第一篇：綜合改錯練習(xí)范文
修改病句梳理
修改病句，先要找出病因，然后再著手修改。修改時，注意不要改變原句的意思。常見的病句有以下幾種：
（1）成份殘缺。即句子不完整。如：讀了《革命烈士詩二首》后，受到了深刻的教育。是誰受到了深刻的教育呢？沒說出來。這個句子應(yīng)該補(bǔ)上我或同學(xué)們一類詞語。（2）搭配不當(dāng)。即句子的主要成份之間，附加成份和主要成份之間搭配不當(dāng)。
如：春天的蘇州是一年中最美的季節(jié)。把這個句子簡縮后就可看出，蘇州是季節(jié)，顯然不通。只要改成蘇州的春天是一年中最美麗的季節(jié)，就通順了。（3）前后矛盾。一句話必須合乎事理不能自相矛盾。如：我的回家作業(yè)基本上全部
做完了?；丶易鳂I(yè)要么是基本上做完（還有少量沒做），要么是全部做完（一點(diǎn)兒都沒有剩下）。又說是基本上，又說是全部顯然是矛盾的，兩種說法只能保留一種。
（4）重復(fù)羅嗦。有些句子形容詞用得過多，意思重復(fù)，甚至改變了原意。把句子多余的詞語刪去，句子就明白簡潔了。
如：我一定要改正不好的缺點(diǎn)。缺點(diǎn)當(dāng)然是不好的，把不好的刪去句子就簡潔了。
（5）不合邏輯。如：商店的貨架上擺滿了葡萄、蘋果、梨和水果。因?yàn)樗似咸?、蘋果、梨等，不能平列一起，所以應(yīng)該把水果刪去。（6）詞序不對。即句子里的詞語排列的先后不合適。
如：他完成了一次又一次的艱巨任務(wù)。調(diào)整為他一次又一次完成了艱巨任務(wù)。
（7）形容不當(dāng)。如：王老師講完故事，教室里響起排山倒海的掌聲。教室里不可能出現(xiàn)排山倒海的掌聲，形容不當(dāng)，可改為熱烈的掌聲。
練一練
修改下列病句
1.貫徹《小學(xué)生守則》以后，發(fā)生了顯著的變化。
2.我們沿著這條公路，不要一小時，就可到達(dá)縣城了。
3.我們偉大的祖國在社會主義康莊大道上。
4.這個班級的同學(xué)是全校開展學(xué)雷鋒活動最好的班級。
5.老師的教育下，他明確了學(xué)態(tài)度。
6.同學(xué)們積極投入愛國衛(wèi)生運(yùn)動，把教室打掃得整整齊齊、干干凈凈、清清爽爽。
7.過去，我做作業(yè)馬虎潦草，很不認(rèn)真，不經(jīng)常拖拉，不按時完成。
8.六一節(jié)那天，我踏著輕松的步伐，興奮的心情來到學(xué)校。9.全班同學(xué)都到了，只有王鋼沒來。
10.昨天傍晚下了一夜大雨。
11.校園里屹立著一棵棵白楊。
12.因?yàn)樗泻艽筮M(jìn)步，但是老師表揚(yáng)了他。
13.動物園的爬行館里展出各種蛇與許多鳥。
14.公園里的松柏、桃樹等樹木枝繁葉茂。
15.我愛吃蘋果、香蕉、黃瓜等水果。
16.圖書角有《兒童文學(xué)》《少年文藝》和《中國少年報》等課外書。
17.他經(jīng)常回憶過去有趣的往事。
18.今天中午下了一天的雨。
19.我上完五年級了，還有一年沒有畢業(yè)。
20.萬里長城、故宮博物院和南京長江大橋是中外游客向往的古跡。
21.造紙是我國古代的四大發(fā)明。
22.《林海》這篇課文的作者是老舍先生寫的。
23.他穿了一件灰色上衣，一頂藍(lán)帽子。
一進(jìn)幼兒園，我就看見了一張張可愛的小臉和一陣陣動聽的歌聲。
綜合改錯練習(xí)
1、（兩處錯別字，四處語病，兩處標(biāo)點(diǎn)）
去年署假，我有機(jī)會加入了夏令營活動。夏令營的活動內(nèi)容真是五彩繽紛，有畫畫、跳舞、唱歌、朗讀、寫生、坐軍事游戲等……夏令營活動既豐富了我的假期生活，而且開闊了我的眼界。我真喜愛夏令營活動啊。
2、（兩處錯別字，三處病句，一處標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號）
初夏,我們在老師的帶領(lǐng)下，壞著高興的心情，和摘草莓的工具去郊區(qū)摘草莓。我們有的題著盒子，挎著籃子，有的拎著袋子……大家爭先恐后你爭我搶地忙開了。不一會兒，盒子，籃子和袋子都裝得滿滿的了。喜滋滋地滿載而歸了。
3、（一處錯別字，兩處標(biāo)點(diǎn)，三處語?。?/p>
過了《五一》長假，同學(xué)們重反校園。一進(jìn)教室，大家就七嘴八舌，議論紛紛地說起了假期里的新聞，揚(yáng)州軍嫂陳巧云多年來熱愛幫助困難軍屬，受到了人們的一致夸耀。
4、（兩處錯別字，兩處標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號，三處語?。?/p>
《六一》那天，爸爸媽媽代我去太湖邊游玩。湖邊五顏六色、色色俱全的鮮花正在怒放，讓我們贊嘆不決?？上У氖翘廴緡?yán)重，湖面上漂浮著許多臟物?？吹竭@些，我們的心情很繁重，我想，“如果我們每個人都講衛(wèi)生，不亂扔臟物，我們的健康和疾病就有保障了?！?/p>
5、（兩處錯別字，兩處標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號，三處語?。?/p>
盡管語文書上有很多一對對繁簡字對照的列子，可是離開了簡化字，還是不知道它的讀音。于是我去像老師請教。老師親密地對我說：“這不是你的問題？雖然現(xiàn)在這些字不常出現(xiàn)，所以不熟悉是正常的”。
6、（兩處錯別字，兩處標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號，三處語?。?/p>
我們班長的王琳是德、智、體全面發(fā)展。他不僅關(guān)心集體，克苦學(xué)習(xí)。還注意鍛煉身體，因?yàn)?，他被評為三好學(xué)生。語文對他特別感興趣，經(jīng)長給“語文報”投稿。
7、（一處錯別字，三處語?。?/p>
上課鈴一響，沸騰的校園里立即頓時安靜下來。我們?nèi)嗤瑢W(xué)都在認(rèn)真聽講，只有兩個同學(xué)在作小動作。老師批評了他們，兩個同學(xué)克服了自己的錯誤。
8、（兩個錯別字，三個錯標(biāo)點(diǎn)，三處語?。?/p>
我寫的一篇作文“我愛家鄉(xiāng)的梧桐樹”在作文竟賽中獲獎了。晚上，我激動的心情翻開日記本?；叵胫l(fā)獎時的情景就象放電影一樣一幕幕地出現(xiàn)在眼前。當(dāng)時，老師親切地對我說：“希望你再接再勵爭取更大的成就?！?/p>
9、（一個錯別字，一處錯標(biāo)點(diǎn)，兩處語病）
在遼闊的南海上，有四個群島：東沙、西沙、南沙和中沙。它們就是自古以來我們祖國的神圣領(lǐng)土。美麗富撓的西沙群島在南海的西北面，它像一顆珍珠生長在蔚藍(lán)的海面上。人們稱它們?yōu)槊利惖摹赌虾Ｃ髦椤贰?/p>
10、下面這段話中一共有5處錯誤。（三處語病，一個標(biāo)點(diǎn)，一個錯別字）
王小軍非常喜歡酷愛打乒乓球，看“體育世界”雜志。只要一打球，他就會忘記吃飯和休息。他在訓(xùn)練時勤奮克苦，球技不斷增加。在全市小學(xué)生乒乓球大賽中，他自然不負(fù)眾望，一路過關(guān)斬將，奪得了小學(xué)生男子單打的冠軍。
11、修改下面一段話中的錯誤。（四處錯誤，二個錯別字，一個錯標(biāo)點(diǎn)）
老師來到我的身邊，用親熱的語氣對我說：“在學(xué)習(xí)上不能追求慮榮，要踏踏實(shí)實(shí)，扎扎實(shí)實(shí)，這樣才能取得好成就。老師的聲音不大，所以它像重垂一樣敲擊著我的心。
12、修改下面一段話中的錯誤。（病句兩個，錯字兩個，標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤一個）。
西游記是中國古典小說四大名著，在世界文化史上也享有勝名，書中塑造了唐僧、孫悟空和眾多人物形象，內(nèi)容生動有趣，讓人讀了愛不失手。
13、（四處語病，二錯字，一錯標(biāo)點(diǎn)）
閱覽課上，我們討論并閱讀了“海倫.凱勒傳 ”，感觸很多。誰能相信一個不但看不見而且聽不見的女子能掌握法、德等五種英語呢？誰能相信她果然能取得那么多驚人的成就呢？做為一個身體建全的人，我們有什么理由不努力呢？
14、綜合改錯。（錯別字、標(biāo)點(diǎn)、語病共6處）
“六一”慶祝會上，宣讀了優(yōu)秀少先隊員的名單，特別發(fā)揚(yáng)了劉華的先進(jìn)事跡。聽了這個消息，同學(xué)們紛紛向他慶祝，劉華十分激動極了，他表明自己的決心：今后一定要再接再勵，刻苦鉆研，努力攀登科學(xué)高峰。
第二篇：修改病句練習(xí)和綜合改錯1
修改病句練習(xí)
一、病句的幾種類型：
1.成分殘缺：即句子中缺少了某些必要成分，句子意思表達(dá)不清楚。
例：他受壞思想的影響，走上了犯罪。
2.搭配不當(dāng)：即句子中的某兩個成分或某兩個詞語錯誤搭配。
例：教室里人聲混亂，老師講的什么，誰也沒有聽清。
3.詞序顛倒：即句子里的詞沒有按照規(guī)律和表達(dá)意思的需要來排列。
例：歷史博物館里展出了兩千多年前新出土的文物。4.意思重復(fù)： 即句子里出現(xiàn)多余成分，顯得語句羅嗦、累贅。
例：我覺得這是想得不對的錯誤想法。
5.概念不清：即句中的意思含糊不清，令人不解、混淆。例：造紙是中國的四大發(fā)明。
6.前后矛盾：即句子前后意思不一致。例：我肯定李琳大概是生病了。7.分類不當(dāng)：即句子中把不是一類的歸為了一類。例：籃子里有青菜、蘿卜、葡萄、西紅柿等 蔬菜。
二、改病句的三個步驟
①讀句子、理句意②查排審、找病因③改句子、保原意（改得少、改得巧）
三、改病 句練習(xí)。
（1）每個小學(xué)生都應(yīng)該上課專心聽講的好習(xí)慣。
（2）“六一”聯(lián)歡會上，我們班表演了文娛節(jié)目和大合唱。（3）我們要不斷改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法，增強(qiáng)學(xué)習(xí)效率。（4）周爺爺愛戴我們小朋友，我們熱愛周爺爺。（5）這本書對我很感興趣。
（6）黃繼光不但壯烈犧牲了，而且他永遠(yuǎn)活在我們的心中。（7）大家都講衛(wèi)生，我們的健康和疾病就有保障。（8）《繁星》的作者是巴金寫的。
（9）我們要積極響應(yīng)“人人動手，綠化祖國”。（10）美麗的大草原一碧千里，到處都是綠色。（11）我們開會通過并討論了他的建議。
（12）《小學(xué)生語文報》和《少年文藝》這兩種報紙我都很愛看。(13)聯(lián)歡會開始了，整個會場充滿了熱鬧的氣氛。(14)戰(zhàn)士們冒著大雨和泥濘的小路快步前進(jìn)。(15)下午，全校師生和少先隊員去參觀畫展。
(16)《科學(xué)畫報》和《少年文藝》這兩種報紙我都愛看。(17)我估計他今天一定不會來參加會議了。
(18)在美術(shù)老師的悉心指導(dǎo)下，使我的素描畫進(jìn)步很快。(19)我們必須認(rèn)真克服并善于發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)習(xí)上的毛病。(20)上課時，始終專心聽講，因此，成績很好。
(21)菜園里種著西紅柿、西瓜、黃瓜、毛豆、紅豆、扁豆等蔬菜。(22)經(jīng)過教育，我明確了學(xué)習(xí)目的和學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度。(23)墻上的掛鐘走了一圈，一個小時又過去了。(24)我們要熱愛公共財產(chǎn)。(25)草原把夕陽照得五彩繽紛。
(26)《小學(xué)生數(shù)學(xué)報》和《少年報》這兩種報紙我都很愛看。(27)王老師被光榮地評為“模范班主任”的光榮稱號。(28)我們大搖大擺地走在山間小道上。
(29)我們要不斷改善缺點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮優(yōu)點(diǎn)，取答得更大的成績。(30)經(jīng)過努力，王小明的錯別字大大進(jìn)步了。
(31)黃河、長江、萬里長城、古運(yùn)河都是我國古代的偉大工程。(32)這篇作文層次和語句都很通順。改病句練習(xí)
1．造紙是我國古代的四大發(fā)明。
2．《林海》這篇課文的作者是老舍先生寫的。3．他穿了灰色上衣,一頂藍(lán)帽子。
4．一進(jìn)幼兒園,我就看見了一張張可愛的小臉和一陣陣動聽的歌聲。5．大掃除開始了,男女老少都參加,男的干重活,老的少的干輕活。6．這篇文章的內(nèi)容比較優(yōu)美。7．夏天的廬山是美麗的風(fēng)景。8．小王用的毛筆寫字非常漂亮。9．她焦急地等待著汽車開來的方向。10．列車沿著鐵路在戈壁 灘上奔騰。
11．聯(lián)歡會上，同學(xué)們唱了許多動聽的歌和舞蹈。
12．勞動開始了，男的女的都參加，男的、年輕的干重活，女的、年老的干輕活。13．秋天的田野一片迷人的景色，金黃的稻谷，雪白的棉花，碧綠的麥苗,多使人喜愛呀！
14．我們班的好人好事和李剛助人為樂的好事，受到了學(xué)校的表揚(yáng)。15．晚霞把山峰、田野、村莊、大地映紅了。16．所有的全校師生都參加了植樹勞動。17．多讀好書，可以豐富和提高我們的知識。18．媽媽的工作養(yǎng)成了認(rèn)真的好習(xí)慣。19．我估計他這道題一定不會做。20．夏天的小興安嶺是一年中最好的季節(jié)。21．這學(xué)期，我校開展了“手拉手”的熱潮。
22．我校分別在教室里和球場上舉行籃球比賽和智力競賽。23．在“慶祝元旦”聯(lián)歡會上，我們班上演出了文娛節(jié)目和舞蹈。24．鄰居家的小弟弟不僅年紀(jì)小，而且很懂事。25．國慶節(jié)的夜晚，大街小巷，張燈結(jié)彩，非常熱烈。26．聽了報告，受到了教育。
27．早稻熟透了，田野像鋪上了綠色的地毯。28．我忍不住不禁 笑了起來。29．我經(jīng)常看到小明有時在早鍛煉。30．小興安嶺的夏天真美麗。31．少先隊員發(fā)揮革命傳統(tǒng)。
32．因?yàn)槔仙釔垧B(yǎng)花，而且養(yǎng)了許多花。33．媽媽買了水果、桃、蘋果，還有巧克力。34．他喊他出去玩。
35．每個小學(xué)生都應(yīng)該上課專心聽講的好習(xí)慣。36．言行不一致的人是一種極壞的作風(fēng)。37．烏云和大雨一起從空中傾瀉下來。38．墨綠的麥苗舒展著嫩葉。
39．近幾年來，我國人民的生活水平又有了改善。40．經(jīng)過普法教育，群眾普遍的覺悟提高了。41．他的一雙手幾乎完全凍僵了。
42．黃繼光不但壯烈犧牲了，而且他永遠(yuǎn)活在我們的心中。43．我們在學(xué)習(xí)上應(yīng)該要有不怕困難的精神。44．《繁星》的作者是巴金寫的。45．兩個新社會，真是鮮明的對比?。?6．這些作文題目的范圍比較困難。
47．江明這學(xué)期努力學(xué)習(xí),終于取得了很好的成就。48．老班長熱氣騰騰地端來了一碗魚湯。49．我在花壇旁聞到了醉人的花香和漂亮的蝴蝶。50．泰山是我國的五大名山。51．我們開會通過并討論了他的建議。52．這本書有聲有色。53．媽媽給我買了三本書籍。
54．美麗的大草原一碧千里，到處都是綠色。55．經(jīng)過老師的耐心教育，使我認(rèn)識可自己的錯誤。56．丁小蘭努力學(xué)習(xí)，老師經(jīng)?？湟?。57.李小明光榮地被評為優(yōu)秀少先隊員的稱號。58.我一定要做好一個受小朋友歡迎的輔導(dǎo)員工作。59.小組會上，大家互相做了自我批評。60王清端正了學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度和目的。61.經(jīng)過努力，我的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度提高了。62.經(jīng)過努力，我的學(xué)習(xí)目的提高了。63.我斷定他大概是鄭平的哥哥。64.會場上到處都是五顏六色的紅旗。
65.小華懷著愉快的心情和輕松的步子向?qū)W校走去。66.經(jīng)過學(xué)習(xí)，大家普遍的覺悟提高了。67.這里的風(fēng)景美麗，優(yōu)美，好看極了。
68.近兩年來，電視機(jī)的質(zhì)量提高了，價格減少了。69.小剛特別喜歡踢足球和排球。70.前天傍晚下了一天的雨。71.懷著崇敬的心情，祭掃了烈士墓。72.我們要認(rèn)真改正并找出作業(yè)中的錯誤。73.這本書的內(nèi)容和插圖都 很美麗。74.萬里長城、趙州橋、黃河都是我國古代的偉大工程。75.我們要繼承和發(fā)揚(yáng)老一輩的革命事業(yè)。
76.老師表揚(yáng)了班里的好人好事和李小敏拾金不昧的好事。77.大林經(jīng)常一貫地為班上做好事。
78.一進(jìn)公園，就看見美麗的鮮花和誘人的香味。79.高大的高樓大廈像雨后春筍般矗立在祖國大地。80.我愛看《兒童時代》《兒童故事選》和課外書。81.林萍一向刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，在這次考試中居然取得了好成績。82.山坡上栽著許多梨樹、蘋果樹和果樹。83.誰在那兒放了一槍，嚇得鳥兒幾乎全飛走了。84.“六·一”聯(lián)歡會上的氣象十分熱烈。
85.這時，大家的眼睛都集中在黑板上，看老師演算。86.姐姐把自己的想法毫無保留地全部告訴我。87.春天到了，種子長葉，生根，發(fā)芽。88.只有雨停止，我們就到公園去。
89.盼望已久的故事書即將終于到了，同學(xué)們快樂極了。90.登山隊員在陡峭曲折的山路上昂首闊步地前進(jìn)。91.小明刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，取得了顯著的成就。92.老師們愛戴我們每個學(xué)生。
93.兩個新舊社會，真是鮮明的對比??！94.在這次區(qū)小學(xué)生運(yùn)動會上，取得了優(yōu)異成績。95.老師耐心學(xué)生。
96下課了，校園里頓時一下子就沸騰了。97他頂著寒風(fēng)和冰雪艱難地走著。98火紅的楓葉在春風(fēng)中搖動。99他寫出了一份非常仔細(xì)的報告。100奶奶家養(yǎng)了許多家禽：雞、鴨、牛等。101我們要培養(yǎng)自己的寫作興趣和水平。
102陳老師光榮地被評為“模范班主任”的稱號。103這道題雖然不難，但是他很快就做好了。104他戴著一頂藍(lán)帽子，一條藍(lán)褲子。
105聯(lián)歡會上，同學(xué)們唱了許多動聽的歌和舞蹈。106我學(xué)到了許多新的見識。107英雄賴寧為搶救國家財產(chǎn)的獻(xiàn)身精神。108領(lǐng)導(dǎo)辦事太果斷，往往就會失去群眾的信任。109我估計他這道題一定不會做。
110雷鋒助人為樂的精神是值得我們學(xué)習(xí)的榜樣。111長城、故宮和南京長江大橋都是我國的名勝古跡。112我們要不斷改正學(xué)習(xí)方法，增加學(xué)習(xí)效率。113他熱愛學(xué)習(xí),但是熱愛勞動。114我每天晚上收看廣播和電視。115我國人口是世界上最多的國家。
116他帶了鋼筆、尺子、橡皮、參考書等文具。117皓潔的月光灑滿大地，滿天的繁星調(diào)皮地眨著眼睛。B綜合改錯。
修改短文的三個步驟：
①讀文章、明段意②細(xì)讀句、改別字、改病句（改病句方法見上）、改標(biāo)點(diǎn)③再讀段、理句序 １． 王老師對我們要求非常嚴(yán)厲：一次考試卷發(fā)下來,我接過是試卷看了一眼,“99分”，便順手把卷子塞進(jìn)書包。王老師說：“你一題錯了，訂正了嗎?！蔽衣唤?jīng)心的回答，“沒有?！蓖趵蠋焽?yán)厲地說：“馬上改，不要放過一道錯題。”我只好拿出試卷，把試題從做一遍。從此，我端正了有錯畢改的好習(xí)慣。
２．我寫的一遍作文“我愛故鄉(xiāng)的梧桐樹”在作文比賽中中獎了。晚上，我激動地心情翻開日記本，想象著發(fā)獎時的情景就像過電影一樣一幕幕地出現(xiàn)在眼前。當(dāng)時，老師新切地對我說：“希望你再接再勵，爭取更大的成就”。
３．在<<學(xué)雷峰樹新風(fēng)>>活動中，學(xué)校展現(xiàn)了一批助人為樂的好同學(xué)。每天任真完成了各科作業(yè)和語文作業(yè)后。總是奈心地幫助應(yīng)病缺課王少立同學(xué)見沙波這么幫助自己任真，感動極了。
４．下課了，我的作業(yè)還沒做完，看到同學(xué)們玩得興致勃勃、興高采烈的樣子和一陣的歡笑聲，可是我有點(diǎn)沉不氣了，便拿過同桌的作業(yè)鈔了起來。這事被老師知到了，她不僅沒有批評我，還用英雄事績教育我，我知到自己錯了，心情很繁重。從此已后，我不在抄別人的作業(yè)，終于取得了很好的學(xué)習(xí)成就。
５．老師傅聽了這話，一下子，摟住了徒弟的肩膀，一棵淚珠涌出了多皺的眼角，他異口同聲地說：“真多虧你了，否則，還不知怎樣結(jié)果呢！
６．今天是<<-六.一>>兒童節(jié)，小紅穿著黃衣服，籃帽子到學(xué)校參加連歡會。會上，她首先第一個表演了精致的節(jié)目，收到了大家的熱烈歡迎。接下來，同學(xué)們 陸續(xù)表演了獨(dú)唱，舞蹈和許多動聽的歌舞。
７．“雷鋒的故事”這本書寫得深動形象。讀了這本書，受到了深刻的教育。雷鋒叔叔是我們的好榜樣，我們要用實(shí)際行動像雷鋒叔叔學(xué)習(xí)，向他那樣見好事就做的好思想。
８．“六.一”兒童節(jié)那天上午。我校全體少先隊到電影院看“少年擒魔記”，大家非常高興極了。到了電影院，我見李華眼睛近視，代著眼睛還看不清，便主動地把我的坐位讓給了他。９．我的姑父在外國語學(xué)院工作，他會三四國英語。他家里多極了書報，我最喜歡看“中國少年報”和“少年文藝”這兩種報紙，還喜歡看一些醫(yī)學(xué)方面的書籍，可以增長知識，這樣我們的健康與疾病就有了保障。
10．我的表哥是個大學(xué)生。很愛學(xué)習(xí)，特別是外語。一讀起來，就一切忘掉了周圍的。因?yàn)樗麑W(xué)會了三四國英語。
11．我的妹妹天真活潑；聰明可愛，已上四年級了。由于她學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度明確，又掌握了正確的學(xué)習(xí)方法，并且有良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，加上克苦學(xué)習(xí)的精神，因?yàn)?，學(xué)習(xí)取得了好成績。
12．學(xué)校把優(yōu)秀少先隊員的名單已經(jīng)公布了，我們班的同學(xué)陸續(xù)被評為優(yōu)秀少先隊。結(jié)果她一點(diǎn)兒也不驕傲。同學(xué)們夸獎她，總是說“自己做得還很不夠”。
13．一萬米長跑比賽非常激動，運(yùn)動健兒二十幾名在跑道上你追我趕。他們都跑得很快，所以跑得相當(dāng)輕松。觀眾不停地喊“加油，”都愿望本班的運(yùn)動員取得好成績。觀眾不停地喊“加油，”都愿望本班的運(yùn)動員取得好成績。
14.有一次，作完語文作業(yè)，我把本子一推。就要出去玩。爸爸問我：“作業(yè)撿察過了嗎？”我漫無邊際地回答“不用撿察，保證沒措！”爸爸莊嚴(yán)對我說：“不要那么自信。細(xì)心一點(diǎn)好，學(xué)習(xí)可不能有一點(diǎn)馬虎！”
15.在個門攻課中，語文是對我最敢興趣的。其他攻課如數(shù)學(xué)、自然、歷史等學(xué)得就差勁了。老師對我進(jìn)行了嚴(yán)格地批評，并鼓舞我要認(rèn)真學(xué)好個門攻課，我明確了學(xué)習(xí)目的和態(tài)度。學(xué)習(xí)有了改善。
16.署假里的一天，我在屋里看“水滸傳”。正當(dāng)我看得有聲有色的時候，居然聽到屋外有人大喊，“快收谷子呀！”我急忙趕快放下書本，像屋外跑去。
17.你看過“昆蟲記”這本書嗎？這是法國十九世紀(jì)的昆蟲學(xué)家法布爾譜寫的一本書。書里計載了許多有趣的故事，它詳細(xì)描術(shù)了昆蟲怎樣生活、捕食、逃辟敵害等，真是知識豐盛極了。
18.魯爺爺今年八十多歲了。他身穿一件黑棉襖和一頂舊棉帽，仍舊保持著艱苦樸素。在解放戰(zhàn)爭時候，他推起小車為前線運(yùn)送小米、小麥和糧食，不知走過多少城市和村莊？他曾今被評為“支前模范”的光榮稱號。他經(jīng)常對我們說：“他經(jīng)歷過兩個新舊社會，深知今天辛福生活來得不容易，你們一定要愛護(hù)它??！”
19.我們已經(jīng)即將畢業(yè)，學(xué)習(xí)更加勤勞了，這學(xué)期，我們班經(jīng)常閱讀的報紙有《小學(xué)生語文導(dǎo)報》、《少年文藝》和《中國少年報》。大量的課外閱讀，使我們增長了知識和寫作水平。我們班還被評為“課外閱讀先進(jìn)集體”的光榮稱號呢？
20.一天,我們在校園里植樹老師帶領(lǐng)著。老師說，你們裁樹的時候，根要放直，苗要扶正，土要埋好，然后在澆水。聽了老師的話，我們膽戰(zhàn)心驚地把每一顆小樹苗裁好，又澆上水?？曙柫怂?，顯得格外十分精神，仿佛再對我們 笑。
21.去年署假，我到香山參加夏令營活動，內(nèi)容豐富多采：“彈琴、跳舞、唱歌、朗頌、畫畫??”真是有趣好玩及了。它雖然豐富了我的假期生活，而且增長了知識，這樣的生活多有意義啊 ？
22.錢小慶同學(xué)不光智慧，還很克苦，學(xué)習(xí)成積一直很好。但由于 她愛躺著看書，結(jié)果不到半年時候眼睛就近視聞。錢小慶后悔及了，她說，我一定要改進(jìn)躺著看書的不良的壞習(xí)慣。從此，她堅定做眼保鍵操，主意養(yǎng)成保衛(wèi)視力和良好習(xí)氣，視力又漸漸地好轉(zhuǎn)了。
23.江輝同學(xué)在學(xué)習(xí)上不怕困苦，經(jīng)過一年的努力，居然取得了很大的成就，我們因該學(xué)習(xí)他這種玩強(qiáng)；刻苦專研的精神。
24.宋文 要轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)了。他來向我告別。把一支刻著自己名字的鋼筆送給他，說：“你走后，我會想你的，希望你給我寫信。”他把嶄新的一本成語詞典送給我。我們倆已經(jīng)差點(diǎn)兒流出了眼淚。
25.攀登到光輝的頂點(diǎn)是須要副出代價的。那些畏懼害怕困苦的人，那些意識柔弱的人，那些缺少意力的人，都是很難維持到低的。
26.學(xué)校的課外活動正是五花八門。奏，我們代著鍋、盆、碗、蔬菜等炊具到郊外野餐；夏天，我們在碧波蕩漾的湖中游泳；秋天，老師帶我們到公園嘗菊，冬天，開展象征性長跑。
27.居里夫人是波蘭人。她是世界著名科學(xué)家，曾取得兩次諾貝爾獎金。她在取得成績的時候和別人的表揚(yáng)時，首先第一個想到的是少年時候教語法的歐班老師。28.一天晚上，方方和亮亮在一起同時看電視小品節(jié)目。演員的精致表演，引得使他們不禁忍不住笑出聲來。他倆邊看邊談。他對他說：“言行不一致的人是一種極壞的作風(fēng)?！毙×谅犃?，點(diǎn)頭表示同意贊同。
第三篇：經(jīng)典短文改錯練習(xí)
短文改錯.1.Anita Mei was a very famous pop singer in Hong Kong.Together 76.with her mother, she began to perform in the age of four.In the early 77.1980s, she took part in a local singing competition but won the first 78.prize.The song “Bad Girl” made her famous.The following years see 79.Anita play in many movies and made many records.Some of her songs 80.were very popular.She was always ready to help others, she made 81.a lot of good friends.When SARS hit Hong Kong in 2004, they 82.organized several pop concert with other pop stars, calling on Hong 83.Kong people to bravely face the disease.Sad, Anita died of cancer 84.in December, 2003.The brave and the beautiful lady will always be 85.remembered by people.2.When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory.76． But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77． to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78． saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79． like to have.One of the answers he accepted was from a man 80． was looking for a job, too.This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 81． when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82． address to you present boss as I have been trying to find 83． a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter, 84． he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish.85．
3.Every day John goes to work by trains.He always 76.___________ buys a piece newspaper to read on the train, so he feels 77.___________ that the time pass more quickly.One day on the train he 78.___________ was reading a report about important football match.79.___________ The report was such interesting that he forgot to get off 80.___________ at his station.He didn’t know it until he saw the sea.81.___________ He got off at the next station, and wait a long time for 82.___________ a train to go back.He arrived very lately at the office.83.___________ His boss was angry to him when he told him why he 84.___________ was late.“Work is more importance than football!” 85.___________ 4.In the first day when I went to work in a very famous 76．___________ restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few 77．___________ people coming for dinner.So I am “invited” to have a meal in 78．___________ the restaurant.After ordering two French dishes and some food, 79．___________ I began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the 80．___________ meal.Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything 81．___________ else wrong there.I wrote something improper down secret.My 82．___________ meal was not serving yet.I looked at my watch ：32 minutes 83．___________ passed!I realized that wait too long for service was the main 84．__________ reasons why the business was poor.Then I wrote a report about 85．___________ my findings and presented it to the boss.5.Last month we bought our two-year-old daughter a little dog.There are not many children of her age there we live, 76． and we thought a dog would make her less alone.We were 77． right.They play together happily all days.Our daughter now 78． smiles and laughs a lot more than she used.In a way it 79．
is like having two children in the house.All of them are 80． very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they 81． want.The dog is easy to look after than my daughter.82． He always eats up all his food and we don’t have piles of 83． dirty clothes to wash.My wife is also happy because of 84． I have given up smoke.The dog doesn’t like the smell.85．
6.I went shopping with my wife.We have a lot of things to 1._________ buy them.We drove to the center of the city and stopped 2._________ our car in front of the shop.An hour late, we came back 3._________ to the car.But it was strange that we couldn't open 4._________ the door.So we asked policeman for help.He was 5._________ glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.6._________ Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.“How are 7._________ you doing with my car ” We were surprising and went to 8._________ see the number of the car.What you think we did then 9._________ We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.10._________ 7.To my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages 76.______ traveling both by plane and by train.Travel by plane is 77.______ time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest 78.______ on the trip.but it is too expensive.Unless you travel by 79.______ train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can 80.______ appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the 81.______ railway.However, it was too crowded and time-wasting, 82.______ and we can take a good rest.So you can see every 83.______ coin has two sides.You'd better to choose either of 84.______ them depending on your own interest or economy.85.______
8.Dear Worried, I have accepted your letter and I'm glad to give you some 76.__________ suggestions.First in all, don't be disappointed.Many students 77.__________ find it difficulty to write well.In my opinion, if you want to 78.__________ improve your writing, and you can do several things.First, 79.__________ do some study with phrases and sentence structures.Second, 80.__________ read as much as possible.There are many things can't be 81.__________ learnt.You must see it in books many times.Then you'll 82.__________ be able to use them correctly yourself.But, in order to write 83.__________ well, you must learn to read much.Finally, you'd better to 84.__________ recite some good passages.Good luck for you in your writing.85.9.My cousin and I usually stay out late with some friends on Saturday evenings, left Grandpa alone at home.71.___ It was so cold yesterday, however, that none of us wanted 72.____ to suffer from the frozen wind outside.So after dinner we 73.____ stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa 74.____ tell his experiences in Second World War.In fact they 75.____ sounded familiar to us, so we were still listening attentively 76.____ so as to make him be happy.Now and then we asked Grandpa 77.____ some questions, that he answered in a humorous way.We 78.____ burst out laughing from time to time and he laughed too.79.____ Full of joy, we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.80.____ 10.As is known to all that the Internet is playing 76________ a more and more important part on our daily life.77________ On it, we can not only read news at home or abroad 78_________ but also get much information as possible.For instance, 79_________ we are often send e-mails or make telephone calls 80 _______ to our families as well as our friends.However, 81 _______ we can go to school on the net, read different 82 _______ kind of books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games.We can even do shopping without left our homes.83 _______ 84 ________ 85 _______ ⑴ 76.√ 77.in---at78.but---and 79.see---saw 80.made---make 81.∧and/so 82 they—she 83.concert—concerts 84.Sadly 85.the ⑵ 76．job 77．去掉been 78． a 79．experience 80． received 81． 去掉was/加who 82．your-my 83．√ 84． read 85． really ⑶76.trains 改為 train 77.去掉 piece。78.pass 改為 passes。79.important 前加 an 80.such 改為 so。81.此行無錯。82.wait 改為 waited。83.lately 改為 late。84.to 改為 with。85.importance 改為 important。
⑷76.in--on 77 a / 78 was 79 right 80.at the /my 81that--whether /if 82 secretly 83.served 84 waiting 85.reason ⑸ 76．there改為where 77．a(chǎn)lone改為lonely 78．days改為day 79．used改為used to 80．All改為Both 81．but改為and 82．easy改為easier 83．無錯 84．去掉of 85．smoke改為smoking ⑹1.Have改為had 2.them去掉 3.late改為later 4.正確 5.asked 后加a 6.minute改為 minutes 7.How 改為What 8.surprising改為surprised 9.What 后加do 10.speak 改為 say ⑺76.To—In 77.Travel—Travelin9 78.comfortably--comfortable 79.Unless--If 80.safety--safe 81.正確 82.was—is 83.can后加not 84.去掉to 85.or--and ⑻76.accepted→received 77.in→of 78.difficulty→difficult 79.去掉and 80.對 81.things后加that 82.it→them 83.But→So 84.去掉to 85.for→to
⑼71.left-leaving 72.none-neither 73.froze-freezing 74.stay-stayed 75.in 后面加the 76.so-but/yet 77.be去掉 78.that-which 79.正確80.in-on ⑽ 76.As →It 77.on →in 78.or →and 79.get ⌒much as 80.are81.However →Besides 82.∨ 83.kind →kinds 84.watching →watch 85.left →leaving
⑾ 76.accepted→received 77.去掉more, 78.because后加of, 79.other→another 80.say→said 81.and→or兩,三天用two or three days.82.family前加the這里特指家庭的其他成員.83.fast→soon fast指動作的迅速,soon指時間“盡快地”.84.√ 85.happily→happy
⑿ 76.√77.is→are 78.felt→feel 79.Therefore→However 80.∧little→a a little boy 81.去掉not 后的to 82.play→playing 83.like→as 84.grade→grades“分?jǐn)?shù)”, 85.for→in
⒀ 76.have→had 77.√ 78去掉but 79.去 掉him 80.shoulders →shoulder 81.taking → taken 82.was后加 not 83.He→I 84.explain后加to ⒁ 1.calling—called 2.walking前加was3.and—or 4.and—but5.dead—died 6.√7.All—Both 8.去掉not 9.great前加a 10.danced—dance
第四篇：短文改錯練習(xí)
短文改錯專練：March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room.It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep.I’m thinking about my future!Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know!My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun.Also I’m really bad at biology at the school.My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!
Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed.I can think about my future in bed.I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time.We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before.We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place.We listened to the music together and soon became best friends.Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them.It is great.We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach.We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs.Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK.I’ve got news too.I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school.We’re going to stay on a farm with four days!We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.I’m sure I’ll love it.You know how crazy I am about the animals!I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too.Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours, 4 Nadia People had always been interested in bees.This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make.In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years.In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey.They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard.Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees.In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees.They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other.Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.Yesterday afternoon, I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name.How a good man!
I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today.According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way.He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification.Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.Last weekends, I went shopping by myself.It was a sunny day and I feel very happy.When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus.Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop.Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room.I had to wait the next bus.Suddenly, it started to rain.I had no choice but to call a taxi.Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by.Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain.What an unlucky day!
My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor.I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.I enjoy serving others.Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job good.Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies.For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students.Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax.I believe I am the right person to this post.Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week.I’m really sorry.I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was.So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken.Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus.And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing.Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone.Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me.Hope to hear you soon.Yours, Jack
Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip.I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus.On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked.We all had good time.Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees.It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air.Finally, we went home at half past four.Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad.They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent.Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future.Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them.He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners.Besides, the cost is too much for his family.In my opinions, I should continue to study in China.As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market.It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars.But there is one serious problems with this.The information are actually very often misinformation.It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us.And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.My grandfather had had enough of his cat.He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess.So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town.He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep.My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather.He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention.He decided he will never give her away again.Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society.This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did.People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past.Customs and beliefs have changed very slower.They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better.Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next.Yet changes do take place.All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other.In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof.They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter.Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police.After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to.It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly.The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground.Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit.There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema.But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities.As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired.But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic.Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active.In a word, exercise is good for the health.Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email.A cave!You know we’re on holidays in Spain.Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first.We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good.I think I ate too much ice cream the day before.Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada.However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking.Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful.We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave.We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything.Take care!
Ben
My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television.He decided to set up himself.He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses.After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV.The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV.That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside.When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire.Fortunately, the fire was putting out.It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others.It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves.But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas.We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received.They forget to think of the sick and the homeless.The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed.What a shame!
A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him.Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes.At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door.Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move.Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house.When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy.But it was too late and she was arrested.My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.21
Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams.Some copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones.Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects.For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students.For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future.So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating.At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student.At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class.I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent.Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.I believe you will be one of their friend too.Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing.I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.Best wishes!
Yours, Li Hua
第五篇：五年級語文修改病句和綜合改錯練習(xí)
修改病句練習(xí)
一、病句的幾種類型：
1.成分殘缺：即句子中缺少了某些必要成分，句子意思表達(dá)不清楚。
例：他受壞思想的影響，走上了犯罪。
2.搭配不當(dāng)：即句子中的某兩個成分或某兩個詞語錯誤搭配。
例：教室里人聲混亂，老師講的什么，誰也沒有聽清。
3.詞序顛倒：即句子里的詞沒有按照規(guī)律和表達(dá)意思的需要來排列。
例：歷史博物館里展出了兩千多年前新出土的文物。4.意思重復(fù)： 即句子里出現(xiàn)多余成分，顯得語句羅嗦、累贅。
例：我覺得這是想得不對的錯誤想法。
5.概念不清：即句中的意思含糊不清，令人不解、混淆。例：造紙是中國的四大發(fā)明。
6.前后矛盾：即句子前后意思不一致。
例：我肯定李琳大概是生病了。7.分類不當(dāng)：即句子中把不是一類的歸為了一類。例：籃子里有青菜、蘿卜、葡萄、西紅柿等 蔬菜。
二、改病句的三個步驟
①讀句子、理句意②查排審、找病因③改句子、保原意（改得少、改得巧）
三、練習(xí)：
（1）每個小學(xué)生都應(yīng)該上課專心聽講的好習(xí)慣。
（2）“六一”聯(lián)歡會上，我們班表演了文娛節(jié)目和大合唱。（3）我們要不斷改進(jìn)學(xué)習(xí)方法，增強(qiáng)學(xué)習(xí)效率。（4）周爺爺愛戴我們小朋友，我們熱愛周爺爺。（5）這本書對我很感興趣。
（6）黃繼光不但壯烈犧牲了，而且他永遠(yuǎn)活在我們的心中。（7）大家都講衛(wèi)生，我們的健康和疾病就有保障。（8）《繁星》的作者是巴金寫的。
（9）我們要積極響應(yīng)“人人動手，綠化祖國”。（10）美麗的大草原一碧千里，到處都是綠色。（11）我們開會通過并討論了他的建議。
（12）《小學(xué)生語文報》和《少年文藝》這兩種報紙我都很愛看。(13)聯(lián)歡會開始了，整個會場充滿了熱鬧的氣氛。(14)戰(zhàn)士們冒著大雨和泥濘的小路快步前進(jìn)。(15)下午，全校師生和少先隊員去參觀畫展。
(16)《科學(xué)畫報》和《少年文藝》這兩種報紙我都愛看。(17)我估計他今天一定不會來參加會議了。
(18)在美術(shù)老師的悉心指導(dǎo)下，使我的素描畫進(jìn)步很快。(19)我們必須認(rèn)真克服并善于發(fā)現(xiàn)學(xué)習(xí)上的毛病。(20)上課時，始終專心聽講，因此，成績很好。
(21)菜園里種著西紅柿、西瓜、黃瓜、毛豆、紅豆、扁豆等蔬菜。(22)經(jīng)過教育，我明確了學(xué)習(xí)目的和學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度。(23)墻上的掛鐘走了一圈，一個小時又過去了。(24)我們要熱愛公共財產(chǎn)。(25)草原把夕陽照得五彩繽紛。
(26)《小學(xué)生數(shù)學(xué)報》和《少年報》這兩種報紙我都很愛看。(27)王老師被光榮地評為“模范班主任”的光榮稱號。(28)我們大搖大擺地走在山間小道上。
(29)我們要不斷改善缺點(diǎn)，發(fā)揮優(yōu)點(diǎn)，取答得更大的成績。(30)經(jīng)過努力，王小明的錯別字大大進(jìn)步了。
(31)黃河、長江、萬里長城、古運(yùn)河都是我國古代的偉大工程。(32)這篇作文層次和語句都很通順。
1．造紙是我國古代的四大發(fā)明。
2．《林海》這篇課文的作者是老舍先生寫的。3．他穿了灰色上衣,一頂藍(lán)帽子。
4．一進(jìn)幼兒園,我就看見了一張張可愛的小臉和一陣陣動聽的歌聲。5．大掃除開始了,男女老少都參加,男的干重活,老的少的干輕活。6．這篇文章的內(nèi)容比較優(yōu)美。7．夏天的廬山是美麗的風(fēng)景。8．小王用的毛筆寫字非常漂亮。9．她焦急地等待著汽車開來的方向。10．列車沿著鐵路在戈壁 灘上奔騰。
11．聯(lián)歡會上，同學(xué)們唱了許多動聽的歌和舞蹈。
12．勞動開始了，男的女的都參加，男的、年輕的干重活，女的、年老的干輕活。13．秋天的田野一片迷人的景色，金黃的稻谷，雪白的棉花，碧綠的麥苗,多使人喜愛呀！14．我們班的好人好事和李剛助人為樂的好事，受到了學(xué)校的表揚(yáng)。15．晚霞把山峰、田野、村莊、大地映紅了。16．所有的全校師生都參加了植樹勞動。17．多讀好書，可以豐富和提高我們的知識。18．媽媽的工作養(yǎng)成了認(rèn)真的好習(xí)慣。19．我估計他這道題一定不會做。
20．夏天的小興安嶺是一年中最好的季節(jié)。21．這學(xué)期，我校開展了“手拉手”的熱潮。
22．我校分別在教室里和球場上舉行籃球比賽和智力競賽。23．在“慶祝元旦”聯(lián)歡會上，我們班上演出了文娛節(jié)目和舞蹈。24．鄰居家的小弟弟不僅年紀(jì)小，而且很懂事。25．國慶節(jié)的夜晚，大街小巷，張燈結(jié)彩，非常熱烈。26．聽了報告，受到了教育。
27．早稻熟透了，田野像鋪上了綠色的地毯。28．我忍不住不禁 笑了起來。29．我經(jīng)?？吹叫∶饔袝r在早鍛煉。30．小興安嶺的夏天真美麗。31．少先隊員發(fā)揮革命傳統(tǒng)。
32．因?yàn)槔仙釔垧B(yǎng)花，而且養(yǎng)了許多花。33．媽媽買了水果、桃、蘋果，還有巧克力。34．他喊他出去玩。
35．每個小學(xué)生都應(yīng)該上課專心聽講的好習(xí)慣。36．言行不一致的人是一種極壞的作風(fēng)。37．烏云和大雨一起從空中傾瀉下來。38．墨綠的麥苗舒展著嫩葉。
39．近幾年來，我國人民的生活水平又有了改善。40．經(jīng)過普法教育，群眾普遍的覺悟提高了。41．他的一雙手幾乎完全凍僵了。
42．黃繼光不但壯烈犧牲了，而且他永遠(yuǎn)活在我們的心中。43．我們在學(xué)習(xí)上應(yīng)該要有不怕困難的精神。44．《繁星》的作者是巴金寫的。45．兩個新社會，真是鮮明的對比??！46．這些作文題目的范圍比較困難。
47．江明這學(xué)期努力學(xué)習(xí),終于取得了很好的成就。48．老班長熱氣騰騰地端來了一碗魚湯。
49．我在花壇旁聞到了醉人的花香和漂亮的蝴蝶。50．泰山是我國的五大名山。
51．我們開會通過并討論了他的建議。52．這本書有聲有色。53．媽媽給我買了三本書籍。
54．美麗的大草原一碧千里，到處都是綠色。55．經(jīng)過老師的耐心教育，使我認(rèn)識可自己的錯誤。56．丁小蘭努力學(xué)習(xí)，老師經(jīng)?？湟?。57.李小明光榮地被評為優(yōu)秀少先隊員的稱號。58.我一定要做好一個受小朋友歡迎的輔導(dǎo)員工作。59.小組會上，大家互相做了自我批評。60王清端正了學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度和目的。61.經(jīng)過努力，我的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度提高了。62.經(jīng)過努力，我的學(xué)習(xí)目的提高了。63.我斷定他大概是鄭平的哥哥。64.會場上到處都是五顏六色的紅旗。
65.小華懷著愉快的心情和輕松的步子向?qū)W校走去。66.經(jīng)過學(xué)習(xí)，大家普遍的覺悟提高了。67.這里的風(fēng)景美麗，優(yōu)美，好看極了。
68.近兩年來，電視機(jī)的質(zhì)量提高了，價格減少了。69.小剛特別喜歡踢足球和排球。70.前天傍晚下了一天的雨。
71.懷著崇敬的心情，祭掃了烈士墓。72.我們要認(rèn)真改正并找出作業(yè)中的錯誤。73.這本書的內(nèi)容和插圖都 很美麗。
74.萬里長城、趙州橋、黃河都是我國古代的偉大工程。75.我們要繼承和發(fā)揚(yáng)老一輩的革命事業(yè)。
76.老師表揚(yáng)了班里的好人好事和李小敏拾金不昧的好事。77.大林經(jīng)常一貫地為班上做好事。
78.一進(jìn)公園，就看見美麗的鮮花和誘人的香味。79.高大的高樓大廈像雨后春筍般矗立在祖國大地。80.我愛看《兒童時代》《兒童故事選》和課外書。81.林萍一向刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，在這次考試中居然取得了好成績。82.山坡上栽著許多梨樹、蘋果樹和果樹。83.誰在那兒放了一槍，嚇得鳥兒幾乎全飛走了。84.“六〃一”聯(lián)歡會上的氣象十分熱烈。
85.這時，大家的眼睛都集中在黑板上，看老師演算。86.姐姐把自己的想法毫無保留地全部告訴我。87.春天到了，種子長葉，生根，發(fā)芽。88.只有雨停止，我們就到公園去。
89.盼望已久的故事書即將終于到了，同學(xué)們快樂極了。90.登山隊員在陡峭曲折的山路上昂首闊步地前進(jìn)。91.小明刻苦學(xué)習(xí)，取得了顯著的成就。92.老師們愛戴我們每個學(xué)生。
93.兩個新舊社會，真是鮮明的對比?。?4.在這次區(qū)小學(xué)生運(yùn)動會上，取得了優(yōu)異成績。95.老師耐心學(xué)生。
96下課了，校園里頓時一下子就沸騰了。97他頂著寒風(fēng)和冰雪艱難地走著。98火紅的楓葉在春風(fēng)中搖動。99他寫出了一份非常仔細(xì)的報告。
100奶奶家養(yǎng)了許多家禽：雞、鴨、牛等。101我們要培養(yǎng)自己的寫作興趣和水平。
102陳老師光榮地被評為“模范班主任”的稱號。103這道題雖然不難，但是他很快就做好了。104他戴著一頂藍(lán)帽子，一條藍(lán)褲子。
105聯(lián)歡會上，同學(xué)們唱了許多動聽的歌和舞蹈。106我學(xué)到了許多新的見識。
107英雄賴寧為搶救國家財產(chǎn)的獻(xiàn)身精神。108領(lǐng)導(dǎo)辦事太果斷，往往就會失去群眾的信任。109我估計他這道題一定不會做。110雷鋒助人為樂的精神是值得我們學(xué)習(xí)的榜樣。111長城、故宮和南京長江大橋都是我國的名勝古跡。112我們要不斷改正學(xué)習(xí)方法，增加學(xué)習(xí)效率。113他熱愛學(xué)習(xí),但是熱愛勞動。114我每天晚上收看廣播和電視。115我國人口是世界上最多的國家。
116他帶了鋼筆、尺子、橡皮、參考書等文具。
117皓潔的月光灑滿大地，滿天的繁星調(diào)皮地眨著眼睛。
四、綜合改錯。修改短文的三個步驟：
①讀文章、明段意②細(xì)讀句、改別字、改病句（改病句方法見上）、改標(biāo)點(diǎn)③再讀段、理句序 １． 王老師對我們要求非常嚴(yán)厲：一次考試卷發(fā)下來,我接過是試卷看了一眼,“99分”，便順手把卷子塞進(jìn)書包。王老師說：“你一題錯了，訂正了嗎。”我慢不經(jīng)心的回答，“沒有?！蓖趵蠋焽?yán)厲地說：“馬上改，不要放過一道錯題?！蔽抑缓媚贸鲈嚲恚言囶}從做一遍。從此，我端正了有錯畢改的好習(xí)慣。
２．我寫的一遍作文“我愛故鄉(xiāng)的梧桐樹”在作文比賽中中獎了。晚上，我激動地心情翻開日記本，想象著發(fā)獎時的情景就像過電影一樣一幕幕地出現(xiàn)在眼前。當(dāng)時，老師新切地對我說：“希望你再接再勵，爭取更大的成就”。３．在<<學(xué)雷峰樹新風(fēng)>>活動中，學(xué)校展現(xiàn)了一批助人為樂的好同學(xué)。每天任真完成了各科作業(yè)和語文作業(yè)后?？偸悄涡牡貛椭鷳?yīng)病缺課王少立同學(xué)見沙波這么幫助自己任真，感動極了。
４．下課了，我的作業(yè)還沒做完，看到同學(xué)們玩得興致勃勃、興高采烈的樣子和一陣的歡笑聲，可是我有點(diǎn)沉不氣了，便拿過同桌的作業(yè)鈔了起來。這事被老師知到了，她不僅沒有批評我，還用英雄事績教育我，我知到自己錯了，心情很繁重。從此已后，我不在抄別人的作業(yè)，終于取得了很好的學(xué)習(xí)成就。５．老師傅聽了這話，一下子，摟住了徒弟的肩膀，一棵淚珠涌出了多皺的眼角，他異口同聲地說：“真多虧你了，否則，還不知怎樣結(jié)果呢！
６．今天是<<-六.一>>兒童節(jié)，小紅穿著黃衣服，籃帽子到學(xué)校參加連歡會。會上，她首先第一個表演了精致的節(jié)目，收到了大家的熱烈歡迎。接下來，同學(xué)們陸續(xù)表演了獨(dú)唱，舞蹈和許多動聽的歌舞。７．“雷鋒的故事”這本書寫得深動形象。讀了這本書，受到了深刻的教育。雷鋒叔叔是我們的好榜樣，我們要用實(shí)際行動像雷鋒叔叔學(xué)習(xí)，向他那樣見好事就做的好思想。
８．“六.一”兒童節(jié)那天上午。我校全體少先隊到電影院看“少年擒魔記”，大家非常高興極了。到了電影院，我見李華眼睛近視，代著眼睛還看不清，便主動地把我的坐位讓給了他。
９．我的姑父在外國語學(xué)院工作，他會三四國英語。他家里多極了書報，我最喜歡看“中國少年報”和“少年文藝”這兩種報紙，還喜歡看一些醫(yī)學(xué)方面的書籍，可以增長知識，這樣我們的健康與疾病就有了保障。
10．我的表哥是個大學(xué)生。很愛學(xué)習(xí)，特別是外語。一讀起來，就一切忘掉了周圍的。因?yàn)樗麑W(xué)會了三四國英語。
11．我的妹妹天真活潑；聰明可愛，已上四年級了。由于她學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度明確，又掌握了正確的學(xué)習(xí)方法，并且有良好的學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣，加上克苦學(xué)習(xí)的精神，因?yàn)?，學(xué)習(xí)取得了好成績。12．學(xué)校把優(yōu)秀少先隊員的名單已經(jīng)公布了，我們班的同學(xué)陸續(xù)被評為優(yōu)秀少先隊。結(jié)果她一點(diǎn)兒也不驕傲。同學(xué)們夸獎她，總是說“自己做得還很不夠”。
13．一萬米長跑比賽非常激動，運(yùn)動健兒二十幾名在跑道上你追我趕。他們都跑得很快，所以跑得相當(dāng)輕松。觀眾不停地喊“加油，”都愿望本班的運(yùn)動員取得好成績。觀眾不停地喊“加油，”都愿望本班的運(yùn)動員取得好成績。
14.有一次，作完語文作業(yè)，我把本子一推。就要出去玩。爸爸問我：“作業(yè)撿察過了嗎？”我漫無邊際地回答“不用撿察，保證沒措！”爸爸莊嚴(yán)對我說：“不要那么自信。細(xì)心一點(diǎn)好，學(xué)習(xí)可不能有一點(diǎn)馬虎！”
15.在個門攻課中，語文是對我最敢興趣的。其他攻課如數(shù)學(xué)、自然、歷史等學(xué)得就差勁了。老師對我進(jìn)行了嚴(yán)格地批評，并鼓舞我要認(rèn)真學(xué)好個門攻課，我明確了學(xué)習(xí)目的和態(tài)度。學(xué)習(xí)有了改善。16.署假里的一天，我在屋里看“水滸傳”。正當(dāng)我看得有聲有色的時候，居然聽到屋外有人大喊，“快收谷子呀！”我急忙趕快放下書本，像屋外跑去。
17.你看過“昆蟲記”這本書嗎？這是法國十九世紀(jì)的昆蟲學(xué)家法布爾譜寫的一本書。書里計載了許多有趣的故事，它詳細(xì)描術(shù)了昆蟲怎樣生活、捕食、逃辟敵害等，真是知識豐盛極了。
18.魯爺爺今年八十多歲了。他身穿一件黑棉襖和一頂舊棉帽，仍舊保持著艱苦樸素。在解放戰(zhàn)爭時候，他推起小車為前線運(yùn)送小米、小麥和糧食，不知走過多少城市和村莊？他曾今被評為“支前模范”的光榮稱號。他經(jīng)常對我們說：“他經(jīng)歷過兩個新舊社會，深知今天辛福生活來得不容易，你們一定要愛護(hù)它??！”
19.我們已經(jīng)即將畢業(yè)，學(xué)習(xí)更加勤勞了，這學(xué)期，我們班經(jīng)常閱讀的報紙有《小學(xué)生語文導(dǎo)報》、《少年文藝》和《中國少年報》。大量的課外閱讀，使我們增長了知識和寫作水平。我們班還被評為“課外閱讀先進(jìn)集體”的光榮稱號呢？
20.一天,我們在校園里植樹老師帶領(lǐng)著。老師說，你們裁樹的時候，根要放直，苗要扶正，土要埋好，然后在澆水。聽了老師的話，我們膽戰(zhàn)心驚地把每一顆小樹苗裁好，又澆上水?？曙柫怂@得格外十分精神，仿佛再對我們笑。
21.去年署假，我到香山參加夏令營活動，內(nèi)容豐富多采：“彈琴、跳舞、唱歌、朗頌、畫畫……”真是有趣好玩及了。它雖然豐富了我的假期生活，而且增長了知識，這樣的生活多有意義啊 ？
22.錢小慶同學(xué)不光智慧，還很克苦，學(xué)習(xí)成積一直很好。但由于 她愛躺著看書，結(jié)果不到半年時候眼睛就近視聞。錢小慶后悔及了，她說，我一定要改進(jìn)躺著看書的不良的壞習(xí)慣。從此，她堅定做眼保鍵操，主意養(yǎng)成保衛(wèi)視力和良好習(xí)氣，視力又漸漸地好轉(zhuǎn)了。
23.江輝同學(xué)在學(xué)習(xí)上不怕困苦，經(jīng)過一年的努力，居然取得了很大的成就，我們因該學(xué)習(xí)他這種玩強(qiáng)；刻苦專研的精神。
24.宋文 要轉(zhuǎn)學(xué)了。他來向我告別。把一支刻著自己名字的鋼筆送給他，說：“你走后，我會想你的，希望你給我寫信。”他把嶄新的一本成語詞典送給我。我們倆已經(jīng)差點(diǎn)兒流出了眼淚。
25.攀登到光輝的頂點(diǎn)是須要副出代價的。那些畏懼害怕困苦的人，那些意識柔弱的人，那些缺少意力的人，都是很難維持到低的。
26.學(xué)校的課外活動正是五花八門。奏，我們代著鍋、盆、碗、蔬菜等炊具到郊外野餐；夏天，我們在碧波蕩漾的湖中游泳；秋天，老師帶我們到公園嘗菊，冬天，開展象征性長跑。
27.居里夫人是波蘭人。她是世界著名科學(xué)家，曾取得兩次諾貝爾獎金。她在取得成績的時候和別人的表揚(yáng)時，首先第一個想到的是少年時候教語法的歐班老師。28.一天晚上，方方和亮亮在一起同時看電視小品節(jié)目。演員的精致表演，引得使他們不禁忍不住笑出聲來。他倆邊看邊談。他對他說：“言行不一致的人是一種極壞的作風(fēng)。”小亮聽了，點(diǎn)頭表示同意贊同。
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