第一篇：2018年8月25日托福考試 獨(dú)立寫作解析

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獨(dú)立寫作考題：

You may choose between two professors who will be teaching a course that you must take at your university.If the following statements are the only information available to you about the differences between the two professors, which professor would you choose? Why?--One professor was voted most popular in a survey of students about their teachers.--One professors has just been given an award for outstanding research.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Be sure to use your own words.Do not use memorized examples.題目特征：

雙選題，教育類話題，題干信息量相對(duì)較大

題干信息解讀

該題信息可以精煉為：

大學(xué)選課時(shí)，更加傾向于選擇哪位教授的課程？ 1）學(xué)生票選中最受歡迎的教授 2）剛因杰出研究獲獎(jiǎng)的教授

該題整體來(lái)說(shuō)，難度不大，學(xué)生拿到手之后應(yīng)該是有話可說(shuō)——畢竟選課對(duì)每位學(xué)生來(lái)說(shuō)，已然不陌生。針對(duì)自己選課時(shí)考慮的因素以及為何會(huì)有該考慮因素，再結(jié)合題干中所提供的兩種教授特點(diǎn)，自然會(huì)找到展開作文的思路。

比如，選課時(shí)，我們會(huì)考慮“whether is the course academically beneficial to us or not?”，”whether is the professor friendly and attractive or not? ”等等，思考之后，再結(jié)合題目中所給特點(diǎn)(voted most popular;just awarded for outstanding research)進(jìn)行分析即可

針對(duì)該題的參考思路，針對(duì)“教授受歡迎”，很容易想到，理由如下：

01、教授風(fēng)趣，講解清楚簡(jiǎn)單，讓學(xué)生積極參與，很會(huì)激起學(xué)生的參與熱情和興趣。The class offered by the popular professor can be rendered to be interesting rather than inflexible or vapid, easier for students to be attracted and then concentrated, inspire students to participate more actively/more opportunities can be created for students to interact, spark off the passion and interest from students, study more effectively and efficiently.02、教授受歡迎，意味著學(xué)生與老師的互動(dòng)或者交流很多，因此更容易發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)生們的相關(guān)問題，必然可以針對(duì)性的給出建議，從而讓學(xué)生在學(xué)習(xí)中獲得更多提高

It cannot be denied that students are more willing to interact with the most popular professor, more interaction or communication in or after class, easier for the professor to notice where the student is not good or proficient enough academically, offer some

第二篇：托?？荚噷懽髟u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

1、內(nèi)容的完整性和準(zhǔn)確性。簡(jiǎn)單地說(shuō)，就是文章是否有將講座中的關(guān)鍵信息點(diǎn)完整、準(zhǔn)確地提取出來(lái)(通常情況下有三點(diǎn))，并和閱讀材料中的相關(guān)內(nèi)容有效地一一對(duì)應(yīng)。如果講座中的信息點(diǎn)有缺失，那么會(huì)有一定程度的扣分；如果只寫了有關(guān)閱讀材料的觀點(diǎn)，得1分。

2、文章的組織機(jī)構(gòu)，詞匯和語(yǔ)法的正確性和準(zhǔn)確性。高分的作文需要做到條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)連貫，用詞恰當(dāng)，能夠準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)講座中的觀點(diǎn)與閱讀材料中的觀點(diǎn)是如何相互聯(lián)系的，只要作文中的錯(cuò)誤不至于使內(nèi)容表述出現(xiàn)誤解，一些偶爾出現(xiàn)的語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，如單詞拼寫、單復(fù)數(shù)問題等，不會(huì)對(duì)作文成績(jī)產(chǎn)生很大影響，當(dāng)然，錯(cuò)誤肯定是越少越好的。

1、有效回應(yīng)題目，闡明文章主題。一般來(lái)說(shuō)，獨(dú)立寫作完全跑題的情況很少，但是很多考生在展開討論時(shí)所采用的論據(jù)，比較容易出現(xiàn)跟主題關(guān)聯(lián)性不大的情況，即局部答非所問的現(xiàn)象，從而影響了得分。

2、邏輯條理清楚，論證充分展開。這一點(diǎn)的關(guān)鍵在于文章論證的展開，是否提供了大量的細(xì)節(jié)和例子來(lái)支持觀點(diǎn)，而非泛泛而談地說(shuō)理。比如說(shuō)某位同學(xué)的英文寫作能力很強(qiáng)，我光說(shuō)很強(qiáng)，很厲害，寫得很好都很表面，但是我如果說(shuō)這位同學(xué)托福寫作考了29分，那么就是很細(xì)節(jié)很有說(shuō)服力的論據(jù)了。

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3、內(nèi)容連貫一致，銜接自然流暢。達(dá)到內(nèi)容連貫一致的文章通常全文圍繞中心論點(diǎn)展開，而不會(huì)論據(jù)自相矛盾，也不會(huì)重復(fù)論證，有時(shí)候通過一些表示因果、先后、遞進(jìn)的關(guān)系連詞可以起到粘合劑的作用。

4、遣詞造句地道，語(yǔ)言駕馭嫻熟。托?？荚嚱K究是語(yǔ)言考試，最終還是要考查考生的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力，但是要注意的是，并不是要求考生通篇都用難詞偏語(yǔ)長(zhǎng)句，而是要會(huì)變化著用一些美國(guó)人常用的語(yǔ)句把自己的想法表達(dá)清楚，所以建議考生盡量多閱讀和模仿英文原版材料，這樣寫出來(lái)的文章才能夠原汁原味。托?？荚噷懽髟u(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)責(zé)任編輯：曾老師 閱讀：人次

第三篇：2015年8月22日大陸托?？荚噷懽髡骖}和解析

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2015年8月22日大陸托福考試寫作真題和范文解析

備考托福的小伙伴們注意了，托福真題是你不可缺少的備考利器，前程百利小編給大家整理了剛剛過去的8月22日托?？荚噷懽髡骖}，還有詳細(xì)的寫作思路和優(yōu)秀范文。小編想要告訴大家的是，托福獨(dú)立寫作再次命中!了解托福考試的題型，有助于我們更好的備考接下來(lái)的托?？荚?，趕緊收藏吧!

第一部分

綜合寫作： 有關(guān)“計(jì)劃燒除”的問題

閱讀：

1.“計(jì)劃燒除”對(duì)動(dòng)物有害;

2.“計(jì)劃燒除”會(huì)造成煙氣和二氧化碳污染;

3.即使不進(jìn)行“計(jì)劃燒除”也會(huì)有自然火災(zāi)的發(fā)生，所以“計(jì)劃燒除”會(huì)浪費(fèi)財(cái)力。

聽力反駁：

1.因?yàn)橛袔讉€(gè)月動(dòng)物是不繁殖的，而且成年動(dòng)物在遇火時(shí)可以成功逃脫，因此“計(jì)劃燒除”不會(huì)對(duì)動(dòng)物造成危害;

2.“計(jì)劃燒除”可以讓植物吸收二氧化碳;

3.“計(jì)劃燒除”會(huì)消除可燃物，減少自然火災(zāi)的發(fā)生。

綜合寫作思路：

1、閱讀支持“計(jì)劃燒除”對(duì)動(dòng)物有害;聽力則贊成，動(dòng)物是不繁殖的，而且成年動(dòng)物在遇火時(shí)可以成功逃脫，因此“計(jì)劃燒除”不會(huì)對(duì)動(dòng)物造成危害。

2、閱讀部分提出“計(jì)劃燒除”會(huì)造成煙氣和二氧化碳污染;但是，聽力提出“計(jì)劃燒除”可以讓植物吸收二氧化碳。

3、閱讀部分提出，即使不進(jìn)行“計(jì)劃燒除”也會(huì)有自然火災(zāi)的發(fā)生，所以“計(jì)劃燒除”會(huì)浪費(fèi)財(cái)力;但是，聽力部分則反駁說(shuō)“計(jì)劃燒除”會(huì)消除可燃物，減少自然火災(zāi)的發(fā)生。

范文：

The lecturer contends that prescribed burns prevent larger forest fires.This directly contradicts the reading passage’s claim that there are more disadvantages than advantages.http://bailiedu.com

First, in spite of the concerns some people have, only a few animals die from the burns;there is enough time for animals to escape.Moreover, the professor cites the example of Yellowstone National Park, where animals have no difficulties finding new habitats because of the park's huge size.This refutes the reading passage’s claim that forest animals die from prescribed burns and that even if they manage to survive, they have a hard time because of the competition for food in their new territory.On top of that, the lecturer says there has been a misunderstanding about the environmental damage of prescribed burns.It is true that prescribed burns produce smoke;however, the amount of smoke is much less than the amount of smoke generated during major forest fires.This rebuts the reading passage’s claim that since many prescribed burns take several days, smoke coming from the burning causes air pollution.Finally, prescribed burns are deliberately carried out.The forest officials put a lot of thought and efforts into the burns before they intentionally set a forest on fire;accordingly, it is less feasible that the forest officials would conduct the burns if conditions are not suitable.This contradicts the idea mentioned in the reading passage that prescribed burns can change into major forest fires by spreading unexpectedly.第二部分

獨(dú)立寫作：

題目：Do you agree or disagree: the most effective way for governments to encourage energy conservation is to increase the price of gasoline and electricity?

命中情況：命中8月22日前程百利獨(dú)立寫作大范圍——社會(huì)類“第四題”。

是否新題：否

重復(fù)情況：2008年9月21日中國(guó)考試，2008年9月28日中國(guó)考試，2009年11月22日中國(guó)考試

題材：社會(huì)類

獨(dú)立寫作思路：

1.同意

(1)提高汽油費(fèi)和電費(fèi)會(huì)在一定程度上抑制消費(fèi)者對(duì)能源的使用，從而節(jié)省能源;

(2)提高汽油費(fèi)和電費(fèi)會(huì)讓消費(fèi)者養(yǎng)成節(jié)省能源的習(xí)慣，從長(zhǎng)遠(yuǎn)看來(lái)，有利于能源節(jié)約。

2.不同意

(1)隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，人們的消費(fèi)水平提高了，提高汽油費(fèi)和電費(fèi)對(duì)消費(fèi)者來(lái)說(shuō)影響不大;

(2)提高汽油費(fèi)和電費(fèi)不能從根本上節(jié)約能源，要真正做到能源節(jié)約，根本措施在于開發(fā)新技術(shù)，提高能源利用效率。

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范文：(不同意)

In such a scientific-technologically developed society, energy has played an indispensable and dominant role in aspects of life, whatever in personal living or corporate expansion.However, with the rapid decline in the amount of the energy or recourse resulting from increasing demand as well as overly exploitation, it is imperative that government take measures to conserve the energy available.For example, increasing the cost of gasoline and electricity will admittedly control the use of both for a majority will not purchase or waste them as before, but it is not the only way due to some potential drawbacks in the long run.For one thing, it will create a path for some commercial producers to make profits from the price-raising illegally when they are keen on the sole material benefits instead of the initial motive of the government.Energy, whose consumption has accounted for a big proportion in the national revenue, is always a hot issue in many profit-oriented companies.For instance, some gasoline companies will expand their exploitation area for larger inventories, from which they can get greater profits once the price of the products are increased.They will also force their employees to work excessively with disregard to safety.Doing so can not only conserve the energy as planned, but also bring some negative influenced on the social life.For another, the increase in the energy may cause a financial burden for those relying on the resource, individually or corporately.If the strategy is carried out, some companies will face great difficulty in affording the energy, and consequently they cannot continue their production without resource provision.Neither can some families in some poverty-stricken areas.One of my relatives, living in a less developed village, is striving to save the money on the electricity or gas.Suffering from the pressure of tuition of his children, he has to try to live an economical life.Thus the increase in the price of electricity will inevitably become an obstacle in such occasions.In conclusion, in spite of the possible effectiveness in the energy conservation, the cost rising will lead to some illegal cases or financial burdens to some poor ones at the same time.If there are some more complementary alternatives, such as to enhance the public awareness to conserve the energy actively, the goal of the government will be fulfilled in a balanced way.以上就是8月22日托?？荚噷懽鞑糠值恼骖}。備考托福的小伙伴，趕緊來(lái)圍觀吧!前程百利小編也給8月30日參加托?？荚嚨男』锇樘峁┝饲俺贪倮顧?quán)威的機(jī)經(jīng)，四個(gè)單項(xiàng)都很全面，敬請(qǐng)關(guān)注。

第四篇：獨(dú)立寫作模版（范文）

This new century has witnessed the explosive growth of science and technology, which____.When it comes to____, the discussion of this issue among individuals and in society as a whole has come into vogue during the last decade.The statement claims that __________./It is commonly accepted that_大眾觀點(diǎn)___.From my perspective, I agree/disagree with the statement and there are several reasons and instances as follows supporting my view./From my perspective, I prefer A rather than B and there are several reasons and instances as follows supporting my view.讓步段 Unquestionably,讓步詞

However, say XXX is an overstatement, for one thing..加2到3個(gè)支持句

For another thing…加兩到三個(gè)支持句

In conclusion, if there is anyone out there who still doubts if … who still wonders if … who still questions if … this essay is my answer.

第五篇：獨(dú)立寫作

我覺得我不管綜合寫作還是獨(dú)立寫作都是一樣的特點(diǎn)，那就是字?jǐn)?shù)足。綜合寫作要求是185-225，我每次必300+。獨(dú)立寫作要求300+我記得考場(chǎng)上我至少寫了500+。

獨(dú)立作文：450字以上

第一段陳述你的觀點(diǎn)，支持哪一方；第二、三、四段從三個(gè)方面論述你的觀點(diǎn)；最后一段總結(jié)一下，綜上所述，某某觀點(diǎn)是正確的。

獨(dú)立寫作的八股在于它的題目很固定，OG上給出了那幾百道例題 絕大部分題目是：

**和**相比，你覺得哪個(gè)更好/更合理？/你更支持哪個(gè)觀點(diǎn)？

一部分題目是：*******，你怎么辦？/你是怎么看的？

而這兩種其實(shí)是一種題目。如果題目沒有給你二選一的選項(xiàng)，我們要做的是把它轉(zhuǎn)化為二選一或者多選一，這么多選項(xiàng)你只要從中挑選一個(gè)，然后把這個(gè)和其他的相比較這篇文章你就搞定了

除了題目固定之外，寫作的手法同樣很固定。其實(shí)大家只要熟讀范文100篇，不會(huì)背書也能寫。具體的方法就是在論壇找到那誰(shuí)誰(shuí)誰(shuí)的185篇滿分作文，挑選其中你覺得寫的不錯(cuò)的把其中鋪墊的句型，轉(zhuǎn)換詞挑出來(lái)，背一背，背多了你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)所有的滿分作文其實(shí)是一個(gè)套路出來(lái)的流水線作品（除極少數(shù)作文）。流水線作文誰(shuí)不會(huì)寫呢？那滿分作文其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單的！