第一篇：初一書面表達專練

初一書面表達專練

一.自我介紹（姓名→年齡→班級→朋友→愛好的運動→愛好的食物）Hello.My name is David Smith.My first name is David.My last name is Smith.I am a boy.I am fourteen ,I am in Class 7,Grade 7.My good friend’s name is Jack.I like my school.I like my teachers,too.二.尋物啟事和失物招領(lǐng)

Found: PenLost:

Is this your pen?My notebook.Please call Mary at.My name is Tony.3456754Please call 6754398

練習(xí)

1.Jim 丟了一本書，請寫一則尋物啟示。（56987125）

Lost:A book

Please call Jim at 56987125.2.Mary 撿到了一只黑色的書包，請寫一則招領(lǐng)啟示。（1489673）

Found:

A black bag

Please call Mary at 1489673.三.用書信的方式來介紹照片中的人物。注意書信的格式。

Dear Mary ,Here’s ma my family photo.Look at the old man.He is my grandfather.This is my grandmother.Theses are my parents.My father’s name is Bill.My mother’s name is Mary.This is my uncle.He is an English teacher.This boy is me.Yours /Your friend ,Tom

四.給朋友寫便條，請他/她從取東西。注意便條和書信格式的區(qū)別。

Dear Dongdong,Can you bring some things to me? I need my hat ,my English book ,my notebook and a set of keys.My hat is on the chair.The English book is on the desk.The notebook and a set of keys are in the drawer.Thanks,Li Lei

五.介紹你的房間

Here’s my room.My TV is on the desk.My baseball is on the floor ,under the bed.My CDs are in the backpack.The flowers are on the table.My books are in the bookcase.This is my computer.It is on the desk, next to the window.I like it very much.五.我的房間

My Room

This is my room.It’s not a big room.There are three pictures on the wall.My desk is near the window.There is a computer and some books on the desk.There is a coat on my bed.My football shoes are under the bed.What else can you see?

六.寫一段話，談?wù)勀愫屯楦飨矚g什么球類運動，不喜歡什么球類運動。

Yang Fang likes soccer.I also like soccer.He likes volleyball ,but I don’t like volleyball.I like basketball and ping-pong.He likes sports very much.I like them, too.We like watching sports on TV.根據(jù)圖片說明Jack喜歡的球類運動。

Jack has a great sports collection.He has eight tennis rackets ,nine basketballs and six baseballs.He also has four volleyballs and three tennis rackets.He plays sports every day.七.寫一張要求你的同學(xué)參加體育俱樂部的海報。

Let’s play sports!

Do you like sports ?Do you play basketball ?Do you play volleyball ?W have many sports clubs :basketball ,volleyball, soccer, baseball ,ping-pong and more.Please join us!

八.談?wù)勀愫湍愕耐瑢W(xué)早，中，晚餐各喜歡吃的食物

My friend Lucy and I like different food.For breakfast ,she likes eggs, bananas and apples, but I like eggs ,milk and hamburgers.For lunch, she likes hamburgers, salad and pears ,but I like rice, salad and apples.For dinner, She likes chicken ,tomatoes ,French fries and ice cream ,but I like rice, chicken, tomatoes.I don’t like ice cream.九.Liping的服裝店開張了，請幫助她寫一個廣告話。

單詞提示： Come to , T-shirt(6 , in all colors), sweater(＄24, orange), shoes(＄12 , white),on sale

Come to Liping’s clothes store ,and have a look at the clothes.We have T-shirts in all colors are at 6yuan each.The orange sweater is 24dollars.We also have shoes in all colors.The white shoes are on sale for 12 dollars.The shoes in yellow are 16dollars.Welcome to store and see.

第二篇：高考書面表達專練第七節(jié)

高考書面表達專練第七節(jié)

履歷表(Resume)與求職信（Application for a Job）美文欣賞

①Resume

Name in full: Hiram Kirk Leman

Sex: Male

Date of birth: Nov.18,1939

Place of birth: Cleveland, Ohio, U.S.A.Nationality: U.S.A.Height: 1.76 m.Weight: 70 kg.Marital status: Married

Children: Two

Religion: Christian

Party affiliation: None

Education:

B.S.degree in chemistry in 1961

M.S.degree in mathematics in 1963

D.S.degree in physics in 1970

Foreign language: Spanish, French, German

Working experience:

Firm: 1975-present, Gulf Oil Corp.Position: Oil-refining expert

Present address:

405 Duane Street, Atlanta, Georgia, U.S.A.Permanent address:

411 Greenwood Ave, Cleveland, Ohio, U.S.A.Reference:

Joe Smith, 22 Wedgewood Rd., Austin, Tex., U.S.A.Patrick Queensberry, 181 Wilson St.Los Angeles, U.S.A.Dec.15, 1983 履歷表

姓 名：海勒姆﹒柯克﹒萊曼

性 別：男

出生日期：1939年11月18日

出生地點：美國俄亥俄州克利夫蘭

國 籍：美國

身 高：1.76米

體 重：70公斤

婚 姻：已婚

孩 子：2個

宗 教：基督教徒

黨派關(guān)系：無

學(xué)歷：1961年獲化學(xué)學(xué)士學(xué)位

1963年獲數(shù)學(xué)學(xué)士學(xué)位

1970年獲物理博士學(xué)位

外語：西班牙語、法語、德語

工作簡歷：

公司：1975年到今天在海灣石油公司任職

職位：煉油專家

目前通訊地址：美國喬治亞洲阿特蘭大杜安街第405號

永久通訊地址：美國俄亥俄州克利夫蘭格林伍德大街第411號

證明人：喬﹒史密斯，美國得克薩州奧斯丁市韋奇伍德路第22號

帕特里克﹒昆斯伯里，美國洛杉磯市威爾遜大街第181號

1983年12月15日

（學(xué)習(xí)記憶慣用法）

.②

Dear Sir,Please consider me as an applicant for the position of the secretary which you describe in your advertisement in the newspaper of July 5.I’ve just graduated from Shanghai Commercial College in which I majored in Import and Export Trading.English happened to be my favorite and best subject at school.My English scores were always on the top ten of my class of fifty.I have learned to operate telex machine and computer and I can type either in English or in Chinese.Although I have no other work experience than a two years part-time job in an export company in summer, I am willing to work hard and learn.I’d very much appreciate the chance to talk to you and to get your opinion on whether I am qualified for the job you offer.Yours truly, Li Nan

敬啟者：

本人欲申請貴公司7月5日在報上刊登招聘秘書一職?；菡堄枰钥紤]。

本人剛從上海商學(xué)院畢業(yè)，所學(xué)專業(yè)是進出口貿(mào)易。在學(xué)校，我喜歡英語，成績總在全班五十人中前十名之內(nèi)。我會操作電傳機幾電腦，擅長中英文打字，除了暑假在一家出口公司兼職工作兩年之外無其他工作經(jīng)驗，我極愿努力工作、不斷學(xué)習(xí)。

如有機會與你面談，我將十分感謝。希望能知道我是否適合擔(dān)任你們所要求的工作。李楠 啟

（學(xué)習(xí)記憶慣用法）

常用表達法

求職信與履歷表（又稱Curriculum Vitae 或簡稱C.V.）具有很大的相關(guān)性，所以本節(jié)我們將它們安排在了一起來學(xué)習(xí)。寫求職信的目的是要對方相信你是一個值得考慮的人選，而履歷表是你的求職信中必須附加的部分，又是聘方初選的主要依據(jù)。

常用表達法可主要參看“人物介紹（Introducing Somebody）”一節(jié)。除此之外，還應(yīng)注意以下各條：

1.求職信屬于較為嚴格的書面文體，所以必須講究譴詞用句；而履歷表應(yīng)盡量簡潔明了，不必用完整的句子。

2.求職信中應(yīng)該包括以下主要內(nèi)容：

①用一兩句話簡單表達你為何對此工作感興趣；

②簡單告訴收信人你是從何處獲取的此職位信息；

③詳細告訴對方有關(guān)你的教育、工作（或兼職工作、假期打工）經(jīng)歷及與此工作相關(guān)的個人興趣、愛好等；

④提供你的若干個人信息資料：年齡、婚姻狀況、特長、種族及參與的相關(guān)團體等；⑤若有必要，提供兩三個對你的為人及工作能力有所了解的擔(dān)保人姓名和聯(lián)系方式；⑥表示你很想獲得面試機會。

3.履歷表中應(yīng)該包括以下主要內(nèi)容：

①個人資料；

②教育背景；

③工作經(jīng)驗；

④擔(dān)保人。

⑤履歷表常見項目及填法：

現(xiàn)在通訊地址（Present address），永久通訊地址（Permanent Address），國籍（Nationality），健康狀況（Health,可回答Excellent等），性別（Sex，常用Male 或Female），外語（Foreign Language），證明人姓名及通訊地址（Reference），婚姻狀況（Marital Status，可用Married或Single/Unmarried），宗教（Religion，可答Christian等），黨派（Party affiliation ,可答None等），工作簡歷（Working Experience），求職目標(biāo)（Job Objective），受獎情況（Honours and Awards）

取得學(xué)位的情況：

B.S.degree in Physics in1982(B.S.學(xué)士 bachelor)

M.S.degree in Mathematics in1983(M.S.碩士 master)

D.S.degree in Chemistry in 1997(D.S.博士doctor)

4.寫求職信及填履歷表時需注意的“三要三不要”：

①措辭要直接，不拐彎抹角；

②語言要禮貌，不過份謙卑；

③檢查要認真，不留錯漏遺憾。

寫作練習(xí)

某中外合資企業(yè)在一家英文報上登了一則廣告（advertisement），招聘一名秘書，基本條件如下：

1、年齡不超過25歲，未婚；

2、身體健康。身高要求：男性1.70米以上，女性1.60米以上；

3、高中以上文化程度；

4、有較好的英語基礎(chǔ)，英語口語能力強者優(yōu)先錄用；

5、擅長寫作，具有從事文秘(secretary)工作的能力。

假如你叫王強，看了廣告后想求此職。請用英語寫一封求職信，針對招聘條件介紹自己的情況。

習(xí)作點評

Dear Sir:

I’m writing to introduce myself.Yesterday I saw an advertisement on the newspaper which was looking for a secretary.My name is Wang Qiang, the age of 25.I hasn’t got married yet.The condition of my body is very healthy, and I am 1.6 meters high.Now I’m a college student.I’m very interested in English, so I do well in English.In my thirteens, I had a foreign teacher, so that my spoken English is quite well.Maybe it’s very important that I’m good at writing I believe that I have the ability for this job.Yours，Wang Qiang

本篇能基本表達題目要求，格式也基本無誤，但文中頗多不合英文習(xí)慣的用法與表達法。請你試著修改文中劃線部分，使之更準(zhǔn)確、貼切、地道。

參考范文

Dear Sir,After reading your advertisement for a secretary in today’s English paper, I want to offer myself to the position.I’m 19 years old, male, unmarried.I’m 1.75 meters tall, strong and healthy.I’ve just graduated from a senior middle school of Beijing.Last year, I got the first place in the English composition contest in West District, Beijing.I type quite well and can use computers skillfully.I’d like to be your secretary very much.If these meet your requirements, I’ll be very thankful for your kindness.Of course I’ll work hard and well if I can hold the position.I’m eager for your early reply

Sincerely yours,Wang Qiang。

第三篇：2018衡水名師原創(chuàng)英語專題卷：專題十六《書面表達應(yīng)用類專練》

絕密★啟用前

2018衡水名師原創(chuàng)英語專題卷 專題十六：書面表達應(yīng)用類專練

考點01：冠詞 3顆星 考點02：代詞 3顆星

考點03：介詞和介詞短語 2顆星 考點04: 名詞 3顆星

考點06：形容詞和副詞 5顆星 考點08：非謂語動詞 5顆星

考點09：動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài) 5顆星 考點10：定語從句 3顆星 考點12 并列連詞 4顆星 考點13 狀語從句 3顆星 考點34 書面表達應(yīng)用文5顆星 書面表達（每題25分，共50分）

1.【來源】2017年普通高等學(xué)校全國招生統(tǒng)一考試（天津卷）考點34中難

假設(shè)你是李津，與你以前的外籍教師Mrs.Green 一直保持聯(lián)系。近日她來信詢問你的近況，請根據(jù)以下提示給她回復(fù)一封郵件。

（1）簡要介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活；

（2）告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運會的志愿者，并介紹為此所做的準(zhǔn)備（如深入了解天津等）；

（3）希望她有機會重訪天津。注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；

（2）可適當(dāng)加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；（3）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：第十三屆全運會 the 13th National Games Dear Mrs.Green, I’m glad to hear from you.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________Yours, Li Jin

2.【來源】2017年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國統(tǒng)一考試（新課標(biāo)I）考點34中難 假定你是李華，正在教你的英國朋友Leslie學(xué)習(xí)漢語。請你寫封郵件告知下次上課的計劃。內(nèi)容包括：

（1）時間和地點；（2）內(nèi)容：學(xué)習(xí)唐詩；（3）課前準(zhǔn)備：簡要了解唐朝的歷史。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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語法填空（每題1.5分，共45分）

閱讀下面短文，在空白處填入1個適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。（1）【來源】（2016·山西省八校聯(lián)考）

I can well remember that I was once asked to deliver a speech titled A Real Test in My Life before the whole class at the age of 9!You can imagine how 1 考點06(terrible)shy I was the moment I thought of that — with so many eyes 考點08(fix)upon me.I had no 3 考點04(choose)but to prepare for it, though.First of all, I was to draft the speech, which was just a piece of cake for me, a good writer.But the hardest part 4 考點09(lie)in my oral presentation from my memory, for to read from the paper was not allowed.The real moment began 5 考點13 I stood

on the platform with my legs trembling and my mind blank.But my 6 考點04(listen)were waiting patiently without any signs of rushing me.Gradually I found myself back, giving out my speech with difficulty.After what seemed to be a hundred years, I found my audience applauding — I made 7 考點02!From then on, my fear of talking before a big audience 8 考點09(appear).Actually with my confidence building up, I now turn out to be a great speaker.Looking back, I know the greatest difficulty on our way 9 考點03 success is our fear.Overcome it, 10 考點12 we will be able to achieve our goals.（2）【來源】（2016·山西省康杰中學(xué)等四校聯(lián)考）

What defines a healthy city? Is it a place with a lot of open spaces 1 考點10 people can exercise and enjoy the fresh air? A place with little or no pollution? A place in which people can 2 考點06(free)socialize and express their ideas? Perhaps, it’s all that plus more.Other considerations are the availability of health and fitness facilities, an excellent healthcare program and sincere efforts by 3 考點01 local government to actively promote health and wellness among its citizens.Of all the cities in the world, one of the top six 4 考點06(healthy)cities is Copenhagen, Denmark.Copenhageners love to walk.Foot traffic accounts 5 考點03 80% of all traffic in the Copenhagen city center.Those who prefer can also bike.It is estimated that more than a third of all work trips in Copenhagen 6 考點09(carry)out on a bike.As for the climate here, the city does not have the blessing of pleasant weather all year round.7 考點13 everything starts to freeze, it turns several city squares into huge skating fields.The frozen parts of the city also make 8 考點02 easier for residents to skate around.The city also has museums and art galleries for the kids and 9考點04(grown-up).It has the Royal Danish Academy of Fine Art and the Royal Library housed in a rather grand building 10 考點08(call)the Black Diamond.（3）【來源】(2016·四川綿陽市高三二診考試)

（2016·河北衡水中學(xué)高三模考）

Scientists have discovered that 1 考點08(stay)in the cold could help us lose weight.Researchers at the University of California found that exposure to the cold increases levels of a protein that helps form brown fat-the type of fat that produces heat and keeps us warm.Brown fat burns energy, 2 考點10 helps us lose weight.White fat stores extra energy, which results 3 考點03 weight gain.The researchers said that because air conditioning and heating give us constant, 4 考點06(comfort)temperatures, our body's need for brown fat has decreased.They found that: ＂Outdoor workers in northern Finland who 5 考點09(expose)to cold temperature have 6 考點01 significant amount of brown fat when 7 考點08(compare)to same-aged indoor workers.＂ The research was conducted on two different control groups of mice.8 考點02 group was injected with the protein that helps create brown fat.This group later gained 30% less weight after both groups were fed high-fat diets.The researchers say this could be good news in the fight against obesity'.People who are obese have 9 考點06(low)levels of brown fat than thinner people.Head researcher Hei Sook Sul said: ＂This protein could become an important target for research into the treatment and prevention of obesity and obesity — related diseases.＂ She added: ＂If you can somehow increase levels of this protein, you could 10 考點06(possible)lose more weight even if eating the same amount of food.＂

參考答案

一．書面表達

1.Dear Mrs.Green, I’m so glad to hear from you.I’m writing to tell you something about my life and study in recent days.I’m very busy with my lessons now, for the Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near,.Every day, I have to spend most of my time in studying.As a result, I don’t have enough time to take exercise, what’s worse, I don’t communicate a lot with my parents and my friends.By the way, I am now a volunteer for the the 13 National Games, which will be held at the end of August in Tianjin.In order to be a qualified volunteer, I have to improve myself by reading some books about Tianjin so as to know more about it.thWill you please pay a visit to Tianjin again so that we may meet again, for I miss you very much!Looking forward to seeing you a second time.2.Dear Leslie, How are you? I’m writing to tell you about your next Chinese lesson.We’ll still meet at my school, but not on Saturday as usual, since I’ll have to participation a sporting activity that day.So let’s make it three o’clock on Sunday afternoon.As you know, in order to acquire a good knowledge of Chinese, you should learn more about Chinese culture and history.Therefore, this time I will introduce Tang Poetry to you, which is of great help in learning Chinese.I advise you to learn about the brief history of the Tang dynasty in advance.It will surely help you learn the poems.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours, Li Hua 二.語法填空

(1)1.terribly 2.fixed 3.choice 4.lay 5.when 6.listeners 7.it 8.disappeared 9.to 10.and(2)1.where 2.freely 3.the 4.healthiest 5.for 6.are carried 7.When/As 8.it 9.grown-ups 10.called（3）1.staying 2.which 3.in 4.comfortable 5.are exposed 6.a 7.compared 8.One 9.lower 10.possibly

第四篇：書面表達

中考英語書面表達的考點集匯、講解和訓(xùn)練

【考點掃描】

書面表達是每年中考必考題型，是考查學(xué)生交際能力的一個重要組成部分。書面表達通常有三種形式：

1、書信、日記、通知、留言、假條；

2、看圖作文；

3、根據(jù)漢語提示作文。

無論是那一種書面表達形式，考生所寫的短文都要緊扣主題、文理通順，要素完整，語言準(zhǔn)確、得當(dāng)、格式正確、無大、小寫和拼寫錯誤，標(biāo)點符號正確，能達到交際目的?！久麕熃怆y】 一.訓(xùn)練方法

1.記。認真系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí)和背誦基礎(chǔ)知識和優(yōu)美的句子、句型。中國有句古話，叫“熟讀唐詩三百首，不會吟詩也會作”。同樣，要使自己具有較強的寫作能力，首先應(yīng)該熟讀和背誦一些句型和短文。許多同學(xué)寫出來的語言根本不符合英語的語言習(xí)慣，相當(dāng)一部分人有對照中文逐字翻譯的不良習(xí)慣，不去理會中英文的差異。大量的背誦和閱讀是提高寫作能力的有效辦法，同學(xué)們?nèi)粲写罅康默F(xiàn)成語言積累在腦海里，自己寫起文段來，就可以做到脫口而出，或是模仿、套用，甚至發(fā)揮。

2.練。每練一篇書面表達題，都要真正學(xué)到一點東西，不可貪多而邊學(xué)邊忘。平時可以采用循序漸進、靈活多樣的練習(xí)方式。從根據(jù)提示詞寫單句開始，到寫單句，然后到寫幾句話，最后到寫流利的文段。盡量嘗試多種形式的寫作，如短信、說明、通知、便條、明信片、看圖寫作、根據(jù)表格或記錄寫短文等。

3.寫。要進行實戰(zhàn)寫作。要求自己在20分鐘內(nèi)寫出100個詞的短文，并且質(zhì)量高、1 內(nèi)容全、形式正確。這樣形成習(xí)慣，考試時就能得心應(yīng)手。二.應(yīng)試策略

1.審題目：要切中題意。《中考考試說明》指出，書面表達要切中題意。怎樣才能切中題意？就是要認真審題，看到考題后，先不要急于動筆，要仔細看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時態(tài)、活動時間、地點等。

2.圈要點：防止遺漏要點。要點是給分的一個重要因素。為了防止寫作過程中遺漏要點，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個要點逐條列出。

3.列提綱：為寫作做好準(zhǔn)備。根據(jù)文章要點短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞語記下，形成提綱。

4.定基調(diào)：定出時態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時要做到以下六個方面：

(1)避免使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。

(2)多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型。可適當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語或情態(tài)動詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語法、句法知識的靈活運用。1）語態(tài)、時態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無誤。

2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。

4）注意冠詞用法，例如： He is an honest student.中的an不能寫成a。

5）注意拼寫、標(biāo)點符號和大小寫，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。

(4)描寫人物時，要生動具體，例如：

1）外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2）服飾顏色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4）感情描寫：love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5）動作描寫：come, go, get, have, take, bring, fetch 等。

(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進等過渡詞進行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過渡的用法： 1）表示并列關(guān)系的：and, as well as, or… 2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but, yet, however… 3）表示時間關(guān)系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 4）表示因果關(guān)系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 6）表示列舉的：for example , such as… 7）表示總結(jié)性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…

(6)不會表達，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點和語言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯，容易被扣分，閱卷場上有句話：“錯誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個別要點表達不出來或難以表達，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡?？傊?，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語表達習(xí)慣。(6)改病句：認真檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文時，由于時間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯在所難免。因此，改錯這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評卷是根據(jù)要點、語言準(zhǔn)確性、上下 3 文的連貫性來給分，根據(jù)錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯誤應(yīng)從以下幾個方面入手： 1）格式是否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言是否用錯。4）時態(tài)、語態(tài)錯誤。5）標(biāo)點錯誤。6）人稱是否用錯。三.注意事項

書面表達要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。每年閱卷老師在十來天的時間里要看十幾萬考生的作文，工作量之大，時間之緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)。【中考范例】

VII.書面表達（共1題，計10分）

假如你叫張強。請根據(jù)下面美國朋友Bob的來信內(nèi)容，結(jié)合你自己的情況寫一篇語言連慣、符合邏輯的英文回信。

要求：1.認真閱讀來信的內(nèi)容，從中獲得你需要的信息。2.詞數(shù)：80左右。回信的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)。注意：回信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實地址和所在學(xué)校的名稱。

Hello！I’m your new friend.My name is Bob.I’m fifteen.I’m American.I live in New York.4 I am a middle school student.I’m good at maths.It is very interesting.My favourite sport is basketball.And I am not only a basketball fan but also a good player.I like pop music.My friends and I often sing pop songs

After school, I am interested in getting on-line.I have known a lot about China from the Internet.Now I’m learning Chinese.I hope I will visit your country one day.Please write to me and tell me something about your life.I’m looking forward to hearing from you.Bob Dear Bob, _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ Yours，Zhang Qiang 【解析】根據(jù)前面提到第六個步驟，我們來寫一下這篇書面表達。

1.審題目：通過審題目我們可以知道：本篇書面表達應(yīng)是寫一封回信，寫信人是張強，收信人是Bob，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)是介紹張強自己的情況。

2.圈要點：根據(jù)來信判斷，寫回信必須包括以下要點：

1、收到對方的來信；

2、愿意和對方交朋友；

3、自己的姓名、年齡和住址；

4、自己的身份、特長和愛好；

5、自己的希望。

3、列提綱：1.got your letter 2.glad to be your friend 3.name, zhang Qiang, fifteen, live in Shanxi 4.a middle school student, like English, like sports, good at drawing, 5.hope we’ll meet in China

4、定基調(diào)：1.時態(tài)：收到來信用一般過去時，介紹情況用一般現(xiàn)在時，希望用一般將來時。2.人稱用第一人稱。3.可按提綱的順序來寫。4.開頭和結(jié)尾題目已經(jīng)給出。

5、寫全文： Dear Bob, I got your letter yesterday.I’m very glad to be your pen friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I’m fifteen years old, too.I live in Shaanxi.I’m a middle school student, too.I like English and physics very much.I also like sports, but I’m good at drawing.I know a little about America.Could you tell me something more about your country in your next letter? I hope we’ll meet in China some day.I’m sure we’ll have a good time together.Please write(to)me soon.Yours, Zhang Qiang 6

6、改病句：認真復(fù)查一邊，如有錯誤，加以改正。【滿分演練】

（1）

華山是中國名山之一。假設(shè)外國友人到你校參觀后，準(zhǔn)備去旅游。請根據(jù)以下要點向外國友人簡單介紹華山（the Hua Mountain）

1．位于陜西東部，是中國著名的旅游勝地，每年有大批中外游客前去旅游觀光。2．乘汽車去大約要花1個小時；也可以乘火車去。

3．登山便可領(lǐng)略其云海（the sea of clouds）、奇松（wondrous pines）、怪石（unique rocks）等秀麗的風(fēng)景及清晨美麗的日出。注意：

1．字數(shù)：80詞左右。2．請不要逐字翻譯。（2）根據(jù)提示和要求完成下面短文

假如你（Li Lei）在去年夏令營認識的一個朋友Jim從英國給你寄來一件禮物—— 一件紅色的襯衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問好，他想知道你近來在忙些什么。請你給他寫一封回信（100個詞左右）表示感謝?；匦乓ㄒ韵聝?nèi)容： 1.向Jim問好并對他表示感謝。

2.禮物是你最喜歡的顏色，尺寸很合適，你非常喜歡。

3.告訴Jim你近來很好，上周剛過完生日，生日聚會很熱鬧。詢問Jim的近況，并表示希望他能來中國。

注意1.信的格式已經(jīng)給出。

2.信中不得使用真實的人名、地名。（3）

根據(jù)中文意思和英文提示詞語，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給英文提示詞語必須都用上，中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐句翻譯，每組英文提示所寫出的句數(shù)不限。

今天是6月23日星期日，天氣晴朗。你和你的同學(xué)張宏參觀了西安市動物園。那里的動物十分有趣，人見人愛。當(dāng)你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物時，就上前阻止并說……

請你用英文寫一篇日記，記述今天的經(jīng)歷。（請注意日記格式）1．fine day, sun, bright 2．visit, Beijing Zoo 3．a(chǎn)nimal, so interesting, people, love 4．see, visitor, throw…to, stop, say（4）

根據(jù)中文設(shè)置的情景、英文提示詞語以及表格所提供的信息，寫出語法正確、意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。注意1.字數(shù)60~80。

2.所給的英文提示詞語及表格所提供的信息必須都用上。（可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）3.發(fā)言稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。

假設(shè)你是張斌，今年暑假你將參加學(xué)校組織的赴加拿大“綠色之旅”夏令營活動。請你準(zhǔn)備一篇在開營式上的自我介紹發(fā)言稿。

name, Zhang Bin, fifteen years old, live in Xi’an, favorite subject, biology…

Dear friends

I’m very glad to introduce myself to you._______________________ _________________________________________________________________________________

That’s all.Thank you for listening.（5）

根據(jù)中文提示和英文提示詞語寫一篇短文。

今年暑假，有一批美國中學(xué)生要來你們學(xué)校訪問。請你寫一篇有關(guān)西安的簡介，以便和他們交流。

注意：1.字數(shù)100左右；

2.必須使用所給英文提示。Capital of Shaanxi, Lie in the Northwest, many places of interest, autumn, best season 9（6）看圖寫話。

根據(jù)以上四幅圖和提示詞語，寫出一篇語法正確、意思連貫、語句通順、符合邏輯的短文，開頭已給出。要求：1.敘述要用第三人稱。2.詞數(shù)60~80個左右。3.要表達自己的看法或想法。

4.選用下列詞語：rush hour, cross, make sure, come over, traffic rules Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（7）

請你參考圖文提示，寫一篇60~80詞的短文。注意：1.語言規(guī)范，語意完整，內(nèi)容豐富。2.表達符合圖意，書寫規(guī)范。3.給出自己的觀點。4.文章的開頭已給出。

參考詞：pollute, turn off the tap(水龍頭)，dry, save(節(jié)約 vt.), water resources(水資源)From the pictures we know that ______________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________（8）

請根據(jù)下面四幅圖，寫一篇70個單詞左右的短文。文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不算入總詞匯數(shù)內(nèi)。

參考詞匯： on fire 著火firefighter n.消防員put out 滅火

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...”

__________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________（9）看圖寫話。

要求：1.根據(jù)圖畫所提供的語境，寫出意思連貫、語言流暢、語法準(zhǔn)確、符合邏輯的短文。2.至少使用兩種時態(tài)，70詞以上。不得使用真實姓名、地名、學(xué)校名。

3.標(biāo)題和第一句已給出，但不計入70詞之內(nèi)。

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________（10）

根據(jù)所給圖畫用英語寫一篇約80詞的短文。

(11)

假如你所在的學(xué)校要出一期英語壁報。你準(zhǔn)備就自己經(jīng)歷的一件事寫一篇英語短文向壁報投稿。下面五幅圖記錄了你上個星期六與老師和同學(xué)到南河邊參加植樹活動的全過程。請你就以下五幅圖寫一篇英文短文。

注意：1.短文內(nèi)容要包括所有圖畫中的主要內(nèi)容 2.詞數(shù)：70～90

3.生詞提示： 桶bucket鋤頭hoe

________________________________________________________________ 13 ____________________________________________________________________（12）

請按照下面6幅圖和表格的提示，寫一篇題為“Changes in Our Hometown”的英語短文。（詞數(shù)：50~80，不包括已經(jīng)給出的單詞）

內(nèi)容要點：

過去 現(xiàn)在 舊房 高樓 河水污濁 河水清澈 步行、騎自行車 乘公交車、小汽車 Changes in Our Hometown

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past 14 ________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 【練習(xí)答案】

(1)參考答案：

The Hua Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China.It lies in the east of Shaanxi.Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit there.It’s not far from here.It takes you about one hour to get there by bus.You can also go there by train.When you are at the top of the mountain, you’ll find clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you.In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful.It’s really a nice place to visit.(2)參考答案：

Zhonghua street Xi;an, China June21st, 2004 Dear Jim：

How are you? Many thanks for the shirt!I’m very happy to hear from you again.I love the shirt very much, Jim, and red is my favourite colour!You remembered!It’s just my size.Every time I wear it, I will think of you.I’m fine here in China.Last week I had a birthday party.Many of my classmates came and my mother made us a lot of good food.We really had a wonderful time together.How are you doing in England, Jim? I miss you very much.I always miss the days we were together last summer.I hope you can come to China someday.Please write back soon.Your friend, Li Lei

(3)參考答案：

Sunday June 23rd

It was a fine day today and the sun was bright.I visited Xi’an Zoo with my classmate, Zhang Hong.The animals there were so interesting that all the people loved them.When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys, I went/ran to stop him/her and said, “Animals are our friends and we must take good care of them.”

(4)參考答案： Dear friends，I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Bin.I’m fifteen years old.I live in Beijing.One of my favorite subjects is biology.I’m interested in drawing.In my free time, I often go camping, draw some pictures of plants, and enjoy the singing of birds in nature.I want to be a biologist when I grow up.I feel lucky to join you.I hope we can be good friends and do our best to make That’s all.Thank you for listening.(5)參考答案：

Xi’an is the capital of Shaanxi with a long history.There are many places of interest, such as the Dayan Pagoda, the Xiaoyan Pagoda, the Bell Tower and the Terra Cotta Warriors.Since it lies in the Northwest of China, the winter here is long and it sometimes snows.Autumn is the best season in Xi’an, for it’s neither too cold nor too hot.One of the most famous traditional foods is “Yangroupao”.(6)參考答案：

Last Monday, Tim got up at 7:40 in the morning.It was the rush hour.He rode his bike to school very fast.He was crossing the street when a car came at that moment.Tim’s bike hit the car and he fell to the ground heavily.The driver was very kind and stopped to make sure that Tim was all right.Then a policeman came over.He told Tim to ride more slowly next time and it was dangerous.Tim thanked him and went to school.All of the young men should obey the traffic rules.17(7)參考答案：

From the pictures we know that much water has been polluted.Some factories are pouring waste water into rivers and lakes.The water becomes dirty and lots of fish have died.Many people often waste water.For example, they often forget to turn off the taps.If we don’t have enough water, land will be dry and crops will die.We can’t live without water.So we should try our best and encourage everyone to protect water resources.We must save water and stop polluting it.If we do that, Things will be much better.(8)參考答案：

Jack was woken up by the shouting “Fire!Help!Fire!Help!...” What had happened? He looked out of the window.Wow!He found that his neighbour’s house was on fire.Jack jumped off the bed and rushed to the telephone.He made a call to the police.Then, he ran out and helped his neighbour(to)fight against the fire.Soon the fire fighters came and in a short time the fire was put out.And the house owner and fire fighters thanked Jack and his neighbours a lot.(9)參考答案：

TAKING CARE OF TREES

One day Lin Tao and Mei Mei were playing in the garden.They found

that a young tree there was dying.They thought they must save the young tree.Then they put a rope around the tree and watered it.Some days later the tree came back to life again.Their mother saw this and praised them, “You are good children!”

(10)參考答案：

Yesterday afternoon Li Ping and I were going to school.On the way we saw an old woman crossing the street.Suddenly a car passed by very fast.The old woman was frightened and fell down to the ground.The apples in her basket were all out on the street.Immediately, we ran to the old woman, helped her get up and picked up all the apples.Li Ping helped her carry the basket and I helped her cross the street.The old woman thanked us very much.（11）參考答案： 內(nèi)容要點：

（1）上星期五老師告訴我們“明天去南河邊植樹”。（2）上星期六（第二天）早上六點半我就起床了。（3）我?guī)е叭W(xué)校，同學(xué)們帶著桶、鋤頭在校門口等待。（4）到南河邊，我們開始植樹。（也可描寫動場面。）（5）看著新種下的樹，我們都很高興。

Last Friday, our teacher told us that we would go to plant trees by the 19 South River the next day.On Saturday morning I got up at six thirty and went to school with a bucket.My classmates were waiting at the school gate with buckets and hoes.When we got to the South River, we began to plant trees on the river bank.(On the river bank, some students were digging holes, the others were planting or watering the young trees.)

After we finished our work, we were happy to see the young trees we planted on the river bank.（12）參考答案：

Over the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown.In the past, the houses in our hometown were very poor, but now many people have moved into tall buildings(there are many tall buildings here and there).The water in the rivers was very dirty, but now the rivers are clean and people can swim in them.People used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.走到茶幾邊，我認出了外婆的杯子，但是哪一個才是媽媽的杯子呢？突然之間，我覺得，自己真得太不了解父母了。當(dāng)媽媽為我倒水時，我卻不知她的杯子是什么樣的；當(dāng)媽媽為我夾我喜歡吃的菜時，我卻沒想過他們是愛吃淡一點，還是濃一點。。。2009年到了，意味著過去一年的逝去和新的一年的到來。媽媽為我操勞了一整年，仔細想想，現(xiàn)在的我也應(yīng)該為她做一點點事了。

于是，我決定先將茶沏好再找杯子。學(xué)著爸爸平時沏茶的順序，我先從茶柜 里找出了一罐普洱茶，再往燒水的壺里加入水放在電茶爐上燒，接著，我將爸爸已經(jīng)掰好的普洱茶片拿了兩片放在蓋碗里，等了一會，水開了，我小心地將水注入蓋碗，將蓋蓋上，把蓋碗里第一遍的茶水濾掉，然后再次注水，蓋上蓋，燜一會才兩手并用地將茶水倒入茶海里，因為第一次自己動手，蓋碗的燙手是我所沒想到的，手忙腳亂的我弄得茶幾上一片片的水漬。重復(fù)幾次這樣的程序后，我先幫外婆倒了一杯茶，因為外婆特別喜歡喝茶。當(dāng)外婆從廚房走出來的時候我已經(jīng)把茶都給倒好了，這時，外婆才告訴我哪一個是媽媽的杯子。

媽媽起床了，我雙手捧著水杯送到她的面前，就像捧著一顆溫?zé)岬男?。媽媽一愣，隨即臉上露出了微笑，她一手接過水杯，伸出另一只手將我拉進了她的懷里，那手輕輕柔柔地在我的頭上撫摸著，接著媽媽在我的臉上深深地親了一口。雖然媽媽經(jīng)常親我，但這一刻的親吻卻最讓我感到幸福。我抬起頭對媽媽說：“媽媽快喝吧，要不茶要涼了?！眿寢屟銎鹆瞬弊?，張著嘴巴，“咕咚，咕咚”地喝了幾大口。看她那甜蜜蜜的樣子，仿佛微苦的普洱茶也是蜜一般甜。

我記得在我小學(xué)的時侯，就讀過一首曹值的七步詩：“煮豆持作梗，轆轂以為汁；秸在釜下燃，豆在釜中泣；本是同根生，相煎何太急”。那時只知其大意，只知道曹操的長子曹丕繼位，他在一些奸臣的影響下，擔(dān)心他的同胞弟弟曹值篡位，便逼迫曹值在七步之內(nèi)作出一首詩來，否則處死；結(jié)果他的弟弟就在七步之內(nèi)寫出了流傳至今的“七步詩”。當(dāng)時這首詩對曹丕也是一種極大的潮諷。

幾個世紀過去了，社會和生活都發(fā)生了極大的變化；應(yīng)該說人的素質(zhì)也應(yīng)有所提高；一個人生活在世上，是離不開親情、友情和愛情的；有人說：打架親兄弟，上陣父子兵，但是，兄弟姐妹的團結(jié)并不是真對與他人打架斗毆，在生活上，21 事業(yè)上應(yīng)是不可或缺的照應(yīng)；俗話說“一根筷子容易斷，十雙筷子斷就難”；可見，團結(jié)是一種力量，只有團結(jié)才有攻不破的堡壘。

然而，就在生活優(yōu)越的今天，兄弟姐妹往往因為一點小事，一點利益而你爭我斗，反目成仇，甚而相殘；我和我的朋友在聊天時有時聊及這個問題，有人這樣評論：一個人生活在世上，如果不顧親情，對兄弟姐妹甚至父母于不顧，那他在這個社會上和任何人都不要談“情”字，特別是友情。

樹大分枝，各自成立家庭后，在生活中一些小事是難免發(fā)生的，但要看你怎樣去對待，把金錢和利益看的太重，那麼，你就會值親情于不顧；看淡名利，注重親情才是做人的底線；爭則不足，讓則有余，在利益和金錢面前，我們何不禮讓一點，做一個有道德、有素質(zhì)、有親情的人呢？

家和萬事興，團結(jié)是一種力量，讓我們團結(jié)友愛，和睦共處，為個人的事業(yè)、為家庭的生活、為國家的興盛而看重親情、友情、愛情；把金錢和利益看淡一些吧！人過留名，雁去留聲，希望在幾十年之后，當(dāng)你離開這個世界的時侯，留給后人的不是唾泣，而是美愉。

今天是她父親的生日,她要回家和父親一起過生日.我很理解她的想法,更理解她的思念之情.是的,她父親已經(jīng)六十多歲了,為了子女的成長與幸福,含辛茹苦,真的的不容易.話說過來,人一輩子真的很不容易.人年老時非常希望能夠和子女在一起,即使不能在一起,哪怕一個電話甚至一個短信,父母也已經(jīng)很知足了.我由于長期在外,很想念爸爸媽媽.想起過去,心里真的很辛酸,父母親為了我們的成長真的付出了很多,然而他們現(xiàn)在又生活得怎么樣呢?想起過去的一幕一幕,我心里很難受!我很希望做做子女的我們,踏踏實實地做好每一件事情,不讓父母擔(dān)憂,這是最基本的我們應(yīng)當(dāng)做的事情.22 談到這里我不由自主地想起一部電影《我的兄弟姐妹》,這是一部關(guān)于親情的影片,暫且不管故事的真實性,主要考究它的內(nèi)涵.主人公齊思甜和哥哥齊憶苦、妹妹奇妙、弟弟齊天生活在一個不富裕卻充滿溫馨和愛的家。然而在一個暴風(fēng)雪的夜晚，他們的母親舊病復(fù)發(fā)，咳得吐血了。父親背她去醫(yī)院，卻出了意外，他們倆都亡故了。次日，另一家人搬進了四個孩子的家。性格剛強的哥哥無法忍受這個新家庭的種種，無奈地帶著弟弟妹妹離開了家。他們開始四處奔波，尋找落腳之處。當(dāng)實在沒有能力照顧弟弟妹妹的時候，他把妹妹齊思甜送給一對正要出國的夫婦；把弟弟送給他的舅媽一家；又把小妹妹帶到一對老人家中請他們收養(yǎng)。他自己和弟弟妹妹們便各奔東西……20年后，齊憶苦在北京當(dāng)上了出租車司機；齊思甜出國受到良好的教育，成了音樂家；齊天成為東北大學(xué)學(xué)生；齊妙卻當(dāng)上了舞廳小姐。在北京的音樂會上，思甜驀然回首的瞬間，音樂霎時凝固了。他們四人擁抱在一起，淚水順著另一支悠揚的樂曲落下，聽眾的掌聲久久不息……終于，他們有了一次永久的重逢。

齊思甜的父親是一個音樂教師，他們一家人都生活在音樂的天堂里，這也為后來思甜成為音樂家打好了基礎(chǔ)。父親說：“人生路上有許多困難的事情，只要有音樂在，你的靈魂便不再寂寞?！边@位父親是偉大的，他樂觀開朗，以身作則。盡管他和藹可親，但同時又是一個嚴厲的父親。有一回，齊憶苦偷鄰居家的雞蛋，是為了滿足妹妹小小的心愿。而他卻因此挨了父親的鞭子，還罰他站在雪地里很久。在父親被分配到別的地方邊勞動邊教音樂時，他對這“莫須有的罪名”并沒有悲憤倒下，而是瞞著家人當(dāng)搬運工挨家挨戶送木材，還干各種各樣的粗活。他也沒有一絲怨言，還對孩子說：“我沒事。”懂事的孩子們也拿起了工具，幫父親干活。他哼著小調(diào)，陽光幸福地灑在他們臉上。

可見,這位父親是多么偉大，他以他的行動告訴了孩子們音樂的重要性及如何面對生活的苦難。

那么，又是一種什么樣的力量，使后來的四個孩子重逢，使他們歡聚，使他們接受心靈的洗禮？

毋庸置疑，是親情。

寒冷的冬天，四個孩子依偎在車站。他們在為下一餐飯而擔(dān)心著?！案纾茵I。”、“哥，我冷。”、“哥，我想回家……”弟妹們的話刺痛了哥哥。他說：“只要我還有一口氣，就不讓你們受委屈?！笔聦嵣纤策@么做了。如果不是親情，他又何必活得如此累呢？他又怎能忘記，那一晚，父母臨走時對他的囑咐：“你是哥哥，要照顧好弟弟妹妹?！?/p>

生活改變了許多人和事，也改變了他們。但是，親情是始終不渝的。最小的妹妹齊妙長大后竟成了舞廳小姐！她離開原來的家后，養(yǎng)父母去世得早，加上無人看管，就開始墮落下去了。她在20年后與齊思甜相遇時，大言不慚地對她說她滿足于當(dāng)前腐朽昏暗的生活方式。但是自那以后，她回憶起以前的一點一滴，又不免傷感和懊悔。她發(fā)現(xiàn)自己對不起所有愛她的人，她的良心受到了譴責(zé)。于是，親情的歸來使她的精神方面的巨人復(fù)活了！她的靈魂才得以解放。

親情給人以新生，親情又猶如一支鎮(zhèn)心劑。

親情是心中的太陽，照耀著我們；親情是溫柔的春風(fēng)，撫摸著我們；親情如綿綿的春雨，滋潤著我們。

親情是雪，晶瑩剔透；親情也可以是雷，驚天撼地。

親情可以是燈，溫暖柔和；親情也可以是微弱的燭光，不亮卻很輝煌。不管怎么說，親情一定是無價的寶藏。

沒有了親情，世界變得荒蕪、凄涼；沒有了親情，生命則無法繁衍后代；沒有了親情，生活就單調(diào)枯燥；沒有了親情，人間也成了地獄。

親情是溝通兩代之間思想交流的橋梁，是一條連結(jié)兩顆心的紐帶?！靶值芙忝迷翘焐系粝碌乃?，誰也不認得誰。但落在地下后，結(jié)成一體，結(jié)成冰，化成水，就永遠也分不開了?！?/p>

“臨行密密封，意恐遲遲歸”，是親情?！拔以谶@頭，母親在那頭”，也是親情。

無價的親情呵，愿我們在你的鼓舞下，駛向美好燦爛的明天。關(guān)于親情的影片..我看這部影片時,心情很沉重,流淚了.我想,不論一個人的出身是多么卑微,只要我們能夠記住親情的鼓舞與期待,只要我們我們?nèi)タ炭嗯?只要我們在心理上能夠戰(zhàn)勝自己,那么我們就是生活的強者!

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There are two sides of opinions about it.Some people say A is their favorite.They hold their view for the reason that②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由

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In recent days, we have to face the problem-----A.The problem is becoming more and more serious./ The present situation is worrying.First,------------(說明Ａ的現(xiàn)狀)．Second,---------------(舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀)

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation./ To our great joy, many measures have been taken to solve the problems.For one thing,---------------(解決方法一).For another-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally, I believe that------(我的解決方法/ 看法)./ Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because-----(帶來的好處)/ if--------------.說明利弊題型

nowadays many middle schools prefer to---------.Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows.First,----------.Besides / What’s more,-------.Meanwhile,-----.On the other hand,/ However,-----------------------.The most important thing is that------------.As a result,-----------------------

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高考英語滿分作文范文:A Letter of Thanks(一封感謝信)

時間： 2008-04-08 17:11:41作者：來源：

Dear Mr.John,How are things going with you in Beijing?

I am writing to show my thanks to you.You tutored me in my spoken English

before you went to Beijing.With your help I made such rapid progress that I won

the first place in the Spoken English Competition of the city.My achievement is owed to your help.Thank you very much.I have heard that you and your wife will pay a visit to my school.I am very glad at the news.In that case we can see each other again.I am looking forward to your coming.I am sending you a telescope as a small gift.I hope you will like it.All the best.Yours,Liu Jie