第一篇：寫人篇作文

寫人篇（寫倩翎）

她，是天使的化身

天使或許沒有美麗的翅膀，也不一定穿著柔和的裙子。在我身邊，上帝讓我交到了一個(gè)朋友，她就是天使的化身。她有著善良與美麗，準(zhǔn)確地來說，是因?yàn)樗屏剂?，上帝給她的回報(bào)就是“美麗”。

她有這一雙溫柔、水汪汪的大眼睛，她那雙顧盼撩人的大眼睛每一忽閃，微微上翹的長睫毛便撲朔迷離地上下跳動(dòng)。修長的眉毛下，閃動(dòng)著一雙水晶般明亮而又純潔的大眼睛。她很愛笑，嬌唇紅潤，嘴角邊綻出兩個(gè)小酒窩，花一樣美。那紅潤的兩唇，像兩片淡紅的、正在開放的花瓣，說起話來妙語聯(lián)珠。她頭發(fā)秀美，白玉般的小臉蛋兒襯托著那一頭柔軟的頭發(fā)。她就是我的好朋友——倩翎！

我還記得在一個(gè)星期三，那一天汐媛當(dāng)代理班主任。中午，來福玩起了一個(gè)“惡作劇”，在這兒吃飯的同學(xué)都要說出密碼才能進(jìn)班。后來，小宇和仲謀竟然把密碼改成對(duì)對(duì)方不好的密碼。我只是幫忙開門，汐媛竟不分青紅皂白地只記了我的名字，我哭了，我覺得很委屈。倩翎看見了，就拿著紙巾一邊給我擦淚，一邊說：“別哭了，我們都知道不是你的錯(cuò)?！蔽覍?duì)著汐媛邊哭邊說：“你在網(wǎng)上一直罵我，你以為我是瞎子嗎？我不想跟你發(fā)生爭執(zhí)是因?yàn)橘霍岬脑?！你又不是不知道，李倩翎?huì)很難做的！”李倩翎還是默默地在我旁邊幫我擦淚，她不說話，可能陷入了沉思。

在大家的勸說下，汐媛劃了我的名字，記上了小宇的名。小宇也哭了，我也沒停止。倩翎看見兩個(gè)人哭了，她就往我們兩個(gè)人身邊來回跑，一下幫這個(gè)擦眼淚，勸不要哭了，一下又跑到另一個(gè)的旁邊擦眼淚。我想停止哭泣，可我真的很委屈，我停不下來。我告訴倩翎我不能停止哭泣，她只輕輕地說了句：“加油，克制住自己，別哭了?！苯又^續(xù)幫我擦淚。

我們不哭了，倩翎也笑逐顏開，露出了她的微笑，她的酒窩，她的開心。她就是總為她人著想的人。

天使就是這樣，總為她人著想，別人開心了，自己也就開心了。倩翎，就是天使的化身！

第二篇：寫人篇

“吳老師”補(bǔ)習(xí)班中高年級(jí)作文導(dǎo)學(xué)案

寫人篇

寫人是作文的基本命題。

寫人的文章應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：

1、交代清楚他是什么人，如他的年齡、性別、外貌、性情，及與自己的關(guān)系。

2、要通過具體的事件來表現(xiàn)人物，決不能像老師給你寫品德評(píng)語那樣來寫人。所選的事件要能充分表現(xiàn)這

3、要寫出人物的特點(diǎn)，就是要寫出這個(gè)人與其他人不同的地方。只有把特點(diǎn)寫出來了，才能給讀者留下深刻的印象，文章也才能與眾不同，有新意。

4、要緊緊扣住人物的特點(diǎn)和文章所要表達(dá)的思想感情來寫人，不要想到什么就寫什么，馬虎拼湊，更不能重復(fù)羅嗦，畫蛇添足，使人看了不知在說什么。

范文1：什么是我？這就是我同學(xué)們，我給你們介紹一位同學(xué)，希望你們和她成為好朋友。

她今年步入六年級(jí)了，1.58米的個(gè)子，一對(duì)不濃不淡的眉毛，一雙本來挺大，但因?yàn)槌闪私曆郾蛔约翰[成一對(duì)月牙似的小眼睛。不高的鼻梁，不薄不厚的嘴唇，這就是她的長相。

她很活潑，也很調(diào)皮，但從來不給老師、家長添麻煩。她很愛看書，精彩的部分能背下來。她很馬虎，成績單上因?yàn)轳R虎扣了不少冤枉分。她很喜歡音樂，歌唱的不錯(cuò)，這就是她的性格。

下面我給大家講兩個(gè)有關(guān)她的故事。

有一次，她看一本《福爾摩斯》偵探小說，看的入了迷。媽媽喊她吃飯，喊了三遍她才邊看書邊去吃飯。她把勺子伸向“雞湯”，“??！…..”，她以史無前例的180分貝的聲音尖叫著，原來，她把滿滿一勺辣椒面當(dāng)雞湯放進(jìn)了嘴里。她咕咚咕咚澆了半天涼水，可還是被辣的跳來跳去，她媽媽趕緊從冰箱里拿了一塊冰放到她嘴里，總算沒事了。她媽媽把她罵了一頓，她吐吐舌頭，埋頭吃飯?？沙酝觑埡?，仍然不知悔改，接著看了起來。

還有一次，她學(xué)騎車，一開始用大車子，不料，車上的釘子不僅把她的新短裙勾破了，還使她摔了個(gè)大馬趴。沒辦法，她媽媽只好給她買了一輛小車，她學(xué)會(huì)了?？伤粫?huì)爬就想跑，居然雙手脫把，砰的一聲，和一輛大車子相撞，把她手腳弄破了，她媽媽十分心疼，她卻又騎了上去。雖然摔了很多跤，但她終于學(xué)會(huì)了，如今，她騎車已經(jīng)達(dá)到了爐火純青的地步。

聽了我的介紹，你們應(yīng)該知道她是誰了吧！她就是我，喻曉，一個(gè)即將步入六年級(jí)的學(xué)生！

點(diǎn)評(píng)：這篇文章以獨(dú)特的題目先聲奪人，接著以第三人稱來對(duì)人物進(jìn)行介紹，又以兩個(gè)具體生動(dòng)的事例來突出人物的性格特點(diǎn)，同時(shí)在結(jié)尾處點(diǎn)明介紹的人物就是作者本身。構(gòu)思角度新穎，文章亮點(diǎn)層出不窮。

范文2：我的弟弟

都說我們這做哥哥、做姐姐的要給小弟弟、小妹妹們做榜樣，但我的弟弟卻用行動(dòng)和語言來讓我明白了一個(gè)重要的道理。雖說他是我的弟弟，但他卻使我尊敬和敬佩。

那是暑假的一天，我和弟弟一起來到大街上。我悠閑自在，目視前方；可弟弟卻“虎視耽耽”地看著地上，一點(diǎn)東西都會(huì)成為他的目標(biāo)，活像個(gè)小“福爾摩斯”。突然，兩個(gè)“嫌疑犯”印入了弟弟的眼簾。他如同饑餓的野獸發(fā)現(xiàn)了獵物一般猛地沖了上去，撿起了兩個(gè)空瓶字……

回到家，我身上是空空如也，可弟弟卻不得了：易拉罐、塑料瓶等等裝滿了一身。我問他又不是撿破爛的，要那么多垃圾干什么。他聽了后，神氣地說：“別小看我，這些能賣錢！”“賣錢？你什么時(shí)候成了小財(cái)迷了？” 1 人性格和品質(zhì)。當(dāng)你把事情(寫清楚，注意詳略)寫好了，人物也就寫好了。

“吳老師”補(bǔ)習(xí)班中高年級(jí)作文導(dǎo)學(xué)案

“不是，我想我已經(jīng)7歲半了，總不能光靠父母，自己也應(yīng)該勤儉節(jié)約。雖然這些東西賣不了多少錢，但是買一些文具還是綽綽有余的了。這樣子即能夠節(jié)省爸爸媽媽的開支，又能為綠化環(huán)境出一份力。能夠兩全其美，多好??！”我呆住了，這還是我原來那個(gè)調(diào)皮搗蛋、整天纏著爸爸媽媽買玩具的弟弟嗎？怎么一下子變得那么得懂事

了？弟弟似乎看出了我的心思，又說：“我已經(jīng)不是原來的那個(gè)小毛頭了，現(xiàn)在我也要變得更加懂事，給那些比

我更小的弟弟妹妹們做好榜樣！”

多么懂事的弟弟啊，多么感人的話語啊，多么優(yōu)秀的品質(zhì)?。‰m然這是一個(gè)幼小的心靈說出的話，但是它卻能提醒許許多多的人，用勤儉節(jié)約的這種好品質(zhì)，來共同創(chuàng)建一個(gè)更加美好的和諧家園。

點(diǎn)評(píng)：在本文開頭小作者就給讀者一個(gè)懸念——是什么樣的事情能讓一個(gè)哥哥對(duì)弟弟產(chǎn)生敬佩之情？然后引

出小作者要敘述的事件，以及小作者最終目的是要通過這樣一個(gè)事件突出弟弟的形象——懂事、節(jié)儉。

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學(xué)生姓名____________年級(jí)____________習(xí)作等第_______________2

第三篇：四年級(jí)作文寫人篇

寫人作文：

寫人，是小學(xué)作文訓(xùn)練的基本功之一。在記敘文中，人和事是不可分的，關(guān)鍵是看題目如何要求。要求寫事的題目，文中的人要為事服務(wù);要求寫人的題目，文中的事必須為人服務(wù)。寫人為主的記敘文，就是要通過一件或幾件事，來表現(xiàn)人物一種或多種品質(zhì)。寫人的記敘文，敘事不要求完整;記事的記敘文，虛實(shí)要求完整，而且要貫穿文章始終。

一、通過一件事來寫人

通過一件事來寫人，通常是表現(xiàn)人物的一種品質(zhì)或性格的一個(gè)方面。為了刻畫人物，對(duì)所寫人物必須進(jìn)行必要的外貌、語言、動(dòng)作、心理等方面的描寫。但是，從以事寫人這個(gè)角度來說，最好是選擇一件最能反映此人某一特點(diǎn)的事，并把這件事寫好。

在寫事情的時(shí)候，要選擇典型的事例。所謂典型，就是能集中反映中心思想的事，能夠表現(xiàn)人物的好思想、好品質(zhì)、美好情感的事。對(duì)小學(xué)生來說，選擇典型事例，要著眼于小事，選擇那些最能反映深刻意義的小事。這樣的事表面上看，都是普普通通的凡人小事，但是其中卻蘊(yùn)涵著深刻的意義，這就是我們常說的“小中見大”。

二、通過幾件事寫人

可以分成兩種情況：以是用幾件事表現(xiàn)某個(gè)人的一種品質(zhì);二是用幾件事表現(xiàn)某個(gè)人的多種品質(zhì)。要注意：用幾件事寫人，這些事可以是完整的，作者必須把事情發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件(起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果)，一一交代清楚，也可以是不完整的，只著重于某幾點(diǎn)進(jìn)行敘述。更多的是在一篇文章中，有的事詳寫;有的事略寫;有的事要求寫得比較完整，有的事要求寫得比較簡單。通過幾件事寫人，同樣要對(duì)人物進(jìn)行必要的外貌、行動(dòng)、語言、心理的描寫。

三、學(xué)會(huì)刻畫人物

寫人的文章要會(huì)在敘事的過程中，對(duì)最能表現(xiàn)人物思想感情、性格特點(diǎn)的外貌、語言、動(dòng)作、心理活動(dòng)等方面進(jìn)行描寫，也就是學(xué)會(huì)刻畫人物。

1.外貌描寫

人物的外貌，就是人物的外形特征，包括容貌、衣著、姿態(tài)、神情等等。外貌描寫首先必須從文章中心思想的需要出發(fā)，要求抓住人物的本質(zhì)特征，有選擇、有重點(diǎn)地描寫，來揭示人物性格的一種方法。人物的的外貌和人物內(nèi)心世界密切的聯(lián)系，具體說：通過外貌描寫，使人物的形象更豐滿，能給讀者留下深刻印象;通過外貌描寫，揭示人物的身份;通過外貌描寫，展示人物在特定場合的內(nèi)心世界;通過外貌描寫，表現(xiàn)人物性格、精神面貌和思想品質(zhì)。

總之，外貌描寫要和表現(xiàn)人物特點(diǎn)、突出文章的中心思想緊密配合。外貌描寫要傳神，切忌臉譜化，反對(duì)那種部分主次，從頭寫到腳、千人一貌的寫法。

2.語言描寫

人物的語言包括人物的獨(dú)白，對(duì)話，交談以及語氣?！把詾樾穆暋?。人物的語言是人物內(nèi)心世界的直接表現(xiàn)。因此成功的語言描寫能恰當(dāng)?shù)乇憩F(xiàn)人物的身份、年齡、思想、品質(zhì)、作風(fēng)和個(gè)性特點(diǎn)。描寫人物語言時(shí)，要注意符合人物的身份，表現(xiàn)人物的思想感情，反映人物相互間的關(guān)系。

3.動(dòng)作描寫

描寫人物的動(dòng)作時(shí)，不僅要寫出人物“做什么”，還要寫出“怎么做”。4.心理描寫

心理活動(dòng)是無聲的語言，是直接表現(xiàn)人物精神面貌，思想活動(dòng)的手段。描寫人物的心理活動(dòng)時(shí)，要注意把心理活動(dòng)產(chǎn)生的原因敘述清楚，還要注意與外貌、動(dòng)作、語言描寫結(jié)合起來。外貌、語言、動(dòng)作、心理活動(dòng)寫好了，人物的形象就突出、鮮明了。

四、善用對(duì)比

對(duì)比是寫人作文經(jīng)常用到的寫作方法?？梢阅米约旱哪骋环矫嫣攸c(diǎn)、愛好、特長和他人的對(duì)比，即橫向?qū)Ρ龋灰部梢詫懽约含F(xiàn)在在某一方面怎么樣和過去自己在某一方面如何進(jìn)行對(duì)比，即縱向?qū)Ρ?。通過橫、縱對(duì)比，能把一個(gè)人的思想品質(zhì)、精神風(fēng)貌、主要特點(diǎn)給突出形象地表現(xiàn)出來。運(yùn)用對(duì)比描寫，不應(yīng)該勉強(qiáng)湊合，適合采用對(duì)比寫法就用，不適合采用對(duì)比寫法的就不要用。

六、為了便于同學(xué)們理解記憶，編了以下順口溜： 寫人文章并不難，抓住特點(diǎn)是關(guān)鍵。選擇事例一二三，典型新穎考慮全。

描寫方法有五個(gè)，交靠運(yùn)用文章鮮。運(yùn)用細(xì)節(jié)不呆板，突出中心記心間。橫縱對(duì)比形象現(xiàn)，不宜用時(shí)勿生搬。以上幾點(diǎn)全做到，寫人文章一定好。

（二）、寫人篇名作賞析：

我的好友小帥子

朋友是每一個(gè)人的精神支柱。當(dāng)你悶悶不樂的時(shí)候，他（她）會(huì)逗你開心；當(dāng)你遇到困難時(shí)他（她）會(huì)向你伸出援住之手。每個(gè)人都有朋友我也不例外我最好的朋友就是――小帥子。

小帥子，你聽到這個(gè)名字一定會(huì)認(rèn)為是他父母因他長得帥而這樣取的名吧，沒錯(cuò)兇的確長得十分帥：大大的腦袋，一雙炯炯有神的濃眉大眼，一看就是機(jī)靈的家伙，高高的鼻子下面長著一張能說會(huì)道并且愛吃的嘴，瓜子型臉蛋真是標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的中國帥哥。

他的性格十分怪，雖然他為人儉樸但在朋友面前總是十分慷慨大方。有一次，我正好沒本子寫作業(yè)了，可身上又沒錢，他看到我著急的樣子，用身上的僅有的五角錢幫我買了一本本子，解了我的燃眉之急，我覺得不好意思，因?yàn)槟鞘撬淖囧X，只聽他說：沒關(guān)系，我可以跑回去，既省錢又可以鍛煉身體，不是一舉多得嗎。

他還是個(gè)勇敢的家伙。有一次，我們倆來到河邊捉螃蟹，我們使頸把河邊一張沒人要的網(wǎng)拋進(jìn)水中，過了一會(huì)兒我們把網(wǎng)拉上來，一看，上面果然有幾只螃蟹正我們張開鉗子。因我第一次見到這可怕的東西不敢捉，嚇得往后腿?？尚涀訁s不慌不忙地對(duì)我說，別怕看我的，只見小帥子面不改色心不跳地來到網(wǎng)前，一只手小心翼翼地按住螃蟹的背，另一只手迅速地夾住它的身體兩邊，壓住它的鉗子，利索地放在我事先準(zhǔn)備好的桶里。不一會(huì)兒，一只只螃蟹都進(jìn)了桶。我知道他也是第一次捉螃蟹，可他如此勇敢，我不得不佩服他。

這就是我的好朋友。我十分喜歡他的的帥氣和勇敢，請(qǐng)記住他――小帥子。

我的爺爺

我的爺爺快八十歲了，個(gè)子不高，有點(diǎn)駝背；他的頭發(fā)花白，眉毛又長又濃，手腳很粗糙，牙齒掉了許多，安上了一口假牙。

爺爺是農(nóng)村人，三歲就沒了父母，十幾歲給別人家打長工，十五歲那年被東家派到嶗山，給日本人挖山洞，受盡了苦難。

爺爺很勤快，干活也很利索。每次吃完飯他都搶著要洗碗，可是我們怕累著他，哪能讓他給我們洗碗呢？！

爺爺身體很健康，他每天早晨、上午、下午都去鍛煉，在健身器上鍛煉時(shí)連六十歲的人都自嘆不如，自從我們把他接來以后他連感冒都沒得過。

爺爺很喜歡聊天，不管認(rèn)識(shí)不認(rèn)識(shí)他都聊。我以為爺爺只和老人聊天，但是我錯(cuò)了，有一次我看見爺爺正在和一群小孩說話。爺爺很關(guān)心我的學(xué)習(xí)，只要我一走神，爺爺便會(huì)在一旁提醒我好好學(xué)習(xí)，將來考個(gè)好成績，不要向他一樣，一個(gè)字也不認(rèn)識(shí)。

由于以前家里窮，沒錢上學(xué)，爺爺不識(shí)字。知道爺爺不識(shí)字以后，我決定教爺爺寫字。我先教爺爺寫他的名字，爺爺一筆一劃的寫了出來，雖然寫的不怎么樣，但是對(duì)爺爺來說已經(jīng)很不錯(cuò)了?？匆姞敔攲憰?huì)自己的名字后高興的樣子，我心里比吃了蜜還甜。

在此我衷心的祝愿爺爺幸福健康、快樂長壽。

（三）、寫人方向：

1、外貌品質(zhì)

3動(dòng)作

第四篇：英語作文寫人篇模版[模版]

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Me(我)My name is______(寫自己的英文名哦).I am ___(數(shù)字)years old.I am from China, and I am a student in _____________(寫自己的學(xué)校名稱哦).My favorite subject（喜愛的科目）is______（寫自己喜歡的科目名稱哦）, because it is very interesting(有趣的).I like ___________________(寫自己喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)哦)｛如swimming and riding a bike｝.I can ____________________(寫自己的強(qiáng)項(xiàng)哦)｛如 swim, play basketball and tennis｝.There are _____(數(shù)字)people in my family, they are________________｛如 my father, my mother and my brother and my sister and I｝.My father is ___(數(shù)字)years old，he is a ____(職業(yè)){ eg(例如).doctor;teacher;worker;policeman;manager }.My mother is_____(數(shù)字)years old, she is a _______(職業(yè)).My brother/sister is a student, too.They are kind to me.(他們都對(duì)我很好).I love my family, and we are happy every day.This is me(這就是我啊).?My good friend(我的好朋友)I am ________(寫上自己的名字哦).I am ___(數(shù)字)years old.I am from China, and I am a student in _____________(寫自己的學(xué)校名稱哦).My good friend is _________(寫上你好朋友的名字), he/she is ___(數(shù)字)years old.He/She is good at(擅長)_______________(寫上你朋友擅長的東西啊)｛如科目，運(yùn)動(dòng)等，一定要記住如果加動(dòng)詞一定要加V-ing哦｝.His/Her hobby is_____________(寫上你朋友的愛好哦，也是動(dòng)詞一定要加V-ing).He/She can ________________(寫你的朋友會(huì)什么東西啊……).He/She is nice to everyone.He/She is always helping to others, so we like to make friends with him/her.(他/她對(duì)每個(gè)人都很好，經(jīng)常幫助別人，所以我們都喜歡和他/她交朋友).This is my good friend----______(寫上你朋友的名字哦).｛注明：這個(gè)模版也可以寫自己的爸爸媽媽老師等等哦，不過要自己改一些關(guān)鍵詞哦Y(^_^)Y｝

?My family(我的家人)My name is______(寫自己的英文名哦).I am ___(數(shù)字)years old.I am from China, and I am a student in _____________(寫自己的學(xué)校名稱哦).My favorite subject（喜愛的科目）is______（寫自己喜歡的科目名稱哦）, because it is very interesting(有趣的).I like ___________________(寫自己喜歡的運(yùn)動(dòng)哦)｛如swimming and riding a bike｝.I can ____________________(寫自己的強(qiáng)項(xiàng)哦)｛如 swim, play basketball and tennis｝.There are _____(數(shù)字)people in my family, they are________________｛如 my father, my mother and my brother and my sister and I｝.My father is ___(數(shù)字)years old，he is a ____(職業(yè)){ eg(例如).doctor;teacher;worker;policeman;manager }.My mother is_____(數(shù)字)years old, she is a _______(職業(yè)).My brother/sister is a student, too.They are kind to me.(他們都對(duì)我很好).This is my family.I love my family, and we are happy every day.

第五篇：英語作文 寫人篇

My grandfather is very kind to me.He loves me very much.I am the apple of his eye, but when it comes to my study he is very strict.Every day he spends more than one hour examining my homework.With his help, I have been doing well in my studies.My grandfather is also warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them.One day, a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly.My grandfather took the girl to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings.My grandfather is a kind and easy-going man, but now he is living in another city with my aunt.We all miss him very much and I hope that I can go to visit him soon.姥爺很疼愛我.”他也非常喜歡我,把我視為掌上明珠.但一說到學(xué)習(xí),他就對(duì)我極其嚴(yán)厲.每天他都要花一個(gè)多小時(shí)檢查我的作業(yè).在他的幫助下,我的學(xué)習(xí)一直非常好.姥爺對(duì)鄰居也很熱心,他總是樂于助人.一天,鄰家的女孩不慎傷了腿,姥爺馬上帶她去醫(yī)院,并用自己的積蓄幫她支付藥費(fèi).姥爺是一個(gè)熱心隨和的人.現(xiàn)在他和我阿姨住在另一個(gè)城市.我們都很想他,我希望不久就能見到他.My grandfather is in his seventies now.He is a kind and warm-hearted old man.He used to live with my family.At that time he always spent more than one hour examining my homework every day.When I was ill, he took good care of me.He showed great concern.Grandfather is very warm-hearted to his neighbors and is always ready to help them.One day, a girl who is one of his neighbors injured her leg carelessly.My grandfather took her to the hospital at once and paid the fees with his own savings.Now my grandfather is living in another city with my aunt.My parents and I all miss him very much.And I hope that I can go to visit him soon.我姥爺70多歲了,他是一位和藹、熱心的老人.他過去和我們一起住.那段日子里,他每天都花一個(gè)多小時(shí)的時(shí)間檢查我的功課.在我生病時(shí),細(xì)心照料我.他非常疼愛我.姥爺對(duì)鄰居們也很熱心,總是樂于助人.一天,鄰居家的女孩不慎摔傷了腿,姥爺馬上帶她到醫(yī)院去,并用自己的積蓄幫她支付藥費(fèi).現(xiàn)在姥爺和我阿姨一起住在另一個(gè)城市.我和爸爸媽媽都很想他.我希望不久就能見到他.4、介紹兵壇名將（鄧亞萍）

Deng Yaping, 28, from Henan Province, is a talented woman player f table tennis.She was the table tennis champion of the 1 l th Asian Games nd the 41st World Table Tennis Championship.And in the 25th Olympic ames she won two gold medals.Why can she make such brilliant chievements with the disadvantage of her Short figure? Her hard work and etermination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages.At the age of 4, she began to play table tennis under the guidance of her father.When she was 8, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school.In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team.On her way to success, she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything.鄧亞萍,女,28歲,河南人,一位杰出的乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員.她分別在11屆亞運(yùn)會(huì)和41屆世界乒乓球錦標(biāo)賽上獲得冠軍,并在25后奧運(yùn)會(huì)中獲得兩枚金牌.為什么她能在個(gè)子不高的狀況下取得如此輝煌的成就呢?是她的勤奮和決心彌補(bǔ)了她的缺陷,指引她走向功.4歲時(shí),她在父親的指導(dǎo)下開始打乒乓球；8歲時(shí)就奪得業(yè)余體校全國冠軍；1998年,成為國家集訓(xùn)隊(duì)員.在成功的路上,她向我們證明了：個(gè)子矮小并不重要,勤奮才是成功的關(guān)鍵.Deng Yaping, 28, is a world-famous woman player of table tennis.She comes from Henan Province.At the age of 4, she began to play ping-pong under her father's instructions.When she was 8 years old, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school.In 1988 she entered the National Training Team.After that she won medals one after another, including gold medals in the 1 l th Asian Games' Table Tennis Competition and the 41st World Table Tennis Championship and two gold medals in the 25th Olympic Games.Is she born a table tennis player? No.She is only 1.5 meters in height, which is her disadvantage.However, she overcame it by hard work and perservance.Her success proves where there is a will, there is a way.鄧亞萍,女,28歲,世界著名乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員,河南人.4歲時(shí),在父親指導(dǎo)下開始打乒乓球.8歲時(shí),獲得業(yè)余體校全國冠軍.1988年進(jìn)入國家集訓(xùn)隊(duì),之后獲得了一枚又一枚的獎(jiǎng)牌.其中包括：11后亞運(yùn)會(huì)冠軍,41后世界乒乓球錦標(biāo)賽冠軍及25屆奧運(yùn)會(huì)金牌2枚.鄧亞萍天生擾是乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員嗎?不.她身高只有1．5米,這對(duì)她非常不利.然而,她靠勤奮和毅力克服了這些不利因素.她的成功證明．有志者事竟成.5、介紹媽媽的XX My mother has a pair of keen eyes which can speak.With her eyes,she observed my mood, gave me courage and made me strong.Therefore, I could face difficulties.When I was a baby learning to walk, my mother always lent me a hand and encouraged me to get up while I fell down.As I finally threw myself into her arms, her eyes smiled with praise.Later as I grew up, I met with more difficulties.But whenever I was frustrated, my mother's eyes always gave me hope and encouragement.Once I failed in exams, my mother encouraged me to find out the reasons.Instead of blaming me she pushed me to do better.At last I overcame the difficulty.Now I have grown up and become more independent, but whenever I come across setbacks, my mother's eyes are always with me encouraging me wherever I go.我母親有一雙敏銳的、會(huì)說話的眼睛.那雙眼睛能洞察我的心情,給我鼓勵(lì),促我堅(jiān)強(qiáng),因此我能面對(duì)一切困難.孩提學(xué)步時(shí),媽媽總是幫助我,鼓勵(lì)我摔倒了就爬起來.最后我晃晃悠悠地?fù)溥M(jìn)她懷抱時(shí),她的雙眼充滿了贊揚(yáng)之情.成長過程中,我遇到了很多困難,但灰心失望時(shí),媽媽的雙眼總給我以希望和鼓勵(lì).一次我考試不及格,媽媽沒有責(zé)備我,而是鼓勵(lì)我找出原因,提高我的成績.最后我終于度過了難關(guān).現(xiàn)在,我長大了,不用再讓她操心了.但每當(dāng)遇到挫折時(shí),媽媽的眼睛總是伴隨著我,給我鼓勵(lì)

1.Along with the advance of the society moreand more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that....1.隨著社會(huì)的不斷發(fā)展，出現(xiàn)了越來越多的問題，其中之一便是____________。2.As to whether it is a blessing or a curse,however, people take different attitudes.2.然而，對(duì)于此類問題，人們持不同的看法。(Hold different attitudes 持不同的看;Come up withdifferent attitudes 有不同的看法)3.As society develops, people are attachingmuch importance to....3.隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，人們開始關(guān)注............4.People are attaching more and moreimportance to the interview during job hunting 4.求職的過程中，人們慢慢意識(shí)到面試的重要性。

5.As to whether it is worthwhile....., thereis a long-running controversial debate.It is quite natural that people fromdifferent backgrounds may have divergent attitudes towards it.5.關(guān)于是否值得___________的問題，一直以來爭論不休。當(dāng)然，不同的人對(duì)此可能持不同的觀點(diǎn)。6.In the process of modern urban development,we often find ourselves in a dilemma.6.在都市的發(fā)展中，我們往往會(huì)陷入困境。

7.Recently the phenomenon has aroused wideconcern, some people are in alarm that....7.最近，這種現(xiàn)象引起了人們的廣泛關(guān)注，有人開始擔(dān)心______________。

8.The human race has entered a completely newstage in its history, with the increasingly rapid economic globalization andurbanization, more problems are brought to our attention.8.人類進(jìn)入了一個(gè)歷史的嶄新的階段，經(jīng)濟(jì)全球化、都市化的速度不斷加快，隨之給我們帶來了很多問題。

9.......plays such an important role that itundeniably becomes the biggest concern of the present world, there comes aquestion, is it a blessing or a curse?“ 9._______顯得非常重要而成為當(dāng)今世界所關(guān)注的最大的問題，這是無可厚非的。不過，問題是：”我們?cè)撊绾尉駬?“ 10.Now we are entering a new era, full ofopportunities and challenges, 10.現(xiàn)在我們正在進(jìn)入一個(gè)充滿機(jī)會(huì)和挑戰(zhàn)的新時(shí)代。

11.People from different backgrounds wouldput different interpretations on the same case.11.不同行業(yè)的人對(duì)同一種問題的解釋不盡相同。

12.The controversial issue is often broughtinto public focus.People from different backgrounds hold different attitudestowards the issue.12.這中極具爭議性的話題往往很受社會(huì)的關(guān)注。不同的人對(duì)此問題的看法也不盡相同。13.When asked..., some people think.....while some prefer...13.說到______，有人認(rèn)為________，而另一些人則認(rèn)為__________。

14.Just as the saying goes: ”so manypeople, so many minds“.It is quite understandable that views on thisissue vary from person to person.14.俗話說，”"。不同的人對(duì)此有不同的看法是可以理解的。15.To this issue, different people come upwith various attitudes.15.對(duì)于這個(gè)問題，不同的人持不同的觀點(diǎn)。

16.There is a good side and a bad side toeverything, it goes without saying that...16.萬事萬物都有其兩面性，所以，勿庸置疑，____________。

17.When it comes to..., most people believethat..., but other people regard...as …..17.提到_________問題，很多人認(rèn)為_________，不過，一些人則認(rèn)為______是____.18.When faced with...., quite a few peopleclaim that...., but other people think as...18.提到_________問題，僅少數(shù)人認(rèn)為________，但另一些人則認(rèn)為_________。

19.There is a public controversy nowadaysover the issue of....There who criticize..argue that...., they believe that...,but people who favor.., on the other hand, argue that...19.目前，_______問題爭議較大。批判_______的人認(rèn)為_______，他們認(rèn)為_______，不過，另一方面，贊同_______的人則認(rèn)為_________。20.Some people are of the opinion that..20.有些人認(rèn)為_____________。21.Many people claim that...21.很多人認(rèn)為_____________。

22.A majority of 絕大多數(shù) A largenumber of 很多人

23.Some people contend that...has proved tobring many advantages(disadvantages)23.有些人認(rèn)為________有很多有利之處(不利之處)。

24.Those who argue for...say that...economic development of the cities.24.覺得_____的人認(rèn)為，______ 城市的經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展。25.Some people advocate that....25.有些人在堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為_________。

26.They hold that...他們認(rèn)為_________。

27.People, who advocate that..., have theirsound reasons(grounds)27.堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為______的人也有其說法(依據(jù))。

28.Those who have already benefited frompracticing it sing high praise of it.28.那些從中受益的人對(duì)此大家褒獎(jiǎng)。

29.Those who strongly approve of...havecogent reasons for it.29.強(qiáng)烈認(rèn)同_______的人有很多原因。30.Many people would claim that...30.有人會(huì)認(rèn)為___________。

31.People who support...give some or all ofthe following reasons.31.那些支持_________觀點(diǎn)的人列出了如下原因：________。

32.But others hold the view that...但是，另外一些人則認(rèn)為_______。

32.觀點(diǎn)的用詞：Attitude, opinion, 與其搭配的動(dòng)詞以及詞組：Take,have, come up with，set forth, put forward等。

33.But on the other hand, there are alsoquite a few people who strongly advocate that..,.33.不過，另一方面，也有少部分人堅(jiān)持認(rèn)為_______________。34.But people who are..., on the other hand, maintain that...34.不過，另一方面，________的人認(rèn)為__________。

35.However, there are a large number ofpeople who hold a different view concerning this case.35.然而，很多人對(duì)此有不同的看法。問題用詞：Issue, phenomenon，后接介詞, on, over等。36.However, some others argue that...然而，另一些人則認(rèn)為_________。

37.However, there are also some others whocontend that...然而，也有人認(rèn)為__________ 38.But other people set forth completelytotally different argument concerning this case.38.不過，對(duì)于此，另一些人則持完全不同的觀點(diǎn)。39.Some people examine this issue fromanother angle.39.有的人用另一角度來看這一問題。

40.On the other hand, there are also manyopponents who strongly...40.另一方面，也有很多反對(duì)的人，他們認(rèn)為_____________。

41.According to my personality and fondness,I would prefer...rather than...41.根據(jù)我的個(gè)性以及興趣，我選擇_______而不會(huì)選擇__________。42.Personally, I side with the latter(former)opinion...42.就我個(gè)人而言，我支持后者(前者)___________。43.Personally, I am in favor of the former pointof view.43.就我個(gè)人而言，我較同意前一種看法。44.To my point of view 我認(rèn)為

45.To my mind, the advantages far overweighthe drawbacks(disadvantages, shortcomings)45.我認(rèn)為，優(yōu)點(diǎn)勝過缺點(diǎn)。

46.For my part, I stand on side of the latteropinion that..46.就我而言，我較贊同后一種觀點(diǎn)________________。

47.As far as I am concerned, I am inclined tobe on the side of the latter view.47.在我看來，我較同意后一種觀點(diǎn)。48.After a thorough consideration, for mypart, I am in favor of the latter view that...48.經(jīng)過深思熟慮，我較支持后一種看法，亦即________________________。49.If asked to make a decision, I wouldprefer...49.如果真的需要作出選擇，我寧愿____________。對(duì)比觀點(diǎn)題型

(1)要求論述兩個(gè)對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)并給出自己的看法。1.有一些人認(rèn)為…… 2.另一些人認(rèn)為…… 3.我的看法…… The topic of ①________(主題)is becoming more and more popular recently.There are two sides of opinions of it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason of ②________(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③________(理由二).Moreover, ④________(理由三).While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons.Firstly,________(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥____________(理由二).Thirdly(finally),⑦_(dá)___________(理由三).From my point of view, I think ⑧________(我的觀點(diǎn)).The reason is that ⑨____________(原因).As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice.For me, the former is surely a wise choice.(2)給出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，要求考生反對(duì)這一觀點(diǎn)Some people believe that ①________(觀點(diǎn)一).For example, they think ②________(舉例說明).And it will bring them ③________(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point.For one thing,④____(我不同意該看法的理由一).For another thing, ⑤____(反對(duì)的理由之二).Form all what I have said,I agree to the thought that ⑥____(我對(duì)文章所討論主題的看法).闡述主題題型

要求從一句話或一個(gè)主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述.1.闡述名言或主題所蘊(yùn)涵的意義.2.分析并舉例使其更充實(shí).The good old proverb ________(名言或諺語)reminds us that ________(釋義).Indeed, we can learn many things form it.First of all,________(理由一).For example, ____________(舉例說明).Secondly,________(理由二).Another case is that ________(舉例說明).Furthermore , ____________(理由三).In my opinion, ________(我的觀點(diǎn)).In short, whatever you do, please remember the say____A.If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.解決方法題型

要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑 1.問題現(xiàn)狀 2.怎樣解決(解決方案的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn))In recent days, we have to face I problem——A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ________(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).Second, ________(舉例進(jìn)一步說明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing, ________(解決方法一).For another ________(解決方法二).Finally, ________(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that ________(我的解決方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(帶來的好處).四、說明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對(duì)比事物本身的利弊，有時(shí)也會(huì)單從一個(gè)角度(利或弊)出發(fā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度(或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A(yù)測)1.說明事物現(xiàn)狀 2.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)(或一方面)3.你對(duì)現(xiàn)狀(或前景)的看法

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First ________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides ____________(A的優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二).But every coin has two sides.The negative aspects are also apparent.One of the important disadvantages is that ________(A的第一個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).To make matters worse,____________(A的第二個(gè)缺點(diǎn)).Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones.Therefore, I would like to ________(我的看法).(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in.Only by this way, ________(對(duì)前景的預(yù)測 議論文的框架

(1)不同觀點(diǎn)列舉型(選擇型)There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文題目_____.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.A majority of people think that _ 觀點(diǎn)一________.In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____.So it goes without saying that ___觀點(diǎn)一_____.People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the idea that ___觀點(diǎn)二_______.In their point of view, on the one hand，___原因一_______.On the other hand, ____原因二_____.Therefore, there is no doubt that ___觀點(diǎn)二______.As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __觀點(diǎn)一或二______.It is not only because ________, but also because _________.The more _______, the more ________.