第一篇：2016年四級作文寫作練習(xí)美國人寫的經(jīng)典作文11

寫寫幫文秘助手(004km.cn)之2016年四級作文范文寫作練習(xí)：美國人寫的經(jīng)典作文（11）

anticipating the good

anxiety about change

when we find ourselves going through any kind of change in our lives, our natural response may be to tense up on the physical, mental, or emotional level.we may not even notice that we have braced ourselves against a shift until we recognize the anxiety, mood swings, or general worried feeling toward the unknown that usually results.there are positive ways to move through change without pushing it away, however, or attempting to deny that it is happening.since change will occur in almost every aspect of our lives, we can learn to make our response to it an affirmative one of anticipation, welcoming the new while releasing the past with grace.one thing we can do is change our perspective by changing the labels we use to identify our feelings.we can reinterpret feelings of anxiety as the anxious butterflies that come with eager expectation.with this shift, we begin to look for the good that is on its way to us.though we may only be able to imagine the possibilities, when we acknowledge that good is there for us to find, we focus our energy on joyful anticipation and bring it into our experience while allowing the feelings to carry us forward.we can also choose to do a ceremony to allow our emotions to process.every culture has created ceremonies to help people make the transition from one phase of life to the next.we can always create a ceremony too, perhaps by burning written thoughts to

watch the smoke carry them away, thereby releasing them, or we can welcome new endeavors by planting flowers or trees.some ceremonial activities such as a farewell send-off or housewarming party, we may do automatically.society also has built-in ceremonies, like graduation and weddings, which may satisfy the need we feel.sometimes the shift from denial to acceptance is all that is needed to ease our anxiety, allowing us to bring our memories with us as we move through nervousness to joyful excitement about the good to come

第二篇：四級寫作練習(xí)題目和

四級寫作復(fù)習(xí)資料

分析原因類

The Traditional Chinese Culture Fever1、近年來中國傳統(tǒng)文化開始在全世界得到越來越多的關(guān)注，比如…（描述現(xiàn)象.Recently…, this phenomenon is known as…）

2、分析中國傳統(tǒng)文化在世界流行的主要原因（說明原因.firstly…，moreover…, so…）

3、“我”的觀點(個人看法.as for me…I’m quite proud and honored to see…)

NEET Group Phenomenon1、社會上出現(xiàn)“啃老族”：已經(jīng)成年、有勞動能力的年輕人，仍依靠父母供養(yǎng)（nowadays，there are a considerable number of young people …,）

2、簡要分析出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因(Why ia there such phenomenon? The reasons may be…: firstly…, and second…, so…)

3、你的看法(The phenomenon of… is a sign of social resource waste.In my opinion…if the young people…if the government …)

參考詞匯：NEET:(Not in Employment, Education or Training)group

分析影響類

The Effects of Advertisements1、現(xiàn)代社會廣告無處不在2、廣告怎樣影響我們的生活

3、談?wù)勀銓V告的看法

分析利弊類

Should College students do business in the Dormitory?

1、有些大學(xué)生在宿舍做買賣，如開雜貨店、復(fù)印社等(分析優(yōu)點段。In this economic era, some college students …, they usually…,by doing business…, what’s more…)

2、這種做法有哪些利弊（分析缺點段。However…, if this problem is not properly solved…,）

3、你的觀點(個人看法。In my opinion, students can not be allowed to do business in the dorm…, for …,at the same time…,)

分析危害類

On spam messages1、隨著手機(jī)的普及，垃圾短信也日益猖獗（描述問題。Along with the popularity of cellphones...,）

2、垃圾短信帶來哪些危害（說明危害。As everyone sees,… besides,…）

3、如何應(yīng)對垃圾短信（建議方法段。Accordingly, effective measures should be taken to …, on the one hand…, on the other hand…, only in these ways can the harm of spam messages be minimized.）

Private cars1、隨著人們生活水平的提高，社會上私家車越來越多了(As the ling standards of Chinese1

people has been greatly improved,…)

2、特別是在大城市，私家車的激增帶來了一些問題(But in already densely big cities in

particular, the … has brought many problems…, crowded road… the emission ofcars …)

3、我的看法和建議(In my opinion, some measures should be taken… firstly, the government

should… , secondly, public transport facilities should… thirdly, people…buy cars with low energy consumption and fewer emission …,fourthly…)

參考詞匯：proliferation 激增emission(汽車)排出的尾氣

闡述方法類

How to lead a low-carbon life1、當(dāng)前十分流行“低碳”生活方式：降低二氧化碳排放量，實現(xiàn)低能耗（提出問題。Nowadays,energy conservation and carbon reduction have become challenges for people…., thus the concept of “l(fā)ow-carbon life” has been …,what we can do is …, reduce carbon-dioxide emission…, lower the power consumption…）

2、如何做到低碳生活（說明方法。The key point is to lower …firstly…, secondly…, thirdly…,last but not the least…, small activities could create big challenge.）

3、談?wù)劦吞忌畹闹匾裕▊€人看法。Living a low-carbon life couldbeneficial to …, if

we…, then our goal of sustainable development will be achieved …, and more sources and energy will be saved…）

論證觀點類

Constant Dropping Wears Away a Stone1、怎樣理解“滴水穿石”這句諺語（提出論點解釋。As the old saying goes,.“Constant Dropping Wears Away a Stone”.It tell us that,…

2、舉例論證(舉例論證。Many remarkable persons contribute to ythis proverb.For example…,the reson for this achievements is …)

3.重申觀點，指出注意事項 ： from the above examples, we learn that …, but what must be noticed is that we should make sure the things we are goin gto do is meaningful…

選擇立場類

New Year’s Eve, Dining outside or at Home?

1、現(xiàn)在很多人選擇去飯店而不是在家吃年夜飯（提出爭論。In revent years, more and more

people are so eager to dine outside that the seats in resturants are …, however, still others think differently …, they enjoy…）

2、另一些人堅持認(rèn)為年夜飯應(yīng)該在家吃(As for those who dine at home…,)

3、“我”的看法(In my opinion…, although dining outside on New year’s Eve is very

convinient, I prefer…)

Reading Online or Offline1、現(xiàn)在越來越多的人在網(wǎng)上閱讀雜志、報紙、書籍等(With the development of … , more and

more people begin to read online…they read … and even e-books)

2、仍有很多人在閱讀傳統(tǒng)的紙質(zhì)的文字內(nèi)容(However, there are still lots of people who

stick to …they buy….)

3、你對此的觀點(In my opinion, e-book… while p-book are… It’s very possible that reading

online and reading offline complement each other, but neither of them can replace the other.)參考詞匯： e-books電子書p-books紙質(zhì)書

Chinese Festivals and Western Festivals in China1、越來越多的中國人慶祝西方的節(jié)日(Western festivals have gained greater popularity than

before in China.More and more people, especially youngsters celebrate western festivals…such as…)

2、有人認(rèn)為中國人就應(yīng)該慶祝中國自己的節(jié)日(On the contrary, other people believe that

our Chinese should… like Spring festival…)

3、你對此的看法(In my opinion, both the … and … are …for people’s reunion.Western

festivals provide… while… , In a word,…)

Working as Interns before Graduation1、有些大學(xué)生認(rèn)為有必要在畢業(yè)前去實習(xí)(Some students think it necessary to…,.Nowadays, recruiters tend to pay more and more attention to students’ capabilities, such as…, the skills of … thus, more and more undergraduates are eager to seek …)

2、但也有些人持不同意見（However, some other students hold a different opinion.They

believe that …, skip classes to work…, But without solid knowledge , …）

3、“我”的看法(In my opinion, undergraduates had better work as interns before…, but it’s

important to keep balance of … , it’s a good way for students to…)

參考詞匯：實習(xí)生 intern實習(xí)生的職位internship

如何駕馭結(jié)構(gòu)

分析原因類的行文思路

第一段：描述現(xiàn)象段：總體概括現(xiàn)象（主題句）-------具體描述現(xiàn)象的現(xiàn)狀、表現(xiàn)、特點或受關(guān)注的程度

第二段：說明原因段：總體引出原因（主題句）--------原因一-------原因二-------原因三

第三段：個人看法段/ 個人情況段：總體評論現(xiàn)象/總述個人情況（主題句）--------對現(xiàn)象作出具體評論（可以是問題、影響或前景）/ 具體說明個人情況或理由------總結(jié)全文，可以提出建議或展望

分析影響類的行文思路

第一段：描述現(xiàn)象段：總體概括現(xiàn)象（主題句）-------具體描述現(xiàn)象或簡單分析原因

第二段：說明影響段：總體引出影響（主題句）--------影響一-------影響二-------影響三

第三段：個人看法段/ 個人情況段：總體評論現(xiàn)象/總述個人情況（主題句）------具體闡述自己對現(xiàn)象的看法（可以是現(xiàn)象前景、存在問題或注意事項）/ 具體說明個人情況或理由------總結(jié)全文，可以提出建議或展望。

分析利弊類的行文思路

第一段：分析優(yōu)點段：提出要談?wù)摰闹行氖挛?------引出對其“利”的一面（即“優(yōu)點”）的分析（主題句）-------具體分析該事物“利”的一面

第二段：分析缺點段：引出對其“弊”的一面（即“缺點”）的分析（主題句）-------具體分析該事物“弊”的一面

第三段：個人看法段：總體表明“我”的看法或體會（主題句）--------具體闡述“我”的看法、體會或理由------總結(jié)全文，可以提出建議或希望

分析圖表類的行文思路

第一段：描述圖表段：總體概括圖表中反映的現(xiàn)象（主題句）-------具體描述圖表的數(shù)據(jù)

第二段：說明原因段：總體引出原因（主題句）--------原因一-------原因二-------原因三

第三段：個人看法段/ 個人情況段：總體評論圖表中的現(xiàn)象（主題句）--------闡述自己對現(xiàn)象的看法（可以從問題、影響或前景等角度來寫）/ 具體說明個人情況或理由------總結(jié)全文，可以提出建議或展望

分析危害類的行文思路

第一段：描述問題段：總體概括問題或描述問題背景（主題句）-------具體描述問題（具體描述問題時可從問題的嚴(yán)重程度和具體事例來寫，注意不要和下段中的危害重合）

第二段：說明危害段：總體引出危害（主題句）--------危害一-------危害二-------危害三

第三段：說明方法段：總體引出方法（主題句）--------方法一------方法二------總結(jié)方法，可以提出建議或希望

闡述方法類的行文思路

第一段：提出問題段：概括提出問題或要實現(xiàn)的目標(biāo)（主題句）-------具體描述問題、目標(biāo)或其重要性-------強(qiáng)調(diào)解決問題或?qū)崿F(xiàn)目標(biāo)的必要性或緊迫性（注意結(jié)尾句要承上啟下）

第二段：說明方法段：總體引出方法（主題句）--------方法一/因素一-------方法二/ 因素二-------方法三/因素三（可能是方法，也可能是解決問題或?qū)崿F(xiàn)目標(biāo)時的決定因素，方法或因素可以是兩到三點，不一定每點都要展開說）

第三段：個人看法段/ 個人情況段：總體評論問題或目標(biāo)/總述個人情況（主題句）--------具體評論該問題或目標(biāo)/ 具體說明個人情況或理由------總結(jié)全文，可以提出建議或希望

選擇立場類的行文思路

第一段：描述爭議段：指出爭議現(xiàn)象、話題或觀點-------闡述人們對其的爭議（闡述爭議時簡單地提出對立觀點或做法即可，一般不在此展開論證）

第二段：對比論證段：闡述爭議一方的觀點和理由--------轉(zhuǎn)折引出爭議另一方觀點-------闡述爭議另一方的理由（每種觀點給出一至兩個理由，不需要長篇大論。本段論述要客觀，不要摻雜個人觀點，不應(yīng)出現(xiàn)第一人稱。如果本段內(nèi)容較多，也可將雙方的觀點和理由分為兩段來寫）

第三段：表明看法段：表明“我”的看法（主題句）--------闡述“我”的理由------總結(jié)全文，可以提出建議或希望（盡量給出明確且積極的選擇，并給出充分的理由）

論證觀點類的行文思路

第一段：提出觀點段：描述背景現(xiàn)象、做法或觀點-------由此要引出論證的觀點（主題句）------解釋或強(qiáng)調(diào)觀點中的道理

第二段：論證觀點段：總體引出例證或論據(jù)（主題句）--------例證或論據(jù)一-------例證或論據(jù)二-------例證或論據(jù)三（論據(jù)要充分，不能重復(fù)觀點，要結(jié)合實例，選取一兩個適當(dāng)展開，也可以只舉一個例子，詳細(xì)展開論證）

第三段：重申觀點段：重申觀點（主題句）--------強(qiáng)調(diào)其重要意義或指出需要注意的地方（重申觀點時注意適當(dāng)變換用詞或句式）

第三篇：四級寫作練習(xí)題目及

Writing Practice Practice 1.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On a Harmonious Dormitory Life.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.宿舍生活有時會出現(xiàn)不和諧的情況;2.一個和諧宿舍生活的必要性;3.如何創(chuàng)造和諧的宿舍生活.On a Harmonious Dormitory Life Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life.But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory be disturbed in one way or another.As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members.On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study.On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together.There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life.Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any.Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you'll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist.Thirdly, you'll have to share with each other and make good friends.In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.作文地帶點評: “和諧”成為我們當(dāng)今社會詞頻概率最高用詞,就社會而言,倡導(dǎo)建立和諧 社會;就家庭而言,提倡建設(shè)和諧家庭;就校園來講,則要建立和諧校園;和諧兩字似乎無 所不在,大學(xué)生宿舍生活同樣需要和諧.本預(yù)測題與四級考試熱點密切相關(guān),又為典型的校 園生活主題,值得關(guān)注.Practice 2.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic College Students' Job Hunting.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.1.近幾年出現(xiàn)了大學(xué)生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象

2.產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因(如大學(xué)生追求的目標(biāo)過高,專業(yè)不對口等)3.如何解決這一問題(改變就業(yè)觀念,大學(xué)生再培訓(xùn)等)

College Students' Job Hunting In recent years, college students find it increasingly difficult to get a job.It sounds strange since young college students are usually intelligent, well-educated phenomenon, aspirant and eager to bring their talent into full play.Then what underlies the strange phenomenon?

There are several reasons for this.To begin with, nowadays college students aim too high.All they want are “good” jobs which could offer good salary, comfortable working conditions, high social status among others.Consequently, most college students are unwilling to accept vacant jobs they consider not “good” enough.Another reason is that there is a big gap between the majors some students study in school and the demands of vacant jobs.So companies think some students are not fit for the jobs.Solution to the problem requires efforts on both the society and the students.The companies should value the students, talent and knowledge while the latter should not merely aim at material gains.They should be down-to–earth in building up their career.Furthermore, they should face their weak points so as to improve themselves and be more competent.作文地帶點評: 本預(yù)測題為社會熱點話題.近年來大學(xué)生就業(yè)難日益成為各級政府及社會各 方面關(guān)注的焦點,媒體也廣泛報道了大學(xué)生就業(yè)形勢嚴(yán)峻,呼吁全社會共同努力;此外,該 預(yù)測題也與大學(xué)生就業(yè)密切相關(guān),也是四級作文選題重點之一.Practice 3.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Credit Cards.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:

1.越來越多的人使用信用卡, 信用卡有哪些好處

2.信用卡的弊端

3.你自己的觀點

Credit Cards Personal credit cards are becoming more common in China.Banks and other financial institutions are encouraging their customers to change the way they buy things.Credit cards, otherwise known as “plastic money”, are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change.Consumers will be able to “buy now, pay later”, and many see this as an advantage.But people need to be careful.There are dangers associated with credit cards.Some people find it very easy to exceed their budget.They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need, and can become quickly overburdened by debt.The credit cards often charge a high rate of interest, which exacerbates the problems for these people.However, used wisely credit cards can improve the quality of people's lives.They can give people access to money to meet sudden unplanned expenses.Properly handled, they can let people control their expenditure and the monthly statements provide a record of where their money has gone.作文地帶點評: 這是一篇議論文, 關(guān)于信用卡的利弊.可以分成三部分: 第一部分, 信用 卡的好處, 比如說應(yīng)急等;第二部分, 信用卡的一些弊端, 比如說鼓勵一些無用的消費(fèi);第三部分: 你自己的觀點, 理性使用.Practice 4.Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: A Letter to the President of the University about Improving the Sports Facilities on Campus.You should write no more than 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese: 假設(shè)你是李明, 請你寫一封信給校長, 建議改善本校體育設(shè)施狀況, 內(nèi)容應(yīng)涉及體育設(shè)施對大學(xué)生的重要性, 對目前學(xué)校體育設(shè)施的狀況可以表揚(yáng), 可以提出批評建議, 也可以兼而有之.A Letter to the President of the University Dear Mr.President，I am writing this letter to you to express my concern about the sports facilities on campus.I have noticed that our university has very limited resources in terms of opportunities to participate in sports, especially given that the number of students on campus is increasing every year.As we both know, sports are very important for the sound growth of young people.If they have access to quality sports facilities, young people are able to choose a healthier lifestyle, to boost self-esteem and confidence, and to build a positive outlook and sense of achievement.My proposal is to build a new sports area.It should be designed with soccer players, basketball players, and ping-pong players in mind.It should have a different section for each activity and be available to students all year round.I believe such facilities will meet our sporting needs.Thank you for your reading this letter.Yours faithfully, Li Ming

作文地帶點評:本預(yù)測題仿真度頗高,為校園生活話題,與在校大學(xué)生日常生活密切相關(guān), 是最近幾年側(cè)重考查的題材.2002 年 1 月考查了就本校食堂狀況給校長寫一封信.Practice 5.Direction: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic :Cell Phones.You should write no less than 120 words and base your composition on the outline below: 圖略-大體講述手機(jī)使用上升趨勢的一幅圖

1.描述上圖所示的手機(jī)用戶數(shù)的變化情況

2.出現(xiàn)這種情況的原因

3.對此現(xiàn)象作出評價

Cell Phones As is shown in the chart, cell phones are becoming increasingly popular within China.In 1999, the number of cell phones in use was only 2 million, but in 2002, the number reaches 5 million.And in the year 2005, the number has suddenly soared to 9 million.There are many factors contributing to this development.Firstly, a cell phone has no wires and can be carried everywhere easily.Secondly, a cell phone is something wonderful that we can have fun with news, games, music and chat through sending short messages.Thirdly, the drop in price and the simultaneous improvement in the functions have made it possible for an average person to make use of cell phone.The wide use of cell phones has make them more and more indispensable in people's daily life.The many functions of the cell phone have made certain people reluctant to separate themselves from their cell phone.作文地帶點評: 隨著我國經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展, 人民的生活水平不斷改善, 通訊業(yè)的日新月異的發(fā)展, 使得手機(jī)使用普及化, 成為人們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹谋匦杵? 對此的利弊人們看法各異.本預(yù)測題為熱點話題, 同樣是年輕人較熟悉和經(jīng)常討論的話題, 值得關(guān)注.3

第四篇：四級寫作

寫作高分揭密

導(dǎo)語：無論什么類型的語言考試都會把寫作當(dāng)作語言output 能力考察的最好形式。很多考生雖然懂得這個道理，在認(rèn)識上卻存在很多誤區(qū)。大家經(jīng)常會問“大綱單詞是不是都背下就能得高分？范文要不要背？可不可能押中考題？怎么樣復(fù)習(xí)才能提高寫作能力？”等等諸如此類的問題。今天我們就來解決！

◆寫作存在“三難、四差、一慢”等問題

上述問題的起源，一是由于大家在寫作文時存在三難問題(即開頭難, 展開難, 結(jié)尾難)，以及“四差一慢”問題(即語言能力差，詞句變換能力差，主題展開能力差，全文段落連貫?zāi)芰Σ詈蛯懽魉俣嚷?。

二是因為對于歷年大綱出現(xiàn)過的經(jīng)典段落缺乏研究，沒有認(rèn)真分析范文是如何用自己的詞句來說明現(xiàn)象，來描述圖表，來表達(dá)不同人的正反觀點，來說明闡述利弊，來闡述原因意義，來舉例說明，來歸納總結(jié)，來預(yù)測趨勢，來建議措施的。大部分考生只會盲目背誦見過的全部范文，不懂得要有選擇的背誦，比如：重點詞匯，常用套語，精彩句子，優(yōu)秀段落，經(jīng)典篇章。只有有選擇的背誦才是高分作文的素材基礎(chǔ)，肚子里面沒有一定數(shù)量的好詞好句是很難在一定的時間內(nèi)寫出一篇優(yōu)秀的文章的。

◆拉開六個檔次考生的分水嶺：清楚表意，句式變化

我們從歷年寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)來看，便可以知道考生得分情況總共分六個檔次。而在其中，又不難發(fā)現(xiàn)其中大綱明確寫出的“內(nèi)容切題，包括題中所列的各項要求”這一項對于得滿分和及格分左右的考生是一樣的。這說明，這個要求不是拉開考生實際分?jǐn)?shù)的關(guān)鍵?！扒宄磉_(dá)其內(nèi)涵，文字連貫；句式有變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確”是把六個檔次的考生拉開的分水嶺。

第一檔做到了“清楚表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵，文字連貫；句式有變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞正確”第二檔則是“比較清楚地表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵，文字基本連貫；句式有一定變化，句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞錯誤較少?！?/p>

第三檔是“基本清楚地表達(dá)其內(nèi)涵；句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞有一些錯誤?！?/p>

第四檔是 “基本包含題中所列的各項要求，語句可以理解，但有較多的句子結(jié)構(gòu)和用詞錯誤。”

第五檔是“基本按要求寫作，但只有少數(shù)句子可理解?！?/p>

第六檔當(dāng)然是什么都不寫，或者文不切題，語句混亂，無法理解的0分考生了。

◆提出“四化”理論，提高作文水準(zhǔn)

一、語言準(zhǔn)確化：語言準(zhǔn)確化主要表現(xiàn)在詞匯準(zhǔn)確和造句準(zhǔn)確上。

1.詞匯準(zhǔn)確化主要表現(xiàn)為以下四個方面：1.拼寫 2.介詞 3.同義詞 4.正規(guī)和非正規(guī)。由于受中文的影響，很多同學(xué)會把一些常用的介詞用錯。比如在校園里，有的考生就寫成in campus, 但正確寫法是 on campus;再比如：成功的關(guān)鍵，不少考生寫成 key of success, 實際是 key to success;另外，很多考生同義詞不分，比如cause, reason不分，problem和question不分，consist of 和compose不分?？赡苁遣簧倏忌芰擞⒄Z口語的影響或者專業(yè)英語的影響，喜歡用一些過于口語化和太正規(guī)的語言，這都是不合理的，我們寫作要用的是

白話文，用普通的正確的優(yōu)秀的語言表達(dá)內(nèi)容。

廣大考生容易犯錯誤的原因是：

首先，不同民族對同一事物，同一現(xiàn)象認(rèn)識方面有差異。

其次，對同一現(xiàn)象，同一意義語言表達(dá)方面有差異。例如，漢語認(rèn)為“一陣大雨”，英語寫成“a heavy rain”，不能寫成“a big rain ”。

第三，學(xué)生對所學(xué)語言規(guī)則進(jìn)行錯誤類推。例如，由“I went to the store yesterday morning.”推出“I went to the concert yesterday night.” 這種推導(dǎo)得出的句子可是一個錯句?！白蛱焱砩稀庇⒄Z只能說“l(fā)ast night”。但是，“昨天上午（下午，傍晚）”則用“yesterday morning(afternoon, evening)”。

第四，學(xué)生照漢語思維直譯，導(dǎo)致了表達(dá)錯誤和不地道、不準(zhǔn)確的英語表達(dá)。比如，學(xué)生把“你的來信收到了”寫成“Your letter has received.”，這是從漢語直譯出來的，因為英語中物做主語時，應(yīng)該用被動語態(tài)，應(yīng)寫成“Your letter has been received.”。所以提高寫作水平必須從基礎(chǔ)抓起，寫每個句子都要注意基礎(chǔ)語法與句型，注意每個詞每個意義的使用條件與用法、搭配關(guān)系、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)、同義詞與近義詞的區(qū)別等。

另外在背誦一些經(jīng)常使用的萬能套話，和不同場景的關(guān)鍵詞匯。

比如環(huán)境保護(hù)的話題，大家就應(yīng)該知道如下單詞：

沙塵暴Sand/dust storms

生態(tài)失衡Disruption of ecological balance

溫室效應(yīng)Greenhouse effect

全球變暖Global warming

淡水資源短缺Shortage of fresh water

環(huán)保意識Environmental awareness

生態(tài)系統(tǒng)Ecosystem

說到經(jīng)濟(jì)，中國的市場經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展，就應(yīng)該知道

國有企業(yè)state-owned enterprise

私人企業(yè)private enterprise

壟斷市場monopolize the market

偷稅漏稅tax evasion

跨國集團(tuán)multinational corporation

貿(mào)易制裁trade sanction

貿(mào)易壁壘trade barriers

全球經(jīng)濟(jì)一體化integration with the global economy

西部大開發(fā)Go-West Campaign

中國加入WTO China’s entry into WTO

亂攤派亂收費(fèi)imposition of arbitrary quotas and service charge

2.句子準(zhǔn)確化主要是避免寫病句?？忌Ｒ姷牟【溆校?.主謂一致 2.隨意更換 3.逗號濫用 4.重復(fù) 5.邏輯主語和主句主語不一致 6.修飾語位置亂放 7.不分可數(shù)名詞與不可數(shù)名詞

8.冠詞亂用 9.句子不完整 10.詞語的搭配 11.句子無明確的主語 12.一個句子有幾個動詞謂語 13.中國式英語。

比如：漢語說“我不知道這是對還是錯”如果寫成 “I don’t know it's true or not..” 則是錯句。因為在英語中，如果“know”之后跟疑問句，則用“whether”或“if”引導(dǎo)從句。在比如：“下崗，下海”等特色中國詞匯，可能有的同學(xué)會寫成down office, go down to the sea之內(nèi)的令人產(chǎn)生歧義的英文來，而實際上是laid-off workers，go into business.二、詞句多樣化：詞的多樣化是指用詞要多樣 比如說圖畫作文，我們會用到show, 我們也可以說reveals, indicates, illustrates等等。在比如“認(rèn)為”，我們可以說think, 也可以說hold, maintain, insist that。表達(dá)“越來越”不用老說more and more，還可以 用in growing numbers，on the rise等等。

而句子的多樣化主要為以下五個方面：句子開頭多樣化，主語多樣化，定語的多樣化、長短句變化。大部分的考生都喜歡用“主謂賓”磚頭式的句子去砸閱卷老師，不知道變化一下，用不定式，形容詞，介詞短語，分詞，同謂語，從句開頭。其次，大家都喜歡用“我，我們，他們”做主語，這實際上是受了漢語以人為中心的影響，英語可以用物來做主語，比如用動名詞，名詞或名詞短語，不定式等等做主語。比如：When I see the picture, I always think of my childhood.就可以這么說：The sight of the picture always reminds me of my childhood.當(dāng)然，句子還要講究平行原則、如何把短句子連接成為長句子、如何把短句擴(kuò)展成長句子。

三、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰化：就是要求考生把主題句寫在段首，自然段中，句子與句子之間要注意過渡詞匯的使用。分析原因或者列舉段落我們提倡“條理原則”。即要經(jīng)常說首先，其次，然后，最后。比如：首先，to(begin/start)with/ first and foremost/most important of all;其次：then, furthermore, moreover, what’s more, in addition, besides;最后last but not least, finally.如果是講兩種人或兩種情況，可以on the one hand, on the other hand 或for one thing, for another。

四、內(nèi)容簡單化：作文題型的存在的主要目的是為了考察考生的英語語言表達(dá)能力，而不是考察是否有構(gòu)思能力，編劇能力。切記不用把內(nèi)容想得多么復(fù)雜，而且復(fù)雜內(nèi)容的英文表達(dá)會更難。話說回來，就算讓考生當(dāng)場寫一篇字?jǐn)?shù)在120字左右的短篇漢語文章也不一定能寫出什么驚天地泣鬼神，見解深刻獨到的微型雜文來。所以考生只要舉一些簡單常見的例子就行。

至于應(yīng)用文，考生應(yīng)該在注意把握信息點，注意信件的種類（即正式文體和非正式文體）。如果應(yīng)用文考題是寫給公司單位就要采用正式文體，如果考題是給朋友的話，就應(yīng)當(dāng)用非正式的普通用語。對于正式文體，我們可以背誦有關(guān)投訴信，詢問信，請求信，道歉信，感謝信，建議信，求職信，辭職信，邀請信的一些慣用表達(dá)。而非正式文體我們同樣要注意詞句方面不要寫錯，要準(zhǔn)確多樣。

結(jié)束語：這樣看來，不管是什么作文，我們都要保證“四化”即語言準(zhǔn)確化，詞句多樣化，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰化，內(nèi)容簡單化，寫好作文不在話下！

第五篇：四級寫作

一.對比觀點題型

(1)要求論述兩個對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。

1.有一些人認(rèn)為……

累了,休息下,去考試大在線網(wǎng)上輔導(dǎo)逛逛

2.另一些人認(rèn)為……

3.我的看法……

The topic of ①________(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③________(理由二).Moreover, ④________(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥____________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦_(dá)___________(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧________(我的觀點).The reason is that ⑨____________(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個觀點，要求考生反對這一觀點Some people believe that ①________(觀點一).For example, they think ②________(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③________(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④____(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤____(反對的理由之二).Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____(我對文章所討論主題的看法).英語六級考試寫作技巧

二.闡述主題題型

要求從一句話或一個主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實.The good old proverb ________(名言或諺語)reminds us that ________(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________(理由一).For example, ____________(舉例說明).Secondly,________(理由二).Another case is that ________(舉例說明).Furthermore , ____________(理由三).英語四級英譯漢的目的,要求和評分

In my opinion, ________(我的觀點).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say____A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.三.解決方法題型

要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑

1.問題現(xiàn)狀英語四級英譯漢的目的,要求和評分

2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點)

In recent days, we have to face I problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second, ________(舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________(解決方法一).For another ________(解決方法二).Finally, ________(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that ________(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(帶來的好處).四.說明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時也會單從一個角度(利或弊)出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測)

1.說明事物現(xiàn)狀

2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(或一方面)

3.你對現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________(A的優(yōu)點之一).Besides ____________(A的優(yōu)點之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一個缺點).To make matters worse,____________(A的第二個缺點).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________(對前景的預(yù)測).五.議論文的框架

(1)不同觀點列舉型(選擇型)

There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying

that ___觀點一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.(2)利弊型的議論文

Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)___作文題目______.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __題目議題_____.Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly, ___優(yōu)點一______.And secondly ___優(yōu)點二_____.Just As a popular saying goes, “every coin has two sides”, __討論議題______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects.To begin with, ___缺點一______.In addition, ____ 缺點二______.To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __討論議題____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____討論議題___.(3)答題性議論文

Currently, there is a widespread concern over(the issue that)__作文題目_______.It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.英語四級英譯漢的目的,要求和評分

As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem.First of all, __途徑一______.In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途徑二_____.Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文題目______, we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.(4)諺語警句性議論文

It is well know to us that the proverb: “ ___諺語_______” has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study.It means ____諺語的含義_______.The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows.(also theoretically)

A case in point is ___例子一______.Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____諺語_____.With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____諺語_____.The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.as is indicated above......there is.....in the picture,it is obvious that,by diagramwe know that.for the reason if we realize that we firstly should,secondly we ,not only do webut, in the end it is essential that，,we make a conclusion that it is ,it isthat，,to our surprise ,the cartoon show us to sty.ina word ,we believe that