according improved my ability of English listening, speaking, reading, writing and translation considerably.Besides, I have learned a lot about foreign relations and trade.At leisure, I always try to grasp every precious opportunity to practice English with native speakers.As a matter of fact, I've already tried some translation and interpretation jobs.I once worked as a temporary interpreter at the East China Export Commodities Fair.In addition, during the past two years, I have been working as a part-time tour guide.My jobs offered me good opportunities to improve my English and work competence and I enjoy them very much.Two weeks from now, I will be on holiday again.If you can grant me the honor to work for your company as a secretary for two months, I'd feel obliged.Thank you for reading my application letter.I'm looking forward to your reply.[2010四級(jí)寫作] 12月四級(jí)寫作話題預(yù)測(cè):換工作
6.My View on Job-hopping
Outline:1.有些人喜歡始終從事一種工作,因?yàn)椤?2.有些人喜歡經(jīng)常換工作,因?yàn)椤?.3.我的看法
參考范文:
People's opinions are always different when they talk about job-hopping.Those who never change their job throughout their life maintain that they have accumulated enough experience to work smoothly and efficiently, so what's the point in changing it and taking another job? They also firmly believe that anyone who wants to excel in his specialty has to work hard on the same post for years to acquire the required skill and knowledge.However, many others hold just the opposite view.On the one hand, they believe that if the present job can offer neither satisfactory working conditions nor future opportunities, they will not hesitate a moment to leave.On the other hand, they hold that life is but once and job-hopping can provide rich and exciting experiences.My own opinion is that job-hopping, in this fast-changing era of information, has become more than common and acceptable.If we want to keep pace with the times, we have to change for the faster, the higher and the stronger.If life is a journey, we have nothing to regret so long as we put meaning into it.So why not make a change?
[2010四級(jí)寫作] 12月四級(jí)寫作話題預(yù)測(cè):擇業(yè)
7.Choosing a Career
Outline: 1.擇業(yè)是每個(gè)青年人都要面臨的問(wèn)題。2.擇業(yè)的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是什么。3.我們應(yīng)持的態(tài)度。
Choosing career is a problem that every youth must be faced.First of all, when a person has grown up, he has to decide which field he will go into so that he can earn enough money and support himself.Besides, with so many people rushing into the city from the coun?try, there are fewer and fewer job opportunities available and it is becoming increasingly difficult for one to find a suitable job.There are many factors to be considered when one is choosing a career.One factor is that a young man has to find a job that will bring him a good income for a comfortable life.Interest is another factor.The job should be interesting and motivating.Finally, one should find a job that suits his talent, so that he can make full use of his potential.But what preparations should a young man make in order to choose a good job? One must first of all be serious about this matter be?cause it will have an influence on his whole life.Then, to meet the requirements of demanding jobs, one needs to have certain qualifica?tions.It is therefore essential for him to acquire basic knowledge and skills.
第四篇:專業(yè)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)考試寫作
2006年英語(yǔ)專業(yè)八級(jí)滿分作文
Ambition is the decision one makes and the resolution with which he carries out that decision.It provides us with the required driving force to accomplish any undertakings in our life.Just as Joseph Epstein, a famous American writer put it, “And as we decide and choose, so are our lives formed.” Indeed, once we make up our minds to choose to do something, then our life becomes meaningful and specifically orientated.This notion of life, as far as I observe, is closest to truth and does apply to almost all aspects of life.First things first, ambition renders us a sense of mission.No matter what decision you make you have to be responsible for your choice.Your choice procures you a sense of orientation, or more specially a sense of mission.And only a strong mission may enable one to accomplish greatness.Caesar of the ancient Roman Empire was urged by his ambition “I came, I saw, I conquered.” And became an unrivaled empire builder in the history of Rome.John Milton, stimulated always by his ambition that aimed at writing some “mighty lines” which England would unwillingly forget, had in due time secured his position as the second Shakespeare in the history of English literature.In the second place, ambition can bring one’s potentials to the full.Ambition may well serve as a catalyst activating one’s dormant potentials.Without ambition one’s potentials will remain slumbering like a dormant volcano.A case in point is Ms Zhang Haidi, a Chinese Helen Keller.It was her ambition to be a useful person has turned the almost paralyzed Zhang Haidi into a well-accomplished figure whose achievements would dwarf those of some normal people aim at the sun, though, at worst, they may probably land on the moon.Influential as it is upon us, however, ambition must be channeled in the right direction.If wrongly directed, one’s ambition may bring havoc on him and others.Hitler, whose ambition was to conquer Europe by whatever evil means, finally turned him into a demon.It was this demon that almost cast Europe into an unfathomable abyss of anguish and suffering.Another case is Macbeth whose ambition was to become the king of Scotland.However, his ambition was materialized by the murder of King Duncan.Consequently, unbearable guilt and psychological agony drove him to his tragic doom.To sum up, ambition can benefit us tremendously if wisely and correctly channeled, otherwise it may ruin others and ourselves.A poet says: life can be bad;life can be good;life can be dirty;life can be sad,;life can even be painful.In my mind’s eye, a person can make his life beautiful, meaningful and rewarding and stand out as a respectable personage if he is motivated by a well-orientated ambition
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考研英語(yǔ)小作文和大作文備考經(jīng)驗(yàn)談
作文歷來(lái)是研究生入學(xué)考試的重中之重,每年都有無(wú)數(shù)考研英豪難過(guò)英語(yǔ)關(guān),從而與成功一步之遙,失之交臂。在名目繁多的輔導(dǎo)機(jī)構(gòu)的海報(bào)滿天飛與媒體炒作日漸升溫時(shí),如何一方面保持清醒的頭腦,一方面找到適合自己并且針對(duì)行之有效的學(xué)習(xí)方法,才是真正關(guān)鍵的問(wèn)題。本文將重點(diǎn)給各位網(wǎng)友講講考研英語(yǔ)小作文、大作文的備考技巧經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
一、應(yīng)用文(小作文)
應(yīng)用文寫作要求考生在三個(gè)方面完成要求:一要注意把握信息點(diǎn);第二是把握語(yǔ)言點(diǎn),內(nèi)容要十分明確,不要出現(xiàn)過(guò)多的錯(cuò)誤;第三是要注意格式和語(yǔ)言。一是掌握格式的線條,主要是掌握兩種大的文類,一個(gè)是正式文體,一個(gè)是非正式文體。如果應(yīng)用文涉及的是商務(wù)或者公務(wù)之類較正式的東西,那么語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的時(shí)候也得注意格式和書(shū)面化、規(guī)范化;如果要求寫便條給朋友的話,就應(yīng)當(dāng)用主語(yǔ)化的表達(dá)方式。
這幾個(gè)方面注意了,就可以很大地緩解難度。應(yīng)用文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求是100個(gè)字,大概8句話,8句話怎么分配呢?第一段就寫一句話,第一句話表明你寫信的基本內(nèi)容:如果是詢問(wèn)信息的話,就說(shuō)你寫這封信要詢問(wèn)以下幾個(gè)問(wèn)題;如果是投訴,就說(shuō)寫這封信是要表達(dá)對(duì)什么東西的不滿;如果是請(qǐng)求信,就說(shuō)寫這封信想要請(qǐng)求什么東西就可以了??傊?,就一句話,簡(jiǎn)明扼要。然后,用簡(jiǎn)練的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)清楚題目要求表達(dá)的內(nèi)容和信息。最后一句話,就是一個(gè)禮貌的結(jié)尾。
二、大作文
大作文的寫作一般會(huì)給考生寫作提綱,或圖表、圖畫,或圖文并茂。命題方式雖然多樣,但題目涉及面往往是考生比較熟悉的內(nèi)容,目的是測(cè)定考生語(yǔ)言的實(shí)際應(yīng)用能力。要求表達(dá)清楚,文字連貫,中心突出,內(nèi)容豐富,句式多變,句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確。
語(yǔ)言的應(yīng)用能力不可能一蹴而就,必須厚積薄發(fā),必須經(jīng)過(guò)長(zhǎng)期的實(shí)踐鍛煉。如何提高英語(yǔ)寫作能力呢?一是要背大量的優(yōu)秀范文,整段整篇地背,并轉(zhuǎn)換為自己的語(yǔ)言,寫作時(shí)才能隨心所欲地支配??荚嚂r(shí)避免套用以前死記硬背的幾個(gè)范文,把一些詞不達(dá)意的詞堆積在一起,沒(méi)有統(tǒng)一性,無(wú)法很好地表現(xiàn)主題。
二是要多動(dòng)手。包括對(duì)背過(guò)的文章進(jìn)行詞語(yǔ)替換、句式轉(zhuǎn)換、句子重組等,以及對(duì)某一主題展開(kāi)寫作。多動(dòng)手才能提高筆下功夫,才能保證在考場(chǎng)上順利寫作??梢哉f(shuō)背誦范文是培養(yǎng)語(yǔ)感、積累素材、掌握寫作方法的途徑,動(dòng)手寫作則是實(shí)踐,是最終目的,這兩者結(jié)合起來(lái),就是“理論聯(lián)系了實(shí)際”。另外,背誦范文應(yīng)有針對(duì)性,寫作訓(xùn)練也是一樣,在訓(xùn)練中要掌握每一類型作文的寫作規(guī)律,根據(jù)其寫作特點(diǎn)(如提綱式作文就要求考生根據(jù)提綱提示的思路和規(guī)定的要點(diǎn)展開(kāi)段落)進(jìn)行全面訓(xùn)練。但是,注意不要帶有押題的心理,靠背幾篇范文就能應(yīng)付考試的心態(tài)是不可取的。很多高分考生認(rèn)為,背誦《新概念英語(yǔ)》第三冊(cè),熟練掌握其中的各種表達(dá)方式,并堅(jiān)持每天進(jìn)行英語(yǔ)隨筆練習(xí),對(duì)于提高英語(yǔ)寫作能力十分有益。
三、應(yīng)試技巧
1、認(rèn)真審題
作文第一步是仔細(xì)審題,考生要仔細(xì)閱讀試題要求及相關(guān)信息,如圖表、圖畫、數(shù)字等,準(zhǔn)確把握出題者意圖??佳凶魑募尚攀帜閬?lái),提筆就寫,根本不審題,想到哪兒就寫到哪兒,或完全憑自己想象編故事,置考試要求于不顧,“下筆千言,離題萬(wàn)里”。比如1998年考研作文是一幅卡通畫,老母雞申明外加一首打油詩(shī),諷刺一些企業(yè)把該盡職之事作為推銷產(chǎn)品的承諾。2000年的作文“a brief history of world commercial fishing”,它給出了兩張圖,從1900年的漁船和魚(yú)量之比到1995年的漁船和魚(yú)量之比的變化談如何保護(hù)漁業(yè)資源,應(yīng)從商業(yè)性濫捕魚(yú)這一主題展開(kāi)話題,有的考生卻大談環(huán)境污染。這就偏離了主題,因?yàn)轭}中自始至終都沒(méi)有談到環(huán)境污染問(wèn)題。
有的同學(xué)沒(méi)有審題習(xí)慣,或擔(dān)心時(shí)間不夠草草審題,最后文不對(duì)題,草草收?qǐng)觯@必然會(huì)影響英語(yǔ)成績(jī),同時(shí)也會(huì)影響后兩門考試的心情。
2、列出提綱
考試規(guī)定的時(shí)間是很有限的,所以不能花太多時(shí)間準(zhǔn)備一個(gè)詳細(xì)的提綱,但關(guān)鍵詞提綱或粗略提綱還是非常有必要的。對(duì)原始材料分析歸納后要形成一個(gè)基本的框架。文章打算分幾段寫,每段大概怎樣寫,字?jǐn)?shù)控制在多少,開(kāi)頭段落是道破主題、點(diǎn)明要旨、引人入勝還是先給出主題一般的背景情況和對(duì)主題進(jìn)行濃縮的陳述,中間段落和結(jié)尾又怎樣寫,等等,這些都要心中有數(shù)。有的考生習(xí)慣用漢語(yǔ)構(gòu)思文章,逐句翻譯提綱,當(dāng)碰到某個(gè)詞卡住時(shí)就翻譯不下去,僵在那里。要注意列提綱是為了更好更全面地表達(dá)主題。主題的表達(dá)可有多種形式,不一定非要尋找一個(gè)特定的詞或句子??荚嚂r(shí)考生要充分調(diào)動(dòng)大腦,靈活運(yùn)用以前所學(xué)知識(shí)。
3、開(kāi)始寫作
一篇文章往往由四部分組成:標(biāo)題(title),首段(opening paragraph),主體(body paragraph),結(jié)尾段(concluding paragraph)。標(biāo)題要新穎,能引起讀者興趣。首段的內(nèi)容根據(jù)文章的體裁而變化:比如議論文可以從一種現(xiàn)象、一種觀點(diǎn)出發(fā)引出作者的觀點(diǎn),記敘文往往交代人物和故事背景。主體是文章的主要部分,通過(guò)合適的語(yǔ)篇模式表達(dá)一定的觀點(diǎn),考生要圍繞中心按一定順序分層次有重點(diǎn)地展開(kāi)敘述、描寫和議論。結(jié)尾段是對(duì)全文的總結(jié),論點(diǎn)上要與前面的敘述保持一致
寫好英語(yǔ)文章的20字訣
Agreement: 主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)在人稱、數(shù)上的一致,關(guān)系代詞與先行詞的一致。Ambiguity: 盡量不去使用可能引起歧義的詞語(yǔ)或句子。Brief: 文章“簡(jiǎn)為貴”,要抓住要點(diǎn),簡(jiǎn)明扼要。Coherence: 文理通順,前后連貫。
Development: 主題的發(fā)揮應(yīng)當(dāng)充分、合理、正確。
Division: 詞匯、句子、段落要分配使用得當(dāng),劃分要清楚,避免使用重復(fù)字句和種子片段。Figures: 正確合理使用各類修辭格式。Inflated diction: 不使用做作的語(yǔ)言。Key: 用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)鍵詞突出主題,每段都應(yīng)有主題句。Logical: 內(nèi)容要符合邏輯。
Message: 信息要新鮮、確實(shí)、可信。Omit: 合理刪除多余的不必要部分。
Proposition: 主張、觀點(diǎn)、論述要清楚肯切、合情入理。Punctuation: 正確適時(shí)使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。Relevant: 文章一定要要題。
Sentence pattern: 句型要盡量多樣化。Strait: 開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山,直來(lái)直去。
Style: 文體恰切,適合內(nèi)容要求。
Tense: 動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)要正確、一致、變化合理。Theme: 選題得當(dāng),主題突出
堅(jiān)持八條英文寫作守則
1.Organize your thoughts before writing: brainstorm、make an outline、etc.下筆前整合思緒:腦力激蕩,寫出綱要等。
2.Write clearly.Be concise.Avoid wordiness.寫作清晰,務(wù)必精簡(jiǎn),避免贅言。
3.Use good grammar and write complete sentences.使用好的文法,寫出完整句子。
4.Write simple sentences.Avoid a fancy style.嘗試簡(jiǎn)單句,避免花俏的句法。
5.Avoid slang、cliche and informal words.避免俚語(yǔ)、陳腔濫調(diào)和非正式用字。
6.Avoid use of the first person(i.e.I/me/my)unless necessary to specific piece.除非必要,避免使用第一人稱:如“我/我的”。
7.Writing naturally.Read it aloud.Does it sound natural? Does it flow? 自然揮灑,大聲朗誦。整篇文章聽(tīng)起來(lái)自然嗎?通順嗎?
8.Move logically from one idea to the next.Don't skip steps.上下句意要合乎邏輯。別毫無(wú)章法亂跳。
談?dòng)⒄Z(yǔ)作文的“寫”與“作”
絕大多數(shù)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)者,一想到寫英語(yǔ)作文,就會(huì)頭“大”。他們常??嗨稼は?,然后草草而就,只求按時(shí)“交差”,別的就顧不上了。這種狀態(tài)下炮制出來(lái)的“大作”,其質(zhì)量可想而知。
對(duì)初學(xué)者而言,一篇英語(yǔ)作文的過(guò)程,至少應(yīng)該包括兩個(gè)階段,“寫”與“作”。
所謂“寫”的過(guò)程應(yīng)該與中文寫作沒(méi)有很大區(qū)別,無(wú)非是扣題,構(gòu)思,表述。惟一要特別注意的是,我們寫英語(yǔ)作文時(shí),一般要求的字?jǐn)?shù)比較少,所以我們?cè)谖恼碌慕Y(jié)構(gòu)上更須注意突出重點(diǎn),集中火力。在非重點(diǎn)部分,不要隨便發(fā)揮,而應(yīng)該盡量直奔主題。以本次征文比賽為例,題目是The English Teacher I Admire Most,那么文章的重點(diǎn)應(yīng)該是講述why I admire him/her,what is so special about him/her,what I see in him/her,what has made him/her such a wonderful teacher等等,你可以狀貌,但主要應(yīng)該是“寫神”,狀貌應(yīng)該簡(jiǎn)短,應(yīng)該只起鋪墊的作用。寫這篇文章當(dāng)然離不開(kāi)敘事,全文可能敘述一件或多件事,那么這一件或多件事各自所占的分量應(yīng)該有分寸,使整篇文章保持平衡。敘事時(shí)應(yīng)該直奔主旨。英語(yǔ)寫作的傳統(tǒng)非常注重所謂的topic sentence——能夠統(tǒng)攝全文或者全段的句子。這個(gè)句子最好出現(xiàn)在文章的開(kāi)頭,然后在文章的結(jié)尾處用不同的表述呼應(yīng)這個(gè)句子。例如,有一篇應(yīng)征例文的第一句是這樣的:She takes us into the magical English world。這就是一個(gè)非常有力的topic sentence。這一個(gè)句子就足可吸引讀者,讓讀者相信作者心中對(duì)她確實(shí)有一種毫無(wú)保留甚或“五體投地”的admiration,接下來(lái)就會(huì)有興趣了解她究竟有怎樣的magic power,讓學(xué)生如此著迷。這篇文章的結(jié)句是her charisma(魅力)is unbelievable,非常有力度,charisma與unbelievable兩個(gè)詞巧妙地呼應(yīng)了magic這個(gè)詞。文章需要topic sentence,每個(gè)段落最好也要有這樣非常powerful的topic sentence。構(gòu)思完成以后,就是落筆表述的過(guò)程。這個(gè)過(guò)程應(yīng)該迅速,最好能夠一氣呼成,不要過(guò)多地顧忌是否犯了語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤,或者表述是否清楚。不要猶猶豫豫,一步三回頭,因?yàn)樵谕瓿闪?/p>
“寫”以后,你還有一個(gè)“作”的過(guò)程。所謂“作”,就是“精雕細(xì)作”。英語(yǔ)初學(xué)者常常覺(jué)得自己“眼高手低”,想表述的意思難以成文,本來(lái)很精致的“意”卻表現(xiàn)為頗為笨拙的“文”。這當(dāng)然與我們掌握的詞匯有限相關(guān)。但是,我們有限的詞匯與表達(dá),經(jīng)過(guò)適當(dāng)?shù)恼{(diào)度與搭配,還是可以“作”出好文章來(lái)的。
我們?cè)趯懲瓿醺逡院?,不妨讓自己的好友讀一下,看看他是否明白文章的每一個(gè)句子。因?yàn)樽髡咦约撼30严氲蕉鴽](méi)有表述出來(lái)的信息也read into the article,因此不容易發(fā)現(xiàn)表述不清的問(wèn)題。
處理完了表述問(wèn)題以后,就進(jìn)入“深加工”階段。英語(yǔ)寫作最強(qiáng)調(diào)韻律感,即使是高深的學(xué)術(shù)文章,讀起來(lái)常常也會(huì)很有“樂(lè)感”。這種“樂(lè)感”主要來(lái)自于句子結(jié)構(gòu)的變化與組合。簡(jiǎn)而言之,就是長(zhǎng)短結(jié)合,錯(cuò)落有致。英語(yǔ)的句子結(jié)構(gòu)變化比較多,但我們?cè)趯懽鲿r(shí)受漢語(yǔ)的影響很深,寫出的句子常常整齊劃一,缺少變化。我們?cè)诩庸r(shí),就要有意地想:某幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句能加工成一個(gè)復(fù)合句或者復(fù)雜句;我們的每一個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)是否都是“人”(從頭到尾都是he或者we),是否可以用一個(gè)抽象名詞或者一個(gè)ing結(jié)構(gòu)來(lái)充當(dāng)其中某些句子的主語(yǔ),以此構(gòu)成主語(yǔ)的變化;在一個(gè)“意群”中,是否每個(gè)句子都是以主語(yǔ)開(kāi)始;是否每個(gè)句子的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞都是簡(jiǎn)單的一個(gè)動(dòng)詞,能否把其中的某一個(gè)或幾個(gè)改成詞組;能否構(gòu)成一個(gè)又一個(gè)“短句+長(zhǎng)句+短句”的意群組合;對(duì)于每一個(gè)表述,都可以想一下,這種表述是否太中文化,英語(yǔ)是否有更簡(jiǎn)單的表達(dá)。
某個(gè)大詩(shī)人曾經(jīng)說(shuō)過(guò):詩(shī)是“寫”出來(lái)的,而不應(yīng)該是“作”出來(lái)的。但對(duì)我們英語(yǔ)初學(xué)者而言,在練習(xí)時(shí),還是應(yīng)該一次又一次地、有意識(shí)地經(jīng)歷這樣的“作”的過(guò)程?!白鳌倍嗔?,方能在“臨戰(zhàn)”時(shí)瀟灑地“寫”。(作者:梁凱文,華東師大英語(yǔ)系副教授)
英語(yǔ)寫作中的“結(jié)構(gòu)重組”問(wèn)題 各類考試中英語(yǔ)寫作雖有模板可循,究其實(shí)質(zhì),仍是漢譯英。任何一名考生在英語(yǔ)寫作中,難逃“漢譯英”的邏輯套路,所走思路一般為先胸中形成漢語(yǔ)意思,再將漢語(yǔ)意思轉(zhuǎn)換為英文,即便英語(yǔ)素養(yǎng)較高的考生,在兩者轉(zhuǎn)換過(guò)程中沒(méi)有時(shí)間差,出手即英文也是不太可能的。就在這一轉(zhuǎn)換過(guò)程中,盡顯英雄本色,英語(yǔ)英雄者,妙筆生花,出手不凡;英語(yǔ)笨拙者,最后只能造出個(gè)不中不洋的拙劣句子。我們可以給漢譯英一個(gè)重新定位:包含所有語(yǔ)言信息的一種結(jié)構(gòu)再造。具體說(shuō)來(lái)就是面對(duì)一句中文,翻譯時(shí)要打亂原有語(yǔ)序和結(jié)構(gòu),自行設(shè)計(jì),重組語(yǔ)言信息,無(wú)限靠近原汁原味的英語(yǔ),姑且將這種方法稱之為“結(jié)構(gòu)重組”。這一點(diǎn)是基于這么一個(gè)事實(shí):英語(yǔ)跟中文的語(yǔ)序和結(jié)構(gòu)不盡一樣。下面舉例說(shuō)明:
(1)簡(jiǎn)單句類(所謂簡(jiǎn)單句,即是含有一個(gè)動(dòng)詞的句子)
看一例:他嗓門大。最容易翻譯成:His voice is loud.評(píng)語(yǔ):超級(jí)直白
而更好的翻譯是:He has a loud voice.其實(shí)就成了 他有一個(gè)大嗓門。如果第一步便翻譯成he has a loud voice,恭喜,你就被歸入少數(shù)具備英語(yǔ)思維的高手類了,就這么簡(jiǎn)單。
對(duì)策:多多積攢類似例句,然后多多模仿。
試一個(gè):她身材好,便可翻譯成:She has a good figure.(2)復(fù)雜句類
看一例:我抬頭一看,只見(jiàn)一群衣衫襤褸的孩子,默默無(wú)聲得站于四周,觀看著我倆進(jìn)餐。
按照原文語(yǔ)序很容易翻成:I looked up and saw that a group of children in rags surrounding us silently and seeing us eating dinner.評(píng)語(yǔ):直白,動(dòng)詞堆砌,不流暢。
先準(zhǔn)備語(yǔ)言信息:抬頭一看:look up;衣衫襤褸的孩子:children in rags;默默:silently;觀看:look at。最后范文是:Looking up, I saw that we were surrounded by children in rags who were looking at us as we ate.(新概念3 第48課line35-36)
分析:范文用到了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ)(looking up,),主動(dòng)意思由被動(dòng)形式表達(dá),(were surrounded by)并設(shè)計(jì)出一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句來(lái)(who were looking at us as we ate)原文中看不出來(lái)定語(yǔ)(….的)痕跡。
對(duì)策,含有多個(gè)動(dòng)詞的句子,將動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行主次區(qū)分,次要?jiǎng)釉~非謂語(yǔ)化,主要?jiǎng)釉~謂語(yǔ)化,附帶從句設(shè)計(jì),定語(yǔ)從句首當(dāng)其沖現(xiàn)行被考慮。
總之,寫句子時(shí),不要立馬下手,凝神定氣,多三思,在結(jié)構(gòu)安排上有所建樹(shù)和創(chuàng)新,大膽
將信息重組,結(jié)構(gòu)優(yōu)化,力圖寫出地道的英文句子,這是個(gè)長(zhǎng)期的功夫。
最后建議學(xué)員可將新概念2,3 冊(cè)拿來(lái)做漢譯英的練習(xí),將每篇課文的中文譯文試著翻譯成英文,再與原文對(duì)照,個(gè)中差距,一對(duì)照即曉個(gè)清楚。
怎樣獲得英語(yǔ)專業(yè)四級(jí)考試寫作高分
(一)寫作題的性質(zhì)
寫作是人們表達(dá)思想的一種重要手段,我們稱之為comprehensive test的綜合測(cè)試,體現(xiàn)的是學(xué)生綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力。因?yàn)樗粌H考核考生對(duì)詞匯的掌握、對(duì)語(yǔ)法的應(yīng)用,同時(shí)也考查了學(xué)生的表達(dá)能力、思維的邏輯性和條理性。我們知道,學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)需掌握四種技能:聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀、寫。聽(tīng)和讀是語(yǔ)言的input(輸入)過(guò)程,因而對(duì)于聽(tīng)力和閱讀的測(cè)試是考查學(xué)習(xí)者的被動(dòng)英文技能;說(shuō)和寫是語(yǔ)言的output(輸出)過(guò)程,對(duì)于口語(yǔ)和寫作的測(cè)試則是考查學(xué)習(xí)者的主動(dòng)英文技能。學(xué)習(xí)者的被動(dòng)英文水平往往高于主動(dòng)英文水平,因此聽(tīng)力理解材料的難度往往大于口語(yǔ)的內(nèi)容,閱讀理解材料的難度往往要大于寫作。由此可見(jiàn),在經(jīng)過(guò)兩年基礎(chǔ)專業(yè)課的學(xué)習(xí)后,學(xué)習(xí)者應(yīng)該將重點(diǎn)放在把被動(dòng)英文水平轉(zhuǎn)化成主動(dòng)英文水平上。一旦我們的大腦有了大量的語(yǔ)言輸出之后,就能達(dá)到出口成章、下筆有神的境界。
(二)英語(yǔ)專業(yè)四級(jí)寫作要求
(1)能根據(jù)各種不同的聽(tīng)讀材料筆頭回答問(wèn)題,復(fù)述內(nèi)容寫摘要、寫提綱和記筆記。
(2)能根據(jù)題目列出寫作提綱,在一小時(shí)內(nèi)寫出200~250詞的短文。
以上均要求做到內(nèi)容完整、條理清楚,語(yǔ)法基本正確,語(yǔ)言通順恰當(dāng)。
(3)能寫一般的書(shū)信、通知、便條、請(qǐng)?zhí)?,填寫?jiǎn)單的表格,格式正確,語(yǔ)言得體。
寫作課培養(yǎng)學(xué)生初步寫作能力,包括提綱、文章摘要、短文以及最簡(jiǎn)單的常用應(yīng)用文。
(三)考試大綱對(duì)英語(yǔ)專業(yè)寫作的要求和規(guī)定
(1)測(cè)試目的:按照英語(yǔ)專業(yè)基礎(chǔ)階段英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱的要求,檢查學(xué)生在基礎(chǔ)階 段末期的英語(yǔ)寫作能力。
(2)題型:主觀試題,分為Section A和Section B兩個(gè)部分。
Section A: Composition寫作文
Section B: Note-writing寫便條
(3)測(cè)試要求:
a)作文。要求根據(jù)所給的題目和列出的寫作提綱或圖表、數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)表等(也附有寫作提綱)寫一篇150詞的短文,能做到內(nèi)容切題、完整,條理清楚,文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn),語(yǔ)法正確,語(yǔ)言通順恰當(dāng)。作文的類別有說(shuō)明文、議論文或記敘文。考試時(shí)間為35分鐘。
b)便條。要求根據(jù)提示寫大約50~60詞的便條、通知、請(qǐng)?zhí)?。要求做到格式正確,語(yǔ)言得體??荚嚂r(shí)間為10分鐘。
(四)英語(yǔ)專業(yè)四級(jí)寫作的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
1.作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
(1)文章內(nèi)容切題、豐富,文章通順,表達(dá)清楚。
(2)行文流暢。
(3)組織嚴(yán)密,邏輯性強(qiáng)。
(4)句型多樣化,句法結(jié)構(gòu)正確。
(5)用詞得體、恰當(dāng)、豐富。
(6)語(yǔ)法正確。
(7)拼寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確,書(shū)寫整潔。
(五)高分密招
很多學(xué)習(xí)者翻開(kāi)作文書(shū)籍,就如同想打開(kāi)一本武功秘籍,只希望看到5個(gè)字母trick(技巧)。技巧固然十分重要,但在應(yīng)試準(zhǔn)備中,常常需要70%的基礎(chǔ)和30%的技巧。這里要提醒 大家的是,不可高估技巧的作用,猶如在武打片中,要想得到某某寶典和劍法,是需要付出慘痛的代價(jià)的。
1.在考場(chǎng)中,常常感到無(wú)話可說(shuō),該怎么辦? 的確,在考場(chǎng)中有些考生由于緊張,常常會(huì)出現(xiàn)大腦一片空白,在10分鐘之內(nèi)動(dòng)不了筆。對(duì)于這種在考場(chǎng)中思維短路的現(xiàn)象,有兩種對(duì)策。
對(duì)策一:逆向思維法??忌谀玫揭粋€(gè)作文話題、但不知該如何動(dòng)筆時(shí),可以去聯(lián)想有關(guān)該 話題的具體事件,從具體事件中提煉出觀點(diǎn),再將觀點(diǎn)反彈回去,即topic具體事件觀點(diǎn)。例如看到The Advantage and Disadvantage of TV這個(gè)文章題目時(shí),如果不知如何下筆,可以去聯(lián)想一些具體的電視節(jié)目。一提到電視節(jié)目,就會(huì)自然而然地想到《新聞聯(lián)播》?!缎侣劼?lián)播》有哪些好處呢?當(dāng)然是開(kāi)拓視野,了解世界。同時(shí),還會(huì)聯(lián)想到一些暴力片和色情片,它們對(duì)兒童的身心健康發(fā)展不利。
對(duì)策二:正說(shuō)反說(shuō)法。考生在寫作中感到觀點(diǎn)空洞茫然,不易理論清楚,甚至不知從何談起時(shí),可以從正、反兩個(gè)方面對(duì)議題進(jìn)行“擺事實(shí),講道理”,即“如果這樣,就會(huì)怎么樣; 如果不這樣,又會(huì)怎么樣”。
2.在寫作中,遇到不會(huì)表達(dá)的詞語(yǔ)該怎么辦?
對(duì)于母語(yǔ)是中文的學(xué)習(xí)者,其中文詞匯量往往大于英文詞匯量,在英文寫作中遇到不能表 達(dá)的詞語(yǔ)是最正常不過(guò)的事情了。但有的考生在遇到不會(huì)拼寫的單詞時(shí),往往絞盡腦汁,冥思苦想,結(jié)果造成思維短路,得不償失。其實(shí),對(duì)于這種情況,也有兩種對(duì)策。
對(duì)策一:用其近義詞代替。
如在寫Student Use of Computer這篇作文時(shí),很多同學(xué)以“在 最近10年里,學(xué)生使用電腦的小時(shí)數(shù)一直在增加”這句話來(lái)開(kāi)頭。“10年”可以用decade表 示,“增加”可以用ascend表示。但是不知道這兩個(gè)詞或?qū)τ谒鼈兊钠磳憶](méi)有把握時(shí),可用 其近義詞表示,如“10年”直接用ten years就可以,“增加”還可用increase, go up, rise, grow, jump, climb等。在這個(gè)時(shí)候,考生必須遵守“寧為瓦全,不可玉碎”的原則。這就要求在平時(shí)注意多收集一些同義詞。如在每一篇作文中都會(huì)用到的一個(gè)單詞“認(rèn)為”,英文中有很多單詞來(lái)表達(dá)此義,如think, agree, claim, maintain, argue, believe, h old, suggest, view…as, regard…as, consider…(as)。又如另一個(gè)單詞“目前,最近”,可用nowadays, these years, recently, lately, currently, at present。此外,同義詞的收集與運(yùn)用有助于考生在寫作中用詞多樣化。
對(duì)策二:當(dāng)考生在寫作中,既找不到該詞 的近義詞,又不能用解釋性的語(yǔ)言進(jìn)行闡述時(shí),考生可以考慮用其上義詞或下義詞來(lái)代替。
上義詞是對(duì)事物的概括性、抽象性說(shuō)明;下義詞是事物的具體表現(xiàn)形式。如Owing a Car這 篇文章談到擁有汽車的弊端,其中有一點(diǎn)是汽車會(huì)排放出一氧化碳(carbon oxide)和二氧化 碳(carbon dioxide),對(duì)空氣造成污染。當(dāng)然,如果不知道如何拼寫,更不知該如何去 釋義一氧化碳和二氧化碳時(shí),可以用它們的上義詞poisonous gases來(lái)表示,因?yàn)椴?論是一氧化碳還是二氧化碳都是有毒氣體。又如Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus(大學(xué)生該如何走出校園了解世界),提綱的第二點(diǎn)要求是大學(xué)生了解社會(huì)的途徑(大眾媒體、社會(huì)服務(wù)等)?!按蟊娒襟w”為mass media,“社會(huì)服務(wù)”為social service。如果考生不會(huì)表達(dá),但是在提綱里又明確規(guī)定不能不寫時(shí),可以用其下義詞來(lái)代替。大眾媒 體的具體表現(xiàn)形式是TV,radio, newspaper, internet;社會(huì)服務(wù)的具體表現(xiàn)形式則為par t|time job, tutoring等。因而,考生在寫作中遇到不會(huì)表達(dá)的單詞時(shí),應(yīng)該沉著冷靜,考慮用其近義詞、上義詞或下義詞來(lái)代替。
如何給閱卷老師留下美好的第一印象
要想作文獲得高分,顯而易見(jiàn)就是要給閱卷老師留下美好的印象。老師們的閱卷過(guò)程是郁悶枯燥的。使自己的文章在大約1分鐘的閱讀時(shí)間內(nèi),迅速地在他們的腦海中形成較多的興奮點(diǎn),是至關(guān)重要的。
首先,作文的寫作時(shí)間為35分鐘,合理的時(shí)間安排為10+20+5,前面的10分鐘用來(lái)讀題審題,構(gòu)思并列提綱,接著的20分鐘用來(lái)按照提綱寫作,最后5分鐘用來(lái)檢查及潤(rùn)色。合理的時(shí) 間安排是寫出優(yōu)秀 作文的必不可少的第一步。
其次,卷面的設(shè)置。要想讓閱卷老師對(duì)你的作文試卷有一種賞心悅目的感覺(jué),作文的排版應(yīng)該不多于2/3,不少于1/3,要留有余地,不要將卷面寫得密密麻麻。字體不要過(guò)大或過(guò)小。字跡要工整。段落方面,英語(yǔ)專業(yè)四級(jí)考試作文的特點(diǎn)決定了作文寫法的基本框架為三段論。俗話說(shuō),事不過(guò)三,超過(guò)了三段后就會(huì)讓人感到過(guò)于繁瑣。并且應(yīng)當(dāng)注意的是,每段開(kāi)頭都應(yīng)該有縮進(jìn),留有兩個(gè)單詞的位置。
再次,除了形式之外,作文 的內(nèi)容也尤其重要。閱卷老師閱卷一般是從第一段看語(yǔ)言,從第二段看結(jié)構(gòu)。這就要求考生 的作文開(kāi)頭部分以及每一段的第一句一定要寫得像英文,不要出現(xiàn)任何的拼寫或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。除了語(yǔ)言的地道外,還要求作文有層次感。可以用一系列表示邏輯關(guān)系的連詞,即路標(biāo) 詞來(lái)表示思路的清晰,如and, however, furthermore,also, what"s more等。此外,還可 以用對(duì)等的句式結(jié)構(gòu),如for one thing, for another; On the one hand, on the other hand等來(lái)增加文章的層次感??傊h論文對(duì)語(yǔ)言的要求主要體現(xiàn)在三個(gè)方面:①用 恰當(dāng)?shù)倪壿嬙~表現(xiàn)文章的邏輯性。②要注意自然段與主題句的運(yùn)用,即用自然段表現(xiàn)出文章 的邏輯性,并在每段中用主題句說(shuō)明要點(diǎn),給人一目了然的感覺(jué)。③要注意句型結(jié)構(gòu),注意 每句的重心和句與句之間的銜接,使句意一環(huán)扣一環(huán),避免松散。
便條的寫作
便條是一種簡(jiǎn)單的書(shū)信形式。要求學(xué)生仔細(xì)閱讀和分析所給的情景,確定便條所涉及的內(nèi)容,如寫便條者與便條接收者的身份、兩者之間的關(guān)系及情景的正式程度等。便條的特點(diǎn)在于內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)短,大多是臨時(shí)性的詢問(wèn)、留言、通知、要求等。與正規(guī)書(shū)信相比,便條的語(yǔ)言更為口語(yǔ)化。有急事需告訴別人而又不能面談時(shí),就可以寫便條,如請(qǐng)假條、留言條等。一般不寫地址,與普通書(shū)信基本相同。結(jié)尾時(shí)也無(wú)需要結(jié)尾禮詞,只需要寫上便條者姓名。便條的日期一般只要寫上星期幾,也可以寫明上午、下午的具體時(shí)間。便條具有用途廣泛、形式簡(jiǎn)單、文字要求不十分嚴(yán)格的特點(diǎn)。
Should higher education be available to all students or only to good students? TOPIC:
Some people believe that a college or university education should be available to all students.Others believe that higher education should be available only to good students.Discuss these views.Which view do you agree with? Explain why.Some people believe that only good students should have access to a university education.Others posit that higher education should be open to everyone, regardless of their academic abilities.I agree with the former opinion.Universities should only allow good students into their programs because these students value the importance of a good education and are interested in furthering their education.Furthermore, if all students were allowed into universities, the schools would quickly become saturated, and the quality of education received would diminish.A university education is very important to a good student.This type of student has set his/her sights on a university education from early on, and has put in the necessary work to earn a place in a good university.Poor students who did not try to achieve good grades in high school obviously do not care about their education, and therefore, do not deserve to go to university.However, if these poor students go back to school and improve their grades, they should also be allowed to go to university.Good students are very interested in furthering their education.They have put copious amounts of work into their education, and are interested in learning more.Poor students are usually not as interested in furthering their education.If they were interested in this, they would have tried harder to begin with.With that said, let us suppose for a moment that universities did allow all students, regardless of their grades, into university.The school would quickly become overfull, and good students, who really care about their education, would suffer because of it.They might not be able to get into the classes they want, and if they do get in, there might be so many students in the class that it is impossible to learn.In conclusion, I think that it is important to save a university education for those who really want it-good students.If a poor student wishes to go to university, then he/she will have to return to high school and improve his/her grades.TOPIC: [命題作文欣賞] Should schools ask students to evaluate their teachers?
Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers.Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Teachers have a very difficult job in society.They not only have to learn how to teach material effectively, but also must learn how to deal with a wide variety of personalities.While teaching is a difficult job, I think it is important for schools to ask students to evaluate their teachers.I think this is the right thing to do because it encourages teachers to try their best, it gives students the opportunity to choose effective teachers, and it allows the schools to have the best teachers possible teaching.If a teacher knows that at the end of the term, the students will be evaluating his/her work, then the teacher will be driven to do a very good job.If there is no pressure from evaluation, a teacher might be prone to doing a less than perfect job.I believe that everyone needs an occasional evaluation to ensure they are doing their job correctly.In the case of a teacher, the students will give the most important evaluations.If there was a public summary of which teacher scored the highest on his/her evaluations, then students would be able to take courses based on which teacher was the best at the job.This would allow students to excel in their studies, and achieve better grades.Finally, if schools ask students to evaluate their teachers, the schools themselves would be able to have the best teachers working on campus.If a teacher scored too low on an evaluation, a replacement could be found.This is a much better method than waiting for students to complain about a teacher.Teachers do have a difficult job, but regardless of this, they must excel at it.If a person is a particularly poor teacher, the students will not learn the required material, and suffer for it.
第五篇:英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫作話題預(yù)測(cè):求職信
求職信
求職信sample 1
Directions: For this part, you are asked to write An Application Letter in about 120 words based on the information provided below in Chinese:
中國(guó)四達(dá)國(guó)際經(jīng)濟(jì)技術(shù)合作公司(CSCIETC)誠(chéng)聘文秘一員,要求如下:*年歷20—30歲,大學(xué)本科以上學(xué)歷
*流利的英語(yǔ)聽(tīng)說(shuō)讀寫能力
*熟練的計(jì)算機(jī)操作能力
*良好的溝通與協(xié)調(diào)能力*
*有外企工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)者優(yōu)先
應(yīng)聘者請(qǐng)將簡(jiǎn)歷、聯(lián)系方式以及待遇要求寄至:上海市淮海中路8560號(hào)攬盛大廈人力資源部
郵編:200033
Wang Peng
No.3120, Zhongshan Road
Xu Hui District
Shanghai, 200076
September, 28th, 2003
Department of Human Resources
Lansheng Building
No.8560, Huaihai Zhong Road
Shanghai, 200033
Dear Sir or Madam,I learned from Beijing Youth Daily Oct.2 that your company is offering a position for a secretary, and it's a great pleasure for me to write to explore the possibility of seeking the job.I graduated two years ago from Beijing University of Technology, and obtained a bachelor's degree in the field of business manage?ment.During my stay in the university my major courses included macro-economics, business communication skills, marketing and com?puter applications.I was especially fond of the communication skills which enabled me to deal with people and things around well.Upon graduation I engaged with HP China Branch as an assis?tant to the head of Marketing Department.My responsibilities consist?ed of carrying out market surveys, writing reports and organizing meet?ings within the department.This two-year experience has helped me a lot in many ways.In particular, I become
increasingly aware of the importance of co-ordination and co-operation among co-workers.I also believe the experience will qualify me for the current vacancy in your company.I passed both CET-4 and CET-6 with high marks.My spoken English is also fluent enough to organize meetings in English, which was actually my routine work in HP.Most of my market reports were presented in English, as my former boss is a native English speaker
I enclose herein my resume and some relevant documents as re?quired.And if you need any further information on me, I also refer you to Mr.Johnson, my ex-colleague, who is available at 021-66668888.I appreciate your sincere consideration of me, and am looking forward to an early interview with you.Sincerely yours,Wang Peng
求職信sample 2
Directions: The summer vacation is drawing near.You, Liming by name, want to find a part-time job.Write an application letter of about 120-150 words within 30 minutes.Dear Sirs,I'm Li Ming, a sophomore majoring in English at XX University.I read in yesterday's newspaper that you are looking for a part-time secretary and I think I'll prove to be a real find for you.During the past two years at university, I’ve taken over 18 compulsory and optional course, and have according improved my ability of English listening, speaking, reading, writing and translation considerably.Besides, I have learned a lot about foreign relations and trade.At leisure, I always try to grasp every precious opportunity to practice English with native speakers.As a matter of fact, I've already tried some translation and interpretation jobs.I once worked as a temporary interpreter at the East China Export Commodities Fair.In addition, during the past two years, I have been working as a part-time tour guide.My jobs offered me good opportunities to improve my English and work competence and I enjoy them very much.Two weeks from now, I will be on holiday again.If you can grant me the honor to work for your company as a secretary for two months, I'd feel obliged.Thank you for reading my application letter.I'm looking forward to your reply.