第一篇:大學(xué)英語寫作十二句作文法
十二句作文法
大學(xué)英語四、六級考試寫作的評分依據(jù)是:文章切題、條理清楚、語言準(zhǔn)確和字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求。所謂切題就是看你寫的作文跑不跑題。所謂條理是指每一段的議論的正反清楚,說明的幾個(gè)方面清楚,描述的時(shí)間正確。語言準(zhǔn)確要求作文的語法詞匯使用正確,符合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。
四、六級的作文的字?jǐn)?shù)要求是四級不少于100字,六級不少于120字。針對四、六級考試的作文要求我們提出了十二句作文法,這里所說的十二句作文法不僅包括一般英文寫作的方法而且包括我們在多年考試輔導(dǎo)和閱卷中所總結(jié)出來的一套行之有效的寫作方法。它的具體內(nèi)容有以下幾點(diǎn)。
一、審題
我們拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是審題。審題的作用在于使你的寫作不跑題(如果跑題,條理和語言再好,也得不到及格分,甚至0分)那么審題要審什么呢?
1.體裁(議論文、說明文、描述文)
審題就是要審作文的體裁和題材。因?yàn)槭裁礃拥捏w裁就會用什么樣的題材去寫。那么體裁包括哪些呢?就四、六級考試而言,它包括議論文、說明文和描述文。從近些年來看,四、六級作文不是單一的體裁,而是幾種體裁的雜合體。例如有一次四級作文題是這樣出的:
Directions:
For this you’re your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student. You should write at 1east 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese)below:
(1)做合格大學(xué)生的必要性
(2)做合格大學(xué)生的必備條件(可從德、智、體等方面談)
(3)我打算這樣做
很多人說這種類型的作文是議論文。我們認(rèn)為說:它是議論文是片面的。因?yàn)椋谝欢我髮憽啊匾浴?,這說明本段體裁是議論文;第二段要求寫“……必備條件”,這說明本段要求寫說明文;而第三段要求寫“……這樣做”,說明本段要求寫的是描述文。所以我們說在大多數(shù)情況下,四、六級作文是三種體裁的雜
合體。
2.根據(jù)不同體裁確定寫作方法
我們審題的目的就在于根據(jù)不同的體裁來確定不同的寫作方法。通過審題,我們可以看出四、六級作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段為議論文、第二段為說明文、第三段為描述文。議論文有議論文的寫作方式、說明文有說明文的寫作方式、描述文也有它自身的寫作特點(diǎn)。
第一段為議論文:它的寫作特點(diǎn)是要有論點(diǎn)和論據(jù),而且往往從正反兩面來論述。例如上面題目的第一段的寫作思路是:做合格大學(xué)生,會怎么樣(這是從正面論述);不能做到合格大學(xué)生,會怎么樣(從反面論述);所以我們要做合格的大學(xué)生(結(jié)論)。
第二段為說明文:它的寫作特點(diǎn)是從幾方面或幾條來說明一個(gè)問題,就跟機(jī)器的說明書一樣,通過1、2、3說明它的用途。就上面的作文而言,我們可從三個(gè)方面(德、智、體)來說明做合格大學(xué)生的必備條件。
第三段為描述文:以“人”為中心描述一個(gè)“做”的過程。跟上兩段相比,本段的主語多為人稱代詞。該段的描述要與第二段相呼應(yīng)。
二、確定主題句
通過審題,我們知道該如何確定寫作的思路。下邊我們就談怎么樣寫。第一步就是要寫主題句。主題句是確保不跑題的前提,只有不跑題才有可能得及格分。寫主題句最保險(xiǎn)的方法就是把中文提綱的各句譯成英語。例如上述作文的三段主題句分別為:
1.It is very necessary to be a good university student.(議論文主題句)
2.There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student.(說明文的主題句)
3.What I will do in the future is the following.(描述文的主題句)
如果要求句是英語就可以把它擴(kuò)充成主題句,例如這樣的一篇作文:Good Health
1.Importance of good health
2.Ways to keep fit
3.My own practice
這樣的作文的要求句就可以擴(kuò)展成主題句。擴(kuò)展后三段的主題句分別為:
1.It is very important to have good health.(將名詞importance變成形容詞important)
2.There are four ways to keep fit for me.(用there be句型)
3.My own practices are the following.(采用原詞)
三、確保文章條理清楚
保證不跑題是寫作當(dāng)中第一重要任務(wù),第二個(gè)重要任務(wù)就是要做到條理清楚。對于議論文來說,正反面要清楚。對于說明文來說,1、2、3條要清楚,對于描述文來說,誰干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good Health來說,第一段保證正反面要清楚就應(yīng)這樣寫:主題句(It is very important to have good health.)正面句(With good health,we can...),反面句(Without good health
we can do nothing.We can’t do...).第二段應(yīng)當(dāng)這樣寫:主題句(There are four ways to keep fit.),從幾方面說明:First,we should have our break fast in the morning.
Second, we should have a nap at noon.
Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon.
And fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listeningto the music...)
為了使文章更具條理性,我們可以用first(ly),second(ly),third(ly)等副詞,他們可以使文章的條理性十分突出。作文是主觀性題,要想得高分我們必須把評卷老師考慮進(jìn)去。評卷老師的時(shí)間很短(每份卷子的作文只有一兩分鐘就要閱完),所以我們在列條條時(shí)最好不用:
To begin with,……After that,……And then,……The next,……The following……At last……。因?yàn)橛眠@樣的詞語不利于閱卷老師看出你作文的條理性。
第三段應(yīng)當(dāng)這樣寫:主題句(My own practices are the following.)具體情況(主語為第一人稱代詞I,與第二段呼應(yīng))
In the morning,I have my breakfast.
At noon,I have a nap.
And in the afternoon,I always play football.
In the evening,I usually listen to the classic music.
四、保證作文符合字?jǐn)?shù)要求的十二句作文法
在四、六級考試中考生一定希望既讓作文達(dá)到字?jǐn)?shù)要求又不至于寫得太多,因?yàn)閷懙锰?,一方面會更多地暴露自己的語言上的弱點(diǎn),另一方面又會占用過多的寶貴時(shí)間。寫得太多還容易使寫作跑題。解決這些問題的一個(gè)有效的辦法就是采用十二句作文法。
我們知道,四、六級作文大都是三段式。我們算一下,如果我們在每一段中寫上四句話,即主題句加兩, 三句擴(kuò)展句和一個(gè)結(jié)論句就可以了。這樣全篇在十二句左右。每一句十多個(gè)字,這樣就是120-150宇。同時(shí),我們也提醒大家,不能寫得太多,寫得多容易跑題。在寫作時(shí),我們要橫向?qū)懽鳎磳懩骋粏栴}的橫段面。例如,上面講到健康的重要性時(shí),我們只寫四句就可以了。第一句主題句,第二句從正面論述,第三句從反面論述,第四句為結(jié)論句。但有的同學(xué)在寫的時(shí)候說“健康非常重要,”然后就寫“吃波菜非常重要”,因?yàn)椴げ撕胸S富的鐵,鐵對人是非常重要的,因?yàn)椤?。這樣的作文的基本模式是A-BB-CC-DD-正以此類推。這就叫流水賬,沒有中心。我們寫作時(shí)要根據(jù)橫段面去寫,而不要寫成流水賬。避免寫成流水賬的方法是不要就前一句中的一個(gè)非重點(diǎn)詞再進(jìn)行描述。而要對主題句從橫段面去寫,寫完一個(gè)橫段面就不要再對這一橫段面進(jìn)行闡述了,應(yīng)當(dāng)去寫另一個(gè)橫段面。
如果我們感覺字?jǐn)?shù)不夠,就在每一句或某些句子上添加些詞語就行了。例如我們感覺上邊第二段不夠長,就可以這樣來加詞:
主題
句 There are four ways to keep fit.There are four or more ways to keep fit for everyone of us.從幾方面說明:
First,we should have our breakfast in the morning.
Firstly,we should have our breakfast,such as milk,eggs,bread and so on,in the morning.
Second,we should have a nap at noon.
Second,we should have a short nap,even 30 minutes,at noon.Thirdly,sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon.
Thirdly, sports exercises are necessary for everyone and we can
do some sports exercises in the afternoon.
And fourth,we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening tomusic.
And fourthly,we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to both popularand classic music.
這樣一來,我們只要保持本句的主題不變,添加一些次要詞就能達(dá)到字?jǐn)?shù)的規(guī)定標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。綜上所述,如果我們按以上幾個(gè)步驟和方法去寫作文,就可以保證及格以上的分?jǐn)?shù)。
第二篇:大學(xué)英語寫作
常用寫作句型
1現(xiàn)象解釋型
模板一
⑴According to the chart/graph/ table/ picture, it is clear that 圖表/畫內(nèi)容總概括.⑵The chart/graph/ table/picture shows.⑶Many reasons contribute to 現(xiàn)象概括.⑷To begin with, 原因一.⑸進(jìn)一步闡述原因一.⑹Moreover, 原因二.⑺In addition, 原因三.⑻As a result, 段落總結(jié)句.⑼As to me, I think 我的觀點(diǎn)/態(tài)度/建議.⑽ First of all, 理由一.⑾ Besides, 理由二.⑿To conclude, 模板二
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⑴From the chart/graph/ table/picture, we learn that nowadays, 總述社會現(xiàn)象/事實(shí)現(xiàn)象, which has aroused the great /common concern.⑵what impresses me most is.⑶That are many reasons accounting for.⑷First of all,原因一.⑸進(jìn)一步闡述原因一.⑹ What is more, 原因二.⑺ For example, 舉例說明原因二.⑻ In addition, 原因三.⑼As far as I am concerned, 我的觀點(diǎn).⑽For one thing/On one hand 理由一.⑾ For another/ On the other hand,.⑿Thus/In brief/Taking above mentioned factors into consideration, I may reasonably conclude that….常用句型
⑴As is described in the chart/graph/table/picture, in the past few decades, there have arisen sharp increase in…如圖中所示,在過去的幾十年中,……急劇增長。
⑵The chart/graph/table/picture describes that the figure declines/falls smoothly/markedly, it indicates that…
圖表顯示數(shù)字下降平緩/明顯,這表明……
⑶In the chart/graph/table/picture, we can seen that there was a slight/ marked fluctuation.It reveals that…
在圖表中,我們可以看到有細(xì)微/很明顯的波動,這表明…
⑷Recently, the problems of …h(huán)as become the focus of the public concern.近來,…問題引起公眾極大的關(guān)注。
⑸There may be a combination of factors which contribute to/ are responsible for/ explain… …可能是好幾個(gè)因素造成的結(jié)果。
⑹There may be several possible reasons for which will be demonstrated below.可能有幾個(gè)原因?qū)е铝宋覀兿旅嫠U述的問題。
⑺It’s no easy /simple task to offer the reasons for this phenomenon which involves more than one complicated factors.要解釋該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因并不容易,因?yàn)槠渲猩婕暗胶芏鄰?fù)雜的因素。
⑻ Among all the important/convincing reasons for…,one should be emphasized… 在所有重要/有力的原因中,我們應(yīng)當(dāng)重點(diǎn)關(guān)注…
2問題解決型
模板一
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⑴It is well-known that 相關(guān)背景, but nowadays 總述不良現(xiàn)象或問題.⑵現(xiàn)象具體表現(xiàn)一.⑶現(xiàn)象的具體表現(xiàn)二.⑷It should be paid attention to that 該現(xiàn)象 is causing great harm/該現(xiàn)象 is caused for many reasons.⑸On one hand, ⑹On the other hand,.⑺Therefore, it is high time that ⑻First of all, 解決方法一.⑼進(jìn)一步闡述方法一.⑽Secondly/In addition, 解決方法二.⑾Thirdly/Besides/Morever.解決方法三.⑿Only in this way can we解決問題.模板二
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⑴There has been a discussion recently about 事實(shí)現(xiàn)象.⑵ It is obvious that 危害一/作用一.⑶ Additionally, 危害二/作用二.⑷So how to 解決問題is worth paying attention to.⑸On one hand/ Firstly, 解決方法一.⑹進(jìn)一步闡述方法二⑺On the other hand/Secondly,解決方法二.⑻For example,支持該方法的例子.⑼In addition/ Thirdly, 解決方法三.⑽In fact, more than three ways can be adopted.⑾As for me, 我的思考或看法.⑿All in all, 總結(jié)全文.常用句型
⑴It is important that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation.⑵There is little doubt that serious attention must be called to…
⑶There is no immediate solution to the problem of…,but …might be helpful/ but the general awareness of the necessity of…might be the first step.⑷In order to make our world a better place in which we live, we should make great efforts to… ⑸To conclude, we can see the best way is…
⑹Following these methods may not guarantee the success in solution to…, but the payoff will be worth the effort.3對比選擇型
模板一
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⑴Different people have different views on看法/問題.⑵Somme prefer 一種看法觀點(diǎn).⑶Others tend to.⑷As for me, I agree to the first/ second opinion.⑸Of course, 我不贊同的觀點(diǎn)的合理性.⑹For example, 支持其合理性的例子.⑺But 我不贊同的觀點(diǎn)的不足.⑻The following reason can account for your preference.⑼The main reason is that 支持觀點(diǎn)的理由一.⑽ A good example to illustrate is that 支持理由一的例子.⑾In addition/ What’s more,支持觀點(diǎn)的理由二.⑿For the foregoing, 重申觀點(diǎn).模板二
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⑴When it comes to事物/問題, different people will offer different opinions.⑵Some people take it for granted that 觀點(diǎn)一.⑶In their opinion, 觀點(diǎn)一的理由一.⑷Besides, 觀點(diǎn)一的理由二.⑸However, others hold that觀點(diǎn)二.⑹They maintain that 觀點(diǎn)二的理由一.⑺And 觀點(diǎn)二的理由二.⑻Weighing up these two arguments, I am for 觀點(diǎn)一/觀點(diǎn)二.⑼ On one hand, 理由一.⑽ On the other hand, ⑾ For instance, 舉例說明理由二.⑿ Therefore, as stated above, 常用句式
⑴ There is a general discussion nowadays on the problem of …Some argue that …,but others set forth a totally different argument about the issue.⑵ In response to the problem, some people believe…,in their minds,…Other maintain that…, in their eyes,…
⑶ Personally, I side with the former/ latter opinion.⑷ In conclusion, it is clear that
4觀點(diǎn)論證型
模板一
⑴ It is true that 普遍的觀點(diǎn).⑵ However, 不同的觀點(diǎn)/現(xiàn)象.⑶ I think,我的觀點(diǎn).⑷ 理由或其他論據(jù) can be listed as follows.⑸ Firstly,論據(jù)一.⑹ Secondly, 論據(jù)二.⑺ For example, 支持論據(jù)二的事例.⑻ Thirdly, 論據(jù)
三.⑼ A case in point is 支持論據(jù)三的事例.⑽ There is no doubt that 重申觀點(diǎn).⑾ Therefore, 與該觀點(diǎn)相符的做法.⑿ In a word, 總結(jié)全文.模板二
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⑴ Many people believe that 社會現(xiàn)象/事實(shí).⑵The truth is deep and profound.⑶ As we all know,具體表現(xiàn)一.⑷ In addition, 具體表現(xiàn)二.⑸ There are numerous examples supporting this argument.⑹ A case in point is 闡述第一個(gè)例子⑺ For another example, 引出并說明第二個(gè)例子.⑻ Moreover, 闡述第三個(gè)例子.⑼All mentioned above that tells us that重申觀點(diǎn).⑽ But(One thing we have to notice is that)提出個(gè)人建議.⑾ In short,總結(jié)全文.常用句式
⑴ It is well known that …plays an important part in…
⑵ It is believed that …
⑶ There are many reasons explaining …
⑷ From what has been mentioned above, we may safely come to the conclusion that …
5應(yīng)用文
⑴建議信模板
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Dear ___________,⑴ I am delighted to learn that _________.⑵ It____________.⑶ In my opinion, ________.⑷ On one hand,_________.⑸ On the other hand,_________.⑹ As to ________, I suggest ___________.⑺ If__________.⑻ It is unnecessary for you to _____________.⑼ In addition, ________________.⑽ I am sure _______________.⑾ Please inform me _________________.⑿ I amlooking forward to __________.Sincerely yours,Signature
常用句式
⑴ I would like to suggest that …/ I am writing with my suggestion that…
⑵ You have asked me for my advice with regard to …and I will try to make some conducive suggestions.⑶ If I were you, I would…
⑷ As you may agree that...⑸ I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/ practical/ useful.⑹ I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration.⑺ I would be happy to see improvements in this regard.⑻ I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.⑵倡議書模板
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Dear________,⑴ I am writing this letter to call on ____________to ____________.⑵ As some of you may know,___________.⑶ In fact,___________.⑷It is necessary for us to___________.⑸ On one hand,__________.⑹ On the other hand, ______________.⑺ However,___________________.⑻So it is high
time_____________________.⑼ Firstly, ________________.⑽Secondly, _______________.⑾ If you are willing to ____________, please ______________.⑿ Join us in the action and extend ________into a spirit that dares any possible difficulties.Thank you.⑶求職信模板
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Dear_______,⑴ I am applying for the position of _________advertised in _________.⑵ I major in
_____.⑶ My training in ________definitely meet your qualifications.⑷ My complete resume is attached.⑸ I will graduate on____________ from_________.⑹ In addition to the required courses of this program, I have_________.⑺ I also have some experience in ___________.⑻ I believe my training and experience _________________.⑼ You will find me to be ________________⑽ I hope that you will consider me for your position.⑾ May I have a personal interview at your convenience? ⑿ I can be reached by telephone __________.Sincerely yours,Signature
常用句式
⑴ I am writing to apply for the post of …advertised in …
⑵ In reply to your advertisement in…, I beg to apply for the post …in your company.⑶ I feel I have the qualifications and experiences needed for the position of …
⑷ I shall bring with me the full details of my testimonials as you request.⑸ I hope I may be granted an interview when I can explain my qualification more fully.⑹ It seems that my experience, together with my education, has given me ideal preparation to assume the role of…in your firm.
第三篇:大學(xué)英語寫作模版
(1)模版一There is no consensus among the people as to the view of(主題).Some people hold the idea that(觀點(diǎn)A).A case in point is that(支持觀點(diǎn)A的例子).On the other hand, others may have a quite different view.According to them,(觀點(diǎn)B).The most typical example is that(支持觀點(diǎn)B的例子).Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter.Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some
extent, but the latter is more convincing.2)模版二(主題)is a common occurrence in our lives.The attitudes toward this issue vary from person to person.Some people tend to ______when they are asked(觀點(diǎn)A)because(支持觀點(diǎn)A的原因).The most typical example is that(支持觀點(diǎn)A的例子).However, others argue that(觀點(diǎn)B).They point out that(重申觀點(diǎn)B)for the reason that(支持觀點(diǎn)B的原因).As far as I am concerned, I will choose to(你的觀點(diǎn))because this choice fits my personality and my life-long belief.2)My View 型(1)模版一 When asked about(主題), some people hold the idea that 觀點(diǎn)A).As far as they are concerned,(展開觀點(diǎn)A).But I could not agree with them in several points.In my opinion,(觀點(diǎn)B).The reasons for my choice are listed as follows.In the first place,(支持觀點(diǎn)B的理由1).In the second place,(支持觀點(diǎn)B的理由2).In the third place,(支持觀點(diǎn)B的理由3).For the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe(重申觀點(diǎn)B).(2)模版二 Some people believe that(觀點(diǎn)A).For instance, they hold the idea that(支持觀點(diǎn)A的例子).And it may bring them(A帶給他們的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,(我不同意的理由1).For another,(我不同意的理由2).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, I agree to the thought that(重申自己的觀點(diǎn)).3)利弊型(1)模版一Nowadays many people prefer(主題)because it plays a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.On the one hand,(主題的優(yōu)點(diǎn)1).On the other hand,(主題的優(yōu)點(diǎn)2).But everything can be divided into two.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that(主題的缺點(diǎn)1).To make matters
worse,(主題的缺點(diǎn)2).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects.Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain,(主題)itself is
neither good nor bad.It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.(2)模版二With the development of science and human civilization, many formerly unimaginable things come into reality.Some of them have positive effects on our life, but some are distasteful.The phenomenon of(主題現(xiàn)象)is an example of the former / latter one.There are many factors that may account for it, and the following are the most conspicuous aspects.To start with,(原因1).Furthermore,(原因2).Eventually,(原因3).Good as(主題現(xiàn)象)is, it has, unfortunately, its disadvantages.The apparent example is that(缺點(diǎn)例子1).In addition,(缺點(diǎn)例子2).On the whole, the phenomenon is one of the results of the progress of the modern society.There is still a long way for us to improve / eliminate(主題現(xiàn)象)and make our life more comfortable.圖表式作文 It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years(as X varies).At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are …(多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all, …(第一個(gè)原因).More
importantly, …(第二個(gè)原因).Most important of all, …(第三個(gè)原因).From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for
quite a long time(if necessary measures are not taken括號里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢).提綱式作文 1.對立觀點(diǎn)式 Some people are in favor of the idea of doing(X).They point out the fact that 支持(X)的第一個(gè)原因。They also argue that 支持(X)的另一個(gè)原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do(X).They firmly point out that 反對(X)的第一個(gè)理由。An eample can give the details of this argument:
There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of(X)overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about,(X)also may(X)的有一個(gè)壞處。
2.批駁觀點(diǎn)式Many people argue that 錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)。By saying that, they mean 對這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)的進(jìn)一步解釋。An example they have presented is that 一個(gè)
例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 贊成這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)或者受到這個(gè)錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)的影響)。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief.But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 與錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)相反的觀
點(diǎn)。There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下參照辯論文的議論文寫法)。
3.社會問題(現(xiàn)象)式 Nowadays, there exists an increasinglyserious social/economic/ environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common
concern of the public).According to a survey, 調(diào)查內(nèi)容說明這種現(xiàn)象的情況。(或者是一個(gè)例子)。
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面參照辯論式議論文寫法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects.參照辯論式議論文的寫法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.同上
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..辯論式議論文模版
模版1Some people believe(argue, recognize, think)that 觀點(diǎn)1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 觀點(diǎn)2.As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all, 論據(jù)1.More importantly, 論據(jù)2.Most important of all, 論據(jù)3.In summary, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或:From above, we can predict that 預(yù)測.模版2People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 觀點(diǎn)1, while others point out that 觀點(diǎn)2.As far as I am concerned, the
former/latter opinion holds more weight.For one thing, 論據(jù)1.For another, 論據(jù)2.Last but not the least, 論據(jù)3.To conclude, 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn).As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above, we can predict that 預(yù)測.模版3There is no consensus of opinions among people about X(爭論的焦點(diǎn))。Some people are of the view that 觀點(diǎn)1,while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 觀點(diǎn)2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.First of all, 論據(jù)1。Furthermore, 論據(jù)2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest.That is, 論據(jù)3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表決心.或 From above, we can predict that 預(yù)測.(I)說明原因型模塊
Currently, XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX
It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon
(6).With reference to my standpoint, I think(7).注釋: 1:XX的第一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn) 2:支持XX的做法 3:不支持XX的做法
4:XX的第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn) 5:舉例證明優(yōu)點(diǎn)二 6:說明XX優(yōu)點(diǎn)三的影響第三天我寫的相應(yīng)作文:The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your
enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that
(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You don't have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my standpoint, I think(he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).(I)說明原因型模塊(2)
In recent years, XX has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all,(3).Then, there comes a case that(4).Moreover,(5).Especially when(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind
people that(7).In this way, we should behave just like(8).The impact of Television
In recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV, offering as many as 50 channels.It has
caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all,(with so many programs to choose from,children are not getting as much exercise as they should).Then, there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school).Moreover,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what
programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing).In this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.Nowadays, there are more and more [某種現(xiàn)象] in [某種場合].It is estimated that [相關(guān)數(shù)據(jù)].Why have there been so many [某種現(xiàn)象]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [原因一].Besides, [原因二].The third one is [原因三].To sum up, the main cause of [某種現(xiàn)象] is due to [最主要原因].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [解決辦法一].On the other hand, [解決辦法二].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [某種現(xiàn)象].為便于讀者理解,我特意用這個(gè)模板,寫了一篇關(guān)于ghost writer(捉刀代筆的槍手)的示范性小作文,請您觀摩一下。
Nowadays, there are more and more [ghost writers / 槍手] in [China's examinations / 中國的考場].It is estimated that [5% examinees are ghost writers / 5%的應(yīng)試者是槍手].Why have there been so many [ghost writers / 槍手]? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is [hirers' ignorance / 雇主無知].Besides,[hirers' indolence / 雇主懶惰].The third one is [hirers' obtusity / 雇主遲鈍].To sum up, the main cause of [ghost writers / 槍手] is due to [hirers' low IQ / 雇主智商低].It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing, [flagellation / 鞭打].On the other hand, [decapitation / 斬首].All these measures will certainly reduce the number of [ghost writers / 槍手].(I)說明原因型
模塊
(一)Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities.It is estimated that(1).Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(2).Besides,(3).The third reason is(4).To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to(5).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing ,(6).On the other hand ,(7).All these measures will certainly reduce the
number of XX.Generation gap between parents and children
Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and
children which is so-called generation gap.It is estimated that(75 percentages of parents often complain their children's unreasonable behavior while children
usually think their parents too old fashioned).Why have there been so much misunderstanding between parents and children?
Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.The first one is that(the two generations,having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them).Besides(due to having little in common to
talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face).The third reason is(with the
pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they don't spare enough time to exchange ideas).To sum
up ,the main cause of XX is due to(lake of communication and understanding each other).It is high time that something were done upon it.For one thing(children should respect their parents).On the other hand ,(parents also should show solicitue for
their children).All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap.(I)說明原因型 模塊(2)In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on(1).The factors for(2).First of all ,(3).Then , there comes a case that(4).Moreover ,(5).Especiallywhen(6).Indeed, these unique points can be collected theo remindpeople that(7).In this way ,we should behave just like(8).The impact of Television
In recent years , with the development of science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels.It has
caused a heated debate on(the impact of television on children).Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for(parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).First of all ,(with so many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much
exercise as they should).Then , there comes a case that(some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their
ability to achieve in school).Moreover ,(the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies).Especially when(the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that(they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV
viewing).In this way ,children will not be influented too deeply.(I)說明原因型 模塊(3)
Currently,XX has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuable than XX.It is clear that(1).If you(2), as a result , your dreams will come true.On the contrary, if you(3).Failure will be following with you.It turns out that all your
plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(4).You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know(5).It will exert a profound influence upon
(6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(7).注釋:: XX的第一個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn) 2: 支持XX的做法 3:不支持XX的做法 4:XX的第二個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)
5:舉例證明優(yōu)點(diǎn)二6:說明XX優(yōu)點(diǎn)三的影響第三天我寫的相應(yīng)作文:
The importance of self-confidence
Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day.This does demonstrate the theory---nothing is more valuablethan self-confidence.It is clear that(self-confidence means trust in one's abilities).If you(are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power
to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome
difficulties), as a result , your dreams willcome true.On the contrary,if you(have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that
you would ever achieve anything).Failure will be following with you。
It turns out that all your plan falls through.No one can deny another fact that(self-confidence gives you light
when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).You donn't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect
that we all know(the secret of MMe.Curie lies in preserverence and
self-confidence, the latter in particular).It will exert a profound
influence upon(the achievement of one's ambitions).With reference to my standpoint ,I think(he that can have
self-confidence can have what he will).綜合運(yùn)用篇
Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....隨著社會的不斷發(fā)展,出現(xiàn)了越來越多的問題,其中之一便是____________。
As to whether it is a blessing or a curse, however, people take different attitudes.然而,對于此類問題,人們持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up with different attitudes 有不同的看法)
As society develops, people are attaching much importance to....隨著社會的發(fā)展,人們開始關(guān)注.....As to whether it is worthwhile....., there is a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people from different backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.關(guān)于是否值得________的問題,一直以來爭論不休。當(dāng)然,不同的人對此可能持不同的觀點(diǎn)。
Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern, some people are in alarm that....最近,這種現(xiàn)象引起了人們的廣泛關(guān)注,有人開始擔(dān)心______________。
展現(xiàn)問題篇
Recently the issue of whether or not...has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.近來,是否_______的問題已經(jīng)非常明確而且引起了社會的廣泛關(guān)注。
The issue whether it is good or not to....has aroused a heated discussion all over the country.______的利與弊已在全國范圍內(nèi)引起熱烈的討論。
At present, some people think....while others claim...Both sides have their merits.目前,一些人認(rèn)為_______而另一些人則認(rèn)為_______。其實(shí),兩種觀點(diǎn)都其可取之處。
People rarely reach an absolute consensus on such a controversial issue.對于這種極具爭議的話題,我們很難作出絕對的回答。
People from different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.不同行業(yè)的人對同一種問題的解釋不盡相同。
The controversial issue is often brought into public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudes towards the issue.這中極具爭議性的話題往往很受社會的關(guān)注。不同的人對此問題的看法也不盡相同。
When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...說到___,有人認(rèn)為____,而另一些人則認(rèn)為___。
There is a public controversy nowadays over the issue of..There who criticize...argue that..., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...目前,___問題爭議較大。批判_______的人認(rèn)為___,他們認(rèn)為____,不過,另一方面,贊同__的人則認(rèn)為___。
1、常用與開頭的短語、句式
(1)with the(rapidly)growing popularity of(computers/private cars)in China,the quality of our lives has been considerably changed。
(3)With the development of(science and technology/market economy),more and more/an increasing number of people come to realize that …
(4)Currently there is a widespread/serious concern over(illegal publication/drug abuse/negative influence of western cultures).(5)Nowadays ,a heated debated/discussion about…is under way in China.some people believe that …,whereas others argue that…
(6)There are some reasons for owning(private cars/ personal computers).To begin with,…Next,…Last,…There are, on the other hand, many reasons against it, First,…Second,…Finally,…
(7)There are many advantages and disadvantages in(owning a car).(8)There are various /at least three ways/possible techniques/problems/methods to do something
(9)Smoking/Alcoholic beverage should be banned from college campuses for toe reasons.The first reason is that …The second reason is that …/On the one hand ,… On the other hand,…
(10)The possible solutions of(the energy crisis/water shortages/these social problems)depend on three factors…
(11)The tow major reasons responsible for(the rapid economic growth /the widespread of fake products)are…
2.常用于結(jié)尾的短語、句式
(1)It is hoped that we should place much emphasis on/pay more attention to。。
(2)To conclude,we can see that(the best way/the possible solution)is。。
(3)In short,(shortages of water,decrease of fertile fields and environmental pollution)are the major problems to be solved to(increase rain production)。
(4)In order to make our world a better place in which to live we should make great efforts to。。
(5)In a word,there are three suggestions we must follow,only in this way can we(achieve a great success)。
(6)It is time for us to take an active part in。。
(7)Let us work hand in hand in hand to(solve these social problems)
1.表示原因 1)There are three reasons for this. 2)The reasons for this are as follows. 3)The reason for this is obvious. 4)The reason for this is not far to seek. 5)The reason for this is that...
6)We have good reason to believe that...
例: There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,people’s living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.
2.表示好處1)It has the following advantages.2)It does us a lot of good. 3)It benefits us quite a lot. 4)It is beneficial to us.
5)It is of great benefit to us.
例: Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.
3.表示壞處1)It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2)It does us much harm. 3)It is harmfulto us.
例: However,everything dividesinto two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televi-sion.
4.表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)for sb.to do sth. 2)We think it necessary to do sth. 3)It plays an important role in our life.
例: Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon,computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.
5.表示措施1)We should take some effective measures. 2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties. 3)We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.
例: The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.
6.表示變化1)Some changes have taken place in the past five years.
2)A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications. 3)The computer has brought about many changes in education.
例: Some changes have taken place in people’s diet in the past five years.The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek.Nowadays,more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein,and from fruit and vegetable to milk for vitamins.
第四篇:大學(xué)英語寫作
1.對立觀點(diǎn)式
A.有人認(rèn)為#是好事,贊成#,為什么?
B.有人認(rèn)為# 是壞事,反對#,為什么?
C.我的看法。
模板:
With the development of our society, # has increasingly become a common concern of the public.(可再加一句情況說明)
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing #.They point out the fact that 支持# 的第一個(gè)原因.They also argue that 支持# 的另一個(gè)原因.However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do #.They firmly point out that 反對# 的第一個(gè)理由.What’s more, 反對# 的第二個(gè)理由.There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of#/doing # 的好處overweigh the disadvantages.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.(結(jié)尾一段也可選用這種方式:
Therefore, in my opinion, although there are advantages of #/doing # 的好處, its negative effects should not be ignored.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.)
Colleges Have Opened Their Doors Wider With the development of our society, the fact that colleges have opened their doors wider has increasingly become a common concern of the public.Some people are in favor of the idea of opening the colleges’ doors wider.They point out the fact that it allows more students to pursue higher education.They also argue that it will provide more talents for our society.However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to open the colleges’ doors wider.They firmly point out that it will be much harder for the graduates to find a job.What’s more, it will lead to a social problem.There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of
opening the colleges’ doors wider overweigh the disadvantages.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.(141 words)(結(jié)尾一段也可選用這種方式: Therefore, in my opinion, although there are advantages of opening the colleges’ doors wider, its negative effects should not be ignored.Given more correct directions, all of us can benefit more from it.)(141 words)
2.社會問題(現(xiàn)象)式
A.一個(gè)社會問題或者現(xiàn)象
B.產(chǎn)生的原因
C.我的看法。
Work in the Countryside(positive)
1.許多大學(xué)畢業(yè)生自愿到農(nóng)村工作
2.出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因
3.我的看法
Work in the Countryside With more and more university graduates in our society, how to find a good job has increasingly become a common concern of the public.It is reported that many university graduates would like to work in the countryside.There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.To start with, it is a fact that with more and more university students graduating each year, the job market competition becomes more and more fierce, and many graduates cannot find jobs in the cities.Secondly, most villages that are trying to employ university graduates have developed well.It makes mot much difference whether to work in the countryside or in the city.Last but not least, some university graduates who come from the
countryside are eager to go back home to contribute to the construction of their hometown.Based on the above reasons, I think university graduates should go to work where they are needed most and where they can make full use of their talents.Working in the countryside can be truly an advisable(明智的)choice.(170 words)Misleading News(negative)
1.當(dāng)今社會虛假新聞越來越多
2.分析出現(xiàn)這種現(xiàn)象的原因
3.呼吁社會改變這種不智之舉
With the development of our society, misleading news has increasingly become a common concern of the public.It is reported that there are more and more misleading news in our society.There are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.To start with, it is a fact that there are more and more modern communication tools in the world, misleading news can easily spread.Secondly, some journalists would like to draw public attention and increase the sales by publishing misleading news.Last but not least, the public would like to share some interesting news which may be misleading.Based on the above discussions, I think we should take action to prevent misleading news.Think twice before we speak can be truly an advisable choice.(124 words)
3.應(yīng)用文
寫信:感謝信, 投訴信,道歉信,邀請信,申請(貸款、入學(xué)、求職),請求別人幫忙(寫推薦信,搜查資料)
Dear Sir or Madam,(不知是誰的情況下,如果有要求寫給誰要寫上具體的名稱)
I am a student/customer who….I am writing to thank you for/complain about/apologize for/invite you to do/apply for/ask for your help to do sth.描述過程或原因.When I …, I was really thankful/upset/sorry /honored/interested/upset.I sincerely hope that ….If you can…, I will be really….I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Lily
A Letter to Apply for a Student Loan
1.介紹你的個(gè)人情況
2.申請助學(xué)貸款的原因、數(shù)額及用途
3.如何保證??顚S靡约澳愕倪€款
Dear Sir or Madam,I am a sophomore in Peking University who majors in Engineering.I am writing to apply for a student loan of 2,000 yuan.It is hard for me to make the application, but I have to.Last year both my parents were laid off, and what’s worse, three weeks ago my mother was discovered to have caught a serious disease.Therefore, I could not get support for my study form my family any more.When I knew that I have the opportunity to apply for the student loan, I was really happy and excited.So I immediately write this letter to you to ask for your help.I sincerely hope that I can get the loan.I promise that all the money will go to my tuition and fees for the next year, and I will repay it within four years, that is, one year after my graduation.If you can grant my application, I will be really grateful.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Lily
(166 words)
4.圖表作文模板
圖表作文提示部分包括圖表和文字要點(diǎn)提示兩部分。圖表的類型主要有:圓形(餅型)圖(pie chart)、柱形圖(直型圖)(graph)、曲線圖(chart)和數(shù)據(jù)統(tǒng)計(jì)表(表格)(table)。① 描述圖表 ②分三方面解釋原因 ③下結(jié)論
1)As can be seen from the in______.During the period from _______to _______, ________rose from ________to _______, while _______ decreased from _______ to _______.2)We believe that there are a number of reasons for this phenomenon.To begin with,____.Secondly, ____.Last but not least, _____.3)In conclusion, ______.We can imagine that _____.范文: Health Gains in Developing Countries
1.以下圖為依據(jù)描述發(fā)展中國家的期望壽命(1ife expectancy)和嬰兒死亡率(infant mortality)的變化情況
2.說明引起變化的各種原因
1960 1990
Health Gains in Developing Countries
life expectancy of developing 40 years nearly 60 years, infant
develops quickly in developing countries during this period, and living quality improves the development of national health care systems.When they become richer and richer, they care more about personal health conditions.medical sciences also develop at a fantastic speed, and it is much safer for mothers to give birth.the situations in developing countries are changing for the better.(169 words)
注:還須注意今年的熱點(diǎn)問題,如:就業(yè)(有關(guān)詞匯如: graduate, apply for, applicant, candidate等);經(jīng)濟(jì)問題(有關(guān)詞匯如: the financial
crisis/tsunami等);或城市交通問題等.
第五篇:中考英語三段式作文法
中考英語三段式作文法
重點(diǎn)詮釋 :
所謂三段式就是將一篇書面表達(dá)按三段的寫作模式謀篇布局。就整體篇章結(jié)構(gòu)而言,如何把握較大的寫作空間,三段式的寫作模式為最佳選擇。三段式的模式寫法通常為:
1.第一段開門見山,提出要解決的問題或觀點(diǎn),或者把時(shí)間,地點(diǎn),人物和主要事件及時(shí)點(diǎn)出。
2.第二段要擺出事實(shí)或提出論據(jù),或者把事情發(fā)展的經(jīng)過詳細(xì)寫出來。
3.最后一段,得出結(jié)論或理由。
注意:要學(xué)會使用過渡詞。過渡詞猶如“橋梁”和“粘合劑 ”。恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠^渡詞可避免結(jié)構(gòu)松散,層次分明,表意不清等弊端,使文章條理清楚,文字連貫流暢。常用的過渡詞有:
遞進(jìn)型: also,(and)besides, what’s more, moreover, furthermore, in addition, even, what’s worse, worse still, to make matters worse, for the worse, not only?but also等;
解釋型:that is(to say), in other words, or, namely, if fact, in reality, as a matter of fact等;
轉(zhuǎn)折型:however, but, yet, nevertheless, instead, on the contrary,on the other hand 等;
列舉型:firstly?secondly?finally, on the one hand, on the other hand, for one thing, for another 等 舉例型:for example, for instance, such as, that is, like, take? for example等;
因果型:because(of), since, now that, thanks to, due to;thus, therefore, as a result(consequence),so? that, so that等;
讓步型:though, although, in spite of, despite 等;
順序型:first?next?and then?finally, first?then?after that?finally 等;
并列型:and, both?and, or, either?or, as well as, 等
時(shí)間型:afterwards, soon, later, the moment/ immediately/ on doing, hardly?when, no sooner?than 等
總結(jié)型:in a word, to sum up, in short, on the whole, in conclusion 等
見解型:in my opinion, personally speaking, as far as I am concerned,I’m sure 等
條件型:if, as long as, so long as, on condition that , unless 等
寫作典例 :
假設(shè)你是李越,你的加拿大筆友Steve來信說,他和他的一些同學(xué)正在學(xué)中文,請你推薦兩本學(xué)中文的詞典。根據(jù)下表提供的信息,請你給他寫一封回信。
英漢詞典 新華字典
收詞
(字)18000(英語)
20000(漢語)10000
價(jià)格 52元 11元
特點(diǎn) 大量例子,用法說明,適合初學(xué)者 中國最常用的漢語字典
注意:
1.詞數(shù):80左右;
2.參考詞匯:推薦recommend;英漢詞典The English-Chinese Dictionary(ECE);
新華字典 Xinhua Dictionary(XD)
Dear Steve,_________________________________________________
_________________________________________________
Yours
Li Yue
分析:此篇書面表達(dá)屬于實(shí)物說明文,其篇章結(jié)構(gòu)可按三段式進(jìn)行寫作。本文的第一段,可用直接的敘述“I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese”.正文即可作為第二段,其主要內(nèi)容是對兩本詞典的一些介紹。結(jié)束語即可作為第三段。應(yīng)將兩本詞典的特點(diǎn)表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,以便加拿大筆友 Steve作出合理選擇。表達(dá)時(shí),文章的基本時(shí)態(tài)可考慮用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
范文:
Dear Steve,I’m so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese.I’d like to recommend the following two dictionaries.The English-Chinese Dictionary is really a good one for beginners.It has 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words, besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you how to use a word.Xinhua Dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary fo 10,000 words.It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese.Of the two, ECD is more expensive.It costs 52 yuan,and XD costs 11 yuan.Please let me know if you want me to buy one for you.Yours,Li Yue