第一篇：初中英語寫作

初中英語作文高分秘訣

1.動(dòng)筆之前，認(rèn)真審題

《中考考試說明》指出，書面表達(dá)要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認(rèn)真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動(dòng)筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。

2.圍繞中心，擬定提綱

書面表達(dá)評(píng)分原則有四條：

（1）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；

（2）運(yùn)用詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量；

（3）運(yùn)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性；

（4）上下文的連貫性。

由此可見，要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出。根據(jù)短文的中心思想考慮如何開頭、展開和結(jié)尾，設(shè)想幾個(gè)承上啟下的連詞，將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語草草記下，形成提綱，寫時(shí)切忌結(jié)構(gòu)分散，廢話連篇，嚴(yán)重跑題。書面表達(dá)，內(nèi)容廣泛，題材多樣，要弄清考題的要求是寫人、敘事、介紹、評(píng)論、圖表、書信、日記、通知、便條還是看圖作文或改寫縮寫。如果是日記，要寫清年、月、日和天氣情況；如果是書信，則要注意書信的格式，注意短文字?jǐn)?shù)不要低于或超過規(guī)定的字?jǐn)?shù)太多。

3.語言通順，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確

(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。

(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型?？蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。

(3)．注意語法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。

1)語態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。

2)主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。

3)注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4)注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5)注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)特別注意漢英的不同，例如：

漢語英語

A.句號(hào)。.B.省略號(hào)???

C.頓號(hào)、無

(4)描寫人物時(shí)，要生動(dòng)具體，例如：

1)外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。

2)服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。

3)內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。

4)感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。

5)動(dòng)作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時(shí)間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過渡詞進(jìn)行

加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法：

1)表示并列關(guān)系的過渡詞：and, as well as, or ?

2)表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過渡詞：but, yet, however ?

3)表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的過渡詞：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, later, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that ?

4)表示空間關(guān)系的過渡詞：near(to), far(from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside ?

5)表示比較關(guān)系的過渡詞：in the same way, just like, just as ?

6)表示對(duì)照關(guān)系的過渡詞：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though ?

7)表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的過渡詞： also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again ?

8)表示因果關(guān)系的過渡詞：because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result?

9)表示解釋說明的過渡詞：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually ?

10)表示強(qiáng)調(diào)的過渡詞：in fact, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important ?

11)表示目的的過渡詞：for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, ?

12)表示列舉的過渡詞：for example , such as ?

13)表示總結(jié)性的過渡詞：in conclusion, finally, at last, in brief, as has been stated, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking ?

4.不會(huì)表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑

中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò)，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡?？傊?，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。

(1)迂回而行

當(dāng)漢語詞義不會(huì)用英語表達(dá)時(shí)，可以想一個(gè)與這個(gè)漢語詞義相似的幾種詞義。擴(kuò)展思路，然后從英語中找出一個(gè)與其詞義相近的代替。這樣可有異曲同工之妙。

(2)小詞大用

漢語中有些語意看來很復(fù)雜很文雅，但在英語中可用一些常用詞表達(dá)。下面這些詞可能在你的書面表達(dá)中很有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。

(3)借花獻(xiàn)佛

有時(shí)書面表達(dá)中需要的單詞或詞組或許在試卷中的其他地方出現(xiàn)。因?yàn)閯倓傋鲞^題，記憶猶新，那么就可信手拈來，為我所用。

5.錦上添花，量力而行

如果你還有時(shí)間和精力，想把書面表達(dá)寫得更好，那么，請(qǐng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

(1)句型多樣化，不要I（We）??到底，使人覺得乏味。

(2)適當(dāng)使用一些并列句或主從復(fù)合句。

(3)進(jìn)一步描繪人或事物時(shí)，適當(dāng)使用定語從句。

(4)適當(dāng)使用分詞或分詞短語，烘托謂語動(dòng)詞。

(5)偶爾使用一下倒裝句，增加新鮮感。

(6)適當(dāng)調(diào)換一下狀語在句子中的位置，使句子不雷同。

(7)上下句子緊接時(shí)，其中完全相同的成分可以省略，以節(jié)省篇幅。

6.書寫工整，卷面整潔

字跡要清晰，讓閱卷人看得清楚，不可字跡潦草，難以辨認(rèn)，要保持卷面的整潔。

7.寫完之后，勿忘檢查

中考作文時(shí)，由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此，改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手：

(1)格式是否有錯(cuò)。

(2)拼寫有無錯(cuò)誤。

(3)語言是否用錯(cuò)。

(4)時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。

(5)標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。

(6)人稱是否用錯(cuò)。

【注意】此時(shí)不宜在卷面上作較大的改動(dòng)，以免顧此失彼，影響全局。

總之，只要平時(shí)同學(xué)們多練習(xí)寫作并有意運(yùn)用上述方法和技巧，合理分配時(shí)間，在中考時(shí)一定能寫出高質(zhì)量的作文，得到令人滿意的考分。

初中英語寫作技巧

書面表達(dá)，首先要抓住所給的提示，然后運(yùn)用所學(xué)詞匯、語法及句型，避繁就簡，簡明表達(dá)要講的內(nèi)容。

那么，如何才能做好英語寫作題呢?這里介紹五個(gè)要訣以供參考。

1.緊扣中心;2.意思連貫;3.富于變化;4.注意時(shí)態(tài);

5.不“生造”句子。

書面表達(dá)是一項(xiàng)能夠充分考查學(xué)生語言綜合運(yùn)用能力的題型，一般來說，書面表達(dá)采取情景作文和控制作文兩種形式。情景作文多為看圖填詞、看圖寫話、看圖作文等形式，后者指根據(jù)所給條件進(jìn)行寫作的形式。

以上兩種書面表達(dá)形式，都不同于自由寫作，都不允許同學(xué)們隨意發(fā)揮，更不許逐詞逐句地翻譯提示，而是要求考生抓住信息大意，用自己所學(xué)的、熟悉的語言進(jìn)行表達(dá)。所以，無論哪一種書面表達(dá)形式，都要求做到以下幾點(diǎn)：

1.緊扣題目，準(zhǔn)確、全面地表達(dá)出要點(diǎn)中規(guī)定的全部信息和內(nèi)容，不得遺漏;

2.表達(dá)正確，意思連貫，過渡自然;

3.格式正確，書寫規(guī)范，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。

做好“書面表達(dá)”這道題，應(yīng)該從以下幾方面入手：

一、充分準(zhǔn)備，打好基礎(chǔ)

為了提高書面表達(dá)水平，平時(shí)應(yīng)加強(qiáng)閱讀，應(yīng)背誦一些句型、段落、甚至短文。只要讀得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下筆成文。此外，還要了解英文寫作方面的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，掌握常用文體的寫作方法。其實(shí)，用英文寫信、記日記等都是學(xué)生力所能及且行之有效的練習(xí)寫作的好方法。

二、仔細(xì)審題，明確要求

對(duì)題目所提供的信息要認(rèn)真分析，明確要求，做到心中有數(shù)。要對(duì)所提供的信息加以分析、整理，使之更加具體化、條理化，為開始動(dòng)筆做好準(zhǔn)備工作，還要搞清題目的要求，以

便根據(jù)不同的題材、體裁，寫出不同格式，風(fēng)格各異的文章。此外，還要注意人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、地點(diǎn)等信息，避免出錯(cuò)。

三、抓住重點(diǎn)，尋求思路

根據(jù)題目所提供的信息，草擬提綱，尋求邏輯次序，確定如何下手。否則，語無倫次的文章將不會(huì)被人接受，也不可能得到高分。

四、遣詞造句，表達(dá)規(guī)范

用詞要適當(dāng)，不可逐句把提示漢譯英，亦不可生拼硬湊，不要硬拿英語單詞到中文句子里去對(duì)號(hào)，否則寫出中文式英語，鬧出笑話。一般來講，寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)盡量選出你有把握的詞，盡量使用短句(簡單句)。如果有的單詞不會(huì)寫，有的思想不會(huì)用英語表達(dá)，你可以設(shè)法繞開，最好找一個(gè)同義詞、同義句，或近義詞、詞組短語來代替。要正確使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，如 and，or，but，so，because，since 等，以便行文自然流暢。除此之外，寫作時(shí)還要注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的各種句式的交替作用，使文章顯得得體，表達(dá)流暢。

五、修改潤色，錦上添花

作文寫完之后，應(yīng)注意檢查修改，修改時(shí)先從全局修改。首先要檢查主題是否明確，表達(dá)方式是否恰當(dāng)，接下來檢查所寫內(nèi)容是否切題，該交待的內(nèi)容是否交待了，最后檢查所用時(shí)態(tài)、人稱是否符合要求，最后是否一致。

局部修改，也就是段落、句子水平上的修改。作局部修改時(shí)，要檢查段落是否完整，句子表達(dá)是否準(zhǔn)確，語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、移行、大小寫等方面是否有誤。

另外，值得一提的是，考生修改時(shí)，一定要注意文章長短(詞數(shù))是否達(dá)到了要求。為了便于辨認(rèn)，修改好后，還要認(rèn)真謄寫一遍，英語謄寫的基本要點(diǎn)如下:

1.四周應(yīng)留空。

2.標(biāo)題應(yīng)寫在第一行的中央。文章與標(biāo)題間空 2-3 行，除介詞、連詞、冠詞外，標(biāo)題中每一個(gè)實(shí)詞的第一個(gè)字母均應(yīng)大寫，但如果第一個(gè)單詞是介詞、連詞等，這個(gè)詞的第一個(gè)字母仍應(yīng)大寫。

3.段與段之間一般不空行，但每段第一行應(yīng)縮進(jìn) 4-5 個(gè)字母所占的位置。

4.書寫工整、規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞間距要一致，盡量避免移行。

5.要?jiǎng)h掉一個(gè)詞時(shí)，用一條粗橫線劃掉，不要用括號(hào)括起來。

謄寫完后，還應(yīng)仔細(xì)校閱 1-2 遍。校閱要逐詞逐句進(jìn)行，注意檢查語法、拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、大小寫等方面的錯(cuò)誤。校閱是自檢的最后一關(guān)，應(yīng)嚴(yán)肅認(rèn)真的進(jìn)行，盡可能地消滅一切差錯(cuò)，增強(qiáng)文章的效果。

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范文：一次體育課 A PE Lesson

下面是某節(jié)體育課的有關(guān)情況，請(qǐng)你據(jù)此寫一篇日記。

1．時(shí)間：5月28日，星期一，下午。

2．天氣：陰。

3．項(xiàng)目：跳遠(yuǎn)（jump）。

4．過程：

（1）打上課鈴時(shí)就在操場集合；

（2）做準(zhǔn)備活動(dòng)（warming—upexercises）；

（3）聽老師講解并示范；

（4）我因心情緊張而失敗；

（5）不灰心，反復(fù)練習(xí)；

（6）終于跳過了3米。

5．體會(huì)：只要有恒心（perseverance）就一定能成功。

注意：

1．內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不能逐點(diǎn)翻譯。

2．日記格式要正確。

3．詞數(shù)100左右。

A PE Lesson

May 28th Monday Cloudy

This afternoon we had a PE lesson.Our teacher taught us to practise the long jump.When the bell rang，we gathered on the playground.After warming-up exercises，the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it.Then we followed the teacher and practised one after another.Soon came my turn，but I felt a hit nervous.Though I failed the first time，yet I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practising.At last I was able to jump over 3 meters.From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance.范文：寫給母親的感謝信

My dearest Mother，The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter.I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me.This day，I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home.I know I will watch myself，so don't worry about me.I am doing very well on my study.My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice.Though I can't be at home，I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.Love，Your son

Dear mother ：

I am writing to express my deepest thanks to you in Mother's Day，dear mother，you devote all of your energy and blood to our.you do not have any complaint about my brother and i.You love our though various different approaches such as study，work and life，consquently，our held on the belief that

the mother is only lover.please accept our appreciate again

I hope that you have happiness everyday.Mum：

Such is sons' nature，I really do not know how to express my thanks to you.However，I can imagine，on the day 18 years ago，when you gave birth to me，what a complex feeling you had.In the past few years，every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me，then in the afternoon，you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day’s hardwork.Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon，like a bird is leaving its parents.Nevertheless，your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and——I love you mum！

范文：介紹校內(nèi)配套設(shè)施

I am very gladto showyou around.As you can see，my school is very small.It hasonly one building which is built like a ring.It has four floors in all.On the'first floor are the offices of leaders.The classrooms and the offices of teachers are on the other three floors.On the second floor，there is a reading room.In front of the building is the playground.

第二篇：初中英語寫作

中學(xué)英語寫作教學(xué)：寫作時(shí)應(yīng)思考的是 What do you want to write ? What do you want to say to readers ?

將學(xué)生的現(xiàn)實(shí)需要與寫作聯(lián)系起來讓學(xué)生產(chǎn)生寫作的愿望。所謂現(xiàn)實(shí)需要就是指幫學(xué)生運(yùn)用寫作解決生活中的實(shí)際問題，例如老師在學(xué)期之初明確規(guī)定：學(xué)生生病必須用英文寫請(qǐng)假條。逐漸地，這種需要就會(huì)轉(zhuǎn)換成對(duì)寫作的一種自覺愿望。初中英語寫作教學(xué)指導(dǎo)重點(diǎn)應(yīng)放在“模仿性寫作”，在初三的后期可指導(dǎo)學(xué)生進(jìn)行“創(chuàng)造性寫作”，所謂創(chuàng)造性寫作就是在老師的啟發(fā)之下，讓學(xué)生運(yùn)用發(fā)散思維、批判性思維寫出有新意的短文。模仿性寫作注重幫助學(xué)生掌握寫作的題材和內(nèi)容，創(chuàng)造性寫作要求作者在寫作中表達(dá)自己的新思維。嚴(yán)格來講，初中英語寫作不是真正意義上的寫作，是“準(zhǔn)寫作”，尤其在初中和高中的早期階段，這種寫作應(yīng)該以模仿為主，在模仿的基礎(chǔ)上，訓(xùn)練學(xué)生遣詞組句、組句成篇的能力，以及訓(xùn)練學(xué)生寫作的思維能力。

1.初一寫作

初一寫作是通過范文閱讀仿寫的形式來體現(xiàn)，即讀格式化范文，如海報(bào)、問候卡、邀請(qǐng)卡等來參照寫作。而描述性指讓學(xué)生使用片語、單句去描述規(guī)定的圖片，并通過圖片的系列性來實(shí)現(xiàn)單句間的組合排列。但初一寫作還不是語篇寫作，寫作的基本目的是斟詞酌句，為接近意義上的寫作進(jìn)行前期的基本訓(xùn)練。這種訓(xùn)練不是機(jī)械的，而是納入一定的圖片設(shè)定的語境中來進(jìn)行。

2.初二寫作：

初二寫作是老師引導(dǎo)下寫簡單話題作文，通過小組內(nèi)討論決定寫作提綱，共同進(jìn)行接力式寫作并共同修改訂正。初二寫作只是初步培養(yǎng)學(xué)生簡單的語篇寫作能力，此時(shí)的寫作不具有創(chuàng)作性，而是以模仿為主，因此讀與寫、聽與寫技能之間的配合轉(zhuǎn)換尤為重要。

3.初三寫作：

初三英語寫作應(yīng)讓學(xué)生獨(dú)立地去經(jīng)歷一個(gè)較為完整的寫作過程，從素材的收集到獨(dú)立的起草，老師的指導(dǎo)只是在體現(xiàn)在短文的修改階段。此時(shí)，寫作的流暢性還不能完全通過“意連”來實(shí)現(xiàn)，因此指導(dǎo)學(xué)生在寫作中運(yùn)用連接詞(如 but，however，therefore，furthermore，so，still 等)來體現(xiàn)語篇寫作中的“形連”應(yīng)該予以重視。初三語篇寫作的創(chuàng)作性體現(xiàn)在以下三方面：(1)以應(yīng)用文體為中心的練筆創(chuàng)作，如書信文體、日記文體、海報(bào)通知等招貼文體；(2)表示邏輯關(guān)系的簡單說明文體和表示時(shí)空人物關(guān)系的記敘文體的寫作練習(xí)；

(3)以圖示和表格為中心的描述性語段寫作練習(xí)，如用語言解釋一則廣告，用語言解釋一幅圖，用語言解釋一則用藥須知等。通過初三學(xué)段的寫作來訓(xùn)練學(xué)生的獨(dú)立思考能力、集合思維和發(fā)散思維能力、創(chuàng)新思維能力、筆頭語言的運(yùn)用表達(dá)能力和對(duì)自己及他人寫作成果的欣賞能力

第三篇：初中英語寫作

英語寫作25個(gè)經(jīng)典句型

一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名詞 +(that)+ 主詞 + have ever + seen

(known/heard/had/read, etc)

~~~ the most + 形容詞 + 名詞 +(that)+ 主詞 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)

例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.海倫是我所看過最美麗的女孩。

Mr.Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.張老師是我曾經(jīng)遇到最仁慈的教師。

二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容詞 + than to + V例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.沒有比接受教育更重要的事。

三、There is no denying that + S + V...（不可否認(rèn)的...）

例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad toworse.不可否認(rèn)的，我們的生活品質(zhì)已經(jīng)每況愈下。

四、There is no doubt that + 句子~~（毫無疑問的...）

例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.毫無疑問的我們的教育制度令人不滿意。

五、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（...的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是...）

例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won’t create(produce)any pollution.使用太陽能的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是它不會(huì)制造任何污染。

六、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（...的原因是...）

例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air./ The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.我們必須種樹的原因是它們能供應(yīng)我們新鮮的空氣。

七、So + 形容詞 + be + 主詞 + that + 句子（如此...以致于...）

例句：So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it.時(shí)間是如此珍貴，我們經(jīng)不起浪費(fèi)它。

八、Adj + as + Subject（主詞）+ be, S + V~~~（雖然...）

例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.{by no means = in no way = on no account 一點(diǎn)也不}

雖然我們的國家富有，我們的生活品質(zhì)絕對(duì)令人不滿意。

九、The + ~er + S + V,~~~the + ~er + S + V ~~~

The + more + Adj + S + V,~~~the + more + Adj + S + V~~~（愈...愈...）

例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.你愈努力，你愈進(jìn)步。

The more books we read, the more learned we become.我們書讀愈多，我們愈有學(xué)問。

十、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~（借著...，..能夠..）

例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.借著做運(yùn)動(dòng)，我們能夠始終保持健康。

十一、It is time +to do sth.（該是...的時(shí)候了）

例句：It is timeto solve the traffic problems.該是解決交通問題的時(shí)候了。

十二、That is the reason why ~~~（那就是...的原因）

例句：Summer is sultry.That is the reason why I don’t like it.夏天很燠熱。那就是我不喜歡它的原因。

十三、For the past+ 時(shí)間，S + 現(xiàn)在完成式...（過去...年來，...一直...）

例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.過去兩年來，我一直忙著準(zhǔn)備考試。

十四、Since + S + 過去式，S + 現(xiàn)在完成式。

例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自從他上高中，他一直很用功。

十五、It pays to + V ~~~（...是值得的。）

例句：It pays to help others.幫助別人是值得的。

十六、be based on（以...為基礎(chǔ)）

例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony.社會(huì)的進(jìn)步是以和諧為基礎(chǔ)的。

十七、Spare no effort to + V（不遺余力的）

例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.我們應(yīng)該不遺余力的美化我們的環(huán)境。

初中英語重要句型：初中英語寫作中常見的十二種句型

句型1：There＋be ＋主語＋地點(diǎn)狀語／時(shí)間狀語

There's a boat in the river．河里有條船。

There are seven days in a week．一周有七天。

句型2：What's wrong with＋sb．／sth．？

What's wrong with you？你怎么啦？

What's wrong with your watch？你的手表有什么毛??？

句型3：How do you like．．．？

How do you like China？你覺得中國怎么樣？

句型4：What do you lit．．．？

What do you lit China？你喜歡中國的什么？

句型5：had better（not）＋動(dòng)詞原形

You'd better ask that policeman over there．你最好去問問那邊的那個(gè)警察。

句型6：How＋adj．／adv．＋主語＋謂語！

What a／an＋adj．＋n．＋主語＋謂語！

How cold it is today！今天多冷啊！

What a fine picture it is！多美的一幅圖畫呀！

句型7：Thank＋sb．＋for（doing）sth．

Than for coming to see me．感謝你來看我。

句型8：So＋be／情態(tài)動(dòng)詞／助動(dòng)詞＋主語

He is a student．So am I．他是一個(gè)學(xué)生，我也是。

句型9：．．．not．．．until．．．

He didn't have supper until his parents came back．直到他的父母回來他才吃飯。句型10：比較級(jí)＋and＋比較級(jí)

The baby cried harder and harder．那孩子哭得越來越厲害。

句型11：the ＋比較級(jí)，the ＋比較級(jí)

The more one has，the more one wants．越有越貪。

句型12：．．．a(chǎn)s＋adj．／adv．＋as．．．

．．not as（so）＋adj．／adv．＋as．．．

Do you think that art is as important as music？你認(rèn)為藝術(shù)和音樂一樣重要嗎？

Last Sunday the weather was not so wet as it is today．上個(gè)星期天的天氣不如今天的天氣潮濕。

句型13：more／less＋adj．＋than．．．

I think English is more useful than Japanese．我認(rèn)為英語比日語有用。

I think art is less important than music．我認(rèn)為藝術(shù)不如音樂重要。

句型14：stop．．．from doing sth．

The Great Green Wall will stop the wind from blowing the earth away．綠色長城將阻擋風(fēng)吹走土壤。

句型15：both．．．a(chǎn)nd．．．

Both you and I are students．我和你都是學(xué)生。

中考英語作文常用過渡詞

1? by this time 此時(shí)at the same time同時(shí)after a while過了一會(huì)兒

in addition/besides/what’s more此外

by the way順便提一句for example/for instance例如such as正如

in fact 事實(shí)上in other words 換句話說

at last/ finally最后as a result結(jié)果in a word總之

2?（1）表示選擇or；either…or；otherwise否則；rather than；whether…or not；not…but

（2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折but但 是；although雖然；yet然而；however然而；

（3）表示過渡by the way順便提一下

（4）表示順序at first/ first（of all）/ firstly/above all to start/begin with 首先；second / secondly第二；next接著；later后來；soon(shortly)after之后不久，在……之后不久；since then從那時(shí)起；at last / finally/in the end最后,from now on從現(xiàn)在起；in the meanwhile(meantime)在此期間，與此同時(shí)

（5）表示因果關(guān)系

because / as / since / for因?yàn)椋?because of this由于這一原因； thanks to多虧；as a result of由于……的結(jié)果；if so倘若如此；then那么；therefore因此；so所以；

（6）表示結(jié)論或摘要

in short 總之,in a word簡言之，總之；

周知

as a result結(jié)果it is well-known that / as we all know眾所

第四篇：初中英語寫作

1． 開頭萬能公式一：名人名言

有人問了，“我沒有記住名言，怎么辦？尤其是英語名言？”，很好辦：編！

原理：我們看到的東西很多都是創(chuàng)造出來的，包括我們欣賞的文章也是，所以盡管編，但是一定要聽起來很有道理呦！而且沒準(zhǔn)將來我們就是名人呢！對(duì)吧？

經(jīng)典句型：

A proberb says, “ You are only young once.”（適用于已記住的名言）

It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（適用于自編名言）更多經(jīng)典句型：

As everyone knows, No one can deny that?

2． 開頭萬能公式二：數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)

原理：要想更有說服力，就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來說明。

原則上在議論文當(dāng)中十不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字的，可是在考試的時(shí)候哪管那三七二十一，但編無妨，只要我有東西寫就萬事大吉了。所以不妨試用下面的句型：

According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.看起來這個(gè)數(shù)字文鄒鄒的，其實(shí)都是編造出來的，下面隨便幾個(gè)題目我們都可以這樣編造： Honesty

根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，大學(xué)生向老師請(qǐng)假的理由當(dāng)中78%都是假的。

Travel by Bike

根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，85%的人在近距離旅行的時(shí)候首選的交通工具是自行車。Youth

根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，在某個(gè)大學(xué)，學(xué)生的課余時(shí)間的70%都是在休閑娛樂。Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work?

根據(jù)最近的一項(xiàng)統(tǒng)計(jì)調(diào)查顯示，98%的人同意每周五天工作日。

更多句型：

A recent statistics shows that ?

寫作絕招結(jié)尾萬能公式：

1． 結(jié)尾萬能公式一：如此結(jié)論

說完了，畢竟要?dú)w納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長篇大論，到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開小差，等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說結(jié)束語。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子： Obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過渡短語：to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus更多句型：Thus, it can be concluded that?, Therefore, we can find that?

2． 結(jié)尾萬能公式二：如此建議

如果說“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經(jīng)典，因?yàn)榭脊俦緛斫?jīng)常考這個(gè)句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會(huì)怎么想呢？

更多句型：Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.寫作絕招 寫作的“七項(xiàng)基本原則”：

一、長 短 句原則工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人！寫一個(gè)短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：

Asa creature, I eat;as a man, I read.Although one action is to meet theprimary need

of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar.如此可見，長短句結(jié)合，抑揚(yáng)頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！

強(qiáng)烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長的句群形式，定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結(jié)尾一般用一長一短就可以了。

二、主 題 句原則國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無首”之感！相信各位讀過一些破爛文學(xué)，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi)，結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個(gè)主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險(xiǎn)型）或者結(jié)尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會(huì)平安無事！

特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的！

To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）.Without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.三、一 二 三原則

領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)? 如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚?？脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。1）first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）

2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）

3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）

4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，原因：俗）

5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）

6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）

7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強(qiáng)烈推薦）

8）most important of all, moreover, finally

9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）

10）for one thing, for another thing（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）

建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時(shí)說話的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚！

四、短語優(yōu)先原則寫作時(shí)，尤其是在考試時(shí)，如果使用短語，有兩個(gè)好處：其

一、用短語會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn)，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語，必然會(huì)看你低一等。相反，如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)—精彩的短語，那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。其

二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路，只有湊字?jǐn)?shù)，怎么辦？用短語是一個(gè)辦法！比如：

I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達(dá)：I cannot put up with it.I want it.可以用短語表達(dá)：I am looking forward to it.這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加，表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。

五、多實(shí)少虛原則原因很簡單，寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該之說nice這樣空洞的詞，應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital 之類的形象詞。再比如： 走出房間，general的詞是：walk out of the room

但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說：slip out of the room

小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說：sail out of the room

小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說：dance out of the room

老人走出房間應(yīng)該說：stagger out of the room

所以多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞，文章將會(huì)大放異彩！

六、多變句式原則1）加法（串聯(lián)）

都希望寫下很長的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫長句的方法就

是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and, 但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說：I enjor music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式：

Not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.其它的短語可以用： besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover

2）轉(zhuǎn)折（拐彎抹角）批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題，再說缺點(diǎn)，這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn)，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說話的時(shí)候，只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來點(diǎn)廢話，注意二者之間用個(gè)專這次就夠了。

The car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin, but it was warm.更多的短語：despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding

3）因果（so, so, so）昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩，然后我主動(dòng)搭訕，然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d，然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了，然后我們成為了朋友?可見，講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系！The snow began to fall, so we went home.更多短語：then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that

4）失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）

有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個(gè)樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子，就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語從句，表語從句，賓語從句的變形。

舉例：This is what I can do.Whether he can go with us or not is not sure.同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分：

When to go, Why he goes away?

5）附加（多此一舉）如果有了老婆，總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況，當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候，她會(huì)插一句說，我昨天見過他；或者說，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。

The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I don’t enjoy that book you are reading.Mr liu, our oral English teacher, is easy-going.其實(shí)很簡單，同位語--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成；定語從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中，但是whom or that 關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。

6）排比（排山倒海句）文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句，一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句，一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式，一個(gè)個(gè)地詞，一個(gè)個(gè)的短語，如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢！

Whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（氣勢恢宏）

要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可！

七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則既然十挑戰(zhàn)極限，必然是比較難的，但是并非不可攀！

原理：在學(xué)生的文章中，很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子，其實(shí)也很簡單，只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì)，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，分詞要求主語一致，而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如：The weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the Western Hills.Africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of China.如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！

寫作絕招文章主體段落三大殺手锏：

一、舉實(shí)例思維短路，舉實(shí)例！提出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，舉實(shí)例！提出一個(gè)方案，舉實(shí)例！而且者也是我們揭示一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)最好的方式，任何情況下，只要我們無法繼續(xù)文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！

Inorder to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted everypossible stimulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light,colours, cartoon films and human performance.For instance, toadvertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress tosit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fimehim or her.rast

更多句型：To take ? as an example, One example is?, Another example is?, for example

二、做比較方法：寫完一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，比較與之相似的；又寫完一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，再比較與之相反的； 世界上沒有同樣的指紋，沒有相同的樹葉，文章亦同，只有通過比較，你才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(diǎn)（through comparison）和不同點(diǎn)（through contrast）。下面是一些短語： 相似的比較： in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner

相反的比較： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with ?, ?

這個(gè)對(duì) compare and contrast 題型很有用

三、換言之沒話說了，可以換一句話再說，讓你的文章在多一些字，或者文鄒鄒地說，是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點(diǎn)。實(shí)際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)！下面的句子實(shí)際上就三個(gè)字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say, I love you.I am wild about you.In other words, I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我們舉過的例子：I cannot bear it.可以用短語表達(dá)：I cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說：I cannot bear it.That is to say, I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短語：in more difficult language, in simpler

初中英語提示性作文“六步走”

提示性作文，即題干統(tǒng)一要求學(xué)生根據(jù)漢語意思和英語提示詞寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。在分析2005-2011年中考試卷寫作部分時(shí)不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，除2010年考的不是提示性作文，其它的均為關(guān)鍵字造句→成文型作文。2011年各城區(qū)的模擬題，包括海淀、東城、崇文、朝陽一模都考到了“關(guān)鍵字造句→成文型”的作文，所以需要引起廣大考生的足夠重視。

然而，學(xué)生在面對(duì)這種類型的作文時(shí)通常感覺摸不著頭腦，不知如何下筆。但事實(shí)上只要大家記住我給提示性作文新的稱謂，即“關(guān)鍵字造句→成文型作文”，這種類型的作文還是非常具有可操作性的。

首先我先來解釋下這個(gè)新名詞：“關(guān)鍵字造句”是指就作文題干所提供的一系列單詞并參考給出的中文提示句子逐個(gè)進(jìn)行造句；“→”是表示在已經(jīng)造好的句子的情況下適當(dāng)增加和擴(kuò)充跟主題相近的句子使文章脈絡(luò)更加清晰；“成文”是指在結(jié)束上兩步造句和擴(kuò)充句子的情況下適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充些連詞和過渡句使文章結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容更加豐富和完整。

下面我們就來見招拆招，再現(xiàn)“關(guān)鍵字造句→成文型”作文寫作的“六步走”戰(zhàn)略吧！

1.審題+立意。

考生需要花一定的時(shí)間充分了解題目的要求，同時(shí)在立意的過程中一定要確立寫作的時(shí)

態(tài)和基調(diào)。

2.分段。

初中階段的寫作可以采用兩段或者三段式，客觀描述占一到兩段，主觀表達(dá)占一段。

3.關(guān)鍵字造句。

就是根據(jù)作文題干所提供的一系列單詞并參考給出的中文提示句子逐個(gè)進(jìn)行組詞成句。在造好句子的情況下，擴(kuò)寫跟主題相近的句子。

4.連句成文。

就是在完成前一步驟的情況下，補(bǔ)充些連詞和過渡句，使之通暢有邏

5.主觀表達(dá)。

在這里要跟廣大考生呼吁主觀表達(dá)的重要性。05-09年北京市中考題中關(guān)鍵字造句→成文型作文的題干都明確提出“給出自己的建議、談?wù)勛约旱母惺?、你?duì)此事的看法、你有什么體會(huì)”之類的字樣，所以切莫在自己的寫作中忽略了自己的主觀表達(dá)。通常情況下可以寫3-4句話即可。

6.檢查。

這是非常關(guān)鍵的一步，應(yīng)該及時(shí)修正語言錯(cuò)誤，看看文章是否符合題目要求。

接下來我們以中考作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)對(duì)初中英語關(guān)鍵字造句→成文型作文“六步走”進(jìn)行一個(gè)可行性的分析。以第一檔作文為例，完全符合題目要求（審題），內(nèi)容完整、豐富（立意），思想健康、積極向上（主觀表達(dá)）。能夠使用多種句型結(jié)構(gòu)和豐富的詞匯（關(guān)鍵字造句），語言通順，語意連貫（連句成文），表達(dá)清楚，具有邏輯性（更高層次的要求）。所以只要考生根據(jù)這六步走戰(zhàn)略一以貫之地練習(xí)，必定能攻克提示性作文。

第五篇：初中英語寫作

初中英語寫作范文集錦

1范文：孩子的獨(dú)立教育

圍繞：學(xué)校讓學(xué)生打掃廁所和學(xué)校不讓學(xué)生打掃廁所兩種情況。寫一不少于80個(gè)詞的主題為“孩子的獨(dú)立教育”英語作文。

給出詞：only child，moral education

nowadays in china，many students are the only child in their family.they are the apple of their parents’ eyes or even their grandparents’，so they are free of any house work or menial labor.and moral education is no more than some bookish thing.Students are largely dependent on their parents and teachers.to educate them to be independent，the most effective way is to let them experience on their own.therefore，they are better to be given the opportunity to get some train at school-to clean the washing room，which can be regarded as part of the moral education.2范文：關(guān)于國慶節(jié)的英語作文

例1

National Day is coming，and we can have a seven-day.My family are going to Hainan.It’s a good seaside city.We are staying there for a week.We are going to the beach and going swimming in the sea.We’re visiting Tianya Haijiao，Wanquan River and many other beautiful places.I think we’ll have a good time there.國慶節(jié)來了，我有七天的假期。我們一家去海南。那是一個(gè)美麗的海濱城市。我們在那里待上一個(gè)星期。我們?nèi)ド碁?，還在海里游泳。我們游覽“天涯海角”，菀泉河還有別的許多好地方。我想我們在那里會(huì)玩得很開心。

例2 National Day Holidays

I went to my cousin’s house on the first day of the holidays and got a piece of good news that his wife was pregnant；She said she’s worrying about getting fat，but on her face there was a unconcealable pleasure of conceiving a baby.My cousin told me that he’ll educate his child in a severe way，with a future father’s matureness.I’m happy for them.：）

Yesterday，our research school’s soccer team had a match with the graduate students from the department of international business.It was almost a close game in the first half，but we seemed lacking of vigor in the second half，so，we lost the game.Half of the National Day holidays have passed by……life still goes with good and bad times.3范文：中學(xué)生該不該上網(wǎng)

最近你們學(xué)校要舉行一次“中學(xué)生該不該上網(wǎng)”的討論。你是贊成者之一，認(rèn)為我們不應(yīng)該因噎廢食。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容寫一篇發(fā)言篇。

要求：字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右注意：不要逐句翻譯。益處

1.看國內(nèi)外新聞，獲取信息。2.發(fā)e-mail，打電話。

3.上網(wǎng)絡(luò)學(xué)校，閱讀各種書籍，自學(xué)外語。

4.欣賞音樂，觀看體育比賽，玩棋牌等游戲，網(wǎng)上購物，豐富我們的生活。

5.提高我們操作電腦的能力

注意事項(xiàng)

1．不要沉湎于（be given to）上網(wǎng)以免影響生活和學(xué)習(xí)。2．不要上不健康的網(wǎng)站。

參考范文：

In my opinion，the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks.As is known to all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life.On the Internet，we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can.We can send e-mails or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends.We can also attend the net school，read many books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music，watch matches and play computer games on the Internet.We can even do shopping on line.Besides，we can improve our ability to operate the computer.But we should not be given to the Internet，or we'll get our life and study destroyed.Besides，we should keep off the harmful websites.Anyhow，this doesn't prevent the Internet becoming our friend.We can't throw away the apple because of the core，can we？

4范文：我的同學(xué) My Classmate

請(qǐng)以“My Classmate”為標(biāo)題寫一篇記敘文

要求：

1、主題明確，語言流暢，思路清晰。

2、字?jǐn)?shù)在100字以內(nèi)。

思路點(diǎn)撥：

寫記敘文要按照事物發(fā)展的客觀規(guī)律敘述，所敘述的內(nèi)容要交代清楚，條理清晰，重點(diǎn)突出，主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。

這篇文章也是記敘文，主人公應(yīng)該用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主。本文以主人公為中心線索，以

一、兩件事件為重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容去組織材料，反映主人公的形象特征。整個(gè)內(nèi)容情節(jié)要合情合理，有真實(shí)感，敘述時(shí)可按事情發(fā)展的順序進(jìn)行，同時(shí)加以點(diǎn)評(píng)。

參考范文 My Classmate

Liu Kai is my classmate.He is a good student and always ready to help others.One day on his way to school，he saw a little girl crossing the road.A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived，and he took her home.When LiuKai hurried into the classroom，the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late.He was then praised for what he had done.5范文：介紹學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)情況

It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study.At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses.We can study what we are interested in.In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects.And we can also study on the Internet.范文：A piano player

What do I want to do when I’m older？ Someone wants to be a doctor.Someone wants to be a basketball player because they are good at sport.Someone wants to be a writer and to make the writing.Someone wants to be a teacher because they like teaching children.I like playing the piano and I good at it.So I want to become a piano player.Play the piano is very interesting.And you can learn something of music.Piano can make you like music.A lot of musician and singer are love playing piano.I play the piano when I’m ten years old.Now I’m in grand five.I hope when I’m sixteen years old，I can become grand eight.I’ll be harder and harder to practise.Become a piano play is a hard job.But I believe I can do it.范文：my dream place

The winter vacation passed quickly.In those days，I have done some things.Playing，doing homework and so on.Sometimes I helped my mother doing some housework.She thanked to me.Though，I was proud of myself.I also went over my English learning.I think I have known more than before.In the new term，I will study hard.范文：The thing that I'll never forget

How time flies！I’m fifteen years now.During the long time，there was one thing that I will never forget.The Spring Festival is our traditional festival.During the Spring Festival，people usually visit their friends and relatives.When I was 9 years old，my family took the bus to my grandparents’ to say “Happy New Year” to them.In the bus，I had a good seat.At 7：30，the bus came to a village.A woman got on with a baby in her arms.At that time，there was no seat.But she must look after her baby carefully.She had to stand next to me.I wanted to stand up and let her sit down，but I was afraid of hearing the other people say“That girl want to be praised.”I looked around.Most people were looking out of the windows and some were sleeping.Suddenly，a little boy behind me，stood up and made room for the woman.She said “Thank you very much” with a big smile.The boy smiled，too.When I told my cousin about it after that，he said “The child is the father of a man.” I’m very ashamed.Why could’t I do the same thing as the little boy did？

From that I learn that we should do our best to help people who need help.If everyone makes a contribution to helping others，the world will become much more beautiful！

6范文：怎樣學(xué)習(xí)英語 How to study English？

作文一：

Study English，You do need to use English with speakers who are not teachers of English.This isn't easy，since everyone feels constrained speaking English with friends with whom it would be natural to use a shared mother tongue.Joining an English Club is a good idea and joining a club with an international membership（where English is in use at least some of the time）is，for many people，even better.If nothing like this is accessible，you might consider what would be involved in getting something going.你需要常常和英語教師以外的人士用英語交談。這當(dāng)然很不容易，因?yàn)榕c母語相同的人自由交談時(shí)，彼此若用英語交談總會(huì)覺得很不自在。亦可參加英語俱樂部或國際會(huì)員的俱樂部（至少有時(shí)使用英語溝通），這樣對(duì)很多人而言更有益。如果沒有合適的社團(tuán)可加入，也不妨考慮任何足以提高英語能力的機(jī)會(huì)。

作文二：

There are four key points to study English：listening，speaking，reading and writing.Firstly，we should be brave to talk with others in English.By doing this，we can improve ore talking and listening skill.Secondly，we should try to listen to all kinds of English programmes as much as possible.In this way，we can gradually improve our pronunciation.Thirdly，we should often read English books.When we come across a new word.We should guess its meaning through the contest first.then look it up in the dictionary to have a check.I thin，it is a good way of reading.Fourthly，we should practice our writing skills.Whenever we have any idea，we should get the pen and write it down at once.It is very important to avoid writing in Chinese way and using the Chinese grammar.As long as we listen，speak，read and write more，we are sure to make remarkable progress！

7范文：介紹學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)情況

It is my honor to show you around，and now I will introduce something about our study.At present we learn not only from the textbook but also from optional courses.We can study what we are interested in.In this way，we can develop ourselves in different aspects.And we can also study on the Internet.范文：風(fēng) Wind

Each season has wind.The warm wind in spring，the hot wind in summer，the gold wind in autumn and cold wind in winter are all called wind，but their tempers are quite different.When spring comes，warm wind wakes up everything；many flowers come out.It can bring us joy.In hot summer，the sweats roll down from our checks.Everything needs wind，but wind often hide and seek with us.Autumn comes.Cool wind blows yellow leaves down.The corn is ripe and all the fields become yellow.The farmers are busy getting in crops.It can bring us the happiness of harvest.In cold winter，cold wind blows so hard that everyone can hardly open his eyes

Wind，we welcome you，need you，but sometimes hate you.Will you please obey us and do good things for us.8范文：找媽媽 Looking for Mum

One day Li Ming caught a little bird.He tied it with a piece of thread and played with it happily.At that time，he saw a little girl crying by the roadside.A policeman saw her，came over and asked her why she was crying and where her house is.When he learned that girl had got lost and she was then looking for her mother，he decided to lead the girl to be back home.Seeing this Li Ming thought the little bird also had its mother and he should set the little bird free so that it could be with its mother again.Then Li Ming untied the thread and returned the little bird to the blue sky.9范文：能源 Energy

As we all know we need energy in our daily life.There are many kinds of energy.We can get our energy from food.The energy in food comes from sunlight which helps plants grow.Plants store up energy from the sun，much of our food comes from plants.Some of our food comes from animals，but animals depend on plants for food too.10范文：英語作文自我介紹 To introduce myself

Hello，everyone！

My name is Winnie.I'm a 15 years old girl.I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao.I'm an active，lovely and clever girl.In the school，my favourite subject is maths.Perhaps someone thinks it's difficult to study well.But I like it.I belive that if you try your best，everything can be done well.I also like sports very much.Such as，running，volleyball and so on.I'm kind-hearted.If you need help，please come to me.I hope we can be good friends！

OK.This is me.A sunny girl.11范文：給父親的信

Directions：you have decided to start jogging next month，but you haven't got any suitable shoes to wear.Now you are writing a letter to your father asking him to send you some extra money so that you can but the shoes.in you letter，you will include：

* your hard work；

* How you read about jogging in your English textbook；

* The advantages ofjogging；

* THe need for a pair fo quality shoes；

* The price of the shoes you plan to buy；

* THe time you need the money；

* Your appreciation for his help Dear dad，I am writing to you for help which I have come to a desperate need.You know I always want to be healthy and in geat shape，so I can pay more attention to teacher's instruction.Yesterday，I went to library and read some books about jogging.I think I need a good jogging shoes for my exercise.I believe a strong body can enhance my study as described by our textbook.I have found a cheap price of a pair of jogging shoes which cost only $500 nearby school.Daddy，you will help me buy this pair，wont' you？ The on sale may not last for long.Please send money as soon as possible，so I can start my jogging right away.I know you will fulfill my dream and expect my endeavor.I promise I will do my best on my study and exercise.Thank you for your consideration.Take care and wish you happiness.Yours beloved son.12范文：考試 Examination

Someone says examination can help us go over our lessons in time and after the examination we can find how we are getting on with our studies.But we are always having too many examinations and they are also too difficult for us to get through.I find some of us have lost interest in learning lessons.Besides，it is harmful to our health as we hardly have any time to go in for sports.I think the present system of measurement should be improved.13范文：什么是成功的秘訣 What Is the Secret of Success

My father is an engineer.He works very hard.Once I asked my father what the secret of success was.He didn't say a word，but wrote a few words on a piece of paper and handed it to me.I looked at the paper，it was written：A=X+Y+Z.“What does it mean？”I asked.“A means success，”explained my father.“X means hard，Y means good ways，and Z means you must stop talking and start to work.”

That's right.From then on，I tried my best to be better.14范文：通知 Notice

The sports meeting which was to take place this Saturday has to be put off because of the heavy rairi these days.All students are required to come to school on Saturday morning as usual，but there will be no class that afternoon.Weather permitting，the sports meeting will be held next Saturday morning.Members of the school ping-pong team must come to the Ping-pong Hall at 4：30 this Saturday afternoon.Ping-pong stars from Wuhan will come and give special training and coaching then.Office of Physical Education 10th April，2005

15范文：一次體育課 A PE Lesson

下面是某節(jié)體育課的有關(guān)情況，請(qǐng)你據(jù)此寫一篇日記。

1．時(shí)間：5月28日，星期一，下午。

2．天氣：陰。

3．項(xiàng)目：跳遠(yuǎn)（jump）。

4．過程：

（1）打上課鈴時(shí)就在操場集合；

（2）做準(zhǔn)備活動(dòng)（warming—upexercises）；

（3）聽老師講解并示范；

（4）我因心情緊張而失?。?/p>

（5）不灰心，反復(fù)練習(xí)；

（6）終于跳過了3米。

5．體會(huì)：只要有恒心（perseverance）就一定能成功。

注意：

1．內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，但不能逐點(diǎn)翻譯。

2．日記格式要正確。

3．詞數(shù)100左右。A PE Lesson

May 28th Monday Cloudy

This afternoon we had a PE lesson.Our teacher taught us to practise the long jump.When the bell rang，we gathered on the playground.After warming-up exercises，the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it.Then we followed the teacher and practised one after another.Soon came my turn，but I felt a hit nervous.Though I failed the first time，yet I didn't lose my heart.I kept on practising.At last I was able to jump over 3 meters.From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance.16范文：寫給母親的感謝信 My dearest Mother，The mother's day is coming and I would like to say “Happy mother's day” in this letter.I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me.This day，I will stay away and can't give you my appreciation at home.I know I will watch myself，so don't worry about me.I am doing very well on my study.My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice.Though I can't be at home，I hope you have a wonderful mother's day.Love，Your son ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Dear mother ：

I am writing to express my deepest thanks to you in Mother's Day，dear mother，you devote all of your energy and blood to our.you do not have any complaint about my brother and i.You love our though various different approaches such as study，work and life，consquently，our held on the belief that the mother is only lover.please accept our appreciate again

I hope that you have happiness everyday.^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Mum：

Such is sons' nature，I really do not know how to express my thanks to you.However，I can imagine，on the day 18 years ago，when you gave birth to me，what a complex feeling you had.In the past few years，every day you struggle me up in the morning and prepare breakfast for me，then in the afternoon，you always welcome your only son with delicious foods after a day’s hardwork.Now your son has been 18 and will go to university soon，like a bird is leaving its parents.Nevertheless，your footprints on my heart will never ever fade and——I love you mum！

17范文：介紹校內(nèi)配套設(shè)施

I am very gladto showyou around.As you can see，my school is very small.It hasonly one building which is built like a ring.It has four floors in all.On the'first floor are the offices of leaders.The classrooms and the offices of teachers are on the other three floors.On the second floor，there is a reading room.In front of the building is the playground.18范文：少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲 A young idler,an old beggar

“少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲”，請(qǐng)你談?wù)剬?duì)此的想法并如何行動(dòng)。

Almost everyone knows the famous Chinese saying：A young idler，an old beggar.Throughout history，we have seen many cases in which this saying has again and again proved to be true.It goes without saying that the youth is the best time of life，during which one's mental and physical states are at their peaks.It takes relatively less time and pains to learn or accept new things in a world full of changes and rapid developments.In addition，one is less likely to be under great pressure from career，family and health problems when young.Therefore，a fresh mind plus enormous energy will ensure success in different aspects of life.Of course，we all know：no pains，no gains.If we don't make every effort to make good use of the advantages youth brings us，it is impossible to achieve any goals.As students，we should now try our best to learn all the subjects well so that we can be well prepared for the challenges that we will face in the future.19范文：寒假生活 Wonderful life in winter holiday

From the sixteenth of January to the seventh of February is our Winter Holiday.I think everybody did a lot of things in the Winter Holiday.But I didn't.Let you to listen to my story of Winter Holiday.I spend a lot of time on the homework… Every day in my Winter Holiday，I always got up late.Then I listened to the tape，it was nine o'clock.Then I ate breakfast and then I did my homework during the daytime！I’m not very slow but the homework was too heavy！

I'm unlucky on the playing too.I played firecracker but I hurt my finger with the fire.I'm careless to kindle the firecracker，so I'm very unlucky.I still unlucky on my friend's party.In the morning，I wanted to get up early but I woke up at 10：50.After ten minutes，the party would start！So I only eat a piece of bread then I go to my friend’s home！And I stay at his home for a long time when I came home.My mother and father were very angry and they scolded me！

I'm worried and feel unlucky on my weigh.Last term，I was 48 kilogram but now I am 51 kilogram！I must to do banting！

But most important，I have gone to Shanghai Ocean Aquarium，I want to go there very much because I want to see the horse，the monkey…in the sea.Now I've done it.It is a bright dot in my Winter Holiday.20范文：我家的小狗 My Little Dog

Last year，my friend gave me a little dog.I was fond of him very much.I liked to play with him after school and he liked to follow me wherever I went.I was very glad that I had a “body guard”。

Last winter I was very busy with my lessons and came home very late every day.However，no matter how late I went home，my dog used to stand at a comer near my school waiting for me.When I passed there，he barked two or three times then ran towards me.It seemed that he was calling me.My dog not only，took good care of me，but also was respoasible at home.When strangers came to my house，he barked at them but not hurt them.What a lovely dog he is！

21范文：我的儲(chǔ)蓄罐 My Collecting-tin

I have a lot of little handiwork，but the favorite one is my collecting-tin.It is a little man made of china.He wears a red hat and a pair of big glasses.His blue clothes are very nice.He has a red noseband no big eyes like stars on his face.His big and round body is very funny.Because of this collecting-fin，I have learned how to savemoney.When I was a little boy，I always put coins away，then I dropped them into his round body.Sometimes he can “eat” plenty of coins at a time，He becomes heavier and heavier day after day.22范文：我的外籍老師 Our Foreign Teacher

Ms Jerry is a foreign teacher.She comes from America.She is thirty-one years old.She has fair hair，white skin and gray eyes.She is tall and slim.She looks very kind.And in fact，she is kind indeed.Ms Jerry is a good teacher.Although she only comes to our school twice a week，she is very responsible to her work and strict with her students.Once，she was ill，but she went on giving us lessons.When we learned this，we all listened to her even more attentively than usual.Ms Jerry teaches us English with great enthusiasm：“Each lesson she will bring us new pictures，new stories，new games and new songs.Her class is always full of happy laughter and merry songs.Ms Jerry is such a good teacher that all of us love and respect her.23范文：參觀博物館 Going to the Museums

During a long vacation，I usually like to go to see the exhibits in one of a great many museums.Such as the art museum，the history museum，the museum of natural history，and the museum of science and technology.Many wonderful things are cared for in museums.There are paintings，potteries，sculptures，costumes，swords，ancient animal bones and plants，stuffed animals，antique steam locomotives，and many others.It is always a good review of history to visit those museums.24范文：寄信 Mailing a Letter

All large cities around the world have many post offices located throughout the city，and even the smallest village has at least one postal station.You may go to a post office to mail a letter.However，there are mail boxes located on every second or third corner in all cities and towns.Any letter or small package having sufficient postage may be dropped in any of these mail boxes.If a person wishes a letter to be delivered more quickly to the address，he may buy a special delivery stamp and delivery is made directly by the messenger instead of by the regular carrier.25范文：神奇的貝殼 The Magic Shell

At the beach I found a magic shell，so I brought it home in my pail；and I kept it up on my top bookshelf right under the picture whale.And now，whenever I wish I were back there by the shining sea，I hold the shell up close to my ear，till it brings the beach to me：all the hushing sound and the rushing sound of the seashore winds and waves are caught in my shell that I brought home.26范文：旅游事業(yè) Ways to Improve china's tourism

【要求】

要求：旅游事業(yè)對(duì)我國具有舉足輕重的作用。請(qǐng)以Ways to Improve China＇s Tourism為題為我國旅游事業(yè)的發(fā)展提幾點(diǎn)建議。（提示：擴(kuò)大宣傳，改善旅游設(shè)施，提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量……）

【范文】

Ways to Improve china＇s tourism

Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world.However，tourism in China is not as developed as it should be.If the following is done，China＇s tourism will definitely be improved.First，our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists.Second，facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip.Finally，the quality of service should be improved.Don＇t tell people their ideas are bad unless you＇ve got a good one.27范文：模范學(xué)生 A Model Student

Do you mind being called a bad student？Of course not.So far as I know，everybody intends to be（become）a model student.However，to be a model student is by no means an easy thing.First，he must do his best to obtain knowledge.A man without sufficient knowledge will not succeed.Secondly，he must remember to improve his health.Only a strong man can do great tasks.Thirdly，he should receive moral education.If his conduct is not good，no one will consider making friends with him.28范文：通電話 A Phone Call

I was tired with preparing for the Joint College Entrance Examination the other evening.And having been alone for several hours，I was eager to have someone to chat with me about anything but examinations.So I telephoned my best friend Mary，who was also busy preparing for the joint entrance examination.On the telephone，I told her that I missed her very much.And I invited her to have a cup of coffee with me in a coffeehouse near her home.But to my surprise，she declined and said that she had to devote all her time to her studies.Hearing this，I could do nothing but hang up after saying “Sorry” to her.Disappointed and discouraged，I turned back to my desk and reluctantly buried myself again in my books.29范文：春天來了 Spring is coming on

Winter has gone，and spring is coming on.Watching the ice melting，I know the whole earth is being rejuvenated from the winter.A variety of flowers come out to show their beauty and bring us fragrance.It is a feast for our eyes and souls.The yellow grass suddenly turn green.The young leaves grow on the branches.The swallows fly back home with the greeting of spring.Everything is coming to life.Feeling the warm sunshine，enjoying the beautiful scenery，listening to the wonderful music，drinking the new tea，my mood is perfect and I have nothing else to desire.Spring is the most fantastic season in the year.It means so much to the other three seasons.30范文：一個(gè)特殊的女孩 A special girl

There is a special girl.Why is she special？Firstly she looks like a boy so her classmates always call her a “hoyden”.Maybe they’re right because she also has the same hobbies as the boys.She likes playing soccer，basketball，table tennis，badminton，computer games and so on.If someone bothers her she will feel annoyed and even fight against him.Secondly she is a lovely girl.She loves life very much.You may see her smiling all the time.She likes making friends with others.She likes making jokes with them，too.She likes singing but she is not good at it.She likes dancing，but she is not good at it，either.Thirdly，she is a sentimental girl.She likes talking to birds and flowers.She likes talking to herself，too.When she’s watching TV，she will cry over a touching scene.Sometimes she is moved to cry all day and all night.Lastly she’s a fantastic girl.She has lots of dreams.She always dreams of her future such as her job when she grows up.She wants to be a scientist because scientists invent things that are helpful for our lives.She wants to be a TV hostess because she has beautiful voice and she also wants to be…

That’s why I said she’s special.Do you want to know her？If you can keep the secret I can tell you who she is.The special girl is me.31范文：我的生日 My birthday

My birthday is on March 23th，I celebrate it every year with my family and my friends.Every year，I hold a little birthday party and invite my friends.We chat and play a lot of games together.The best part of it is that I love the birthday cake and the gifts I get from my parents and my friends.I also get some money on my birthday.I can buy what I want with the money.I have great fun on my birthdays，but on the other hand，I also understand that I am one year older after each birthday and that means I should be more responsible for myself and I should also my self-aware.I should understand more things and be less ignorant！

Fianlly，I should be thankful for my parents，I know they have done their best in raising me up.32范文：成人教育的發(fā)展 A Boom in Adult education

Directions：For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Boom in Adult Education.You should write no less than 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below：

1.現(xiàn)在許多成年人都利用業(yè)余時(shí)間去大學(xué)或夜校讀書

2.出現(xiàn)這種成人教育熱的原因是……

范文：

A Boom in Adult Education

Every Tuesday and Friday evening sees Miss Li，my neighbor and a secretary in a company rush home after a hard day’s work，gulp down her meals and then hurry out to catch the bus for her English class.Miss Li’s case is not unique，and now more and more city adults spend their leisure time trying to improve themselves at school or college.There are a number of reasons for people to go back for their education.Some people，like Miss Li，are doing it to acquire another degree or diploma to impress the society.To them more knowledge，or rather，more credentials means more opportunities for better jobs and quicker promotion.Other people，especially those who are laid off or out of employment go to vocational school to prepare to return to the job market.They are eager for new skills so that they can be qualified for the jobs in retail trade，administration，education and other service categories to which they are strange because most of them were blue-collar workers in the factory.There are also people who come to take such courses as Chinese traditional medicine，painting，calligraphy and photography.As their working weeks decline people begin to have time to fulfill their old dream of their heart’s desire.Out of necessity or out of interest，people go back to school for the common goal——to improve themselves，and this boom in adult education，in turn，helps to raise the intellectual standard of the whole country.33范文：你喜歡哪種方式的旅行？ Which Mode of Travel Do You like?

Directions：For this part you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Which Mode of Travel Do You like？ You should write noless than 150 words and base your composition on the outline（given in Chinese）below：

1.有的人喜歡參加旅行社旅游（package tours）

2.有的人喜歡自己獨(dú)立行動(dòng)（travelling on one’s own）

3.比較這兩種旅游方式，我喜歡的是……

范文：

With the general standard of living improvingand the working week becoming shorter，more andmore people are able to make a holiday trip toplaces of interest.While many like to joinpackage tours fro convenience，I prefer to traveln my own.I like travelling on may own not only because it costs much less but because it gives a great degree of independence and freedom.Travelling on my own，I’m my own boss；and can decide when to start on my way，where to linger a little longer and which spot can be skipped over to save energy or time for another spot.I can always adjust my plan.On the contrary，in a package tour you’re deprived of as much freedom as in a military base.At the sound of the whistle，you have to jump up from a sound sleep and，with heavy-lidded eyes，hurry to the gathering place where you are collected and counted to board a coach.At the sight of the little flag waving，you must immediately take yourself away from the scenes you are marveling at and follow the guide whose sole interest is to cover all spots according to him strict schedule，regardless of the weather or your health condition.True，you may encounter inconveniences if you travel individually，for instance，getting accommodations for the night and finding a place for meals.But nothing can be compared with the freedom which is vital to a person who takes a holiday trip mainly to escape from constraints of his routine life.34范文：快樂的家 A Happy Family

I have a happy family.Although it’s small，it’s full of love.There are four people in my family，my father，my mother，my elder sister and myself——we all love each other.My father is a doctor.He loves his work.Every day he works from dawn to dark.In his spare time，he likes reading and writing books.My mother is a teacher.She is very strict with her students but kind to them.Every day she goes to work early.She is not only a teacher but also a fiend of the students.My sister is a shopkeeper and she has been married for several years.I’m a middle school students.My wish is to be a university student.And my parents often encourage me to work hard.I will try my best to realize my dream.35范文：全家福 A Photo of My Family

Look at this photograph of my family.There are five people in it.The tallest one is my father.He is forty-eight years old.My mother is standing beside him.She is not as my father.She is three years younger than my father.Sitting in front of them are my grandparents.My grandfather is that fat one with a pair of glasses.My grandmother is as fat as he.This little one is me.I’m sitting between them.All of us love one anther.I have a happy family.36范文：快樂的一天 A Happy Day

Today is the National Day.It is our country＇s birthday.Now she is 56.I am very happy.Today in the afternoon，I go to the park，people all look so happy.Someone is doing exercise，someone is singing the nation song.A little girl comes to me and says to me，happy National Day.I know she loves the country，but I love her，too.Today is a happy day.37范文：最好的朋友 My Best Friend

I have a best friend.She has long，straight，black hair，big，black eyes and a small nose.She is very thin and kind，she is cute，too.Her English and Chinese is very good.She is hard-working.Her favorite season is summer，because it’s hot，she can eat ice-cream.She likes playing the piano，reading books and singing songs.Who’s she？She is my best friend ——Sun Mengqi.She has a very good English name，too——Angle.38范文講評(píng)：周末

「要求」

周末兩天的休息對(duì)于平時(shí)忙于工作學(xué)習(xí)的人們來說是非常寶貴的。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提綱寫一篇短文。

周末對(duì)于人們來說意味著什么。

每個(gè)人都有自己度周末的方式。

我是怎樣度周末的。

「范文」

Weekends

Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest.For example，people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.Everyone spends weekends in his own way.Within two days，some people can relax themselves by listening to music，reading novels，or watching films.Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball，wimming or dancing.Different people have different relaxations.I often spend weekends with my family or my friends.Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends.Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge.I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision.An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends.Weekends are always enjoyable for me.「評(píng)語」

全文思路清晰，論述充分，語言流暢易懂。用詞講究，注意了詞語搭配，沒有重復(fù)、堆砌之感。

39范文講評(píng)：節(jié)日出行

「要求」

和外國朋友交談是文化生活中很重要的一部分，但是談什么話題卻要慎重考慮，因?yàn)楦鲊L(fēng)俗習(xí)慣不同，談的東西要關(guān)涉到禁忌、興趣。學(xué)校的英語角將要組織一次對(duì)外交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以書面形式寫一些可以作為談話的材料。

「范文」

Holidays and Outings

It is common in English to ask people about their holidays.In the West many families go away on holiday during the summer months and so it is very usual to ask about this.If the holiday has not yet taken place，then their holiday plans can be talked about.And if it is already over，then where they went，whether they enjoyed it and so on can be discussed.Similar questions are asked before festivals and pubic holidays.Foreigners living and working in China often have frequent opportunities for travel，either at weekends or during their holiday periods，so questions on this topic can often lead to fruitful discussions.They may be particularly interested to hear comments on which places are worth visiting and why，especially if these places are a little less well known and not clearly described in the tour guides.Take vacaticn and long weekends.Never let vacation time expire.「評(píng)語」

看完上文，可知這實(shí)際上是一篇討論英語話題的文章。從這個(gè)角度來寫“Holidays and Outings”這個(gè)題目可謂不無新義。但是在與外國人交往時(shí)談些什么都是一個(gè)很現(xiàn)實(shí)的問題。本文提供了這一范例。全篇也圍這個(gè)問題來寫，幾乎每句話都是緊扣中心的。比如它始終突出了這是一個(gè)話題，就反復(fù)用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等詞。

40范文講評(píng)：介紹你的學(xué)校

「要求」

下周將有一批外賓來校參觀，請(qǐng)你給外賓簡要介紹你校的情況。內(nèi)容包括三方面：

校史和成績。

學(xué)校規(guī)模和主要設(shè)施。

師生狀況（詞數(shù)100—120）。

「范文」

An Introduction

Our school was built in 1945 and a great number of students have graduated from it.Now many of them have become scientists，professors and engineers.Many students have also become workers and farmers after graduation.They have achieved great success in the development of modern industry and agriculture.Our school is a key middle school in our province.It has thirty classes with over 130students.Our school has a six-storeyed teaching building，several laboratories and a large playground.Last year，a new library was built and it has more than 1000 copies of books.All the teachers here are trying their best to do their work well.Every students is making full use of his time to train himself to be a qualified student.「評(píng)語」

文章簡潔得體，結(jié)構(gòu)鮮明，語言流暢，介紹具體。讀后讓人對(duì)學(xué)校概貌了然于胸。

school 還有學(xué)派的意思，另外“一群魚”叫做a school of fish.