第一篇：初二語文改錯練習

初二語文改錯練習

1、下面的語段有好幾處語病，請根據(jù)文后要求，用規(guī)定的符號直接在原文上修改。（4分）①今年央視春晚中，來自中國臺灣的魔術(shù)師劉謙把董卿的戒指變到雞蛋里的一幕，讓億萬觀眾啞口無言，隨后網(wǎng)絡上打響了一場聲事浩大的揭秘游戲大討論。②有網(wǎng)友認為“董卿就是劉謙的托兒”，有網(wǎng)友猜想“道具是特制的，暗藏機關(guān)”。③劉謙回應，“這些‘破解’都不正確”。他認為，“挖空心思破解魔術(shù)”是觀眾的“不正常的欣賞習慣”。④在春晚一炮打響后，劉謙一直處于頻繁表演，他在內(nèi)地表演的數(shù)十個魔術(shù)幾乎不重樣，這對魔術(shù)師來說是個極大的考驗和挑戰(zhàn)。

（1）語段中有一個錯別字是，改為。

（2）語段在語言的表達上有幾處毛病，請找出來，用規(guī)定的符號在原文上加以修改。（不得超過4處）

2、下面的語段有好幾處語病，請根據(jù)文后要求，用規(guī)定的符號直接在原文上修改。（4分）①有些人認為愛因斯坦這樣的天才幾百年才能出現(xiàn)一個。②事實上，幼年的愛因斯坦與一般的小孩比起來發(fā)育比較遲緩，到了四五歲還不太會說話。③他剛?cè)胫袑W讀書時，老師們都嫌他“生性孤辟，智力遲鈍”，責備他“不守紀律，想入非非?！雹懿痪盟樟钔藢W了。⑤在家的一段時間，他經(jīng)常去鄰居山姆大叔家玩耍。⑥后來，他到了瑞士的阿勞州立中學，這所學校主張學生自我負責，老師的責任是向?qū)W生展示知識和科學的魅力，鼓動他們的求知欲望，讓他們的智力得到自由發(fā)展。⑦在這所學校里，愛因斯坦逐漸變得樂觀、自信，他對知識的渴望也達到了前所未有的程度，為他后來的成功奠定了重要的水平。⑧可見，不同的教育環(huán)境和方法，對一個人的影響是非常大的。

要求：（1）文中有一句話與中心關(guān)系不大，請刪去。（1分）

（2）語段在語言表達及標點使用上有毛病，請選擇3～4處加以修改。（3分）

3、下面是某位同學的作文片段，請根據(jù)文后要求，用規(guī)定的符號在原文上直接修改。（4分）

①理想，就像芻鷹的翅膀，如果你有著高飛的理想，并且肯去實現(xiàn)，理想可以帶著你飛向成功的彼岸。②若是你有著遠大的理想，卻懷著“明天開始努力”，那么你將是一只經(jīng)不起風吹雨打的小燕雀。③要是你胸無點墨，沒有奮斗的目標，那么你將永遠不能登上輝煌的高峰。④要奮斗，總要有一個具體的目標和計劃，“萬事具備，只欠東風”，有了計劃理想才能一步一步實現(xiàn)。⑤理想對于我們來說就是指路的明燈，是克服困難的阻力，對我們的成長起著重要的作用。⑥我們從學生時代就必需要樹立崇高的理想，并且朝著這個理想去拼搏；去奮斗。

要求：（1）刪掉片段中與中心無關(guān)的一個句子。（1分）

（2）片段在語言表達及標點使用上有毛病，請選擇3～4處加以修改。（3分）

4．下面是某小說的評論片斷，根據(jù)文后要求，用規(guī)定符號在原文上直接修改。（3分）

①這部小說，作者借一座老宅即將被拆除的挈機，傳遞出了那個萬物復蘇的年代里南方小城特殊的氣息，借一群蕓蕓眾生極為日?；纳?，塑造了多個市井小民。②小說盡管再現(xiàn)了那個年代特有的社會氛圍和生活場景，還濃墨重彩地寫了改革開放大潮在老宅子中發(fā)起的頗具文化意味的波斕。

要求：（1）必須修改①中的一個錯標點和②中一處錯用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞；

（2）其他在錯別字、搭配不當、成分殘缺、重復啰嗦等方面任選兩處修改。

5、下面是某報上的一則廣告，根據(jù)文后要求，用規(guī)定符號在原文上直接修改。（3分）

①國家大豆技術(shù)研究推廣中心——太平洋天然食品有限公司被國家列為“火炬計劃”重點技術(shù)高新企業(yè)，公司主要從事具有大豆生物特色的現(xiàn)代生物醫(yī)藥、保健食品的研發(fā)、銷售與服務工作。②目前，為推廣高科技大豆生物醫(yī)學成果在心腦血管及腸胃道等疾病防治領(lǐng)域，該公司發(fā)起了延長衰老健康工程，“生命更美麗”，凡得到增送的中老年朋友，均可憑有效證件，到指定地點免費領(lǐng)取。

要求：（1）句①有一處語序不當。

（2）句②在標點和表達上有多處錯誤，請各選一處加以修改。

6、下面是某校心理健康教育與咨詢中心致全體師生的一封題為《積極樂觀，從容應對甲流》的公開信的片段，內(nèi)容和格式方面出了一些問題。（4分）

各位老師同學，“甲型H1N1流感”正蔓延全球，我們的生活正面臨嚴竣考驗。從心理學的角度看，這樣的恐慌是缺乏安全感，在疫情蔓延期間這屬于正常反應，但如果反應過度，就會影響我們的學習與生活。愉悅的心情，能增加身體的免疫能力，改善煩燥焦慮的情緒。能否有健康的生活方式也是預防疾病和抵抗流行性疾病如“甲流”的最佳方法。??

老師們，全社會都在行動，我們的學校也正在開展各種有效的措施。讓我們以勇氣做基石，信任做紐帶，積極樂觀，從容應對，讓甲流離我們遠去！

2009.10.21

校心理健康教育與咨詢中心

7、下面這封感謝信的格式有毛病，請依次指出。（４分）

××中學：

我兒小強身患重癥，家境又十分困難，連籌醫(yī)藥費都很困難。正在我們一籌莫展之際，學校領(lǐng)導將五萬元的捐款送到我們手里，這筆救命錢解了我們的然眉之急，小強重新返回學校，恢復健康。為此，我萬分感謝學校的廣大師生，是你們的愛心挽救了我兒的生命。

李林榮

初二語文改錯練習答案

1、（1）“事”改為“勢”（1分）；（2）“啞口無言”改為“瞠目結(jié)舌”；“打響”改為“掀起”；“劉謙一直處于頻繁表演”缺賓語，應加上“的狀態(tài)”（3分。改對1處得1分，得滿3分為止。如有其他改法，只要合理也可得分）

2、（1）刪除第5句（2）“辟”改為“僻 ”； “鼓動”改為“激發(fā)”；“水平”改為“基礎(chǔ)”；“為他后來”前面加上“這”；‘想入非非。”’中‘。”’改為‘”。’ 如有其他正確改法也可以。

3、（1）刪掉句④②；（1分）

（2）句①中“芻”改“雛”；句②“明天開始努力”后加“想法”或“念頭”；句③“胸無點墨”改“胸無大志”； 句⑤“阻力”或 “動力”。句⑥“必需”改“必須”。（3分，改出一處1分，給滿3分為止，其他改法只要合理即可。）

4．（1）①中“特殊氣氛”后的“，”應為“；”，②中“盡管”應為“不僅”。（2）①中“挈機”應為“契機”；應刪除“一群”；“市井小民”后應加上“的生動形象”； ②中“發(fā)起”應改為“掀起”；“波斕”應為“波瀾”。（3分。改對一處得1分，修改不得超過4處，超過一處扣1分；其他修改合理的也可按要求給分。）

5、修改參考：

（1）將“高新”放到“重點”后面。（2）句②中在 “防治領(lǐng)域”的后面添加“的應用”；或?qū)ⅰ把娱L”改為 “延緩”； “健康工程”后面的逗號 改為破折號； 在“‘生命更美麗’”后面加上 “活動”；或把“增”改成 “贈”。（3分。改對一處得1分，若有其他改法，只要符合要求且正確合理亦可得分。）

6、（1）“竣”改成“峻”；（2）“是缺乏安全感”后加“的表現(xiàn)”；（3）“增加身體的免疫能力”中“增加”改為“增強”或“提高”；（4）“煩燥”的“燥”改成“躁”；（5）刪掉“能否有”；（6）“老師們”改為“老師們，同學們”；（7）“開展各種有效的措施”中“開展”改成“采取”；（8）將信的署名和日期調(diào)換位置。（共4分。改對1 處得1分，給滿4分為止。如有其他改法只要合理亦可給分）

7、（1）無標題（2）缺少致敬語（3）缺日期（4）“然”改為“燃”（5）“重新返回學?！焙汀盎謴徒】怠闭{(diào)換位置

第二篇：經(jīng)典短文改錯練習

短文改錯.1.Anita Mei was a very famous pop singer in Hong Kong.Together 76.with her mother, she began to perform in the age of four.In the early 77.1980s, she took part in a local singing competition but won the first 78.prize.The song “Bad Girl” made her famous.The following years see 79.Anita play in many movies and made many records.Some of her songs 80.were very popular.She was always ready to help others, she made 81.a lot of good friends.When SARS hit Hong Kong in 2004, they 82.organized several pop concert with other pop stars, calling on Hong 83.Kong people to bravely face the disease.Sad, Anita died of cancer 84.in December, 2003.The brave and the beautiful lady will always be 85.remembered by people.2.When Joe left university, he got a good work in a bike factory.76． But after he had been worked there for some years, he decided 77． to have change, so he put a notice in several newspapers, 78． saying what experiences he had and the kind of job he would 79． like to have.One of the answers he accepted was from a man 80． was looking for a job, too.This man wrote to him, “Dear, sir, 81． when you get a new job, be kind enough to give your name and 82． address to you present boss as I have been trying to find 83． a position like yours for a long time.” After he reads the letter, 84． he suddenly realized that what he had done was real foolish.85．

3.Every day John goes to work by trains.He always 76.___________ buys a piece newspaper to read on the train, so he feels 77.___________ that the time pass more quickly.One day on the train he 78.___________ was reading a report about important football match.79.___________ The report was such interesting that he forgot to get off 80.___________ at his station.He didn’t know it until he saw the sea.81.___________ He got off at the next station, and wait a long time for 82.___________ a train to go back.He arrived very lately at the office.83.___________ His boss was angry to him when he told him why he 84.___________ was late.“Work is more importance than football!” 85.___________ 4.In the first day when I went to work in a very famous 76．___________ restaurant, my boss complained that there were very a few 77．___________ people coming for dinner.So I am “invited” to have a meal in 78．___________ the restaurant.After ordering two French dishes and some food, 79．___________ I began to look frequently at watch timing the serving of the 80．___________ meal.Meanwhile, I looked around to see that there was anything 81．___________ else wrong there.I wrote something improper down secret.My 82．___________ meal was not serving yet.I looked at my watch ：32 minutes 83．___________ passed!I realized that wait too long for service was the main 84．__________ reasons why the business was poor.Then I wrote a report about 85．___________ my findings and presented it to the boss.5.Last month we bought our two-year-old daughter a little dog.There are not many children of her age there we live, 76． and we thought a dog would make her less alone.We were 77． right.They play together happily all days.Our daughter now 78． smiles and laughs a lot more than she used.In a way it 79．

is like having two children in the house.All of them are 80． very untidy, but they cry when they do not get what they 81． want.The dog is easy to look after than my daughter.82． He always eats up all his food and we don’t have piles of 83． dirty clothes to wash.My wife is also happy because of 84． I have given up smoke.The dog doesn’t like the smell.85．

6.I went shopping with my wife.We have a lot of things to 1._________ buy them.We drove to the center of the city and stopped 2._________ our car in front of the shop.An hour late, we came back 3._________ to the car.But it was strange that we couldn't open 4._________ the door.So we asked policeman for help.He was 5._________ glad to help us.A few minute later, he got the door open.6._________ Just then a man came up and shouted angrily.“How are 7._________ you doing with my car ” We were surprising and went to 8._________ see the number of the car.What you think we did then 9._________ We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.10._________ 7.To my opinion, there are advantages and disadvantages 76.______ traveling both by plane and by train.Travel by plane is 77.______ time-saving, comfortably, and you can have a good rest 78.______ on the trip.but it is too expensive.Unless you travel by 79.______ train, it is not expensive and quite safety and you can 80.______ appreciate the beautiful sceneries on both sides of the 81.______ railway.However, it was too crowded and time-wasting, 82.______ and we can take a good rest.So you can see every 83.______ coin has two sides.You'd better to choose either of 84.______ them depending on your own interest or economy.85.______

8.Dear Worried, I have accepted your letter and I'm glad to give you some 76.__________ suggestions.First in all, don't be disappointed.Many students 77.__________ find it difficulty to write well.In my opinion, if you want to 78.__________ improve your writing, and you can do several things.First, 79.__________ do some study with phrases and sentence structures.Second, 80.__________ read as much as possible.There are many things can't be 81.__________ learnt.You must see it in books many times.Then you'll 82.__________ be able to use them correctly yourself.But, in order to write 83.__________ well, you must learn to read much.Finally, you'd better to 84.__________ recite some good passages.Good luck for you in your writing.85.9.My cousin and I usually stay out late with some friends on Saturday evenings, left Grandpa alone at home.71.___ It was so cold yesterday, however, that none of us wanted 72.____ to suffer from the frozen wind outside.So after dinner we 73.____ stay at home sitting around a fire and listening to Grandpa 74.____ tell his experiences in Second World War.In fact they 75.____ sounded familiar to us, so we were still listening attentively 76.____ so as to make him be happy.Now and then we asked Grandpa 77.____ some questions, that he answered in a humorous way.We 78.____ burst out laughing from time to time and he laughed too.79.____ Full of joy, we all felt especially warm in the cold evening.80.____ 10.As is known to all that the Internet is playing 76________ a more and more important part on our daily life.77________ On it, we can not only read news at home or abroad 78_________ but also get much information as possible.For instance, 79_________ we are often send e-mails or make telephone calls 80 _______ to our families as well as our friends.However, 81 _______ we can go to school on the net, read different 82 _______ kind of books and even teach ourselves English.We can also enjoy music, watching sports and play computer games.We can even do shopping without left our homes.83 _______ 84 ________ 85 _______ ⑴ 76.√ 77.in---at78.but---and 79.see---saw 80.made---make 81.∧and/so 82 they—she 83.concert—concerts 84.Sadly 85.the ⑵ 76．job 77．去掉been 78． a 79．experience 80． received 81． 去掉was/加who 82．your-my 83．√ 84． read 85． really ⑶76.trains 改為 train 77.去掉 piece。78.pass 改為 passes。79.important 前加 an 80.such 改為 so。81.此行無錯。82.wait 改為 waited。83.lately 改為 late。84.to 改為 with。85.importance 改為 important。

⑷76.in--on 77 a / 78 was 79 right 80.at the /my 81that--whether /if 82 secretly 83.served 84 waiting 85.reason ⑸ 76．there改為where 77．a(chǎn)lone改為lonely 78．days改為day 79．used改為used to 80．All改為Both 81．but改為and 82．easy改為easier 83．無錯 84．去掉of 85．smoke改為smoking ⑹1.Have改為had 2.them去掉 3.late改為later 4.正確 5.asked 后加a 6.minute改為 minutes 7.How 改為What 8.surprising改為surprised 9.What 后加do 10.speak 改為 say ⑺76.To—In 77.Travel—Travelin9 78.comfortably--comfortable 79.Unless--If 80.safety--safe 81.正確 82.was—is 83.can后加not 84.去掉to 85.or--and ⑻76.accepted→received 77.in→of 78.difficulty→difficult 79.去掉and 80.對 81.things后加that 82.it→them 83.But→So 84.去掉to 85.for→to

⑼71.left-leaving 72.none-neither 73.froze-freezing 74.stay-stayed 75.in 后面加the 76.so-but/yet 77.be去掉 78.that-which 79.正確80.in-on ⑽ 76.As →It 77.on →in 78.or →and 79.get ⌒much as 80.are81.However →Besides 82.∨ 83.kind →kinds 84.watching →watch 85.left →leaving

⑾ 76.accepted→received 77.去掉more, 78.because后加of, 79.other→another 80.say→said 81.and→or兩,三天用two or three days.82.family前加the這里特指家庭的其他成員.83.fast→soon fast指動作的迅速,soon指時間“盡快地”.84.√ 85.happily→happy

⑿ 76.√77.is→are 78.felt→feel 79.Therefore→However 80.∧little→a a little boy 81.去掉not 后的to 82.play→playing 83.like→as 84.grade→grades“分數(shù)”, 85.for→in

⒀ 76.have→had 77.√ 78去掉but 79.去 掉him 80.shoulders →shoulder 81.taking → taken 82.was后加 not 83.He→I 84.explain后加to ⒁ 1.calling—called 2.walking前加was3.and—or 4.and—but5.dead—died 6.√7.All—Both 8.去掉not 9.great前加a 10.danced—dance

第三篇：短文改錯練習

短文改錯專練：March 29th, Dear Diary, I’m writing this at my room.It’s almost midnight and I have to getting up early tomorrow, but I can’t sleep.I’m thinking about my future!Every day, my parents asks me, “What do you want to be when you grow?” The problem is: I don’t know!My mom always says, “Be a doctor!” And she doesn’t understand — to be a doctor, you have to study for a long, long time and that’s not her idea of fun.Also I’m really bad at biology at the school.My dad says, “Be a pilot!” Is he crazy? He knew I hate flying!

Now I’m getting tiring, so I’m going to bed.I can think about my future in bed.I get my best ideas when I’m lain down.I have known my friend Rebecca for a long time.We firstly met at a friend’s birthday party five years before.We found out that we both liked singing and dancing, so I invited Rebecca over to my place.We listened to the music together and soon became best friends.Three years ago, Rebecca’s parents invited me go on holiday with them.It is great.We spent three wonderful weeks in a little cottage.Rebecca and I loved walking along the beautifully beach.We took a lot of photos and had a lot of funs.Last year, Rebecca’s father changed her job, and they moved to other town.Since then we haven’t seen each other very much, but we’ve talked in the phone and we’ve written emails to each other.Dear Joe, How are you? Thanks to your post — good to know when you’re OK.I’ve got news too.I’m going on holiday next weeks with my brother and Anna, a friend from school.We’re going to stay on a farm with four days!We’re going to look after the animals and doing some horse-riding.I’m sure I’ll love it.You know how crazy I am about the animals!I want to learn all about the cows or the horses.I hope I will have some times to go walking in the hills, too.Well, right now I’m going to finish homework — lots to do before the holiday!I’ll write to you when I get back to telling you about my holiday.Yours, 4 Nadia People had always been interested in bees.This interest may have begun with the honey what bees make.In the fact, it has been found that people have been eating honey for thousand of years.In the more recently past, people were interested in the way bees made honey.They admired the way bees seemed to working so hard.Some languages even developed expressions about people working like bees.In English, for example, we talk with a “busy bee”.Now scientists has a new reason to be interested in bees.They have discovered that bees able to communicate with each other.Research has revealed some surprised facts about this, but there are still many mysteries.Yesterday afternoon, I took the No.6 bus to go home.It was crowded on the bus, and I had listened to music by my earphones.Suddenly I saw the name of the bus stop that I should get off, so I got off the bus in hurry.When I arrived home, I realized that I had left my bag on the bus.My ID card and ten books were in the bag.I was worried and eager to finding it, so I went to the bus companies for help.Fortunate, at the Lost and Found, I see my bag.I wanted to thank the person who had found my bag, and the staff there said the person hadn’t left his name.How a good man!

I read an interested piece of news on a newspaper today.According to Professor Richard Wiseman, only less than a quarter of the British achieved their New Year goals because they do it in the wrong way.He studied 700 volunteers who made a wide ranges of New Year goals, including quitting smoking, losing the weight, or gaining a qualification.Just 22 percent of the participants managed to meeting their goals or described their progress like “very successful.” The reason so much failed was that they took the wrong approach and led by self-help books in the wrong way.They tended to spend a lot of time on thinking about the “bad things” what would happen if they did not achieve their goals instead of taking action.Last weekends, I went shopping by myself.It was a sunny day and I feel very happy.When I had bought anything I needed, I went to the bus stop to take a bus.Unfortunately, there were too much people at the bus stop.Then it was my turn to get on, there was no room.I had to wait the next bus.Suddenly, it started to rain.I had no choice but to call a taxi.Half way through the journey, the taxi was broke down.I was filled with angry when I saw an emptier bus go by.Finally, I decided to walk home in a rain.What an unlucky day!

My name is Li Hua and I wanted to be class monitor.I am responsible, sociable, or easy-going.I enjoy serving others.Additionally, I have vary interests.I love singing and playing the drums as well soccer.I am also a good listener and be always open to different opinions.I am confident that I can do the job good.Being a student myself, firstly, I will create an academic atmosphere so that everyone in our classes can improve their studies.For those students who is falling behind, I will find ways to help them to catch up.Secondly, I will serve as a bridge among teachers and students.Finally, I will arrange parties so we can relax.I believe I am the right person to this post.Dear Sarah, I’m writing because I want to apologize to what I did last week.I’m really sorry.I know we said 8:30, and I would’ve gotten here on time if everything hadn’t gone wrongly.I was late because my watch broke and I didn’t know what the time it was.So you see, I would’ve arrived on time if my watch hadn’t broken.Then I have to walk because I’d missed the bus.And then I fell over and my trousers got dirty, so I had to go home and get changing.Then I decided to catch another buses, but it was too late.I would have phoned you and my brother had taken my mobile phone.Anyway, I hope you aren’t too angrier with me.Hope to hear you soon.Yours, Jack

Today my classmate and I went to a farm for a trip.I get up at six o’clock and we set off by bus.On the bus, some of us sang, and some of us talked.We all had good time.Two hours late, we arrived at the gate of the farm, that the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome.After we were shown around the big farm, they began to plant trees.It was really a good way to getting close to nature and protect the environment at the same time.Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat on the open air.Finally, we went home at half past four.Although all of us was tired, our trip was really very more unforgettable.Both my father and mother has been wanting me to study abroad.They think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country and that studying abroad at early age will enable me to be dependent.Moreover, it will be easier to me to gain advanced knowledge of technology, that will prepare me for a brighter future.Moreover, my good friend, Zhang Hua doesn’t agree with them.He thought my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners.Besides, the cost is too much for his family.In my opinions, I should continue to study in China.As long as I study hard at now, I’ll make great achievements in the future.Advertising informs consumers about newer products available on the market.It gives us information with everything from shampoo to toothpaste to computers and cars.But there is one serious problems with this.The information are actually very often misinformation.It tells us the products’ benefits but hides its disadvantages.Advertising not only leads us to buying things that we don’t need and can’t afford, but it confuses our sense reality.“Zoom toothpaste prevents bad teeth and gives you the white teeth!” the advertisement tells us.And it doesn’t tell us the complete truth that a health diet and a good toothbrush will have the same effect.My grandfather had had enough of his cat.He was tired of her scratching all the furnitures and made a mess.So he gave her to a friend, who lived on the other side of town.He told his friends that he was getting so old to look after her.A week later, in a very cold winter day, my grandfather returned home from shopping and surprised to see the cat on his doorstep.My grandfather was moved by the fact that his pet had found his way back from the other side of town in such a cold weather.He took the cat outside and gave her lots of loving attention.He decided he will never give her away again.Bedouin, the Arab people who live in the desert, living in a traditional society.This means they live on much the same way as their ancestors did.People who live in traditional societies has strong ties to the past.Customs and beliefs have changed very slower.They fear that when changes will make their lives worse rather than better.Values are passing on with little changes from one generation to the next.Yet changes do take place.All cultures change, but they change much quickly at some periods than at other.In very recent years, changes have taken place very quickly everywhere, including deserts of Southwest Asia and North Africa.My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof.They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter.Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police.After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to.It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly.The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground.Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.Taking parts in recreation activities help us keep fit.There are various kinds of activity in our daily life, for example, listening to music, watching TV, playing chess, or going to cinema.But I think we’d better to have more outdoor activities.As students, we usually sit too longer in the classroom, and as a result our eyes and brains getting tired.But it’s a good idea to play basketball, football, table tennis, go swimming, do some runnings, or even go for a picnic.Our brains also need changes to make it smart and active.In a word, exercise is good for the health.Dear Sandra, You’ll never guess where I’m writing this email.A cave!You know we’re on holidays in Spain.Well, we spend a few days in Barcelona first.We had a good time there, though one day I didn’t feel very good.I think I ate too much ice cream the day before.Anyway, when I left Barcelona, we came to spend a few days in Granada.However, we couldn’t get a hotel — too many tourists and not enough bed!Then the hotel owner said, “Why don’t try the cave hotels?” We thought he were joking.Living in caves? But there we are and it’s wonderful.We’re enjoying it much that we don’t know when we’re going to leave.We’re never going to have enough time to explore for everything.Take care!

Ben

My uncle buys a satellite dish, which is a large round piece of metal that receives satellite television.He decided to set up himself.He climbed up the ladder and attached the dish with the side of his houses.After he finishing, he and my aunt relaxed for the evening in front of the TV.The next day was very much hot, and they decided to stay at home and watch TV.That afternoon they heard lots of shouting outside.When they went outside, they saw that the house opposite were on fire.Fortunately, the fire was putting out.It turned out that the fire had started because my uncle’s satellite dish had been concentrating the sun’s rays on the curtains of her neighbor’s house but had caused the fire.Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others.It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves.But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not — we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas.We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received.They forget to think of the sick and the homeless.The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed.What a shame!

A thief broke into our house and filled his bag by our possessions when he suddenly feeling a pair of eyes on him.Looking up, he sees an eagle staring at him with cold, merciless eyes.At first the man was too frightening to move, but after ten minute he tried moving quietly towards the door.Therefore, the eyes just followed him and he couldn’t move.Eventually, my parents returned to and found the thief in our house.When my father turned the light, the thief could see that the eagle was just a toy.But it was too late and she was arrested.My father said that the toy eagle were better than any watchdog.21

Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams.Some copy from each other;some copy from their text books, reference books or prepared note;others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones.Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects.For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students.For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future.So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating.At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.Dear Jack, I’m glad to learn that you will come Beijing to learn about Chinese culture as an exchange student.At the moment, I am studying English in my school but I always get better grades in my class.I’m good at the spoken English, so I’m sure I will communicate with you frequent.Beside, my parents are open and kind and is friends with many of my classmates.I believe you will be one of their friend too.Therefore, I invite you to live in my home during you stay in Beijing.I’m willing to helping you as much as I can.Best wishes!

Yours, Li Hua

第四篇：綜合改錯練習范文

修改病句梳理

修改病句，先要找出病因，然后再著手修改。修改時，注意不要改變原句的意思。常見的病句有以下幾種：

（1）成份殘缺。即句子不完整。如：讀了《革命烈士詩二首》后，受到了深刻的教育。是誰受到了深刻的教育呢？沒說出來。這個句子應該補上我或同學們一類詞語。（2）搭配不當。即句子的主要成份之間，附加成份和主要成份之間搭配不當。

如：春天的蘇州是一年中最美的季節(jié)。把這個句子簡縮后就可看出，蘇州是季節(jié)，顯然不通。只要改成蘇州的春天是一年中最美麗的季節(jié)，就通順了。（3）前后矛盾。一句話必須合乎事理不能自相矛盾。如：我的回家作業(yè)基本上全部

做完了?；丶易鳂I(yè)要么是基本上做完（還有少量沒做），要么是全部做完（一點兒都沒有剩下）。又說是基本上，又說是全部顯然是矛盾的，兩種說法只能保留一種。

（4）重復羅嗦。有些句子形容詞用得過多，意思重復，甚至改變了原意。把句子多余的詞語刪去，句子就明白簡潔了。

如：我一定要改正不好的缺點。缺點當然是不好的，把不好的刪去句子就簡潔了。

（5）不合邏輯。如：商店的貨架上擺滿了葡萄、蘋果、梨和水果。因為水果包括了葡萄、蘋果、梨等，不能平列一起，所以應該把水果刪去。（6）詞序不對。即句子里的詞語排列的先后不合適。

如：他完成了一次又一次的艱巨任務。調(diào)整為他一次又一次完成了艱巨任務。

（7）形容不當。如：王老師講完故事，教室里響起排山倒海的掌聲。教室里不可能出現(xiàn)排山倒海的掌聲，形容不當，可改為熱烈的掌聲。

練一練

修改下列病句

1.貫徹《小學生守則》以后，發(fā)生了顯著的變化。

2.我們沿著這條公路，不要一小時，就可到達縣城了。

3.我們偉大的祖國在社會主義康莊大道上。

4.這個班級的同學是全校開展學雷鋒活動最好的班級。

5.老師的教育下，他明確了學態(tài)度。

6.同學們積極投入愛國衛(wèi)生運動，把教室打掃得整整齊齊、干干凈凈、清清爽爽。

7.過去，我做作業(yè)馬虎潦草，很不認真，不經(jīng)常拖拉，不按時完成。

8.六一節(jié)那天，我踏著輕松的步伐，興奮的心情來到學校。9.全班同學都到了，只有王鋼沒來。

10.昨天傍晚下了一夜大雨。

11.校園里屹立著一棵棵白楊。

12.因為他有很大進步，但是老師表揚了他。

13.動物園的爬行館里展出各種蛇與許多鳥。

14.公園里的松柏、桃樹等樹木枝繁葉茂。

15.我愛吃蘋果、香蕉、黃瓜等水果。

16.圖書角有《兒童文學》《少年文藝》和《中國少年報》等課外書。

17.他經(jīng)常回憶過去有趣的往事。

18.今天中午下了一天的雨。

19.我上完五年級了，還有一年沒有畢業(yè)。

20.萬里長城、故宮博物院和南京長江大橋是中外游客向往的古跡。

21.造紙是我國古代的四大發(fā)明。

22.《林海》這篇課文的作者是老舍先生寫的。

23.他穿了一件灰色上衣，一頂藍帽子。

一進幼兒園，我就看見了一張張可愛的小臉和一陣陣動聽的歌聲。

綜合改錯練習

1、（兩處錯別字，四處語病，兩處標點）

去年署假，我有機會加入了夏令營活動。夏令營的活動內(nèi)容真是五彩繽紛，有畫畫、跳舞、唱歌、朗讀、寫生、坐軍事游戲等……夏令營活動既豐富了我的假期生活，而且開闊了我的眼界。我真喜愛夏令營活動啊。

2、（兩處錯別字，三處病句，一處標點符號）

初夏,我們在老師的帶領(lǐng)下，壞著高興的心情，和摘草莓的工具去郊區(qū)摘草莓。我們有的題著盒子，挎著籃子，有的拎著袋子……大家爭先恐后你爭我搶地忙開了。不一會兒，盒子，籃子和袋子都裝得滿滿的了。喜滋滋地滿載而歸了。

3、（一處錯別字，兩處標點，三處語?。?/p>

過了《五一》長假，同學們重反校園。一進教室，大家就七嘴八舌，議論紛紛地說起了假期里的新聞，揚州軍嫂陳巧云多年來熱愛幫助困難軍屬，受到了人們的一致夸耀。

4、（兩處錯別字，兩處標點符號，三處語?。?/p>

《六一》那天，爸爸媽媽代我去太湖邊游玩。湖邊五顏六色、色色俱全的鮮花正在怒放，讓我們贊嘆不決?？上У氖翘廴緡乐兀嫔掀≈S多臟物?？吹竭@些，我們的心情很繁重，我想，“如果我們每個人都講衛(wèi)生，不亂扔臟物，我們的健康和疾病就有保障了?！?/p>

5、（兩處錯別字，兩處標點符號，三處語?。?/p>

盡管語文書上有很多一對對繁簡字對照的列子，可是離開了簡化字，還是不知道它的讀音。于是我去像老師請教。老師親密地對我說：“這不是你的問題？雖然現(xiàn)在這些字不常出現(xiàn)，所以不熟悉是正常的”。

6、（兩處錯別字，兩處標點符號，三處語?。?/p>

我們班長的王琳是德、智、體全面發(fā)展。他不僅關(guān)心集體，克苦學習。還注意鍛煉身體，因為，他被評為三好學生。語文對他特別感興趣，經(jīng)長給“語文報”投稿。

7、（一處錯別字，三處語病）

上課鈴一響，沸騰的校園里立即頓時安靜下來。我們?nèi)嗤瑢W都在認真聽講，只有兩個同學在作小動作。老師批評了他們，兩個同學克服了自己的錯誤。

8、（兩個錯別字，三個錯標點，三處語病）

我寫的一篇作文“我愛家鄉(xiāng)的梧桐樹”在作文竟賽中獲獎了。晚上，我激動的心情翻開日記本?；叵胫l(fā)獎時的情景就象放電影一樣一幕幕地出現(xiàn)在眼前。當時，老師親切地對我說：“希望你再接再勵爭取更大的成就?！?/p>

9、（一個錯別字，一處錯標點，兩處語?。?/p>

在遼闊的南海上，有四個群島：東沙、西沙、南沙和中沙。它們就是自古以來我們祖國的神圣領(lǐng)土。美麗富撓的西沙群島在南海的西北面，它像一顆珍珠生長在蔚藍的海面上。人們稱它們?yōu)槊利惖摹赌虾Ｃ髦椤贰?/p>

10、下面這段話中一共有5處錯誤。（三處語病，一個標點，一個錯別字）

王小軍非常喜歡酷愛打乒乓球，看“體育世界”雜志。只要一打球，他就會忘記吃飯和休息。他在訓練時勤奮克苦，球技不斷增加。在全市小學生乒乓球大賽中，他自然不負眾望，一路過關(guān)斬將，奪得了小學生男子單打的冠軍。

11、修改下面一段話中的錯誤。（四處錯誤，二個錯別字，一個錯標點）

老師來到我的身邊，用親熱的語氣對我說：“在學習上不能追求慮榮，要踏踏實實，扎扎實實，這樣才能取得好成就。老師的聲音不大，所以它像重垂一樣敲擊著我的心。

12、修改下面一段話中的錯誤。（病句兩個，錯字兩個，標點錯誤一個）。

西游記是中國古典小說四大名著，在世界文化史上也享有勝名，書中塑造了唐僧、孫悟空和眾多人物形象，內(nèi)容生動有趣，讓人讀了愛不失手。

13、（四處語病，二錯字，一錯標點）

閱覽課上，我們討論并閱讀了“海倫.凱勒傳 ”，感觸很多。誰能相信一個不但看不見而且聽不見的女子能掌握法、德等五種英語呢？誰能相信她果然能取得那么多驚人的成就呢？做為一個身體建全的人，我們有什么理由不努力呢？

14、綜合改錯。（錯別字、標點、語病共6處）

“六一”慶祝會上，宣讀了優(yōu)秀少先隊員的名單，特別發(fā)揚了劉華的先進事跡。聽了這個消息，同學們紛紛向他慶祝，劉華十分激動極了，他表明自己的決心：今后一定要再接再勵，刻苦鉆研，努力攀登科學高峰。

第五篇：初二語文練習及答案

材料一：如今，一些城里孩子吃著肯德基、麥當勞，看著《哈利?波特》長大，不知道自己國家歷史上還有李白、杜甫、花木蘭，近現(xiàn)代還有劉胡蘭、董存瑞、高玉寶，甚至不少大學生、留學生不知道《論語》《春秋》和《孫子兵法》。

材料二：《智斗》《包龍圖打坐在開封府》等經(jīng)典京劇唱段將正式進入中小學課堂。教育部決定2008年3月到2009年7月在北京、天津、黑龍江、上海、江蘇、浙江、江西、湖北、廣東、甘肅等10省市開展試點工作，在音樂課程中增加京劇內(nèi)容，并在試點的基礎(chǔ)上逐步向全國推廣。

材料三：國務院新修改的《全國年節(jié)及紀念日放假辦法》對民族傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日放假作如下調(diào)整：春節(jié)，放假3天(除夕、正月初

一、初二);清明節(jié)(新增)，放假1天(農(nóng)歷清明當日);端午節(jié)(新增)，放假1天(農(nóng)歷端午當日);中秋節(jié)(新增)，放假1天(農(nóng)歷中秋當日)。

閱讀《鄉(xiāng)野的花》一文，完成10—14題

現(xiàn)在流行送花，且大多是青翠欲滴、艷麗誘人的鮮花。

這幾年新春，我每每收到老友新朋托禮儀小姐送來的鮮花，可惜元宵前后最多正月底，便都會香消玉殞①。妻只好叫女兒把枯萎的花“葬”入樓下的垃圾箱中。

唯有去年那束鄉(xiāng)野的花依然婷婷玉立于我的案頭。

去年春節(jié)，女兒和外孫女回老家來過年。一到家，便陶醉于鄉(xiāng)村的雪野。外孫女不知哪來的“靈感”，把瘋玩摘來的野草桔、小竹枝和樹上搖下的帶柄的凍果，插在燃放過的煙花的紙管里，竟成就了一束束別具一格的花店也絕無出售的鄉(xiāng)野的花。外孫女贈我一束并說要把剩余的帶回城，送給她城里的爺爺、奶奶和其他長輩、伙伴，讓他們分享農(nóng)家的新春樂、鄉(xiāng)野的淳樸情。

“是嗎?”我詫異后有了幾分欣喜——因她的講孝心、重友情，更為她無意中造就出的這鄉(xiāng)野的花。

這鄉(xiāng)野的花不鮮不艷也不值錢，但它卻飽經(jīng)風霜②，幾多錘煉，幾多滄桑，換來的是不復蒼老，因而比鮮花更久長。

這鄉(xiāng)野的花不青不翠也不嬌貴，但它卻表里如一，成熟不變——它已無法再接通多變的季節(jié)的血脈，也就不會因春風至而得意忘形，為冬雪飄又萎靡不振，因而比鮮花更堅貞。這鄉(xiāng)野的花不虛不偽又不經(jīng)雕琢，本是無心插柳，隨手撿得，巧手組合，渾然天成③，質(zhì)樸純正，因而比鮮花更真實。

這鄉(xiāng)野的花喲，也不像商店里的干花，骨子里是紗是布，是刻意喬裝打扮④而舉著“花”家旗號的冒牌貨——再像也只是徒有其形。

去年春在省委黨校學習，得閑在南京植物園沐月踏青，園丁送我?guī)字B(yǎng)在礦泉水瓶中，結(jié)果，雖按園丁吩咐的方法精心侍弄，沒幾天還是開始變形，最終枯得面目全非，遠不如茹志鵑《百合花》中那個青年戰(zhàn)士“槍筒里的一枝野菊花”，倒能裝點那個年代青年戰(zhàn)士純潔美好的精神世界。

花店里的一束束鮮花，經(jīng)花農(nóng)栽種、車輛運輸、花匠插配、商賈售送，費時費力，要不了幾時就成了垃圾箱中的廢物，其生命是何其的短暫!而我這案頭花，本來無生命，此時看來，卻又似乎有了生命。

為何?因為由此我想到“死而復生”一詞?？磥?，有時死才是生的試金石。自然界的植物的生命力再旺盛也會枯萎。即使像活著可三百年不死、死后能三百年不倒、倒后會三百年不朽的沙漠里的胡楊，算來也不過九百年吧?而人類的文明卻已有了幾千年的歷史，且會長久地持續(xù)下去。這恐怕就是精神和文化的力量，我案頭這來自鄉(xiāng)野的花，本是“死”過了的枯枝萎果，但我們在感情上為其注入了靈性、精神上賦予了它以生命，所以它就美了也就能久長了?！x自《散文百家》，作者施建石，有改動

10.文章巧用對比手法突出了“鄉(xiāng)野的花”的“久長”、“堅貞”與“真實”，請從文中擇取恰當?shù)脑~語填入下表(每空限填1或2個詞語)。(4分)“鄉(xiāng)野的花”的特點 “鄉(xiāng)野的花”的情狀 “禮儀鮮花”的情狀 久 長

堅 貞 表里如一 真 實 喬裝打扮

11.談談你對“而我這案頭花，本來無生命，此時看來，卻又似乎有了生命”這句話的理解。(3分)12.結(jié)合上下文說說文中畫線句在表達作者感情上的作用。(3分)13.褒義詞是指含有贊許、肯定等感情色彩的詞，依據(jù)上下文判斷，文中加點的4個成語里屬于褒義詞的2個是()。(2分。只填序號)14.“因?精神和文化的力量?而?死而復生?”是令人深思的客觀現(xiàn)象。品讀最后一節(jié)，舉例說說你對這一現(xiàn)象的生活感受或閱讀體驗。(4分)得分 評卷人(三)閱讀韓愈《馬說》，完成15—17題。(共8分)世有伯樂，然后有千里馬，千里馬常有，而伯樂不常有。故雖有名馬，只辱于奴隸人之手，駢死于槽櫪之間，不以千里稱也。

馬之千里者，一食或盡粟一石。食馬者不知其能千里而食也。是馬也，雖有千里之能，食不飽，力不足，才美不外見，且欲與常馬等不可得，安求其能千里也? 策之不以其道，食之不能盡其材，鳴之而不能通其意，執(zhí)策而臨之，曰：“天下無馬!”嗚呼!其真無馬邪?其真不知馬也。

15.用現(xiàn)代漢語解釋下列加點詞或短語的意思。(3分)①食馬者()②策之不以其道()③才美不外見()④執(zhí)策而臨之()16.用現(xiàn)代漢語寫出文段中畫線句的意思。(3分)17.文中表明造成千里馬“欲與常馬等不可得”的原因的句子是：(2分)得分 評卷人(四)閱讀下面的文言短文，完成18—19題。(共5分)及(接觸)之而后知，履(實行)之而后艱(知道艱難)，烏有(哪有)不行而知者乎?披(閱)五岳之圖，以為知山，不如樵夫之一足(攀登);談滄溟(海洋)之廣，以為知海，不如估客(商販)之一瞥;觀八珍之譜，以為知味，不如庖丁之一啜(吃)。(魏源《海國圖志》)18.用自己的話簡要概述短文闡述的道理。(2分)19.“知山”“知海”“知味”的根本途徑是什么?請各用原文中的1個字回答。(3分)(1)“知山”在于();(2)“知?！痹谟?);(3)“知味”在于()。默寫。(8分)①苔痕上階綠。，往來無白丁。②故雖有名馬，，不以千里稱也。

③《池鶴》中可以用成語“鶴立雞群”來概括的兩句詩是：。

④《宣州謝朓樓餞別校書叔云》中表現(xiàn)作者滿懷豪情逸興、神馳太空的兩句詩是。

3.按照所給文段的思路，仿照相應的句式，將文段補寫完整。(2分)人生中難免有些事情不盡如人意：也許你想成為太陽，卻只是一顆不起眼的星星;也許你想成為大海，;，卻只是一根細弱的小草。這個時候，請不要失去人生的方向。只要珍惜自己，坦然接受自己，你會驚喜地發(fā)現(xiàn)平凡的你也有自己美麗的風景。

4.用所給的修改符號(不必全使用)，對下面的這段文字進行修改(不得超過6處)，使文句表達得更加準確流暢。(4分)(1)換用號：(2)增補號：(3)刪除號：(4)調(diào)位號：

我倆是交往好手，不多時，就成了哥們。于是，他對我漸漸有了新的了解。他很喜歡玩電腦，簡直達到了“醉生夢死”的形態(tài)。記得一次去他家玩的時候，他正在打電腦，“一條縫”盯著那屏幕上的光標移動。他最得意的是電子游戲，他可以不睡覺，也可以拋下作業(yè)不管。他的老媽想把他從家里趕出來活動活動的想法，可他就是懶在電腦轉(zhuǎn)椅上不起來。

5.班級將舉辦一次對話式主題班會，中心話題是“中學生與網(wǎng)絡”，請你為本次主題班會撰寫一段開場白，不超過150字。(4分)得分 評卷人(三)綜合性學習(共4分)6.國務院總理溫家寶在接受英國《泰晤士報》訪談時，引用了中外名家的詩詞名句來說明自己是怎樣的人。仔細揣摩這幾句話，請你用自己的話把溫家寶總理是怎樣一個人概括出來。材料一：晚清名臣左宗棠結(jié)婚時新房門口的對聯(lián)：“身無半畝，心憂天下;讀破萬卷，神交古人?！?/p>

材料二：北宋大儒張載：“為天地立心，為生民立命，為往圣繼絕學，為萬世開太平?！?材料三：屈原《離騷》詩句：“長太息以掩涕兮，哀民生之多艱?！?/p>

材料四：德國大哲學家康德：“有兩種東西，我對它們的思考越是深沉和持久，它們在我心靈中喚起的驚奇和敬畏就會日新月異，不斷增長，這就是我頭上的星空與心中的道德定律?！?/p>

材料五：現(xiàn)代詩人艾青的《我愛這土地》：“為什么我的眼里常含淚水?因為我對這土地愛得深沉?！?/p>

——《新民周刊》

1.閱讀下面文字，把文中拼音所表示的漢字依次寫在方格內(nèi)。(2分)春天，嫩綠的葉芽從枝的縫里méng 生，努力的穿過那小小的洞向外長，渴求一見浩hàn的藍天。終于，它長成了，長成了一片有模有樣的小葉子，輕輕的膜fù 蓋著它的血肉，細小的脈絡隱nì

其中。這樣的葉子我摸過，柔軟的質(zhì)地，嫩得光滑，嫩得鮮艷。金黃讓人充滿了希望?！睹牢募狻?/p>

2.默寫。(8分)①，中間小謝又清發(fā)。② 濁酒一杯家萬里。③，小橋流水人家。

④只要有這點精神，就是一個高尚的人，一個有道德的人，一個有益于人民的人。⑤寫出兩句詠鳥的古詩詞： 得分 評卷人(二)運用(共12分)3.仿照例句的形式，寫一個句子，內(nèi)容自定。(2分)人們都愛春天，愛她的風和日麗，愛她的花紅柳綠，愛她的雨潤萬物。

4.用所給的修改符號(不必全使用)，對下面的這段文字與標點進行修改(不得超過6處)，使文句表達更加準確流暢。(4分)(1)換用號：(2)增補號：(3)刪除號：(4)調(diào)位號：

逐漸慢慢長大的你一定有很多自己的想法，覺得父母之間似乎有一堵無形的墻。我想對你說：墻推倒了就是橋。對著一窗的月光，找一個靜謐寧靜的夜晚，給辛勞了一天的母親倒一杯熱茶，和母親作一次推心制腹的談話好嗎?讓暖暖的情意在兩顆心與心之間流動、交融┅┅

5.在“如果我主辦?？钡木C合實踐活動中，你將會給?？∶麨椤?》;設置的欄目有：⑴_____________ ______;⑵___________________ ___。(3分)如果由你親自撰寫“刊首語”，你將會對全校師生說些什么?不超過60 個字。(3分)得分 評卷人(三)綜合性學習(共4分)6.閱讀下面三則材料，試寫出你對人生的感言：

材料一：洪戰(zhàn)輝：當他還是一個孩子的時候，就對另一個更弱小的孩子擔起了責任，就要撐起困境中的家庭，就要學會友善、勇敢和堅強，生活讓他過早地開始收獲，他由此從男孩開始變成了苦難打不倒的男子漢，在貧困中求學，在艱辛中自強，今天他看起來依然文弱，但是在精神上，他從來是強者。

材料二： 邰麗華：從不幸的谷底到藝術(shù)的巔峰，也許你的生命本身就是一次絕美的舞蹈，于無聲處，展現(xiàn)生命的蓬勃，在手臂間勾勒人性的高潔，一個樸素女子為我們呈現(xiàn)華麗的奇跡，心靈的震撼不需要語言，你在我們眼中是最美。

材料三：王順友：他樸實的像一塊石頭，一個人一匹馬，一段世界郵政史上的傳奇，他過灘涉水，越嶺翻山，用一個人的長征傳郵萬里，用20年的跋涉飛雪傳心，路的盡頭還有路，山的那邊還是山，近鄰尚得百里遠，世上最親郵遞員。——“感動中國2005人物”頒獎詞 閱讀《千年獨舞》一文，完成11—16題。(共18分)1405年7月11日，歷史定格在這一天。這一天似乎離我們過于遙遠，遙遠得記不清船只的數(shù)量，水手的編制。然而又似乎離我們很近，近得我們可以看清鄭和威武的身姿，拋錨起航的宏偉場面。這一天，明朝三寶太監(jiān)鄭和率領(lǐng)由百余艘大小船只，二萬七千八百余人組成的龐大船隊，從1405年(明永樂三年)至1433年(宣德八年)，歷時28年，七下西洋。遠航至東南亞、印度洋，最遠到達紅海與非洲東海岸，遍訪30多個國家和地區(qū)。其航程之遠，歷時之久;船舶數(shù)量之多，噸位之大;船員之眾，組織之嚴密;造船和航海技術(shù)之先進，均為當時世界之最，遠在歐洲人所謂“地理大發(fā)現(xiàn)”的大航海之先，是世界航海史之壯舉。

鄭和七下西洋，有五次在商貿(mào)繁盛的馬六甲停留。為了紀念這位偉大的航海家，在馬六甲有一座采用中國傳統(tǒng)建筑形式，紅墻配琉璃瓦，富有濃厚的中國建筑風格廟宇，三寶廟。廟頂飛檐描有彩龍戲珠;大門頂上，飛檐高翹;“國泰民安”、“風調(diào)雨順”章顯為民眾生活祈福。走進大門，在右邊四方的石墩上，有一尊青石雕像，背負寶劍，形象威武莊嚴，他便是我國明代著名航海家三保太監(jiān)鄭和。

在喧嘩的歷史長河中，他是一位孤獨的舞者。他以自己特殊的身份，帶著“揚國威、示富強”的使命，在大西洋(按：此處疑“印度洋”之誤，下同)寬廣無垠的海面上馳騁。以驚濤駭浪為樂，以電閃雷鳴為伍，以飛鳥游魚為伴，佇立于船頭的身影，撕裂了大西洋千百年的孤獨。曾幾何，誰人能如此貼近的感受大洋的威力;誰人能如此幸運地享受大洋的安謐;誰人能橫跨西洋留下足跡恩澤后世?我們不會了解也難以知道幾百年前的三保太監(jiān)如何戰(zhàn)勝寂寞與孤獨，如何在大西洋寬廣的洋面奏響這千年絕唱的舞曲。那是海的聲音，風的祝福，雷的聲威!他隨波獨舞，以大洋為章，用自己特有方式書寫了一部巨篇史詩。也許我們很難理解，在中華五千年的歷史長河中，一位身份特殊的人能獨舞于大西洋幾百年。在雄性統(tǒng)治的世界里，在充滿暴力的世界里，在相信勢力的世界里，卻讓一位剝奪了雄性權(quán)利的人傳承文明，去樹立帝國雄威。沒有人會明白，為何是一位太監(jiān)，能夠克服諸多困難，七下西洋接受眾多國家的頂禮膜拜。

中華自古多奇人，這與中華民族吃苦耐勞，勇于開拓的精神有著密切的關(guān)系。中華幾千年歷史文明的沉淀，造就了一代又一代敢為人先的開拓者。這位偉大的、孤獨的舞者絕然不會想到自己七下西洋的艱難旅程會成為中華民族史上的一件盛事，也許他只是遵從帝國首領(lǐng)的命令。他也不會想到至此以后，中華民族卻再也難以走出國門，更不會想到，幾百年以后，西方列強用堅船利炮轟開了中國看似堅實的壁壘。他們傳承的不是“揚國威，示富強”，而是野蠻的殺戮，瘋狂的掠奪，中華民族經(jīng)歷了百年浩劫。大西洋屬于勇敢者的舞臺，而令人欣慰的是舞臺上的第一位舞者屬于東方帝國。他是孤獨的，大西洋千百年的孤寂需要他去安慰;他是幸運的，大西洋第一篇史詩記載了他的舞步;他是偉大的，大西洋的脊背上烙下了他的足跡;他是成功的，大西洋浮躁的脾性曾七次臣服于他的腳下。

前人給我們留下了寶貴的財富，它不是物質(zhì)上的富有，而精神上的富足。民族復興的偉業(yè)需要我們樹立民放自豪感,增強民族自尊心，我們應沿著前人跋涉的足跡，繼續(xù)傳承中華文明，以我們自己的方式，完成新一代人歷史使命，東方巨龍將會再次自由的馳騁于五洋七洲，暢想新的篇章!

11、根據(jù)文章有關(guān)內(nèi)容，為下面對聯(lián)擬一則稱頌鄭和功績的下聯(lián)(句式大體工整)。(2分)畢升創(chuàng)活字印刷顯我民族智慧。

12、聯(lián)系全文內(nèi)容，說說《千年獨舞》中的“獨舞”有怎樣的含義?(2分)13.用簡要的語言歸納，在鄭和身上體現(xiàn)了哪些民族精神?(3分)14.為什么說鄭和下西洋是“世界航海史之壯舉”?請摘錄文中語句回答。(3分)15.你喜歡這篇文章嗎?請從文章的內(nèi)容和表達兩方面說出你喜歡或不喜歡的理由。(4分)16.閱讀下面材料，結(jié)合本文內(nèi)容，寫出胡錦濤總書記贈送禮品的用意。(2分)材料一： 2005年4月29日，中共中央總書記胡錦濤與中國國民黨主席連戰(zhàn)在北京進行歷史性會見并互贈了禮品?！班嵑推邔殞毚币灾袊伯a(chǎn)黨中央委員會總書記胡錦濤的名義，贈送中國國民黨大陸訪問團。

材料二：：2005年5月12日，中共中央總書記胡錦濤與親民黨主席宋楚瑜在北京進行歷史性會見并互贈了禮品。胡錦濤禮贈宋楚瑜率領(lǐng)的親民黨大陸訪問團“鄭和七寶寶船”。

答案：(1)【甲】表：長期使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)后，身體狀況出現(xiàn)了明顯下降。【乙】表：長期使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)后，導致了不少嚴重的心理疾患。(2)提示：可結(jié)合互聯(lián)網(wǎng)在學習中的作用、長期使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的后果、同齡人身體和心理健康的重要性、使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)時的自我控制等方面來闡述。(共4分。每題2分。第2小題每點合理建議得1分，闡述時不能脫離圖表的信息。意對即可)(二)14分

10.①冬天，母親把老陽兒疊在被子里。②夏天，畢大媽把老陽兒煮在水里面。(3分。應至少包括人和事，寫對一件的得2分。意對即可)11.(1)把曬暖的被子疊起來保溫。(2)水在陽光的照射下變得暖和了。(4分。一句2分，意對即可)12.①大院里的人通常是用柴火燒水，“煮”字的聯(lián)想自然貼切。②竭力保證全家溫飽是母親的責任，“煮”字的使用突出母親日常掛念的事情。③“煮太陽”是很新穎獨特的說法，給人以文學想像的空間和文字閱讀的美感。(3分，答出1點得2分，寫出兩點的即可考慮給滿分。只抄錄原文的最多得1分。意對即可)13.參考：母親“把老陽兒疊起來”(或“把老陽兒煮在水里”、“讓太陽成為了我們居家過日子必備的一種物件”)帶給我們溫暖與快樂。(2分)母親這種“智慧和溫暖的心”，尤其是“在艱苦日子里磨煉出的一點兒本事”，成為我們生命里不可或缺的太陽(老陽兒)，母親就是照亮和溫暖我們生命的陽光(老陽兒)，是我們所有幸福和感恩的來源。(2分)(共4分。意對即可)

一、積累運用

1.融 芥蒂 jí dù(共2分，對1個不得分，對2-3個得1分，對4-5個得2分)2.①只辱于奴隸人之手，駢死于槽櫪之間。(答“千里馬常有，而伯樂不常有”的得1分)②發(fā)憤忘食，樂以忘憂。③人不寐，將軍白發(fā)征夫淚!④枯藤老樹昏鴉/古道西風瘦馬。(共8分，每句1分，有錯、漏、添字的該句不得分)3.(1)刪除“每到清晨……面紗”一句。

(2)將“插秧”和“播種”顛倒一下位置;將“柴火賣”后的“，”改為“;”;將“繁衍”改為“養(yǎng)活”;在“新衣服”前加上“穿上”;將“刻骨名心”改為“刻骨銘心”。

(共5分。改對1處得1分。修改超過6處的，從第7處開始，不得分也不扣分。其他改法，只要合理也可得分)4.不設統(tǒng)一答案。參考：特點——口語化(1分)，通俗易懂(1分)。體現(xiàn)了中國領(lǐng)導人民主平等(1分)、務實有效(1分)、貼近群眾(1分)的治國思想。(共5分，答到4點即可得全分。意對即可。其他合理說法也應酌情給分)(三)(共12分)15.① 品德高尚。② 使身體勞累。

③ 沒有學問的人(或知識淺薄的人)。④ 如果能堅持(有恒心)。(共2分。答對兩個得1分)16.(1)苔蘚痕跡碧綠，長到了臺階上;草色青蔥，映入了竹簾里。(2)世人的贊譽不值得羨慕，只要把仁愛作為自己的行動準則就行了。(共4分，每句2分。略有欠缺的可以不扣分)17.在涅貴不緇(2分。答成“在涅貴不緇，曖曖內(nèi)含光”的建議不扣分。自己概括不得分)18.參考：“無說己之長”，“隱心而后動”，“守愚圣所臧”，“曖曖內(nèi)含光”，“慎言節(jié)飲食”。(共2分。答出1句給1分，得滿2分為止。有偏差的可以考慮給1分)19.人才的培養(yǎng)離不開伯樂;孤芳自賞、清高孤傲。(2分。意對即可)5.題目示例：《如此錦標》，《野蠻作業(yè)》，《足球殺手》等。漫畫內(nèi)容參考：這是一幅名為《如此錦標》的漫畫。一位運動員手舉鮮花，站在領(lǐng)獎臺上向觀眾揮手。他的左手拎著一把大砍刀，漫畫用一個大大的問號引起我們的思考：野蠻賽風何時了?(共3分。標題1分，內(nèi)容2分。意對即可)6.參考：我國青少年傳統(tǒng)文化觀念淡薄，急需加強傳統(tǒng)文化教育;弘揚傳統(tǒng)文化應從小抓起，從素質(zhì)教育抓起，以相關(guān)法律法規(guī)為保障，應形成優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)傳承發(fā)揚。(3分。按照要點、流暢度以3、2、1、0給分)(一)(共11分)6.【甲】花青素的酸堿度決定其顏色?！疽摇咳斯みx擇優(yōu)于自然選擇。(2分。意對即可)7.【甲】由分到總，【乙】由總到分。具體說明略。(共4分。【甲】【乙】各2分。其它分析，言之有理的酌情給分)8.參考：不能刪去，(1分)“僅”表示只舉一例，“幾十年工夫”表明時間短，(1分)說明人工選擇在較短時間內(nèi)取得的顯著成果。(1分)(共3分。意對即可)9.B(2分)(二)(共16分)10.(4分，1空1分。選擇其它詞語的，酌情給分)“鄉(xiāng)野的花”的特點 “鄉(xiāng)野的花”的情狀 “禮儀鮮花”的情狀 久 長(飽經(jīng)風霜、不蒼老)(青翠欲滴、艷麗誘人)堅 貞 表里如一(得意忘形、萎靡不振)真 實(渾然天成、質(zhì)樸純正)喬裝打扮

11.參考：我案頭這來自鄉(xiāng)野的花，本是“死”過了的枯枝萎果，但我們在感情上為其注入了靈性、精神上賦予了它以生命，所以它就美了，也就能久長了。(3分，意對即可)12.參考：說明“礦泉水瓶里的幾枝花”非但養(yǎng)不長，而且連裝點一下人的精神風貌都做不到。表達了自己對水瓶鮮花的不屑。(3分。意對即可。若以“那個青年戰(zhàn)士”為陳述對象，最多得1分)13.②、③(2分，答對1個得1分)14.不設統(tǒng)一答案，提示：所舉事例必須符合因“精神和文化的力量”而“死而復生”的意思。(4分。視恰當與深刻的程度以4、3、2、1給分。不舉例最多給2分)(三)(共8分)15.①喂養(yǎng)馬的人 ②驅(qū)使，驅(qū)趕 ③不能顯現(xiàn)出來 ④鞭子(共3分，對1個得1分，得滿3分為止)16.只是辱沒在馬夫的手里，(和普通馬)一同死在馬廄里，不把它稱為千里馬。(3分。意對即可，個別字詞不到位的可以不扣分)17.食馬者不知其能千里而食也。(2分。答“是馬也，雖有千里之能，食不飽，力不足”的也算對)(四)(共5分)18.不設統(tǒng)一答案。參考：闡明“只有親自接觸事物才能了解事物”的道理。(2分，意對即可)19.依次是“足”、“瞥”、“啜”。(3分，1字1分)2.(1)草色入簾青。談笑有鴻儒。(2)只辱于奴隸人之手，駢死于槽櫪之間。(3)高作籠前無伴侶，亂群雞里有風標。(4)俱懷逸興壯思飛，欲上青天攬明月。(共8分，每句1分，有錯、漏、改字的均不給分)(二)運用(10分)3.不設統(tǒng)一答案。上下句構(gòu)成轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，并且與前文的太陽、星星照應。參考：卻只是一股涓涓的山泉;也許你想成為大樹。(2分。每句1分)4.(1)“交往”改為“交際”;(2)“他對我”改為“我對他”;(3)“形態(tài)”改為“狀態(tài)”;(4)“他可以不睡覺，”刪去“他”;(5)刪去“的想法”;(6)“懶”改為“賴”。(4分。改對1處得1分，得滿4分為止)5.不設統(tǒng)一答案，要有稱呼，要說清楚班會的主題，開展本次班會的目的，語言簡明扼要。(4分，視內(nèi)容、表達分4、3、2、1給分)(三)綜合性學習(4分)6.不設統(tǒng)一答案。參考：①溫家寶總理喜愛讀書，博覽群書，②熱愛祖國與人民，③憂國憂民，將國家與人民放在心中，④為國家與人民鞠躬盡瘁，日夜操勞，⑤完全不在乎自己個人的金錢得失。(4分。答到1點給1分，給滿4分為止，完全與所給詩文無關(guān)則不給分)

一、積累運用(共26分)1.萌 瀚 覆 匿(2分，答對1個得1分，給滿2分為止。)2.(1)蓬萊文章建安骨(2)燕然未勒歸無計(3)枯藤老樹昏鴉 古道西風瘦馬(4)一個純粹的人 一個脫離了低級趣味的人(5)只要是詠鳥的古詩詞即可(8分，每空1分。有錯該句不得分。)3.不設統(tǒng)一答案。參考：人們都愛秋天，愛她的天高氣爽，愛她的云淡日麗，愛她的香飄四

野。(2分。句式對應、意對即可)4.(1)刪除“慢慢”;(2)“覺得”后面添加“和”;(3)刪除“寧靜”;(4)“對著一窗的月光，”“找一個靜謐寧靜的夜晚，”調(diào)換。(5)“制”改為“置”;(6)刪除“兩顆”。(4分。改對1處得1分，得滿4分為止。)5.校刊名稱略(1分);欄目名稱力求精練、新穎、有創(chuàng)意(每個1分);“刊首語”如能談到 辦刊的宗旨，辦刊的方法，語言優(yōu)美、流暢、有感召力可得滿分。(3分，酌情按3、2、1給分。)6.沒有標準答案。參考：他們都是普通人，但他們珍視生命歷程，敢于面對挫折，甘于平凡，踏實走好人生每一步，綻放了美麗，誕生了感動。(4分。視內(nèi)容、表達分4、3、2給分。)(二)(共16分)11.不設統(tǒng)一答案。參考：鄭和駕船遠航揚我中華雄威。(2分。內(nèi)容概括準確，基本符合對聯(lián)要求即可。)12.指鄭和下西洋在近千年里是獨一無二的，他征服大西洋就如同在舞臺上跳出的舞步。(2分。意對即可)13.積極向上、不怕艱難、勇于開拓的精神。(3分。意對即可)。

14.“航程之遠，歷時之久;船舶數(shù)量之多，噸位之大;船員之眾，組織之嚴密;造船和航海技術(shù)之先進，均為當時世界之最，遠在歐洲人所謂“地理大發(fā)現(xiàn)”的大航海之先”(3分)15.沒有標準答案。(4分。要求觀點明確，理由充分。視內(nèi)容、表達分4、3、2給分。)16.渴望臺灣早日回歸祖國，渴望祖國早日統(tǒng)一。(2分。意對即可)