第一篇：2016英語(yǔ)高考書面表達(dá)專題練習(xí)——祝賀信

書面表達(dá)專題練習(xí)——祝賀信

袁道鐵

一.文體概述: 祝賀信是指在日常生活中，得知同學(xué)或朋友競(jìng)賽獲獎(jiǎng)、考上大學(xué)、結(jié)婚、過(guò)新年或重大節(jié)日等，給對(duì)方祝賀的信件。書寫時(shí)應(yīng)做到真誠(chéng)、自然、親切動(dòng)人。祝賀信通常包括以下內(nèi)容：祝賀事由→所取得的成績(jī)→被祝賀人過(guò)去的努力→被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)→表達(dá)自己的愿望。二.具體寫作步驟：

1.Use the word “congratulations” early in your letter.2.Mention the reason why you congratulate someone, such as graduation, promotion, honor, baby.3.Tell how happy, pleased, proud or impressed you are and why.4.If necessary, tell how you learned about the good news.If you read it the newspaper, enclose the clipping or photocopy of it.5.Close your letter with wishes for the person or expressions of your confidence: wish the person continued success and happiness;express your confidence in a bright future;assure the person of your love, affection, admiration, warmth, interest, delight, pleasure or continued business support.6.Contents: cause；what and when；best wishes.三、常用語(yǔ)塊

1.接受我最誠(chéng)的摯恭喜/祝賀??

2.很高興聽(tīng)到?? 3.很高興得知你?? 4.我想表達(dá)我對(duì)??的祝賀 5.我為你??感到非常高興 6.??是相當(dāng)令人振奮的消息！7.我知道這肯定是因?yàn)?? 8.是你非常值得的獎(jiǎng)賞

9.祝你一切順利!

10.祝你心想事成!四.套用句式

1.我很高興你夢(mèng)想成真。

2.我寫這封信是為了表達(dá)我對(duì)你英語(yǔ)演講比賽獲得第一名的祝賀 3.祝賀你高考成功。

4.請(qǐng)接受我最誠(chéng)摯的祝賀和對(duì)未來(lái)最良好的祝愿。5.我希望你的未來(lái)是燦爛的。

6.我們都為你所取得的巨大成就感到驕傲。五.模版Dear ______ , ①I have learned with delight that you ______（祝賀事由）.I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.You must be ______.④And I feel very happy for you.⑤ ______（所取得的成績(jī)）is quite exciting news!②③

⑥I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝賀人過(guò)去的努力）.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）.⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨詢對(duì)方何時(shí)有空）.⑨I hope ______（表達(dá)自己的愿望）.⑩My best wishes for your further success.Yours sincerely, Li Ming 六.習(xí)作修改(做短文改錯(cuò)，背經(jīng)典范文)Dear Henry，I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduation.As your close friend, I just want you to know what lucky I am to be able to share your pride and howpleased I was at your admission.In my views, you work hard and besides that, youare a very intelligence person.This admission is areward where you richly deserve.I am sure youwill make a greater progress in your study and obtain a brightly future in your life.I wish you greater success in your school career and I am look forward to good news from you soon.Best wishes.Li Hua

Yours, 七．范文展示:假如你是李華，你的好友魏芳在中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)演講比賽中榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，給她寫一封祝賀信。內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)你的愉悅心情；2.向她表示祝賀； 3.請(qǐng)她介紹成功的經(jīng)驗(yàn)；

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：英語(yǔ)演講比賽 the English Speech Contest Dear Wei Fang, I hear that you have won first prize in the English Speech Contest of MiddleSchool Students, so I’mwriting to givemy sincere congratulations.You don’t know how excited I was when I heard the good news.As your best friend, I am proud of you!Your pronunciation and fluent English left me with deep impression.It came as no surprise to me that you won the contest.Could you share with me how you improve your spoken English? Your experience will be of great help to me in learning.I will be grateful if you can write me back and give me your advice.I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours, Li Hua

八.練習(xí)假定你是李華，得知你的外國(guó)筆友Peter獲得了“漢語(yǔ)橋”世界大學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)。你為他感到驕傲，給他寫一封祝賀信，要點(diǎn)如下： 1.天天練習(xí)講漢語(yǔ)，從不會(huì)到流利，終于成功。2.繼續(xù)努力，有機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)中國(guó)留學(xué)3.希望見(jiàn)面和交流。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3.開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

參考詞匯：“漢語(yǔ)橋”世界大學(xué)生中文演講比賽 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest

Dear Peter, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours，Li Hua

教師點(diǎn)評(píng)：

我的收獲：1.常用詞匯

2.常用句型

答案三 1.Accept my sincerest congratulations 2.How happy I am to hear...3.I have learned with delight that you?

I have learned with delight that you?4.I would like to express my congratulations on? 5.I feel very happy for you(r)?6.?is quite exciting news 7.I know this is surely owing to? 8.It is a reward that you richly deserve for your?9.Wish you all the best!10.May all your wishes come true!四.1.I feel very happy for your dream has come true.2.I am writing to express my congratulations on your winning the first place in the English speech contest.3.Congratulations on your success in the National College Entrance Examination.4.Please accept my warmest regards.5.I hope your future will be glorious.五1.congratulations后+on 2.graduation--graduate 3.what---how 4.was---am 5.Views---view 6.intelligence---intelligent7.Where--that/which或去掉 8.去掉greater前的a 9.brightly---bright10.Look--looking 八．Dear Peter，I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest.I know that you were not good at Chinese at first.However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day.As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”.Finally, you succeeded!In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student.So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition.If you go on studying Chinese harder, you will have the opportunity to study in China.At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other.Sincere congratulations to you again!

Yours，Li Hua

第二篇：2017高考英語(yǔ)祝賀信書面表達(dá)寫作

2017高考英語(yǔ)祝賀信Congratulatory Letter書面表達(dá)寫作

祝賀信

祝賀信是社交中的一種禮儀性信函。通常包括以下幾個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：說(shuō)明祝賀事由，表達(dá)熱烈、誠(chéng)摯的祝賀；圍繞祝賀事件表述賀喜內(nèi)容；表達(dá)美好祝福。寫作“三步走”：

說(shuō)明事由并表達(dá)自己衷心的祝賀->展開(kāi)評(píng)論事件、贊揚(yáng)收信人->再次表達(dá)良好祝愿

在寫作主要內(nèi)容的時(shí)候，可以重點(diǎn)贊揚(yáng)一下當(dāng)事人的優(yōu)秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他將來(lái)的美好發(fā)展前景等。Tips in English Here are some principles that congratulatory letters follow: 1.The purpose of writing the letter is to make your reader feel certain that he or she deserves the special message of recognition and praise.2.The note should be brief, dealing with the primary topic only.These messages are most effective when they conduct no business.3.The whole message should carry a tone of being positive and conversational(會(huì)談的，談話的).4.Be sure to send the letter within a few days of the event.Any delay in delivery of the message would make your effort worse than no effort at all.開(kāi)頭常用句式

It was exciting news for me to learn of …

Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratulations on … It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on … I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in … I am really happy to learn that you have been elected… 結(jié)尾常用句式

Wish you good luck!We wish to share your honor and joy.I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead.May all go wonderfully in your new post!May every happiness be yours!All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career!May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity.Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity!閃光詞匯及詞組：

delighted: adj.高興的，欣喜的 achievement: n.成就，功績(jī) essential: 本質(zhì)的，基本的，重要的play a...role: 起......的作用 enhance: v.提高，增強(qiáng)

comprehensive: adj.全面的 embrace: v.擁抱

pave the way for: 為...鋪平道路

brilliant: adj.燦爛的

書面表達(dá)祝賀信寫作模版祝賀信 模板1：Dear_____________，Congratulations on your _______.I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement.I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success.This new position, on the other hand, adds a new dimension to your life and is bound to

________.What’s more, I also believe that

.May all goes beautifully in your new post!

Yours sincerely，Li Ming 模板2：Dear_____________，Good news travels fast!It was delightful for me to hear that ______________.Please accept my sincere congratulations to your ___________.I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I know more than anyone else how much effort you have put in.Now you prove to me a matured and well-rounded________in every respect.Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________.May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams!

Yours sincerely，Li Ming 模版3Dear ______ , ①I have learned with delight that you ______（祝賀事由）.②I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______.③You must be ______.④And I feel very happy for you.⑤ ______（所取得的成績(jī)）is quite exciting news!⑥I know this is surely owing to ______（被祝賀人過(guò)去的努力）.⑦It is a reward you richly deserve for your ______（被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）.⑧Kindly let me know when you ______（咨詢對(duì)方何時(shí)有空）.⑨I hope ______（表達(dá)自己的愿望）.⑩My best wishes for your further success.Yours sincerely,Englishtec Li Ming

寫作練習(xí)

書面表達(dá) 假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，得知你的美國(guó)筆友Peter被Harvard(哈佛大學(xué))錄取，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：表示祝賀且備受鼓舞；介紹自己目前的學(xué)習(xí)情況；請(qǐng)教學(xué)習(xí)方法。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)；

3.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。書面表達(dá)參考范文：

Dear Peter，I have received your e-mail.I am very excited and inspired by the good news that you have been admitted into Harvard.First I’d like to offer my congratulations to you on your great success and I also hope to enter a famous university just like you.Now I want to tell you something about myself.As you know, I’m busy preparing for the College Entrance Examination.Day after day I work very hard and have to stay up late doing piles of papers.However, I’m always feeling stressed out because my efforts don’t seem to pay off, which makes me frustrated and exhausted.Will you be kind enough to give me some advice? I would appreciate it if you could write back to me as soon as possible.Yours，Li Hua

寫作練習(xí)請(qǐng)按照英文提示寫作 Directions: Your friend Jason is elected as the Chairman of the Students' Union of your university.Write a letter to congratulate him, state the reason for his success, and express your best wishes and encouragement.You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter.Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address.范文： Dear Jason, I am much delighted to learn that you have been elected the Chairman of our University Students' Union.This is a special and happy moment for you and I am very proud of your achievement.The Students' Union plays an essential role in our campus life.Managing and leveraging such an organization not only poses a great challenge to you, but will also fundamentally enhance your ability comprehensively.I believe this position will be a new beginning, and a chance for you to embrace a fuller life and pave the way for a brilliant future career.Please accept my most sincere congratulations!Best wishes, Li Ming 親愛(ài)的詹生：

聽(tīng)說(shuō)你被選為學(xué)生會(huì)主席，我感到非常高興。對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)，這是一個(gè)特殊的時(shí)刻、一個(gè)高興的時(shí)刻，我為你的成就而感到驕傲。

學(xué)生會(huì)在我們的校園生活中起到了重要的作用，要管理和權(quán)衡這個(gè)組織對(duì)于你提出了一個(gè)很大的挑戰(zhàn)，同時(shí)也將綜合地提高你的各方面能力。我相信這是一個(gè)新的開(kāi)始，這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)將使你擁抱一個(gè)充實(shí)的生活、并為你將來(lái)的燦爛未來(lái)打下基礎(chǔ)。

請(qǐng)接受我最誠(chéng)摯的祝福！

衷心的祝愿，李明 真題背誦： Dear Henry，I am writing to offer my sincerest congratulations on your admission into the Biology Department of Peking University as a graduate.As your close friend, I just want you to know how lucky I am to be able to share your pride and how pleased I am at your admission.In my view, you work hard and besides that, you are a very intelligent person.This admission is a reward which you richly deserve.I am sure you will make

greater progress in your study and obtain a bright future in your life.I wish you greater success in your school career and I am looking forward to good news from you soon.Best wishes.Englishtec Yours, Li Hua 作業(yè)

假定你是李華，得知你的外國(guó)筆友Peter獲得了“漢語(yǔ)橋”世界大學(xué)生中文演講比賽一等獎(jiǎng)。你為他感到驕傲，并給他寫一封祝賀信，因?yàn)樗焯炀毩?xí)講漢語(yǔ)，從不會(huì)到流利，終于成功。繼續(xù)努力，有機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)中國(guó)留學(xué)。希望見(jiàn)面和交流。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右。2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：“漢語(yǔ)橋”世界大學(xué)生中文演講比賽 “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest Dear Peter，I would like to express my congratulations to you on your receiving the first prize of “Chinese Bridge” Chinese speech contest.I know that you were not good at Chinese at first.However, you practiced speaking Chinese every day.As the saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits”.Finally, you succeeded!In my mind, this match is very difficult for a foreign student.So I’m so surprised that you become champion of this competition.If you go on studying Chinese harder，you will have the opportunity to study in China.At last, I hope to see you and communicate with each other.Sincere congratulations to you again!Yours, Li Hua

第三篇：書面表達(dá)專題練習(xí)

書面表達(dá)專題練習(xí)

話題作文

（一）老師讓同學(xué)們討論網(wǎng)上購(gòu)物(Internet shopping)的利（advantages）與弊（disadvantages），根據(jù)下列信息，請(qǐng)你代表你們組做個(gè)發(fā)言。

利：方便，24小時(shí)營(yíng)業(yè)，不用排隊(duì)（queue with）；

弊：看不見(jiàn)物品，不能享受和朋友一起購(gòu)物的樂(lè)趣??

要求：

1.詞數(shù)100詞左右

2.包含提示內(nèi)容，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

話題作文

（二）“保護(hù)環(huán)境，人人有責(zé)”，請(qǐng)以How to Be a Greener Person 為題，寫一篇有關(guān)環(huán)保的短文，并適當(dāng)發(fā)表你的看法，詞數(shù)90詞左右。

提示：(protect the environment, turn off the lights, plastic bags, prevent the factory pouring waste water into rivers.)

應(yīng)用文

（一）在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中，Lucy 遇到了一些困難，比如：?jiǎn)卧~記不住，語(yǔ)法也常常犯錯(cuò)誤，上課聽(tīng)不懂老師講的。她很焦急，現(xiàn)在想寫封信向她的筆友Linda求助。詞數(shù)60-80。

Dear Linda，How are you? These days I feel English is a little difficult for me.Best wishes!

Yours，Lucy

應(yīng)用文

（二）假如你是李林，今年暑假你將參加赴加拿大的“綠色之旅”夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備一篇開(kāi)營(yíng)式上的發(fā)言稿，做一個(gè)自我介紹。詞數(shù)60-80詞。

要點(diǎn)如下：

1.今年15歲。住在山東聊城；

2.喜歡的科目是音樂(lè)，對(duì)繪畫感興趣；

3.業(yè)余時(shí)間去野營(yíng)、繪畫、聽(tīng)鳥兒唱歌；

4.今后想從事音樂(lè)家的工作；

5.希望盡自己的努力讓我們的地球更美。

表格作文

（一）你班Stephen同學(xué)本學(xué)期與以前相比，變化很大，根據(jù)下表提示，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)60-80詞。

表格作文

（二）請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列表格的提示, 寫一篇題為Changes in Our Hometown的英語(yǔ)短文。詞數(shù)100詞左右。

第四篇：高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)技巧

高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)技巧

通常，英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)，聽(tīng)、說(shuō)、讀、寫、譯五項(xiàng)基本技能缺一不可?！镀胀ǜ咧杏⒄Z(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》，對(duì)九級(jí)語(yǔ)言技能目標(biāo)英語(yǔ)寫作有6點(diǎn)明確的要求。同時(shí)列出了寫作技能與試題設(shè)計(jì)的要求和寫作評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，其測(cè)試方式有五種。學(xué)生作文主要從內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言使用效果、結(jié)構(gòu)和連貫性、格式和語(yǔ)域及與目標(biāo)讀者的交流五個(gè)方面進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)。英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)是英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)和語(yǔ)法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)的綜合運(yùn)用，還要具有較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力和邏輯思維能力，要求內(nèi)容清楚、意思連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)完整、邏輯性強(qiáng)、主題突出、用詞準(zhǔn)確、文體恰當(dāng)。一般，要文理通暢，非單純地翻譯。要答卷滿意，平時(shí)確實(shí)需要長(zhǎng)期的信心的培養(yǎng)，耐心的啟發(fā)，由易到難，從簡(jiǎn)單到復(fù)雜，循序漸進(jìn)地堅(jiān)持內(nèi)容、語(yǔ)言、語(yǔ)法、表達(dá)、結(jié)構(gòu)、邏輯和卷面等進(jìn)行規(guī)范地訓(xùn)練，而且訓(xùn)練有素?，F(xiàn)在，不少學(xué)生對(duì)英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)不予或不夠重視。這并非完全意義上的寫作，只要求用書面語(yǔ)言基本表達(dá)出要表達(dá)的東西。一般原則是：不多寫、不少寫和不錯(cuò)寫。現(xiàn)結(jié)合存在的問(wèn)題和多年的教學(xué)積累，談?wù)劯呖加⒄Z(yǔ)書面表達(dá)應(yīng)注重的五方面。用順

審準(zhǔn)題義，明確情景，看清要求。不少考生寫作時(shí)，還有不看要求或不看完看全要求就解題的習(xí)慣，特別是不注意生詞或短語(yǔ)提示，或干脆完全根據(jù)所給材料先后順序逐一翻譯。前后不連貫，層次不清晰，邏輯性不強(qiáng)。因此應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料，找到所要表達(dá)的主旨文意及線索，在線索引導(dǎo)下通暢地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，增加可讀性。為此，應(yīng)注意使用and, so, then, at the same time, on the one hand, on the other hand, first, second,at last, what''s more, I''m afraid, I think等表示過(guò)度及連接的詞匯，使之有較強(qiáng)的感情色彩。用對(duì)

對(duì)每一個(gè)句子都盡可能避免語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。通常錯(cuò)處出在：

2.1動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤

（1）多用。

1）There were five hundred students couldn’t go to school because of the earthquake.（劃線部分改為Five hundred）

2）A hero comes from Beichuan will give us a talk tomorrow afternoon.（劃線部分改為coming或去掉comes）

（2）缺失。

1）He wouldn’t ∧ able to work out the math problem.（遺漏處加be）

2）It isn’t said that they ∧ often careless in class.（遺漏處加are）

（3）時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。

1）Hurry up!Here is coming the bus.（劃線部分改為comes）

2）Class start at 8:00 am.（劃線部分改為starts）

書面表達(dá)可能出現(xiàn)多種時(shí)態(tài)，但特定時(shí)間背景下時(shí)態(tài)相同。如人事物現(xiàn)狀的介紹，應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；過(guò)去的介紹，應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；日記應(yīng)以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；通知應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。千萬(wàn)不要隨心所欲，不假思索地使用，造成大面積失分。

（4）語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。由于漢語(yǔ)被動(dòng)色彩不濃，因此英語(yǔ)表達(dá)易受影響，該用而不用，不該用而用be動(dòng)詞。如：

1）He remembered his wallet had ∧ lost in the bus.（遺漏處加been）

2）The matter was happened two years ago.（劃線處去掉was）

還有喜歡在動(dòng)詞前面加be動(dòng)詞。如：

3）I am think that I’ll learn how to use a computer.（劃線處去掉am）

4）They are decide that they will study harder.（劃線處去掉are）

2.2名詞單復(fù)數(shù)混用

1）He wrote an 800-words article yesterday.（劃線處改為800-word）

2）It is a ten-minutes walk from here to there.（劃線處改為ten-minute或ten minutes''）

2.3冠詞錯(cuò)誤

冠詞屬小詞，重視不夠，影響表達(dá)。

1）How do you spell the computer？（劃線處去掉the）

2）We should treasure the time because the time is money.（劃線處去掉the）用準(zhǔn)

用準(zhǔn)確地道的語(yǔ)言，不能生澀難懂，不合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。常見(jiàn)現(xiàn)象如下：

3.1單詞堆砌

寫句子，用語(yǔ)不準(zhǔn)，而根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)句序進(jìn)行相應(yīng)的英語(yǔ)單詞堆砌而成。如：

1）Study hard, are because they know is the Hope project give their chance to go to school.（錯(cuò)）→They study hard because they know it is the Hope project that gives them a chance to go to school.（正）

2）Welcome you come back to our school to visit.（錯(cuò)）

→You’re welcome back to visit our school.（正）

另外，不重視掌握單詞，寫作時(shí)碰到生詞難句就委婉地去解釋，用模糊定義，語(yǔ)言生澀難懂，文意混亂，表達(dá)不清。如：

Mr.Zhao is good at teaching English;he has many good ways to use to teach us.（錯(cuò)）

→Mr.Zhao is good at teaching, and he has many methods of teaching us English.（正）

3.2使用Chinglish

英語(yǔ)作文，受漢語(yǔ)影響，雖語(yǔ)法正確，卻不符英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。如：

1）Our friends are all over the world.（錯(cuò)）→We have friends all over the world.（正）

2）My height is 180 centimeters and my body is healthy.（錯(cuò)）

→I am 180 centimeters tall and I’m healthy.（正）

語(yǔ)言轉(zhuǎn)換功在平時(shí)。簡(jiǎn)明扼要，表達(dá)清楚，是關(guān)鍵所在。冰凍三尺，非一日之寒。用全

初學(xué)寫作要簡(jiǎn)單完整清楚地表達(dá)，就要把握兩個(gè)關(guān)系：

4.1完整不一定就句式復(fù)雜

一味追求新、奇、特、難，容易出錯(cuò)。如：

1）Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old and that is a middle school student and that comes from the northwest of the Sichuan province.（錯(cuò)）→Li Lang, a brave boy who is only 6 years old , and he is a middle school student from the northwest part of the Sichuan province.（正）

2）It is not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（錯(cuò)）→Not only we students but also our parents and our teachers are kind to the children.（正）

4.2簡(jiǎn)單也不一定就用省略句

在不可省的地方省略，結(jié)構(gòu)就不完整，句意就不明確。如：

1）He studies very hard and kind.（錯(cuò)）→He studies very hard and he is very kind.（正）

2）He doesn''t know what and how to do.（錯(cuò)）→He doesn''t know what to do and how to do it.（正）

另外，考試是根據(jù)內(nèi)容和表達(dá)給分的，要點(diǎn)齊全，是直接因素。必須注意要點(diǎn)來(lái)源：

標(biāo)題。有些需要標(biāo)題，卻粗心漏掉不寫，造成失分。書寫標(biāo)題應(yīng)力求簡(jiǎn)潔明了，有較強(qiáng)概括力和針對(duì)性，并注意單詞字母大小寫。

格式。不少應(yīng)用文需要正確的格式，如通知的開(kāi)頭，常常要交待通知的對(duì)象；日記開(kāi)頭，常常交待時(shí)間和天氣；信件的左上角必須注明寫信人的地址和時(shí)間，下一行要頂格寫上稱呼，正文結(jié)束后，要有結(jié)束語(yǔ)，并簽名。

正文。這是全文要點(diǎn)集中之處，應(yīng)認(rèn)真思考材料含義，理清大意，將所有要點(diǎn)逐一落實(shí)，并檢查有無(wú)遺漏。

常識(shí)性。原材料不一定反應(yīng)，但仍然重要，既屬內(nèi)容，又承上啟下，增強(qiáng)文章可讀性。如寫通知結(jié)尾可用“Don’t forget the time and address.”，“I’m sure you’ll have a pleasant time/a lot of fun.”或“That’s all, thank you.”；寫參觀歡迎詞開(kāi)頭可用“You’re welcome to visit our city.”，“Now, let me tell you something about our school.”或“Let me introduce something about our school to you.”，結(jié)尾可用“Now, I’d like to introduce something about our school/LI ping to you.”，介紹結(jié)束也可用“That’s all, thank you.”；寫信結(jié)尾可用“please give my best regards/love /wishes to your parents.”或“Remember me to your parents!”，“I hope to hear from you soon.”或“Waiting for your early reply.”

必須注意原則：不多不少。該有的不少，不該有的不寫。整潔

文章寫好后，應(yīng)認(rèn)真修改，不忙于提前交卷，避免大小寫及標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤，謄寫應(yīng)盡可能書寫工整，布局美觀。卷面整潔清爽就會(huì)增加得高分機(jī)會(huì)。

總之，了解、掌握、運(yùn)用好以上五個(gè)方面，就容易得高分。

第五篇：2011福建高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)

2010福建高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)

寫演講辭

去澳大利亞做演講——主題是“水資源短缺”

材料提供三點(diǎn)措施：1.回收利用 2.海水淡化 3.自己的觀點(diǎn)

水資源問(wèn)題：

Water is important to all living things.Without water, there can be no life on earth.Humans also need water to drink, to cook and to clean.But now people waste a lot of water.Some people even pour rubbish into rivers and lakes.So clean water is becoming less and less.It’s important for us to protect and save water.But what can we do to save water? First, we should call on people to protect water.Second, as a student, I think we should remember to turn the taps off when we leave.Third, We should not only collect but also reuse the waste water.After we wash our faces, we had better use that water to water flowers or do something else.If everyone can do something useful, there will be more and more clean water.作為一名中學(xué)生，你是如何參與環(huán)保這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)？

As we know, there are many kinds of pollution around us, such as air pollution, water pollution and so on.They are bad for us in many ways.So it’s important for us to protect our environment.As a middle school student, I often do a lot of things for the Greener China.I spread message about protecting the environment, such as the 3Rs.Also I teach the people around me how to deal with rubbish.In my daily life, I often turn the light off when I leave.What’s more, I use both sides of paper and so on.In a word, if everyone can do something useful for our homes, our home will become greener and greener.目前地球面臨水資源危機(jī)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇100詞左右的短文。1.人們以為淡水是取之不盡的（提示：雨水、河水、井水??）2.實(shí)際上淡水是非常緊缺的（提示：人口增加，工業(yè)用水增加，污染??）3.人類應(yīng)該怎么辦？ Global Shortage of Fresh Water One possible version: Global Shortage of Fresh WaterMany people believe that the world’s supply of fresh water will never be used up.They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use.Such an opinion leads to a shocking waste of water.As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water.Furthermore ,with the rapid growth of the world’s population ,the rising demand for water by industry ,and the serious pollution of our surroundings ,the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water.Actually ,in some big cities ,fresh water cannot meet the daily needs.Therefore ,to find new ways to save water is an urgent task.First ,we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water.Second ,scientists must wor

k even harder to purify sea water and polluted water ,and try to find substitutes to reduce the use of fresh water.有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)水資源的英語(yǔ)作文5篇

有關(guān)環(huán)境保護(hù)的英語(yǔ)作文：水資源是有限的人們總以為淡水是取之不盡的，實(shí)際上淡水資源是很有限的。請(qǐng)談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

It is generally believed that there is a good supply of fresh water.But to our disappointment, the fact is just the opposite.As we can see, the world population is growing rapidly day by day.So enough fresh water is needed to feed such a big population.What’s more, with the development of industry, factories and vehicles produce poisonous gases or wastes, which consequently results in the pollution of water.Though fresh, a good amount of it can no longer be used.Only quite limited fresh water resource is available to human beings.So it’s high time for us human beings to take quick action to protect water resource.Stop pollution and save water, otherwise, we cannot survive on the earth.With fresh water, the world will be prosperous.Water

Water is very important for living things.Without water there can be no life on earth.All animals and plants need water.Man also needs water.Water is found atmosteverywhere.Even in the driest part of the world there is some water in the air.As we all have found out, water may be a solid, or a liquid or a gas.When it isa solid, it may be as hard as brick, When itis a liquid, you can pour it out of a container.When it is a gas, you cannot see or feel it.Although about 70 percent of the earth's surface is covered with water,there are many places in the world still running out of water.So we should make good use of water on earth.水

水對(duì)生物很重要，沒(méi)有水，地球上就沒(méi)有生命。所有的動(dòng)植物都需要水。人

類也需要水。

水幾乎無(wú)處不在。即使在世界上最干燥的地方，空氣中也有水。

水，正如你所了解的，有固態(tài)、液態(tài)和氣態(tài)。當(dāng)它是固態(tài)時(shí)，它可以像磚一樣硬；當(dāng)它是液態(tài)時(shí)，你可以將它從容器中倒出；當(dāng)它是氣態(tài)時(shí)，你看不見(jiàn)或感覺(jué)不到它。

雖然地球表面70％是水覆蓋著，世界上仍有許多地方缺水。所以我們要好好利用地球上的水。

The Importance of Water

As we all know, plants and animals need water.So do the people's life and production, t,ife couldn't go on without water.With the rapid development of agriculture and industry, more and more water is needed.Therefore, water is becoming scarce in many places.What's more, a lot of rivers and lakes are beginning polluted by the waste watcr from factories.Fish can't live in them any longer.At the same time, thc waste water does great harm to people's health.In order to make rivers and lakes clean and prevent water from being polluted,we must do something to stop all sorts of pollution.水的重要性

正如我們所了解的，動(dòng)植物需要水，人類的生產(chǎn)生活也需要水。沒(méi)有水便沒(méi)有生命。

隨著工農(nóng)業(yè)的迅速發(fā)展，水的需要量越來(lái)越大。因此，許多地方缺水。而且，許多河流湖泊被工廠排放的污水所污染，魚不能生存。同時(shí)，廢水給人們的健康帶來(lái)極大的危害。

為了保持河流湖泊清潔，防止水污染，我們必須采取措施，阻止各種污染。

環(huán)境日英語(yǔ)作文：關(guān)于河水污染的感想

根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇關(guān)于河水污染的感想。

1.上星期天，你隨父親去釣魚，看見(jiàn)河水污染，幾乎釣不到魚。

2.河水被污染的原因。

3.倘若全國(guó)各地的河水都被污染，后果如何？

4.環(huán)境污染對(duì)人類危害極大，我國(guó)政府正在努力采取措施與污染作斗爭(zhēng)。

5.希望在不久的將來(lái)，河水會(huì)變干凈。

詞數(shù) 100~130.Last Sunday my father and I went fishing along a river.We found the water so dirty that we could hardly catch fish in it.A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted.In this way most of the fish in the river were killed.If the river water all over the country is polluted like this，no living things will exist in the water.As we all know，environmental pollution does great harm to living things and human beings.Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is.Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution.We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.環(huán)境日英語(yǔ)作文：Water Pollution-水污染

Spring is tht best season of the year.The weather gets warmer and warmer.My clas i'amates and I took a one-day sightseeing around our city.The scene was pretty.But when we saw the rivers along our city, I felt very sorry, and thoughit a lot.With the development of modern agriculture and industry, more and more waste water is being poured into rivers.It has caused serious pollution.The river is becoming so dirty that no living things can live in it.The river is giving off a terrible smell.We make an urgent appeal that measures should be taken to cope with the situation.Our government should start building various facilities such as sewage treatment!plant and encourage scientists to work out more and better ways to reduce the pollution of water.Water is tho source of our lives.It is very important to protect water.春天是一年中最好的季節(jié)，天氣變得越來(lái)越暖和。我和我的同學(xué)們進(jìn)行了一次環(huán)城一日游，所到之處景色宜人。但當(dāng)我看到沿著城區(qū)流過(guò)的河流時(shí)，我感到很惋惜，想了很多。

隨著現(xiàn)代工農(nóng)業(yè)的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的污水排進(jìn)河里，河水被嚴(yán)重污染。河水變得如此的骯臟以致于生物不能在里面生活。河水發(fā)出難聞的氣味。

我們急切呼吁采取措施改變這種狀況。政府應(yīng)當(dāng)建立各種設(shè)備，例如污水處理廠，并且鼓勵(lì)科學(xué)家們想出更多更好的辦法以減少水污染。

水是生命之源，保護(hù)水資源十分重要。

My classmates and I had an outing this spring.We had a good time.But meanwhile I noticed that water pollution in our city was becoming more and more serious.On our way, we could see women washing clothes in the river.Litter was floating on the river.Waste water produced by a chemical factory was being discharged into the river.We did not see any fish in the river.The fiver was not so clear as before.Water quality was very bad.I am worried

about it because water is important to all living things.Man can not live without water.I hope people pay more attention to this problem, especially the government.Try to control the pollution of water as early as possible.At last I would like to say, “To protect water is to protect life.”

今年春天，我和我的同學(xué)去春游，我們玩得都很高興。但同時(shí)，我也注意到我們城市的水污染變得越來(lái)越嚴(yán)重了。

沿途我們看到許多婦女在河邊洗衣，河面上漂著垃圾，一家化工廠正將廢水排入河中。河中看不到一條魚，河水也不像從前那樣清澈了，水質(zhì)很差。對(duì)此我深感擔(dān)憂，因?yàn)樗畬?duì)于所有生物都非常重要。沒(méi)有水人類將無(wú)法生存。我希望人們能多關(guān)注這個(gè)問(wèn)題，特別是政府部門，爭(zhēng)取及早解決水污染問(wèn)題。最后，我想說(shuō)“保護(hù)水就是保護(hù)生命?！?/p>