第一篇：英語(yǔ)作文例文點(diǎn)評(píng)88篇

借鑒和模仿是提高寫作的基石。先借來(lái)再轉(zhuǎn)為自用是巧學(xué)者之法。內(nèi)容可適用于讀寫任務(wù)正文部分。

--Miss.Q 英語(yǔ)作文例文點(diǎn)評(píng)88篇（收集于網(wǎng)絡(luò)）【要求】

英語(yǔ)課上老師教給同學(xué)們一句英語(yǔ)格言“No Pains, No Gains”（不勞則不獲），并讓大家圍繞如下三方面以這句格言為題寫一篇短文。

人們?cè)诶щy面前容易氣餒，并產(chǎn)生不勞而獲的想法。

“不勞則不獲”這一格言能給予人鼓勵(lì)。

學(xué)生要取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)離不開(kāi)苦功夫，所謂成功的秘訣即是辛勤的勞動(dòng)。

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No Pains, No Gains

People attempting a task may be discouraged in front of difficulties.They start with a great interest and passion.When they find that the task will take much more effort than they thought, their interest diminishes and their passion wanes.At that time, they are likely to have the idea of reaping a good harvest without much labor.The old saying “No pains, no gains” comes as a word of cheer to these discouraged persons.No task that is really worth doing can be done either easily or quickly.No mastery of any knowledge or skill can be gained without painstaking efforts.We students shoulder the task of learning knowledge that calls for exertion.To improve our grades is what every student wants.We may envy those who have achieved excellence, and wonder what makes them succeed.In fact, their secret of success is no secret.It depends largely on their efforts.Good grades only belong to hardworking students.Many thanks for the favor you did for me!【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文緊緊圍繞題目給出的三方面加以論述，層次清楚，語(yǔ)言流暢易懂?！癷nterest diminishes and their passion wanes” 中詞語(yǔ)搭配講究，“reaping a good harvest without much labor” 用另一個(gè)習(xí)慣表達(dá)法點(diǎn)出了“No Pains, No Gains”的含義，同時(shí)又避免了重復(fù)。文章句式靈活，長(zhǎng)短搭配得當(dāng)，使文章朗朗上口，雖然是議論文，但卻沒(méi)有枯燥之感。

【要求】

根據(jù)下面的提示寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容須包括下面幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)。

沒(méi)有堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志就不可能取得成功。

事業(yè)成功須非凡的干勁。

有些人害怕困難，則一事無(wú)成。

【范文】

Where there is a Will, There is a Way

No man can win success without strong will.We hear some men have got good results, but hardly realize that the great men had been making more efforts before they achieved success.Success requires an unusual amount of energy to overcome difficulties.So it is important for us to have great resolution.Some men tend to be afraid of difficulties.If they meet with some difficulties, they will give in.So they get nothing eventually.So let's make up our minds, stick to it and surely win success in our career.Focus on the most important things to do to help your organization be successful.Don't focus on the easiest things.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

對(duì)這種提綱式作文，一定要囊括所給提綱中的全部?jī)?nèi)容，但又無(wú)須拘泥于提綱，更不能逐字逐句地“翻譯”。對(duì)此應(yīng)發(fā)揮自己的想像力和創(chuàng)造力，大膽地創(chuàng)作擴(kuò)展。

【要求】

很多人都希望能在事業(yè)上有所成就，但不是所有人都能取得勝利。成功需要頑強(qiáng)的意志，鍥而不舍的努力，勤奮學(xué)習(xí)的精神。請(qǐng)你以此為主要內(nèi)容，準(zhǔn)備一篇百字左右的簡(jiǎn)短發(fā)言。

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The way to success

Everyone tries to achieve success in his/her career.But some finally attain their aims while others fail.Why? Some continue their cause to the end through long period of hard struggles, but others are easily disappointed and stop halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Life is short and we have too much to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can make constant efforts.Don't be afraid of life.Believe that life is worth living, and your belief will help create the fact.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

這是一篇議論文，作者首先提出問(wèn)題，再提出自己觀點(diǎn)：意志堅(jiān)強(qiáng)、鍥而不舍、勤奮，是成功的三大要素。作者在結(jié)尾，巧妙地運(yùn)用了諺語(yǔ)“where there is a will there is a way”，使文章增色不少。

【要求】

堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志(Man's Strong Will)請(qǐng)以下面三句分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇以堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志為題的文章。

Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality.There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will.It is not easy to cultivate a strong will.【范文】

Man's Strong Will

Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality.It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship that befalls.It is strong will that enables us to endure the trying situation and to attain our goals.Strong will gives us light when we are in the dark, and encouragement when we are frustrated.With this meritorious quality, no enemy can overwhelm us, and no obstacles can stand in our way.As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.All pain helps to make us rise, how-ever much we may hate it at the time.There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will.During the Long March, the Red Army soldiers met with the greatest hardship men have ever experienced.They had nothing to eat but grass roots and barks of trees.It was their strong will that made them defeat the hardship.Helen Keller, a strong willed American blind woman, mastered the English language and became a well-known educator.Such instances abound, and suffice it just to enumerate the two.Develop a high tolerance for ambiguity----you'll be more satisfied.It is not easy to cultivate a strong will.First of all, we must set up a firm faith in our cause, namely, the cause of communism, and be ready to devote our lives to it.Secondly, we must learn from strong-willed persons, especially, from revolutionary martyrs who fought for communism to the last drop of blood.Finally, we should boldly go through trials and hardships to train our will so as to get rid of the weak points of our moral character.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文為議論文。首段的“neither?nor?”“It is strong will that?”，和“no enemy?no obstacles?”的運(yùn)用，加強(qiáng)了文章的語(yǔ)氣，突出了堅(jiān)強(qiáng)意志的重要價(jià)值。段末的格言起到了畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。第二段用了紅軍二萬(wàn)五千里長(zhǎng)征和海倫?凱勒這兩個(gè)例子，有力地證明了堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志能使人獲得成功這一主題。末段談如何培養(yǎng)堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志，層次清晰，觀點(diǎn)正確，具有說(shuō)服力。

【要求】

以“Don't Stop Halfway”為題寫一篇議論文。

論證具體

結(jié)構(gòu)完整

字?jǐn)?shù)100—150 【范文】

Don't Stop Halfway

When a man is doing some work, he desires some benefit from it.In order to get this benefit, the must do the task to the end and completely finish it.To finish a task, whether hard or not requires patience and firmness.Therefore when you have some work to do, you must do it faithfully, irrespective of the difficulty.Difficulties and obstacles are unavoidable;if you turn your back on meeting them, you will succeed in nothing, but if you can overcome them, you will accomplish something.To stop halfway is very bad.Suppose that a precious stone is at a great distance from you and you want to obtain it;you must reach for it;you must not stop halfway.If you stop halfway, you will not only get nothing, but also lose something, because your time and strength will be wasted.It is a good thing for one to do one thing at a time, and never stop halfway.Cultivate a reputation for being reliable and hardworking, even if it means bucking peer pressure.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

作者對(duì)不要半途而廢的論證具體而有說(shuō)服力，告訴我們半途而廢不僅無(wú)法達(dá)到目標(biāo)而且浪費(fèi)時(shí)間、精力。段落安排逐層深入，循循善誘。全文整體結(jié)構(gòu)完整、自然。

【要求】

題目：Failure（失?。┦且粋€(gè)人經(jīng)常遇到的。失敗不是好事，因?yàn)樗谷说呐?efforts)付之東流。但是，失敗也是好事，它可以教育我們使我們學(xué)到更多的東西。試寫一短文就此談?wù)勀銓?duì)失敗的看法。

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Failure

Nearly everybody regards failure as a bad thing.The efforts we have made seem to be of no use and we feel very disappointed.Some people even lose the courage to start again or lose interest in life when the failure is a very great one.But failure can also benefit us.It can teach us a good lesson and make us experienced.Also, we can realize our own shortcomings and get a better knowledge of ourselves.So when we start again, we can succeed more easily.Therefore, failure not only disappoints us but also benefits us.When we fail, we should make full use of our failure and learn from our experience.Then, we may succeed in the future.Life is made up of ambiguous victories and nebulous defeats----claim them all as victories!【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文最大的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是正反對(duì)照，條理清楚。高考作文時(shí)間很短，所以謀篇布局顯得十分重要。本文脈絡(luò)清楚，淺顯易懂，應(yīng)該說(shuō)在考場(chǎng)中是容易取勝的。此外，本篇行文簡(jiǎn)練，顯得干凈利落。要求】

每個(gè)人的生活中都有過(guò)失敗的經(jīng)歷，失敗對(duì)于我們來(lái)說(shuō)，到底意味著什么？請(qǐng)你按如下提綱寫一篇文章，談?wù)勀銓?duì)失敗的理解。

失敗是生活中的常事。

人們對(duì)失敗的態(tài)度各不相同。

就我而言，我認(rèn)為失敗?

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Is Failure a Bad Thing

Failure is quite a common thing in our life.As long as we do things we will surely encounter difficulties.Of course we should try our best to get over them, but in many cases, it is not so easy, or even impossible.Then how should we face failure? Different people take different attitudes towards failure.When faced with failure, some people become frustrated and lose their selfconfidence.They refuse to make any further efforts.These people will probably never amount to anything in life.Some people just don't fear failure.They firmly believe that failure is the mother of success.As a result, not only can failure stop them, but they draw useful lessons from it and try even harder.Such people are sure to succeed someday.As for me, I don't think failure is a bad thing.Failure can never discourage me but only enrich my experience and steel my will.With this positive attitude in mind, I will try hard in anything I'm determined to accomplish and attain success in the end.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文按題目所給綱要分為三段。首段簡(jiǎn)要地論述了失敗是每個(gè)人都會(huì)遇到的，末句用了一句設(shè)問(wèn)，起到了承上啟下的作用。第二段談到了人們對(duì)失敗的兩種典型態(tài)度，先寫錯(cuò)誤觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行鋪墊，而后再寫正確觀點(diǎn)。這種安排自然突出了作者所贊同的態(tài)度，同時(shí)為引出第三段做好的了準(zhǔn)備。末段作者則闡明了自己的觀點(diǎn)。全文層次清楚，段落間銜接緊密而自然，主題突出，語(yǔ)言流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確。

【要求】

失敗，是人人都不愿體驗(yàn)的結(jié)果。有人說(shuō)失敗使人消沉，有人說(shuō)失敗是成功之母。你對(duì)失敗的態(tài)度怎樣？寫一篇短文。

字?jǐn)?shù)150—200字，題目自擬。

【范文】

Is Failure a Bad Thing?

Failure is a common thing in our daily lives.As students, We sometimes fail to get high scores on our examinations.When we play game, we sometimes can't avoid losing to others.And there are times when we fail to do satisfactory work.All these failures happen naturally and almost every one of us has had such experiences.However, there are different attitudes towards failure.Some people lose heart in failure, they think the world has come to an end.Some people don't take failure seriously and just ignore it, while some others learn much from it.In my opinion, what really counts is not failure itself, but what we think of failure and do after failure.As long as we believe in ourselves and don't give up, and in the mean time learn something from our failure, We'll certainly be successful in the end.So I'm never afraid of failure, for I believe that failure is not a bad thing, but the mother of success.看問(wèn)題一定要看到正反兩面，體現(xiàn)在文中，就往往是鮮明的對(duì)比。

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】 表達(dá)思想清楚，內(nèi)容比較充實(shí)，文字流暢，句子結(jié)構(gòu)多樣。第一段、第二段主題句簡(jiǎn)練而貼切，句間銜接比較自然，用詞造句有不少閃光點(diǎn)，如：the world has come to an end 等。

要求】

請(qǐng)以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇題為“誠(chéng)實(shí)”的文章。

It is usually better to be honest than dishonest.One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience.Honesty makes you happy and gain a good reputation.【范文】

honesty

We often praise somebody because of his diligence and honesty.So all the people think that honesty is a virtue and that it is the best policy.It is usually better to be honest than dishonest.People tend to believe an honest man, no matter what he does and what he says.On the contrary, dishonest people are not trustworthy.For this reason, honest people are always more successful than the dishonest.So it is better to be honest because it can help you succeed.One of the worst things about lying is that it results in a guilty conscience.If a person tells lies, his face will turn red and his heart will beat faster.He will always live in fright.Honesty makes you happy and gains a good reputation.All people consider what you've said true and trust you just because you are an honest man.Therefore, you can say what you like and do what you like without fear.You will feel very happy.Likewise, just because of your honesty, people respect you and love you.Gradually, you will gain a good reputation.To be honest will ensure you a happy life.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文內(nèi)容切題，詳略安排得當(dāng)，重點(diǎn)放在誠(chéng)實(shí)的益處，即第二段和第四段上。這兩段的段末均有一句總結(jié)句與段首的主題句相呼應(yīng)，使段落結(jié)構(gòu)完整，同時(shí)強(qiáng)化了主題。文章語(yǔ)言略顯單調(diào)，但比較順暢，表達(dá)也較清楚。

【要求】

班會(huì)課上要求同學(xué)們?yōu)榇蠹矣糜⑽闹v述一個(gè)小哲理，要求條理清晰，有自己的見(jiàn)解。你的發(fā)言稿內(nèi)容如下：

真誠(chéng)是一種重要的思想方法。

應(yīng)該弄清楚什么是真誠(chéng)。

為什么有時(shí)人們難以做到真誠(chéng)。

真誠(chéng)，是一種人生態(tài)度。

【范文】

On the Truth

Truth is an attitude of the mind.It is important, if one does not wish to inconvenience and bore his or her friends.It means telling no lies and never backing out of one's word.But it is more important to know what is the truth, and not to slide into those untruthful habits of thought which are so pleasant and so easy.There is a word named “the victory habit of mind”.People who have this mind are unduly preoccupied by what was socially and morally convenient.One should have the courage to think uncomfortably, since it is only by rejecting the convenience that one can come to think the truth.Truth, is an attitude of the life.直線式思維，層層推進(jìn)是英文的習(xí)慣。避免Chinglish不僅僅要防止出錯(cuò)，還要培養(yǎng)語(yǔ)感和思路。

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

這篇短文首尾照應(yīng)，用同一句式，只換了一個(gè)單詞：“mind”、“l(fā)ife”，卻把意思推進(jìn)了一層，很符合英文的習(xí)慣，能起到警人的效果。能夠不停地把意思深入，也是這篇短的一個(gè)特點(diǎn)。它使用的是層層推進(jìn)的辦法，沒(méi)有在每個(gè)點(diǎn)上展開(kāi)論述，但卻顯得乏味。

【要求】

題目：自信

請(qǐng)指明什么是自信，并闡明自信的重要性。

【范文】

Self-confidence

Self-confidence means trust in one's own ability.As a very important psychological quality, it brings your creative power to play, arouses you enthusiasm for work and helps you overcome difficulties.When asked of the secret of her success, Marie Curie answered, “My success lies in perseverance and self-confidence, the latter in particular.”

Self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed.It is self-confidence that inspires you to cope with any arduous task.With self-confidence, the goal you intend can be reached, and so can the hard nut be cracked.Some people find most of the things impossible, saying, “It is beyond my ability to do the task.” or “I am not cut out for it.” In many cases, these are only lame excuses.When our heart is void of self-confidence, every hope is gone, and everything we are laying our hands on is spoilt.Be honest with yourself about your strengths and weakness and manage accordingly.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文為議論文，分三部分層層深入地論述了自信心這一可貴的心理素質(zhì)。首段在給自信心作出簡(jiǎn)要解釋后，接著闡明了自信心的重要性。段末恰到好處地引用了居里夫人的話來(lái)支持自己的論點(diǎn)。第二段進(jìn)一步陳述了自信心的重要性。而在末段作者首先通過(guò)兩句話生動(dòng)地表現(xiàn)出了缺乏自信心人的心態(tài)，而后從反而指出如果缺乏自信心，則會(huì)一事無(wú)成。

【要求】

ambition的意思是我們的生活目標(biāo)，是對(duì)成功、權(quán)力、財(cái)富等等的強(qiáng)烈渴望。ambition并不意味著要成為最好的，它是一種激勵(lì)我們向前的目標(biāo)，使我們不因失敗而失去希望。每個(gè)人都有自己的ambition，但不是每個(gè)人都能實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的渴望。結(jié)合以上內(nèi)容，以“Ambition”為題寫一篇議論文。

不要逐字逐句翻譯。

字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。

【范文】

Ambition

Our ambition means the goal we have in our life.It is a strong desire for success, power, riches, and so on.To have ambition doesn't necessarily mean one wants to be number one.This is not the real sense of the word.True ambition is the goal that encourages us to look forward and not to lose hope because of failure.Ambition differs from person to person and everyone has his or her own ambition.Yet not every-one of us can succeed in what we desire to do.Live all you can.It's a mistake not to.The right time is any time, that one is still so lucky as to live.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文充分表達(dá)了題目的要求，思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，內(nèi)容簡(jiǎn)明扼要。語(yǔ)句活潑流利，用詞直接精當(dāng)，避免了華麗浮夸的詞藻或含義模糊的語(yǔ)句。緊扣題意，中心明確，是一篇成功的議論文。結(jié)尾處引用格言更顯出深厚的語(yǔ)言功底，為全文增色不少。

【要求】

文明禮貌(Good Manners)請(qǐng)以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇以文明禮貌為題的文章。

People all over the world set great regard on good manners.There are good manners in which we behave in public places.If everyone has developed good manners…

【范文】

Good Manners

People all over the world set great regard on good manners.To a certain degree, good manners indicate a person's good education and breeding.In schools, it is part of students' moral trailing to develop good manners.A person with good manners always wins praise.On the contrary, people will frown on him if he behaves roughly and impolitely.There are good manners in which we behave in public places.It is a good manner to offer help to the young, the old and the handicapped when they are in need of it.So is it to behave politely and keep away from foul language.Besides, we should guard against such minor offenses as making a loud noise, casting peels and shells, smoking and spitting.If everyone has developed good manners, people will from a more harmonious relationship.If everyone behaves considerately towards others and follows the social ethics, people will live in a better world.With the general mood of society improved, there will be a progress of civilization.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文按照題目所給的綱要從三方面論述了文明禮貌的重要性。意思明晰，文理通順?！癴rown on”，“keep away from”，“guard against”，“minor offenses”等小詞用得準(zhǔn)確自然，很好地傳達(dá)了作者的意思。

要求】

在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)，請(qǐng)你談一談對(duì)禮貌的看法。

字?jǐn)?shù)100—150字

【范文】

Politeness

Politeness means good behavior in social intercourse.Codes of politeness may differ from country to country.But the object is always to add pleasure and grace to daily life.A polite person is always an agreeable companion.He is agreeable because he is always thinking of others before himself.He doesn't interrupt people when they are talking.He is careful not to say anything to hurt other people's feelings.He doesn't push in a crowd, but waits quietly until it is his turn to pass.In addition, by acting in accordance with the prevailing customs, he is considered a member of the civilized society;otherwise, he is looked upon as a fool and will be avoided by people of high breeding.Politeness is truly a valuable asset.If you are courteous to other people, you have good manners and your everday life will be much happier.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

論點(diǎn)鮮明。文章開(kāi)頭即表明作者觀點(diǎn)，接著圍繞這一觀點(diǎn)以第三人稱娓娓道來(lái)，給人以中肯無(wú)惑之感。全文運(yùn)筆流暢，論證充分。讀后給人以深刻印象。

【要求】

古今中外有很多關(guān)于人生問(wèn)題的討論，這方面的精彩英語(yǔ)文章也數(shù)不勝數(shù)。現(xiàn)在有一個(gè)英語(yǔ)雜志想開(kāi)辟一個(gè)討論人生的小專欄，要求語(yǔ)句精練警人，觀點(diǎn)有新義。你的應(yīng)征文章內(nèi)容如下：

生命中的快樂(lè)是人們所不斷尋求的。

但是我們往往忽視身邊的快樂(lè)，而去尋找那些所謂大的野心勃勃的東西。

快樂(lè)無(wú)所不在。

想一想身邊有哪些可珍惜的快樂(lè)呢。

【范文】

The Happiness of the Life

Life is like a winding path that surrounded by flowers, butterflies, and delicious fruit, but many of us spend much time looking for happiness around the next corner.We do not bend to enjoy the happiness that is ours for the taking just at out feet.In our desire to reach the “pot of gold”, complete and lasting happiness we all want to fill our lives, we ignore things which don't seem worthy of such a large ambition, or which can't give us the whole thing all at once.Happiness is all around us, but it often comes in small grains.When we gather it grain by grain, we soon have a basketful.What small pieces of happiness surround me right now? Most folks are about as happy as they make up their minds to be.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文按要求描寫了自己是如何看待生活中快樂(lè)的。語(yǔ)言很清新，幾個(gè)比喻用得很有特色：比如把“l(fā)ife”比做“a winding path surrounded by flowers, butterflies, and delicious fruit”，把收集生活中的快樂(lè)比做“gather grain”。既生動(dòng)又形象。最后的疑問(wèn)句也起到了發(fā)人深省的效果。

【要求】

人人都渴望幸福，但對(duì)幸福的理解卻不盡相同：有人追逐金錢，有人看重名譽(yù)，有人渴望友情，有人視愛(ài)情為人生的崇高追求。你呢？寫下你對(duì)幸福的看法。

字?jǐn)?shù)：100左右。

【范文】

Happiness

Happiness means different things to different people.For example some people believe that if they have a lot of money or many material things, they will be happy.They believe that if they are wealthy, they will be able to do everything they want, and so they will be happy.On the other hand, some people believe that money is not the only source of happiness.These people value their intelligence, or their health, or their religion;these things make them happy, For me, happiness is closely tied to my family.I am happy if my father and my mother live in harmony.When all the members of my family share the good time and the bad, I am happy.Although the definition of happiness depends on the individual, my “wealth” of happiness is my family.Remember this,----that very little is needed to make a happy life.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

作者首先列出不同人對(duì)幸福的不同理解，然后引出作者本人對(duì)幸福的觀點(diǎn)—“closely tied to my family”尤其“I'm happy if my father and mother live in harmony”讀來(lái)令人感動(dòng)。全篇行文流暢，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，首尾呼應(yīng)。

【要求】

社會(huì)的變化引起人們對(duì)富有與歡樂(lè)的討論。人們開(kāi)始認(rèn)為富有與歡樂(lè)并非必然相聯(lián)系，窮人一樣有他們的歡樂(lè)。你會(huì)在富有與歡樂(lè)之間作出什么選擇？請(qǐng)你就常人的看法和你自己的看法寫簡(jiǎn)短文。

【范文】

Wealthy and Happy

Wealth and happiness are not necessarily related to each other.First of all, we have to believe that wealthy people are more likely to be happy than poor ones.Because wealthy people do not have to worry about their work and bread, which are usually the causes of trouble to the poor.But in this world, happiness does not belong to the rich only.The poor have an equal right to it.So long as the poor are satisfied with themselves and their condition, they feel happy.I think it would be perfect to be both wealthy and happy.But if the two can not be held at the same time, I would rather choose happiness.Money may be the husk of many things, but not the kernel.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

富有與歡樂(lè)是一個(gè)賦有哲學(xué)意義的問(wèn)題：一個(gè)是物質(zhì)條件，一個(gè)是心理感覺(jué)。不同的人應(yīng)該允許有不同的看法。本文開(kāi)篇闡述了常人的觀點(diǎn)，按著從正、反兩個(gè)方面辯證闡述二者的關(guān)系，最后闡明自己的觀點(diǎn)，顯得說(shuō)理充分，讓人信服。寫這類主觀性題目，個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)必須明確。

【要求】

題目：How to Approach Money。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示作文，要求以三句話作為段首語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)文章。

Money is necessary in our modern life.But money is not all good.How should we approach money.【范文】

How to Approach Money

Money is necessary in our modern life.We need money to buy things such as food and clothing.When we go out, we should pay traffic fee and other fees.In a word, money is important.With more money, we can live better and create better working or studying conditions.But money is not always good.Many people work hard when they have no money but do nothing when they have more than enough money, And even worse, there are some people nowadays who make money at the expense of friendship or other people's interests.How should we approach money, then? In my opinion, we should work hard to earn more money, But at the same time, we must remember that money is not our final goal.一定要把握好“度”哦，不要離topic sentence太遠(yuǎn)。

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文為一給起首句的作文，所以內(nèi)容限制很大，個(gè)人發(fā)揮余地較小。本文優(yōu)點(diǎn)在于簡(jiǎn)練地評(píng)論了金錢的利與弊，邏輯清楚。此類文章寫作起來(lái)比較容易。

【要求】

請(qǐng)以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇以健康、美貌和學(xué)識(shí)為題的文章。

Young people look forward to being strong and handsome.There are women who set great store by the beauty of outward appearance.Health and beauty without knowledge is almost equal to a body without soul.【范文】

Health, Beauty and Knowledge

Young people look forward to being strong and handsome.They take part in rigorous training to build up their body.They take some gymnastics stars as their models, whose welldeveloped muscles or proportioned figure is the combination of strength and grace, and also the indication of youthfulness and vitality.There are women who set great store by the beauty of outward appearance.They dress themselves in clothes of the latest fashion.They apply a heavy make-up, rouging their lips, powdering their faces, painting their brows, and wearing earrings and necklaces.To compensate the inadequacy of their natural beauty, some goes so far as to receive the operation of face mending.文體和文風(fēng)也是應(yīng)該注意的。文體比較鄭重。

Health and beauty without knowledge is almost equal to a body without soul.A person with a stout body alone can go nowhere in the modern age of science and technology, a person's outward beauty is as easy to fade as a flower to wither no matter how colorful it is.It is true that health and beauty are something one may well be proud of.But it is of greater importance for a student to master adequate knowledge that is useful in his life-long service to the country.句子相應(yīng)規(guī)整一些，用詞也盡量正式，以免出現(xiàn)不得當(dāng)?shù)男υ挕?/p>

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

全文圍繞三個(gè)主題句展開(kāi)議論，條理清楚，層次分明，用詞準(zhǔn)確?！皐ell-developed muscles”，“proportioned figure”，“apply make-up”，“rouging lips”，“powdering faces”，“painting brows”，及“wearing earrings and necklaces”等詞語(yǔ)搭配講究，生動(dòng)地表達(dá)了作者的意思?！癮 person's outward beauty is as easy to fade as a flower to wither no matter how colorful it is.”比喻句用得貼切自然，很好地強(qiáng)調(diào)了主題。

【要求】

健康是革命的本錢，請(qǐng)以“health”為題目寫篇100單詞的英語(yǔ)小短文。每段的中心句已經(jīng)給出：

Health is the foundation of one's future success.What should we do to maintain and enhance our health? Health is more important than wealth.【范文】

Health

It is clear that health is the foundation of one's future success.If you become sick, it is nearly impossible to pursue your career effectively.On the other hand, if you are strong, you can go all out to overcome the obstacles that lie ahead of you.Now that we know that health is the source of our energy, what should we do to maintain and enhance our health? First, we should exercise every day to strengthen our muscles.Second, we should keep regular hours of our lives.If we get up early, we can breathe fresh air and see the sunrise, and this habit can do wonders for our outlook on life.Third, there is a proverb that says, “Prevention is better than cure.”

In conclusion, health is more important than wealth.Those who are rich but lose their health are no more fortunate than those who are poor.If you want your wish to come true, health is the most important ingredient of your success.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文為行云流水，結(jié)構(gòu)清楚而緊湊。開(kāi)篇說(shuō)明健康的重要性。在第二段里，分了三個(gè)層次來(lái)闡釋“健康是我們能量的源泉”，而且還有提問(wèn)句來(lái)引導(dǎo)下面的回答。最后一段，“in conclusion”，總結(jié)了全文，而且有所提高。

Understand your health benefits and keep track of them.【要求】

題目：減肥。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)寫一短文，談?wù)勀銓?duì)減肥的看法。

節(jié)食（diet.n.）與慢跑（jogging）是兩種效果不同的減肥方法。

慢跑經(jīng)濟(jì)而有效；節(jié)食效果不佳。

減肥如走極端則很危險(xiǎn)。

【范文】

Losing Weight

Many fat people want to lose weight and to be younger and slimmer.They often choose two ways----diet and jogging.Their effects are different.Jogging is the easiest and cheapest way of shaping the body.For the price of a good pair of running shoes, anyone can join the race anywhere.Dieting, too, has become a common way.People eat very little everyday, and the food they eat cannot supply as much nutrition as the body needs.Both jogging and dieting, carried to extremes, can be harmful.Above all, common sense should be the keystone for any dieting and exercise scheme.It is true that the principal part of beauty lies in decent motion.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

這是一篇有提示語(yǔ)的作用文，因此，一般要求在文章的段首以中心句的形式點(diǎn)明要點(diǎn)。另外，提示性的作用，切忌主觀修改提示要求。議論文的優(yōu)點(diǎn)就在于緊扣提示，層層展開(kāi)，干凈利落，正反相稱，使文章顯得公允、完整。

要求】

“虛心使人進(jìn)步，驕傲使人落后”這句家喻戶曉的格言指出了謙虛這一美德的重要性。請(qǐng)你圍繞這句格言寫一篇短文談?wù)勀銓?duì)謙虛的理解。

人各有所長(zhǎng)，因此可能會(huì)自視過(guò)高。例如老年人可能看不起年輕人，認(rèn)為年輕人短少智慧和閱歷；而年輕人也會(huì)輕視老人，認(rèn)為他們?nèi)鄙倩盍ΑＶ匾氖?，要謙虛地學(xué)習(xí)別人的長(zhǎng)處。

學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)也離不開(kāi)謙虛。一個(gè)謙虛的人會(huì)不恥下問(wèn)，因?yàn)樗?，知識(shí)的海洋如此浩瀚，一個(gè)人在一生中能學(xué)到的只是滄海一粟。反之，一個(gè)自負(fù)的人則炫耀自己的一知半解，不再進(jìn)取。謙虛的人對(duì)知識(shí)的追求是無(wú)止境的，這正是他能取得成功的原因所在。

【范文】

Modesty

“Modesty helps one progress, and pride makes one lag behind.”Celebrating the virtue of modesty, The saying becomes many people's motto.Everyone has his strong points, of which he may have too high an opinion.For example, the old may look down upon the young, thinking that young persons lack wisdom and experience;the young may despise the old, taking pride in their vigor.The important thing is to be modest and to learn from other people's strong points.Modesty is important in learning.A modest person never hesitates to consult those who are inferior to him.He understands that the range of knowledge is as vast as the sea and one can only gain a drop all his life.In contrast, a conceited person, while having only a smattering of knowledge, shows it off and dissatisfied with what he has achieved.As a modest person's thirst for knowledge is never satisfied, the road to success lies before him.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

文章以“虛心使人進(jìn)步，驕傲使人落后”這一格言開(kāi)頭，從“人各有所長(zhǎng)，應(yīng)虛心取人所長(zhǎng)”和“謙虛對(duì)求學(xué)至關(guān)重要”兩方面論述了謙虛這一主題，最后得出結(jié)論“虛心的人能夠走向成功”。層次清楚，措辭準(zhǔn)確。文中將知識(shí)與大海作比喻句貼切自然，沒(méi)有牽強(qiáng)附會(huì)之感。文中一些習(xí)語(yǔ)的熟練運(yùn)用，也顯示出了作者良好的文字功底。

【要求】

題目：愛(ài)是人類普遍而偉大的感情，請(qǐng)以“l(fā)ove”為題，寫一篇100單詞左右的英語(yǔ)小短文。文章每一段的前一句話已經(jīng)給出。

Love plays an important part in this world today.The love between you and your parents is a specials love.There are other kinds of love.【范文】

Love

Love plays an important part in this world today.With the increasing modernization of society, relationship between people are becoming looser and looser.It is difficult to imagine what they would be like if there were no love for each other.Love is the caring and concern for, and understanding of other people and the acceptance of their strength and weaknesses.To love and to be loved is the true happiness in life.The love between you and your parents is a special one.This love, as any other sincere love, must be honest and be shared by both parents and children.The love of parents is a great support in their children's lives.It will remain with them and help them overcome all the difficulties and make them feel secure.There are other kinds of love.Love between friends, partners, human beings and animals.The power of love makes us endure the difficulties in our lives, even though we may not have the chance to think about it, it maybe be kept alive deeply in our heart.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】該文邏輯清晰，詞語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)練，先從“愛(ài)”的普遍意義談起，說(shuō)到“愛(ài)”的含義，“愛(ài)”對(duì)我們的重要。在第二段里又重點(diǎn)地談了談父母和孩子之間的“愛(ài)”，然后結(jié)尾處點(diǎn)到了其他種類的“愛(ài)”。有序有節(jié)，完整精干。

并不是好文章必須追求艱澀的詞語(yǔ)，平易的語(yǔ)言只要運(yùn)用得當(dāng)，也會(huì)有極好的效果。

【要求】

本市無(wú)償獻(xiàn)血日即將來(lái)到。在學(xué)校的無(wú)償獻(xiàn)血?jiǎng)訂T活動(dòng)中，你應(yīng)《英語(yǔ)園地》之邀，寫一篇宣傳稿，向包括留學(xué)生及外籍教員在內(nèi)的全校師生宣傳無(wú)償獻(xiàn)血的重大意義及其對(duì)身體的影響。大意如下：

血液是人體不可缺少的東西。它將養(yǎng)分和氧氣輸送體內(nèi)各給組織，同時(shí)將廢物和二氧化碳運(yùn)走。一個(gè)人如果失血過(guò)多就會(huì)死亡。輸血這一措施正在挽救著千百萬(wàn)人的生命。沒(méi)有豐富的血庫(kù)，也就無(wú)所謂現(xiàn)代醫(yī)學(xué)的發(fā)展。

無(wú)償獻(xiàn)血是高尚之舉，它體現(xiàn)了獻(xiàn)血者對(duì)他人的關(guān)愛(ài)。目前，獻(xiàn)血活動(dòng)在許多國(guó)家都廣泛開(kāi)展，它在我國(guó)也得到提倡。

獻(xiàn)血不會(huì)損害獻(xiàn)血者的健康。首先，只有健康的人才有資格獻(xiàn)血；此外，每次的獻(xiàn)血量很少，獻(xiàn)血者的身體會(huì)很快進(jìn)行調(diào)整，使身體機(jī)制正常運(yùn)行。

【范文】

Blood Donation Without payment

Blood is vital to the human body.It carries nourishment and oxygen to tissues, and at the same time, removes wastes and carbon dioxide.A person will die if he loses too much blood.Nowadays blood transfusion is saving millions of dying people.Without an adequate store of blood, the modern medicine can't develop.Blood donation doesn't harm the donator's health.First, only healthy people are allowed to donate blood;besides, every time, only a small amount of blood is taken from the donator.His body will make a quick adjustment to allow the body to operate normally.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

文章從血液對(duì)人體的重要性和獻(xiàn)血對(duì)人體的影響兩方面對(duì)無(wú)償獻(xiàn)血活動(dòng)進(jìn)行了論述。每段句首為主題句，使整篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。行文流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確。句式雖略顯簡(jiǎn)單，但“carry, remove, make an adjustment”等詞語(yǔ)的恰當(dāng)使用，使文章呈現(xiàn)出一定的變化。

We may miss the point of life by being too important.【要求】

人類每時(shí)每刻都在浪費(fèi)著各種各樣的資源，不僅包括自然資源，還包括時(shí)間資源。請(qǐng)你以下面三句話分別作為段首主題句，寫一篇短文談?wù)劺速M(fèi)問(wèn)題。

Mankind is wasting things everywhere and every day.The worst example of man's waste is the waste of time.It is time to call for an end to waste.【范文】

Mankind is wasting things everywhere and every day.Wherever we turn, we can see that paper, bottles and cans are thrown away;food is wasted just because of its poor taste;clothes are discarded simply due to their old fashion.Not only things and money are wasted, but natural resources are abused as well.Trees are cut down merely for fuel;wildlife is killed simply for food;oil, coal and minerals are exploited in a bad way.The worst example of man's waste is the waste of time.Many people tend to spend their time on worthless things, such as wandering about in the street, gossiping in the office, or sleeping too much during the day.As we know, time is so precious to us that it passes by and never returns.The waste of time amounts to the waste of life.It is time to call for an end to waste.On the one hand, we must save natural resources and make full use of them;otherwise human beings will be faced with the scarcity of natural resources and suffer from the pollution caused by wastes.On the other hand, we must treasure our time.Only with our time devoted to study and work for the people will we never regret the life we have had.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文主題突出，論述充分而有層次。句子之間銜接自然，邏輯性強(qiáng)。文中詞語(yǔ)搭配講究，符合英語(yǔ)表態(tài)習(xí)慣。

詞語(yǔ)搭配是難點(diǎn)也是重點(diǎn)，只要熟練運(yùn)用，才能真正掌握。

【要求】

面對(duì)班上越來(lái)越多的同學(xué)開(kāi)始講究吃穿，追求名牌，班主任王老師組織了一次以“節(jié)儉”為主題的班會(huì)。經(jīng)過(guò)討論，大家達(dá)成了共識(shí)，認(rèn)為現(xiàn)在雖然生活富裕了，衣食無(wú)憂了，但節(jié)儉是我們富家強(qiáng)國(guó)的基礎(chǔ)，是一種美德，不應(yīng)忘記。請(qǐng)你從以下三方面入手來(lái)談一談你對(duì)節(jié)儉的認(rèn)識(shí)：

節(jié)儉是一種美德，節(jié)儉的人懂得花錢之道；

節(jié)儉有諸多益處；

中國(guó)是一個(gè)發(fā)展中國(guó)家。我們只有勤勞節(jié)儉，才能建設(shè)一個(gè)強(qiáng)大的祖國(guó)。

【范文】

Thrift

Thrift is considered as a kind of virtue not only in China but also in the world.Thrifty people take great care not to waste anything when they are doing things and not to waste any money when they are spending it.As a virtue, thrift is very important to everyone.In the world some people spend their money like water, while others keep the habit of practicing thrift.The latter never spend their money on useless things, what's more, they always make good use of their money, for example, to help the poor to do things out of charity.By doing this they have made contributions to the society and their virtue has been highly appreciated.Live within your means.Not everyone knows how mysteriously money dribbles away in petty expenditure.If we don't take care of the cent, it will mount to dollars, which will take wings and fly away.We should always remember the English proverb“Take care of the pence and the pounds will take care of themselves”.Sometimes we want to go out to have holidays with our family and by means of thrift the money to be spent on such occasions can often be saved beforehand.Sickness sometimes comes and unless preparation has been made, there is much difficulty in meeting the increased expenditure.So everybody should try to save as much money as possible.China is a developing country.If we Chinese people are all thrifty and working hard, surely our country will be stronger and stronger, and then one day become a very rich and prosperous one.突出特點(diǎn)是大量諺語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用，借力發(fā)揮，為文章增色不少。

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

全文圍繞題目所給的三方面展開(kāi)論述，內(nèi)容切題，觀點(diǎn)鮮明。語(yǔ)言流暢，句與句之間聯(lián)系緊密，富有邏輯性。句式的變換和一系列比喻及諺語(yǔ)的使用，使文章讀來(lái)生動(dòng)，具有說(shuō)服力。

【要求】

幽默感是上天賜給人類的最好禮物，是快樂(lè)生活中所必不可少的要素。請(qǐng)你以下面的提綱寫一篇短文，談?wù)劄槭裁从哪蟹浅Ｖ匾?/p>

幽默感是上天賜給人類的最好禮物，是公認(rèn)的最有價(jià)值的性格特征之一。

幽默可以促進(jìn)我們的身心健康。

幽默有助于我們與他人和諧相處。

綜上所述，?

【范文】

Why a Sense of Humor is Important

A sense of humor, God's greatest gift to mankind, is universally considered the most valuable personality asset.It is born within every person's heart, but has to be cultivated.A person without humor is just like a spring without flowers and a dish without seasoning.In a sense, your personality lies in your sense of humor.Humor can enhance physical as well as mental well being.It helps us bear our burdens, lessen our tension, overcome our frustration, relax our body muscles, and dissolve countless trifles and irritations.With the cracking of a joke, all our worries, sadness and tiredness disperse like mist and smoke, and we are full of vigor once again.Humor helps us live in harmony with others.It is unavoidable to have misunderstanding and tension with others during work or study.But humor can ,as a“pacifier”, inject a light note into the touchy situation to ease these problems quicker than angry words or quarrels.With it you can always keep on good terms with others.In short, a sense of humor is really one of the keys to happiness.It gives zest to life to make it worth living.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)流暢，用詞準(zhǔn)確。尤其是詞語(yǔ)的搭配比較講究，值得大家學(xué)習(xí)。文章內(nèi)容切題，層次清楚，句與句之間的連接富有邏輯性。

【要求】

以“Why a sense of humor is important”為題，寫一篇100字左右短文。提示如下：

幽默能體現(xiàn)個(gè)性。

幽默有益于身心健康。

幽默能融洽與他人關(guān)系。

【范文】

Why a Sense of Humor Is Important

Humor shows a person's characteristics.If you can see everything with a sense of humor, you are an interesting person, and people will never feel dull together with you.It also shows that you are a well-educated man.You are healthy and happy with your sense of humor, for it can always keep you in high spirit, which will do good to both your mental and physical health.A sense of humor changes the color of the whole world before you.You will also have plenty of friends with your sense of humor.People feel it a pleasure to be with you, for you help them to see things from an entirely different view and a much brighter view.You give people strength to face a world full of struggle.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文給出了每段的主題句。文章應(yīng)圍繞這幾點(diǎn)發(fā)展成段，運(yùn)用類比、假設(shè)等技巧，可以完成一篇出色的習(xí)作。

A little bit of humor can be an effective icebreaker.【要求】

你認(rèn)為在人際交往中最能體現(xiàn)個(gè)性風(fēng)度、融洽與他人關(guān)系的性格是什么。

請(qǐng)用100字左右闡述你的理由。

題目自擬。

【范文】

Why a Sense of Humor Is Important

A sense of humor is universally considered the most valuable personality trait.Although everyone is born with it, it has to be cultivated.A person without humor is just like a spring without flowers.In a way, your personality lies in your sense of humor.Humor can enhance physical as well as mental well being.It helps us reduce stress, overcome frustration and dissolve countless trifling irritations.Humor helps us to get along with others.Misunderstanding and tension with others during work or study is unavoidable.But appropriate use of humor can settle quarrels and conflicts.With a good sense of humor you can always keep on good terms with others

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美，比喻恰當(dāng)，論述有理有據(jù)，條理清晰，層次分明。自擬的題目既指出了性格關(guān)鍵詞“humor”，又說(shuō)明了本文的主要內(nèi)容是論述“重要性”，是自命題作文中的精品。

把這幾篇同題材的文章對(duì)照參閱，一定會(huì)很有幫助的。

【要求】

題目：時(shí)間是無(wú)價(jià)之寶，浪費(fèi)時(shí)間就是浪費(fèi)生命。請(qǐng)以“The Value of Time”為題，寫一篇100單詞左右的英語(yǔ)小短文。每段的中心句已經(jīng)給出。

Time is even more precious than money.We should make full use of time.There are a lot of people who waste their time.We should get into the good habit of saving time.【范文】

The Value of Time

A proverb says:“Time is money”.But in my opinion, time is even more precious than money.When money is spent, we can earn it back.However, when time is gone, it will never return.This is the reason why we must save time.It goes without saying that the time at our disposal is unusually limited.Hence, even an hour is extremely precious.We should make full use of our time to do useful things.As students we must not relax our efforts to engage in our studies so as to serve society and our nation in the future.It is a pity that there are a lot of people who do not know the importance of time.They spend their precious time smoking, drinking and gambling.They do not realize that wasting time is equal to wasting part of their valuable life.In a word, we should get into the good habit of saving time.Do not put off what can be done today until tomorrow.Laziness will not only bring us failure but also lead us to the road of poverty.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文分為四段，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，每段有每段的重點(diǎn)和內(nèi)容。每一段，開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山地談到為什么我們要珍惜時(shí)間，因?yàn)樗冉疱X還寶貴；第二段里說(shuō)，作為一名學(xué)生，更應(yīng)該如此，“hence?”作為一種總結(jié)；第三段，對(duì)于一些不學(xué)無(wú)術(shù)的同學(xué)表示遺憾和惋惜。最后，用“in a word”來(lái)說(shuō)明我們應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)高效率地利用時(shí)間的好習(xí)慣。

【要求】

題目：暑假兩個(gè)月的漫長(zhǎng)假期為緊張學(xué)習(xí)的同學(xué)們提供了空閑娛樂(lè)、實(shí)踐鍛煉的好機(jī)會(huì)。你將怎樣安排你的暑假生活？請(qǐng)以“How to Spend the Summer Vacation”為題，寫一篇100個(gè)單詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

寫出你安排暑假的活動(dòng)和選擇這些活動(dòng)的理由。

【范文】

How to Spend the Summer Vacation

In school, we have summer vacation.In summer, the weather is so hot that our brain needs a rest after a period of hard work.Thus it is for health reasons that we have our summer vacation.What would be the most healthy way to spend it then? There are many kinds of sports, which are good for health in summer, such as swimming, tennis and baseball.But care should be taken not to practice such sports all day long, which would be very bad for our health.Another point we have to consider is that our time should not be spent entirely in playing.We attend school in order to get some knowledge, which will be useful in our life.But knowledge can only be obtained through constant drilling.During the vacation, we should not neglect to review the lessons we have learnt.It is true that all work and no play makes you a dull fellow.Though there may be other ways to spend the summer vacation, this seems to me the best of all.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】文章首先從暑假的必要性開(kāi)始，在第二段里又用問(wèn)句來(lái)承上啟下，提出本文的中心意思：“我們?cè)趺床拍茏詈玫乩檬罴俚臅r(shí)間呢？”并說(shuō)明運(yùn)動(dòng)是一個(gè)很好的選擇，但是，第三段又說(shuō)明還要學(xué)習(xí)以增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)。

回答“怎么樣”的時(shí)候往往要闡述“為什么”，才顯得理直氣壯。

【要求】

周末兩天的休息對(duì)于平時(shí)忙于工作學(xué)習(xí)的人們來(lái)說(shuō)是非常寶貴的。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提綱寫一篇短文。

周末對(duì)于人們來(lái)說(shuō)意味著什么。

每個(gè)人都有自己度周末的方式。

我是怎樣度周末的。

【范文】

Weekends

Weekends to people mean that they can have a two-day good rest.For example, people can go out to enjoy themselves or get together with relatives and friends to talk with each other or watch interesting video tapes with the whole family.Everyone spends weekends in his own way.Within two days, some people can relax themselves by listening to music, reading novels, or watching films.Others perhaps are more active by playing basketball, wimming or dancing.Different people have different relaxations.I often spend weekends with my family or my friends.Sometimes my parents take me on a visit to their old friends.Sometimes I go to the library to study or borrow some books to gain much knowledge.I also go to see various exhibition to broaden my vision.An excursion to seashore or mountain resorts is my favorite way of spending weekends.Weekends are always enjoyable for me.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

全文思路清晰，論述充分，語(yǔ)言流暢易懂。用詞講究，注意了詞語(yǔ)搭配，沒(méi)有重復(fù)、堆砌之感。

【要求】

要求：旅游事業(yè)對(duì)我國(guó)具有舉足輕重的作用。請(qǐng)以Ways to Improve China's Tourism為題為我國(guó)旅游事業(yè)的發(fā)展提幾點(diǎn)建議。（提示：擴(kuò)大宣傳，改善旅游設(shè)施，提高服務(wù)質(zhì)量??）

【范文】

Ways to Improve china's tourism

Tourism is now becoming a major industry throughout the world.However, tourism in China is not as developed as it should be.If the following is done, China's tourism will definitely be improved.First, our places of interest should be better advertised throughout the world to attract more tourists.Second, facilities should be provided to ensure that tourists enjoy their trip.Finally, the quality of service should be improved.Don't tell people their ideas are bad unless you've got a good one.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文第一段提出問(wèn)題，第二段解決問(wèn)題，“first”，“second”，“finally”等詞的使用，使整篇文章條理格外清晰。

【要求】

題目：人們對(duì)旅游觀光有各種不同的看法，旅游也有其巨大的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，同時(shí)也有缺點(diǎn)。請(qǐng)寫一短文談?wù)勀闳绾慰创糜蔚摹?/p>

【范文】

Nowadays, it is very popular among young people to travel around and see the world.Some people say they want something exciting and choose sightseeing.Some people who go outside simply want to see how other people live.And other people hope to refresh themselves and relax.However, when you want to travel, you will find many things to worry about before you really enjoy yourself.For example, ticket, hotel, luggage, thirst, hunger, rain, etc.In my opinion, if you have made up your mind to travel, you'd better well prepare yourself and never complain.Living close to nature is fun, especially for city people.Many new inventions make camping easier.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文從幾個(gè)方面表明了不同人有不同旅游觀念這一現(xiàn)實(shí)，同時(shí)指出旅游的麻煩之處，而沒(méi)有泛泛地談旅游的種種優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)，這是本文取勝之處。文末的話，形象表明了大眾對(duì)旅游的態(tài)度，顯得真實(shí)貼切。此文另一優(yōu)點(diǎn)，在于羅列不同觀點(diǎn)時(shí)有條不紊。

【要求】

暑假就要到了，許多同學(xué)都會(huì)選擇旅游作為度假的一種方式。的確，旅游對(duì)一個(gè)人的身心健康頗有好處。那么就請(qǐng)你以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇旅游的文章。

Travel is a very good means of broadening a person's perspective.Travel may relieve a person of boredom and gloom.Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages.【范文】

Travel

Travel is a very good means of broadening a person's perspective.It makes you come into contact with different cultures, meet people of different colors and go through peculiar rites and ceremonies.Travelling much, you will not only enrich your knowledge and experiences, but also be aware of the vastness of nature.Travel may also relieve person of boredom and gloom.Travel brings you enjoyment and attraction.It gives you a pleasant experience, which will disperse your boredom and make you forget whatever annoys you.Travel broadens your mind and leaves you good memories.Later, you may go over these memories and enjoy your past experiences, thus keeping a fresh and sunny mind.The field's his study, nature was his book.Travelers can choose different modes of transportation which have advantages and disadvantages.Airplanes are the fastest but also the most expensive.Buses and trains are less expensive, but they soon make you feel cramped and uncomfortable.Ships provide you with comfort unless you get seasick.Most people can afford traveling by bicycle, which, although slow, can limber up your muscles and get you closer to nature.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文首先陳述了旅游能夠開(kāi)闊人們眼界的原因，接著指出為什么旅游能夠消除煩悶、抑郁的心情，最后說(shuō)明進(jìn)行旅游可采取的不同交通工具的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。本篇各段解釋言簡(jiǎn)意明，主題突出?！癱ome into contact with?”，“enrich you knowledge and experiences”，“be aware of the vastness of nature”，“disperse your boredom”，“broaden your mind”等詞語(yǔ)的恰當(dāng)搭配，生動(dòng)而準(zhǔn)確地表現(xiàn)出了旅游的益處。

要求】

題目：你將參加校園英語(yǔ)講演比賽?，F(xiàn)在需要寫出一份簡(jiǎn)要的底稿，底稿應(yīng)包含以下基本要點(diǎn)。

隨著工作時(shí)間的縮短，空余時(shí)間越來(lái)越多了。

如何利用空余時(shí)間。

利用空余時(shí)間的益處。

題目自擬?！痉段摹?/p>

Use of Free Time

Some people may be so busy that they never have a spare moment, but it would be hard to find such people in contemporary times.Working hours are shorter and vacations longer, and there are more and more ways to spend the weekends.Aside from eating and sleeping, what do people do during the many hours when they are not at work or at school? Use of free time often discloses much about one's tastes, values, interests and personality.What may be one man's leisure, however, might be another man's work.In leisure hours, some may turn to the humanities: literature, magic, art and here we might also mention movies and television.Others participate in sports, politics, voluntary work or hobbies at home.Still others like parties, travelling, or just loafing.Obviously, the use of free time is a good means of relaxation, but its benefits go beyond this.All things people do in leisure hours enable them to gratify their wishes.This can contribute to intellectual growth and promote social activities as well.So the good use of free time will make life rich, colorful and rewarding.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

這篇文章寫得很有水平。說(shuō)理深入淺出，語(yǔ)言豐富曉暢，例證詳實(shí)，句式靈活多變，使得文章生動(dòng)并吸引人。開(kāi)篇用問(wèn)句，引出下文；結(jié)尾點(diǎn)題，總結(jié)全文。并且很有文學(xué)性。

【要求】

和外國(guó)朋友交談是文化生活中很重要的一部分，但是談什么話題卻要慎重考慮，因?yàn)楦鲊?guó)風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣不同，談的東西要關(guān)涉到禁忌、興趣。學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)角將要組織一次對(duì)外交流活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以書面形式寫一些可以作為談話的材料。

【范文】

Holidays and Outings

It is common in English to ask people about their holidays.In the West many families go away on holiday during the summer months and so it is very usual to ask about this.If the holiday has not yet taken place, then their holiday plans can be talked about.And if it is already over, then where they went, whether they enjoyed it and so on can be discussed.Similar questions are asked before festivals and pubic holidays.Foreigners living and working in China often have frequent opportunities for travel, either at weekends or during their holiday periods, so questions on this topic can often lead to fruitful discussions.They may be particularly interested to hear comments on which places are worth visiting and why, especially if these places are a little less well known and not clearly described in the tour guides.Take vacaticn and long weekends.Never let vacation time expire.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

看完上文，可知這實(shí)際上是一篇討論英語(yǔ)話題的文章。從這個(gè)角度來(lái)寫“Holidays and Outings”這個(gè)題目可謂不無(wú)新義。但是在與外國(guó)人交往時(shí)談些什么都是一個(gè)很現(xiàn)實(shí)的問(wèn)題。本文提供了這一范例。全篇也圍這個(gè)問(wèn)題來(lái)寫，幾乎每句話都是緊扣中心的。比如它始終突出了這是一個(gè)話題，就反復(fù)用“ask”、“discuss”、以及“comment”等詞。

【要求】

在一次主題為“電腦時(shí)代”的學(xué)校征文活動(dòng)中，你計(jì)劃以“The Computer”為題寫一篇文章參加評(píng)選，你的輔導(dǎo)老師幫助你制訂了一個(gè)寫作綱要，如下：

計(jì)算機(jī)正廣泛被用于各行各業(yè)。

在過(guò)去的五十年中，計(jì)算機(jī)得到了迅猛的發(fā)展。

計(jì)算機(jī)最終還是由人來(lái)設(shè)計(jì)和控制。

【范文】 The Computer

The computer is widely used in all phases of society.In industry, business, education, medicine, nearly all walks of life, computers have made their appearance, providing great speed and accuracy for our work.Computers have been used in the home, offices, laboratories and research institutions, functioning as the most efficient and versatile instruments for calculating, sorting, filing, recording and distributing.Computers are indispensable to modern civilization.Without computers, our life and our society will undoubtedly suffer a big regression.During the past five decades the computer has been rapidly advanced.Ever since the computer came into being, it has experienced the development of several generations, which are based respectively on vacuum tube, transistor and integrated circuit.Early computers were of great size, and had no match for the latest electronic computers in speed and accuracy.The Latter is capable of processing the most complicated information and reaching solution to problems in a fraction of time.At present, efforts are being made not only to bring the hardware to perfection, but also to improve the quality of the software.作文的內(nèi)容千變?nèi)f化，這就要求我們豐富自己的知識(shí)，特別是各行業(yè)的最新動(dòng)態(tài)。只有這樣，才能自如地處理各種題材和內(nèi)容。

Computers must be instructed and programmed by people.In spite of the remarkable skill of the computer, men can never become its slave.Computers are not creative.They work according to men's instructions.So the development of computers and their use will depend upon the ingenuity of men.Although there are times when computers seem to operate like a mechanical “brain”,their achievements are not comparable to what the minds of men are able to do.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

全文按照題目所給主題共分三段，以說(shuō)明為主，第三段具有議論性質(zhì)。本文層次清楚，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，句與句之間聯(lián)系緊密。該文題材涉及當(dāng)今熱門話題，許多與電腦有關(guān)的詞匯和表達(dá)法對(duì)同學(xué)們有參考價(jià)值。

題目：計(jì)算機(jī)是現(xiàn)代科學(xué)技術(shù)最杰出的成果之一，它無(wú)處不在，與我們生活的各個(gè)領(lǐng)域息息相關(guān)。

請(qǐng)以“Computers”為題，寫一篇100個(gè)單詞左右的英語(yǔ)小短文。

要求寫出計(jì)算機(jī)的具體用途和人們對(duì)于計(jì)算機(jī)應(yīng)用的態(tài)度。

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Computers

One of the greatest advancements in modern technology has been the invention of computers.Computers are changing the way people live and work.They are already widely used in industry, business and in academic institutions.With the popularization of science and technology, computers have found an increasingly wide application in all fields.A computer can do a lot of work.It is capable of doing extremely complicated work in all fields of learning.It can solve the most complex mathematics problems.Computers are able to store large amounts of information, which can be recalled rapidly at any time.The truth of the matter, however, is that any new technology has a “dark”side.The problems caused by the use of computers are quite different.For example, assembly lines will be a slow process to retain workers to build and operate new equipment.Nevertheless, the dark side of the computer shouldn't mean that we should abandon the use of computers.Technology only can make the real work cheaper, faster, and less tedious.It cannot solve problems.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文從現(xiàn)代化的技術(shù)革新角度來(lái)談?dòng)?jì)算機(jī)，然后在第二段里講到，隨著科學(xué)和技術(shù)的普遍應(yīng)用，計(jì)算機(jī)也大放光彩，具體的例舉了兩個(gè)用處。最后一段里，用“the truth of the matter”，再加“however”轉(zhuǎn)折，說(shuō)明了計(jì)算機(jī)的“dark side”，文章全面而重點(diǎn)突出?！疽蟆?/p>

世界環(huán)境日到來(lái)之際，你將代表你們班以一個(gè)污染的環(huán)境為題向全校同學(xué)發(fā)出一封倡儀書，先描述列舉環(huán)境污染對(duì)人類健康的危害，然后號(hào)召大家保護(hù)環(huán)境。

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A Polluted Environment

Environmental pollution is a serious social problem.It poses a terrible threat to men's health.The atmosphere is filthy.The air is thick with dust and burnt oil.Dark smokes are being emitted from chimneys, and choking fumes are being released from numerous vehicles.Stay a little while in a big city, then wipe your forehead with your handkerchief, it is black.Hang out your washing on the line to dry, you will have to wash again.Garbage is left to accumulate in unsanitary heaps that attract flies and give off bad smell.Nor is the pollution confined to air and land.Large quantity of sewage and chemical waste are dumped daily into rivers, lakes and the sea, which kills millions of fish.Noises coming from honking cars, rumbling machines and broadcasting loudspeakers may make a person nervous and irritable, even drive him crazy.Environmental pollution is responsible for many diseases that are disabling, or bringing death to human beings.In short, let's take good care of our mother globe, not only for the well-being of ourselves, but also for that of our future generations.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文是描寫文，以主觀描寫的方式，具體、形象地描繪了被污染的環(huán)境。文章突出強(qiáng)調(diào)了污染對(duì)人體健康有極大危害這一主題。語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練有力，句式總體上講也較簡(jiǎn)單，但有效地表達(dá)了倡議書所需的語(yǔ)氣。文章感染性強(qiáng)，特別是以祈使句作結(jié)，增強(qiáng)了本文的號(hào)召性。

【要求】

題目：“世界環(huán)保日”即將到來(lái)，你將為校廣播站寫一篇宣傳保護(hù)水資源的稿件，包含如下要點(diǎn)：

水是必不可少的。

人類面臨嚴(yán)重缺水問(wèn)題。

我們應(yīng)該怎么做。

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Conserving Water Resource

Water is indispensable to our life and the development of national economy.It is often described as the source of all living things and the lifeblood of agriculture and industry.Without it, nothing could grow and out world would become a terrible desert.The world we live in is now faced with a severe shortage of fresh water.According to some official figures, more than 1,700 million people in the world don't have enough clear water to drink and over 25 thousand people die of water related diseases daily.So, all of us should actively b save water.It's our obligation for the benefit of the future generations.每篇文章都會(huì)有自己的特色，要盡力突出自己的閃光點(diǎn)。

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

文章條理清晰，層次分明，語(yǔ)言流暢，用詞靈活不落俗套。運(yùn)用了一個(gè)比喻，使文章增色不少。

【要求】

題目：以“Preserving Our Environment”為題，寫一篇征文。要求按如下三條作為文章的提綱：

人類正在污染環(huán)境。

污染對(duì)人類的危害。

如何保護(hù)環(huán)境。

【范文】 Preserving Our Environment

Man is slowly polluting his environment.He dirties the air with waste gases;he poisons the water with chemical wastes;he damages the soil with fertilizers.Pollution does great harm to man.As we know, water, air and soil are necessary to man's survival.Polluted air, water and soil make people sick and even cause deaths.Environmental pollution is becoming one of the most serious problems that mankind faces.Now it's high time drastic action was taken.First, we should make the public aware of the dangers caused by pollution.Second, we should take pollution control measures to reduce pollution.Third, we should keep our pollution under control.After all, the earth is our home.We must take care of it for ourselves and our descendants.Never miss deadlines.Never.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

層次分明，條理清晰，是這篇文章一大優(yōu)點(diǎn)。每段圍繞一個(gè)中心，主題明確?！癴irst, second, third, after all”是提示層次的常用詞匯。

【要求】

隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，大城市中的高樓越建越多，道路越修越寬，但樹(shù)木卻越來(lái)越少。以國(guó)慶五十周年為契機(jī)，國(guó)家號(hào)召各大城市努力整頓市容，拆除違章建筑，增加綠化面積。這無(wú)疑是個(gè)造福子孫的明智之舉。請(qǐng)你以下面三句話分別作為三段段首主題句，以綠化我們的城市為題，寫一篇文章。

With industries and business developing quickly, the number of trees in many big cities has dramatically reduced.Making cities greener has many advantages.Making our cities greener requires nationwide efforts.【范文】

Make Our Cities Green

With industries and business developing quickly, the number of trees in many big cities has dramatically reduces.Efforts are being made to prevent people from cutting more trees.But a lot of trees are being destroyed by people who have never thought of the importance of green plants.Making cities greener has many advantages.First, it can make our air cleaner.Some researchers have proved that trees can reduce the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere through absorption.Second, it can make our cities more beautiful.With trees and flowers everywhere, living conditions can be improved.Finally, it can produce timber----an effective way to solve the problems of limited supply of natural resources.Making our cities greener requires nationwide efforts.People in every field should not only know about the importance of keeping the quality of urban environment, but also take common action to plant more trees and flowers so as to improve our living conditions.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文按照題目所給的三個(gè)主題句分三段展開(kāi)論述：論點(diǎn)突出，論據(jù)充分，層次分明。語(yǔ)言連貫流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。

【要求】

要求：近年來(lái)，水污染現(xiàn)狀越來(lái)越令人擔(dān)憂。針對(duì)此，各種防污治污工程也相繼展開(kāi)，盡管水在人們生活中的地位無(wú)可替代，但人們卻視而不見(jiàn)，尤其是污染根源——排污的工廠企業(yè)。請(qǐng)你對(duì)水污染情況作一分析。

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Water Pollution

Water is recognized as the source of life.However, this source is in trouble and we are faced with the problem of water pollution.Polluted water carries poisonous chemicals to rivers and seas, poisoning animals and infecting our drinking water.Water is mainly polluted by industrial wastes.For example, water coming from the paper----making factories will pollute the clean water near the factories.The quality of water directly influences our health, and water resources are limited on earth.So, effective measures should be taken immediately to secure our life.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文開(kāi)篇開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，在起首段直接引出論題，使人一下子抓住文章的重要思想，然后層層展開(kāi)論述，條理清楚，使人對(duì)水污染的危害及其產(chǎn)生原因有了一個(gè)大致的了解。

追根溯源，會(huì)讓你的見(jiàn)解更深刻。

【要求】

題目：機(jī)會(huì)（opportunity），機(jī)會(huì)，對(duì)每個(gè)人的成才都很重要，不同的人對(duì)機(jī)會(huì)有著不同的看法。在人的一生中，你會(huì)面臨許多機(jī)會(huì)，也會(huì)錯(cuò)過(guò)很多機(jī)會(huì)。那么你是怎樣看待機(jī)會(huì)的呢？請(qǐng)寫一篇短文談?wù)勀銓?duì)機(jī)會(huì)的看法。

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Opportunity

Some people regard opportunity as the most important part of their life.It's the way to success.So when they see their friends succeed, they will complain that they are not lucky enough to have the opportunity.But other people think that opportunity is sheer luck, with their hard work, knowledge and skill, opportunity will be waiting for them everywhere.Although the attitudes towards opportunity are different, opportunity is important indeed, and no one should neglect.It can make a person successful.We should grasp every valuable opportunity and make good use of it, otherwise nothing can be left with us but regret and disappointment.But I think it is not opportunity itself that decides a person's success or failure.It is fair to every person, I think.To grasp the opportunity, we need knowledge, skill and experience.In a word, opportunity is important but not decisive.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文層層推進(jìn)，首先列舉兩種對(duì)立的觀點(diǎn)，然后闡述機(jī)會(huì)的重要性，最后以自己的觀點(diǎn)結(jié)束全文。文章很有深度。從語(yǔ)言上講，說(shuō)理透徹，也很生動(dòng)，避免了題目一大就空的毛病。此外，文章在邏輯上嚴(yán)密，觀點(diǎn)不偏不倚，不失為一佳作。

【要求】

請(qǐng)寫一篇文章談?wù)勗缙饘?duì)我們的好處。

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Early Rising

Early rising is beneficial to us in more than one way.First, it helps to keep us fit.We all need fresh air.But air is never so fresh as early in the morning.Besides, it improves our health to take morning exercises.Second, early rising helps us in our studies.In the morning we learn more quickly and find it easier to memorize what we learn.Get into the office.Never be late.Third, early rising enables us to plan our work for the day.we cannot work well without a proper plan.Just as the plan for the year should be made in the spring, so the plan for the day should be made in the morning.Fourth, early rising gives us enough time to get ready for our work, such as to wash our handsome faces and eat our breakfast properly.Late risers may find it very difficult to cultivate the habit of early rising.They ought to make a special effort to do so.As the English proverb says, “Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文層次清楚，分別用“first, second, third , fourth”引出早起的四個(gè)好處，表達(dá)清楚。末段的諺語(yǔ)用得較恰當(dāng)，對(duì)全文主題作了很好的概括。

【要求】

要求：人的生活難免會(huì)遇到挫折和痛苦。當(dāng)生活對(duì)你收斂起笑容時(shí)，你該以什么樣的態(tài)度回報(bào)生活呢？請(qǐng)以Escape for a While為題，寫一篇80字左右的文章，包括以下要點(diǎn)：

當(dāng)你在生活中遇到困難時(shí)，暫時(shí)的回避往往會(huì)有所裨益。

如果你不能身體力行地從煩惱中暫時(shí)解脫出來(lái)，精神上的“想像回避法”也不失為一種很好的方法。

暫時(shí)地回避困難并不等于逃避現(xiàn)實(shí)，其目的是為了最終解決困難。

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Escape for a While

When things go wrong, it is often helpful to get away from the problem for a while.At school, you can go out for a walk or go to watch a movie.If you can't physically get away from your problem, try an imaginary escape.Even a few minutes in your imaginary retreat can refresh you.In that way, you can come back and deal with your problem when you are in better mood.迂回是一種策略。寫作也是一樣，正面無(wú)法表達(dá)的，試試側(cè)面描述，或者反面對(duì)照？

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文層次清楚，舉例恰當(dāng)，句型運(yùn)用靈活自如，“go wrong”、“get away from”、“deal with”等短語(yǔ)恰如其分，起到了畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。

【要求】

要求：目前社會(huì)上有不少假冒偽劣產(chǎn)品（fake commodities），請(qǐng)用100字左右論述為什么會(huì)有這種現(xiàn)象，并舉例說(shuō)明假冒偽劣商品對(duì)消費(fèi)者個(gè)人、社會(huì)等的危害。

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The Danger of Fake Commodities

Today, fake commodities are quite common.In order to get high profits, some factories and companies produce fake commodities.Another cause of this phenomenon is that laws are not strict enough.Fake Commodities can bring about great loss to both state and private property.A case in point is that if a consumer buys some fake medicine, he will inevitably suffer much pain.The fake medicine may even cost him his life.So every one of us has the duty to fight against fake commodities for our society and for ourselves.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文短語(yǔ)的使用恰到好處，便文章既不枯燥乏味又無(wú)畫蛇添足的累贅感。

【要求】

要求：社會(huì)上假貨很多，它對(duì)人民生活造成不良影響，請(qǐng)就假貨的危害及針對(duì)假貨應(yīng)采取什么措施，談一談你的看法。字?jǐn)?shù)100-150。

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My View on Fake Commodities

Nowadays, more and more fake commodities appear on the market ,a problem which has attracted a lot of attention.Fake commodities are very harmful to consumers.There are different types, ranging from food and clothes to radios, and TV sets.Even some medicines are fake too, which has caused a lot of trouble.In addition, fake commodities have affected the manufacturers, too.Those who have fallen victim to fake commodities will never buy them again.There are many ways to get rid of fake commodities.First, laws should be passed to punish those who produce fake commodities.Second, people should be educated to tell the original from the fake.They shouldn't buy something just because the advertisements tell them to do so.In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of fake commodities and fight a battle against them.Only in this way can fake commodities be driven out of our daily life completely in the future.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

語(yǔ)言流暢，觀點(diǎn)鮮明，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。

要求】

要求：產(chǎn)品的質(zhì)量問(wèn)題關(guān)系到國(guó)計(jì)民生，是廣大商家和消費(fèi)者矚目的焦點(diǎn)。然而，在某些地區(qū)劣制商品充斥市場(chǎng)，嚴(yán)重影響了生產(chǎn)和生活。請(qǐng)以The Quality of Products為題，寫一篇80字左右的文章，包括如下要點(diǎn)：

隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，產(chǎn)品的豐富，劣質(zhì)產(chǎn)品也越來(lái)越多，許多劣質(zhì)商品流入市場(chǎng)。

劣質(zhì)商品極大地?fù)p害了生產(chǎn)者和消費(fèi)者的利益。

應(yīng)采取有效措施保證商品質(zhì)量。

【范文】

The quality of products

With the development of our economy, we can see more and more things produced.But a the same time ,many poor quality goods are pouring into the market.They do a great deal of harm to the producer and the customer as well.We should take effective measures to ensure products of good quality.Everyone should pay attention to the quality of products, for it is closely related to our daily life.多讀多背，才能保證你的語(yǔ)言流暢平易。

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文語(yǔ)言流暢，觀點(diǎn)明確，涉及并闡述了要求中的所有要點(diǎn)，是一篇優(yōu)秀的的應(yīng)試作文。

【要求】

請(qǐng)以“獨(dú)生子女家庭”為題，寫一篇100字左右的文章。具體內(nèi)容如下：

在中國(guó)，大多數(shù)人開(kāi)始認(rèn)為，只有一個(gè)孩子的家庭要比有幾個(gè)孩子的家庭好。

計(jì)劃生育的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：控制人口增長(zhǎng)；家長(zhǎng)有更多的時(shí)間關(guān)心自己孩子的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。

因此出現(xiàn)了越來(lái)越多的獨(dú)生子女家庭。但有人說(shuō)獨(dú)生子女家庭將來(lái)可能會(huì)造成社會(huì)問(wèn)題。例如：孩子會(huì)覺(jué)得孤單，有時(shí)會(huì)被家長(zhǎng)寵壞（be spoiled）。

比較兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，我們能看出獨(dú)生子女家庭有更多的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。它對(duì)個(gè)人和國(guó)家都有好處。

【范文】

The One-Child Family

In China, most people have begun to think that a family with only one child is better than the one with many children.Family planning tends to control population growth.Besides, parents have much more time to look after their child.So there are more and more one-child families.But some people say that the one-child family may result in some social problems in the future.For instance, the child will feel lonely and sometimes be spoiled by their parents.Compared with the different view, we can see that the one-child family has more advantages.It benefits people as well as our country as a whole.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文緊扣內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)句通順，承接轉(zhuǎn)換比較自然。用詞規(guī)范，短語(yǔ)的靈活運(yùn)用更為文章增色不少。不足之處是句式單調(diào)，缺少變化，行文也不夠簡(jiǎn)潔，但總體上還是達(dá)到了題目的要求?！疽蟆?/p>

按以下線索完成一篇100字左右的短文，以“Is it Good to Have a Small Family? ”為題，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?/p>

有些人認(rèn)為孩子多些好（說(shuō)明可能的原因）。

有些人認(rèn)為孩子少些好（說(shuō)明可能的原因）。

你對(duì)此問(wèn)題的看法。

【范文】

Is It Good to Have a Small Family?

Influenced by traditional ideas, some people still think it's better to have a big family.They think the more children they have the better life they will live when they grow old.Most people now, however, only want to have one child.They think they can give the child better food and better education.And they themselves want to have more time to work ,to learn and to play.In my opinion, it's enough for a family to have one child, not only for the sake of the child and the parents, but also for the benefit of the country and the world.As we know, people in the world are becoming more and more.If we don't exercise birth control, some day the earth will be too crowded for people to live on.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

這是一篇自由討論的議論文，因此第三點(diǎn)應(yīng)占更多的篇幅。本文可用我們較為熟悉的寫法，分為三段，每段先寫主題句。第二點(diǎn)和第三點(diǎn)如觀點(diǎn)一致，我們說(shuō)明原因時(shí)，應(yīng)從不同角度來(lái)談，如第二段可從個(gè)人經(jīng)濟(jì)上著筆，第三段則從國(guó)策上著筆。

分析利弊的文章，重在比較，一定要把自己的觀點(diǎn)，從論證中體現(xiàn)出來(lái)。

【要求】

當(dāng)今世界面臨人口爆炸的危險(xiǎn)，而中國(guó)的人口問(wèn)題顯得尤為緊迫。在這種情況下，控制人口無(wú)疑成為中國(guó)的一項(xiàng)基本國(guó)策。請(qǐng)你圍繞人口問(wèn)題寫一篇文章，以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句：

Mankind is feeling greater pressure from the expanding number of people.Birth control should be a basic policy in our country.There are disadvantages of a family having more children.【范文】

Population and Birth Control

Mankind is feeling greater pressure from the expanding number of people.The earth can never be expanded.Nor are there endless sources of food and clothing.Yet people are being born faster than they die.In the next forty years, the world population may double.How can so many people be fed? What is worse, there is danger that someday mankind will have only standing room.Birth control should be a basic policy in our country.China has the biggest population in the world.With a high birth rate, the production of grains and goods will be unable to meet the need of the people.To raise people's living standard, we must practice birth control.注意平時(shí)的積累，學(xué)會(huì)多角度思維，有助于深入透徹地寫好這類文章。

There are disadvantages of a family having more children.First of all, as the parents have only limited income in general, they cannot give their children a good breeding in food , clothing and shelter, let alone education.Second , child rearing will exhaust the parents, leaving them no time and energy for their work.Last, having more children will increase the burden of the society.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文分三段論述了人口問(wèn)題。首先從土地面積、衣、食以及出生率等方面論證了當(dāng)今世界人口爆炸的嚴(yán)重性。接著，文章從我國(guó)人口數(shù)量大、人均耕地面積小、谷物增長(zhǎng)速度相對(duì)緩慢的國(guó)情入手，闡明控制人口是我國(guó)的一項(xiàng)基本國(guó)策。最后，文章舉出事例說(shuō)明一個(gè)家庭多子女的不利之處。全文條理清楚，行文簡(jiǎn)練流暢。人口問(wèn)題是目前比較熱門的話題之一，本文中一些有關(guān)的表達(dá)方法，值得同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)掌握。

【要求】

要求：請(qǐng)您根據(jù)下面的提綱寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，內(nèi)容涵蓋下列要點(diǎn)：

世界人口增長(zhǎng)迅速。

有許多問(wèn)題是由于人口過(guò)多造成的。

解決人口問(wèn)題的一些辦法。

【范文】

The problem of Human population

The world's population keeps growing at rapid speed.It's reported that by the next century, the world's population will reach 7,000 million.There are many problems related to population explosion, such as food shortage, housing problem and so on.If we can't solve the problem one day, our survival will be affected.Birth control, as we know, is for sure a way out.Besides, rational population distribution may also work.數(shù)字從何而來(lái)？這是廣種薄收的成果。臨淵羨魚不如退而結(jié)網(wǎng)。

【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

文章開(kāi)端并非老生常談地說(shuō)人口問(wèn)題如何嚴(yán)峻，而是采用了一個(gè)令人觸目驚心的數(shù)字，給讀者留下了深刻的印象。在這一基礎(chǔ)上，作者再進(jìn)行論述就水到渠成了。

【要求】

要求：隨著經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，中國(guó)的城市化速度越來(lái)越快，大量人口擁入城市，在促進(jìn)城市發(fā)展的同時(shí)，也帶來(lái)不少問(wèn)題，請(qǐng)你對(duì)此談一下看法。

【范文】

The Rush to Cities

With the development of economy , more and more people rush to cities.Some people rush to cities in order to look for jobs and earn more money while others want to learn new knowledge and improve the quality of their personal life.Opportunities for bright young people are greater in the cities.But there exist some problems.For example, owing to the increasing population, the housing and traffic problem are becoming more and more serious.And the rush of the country people to cities also leads to the rise in crimes.To solve these problems, the government should take effective measures to control the population and make them live orderly.Also some opportunities should be created for the country people to receive education and improve their quality of life.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文成功之處在于，行文恰當(dāng)，合理地運(yùn)用了一些成語(yǔ)、習(xí)慣用語(yǔ)和固定搭配等表達(dá)方式，使文意的表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確有力，形象生動(dòng)。

【要求】

隨著越來(lái)越多的外來(lái)人口涌入城市，城市的住房總是變得越來(lái)越緊迫。許多人提出了不同的解決辦法。你對(duì)此有什么建議嗎？請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文談一談你對(duì)解決城市住房問(wèn)題的建議。

【范文】

With the development of modern industry, more and more people are flowing into big cities.Accordingly, the housing problem in big cities is becoming more and more serious.People have offered many solutions to this problem.I think building satellite cities in the suburbs is more practical.The fresh air and beautiful scenery in the suburbs will be appealing to the city citizens, who suffer from air pollution, noises, etc.In the overcrowded city, with more people leaving the city, more space will be available for those remaining.The housing problem in big cities will thus be solved.In the meantime, I'm against the idea of utilizing the underground space to solve the problem.We can imagine how uncomfortable it will be to live under the ground , having to probe in the dark.The air there will be very stuffy, and the cost of building underground houses will be tremendous.In brief, building satellite cities can not only improve the living condition in big cities , but also provide a much better living environment.But the housing problem is very complicated.Perhaps people can hardly rely on only one way to solve the problem completely.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文首段以一句話概括了目前的問(wèn)題。而后作者在第二段提出了建造衛(wèi)星城的解決辦法，并闡述這樣做的好處。第三段作者提出了反對(duì)向地下發(fā)展住房這一解決辦法，并解釋了原因。末段，作者指出雖然建造衛(wèi)星城有諸多好處，但住房問(wèn)題非常復(fù)雜，不能依賴單一方法來(lái)解決。全文思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)分明，段落之間過(guò)渡自然。用詞準(zhǔn)確清楚。

【要求】

近年來(lái)，隨著國(guó)家交通工具的日益增多，大大小小的交通事故頻繁發(fā)生，給人民的生命財(cái)產(chǎn)帶來(lái)了重大損失。交通事故的嚴(yán)重性在什么地方？如何采取有效的方法加以解決？未來(lái)的前景到底如何？請(qǐng)發(fā)表你的看法。

【范文】

Road Accidents

In recent years, the number of road accidents has been on the rise, especially in big cities.Whenever they happen , the people involved are either injured or killed, which causes great losses both to the country and to their families.Therefore, it is necessary that we do something to reduce traffic accidents and make our life safe.There are several ways to cut down the accident rate.In the first place, the government should take measures to improve the road conditions.Secondly local authorities should educate people in every possible way to obey traffic regulations.Finally, people should be careful when crossing streets.I believe, if we do our best , we'll make our roads safe.For safety , it is very important for everyone to obey the traffic laws.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文的論述條分縷析，層次鮮明，思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)整，使人一目了然；且在復(fù)雜多變的語(yǔ)法時(shí)態(tài)方面，做到了主謂一致，時(shí)態(tài)合理，單復(fù)數(shù)搭配恰當(dāng)，杜絕了平時(shí)易犯的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。

【要求】

要求：隨著社會(huì)經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，上海作為中國(guó)的大都市，其交通狀況不太令人滿意，如不及時(shí)有效的解決，則會(huì)成為制約其發(fā)展的“瓶頸”。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)你的了解，談一下關(guān)于上海交通阻塞的情況。

【范文】

Traffic Jams in Shanghai

For the past ten years traffic jams in Shanghai have become more and more serious.There are many reasons for it but in general they come down to three main causes.First, with the rapid development of economy in Shanghai, too many traffic tools are brought into use.Next, the traffic system in Shanghai was established mainly in the 1940's.The roads are so narrow that they can't bear such heavy traffic.The final reason is that the population of Shanghai has been increasing too fast.So, it is clear that the traffic system in Shanghai must be reorganized as soon as possible.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本段第一句為主題引入句，提出上海交通阻塞的嚴(yán)重性。第二句為主題句，指出阻塞有三個(gè)主要原因。然后明確闡述原因所在。最后，作者沒(méi)有作為一個(gè)客觀者總結(jié)其原因，而是對(duì)主題加以評(píng)述，表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，以引起讀者思考。

少以旁觀者的身份表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，要多用自己的聲音說(shuō)話。

【要求】

現(xiàn)代人出行有多種交通工具可以選擇，公共汽車和自行車就是兩個(gè)最普遍的工具。有人認(rèn)為坐公共汽車上班最方便，而有人則認(rèn)為騎自行車更好。你的意見(jiàn)如何？請(qǐng)寫一篇短文表明你的意見(jiàn)和理由。

【范文】

Going to Work on Bicycle Rather than by Bus

In my opinion, bicycles, as a means of transportation, have many advantages over buses.One reason is the traffic jam.Crowded people and numerous vehicles often hold up the traffic.You can hardly afford the delay.Another reason is the difficulty in getting on a bus during rush hours.There are so many people waiting at the bus stop.You will be quite lucky if you can push your way into the bus.What happens in the bus is the third reason.Pressed by the crowded passengers, you feel very uncomfortable.A passenger standing next to you may shove his elbow in you ribs or step on your toes.It is certainly a relief when you finally get off the bus.By comparison, riding on bicycle can free you from all these troubles.It is seldom stopped by the traffic jam, thus making you active at your workplace in time.Also, it limbers up your muscles and animates your mind.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文一開(kāi)始就開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山地指明騎自行車上班更有利。接著文章分別闡明了幾個(gè)原因：第一，交通阻塞，乘車容易誤事；第二，乘車?yán)щy；第三，上車后擁擠不堪；第四，騎自行車上班的好處。寫這類文章最忌拐彎抹角，顧左右而言他。本文的一大優(yōu)點(diǎn)就是單刀直入，論據(jù)清楚，語(yǔ)言平易懂。

用細(xì)節(jié)來(lái)講道理，理直氣壯，說(shuō)服力更強(qiáng)。

【要求】

汽車自發(fā)明以來(lái)，已成為人們生活中不可缺少的一部分。請(qǐng)你以下面三句話分別作為三段段首的主題句，寫一篇關(guān)于汽車的文章。

The automobile is constantly improved.The speed of the automobile can be of great advantage in time of emergency.On the other hand, the automobile can cause damage because of the violation of driving regulations.【范文】

The Automobile

The automobile is constantly improved.Man has given his talents to full play in designing and perfecting all kinds of automobiles.Old-fashioned types are replaced by new ones, which are faster, more energy-saving.more enduring and more comfortable.The engine, the wheels, the body, the tires and the inner furnishing have all undergone much improvement.The speed of the automobile can be of great advantage in time of emergency.When a hospital receives an urgent call, its ambulance dashes to the sick or the wounded person.It carries him to the hospital before it is too late to save his life.Being informed of a crime, the police drive to the spot to subdue the criminal.When a building is on fire, the fire engine runs at a high speed to put out the fire.Life doesn't give itself to one who tires to keep all its advantage at once.On the other hand, the automobile can cause damage because of the violation of traffic regulations.It is not a rare happening that two cars collide on the motor way and the drivers get killed.It is often reported that a truck overrides a child or throws down a bicyclist.The most dreadful is the accident that a bus falls down a steep hill with all passengers falling victims to the tragedy.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】 本文根據(jù)所給的主題句展開(kāi)段落。第一段寫汽車在許多方面都得到了改進(jìn)。第二段舉例陳述了汽車在緊急時(shí)刻的作用。第三段舉例說(shuō)明了由于違章駕駛汽車所造成的危害。全篇文理通順，論據(jù)充足，語(yǔ)言明白易懂。

【要求】

根據(jù)提示，用英文寫一篇100—120字左右的短文，說(shuō)明乘飛機(jī)或火車旅行的利弊。如：乘飛機(jī)省時(shí)舒適，乘火車擁擠，不便于休息，但乘火車便宜，可觀光等等。標(biāo)題及文章的第一句已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)之內(nèi)。

Train Travel or Air Travel? Air travel has two advantages（益處）over train travel?

【范文】

Train Travel or Air Travel?

Air travel has two advantages（益處）over train travel.First, traveling by plane can save a lot of time.For example, traveling by plane can save a lot of time.For example, you can fly from Beijing to Zhuhai in two hours, but if you go by train, you have to spend more than two days.Secondly, air travel is more comfortable.The plane flies so smoothly that you can rest well during the trip, while the train is sometimes crowded.Passengers have to sit for a long time ,which makes people tired.But train travel also has its own advantages.For example, traveling by train can save over nine hundred yuan than by plane from Beijing to Zhuhai.And you can enjoy the views outside the windows of the train.So different people like different ways of traveling.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文的結(jié)構(gòu)順序用“First”、“Secondly”等標(biāo)志性詞語(yǔ)顯示出來(lái)，因而使層次顯得極為清晰。

注意控制字?jǐn)?shù)，尤其本文有特殊要求。

【要求】

要求：中國(guó)是世界上的“自行車王國(guó)”，自行車是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪凶钇毡榈慕煌üぞ撸c我們生活息息相關(guān)，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，介紹一下中國(guó)的自行車狀況。

【范文】

Bicycles in Our Everyday life

Bicycles are the most common transportation means for Chinese people.China is known as the kingdom of bicycles.In big cities, many people ride bicycles to work.In countryside, many peasants use bicycles to send agricultural products to the market.Know what shoes to wear and keep them in proper shape.One important reason why bicycles are popu lar in China is that they are cheap, for bicycles do not need any supply of gas or oil, and consequently they do not cause any pollution.The low price makes it become the favorite trans portation tool of ordinary people , and play an important part in our everyday life.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文是一篇介紹性的說(shuō)明文。文章一開(kāi)始提出了自行車在我國(guó)所占的地位，然后分析它在不同地區(qū)發(fā)揮不同的作用。在介紹自行車流行的原因時(shí)，它重點(diǎn)介紹了價(jià)格低這個(gè)關(guān)鍵因素，使得全文重點(diǎn)突出，關(guān)系緊湊。

【要求】

按照下面要求寫一篇不超過(guò)120字的作文，題目為“Bicycle or Car”。

自行車和小汽車作為交通工具各有的特點(diǎn)。

中國(guó)人和外國(guó)人（如美國(guó)人）在選擇上的不同之處。

陳述你個(gè)人的選擇及理由。

【范文】

Bicycle or Car

Both bicycles and cars are important means of transportation.Bicycles go slowly while cars go quickly.Bicycles need only human power, but cars must be run by either gas or electricity.Bicycles can be put almost anywhere, whereas cars need garages or parking lots.Perhaps the most obvious difference is that buying a bicycle will cost you only a small amount, while owning a car will certainly consume a large sum of money.Which is better, a bicycle or a car ? Well , it all depends on your practical needs and personal income.For example, most Americans would rather have a car.But this is not the case with most Chinese.They profer a bicycle for they simply don't know what to do with a car.I, of course, prefer a bicycle.It doesn't cost me much to buy one, yet it is very convenient.What is more, it does not pollute the air.A bicycle serves me well.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

這是一篇議論文。作者首先運(yùn)用對(duì)比的寫法簡(jiǎn)述了自行車和小汽車各自的特點(diǎn)。如何看待這些特點(diǎn)，作者隨即對(duì)此進(jìn)行論述并提出了自己的看法，論證合理流暢。

It is never a disgrace to say,“ I can not afford it.”

【要求】

根據(jù)題目，按下面所給提綱寫一篇短文。

多看電視對(duì)學(xué)習(xí)、工作的副作用。

多讀書的好處。

談一下你個(gè)人的看法。

【范文】

Watch less Television----Read More Books

There is no doubt that television is a miracle of technology created by man and it gives us many useful and wonderful things.But if a student is continuously exposed to the world of TV, he will be unable to concentrate on his lessons.And he may eventually fail in his examinations.On the other hand, one can get knowledge through reading books.From books , one can learn what he doesn't know.Therefore, one can benefit a lot from reading books.Personally, I think some of the TV programs are interesting and instructive.As a student, I should devote most of my time to reading more useful books.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

這是一篇提綱式作文。對(duì)這種題型，必須先揣摩提綱，明確命題要求，然后根據(jù)提綱層層展開(kāi)論述，連段成篇，做到意義連貫、中心思想清楚。

【要求】

學(xué)校中寄宿班的同學(xué)最近提議開(kāi)設(shè)一個(gè)電視室，讓大家在課余時(shí)間有機(jī)會(huì)看一看電視。為此，校領(lǐng)導(dǎo)們進(jìn)行了認(rèn)真的討論，有的認(rèn)為，為學(xué)生們配備電視只會(huì)分散大家精力，影響學(xué)習(xí)；而有的則認(rèn)為，學(xué)生們可以通過(guò)電視加強(qiáng)與外部世界的聯(lián)系，豐富知識(shí)，同時(shí)也在緊張的學(xué)習(xí)之余獲得一定的放松。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，談一談你認(rèn)為開(kāi)設(shè)一個(gè)電視室是否有必要，為什么？

【范文】

Is a TV Lounge Necessary to Students?

As a student, I completely agree with the proposition that students should have a television lounge.A television lounge not only is necessary to those who don't know how to spend their spare time after class, but also can help solve the problem of the noise in study halls caused by the students who have no homework.Indeed, many of the students want to have a place to relax after a day of hard work.Watching TV is a good way to relax.Students can share entertainment and havesome fun while watching interesting programs.In this way the TV lounge can help keep students out of trouble during part of their free time.A TV lounge would definitely be an attractive place for students.There can be no doubt that opening a television lounge would be beneficial to both those who want to have a quiet place to study and those who want to relax after a day of hard work.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文開(kāi)門見(jiàn)山，先表明了作者對(duì)上述建議持肯定意見(jiàn)，隨后作者闡述了支持的原因。雖然原因分析得有些簡(jiǎn)單，但全文敘述連貫，表達(dá)清楚，合乎邏輯，能夠自圓其說(shuō)，很好地支持了作者的觀點(diǎn)。

Leave your classroom sometimes.It will clear your head.【要求】

針對(duì)學(xué)校許多學(xué)生都沉湎于電子游戲之現(xiàn)象，學(xué)生英語(yǔ)周刊發(fā)出了“No More Video Games”的倡議。作為該刊的編委之一，你將執(zhí)筆這份介議。提綱如下：

青少年在游戲廳花費(fèi)了太多的金錢和精力。游戲廳應(yīng)該被取締。青少年應(yīng)該在課余做一些更有意義的事。

電子游戲廳對(duì)青少年的身心健康均無(wú)益處。

所以，??

【范文】

No More Video Games

Teenagers are spending too much time and money on video arcades these days.Video games should be done away with.They are nothing but a waste of time , money and energy.Teenagers should be doing valuable things like reading, studying, and going to the concerts and the museums.Video games are bad for both the physical and mental health of the young.In video arcades, the lights are often dim and the games are noisy, which damages people's eyes and ears.In addition, a lot of money is spent by teenagers on these games.They think nothing of spending twenty or thirty yuan in an afternoon just to have the satisfaction of beating an electronic machine.What's more, playing video games does not allow people to use any of their creativity.There is also no opportunity for physical exercise, which young people are sadly lacking these days.Therefore, video arcades should be banned from cities and towns.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，分析合理，語(yǔ)言流暢。

【要求】

夏天到了，有的同學(xué)換上了尼龍面料（nylon）的夏裝，而有的同學(xué)則穿起了絲和棉等天然面料制成的衣服。英語(yǔ)老師在課堂上讓大家圍繞這兩類面料的利弊進(jìn)行討論，然后寫一篇短文對(duì)二者進(jìn)行比較，指明你喜歡哪一種，并說(shuō)出你的理由。

【范文】

A Comparison Between Two Kinds of Clothes

Clothes made of nylon have big advantages over those made of natural materials such as cotton and silk.First of all, they are more durable.That is to say, they don't wear out so quickly.Second, they are easier to wash and dry.So the wearer can spare time while washing and drying them.Besides these two advantages, clothes made of nylon are lighter, and they keep their shape longer.In spite of this ,clothes made of nylon can not match those made of natural materials in several respects.They are not quite as beautiful as silk, and as cheap as cotton.They make the wearer feel hot and sticky, therefore less comfortable than clothes made of natural materials.As each kind has its advantages, it is hard to say which I prefer.There are clothes made by mixing cotton or silk with nylon.They can make up the deficiencies of the former by acquiring the strong points of the latter.I prefer this kind of clothes.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文采用比較和對(duì)照的方式，說(shuō)明了兩類用不同材料制成的衣物的長(zhǎng)處和短處。文章先談了以尼龍制成的衣物的長(zhǎng)處——耐穿，易洗，易干，輕便，不易變形等；接著又談?wù)摿擞妹藓徒z等天然材料制成的衣物的長(zhǎng)處——美觀，柔軟，舒適等；最后寫明了作者的選擇及作出這種選擇的原因。該文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，論據(jù)充分，觀點(diǎn)明確。文章套路結(jié)構(gòu)具有代表性，值得同學(xué)們學(xué)習(xí)。

【要求】

題目：Fast Food。目前中國(guó)有兩種快餐：中式快餐和西式快餐。這兩種快餐相互競(jìng)爭(zhēng)。中國(guó)的西式快餐，興起晚但勢(shì)力強(qiáng)。麥當(dāng)勞（MacDonald），肯德基（KFC）和比薩餅（Pizza Hut）等。中式快餐更適合中國(guó)人口味，但往往管理不善。對(duì)此現(xiàn)狀，請(qǐng)寫一短文進(jìn)行說(shuō)明。

【范文】

Fast Food

There are at present two kinds of fast food in China: Chinese fast food and western fast food.There are many kinds of western fast food , such as MacDonald, KFC and Pizza Hut.Western fast food industry has a longer history and more advanced management than Chinese fast food, It is especially popular among young people.But at the same time , it also produces some negative effects on Chinese culture and tradition.Chinese fast food suits Chinese people's taste better and finds support among all age groups.But much of the Chinese fast food industry is not well managed and needs to be improved.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

注意本文題目要求，即根據(jù)所述情況寫一說(shuō)明文，所以首先不要過(guò)多地加入個(gè)人感情色彩。本篇行文簡(jiǎn)練，采用總分式寫作順序，顯得結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。同時(shí)，在分別介紹時(shí)，抓住了其主要特點(diǎn)，顯得貼切真實(shí)。

Act as if customers were God.【要求】

學(xué)?！稌r(shí)代》周刊要求一些從小處表現(xiàn)時(shí)代變化的英語(yǔ)文章。請(qǐng)你準(zhǔn)備從飲食方面闡述，內(nèi)容如下：

飲食習(xí)慣隨著時(shí)代發(fā)生變化。

在20世紀(jì)，人們的飲食習(xí)慣發(fā)生了哪些具體變化。

這些變化對(duì)社會(huì)有哪些影響。

【范文】

The Eating Patterns

Eating patterns change over time.Ingredients cannot be seen before in a country might begin to appear in local markets , shipped from abroad.Migration causes cultures to change, and eating patterns invariably reflect new influences.In the 20th century, few people have the time to go home for lunch, and many city dwellers find themselves in need of grabbing a bite to eat in a place close to their offices.As a result, the popularity of fast food and takeaway food has risen.In many urban areas, people who traditionally ate their main meal at midday now enjoy it in the evening, after work.Changing eating patterns have an effect on other aspects of society.Meals have traditionally been times when members of a family catch up with each other.Fast food and quick meals sometimes threaten such family get-together.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題是否準(zhǔn)確，是一篇文章的關(guān)鍵。一篇一百上下的短文更要盡量做到開(kāi)宗明義，其次才是層次的清晰。這篇短文在第一段里簡(jiǎn)述了“the eating patterns change”的原因。第二段里講了“change”的實(shí)際內(nèi)容。第三段則論及它的影響。觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚。

【要求】 請(qǐng)以“Haste Makes Waste”為題，寫一篇短文。

言之有理。

表達(dá)清晰。

字?jǐn)?shù)150-200字。

【范文】

Haste Makes Waste

There is an old saying,“Haste makes waste.”It was the experience of our forefathers, but it is correct in many cases even today.Usually, if you act quickly, you can reach your goals sooner.But this isn't always the case.If you emphasize only speed and ignore the quality of your work, you will have the opposite result.The hastier you are, the slower you achieve completeness and success.In short, haste makes waste.Assume that you are preparing for your final examination.There are a lot of exercises to do and many rotes to remember.The fact that you don't have enough time makes you very worried.So you read and write continuously, without rest, without sleep, without relaxation.The result is that your brain is less and less efficient and your work is slower and slower.The situation goes from bad to worse.All your efforts lead to nothing.On the contrary, if you prepare with a deliberate plan and carry out the plan step by step.Your work will be effective.Whatever you do, please remember the saying----“Haste makes waste”.If you understand and apply it in your study or work, you'll certainly benefit a lot from it.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，開(kāi)篇新穎，論證條理清楚，結(jié)論合情合理，句型有變化，用詞有特色。

Always plan your day in the morning.【要求】

隨著人們生活水平的不斷提高，越來(lái)越多的家庭養(yǎng)起的寵物。寵物為人們的生活增添了許多情趣，使人們更加親近自然，但同時(shí)，養(yǎng)寵物也帶來(lái)了不少問(wèn)題。請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文，談?wù)勶曫B(yǎng)寵物的利與弊，并表明你的觀點(diǎn)。

【范文】

Are Pets Good for People?

People's opinions about whether pets are good for people vary from person to person.Some people say that the great virtue of pets is that they can keep us company, and we all need companions to keep us happy.Often a cat or a dog can comfort us at times when human works can't help.A pet in a family keeps people in touch with the more natural animal world.Others think that keeping pets is just a waste of time and resources.And some pets can cause serious diseases.Besides, some people nowadays are so crazy about pets that they even neglect caring for others' health and public hygiene.Personally, I agree with the latter argument.It is true that pets can keep us happy, but I think , we should think of others' happiness and health.In short, pets are not good for the benefit of all people.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文內(nèi)容切題，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，邏輯性強(qiáng)。

【要求】

隨著社會(huì)的發(fā)展，學(xué)校教育的重點(diǎn)從過(guò)去的僅僅傳授書本知識(shí)轉(zhuǎn)移到了現(xiàn)在的全面素質(zhì)培養(yǎng)。而評(píng)判一個(gè)學(xué)生是否優(yōu)秀的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)也因此而發(fā)生了變化。請(qǐng)你按照下面的提示分三段寫一篇短文，對(duì)比一下今昔好學(xué)生標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的不同，并對(duì)所發(fā)生的變化發(fā)表你的看法。In the past, a “good student”referred to …

Now the criteria（標(biāo)準(zhǔn)）of a good student are changing.Generally speaking , the criteria of a good student are changing for the …(better/worse).【范文】

The Good students

In the past, a “good student”referred to one who was only good at studies.For example, in the school, what the school master cared about was how well the student did in his school subjects.It did not matter whether a student had good health or not as long as he got the top marks.At home , for another example, before leaving for school, the parents would again and again tell their children to study hard and try to get good grades.As a result, many students showed little interest in anything else.Books are good enough in their own way, but they are a mighty bloodless substitute for life.Now the criteria of a good student are changing.As society is developing ,people have now come to realize that the traditional standard of a good student is too limited.Today, in addition to being good at studies, a student is also encouraged to cultivate interests in many other things, such as sports, painting, and music.In short, by the new criteria, a good student should not only achieve good marks in academic subjects, but also have varied interests and abilities.If a man reads very hard, he will have little time for thought.Generally speaking, the criteria of a good student are changing for the better.For one thing ,the growth of one's personality depends on a variety of factors, in addition to that of academic learning.For another, the development of modern civilization requires that education should lay emphasis not only on school subjects but on the ability to solve problems as well.Therefore, this change is beneficial both to the student and to society as a whole.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文首段先概括了過(guò)去好學(xué)生的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)即是學(xué)習(xí)好。而后分別從在學(xué)校和在家中兩方面加以描述，最后末句得出結(jié)論——許多學(xué)生除了讀書以外對(duì)別的事情毫無(wú)興趣。該段層次清楚，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確到位。第二段集中闡述了變化后的好學(xué)生標(biāo)準(zhǔn)——除去學(xué)習(xí)好之外，還應(yīng)有廣泛的興趣和較高的綜合素質(zhì)。該段與首段內(nèi)容銜接較好，體現(xiàn)出了“變化”二字。最后一段作者得出結(jié)論——新的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是一種進(jìn)步，并分析了原因以支持這一結(jié)論。該段的論述也很有層次，并且分析合情合理，能夠自圓其說(shuō)。全文結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，內(nèi)容切題，觀點(diǎn)鮮明。

【要求】

隨著我國(guó)不斷地深化改革，擴(kuò)大開(kāi)放，越來(lái)越多的外商來(lái)華投資。那么外商投資對(duì)我們的經(jīng)濟(jì)建設(shè)有什么益處呢？我們又如何更好的吸引外資呢？請(qǐng)你以外商投資為題，圍繞以上兩個(gè)問(wèn)題寫一篇短文。

【范文】

Foreign Investment

Thanks to the open policy in China, more and more foreign businessmen have come to invest, building new factories, mines an other business enterprises, or enlarging and improving old ones.Foreign investment is important in that it supplements the socialist economy of our country.It has the advantage of importing foreign capital, technology, talents, advanced equipment and methods of management.Ours is a country of vast territory, abounding in natural resources and labor force.Foreign investment can help to explore the resources and labor force.Foreign investment can help to explore the resources and make use of the labor force, thus giving our strong points to play.In a word, foreign investment may improve our economy.Of course, foreign investment is of mutual benefit.The foreign businessmen can also reap profits, otherwise they would not come to invest.To attract more foreign investment, we must maintain the country's political stability to bring about a good investment environment.Meanwhile we should carry out some good policies, which makes the foreign businessmen believe that to invest in China does pay.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

文章著重說(shuō)明了外國(guó)投資對(duì)我國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)建設(shè)的意義：它是對(duì)我國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)的補(bǔ)充，能利用外國(guó)的人才和先進(jìn)技術(shù)、設(shè)備和管理方法，借此幫助發(fā)揮我國(guó)自身的優(yōu)勢(shì)。文末談到了如何更好地吸引外資。全文內(nèi)容完整，層次清楚，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔?！皌hanks to”,“in that”,“thus”,“in a word”,“otherwise”和“meanwhile”等是寫作中常用的詞匯，同學(xué)們應(yīng)有所把握。

【要求】

在二戰(zhàn)結(jié)束后半個(gè)多世紀(jì)的今天，戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)并沒(méi)有遠(yuǎn)離我們。無(wú)論是巴爾干、海灣，還是非洲的大湖地區(qū)，克什米爾??都一度成為硝煙彌漫的戰(zhàn)場(chǎng)，人民飽受戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)與地區(qū)沖突的摧殘。請(qǐng)你以戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)為題寫一篇文章，表明你對(duì)戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)的看法和立場(chǎng)。

【范文】

War

The word“war”is not unfamiliar to us.We all can form a horrible picture of war.Cities are leveled to the ground;villages are burnt down into ashes;streets are heaped with corpses in which babies struggle in the clutches of their dead mothers.It is true that war can bring about disasters in the world.Although we have been objecting to war, we never fear it.War is divided into two kinds: just war and unjust war.We are opposed to unjust war, but in favor of just war.By waging just war, the progressive force destroys the old regime and wins liberation.By waging just war, a country defends its sovereignty against aggression.We Chinese are peace-loving people, and we will never invade other countries.But, if anyone ventures to impose war on us, we will surely wage a just war to smash him.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文為議論文，中心論點(diǎn)是中國(guó)人民愛(ài)好和平，但決不懼怕戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)。文章首先描寫了戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)的恐怖，接著筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，指出我們反對(duì)戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)，但并不懼怕戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)，進(jìn)而指出戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)有正義和非正義之分，我們反對(duì)后者，支持前者。最后一部分再次強(qiáng)調(diào)主題，闡明中國(guó)人民決不侵略別人，但如果有誰(shuí)膽敢把戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)強(qiáng)加給我們，我們就用正義戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)將他摧毀。全文觀點(diǎn)鮮明，條理清晰，字里行間充滿了正義感。

We wept when we were born.Not when we die!【要求】

題目：隨著社會(huì)發(fā)展，婦女的地位提高并進(jìn)一步得到解放。請(qǐng)以“Women in the Modern World”為題，寫一篇100個(gè)單詞以上的英語(yǔ)短文，文章每段開(kāi)頭第一句話給出如下：

Women are playing an increasingly important role in society today.With the changes in their social role, women's position is the family has been improved as well.In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.【范文】

Women in the Modern World

Women are playing an increasingly important role in society today.Having repeatedly demonstrated ability in roles traditionally held by men, they are showing just how much they can contribute.No longer can it be said that women's place is only in the home raising children and keeping house.Throughout society, capable women are proving that they are valuable to their communities.With the changes in their social role, women's position is the family has improved as well.As a provider for the family, the wife no longer is obedient to her husband but, instead, exerts an influence on the children and family affairs equal to that of her husband.Moreover, the husband must now assume some of the responsibilities of maintaining a household such as cooking ,cleaning ,and other such jobs around the house.Always have an answer to the question,“What would I do if I lose my job tomorrow?”

In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.It is still difficult for women to get certain jobs like top management positions.Because some fields is dominated by men, many capable women have perhaps chosen alternative careers rather than go through the difficulty of trying to break into certain professions.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

此文屬于比較高水平的文章，結(jié)構(gòu)緊密，語(yǔ)文優(yōu)美。首先，在第一段中，用中心句提出了婦女在當(dāng)今社會(huì)里承擔(dān)了越來(lái)越重要的角色，而不再是僅僅在家庭范圍里養(yǎng)兒育女；第二段里鮮明地提出了隨著婦女地位的改變，她在家庭中的位置也有變化。用“instead”,“moreover”,來(lái)表達(dá)這種層次。緊接著，用“in spite of”,說(shuō)明了婦女的解放還很不夠，社會(huì)應(yīng)該對(duì)此抱有更大的毅力和決心。

【要求】

我們應(yīng)該提倡男女平等嗎？有人認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該提倡，因?yàn)樵S多男人能做的事女人不能去做。男人比女人做出的貢獻(xiàn)多，所以應(yīng)該享有更多的權(quán)利。你認(rèn)為呢？寫一篇80字左右的文章論述你的觀點(diǎn)。

【范文】

Equality between Men and Women

Should men and women be equal? Many said that men and women should not be equal, because there are many things men can do that could notbe done by women.Therefore men are stronger than women, and the former should have more rights than the latter.In my opinion, men and women should be equal.Nowadays many things could also be done by women.So I think that women should come out of the kitchen.That the woman was made of a rib out of the side of Adam;not out of his feet to be trampled upon by him, but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文形式活潑，整體上為設(shè)問(wèn)形式，各句之間銜接自然，觀點(diǎn)明確，是一篇較為優(yōu)秀的應(yīng)試作文。

【要求】

Women in the Modern World。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

Women is playing an increasing important part in society today.With the changes in their social role, women's position in the family has been improved as well.My opinion is…

【范文】

Women in the Modern World

Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.In many countries, more and more women are acting as workers, farmers, scientists and even leaders.Women can work perfectly well as men do.With the changes in their social role, women's position in the family has been improved as well.Husbands are not the masters of wives in many places.Husband and wife are equal now.They cope with problems of daily life together and share happiness with each other.My opinion is that the liberation of women has not been completely realized.In some places, few women are allowed to attend important international meetings, for women are allowed to attend important international meetings for women are still regarded as incapable creatures.This is really the problem we should solve.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文表達(dá)清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好?；旧详U明了婦女解放的表現(xiàn)，有總述有例證，文章顯得流暢而且恰如其分。此類給提示的作文一般要求以所給例句為段首句，然后進(jìn)行寫作，而且不要游離于段首句之意。

When the people told Joan of Arc(圣女貞德)she should be at home minding women's work, she answered there ere plenty to spin and wash.【要求】

現(xiàn)在社會(huì)上有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會(huì)帶來(lái)好運(yùn)氣，也有些人認(rèn)為數(shù)字和運(yùn)氣毫不相干。請(qǐng)寫一篇議論文，說(shuō)明你的看法。字?jǐn)?shù)在80-100字之間。

【范文】

Do“Lucky Numbers”Really Bring Good Luck?

Nowadays, some people think that “Lucky numbers” can bring them good luck.As a result, they pay quite a lot for car license plates or telephone numbers with “eight”,because this number in Chinese is pronounced“ba” which is similar to the pronunciation of the Chinese character “fa”,meaning making a fortune.However, other people believe that numbers have nothing to do with luck.They can give many examples to show that some of the people who have a car license plate or a telephone number with the so-called lucky number have not had good fortune at all.In my opinion, numbers can not determine whether we will have good luck or we will make a lot of money.Only working hard and being honest can bring us good luck.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文短語(yǔ)運(yùn)用精確，舉例恰到好處，對(duì)題目要求理解得深入透徹，既涉及到了社會(huì)上兩種人的不同態(tài)度，又鮮明地表達(dá)了自己的觀點(diǎn)，是一篇非常切題的文章。

Life doesn't give itself to one who tries to keep all its advantages at once.【要求】

任何事物的發(fā)展都有兩面性——好的和壞的?，F(xiàn)代工業(yè)的興起，一方面改善了人們的生活條件，另一方面卻危害了人們的生活環(huán)境。請(qǐng)你對(duì)此發(fā)表一下你的看法。

【范文】

Modern Industry

Modern industry has changed our way of life.In the past, we traveled form one place to another either on foot or on a horse's back, but now we go by bus, train or plane.When I play with my cat, who knows whether I do not make her more sport than she makes me? Modern industry also has seriously polluted our surroundings.Cars add much waste to the air that is already polluted by power and chemical plants.These problems, however, can be solved through further industrial development.For example, we can use electricity and solar energy instead of coal.We believe a more advanced industry will certainly be more capable of taking care of its waste.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文成功地運(yùn)用了例證的論述方法。每段第一句無(wú)疑是主題句，在其后緊跟一個(gè)使子進(jìn)行解釋補(bǔ)充，一方面使文章敘議結(jié)合，另一方面增加了論點(diǎn)的說(shuō)服力，使論證更加有效有力。

要求】

人類社會(huì)的發(fā)展與科學(xué)技術(shù)的進(jìn)步是密不可分的。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的提綱寫篇短文，談一談科技在現(xiàn)代生活中的作用。

【范文】

Technology

Human life can not continue without science and technology.For many years, human society has developed with the advance of science and technology has in turn brought the process to mankind.Because of this, the life we are living now is more civilized than that of our forefather's.The development of science and technology has brought about many changes in people's lives.For instance, the invention of television and the space rocket has opened a new era for mankind.Through the use of TV people can hear the sound and learn of the events, which actually are thousands of miles away.Owing to the invention of spaceship and rocket, the dream of men's

landing on the moon, which was impossible several decades ago, has now come true.Especially in technical and scientific fields, so much new information is being addedto our present knowledge that people in technicalfields must study constantly to keep up with new developments.Science and technology also play an important role in our socialist construction.To realize the four-modernization, we need to accelerate the development of science and technology.It is hard to imagine that the modernization of industry, agriculture and national defense of our country can be realized without the application of modern science and technology.We may say, our socialist construction is just like a skyscraper, while science and technology are its base.Without the base, the skyscraper can't be built.Therefore we should all try our best to contribute, however small, to the development of science and technology so as to provide a more solid base on which we build our country.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文緊緊圍繞提綱展開(kāi)論述，思路清晰，行文流暢，邏輯性強(qiáng)。詞語(yǔ)搭配恰當(dāng)，符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。許多短語(yǔ)和動(dòng)詞的用法值得大家學(xué)習(xí)。

【要求】

科技的發(fā)展給人們的生活帶來(lái)了天翻地覆的變化。沒(méi)有科學(xué)和技術(shù)，人類的生活就無(wú)法維持。請(qǐng)寫一篇100字左右的英文短文，說(shuō)明科技在現(xiàn)代生活中的重要作用。

【范文】

The Place of Science and Technology in Modern Life

Human beings can not survive without science and technology.For many years, human society has developed with the advance of science and technology while the development of science and technology has in turn brought progress to human beings.It is we known that the development of science and technology has brought about many changes in people's life, And owing to the invention of the spaceship and the rocket, the dream of landing on the moon has come true.TV ＆ the Internet keep people informed of current events and developments in very field.Science and technology also play an important role in our socialist construction and they can be considered its base.Therefore we should try our best to contribute to the development of science and technology so as to make a more solid base for socialist construction.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文第一段概括論述科技的重要地位，第二、三兩段分別從生活和建設(shè)兩方面具體論述。段落內(nèi)部各句之間也呈現(xiàn)總分關(guān)系，總體結(jié)構(gòu)一目了然。

【要求】

在市組織的一個(gè)反映兩個(gè)世紀(jì)變化的學(xué)科報(bào)告會(huì)上，你應(yīng)邀用英文做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短的主題通訊，內(nèi)容如下：

如果歷史重復(fù)它自己，人們相信自動(dòng)化仍然會(huì)改變?nèi)藗兊纳睢?/p>

在信息社會(huì)中，工人們會(huì)把他們的注意力放置在信息的服務(wù)上。

以一個(gè)有趣的但不無(wú)道理的反問(wèn)句結(jié)尾。

【范文】

Automation Changed The society

The trend in today's offices and factories is paralleling that of the farm 200 years ago.If history repeats itself----and most experts believe it will----automation will continue to reduce the number of workers needed to accomplish unskilled and semiskilled tasks.Automation will also provide workers with valuable information that will help them better do their jobs.In the information society, workers will focus their energies on providing a myriad of information services.Today it is a bit difficult to imagine a society that may become desperately dependent on certain information services.But let's put this concern in its proper perspective.Can you imagine our nineteenth century forefathers becoming as desperately dependent on the speed of air travel or hair dryers as we are? Who among us would give up our hair dryer!【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文體現(xiàn)了學(xué)術(shù)報(bào)告文章的嚴(yán)肅性，里面有很多漂亮而規(guī)范的句子，比如：“put this concern in its proper perspective”,“If history repeats itself”。結(jié)尾的幽默手法也很符合英語(yǔ)習(xí)慣。

Be the first to use technology-don's fight it.【要求】

廣告已經(jīng)滲透到社會(huì)各個(gè)角落，潛移默化地影響著人們的生活。學(xué)校英語(yǔ)電臺(tái)的社會(huì)生活欄目約你圍繞廣告這個(gè)主題，寫一篇廣播稿。為此，編輯為你提供了三個(gè)主題句，要求你把它們分別作為每一段的開(kāi)篇句。

Advertisements and commercials appear everywhere in modern society.In order to attract more customers, advertisers will go to extremes.Although advertisements and commercials enable you to make decisions quickly, sometimes they cause a lot of trouble.【范文】

Advertisements and Commercials

Advertisements and commercials appear everywhere in modern society.Nowhere can you fail to see them.Driving on the highway, you see huge advertising signs by the roadside.When a truck passes by, you see advertisements on it.Newspapers and magazines set aside much room for advertisements.The radio waves reach for and wide, broadcasting commercials to people, while televisions make commercials vivid and visible.You might even think you are almost drowned in advertisements and commercials.Learn how to give first-sate presentations so that the message you're trying to deliver is the same one the audience receives.In order to attract more customers, advertisers will go to extremes.They do their utmost to appeal to people's five senses.Apart from the old trick of using images of beautiful girls,they also get movie stars and famous athletes in their commercials.They take pains to bring into full play the effect of light, sound, color, film and performance.The most noticeable thingis the terms of propaganda, extolling a certain commodity as ranking first among equals or being a winner of a prize or golden medal.Give presentation that tell stories, not just provide data.Although advertisements and commercials enable you to make decisions quickly, sometimes they cause a lot of trouble.For example, television programs are frequently interrupted by commercials ruin good movies and exciting television shows, which may make the audience's patience wear off and drive them crazy.Newspapers and magazines set aside valuables paces forads, which could otherwise be used for carrying more useful boastful and showy style of the propaganda which often makes people doubt whether the commodity is really good.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文圍繞主題句分為三段。首段舉出事實(shí)證實(shí)當(dāng)代社會(huì)廣告無(wú)處不在，有鋪天蓋地之勢(shì)。第二段寫商家為吸引顧客不擇手段。末段寫廣告在日常生活中也可給人還來(lái)麻煩。三段內(nèi)容緊緊圍繞主題句，論據(jù)充分，語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)，句式富于變化，行文流暢易懂。

【要求】

形形色色的廣告，如今成了人們生活中不可或缺的點(diǎn)綴。請(qǐng)以“Advertisement”為題，寫一篇大既100個(gè)單詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，說(shuō)明廣告的功能，廣告的弊病。每段的第一句已給出：

Advertisement appear everywhere in modern society.In order to attract more customers, advertisements will sometimes go to extremes.Although advertisements enable you to make decisions quickly.【范文】

Advertisement

Advertisement appears everywhere in modern society.When you walk along the streets, you can see large boards with pretty girl smiling at you.You read newspapers, and see half of the pages covered with ads.You turn on TV, and see commercial advertisement again.Whether you like it or not, advertisements fill into your life.In order to attrract more customers, advertisements will sometimes go to extremes.Advertisers adopt every possible simulation in producing their announcements.For instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will employ an actor to sit at a table and devour their seemingly delicious food product while they film him.Later this ad will be seen on TV.Although advertisements enable you to make decisions quickly.Sometimes they can cause lots of trouble.There are always many of them and they make you forget what you are sitting there for.My advice is that only believe your eyes.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

該文從廣告的廣泛用途開(kāi)始說(shuō)起，先在第一段里說(shuō)明了廣告在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)里的無(wú)處不在。在第二段里，寫廣告商為了效果，打出各種奇招。最后一段，又提醒大家，廣告只能用為參考。該文結(jié)構(gòu)緊密而全面?！癮lthough”,“in order to”,有效地連接了上下文。

【要求】

校刊決定舉辦一次關(guān)于“學(xué)習(xí)與課外活動(dòng)”的征文，要求如下：

有人認(rèn)為在大學(xué)里應(yīng)該多參加一些社團(tuán)活動(dòng)，這比功課重要。

有人認(rèn)為在學(xué)校里主要的任務(wù)是學(xué)習(xí)，不愿參加課外活動(dòng)。

以上2種看法你贊成哪一種，說(shuō)明你的原因。

【范文】

Finding your Talent

I prefer the type of student who spends more time on his studies because I recognize that a person cannot be good at everything and that he must specialize.An old English saying----Jack of all trades but master of none.I now realize that I was not an unfortunate child in preferring reading to football.I should, in fact, have been given more time in the library.I have no sense when I take part in the activities such as clubs and sports.I find my favorite in studying.So I am willing to stay in library.I think everyone has his own talent in certain things.So I also support the students who like to play football of other things more than study.Talent is a sense “God

given”,I think everyone should find it and follow it.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

角度新穎。從“每個(gè)人都有自己的天分”入手，既表明了自己的立場(chǎng)，又論及了其它。論證合理明析，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句式完整。

These roses under the window make no reference to former roses or to better ones;they are what they are.【要求】

We Learn More Outside the Classroom。根據(jù)你的個(gè)人角度，談?wù)勀銓?duì)課堂內(nèi)、課堂外的知識(shí)與實(shí)踐的看法。

【范文】

We Learn more Outside the Classroom

I believe we learn more outside the classroom than we do inside.When we are talking with friends, listening to radio or watching TV, or reading a book which we love but is not required by our teachers, we are learning something that may be very important for our future life.In class, we can only learn how to learn.Just as the old saying go, we can not learn how to plant vegetables or how to make clothes just inside a classroom with its rows of desks and chairs and a blackboard.We have to practice what we learn outside of the classroom.We should not confine ourselves to the classroom.We should go out of the classroom, see the world and talk to others as much as we can.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文沒(méi)有羅列事例進(jìn)行長(zhǎng)篇累述，從日常生活小情節(jié)入手，以事實(shí)說(shuō)明，在今天這個(gè)社會(huì)里，學(xué)知識(shí)渠道的多樣性，讓人可以信服。作文并非文字堆砌，而在于說(shuō)明道理，力求客觀真實(shí)。

Life has taught me to think, but thinking has not taught me to live.【要求】

假期將至，學(xué)生會(huì)組織了一系列社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，但報(bào)名者并不踴躍。許多同學(xué)認(rèn)為社會(huì)實(shí)踐沒(méi)有用處，寧愿利用暑期時(shí)間參加一些輔導(dǎo)班或提前預(yù)習(xí)下學(xué)期的功課。針對(duì)這一想法，學(xué)生會(huì)的英語(yǔ)刊物《學(xué)生周報(bào)》決定印發(fā)一期簡(jiǎn)訊，糾正大家的錯(cuò)誤認(rèn)識(shí)。文章由你來(lái)執(zhí)筆。大家經(jīng)過(guò)討論，認(rèn)為應(yīng)從下面三個(gè)方面入手：

學(xué)生往往對(duì)社會(huì)實(shí)踐缺乏認(rèn)識(shí)。

社會(huì)實(shí)踐是學(xué)校教育的一個(gè)重要。

組成部分，對(duì)課堂教學(xué)具有有益的補(bǔ)充作用。

參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐的好處。

【范文】

Social Practice in Education

Most of the college students think that social practice is not important, they only consider their study as the

most important thing.So they do well in class, but pay no attention to social practice.Some students don't participate in any social practice at all.Therefore, they have little knowledge about society.In fact, social practice should become organic component of school education.The knowledge we obtain in class is from the books and it is limited.So it is essential for the students to participate in social practice in order to learn things that they can't get in class.In this sense, social practice is an important part of school education because it is a valuable supplement to classroom teaching.Participation in social practice does a lot of good to us.We can apply the knowledge we obtain from our textbooks to the solution of practical problems.By doing so, we can get more experience.Furthermore, participation in social practice can help the students have more knowledge about our society and our country.They will take correct attitudes towards their studies.And the teachers needn't always urge the students to work hard.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文緊緊扣住了題目所給的要點(diǎn)，每一段的論點(diǎn)和論據(jù)都緊密相關(guān)，結(jié)構(gòu)也較緊湊。文章的重點(diǎn)應(yīng)放在社會(huì)實(shí)踐的益處上，因此作者在此用了較多的筆墨，詳略得當(dāng)。文章語(yǔ)文流暢，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。

【要求】

新學(xué)年開(kāi)始之際，學(xué)校英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部需要招收新成員。作為俱樂(lè)部的宣傳委員，你要負(fù)責(zé)以英語(yǔ)寫一張招新告示，從以下三個(gè)方面談一談學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)的重要性。

學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)在當(dāng)前具有很大的重要性。

在中國(guó)，人們學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)的熱情空前高漲。

要掌握一門外語(yǔ)需要艱苦的努力。

【范文】 Foreign Language Learning

Learning foreign language is of great significance today.The mastery of foreign languages enables us to communicate with people of other countries, achieve mutual understanding and further our trading contact, economic cooperation, and cultural and academic exchange with other countries.By means of foreign languages, we read foreign books, documents and data in original, draw new ideas and fresh thoughts, and introduce advanced science and technology into our country.So foreign languages are playing an important role in our efforts to enlarge China's influence and make greater contribution to mankind.To learn a foreign language can be fun.There is great popular interest in foreign languages learning in our country.More and more people start to learn foreign languages.Every where we can see people reading aloud English and listening to a tape-recorder.And there are English corners an clubs where language learners seize the chance to practise speaking.To satisfy people's need, many foreign textbooks and references have been introduced into our country.Equally remarkable are foreign language programs on TV that attract a large audience.The mastery of foreign language needs painstaking efforts.One can never have a good command of it overnight.On the contrary, he has to spend enough time an take great pains before he can make real progress.It is not unusual that in the face of difficulties, a person gets so frustrated as to give in.But where there is a will, there is a way.So long as you persevere in your learning and practise hard, you will surely bring your study to fruition.No pains, no gains.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文從題目所給的三個(gè)方面進(jìn)行論述。首段用了“communicate, achieve, further?”等一系列動(dòng)詞列舉了學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)的重大意義。第二段則舉出若干例證證實(shí)了中國(guó)出現(xiàn)的外語(yǔ)熱。末段用了“有志者事競(jìng)成”這一格言，指出只要堅(jiān)持不懈，必然會(huì)學(xué)有所成。全文層次分明，語(yǔ)氣客觀，用詞嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。

第二篇：英語(yǔ)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)

新東方英語(yǔ)手機(jī)報(bào)——大千世界觸“手”可及，精彩英語(yǔ)盡在“掌”握！

錢琦來(lái)自哈工大附中，2011年她以118分的高分成為哈市中考語(yǔ)文第一名，她的語(yǔ)文作文得了50分的滿分。作為本次名師公益大講堂的嘉賓，錢琦告訴在場(chǎng)的同學(xué)們，寫作文，不追求華麗的辭藻，追求深刻性。

重在表達(dá)內(nèi)心感受

錢琦說(shuō)：“寫作文重在表達(dá)內(nèi)心的感受，讓人從文字的背后看到你的心靈，看到你心里想什么，文章不僅要感染別人，還要讓人理解文章要傳達(dá)到意思，讓人感到深刻。”

錢琦對(duì)即將上初四的學(xué)生說(shuō)：“你們還有一年時(shí)間，可以從現(xiàn)在開(kāi)始培養(yǎng)對(duì)文字的感覺(jué)，從閱讀開(kāi)始，觀察生活，寫作不追求華麗的辭藻，追求深刻性?！?/p>

不能華麗辭藻堆砌

“我相信‘讀書破萬(wàn)卷，下筆如有神’，因此喜歡閱讀，尤其喜歡閱讀那些有思想有哲理的書，比如《人生哲學(xué)》和《蘇菲的世界》。如果覺(jué)得沒(méi)看懂，可以多看幾遍?！卞X琦說(shuō)，她在初四的上學(xué)期喜歡用華麗辭藻來(lái)堆積文章。“我寫過(guò)一篇作文叫《生活的詩(shī)意》，語(yǔ)文老師僅給了38分，評(píng)語(yǔ)一共4個(gè)字：‘詩(shī)意何在’。這對(duì)我的打擊很大，我主動(dòng)找到了老師。老師說(shuō)，你寫的作文特別空洞，不知道在表達(dá)什么。我一下子就明白了，那些華麗的辭藻、排比句，無(wú)法表達(dá)自己的真實(shí)感受?！?/p>

第三篇：英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)及

Nothing Succeeds without a Strong Will.四級(jí)寫作考題出爐了?？吹娇碱}，我們眼前又是一亮：這不是新東方四級(jí)寫作教材必背范文第13篇The Way to Success 的翻版嗎！

這已經(jīng)不是第一次了。

如果說(shuō)以前這種情況頗為“偶然”，近年這種“命中考題”的情況似乎不再鮮見(jiàn)、漸漸變成“必然”了。2003年四、六級(jí)寫作共用的題目Honesty Is the Best Policy就是我們教材必背范文第3篇Honesty；08年6月四級(jí)考題“大學(xué)生休閑娛樂(lè)的方式”和我們必背范文第12篇Ways of Relaxing 非常相近；08年12月考題Disposable Plastic Bags 是我們考前預(yù)測(cè)的重點(diǎn)；09年12月考題“創(chuàng)建綠色校園”和我們必背范文第9篇Make Our Cities Greener 非常接近，只要把city 改成campus 就可以了。

當(dāng)然，猜題押題不是我們的宗旨。我們更重視的是如何培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的寫作能力傳授寫作技巧。

一般來(lái)說(shuō)，文章的主體段落展開(kāi)方式不外乎因果分析和舉例說(shuō)明。今年的考題與以往很多“現(xiàn)象類”或“爭(zhēng)議類”考題不同，要求評(píng)述一句格言，這和03年Honesty 非常相似。對(duì)這種文章，因果分析比較牽強(qiáng)。那么我們主要就依靠舉例說(shuō)明了。在我們的教材范文中就舉了兩個(gè)例子，一為孫中山依靠堅(jiān)強(qiáng)的意志創(chuàng)建中華民國(guó)，二為蘇秦刺股挑燈夜讀。

其實(shí)考生只要掌握了方法，隨便舉一兩個(gè)自己生活中的例子。只要文字表達(dá)順暢，就是一篇好文章。

碰到熟悉的考題固然欣喜；碰到陌生的考題學(xué)會(huì)自如應(yīng)對(duì)才是制勝的法則。

附教材范文：

Everyone tries to achieve success in his career.However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails.Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway.Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success.A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit.He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be.Dr.Sun Yat-sen was such a man.Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty.Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study.Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies.Marx often worked 15 hours a day.Life is short and we have many things to do.Without diligence no one can achieve anything.I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts.

第四篇：英語(yǔ)作文點(diǎn)評(píng)

I Have a Dream 信陽(yáng)市第三職業(yè)高級(jí)中學(xué)三（3）班

孫鵬麗

Almost every student has a colorful dream , so do I.I want to be a wealth①

women.Perhaps you will be surprised at my dream.I want to explain something about it.My hometown it so poor that many young people have to leave home to make a living in big cities , leaving their children alone at home.That is not good to them.For lack of their parents’ take care② , some of them become shy and awkward③,and some

even become criminals.Therefore , if I can become a successful woman , I will set up my own company and many factories in my hometown.Then our villagers can get a job and steady income.At that time , they can live a happy life with their families , and avoid leaving home and the divide④

from their children.If that’s the case , my hometown will become beautiful and prosperous.As far as I’m concerned , only having a dream is not enough , in order to realize my dream , I will be sure to seize every minute to study hard to make a good base to enter the society , for my dream , for my hometown and for my motherland.點(diǎn)評(píng)：

1﹑妙語(yǔ)錦囊: be surprised at...對(duì)??感到意外； so...that...如此??以致?? ；make a living謨生；leave...alone把某人獨(dú)自留下；set up建立；live a happy life過(guò)幸福的生活；in order to...為了??；make a good base打好基礎(chǔ)。

2、亮點(diǎn)展示：文章的篇幅不長(zhǎng)，卻給人以跌宕起伏之感。這是因?yàn)樾∽髡邔?duì)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)進(jìn)行了精心的設(shè)計(jì)，并鋪以關(guān)鍵性的過(guò)渡詞。如：perhaps you...或許你會(huì)??；therefore因此；if that’s the case如果那樣的話；as far as I’m concerned就我而言。

3、不足之處：①wealth是名詞，應(yīng)換成形容詞wealthy。②take care是短語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，應(yīng)將take去掉，保留名詞care。③此處應(yīng)是誤用：awkward是指“笨拙，不熟練”，作者想表達(dá)的應(yīng)該是“害羞膽小”所以用cowardly。④divide作名詞時(shí)，不是“分離”，而是“分水嶺”的意思，故應(yīng)換成separation。

4、總 結(jié)：“文章情真”，小作者以細(xì)膩的筆調(diào)寫出了自己對(duì)夢(mèng)想的追求。對(duì)文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，小作者也進(jìn)行了精心的安排，給人以跌宕起伏之感。更為可貴的是：小作者能從身邊所觀察到的現(xiàn)象引出了“留守兒童”這一敏感話題，叫人深思。作為一篇課堂命題作文，小作者能在有限的時(shí)間里寫出這樣的文章，實(shí)屬難得。

指導(dǎo)教師：劉鳳

第五篇：英語(yǔ)說(shuō)明文及點(diǎn)評(píng)

英語(yǔ)說(shuō)明文及范文點(diǎn)評(píng)

【要求】

要求：假設(shè)你是一名圖書館的工作人員，請(qǐng)寫一篇文章說(shuō)明文，介紹圖書的借閱規(guī)則。字?jǐn)?shù)在80100字之間。

【范文】

Something You Must Know

This library is and English Language teaching and learning librany.If you want to borrow some books, you must fill out a library application form and put it in the box on the librarian's desk.Because of the large number of applications we receive each week, you must wait oneweek.Please bring yor student or work card to pick up your library card.Library application forms which are not picked up within 2 months will be discarded and you will have to reapply.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文的借書規(guī)則表述得比較清晰，注意到了說(shuō)明文語(yǔ)言的精練準(zhǔn)確、通俗易懂的特點(diǎn)。對(duì)于高中生而言，這是一篇優(yōu)秀的應(yīng)試作文。

There is no indefinite liberty.【要求】

要求：小程原來(lái)英語(yǔ)成績(jī)很差，自從他參加了學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)角，成績(jī)有了很大的進(jìn)步，尤其是聽(tīng)力和口語(yǔ)提高更是迅速。請(qǐng)你代小程寫一篇短文，介紹一下英語(yǔ)角的情況。

【范文】

English Corner

English Corner is very useful to learn to communicate in English.Learning a foreign language requires four skills: reading, writing, listening and speaking.The English Corner is a wonderful place to practise both listening and speaking.English Corner is also a good place to meet new friends.When I went to English Corner last Sunday, I came across a variety of people, who all had one thing in common;that is they wanted to communicate in English.So the atmosphere was relaxing.English Corner enlarges our would.As we listen to foreigners talking about their countries and customs, we learn many things that we can't learn from books.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文第一段是總領(lǐng)段，點(diǎn)明了English Corner 在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中的地位和作用。緊接著簡(jiǎn)單介紹了English Corner如何在我們英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)中發(fā)揮作用。全篇文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語(yǔ)句連貫，無(wú)華麗詞匯之堆砌，但文章中心卻表達(dá)的清晰而明確。

Without you ,it would have never been possible.Thank you.【要求】

請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)寫一篇關(guān)于你校的校園平面圖（diagram

教師辦公室在教學(xué)樓三樓。

學(xué)校四周是樹(shù)。

字?jǐn)?shù)：100

【范文】

This is a diagram of our schoolyard.It is four hundred meters long and three hundred meters wide.The school gate faces the south.Our teaching building stands in the middle of our school yard.It is a building of five stories.The teachers' offices are on the third floor.There is a garden in front of the teaching building.On the left of the garden is our library.Our lab is on the right of the garden.There is a large playground behind the teaching building.Many trees are planted

around the school-yard.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文按照由外到內(nèi)、由前往后的順序進(jìn)行介紹說(shuō)明，使文章層次分明，脈胳清晰，說(shuō)明簡(jiǎn)短有力。

Brevity is the soul of wit.文以簡(jiǎn)潔為貴

English Dictionaries

【要求】

English Dictionariesspelling）；發(fā)音（pronunciation）和意項(xiàng)（meanings）。請(qǐng)你寫一短文向別人介紹一本普通的英文字典。

【范文】

English Dictionaries

Most English dictionaries will tell you a number of things about the

language.There are three important things, spelling, pronunciation and meanings.The first is the spelling of the words.If you are not sure about the

spelling of a word, you can try to find the correct spelling in a

dictionary.The words are always given in alphabetical order.The second thing is pronunciation, Most dictionaries give the pronunciation of a word in a special kind of alphabet, which is called phonetic.The third thing a dictionary will tell you is the meanings of words,Many

words have more than one meaning, and a good dictionary will explain all of the word's meanings.These are some of the important facts that you can learn from dictionaries.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文抓住了英文字典的三個(gè)方面的主要內(nèi)容進(jìn)行闡述，采用總—分—總的結(jié)構(gòu)方式組織材料，顯得結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。文章緊扣字典的主要特點(diǎn)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明，顯得重點(diǎn)突出，對(duì)字典有一清晰的認(rèn)識(shí)。

“barbecue”是日常生活中常見(jiàn)的一種食品，想知道是什么就去查字典吧。

Hans Christian Anderson

【要求】

請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容和所給單詞及詞組，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇介紹世界著名童話作家安徒生

（Hans Christian Anderson100——120。內(nèi)容提示：安徒生生于1805年。十一歲喪

父。由于家境貧困，童年時(shí)代沒(méi)能上學(xué)，開(kāi)始跟人學(xué)習(xí)縫紉。十四歲時(shí)到一劇院工作。后來(lái)在一些熱心的藝術(shù)家的幫助下，上了學(xué)。1828年接受高等教育，畢業(yè)后獻(xiàn)身文學(xué)（literature）。他寫劇本、小說(shuō)、詩(shī)歌等等。他努力創(chuàng)作，獲得很大成功。一生共創(chuàng)作160多個(gè)故事。1875年去世。

Words and Expressions to Be Used:

world-famousdevote oneself tofairy tales

by the timeadvanced educationlead to

【范文】

Hans Christian Anderson

Hans Christian Anderson was a world-famous writer of fairy tales.He was born in 1805.When he was eleven his father died.His family was then so poor that he could not go to school during his childhood.He learned sewing from a tailor.At the age of fourteen, he went to work in a theatre.Later helped by some warm-hearted artists, he went to school.In 1828, he began to get advanced education.After graduation, he devoted himself to literature.He wrote plays, novels, poems and so on.He worked hard at literature.This led to his great

success.He wrote more than 160 stories in all.He was famous for his funny fairy tales, which became popular all over the world.He died in 1875.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

本文用詞準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言流暢，內(nèi)容符合要求

My favorite program

【要求】

現(xiàn)在隨著電視等傳播媒介的普及和發(fā)展，電視節(jié)目的花樣越來(lái)越多，知識(shí)性、娛樂(lè)性的側(cè)重也各有不同。請(qǐng)你寫一篇文章，介紹一下你最喜歡的節(jié)目。

【范文】

My favorite program

Nowadays radios and TVs play a more and more important role in our daily life.There are many programs shown every day.Some of them are very good.My favorite program is called“The Animal World”, which is broadcast by CCTV every Sunday night.The program provides us with natural scenes, the life of all kinds of wild animals and the wonderful explanation about it.We also acquire some knowledge about animals, even some plants.So in my opinion, it is an

interesting as well as an instructive program.Be sides, the pictures are very beautiful.It's really a great joy to watch it.If you don't believe it, Just watch it yourself.【評(píng)語(yǔ)】

這篇文章給我們提供了一種寫說(shuō)明文的一般結(jié)構(gòu)：點(diǎn)明主題——一般介紹——文章主體——概括和歸納結(jié)尾。通過(guò)這種結(jié)構(gòu)，可使描述脈絡(luò)清晰，表述自然流暢，不致于發(fā)生思路混亂的局面。

你喜歡哪個(gè)電視臺(tái)的什么節(jié)目？你也試寫一下？