第一篇:2014高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)抓分練習(xí)(10)
2014高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)抓分練習(xí)(10)及答案
短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1分,滿(mǎn)分10分)
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(^)。并在其下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(/)劃掉。
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞后劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不記分。
I’m a middle school student name Li Ming.I’m writing to tell you something.Recently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school.I went there too in the other day.I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or chat.Some students were even talking about love affairs online.On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations.The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games.The Internet is good if we make good use of it.Otherwise, it will give us great harm.So the local government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.參考答案
I’m a middle school student name Li Ming.I’m writing to tell you something.1.named Recently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our
school.I went there too in the other day.I was surprising to see many students 2,去掉in 3.surprised
playing computer games, watching films or chat.Some students were even
4.chatting talking about love affairs online.5.in On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful 5.in 6.where informations.The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than 7 information place for games.The Internet is good if we make good use of it.Otherwise, it 8 a place will give us great harm.So the local government should take measure to make 9.do 10 measures sure that students use cyber cafes positively.短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1分,滿(mǎn)分10分)
假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意: 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
Senior three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination.Should I choose a good major and a good university? Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn what they are interested.It will also make it possibly for them to take their favorite jobs in the future.However, those who think differently believes that the environment is important to one’s development.They also believe that students graduate from leading universities are often more likely to find a good job.In my opinion, the best choice is to choose
only to their health but also for their mind.Middle school students 82.are future builders of the country.They should spend their time 83.learning useful knowledges.So it's really time that these young 84.smokers made up their minds give up smoking.【參考答案】(五)76.去掉which 77.are → is 78.two-fifth → two-fifths 79.whom → them 80.So → But 81.∧harmful → more 82.for → to
85.83.√ 84.knowledges → knowledge 85.minds ∧ → to
短文改錯(cuò)(第一節(jié):短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題)假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的作文。文中共有十處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)詞。
增加:在缺詞處加上一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改十處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon.A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her.The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop.He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike.The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move.The young
掉。
此行缺一詞:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧),在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出該加的詞。此行錯(cuò)一詞:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,在該行右邊橫線上寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。注意:原行沒(méi)有錯(cuò)的不要改。
This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,66.the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring 67.Festival.My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.One time, I just couldn't wait for the Spring Festival dinner.As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me.Shake her head, she said, ‘It 72.isn't a good time to do that, dear.' At once I apologize 73.and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.You 74.know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month." 75.參考答案
66.boy前加a 67.去掉when 68.cooker改為cook 69.but改為and 70.√ 71.about后加to 72.Shake改為Shaking 73.apologize改為apologized 74.me改為myself 75.month改為months
68.69.70.71.st
Best regard to you all.Yours, Liu Mei 【參考答案】短文改錯(cuò):
And—But meeting 前加a 去掉to your---my got---get Walk---Walking straightly—straight bank后加on which---where(in which)regard--regards
短文改錯(cuò)(共10小題;每小題1分,滿(mǎn)分10分)增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧),并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。注意: 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning Province in June, in 1965. When I was a child, I dreamed of flying
in the sky. I joined the army in June, 1983. In 1992, I was sent to
the air force base. In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members
from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination. I worked hardly,because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998.I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later.
第二篇:經(jīng)典短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)
短文改錯(cuò).1.Anita Mei was a very famous pop singer in Hong Kong.Together 76.with her mother, she began to perform in the age of four.In the early 77.1980s, she took part in a local singing competition but won the first 78.prize.The song “Bad Girl” made her famous.The following years see 79.Anita play in many movies and made many records.Some of her songs 80.were very popular.She was always ready to help others, she made 81.a lot of good friends.When SARS hit Hong Kong in 2004, they 82.organized several pop concert with other pop stars, calling on Hong 83.Kong people to bravely face the disease.Sad, Anita died of cancer 84.in December, 2003.The brave and the beautiful lady will always be 85.remembered by people.2.When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory.76. But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77. to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78. saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79. like to have.One of the answers he accepted was from a man 80. was looking for a job, too.This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 81. when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82. address to you present boss as I have been trying to find 83. a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter, 84. he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish.85.
3.Every day John goes to work by trains.He always 76.___________ buys a piece newspaper to read on the train, so he feels 77.___________ that the time pass more quickly.One day on the train he 78.___________ was reading a report about important football match.79.___________ The report was such interesting that he forgot to get off 80.___________ at his station.He didn’t know it until he saw the sea.81.___________ He got off at the next station, and wait a long time for 82.___________ a train to go back.He arrived very lately at the office.83.___________ His boss was angry to him when he told him why he 84.___________ was late.“Work is more importance than football!” 85.___________ 4.In the first day when I went to work in a very famous 76.___________ restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few 77.___________ people coming for dinner.So I am “invited” to have a meal in 78.___________ the restaurant.After ordering two French dishes and some food, 79.___________ I began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the 80.___________ meal.Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything 81.___________ else wrong there.I wrote something improper down secret.My 82.___________ meal was not serving yet.I looked at my watch :32 minutes 83.___________ passed!I realized that wait too long for service was the main 84.__________ reasons why the business was poor.Then I wrote a report about 85.___________ my findings and presented it to the boss.5.Last month we bought our two-year-old daughter a little dog.There are not many children of her age there we live, 76. and we thought a dog would make her less alone.We were 77. right.They play together happily all days.Our daughter now 78. smiles and laughs a lot more than she used.In a way it 79.
is like having two children in the house.All of them are 80. very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they 81. want.The dog is easy to look after than my daughter.82. He always eats up all his food and we don’t have piles of 83. dirty clothes to wash.My wife is also happy because of 84. I have given up smoke.The dog doesn’t like the smell.85.
6.I went shopping with my wife.We have a lot of things to 1._________ buy them.We drove to the center of the city and stopped 2._________ our car in front of the shop.An hour late, we came back 3._________ to the car.But it was strange that we couldn't open 4._________ the door.So we asked policeman for help.He was 5._________ glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.6._________ Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.“How are 7._________ you doing with my car ” We were surprising and went to 8._________ see the number of the car.What you think we did then 9._________ We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.10._________ 7.To my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages 76.______ traveling both by plane and by train.Travel by plane is 77.______ time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest 78.______ on the trip.but it is too expensive.Unless you travel by 79.______ train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can 80.______ appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the 81.______ railway.However, it was too crowded and time-wasting, 82.______ and we can take a good rest.So you can see every 83.______ coin has two sides.You'd better to choose either of 84.______ them depending on your own interest or economy.85.______
8.Dear Worried, I have accepted your letter and I'm glad to give you some 76.__________ suggestions.First in all, don't be disappointed.Many students 77.__________ find it difficulty to write well.In my opinion, if you want to 78.__________ improve your writing, and you can do several things.First, 79.__________ do some study with phrases and sentence structures.Second, 80.__________ read as much as possible.There are many things can't be 81.__________ learnt.You must see it in books many times.Then you'll 82.__________ be able to use them correctly yourself.But, in order to write 83.__________ well, you must learn to read much.Finally, you'd better to 84.__________ recite some good passages.Good luck for you in your writing.85.9.My cousin and I usually stay out late with some friends on Saturday evenings, left Grandpa alone at home.71.___ It was so cold yesterday, however, that none of us wanted 72.____ to suffer from the frozen wind outside.So after dinner we 73.____ stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa 74.____ tell his experiences in Second World War.In fact they 75.____ sounded familiar to us, so we were still listening attentively 76.____ so as to make him be happy.Now and then we asked Grandpa 77.____ some questions, that he answered in a humorous way.We 78.____ burst out laughing from time to time and he laughed too.79.____ Full of joy, we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.80.____ 10.As is known to all that the Internet is playing 76________ a more and more important part on our daily life.77________ On it, we can not only read news at home or abroad 78_________ but also get much information as possible.For instance, 79_________ we are often send e-mails or make telephone calls 80 _______ to our families as well as our friends.However, 81 _______ we can go to school on the net, read different 82 _______ kind of books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games.We can even do shopping without left our homes.83 _______ 84 ________ 85 _______ ⑴ 76.√ 77.in---at78.but---and 79.see---saw 80.made---make 81.∧and/so 82 they—she 83.concert—concerts 84.Sadly 85.the ⑵ 76.job 77.去掉been 78. a 79.experience 80. received 81. 去掉was/加who 82.your-my 83.√ 84. read 85. really ⑶76.trains 改為 train 77.去掉 piece。78.pass 改為 passes。79.important 前加 an 80.such 改為 so。81.此行無(wú)錯(cuò)。82.wait 改為 waited。83.lately 改為 late。84.to 改為 with。85.importance 改為 important。
⑷76.in--on 77 a / 78 was 79 right 80.at the /my 81that--whether /if 82 secretly 83.served 84 waiting 85.reason ⑸ 76.there改為where 77.a(chǎn)lone改為lonely 78.days改為day 79.used改為used to 80.All改為Both 81.but改為and 82.easy改為easier 83.無(wú)錯(cuò) 84.去掉of 85.smoke改為smoking ⑹1.Have改為had 2.them去掉 3.late改為later 4.正確 5.asked 后加a 6.minute改為 minutes 7.How 改為What 8.surprising改為surprised 9.What 后加do 10.speak 改為 say ⑺76.To—In 77.Travel—Travelin9 78.comfortably--comfortable 79.Unless--If 80.safety--safe 81.正確 82.was—is 83.can后加not 84.去掉to 85.or--and ⑻76.accepted→received 77.in→of 78.difficulty→difficult 79.去掉and 80.對(duì) 81.things后加that 82.it→them 83.But→So 84.去掉to 85.for→to
⑼71.left-leaving 72.none-neither 73.froze-freezing 74.stay-stayed 75.in 后面加the 76.so-but/yet 77.be去掉 78.that-which 79.正確80.in-on ⑽ 76.As →It 77.on →in 78.or →and 79.get ⌒much as 80.are81.However →Besides 82.∨ 83.kind →kinds 84.watching →watch 85.left →leaving
⑾ 76.accepted→received 77.去掉more, 78.because后加of, 79.other→another 80.say→said 81.and→or兩,三天用two or three days.82.family前加the這里特指家庭的其他成員.83.fast→soon fast指動(dòng)作的迅速,soon指時(shí)間“盡快地”.84.√ 85.happily→happy
⑿ 76.√77.is→are 78.felt→feel 79.Therefore→However 80.∧little→a a little boy 81.去掉not 后的to 82.play→playing 83.like→as 84.grade→grades“分?jǐn)?shù)”, 85.for→in
⒀ 76.have→had 77.√ 78去掉but 79.去 掉him 80.shoulders →shoulder 81.taking → taken 82.was后加 not 83.He→I 84.explain后加to ⒁ 1.calling—called 2.walking前加was3.and—or 4.and—but5.dead—died 6.√7.All—Both 8.去掉not 9.great前加a 10.danced—dance
第三篇:短文改錯(cuò)練習(xí)
短文改錯(cuò)專(zhuān)練:March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room.It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep.I’m thinking about my future!Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know!My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun.Also I’m really bad at biology at the school.My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!
Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed.I can think about my future in bed.I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time.We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before.We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place.We listened to the music together and soon became best friends.Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them.It is great.We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach.We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs.Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK.I’ve got news too.I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school.We’re going to stay on a farm with four days!We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.I’m sure I’ll love it.You know how crazy I am about the animals!I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too.Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours, 4 Nadia People had always been interested in bees.This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make.In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years.In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey.They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard.Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees.In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees.They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other.Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.Yesterday afternoon, I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name.How a good man!
I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today.According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way.He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification.Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.Last weekends, I went shopping by myself.It was a sunny day and I feel very happy.When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus.Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop.Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room.I had to wait the next bus.Suddenly, it started to rain.I had no choice but to call a taxi.Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by.Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain.What an unlucky day!
My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor.I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.I enjoy serving others.Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job good.Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies.For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students.Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax.I believe I am the right person to this post.Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week.I’m really sorry.I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was.So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken.Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus.And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing.Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone.Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me.Hope to hear you soon.Yours, Jack
Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip.I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus.On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked.We all had good time.Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees.It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air.Finally, we went home at half past four.Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad.They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent.Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future.Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them.He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners.Besides, the cost is too much for his family.In my opinions, I should continue to study in China.As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market.It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars.But there is one serious problems with this.The information are actually very often misinformation.It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us.And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.My grandfather had had enough of his cat.He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess.So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town.He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep.My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather.He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention.He decided he will never give her away again.Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society.This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did.People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past.Customs and beliefs have changed very slower.They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better.Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next.Yet changes do take place.All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other.In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof.They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter.Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police.After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to.It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly.The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground.Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit.There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema.But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities.As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired.But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic.Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active.In a word, exercise is good for the health.Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email.A cave!You know we’re on holidays in Spain.Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first.We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good.I think I ate too much ice cream the day before.Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada.However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking.Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful.We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave.We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything.Take care!
Ben
My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television.He decided to set up himself.He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses.After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV.The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV.That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside.When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire.Fortunately, the fire was putting out.It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others.It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves.But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas.We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received.They forget to think of the sick and the homeless.The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed.What a shame!
A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him.Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes.At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door.Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move.Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house.When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy.But it was too late and she was arrested.My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.21
Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams.Some copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones.Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects.For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students.For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future.So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating.At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student.At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class.I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent.Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.I believe you will be one of their friend too.Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing.I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
第四篇:2017年高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)[定稿]
2017年高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)最全套路
一、短文改錯(cuò)萬(wàn)能公式
1.謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的錯(cuò)誤是歷年考試的重點(diǎn)和熱點(diǎn),常見(jiàn)動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤類(lèi)型有:
①一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)與一般過(guò)去時(shí)錯(cuò)用;
②and前后動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)不一致;
③主謂不一致;
④缺少動(dòng)詞,特別是be動(dòng)詞;
⑤第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)形式錯(cuò)用;
⑥主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)和被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)用。
2.名詞的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤:
單復(fù)數(shù)名詞錯(cuò)用,可數(shù)名詞與不可數(shù)名詞錯(cuò)用。
3.連詞錯(cuò)誤:
連詞包括關(guān)系代詞、副詞,并列連詞and/or/but等。
關(guān)于連詞,一般考查從句關(guān)系:who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。
4.冠詞錯(cuò)誤:
誤用a和an(根據(jù)單詞的第一個(gè)音素來(lái)判定);
誤用a/an和the(固定搭配,或泛指、特指;多冠詞或少冠詞)
5.形容詞和副詞錯(cuò)誤:
系動(dòng)詞后用形容詞(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性動(dòng)詞smell/feel);
詞性的誤用(形容詞修飾名詞;副詞修飾動(dòng)詞、形容詞)。
6.代詞錯(cuò)誤:
代詞的主格和賓格(I/me;he/him;she/her;we/us they/them)錯(cuò)誤;
反身代詞(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用錯(cuò)誤;
代詞的單數(shù)和復(fù)數(shù)使用錯(cuò)誤;
代詞指代錯(cuò)誤;
多代詞或少代詞。
7.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤:
不定式、動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)時(shí);
and連接的不定式或動(dòng)名詞前后不一致(尤其距離較遠(yuǎn)時(shí));
介詞后用動(dòng)名詞形式作賓語(yǔ);
某些動(dòng)詞后要求接動(dòng)名詞或不定式。
8.介詞錯(cuò)誤:
詞組中的介詞誤用;
介詞意思理解偏差;
介詞的多用或少用
二、短文改錯(cuò)解答口訣
動(dòng)詞形,名詞數(shù);
注意形和副;
非謂動(dòng)詞細(xì)辨別;
習(xí)慣用法要記住;
句子成分多分析;
邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注。
1、動(dòng)詞形
主要包括兩類(lèi)錯(cuò)誤:動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤,以及主、謂不一致的錯(cuò)誤。
例如:My favourite sport is football.I was member of our school football team.Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library.(are)
上述兩例分別屬于時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤和主、謂不一致錯(cuò)誤。找出此類(lèi)錯(cuò)誤的關(guān)鍵是樹(shù)立牢固的時(shí)態(tài)概念,注意短文內(nèi)容發(fā)生或存在的時(shí)間,保持時(shí)間概念的一致性。
2、名詞數(shù)
指名詞單、復(fù)數(shù)形式的用法錯(cuò)誤。常表現(xiàn)為將名詞復(fù)數(shù)寫(xiě)成單數(shù)。
例如:?so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject.(subjects)
3、區(qū)分形和副
即區(qū)分形容詞和副詞在句子中的作用和具體用法。這也是高考短文改錯(cuò)的??键c(diǎn)。例如:I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together.(wonderful)Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family.(Unfortunately)
需要注意的是,形容詞多用來(lái)做定、表、補(bǔ)語(yǔ)等,而副詞只能在句子中作狀語(yǔ),修飾動(dòng)詞、形容詞、副詞或整個(gè)句子。第一例中的wonderful作定語(yǔ)修飾time,第二句的Unfortunately作狀語(yǔ)修飾整個(gè)句子。
4、非謂動(dòng)詞細(xì)辨別
這是考查最多的錯(cuò)誤形式之一。主要有分詞和動(dòng)名詞類(lèi)錯(cuò)誤,也包括不定式類(lèi)錯(cuò)誤。
例如:
?in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football.(interested)
Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also ?(playing)
My parents love me? and will do all they can ∧ make sure?(to)
上述二、三例分別是動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ),和不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)。一般的,現(xiàn)在分詞有主動(dòng)態(tài)和進(jìn)行時(shí)的含義,而過(guò)去分詞具有被動(dòng)態(tài)和完成時(shí)的含義,不定式有將來(lái)時(shí)態(tài)的含義。
5、習(xí)慣用法要記住
主要考查習(xí)慣搭配方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)。這也是歷年高考的??键c(diǎn),其錯(cuò)誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種:多詞、少詞和搭配錯(cuò)誤。
例如:It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and?(of)We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ ourselves.(of)
6、句子成分多分析
不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類(lèi);不同的語(yǔ)景要選擇不同的詞語(yǔ)。這些都有待我們對(duì)句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句子成分作細(xì)致的分析,才能找出用詞不當(dāng)?shù)腻e(cuò)誤。
例如:They∧eager to know everything about China and?(were)I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China.(which)
第一例漏掉了謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞were,這是受寒于習(xí)慣的影響而導(dǎo)致的錯(cuò)誤;第二例則是詞類(lèi)與它在句子中的成分不相符,where是副詞,不能作主語(yǔ)。
7、邏輯錯(cuò)誤須關(guān)注
與句子的上、下文不一致,甚至相矛盾,屬于邏輯性錯(cuò)誤。如稱(chēng)謂上的張冠李戴,人名、地名、時(shí)間、方位等方面的錯(cuò)誤,常是這類(lèi)錯(cuò)誤的考查對(duì)象。
例如:The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.(their)First, let me tell you something more about myself.(去掉more)
?no way of setting the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead.(everyone)上述第一例中的主語(yǔ)是Smiths(史密斯夫婦倆),因此后面的his不合邏輯。第二例中的more在這兒表“再”的意思,才開(kāi)始告訴別人,怎么能說(shuō)“再告訴你一些事”?第三例講的是為了解決看電視時(shí)的爭(zhēng)端,“我們”把電視機(jī)賣(mài)了;晚上沒(méi)電視看了,所以與從前一樣,大家又都讀書(shū)了,所以該用everyone。
除了上述錯(cuò)誤類(lèi)型外,??嫉腻e(cuò)誤形式還有:連詞but, and, or和so的用法錯(cuò)誤(可以歸類(lèi)為邏輯錯(cuò)誤),以及冠詞的用法錯(cuò)誤等。
例如:
She was smiling but nodding at me.(and)
It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.(or)
We may be one family and live under a same roof.(the)
三、短文改錯(cuò)參考原則 1.改動(dòng)以最少為原則;2.虛詞以添加或刪除為原則;3.實(shí)詞以改變?cè)~形為原則;4.以保持句子原意為原則;
5.核對(duì)錯(cuò)項(xiàng)時(shí),若的確有一時(shí)難以改出的地方,可以參考所改動(dòng)項(xiàng)是否基本符合“1:1:8”的比例:即多一詞1個(gè),缺詞1個(gè),錯(cuò)詞8個(gè);
6.核對(duì)改正的語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目是否有重復(fù),因?yàn)槎涛母腻e(cuò)往往覆蓋面廣,一般不會(huì)出現(xiàn)重復(fù)考查某個(gè)語(yǔ)法點(diǎn)的現(xiàn)象;
7.核對(duì)答題符號(hào)是否規(guī)范,位置是否準(zhǔn)確,看看有無(wú)遺漏符號(hào),忽略字母大小寫(xiě)和拼寫(xiě)等問(wèn)題。
第五篇:高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)論文
高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)解題策略
摘要:短文改錯(cuò)是高考試題中一個(gè)重要題型。它不僅考查學(xué)生在語(yǔ)法、詞匯、修辭等方面的語(yǔ)言知識(shí)和能力,而且還考查學(xué)生對(duì)信息的認(rèn)知與獲取能力,更重要的是考查學(xué)生能夠判斷、鑒別正誤的能力。這一題型對(duì)很多考生來(lái)說(shuō)是有相當(dāng)難度的,因?yàn)楦腻e(cuò)中的錯(cuò)誤一般都是他們平時(shí)較容易犯的錯(cuò)誤,即他們的軟肋,所以在做這類(lèi)題目的時(shí)候,常常感到無(wú)從下手,或者驚慌失措,結(jié)果胡亂改改就草草了事,結(jié)果連難度系數(shù)并不高的題目也做不出來(lái),知道答案后又后悔不已,但為時(shí)已晚。所以考生應(yīng)該以正確的態(tài)度來(lái)面對(duì)此題。本文就高考英語(yǔ)試題中的短文改錯(cuò)的特點(diǎn),提出解題策略。1.高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)的特點(diǎn)
英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)是現(xiàn)代語(yǔ)言測(cè)試試題中一個(gè)重要的類(lèi)型。它一般是選擇一段或者幾段文字正確、語(yǔ)言地道、題材得當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言材料為母本,按照一個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)淖謹(jǐn)?shù)大體給這篇語(yǔ)言材料分行,在現(xiàn)代語(yǔ)言測(cè)試學(xué)科學(xué)命題理論指導(dǎo)下,對(duì)其中的某些文字進(jìn)行有目的地添加、刪減或錯(cuò)誤改動(dòng),使這段文字的某些行出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)詞、多詞或缺詞的一種情況,讓學(xué)生對(duì)測(cè)試行的文字進(jìn)行判斷或改動(dòng),以恢復(fù)原文正確地道得體的本來(lái)面貌,以此來(lái)對(duì)學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言水平進(jìn)行科學(xué)的測(cè)定。
短文改錯(cuò)屬于綜合考點(diǎn)單技能間接試題特點(diǎn),就是把各類(lèi)考點(diǎn)綜合起來(lái)放在一定篇幅中進(jìn)行考察,對(duì)學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言能力和語(yǔ)篇的能力都有所要求,但更側(cè)重于考察學(xué)生對(duì)語(yǔ)言篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的整體理解和把握的能力,因而屬于檔次較高的題型,能比較準(zhǔn)確地反映學(xué)生的實(shí)際語(yǔ)言水平,也較容易區(qū)分學(xué)生的層次差異。此題型還在辯錯(cuò)、改錯(cuò)中考察到學(xué)生部分產(chǎn)生性的運(yùn)用能力,因而這種題型成為目前測(cè)試準(zhǔn)確性最有效的題型之一。
2.提高高考短文改錯(cuò)能力的方法及策略 2.1靈活運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法知識(shí)
眾所周知,英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言能力包括眾多因素,其中之一是語(yǔ)法知識(shí)。語(yǔ)法知識(shí)是構(gòu)成語(yǔ)言能力的基礎(chǔ)。沒(méi)有系統(tǒng)的語(yǔ)法知識(shí),學(xué)習(xí)者就很難全面、準(zhǔn)確地以口頭或書(shū)面的形式表達(dá)思維或意念。短文改錯(cuò)項(xiàng)目側(cè)重于測(cè)試學(xué)生的運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法知識(shí)的能力,即怎樣運(yùn)用規(guī)范的語(yǔ)言知識(shí)解決具體問(wèn)題的能力。對(duì)于學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō),在平時(shí)要徹底地了解已學(xué)過(guò)的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)和概念,要學(xué)會(huì)“舉一反三”,提高語(yǔ)言的準(zhǔn)確性、邏輯性。2.2擴(kuò)大詞匯量、掌握詞語(yǔ)固定搭配
詞匯與搭配是高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)項(xiàng)目的另一測(cè)試點(diǎn),其測(cè)試面含蓋各類(lèi)詞性的詞,同時(shí)側(cè)重考核他們的搭配與用法。短文改錯(cuò)對(duì)詞匯的考核有些是語(yǔ)意的,有些是結(jié)構(gòu)上的。詞匯的積累不是一朝一夕即可完成,它需要在平時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中逐步積累,積少成多;了解詞的不同搭配在不同語(yǔ)境中的用法,同義詞之間的不同用法,學(xué)會(huì)根據(jù)上下文來(lái)判斷單詞與短語(yǔ)的含義,上下文內(nèi)容的連貫以及邏輯關(guān)系的順暢等。因此,對(duì)于學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō),平時(shí)自己在學(xué)習(xí)中要注意擴(kuò)大、鞏固已有的詞匯量;同時(shí),在學(xué)習(xí)、掌握詞匯的過(guò)程中,特別要注意提高自己靈活運(yùn)用詞匯的能力。2.3運(yùn)用語(yǔ)篇知識(shí) 短文改錯(cuò)主要是考察對(duì)短文宏觀上的把握與微觀上的語(yǔ)言基本功。除了考查語(yǔ)法與詞匯,也考查對(duì)語(yǔ)言整體內(nèi)容的理解和運(yùn)用。此題之所以采用短文改錯(cuò)的形式,就是強(qiáng)調(diào)對(duì)語(yǔ)言知識(shí)(語(yǔ)法與詞匯)在具體語(yǔ)境或上下文中使用的能力。因此在歷年的考題中,很大一部分并不只是限于孤立的詞組或語(yǔ)法,而是要求考生從篇章的角度,從上下文,從句子與句子之間,從語(yǔ)段與語(yǔ)段之間的邏輯關(guān)系與語(yǔ)意關(guān)系去判斷正誤。
要做到從篇章的角度把握全局,首先要學(xué)會(huì)利用首段或段首句最大限度的獲取信息。文章的開(kāi)頭往往開(kāi)宗明義,點(diǎn)明主題。因此利用段首句提供的信息挖掘文章的思路,尋找文章的脈絡(luò)和線索。其次理清文章結(jié)構(gòu),找出前后的邏輯關(guān)系及銜接連詞等。最后聯(lián)系上下文,尋找相關(guān)線索,確定有無(wú)語(yǔ)義上的錯(cuò)誤。在歷年的考試中,學(xué)生對(duì)這類(lèi)錯(cuò)誤的判斷準(zhǔn)確率相對(duì)較低。因此,學(xué)生平時(shí)要加強(qiáng)對(duì)篇章的理解能力的訓(xùn)練,了解、熟悉篇章結(jié)構(gòu)的特點(diǎn):語(yǔ)段內(nèi)句子之間的關(guān)系、語(yǔ)段之間的關(guān)系;它們的類(lèi)別;各種不同關(guān)系的表示法等等。只有在此基礎(chǔ)上,學(xué)生才能靈活正確地使用語(yǔ)言知識(shí),做到準(zhǔn)確答題。2.4運(yùn)用文化背景知識(shí)
做短文改錯(cuò)題時(shí),有時(shí)文章中提供的信息還不夠,這就要求學(xué)生把儲(chǔ)存在大腦里的一般知識(shí)信息結(jié)合起來(lái)考慮,找出錯(cuò)誤并加以改正。根據(jù)Widdowson(1983)提到的理解全過(guò)程,“理解實(shí)質(zhì)上是背景知識(shí)、語(yǔ)境和語(yǔ)言知識(shí)本身綜合作用的產(chǎn)物,缺少任何一部分,理解將是失敗或不完整的?!?2.5采用正確的解題技巧
2.5.1頭腦冷靜,通讀全文掌握中心意思
短文改錯(cuò)題是一個(gè)較綜合和較有難度的題型,但不是無(wú)法攻克,所以做這類(lèi)題時(shí)首先要保持冷靜,運(yùn)用自己所儲(chǔ)備的相關(guān)知識(shí),理性分析。接下來(lái)不要拿起來(lái)就改,首先應(yīng)該對(duì)文章有個(gè)整體了解,可以先迅速通讀全文,在正確理解或大致正確理解甚至猜想原文的前提下,使我們對(duì)全文在宏觀上有一個(gè)初步的把握,這對(duì)判斷整體的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)都很重要。因?yàn)槎涛氖莻€(gè)整體,只了解孤立的詞句是不夠的,需要從篇章的角度對(duì)句子、段落進(jìn)行深層次。透徹的理解,掌握上下文的語(yǔ)境,把局部含義與主旨大意結(jié)合起來(lái)判斷,就能提高準(zhǔn)確性。2.5.2分句閱讀,利用語(yǔ)法等知識(shí)逐行找錯(cuò)
做完上述工作后,就要進(jìn)入逐行改錯(cuò)階段。仔細(xì)分析每一個(gè)句子,而不是每一行。語(yǔ)言是以句子而不是以行為完整的意義單位的,所以解題時(shí),要上下兼顧,切不可顧此失彼。在整句理解的基礎(chǔ)上,逐行進(jìn)行語(yǔ)法和行文邏輯錯(cuò)誤分析。既要看清詞或句子,更要理清整體的邏輯關(guān)系。綜合運(yùn)用所學(xué)語(yǔ)言知識(shí),根據(jù)各行不同的錯(cuò)誤情況分別進(jìn)行答題。如果碰到哪一行的錯(cuò)誤沒(méi)找出來(lái),可暫時(shí)不做,接著做下一行,全部做完后,再回頭做,可能就會(huì)容易些。而且有時(shí)后面的文章會(huì)給出有用的信息。特別要注意兩方面:一是不能改變文中句子本身的意義,還要注意錯(cuò)誤是否出現(xiàn)在行首或尾,因?yàn)檫@兩處的錯(cuò)誤往往不易被察覺(jué)。
2.5.3最后通讀,驗(yàn)證答案 改后復(fù)讀有助于查漏補(bǔ)缺,糾正失誤,減少差錯(cuò)。通過(guò)復(fù)讀,看看全文是否通暢,行文邏輯是否合理,文章結(jié)構(gòu)或句式結(jié)構(gòu)是否完整,尤其要對(duì)初改時(shí)感覺(jué)不順利的地方多加以推敲。還要檢查是否按照考試要求使用所規(guī)定的符號(hào)刪除、增添或修改,避免非水平性失分。3.結(jié)語(yǔ)
綜上所述,英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)是對(duì)語(yǔ)言知識(shí)全面的考查。對(duì)詞匯,語(yǔ)法與篇章理解能力都有較高的要求,建議考生在學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)不能一知半解,似是而非,對(duì)于知識(shí)的掌握必須扎實(shí)準(zhǔn)確。而且還要多進(jìn)行改錯(cuò)練習(xí)??梢酝ㄟ^(guò)看其他同學(xué)的習(xí)作,欣賞的同時(shí)也有意識(shí)地把該習(xí)作進(jìn)行一下“改錯(cuò)”,還可多進(jìn)行單句改錯(cuò)練習(xí),但每次練習(xí)都要遵照正確的方法和步驟,逐漸體會(huì)和把握這一題型的規(guī)律,久而久之就能容易地發(fā)現(xiàn)和改正語(yǔ)病。除此之外,還要加強(qiáng)閱讀方面的訓(xùn)練。閱讀是理解的先決條件,理解是判斷正誤的依據(jù),而判斷又是改錯(cuò)的先決條件。因此要準(zhǔn)確找出文章中的錯(cuò)誤,必須首先著眼閱讀,加強(qiáng)閱讀。
高考英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò)解題策略
五大連池風(fēng)景區(qū)高級(jí)中學(xué)
佟玲