第一篇：高考英語第一輪復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)點(diǎn) 書面表達(dá)

高考英語第一輪復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)點(diǎn) 書面表達(dá)

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高考第一輪如何復(fù)習(xí)一直都是考生們關(guān)注的話題，整理了 高考英語第一輪復(fù)習(xí)知識(shí)點(diǎn)之書面表達(dá)，希望為考生們提供服務(wù)。下面為您解讀高考第一輪復(fù)習(xí)策略。

在歷年的高考評卷過程中，閱卷老師是如何評判一份卷子的，閱卷人最注重的是什么，是每個(gè)高考考生迫切想知道的，筆者將結(jié)合多年的高考閱卷經(jīng)驗(yàn)，告訴大家如何在高考中勝人一籌，在書面表達(dá)上拿到高檔次的分?jǐn)?shù)。書面表達(dá)在評閱時(shí)遵循語言第一位(語言高級(jí))，內(nèi)容第二位(要點(diǎn)齊全)，結(jié)構(gòu)第三位(文章分段)的原則，也就是說閱卷老師最注重的是語言，換句話說是亮點(diǎn)，根據(jù)語言使用情況，亮點(diǎn)的多少而定出檔次，所以考生在書面表達(dá)中語言上的亮點(diǎn)是得高分的關(guān)鍵。亮點(diǎn)一共有四種：

一、高級(jí)詞匯和語法;

二、修辭手法;

三、有效的連詞;

四、名人名言或諺語。首先簡單介紹亮點(diǎn)當(dāng)中至關(guān)重要的高級(jí)語法，以及修辭手法當(dāng)中的一些技巧的使用。

肯定不如雙否好

修辭的使用在書面表達(dá)中算作很大的亮點(diǎn)，在高中階段很少有學(xué)生會(huì)注重修辭的應(yīng)用。雙重否定也是種修辭，而且對于考生來說，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中設(shè)計(jì)雙重否定的句子。例如想表達(dá)“郵遞員天天準(zhǔn)時(shí)到”，如果寫成The postman comes on time every day，就不如變成雙重否定，The postman never fails to come on time，就變成了亮點(diǎn)句，起到強(qiáng)調(diào)作用。幾乎每個(gè)人對生活的態(tài)度都不同程度受到地震的影響，寫成雙重否定There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not affected by the earthquake.應(yīng)用類似的修辭會(huì)在高考中為考生加分。

陳述不如倒裝妙

在書面表達(dá)中閱卷老師喜歡看到的高級(jí)語法共有五種：倒裝，強(qiáng)調(diào)，從句，獨(dú)立主格和分詞結(jié)構(gòu)，以及虛擬語氣。倒裝是一種最簡單易行的使句子呈現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)的方法。在高中階段只需掌握倒裝的四種形式，足以應(yīng)對書面表達(dá)，如何應(yīng)用倒裝，有很多方法和技巧。

主動(dòng)不如被動(dòng)巧

在近些年的閱卷中，發(fā)現(xiàn)考生在寫作中很少使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，也許是受中文思維的影響，幾乎整篇文章都使用主動(dòng)語態(tài)。其實(shí)在英文中，被動(dòng)語態(tài)的使用是很重要的。因?yàn)橛⒄Z是一門客觀的語言，而漢語是主觀的語言，具體體現(xiàn)在英語中經(jīng)常用被動(dòng)語態(tài)，漢語經(jīng)常用主動(dòng)語態(tài);英語中經(jīng)常用物稱或形式主語開頭，強(qiáng)調(diào)一件事發(fā)生在什么人身上，而漢語經(jīng)常用人稱開頭強(qiáng)調(diào)一個(gè)人發(fā)生了什么事。所以使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)符合英語的習(xí)慣，如果能將整個(gè)文章中兩個(gè)句子變成被動(dòng)語態(tài)，就會(huì)呈現(xiàn)句型的變化，使整個(gè)文章句型豐富。例如在2006年的高考中，很多學(xué)生在表達(dá)我們每次可以借五本書最多借十天時(shí)，都是用：We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.這句話如果寫成：At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days，分?jǐn)?shù)會(huì)更高。

第二篇：高考英語書面表達(dá)技巧

高考英語書面表達(dá)技巧

通常，英語學(xué)習(xí)，聽、說、讀、寫、譯五項(xiàng)基本技能缺一不可?！镀胀ǜ咧杏⒄Z課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》，對九級(jí)語言技能目標(biāo)英語寫作有6點(diǎn)明確的要求。同時(shí)列出了寫作技能與試題設(shè)計(jì)的要求和寫作評價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，其測試方式有五種。學(xué)生作文主要從內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、語言使用效果、結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性、格式和語域及與目標(biāo)讀者的交流五個(gè)方面進(jìn)行評價(jià)。英語書面表達(dá)是英語語言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和語法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的綜合運(yùn)用，還要具有較強(qiáng)的語言表達(dá)能力和邏輯思維能力，要求內(nèi)容清楚、意思連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)完整、邏輯性強(qiáng)、主題突出、用詞準(zhǔn)確、文體恰當(dāng)。一般，要文理通暢，非單純地翻譯。要答卷滿意，平時(shí)確實(shí)需要長期的信心的培養(yǎng)，耐心的啟發(fā)，由易到難，從簡單到復(fù)雜，循序漸進(jìn)地堅(jiān)持內(nèi)容、語言、語法、表達(dá)、結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯和卷面等進(jìn)行規(guī)范地訓(xùn)練，而且訓(xùn)練有素?，F(xiàn)在，不少學(xué)生對英語書面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。這并非完全意義上的寫作，只要求用書面語言基本表達(dá)出要表達(dá)的東西。一般原則是：不多寫、不少寫和不錯(cuò)寫?，F(xiàn)結(jié)合存在的問題和多年的教學(xué)積累，談?wù)劯呖加⒄Z書面表達(dá)應(yīng)注重的五方面。用順

審準(zhǔn)題義，明確情景，看清要求。不少考生寫作時(shí)，還有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解題的習(xí)慣，特別是不注意生詞或短語提示，或干脆完全根據(jù)所給材料先后順序逐一翻譯。前后不連貫，層次不清晰，邏輯性不強(qiáng)。因此應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料，找到所要表達(dá)的主旨文意及線索，在線索引導(dǎo)下通暢地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，增加可讀性。為此，應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示過度及連接的詞匯，使之有較強(qiáng)的感情色彩。用對

對每一個(gè)句子都盡可能避免語法錯(cuò)誤。通常錯(cuò)處出在：

2.1動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（劃線部分改為Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（劃線部分改為coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）

（3）時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。

1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（劃線部分改為comes）

2）Class start at 8:00 am.（劃線部分改為starts）

書面表達(dá)可能出現(xiàn)多種時(shí)態(tài)，但特定時(shí)間背景下時(shí)態(tài)相同。如人事物現(xiàn)狀的介紹，應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；過去的介紹，應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)為主；日記應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)為主；通知應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。千萬不要隨心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面積失分。

（4）語態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。由于漢語被動(dòng)色彩不濃，因此英語表達(dá)易受影響，該用而不用，不該用而用be動(dòng)詞。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遺漏處加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（劃線處去掉was）

還有喜歡在動(dòng)詞前面加be動(dòng)詞。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（劃線處去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（劃線處去掉are）

2.2名詞單復(fù)數(shù)混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（劃線處改為800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（劃線處改為ten-minute或ten minutes''）

2.3冠詞錯(cuò)誤

冠詞屬小詞，重視不夠，影響表達(dá)。

1）How do you spell the computer？（劃線處去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（劃線處去掉the）用準(zhǔn)

用準(zhǔn)確地道的語言，不能生澀難懂，不合英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。常見現(xiàn)象如下：

3.1單詞堆砌

寫句子，用語不準(zhǔn)，而根據(jù)漢語句序進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的英語單詞堆砌而成。如：

1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯(cuò)）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（錯(cuò)）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫作時(shí)碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋，用模糊定義，語言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達(dá)不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（錯(cuò)）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英語作文，受漢語影響，雖語法正確，卻不符英語表達(dá)習(xí)慣。如：

1）Our friends are all over the world.（錯(cuò)）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（錯(cuò)）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

語言轉(zhuǎn)換功在平時(shí)。簡明扼要，表達(dá)清楚，是關(guān)鍵所在。冰凍三尺，非一日之寒。用全

初學(xué)寫作要簡單完整清楚地表達(dá)，就要把握兩個(gè)關(guān)系：

4.1完整不一定就句式復(fù)雜

一味追求新、奇、特、難，容易出錯(cuò)。如：

1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（錯(cuò)）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（錯(cuò)）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2簡單也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，結(jié)構(gòu)就不完整，句意就不明確。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯(cuò)）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（錯(cuò)）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的，要點(diǎn)齊全，是直接因素。必須注意要點(diǎn)來源：

標(biāo)題。有些需要標(biāo)題，卻粗心漏掉不寫，造成失分。書寫標(biāo)題應(yīng)力求簡潔明了，有較強(qiáng)概括力和針對性，并注意單詞字母大小寫。

格式。不少應(yīng)用文需要正確的格式，如通知的開頭，常常要交待通知的對象；日記開頭，常常交待時(shí)間和天氣；信件的左上角必須注明寫信人的地址和時(shí)間，下一行要頂格寫上稱呼，正文結(jié)束后，要有結(jié)束語，并簽名。

正文。這是全文要點(diǎn)集中之處，應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料含義，理清大意，將所有要點(diǎn)逐一落實(shí)，并檢查有無遺漏。

常識(shí)性。原材料不一定反應(yīng)，但仍然重要，既屬內(nèi)容，又承上啟下，增強(qiáng)文章可讀性。如寫通知結(jié)尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；寫參觀歡迎詞開頭可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，結(jié)尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介紹結(jié)束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；寫信結(jié)尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必須注意原則：不多不少。該有的不少，不該有的不寫。整潔

文章寫好后，應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，謄寫應(yīng)盡可能書寫工整，布局美觀。卷面整潔清爽就會(huì)增加得高分機(jī)會(huì)。

總之，了解、掌握、運(yùn)用好以上五個(gè)方面，就容易得高分。

第三篇：2011福建高考英語書面表達(dá)

2010福建高考英語書面表達(dá)

寫演講辭

去澳大利亞做演講——主題是“水資源短缺”

材料提供三點(diǎn)措施：1.回收利用 2.海水淡化 3.自己的觀點(diǎn)

水資源問題：

Water is important to all living things.Without water, there can be no life on earth.Humans also need water to drink, to cook and to clean.But now people waste a lot of water.Some people even pour rubbish into rivers and lakes.So clean water is becoming less and less.It’s important for us to protect and save water.But what can we do to save water? First, we should call on people to protect water.Second, as a student, I think we should remember to turn the taps off when we leave.Third, We should not only collect but also reuse the waste water.After we wash our faces, we had better use that water to water flowers or do something else.If everyone can do something useful, there will be more and more clean water.作為一名中學(xué)生，你是如何參與環(huán)保這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)？

As we know, there are many kinds of pollution around us, such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.They are bad for us in many ways.So it’s important for us to protect our environment.As a middle school student, I often do a lot of things for the Greener China.I spread message about protecting the environment, such as the 3Rs.Also I teach the people around me how to deal with rubbish.In my daily life, I often turn the light off when I leave.What’s more, I use both sides of paper and so on.In a word, if everyone can do something useful for our homes, our home will become greener and greener.目前地球面臨水資源危機(jī)，請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文。1.人們以為淡水是取之不盡的（提示：雨水、河水、井水??）2.實(shí)際上淡水是非常緊缺的（提示：人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染??）3.人類應(yīng)該怎么辦？ Global Shortage of Fresh Water One possible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up.They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water.Actually ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.Therefore ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First ,we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water.Second ,scientists must wor

k even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)水資源的英語作文5篇

有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)的英語作文：水資源是有限的人們總以為淡水是取之不盡的，實(shí)際上淡水資源是很有限的。請談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water.But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population.What’s more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water.Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used.Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings.So it’s high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.With fresh water, the world will be prosperous.Water

Water is very important for living things.Without water there can be no life on earth.All animals and plants need water.Man also needs water.Water is found atmosteverywhere.Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.As we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a container.When it is a gas, you cannot see or feel it.Although about 70 percent of the earth's surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water.So we should make good use of water on earth.水

水對生物很重要，沒有水，地球上就沒有生命。所有的動(dòng)植物都需要水。人

類也需要水。

水幾乎無處不在。即使在世界上最干燥的地方，空氣中也有水。

水，正如你所了解的，有固態(tài)、液態(tài)和氣態(tài)。當(dāng)它是固態(tài)時(shí)，它可以像磚一樣硬；當(dāng)它是液態(tài)時(shí)，你可以將它從容器中倒出；當(dāng)它是氣態(tài)時(shí)，你看不見或感覺不到它。

雖然地球表面70％是水覆蓋著，世界上仍有許多地方缺水。所以我們要好好利用地球上的水。

The Importance of Water

As we all know, plants and animals need water.So do the people's life and production, t,ife couldn't go on without water.With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is needed.Therefore, water is becoming scarce in many places.What's more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste watcr from factories.Fish can't live in them any longer.At the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people's health.In order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent water from being polluted,we must do something to stop all sorts of pollution.水的重要性

正如我們所了解的，動(dòng)植物需要水，人類的生產(chǎn)生活也需要水。沒有水便沒有生命。

隨著工農(nóng)業(yè)的迅速發(fā)展，水的需要量越來越大。因此，許多地方缺水。而且，許多河流湖泊被工廠排放的污水所污染，魚不能生存。同時(shí)，廢水給人們的健康帶來極大的危害。

為了保持河流湖泊清潔，防止水污染，我們必須采取措施，阻止各種污染。

環(huán)境日英語作文：關(guān)于河水污染的感想

根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇關(guān)于河水污染的感想。

1.上星期天，你隨父親去釣魚，看見河水污染，幾乎釣不到魚。

2.河水被污染的原因。

3.倘若全國各地的河水都被污染，后果如何？

4.環(huán)境污染對人類危害極大，我國政府正在努力采取措施與污染作斗爭。

5.希望在不久的將來，河水會(huì)變干凈。

詞數(shù) 100~130.Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river.We found the water so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in it.A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted.In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.If the river water all over the country is polluted like this，no living things will exist in the water.As we all know，environmental pollution does great harm to living things and human beings.Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution.We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.環(huán)境日英語作文：Water Pollution-水污染

Spring is tht best season of the year.The weather gets warmer and warmer.My clas i'amates and I took a one-day sightseeing around our city.The scene was pretty.But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a lot.With the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into rivers.It has caused serious pollution.The river is becoming so dirty that no living things can live in it.The river is giving off a terrible smell.We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation.Our government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of water.Water is tho source of our lives.It is very important to protect water.春天是一年中最好的季節(jié)，天氣變得越來越暖和。我和我的同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了一次環(huán)城一日游，所到之處景色宜人。但當(dāng)我看到沿著城區(qū)流過的河流時(shí)，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。

隨著現(xiàn)代工農(nóng)業(yè)的發(fā)展，越來越多的污水排進(jìn)河里，河水被嚴(yán)重污染。河水變得如此的骯臟以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水發(fā)出難聞的氣味。

我們急切呼吁采取措施改變這種狀況。政府應(yīng)當(dāng)建立各種設(shè)備，例如污水處理廠，并且鼓勵(lì)科學(xué)家們想出更多更好的辦法以減少水污染。

水是生命之源，保護(hù)水資源十分重要。

My classmates and I had an outing this spring.We had a good time.But meanwhile I noticed that water pollution in our city was becoming more and more serious.On our way, we could see women washing clothes in the river.Litter was floating on the river.Waste water produced by a chemical factory was being discharged into the river.We did not see any fish in the river.The fiver was not so clear as before.Water quality was very bad.I am worried

about it because water is important to all living things.Man can not live without water.I hope people pay more attention to this problem, especially the government.Try to control the pollution of water as early as possible.At last I would like to say, “To protect water is to protect life.”

今年春天，我和我的同學(xué)去春游，我們玩得都很高興。但同時(shí)，我也注意到我們城市的水污染變得越來越嚴(yán)重了。

沿途我們看到許多婦女在河邊洗衣，河面上漂著垃圾，一家化工廠正將廢水排入河中。河中看不到一條魚，河水也不像從前那樣清澈了，水質(zhì)很差。對此我深感擔(dān)憂，因?yàn)樗畬τ谒猩锒挤浅Ｖ匾?。沒有水人類將無法生存。我希望人們能多關(guān)注這個(gè)問題，特別是政府部門，爭取及早解決水污染問題。最后，我想說“保護(hù)水就是保護(hù)生命?！?/p>

第四篇：英語高考書面表達(dá)結(jié)尾模版

英語高考書面表達(dá)結(jié)尾模版

結(jié)尾萬能公式

1． 結(jié)尾萬能公式一：如此結(jié)論

說完了，畢竟要?dú)w納一番，相信各位都有這樣的經(jīng)歷，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)長篇大論，到最后終于冒出個(gè)“總而言之”之類的話，我們馬上停止開小差，等待領(lǐng)導(dǎo)說結(jié)束語。也就是說，開頭很好，也必然要有一個(gè)精彩的結(jié)尾，讓讀者眼前一亮，這樣，你就可以拿高分了！比如下面的例子：

Obviously（此為過渡短語）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.如果讀者很難“顯而見之”，但說無妨，就當(dāng)讀者的眼光太淺罷了！

更多過渡短語：

to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型：

Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…

2． 結(jié)尾萬能公式二：如此建議

如果說“如此結(jié)論”是結(jié)尾最沒用的廢話，那么“如此建議”應(yīng)該是最有價(jià)值的廢話了，因?yàn)檫@里雖然也是廢話，但是卻用了一個(gè)很經(jīng)典的虛擬語氣的句型。拽！

Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.這里的虛擬語氣用得很經(jīng)典，因?yàn)榭脊俦緛斫?jīng)常考這個(gè)句型，而如果我們自己寫出來，你說考官會(huì)怎么想呢？

更多句型：

Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.英語實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：

十五、（2009.遼寧卷）假定你住在一個(gè)涉外小區(qū)。社區(qū)委員會(huì)請你幫忙用英文以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。

要點(diǎn)：

時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00至11：00 內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果

報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前 提示：帶帽子、手套 注意：

1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已為你寫好。2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。3.參考詞匯：社區(qū) community 第二節(jié)：

一、評分原則

1.本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。

2.評分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。

3.詞數(shù)少于80和多余120的，從總分中減去2分。

4.評分時(shí)應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性及上下文的連貫性。

5.拼寫與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)方面。評分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。

6.如書寫較差以至影響交際，將其分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。

二、內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)

1.時(shí)間：下周六上午8：00 至 11：00

2.內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果

3.報(bào)名：辦公室，下周四下午5：00前

4.提示：帶帽子、手套

5.歡迎踴躍參加

【參考范文】 Dear neighbors, We are very happy announce that our community is going to organize an activity for all the community members.Next Saturday, we going to pick apples in a village 20 kilometers away from our town, and all are welcome.We will meet at 8:00 am at the gate, where a blue bus will be waiting.Our outdoor activity will last 3 hours, and we’ll be back at about 11 o’clock.If you are interested, please sign up at the office before 5:00 pm next Thursday so that we will make necessary arrangements.We suggest that you bring with you a hat and a pair of gloves.We are looking forward to your joining us.Community Office 【解析】 本題命制穩(wěn)健，是中學(xué)教學(xué)中最為常見的提綱式作文。給出要點(diǎn)學(xué)生有話可說。

第一步：審題

1、看要求：本題要求以短文的形式寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動(dòng)的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，這樣格式應(yīng)該已經(jīng)給出，審題的重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)和要求上：要點(diǎn)有五項(xiàng)，注意有三項(xiàng)，但注意的第一項(xiàng)是重要的一項(xiàng)。

2、理思路：調(diào)整要點(diǎn)，講清本次活動(dòng)的安排。可以先將活動(dòng)的時(shí)間，活動(dòng)的內(nèi)容，要求、注意事項(xiàng)表達(dá)出來；然后再寫5和3要點(diǎn)，這樣邏輯清晰表達(dá)合理。第二步：寫作

可以先在草紙上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、單詞、短語去表達(dá)，要嘗試最簡單的復(fù)雜句，如用定語從句、賓語從句等，但句式不易過于復(fù)雜，要用一些恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句與句之間、段與段之間過渡自然。第三步：檢查

作文寫完后，最后要進(jìn)行檢查。重點(diǎn)放在要點(diǎn)寫全了嗎？時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、動(dòng)詞的數(shù)、單詞拼寫對了嗎？標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)、大小寫用對了嗎？檢查完后再抄寫在試卷上，注意卷面的整潔。

【專家簡評】

主題與考生學(xué)習(xí)生活或?qū)W?；顒?dòng)無關(guān)，但由于是以涉外小區(qū)為背景所開展的社區(qū)活動(dòng)，主題空間更為開闊，因此該主題大體符合高考英語寫作話題的一般思路，可以歸類為外事活動(dòng)。通常，命題以要點(diǎn)形式給出和以漢語題干形式給出，對考生而言，前者的難度要大于后者。因?yàn)橐c(diǎn)內(nèi)容的呈現(xiàn)一般看不出英語的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，而如果是完整或半完整句式的漢語題干卻能讓考生比較容易辨別出英語句式結(jié)構(gòu)。這本身就是一種便利。因此，對于各命題單位而言，這幾種形式都應(yīng)該依據(jù)整卷難度的分布情況加以合理配備使用，以免過難或過易。

十六、（2009.浙江卷）

5月1日，高二（3）班的學(xué)生志愿者Li Yue 和 Zhang Hua 去陽光敬老院（Sunshine Nursing Home）開展志愿者活動(dòng)（送水果.打掃.聊天等）。假如你是校英語報(bào)的記者，請按下列要點(diǎn)用英語寫一則100-120個(gè)詞的新聞報(bào)道。

1.時(shí)間.地點(diǎn).任務(wù).活動(dòng)；

2.老人們的反應(yīng)；

3.簡短評論。

注意：報(bào)道的標(biāo)題和記者姓名已給出（不記詞數(shù)）。

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly s5【參考范文】

Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

On May Day, Li Yue and Zhang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work.Upon their arrival, Li Yue and Zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits.Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor.Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.When it was time for the volunteers to leave, the elderly people thanked them for their kindness.They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy.What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.By Chen Jie, School Newspaper

【解析】

本文仍屬于提綱式半開放性體裁的作文，選材貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際，有利于考生的正常發(fā)揮，考生只要按照所給要點(diǎn)的思路來寫即可。

【專家簡評】

09浙江卷的話題和07湖北卷相似，又是志愿者，又是敬老，了無新意。但這并不就說明該卷乏善可陳。若從以考生為本的角度看，該卷第一次出現(xiàn)在題中直接給出漢語拼音人名，而不是漢語人名，這也算是一個(gè)首創(chuàng)。目的只有一個(gè)：避免考生出錯(cuò)。其實(shí)，遮掩在漢語拼音中的人名也讓人看不出這個(gè)人名究竟是漢語中的哪幾個(gè)字，因?yàn)閷τ谕鈬硕?，字母人名只是一個(gè)符號(hào)，他們是無法想象漢字人名所攜帶著的鮮活感和親切感的。

浙江卷前幾年基本上是選擇疑問句式的標(biāo)題作文。例如：“Film or book, which do you prefer?”（06），請你圍繞“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only, or in both English and Chinese?”這個(gè)問題…（07），“Working Individually or Working in a Team”（08）。09年不在題中給出標(biāo)題，卻在文中直接給出標(biāo)題，不知何意？不知這個(gè)對于檢測考生的實(shí)際能力有何幫助？另外，雖然說的是新聞報(bào)道，但實(shí)際上是一個(gè)典型的敘事性質(zhì)的短文寫作。08年僅北京考了一篇敘事性質(zhì)的寫作。09年，除了北京繼續(xù)考了敘事外，浙江也出現(xiàn)了敘事性質(zhì)的文體要求。對于浙江考生而言，其寫作難度應(yīng)該遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)低于前五年的寫作要求了，應(yīng)該是福。

十七、（2009.重慶卷）

國外某網(wǎng)站舉辦新一輪網(wǎng)上討論活動(dòng)，正面向全球中學(xué)生征集話題。假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，經(jīng)常訪問該網(wǎng)站?，F(xiàn)請你用英文給該網(wǎng)站發(fā)送一封電子郵件，向其推薦話題。

內(nèi)容包括： 自我簡介 寫信目錄

話題：我們應(yīng)該感恩（thankful）推薦的理由 預(yù)?；顒?dòng)成功 注意： 1.詞數(shù)100左右 2.郵件格式已為你給出 3.郵件中不能出現(xiàn)本人真實(shí)信息 4.請?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答

【參考范文】

Dear____, I am Li Hua, a student from Xin Hua Middle School.I often visit your website.I am very glad to know that you will make a new round of courses and are collecting topics facing the middle school students.As a student, I really want to recommend a topic to you wholeheartedly.It is that we should be thankful.Living in this world, we have many people that we should be thankful to.We should be thankful to our parents because it was they that brought us into this world;we should be thankful to our teachers because they taught us everything we know and we should be thankful to our friends because when we meet difficulties, they always give us a hand.So I can say we live in a grateful world.I hope that the activity will be a great success.【解析】

這是一篇命題巧妙地書寫體半開發(fā)性提綱式作文。話題樹有教育意義，符合中學(xué)實(shí)際引導(dǎo)學(xué)生思考問題。在寫作中應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1.緊緊圍繞話題“我們應(yīng)該感恩”。

2.但自我簡介、寫信目錄、推薦的理由、預(yù)?；顒?dòng)成功都是圍繞話題展開。3.注意分清段落層次，上下文的過渡。

【專家簡評】

從寫作文體要求看，重慶卷04年要求寫記敘文，05年則改成議論文，近四年基本上是陳說性質(zhì)的文體。就話題而言，近四年都與外事活動(dòng)或外語學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)。不過，09年的話題是涉外的話題征集，有些特點(diǎn)。六年來，三次短文寫作，三次郵件（其中兩次電子郵件）。李華同學(xué)出現(xiàn)3次（06，07，09）?？偟恼f來，重慶卷一直比較謹(jǐn)慎，命題基本上沒有超出全國卷I的范式。

十八、（2009.上海卷）

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.某海外學(xué)校舉辦英語夏令營，開設(shè)了如下課程：園藝（gardening），烹飪（cooking）,防身術(shù)（self-defence），護(hù)理（nursing）。假如你是王躍華（不可以用自己的真實(shí)姓名），寫一封申請信，報(bào)名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)。信的內(nèi)容必須包括：

你感興趣的課程

你期望從這門課程中學(xué)到什么 為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容 【參考范文】

Dear leader，I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses，such as gardening、cooking、self-defence、nursing and so on。I want to register to attend a course bout gardening，because I have liked flowers、grasses etc since I was a little child。I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature。For one thing，I hope to gain a bit more knowledge of gardening so that it can help me to major in the gardening after attending college。Besides I wish to get much more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter the university。What's more，I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure the plants much more。For another，after graduation from college I will devote my life to cultivate the flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state and make many more foreigners come to visit our country。

Yours，Wang yue hua 【解析】

本文是書信格式，報(bào)名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)，屬于半開放式作文。學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意如下幾點(diǎn)：

1.先談自己感興趣的學(xué)科，從四科中選取自己最有把握和有話可說學(xué)科，這是寫作的關(guān)鍵，過渡要自然；

2.再寫自己希望學(xué)到什么，要把握實(shí)用性。

3.然后談出想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容的原因，結(jié)合現(xiàn)實(shí)，理由合情合理。4.在寫作過程中可以嘗試句型的復(fù)雜化，適度增加情節(jié)

【專家簡評】 上海卷的一貫特點(diǎn)有以下幾條：題干短，話題一般與學(xué)習(xí)或?qū)W校生活相關(guān)，寫作形式主要是議論性質(zhì)，間或插以混合性質(zhì)，給考生的思維空間大。還有一點(diǎn)，從不給出范文。09年的Guided Writing屬于混合性質(zhì)：陳說+議論。話題涉外，且與教育教學(xué)課程相關(guān)，是很好的話題。但對于上?？忌裕牧系奶峁┦欠襁^于豐富了些？！參看一下惜墨如金的歷年上海卷，你就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)上海卷習(xí)慣于提供簡練的題干信息，以利于考生的發(fā)揮。這次算是一個(gè)異數(shù)了。

【總評】

2009年高考英語全國卷地方卷共19套，短文寫作共20篇（上海卷和廣東卷各2篇，寧·海卷共享全國卷I的短文寫作題）。綜觀2009年高考英語短文寫作試題，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)最重要的一個(gè)特點(diǎn)就是關(guān)于地方或傳統(tǒng)特色話題，也就是母語文化輸出類話題增多（5篇），以前只是在某個(gè)年份、某個(gè)卷種中有這種話題的點(diǎn)綴，現(xiàn)在看來已經(jīng)蔚成風(fēng)氣。這說明各卷種的命題者們已經(jīng)認(rèn)識(shí)到了母語文化輸出的重要性、緊迫性和現(xiàn)實(shí)性，這是最令人感到欣慰的。

強(qiáng)化訓(xùn)練

11、（1分）

假設(shè)你是你校京劇愛好者協(xié)會(huì)的成員，在一次同英國中學(xué)生代表團(tuán)的聯(lián)歡活動(dòng)中，你協(xié)會(huì)將出一個(gè)京劇節(jié)目。在演出前，由你向外國朋友介紹京劇的由來，按以下提示介紹：

1．京劇在中國很受歡迎，歷史悠久，有200年歷史，在清朝乾隆年間，乾隆對地方劇

有興趣。

2．1790年，為慶祝乾隆80歲生日，他召集各地方劇團(tuán)來京為他演出，4個(gè)來自安徽

的劇團(tuán)在慶典后留在北京。

3．1828年，一個(gè)湖北劇團(tuán)來京，在京常與安徽劇團(tuán)一起演出，兩種唱派合在一起，逐

漸形成了一種新劇種，被稱為京劇。

4．下面演出開始，希望朋友們喜歡。參考詞匯：

地方劇：local opera

乾隆年間：the reign of Qianlong

表演：perform

劇團(tuán)：troupe

12、（1分）

你昨天去游泳患了感冒，今天早上頭痛，醫(yī)生讓你休息兩天。你用英語給老師寫一個(gè)請假條。

13、（1分）

假設(shè)你是學(xué)生會(huì)的負(fù)責(zé)人，你們要組織一次英語講座，請用英語寫一個(gè)通知，把講座的安排：時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，主講人，內(nèi)容，以及注意事項(xiàng)通知大家。

14、（1分）

李華父親的朋友陳偉是在美國居住多年的華裔。因陳偉的兒子陳小明明年要來大陸李華學(xué)校學(xué)漢語，陳小明來信詢問學(xué)校情況，以下是小華回信的內(nèi)容。

1．聽說你明年來我校學(xué)習(xí)，我們很高興。

2．我校是一所具有80年歷史的老學(xué)校。

3．學(xué)校很美，有許多花草樹木，兩座教學(xué)大樓，一座宿舍樓。

4．學(xué)校設(shè)備優(yōu)良，有體育館、計(jì)算機(jī)室和大圖書館等。學(xué)生除正式課程外，還有許多

選修課，如：油畫、打字、烹調(diào)等。

5．最重要的是，學(xué)校有許多優(yōu)秀教師，課程有趣，老師既有知識(shí)又和藹，非常愿意幫

助我們，我愛我們的學(xué)校，我真希望你也能喜歡我們的學(xué)校。參考詞匯：

選修課：elective

體育館：gym

宿舍樓：dormitory building

15、（1分）

寫信向友人介紹作家魯迅。

魏明的美國朋友杰克開始學(xué)習(xí)中國文學(xué)，來信詢問魯迅其人及作品。魏明回信介紹魯迅：

1．魯迅是著名的中國作家。他不僅是作家，思想家，而且還是中國現(xiàn)代文學(xué)的開創(chuàng)者。

2．他的小說被譯成多種文字，并被制成電影，如《阿Q正傳》、《祝福》這兩部影片

深刻地揭露了舊社會(huì)。毛主席對他有高度評價(jià)。他的一些作品還被選入了中學(xué)和大

學(xué)課本。

3．認(rèn)為讀魯迅作品對他很有益處。參考詞匯：

創(chuàng)始人：Founder

中國文學(xué)：Chinese Literature

阿Q正傳：The True Story of AH Q

祝福：The New Year’s Sacrifice16、（1分）

提示：為引進(jìn)外資，進(jìn)一步加快你家鄉(xiāng)A城改革開放。你向一位外商介紹你家鄉(xiāng)A城。

1．A城是一新開發(fā)的經(jīng)濟(jì)特區(qū)。它是一座具有三十萬人口的臨海小城。

2．解放前是一個(gè)小漁村，以漁業(yè)為主，沒有工業(yè)，只有幾所小學(xué)。

3．改革開放以來，許多外商到這里投資，經(jīng)濟(jì)增長很快，建立了許多大工廠、一個(gè)大

港口。港口與國內(nèi)外許多城市連接。

4．教育有很大的發(fā)展，建立了該城第一所大學(xué)。已有三千人從該校畢業(yè)。我相信，A

城在不久的將來將更加現(xiàn)代化。參考詞匯：

投資：invest

經(jīng)濟(jì)開發(fā)區(qū)：an economic-zone

港口：port

17、（1分）

11月11日，你將在家里為你的妹妹15周歲開一個(gè)生日晚會(huì)，寫信給你的外國朋友Peter，邀請他來參加。晚會(huì)開始時(shí)間是晚上6點(diǎn)，將持續(xù)到很晚。告訴Peter每天晚上你都在家，請他給你打個(gè)電話告訴你他是否來參加生日晚會(huì)，并表達(dá)你盼望見到他的心情。

在信的開頭告訴Peter你已收到他10月25日的來信，但由于最近一直忙于期中考試未能及時(shí)回信。

假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在的住址是北京西城區(qū)云梯胡同1號(hào)樓4門2號(hào)。

18、（1分）

給筆友保羅(Paul)的一封信 提示：

1．過了一個(gè)很好的寒假，在寒假中與父親一起回老家河北農(nóng)村。

2．吃驚于家鄉(xiāng)的巨大變化。幾乎村里每家都有彩電，許多家蓋了新房。有的家還有了

摩托車和小汽車。

3．一位村民自豪地告訴我，他和一部分村民打算參加一個(gè)旅游團(tuán)到國外旅游。

4．我表示羨慕他們，我對父親說，將來大學(xué)畢業(yè)要回老家來，父親也表示說他一退休

就來。

5．你的名字小海。

19、（1分）

張紅從廣告上得知某公司需要一名秘書。寫信應(yīng)聘。以下是張紅的簡歷。

年齡20歲，即將從職業(yè)學(xué)校畢業(yè)。專業(yè)：經(jīng)濟(jì)管理（business management）。學(xué)英語8年，會(huì)計(jì)算機(jī)。在過去三年中一直是本校學(xué)生報(bào)編輯之一，學(xué)習(xí)成績在班上優(yōu)秀。主要是本人喜歡辦公室工作，相信能勝任秘書工作。如果能得到這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)將十分感謝。

請以張紅的名義向公司寫信寫聘。參考詞匯：

職業(yè)學(xué)校：vocational school

專業(yè)：major

20、（1分）

給朋友小林的一封信，談?wù)労偕睢?/p>

1．寒假很忙，因?yàn)榻衲昶咴乱獏⒓痈呖肌?/p>

2．每天埋頭讀書，復(fù)習(xí)每門必修課，做許多練習(xí)。

3．學(xué)習(xí)刻苦，每天學(xué)習(xí)10小時(shí)以上，累時(shí)看會(huì)兒電視，聽音樂，但總不去影劇院。不

得不回絕親戚朋友的邀請，只在除夕時(shí)打電話問候。

4．多希望沒有考試，但又不可能，要盡力取得好成績。考上渴望已久的清華大學(xué)。參考詞匯：

必修課：required subject

埋頭于某事：bury oneself in sth.參考答案：

11、（1分）

Now let me say something about Beijing Opera.Beijing Opera is very popular in China.It has a history of more than 200 years.During the reign of the Qianlong emperor in the Qing dynasty, Qianlong had a interest in the local opera.In 1790, to celebrate his eightieth birthday, he summoned opera troupes from different places to perform for him in Beijing.Four famous troupes from Anhui province remained in Beijing after the celebration.In 1828, A Hubei troupe came to Beijing and often performed together with the Anhui troupes.The two types of singing mixed together and gradually a new type came into being known as Beijing Opera.Now is the performance.I hope you will like it.12、（1分）

Dear Mr.Du，I’m sorry to tell you that I can’t go to school today.I’ve caught a cold because I went swimming yesterday.This morning I had a headache and had a fever.The doctor advised me to stay in bed for two days.Now I’m writing to you to ask for two days’ sick leave.Yours respectfully，Li Qing

13、（1分）

There will be an English lecture on high school education in the U.S.by Mr.Jackson.It will be given in the Lecture Hall on Saturday afternoon from 2：00 to 4：00, May 15th, 1992.Those who are interested in it are warmly welcome.Be sure not to be late.After the lecture, please write a diary about it in English.THE STUDENTS’ UNION

14、（1分）

Dear Xiao Ming，I was excited to hear that you will come to learn Chinese in our school.Now let me tell you something about our school.Our school campus is beautiful.It has many trees, flowers and a lot of grass.We have two very nice teaching buildings and a dormitory building.In addition, the school has excellent equipment, such as a new gym, a computer room and a large library.There are also a lot of electives to choose from, such as painting, typing and cooking.Above all, there are many excellent teachers in our school.Classes are interesting, the teachers are kind and knowledgeable and willing to help the students.I like our school.I hope you will like our school too.Yours Li Hua

15、（1分）

Dear Jack，I was very glad to receive your letter on the tenth of February.You ask me something about Lu Xun and his works since you began to study Chinese literature.Now let me tell you something about him.Lu Xun was a well-Known Chinese writer, he was not only a writer, a thinker, and translator, but also a founder of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been put into many languages and some of novels have been made into films, such as The True Story of AH Q and The New Year’s Sacrifice which expose sharply the old society.The late Chairman Mao spoke highly of him.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Since you are learning Chinese literature, I think reading Lu Xun’s novels will benefit a lot.Yours Wei Ming

16、（1分）

My hometown is an economic-open-zone.It is a town on the sea with a population of three hundred thousand.Before the liberation it used to be a fishing village.Most people lived on fishing.There was no industry.And there were only few primary schools here.Since the open-door policy, a lot of foreign businessmen invested here.A lot of factories have been built.Economics have developed rapidly and big port has also been built, which is connected with many ports of other ports both in and out of our country.A new university now has been founded.Three thousand students have already graduated from it.I am sure in the near future our hometown will become more modern.17、（1分）

Doorway 4, building 1

Yunti Hu Tong

Xicheng District

Beijing 100037

China

November 4th,1995 Dear peter，Thank you for your letter of October 25.I haven’t written sooner as I were busy preparing for my mid--term exams.We are having a party on 11th November at our house for my sister’s 15th birthday and we hope you can come.It only happens once a year!The party will start at 6 p.m.and will go on until late!

I’m at home in the evenings.Please give me a call.We’re looking forward to seeing you.loves，Zhao Ning

18、（1分）

Dear Paul，How are you!I think you have come back to school now.I have had a wonderful winter holiday.During the holiday, my father and I went to hometown, In the countryside in HeBei Province.I was astonished to find that great changes had taken place in the village in recent years.Almost every family in the village had colour TV set, many families had their houses newly built, or rebuilt, some of them had motorcycles or cars.One of the villagers proudly told me that he and some other villagers were going to join a tour and travel abroad.How I admire them!

I said to my father that I would go back to my hometown after I graduated from college.Father also expressed he would go back as soon as he retired.Both of us were disappointed when the holiday ended so soon, and we had to leave.What did you do in your holiday? Are you busy now?

Here are my best regards to you and your family

Yours Xiao Hai

19、（1分）

Dear Sir：

How do you do? Through the ad.I know you need a secretary.I would like to have this job.Now let me introduce myself to you.My name is Zhang Hong.I am twenty and will soon graduate from a vocational school.My major is business management.I have been learning English for 8 years and I have computer experience.I have been one of the editors for the student newspaper in our school for the past three years.My grades remain upper level in my class.The most important thing is that I like office work very much.I am sure I can do it well.I will appreciate it very much if you would give me the opportunity.Thank you for your consideration.I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely yours, Zhang Hong

20、（1分）Dear Xiao Lin，I have had a busy holiday these winter because I will take part in the entrance examination this September.I almost buried myself in the books every day.I had to go over every required subject and did a lot of exercises.I worked very hard, more than 10 hours a day.When I was tired I watched TV for a while and listened to music, but I never went to the cinema or theater.I had to refuse several invitations from my relatives and classmates.I only called them to greet them on the eve of the Spring Festival.How I wish there were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to were no examinations at all, but of course it is impossible.I will try my best to get better results and go to Qing Hua University, which I have been longing for.How is your vacation? Best wishes to you and your family!

Yours Wu Qi

第五篇：高考書面表達(dá)

書面表達(dá)范文

例文一：

據(jù)說，中國有一半人在吸煙。許多男孩和女孩都有吸煙的習(xí)慣，盡管他們還是中學(xué)生。

眾所周知，吸煙對人身體是有害的。越來越多的人們認(rèn)識(shí)到這個(gè)問題的嚴(yán)重性，但他們?nèi)匀粯反瞬黄！?/p>

吸煙能導(dǎo)致很多疾病。由于吸煙，一些人一直在咳嗽。肺癌是吸煙導(dǎo)致的最嚴(yán)重的疾病。同時(shí)，吸煙很浪費(fèi)金錢。除此而外，粗心的煙民還可能引起火災(zāi)。

為了保證人們的身體健康，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)改掉吸煙的壞習(xí)慣。請立即停止吸煙吧。

It is said that there are about half of people in China are smoking.Many young boys and girls have the habit of smoking, though they are middle school students.As we all know, smoking does great harm to human beings.More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.But they are never bored with it.Smoking causes many illnesses.A lot of people always cough because of smoking.The most serious illness caused by smoking is lung cancer.Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money.Besides, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.In order to keep healthy, we should get rid of the bad habit of smoking.Please stop smoking at once.例文二：

What is happiness in my mind?

Happiness means different things to different people.For example, some students, believe that if they have much money, they will be happy.They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money.Some students think that they should be in good health, and enjoy whatever they like.Many students wish to have much wealth from their parents.In this way they don’t have to work hard, and they can own everything.I don’t quite agree with the above points.I don’t think money means happiness.We can’t buy many of the things with money, such as health and knowledge, I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge.Although different people value happiness differently, my happiness comes from my study.例文三：

進(jìn)入2l世紀(jì)，環(huán)保是引起世界各國重視的大問題。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇80字左右的短文，談?wù)勀銓Νh(huán)境污染的看法。

1．污染現(xiàn)已成為全球問題?？諝狻⒑恿鳌⒑Ｑ?、土壤的污染對人類和動(dòng)物十分有害。

2．列舉2-3種產(chǎn)生污染的原輛以及由此造成的嚴(yán)重后果。

3．希望人們都能采取有效辦法，控制污染，凈化環(huán)境，保護(hù)生態(tài)平衡。（平衡：balance）In the world today, pollution has become a serious problem facing man and his planet.The air, seas, rivers and soil have been seriously polluted by all kinds of waste and poisonous matter.It does great harm not only to human beings but also to aninmls and plants.We can’t have fresh air.Fish died front polluted water.It is reported that strange diseases havc appeared in many places

because of pollution.I hope that all the people in the world will take necessary steps and effective

measures to solve this serious problem.We arc looking forward to the coming of the day when we

see pollution effectively controlled and air cleaned.It is indeed our urgent task to do everything

possible to protect our ecological environment and to keep nature in good balance.例文四（2012高考題）

春節(jié)是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。請以Spring Festival為題，寫一篇英語作文，介紹一下人們是

如何歡度春節(jié)的。

作文必須包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1.春節(jié)是一個(gè)家人團(tuán)聚的節(jié)日，人們從四面八方回到家。

2.除夕夜，家庭成員坐在桌邊，享用豐盛美味的食物。

3.在春節(jié)期間，孩子們會(huì)很開心。他們可以整天地玩耍，不用上學(xué)。而且，他們還能

得到許多壓歲錢。

4.春節(jié)也是人們休閑和走親訪友的日子。人們彼此祝?！靶履昕鞓贰?，并希望來年有好

運(yùn)。

The Spring Festival is a traditional Chinese holiday and is celebrated on the first day of the

lunar year.It is a time for family members to get together.People go back home from all parts of

the country.On New Year’s Eve, the family sit at the table with a lot of dishes and enjoy delicious foods.During the Spring Festival, school children will have a good time.They can play all day long

instead of going to school.And they can get money from their parents.The Spring Festival is also a time for people to relax and visit their relatives and friends.They wish each other “A Happy New Year” and hope they will have good luck in the coming year.To us Chinese, the Spring Festival is the most important festival throughout the year.例文五：（2011高考題）

在一個(gè)人的成長過程中，常會(huì)遇到煩惱。其中之一就是我們的父母親經(jīng)常翻看我們的書包和日記。假設(shè)你將參加校園英語演講比賽，請就這一現(xiàn)象寫一篇英語演講稿，陳述你的觀點(diǎn)。

演講稿的主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

有些同學(xué)覺得父母不尊重我們，沒有給我們足夠的空間。我們不必為此苦惱，因

為我們還不夠成熟，有時(shí)，無法作出自己的決定，我們需要父母親的幫助。同時(shí)，我們必須和父母親進(jìn)行交流和溝通。畢竟，我們要成長。我們要發(fā)展自己的個(gè)性。我們

需要有自己的觀點(diǎn)、自己的想法以及自己對事物的判斷。但總有一天，我們會(huì)相互理

解的。

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen,Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or

read our diaries.Some students feel parents don’t respect us and aren’t giving us enough space to

do what we like.In my opinion, we don’t have to be bothered about this.After all, there are times

when we are not old enough to make our own decisions and are in need of our parents’ help.Meanwhile, we can communicate with our parents, telling them we’re growing up and it’s good

for us to develop our own identity.Besides, we need to have our own opinions , thoughts and form

our own judgement about things.Sooner or later, I believe , we’ll understand each other.Thank you.例文六（2010高考題）

假如你是王紅，今年暑假即將畢業(yè)。請以第一人稱給某公司林先生寫一封80-100字的英文求職信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)可用不同方式表達(dá)。

求職信必須包括如下要點(diǎn)：

1.今年暑假，我將于東方職業(yè)學(xué)校畢業(yè)。

2.在校期間我的專業(yè)是計(jì)算機(jī)科學(xué)。我曾獲得計(jì)算機(jī)輔助設(shè)計(jì)（CAD）一等獎(jiǎng)。

3.去年，在業(yè)余時(shí)間，我在一家公司兼職，我學(xué)了很多東西。

4.我想在貴公司申請一份職位。我相信我能勝任今后的工作。

5.希望林先生能考慮我的申請。期待著公司能給我一次面試的機(jī)會(huì)。

A Letter of Application

Dear Mr.Lin,I’m Wang Hong.I’ll graduate from Dongfang Vocational school this summer.My major

is Computer Science and I like it.Once I entered for a CAD competition and I was awarded

the first prize.Last year, in spare time, I took a part-time job in a company, where I learned

quite a lot.Now, I’m writing to apply for a post in your company with the hope that I can do

something for you.With my experience and my knowledge, I’m sure I’ll be qualified for my

future job.I sincerely hope Mr.Lin will take my request into consideration, and I would

appreciate an early interview.Yours faithfully,Wang Hong

假如你是李華，請根據(jù)提示的要點(diǎn)寫一份60～80詞的請假條給張老師。

要點(diǎn)：

1、李華病了，感覺不舒服，頭痛，疲勞，不想吃東西。

2、從昨晚開始就這樣，看了醫(yī)生。

3、醫(yī)生仔細(xì)地給他作了檢查，說他患了重感冒，開了藥。要求他臥床休息兩、三天，多喝開水。

4、今天不能到校，請假兩天

Dear Miss Zhang,I’m sorry to tell you that I don’t feel well today.My head hurts and I feel tired.I don’t feel like eating anything.I have been like this ever since last night.I have seen the doctor.She looked me over carefully and told me that I have got a bad cold.She gave me some medicine and told me to stay in bed for two or three days and drink much water, so I’m afraid I can’t go to school today.I’d like to take two days off.Thank you.Yours,Li Hua 例文七：

假設(shè)你是李華，在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上看到英國高中生David登的一則啟事：希望結(jié)識(shí)一位中國朋友，以便學(xué)校中國的語言、文化。請你以李華的名義用英文給David發(fā)一封電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：

（1）你怎樣得知David的愿望；

（2）你愿意成為他的朋友；

（3）你打算如何幫助他；

（4）你盼望他的回復(fù)。

注意：（1）電子郵件的格式以為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；[來源:學(xué)&科&網(wǎng)][來源:Z。xx。k.Com]

（2）詞數(shù)：100左右。

Dear David,I’ve learned it from the Internet that you want to make a Chinese friend so as to learn the Chinese language and culture.I’m glad that you show such great interest in China and I world like to be your friend.I will try my best to write to you as often as possible to introduce you the Chinese culture.When you have an opportunity to come to China, I’ll teach you how to speak Chinese and show you around some famous historical places of interest.Anyway, I am going to help you as much as I can.How do you think?

I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua